Well, that is the first mystery; what had become of the English general’s head? The second riddle is, what had become of the Brazilian general’s heart?
each man acted against his character in a significant way, if this story is to be believed
Well, that is the first mystery; what had become of the English general’s head? The second riddle is, what had become of the Brazilian general’s heart?
each man acted against his character in a significant way, if this story is to be believed
he old, heavy Colonel Newcome fashion
Colonel Newcome -- Colonel Thomas Newcome is the central, virtuous protagonist of William Makepeace Thackeray's 1855 Victorian novel The Newcomes: Memoirs of a Most Respectable Family.
Key Details About Colonel Newcome
• Character & Role: He is an unworldly, honorable British soldier who spends decades serving in India. He becomes a literary emblem of Victorian gentlemanly virtue and chivalry
outside
Does Brown tell the police about what he's discovered? Or even Flambeau?
Father Brown repressed what appeared to be a momentary disposition to dance on the now sunlit lawn and cried quite piteously, like a child, “Oh, let me be silly a little. You don’t know how unhappy I have been. And now I know that there has been no deep sin in this business at all. Only a little lunacy, perhaps—and who minds that?”
only a little lunacy
the landscape seems to represent the people who inhabit it in these men's imaginations (pathetic fallacy)
this from "the wrong shape"
Have you ever noticed this—that people never answer what you say? They answer what you mean—or what they think you mean.
Fr Brown's wisdom
What do you call a man who wants to embrace the chimney-sweep?” “A saint,” said Father Brown. “I think,” said Sir Leopold, with a supercilious smile, “that Ruby means a Socialist.”
the crux of the matter
“The murderer,” went on Brown quietly, “hacked off his enemy’s head and flung the sword far over the wall. But he was too clever to fling the sword only. He flung the head over the wall also. Then he had only to clap on another head to the corpse, and (as he insisted on a private inquest) you all imagined a totally new man.”
the trick
The borderland of the brain, where all the monsters are made, moved horribly in the Gaelic O’Brien. He felt the chaotic presence of all the horse-men and fish-women that man’s unnatural fancy has begotten. A voice older than his first fathers seemed saying in his ear: “Keep out of the monstrous garden where grows the tree with double fruit. Avoid the evil garden where died the man with two heads.” Yet, while these shameful symbolic shapes passed across the ancient mirror of his Irish soul
What's this? Superstition?
“In that case,” cried Valentin, with a dreadful smile, “you may indeed know a great deal about him. About his life and about his—”
what's he getting at here?
“I’ll show you,” said his servant, and reappeared with a flashing naked cavalry sabre, streaked with blood about the point and edge. Everyone in the room eyed it as if it were a thunderbolt; but the experienced Ivan went on quite quietly: “I found this,” he said, “flung among the bushes fifty yards up the road to Paris. In other words, I found it just where your respectable Mr. Brayne threw it when he ran away.”
really?
rising above your lower dignity
what does this mean? In the context of the mystery and Edwardian social customs, "lower dignity" refers to a person's lesser social obligations, personal pride, or petty conventions (such as avoiding a minor public scandal or hiding an awkward personal rejection). To "rise above" it means she chose a higher moral duty—truth and justice—over protecting her immediate social pride or reputation.
They saw the proud, white face of the Scotch aristocrat and her lover, the Irish adventurer, like old portraits in a dark house. The long silence was full of formless historical memories of murdered husbands and poisonous paramours.
mocking AND sarcastic
“I think I can tell you,” cried Lady Margaret, in that clear, quivering voice with which a courageous woman speaks publicly. “I can tell you what Mr. O’Brien was doing in the garden, since he is bound to silence. He was asking me to marry him. I refused; I said in my family circumstances I could give him nothing but my respect. He was a little angry at that; he did not seem to think much of my respect. I wonder,” she added, with rather a wan smile, “if he will care at all for it now. For I offer it him now. I will swear anywhere that he never did a thing like this.”
one of the night's secrets -- subplot, red herring
“Why,” he gasped, “it’s—no, it isn’t; it can’t be. Do you know this man, sir?”
