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  1. Jul 2019
    1. journeyed to Denver, who died in Denver, who came back to Denver & waited in vain, who watched over Denver & brooded & loned in Denver and finally went away to find out the Time

      The way this is written is a little confusing. It makes it seem as if these are separate people but most likely is just one person stuck in between. They died but not really, they continued to exist like a ghost but they got tired of being a ghost and when dofind our how to just straight up go?

    2. who talked continuously seventy hours from park to pad to bar to Bellevue to museum to the Brooklyn Bridge, a lost batallion of platonic conversationalists jumping down the stoops off fire escapes off windowsills off Empire State out of the moon yacketayakking screaming vomiting whispering facts and memories and anecdotes and eyeball kicks and shocks of hospitals and jails and wars,

      Brings attention to people who are dismissed by society. They aren’t taken care of, often forgotten, often mistreated and misunderstood, and left to fend for themselves despite not having the resources and/or support to do so. I’m assuming this speaks about the homeless. They’re the ones can often be seen carrying dreams and not being able to fulfill them due to circumstances.

    3. with dreams, with drugs, with waking nightmares,

      Very Harlem-esque. “What happens to a dream deferred?” (Hughes, 1951) Up to this point talking less about the dream and more about the people who held them. Great minds being those who weren’t able to get recognition for their work due to addiction, poverty, their overall environment. Varying factors led to dreams dying, getting lost, or just deferred.

    4. who

      The repetition of the word “who” at the beginning does two things for me. 1) gives off serious bible vibes, similar to how the Bible repeated who begat who. 2) serves to emphasize the specific great minds that were lost. This creates a sense of passion, as if they’re trying to prove a point or hype something up.

  2. Jun 2019
    1. Hate, little baby, hate deep, You mustn’t know my fears.

      The mother is nurturing her baby to grow strong against those who have wronged her and her husband. The part that I don't quite get is "You mustn't know my fears." Why teach your baby your beliefs and not express how fear engages them. I'm wondering if she ultimately fears that the baby will turn on her in the future...

    2. The world is our room!

      This is talking in support of the spread of communism. Physically dead but Lenin lives through his legacy and through the people with similar views and ideals. Playing with the limbo of being between life and death.

    3. The million men and a million boys, come out of hell and crawling back, maybe they don’t know what they’re saying, maybe they don’t dare but they know what they mean:

      Dempsey appears to represent a type of person who is probably stuck in a particular mindset post war. Men and boys who go to war are expect to do things for people. It is a kill or be killed environment for some and they have to see and experience things that really mess them up. I think this is what this line is getting at. People getting close to death, continuing to live knowing death.

    4. Only spring arrived at its fulfillment, at the peak or verdurous blossoming connotes the quick deep breath of hope again

      Right off the bat, we see a contrast between "The Waste Land" and "Poem for May First"'s interpretations of seasons. In "The Waste Land" spring is frowned upon for showing off life in front of the dead, whereas "Poem for May First" is hopeful and celebrates its arrival.

    1. The river bears no empty bottles, sandwich papers, Silk handkerchiefs, cardboard boxes, cigarette ends Or other testimony of summer nights

      Shows the lack of human activity.

    2. Sweet Thames, run softly till I end my song, Sweet Thames, run softly, for I speak not loud or long.

      I get this image of wanting to be swept away by a current, however still reluctant because you have obligations. This line is contradictory because the narrator is asking the Thames to wait for the duration of a song but still telling it it wont take long.

    3. Here is no water but only rock Rock and no water

      Water is life. Since there is only rock here, there is nothing available to help people live. They are to the point where they can't even stop to think about the possibility of being alive. The amount of dryness at this point lets them know its over. However, they are still moving somehow.

    4. He who was living is now dead We who were living are now dying With a little patience

      People here are moving from life to death. With little patience to not be in between the two? To not have to physically suffer and be mentally tormented?

    5. A current under sea Picked his bones in whispers. As he rose and fell He passed the stages of his age and youth Entering the whirlpool.

      in this section, nature is alive and personified. I think this helps contrast the state of the man's bobbing body in the water. cruzjuan's idea of being kept in a cycle is interesting, but I'm wondering if Phlebas' life is flashing before his eyes and that is what the whirlpool is...?

    6. And the profit and loss.

      Here they are bringing up two contrasting ideas. Not only in the nature of the two words, but these are man made concepts existing among nature.

    7. “Are you alive, or not? Is there nothing in your head?”

      The status of in between being alive and dead is brought up here again. There is a possibility that the person is in shock or confused by the status to the point that they cannot respond.

