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  1. Apr 2023
    1. FCS procurement; Price formation, which when efficient should lead to FCS prices not only reflecting the true cost of the service, but also its true value to the system; and Allocation of the cost of FCS.

      This is a test annotation

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      Yet to do anything here

  2. Mar 2023
    1. The more divergent a modelling scenario is from the current system conditions, the less relevant the results of re-dispatch simplification analysis. However, the proposed method offers an additional tool for assessing and improving our understanding of electricity systems as they currently operate. We think it is a straightforward argument that an improved understanding of the current electricity system will be helpful as we navigate the challenges associated with modelling the energy transition

      I think this should be conclusion

    2. More specifically, as perhaps in the case of generator behaviour in the NEM, the results may highlight the limitations of system designs that obscure the detail of critical operational decision-making processes, degrading the ability of stakeholders to understand how the market will operate in potential future scenarios.

      This is a nice point, but is this a function of system design or of a market overlay? The latter is a subset of the former, but good to be specific

    3. On the other hand, the use of re-dispatch simplification analysis may highlight that some components of electricity system, such as generator behavioural dynamics, cannot be well represented within models.

      re-dispatch is not showing that these components cannot be well represented, but rather that choice in their representation have a large bearing on the outcome

    4. reasonable simplifications

      Relating to a point made earlier. I feel like this entire para is actually saying domain knowledge and policy application helps orientate the "reasonableness" of asssumptions

    5. For short-term modelling, such as the hour and day-head forward processes run by AEMO [45], precise calibration to the current system state might be desirable and achievable. Over the medium term, from months to perhaps serval years ahead, ideally, simplifications would provide consistent, if imperfect, results over many years of test data. Systems such as the NEM have 10-plus years of historical data available, making testing across a broad set of conditions feasible. For longer-term modelling, replicating the current system in detail is potentially less helpful because the causal structure of the energy system is likely to change significantly [30]. On the other hand, a detailed model of how the system functions with the current set of operational and market arrangements might be very useful for testing the strengths and weaknesses of these arrangements for managing changing conditions, such as increased variable renewables, energy storage and decreasing amounts of fossil fuel-based thermal generators.

      Well written

    6. Interestingly, in this case, error balancing does not appear to occur in the unit dispatch error metrics, see [7], although there is no evidence to suggest this will be true in general.

      More discussion here about metrics. How do metrics fit into your thinking on confirmation holism?

    7. The new method is not without limitations, some simplifications can be tested with less uncertainty than others, and the method needs to be applied with consideration for the internal consistency of scenarios and how multiple simplifications may interact.

      This is more appropriate as a topic sentence? Also grammatical issues - that middle phrase

    8. ernatively, a number of techniques have been developed that model the decision-making process of energy-constrained units such as hydro generators

      some examples would be good here

    9. While this may result in a better fit to historical data, it would not represent the underlying dynamics of hydro and battery generator behaviour as they respond to changing market and water availability conditions.

      This is what most modellers would call overfitting right?

    10. However, because the opportunity cost of hydro and battery generation is not tied to a fuel cost but rather the option to energy and used it to generate power in the future when prices are higher,

      Typos and missing words. Also opportunity cost is true of pumped and reservoir hydro, but not of run-of-river

    11. , for dispatch outcomes this was the contract bidding simplification, and for price outcomes this was SRMC bidding.

      New sentence. Again, two different metrics here

    12. attribute an increased divergence between model results and historical data to a failure to improve the component representation, because we may have improved the representation but now the remaining errors within the model are less well-balanced

      See the last comment in the results section. Maybe something somewhere needs to be said about how you measure errors - e.g. the metrics. For example, in the results, you see the "true" result using dispatch targets/levels but error balancing using prices

    13. This is illustrative of the error balancing that can confound the testing of model simplifications with historical data. In this case, the use of re-dispatch simplification analysis has allowed us to track the error introduced by each subsequent simplification clearly showing that the improved performance is the result of error balancing.

      Some more needs to be said or explained here, because you are talking about error balancing with respect to price, but asserting that dispatch targets/levels are the "true" measure of model accuracy.

      Taking that to its extreme, why not choose a better measure than do re-dispatch simplification?

    14. imilarly to the dispatch outcome results, the pricing results suggest that simplifications that affect unit complete unavailability are likely to have a greater impact on outcomes than simplifications that affect unit partial unavailability assumptions.

