If you will stop nagging I will empty the trash wash the dishes and do the laundry.
If you will stop nagging, I will empty the trash, wash the dishes, and do the laundry. Rule 2 Rule 3
If you will stop nagging I will empty the trash wash the dishes and do the laundry.
If you will stop nagging, I will empty the trash, wash the dishes, and do the laundry. Rule 2 Rule 3
I will explain them to you if you wish.
I will explain them to you if you wish.
Although there are many different comma rules they can be learned.
Although there are many different comma rules, they can be learned. Rule 2
I removed the blackberry pie from the oven and put it on the window sill to cool.
I removed the blackberry pie from the oven and put it on the windowsill to cool.
The explanation such as it was could not be believed by any rational person.
The explanation, such as it was, could not be believed by any rational person. Rule 5
Laura lived in Island Grove Florida before moving to Dalton Georgia.
Laura lived in Island Grove, Florida, before moving to Dalton, Georgia. Rule 6
I will walk on the treadmill or I will walk in the park.
I will walk on the treadmill, or I will walk in the park. Rule 1
When you write an essay state your thesis clearly.
When you write an essay, state your thesis clearly. Rule 2
Maria opened her math book and then began doing problems 1 through 10.
Maria opened her math book and then began doing problems 1 through 10.
The movie was boring meaningless and confusing.
The movie was boring, meaningless, and confusing. Rule 4
Chris ran out the door jumped over the fence and raced down the road.
Chris ran out the door, jumped over the fence, and raced down the road. Rule 3
Amelia wore sensible durable clothing.
Amelia wore sensible, durable clothing. Rule 4
That's a bathing suit top not a piece of string.
That's a bathing suit top, not a piece of string. Rule 6
After hearing her excuse I still did not believe her.
After hearing her excuse, I still did not believe her. Rule 2
My family lived in Florence Italy during my high school years.
My family lived in Florence, Italy, during my high school years. Rule 6
As you might have guessed the color of course was permanent and I ended up going to class that night with black hands and black fingernails.
As you might have guessed, the color, of course, was permanent, and I ended up going to class that night with black hands and black fingernails. Rule 2 Rule 5 Rule 1
He assured me that we would be using nonpermanent hair coloring so I helped him.
He assured me that we would be using nonpermanent hair coloring, so I helped him. Rule1
One afternoon before my night class he asked me to help him dye his blonde hair black.
One afternoon before my night class, he asked me to help him dye his blonde hair black. Rule 2
Though my son did not wear flowers in his hair he did experiment with his hair color his hairstyles and his clothing.
Though my son did not wear flowers in his hair, he did experiment with his hair color, his hairstyles, and his clothing. Rule 2 Rule 3
I eventually quit wearing garlands of flowers married a manipulative self-centered musician and had a son.
I eventually quit wearing garlands of flowers, married a manipulative, self-centered musician, and had a son. Rule 3 Rule 4
My reasoning wild as it may seem convinced my parents that they need not worry about me.
My reasoning, wild as it may seem, convinced my parents that they need not worry about me. Rule 5
I was however an A student and I believed my As justified my flowery whimsical appearance.
I was, however, an A student, and I believed my As justified my flowery, whimsical appearance. Rule 5 Rule 1 Rule 4
When I was in college I used to wear garlands of clover in my hair.
When I was in college, I used to wear garlands of clover in my hair. Rule 2
My professors pretended not to notice but I suspected that they did.
My professors pretended not to notice, but I suspected that they did. Rule 1
Some of these garlands would have extensions of flowers that hung to the ground.
Some of these garlands would have extensions of flowers that hung to the ground.
However even the top of the refrigerator was not safe from Moonbear.
However, even the top of the refrigerator was not safe from Moonbear.
After the cherry pie incident I was more careful where I put baked goods to cool.
After the cherry pie incident, I was more careful where I put baked goods to cool.
He had eaten half of the pie before I was able to stop him.
He had eaten half of the pie before I was able to stop him.
Before I knew what was happening Moonbear jumped onto the table and began eating the hot cherry pie.
Before I knew what was happening, Moonbear jumped onto the table and began eating the hot cherry pie.
For example I once removed a freshly baked cherry pie from the oven and I put it on the center of the dining room table to cool.
For example, I once removed a freshly baked cherry pie from the oven, and I put it on the center of the dining room table to cool.
When he was hungry he could move at incredible unimaginable speeds.
When he was hungry, he could move at incredible, unimaginable speeds.
Of all his amazing tricks the one that amazed me the most was his speed.
Of all his amazing tricks, the one that amazed me the most was his speed.
He was also a very useful dog for he had the ability to scare off would-be intruders.
He was also a very useful dog, for he had the ability to scare off would-be intruders.
Moonbear was a smart quick and hungry dog.
Moonbear was a smart, quick, and hungry dog.
In the mid-1970s I had a diabolical intelligent dog named Moonbear.
In the mid-1970s, I had a diabolical, intelligent dog named Moonbear.
For example I enjoy reading walking and singing.
For example, I enjoy reading, walking, and singing.
After sitting in the snow for 10 minutes I began to freeze.
After sitting in the snow for 10 minutes, I began to freeze.
Since it was snowing we did not enjoy having class outside.
Since it was snowing, we did not enjoy having class outside.
During the bomb scare teachers held classes outside on the lawn.
During the bomb scare, teachers held classes outside on the lawn.
I was going to do the dishes but I was distracted.
I was going to do the dishes, but I was distracted.
In need of water the desperate travelers searched for an oasis.
In need of water, the desperate travelers searched for an oasis.
Tom Lizzy and Geoffrey drove to Playalinda and surfed all afternoon.
Tom, Lizzy, and Geoffrey drove to Playalinda and surfed all afternoon.
If you don't mind it is my turn to have a crisis.
If you don't mind, it is my turn to have a crisis.
I admire your problem but I don't have any solutions to offer you.
I admire your problem, but I don't have any solutions to offer you.
Laura worked nights and attended Dalton State during the day.
Laura worked nights and attended Dalton State during the day.
Sandra worked during the day and she attended Dalton State on Monday nights.
Sandra worked during the day, and she attended Dalton State on Monday nights.
My son was afraid of spiders when he was younger.
My son was afraid of spiders when he was younger.
When I was younger I was afraid of the lawnmower man.
When I was younger, I was afraid of the lawnmower man.
In addition she was running a temperature of 102.
In addition, she was running a temperature of 102.
Laura was tired exhausted and frustrated after such a busy day.
Laura was tired, exhausted, and frustrated after such a busy day.
counterargument
Counterargument: Completely open borders would put our security at risk.
Response: The writer agrees that open borders could create some security problems. However, they argue that there are other ways to control the border without criminalizing immigrants.
Claim: Border policy should not criminalize undocumented immigrants.
The author believes that people sometimes cross the border illegally because they are in difficult or dangerous situations and want a better life for themselves and their families. The author understands that open borders could cause security problems, but believes there are better ways to handle immigration. Overall, the author thinks immigrants should be treated with respect, empathy, and understanding instead of being treated like criminals.
Claims of Value
Example: “Social media can be harmful to teenagers.” This is a claim of value because it gives an opinion about whether something is good or bad.
Claims of Fact
Example: “Temperatures around the world are increasing because of climate change.” This is a claim of fact because it can be supported or challenged using evidence and data.
Claims of Policy
Example: “Schools should allow students to use their phones during lunch.” This is a claim of policy because it suggests what schools should do.