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  1. Oct 2016
    1. Of course, bathrooms are only part of the puzzle in addressing gender inclusivity in the office, but they are spaces that are sensitive to such personal issues.

      This topic sentence relates to the main topic of the essay because it includes another reason why it's so important to create a gender neutral environment.

    2. “There are five billion people in the world and five billion unique sexual identities.

      This was a deep and interesting thought to me. It made me think about how different each and everyone of us are different in so many ways.

    3. manifestations

      events showing ones sexuality

  2. Sep 2016
    1. motions, so the

      IC, fanboys IC

    2. anti-capitalism, psychogeography, and participation

      x,y,and z

    3. universal, but with

      IC, fanboys IC

    4. Homelessness is not truly the condition of not having a home. Because the homeless indeed have a home they build on the streets or in the tunnels, their condition is more accurately described as the absence of a stable home.

      this brings new insight on what it really means to be homeless that many of us don't perceive.

    5. omeless demonstrate how urban space impacts the psyche and directs behavior.

      can be tied to how Schindler argues that architecture dictates human behavior.

    1. home, we might also consider the technologies of production that exist in our own rhetorical pedagogies.

      They say: technologies of production that exist in our own rhetorical pedagogies.

      I say: a good rhetorical pedagogue's job is to help students become invested.

    2. engagement, and while

      IC, fanboy IC

    3. xperiences, learns, understands, and invents

      x,y, and z

    4. home, depending

      IC, IC

    5. theorist, Benjamin

      DC, IC

    6. The subject is implicated within the process, and that relational position is also revealed in the act of investigation.

      IC, fanboy IC

    1. laws restricting the use of eminent domain; however, many of those new laws retained exceptions allowing its use to clear blight.

      semicolon is used to long the 2 IC's. subordinate conjunction "however" is used to continue the idea

    2. This fence, which was constructed by the local housing authority with funding from the Department of Housing and Urban Development (HUD), blocked access to and through Rosedale, a contiguous, mostly white neighborhood.

      This fence, which was constructed by the local housing authority with funding from the Department of Housing and Urban Development (HUD). It blocked access to and through Rosedale, a contiguous, mostly white neighborhood.

      When splitting the sentence into two sentences, it gives a subtle pause.

    3. The architected urban landscape regulates, and the architecture itself is a form of regulation.

      The architected urban landscape regulates. The architecture itself is a form of regulation. a comma and fanboy is used to make the sentence smooth and appealing to the reader.

    4. Although the Atlanta, Georgia, metropolitan area is known for its car-centric, sprawling development patterns, it has a subway system: the Metro-politan Atlanta Regional Transit Authority (MARTA).

      Emphasis is created through the use of a colon on the name of the subway system, MARTA.