      See my comment in table of simplifications. If partial unavailability is a subset of no availability, what you are saying is economic decommitment/full outages have a big impact

    15. The difference in volume weighted average price between the No Partial Unavailability and No Unavailability scenarios is on average 1.6 times the difference between the SRMC and Contract Bidding and No Partial Unavailability scenarios

      Refer to relevant subfigure

    16. affect unit complete unavailability are likely to have a greater impact on dispatch outcomes than simplifications that affect unit partial unavailability.

      There is maybe a point to be made (here or in discussion) that this agrees with Xenophon (previous NEM study) - unit commitment matters

    17. The potential impact of partial unavailability simplifications is estimated by the difference between the outcomes in SRMC and Contract Bidding and No Partial Unavailability scenarios. While the potential impact of complete unavailability simplifications is estimated by the difference between the No Partial Unavailability and No Unavailability scenarios.

      comma to join these sentences

    18. That is to say, the historical bids for volume above the max availability are essentially meaningless data that the operators knew would not impact on dispatch outcomes.

      More specifically, they do not impact dispatch outcomes (rather than SOs knowing it would not)

    19. wo of these scenarios are base cases, and the others progressively simplify out all partial unavailability, and then all unavailability.

      Not sure what this means - how can there be two base cases?

    20. Unit maximum availability might differ from the registered (nameplate) capacity for serval reasons. A unit might be operating with a maximum availability greater than its minimum stable operating level but less than its registered capacity, either because of a partial outage, to manage an energy constraint such as fuel availability, or because it is withholding capacity in an attempt to increase the energy price. For brevity, we will call this the partial unavailability case. The other case is when a unit has a maximum availability of zero or less than their minimum stable operating level either because of an outage or because they have de-committed (or are decommitting) for economic or maintenance reasons. We will call this the complete unavailability case.

      This would have be useful for readers to have seen before looking at the table of your simplifications. Either move this to NEM background or simplifications overview section, or reference in the table earlier on that those scenarios are described in Section x

    21. highlighting that the match with the historical distributions is much closer in 2020 than in 2018 or 2019. Although not shown, the distribution for the other scenarios in 2018, and 2019 are consistent with the 2020 results.

      I think you could ditch subfigure (c) in Figure 6. You don't talk about it really. Then facet subfigures (a) and (b) across 2018, 2019 and 2020 (i.e. split those into their own rows/columns). It's too hard right now to compare historical of a year with modelled of a year

    22. The removal of FCAS markets and ramp rates consistently causes the least deviation in yearly volume weighted average prices across 2018, 2019, and 2020. The removal of generic constraints and SRMC bidding assumptions cause similar deviations in yearly volume weighted average prices, with both showing significant variation between years. Contract bidding by hydro and battery generators causes the most deviation in yearly volume weighted average prices across all years.

      This all seems to refer to Fig (c) Reference that in parentheses

    23. removal of FCAS markets and ramp rates

      Using your italicised simplification scenario names is probably better for consistency and word count

    24. ompares

      It's hard to see the historical. Can you change the alpha/transparency of the base case points, or the marker so we can see historical?

      Or is it better to plot the errors instead?

    25. . A moving average, calculated with a centred window of width 21, has been applied to the simulation results to highlight the underlying trends in price deviation from historical values.

      What does this mean? Have you taken your 1000 intervals, applied a moving average, and then calculated error? if so, you are increasing your sample beyond your data - you probably need to explain this a bit more and justify why

      Also what is unit of the width (21)? intervals?

    26. In general,

      Is this not rather "in the aggregate". And a "However" would go well because you talk about things that buck the trend just beforehand

    27. highlighting that not all units or technology groups are affected uniformly,

      Can you choose a colour scheme that does not cycle (i.e. one with more than 15 distinct colours)? I.e. brown coal and OCGT have same colours. So hard to read which is which

    28. Figure 4:

      There is a lot going on in this figure. Can you split this into two subfigures, each sharing same x-axis but splitting y-axes. Also primary axis label - could the bit in parentheses just say Modelled - Actual

    29. only data for 2020 is plotted for better visual clarity.

      Another reason for subfigures. One plot is 2020 only, but two other sets of data plotted apply to multiple years

    30. Three measures are shown: unit capacity factor change distribution, normalised interquartile range in capacity factor change, and normalised mean absolute error (MAE) in dispatch targets.

      I think splitting figures (see comment below) will help and you won't need this here if you do that

    31. The interquartile range for all units shown, normalised to the maximum value, with the scale on the right-hand side. Lastly, the mean absolute error for unit dispatch is shown, normalised to the maximum value, with the scale on the right-hand side.

