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  1. Oct 2023

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  2. Sep 2023
    1. The recently released National Education Policy also recognizes this problem and advocates for solutionssuch as school consolidation and school complex. At a national level, if we consider we have 660,000villages and every village should have 1 school, we get to 660,000 schools. Alternatively, if Govt. schoolsneed to cater to ~140 mn students and the right size of a school is ~250 students, we need only ~6,00,000schools. In order to reach this optimized delivery structure that delivers quality education, we willpotentially need to consolidate the rest

      HELLA IMP

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    1. It was observed that there were very high learning level disparities in class 3-5 students as ~80% viewershipfor class 3-5 was inclined towards revision of previous grade content rather than new at-grade content

      FLN rallyists would be so disappointed

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    1. s a peer mentor as well as a teacher, I regularly interact with the kids from the village of Asawarpur andprovide them with moral and academic support to the best of my abilities.

      most imp line, this should be one of your first bullet points

    2. want to establish structure andinculcate discipline and dedication towards the society among the members, you don't want to taint the freedom of expression that comeswith the art form, with rules and boundations.

      can restructure as "established and implemented structure, discipline, and dedication within the society without compromising on the freedom of expression.."

    3. From appdesigning to understanding the psychological motives and reservations behind donating, this internship taught me that social sector is notjust about a good cause, it's about how you put forth the cause and make other people a part of it.

      put this more in terms of "designed apps and researched psych motives.." if that's what you did. "explored various ways of communicating causes.." or something like that for the last line maybe

    4. Subjects

      add any courses you've done that are relevant to what you're applying for -- psych and socio will reflect through your degree. socio can add in education as minor upar

    5. Neev - The Community Engagement Club - Role: Peer Mentor/ Teacher | Cause: Education | Oct 2021 - Present

      Explaining what Neev does is great, but emphasise what you did - what types of things did you teach them, what kinds of things did you do with them.. talk about academics, socioemotional development, holistics growth - dance/extracurriculars.

    6. We had a weekly activitywhich required us to write about an act of 'agape love' that we carried out orobserved someone else practicing that week. To read up about the various acts ofkindness people around the world (enrolled in this course) practiced, as well asobserving it in my own environment every week, was really refreshing and certainlyone of my favourite aspects of the course!

      not really relevant what did you learn? e.g. how can in be incorporated into social services/ why did this course better equip you?

    7. The role also involved facilitating teamwork, open communication, event management and problem solvingwhile pushing each individual to reach their full potential

      Niceee

    8. Co-head of the Indian core |
      1. Team size you managed?
      2. The content is good - frame it more in terms of created a structure while trying to balance individuality; not that it is tricky to, but that you did.
    9. As part of the Emerging Leaders Experiential Program(ELEP) offered by the Centre for Social Impact and Philanthropy(CSIP), I interned atthis upcoming app based NgO platform called, Ek Ka Josh. Interning there for 2 months provided me with a significant insight into the socialsector and what goes on behind creating these platforms that allow and motivate us to direct our actions towards social good. From appdesigning to understanding the psychological motives and reservations behind donating, this internship taught me that social sector is notjust about a good cause, it's about how you put forth the cause and make other people a part of it.
      1. You don't need to say you interned at Ek Ka Josh in the description as it is already mentioned in the title - you can just say you participated in ELEP offered through CSIP>
      2. The second line you can remove entirely, and focus more on what you did in the internship, and learned in terms of skillls.
    10. Though I joined Muskurahat Foundation as a crowdfunding intern, my role and my experience wasn't limited to just raising funds. Thisinternship taught me how to present a pitch to different demographics in different ways that appealed to their individual beliefs and vision. Idid a gateway course on crowdfunding as well as part of the internship, and experienced first-hand the practical pros and cons of raising fundsthrough crowdfunding.
      1. Say how much you raised
      2. To organise this info - you can put one point as about the crowd-funding and one other things you learned, and last about the course you did - mention the course name and where you did it from if you can.
      3. You can remove pros and cons of crowdfunding part.
      4. In the visions and beliefs point make it a little more action oriented, something like - designed strategies to target different demographics to appeal to their specific interests + beliefs.
    11. EDUCATION

      Update ASP details Subjects/Electives refers more to courses done outside of school I think - so if you've done any specific classes add, otherwise this section can be removed I think, esp cause you have said degree in psych.

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  3. Aug 2023