Rasin’ hell as high as De first Church Steeple.
SO GOOD. I love this imagery utilizing the parallels between hell and the church and how white men forcing their religion on POC was such an atrocity.
Rasin’ hell as high as De first Church Steeple.
SO GOOD. I love this imagery utilizing the parallels between hell and the church and how white men forcing their religion on POC was such an atrocity.
white devils
Wherever your feet lands it seems you can't escape them.
They chained you in coffles,
Not just here, but the strong dichotomy presented in the "you" vs "them" mentality is so effective in this piece. Making the distinction between the two draws attention to how stark the differences were and still are.
SANDBURG
What? Carl Sandburg, the poet?
“Ma Rainey”
Didn't know where to highlight to annotate, but such an interesting contrast that in the first and third sections of the poem, it's written to sound almost like a song. Very lyrical and has a consistent rhythm, meter. And in the second and fourth sections, it's a narrative style describing explicitly what's going on around the speaker. Is this to create the affect of bringing the audience into the world? To make them feel as though we too are listening to Ma Rainey with other patrons?
Maybe it just sags like a heavy load. Or does it explode?
The last three lines here really hit hard. The title "Harlem" connecting the people who live within this area as well as time period shows how close they are to the edge, where they must make a decision to lie down and let themselves be walked over, or to stand up and fight back and reclaim what is rightfully theirs.
And far into the night he crooned that tune. The stars went out and so did the moon. The singer stopped playing and went to bed While the Weary Blues echoed through his head. He slept like a rock or a man that’s dead.
The rhyme scheme in this poem is strong as well as the meter, making for an actual bluesy sounding poem. The musical value to this mirrors and mimics the sorrow and pain felt throughout the community and is an effective use of connections to pull the audience into the poets world and see things as they see them.
Besides, They’ll see how beautiful I am And be ashamed— I, too, am America.
Reclaiming the title of American within this poem forces racists and oppressors to face their crimes and accept people as they are, either accept or face riots. The defiance in this poem and use of line breaks helps to build the speakers power.
My soul has grown deep like the rivers.
This line is emblematic not only of the poem as a whole, but as what the poem is conveying as well. The strong cultural link between African Americans, and Africans in general, and rivers is prevalent throughout history and literature, and this poem shows the migration that was chosen for them when their people were enslaved and forced into America. The rivers of their ancestors are just as much theirs, as the Mississippi is as well.
If colored people are pleased we are glad. If they are not, their displeasure doesn’t matter either.
If they have turned their backs on their own people, then it seems to this artist that their own disapproval matters just as much as the whites; meaning not at all.
They live on Seventh Street in Washington or State Street in Chicago and they do not particularly care whether they are like white folks or anybody else. Their joy runs, bang! into ecstasy. Their religion soars to a shout. Work maybe a little today, rest a little tomorrow. Play awhile. Sing awhile. 0, let’s dance! These common people are not afraid of spirituals, as for a long time their more intellectual brethren were, and jazz is their child. They furnish a wealth of colorful, distinctive material for any artist because they still hold their own individuality in the face of American standardizations. And perhaps these common people will give to the world its truly great Negro artist, the one who is not afraid to be himself. Whereas the better-class Negro would tell the artist what to do, the people at least let him alone when he does appear. And they are not ashamed of him–if they know he exists at all. And they accept what beauty is their own without question.
The contrast of community here to the previous community is astounding. The vibrance and sheer amount of life and joy within these people is tenfold compared to those who try their best to "fit in" with the whites. Embracing who they are as individuals allows them to be free in their lives and in their work.
For racial culture the home of a self-styled “high-class” Negro has nothing better to offer. Instead there will perhaps be more aping of things white than in a less cultured or less wealthy home. The father is perhaps a doctor, lawyer, landowner, or politician. The mother may be a social worker, or a teacher, or she may do nothing and have a maid. Father is often dark but he has usually married the lightest woman he could find. The family attend a fashionable church where few really colored faces are to be found. And they themselves draw a color line. In the North they go to white theaters and white movies. And in the South they have at least two cars and house “like white folks.” Nordic manners, Nordic faces, Nordic hair, Nordic art (if any), and an Episcopal heaven. A very high mountain indeed for the would-be racial artist to climb in order to discover himself and his people.
This entire paragraph is unnerving and saddening, the white washing and need for conformity within the community is so prevalent and accepted, pressured not only by white people looking in, but shamed into by the people around them. The normalization of this is horrifying.
Cordially yours. Pause. Cordially yours. Not sooner together. Cordially yours.
These sets of lines feel as though the author is utilizing stream of consciousness through there speaker; who can't decided whether or not to end the letter.
