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  1. Jun 2023
  2. Aug 2021
    1. he writing process itself provides one of the best ways to help students learn the active, dialogic thinking skills valued in academic life.

      Process, rather than product. Sounds good, but how many of us actually practice this philosophy?

  3. Oct 2020
    1. Other disasterssuch as horrific death of a huge figures such as the beloved Robert Kennedy (who was said to be the next president), and Doctor Martin Luther King, as well as basketball legend Kobe Bryant, and famous black actor Chadwick Boseman.

      These are good examples that speak to the reader

    2. Both of these had dramatic effects on everyday human life

      I think a new paragraph here would help make your point clearer

    3. The way both of these years just screamed disaster.

      Strong and evocative language - I like the metaphor

  4. www.brooklyn.cuny.edu www.brooklyn.cuny.edu
    1. Not a great website in general.

    2. Student Emergency Assistance Fund

      Important information for students

    1. Discussion Boards

      I often use discussion boards. And I certainly have mixed feelings about using it.

    2. No matter how much Hodges experiments, some students will only want to use the discussion boards the minimum amount for credit, he admits.

      At a certain point you can't force students to engage on a deeper level.

    1. but will 2020 be the year that equality wins the fight once and for all

      That is the eternal question!

    2. The 1960s is a decade known for change in America. This change was brought on by the people and was meant to bring justice and equality to the people. 1968 in particular was a very active year in terms of social movements, politics, music, and so on.

      I so agree with this!

    1. Speaking

      New paragraph, or with some rewriting, it could be the last sentence of the paragraph leading into a new paragraph on Charles Moore's photographs.

    2. Due to the way that our minds process information, visual communication in the form of photographs is of the utmost importance.

      Connects to class subject: visual communication

    3. Impactful photographs have often been referred to as a snapshot in time. That moniker genuinely captures both the literal and figurative impact of photos.

      Strong opening that helps frame the essay's theme.