    8. “Do “You know nothing? Do you see nothing? Do you remember “Nothing?”

      What is the point of asking these questions when there is an answer expected? Is it a confirmation of nothing?

    9. I was neither Living nor dead, and I knew nothing

      Again, they mention being in between a state of life and death. Since they were in neither, there is confusion that they seem uncomfortable with.

    10. April is the cruellest month, breeding Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing Memory and desire, stirring Dull roots with spring rain.

      From this first section, there is a lot of mixing and blending of things. Whether it be of seasons, activities, or living status, the narrator seems to have disdain towards things that are existing in between.

    1. The way to say.

      This line almost embodies everything. I don't really understand what is going but I think this piece really playing with sounds and the mind. If you take your time going through each word or phrase, you kind of just read it to read. If you're trying to get through the piece, I found it that mind would insert words that it found missing, changing the word completely, or even rearranging the order of words. Could Sacred Emily actually be Scared Emily and this just her losing herself in thought, I don't know.

    2. Push sea push sea push sea push sea push sea push sea push sea push sea.

      The choice in repetition in the words push and sea is beautiful. Push is going into the word sea, so much so, it almost creates a wave coming back and forth. It's repeated enough that after a while it looks like sea push and not push sea.

    1. Forgive me they were delicious so sweet and so cold

      "This is just to say," for starters sounds like something you would leave as a memo to someone. Up until the point when the speaker says "forgive me," everything seems sincere. As if they were really hungry and couldn't help themselves. When they say "They were delicious so sweet and so cold," it almost changes the tone of the poem because it's showing that despite taking something that wasn't theirs, they almost thoroughly enjoyed it.

    2. The pure products of America go crazy—

      At first I thought this was going to refer to manufactured products from America but as I continued to read it seems that the products refers to American people with an American mindset. Everyone wants something they can't have and it drives them to do things that isn't normally expected from them.

    1. An “Image” is that which presents an intellectual and emotional complex in an instant of time.

      It's interesting to describe an image as a representation of something intellectual and complex yet wanting to view it superficially by looking at it for what it is and not for what it does. Henry Adams, would be upset.

    2. “In a Station of the Metro” (1913) The apparition of these faces in the crowd; Petals on a wet, black bough.

      This is an interesting comparison used to describe how life is momentary. In passing of the subway, how often do you really see who you're walking past? In similar scenes, directors typically display this by blurring peoples faces or just increasing their shadows. But the petals on wet, black bough just have the right saturation for the same effect.

    1. And miles to go before I sleep,

      I'm interested in knowing more about the rhyme scheme of this poem. The rhyme in the third line within each stanza is what dictates the following rhyme in the upcoming stanza. This follows through until the end, when all four lines rhyme. Since the rhyme is chained, I'm also wondering how far that carries into the meaning of this poem.

    2. Because it was grassy and wanted wear; Though as for that the passing there Had worn them really about the same,

      Even though these roads were similar to one another, the road that was ultimately taken seems to be more unconventional which is why it had be traveled on less by other people. It could not only be traveled on less but also, more difficult.

    1. I spun, I wove, I kept the house, I nursed the sick, I made the garden

      From Petit, the Poet to Lucinda Matlock, the amount of livelihood increases. The more each narrator is present in their lives, their "ghost" in the poem isn't as intense.

    2. I am out of your way now

      This definitely gave, old town witch vibes. Where the narrator, was more involved than the average "witch", spent their lifetime trying to improve the town by making literature accessible to them. It seems that their efforts were unappreciated and the town seems to be okay being kept in the dark. After a lot of effort from the narrator, they've just given up trying to provide for them. I am out of your way now, is portrayed as an annoyed comment as if they're going to follow up with, "are you happy now?!"

    1. Mr. Flood

      Mr. Flood seems to be different versions of himself. When first mentioned that he approached this town, Mr. Flood is a poet returning home. When he starts drinking and talking to se secondary Mr. Flood, it seems as if he spoke to a past self before fame and forgetting his roots. It could be that no one celebrates him like they used to and he is humbling himself and returning to himself. It's a little hard to tell.

    2. Poets and kings are but the clerks of Time

      By calling poets and kings the clerks of Time, Robinson suggest that their work and legacy is remembered beyond their years. Even though poets and kings are normal mortal human beings, they have an everlasting impact that allows them to continue to live past their lifetime.

    1. It well may be. I do not think I would.

      I don't understand the purpose of this line because it goes against what was previously said. If love is not anything that is truly essential to your functioning, and once gone if it causes you so much pain, why not just let it go. That is the kind of intention that the poem initially gives off. I think it just tries to show instead that maybe no matter how hard you try, love is all...?

