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  1. Jan 2025
    1. What is above all needed is to let the meaning choose the word, and not the other way about.

      We must learn to write with our meaning in mind, rather than search for something that sounds like what we want. By allowing ourselves to brainstorm our thoughts and the cohesiveness of our writing, this allows us to have clear and concise writing.

    2. Look back through this essay, and for certain you will find that I have again and again committed the very faults I am protesting against.

      Is Orwell at fault like everyone else for this "bad usage" of language or is it the fact that he is self aware that sets him apart?

    3. But if thought corrupts language, language can also corrupt thought. A bad usage can spread by tradition and imitation, even among people who should and do know better.

      Often times this "bad usage" of language can be as simple as imitating society. However, is this harmless or does it carry repercussions?

    4. Where it is not true, it will generally be found that the writer is some kind of rebel, expressing his private opinions, and not a ‘party line’.

      This is becoming more and more prominent in today's political landscape. As we begin to see political writing is becoming interpersonal with the writer and their own thoughts/feelings. This kind of writing is not the kind of informative political writing we need, instead it is the kind of writing society is producing.

    5. By using stale metaphors, similes and idioms, you save much mental effort, at the cost of leaving your meaning vague, not only for your reader but for yourself.

      When we begin to write in a way that is easy, we lose all connection to our writing and start to write vaguely and without meaning. This not only leaves the audience confused, but it may also leave the author unsatisfied with their work.

    6. The whole tendency of modern prose is away from concreteness.

      A lot of the literary work we see today is loosely based on opinion and afterthoughts which leads to inconsistent work. Orwell is saying that modern writers are not taking the time to be precise or intent with their work.

    7. Words of this kind are often used in a consciously dishonest way

      It seems as though a lot of people are using this kind of language, especially when it comes to our current political landscape. There are some people who are using this kind of language to misguide others and some people who are using it simply because they don't know what they're talking about.

    8. prose consists less and less of words chosen for the sake of their meaning, and more and more of phrases tacked together like the sections of a prefabricated hen-house.

      This is the equivalent of writing someone simply because it sounds nice and not because it carries any actual meaning behind it.

    9. This mixture of vagueness and sheer incompetence is the most marked characteristic of modern English prose, and especially of any kind of political writing.

      It seems as though the common problem of today's writing is not knowing how to say the things we want to say. Without having that purpose behind our writing we will continue to fall short.

    10. It is rather the same thing that is happening to the English language. It becomes ugly and inaccurate because our thoughts are foolish, but the slovenliness of our language makes it easier for us to have foolish thoughts.

      The way we use language and the way it changes in the process is intertwined with the way it was changed previously by society. Whether it be an effect of the cause or the cause itself, it's more prevalent than ever.

    11. Underneath this lies the half-conscious belief that language is a natural growth and not an instrument which we shape for our own purposes.

      It's interesting that Orwell specifically states that it is a "half-conscious belief" which leads to the idea that whether we always have the intention of it, we let language grow on its own. This correlates with the idea that language changes with us, due to influence and the way we communicate.

    1. And why wouldn’t you want to cheat, he asks, if using AI gets you a grade similar to those who are doing the work?

      Since the use of AI can be described as cheating, what does that mean for those who don't use it, even if a certain amount is allowed? This may be sending a message to students who have abstained from using AI that their efforts may be pointless if they can accomplish the same as those who incorporate AI into their work.

    2. Professors say that when students admit to misusing the tech, they often apologize and say that they got behind on their work or panicked or felt overwhelmed.

      This is important to consider because the use of AI may be indicative of other unaddressed issues, such as procrastination or the lack of students asking for help when they need it. AI has now become a tool for those who don't want to put in the effort and for those who need something to help them last minute. Perhaps, most AI use isn't malicious but rather a last resort, depending on the situation.

    3. Far less attention has been paid to how to maintain academic integrity right now

      The use of AI has made many educators question academic integrity, which is shaping the way students are learning and interacting with their course content. That being said, what can we do to keep academic integrity intact while evolving with AI? Some educators have opted for allowing small amounts of AI to be used, as long as a majority of the work is from the student. Another way to maintain academic integrity is to allow students the opportunity to be honest about their usage of AI, which can be daunting to some students as AI isn't always welcomed in education. This is the kind of conversation that will have multiple solutions, depending on the audience.

    4. Faculty members who believed that AI posed a threat argued that its usage would undermine academic integrity, students’ critical thinking and writing skills, and creativity.

      When it comes to AI in education, this is the strongest argument. Allowing students to use AI no longer requires them to brainstorm, think freely, or develop their writing skills. A lot of the skills that are developed throughout a student's educational career are suddenly not having the same impact as they can achieve these things with the help of AI.

    5. “For our developmental students, those we know lack the basic skills needed to get through college, we are doing them a disservice if we’re not distinguishing between what is acceptable and what is not,”

      This conversation shouldn't only be fueled by the growing use of AI, but also the use of technology in general. Younger students are having more trouble learning basic skills such as written and verbal communication, as well as integral reading and writing skills. The use of AI is enabling these students to disregard important skills because they no longer see them as necessary compared to older generations who couldn't rely on technology.

    6. Some instructors find they have to push back against their colleagues and peers when urging more caution around AI.

      This is interesting to me because we now live in a society that allows technology to be used as a way to avoid completing work on our own or "enhancing" our work. There should be a cautious approach when using AI, this thought process should be the standard. Although, t's clear that more people want to continue to integrate AI into our work and daily lives.

    7. The lack of guidance and training is of particular concern, experts say, because AI will soon be everywhere.

      As previously stated, AI is being accepted into society more and more everyday. However, a lot of people are using AI simply because it's a convenient tool to make our lives easier, not because they understand the technology and want to use it to its full potential. This kind of technology has to be used and regarded in a way that creates a balance of using AI for its intended use and maintaining the integrity of the work we produce.

    8. The tension surrounding generative AI in education shows no signs of going away.

      This is something to be increasingly aware of. It's true that AI and it's use will continue to grow as the technology is further developed. It's also evident that no matter who opposes AI it is being accepted more and more into our everyday lives.

    9. The explosion in AI use, the endless hours spent figuring out whether — as he put it — there was a person on the other side of that paper, and the concern that students who cheat could end up getting the same grades as those who did the work sent Wilson reeling.

      This is concerning to me because academic integrity is constantly questioned, even for students who don't use AI. This is creating a negative effect on those who are putting in the time and effort on the assignments versus those who are allowing AI to do their assignments for them.