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  1. Dec 2017
    1. according to which being watched by others while performing a task causes physiological arousal, which increases an organism’s tendency to make the dominant response.

      You could revise it to say: He then constructed his drive theory, "where being watched by others while performing a task causes a physiological arousal, thus increasing the organism's tendency to make the dominant response."

  2. Oct 2017
    1. But, we all know that is an estimate that sometimes be off.

      You can either say "But, we all know that is an estimate that CAN sometimes be off" or you can say "But, we all know that is an estimate that IS sometimes off".