Our conclusion is, thus,merely a moral imperative against conducting, supporting, or funding such re-search.
majority being past-tense
Our conclusion is, thus,merely a moral imperative against conducting, supporting, or funding such re-search.
majority being past-tense
they stress how concerned theyfeel
mostly active voice throughout the article
Of course, we concur that one must be careful to avoid any general “dis-couragement to conduct studies or publish findings that may be counter todominant views”
This article was mostly written in third person, but was thrown into first and second at times. Third when the authors were covering their research and first and second whenever the authors directly spoke about their argument(s).
With respect to the hypothesis of anthropogenic climatechange (Hacc), two political asymmetries (PA) and one epistemic asymmetry(EA) hold:(PA1) If research on Hacc is pursued, and if the evidence is taken to favorthe hypothesis ∼Hacc, then there will be (at least) a partial reversion to∼Hacc among members of the public in that belief in ∼Hacc becomes stron-ger; in contrast, if the evidence is taken to favor Hacc, there will be no sig-nificant further removal of the residues of ∼Hacc.(PA2) If belief in ∼Hacc becomes widespread, then the quality of the livesof those affected by climate change will be further reduced through the with-drawal of existing programs of climate change mitigation and adaptation. . . .(EA1) There are significant differences between the probabilities as-signed to ∼Hacc and the probabilities that would be assigned by usingthe most reliable methods for assessing evidence; the probabilities as-signed to ∼Hacc by members of society will typically exceed the probabil-ities that reliable methods would yield, and the probabilities assigned toHacc correspondingly will be reduced. (Leuschner 2018, 1263–64
Both qualitative and categorical, so mixed
I guess men will just need to acceptbeing discriminated against because . . . why?
in-text quotations and first-person. Quotations and paraphrasing have been used frequently so far
4. Attacks against Researchers in Gender Studies
Results of work
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superscript
We would like to acknowledge that Ceci and Williams describe women’s individualchoices as being “freely made or constrained”
footnotes too
cause of women’s under-representation in STEM
passive
“that the overall state of the academy is largely one ofgender neutrality”
In-text quotations
s based on a reviewof correlational studies (i.e., studies investigating correlations between sexand disadvantages in academia), concluding that gender discrimination inacademia no longer exists
past tense
3. Methodological Concerns Regarding Ceci and Williams’s Research
more methodology (IMRaD)
wrongly accepting the hypothesis thatthere is gender bias in academia would lead to measures supporting womenacademics even though they were not required. This would be both costly touniversities and unfair to men, while wrongly rejecting the hypothesis would,however, be especially harmful to women
past tense
we argue
first-person
in the society in which it is embedded
passive
IndRA
vocab
lest contrarians ‘attack us
active voice
(2011, 137; see also Brysse et al. 2013;Lewandowsky et al. 2015; Medimorec and Pennycook 2015)
in-text attribution
dissident
vocab
dissent
vocab
contrarian scientists
vocab
Thus, dissent meeting these conditions is epistemically detrimental as itaffects academic debate.
IndRA concluded
2. The Inductive Risk Account of Epistemically Detrimental Dissent.
Methodology explained (more to come)
6. Conclusion.
Conclusion given (IMRaD)
they conclude by explic-itly rejecting the existence of gender bias in the academy
past tense
They find that women doc-torates in math-intensive fields
Third-person
(Ceci andWilliams 2011, 3161)
attribution in-text
it is reasonable to conclude that gender bias plays a significantrole in causing and reproducing the underrepresentation of women in manyacademic fields
main point
has been subjected
passive
(NSF 2019)
in-text
to be employed at a lower rate
passive
women represent only 19% of graduates in physics, 29% in mathe-matics and statistics, 24% in engineering, and 20% in computer science(NSB 2018
qualitative statistics including a reference/in-text citation
Introduction
part of IMRaD format (Introduction)
Gender bias is a recalcitrant problem in academia and society. However, dissent has beencreated on this issue. We focus on dissenting studies by Stephen J. Ceci and Wendy M.Williams, arguing that they reach conclusions that are unwarranted on the basis of theavailable evidence and that they ignore fundamental objections to their methodologicaldecisions. Drawing on discussions from other contexts, particularly on manufactured dis-sent concerning anthropogenic climate change, we conclude that dissent on gender biassubstantially contributes to (a) the exacerbation of biases in society and (b) an increasingnumber of attacks on researchers, making it both epistemically and socially problematic
summary given before hand
How Dissent on Gender Bias in AcademiaAffects Science and Society: Learning fromthe Case of Climate Change Denial
long title
Anna Leuschner and Manuela Fernández Pinto
again, two authors. Collaboration must be valued
REFERENCES
given by author/publisher, date, the work (including links), and pages referenced
Bostrom, Nick. “Infinite Ethics.” Analysis and Metaphysics 10 (2011): 9–59
see reference annotation
References
given by author, paper name, date and pages that were referenced specifically
we think
qualifier
If your attitudes cannot get too far out of proportion, then in weightier worlds you may care less about anything in particular.
