http://www.keatsian.co.uk/keats-poetry-agnes.php
- In 1819, Keats suggested alterations to Stanza 36 and the two proceeding lines.
*See, while she speaks his arms encroaching slow,
Have zoned her, heart to heart, - loud, loud the dark winds blow!
XXXVI:
For on the midnight came a tempest fell;
More sooth, for that his quick rejoinder flows
Into her burning ear; and still the spell
Unbroken guards her in serene repose.
With her wild dream he mingled, as a rose
Marrieth its odour to a violet.
Still, still she dreams, louder the frost wind blows.*
- This version was rejected because many believed it made the poem too sexually explicit.
- the verson currently printed gives the reader a sense of Porphyro becoming a part of Madeline's dream to fulfill it as an innocent experience.