      This is now makes sense but took me a while. I think better to split into two subfigures, and in the second subfigure, have two legend boxes to distinguish MAE and IQR. Better yet, plot MAE as lines and IQR as columns in the second subfigure

    32. Detailed descriptions of each simplification are presented in the methodology, [Tbl:simplification_descriptions?].

      Summaries, detailed descriptions could go into an appendix?

    33. The Mean Absolute Error (MAE) across all units and all intervals rounds down to 0.0 MW.

      Would it be better to contextualise your last point? I.e. 1 MW is at most ~3% (1 / 30 MW) of the capacity of any unit participating in the NEM (not necessarily true of their dispatch target tho)

    34. [2] shows the distribution of deviations of modelled unit dispatch targets from historical targets.

      Figure is hard to read/interpret. What does 95th percentile and max mean?

      Also can't see 0-1MW. Can you do an inset?

      You also need to specify that it is just for 2020 in the main text

    35. 95 % of units had less than 1 MW of deviation from historical targets, and in 743 of the intervals, the maximum deviation of any unit was less than 1 MW

      Hard to see where 1MW is on the chart

    36. he purpose of the benchmarking is to demonstrate that the base dispatch model closely replicates the actual NEM dispatch procedure.

      If this is a key part of re-dispatch simplification analysis as opposed to other historical assessments, you should emphasise that

    37. Technology aggregate dispatch for the 1000 random intervals tested from 2020.

      I think more description of what is going on would help. It's not immediately obvious what it is

    38. better measure of the impact

      This is where the "extreme" comes in right? You are effectively probing a worst-case impact of simplifying one component?

    39. he SRMC bidding simplification causes a larger change in dispatch, and this change increases when ramp rates and FCAS constraints are removed

      I guess the important thing to point out here is whole is greater than the parts - i.e. no ramp + SRMC is greater than no ramp change + SRMC change

    40. For this reason, all the simplification scenarios explored in the results, [sec:results?], include the removal of FCAS markets and ramp rates.

      Something like this is needed to start this section/paragraph to make it clearer why this is in the method

    41. Simplification definitions

      You might need an Appendix that explains how bids are changed in detail

      Re pandoc, I did it by including this in YAML metadata:

      --include-after-body appendix.tex

      Where appendix.tex was my appendix which was pandoced from markdown

    42. De-commited, decommiting, or recommiting units bid parameters are not modified. De-commited units are those with no bid in volume or a maximum avialability parameter set to zero. De-commiting or re-commiting units are thermal units with an available capacity less than their minimum stable operating level, as indicated by the capacity offered at less than 0 $/MW.

      This is the sort of detail that other rows need, or the sort of detail that should be in an Appendix?

    43. Dispatch is conducted using a mixed integer linear program which maximises the value of spot market trade.

      No mention of AEMO? And you use the acronym in the next section without defining it first

    44. A summary of Nempy has been published in the Journal of Open Source Software [41], and more detailed documentation is available online

      Maybe not necessary - reference JOSS and Github in the sentence where you talk about market features

    45. By comparing scenario results we aim to determine which system components have the greatest potential to change dispatch and pricing outcomes when their model representations are simplified.

      Hmm there is a nuanced point here about which components are sensitive to simplifications (what you are focused on), and whether assumptions around simplifications are "reasonable".

      Maybe characterising these as extreme is doing you a disservice - quite a few modellers may not incorporate these components, or simplify

    46. The reason for adopting the per-interval approach is so the base case can be closely aligned with the real-world system and, the divergence of modelling outcomes from historical outcomes can be more precisely attributed to specific simplifications.

      This is repeated from your limitations para, but actually probably says it clearer. As suggested before, bring that para into method and use this sentence instead of what you have in there

    47. The results presented in [sec:benchmark?] indicate that the dispatch and pricing model implemented with Nempy for this work closely replicates the real-world procedure used by AEMO.

      OK good

    48. dynamic calculation of generic constraint right-hand side values based on unit and network SCADA. Instead, in this work, the right-hand side values calculated historically by AEMO are used.

      Is this not really a problem since you are "reinitialising" each interval with system state. That is, since you are not modelling sequentially, using AEMO values is fine?

      The limitations in your method that was in your intro could preceded the paragraoh about nempy. Limitations of method, then limitations of model. Then you could assess what impact the limitations might have. In this case, not much given your method?

