Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Carayon and Strutt addresses the role of cell-scale signaling during the establishment of planar cell polarity (PCP) in the Drosophila pupal wing. The authors induce locally the expression of a tagged core PCP protein, Frizzled, and observe and analyze the de novo establishment of planar cell polarity. Using this system, the authors show that PCP can be established within several hours, that PCP is robust towards variation in core PCP protein levels, that PCP proteins do not orient microtubules, and that PCP is robust towards 'extrinsic' re-polarization. The authors conclude that the polarization at the cell-scale is strongly intrinsic and only weakly affected by the polarity of neighboring cells.

Major comments:

The data are clearly presented and the manuscript is well written. The conclusions are well supported by the data. 

(1) The authors use a system to de novo establish PCP, which has the advantage of excluding global cues orienting PCP and thus to focus on the cell-intrinsic mechanisms. At the same time, the system has the limitation that it is unclear to what extent de novo PCP establishment reflects 'normal' cell scale PCP establishment, in particular because the Gal4/UAS expression system that is used to induce Fz expression will likely result in much higher Fz levels compared with the endogenous levels. The authors should briefly discuss this limitation.

(2) Fig. 3. The authors use heterozygous mutant backgrounds to test the robustness of de novo PCP establishment towards (partial) depletion in core PCP proteins. The authors conclude that de novo polarization is 'extremely robust to variation in protein level'. Since the authors (presumably) lowered protein levels by 50%, this conclusion appears to be somewhat overstated. The authors should tune down their conclusion.

Significance: 

The manuscript contributes to our understanding of how planar cell polarity is established. It extends previous work by the authors (Strutt and Strutt, 2002,2007) that already showed that induction of core PCP pathway activity by itself is sufficient to induce de novo PCP. This manuscript further explores the underlying mechanisms. The authors test whether de novo PCP establishment depends on an 'inhibitory signal', as previously postulated (Meinhardt, 2007), but do not find evidence. They also test whether core PCP proteins help to orient microtubules (which could enhance cell intrinsic polarization of core PCP proteins), but, again, do not find evidence, corroborating previous work (Harumoto et al, 2010). The most significant finding of this manuscript, perhaps, is the observation that local de novo PCP establishment does not propagate far through the tissue. A limitation of the study is that the mechanisms establishing intrinsic cell scale polarity remain unknown. The work will likely be of interest to specialists in the field of PCP.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The study explores a molecular mechanism by which C. elegans detects low-quality food through neuron-digestive crosstalk, offering new insights into food quality control systems. Liu and colleagues demonstrated that NSY-1, expressed in AWC neurons, is a key regulator for sensing Staphylococcus saprophyticus (SS), inducing avoidance behavior and shutting down the digestive system via intestinal BCF-1. They further revealed that INS-23, an insulin peptide, interacts with the DAF-2 receptor in the gut to modulate SS digestion. The study uncovers a food quality control system connecting neural and intestinal responses, enabling C. elegans to adapt to environmental challenges.

Strengths:

The study employs a genetic screening approach to identify nsy-1 as a critical regulator in detecting food quality and initiating adaptive responses in C. elegans. The use of RNA-seq analysis is particularly noteworthy, as it reveals distinct regulatory pathways involved in food sensing (Figure 4) and digestion of Staphylococcus saprophyticus (Figure 5). The strategic application of both positive and negative data mining enhances the depth of analysis. Importantly, the discovery that C. elegans halts digestion in response to harmful food and employs avoidance behavior highlights a physiological adaptation mechanism.

Weaknesses:

Major weaknesses have been addressed.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Hawes et al. combined behavioral, optical imaging, and activity manipulation techniques to investigate the role of striatal patch SPNs in locomotion regulation. Using Sepw1-Cre transgenic mice, they found that patch SPNs encode locomotion deceleration in a light-dark box procedure through optical imaging techniques. Moreover, genetic ablation of patch SPNs increased locomotion speed, while chemogenetic activation of these neurons decreased it. The authors concluded that a subtype of patch striatonigral neurons modulates locomotion speed based on external environmental cues.

In the revision, the authors have largely addressed my concerns with additional explanation and discussion, although some of the key experiments to strengthen the authors' claim by identifying the function of specific cell populations remain to be conducted due to technical challenges. Nevertheless, the current results remain valuable and interesting to a wide audience in the field.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a novel method to measure passive joint torques - torques due to internal forces other than active muscle contraction - in the fruit fly: genetically inactivating all motor neurons in intact limb acted upon by a gravitational load results in a change in limb configuration; evaluating the moment equilibrium condition about the limb joints then yields a direct estimate of the passive joint torques. Deactivating all motor neurons in an intact standing fly provided two further conclusions: First, because deactivation causes the fly to drop to the floor, the passive joint torques are deemed insufficient to maintain rotational equilibrium against the body weight; using a multi-body-dynamics simulation, the authors estimate that the passive torques would need to be about 40-80 times higher to maintain a typical posture without active muscle action. Second, a delay between the motor neuron inactivation and the onset of the "free fall" motivates the authors to invoke a simple exponential decay model, which is then used to derive a time constant for muscle deactivation, in robust agreement with direct electro-physiological recordings.

Strengths:

The experimental design that permits determination of passive joint torques is elegant, effective, novel, and altogether excellent; it permits measurements previously impossible. A careful error analysis is presented, and a spectrum of technically challenging methods, including multi-body dynamics and e-phys, is deployed to further interpret and contextualise the results.

Weaknesses:

(1) Passive torques are measured, but only some short speculative statements, largely based on previous work, are offered on their functional significance; some of these claims are not well supported by experimental evidence or theoretical arguments. Passive forces are judged as "large" compared to the weight force of the limb, but the arguably more relevant force is the force limb muscles can generate, which, even in equilibrium conditions, is already about two orders of magnitude larger. The conclusion that passive forces are dynamically irrelevant seems natural, but contrasts with the assertion that "passive forces [...] will have a strong influence on limb kinematics". As a result, the functional significance of passive joint torques in the fruit fly, if any, remains unclear, and this ambiguity represents a missed opportunity. We now know the magnitude of passive joint torques - do they matter and for what? Are they helpful, for example, to maintain robust neuronal control, or a mechanical constraint that negatively impacts performance, e.g., because they present a sink for muscle work?

(2) The work is framed with a scaling argument, but the assumptions that underpin the associated claims are not explicit and can thus not be evaluated. This is problematic because at least some arguments appear to contradict textbook scaling theory or everyday experience. For example, active forces are assumed to scale with limb volume, when every textbook would have them scale with area instead; and the asserted scaling of passive forces involves some hidden assumptions that demand more explicit discussion to alert the reader to associated limitations. Passive forces are said to be important only in small animals, but a quick self-experiment confirms that they are sufficient to stabilize human fingers or ankles against gravity, systems orders of magnitude larger than an insect limb, in seeming contradiction with the alleged dominance of scale. Throughout the manuscript, there are such and similar inaccuracies or ambiguities in the mechanical framing and interpretation, making it hard to fairly evaluate some claims, and rendering others likely incorrect.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript Pinon et al. describe the development of a 3D model of human vasculature within a microchip to study Neisseria meningitidis (Nm)- host interactions and validate it through its comparison to the current gold-standard model consisting of human skin engrafted onto a mouse. There is a pressing need for robust biomimetic models with which to study Nm-host interactions because Nm is a human-specific pathogen for which research has been primarily limited to simple 2D human cell culture assays. Their investigation relies primarily on data derived from microscopy and its quantitative analysis, which support the authors' goal of validating their Vessel-on-Chip (VOC) as a useful tool for studying vascular infections by Nm, and by extension, other pathogens associated with blood vessels.

Strengths:<br /> • Introduces a novel human in vitro system that promotes control of experimental variables and permits greater quantitative analysis than previous models<br /> • The VOC model is validated by direct comparison to the state-of-the-art human skin graft on mouse model<br /> • The authors make significant efforts to quantify, model, and statistically analyze their data<br /> • The laser ablation approach permits defining custom vascular architecture<br /> • The VOC model permits the addition and/or alteration of cell types and microbes added to the model<br /> • The VOC model permits the establishment of an endothelium developed by shear stress and active infusion of reagents into the system

Weaknesses:<br /> • The work presented here is mostly descriptive, with little new information that is learned about the biology of Nm or endothelial cells. However, the goal of this study was to establish the VOC model, and the validation presented here is necessary for follow-on studies on Nm pathogenesis and host response.<br /> • The VOC model contains one cell type, human umbilical cord vascular endothelial cells (HUVECs), while true vasculature contains a number of other cell types that associate with and affect the endothelium, such as smooth muscle cells, pericytes, and components of the immune system. These and other shortcomings of the VOC model as it currently stands warrant additional discussion.

Impact:<br /> The VOC model presented by Pinon et al. is an exciting advancement in the set of tools available to study human pathogens interacting with the vasculature. This manuscript focuses on validating the model, and as such sets the foundation for impactful research in the future. Of particular value is the photoablation technique that permits the custom design of vascular architecture without the use of artificial scaffolding structures described in previously published works.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper investigates changes in brain oscillations in V1 in response to experimentally manipulating visual stimulus features (size, contrast at optimal size) and examines whether these effects are of perceptual relevance. The results reveal prominent stimulus-related theta oscillations in V1 that match in frequency the rhythms of behavioural performance (response speed in detecting targets in the visual display). Phase analyses relate these fluctuations of detection performance more formally to opposite theta phase angles in V1.

Strengths:

The non-human primate model provides unique findings on how brain oscillations relate to rhythms in perception (in two rhesus monkeys) that align well with findings from human studies (as occurring in the theta band). However, theta rhythms in humans are typically associated with fronto-parietal activity in the domain of spatial orienting, attentional sampling, while here the focus is on V1. Importantly, microsaccade-controls seem to speak against a spatial orienting/ attentional sampling mechanism to explain the observed effects (at least regarding overt attention).

Weaknesses:

This study provides interesting clues on perceptually relevant brain oscillations. Despite the microsaccade-control, I believe it remains an open question whether the V1 rhythmicity is of pure V1 origin, or driven by top-down input, as it is conceivable that specific stimuli capture attention differently (and hence induce specific covert attentional (re)orienting patterns). For perceptually relevant (yet beta) rhythmicity over occipital areas that are top-down generated, see e.g., Veniero et al., 2019.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper demonstrates that membrane depolarization induces a small increase in cell entry into mitosis. Based on previous work from another lab, the authors propose that ERK activation might be involved. They show convincingly using a combination of assays that ERK is activated by membrane depolarization. They show this is Ca2+ independent and is a result of activation of the whole K-Ras/ERK cascade which results from changed dynamics of phosphatidylserine in the plasma membrane that activates K-Ras. Although the activation of the Ras/ERK pathway by membrane depolarization is not new, linking it to an increase in cell proliferation is novel.

Strengths

A major strength of the study is the use of different techniques - live imaging with ERK reporters, as well as Western blotting to demonstrate ERK activation as well as different methods for inducing membrane depolarization. They also use a number of different cell lines. Via Western blotting the authors are also able to show that the whole MAPK cascade is activated.

Weaknesses

A weakness of the study is the data in Figure 1 showing that membrane depolarization results in an increase of cells entering mitosis. There are very few cells entering mitosis in their sample in any condition. This should be done with many more cells to increase the confidence in the results. The study also lacks a mechanistic link between ERK activation by membrane depolarization and increased cell proliferation.

The authors did achieve their aims with the caveat that the cell proliferation results could be strengthened. The results, for the most par,t support the conclusions.

This work suggests that alterations in membrane potential may have more physiological functions than action potential in the neural system as it has an effect on intracellular signalling and potentially cell proliferation.

