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  1. Dec 2019
    1. Lonnie: Can we clean this section up a bit, looks like formatting is off- also if possible, on the second two points, can we break the sentence into another line after the parenteses on the 2nd point, and after the comma before "U.S. News" on the 3rd point?

  2. Nov 2019
    1. Erin: The client noted that the info is incorrect, and would like us to use something like the below. Can you shorten this?

      "Classes are offered in a blended format requiring students to be on campus half the amount of time, which offers the flexibility to learn on a timeline designed to be ideal for working professionals."

    2. Become an Ethical Leader who Drives Results Globally With a Flexible Master in Management Degree

      Erin: This headline is too long, let's swap it for another option you provided. Can we try and fit the below in a total of two lines?

      Become an Ethical and Effective Leader With a Flexible Master in Management Degree

  3. Sep 2019
    1. ihttps://www.marketwatch.com/press-release/global-knowledge-management-market-analysis-size-share-growth-trends-forecast-2016-2025-with-an-expected-cagr-of-22---researchandmarketscom-2018-08-03 | iihttps://www.bls.gov/ooh/computer-and-information-technology/information-security-analysts.htm | iiihttps://www.bls.gov/ooh/computer-and-information-technology/database-administrators.htm | ivhttps://www.bls.gov/ooh/computer-and-information-technology/network-and-computer-systems-administrators.htm | vhttps://www.linkedin.com/salary/knowledge-management-specialist-salaries-in-united-states

      Update sources to correspond with the salary changes.

    2. The global knowledge management market is expected to grow at a compound annual growth rate of over 22% between 2017 and 2025

      Replace with: Did You Know? Employment of management occupations is projected to grow 8 percent from 2016 to 2026, about as fast as the average for all occupations, which will result in about 807,300 new jobs.

      https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/home.htm

    3. Information Security Analysti

      Please replace the salary section with the following titles and salaries. Sources for each are linked to add to the footer. Thanks!

      Advertising, Promotions, and Marketing Manager- $132,620 median salary (https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/advertising-promotions-and-marketing-managers.htm)

      Public Relations and Fundraising Manager- $114,800 median salary (https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/public-relations-managers.htm)

      Training and Development Manager- $111,340 median salary (https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/training-and-development-managers.htm)

      Knowledge Manager- $70,525 median salary (https://www.payscale.com/research/US/Job=Knowledge_Manager/Salary)

  4. Aug 2019
    1. Visual Content Copyright © 2019 Marquette University. All Rights Reserved.Powered by EducationDynamics, LLC

      Can we move the accreditations above the "Why earn your degree at Marquette" block and mirror the block used for CUA- http://landers.glasspanel.com/staging.glasspanel.com/cua-msw#overlay-context=user?

      No. 14 ranked EMBA program, U.S. News & World Report, 2020 1 No. 14 Ranked Supply Chain Management program, U.S. News & World Report, 2020 2 No. 48 Ranked Part-time MBA 2

      1 https://www.marquette.edu/about/rankings.php 2 https://www.usnews.com/best-graduate-schools/top-business-schools/executive-rankings

    2. Earn a flexible master’s degree at Marquette University

      If the above can't fit on one line, can we try and extend the blue box a little so that the second line fits on one lne?

    3. Our nationally ranked graduate programs include:

      Can you align this sub-head with the subhead to the left (i.e. online graduate business studnets benefit from...)?

    4. You’ll learn from the same great faculty and curriculum with a more convenient delivery.

      Replace with the following:

      You can earn one of our online busines degress in as few as 17 months, and learn from the same great faculty and curriculum with a more convenient delivery.

  5. Jul 2019
    1. Thank you for your interest in Syracuse University. We have received your information and an admissions representative will be in touch with you shortly.

      In the meantime, we'd like to invite you to stop by for an on-campus information session. Stop by any time Monday through Thursday 8 a.m. to 7 p.m. (Fridays until 4:30 p.m.) and meet with advisors to discuss part-time study. Also, drop-in hours are available daily between 2 and 4 p.m.-no appointment needed!

    1. Copyright © 2019 EducationDynamics, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
      • Visual Content Copyright (C) 2019 Marquette University. All Rights Reserved.

      • Website powered by EducationDynamics, LLC

    2. Challenge to respond to ethical dilemmas and apply strategic communication solutions.

      Know how to respond to ethical dilemmas and apply strategic communication solutions.

    3. Teach you how to become a culturally fluent communicator, savvy data miner, strategic media expert, great writer and more.

