Concrete words are more direct in our thoughts and we use words to describe it in the best sense we can. Wth abstract words, we lose vision on what our true purpose is and the meaning is changed of the overall sentence.

This to me is very interesting because it really explains that what the author's mind directly reflects on his writing. Writers must be clear and concise and use concrete words to draw attention to the essay.

"Not only because their grammar is bad and their sentences incomplete" really shows how much the author of this source looks down on the writing of this generation. Haltman says that ideas should be concrete and physical no abstract.

This relates to Haltmans text because he stresses the importance of your ideas. Ideas is what's important and getting the grasp on ideas is whats the key point.

This is very similar to Haltmans primary text by saying our ideas should be concrete and physical. We should be able to grasp our ideas and see it vividly

Many things in our education have changed over the past few decades. The quality of writing and skills have declined and it shows by the results and the confidence of today's students.

Although this object can be viewed as a gathering of dirt and minerals, this finding is very intriguing because it shows that people even back then were finding ways to write and record their history and their stories. If this is legitimate and is actually a finding of a utensil to write with, then it is shown that even with little knowledge and not many resources, people created something out of nothing.