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  1. Mar 2016
    1. The New Yorker is famous for its satirical drawings, drawing off of world news and conversations.

      http://imgc-cn.artprintimages.com/images/P-473-488-90/61/6148/28EG100Z/posters/mick-stevens-i-m-suffering-from-rhetoric-abuse-cartoon.jpg

    2. Academic writing has generally been understood as operating primarily within the linguistic modality, with writing remediating the "voice" of an educator or lecturer.

      Academic writing has often been very stiff and usually only involves few mediums (pen, paper, black text on a white background). Not until the last twenty years has academic writing been digital, but what's to say that academic writing has to be boring? Why can't it be multimodal and involve images, videos, audio, etc.?

    1. franchise economics- Coldstone Creamery

    2. Animal Crossing- "long term debt"

    3. procedural mode- addresses processes, claims, or ideas through processes rather than through visual, writing, or orality.

    4. Does writing convince an audience of a message the same way as an oral presentation can?

    5. Aristotle's rhetoric- persuasion towards correct judgments.

    6. Sophists- "personal trainers for rhetoric."

    7. Rhetoric has a bad reputation with lying politicians or other public speakers.

    8. It’s a theory or a design philosophy. It’s a way of making things.

      Rhetoric is every choice a writer makes to convey a work's meaning.

  2. Feb 2016
    1. LetsPlay channels put into question the idea of television as a stable medium, and invite us to rethink what television is and what it can be.

      LetsPlay channels allow the viewer an extensive, inside glimpse into a video game, with added commentary from the channel's gamer, allowing them to "play" allow with the gamer they are viewing.

    2. LetsPlay

      Live (video) gaming streaming.

    3. Viewers are therefore no longer bound to the television set to watch live television.

      Mobility and convenience.

    4. However, unlike mobile phones and tablets which promote mobility, I would argue that these home based technologies attempt to maintain the television set as the privileged site for viewing and the home as a central location.

      Further arguing that television that once was an event, still remains an event that has the luxury of being played at the comfort of your own home.

    5. Go and apps like it offer new lines of connections that potentially reformulate television culture by deterritorialising appointment, mass and home viewing.

      Online streaming anywhere and anytime.

    6. Foxtel Go is one of a number of television applications (or ‘apps’) that enable viewers to watch television on different devices.

      Basic online streaming service.

    7. broadcast television offers viewers very few opportunities to actively participate in the media texts that they are directed to consume

      Little to no audience participation. Possible exception of news stations asking for audience feedback ("Send us your pictures of the storm," "Tweet us," etc.).

    8. broadcast television is a highly organised structure that revolves around a centre of significance, tends toward homogeneity and produces images and representations for viewers to consume.

      Broadcast television is a binary structure.

    9. reciprocal determination

      Theory that a person's behavior both influences and is influenced by personal factors and the social environment.

    10. deterritorialisation

      The severance of social, political, or cultural practices from their native places and populations.

    11. rhizomatic assemblage

      Theory that allows for multiple, non-hierarchical entry and exit points in data representation and interpretation.

    12. social as a constantly stable structure

      Social aspects remain unchanged and stable.

    13. television once had a stable identity that is now being called into question

      Television used to be an event. Everyone in the household would gather around the television at a certain time and a certain day and all watch a program together. With new ways to access television shows, this togetherness has dissolved; the audience no longer adapts their time in order to watch a show, but a show adapts to fit around the viewer's schedule.

    14. 1950 and 1980

      This time period helped set the foundations for television. Rizzo is arguing that, in the long run, this time period will only be considered a brief period rather than a vital time.

    15. [p]art of the ‘power of television

      Television has the power to inform, persuade, challenge, entertain, and much more to a mass audience.

    16. viewers can access their favourite shows in a number of different ways

      On-demand, online streaming, etc.

    17. assemblages

      Collection or gathering of people or things.

    18. ex falso quodlibet

      Mediaeval name for the rule of inference which allows that from a contradiction you may deduce anything whatsoever.

