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  1. Jul 2020
    1. n addition, the cunning and experienced Grand Admiral Thrawn had also been advancing towards the planets under Mulic’s control. Thrawn was also seeking to re-unite the Empire, and at the time had one of the most powerful armies i

      The visuals you have chosen do a very good job at depicting what the story will look like and what some of the characters will look like. The visuals are all very vivid and give clear view of what the story could be imagined as.

    2. It would also be the start of Mulic’s new life as a

      If there was any I'd say to help improve the storyboard:

      • You could have some frames where you explain why you made some of the story choices you did
      • There is a lot of words on the last slide, so you could split them up a bit
      • While the pictures you already have is great, adding some more would make it even better
    3. The New Republic forces eventually did arrive, andafter some fierce fighting, Mulic knew that his forces had lost. Mulic was about to surrender, but then he saw Luke Skywalker walking around all alone. Mulic thought about making an attempt to takeSkywalker’s life, but just as he began to move, Luke immediately pulled Mulic’s blaster rifle away from him using the force. Luke told Mulic that he didn’t want to come to this base as enemies, but rather, he wished that they could put aside their differences and work together to fight off Thrawn’s approaching army. In addition, Luke also toldMulic that the Force is strong on this planet, and that this planet seems to hold the key to the late Emperor Palpatine’s contingency plan. Luke would need Mulic’s help to find the first clue in solving this mystery. Mulic, feeling as if he had no choice, eventually helped Luke find a Sith Wayfinder device,which would be one of the keys in locating Palpatine’s cloning facilities. After their brief friendly exchange, Mulic asked Luke what was to happen next. After all,Mulic still considered theNew Republic to be agroup of rebels, and still sought to bring back the Empire. Luke told Mulic to followhis truest desire, and that everyone has a choice to make.Mulic first thought that Luke meant joining the New Republic, but Luke shook his head. “No, everyone has a choice to do better, to be a better person, and to create a better world around them.”Luke then told Mulic he knew that he was strong in the Force and that he should not be afraid of who he truly was. Luke also offered Mulic the opportunityto train as his apprentice,andtold Mulic of his plan to restore the Jedi Order, and to maintain peace and stability in the galaxy. Mulic was completely shocked, but after the passage of many days, he agreed. Mulicwould now help Luke prepare for a final series of battles against the Grand Admiral Thrawn.After Thrawn was defeated, it would truly be the end of the Imperial Remnant, and a new start for the galaxy.

      The story is pretty self explanatory and it appears as if you are telling this story to give a look into what life is like for the everyday soldiers of a war and how they reconcile the things they've done with their morality.

    4. Shea’h Mulic was a young stormtrooper that had just suffered some of the worst fighting during the battle of Endor and the battle of Jakku. For his whole life, all he had known was war, and he had grown up believing that his service to the Empire was for a good and noble cause. Now, Mulic returned back home to find that the life he had known was completely destroyed

      You have a very clear and exciting narrative. that is quite engaging and cohesive.

    5. After the battle of Jakku, the Galactic Empire has officially collapsed. Darth Vader and Emperor Palpatine have been deadfor more than a year now, and this battle would officiallymark the destruction of the Empire

      The commentary is very straightforward and is very detailed giving a very vivid view of what the story is about.