In the revised manuscript, the authors have now addressed the issues with Figure 1, and the data presented are much clearer. They did also attempt to pinpoint when in the cell cycle ERK is having its activity, but unfortunately, this was not conclusive.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The tissue regeneration enhancer elements (TREEs) identified in zebrafish have been shown to drive injury-activated temporal-spatial gene expression in mice and large animals. These findings increase the translational potential of findings in zebrafish to mammals. In this manuscript, the authors tested TREEs in combination with different adeno-associated viral (AAV) vectors using in vivo luciferase bioluminescent imaging that allows for longitudinal tracking. The TREE-driven luciferase delivered by a liver de-targeted AAV.cc84 decreased off-target transduction in liver. They further screened an AAV library to identify capsid variants that display enhanced transduction for infarcted myocardium post ischemia reperfusion and myocardial infarction. A new capsid variant, AAV.IR41, was found to show increased transduction post I/R and MI.

Strengths:

The authors injected AAV-cargo several days after ischemia/reperfusion (I/R) injury as a clinically relevant approach. Overall, this study is significant in that it identifies new AAV vectors that can be used to deliver promising genes as potential new gene therapies in the future. The manuscript is well-written and the data are also of high quality.

Weaknesses:

The authors have addressed my previous concerns.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors seek to determine the underlying traits that support the exceptional capacity of Aspergillus oryzae to secrete enzymes and heterologous proteins. To do so, they leverage the availability of multiple domesticated isolates of A. oryzae along with other Aspergillus species to perform comparative imaging and genomic analysis.

Strengths:

The strength of this study lies in the use of multifaceted approaches to identify significant differences in hyphal morphology that correlate with enzyme secretion, which is then followed by the use of genomics to identify candidate functions that underlie these differences.

Weaknesses:

Although the image analysis and data interpretation is convincing, the genetic data supporting the author's model is somewhat more speculative and will likely require additional investigation.

Overall, the authors have achieved their aims in that they are able to clearly document the presence of two distinct hyphal forms in A. oryzae and other Aspergillus species, and to correlate the presence of the thicker rapidly growing form with enhanced enzyme secretion. The image analysis is convincing. The discovery that addition of yeast extract and specific amino acids can stimulate formation of the novel hyphal form is also notable. Although the conclusions are generally supported by the results, this is perhaps less so for the genetic analysis as it remains unclear how direct the role of RseA and the calcium transporters might be in supporting the formation of the thicker hyphae.

The results presented here will impact the field. The complexity of hyphal morphology and how it affects secretion are not well understood despite the importance of these processes for the fungal lifestyle. In addition, the description of approaches that can be used to facilitate the study of these different hyphal forms (i.e., stimulation using yeast extract or specific animo acids) will benefit future efforts to understand the molecular basis of their formation.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

The manuscript is focused on local bulbar mechanisms to solve the flexibility-stability dilemma in contrast to long range interactions documented in other systems (hippocampus-cortex). The network performance is assessed in a perceptual learning task: the network is presented with alternating, similar artificial stimuli (defined as enrichment) and the authors assess its ability to discriminate between these stimuli by comparing the mitral cell representations quantified by Fisher discriminant analysis. The authors use enhancement in discriminability between stimuli as function of the degree of specificity of connectivity in the network to quantify the formation of an odor-specific network structure which as such has memory - they quantify memory as the specificity of that connectivity.

The focus on neurogenesis, excitability and synaptic connectivity of abGCs is topical, and the authors systematically built their model, clearly stating their assumptions and setting up the questions and answers. In my opinion, the combination of latent dendritic representations, excitability and apoptosis in an age-dependent manner is interesting and as the authors point out leads to experimentally testable hypotheses.

In the revised manuscript, the authors have systematically addressed my previous concerns. In particular, they now refer to previous work on granule cells-mitral cell interactions more generally, they explain the pros and cons for usage of specificity in connectivity as a proxy for memory capacity, and the biological plausibility of the model.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Fontana et al. sets out to fill a critical gap in our understanding of how individuality in fear responses corresponds to changes in brain activity. Previous work has shown in myriad species that fear behaviors are highly variable, and these variabilities correlate with sex and strain, with epigenetic modifications, and neural activity in specific regions of the brain, such as the amygdala. However, a whole-brain functional assessment of whether activity in different regions of the brain is associated with fear behavior has been difficult to assess, in part due to the large size and opacity of the brain. The Kenney group overcomes these limitations using the zebrafish, together with powerful behavioral and brain imaging approaches pioneered by their lab. To overcome the technical obstacles of delivering a reproducible unconditioned stimulus in water and quantifying nuanced behavioral responses, the authors developed a three-day conditioning paradigm in which fish were repeatedly exposed to CAS in one tank context and to control water in another. Leveraging automated cluster analysis across over 300 individuals from four inbred strains, they identified four distinct memory-recall phenotypes - non-reactive, evaders, evading freezers, and freezers - demonstrating both the robustness of their assay and the influence of genetic background and sex on fear learning. Finally, whole-brain imaging using the AZBA atlas (Kenney et al. eLife) and cfos mapping coupled with multivariate analysis revealed that although all fish reengaged telencephalic regions during recall, high-freezing phenotypes uniquely recruited cerebellar, preglomerular, and pretectal nuclei, whereas mixed evasion-freezing fish showed preferential activation of preoptic and hypothalamic areas - a finding that lays the groundwork for dissecting the distributed neural substrates of associative fear in zebrafish.

Strengths:

The strengths of the study lie in the use of zeberarish and the innovative behavioral, modeling, and brain imaging tools applied to address this question. The question of how brain-wide activity correlates with variations in fear behavior is fundamental, and arguably, this system is the only system that could be used to address this. The statistics are appropriate, and the study is well reasoned. Overall, I like this manuscript very much and think it adds invaluable information to the field of fear/anxiety.

Weaknesses:

I have a few questions and suggestions.

(1) The three-day contextual fear paradigm, as implemented - one CAS pairing on day 2 followed by a single recall test on day 3 - inevitably conflates acquisition and long-term memory, making it impossible to know whether strains like TU truly recall the association poorly or simply learn it more slowly. For example, given that TU fish extinguish fear faster than AB or TL strains in extended protocols, they may simply require additional or repeated CAS pairings to achieve the same asymptotic performance. To disentangle learning kinetics from recall strength, the assay could be revised to include multiple acquisition trials (e.g., conditioning on two or more consecutive days) with an immediate post-conditioning probe to assess acquisition independent of consolidation, and continuous measurement of freezing and evasive behaviors across each trial to fit learning curves for each strain. Such refinements - even if on a subset of the strains - would reveal whether "non-reactive" phenotypes reflect genuine recall deficits or merely delayed acquisition.

(2) My second major question is with respect to Figure 3 panel B. This is a complex figure, and I can understand the gist of what the authors are attempting to show, but it is difficult to understand as it is. Can this be represented in a way that is clearer and explained a bit more easily?

(3) The brain mapping is by far one of the most interesting aspects of this study, and the methods that the group used are interesting. The brain mapping, however, relies on generating "contrasting" groups (Figure 6A), and I was not clear as to how these two groups were formed. Could the authors elaborate a bit?

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The heat shock response (HSR) is an inducible transcriptional program that has provided paradigmatic insight into how stress cues feed information into the control of gene expression. The recent elucidation that the chaperone Hsp70 controls the DNA binding activity of the central HSR transcription factor Hsf1 by direct binding has spurred the question how such a general chaperone obtains specificity. This study has addressed the next logical question, how J-domain proteins execute this task in budding yeast, the leading cell model for studying the HSR. While an involvement and in part overlapping function of general class A and B J-domain proteins, Ydj1 and Sis1 are indicated by the genetic analysis a highly specific role for the class A Apj1 in displacing Hsf1 from the promoters is found unveiling specificity in the system.

Strengths

The central strong point of the paper is the identification of class A J-domain protein Apj1 as a specific regulator of the attenuation of the HSR by removing Hsf1 from HSEs at the promoters. The genetic evidence and the ChIP data strongly support this claim. This identification of a specific role for a lowly expressed nuclear J-domain protein changes how the wiring of the HSR should be viewed. It also raises important questions regarding the model of chaperone titration, the concept that a chaperone with limiting availability is involved in a thug of war involving competing interactions with misfolded protein substrates and regulatory interactions with Hsf1. Perhaps Apj1 with its low levels and interactions with misfolded and aggregated proteins in the nucleus is the titrated Hsp70 (co)chaperone that determines the extent of the HSR? This would mean that Apj1 is at the nexus of the chaperone titration mechanism. Although Apj1 is not a highly conserved J domain protein among eukaryotes the strength of the study is that is provides a conceptual framework for what may be required for chaperone titration in other eukaryotes: One or more nuclear J-domain proteins with low nuclear levels that has an affinity for Hsf1 and that can become limiting due to interactions with misfolded Hsp70 proteins. The provides a pathway for how these may be identified using for example ChIP-seq.

Weakness

A built-in challenge when studying the mechanism of the HSR is the general role of Hsp70 chaperone system and its J domain proteins. Indeed, a weakness of the study is that it is unclear what of the phenotypic effects have to do with directly recruiting Hsp70 to Hsf1 dependent on a J domain protein and what instead is an indirect effect of protein misfolding caused by the mutation. This interpretation problem is clearly and appropriately dealt with in the manuscript text and in experiments but is of such fundamental nature that it cannot easily be fully ruled out.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, it is established that high fever-like 39{degree sign}C temperatures cause parasite-infected red blood cells to become stickier. It is thought that high temperatures might help the spleen to destroy parasite-infected cells, and they become stickier in order to remain trapped in blood vessels, so they stop passing through the spleen.

Strengths:

The strength of this research is that it shows that fever-like temperatures can cause parasite-infected red blood cells to stick to surfaces designed to mimic the walls of small blood vessels. In a natural infection, this would cause parasite-infected red blood cells to stop circulating through the spleen, where the parasites would be destroyed by the immune system. It is thought that fevers could lead to infected red blood cells becoming stiffer and therefore more easily destroyed in the spleen. Parasites respond to fevers by making their red blood cells stickier, so they stop flowing around the body and into the spleen. The experiments here prove that fever temperatures increase the export of Velcro-like sticky proteins onto the surface of the infected red blood cells and are very thorough and convincing.

Weaknesses:

A minor weakness of the paper is that the effects of fever on the stiffness of infected red blood cells were not measured. This can be easily done in the laboratory by measuring how the passage of infected red blood cells through a bed of tiny metal balls is delayed under fever-like temperatures.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript by Chen et al examines the structure of the inactive LRRK2 bound to microtubules using cryo-EM tomography. Mutations in this protein have been shown to be linked to Parkinson's Disease. It is already shown that the active-like conformation of LRRK2 binds to the MT lattice, but this investigation shows that full-length LRRk2 can oligomerize on MTs in its autoinhibited state with different helical parameters than were observed with active-like state. The structural studies suggest that the autoinhibited state is less stable on MTs.

Strengths:

The protein of interest is very important biomedically and a novel conformational binding to microtubules in proposed

The authors have addressed my original critique.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors build and analyze recurrent neural network (RNN) models of brain-computer interface (BCI) multi-task learning, developing a valuable theoretical understanding of learning-related neural population phenomena ("memory traces" and "uniform shifts") that have been reported in recent experimental studies of BCI and motor learning. The authors find that both phenomena emerge in their RNN models, and both correlate in some manner to learning-related behavioral phenomena ("savings" and "forgetting"). The authors also reveal that RNN training details, in particular, incorporating a task-indicating contextual input, can impact these population-level signatures of learning in RNN activity and their relation to those behavioral phenomena.

Strengths:

The text is well written, and the figures are clearly composed to convey the core concepts and findings. The RNN studies are elegant in their ability to recapitulate the memory trace and uniform shift phenomena, and further allow evaluations of novel scenarios that were not tested in the original corpus of the modeled animal experiments. The authors assess the sensitivity of their results to multiple approaches to RNN training, including training connectivity within a model of motor cortex, training only an upstream model that provides inputs to the motor cortex model, and providing task-indicating contextual inputs.