    19. symbolic placeholders for binary switches: on/off, +/-, yes/no, is/is-not

      Zeroes and ones are numerical in a binary sense, but represent symbols that represent switches that lead to an overall meaning.

    20. The age of media is over, for there is now only one medium

      There is one media, but rather, one medium: everything online is data and is made up of a code or type of coding language. It's definitely an interesting point that I haven't previously considered before.

    21. aphorism

      Speaking of a general truth in a memorable way ("If it ain't broke, don't fix it.").

    22. hypomnesis

      Weakened memory.

    23. amamnesis

      The idea that humans possess knowledge from past incarnations and that learning consists of rediscovering that knowledge within us. (live and learn?)

    24. Digital ontology is the event of the end of media

      Very interesting.

    25. One must be able to communicate to be considered a being and to exist.

    26. full-blown metaphysics of ‘being

      This raises the question of what it means to be. Can a computer "be" and exist without human interaction? Does a computer need a human to input or output information?

    27. web 2.0 practices

      HTML, CSS, and other coding languages.

    28. displacing ‘the human’ from the centre of action

      Lack of embodiment in a digital sphere?

    29. ever-growing excess of data

      It is both interesting and a little scary to think that anyone can post online and that anyone can also access anything that anyone has posted as well. I think that this can really change the way we produce texts, but can also cause problems.

    1. Alex, your paper is an overall strong and great first effort. You provided the audience with many different examples of class, assignments, and professors who helped better your understanding of the concentration. Aside from a few mechanical and grammatical errors, I would just suggest adding in a little bit more information that could help strengthen the paper. Overall, it's a great effort and will be a great addition to your senior portfolio.

    2. my plans are to teach English as a foreign language in another country as a way to travel

      Cool! This is a great aspiration for your future goals and how the concentration will enable you to achieve this.

    3. In this piece, I take the passion for literacy studies I grew in Composition: History, Theory, and Practice, and married it with my love for video games.

      Excellent example.

    4. Through these practices, I have come to recognize critical thinking as not only the ability to look at how a text makes its argument, but how to harness this assessment to be beneficial to one’s own rhetorical practice.

      Excellent.

    5. While I do not credit this paper as the most sophisticated, eloquent, or well argued included in my portfolio

      Great example of your development in the concentration.

    6. Explain this a little more? Maybe use "petty" instead?

    7. I refined my personal definition of rhetoric: the manipulation of symbols to communicate information in a way that is concious of a piece’s audience, their perception of the author, and the form to which the information is bound.

      Very interesting definition.

    8. Game of Thrones

      Italicize.

    9. but during his semester teaching 1102, Matthew opened up a world of study that I had been unaware existed.

      Great example of a class and professor that helped shape your understanding of the concentration.

    1. Karina, I think your CRE is a great, strong first draft. You provide the audience with plenty of great examples as well as the texts, classes, and professors who helped your understanding and growth in the Rhetoric and Composition concentration. Expand it just a little bit further, and I believe that it will make for a solid critical reflective essay to be added to your senior portfolio.

    2. Maybe just refer to the concentration from its "official" name (Rhetoric and Composition) rather than Rhet and Comp for the sake of sounding more professional.

    3. Great example of "learn, grow, and repeat."

    4. Strong definition of critical thinking; excellent.

    5. Great reference to a work and quote that shaped the definition of rhetoric for me. This is a great example.

    6. Omit?

    1. Reach out to the educators who use Twitter.

      A way to use social media to educate students about change and tragedy.

    2. When schools opened across the country, how were they going to talk about what happened?

      How do you tell your students about what is happening? This has every thing to do with rhetoric and how it can be used.

    3. alerted the public that Michael Brown was to start college soon.

      The now iconic photo of Michael Brown in graduation cap and gown.

    1. TEDx has since removed Young’s name from the project but has not really addressed the core concerns raised by many disability activists.

      Backing away from the real issues due to backlash.

