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  1. Apr 2017
    1. The words “robbed” and “security” managed to pierce the soothing backbeat that pumped through not just the Lassimo but every hotel like it in New York. There was a mild ripple of interest from the lobby.

      In Sasha's perspective it didn't sound that serious when she describes her own action. But with Alex it seems pretty severe.

    2. Sasha felt herself contract around the object in a single yawn of appetite

      Normally people's urge for stealing is greed or something beneficial. Sasha's reason for stealing is to fill her appetite of this habit, she had no use of this item.

    3. she knew that the question had a right answer

      She knew the answer to the question, yet she still chose the wrong answer with her actions.

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    1. But, being questioned, the mechanician said that the cup was simply used in his founder’s business, and described the purpose — in short, a cup to test the condition of metals in fusion. He added that it had got into the belfry by the merest chance. Again and again they gazed at the domino, as at some suspicious incognito at a Venetian mask. All sorts of vague apprehensions stirred them. They even dreaded lest, when they should descend, the mechanician, though without a flesh-and-blood companion, for all that, would not be left alone.

      A third person limited point of view seems to be the case here, describing what they are doing but doesn't know what they think inside their head.

    2. While his mild associate was speaking, the chief glanced inquiringly from him to the caster, as if anxious to mark how the discrepancy would be accounted for. As the chief stood, his advanced foot was on the scuttle’s curb.

      A third person point of view speaking Magistrate's comment from before.

    3. before obscured by the cloudings incident to casting, that beauty in its shyest grace, was now revealed

      It seems to be described as hidden or covered before until revealed.

    4. Stone by stone, month by month, the tower rose. Higher, higher, snaillike in pace, but torch or rocket in its pride.

      Repetition. Also have an effect of enhancing the point it is trying to prove, which sounds like the sky is the limit.

    5. never lengthening, never lessening

      Alliteration. Also sets a tone of something is decreasing and vanishing that mixes well with the sentence before and after.

  3. Mar 2017
    1. Anders burst our laughing. He covered his mouth with both hands and said, “I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” then snorted helplessly through his fingers and said, ” Capiche – oh, God, capiche,” and at that the man with the pistol raised the pistol and shot Anders right in the head.

      This further shows that Anders has no sense of danger, he seems to do whatever and say anything he wants without thinking, this was hinted by the way he talked about the women infront of him as well.

    2. “Then get your ugly ass in gear and fill that bag.” “There you go,” Anders said to the woman in front of him. “Justice is done.” “Hey! Bright boy! Did I tell you talk?” “No,” Anders said. “Then shut your trap.” “Did you hear that?” Anders said. “‘Bright boy.’ Right out of ‘The Killers’.” “Please be quiet,” the woman said.

      Anders have a hard time understanding the situation where most people would not act so ruthlessly in this situation. What cause him to be fearless?

  4. Feb 2017
    1. Edna St. Vincent Millay, “[I shall forget you presently]” I shall forget you presently, my dear, So make the most of this, your little day, Your little month, your little half a year, Ere I forget, or die, or move away, And we are done forever; by and by I shall forget you, as I said, but now, If you entreat me with your loveliest lie I will protest you with my favorite vow. I would indeed that love were longer-lived, And vows were not so brittle as they are, But so it is, and nature has contrived To struggle on without a break thus far, Whether or not we find what we are seeking Is idle, biologically speaking.

      This poem seems to heavily written based on dramatic irony. The speaker doesn't give a clear intention. She wanted to be apart, then she wants to speak as if she wants to be together still.

    2. If you entreat me with your loveliest lie I will protest you with my favorite vow. I would indeed that love were longer-lived

      Pivot point, she started off as if she is about to cut the bond with this person, but here she described the "ifs" that the person treated her this way, then the relationship would of been lasting.

    3. Edna St. Vincent Millay, “[I shall forget you presently]” I shall forget you presently, my dear, So make the most of this, your little day, Your little month, your little half a year, Ere I forget, or die, or move away, And we are done forever; by and by I shall forget you, as I said, but now, If you entreat me with your loveliest lie I will protest you with my favorite vow. I would indeed that love were longer-lived, And vows were not so brittle as they are, But so it is, and nature has contrived To struggle on without a break thus far, Whether or not we find what we are seeking Is idle, biologically speaking.

      The rhyme scheme is in "1212345465677." I think the last two lines might be a couplet since they're the same rhyme but they were not separated from the rest.