Does Ivan know who the man is? This almost suggests that he does -- and is questioning his boss/master about how to proceed
The head fell away. It had been entirely sundered from the body; whoever had cut his throat had managed to sever the neck as well.
Grisley scene
alentin was expecting, for special reasons, a man of world-wide fame, whose friendship he had secured during some of his great detective tours and triumphs in the United States. He was expecting Julius K. Brayne, that multi-millionaire whose colossal and even crushing endowments of small religions have occasioned so much easy sport and easier solemnity for the American and English papers.
"for special reasons" -- more foreshadowing
He liked anything that he thought “progressive.” He thought Valentin “progressive,” thereby doing him a grave injustice.
more sarcasm and foreshadowing
He had left his country after some crash of debts, and now expressed his complete freedom from British etiquette by swinging about in uniform, sabre and spurs.
he's the "freed" English subject ... compared to Lord and Lady Galloway
Perhaps such scientific natures have some psychic prevision of the most tremendous problem of their lives.
foreshadowing
He was one of the great humanitarian French freethinkers; and the only thing wrong with them is that they make mercy even colder than justice.
whose opinion is this?
making some last arrangements about executions and such ugly things; and though these duties were rootedly repulsive to him, he always performed them with precision.
executions "and such ugly things"
no ultimate exit at all except through this front door, which was guarded by Ivan and the armoury
only one way out
Valentin’s house was perhaps as peculiar and celebrated as its master.
Setting reflects personality
“Oh, one’s little flock, you know!” said Father Brown,
Again, F is making assumptions about priests, or about people based on prejudice and appearance
such a silly sheep as the man with the umbrella and the parcels.
again, the irony of Valentin's and Flambeau's assumptions. Though they are both masters of disguise themselves, they don't anticipate it in others.
The two figures that they followed were crawling like black flies
lots of insect imagery -- an echo of naturalism?
A perfect dome of peacock-green sank into gold amid the blackening trees and the dark violet distances. The glowing green tint was just deep enough to pick out in points of crystal one or two stars. All that was left of the daylight lay in a golden glitter across the edge of Hampstead and that popular hollow which is called the Vale of Health.
the vivid and poetic face of nature -- in the middle of the dark, blocked up, windowless city
“The criminal is the creative artist; the detective only the critic,” he said with a sour smile
what kind of philosophy is this?
when he could not follow the train of the reasonable, he coldly and carefully followed the train of the unreasonable.
Valentin's trick is to go with his unconscious if his consciousness can't come up with reasons
brainless phrase of modern fatalism and materialism.
one of Chesterton's familiar themes? modernity's fatalism
I have seen both these things myself within the last few days.
Who is this narrator? Suddenly has a personality.
Valentin was a sceptic in the severe style of France, and could have no love for priests.
cultural commentary and prejudice
and a very short Roman Catholic priest going up from a small Essex village. When it came to the last case, Valentin gave it up and almost laughed. The little priest was so much the essence of those Eastern flats; he had a face as round and dull as a Norfolk dumpling; he had eyes as empty as the North Sea; he had several brown paper parcels, which he was quite incapable of collecting.
Things are not as they seem
Flambeau was a figure as statuesque and international as the Kaiser
Cultural allusion, WW 1
There was nothing about him to indicate the fact that the grey jacket covered a loaded revolver, that the white waistcoat covered a police card, or that the straw hat covered one of the most powerful intellects in Europe.
Secrecy -- things are not what they seem on the surface
Between the silver ribbon of morning and the green glittering ribbon of sea, the boat touched Harwich and let loose a swarm of folk like flies, among whom the man we must follow was by no means conspicuous—nor wished to be.
Point of view: 3rd person omniscient, sardonic, great psychic distance from the subject
Unlock
I like the idea that we have "locked up" our senses somehow, and that we can learn how to unlock them for a richer experience of the world.
probably for a bit too long
editorializing in an obit? please.