    2. He’s the hero. We learn nothing about Lapkowicz.

      The reader knows all about the quarterback. But what about Mary? Do we know her?

    3. A high school quarterback in Pennsylvania took a girl with Down syndrome to prom, fulfilling a promise he made to her when they were in the fourth grade. A Qdoba employee in Kentucky was filmed feeding a customer with physical disabilities. Madeline Stuart, an Australian woman with Down syndrome, lost weight and became a model.

      In all three stories, the disabled person's story has taken the backseat to someone who aided the person in a way, making them the "true hero."

    4. inspiration porn sometimes shames the viewer by showing a disabled person overcoming basic obstacles, implying that anyone less disabled has no excuse.

      I've seen this over and over again. "This is a disabled person who has achieved something great while overcoming obstacles. You're not disabled, you have no excuse."

    5. objectify one group of people for the benefit of another group of people

      Perry is claiming that disabled people are being objectified for the benefit of people who are not. The same can be said of many other groups throughout history.

    1. Let her speak

      This quotation simplifies the centuries-long battle for the female voice in public settings, both online and offline.

    2. Senator Wendy Davis’s thirteen-hour filibuster

      Thirteen hours of standing and speaking without pausing, fighting for the silenced and the voiceless. My personal hero.

    3. women have been relegated to the background of public speech or silenced altogether by a patriarchal structure of discourse.

      Dating back to ancient Greek times, with the only exception of Aspasia.

    4. Ellen Pao (an American woman of Chinese descent), experienced a large volume of harassment after banning and censoring the forum’s most hate speech-focused subreddits, eventually stepping down from her position

      Further enabling the patriarchal ideal of rhetoric in public discourse.

    5. “for the past twenty-five hundred years in Western culture, the ideal woman has been disciplined by cultural codes that require a closed mouth (silence), a closed body (chastity), and an enclosed life (domestic confinement)”

      History of female rhetoric.

    6. The “closed mouth” and “closed body” dichotomies that Glenn brings to light are of great importance when women speak or write in public, because it is the body that is harassed or attacked when women resist the cultural expectations of silent or docile speakers.

      "Don't speak unless spoken to."

    7. The Sophists emphasized the development of “knowledge of fundamentals [that] becomes bodily rather than conscious,”

      Sophists- Greek rhetoricians who were skeptical

  3. Jan 2016
    1. Why, because medicine has to define the nature of the body and rhetoric of the soul-if we would proceed, not empirically but scientifically, in the one case to impart health and strength by giving medicine and food in the other to implant the conviction or virtue which you desire, by the right application of words and training.

      Rhetoric is a scientific need to explain and argue points, rather than on an emotionally level.

    2. A very great power in public meetings.

      Lawyers, lawmakers, politicians, speechmakers.

    3. discourse ought to be a living creature, having a body of its own and a head and feet; there should be a middle, beginning, and end, adapted to one another and to the whole?

      Basic argument structure; a living being with moving parts.

    4. Is not rhetoric, taken generally, a universal art of enchanting the mind by arguments

      Rhetoric is an art that has the power to open the mind.

    5. The charioteer- the divine madness.

    6. arrangement of them, for there can be none in the invention

      Socrates argues that style is more important than content.

    7. repetition was the especial merit of the speech; for he omitted no topic of which the subject rightly allowed, and I do not think that any one could have spoken better or more exhaustively.

      Is repetition the best way to get a point across? Or can it be considered too repetitive and too much?

    8. whose success in love is the reward of their merit

      Love conquers all?

    9. The wise are doubtful

      Question everything and be cautious. Ask questions and challenge ideals.

    10. he ingeniously proved that the non-lover should be accepted rather than the lover.

      Does this indicate the idea of "platonic love"?

    1. 1,200-1,500 words translates to about five to seven pages, Times New Roman, 12 point font.

    2. Focus more on your experience and growth in the composition and rhetoric concentration than on the artifacts themselves.