wind seized our breath
I like this description made!
14 Matching Annotations
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anthropomorphized
I haven't heard of this word ever before.
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The landlady looked sour,
I haven't thought to describe a person in this way, I like it!
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woodsorrel flower
I haven't heard of this type of flower before
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hawthorns are black and green
I have never actually seen or touch a hawthorn.
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nonfiction stories are true
I always forget which is true and which is made up.
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Climax: This is the peak of the action
This is my favorite part when reading or watching.
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ragged bursts, my quadriceps burning as I crested the summit
Great descriptions and details. I love it!
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I include pacing with sequence because a change to one often influences the other.
I also have never heard about this in reading or writing. This is a new term for me.
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WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON HERE?" and want to continue reading.
Very important, in doing this all readers wont want to stop reading.
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Freytag's Pyramid: Chronological
How long has this pyramid been around? I have never previously heard about it or have seen it before in classes.
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The term scope refers to the boundaries of plot
I did not know this was what scope refers to and how it is described.
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painting a picture in the reader's mind
I think it is important to piant a picture in the reader's head.
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if it is dropped, or squelching if it is squished underfoot
I never thought to describe a fruit in this way, I would think to say yellow and sour, but I think describing how it would be once smashes is great.
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