5.2 conclusion
Such a theory says that how weighty a thing is depends on whose perspective we assess it from.
Theory given in regards to objectivity
t seems to imply
qualifier and active
Congruity
vocab
ustified by intuitive fit alone.
passive
“the collision between the seriousness with which we take our own lives and the perpetual possibility of regarding everything about which we are serious as arbitrary.”
quotations from Nagel's, "The Absurd"
Suppose such facts had normative mass
passive and qualifier
So both views attribute
active
Averagism
vocab
must
emphasis using italics
So these views differ on the importance of intrinsic duplicates.
active
it relates to something else
passive?
Intrinsicism says f is at least as important as g if and only if our view says f is at least as important as g
categorical
Intrinsicism
vocab
2.1. Intrinsicism
sub group
the fling probably makes up
qualifier
you
second
And getting priority boarding? You can care hardly at all about that.
a question and relatability factor
A weighty marriage may be one that is constituted by much joy and suffering.
passive
Maybe fearsomeness matters.
passive
Compare a long marriage to a short fling
giving an example/making an observation
one might think
qualifier
normative mass
vocab
axiological
vocab
we cash out our notion of importance
First person
how much it is per-missible for Adam to care about that thing
passive?
We think Proportionalism is tenable on either option
Making more room for observation
You need not be so devastated. You may, we think, cease taking yourself so seriously.
The paper switched between first and second-person and it did not change tense
Lovett and Riedener
Names at the head too
We
First-person, a nice mix
here is a certain way it feels to care about something.
Active voice
normativity
Frequent user of this word
Their attitudes are out of whack
Active voice
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Subscripts everywhere
epistemic permissibility.
Vocabulary
I( f ) = NM( f ) .NM(U)
Mixed-method of observation? given that the idea (evidence) is categorical, but the measure seems qualitative.
ESR(Develop) = (0.5 × ¼) + (0.5 × -2/40) = 0.1,ESR(Do Not Develop) = (0.5 × 0/4) + (0.5 × 0/40) = 0.
More qualitative than categorical, given the numbers
ESR(A) = ∑i Ri(A) × Pr(Si)
Almost qualitative, but the evidence given to plug in would be categorical. The equations/diagrams overall, are mixed.
For something to be important, in our sense, is not for it to be worth promoting. Our notion is instead understood in terms of fitting attitudes.
Idea given for the first section
1. Characterizing Importance
First heading of many, and noticeable too
Some philosophers
Convicted qualifier
normativity
Another example of the specific vocab (other previous example(s): proportionalism, plausibility)
But let us not get ahead of ourselves. We will first locate the notion of importance that matters to Proportionalism
First section remained in present tense and did not deviate from second-person
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Superscript (references the footnotes below)
He says: “We might constitute a minute portion of the whole, but that does not detract from our absolute importance” (“In-finite Ethics,” 10). In other words, he dismisses Proportionalism out of hand. We have come across no other prior discussion of Proportionalism.
Attributing their views and other paraphrased views to Nick Bostrom in the footnotes. Not only is the author and source given, but an entire quote to help summarize their previous points better
Some people,
Qualifier
diminish its
Passive voice and the essay has been written in second-person up to this point
A drought has caused the har-vest to fail. She does not have enough food. You donate one hundred dollars to the Red Cross and that gets her the food she desperately needs. This is a good thing, and for a while it seems you have done something very important.
This is just part of the introduction, but completes the introduction portion of the IMRaD format
7. Conclusion
This paper is partially in IMRaD format. This is the conclusion section
Glover and Scott-Taggart,
Both British philosophers. An international collaboration, in that Lovett and Riedener both referred to other peoples work in another country
229
Technical footer
230
Technical header
It says that a thing’s importance de-pends on how big a proportional contribution it makes to the world’s total value. For example, consider the addition of one happy life.
Broad summary of what to expect this paper to be about
The number of happy lives in the universe affects the importance of the addition of one more happy life. We will call this view Proportionalism.
The understanding of Proportionalism (Important for rest of paper)
Adam Lovett and Stefan Riedener
Two authors. A collaborative effort was made and we can assume they both value this component. See bottom for more
New York University
Adam Lovett is a professor at New York University
University of Zurich
Stefan Riedener is a professor at the University of Zurich