      Become a culturally fluent communicator, savvy data miner, strategic media expert, great writer and more.

    4. Help you develop skills today’s employers desire — from communication principles to emerging technologies.

      Develop the skills today’s employers desire — from communication principles to emerging technologies.

    5. Marquette University’s renowned academic quality and focus on values are now available with the flexibility of 100% online bachelor’s and master’s communication programs. You may gain more than just an education here. You could graduate as a skilled communicator adept at navigating the changes of a complex, technological and multicultural world – with the vision and agility to stay ahead. At Marquette, learn to be the difference in your career, community and beyond.

      Page is missing a meta description. Please create one if needed.

    1. Learn from a unique interdisciplinary curriculum that combines business fundamentals with communication Collaborate with professionals and researchers through participation in a corporate communications summit Speed up your degree program by using your existing APR certification toward a two-course waiver Attend part-time and complete the program in as few as 24 months

      Add punctuation after bullets

    2. Help you develop in-demand skills today’s employers desire — from communication principles to emerging technologies Teach you how to become a culturally fluent communicator, savvy data miner, strategic media expert, great writer and more Prepare you for career enhancement across a broad range of career positions and industries Challenge you to respond to ethical dilemmas and apply strategic communication solution

      Add punctuations after bullets.

    3. hange the world through communication.Earn a 100% online communication degree.

      Alt Text for Badges: There was no way to highlight the badges on the footer. Per the client, the alt-text for the first badge states "Higher Learning Comission" but the department is "AACSB". Can you double check these?

    4. Faculty who combine industry experience with academic research

      Replace with:

      You’ll learn from faculty who combine industry experience with academic research

  6. Jun 2019
    1. Learn at a Pace that Works for You Get started by taking just one or two classes —

      Can you replace this image with the one from the mock-up (i.e. girl hands on laptop from 2nd iteration of the LP)

    2. Explore these online, part-time degree programs:

      can you add a tiny bit of space between the paragraph above and the subhead? Once the left paragraph is deleted ensure that it is in line with the "students benefit from" subhead?

    3. Flexibility: Choose from five start dates per year so you can begin your educational journey on your schedule! 1-to-1 Support: Work with a dedicated student success team that supports you from enrollment to the end of your academic career. Affordability: Get personalized assistance applying for grants, scholarships, military benefits, and other sources of aid to make your education more affordable. Community: Connect with classmates and instructors through real-time interaction during weekly synchronous learning sessions.

      The mock-up extended the rows a little so showed a total of 5 rows max. Can we do the same so that it doesn't look as text heavy vs. the right side?

    4. The Bachelor of Professional Studies in Cybersecurity Administration The Bachelor of Professional Studies in Creative Leadership The Bachelor of Professional Studies in Knowledge Management The Bachelor of Arts in Liberal Studies The Associate in Arts in Liberal Studies

      @Lonnie- can you make sure the light grey line is centered and extends to the length of the paragraphs?

    5. Syracuse University online student-centric undergraduate degrees are designed to adapt to your lifestyle and other responsibilities. Whether you are working, raising a family, or tackling a personal goal, you’ll benefit from the full-time support and undeniable spirit of our vibrant community.

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    6. Syracuse University’s online part-time programs provide students with the same quality instruction and academic rigor that has been the university’s standard for nearly 150 years. Whether you’re completing your undergraduate program, pursuing a new career, or building a foundation for a graduate degree, our flexible online degree programs help you reach your professional goals without putting your life on hold.

      Delete

    1. Electronics and Computer Technology (ECT), M.S.

      Lonnie- please add the bullet points below unde this subtitle.

      Requirements: GRE not required! • Curriculum: Choose to study either automation and controls or information technology • Career Preparation: Technical and management positions, including systems integrator, systems design and development, and project management

    2. ​​Requirements: For transfer students who’ve completed accredited associate of science (A.S.) or associate of applied science (A.A.S.)Curriculum: Critical thinking, leadership, and interpersonal and communication skillsCareer Preparation: A variety of industries, including robotics, automation, manufacturing, automotive and energy

      Lonnie- can you format this correctly so it's the same font as the page and in bullet format?

    3. ISU’s accredited, flexible, and industry-relevant curriculum fits your lifestyle and helps you complete your education in Engineering Technology, so you can make your mark in today’s technical global environment.

