25 Matching Annotations
  1. Sep 2019
    1. you are at home, a stranger,

      You're at home but a stanger home is supposed to be a place of refuge where one is loved, known, and cared for.

      a home where you are a stanger means you dont belong or fit or unknown.

    1. Havana cigar clenched between his teeth? No         I think         not

      She's opposed to what society views as lower class behavior. The wing flap, scritch scratch, cigar smoking.

    2. such a waste of energy all that wing flap and scritch scritch scratch.

      She doesn't want to waste time on the mundane, yet all her thinking here is a mundane conversation. (In her own mind)

    3. L B J           little brown job

      LBJ something boring, or easily found, comforting, something youd say to someone thinking thats what they would want to hear. What theyd want you to be.

    4. The best part no sexual dimorphism male         female both alike endless possibilities.

      Seems as though she is craving to be free and out of her relationship w/ boy who tries to finish her sentences. She is much to iridescent to be restrained.

    5. just enough for a quick hop to the next.

      Again is she revealing her real life here? I think so. are sexual relations to her or done to her in such a manner; "just enough for a quick hop to the next."

      also to point to the irony that shes not one to flit branch to branch.

      sj he sees her self as higher than those who do, but engage in the same activities.

    6. and that creamy streak down my throat and pecs good         not great but good         pecs just enough for a quick hop to the next.

      "creamy streak down my throat" Total sex appeal and even the word down my throat leads to her pecs. The same as a womans neck to her breasts.

      She becomes more realistic here after describing the bird as herself in only a positive light.

      "pecs good not great but good pecs."

      she almost reveals what she looks like in person here all while maintaing conversational flow and almost going over it lightly. shes accepted it.

    7. Something exotic he thought. He thought maybe macaw. That would fit all loudmouthed and primary colored he would think.

      The pace you get while reading these lines truly feels conversational. The periods. Where and how the lines end. It almost forces you to read it how shes thinking it.

    8. since he tried to        end

      The spacing between words here is being "cut off" like how the author gets cut off by him trying to end her sentences.

      Or as if in that very moment he was doing it again.

    9. (He thinks too much I always thought.) But really       at heart I’m more don’t laugh now      an L B J           little brown job

      again her use of pace, soacing and parenthesis makes the reader read how she is actually thinking it. the parenthesis highlight a private thought in her head. Its closed off. Her long pause or break after "but really" gives you her emotion same thing with her pause after "im more" she pauses agian this time in embarassment or bracing herself for telling something she thinks youll preceive as funny.

      The longest pause comes after L B J even then shes slowing down the letters as if shes spelling it out in conversation. she doesnt use L.BJ. OR LBJ its L B J but back to the long pause after "l b j " its the longest as if shes waiting for the reader to figure it out on their own, put it together. and when you dont she says it quickly.

    10. I’m not the flit        from branch to        branch        type such a waste of energy all that wing flap and scritch scritch scratch. Really now can you see me seed pod clamped between my beak like some landowner, Havana cigar clenched between his teeth? No         I think         not I think green heron.

      Not a single period. long winded as if she' s finally comfortable describing herself a mix of self confidence and defensive-ness. Shes in full conversation now.

      The spaces/large gaps between "Flit From Branch to Brach" you can almost imagine her using her hands gesturing flittering from branch to branch.

      along with the slight sing song of alliteration gives you a birdsong effect.

      the looks she wants are very much female oriented /long/ olive green feathers. /iridescent/

    11. Have a nice day and he says        Make me. Oh          you want looks I’ll give you looks:

      He says make me because he wants "looks" to get a rise out of someone, she says shell do the same.

      but she wants her own type of looks.

    12. to flash when you get too close

      Protective. She includes a protective adaptation. A concern women must have in particular. Especially when they look long and iridescent