Okay, wrapping up this deep reading of the paragraph. I think there are a few things going on here.
First, this paragraph is trying to do way too many things at once. It is trying to introduce "listening at scale", constraint vs enabling, and "tools for conviviality", but because you're trying to fit that all in one paragraph there isn't space to even explain what each thing means, let alone how they relate to each other. Each of these concepts should be at least a paragraph, if not more.
I think this is symptomatic of a broader issue with the book, which is that it tries to talk about everything and as such doesn't have much time to either teach the reader, or try to persuade the reader. (You do make arguments but you spend so little time on each one, and there are so many, that I find it hard to remember what they even are.)
In the fiction-writing world we have a concept called "kill your darlings". That doesn't mean "kill off your favorite characters", it means: be willing to cut your favorite characters, scenes, plotlines, descriptions, dialogues, etc, if it is not serving the story. Every single sentence has to justify its existence. If I was your editor I would ask you to look at the book as a whole, determine the half of your arguments/references/quotes/concepts that feel the most crucial to what you're trying to convey, and cut the rest. Then you could use the freed up space to actually explain these concepts and how they relate to your larger arguments.
I know you're pretty far along in the process, so "cut out half the book" is not helpful advice, but perhaps an approach to consider next time. You clearly have a ton to say and a lot of amazing references/projects/sources to mention, but the way it's done here just feels like it's not making the most of either your talent as a writer nor the material you're trying to present.