I do believe it will finish, I do believe it will finish.
What will finish? The poem?
I am not missing.
this line is so striking to me because in a seemingly jumbled, incoherent, non-urgent piece; this line stands out as a firm statement to something or someone that could be frantic. The speaker, or the poem, or the author herself is firm and unwavering in it, and knows where and who they are.
All along the road the reddish purplish, forked, upstanding, twiggy stuff of bushes and small trees with dead, brown leaves under them leafless vines—
the explicit description of dead and decaying trees that have lost all signs of life is juxtaposed to the short rebirth of them into the new world. Their death is more meaningful and beautiful than their lives.
Forgive me they were delicious so sweet and so cold
exemplifies the inability to have constraint over oneself, the need to take what is not ours is justified when we explain how grand the item was.
as if the earth under our feet were an excrement of some sky
This poem is so visceral and to the point, the images within it are uncomfortable; it forces us to look at what we've done as a nation, we cannot hide our eyes
It comes from the writer’s not realizing that the natural object is always the adequate symbol.

that sense of freedom from time limits and space limits; that sense of sudden growth, which we experience in the presence of the greatest works of art.

Perhaps a few good poems have come from the new method, and if so it is justified.

does the rose regret The day she did her armour on?
interesting metaphorical question--do people regret when they put their guard up and start to disallow others into their lives?
what power has brought you low,
feels like the archetypal trope when a character's pride or lust for power causes their demise and downfall--he is abandoned in death because he abandoned others in life.
It well may be. I do not think I would.
The word choice of "would" as opposed to "could" in this line is so interesting to me. The entire poem, which has a consistent rhyme scheme by the way of ababcdcdefefgg, talks about how love is not a life or death matter--and the ending lines make it seem as though the speaker is willing to give love up for food, memory, or even peace. The use of "would" instead of "could" gives insight to the fact that the speaker realizes it is within their power to trade the love they receive for something more tangible, they would choose not to. If anything, this cancels out everything the poem has been saying and proves that although the speaker would be able to forgo love, they would choose not to. It's incredibly moving and loving.
Better to go down dignified With boughten friendship at your side Than none at all. Provide, provide!
Haha! SO funny--so ironic. It's dignified in the industry to die with monetary wealth, surrounded by those who don't really care about you, than to die without fame, without monetary wealth, but with many who knew and loved you. Rich in materialism vs rich in life.
A snow-drop spider, a flower like a froth, And dead wings carried like a paper kite.
The use of the point blank descriptor "white" is changed in the last two lines here with "snow" and "paper" white changes from purity and life, to surrender or death. Great symbolism
I doubted if I should ever come back.
The use of the past tense "doubted" along with the ending stanza leads me to believe that the speaker is reflecting on the choice they made so long ago speaking about taking the road no one else has taken was beneficial, however earlier in the poem, they note that the two paths had been worn "about the same," if this is true then why and how did the speaker choose a road? Wouldn't they have been the same?
We keep the wall between us as we go. To each the boulders that have fallen to each. And some are loaves and some so nearly balls
Interesting how this can parallel a certain group of people in the United States today, they believe that there is a divide between people, and that each person carries the same amount of burden. However, each person is not born equal. Some are born into wealth, into prejudice, into a white, straight, male body; and some are born into a body that the aforementioned stifle.
A valiant armor of scarred hopes outworn.
The idea of waring "scarred hopes" as armor????? SO EFFING COOL. Man, he's got great imagery, so simple, but packs such a punch.
Poets and kings are but the clerks of Time, Tiering the same dull webs of discontent, Clipping the same sad alnage of the years.
I've really got no clue what to make of this poem, I'm a bit lost, but these three lines are so stunning that I couldn't scroll without highlighting them. The images, personification, and metaphors that Robinson is using here all just works in magic.
Ere I had reached the age of sixty. I spun, I wove, I kept the house, I nursed the sick,
Beginning with this sequence of short actions falling into one another, and continuing on to the end of the sentence, we see how the structure of the poem mirrors the lifespan of the speaker. Once the age of 60 has been met, most of life's difficulties such as raising children and working are over, time begins to slip through fingers, days are shorter, and things become routine as you move through your second half of life.
“What is the use of knowing the evil in the world?”
This is something I often find myself ruminating on. People often ask you what the use is in keeping track of all the damage, injustices, natural disasters, and terrorist attacks in the world. Who does it help to keep track of all the evil? But the thing is, history repeats itself, and if we keep ourselves uninformed of what's going on, it will only persist. Knowledge is power; and i'd rather be depressedly in-the-know, than living in ignorant bliss.