We knew the scars you can’t see are the ones that last
nice.
It holds the elbow joint in place for fine movements, such as writing. This is our writing muscle.
Great insight/connection.
The forest hid them, but it could do nothing for the inside of Maira’s ears. From where she and her sister buried themselves for hours, she heard the screams of women and children as the soldiers plucked boys and girls from their homes, dragged the little ones through the mountains to enact the horrors we would one day read in newspapers: raping the children, throwing them onto trucks, into helicopters, into mass graves, and sometimes, yes sometimes, selling the children to childless couples, making infants and toddlers and older children, too, gifts from the mountains to military wives
horrifying. and it's of course reminding me of the parallel metaphor of the queen ants that Maria and her sister pull the wings from.
and a grandfather she does not like
I like the way the writer just drops this bomb into the sentence without judgment or fanfare.
But there is something wonderful in watching a figure emerge from the stone unsummoned, feeling the presence of something within you, the writer, and also beyond you – something consistent, wilful, and benevolent, that seems to have a plan, which seems to be: to lead you to your own higher ground
boom.
So: the book would be narrated by a group of monologuing ghosts stuck in that graveyard.
I can't wait to read it.
We often think that the empathetic function in fiction is accomplished via the writer’s relation to his characters, but it’s also accomplished via the writer’s relation to his reader
lovely insight.
She tweaks that which she’s already done
The story of this poet's life.
be less lame
this sounds like a good personal motto: in every case, try to be less lame.
Simply knowing one’s intention and then executing it does not make good art.
true. but hard to accept.
as if I were in control of it.
props. leave the mystery in.
Many bells ring.)
really really funny in this context.
Two, actually. One of them's pregnant, and Stephanie
again, really funny turn
My husband
ha ha
It's all in the timing.
a point of the play?
boring
great turn/flip in the power dynamic
Oral Roberts University
funny
mind
I like the way that this play keeps repeating (with riffs or variations) the same scenario.
taken
Seeing if I can annotate a PDF. And it appears that I can.
tombs
Mirrors as tombs. Interesting connection. I think it works...
as if even to have heard that much might have put us at risk of whatever fate questions like that spring from
Wow. This turn in the poem is effective and powerful for me.
year
I'm thinking about the effect of the couplets on me. They make the poem go slower. They increase the tension and also the juxtaposition, the strangeness.
Am I t
Reversal of phrasing -- creates tension and changes the tone
in wonder of her.
I wasn't expecting this to be a love poem.
garden of insults
This is a phrase I wasn't expecting but that I like
long a kind of secular Mecca for my family
Interesting metaphor, given the subject of the first paragraphs. Sets the writer outside of the status quo as he describes being PART of it.
but they aren’t proven to increase the total time or quality of sleep
I've actually found that melatonin makes it MORE difficult for me to fall and stay asleep. I avoid it like the plague.
It is considered a dietary supplement and therefore held to essentially no premarket standards of quality, safety, or efficacy
doesn't sound good to me
alive
Challenge -- take a scientific process and make it accessible to your general reader.
Caffeine is the most consumed stimulant in the world
fact: i'm drinking a big cup of coffee as I read this.
As an experiment for his high-school science fair in 1964, a 17-year-old San Diego boy named Randy Gardner stayed awake for 264 hours
this makes me think about Randy Gardner and his situation -- who lets their kid do this? what kind of kid thinks up this kind of experiment?
When we get fewer than seven hours, we’re impaired (to degrees that vary from person to person)
how many of you get less than 7 hours per night?
Insufficient sleep causes many chronic and acute medical conditions that have an enormous impact on quality of life, not to mention the economy
here's where the writer tells us why we should care about this subject
Sleep experts often liken sleep-deprived people to drunk drivers: They don’t get behind the wheel thinking they’re probably going to kill someone. But as with drunkenness, one of the first things we lose in sleep deprivation is self-awareness
This is a good way to describe the feeling -- it's clear and accessible. And it makes me think of a time when I felt just like this ... and I was probably sleep deprived.