Weaknesses:

(1) It is unclear to what extent these RNN models operate in regimes relevant to biological neural networks (e.g., motor cortex), even at the neural-population level of abstraction studied here. Can the authors speak to how sensitive their results are to details that might speak to these operating regimes (e.g., signal-to-noise ratios or dimensionality of the RNN activities)?

(2) The work could be further strengthened by analyses demonstrating a more direct link between the neural population phenomena (memory trace and uniform shift) and the behavioral phenomena (savings, forgetting, etc). While in animal experiments, it can be exceedingly difficult to demonstrate links beyond correlative effects, the promise of a model is the relative tractability of implementing manipulations that might establish something closer to a causal link between phenomena. Is it the case that the memory trace is a task-dependent, mean-preserving rotation of the across-target task-relevant activity space? And that the uniform shift is a translation (non-mean-preserving) of that space? If so, could the authors design regularization schemes that specifically target each of these effects, enabling a more direct test of the functional role the effects play in driving behavioral phenomena?

Minor Comments:

The current study is based on BCI learning of center-out tasks, analogous to the Losey et al. task that initially reported the memory trace phenomena. However, a rather different behavioral task - involving arm movements through curl force fields - was employed by the Sun, O'Shea, et al. study that originally reported the uniform shift phenomena. How should readers interpret the current study's findings related to the uniform shift? To what extent might the behavioral implications of the uniform shift depend on the demands of the task, e.g., the biomechanics, day-to-day experiencing of different curl-field perturbations, etc.?

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this well-written manuscript, Unitt and colleagues propose a new, hierarchical nomenclature system for the pathogen Neisseria gonorrhoeae. The proposed nomenclature addresses a longstanding problem in N. gonorrhoeae genomics, namely that the highly recombinant population complicates typing schemes based on only a few loci and that previous typing systems, even those based on the core genome, group strains at only one level of genomic divergence without a system for clustering sequence types together. In this work, the authors have revised the core genome MLST scheme for N. gonorrhoeae and devised life identification numbers (LIN) codes to describe the N. gonorrhoeae population structure.

Strengths:

The LIN codes proposed in this manuscript are congruent with previous typing methods for Neisseria gonorrhoeae, like cgMLST groups, Ng-STAR, and NG-MAST. Importantly, they improve upon many of these methods as the LIN codes are also congruent with the phylogeny and represent monophyletic lineages/sublineages.

The LIN code assignment has been implemented in PubMLST, allowing other researchers to assign LIN codes to new assemblies and put genomes of interest in context with global datasets.

Weaknesses:

The authors correctly highlight that cgMLST-based clusters can be fused due to "intermediate isolates" generated through processes like horizontal gene transfer. However, the LIN codes proposed here are also based on single linkage clustering of cgMLST at multiple levels. It is unclear if future recombination or sequencing of previously unsampled diversity within N. gonorrhoeae merges together higher-level clusters, and if so, how this will impact the stability of the nomenclature.

The authors have defined higher resolution thresholds for the LIN code scheme. However, they do not investigate how these levels correspond to previously identified transmission clusters from genomic epidemiology studies. It would be useful for future users of the scheme to know the relevant LIN code thresholds for these investigations.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript by Atchou et al. investigates the role of the microtubule cytoskeleton in sporozoites of Plasmodium berghei, including possible functions of microtubule post-translational modifications (tyrosination and polyglutamylation) in the development of sporozoites in the liver. They also assessed the development of sporozoites in the mosquito. Using cell culture models and in vivo infections with parasites that contain tubulin mutants deficient in certain PTMs, they show that may aspects of the life cycle progression are impaired. The main conclusion is that microtubule PTMs play a major role in the differentiation processes of the parasites.

However, there are a number of major and minor points of criticism that relate to the interpretation of some of the data.

Comments:

(1) The first paragraph of "Results" almost suggests that the presence of a subpellicular MT-array in sporozoites is a new discovery. This is not the case, see e.g. the recent publication by Ferreira et al. (Nature Communications, 2023).

(2) Why were HeLa cells and not hepatocytes (as in Figure 3) used for measuring infection rates of the mutants in Figure 5H and 5L? As I understand, HeLa cells are not natural host cells for invading sporozoites. HeLa cells are epithelial cells derived from a cervical tumour. I am not an expert in Plasmodium biology, but is a HeLa infection an accepted surrogate model for liver stage development?

(3) The tubulin staining in Figures 1A and 1B is confusing and doesn't seem to make sense. Whereas in 1A the antibody nicely stains host and parasite tubulin, in 1B, only parasite tubulin is visible. If the same antibody and the same host cells have been used, HeLa cytoplasmic microtubules should be visible in 1B. In fact, they should be the predominant antigen. The same applies to Figure 2, where host microtubules are also not visible.

(4) In Figures 2A and B, the host nuclei appear to have very different sizes in the DMSO controls and in the drug-treated cells. For example, in the 20 µM (-) image (bottom right), the nuclei are much larger than in the DMSO (-) control (top left). If this is the case, expansion microscopy hasn't worked reproducibly, and therefore, quantification of fluorescence is problematic. The scalebar is the same for all panels.

(5) I don't quite follow the argument that spindles and the LSPMB are dynamic structures (e.g., lines 145, 174). That is a trivial statement for the spindle, as it is always dynamic, but beyond that, it has only been shown that the structure is sensitive to oryzalin. That says little about any "natural" dynamic behaviour. Any microtubule structure can be destroyed by a particular physical or chemical treatment, but that doesn't mean all structures are dynamic. It also depends on the definition of "dynamic" in a particular context, for example, the time scale of dynamic behaviour (changes within seconds, minutes, or hours).

(6) I am not sure what part in the story EB1 plays. The data are only shown in the Supplements and don't seem to be of particular relevance. EB1 is a ubiquitous protein associated with microtubule plus ends. The statement (line 192) that it "may play a broader role..." is unsubstantiated and cannot be based merely on the observation that it is expressed in a particular life cycle stage.

(7) Line 196 onwards: The antibody IN105 is better known in the field as polyE. Maybe that should be added in Materials and Methods. Also, the antibody T9028 against tyrosinated tubulin is poorly validated in the literature and rarely used. Usually, researchers in this field use the monoclonal antibody YL1/2. I am not sure why this unusual antibody was chosen in this study. In fact, has its specificity against tyrosinated α-tubulin from Plasmodium berghei ever been shown? The original antigen was human and had the sequence EGEEY. The Plasmodium sequence is YEADY and hence very different. It is stated that the LSPMB is both polyglutamylated and tyrosinated. This is unusual because polyglutamylated microtubules are usually indicative of stable microtubules, whereas tyrosinated microtubules are found on freshly polymerised and dynamic microtubules. However, a co-localisation within the same cell has not been attempted. This is, however, possible since polyE is a rabbit antibody and T9028 is a mouse antibody. I suspect that differences or gradients along the LSPMB would have been noticed. Also, in lines 207/208, it is said that tyrosination disappears after hepatocyte invasion, which is shown in Figure 3. However, in Figure 3A, quite a lot of positive signals for tyrosination are visible in the 54 and 56 hpi panels.

(8) In line 229, it is stated that tyrosination "has previously been associated with stable microtubule in motility". This statement is not correct. In fact, none of the cited references that apparently support this statement show that this is the case. On the contrary, stable microtubules, such as flagellar axonemes, are almost completely detyrosinated. Therefore, tyrosination is a marker for dynamic microtubules, whereas detyrosinated microtubules are indicative of stable microtubules. This is an established fact, and it is odd that the authors claim the opposite.

(9) Line 236 onwards: Concerning the generation of tubulin mutants, I think it is necessary to demonstrate successful replacement of the wild-type allele by the mutant allele. I am sure the authors have done this by amplification and subsequent sequencing of the genomic locus using PCR primers outside the plasmid sequences. I suggest including this information, e.g., by displaying the chromatograph trace in a supplementary figure. Or are the sequences displayed in Figure S3B already derived from sequenced genomic DNA? This is not described in the Legend or in Materials and Methods. The left PCR products obtained for Figure S3 B would be a suitable template for sequencing.

(10) It is also important to be aware of the fact that glutamylation also occurs on β-tubulin. This signal will also be detected by polyE (IN105). Therefore, it is surprising that IN105 immunofluorescence is negative on the C-term Δ cells (Figure S3 D). Is there anything known about confirmed polyglutamylation sites on both α- and β-tubulins in Plasmodium, e.g., by MS? In Toxoplasma, both α- and β-tubulin have been shown to be polyglutamylated.

(11) Figure S3 is very confusing. In the legend, certain intron deletions are mentioned. How does this relate to posttranslational tubulin modifications? The corresponding section in Results (lines 288-292) is also not very helpful in understanding this.

(12) Figure 4E doesn't look like brightfield microscopy but like some sort of fluorescent imaging. In Figure 4C, were the control (NoΔ) cells with an integrated cassette, but no mutations, or non-transgenic cells?

(13) It is difficult to understand why the TyΔ and the CtΔ mutants still show quite a strong signal using the anti-tyrosination antibody. If the mutants have replaced all wild-type alleles, the signal should be completely absent, unless the antibody (see my comment above concerning T9028) cross-reacts with detyrosinated microtubules. Therefore, the quantitation in Figures 5F and 5G is actually indicative of something that shouldn't be like that. The quantitation of 5F is at odds with the microscopy image in 5D. If this image is representative, the anti-Ty staining in TyΔ is as strong as in the control NoΔ.

(14) The statement that the failure of CtΔ mutants to generate viable sporozoites is due to the lack of microtubule PTMs (lines 295-296) is speculative. The lack of the entire C-terminal tail could have a number of consequences, such as impaired microtubule assembly or failure to recruit and bind associated proteins. This is not necessarily linked to PTMs. Also, it has been shown in yeast that for microtubules to form properly and exquisite regulation (proteostasis) of the ratio between α- and β-tubulin is essential (Wethekam and Moore, 2023). I am not sure, but according to Materials and Methods (line 423), the gene cassettes for replacing the wild-type tubulin gene with the mutant versions contain a selectable marker gene for pyrimethamine selection. Are there qPCR data that show that expression levels of mutant α-tubulin are more or less the same as the wild-type levels?

(15) In the Discussion, my impression is that two recent studies, the superb Expansion Microscopy study by Bertiaux et al. (2021) and the cryo-EM study by Ferreira et al. (2023), are not sufficiently recognised (although they are cited elsewhere in the manuscript). The latter study includes a detailed description of the microtubule cytoskeleton in sporozoites. However, the present study clearly expands the knowledge about the structure of the cytoskeleton in liver stage parasites and is one of the few studies addressing the distribution and function of microtubule post-translational modifications in Plasmodium.

(16) I somewhat disagree with the statement of a co-occurrence of polyglutamylated and tyrosinated microtubules. I think the resolution is too low to reach that conclusion. As this is a bold claim, and would be contrary to what is known from other organisms, it would require a more rigorous validation. Given the apparent problems with the anti-Ty antibody (signal in the TyΔ mutant), one should be very cautious with this claim.

(17) In the Discussion (lines 311 and 377), it is again claimed that tyrosinated microtubules are "a well-known marker of stable microtubules". This statement is completely incorrect, and I am surprised by this serious mistake. A few lines later, the authors say that polyglutamylated is "commonly associated with dynamic microtubule behaviour". Again, this is completely incorrect and is the opposite of what is firmly established in the literature. Polyglutamylation and detyrosination are markers of stable microtubules.

