While both newspapers addressedthree componants of the larger conflictbetween church leaders, lawyers andlawmakers, their incongruent treat-ment of this subject suggests they wereappealing to a very different audience
The opening sentence of this conclusion feels like a solid thesis statement. Usually, we shy away from the {argument}, {argument}, {argument}, {rebuttal} thesis. But these few words make it feels like a response, instead of an attack: "Their incongruent treatment of this subject suggests..."