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  1. Jan 2025
    1. i. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print. ii. Never use a long word where a short one will do. iii. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. iv. Never use the passive where you can use the active. v. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent. vi. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

      This as well can help elevate my writing.

    2. In our age there is no such thing as ‘keeping out of politics

      This is true, everything affects everyone, it is impossible to not make something political or to simply stay out of it.

    3. If the speech he is making is one that he is accustomed to make over and over again, he may be almost unconscious of what he is saying, as one is when one utters the responses in church

      This shows that it is important to keep the passion in what you are saying even if it is the 100th time you are saying it.

    4. one often has a curious feeling that one is not watching a live human being but some kind of dummy

      I agree that is how it starts to feel, especially if their speech seems the same every time.

    5. People who write in this manner usually have a general emotional meaning – they dislike one thing and want to express solidarity with another – but they are not interested in the detail of what they are saying

      I am interested in how I can dislike and express solidarity while still maintaining the interest of what I am saying.

    6. The first contains 49 words but only 60 syllables, and all its words are those of everyday life. The second contains 38 words of 90 syllables: 18 of its words are from Latin roots, and one from Greek. The first sentence contains six vivid images, and only one phrase (‘time and chance’) that could be called vague. The second contains not a single fresh, arresting phrase, and in spite of its 90 syllables it gives only a shortened version of the meaning contained in the first. Yet without a doubt it is the second kind of sentence that is gaining ground in modern English. I do not want to exaggerate. This kind of writing is not yet universal, and outcrops of simplicity will occur here and there in the worst-written page

      It is very cool how much he breaks this down, proving furthermore that writing is becoming a forgotten art.

    7. When one critic writes, ‘The outstanding feature of Mr. X’s work is its living quality’, while another writes, ‘The immediately striking thing about Mr. X’s work is its peculiar deadness’, the reader accepts this as a simple difference of opinion. If words like black and white were involved, instead of the jargon words dead and living, he would see at once that language was being used in an improper way

      This is interesting because I like that he tells us to just cut to the chase rather than be vague and use words that aren’t helpful.

    8. But in between these two classes there is a huge dump of worn-out metaphors which have lost all evocative power and are merely used because they save people the trouble of inventing phrases for themselves.

      I like how he calls out the lack of creativity in metaphorical writing here.

    9. The writer either has a meaning and cannot express it, or he inadvertently says something else, or he is almost indifferent as to whether his words mean anything or not.

      I’ve never really thought about how when you are writing something you are trying to paint a mental picture and that it is definitely a skill to be able to do so.,

    10. These five passages have not been picked out because they are especially bad – I could have quoted far worse if I had chosen – but because they illustrate various of the mental vices from which we now suffer

      It is wild that these passages are considered bad writing, I think Orwell would have a fit reading a high school paper, it just goes to show how much it has decreased since these were written.

    11. A man may take to drink because he feels himself to be a failure, and then fail all the more completely because he drinks. It is rather the same thing that is happening to the English language. It becomes ugly and inaccurate because our thoughts are foolish, but the slovenliness of our language makes it easier for us to have foolish thoughts

      This is pretty interesting because he is essentially saying that we are making ourselves dumber by the way we speak to each other and I totally agree, slang has made our thoughts lazy.

    12. Underneath this lies the half-conscious belief that language is a natural growth and not an instrument which we shape for our own purposes.

      I like this statement because it just shows that language grows rather than something that we just use for ourselves, language is much more powerful than that.

    1. students teli me about an iirportant new skill: it involves maintaining eyecontact with someone while you text ro*.o.r" else; it's hard, but it can be done'Over the past 15 years, I've studied technologies of mobile.connection and talk

      I think that eye contact has become an important skill that is not done very well. Maintaining eye contact is a good way to make good connections.