(18) In line 339, the authors interpret the residual antibody staining after the introduction of the mutant tubulin as a compensatory mechanism. There is no evidence for this. More likely explanations are firstly the quality of the anti-Ty-antibody used (see comment above), and the fact that also β-tubulin carries C-terminal polyglutamylation sites, which haven't been investigated in this study. PTMs on β-tubulin are not compensatory, but normal PTMs, at least in all other organisms where microtubule PTMs have been investigated.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Asthma is a complex disease that includes endogenous epithelial, immune and neural components that respond to environmental stimuli. Small airborne particles with diameters in the range of 2.5 micrometers or less, so-called PM2.5, are thought to contribute to some forms of asthma. These forms of asthma may have neutrophils, eosinophils and macrophages in bronchoalveolar lavage. Here, Wang and colleagues build on a recent model that incorporated PM2.5 which was found to have a neutrophilic component. Wang altered the model to provide an extra kick via the incorporation of ovalbumin. The major strength of this work is that silencing TRPV1-expressing neurons either pharmacologically or genetically, modulated inflammation and the motility of neutrophils. By examining bronchoalveolar lavage fluid, they found not only that levels of a number of cytokines were increased, but also that artemin, a protein that supports neuronal development and function, was elevated, which did not occur in nociceptor- ablated mice. Their data strengthens links between pollutants, immune and neural interactions.

Comments on revisions:

The manuscript has been revised extensively, including the addition of new experiments, such as intravital microscopy. Did the comments from the reviewers, manifest by additional experiments and modifying how some of the data was presented, result in any changes in the hypotheses or the interpretation of such?

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Genetically encoded calcium indicators (GECIs) are essential tools in neurobiology and physiology. Technological constraints in targeting and kinetics of previous versions of GECIs have limited their application at the subcellular level. Chen et al. present a set of novel tools that overcome many of these limitations. Through systematic testing in the Drosophila NMJ, they demonstrate improved targeting of GCaMP variants to synaptic compartments and report enhanced brightness and temporal fidelity using members of the GCaMP8 series. These advancements are likely to facilitate more precise investigation of synaptic physiology.

This is a comprehensive and detailed manuscript that introduces and validates new GECI tools optimized for the study of neurotransmission and neuronal excitability. These tools are likely to be highly impactful across neuroscience subfields. The authors are commended for publicly sharing their imaging software.

This manuscript could be improved by further testing the GECIs across physiologically relevant ranges of activity, including at high frequency and over long imaging sessions. The authors provide a custom software package (CaFire) for Ca2+ imaging analysis; however, to improve clarity and utility for future users, we recommend providing references to existing Ca2+ imaging tools for context and elaborating on some conceptual and methodological aspects, with more guidance for broader usability. These enhancements would strengthen this already strong manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors in this paper introduce BuzzWatch, an open-source, low-cost (200-300 Euros) platform for long-term monitoring of mosquito flight and behavior. They use a Raspberry Pi with a Noirv2 Camera set up under laboratory conditions to observe 3 different species of mosquitoes. The system captures a variety of multimodal data, like flight activity, sugar feeding, and host-seeking responses, with the help of external modules like CO2 and fructose-soaked cottons. They also release a GUI in addition to automated tracking and behaviour analysis, which doesn't run on Pi but rather on a personal laptop.

Four main use cases are demonstrated:

(1) Characterizing diel rhythms in various Aedes aegypti populations.

(2) Differentiating behaviors of native African vs. invasive human-adapted subspecies.

(3) Assessing physiological (blood-feeding) and environmental (light regime) perturbations.

(4) Testing time-of-day variation in responses to host-associated cues like CO₂ and heat.

Description (Strengths):

(1) The authors introduce a low-cost, scalable system that uses flight tracking in 2D as an alternative to 3D multi-camera systems.

(2) Due to the low pixel quality required by the system, they can record for weeks at a time, capturing long temporal and behavioral activities.

(3) They also integrate external modules such as lights, CO2, and heat as a way to measure responses to a variety of stimuli.

(4) They also introduce a wiki as a guide for building replication and a help in using the GUI module.

(5) They implement both GLMM hourly and PCA of behavior data.

Limitations - Major Comments:

(1) Most experiments are only done with single replicates per colony. If the setup is claimed to be cheap and replicable, there should be clearer replicates across experiments.

(2) No external validation for the flight tracking algorithm using manual annotation or comparison with field data. The authors focus early on biological proof of principle, but the validity of the tracking algorithm is not presented. How accurate is the algorithm at classifying behaviours (e.g., vs human ground truth)? How reliable is tracking?

(3) Why develop a custom GUI instead of using established packages such as rethomics (https://rethomics.github.io/) that are already available for behavioral analysis?

(4) Why use RGB light strips when perceptual white light for humans is not relevant for mosquitoes? The choice of lighting should be based on the mosquito's visual perception. - https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC12077400/ .

(5) Why use GLMMs instead of GAMs (with explicit periodic components)? With GLMMs, you do not account for temporal structure, which is highly relevant and autocorrelated in behavioral time series data.

(6) What is the proportion of mosquitoes that stay alive throughout the experiments? How do you address dead animals in tracking? No data are available on whether all mosquitoes made it through the monitoring period. No survival data is mentioned in the paper, and in the wiki, it is not clear how it is used or how it affects the analyses - https://theomaire.github.io/buzzwatch/analyze.html#diff-cond .

(7 )The sugar feeding behavior is not manually validated.

(8) Figure 4d is difficult to understand - how did you align time? Why is ZT4 aligning with ZT0? Should you "warp" the time series to compare them (e.g., from dawn to dusk)?

(9) No video recordings are made available for demonstration or validation purposes.

Appraisal

(1) The core conclusions---that BuzzWatch can capture multiscale mosquito behavioral rhythms and quantify the effect of genetic, environmental, and physiological variation - show promise but require stronger validation.

(2) Statistical approaches (GLMM, PCA) are chosen but may not be optimal for temporal data with autocorrelation.

(3) The host-seeking module shows a differential response, which is a potentially valuable feature.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors use a combination of a head-fixed grooming paradigm, single-photon mesoscale, and wide-field-of-view two-photon calcium imaging to characterize cortical activity patterns during evoked grooming. Previous work has shown that grooming behavior does not require cortex, but that there are neuronal representations of grooming in motor cortex. The authors extend these findings by showing cortex-wide activation patterns at the meso-scale that relate to distinct grooming elements. This activation is strongest at grooming onset, but declines over the course of extended grooming periods. They also find similar activity patterns during licking/drinking behavior. Two-photon imaging further revealed that individual neurons across the cortex are preferentially activated by grooming. While their activity also declines after grooming onset, they remain active throughout grooming periods. This work extends previous findings by revealing that grooming and other subcortically-generated behaviors may be represented not only in motor cortex, but across dorsal cortex, both on the mesoscale and single neuron levels. These findings may lead to further investigation into the role of cortical activity during subcortically generated behaviors.

Strengths:

(1) Detailed characterization of grooming behavior in a head-fixed paradigm.

(2) Combination of single photon mesoscale and two-photon wide field-of-view imaging to characterize grooming (and licking)-related activity across dorsal cortex on multiple levels

Weaknesses:

(1) The behavior observed in the head-fixed grooming paradigm only partially resembles spontaneous grooming, lacking typical elements of the syntactic chain, while additionally evoking non-typical behaviors, resembling unilateral reaches, making the interpretation of the observations and their relevance to natural behaviors difficult. Furthermore, the nature of the non-typical movements (which may be cortex-dependent while typical grooming is not) is not explored.

(2) Two important findings in relation to the neural representations of individual grooming behaviors remain unclear:

a) The authors state that individual grooming behaviors did not have distinct neuronal representations (except unilateral grooming; Figure 4G) - it remains unclear how this fits with the observation of distinct activation maps during the different grooming behaviors. Should this differential activation not also correspond to distinct activation patterns of 'grooming' neurons across the cortex? Or do they mean that the activity in the 'grooming' neurons is not consistent across grooming instances and therefore no distinct representation can be detected?

b) The authors state that the 'typical' grooming behaviors do not have consistent activation patterns across animals (Figure 3 and supplements). It remains, therefore, unclear what the averaged activation maps really represent. Furthermore, this observation leaves several open questions: Are the activation patterns consistent in individual animals? Do differences across animals emerge due to differences in their behavior? And most importantly, can the actual behavior be decoded from the activation patterns?

(3) Multiple statements/conclusions are not supported by quantification of the data, but only by qualitative assessments, e.g.: lines 433-435: "In general, the maximally activated networks involved in licking and unilateral grooming behaviors 'appeared' to be the most consistent across animals compared to the bilateral grooming movements (Figure 3G)."; 436-437: "Averaged cortical activation maps associated with licking and elliptical behaviors were 'qualitatively similar' between evoked and spontaneous sessions, where the water drop was not applied".; 480-482: "The unique explained variance maps for the licking behavior 'differed' in the drinking context compared to the grooming context (Figure 3-figure supplement 3F)." The lack of quantification leaves the significance of these observations unclear.

(4) It remains unclear what the ongoing activity in 'grooming' neurons represents, since there is no detailed analysis of the relationship between activity and the detailed kinematics of the grooming movements.

The authors show that neuronal representations of grooming and other subcortical behaviors can be found across dorsal cortex and that these representations are at least to some degree specific to distinct behavioral elements. While this study does not reveal functional insights into the role of cortical representations of subcortically-generated behaviors, it is a step towards more in-depth studies. In the future, it will be important to determine whether these representations are efference copies or sensory-driven, or whether they affect the behavior, and if so, under which circumstances.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This study used transcranial direct current stimulation administered using small 'high definition' electrodes to modulate neural activity within the non-human primate prefrontal cortex during both wakefulness and anaesthesia. Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) was used to assess neuromodulatory effects of stimulation. The authors report on modification of brain dynamics during and following anodal and cathodal stimulation during wakefulness and following anodal stimulation at two intensities (1 mA, 2 mA) during anaesthesia. This study provides some support that prefrontal direct current stimulation can alter neural activity patterns across wakefulness and sedation in monkeys.

Strengths and Weaknesses:

A key strength of this work is the use of fMRI-based methods to track changes in brain activity with good spatial precision. Another strength is the exploration of stimulation effects across wakefulness and sedation, which has the potential to provide novel information on the impact of electrical stimulation across states of consciousness. The authors should be commended for undertaking this challenging and important work.

The lack of a sham stimulation condition is a limitation of the study, as it somewhat restricts the certainty with which the results can be attributed to the active stimulation as opposed to other external factors such as drowsiness or fatigue as a result of the experimental procedure? Nevertheless, I acknowledge the demanding nature of performing this work in non-human primates and that only runs with high fixation rates were included, which should have helped reduce any fatigue-related effects.

In the anaesthesia condition, the authors investigated the effects of two intensities of stimulation (1 mA and 2 mA). However, it is possible that the initial 1 mA stimulation block might have caused some level of plasticity-related changes in neural activity that could have potentially interfered with the following 2 mA block due to the lack of a sufficient wash-out period. This potentially limits the findings from the 2 mA block as they cannot be interpreted as completely separate to the initial 1 mA stimulation period, given that they were administered consecutively. However, I do acknowledge the author's point that differences between the 1 mA post-stimulation and baseline conditions were not significantly different, which provides some evidence against this possibility.

The different electrode placement for the two anaesthetised monkeys (i.e., Monkey R: F3/O2 montage, Monkey N: F4/O1 montage) is potentially problematic, as it might have resulted in stimulation over different brain regions. Electric field models of brain current flow for the monkeys would really be needed to understand with reasonable certainty, however, I recognise that these models are generally designed for human studies making their integration into non-human primate studies challenging.

Finally, the sample size is obviously small. However, I realise this is often a limitation in non-human primate research, which can be both expensive and labour intensive.

