in particular ?

are possible within yt, or just possible in general?

support or supporting

So this is what is actually done, not the attempted method? Worth making very clear.

probably want to specify the section.

substantial

Does dask need to be defined? Need to check above.

hanging sentence

a researcher or researchers

In the published version, will all the section numbers be in the titles? I realized that I did not know what section I was in, nor what 1.6.1.3 was.

Table 2

I think some more explanation of this figure could be useful. Like the lines are (probably) showing different levels of refinement. What is black versus grey? This would also probably help for why the box selector region is not actually a box.

Does this belong here or in the Future Directions subsection. Haven't gotten there yet, but wanted to make a note.

enumerated

Move this to after the second-to-last sentence in this paragraph, and then have this sentence and "The accepted YTEPs have included..." into their own paragraph that ends with "Below, we include a table..."

This way the first paragraph is all about what a YTEP is, and the second paragraph is how we have used it in yt.

I still wasn't able to really get what "linting" is from this section.

prominently I think

Is this a totally obvious word to most readers? I don't know what it means.

Without much experience looking at our developer community, I would have thought that these would be swapped.

I found this github page that has some good references on these points. Can look at in more detail if you want! https://github.com/gvwilson/10-newcomers

However, the single biggest update/addition