    2. nor

      "Nor" is being followed by things that are essential to humans, one way or another, and by saying that love isn't those things, the poem shows how much people depend on love or how much they expect from it. It seems as if the narrator has had their heart broken and is starting to move one from the person they were in love with. You can still sense some levels of disdain coming from the piece. You get to the point, I feel, where you just want to say, "Calm down, drama queen." But that is just me.

    1. there is no true American music but the wild sweet melodies of the Negro slave; the American fairy tales and folklore are Indian and African; and, all in all, we black men seem the sole oasis of simple faith and reverence in a dusty desert of dollars and smartness. Will America be poorer if she replace her brutal dyspeptic blundering with light-hearted but determined Negro humility? or her coarse and cruel wit with loving jovial good-humor? or her vulgar music with the soul of the Sorrow Songs?

      Du Bois tells the audience that we need to recognize the origins of American history and culture. People often forget the amount that African slaves, and later African American and Black people, have contributed to what is America. Traces are seen throughout peoples daily lives yet no credit is given. Instead Black people, continue to get pushed to the margins as other appropriate their culture.

    2. In this merging he wishes neither of the older selves to be lost.

      The overall wish is to exist as a person. A wish that an individual is seen for who they are and being African and American is just a plus. It is a wish to coexist with his counterparts without being judged by the color of his skin. He is proud to be black but it's hard to be when the people in power will only hate you for that.

    3. Then it dawned upon me with a certain suddenness that I was different from the others

      People often talk about how black children, predominantly, are forced to grow up faster than other children because of the world that they have to face. Du Bois illustrates how the simple injustices that he faced as a child made him realize that he wouldn't be able to enjoy simple pleasures in life the same way that his white counterparts can.

    1. An American Virgin would never dare command; an American Venus would never dare exist.

      I think this generally says that religion has no business in science, science has no business in religion. You ultimately can't succeed in either if you bring one into the other.

    2. The planet itself seemed less impressive

      The idea that the planet can't offer anything of interest drives people to create things not only to occupy themselves in the moment but to enhance what is already present in front of them. The movement away from religion, that is mentioned later, makes sense when people start taking the place of the CREATOR and there is no longer a need for a higher being.

    3. No American had ever been truly afraid of either.

      The comparison between technological advancement and religion is interesting esp. in the previous paragraphs. I think No American had ever been truly afraid of either. shows not only the lack of rigorous religious interest that Americans tend to have but also displays the American spirit to not give a fuck and pursue their goals no matter what, and in this case it's just science.

    1. She didn’t know I was in the room

      At this point the narrator is always int the room, it seems, but how was it that Jennie wasn't able to tell that she was there?! It's as if the narrator herself is becoming a part of the room. Additionally, the yellow stains on her clothes suggest that she is/could be becoming part of the wallpaper.

    2. little girl

      As mentioned earlier, by putting her in the old nursery, John is making the narrator more child-like. pushing her to infancy and attempting to remove the ability for her mind to grow through writing. Her early childhood connection to finding comfort furniture was probably triggered by his actions and pushed her to feel further discomfort in a dysfunctional room.

    3. just as if she wanted to get out

      At this point she is really starting to see herself in the wallpaper. She describes seeing a woman creeping about the pattern, yet as that moonlight hit it she felt creepy herself. There is a truly a reflection of herself there and an acknowledgement that the woman in the wallpaper wants to leave the wallpaper as much as she wants to leave the room that she is in.

    4. I know a little of the principle of design, and I know this thing was not arranged on any laws of radiation, or alternation, or repetition, or symmetry, or anything else that I ever heard of.

      Her mind tends to flourish whenever she describes the room that she is in whether is be it haunting her or just keeping her mind busy. Whenever she speaks of John it seems as if her thought is inhibited and there is frustration and dread.

    5. windows are barred for little children

      Barred windows start showing her mental imprisonment. Also the nursery is almost making her childlike and deepens her dependence on John.

    6. I get unreasonably angry with John sometimes. I’m sure I never used to be so sensitive. I think it is due to this nervous condition.

      John at this point had engrained in her that everything she is feeling is in her mind. He isn't listening and taking into consideration how she actually feels and, i think, that fuels the anger she has towards him.

    7. My brother is also a physician, and also of high standing, and he says the same thing.

      The mentioning of her high standing physician brother helps validate her belief in what her husband beliefs. Eventually adds to her doubt about her mental state.