Assessment:

This manuscript presents some novel insights into the effects of transcranial direct current stimulation on functional brain dynamics in awake and anaesthetised monkeys using MRI-based connectivity indices. Overall, the study presents several interesting and potentially impactful findings regarding stimulation-induced changes in brain activity. There are some limitations, such as the small sample size, lack of a sham stimulation control, and lack of electric field models, which, if included, would have, in my view, further helped improve the rigour of the study. Nevertheless, the manuscript presents several important findings, which warrant further analysis in future work.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors sought to determine, at the level of individual presubiculum pyramidal cells, how allocentric spatial information from retrosplenial cortex was integrated with egocentric information from the anterior thalamic nuclei. Employing a dual opsin optogenetic approach with patch clamp electrophysiology, Richevaux and colleagues found that around three quarters of layer 3 pyramidal cells in presubiculum receive monosynaptic input from both brain regions. While some interesting questions remain (e.g. the role of inhibitory interneurons in gating the information flow and through different layers of presubiculum, this paper provides valuable insights into the microcircuitry of this brain region and the role that it may play in spatial navigation.

Strengths:

One of the main strengths of this manuscript was that the dual opsin approach allowed the direct comparison of different inputs within an individual neuron, helping to control for what might otherwise have been an important source of variation. The experiments were well-executed and the data rigorously analysed. The conclusions were appropriate to the experimental questions and were well-supported by the results. These data will help to inform in vivo experiments aimed at understanding the contribution of different brain regions in spatial navigation and could be valuable for computational modelling.

Weaknesses:

Some attempts were made to gain mechanistic insights into how inhibitory neurotransmission may affect processing in presubiuclum (e.g. figure 5) but these experiments were a little underpowered and the analysis carried out could have been more comprehensively undertaken, as was done for other experiments in the manuscript.

Comments on revised version:

The authors have addressed all of my comments and I have nothing further to add. Well done for an interesting and valuable contribution!

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a new computational method (OPT) for predicting off-target probe binding in the commercial 10X Xenium spatial transcriptomics platform. They identified 28 genes in the 10x xenium human breast cancer gene panel (280 genes) that are not accurately detected at the single-molecule level. They validated the predicted off-target binding using reference data from single-cell RNA-seq and 3'-sequencing-based Visium RNA-seq. This work provides a practical resource and will serve as a valuable reference for future data interpretation.

Strengths:

(1) Provides a toolbox for the community to identify off-target probes.

(2) Validates the predictions using single-cell RNA-seq and sequencing-based Visium RNA-seq datasets.

Weaknesses:

(1) Does not apply the OPT method to the most widely used Xenium gene panels (e.g., pan-Human, pan-Mouse panels with ~5,000 genes each).

(2) Lacks clarity on how the confidence level of off-target predictions is calculated.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Kim, Lognon et al. present an important finding on pro-locomotor effects of optogenetic activation of the A13 region, which they identify as a dopamine-containing area of the medial zona incerta that undergoes profound remodeling in terms of afferent and efferent connectivity after administration of 6-OHDA to the MFB. The authors claim to address a model of PD-related gait dysfunction, a contentious problem that can be difficult to treat by dopaminergic medication or DBS in conventional targets. They make use of an impressive array of technologies to gain insight into the role of A13 remodeling in the 6-OHDA model of PD. The evidence provided is solid and the paper is well written, but there are several general issues that reduce the value of the paper in its current form, and a number of specific, more minor ones. Also some suggestions, that may improve the paper compared to its recent form, come to mind.

The most fundamental issue that needs to be addressed is the relation of the structural to the behavioral findings. It would be very interesting to see whether the structural heterogeneity in afferent/effects projections induced by 6-OHDA is related to the degree of symptom severity and motor improvement during A13 stimulation.

The authors provide extensive interrogation of large-scale changes in the organization of the A13 region afferent and efferent distributions. It remains unclear how many animals were included to produce Fig 4 and 5. Fig S5 suggests that only 3 animals were used, is that correct? Please provide details about the heterogeneity between animals. Please provide a table detailing how many animals were used for which experiment. Were the same animals used for several experiments?

While the authors provide evidence that photoactivation of the A13 is sufficient in driving locomotion in the OFT, this pro-locomotor effect seems to be independent of 6-OHDA induced pathophysiology. Only in the pole test do they find that there seems to be a difference between Sham vs 6-OHDA concerning effects of photoactivation of the A13. Because of these behavioral findings, optogenic activation of A13 may represent a gain of function rather than disease-specific rescue. This needs to be highlighted more explicitly in the title, abstract and conclusion.

The authors claim that A13 may be a possible target for DBS to treat gait dysfunction. However, the experimental evidence provided (imparticular lack of disease-specific changes in the OFT) seem insufficient to draw such conclusions. It needs to be highlighted that optogenetic activation does not necessarily have the same effects as DBS (see the recent review from Neumann et al. in Brain: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/37450573/). This is important because ZI-DBS so far had very mixed clinical effects. The authors should provide plausible reasons for these discrepancies. Is cell-specificity, that only optogenetic interventions can achieve, necessary? Can new forms of cyclic burst DBS achieve similar specificity (Spix et al, Science 2021)? Please comment.

In a recent study, Jeon et al (Topographic connectivity and cellular profiling reveal detailed input pathways and functionally distinct cell types in the subthalamic nucleus, 2022, Cell Reports) provided evidence on the topographically graded organization of STN afferents and McElvain et al. (Specific populations of basal ganglia output neurons target distinct brain stem areas while collateralizing throughout the diencephalon, 2021, Neuron) have shown similar topographical resolution for SNr efferents. Can a similar topographical organization of efferents and afferents be derived for the A13/ ZI in total?

In conclusion, this is an interesting study that can be improved taking into consideration the points mentioned above.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to identify the peripheral end-organ origin in the fly's wing of all sensory neurons in the anterior dorsomedial nerve. They reconstruct the neurons and their downstream partners in an electron microscopy volume of a female ventral nerve cord, analyse the resulting connectome, and identify their origin with a review of the literature and imaging of genetic driver lines. While some of the neurons were already known through previous work, the authors expand on the identification and create a near-complete map of the wing mechanosensory neurons at synapse resolution.

Strengths:

The authors elegantly combine electron microscopy, neuron morphology, connectomics, and light microscopy methods to bridge the gap between fly wing sensory neuron anatomy and ventral nerve cord morphology. Further, they use EM ultrastructural observations to make predictions on the signaling modality of some of the sensory neurons and thus their function in flight.

The work is as comprehensive as state-of-the-art methods allow to create a near-complete map of the wing mechanosensory neurons. This work will be of importance to the field of fly connectomics and modelling of fly behavior, as well as a useful resource to the Drosophila research community.

Through this comprehensive mapping of neurons to the connectome, the authors create a lot of hypotheses on neuronal function, partially already confirmed with the literature and partially to be tested in the future. The authors achieved their aim of mapping the periphery of the fly's wing to axonal projections in the ventral nerve cord, beautifully laying out their results to support their mapping.

The authors identify the neurons in a previously published connectome of a male fly ventral nerve cord to enable cross-individual analysis of connections. Further, together with their companion paper, Dhawan et al. 2025, describing the haltere sensory neurons in the same EM dataset, they cover the entire mechanosensory space involved in Drosophila flight.

Weaknesses:

The connectomic data are only available upon request; the inclusion of a connectivity table of the reconstructed neurons would aid analysis reproducibility and cross-dataset comparisons.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This study found that ADF serotonergic neurons have a significant role in extending lifespan mediated by HIF-1, as well as serotonin receptor SER-7 in the GABAergic RIS interneurons. The author focuses on the sufficiency and necessity of components from the central nervous system and how they contribute to aging upon hypoxia.

Previous work from the lab has identified that the stabilization of HIF-1 in neurons is sufficient to extend lifespan through the serotonin receptor, SER-7, which subsequently activates fmo-2 in the intestine and leads to lifespan extension. Building on this, the author sought to determine which serotonergic neurons are involved and found that serotonin signaling in ADF neurons is required for lifespan extension mediated by HIF-1.

The author next tested which subset of neurons requires Ser-7 expression to rescue hypoxic response. They found that ser-7 expression in multiple neurons is sufficient to induce fmo-2, with the top candidate being the RIS neuron. Ablation of the RIS neuron did not extend lifespan, suggesting that ser-7 expression in the RIS neuron is required for lifespan extension, positioning it as a key component in the longevity signaling pathway.

The author also investigated neurotransmitters and found that GABA and tyramine are important components in this circuit. They showed that the tyramine receptor called tyra-3 is required for vhl-1-mediated longevity. Given that tyra-3 is expressed in oxygen- and carbon dioxide-sensing neurons, the author demonstrated that these sensing neurons work downstream of serotonin signaling. Lastly, the author screened neuropeptide/receptor binding pairs and identified NLP-17 as playing a role in hypoxia-mediated longevity.

Originality and Significance:

This research is significant in that it uncovers components that are sufficient and necessary for lifespan extension via the hypoxic response. It provides comprehensive data supporting longevity induced by HIF-1-mediated hypoxic response, in conjunction with fmo-2, a longevity gene, as demonstrated in previous work from the lab. Moreover, it provides a number of new transgenic worm tools for C. elegans and aging communities.

Data and Methodology:

(1) The experiments were thoroughly conducted, especially the generations of strains using different neuron-type promoters and crossing into mutant strains to demonstrate sufficiency and necessity.

(2) Some figure legends from the text do not match what the data show. (Figure 6E, F, G).

(3) The lifespan graph legends are confusing and could use some revamping for better clarification.

Conclusions:

This study provides insights into how hypoxic response regulates aging in a cell non-autonomous manner, outlining a potential circuit involving neurons, neurotransmitters, and neuropeptides.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, the authors aim to improve neural encoding models for naturalistic video stimuli by integrating temporally aligned multimodal features derived from a deep learning model (VALOR) to predict fMRI responses during movie viewing.

Strengths:

The major strength of the study lies in its systematic comparison across unimodal and multimodal models using large-scale, high-resolution fMRI datasets. The VALOR model demonstrates improved predictive accuracy and cross-dataset generalization. The model also reveals inherent semantic dimensions of cortical organization and can be used to evaluate the integration timescale of predictive coding.

This study demonstrates the utility of modern multimodal pretrained models for improving brain encoding in naturalistic contexts. While not conceptually novel, the application is technically sound, and the data and modeling pipeline may serve as a valuable benchmark for future studies.

Weaknesses:

The overall framework of using data-driven features derived from pretrained AI models to predict neural response has been well studied and accepted by the field of neuroAI for over a decade. The demonstrated improvements in prediction accuracy, generalization, and semantic mapping are largely attributable to the richer temporal and multimodal representations provided by the VALOR model, not a novel neural modeling framework per se. As such, the work may be viewed as an incremental application of recent advances in multimodal AI to a well-established neural encoding pipeline, rather than a conceptual advance in modeling neural mechanisms.

Several key claims are overstated or lack sufficient justification:

(1) Lines 95-96: The authors claim that "cortical areas share a common space," citing references [22-24]. However, these references primarily support the notion that different modalities or representations can be aligned in a common embedding space from a modeling perspective, rather than providing direct evidence that cortical areas themselves are aligned in a shared neural representational space.

(2) The authors discuss semantic annotation as if it is still a critical component of encoding models. However, recent advances in AI-based encoding methods rely on features derived from large-scale pretrained models (e.g., CLIP, GPT), which automatically capture semantic structure without requiring explicit annotation. While the manuscript does not systematically address this transition, it is important to clarify that the use of such pretrained models is now standard in the field and should not be positioned as an innovation of the present work. Additionally, the citation of Huth et al. (2012, Neuron) to justify the use of WordNet-based annotation omits the important methodological shift in Huth et al. (2016, Nature), which moved away from manual semantic labeling altogether.

Since the 2012 dataset is used primarily to enable comparison in study 3, the emphasis should not be placed on reiterating the disadvantages of semantic annotation, which have already been addressed in prior work. Instead, the manuscript's strength lies in its direct comparison between data-driven feature representations and semantic annotation based on WordNet categories. The authors should place greater emphasis on analyzing and discussing the differences revealed by these two approaches, rather than focusing mainly on the general advantage of automated semantic mapping.

