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  1. Jul 2025
    1. That line of antagonism is extremely simple: the reason for our problems is the bankers and the billionaires.

      Alright, this is atrocious. The bankers and billionaires are not the reason for our problems - they are symptomatic. Absolute dead end bullshit

  2. May 2025
    1. . Then a man interrupted him and asked “what about violent crime?” Cole unfortunately stumbled through the answer and eventually landed on something like “look I’ve learned not to call the cops, so anyone can learn not to call the cops.”

      Again, this is the most interesting undercurrent and would be nice to expand on through conversations

    2. He expressed concern about not repeating the same mistakes from our last big organizing push with Defund, and had thought a lot about politics since. He said, “it’s like we get in this loop and we don’t know how to stop it, and everyone gets mad at each other, and nothing changes. Why do we keep doing the same events? I don’t want to repeat that anymore. Poor people need to call the police.” I agreed, and I said “you’ve gotten pretty good at expressing this problem. I’m trying to figure it out too. It’s been helpful for me to take some time to study politics and socialist history to see how other people have dealt with old baggage and outdated modes of thinking and organizing.” He liked that

      It would be nice to flesh this conversation out a bit more as its interesting

    3. but now that I’m older they sounded like the final scene in Zoolander: “Check it out everyone, Mugatu’s a dick! And he’s trying to kill the Eurasian Dude.”

      Funny

    4. harm reduction, racial justice, and non-profit sectors

      I think so of these terms could be expanded a little - what does it mean to work in the harm reduction or racial justice sectors?

    5. For them, and for most people, it was the international day against being sober and responsible. “Leave it to anarchists to ruin a perfectly good drinking holiday”, I thought.

      I like this passage, and paragraph in general - nicely descriptive and sets the scene well

    1. We all have a job to do.

      This is a strong closing line, and I like that it circles back to the beginning - closing things out nicely. I wonder if there is too much explaining of the point of the piece thought between this and the opening part. I think the point of writing is clear from the content on the narrators job and te section on Joy, over-explaining it weakens it a bit.

    2. Joy went across the street, bought a bottle of liquor and a pack of cigarettes, drank and smoked on the sidewalk for an hour, vomited, then walked back into Big Bank and quit.

      I think the section on Joy is the strongest bit, narrative wise. I'd love to read something longer and maybe more conversational with her.

    3. ut once a settlement or judgment is reached, the defendant is obligated to hire us to fulfill the claims.

      General note that you do a really good job of explaining the ins-and-outs details of the job in a way that is very readable. I feel like I learnt a lot reading this!

    4. History is replete with cruelty, yet we seem incapable of shocking one another with its mention. The impact of a specific story of undue suffering leaves a mark, but on whom, and under what circumstances, remains uncertain—uncertain in any way that might guide us toward clear resolutions or the avoidance of suffering in some moral form. I take this to be true of humanity, or of any population within a district, city, or collective we might belong to. I don’t yet know how to properly assess the importance of Greek tragedy, its cathartic effect, or the social function it served, any more than I feel compelled to comment on its counterpart in the perverse spectacle of public capital punishment, or the codes, glee, or grim necessity driving prison guards and military personnel to inflict beatings or torture in relative privacy. The point is that, outside of artistic redemption or intentional extremes, most of us are agents of death—often, but also mere facilitators of it. We all have a job to do. The closer that job aligns with our immediate goals, the farther we are from that death or suffering, padding our own bank accounts to avoid the same destruction—or perhaps, the closer to it. It would be unfair to label a grocery clerk an agent of death for ringing up food that might clog a customer’s arteries and contribute to their demise. There is an element of choice, but also the indirectness of facilitating death. Of entropy. What can we say of the owner of a liquor store in the heart of an urban hellscape? I’m sure it depends.

      Perhaps it is just a taste thing, but I think the story doesn't really need this opening,. It's well written, and stands well on it's own - but it pulls focus away from the narrative. Maybe just a few opening lines could have the same effect?

  3. Mar 2025
    1. material conditions of life, the totality of which Hegel, following the example of English and French thinkers of the eighteenth century, embraces within the term “civil society

      Does this mean that 'civil society' is considered as the totality of the material conditions of life (in which case I am a little confused by it). Or does it mean that the totality of legal relations and political forms, originating within the material conditions of life, is civil society?