SEEDS
The use of the terms "seeds" in the context of this poem brings the audience into such a microscopic level of the story that's being told, and in large, shrinking us in nature itself and giving a bit of perspective. We're so small, apart of something so large.
PERHAPS that is one reason I do not get well faster.
The irony in her husband being a physician hindering her ability to heal is supremely ironic; women at the time were found to be crazy whenever the topic of mental illness arose
to escape both death and isolation, to husband and use his best powers and his latent genius.
In using his "twoness" he must embrace it and teach others rather than facing the challenge and turning his back. Knowledge is power, ignorance is death.
One ever feels his twoness,—an American, a Negro; two souls, two thoughts, two unreconciled strivings; two warring ideals in one dark body, whose dogged strength alone keeps it from being torn asunder.
The dichotomy he feels inside never truly allows him to be one thing or another.
The shades of the prison-house closed round about us all: walls strait and stubborn to the whitest, but relentlessly narrow, tall, and unscalable to sons of night who must plod darkly on in resignation, or beat unavailing palms against the stone, or steadily, half hopelessly, watch the streak of blue above.
Wow. absolutely stunning, incredible imagery and metaphor here--near speechless. The use of having his white peers be his prison shows that although "they" may try to be sympathetic and try to prove that they understand what he goes through, in and of itself they lock and bind him into a preconceived stereotype without letting him even speak. It's oppressing and defeating.
They
The use of the universal "they" opens us up to a myriad of different potential obstacles the speaker encounters in life, some being more problematic than others; but all with one thing in common--he doesn't care to specify who they are, in a sense it's a power hold, in withholding their identity, he's showing them that their criticisms can't affect him.
She was goddess because of her force; she was the animated dynamo; she was reproduction–the greatest and most mysterious of all energies; all she needed was to be fecund.
He's found something worth rivaling the dynamo, but I'm confused as to how we got here, and just how exactly her and the dynamo relate?
Satisfied that the sequence of men led to nothing and that the sequence of their society could lead no further, while the mere sequence of time was artificial, and the sequence of thought was chaos, he turned at last to the sequence of force; and thus it happened that, after ten years’ pursuit, he found himself lying in the Gallery of Machines at the Great Exposition of 1900, his historical neck broken by the sudden irruption of forces totally new.
Repetition of "sequence" in this sequence of conclusions he comes to leads to him finding something that finally breaks through for him, just when it looks as though he's lost all meaning in what he's been searching for.
while he lost his arithmetic in trying to figure out the equation between the discoveries and the economies of force. The economies, like the discoveries, were absolute, supersensual, occult; incapable of expression in horse-power. What mathematical equivalent could he suggest as the value of a Branly coherer?
Interesting that in trying to make sense of something, he only loses himself further and therefore comes closer to understanding it--sort of like the extended religious metaphor throughout the piece; in trying to make sense of religion or God in the physical world, you understand it less, but believe and follow it more. (If you're into religion, that is.)
Nothing in education is so astonishing as the amount of ignorance it accumulates in the form of inert facts. Adams had looked at most of the accumulations of art in the storehouses called Art Museums; yet he did not know how to look at the art exhibits of 1900. He had studied Karl Marx and his doctrines of history with profound attention, yet he could not apply them at Paris. Langley, with the ease of a great master of experiment, threw out of the field every exhibit that did not reveal a new application of force, and naturally threw out, to begin with, almost the whole art exhibit. Equally, he ignored almost the whole industrial exhibit. He led his pupil directly to the forces. His chief interest was in new motors to make his airship feasible, and he taught Adams the astonishing complexities of the new Daimler motor, and of the automobile, which, since 1893, had become a nightmare at a hundred kilometres an hour, almost as destructive as the electric tram which was only ten years older; and threatening to become as terrible as the locomotive steam-engine itself, which was almost exactly Adams’s own age.
Confused as a whole as to what is going on in the narrative at this point; in Langley trying to teach Adams, Adams is simply absorbing the information and is unable to apply it, while Langley, the teacher, seems to be ignorant as to what is going on in his pupil's head.
The first stanza of the poem is so indicative of lower, working class in America; the diction used along with the alliteration of "burlap...bearing...black bean" grit your mind and tongue as they run through your mouth, leaving an uncomfortable taste of unrest. The upper class in this case is feeding the lion stirring in the lower class, with every slur and injustice handed down, the fire and fury growing within each lower class person. The upper class will be their own undoing.
West Virginia to Kiss My Ass
Shows that it really doesn't matter the destination, the journey is what matters, and even then few to none care about what that actually is for some people--and the struggles they endure.