(3) The authors use subject-specific encoding models trained on the HCP dataset to predict group-level mean responses in an independent in-house dataset. While this analysis is framed as testing model generalization, it is important to clarify that it is not assessing traditional out-of-distribution (OOD) generalization, where the same subject is tested on novel stimuli, but rather evaluating which encoding model's feature space contains more stimulus-specific and cross-subject-consistent information that can transfer across datasets.

Within this setup, the finding that VALOR outperforms CLIP, AlexNet, and WordNet is somewhat expected. VALOR encodes rich spatiotemporal information from videos, making it more aligned with movie-based neural responses. CLIP and AlexNet are static image-based models and thus lack temporal context, while WordNet only provides coarse categorical labels with no stimulus-specific detail. Therefore, the results primarily reflect the advantage of temporally-aware features in capturing shared neural dynamics, rather than revealing surprising model generalization. A direct comparison to pure video-based models, such as Video Swin Transformers or other more recent video models, would help strengthen the argument.

Moreover, while WordNet-based encoding models perform reasonably well within-subject in the HCP dataset, their generalization to group-level responses in the Short Fun Movies (SFM) dataset is markedly poorer. This could indicate that these models capture a considerable amount of subject-specific variance, which fails to translate to consistent group-level activity. This observation highlights the importance of distinguishing between encoding models that capture stimulus-driven representations and those that overfit to individual heterogeneities.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript presents a series of experiments that further investigate the roles of the BLA and PRH in sensory preconditioning, with a particular focus on understanding their differential involvement in the association of S1 and S2 with shock.

Strengths:

The motivation for the study is clearly articulated, and the experimental designs are thoughtfully constructed. I especially appreciate the inclusion of Table 1, which makes the designs easy to follow. The results are clearly presented, and the statistical analyses are rigorous. My comments below mainly concern areas where the writing could be improved to help readers more easily grasp the logic behind the experiments.

Weaknesses:

(1) Lines 56-58: The two previous findings should be more clearly summarized. Specifically, it's unclear whether the "mediated S2-shock" association occurred during Stage 2 or Stage 3. I assume the authors mean Stage 2, but Stage 2 alone would not yet involve "fear of S2," making this expression a bit confusing.

(2) Line 61: The phrase "Pavlovian fear conditioning" is ambiguous in this context. I assume it refers to S1-shock or S2-shock conditioning. If so, it would be clearer to state this explicitly.

(3) Regarding the distinction between having or not having Stage 1 S2-S1 pairings, is "novel vs. familiar" the most accurate way to frame this? This terminology could be misleading, especially since one might wonder why S2 couldn't just be presented alone on Stage 1 if novelty is the critical factor. Would "outcome relevance" or "predictability" be more appropriate descriptors? If the authors choose to retain the "novel vs. familiar" framing, I suggest providing a clear explanation of this rationale before introducing the predictions around Line 118.

(4) Line 121: This statement should refer to S1, not S2.

(5) Line 124: This one should refer to S2, not S1.

(6) Additionally, the rationale for Experiment 4 is not introduced before the Results section. While it is understandable that Experiment 4 functions as a follow-up to Experiment 3, it would be helpful to briefly explain the reasoning behind its inclusion.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Krwawicz et al., present evidence that expression of DNMTs in E. coli results in (1) introduction of alkylation damage that is repaired by AlkB; (2) confers hypersensitivity to alkylating agents such as MMS (and exacerbated by loss of AlkB); (3) confers hypersensitivity to oxidative stress (H2O2 exposure); (4) results in a modest increase in ROS in the absence of exogenous H2O2 exposure; and (5) results in the production of oxidation products of 5mC, namely 5hmC and 5fC, leading to cellular toxicity. The findings reported here have interesting implications for the concept that such genotoxic and potentially mutagenic consequences of DNMT expression (resulting in 5mC) could be selectively disadvantageous for certain organisms. The other aspect of this work which is important for understanding the biological endpoints of genotoxic stress is the notion that DNA damage per se somehow induces elevated levels of ROS.

Strengths:

The manuscript is well-written, and the experiments have been carefully executed providing data that support the authors' proposed model presented in Fig. 7 (Discussion, sources of DNA damage due to DNMT expression).

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors have established an informative system relying on expression of DNMTs to gauge the effects of such expression and subsequent induction of 3mC and 5mC on cell survival and sensitivity to an alkylating agent (MMS) and exogenous oxidative stress (H2O2 exposure). The authors state (p4) that Fig. 2 shows that "Cells expressing either M.SssI or M.MpeI showed increased sensitivity to MMS treatment compared to WT C2523, supporting the conclusion that the expression of DNMTs increased the levels of alkylation damage." This is a confusing statement and requires revision as Fig. 2 does ALL cells shown in Fig. 2 are expressing DNMTs and have been treated with MMS. It is the absence of AlkB and the expression of DNMTs that that causes the MMS sensitivity.

(2) It would be important to know whether the increased sensitivity (toxicity) to DNMT expression and MMS is also accompanied by substantial increases in mutagenicity. The authors should explain in the text why mutation frequencies were not also measured in these experiments.

(3) Materials and Methods. ROS production monitoring. The "Total Reactive Oxygen Species (ROS) Assay Kit" has not been adequately described. Who is the Vendor? What is the nature of the ROS probes employed in this assay? Which specific ROS correspond to "total ROS"?

(4) The demonstration (Fig. 4) that DNMT expression results in elevated ROS and its further synergistic increase when cells are also exposed to H2O2 is the basis for the authors' discussion of DNA damage-induced increases in cellular ROS. S. cerevisiae does not possess DNMTs/5mC, yet exposure to MMS also results in substantial increases in intracellular ROS (Rowe et al, (2008) Free Rad. Biol. Med. 45:1167-1177. PMC2643028). The authors should be aware of previous studies that have linked DNA damage to intracellular increases in ROS in other organisms and should comment on this in the text.

Comments for the revised manuscript:

In this revised manuscript, the authors have satisfactorily addressed the issues raised in the review of the original submission and have significantly improved these studies.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

This manuscript presents a study combining molecular dynamics simulations and Hedgehog (Hh) pathway assays to investigate cholesterol translocation pathways to Smoothened (SMO), a G protein-coupled receptor central to Hedgehog signal transduction. The authors identify and characterize two putative cholesterol access routes to the transmembrane domain (TMD) of SMO and propose a model whereby cholesterol traverses through the TMD to the cysteine-rich domain (CRD), which is presented as the primary site of SMO activation.

The MD simulations and biochemical experiments are carefully executed and provide useful data. However, the manuscript is significantly weakened by a narrow and selective interpretation of the literature, overstatement of certain conclusions, and a lack of appropriate engagement with alternative models that are well-supported by published data-including data from prior work by several of the coauthors of this manuscript. In its current form, the manuscript gives a biased impression of the field and overemphasizes the role of the CRD in cholesterol-mediated SMO activation. Below, I provide specific points where revisions are needed to ensure a more accurate and comprehensive treatment of the biology.

Major Comments:

(1) Overstatement of the CRD as the Orthosteric Site of SMO Activation

The manuscript repeatedly implies or states that the CRD is the orthosteric site of SMO activation, without adequate acknowledgment of alternative models. To give just a few examples (of many in this manuscript):

a) "PTCH is proposed to modulate the Hh signal by decreasing the ability of membrane cholesterol to access SMO's extracellular cysteine-rich domain (CRD)" (p. 3).

b) "In recent years there has been a vigorous debate on the orthosteric site of SMO" (p. 3).

c) "cholesterol must travel through the SMO TMD to reach the orthosteric site in the CRD" (p. 4).

d) "we observe cholesterol moving along TM6 to the TMD-CRD interface (common pathway, Fig. 1d) to access the orthosteric binding site in the CRD" (p. 6).

While the second quote in this list at least acknowledges a debate, the surrounding text suggests that this debate has been entirely resolved in favor of the CRD model. This is misleading and not reflective of the views of other investigators in the field (see, for example, a recent comprehensive review from Zhang and Beachy, Nature Reviews Molecular and Cell Biology 2023, which makes the point that both the CRD and 7TM sites are critical for cholesterol activation of SMO as well as PTCH-mediated regulation of SMO-cholesterol interactions).

In contrast, a large body of literature supports a dual-site model in which both the CRD and the TMD are bona fide cholesterol-binding sites essential for SMO activation. Examples include:

a) Byrne et al., Nature 2016: point mutation of the CRD cholesterol binding site impairs-but does not abolish-SMO activation by cholesterol (SMO D99A, Y134F, and combination mutants - Fig 3 of the 2016 study).

b) Myers et al., Dev Cell 2013 and PNAS 2017: CRD deletion mutants retain responsiveness to PTCH regulation and cholesterol mimetics (similar Hh responsiveness of a CRD deletion mutant is also observed in Fig 4 Byrne et al, Nature 2016).

c) Deshpande et al., Nature 2019: mutation of residues in the TMD cholesterol binding site blocks SMO activation entirely, strongly implicating the TMD as a required site, in contrast to the partial effects of mutating or deleting the CRD site.

Qi et al., Nature 2019, and Deshpande et al., Nature 2019, both reported cholesterol binding at the TMD site based on high-resolution structural data. Oddly, Deshpande et al., Nature 2019, is not cited in the discussion of TMD binding on p. 3, despite being one of the first papers to describe cholesterol in the TMD site and its necessity for activation (the authors only cite it regarding activation of SMO by synthetic small molecules).

Kinnebrew et al., Sci Adv 2022 report that CRD deletion abolished PTCH regulation, which is seemingly at odds with several studies above (e.g., Byrne et al, Nature 2016; Myers et al, Dev Cell 2013); but this difference may reflect the use of an N-terminal GFP fusion to SMO in the Kinnebrew et al 2022, which could alter SMO activation properties by sterically hindering activation at the TMD site by cholesterol (but not synthetic SMO agonists like SAG); in contrast, the earlier work by Byrne et al is not subject to this caveat because it used an untagged, unmodified form of SMO.

Although overexpression of PTCH1 and SMO (wild-type or mutant) has been noted as a caveat in studies of CRD-independent SMO activation by cholesterol, this reviewer points out that several of the studies listed above include experiments with endogenous PTCH1 and low-level SMO expression, demonstrating that SMO can clearly undergo activation by cholesterol (as well as regulation by PTCH1) in a manner that does not require the CRD.

Recommendation:

The authors should revise the manuscript to provide a more balanced overview of the field and explicitly acknowledge that the CRD is not the sole activation site. Instead, a dual-site model is more consistent with available structural, mutational, and functional data. In addition, the authors should reframe their interpretation of their MD studies to reflect this broader and more accurate view of how cholesterol binds and activates SMO.

(2) Bias in Presentation of Translocation Pathways

The manuscript presents the model of cholesterol translocation through SMO to the CRD as the predominant (if not sole) mechanism of activation. Statements such as: "Cholesterol traverses SMO to ultimately reach the CRD binding site" (p. 6) suggest an exclusivity that is not supported by prior literature in the field. Indeed, the authors' own MD data presented here demonstrate more stable cholesterol binding at the TMD than at the CRD (p 17), and binding of cholesterol to the TMD site is essential for SMO activation. As such, it is appropriate to acknowledge that cholesterol may activate SMO by translocating through the TM5/6 tunnel, then binding to the TMD site, as this is a likely route of SMO activation in addition to the CRD translocation route they highlight in their discussion.

The authors describe two possible translocation pathways (Pathway 1: TM2/3 entry to TMD; Pathway 2: TM5/6 entry and direct CRD transfer), but do not sufficiently acknowledge that their own empirical data support Pathway 2 as more relevant. Indeed, because their experimental data suggest Pathway 2 is more strongly linked to SMO activation, this pathway should be weighted more heavily in the authors' discussion. In addition, Pathway 2 is linked to cholesterol binding to both the TMD and CRD sites (the former because the TMD binding site is at the terminus of the hydrophobic tunnel, the latter via the translocation pathway described in the present manuscript), so it is appropriate that Pathway 2 figure more prominently than Pathway 1 into the authors' discussion.

