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"Classes are offered in a blended format requiring students to be on campus half the amount of time, which offers the flexibility to learn on a timeline designed to be ideal for working professionals."
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Become an Ethical Leader who Drives Results Globally With a Flexible Master in Management Degree
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Become an Ethical and Effective Leader With a Flexible Master in Management Degree
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Advertising, Promotions, and Marketing Manager- $132,620 median salary (https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/advertising-promotions-and-marketing-managers.htm)
Public Relations and Fundraising Manager- $114,800 median salary (https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/public-relations-managers.htm)
Training and Development Manager- $111,340 median salary (https://www.bls.gov/ooh/management/training-and-development-managers.htm)
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No. 14 ranked EMBA program, U.S. News & World Report, 2020 1 No. 14 Ranked Supply Chain Management program, U.S. News & World Report, 2020 2 No. 48 Ranked Part-time MBA 2
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Thank you for your interest in Syracuse University. We have received your information and an admissions representative will be in touch with you shortly.
In the meantime, we'd like to invite you to stop by for an on-campus information session. Stop by any time Monday through Thursday 8 a.m. to 7 p.m. (Fridays until 4:30 p.m.) and meet with advisors to discuss part-time study. Also, drop-in hours are available daily between 2 and 4 p.m.-no appointment needed!
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Challenge to respond to ethical dilemmas and apply strategic communication solutions.
Know how to respond to ethical dilemmas and apply strategic communication solutions.
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Become a culturally fluent communicator, savvy data miner, strategic media expert, great writer and more.
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Marquette University’s renowned academic quality and focus on values are now available with the flexibility of 100% online bachelor’s and master’s communication programs. You may gain more than just an education here. You could graduate as a skilled communicator adept at navigating the changes of a complex, technological and multicultural world – with the vision and agility to stay ahead. At Marquette, learn to be the difference in your career, community and beyond.
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Help you develop in-demand skills today’s employers desire — from communication principles to emerging technologies Teach you how to become a culturally fluent communicator, savvy data miner, strategic media expert, great writer and more Prepare you for career enhancement across a broad range of career positions and industries Challenge you to respond to ethical dilemmas and apply strategic communication solution
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Learn at a Pace that Works for You Get started by taking just one or two classes —
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Earn your degree online at Syracuse University.
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Flexibility: Choose from five start dates per year so you can begin your educational journey on your schedule! 1-to-1 Support: Work with a dedicated student success team that supports you from enrollment to the end of your academic career. Affordability: Get personalized assistance applying for grants, scholarships, military benefits, and other sources of aid to make your education more affordable. Community: Connect with classmates and instructors through real-time interaction during weekly synchronous learning sessions.
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The Bachelor of Professional Studies in Cybersecurity Administration The Bachelor of Professional Studies in Creative Leadership The Bachelor of Professional Studies in Knowledge Management The Bachelor of Arts in Liberal Studies The Associate in Arts in Liberal Studies
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• Requirements: GRE not required! • Curriculum: Choose to study either automation and controls or information technology • Career Preparation: Technical and management positions, including systems integrator, systems design and development, and project management
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ISU’s accredited, flexible, and industry-relevant curriculum fits your lifestyle and helps you complete your education in Engineering Technology, so you can make your mark in today’s technical global environment.
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Wentworth’s part-time Master of Engineering in Civil Engineering (MEng CE) will help you move ahead in your career by building advanced civil engineering skills and knowledge. Our curriculum—designed by industry experts—will help you develop the leadership and technical skills you need to excel in this demanding field.
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Prepare to succeed in today’s fast-paced tech environment with Wentworth’s Master of Science in Applied Computer Science (MSACS). Our online degree gives you the skills and knowledge you need to create computer-based solutions for today’s workplace challenges. Increase your marketability in one of the fastest growing fieldsi in under two years.
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Learn how to identify new potential safety threats and respond to criminal activity in Kean’s criminal justice program, which prepare students for roles as police officers, government agents, lawyers and more. In our public administration program, gain the insight for key roles in government, healthcare, and non-profit organizations, including city manager, urban planner and government administrator.
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