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  7. Apr 2019
    1. Register and receive an application fee waiver for attending Register in advance to guarantee your place Arrive 30 minutes early to allow time for parking/walking

      Remove bold

    2. Explore our graduate campus in Hillside, New Jersey. In addition to touring our campus, you'll also meet with admissions, faculty, and distinguished alumni to assist with the application process and answer any questions.

      Increase font size to align with font size on the right

    1. with scholarships, grants, federal loans, and veteran’s benefits.

      Font size looks larger here than it does in the paragraph above. Can we match the font size?

    1. Criminal Justice – Bachelor and Master levels Technology and Engineering* – Bachelor, Master, and Doctorate levels Business – Bachelor level Health & Human Services – Bachelor, Master, and Doctorate levels

      Please add the following to this list:

      Education- Bachelor and Master levels STEM- Bachelor and Master levels General Studies - Bachelor levels

    1. Today’s changing technology environment calls for a new kind of leader. Wentworth’s Master of Science in Technology Management (MSTM) prepares you to excel at the intersection of business and technology. Our cutting-edge curriculum, developed by industry experts, will provide a solid foundation in your pursuit of top information technology management positions.

      @Lonnie- is it possible to get rid of this block and place this copy on the hero to mirror the set-up from recent landers (i.e. http://landers.glasspanel.com/branded?lid=5c37e77f6ebd5)

    1. Wentworth’s part-time Master of Engineering in Civil Engineering (MEng CE) will help you move ahead in your career by building advanced civil engineering skills and knowledge. Our curriculum—designed by industry experts—will help you develop the leadership and technical skills you need to excel in this demanding field.

      @Lonnie- is it possible to get rid of this block and place this copy on the hero to mirror the set-up from recent landers(http://landers.glasspanel.com/branded?lid=5c37e77f6ebd5)

    1. Prepare to succeed in today’s fast-paced tech environment with Wentworth’s Master of Science in Applied Computer Science (MSACS). Our online degree gives you the skills and knowledge you need to create computer-based solutions for today’s workplace challenges. Increase your marketability in one of the fastest growing fieldsi in under two years.

      @Lonnie- is it possible to get rid of this block and place this copy on the hero to mirror the set-up from recent landers (http://landers.glasspanel.com/branded?lid=5c37e77f6ebd5)

  8. Jan 2019
    1. Learn how to identify new potential safety threats and respond to criminal activity in Kean’s criminal justice program, which prepare students for roles as police officers, government agents, lawyers and more. In our public administration program, gain the insight for key roles in government, healthcare, and non-profit organizations, including city manager, urban planner and government administrator.

      Our curriculum takes a practical approach to learning through case studies, hands-on experience and simulations to take students from theory to action. Our degree programs pave the way for careers in key roles that will help you serve the community and make a difference.

  9. Dec 2018
  10. Nov 2018
    1. Communication (B.A.)

      Update program list to the following:

      • Psychology (B.A.)
      • Psychology and Psychiatric Rehabilitation (B.S.)
      • English (B.A.)
      • Asian Studies (B.A.)
      • Communication- Journalism (B.A.)
      • Communication- Public Relations (B.A.)
      • Sociology (B.A.)
    2. Move Human Culture Forward with a Humanities Degree

      Client would like to explore a different headline that is more about expanding your knowledge/creating impact in the world vs. moving human culture forward.

      For example

      • Impact the world around you with a Humanities Degree
      • Advance your knowledge of the world with a Humanities Degree
      • Earn a Humanities Degree to Advance Your Career and Knowledge of the World
    3. to

      The client would like to lead with "undergrad" programs and mention paths to "grad" programs in support of pursuing undergrad programs. For this section, can you try incorporating something like the below:

      programs prepare students for advanced study as they explore and contribute to...etc

    4. and Graduate Humanities

      Please delete.

      The client would like to lead with "undergrad" programs and mention paths to "grad" programs in support of pursuing undergrad programs

    1. Real-world professional experience that leads to job placement and proven career success.

      Nationally Renowned Faculty, awarded over $2 million in competitive grants for Health Sciences since Fall 2009

    2. Access to a professional network through field experiences that will help you develop connections for your future career

      Professional Networking, through field experiences, internships and collaborations with major corporations in healthcare

    3. Training Centers & Certification prep, which facilitate certification in CPR, basic life support or first aid in as little as a day

      Replace with:

      First-hand research opportunities, where you’ll conduct and present research findings with actionable impact.

    4. hands-on training with expert faculty and clinical experiences in real medical settings will prepare you for a career path that makes a difference

      , led by expert faculty in real-world clinical settings, helps students build distinguished careers that make a difference