    49. Nempy implements the key market features of the NEM as described in [sec:background?]. Two di

      While nempy implements the key market features of the NEM in great detail, it is missing two...

    50. costs of the supply-equals-demand and FCAS constraints to be used to determine marginal costs,

      Probably better to use shadow price? It is a cost in the objective function, but market prices are not necessarily marginal costs (outside of the mathematical definition of the optimisation problem)

    51. as part of the special ordered sets (type 2) formulation of interconnector losse

      Could simplify to just "to model". Probably not too relevant to know it's SOS2?

    52. Unit commitment constraints can be submitted for units capable of reaching minimum stable operating levels within 30 minutes, so that commitment and decommitment decisions can be made in the dispatch procedure.

      ref fast start

    53. For each unit 10 price-quantity pair offers must be submitted by 1230 hours on the day ahead of dispatch, optionally in each of the energy and eight FCAS markets [45]. The quantity component of the offer can be re-submitted up until dispatch is run for the interval. A maximum availability in each market is also submitted, which acts as a cap on the quantity that can be provided.

      Ramp rates too right?

    54. ramp rates

      Perhaps this can be further explained when you talk about bid formats, but should be explained that these are submitted or based on telemetered data

    55. The rest of this paper is structured as follows. In Section 2, we provide background on the NEM. In Section 3, the method is described. In Section 4, we present and describe the results. Section 5, discusses the results. Finally, Section 6 presents our conclusions based on this work.

      You could work this into para outlining your paper ("In this work") to save words

    56. new evidence arising from this case study on which simplifications of the NEM are likely to have the most significant impact on model results.

      See previous points about universal findings...can something be said to show that maybe this is useful for other jurisdictions without overstepping given market, topological and resource differences?

    57. Re-dispatch simplification analysis only partially addresses the problems created by confirmation holism because of two main limitations.

      So this whole para could go into the method section. You probably need to spend more words/time here setting the scene and identifying the contribution

    58. where additional model detail or effort to refine simplifications would be most effective

      This relates back to the point earlier. Your lit review showed different model simplifications were more/less important in different systems/jurisdictions

      So is this work specific to the NEM? If not, why not, given your lit review suggests that

      Having said that, it is good to relate to other power systems and why some elements might be universal. THis could have relevance to other central dispatch markets given similar market structures...but of course network topology will be different

    59. novel method, re-dispatch simplification analysis,

      It's still not clear to me how this is novel. Other studies have used historical data as a benchmark and varied model representations (your lit review). The sense I get is that it has to do with nempy being a very detailed copy of the dispatch procedure?

      Maybe your para on re-dispatch simplification needs to spell this out.

    60. hat is to say, for example, market participants will have a small reaction to small changes in market conditions and a larger reaction to large changes in conditions

      An argument against this is that energy systems consist of non-linear dynamics, which could even be the (multiplicative product) of small linear changes of system components

      Classic example is unit commitment

    61. As the detailed model uses input data specific to individual historical dispatch intervals, such as unit initial operating conditions, it is not appropriate for forward-looking modelling studies. However, because of the data aggregation and decision-making role of centralised dispatch, the dispatch model still provides an opportunity to study the impact of a broad range of simplifications that might be applied in electricity system models more generally. For example, the impact of a simplified representation of market participant decision-making can be tested by modifying the bids submitted to the dispatch model, or a simplified network representation can be tested by modifying the network constraints.

      Should this not be in the next paragraph which actually talks about what you do in the paper, or the one after which talks about limitations? All of this seems to be more specific/relevant to your work.

      If the point instead if to highlight the limitations of the approach (i.e. benchmarking against historical data), I would generalise here, e.g. As detailed model uses historical data, it becomes less appropriate as the forward period of the modelling horizon increases

    62. using the precise system state at the start of the dispatch interval, rather than modelling intervals sequentially and using the results from one interval as the initial conditions for the next

      Can you be more specific? Is it because the latter approach "propagates" model uncertainty/error

    63. compared to other approaches the current work still allows simplifications to be tested with fewer sources of confounding error, and a clearer understanding of how other simplifications contribute to model behaviour.

      Why is this? It's not particularly clear to me based on your lit review - other studies have dispatch/market models and benchmark against historical data. So why are they not doing re-dispatch simplification? Or are they?

      If the answer is nempy is highly detailed and basically is a copy of the dispatch procedure (whereas the others are not), that needs to be made clearer

      Related to this, why does re-dispatch simplification analysis lead to better results than model comparison studies? Historical data?