The authors also claim that "there is no experimental structure with cholesterol in the inner leaflet region of SMO TMD" (p 16). However, a structural study of apo-SMO from the Manglik and Cheng labs (Zhang et al., Nat Comm, 2022) identified a cholesterol molecule docked at the TM5/6 interface and also proposed a "squeezing" mechanism by which cholesterol could enter the TM5/6 pocket from the membrane. The authors do not take this SMO conformation into account in their models, nor do they discuss the possibility that conformational dynamics at the TM5/6 interface could facilitate cholesterol flipping and translocation into the hydrophobic conduit, even though both possibilities have precedent in the 2022 empirical cryoEM structural analysis.

Recommendation:

The authors should avoid oversimplification of the SMO cholesterol activation process, either by tempering these claims or broadening their discussion to better reflect the complexity and multiplicity of cholesterol access and activation routes for SMO, and consider the 2022 apo-SMO cryoEM structure in their analysis of the TM5/6 translocation pathway.

(3) Alternative Possibility: Direct Membrane Access to CRD

The possibility that the CRD extracts cholesterol directly from the membrane outer leaflet is not considered. While the crystal structures place the CRD in a stable pose above the membrane, multiple cryo-EM studies suggest that the CRD is dynamic and adopts a variety of conformations, raising the possibility that the stability of the CRD in the crystal structures is a result of crystal packing and that the CRD may be far more dynamic under more physiological conditions.

Recommendation:

The authors should explicitly acknowledge and evaluate this potential mechanism and, if feasible, assess its plausibility through MD simulations.

(4) Inconsistent Framing of Study Scope and Limitations

The discussion contains some contradictory and misleading language. For example, the authors state that "In this study we only focused on the cholesterol movement from the membrane to CRD binding site." and then several sentences later state that "We outline the entire translocation mechanism from a kinetic and thermodynamic perspective.". These statements are at odds. The former appropriately (albeit briefly) notes the limited scope of the modeling, while the latter overstates the generality of the findings.

In addition, the authors' narrow focus on the CRD site constitutes a major caveat to the entire work. It should be acknowledged much earlier in the manuscript, preferably in the introduction, rather than mentioned as an aside in the penultimate paragraph of the conclusion.

Recommendation:<br /> The authors should clarify the scope of the study and expand the discussion of its limitations. They should explicitly acknowledge that the study models one of several cholesterol access routes and that the findings do not rule out alternative pathways.

Summary:

This study has the potential to make a useful contribution to our understanding of cholesterol translocation and SMO activation. However, in its current form, the manuscript presents an overly narrow and, at times, misleading view of the literature and biological models; as such, it is not nearly as impactful as it could be. I strongly encourage the authors to revise the manuscript to include:

(1) A more balanced discussion of the CRD vs. TMD binding sites.

(2) Acknowledgment of alternative cholesterol access pathways.

(3) More comprehensive citation of prior structural and functional studies.

(4) Clarification of assumptions and scope.

Of note, the above suggestions require little to no additional MD simulations or experimental studies, but would significantly enhance the rigor and impact of the work.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This study addresses the role of MIRO1 in vascular smooth muscle cell proliferation, proposing a link between MIRO1 loss and altered growth due to disrupted mitochondrial dynamics and function. While the findings are potentially useful for understanding the importance of mitochondrial positioning and function in this specific cell type within health and disease contexts, the evidence presented appears incomplete, with key bioenergetic and mechanistic claims lacking adequate support.

Strengths:

(1) The study focuses on an important regulatory protein, MIRO1, and its role in vascular smooth muscle cell (VSMC) proliferation, a relatively underexplored context.

(2) It explores the link between smooth muscle cell growth, mitochondrial dynamics, and bioenergetics, which is a potentially significant area for both basic and translational biology.

(3) The use of both in vivo and in vitro systems provides a potentially useful experimental framework to interrogate MIRO1 function in this context.

Weaknesses:

(1) The central claim that MIRO1 loss impairs mitochondrial bioenergetics is not convincingly demonstrated, with only modest changes in respiratory parameters and no direct evidence of functional respiratory chain deficiency.

(2) The proposed link between MIRO1 and respiratory supercomplex assembly or function is speculative, lacking mechanistic detail and supported by incomplete or inconsistent biochemical data.

(3) Key mitochondrial assays are either insufficiently controlled or poorly interpreted, undermining the strength of the conclusions regarding oxidative phosphorylation.

(4) The study does not adequately assess mitochondrial content or biogenesis, which could confound interpretations of changes in respiratory activity.

(5) Overall, the evidence for a direct impact of MIRO1 on mitochondrial respiratory function in the experimental setting is weak, and the conclusions overreach the data.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Metabolons are multisubunit complexes that promote the physical association of sequential enzymes within a metabolic pathway. Such complexes are proposed to increase metabolic flux and efficiency by channeling reaction intermediates between enzymes. The TCA cycle enzymes malate dehydrogenase (MDH1) and citrate synthase (CIT1) have been linked to metabolon formation, yet the conditions under which these enzymes interact, and whether such interactions are dynamic in response to metabolic cues, remain unclear, particularly in the native cellular context. This study uses a nanoBIT protein-protein interaction assay to map the dynamic behavior of the MDH1-CIT1 interaction in response to multiple metabolic stimuli and challenges in yeast. Beyond mapping these interactions in real time, the authors also performed GC-MS metabolomics to map whole-cell metabolite alterations across experimental conditions. Finally, the authors use microscale thermophoresis to determine components that alter the MDH1-CIT1 interaction in vitro. Collectively, the authors synthesize their collected data into a model in which the MDH1-CIT1 metabolon dissociates in conditions of low respiratory flux, and is stimulated during conditions of high respiratory flux. While their data largely support these models, some key exceptions are found that suggest this model is likely oversimplified and will require further work to understand the complexities associated with MDH1-CIT1 interaction dynamics. Nonetheless, the authors put forth an interesting and timely toolkit to begin to understand the interaction kinetics and dynamics of key metabolic enzymes that should serve as a platform to begin disentangling these important yet understudied aspects of metabolic regulation.

Strengths:

(1) The authors address an important question: how do metabolon-associated protein-protein interactions change across altered metabolic conditions?

(2) The development and validation of the MDH1-CIT1 nanoBIT assay provides an important tool to allow the quantification of this protein-protein interaction in vivo. Importantly, the authors demonstrate that the assay allows kinetic and real time assessment of these protein interactions, which reveal interesting and dynamic behavior across conditions.

(3) The use of classic biochemical techniques to confirm that pH and various metabolites can alter the MDH1-CIT1 interaction in vitro is rigorous and supports the model put forth by the authors.

Weaknesses:

(1) Some of the data collected seem to be merely reported rather than synthesized and interpreted for the reader. This is particularly true for data that seem to reflect more complex trends, such as the GC-MS experiments that map metabolites across multiple experiments, or treatments that show somewhat counterintuitive results, such as the antimycin A treatment, which promotes rather than disrupts the MDH1-CIT1 interaction.

(2) Some of the assertions put forth in the manuscript are not substantiated by the data presented, and the authors are at times overly reliant on previous findings from the literature to support their claims. This is particularly notable for claims about "TCA cycle flux"; the authors do not perform flux analysis anywhere in their study and should be cautious when insinuating correlations between their observations and "flux".

(3) The manuscript presentation could be improved. For figures, at times, the axes do not have intuitive labels (example, Figure 1A), data points and details about the number of samples analyzed are missing (bar graphs and box plots), and molecular weight markers are not reported on western blots. The authors refer to the figures out of order in the text, which makes the manuscript challenging to navigate as a reader.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a new method for detecting and identifying proline hydroxylation sites within the proteome. This tool utilizes traditional LC-MS technology with optimized parameters, combined with HILIC-based separation techniques. The authors show that they pick up known hydroxy-proline sites and also validate a new site discovered through their pipeline.

Strengths:

The manuscript utilizes state-of-the-art mass spectrometric techniques with optimized collision parameters to ensure proper detection of the immonium ions, which is an advance compared to other similar approaches before. The use of synthetic control peptides on the HILIC separation step clearly demonstrates the ability of the method to reliably distinguish hydroxy-proline from oxidized methionine - containing peptides. Using this method, they identify a site on CDCA2, which they go on to validate in vitro and also study its role in regulation of mitotic progression in an associated manuscript.

Weaknesses:

Despite the authors' claim about the specificity of this method in picking up the intended peptides, there is a good amount of potential false positives that also happen to get picked (owing to the limitations of MS-based readout), and the authors' criteria for downstream filtering of such peptides require further clarification. In the same vein, greater and more diverse cell-based validation approach will be helpful to substantiate the claims regarding enrichment of peptides in the described pathway analyses.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Type II IRES, such as those from encephalomyocarditis virus (EMCV) and foot-and-mouth disease virus (FMDV), mediate cap-independent translation initiation by using the full complement of eukaryotic initiation factors (eIFs), except the cap-binding protein eIF4E. The molecular details of how IRES type II interacts with the ribosome and initiation factors to promote recruitment have remained unclear. Das and Hussain used cryo-electron microscopy to determine the structure of a translation initiation complex assembled on the EMCV IRES. The structure reveals a direct interaction between the IRES and the 40S ribosomal subunit, offering mechanistic insight into how type II IRES elements recruit the ribosome.

Strengths:

The structure reveals a direct interaction between the IRES and the 40S ribosomal subunit, offering mechanistic insight into how type II IRES elements recruit the ribosome.

Weaknesses:

While this reviewer acknowledges the technical challenges inherent in determining the structure of such a highly flexible complex, the overall resolution remains insufficient to fully support the authors' conclusions, particularly given that cryo-EM is the sole experimental approach presented in the manuscript.

The study is biologically significant; however, the authors should improve the resolution or include complementary biochemical validation.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Bru et al. investigated how inorganic phosphate (Pi) is buffered in cells using S. cerevisiae as a model. Pi is stored in cells in the form of polyphosphates in acidocalcisomes. In S. cerevisiae, the vacuole, which is the yeast lysosome, also fulfills the function of Pi storage organelle. Therefore, yeast is an ideal system to study Pi storage and mobilization.

They can recapitulate in their previously established system, using isolated yeast vacuoles, findings from their own and other groups. They integrate the available data and propose a working model of feedback loops to control the level of Pi on the cellular level.

This is a solid study, in which the biological significance of their findings is not entirely clear. The data analysis and statistical significance need to be improved and included, respectively. The manuscript would have benefited from rigorously testing the model, which would also have increased the impact of the study.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, Bhandari, Keglovits, et al. explore the representational structure of task encoding in the lateral prefrontal cortex. Through an impressive fMRI data-collection effort, they compare and contrast neural representations across tasks with different high-level stimulus-response structures. They find that the lateral prefrontal cortex shows enhanced encoding of task-relevant information, but that most of these representations do not generalize across conditions (i.e., have low abstraction). This appears to be driven in part by the representation of task conditions being clustered by the higher-order task properties ('global' representations), with poor generalization across these clusters ('local' representations). Overall, this paper provides an interesting account of how task representations are encoded in the PFC.

Strengths:

(1) Impressive dataset, which may provide further opportunities for investigating prefrontal representations.

(2) Clever task design, allowing the authors to confound several features within a complex paradigm.

(3) Best-practice analysis for decoding, similarity analyses, and assessments of representational geometry.

(4) Extensive analyses to quantify the structure of PFC task representations.

Weaknesses:

(1) The paper would benefit from improved presentational clarity: more scaffolding of design and analysis decisions, clearer grounding to understand the high-level interpretations of the analyses (e.g., context, cluster, abstraction), and better visualizations of the key findings.