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    1. what is their reward?

      Sums up that the spring break parties and fun the students had were used in a pointless and none-productive way, it went to waste, no rewards.

    2. Meanwhile the elders breathe a grateful sigh

      This is like a pivot point, what seems so fun to the young people seems to be pointless to the elderly.

    3. As at a signal and like an enormous swarm Of monarch butterflies, the young ones head Northward to strict assignments and to bed

      simile comparing the young people to a monarch of butterflies, swarming in like a pool.

    4. The beach is the hot parade ground where brigades Of suntanned girls disport themselves and thrust Upon one’s notice pelvis, butt, and bust, And whitened noses bridged with heart-shaped shades. The boys are beery, laying plots to score, Exhibiting heroic abs and pecs, The showy animality of sex, Which the girls make weak pretenses to ignore. They are viewed by dry, bird-wristed, blue-rinsed crones With diamond rings and teeth of Klondike gold Mounted on a frail armature of bones; Their hatted husbands, once, perhaps, adored, Now paunchy, rheumatoid, and feeling old, Who joust at chess, assault at shuffleboard. II. As at a signal and like an enormous swarm Of monarch butterflies, the young ones head Northward to strict assignments and to bed Each of them in a rock-star-postered dorm, And steel themselves for mastering Kant’s “Critique” Of impenetrable Reason, Pico’s claims For human dignity, late Henry James, And insubordinate particles of Greek. Meanwhile the elders breathe a grateful sigh; Vanished are rudeness, arrogance, and noise. Yet, a week later, what is their reward? Views of the changeless ocean leave them bored, And it would be ungenerous to deny The girls were pretty and the boys were boys.

      The rhyme scheme is in "12213443, 121233, 12213443, 112233."

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    1. departing smile

      This has a deep connotation but is a bit hard to figure out, felt like there is many things that the poet wants to express with this here.

    2. too late

      Can this "too late" indicate to her youngest child, trying to do something to prevent the feeling of her other children caused her?

    3. They have eaten me alive.”

      Before this line, the poem mentions the youngest child sitting next to her. To probably indicate she might have this kind of suffering again, in the future.

    4. They stand a while in flickering light, rehearsing the children’s names and birthdays. “It’s so sweet to hear their chatter, watch them grow and thrive, ” she says to his departing smile. Then, nursing

      The way the poet wrote this in a way that not only it enjambs, but the periods are in the middle of a line. Not sure if that would count as an end-stop if it happens in a middle of a line.

    5. Gwen Harwood, “In the Park” She sits in the park. Her clothes are out of date. Two children whine and bicker, tug her skirt. A third draws aimless patterns in the dirt Someone she loved once passed by – too late to feign indifference to that casual nod. “How nice” et cetera. “Time holds great surprises.” From his neat head unquestionably rises a small balloon…”but for the grace of God…” They stand a while in flickering light, rehearsing the children’s names and birthdays. “It’s so sweet to hear their chatter, watch them grow and thrive, ” she says to his departing smile. Then, nursing the youngest child, sits staring at her feet. To the wind she says, “They have eaten me alive.”

      The rhyme scheme is in "1221, 3443,567567." It is also an sonnet with 14 lines.

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    1. . As he paces he wonders Who can I kill today. And for a moment the little knot of screams is still. The parrot

      This line seems to show ambiguity but it seems to not be taken serious in a way because it was frozen for a bit as the poem says "little knot of screams is still."

    1. I kept waiting for the thud of your crash as I sprinted to catch up, while you grew smaller, more breakable with distance,

      I'm seeing that the poem itself relates back to the title. The speaker has a flashback of his daughter's childhood how she always falls and gets further away from the father. "More breakable with distance" as if that distance is about to increase again with the daughter.

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    1. The hungry deer walk on the risen loaves of snow. You can follow the broken hearts

      At the end of second stanza to the beginning of third stanza, the tone changed. It went from happy and exiting tone for the first two stanzas to a depressing tone for the deer, where a season that they do not have much freedom in.

    2. The cat at my window watches amazed. So many feathers and no bird! All day the snow sets its table with clean linen, putting its house

      When the line enjambs at "watches" to amazed I felt like there should be a karma, but since there isn't one the word amazed seems to stand out more. This second stanza seems to shift focus from the speaker to the cat, both being amazed by the image outside.