    64. bid volume.

      Notice you used availability but then talk of bid volume. This requires specific knowledge of NEM bidding format, which you have yet to cover. Maybe just keep with capacity availability?

    65. bids

      In the NEM we used bids. Internationally, bids refer to demand-side (buy) and offers relate to supply-side (sell). Not sure if you want/need to adapt though

    66. However, identifying the components of model formulations where simplifications have the largest impact on modelling outcomes is a useful first step for prioritising which model components to study in detail.

      I think your previous paras set this up as a reason to do this...so to me it you don't need the previous sentence about "obvious further application".

    67. While all their optimisation models show significant deviation from historical data, the results indicated that unit commitment constraints have a larger impact on model accuracy than reducing the detail of the network representation [22]. Unnewehr et al. tested the impact of network resolution on an optimisation model of the European energy system by comparing generator dispatch to historical data. Similarly, all their scenarios showed significant deviations from historical data. However, they found that increased network detail lowered the deviation from historical data for some generator types, including lignite, hard coal, and gas

      See comment later in para outlining your study about universality of simplification findings

    68. Further, the technique should be applicable to any electricity system that uses centralised dispatch.

      Surely to any energy system, so long as data can be obtained and centralised processes can be adequatlely replicated

    69. ree from significant errors so that deviations in results from historical values can be attributed with confidence to the simplifications being tested. Re

      if you can here link back to confirmation holism to be super explicit

    70. The benchmarking for our work is presented in [sec:benchmark?].

      either move to paper outline or just have the ref in parentheses to save words/space

    71. Re-dispatch simplification analysis is the use of a highly detailed model of a centralised dispatch procedure to test electricity system model simplifications.

      Really, it could involve a highly detailed energy system model - in this paper, you use an electricity system model

    72. In restructured industries, these processes operate as markets and participants submit data that reflects the state of their assets, and operational decisions and preferences.

      In some restructured industries, namely integrated or central-dispatch markets. Could cite

      Ahlqvist, V., Holmberg, P., Tangerås, T., 2018. Central- versus Self-Dispatch in Electricity Markets. SSRN Electronic Journal. https://doi.org/10/gnv8qp

      Cramton, P., 2017. Electricity market design. Oxford Review of Economic Policy 33, 589–612. https://doi.org/10/gcj9vc

    73. is often used

      can be - see comments below

      Also citation?

      Wood, A.J., Wollemberg, B.F., Sheblé, G.B., 2014. Power Generation, Operation and Control. John Wiley & Sons, Inc., Hoboken, New Jersey.

    74. ggregate system data on network and unit operating states and costs, and use optimisation techniques

      use optimisation techniques that draw on system data, including network status and unit operating states and costs,...

    75. Electricity systems are key parts of larger energy systems and are likely to become increasingly important as more energy end-use applications are electrified

      You could cite here?

    76. energy systems

      I can see how this broadly relate to energy systems as a whole, but your academic study example relate to electricity. Worth being specific, or adding something to point this out?

    77. The results presented in [sec:availability_results_results?] demonstrate this phenomenon.

      Don't think this should be here - should be in para you talk about what is in the paper

    78. hypotheses that the change improved the component representation and that the original component formulation was not balancing out other errors within the model. Without further evidence, it is impossible to know which hypothesis to reject

      Hypothesis doesn't sit right with me. Rather is it that it cannot distinguish between component improvement vs error cancellation, and that without further evidence, these two can be conflated?

    79. we

      I had to read this sentence a few times

      Maybe

      Otherwise, if there is increased divergence.., we cannot attribute it to a failure...as we may have improved the...

    80. which has assisted in diagnosing this issue in energy system modelling.

      clunky - maybe "but has received relatively little attention in energy system modelling"?

    81. aluable insight into the sensitivity of energy system models to formulation details.

      Is it worth pointing out/being specific that they provide valuable insights for their target systems (as you outline above, findings are not universal)

    82. their results showed similar average prices but larger deviations in time-resolved prices at the lower and higher ends of the distribution. They then tested 160 alternative implementations of the model finding that the selection of implementations for partial load efficiencies, unit technical constraints, time-coupling constraints, the network model, and temporal resolution are all important for balancing modelling accuracy and complexity

      can you combine these - alternative implementation + benchmarking against historical price data?

    83. A small number of studies have combined benchmarking against historical data and model comparison to test how different simplifications affect accuracy.