I can’t think of another type of self-injury that might be similarly lauded, except maybe binge drinking
I am pulled into this essay, which I know will teach me something about the quality of sleep, by the personal approach to the subject.
Becky had started to keep a journal when Jude’s condition was diagnosed
Oh -- "condition." Backstory.
Anything that could go wrong—a marriage, a child, a medical treatment, a painting, an affair, a tree—started with hope. The only option was to blunder on through hoping
This thought makes me sad and brings me suddenly eye to eye with Becky. It's like the narrative distance between us has suddenly collapsed.
For these comforts, Jude must have been given to her as a punishment
Her world view is skewed, my brain tells me.
No one would know that she was risking her life for this belief: Who knows better’n I do what normal is?
Not sure how I react to this moment, either. I'm reminded of stories by Flannery O'Connor. It's as if Becky is a Flannery O'Connor character, but a midwesterner transplanted to CA.
They, with their limited imaginations, wanted to change their children. Vandalism, Ossie Gulliver had said in front of the Jackson Pollock painting. Parents like them committed vandalism out of love and despair.
Now a few moments are coming together -- I'm starting to see the way the story's been pieced into a whole.
witness to a crime
This reaction really makes me think. Is this a crime? Really? I feel again rather distant from Becky and her reactions/thoughts.
Is this the little girl I carried? Is this the little boy at play? I don’t remember growing older . . . when did they?
"Sunrise, Sunset," from Fiddler on the Roof. the song itself
be
Should we know what song this is? Is this another pop culture reference that will add meaning/significance to the story? It's actually "On the Street Where You Live," by Andy Williams, from My Fair Lady ... the title for the story itself. I had to Google the lyrics to get it. the song itself
Vivien’s mother sat with an erect back in another armchair, her creased face showing little acknowledgment of the conversation. Becky could not tell if she was black or Native American or Latina—perhaps she was all three. There was no photograph in the living room that Becky could use to make out the family’s story. All she knew was that the old woman had raised a musician. Perhaps she would not question herself all the time about failing at motherhood.
For some reason, I find this chain of reasoning or thinking kind of disturbing. What's happening here? Is Becky going from a reverie about what she imagines Vivien's mother's race to be to some comment about mothering and failure?
The thought of letting the plums rot made Becky feel guilty
Is this some key to Becky's personality?
She needed all the evidence to show that they did what they could for Jude. People in the same boat, she noticed, often found more reasons to judge and to denounce.
This moment of the narrator's summary again distances me from Becky. I'm still trying to determine whether I like her or not, whether I'm rooting for her. And I'm still trying to figure out what her motivation is. Is it to excuse herself for some imagined emotional or intellectual failing? What does she want?
Oh, Becky thought. Perhaps others would have recognized him right away from his outfit
So who is this guy, then? Is he part of the art exhibit?
He took a pipe out of his pocket
How do you react to this prop/action?
febrile
interesting word. What does it show us about this character?
Oh, the places he’ll not go, and the things he’ll miss in life!
Again, how many readers will get this culture reference? Does it make a difference if you do or don't?
Max’s boss, the chief of cardiology at the hospital and a longtime friend of the woman on the stage, had purchased two tables
Here we get a lot of background information AND more about the setting all at once. It's a good use of summary (as opposed to scene).
Becky was good at uncovering nonexistent motivations in her actions.
This is an interesting comment from the narrator. It sums up some essential quality Becky possesses (a self consciousness?) and also creates an instant distance between the reader and Becky. She can be summed up so quickly.
Becky’s hope was that someday Jude would read her journal and recognize what he would miss if he didn’t pay attention to people.
Seems like this is an indication not only of Becky's personality and motivation but also a comment on our autobiographical culture.
SpongeBob
How many people reading the story would get this reference?