    3. its high home where nothing leaves tracks or stains or keeps time. The sky it fell from, pale as oatmeal, bears up like sheep before shearing.

      This passage here has a strong image for the readers. Also it seems like personification in a way because snow could not shear like sheep.

  9. Jan 2017
    1. and of its pain, which returns hurts, stings—reproach me now, remind me that I was in those rooms, with my child, with my back turned to her, searching—oh irony!— for beautiful things.

      It is ironic that at first it seems like the daughter was very attached to her but she did not pay that much attention to her. But now that the daughter is grown, she wants more time with the daughter and it is not happening.

    2. When I was young I studied styles: their use and origin. Which age was known for which ornament: and was always drawn to a lyric speech, a civil tone. But never thought I would have the need, as I do now, for a darker one:

      Change of subject or theme it feels like. Shifted from her daughter to her past.

    3. On Sundays, when the rain held off, after lunch or later, I would go with my twelve year old daughter into town, and put down the time at junk sales, antique fairs.

      With most of them being end-stop lines, it felt like she described a lot of things happened in just 7 lines.

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    1. Sun and moon gaze back at him from the glaze of the silver frame,

      Who is the sun and moon referring to? They were described to have a face so they cannot literally be the sun and moon.

    2. He doesn’t know what time is, doesn’t know how in no time those numbers will fill his days the way water fills a bath

      Seems like "he" has a very strong passion about what he loves that he doesn't care about anything else.

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    1. knowing we have to turn away and enter the dark.

      What kind of connection is the addressee trying to say here referring to him/her self that they would both kill a mosquito in a moment?

    2. No, this isn’t another metaphor meant to adorn a romantic tale.

      These two lines made me laugh because it seems like she was telling her story for the past ten lines, then just suddenly left that out of her way to talk to the readers directly.

    3. Peter Everwine, “Lullaby” Last night, in the dark, something came near and frightened me and left me turning in my bed, listening to the hum of a mosquito—almost the timbre of a human voice—as it came and went.

      The first four lines is enjambed and it gave me a feeling as if I had to keep reading and hard to stop, like every line was a cliff hanger.

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    1. ock myself in the bathroom, say the thick words softly,

      Is this some form of depression? As the mother of the house why would she need to hide from everyone to LEARN? Curious on why the author added this part to the poem.

    2. for if I stop trying, I will be deaf when my children need my help

      This goes back to the other point I made, I thought the parents are the ones that are more advanced in language and the ones that teaches their children. This couplet shows that she is worried, will be deaf that shes unable to be a good role model.

    3. to be smarter than he is.” I´m forty, embarrassed at mispronouncing words, embarrassed at the laughter of my children, the grocer, the mailman. Sometimes I take my English book and lock myself in the bathroom, say the thick words softly

      It seems like the mother is trying to get the approval of her family member, but they don't seem to support her decision base on the father's reaction and the child's words.

    4. Now my children go to American High Schools. They speak English. At night they sit around

      I think the correct way to write it is Now my children "goes" to American High school. But I felt like the author did this on purpose to strengthen the characteristics of the mother.

    5. Pat Mora, “Elena” My Spanish isn’t good enough. I remember how I’d smile listening my little ones,

      My assumption is that "my little ones" refers to her children. It seems ironic to me because usually the parents are the ones who is more advanced in their language and teaches the child. But the tone seems like shes implying that her children speaks better Spanish than her.

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    1. While the white wood trim defines solidity in space. This is his house. He remembers it as his, Remembers the walkway he built between the front room and the garage, the rhododendron he planted in back, the car he used to drive. He remembers himself, A younger man, in a tweed hat, a man who loved Music. There is no time for that now. No time for music, The peculiar screeching of strings, the luxurious Fiddling with emotion.

      Although the title is "Alzheimer's", this stanza or paragraph shows that he starts to find out and remember important things for him, and that starts with himself.

    2. Thing he must do, now that he is home, is decide who This woman is, this old, white-haired woman Standing here in the doorway, Welcoming him in

      The irony of this "white-haired woman" is described as fairy important to him, but he cannot remember who she is.

    3. While the white wood trim defines solidity in space. This is his house. He remembers it as his, Remembers the walkway he built between the front room and the garage, the rhododendron he planted in back, the car he used to drive

      Testing. Also it is interesting that the old man is having a flashback of himself while the title of the article is "Alzheimer's".