      Would be good to understand how this is framed relative to last para. Is this a subset of comparison studies?

    84. data [30].

      Is there something that could be said here that using historical data is not often used to actually identify which simplifications are significant, but rather if the model as a whole performs well against historical data?

    85. This approach can be taken further, through repeated testing models can be tuned to better recreate historical outcomes, for exampl

      ..taken further by repeatedly testing models and subsequently tuning them to better recreate historical outcomes.

    86. computation, model interpretation, and representational improvement

      Minor point - could order as per "top-down" modelling chain - representational improvement, computation and interpretation

    87. a role for methods that can assist in quantifying how well model simplifications represent the real-world energy system.

      A bit of a skip in logic, I think the first point is that because of these factors, model simplifications are desirable and even necessary. But we need to have methods to assist in quantifying...

    88. impacts of climate change on the energy system

      Same ref as before. Some good refs below:

      Craig, M.T., Cohen, S., Macknick, J., Draxl, C., Guerra, O.J., Sengupta, M., Haupt, S.E., Hodge, B.-M., Brancucci, C., 2018. A review of the potential impacts of climate change on bulk power system planning and operations in the United States. Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews 98, 255–267. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.rser.2018.09.022

      Bloomfield, H.C., Brayshaw, D.J., Troccoli, A., Goodess, C.M., De Felice, M., Dubus, L., Bett, P.E., Saint-Drenan, Y.-M., 2021. Quantifying the sensitivity of european power systems to energy scenarios and climate change projections. Renewable Energy 164, 1062–1075. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.renene.2020.09.125

      Ralston Fonseca, F., Craig, M., Jaramillo, P., Bergés, M., Severnini, E., Loew, A., Zhai, H., Cheng, Y., Nijssen, B., Voisin, N., Yearsley, J., 2021. Climate-Induced Tradeoffs in Planning and Operating Costs of a Regional Electricity System. Environ. Sci. Technol. 55, 11204–11215. https://doi.org/10.1021/acs.est.1c01334

    89. short-term variability in long-term models

      Good papers to cite here:

      Helistö, N., Kiviluoma, J., Holttinen, H., Lara, J.D., Hodge, B.M., 2019. Including operational aspects in the planning of power systems with large amounts of variable generation: A review of modeling approaches. Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Energy and Environment 8, 1–34. https://doi.org/10/gk45vw

      Collins, S., Deane, J.P., Poncelet, K., Panos, E., Pietzcker, R.C., Delarue, E., Ó Gallachóir, B.P., 2017. Integrating short term variations of the power system into integrated energy system models: A methodological review. Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews 76, 839–856. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.rser.2017.03.090

    90. Recent reviews of energy system modelling tools argue for continued efforts to narrow the gap between model representation and the real-world energy system

      As such,

    91. inconsistency

      Is this the right word? What are these coarse models inconsistent with? If they are inconsistent with high resolution models, you probably need to add that?

    92. The scale and critical nature of modern energy systems largely preclude physical experimentation, as a result, modelling has become an important tool for generating knowledge

      This is a good sentence but needs to be stronger and separated from previous points, e.g.:

      "However, because the scale and critical nature of modern energy (or electrical/power) largely preclude experimentation, modelling has become an important tool for generating knowledge.

    93. commercial decisions

      is the distinction here between short term and long term (business case for capital)? Would the word "operational" help?

      I.e. building a business case is informing a commercial decision right?

    94. A similar set of issues are of concern to system planner and policy-makers who routinely use modelling to help understand emerging issues, and inform policy and planning decisions [9,10,11].

      You could combine this with the first sentence:

      "Modelling is widely used in academic study, and by system planners, policy makers and market participants to...

      Alternatively, since you have a lot of stakeholders (I can see private firms next), you do something like:

      "Modelling is used by many stakeholders to aid decision-making. System planners, operators and policy-makers do...In restructured electricity industries, private firms do...Academics do... (academics might be best last because you have a follow-up sentence that talks about what they model, whereas for the other stakeholders you mention what they do in one sentence)

      You sort of do this but the mention of "academic study" in the first sentence only makes me think of academic modelling

    95. As well as, more flexible energy resources and loads such as energy storage [5], electric vehicles [6], hydrogen electrolysers [7], and various forms of demand response [8].

      This sentence doesn't make sense by itself.

      Can you combine this and the previous sentence - the ideas are much the same. Something like

      "understand how flexible resources, such as ..., will assist in operating a system with more variable...