(2) The paper would benefit from stronger theoretical motivation for the experimental design, as well as a refined discussion on the implications of these findings for theories of cognitive control.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, the authors have developed a new Ca indicator conjugated to the peptide, which likely recognizes synaptic ribbons and have measured microdomain Ca near synaptic ribbons at retinal bipolar cells. This interesting approach allows one to measure Ca close to transmitter release sites, which may be relevant for synaptic vesicle fusion and replenishment. Though microdomain Ca at the active zone of ribbon synapses has been measured by Hudspeth and Moser, the new study uses the peptide recognizing synaptic ribbons, potentially measuring the Ca concentration relatively proximal to the release sites.

Strengths:

The study is, in principle, technically well done, and the peptide approach is technically interesting, which allows one to image Ca near the particular protein complexes. The approach is potentially applicable to other types of imaging.

Weaknesses:

Peptides may not be entirely specific, and genetic approach tagging particular active zone proteins with fluorescent Ca indicator proteins may well be more specific. The readers should be aware of this, when interpreting the results.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper presents a framework for a multilevel agent-based model of the drosophila larva, using a simplified larval body and locomotor equations coupled to oscillators and sensory input. The model itself is built upon significant existing literature, particularly Wystrach, Lagogiannis, and Webb 2016 and Jürgensen et al. 2024. The aim is to generate an easily configurable, well-documented platform for organism-scale behavioral simulation in specific experiments. The authors demonstrate qualitative similarity between in vivo behavioral experiments to calibrated models.

Strengths:

The goal is excellent - a system to rapidly run computational experiments that align naturally with behavioral experiments would be well-suited to develop intuitions and cut through hypotheses. The authors provide quantitative descriptions that show that the best-fit parameters in their models produce results that agree with several properties of larval locomotion.

The description of model calibration in the appendix is clear and explains several aspects of the model better than the main text.

In addition, the code is well-organized using contemporary Python tooling and the documentation is nicely in progress (although it remains incomplete). However, see notes for difficulties with installation.

Weaknesses:

(1) As presented here the modeling itself is described in an unclear fashion and without a particular scientific question. The majority of the effort appears to be calibrating modest extensions of existing models and applying them to very simple experiments. This could be an effective first part of a paper on the software tool, but the paper needs to point to a scientific question or, if it is a tool paper, a gap in the current state of modeling tools needed to address scientific goals. While the manuscript has a good overview of larval behavioral papers, the discussion of modeling is more of an afterthought. However, the paper is a modeling paper and the contribution is to modeling and particularly with this work's minor adaptions of existing models, it is unclear what the principle contribution is intended to be.

(2) While the models presented do qualitatively agree with experimental data in specific situations, there is no effort to challenge the model assumptions or compare them to alternative models. Simply because the data is consistent in a small number of simple experiments does not mean that the models are correct. Moreover, given the highly empirical nature of the modeling, I wonder what results are largely the model putting out what was put in, particularly with regards to kinematic results like frequency and body length or the effect of learning simply changing the sensory gain constant. It is difficult to imagine how at this level of empirical modeling, it would appear quite difficult to integrate the type of cell-type-specific perturbation or functional observation that is common in larval experiments.

(3) The central framing of a "layered control architecture" does not have a significant impact on the work presented here and the paper would do better with less emphasis on it. Given the limited empirical models, there are only so many parameters where different components can influence one another, and as best as I can tell from the paper there is only chemotaxis and modulation of a chemotactic gain constant that are incorporated so far. However, since these are empirical functions it says little about how the layers are actually controlled by the nervous system - indeed, the larval nervous system appears to have many levels of local and long-range module of circuits at both the sensory and motor layers. It is not clear how this aspect would contribute beyond the well-appreciated concept of a relatively finite set of behavioral primitives in an insect brain, particularly for the fly larva. What would be a contradictory model and how would the authors differentiate between that and the one they currently propose? If focusing only on olfactory learning and chemotaxis, how does the current framing add to the existing understanding?

(4) The paper uses experimental data to calibrate the models, however, the experiments are not described at all in the text.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This work provides graphical tools for reconstructing the detailed anatomy of a nervous system from a series of sections imaged by electron microscopy. Contact between neuronal processes can direct outgrowth and is necessary for connectivity, thus function. A bioinformatic approach is used to group neurons according to shared features (e.g., contact, synapses) in a hierarchy of "relatedness" that can be interrogated at each step. In this work, Koonze et al analyze vEM data sets for the C. elegans nerve ring (NR), a dense fascicle of processes from181 neurons. In a bioinformatic approach, the clustering algorithm Diffusion Condensation (DC) groups neurons according to similar cell biological features in iterations that remove chunks of differences in feature data with each step ultimately merging all NR neurons in one cluster. DC results are displayed with C-Phate a 3D visualization tool to produce a trajectory that can be interrogated for cell identities and other features at each iterative step. In previous work by these authors, this approach was utilized to identify subgroups of neuronal processes or "strata" in the NR that can be grouped by physical contact and connectivity. Here they expand their analysis to include a series of available vEM data sets across C. elegans larval development. This approach suggests that strata initially established during embryonic development are largely preserved in the adult. Importantly, exceptions involving stage specific-specific reorganization of neuronal placement in specific strata were also detected. A case study featured in the paper demonstrates the utility of this approach for visualizing the integration of newly generated neurons into the existing NR anatomy. Visualization tools used in this work are publicly available at NeuroSCAN.

Strengths:

A web-based app, NeuroSCAN, that individual researchers can use to interrogate the structure and organization of the C. elegans nerve ring across development.

Weaknesses:

minor revisions

Comments on Revisions:

The authors have satisfactorily addressed my critiques.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In the present study, the authors describe the development of new tools and imaging strategies to assess the concomitant development of excitatory and inhibitory synapses in dissociated neuron cultures. To this end, they generate fluorescently tagged constructs of excitatory and inhibitory synapse marker proteins using either conventional overexpression or CRISPR-based strategies. They then image these marker proteins over a timespan of 15 hours to assess synaptic dynamics at different developmental timepoints. Based on their data, they conclude that excitatory and inhibitory synapse development occur in concert to maintain a functional balance despite individual synapse turnover.

Overall, this study addresses an interesting question, i.e., the interplay between the development of excitatory and inhibitory synapses, which has important implications, particularly for neurodevelopmental disorders in which the balance of excitation and inhibition is disrupted. The experiments are technically solid and well-executed, and the individual images are highly compelling.

However, a number of aspects remain to be addressed in order for the study to support the claims made by the authors. First, the novelty aspect of the development of the fluorescently tagged synaptic proteins is unclear, since reporters of this nature are in routine use in many labs. Second, the analysis of the acquired images often seems incomplete, with only example images but no quantification shown, or the distinction between spatial and temporal dynamics appearing unclear. Third, given this incomplete analysis, the interpretations of the authors are not always convincingly supported by the data presented. In conclusion, substantial improvements are required to render the main messages of the study clear and compelling.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

This paper investigates invariance to natural background noise in the auditory cortex of ferrets and humans. The authors first replicate, in ferrets, a finding from human neuroimaging showing that invariance to background noise increases along the cortical hierarchy (i.e. from primary to non-primary auditory cortex). Next, the authors ask whether this pattern of invariance could be explained by differences in tuning to low-level acoustic features across primary and non-primary regions. The authors conclude that this tuning can explain the spatial organization of background invariance in ferrets, but not in humans. The conclusions of the paper are well supported by the data.

The paper is very straightforwardly written, with a generally clear presentation including well-designed and visually appealing figures. Not only does this paper provide an important replication in a non-human animal model commonly used in auditory neuroscience, but also it extends the original findings in three ways. First, the authors reveal a more fine-grained gradient of background invariance by showing that background invariance increases across primary, secondary and tertiary cortical regions. Second, the authors address a potential mechanism that might underlie this pattern of invariance by considering whether differences in tuning to frequency and spectrotemporal modulations across regions could account for the observed pattern of invariance. The spectrotemporal modulation encoding model used here is a well-established approach in auditory neuroscience and seems appropriate for exploring potential mechanisms underlying invariance in auditory cortex, particularly in ferrets. Third, the authors provide a more complete picture of invariance by additionally analyzing foreground invariance, a complementary measure not explored in the original study.

Comments on author revisions:

The authors have thoroughly addressed the concerns raised in my initial review.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In the manuscript " Dynamics of mesoscale brain network during decision-making learning revealed by chronic, large-scale single-unit recording", Wang et al investigated mesoscale network reorganization during visual stimulus discrimination learning in mice using chronic, large-scale single-unit recordings across 10 cortical/subcortical regions. During learning, mice improved task performance mainly by suppressing licking on no-go trials. The authors found that learning induced restructuring of functional connectivity, with visual (V1, V2M) and frontal (OFC, M2) regions forming a task-relevant subnetwork during the acquisition of correct No-Go (CR) trials.

Learning also compressed sequential neural activation and broadened stimulus encoding across regions. In addition, a region's network connectivity rank correlated with its timing of peak visual stimulus encoding.

Optogenetic inhibition of orbitofrontal cortex (OFC) and high order visual cortex (V2M) impaired learning, validating its role in learning. The work highlights how mesoscale networks underwent dynamic structuring during learning.

Strengths:

The use of ultra-flexible microelectrode arrays (uFINE-M) for chronic, large-scale recordings across 10 cortical/subcortical regions in behaving mice represents a significant methodological advancement. The ability to track individual units over weeks across multiple brain areas will provide a rare opportunity to study mesoscale network plasticity.

While limited in scope, optogenetic inhibition of OFC and V2M directly ties connectivity rank changes to behavioral performance, adding causal depth to correlational observations.

Weaknesses:

The weakness is also related to the strength provided by the method. It is demonstrated in the original method that this approach in principle can track individual units for four months (Luan et al, 2017). The authors have not showed chronically tracked neurons across learning. Without demonstrating that and taking advantage of analyzing chronically tracked neurons, this approach is not different from acute recording across multiple days during learning. Many studies have achieved acute recording across learning using similar tasks. These studies have recorded units from a few brain areas or even across brain-wide areas.

Another weakness is that major results are based on analyses of functional connectivity that is calculated using the cross-correlation score of spiking activity (TSPE algorithm). Functional connection strengthen across areas is then ranked 1-10 based on relative strength. Without ground truth data, it is hard to judge the underlying caveats. I'd strongly advise the authors to use complementary methods to verify the functional connectivity and to evaluate the mesoscale change in subnetworks. Perhaps the authors can use one key information of anatomy, i.e. the cortex projects to the striatum, while the striatum does not directly affect other brain structures recorded in this manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this revised manuscript, the authors explore how Mtb can infect hepatocytes and create a favorable niche associated with upregulation of the transcription factor PPARγ which presumably allows the bacteria to scavenge lipids from lipid droplets in host cells and upregulate drug-metabolizing enzymes to protect against its elimination. In response to the review, the authors have performed some additional immunostaining of hepatocytes, added more detail to figure legends, added experiments somewhat showing improved colocalization and staining, clarified several points and paragraphs, and updated the referenced literature and discussion.

The current manuscript provides evidence that human miliary TB patients have infection of hepatocytes with Mtb, with evidence that the bacteria survive at least partially through upregulation of PPARγ, which significantly changes the lipid milieu of the cells. There is also an examination of transcriptomics and lipid metabolism in response to Mtb infection, as well as drug tolerance of Mtb inside hepatocytes. The current manuscript is an improvement over the previous one.

However, although the manuscript is improved, tissue immunophenotyping of the various cells in the liver remains weak and unconvincing. This is truly a missed opportunity and lessens the rigor of the central findings and conclusions. As pointed out by another reviewer, literature has described different fates of Mtb in the liver. Given the tissue available to the authors, carefully dissecting the various cells that the bacteria are in (esp. hepatocytes versus Kupffer cells) is critical. The authors use only 2 generic markers and do not distinguish among cell types within the tissue slices. A review of the literature shows a variety of both human and mouse antibody markers. In fact, a liver atlas based on immunophenotyping has been published. Likewise, the authors comment on liver granulomas, but this is not justified without immunophenotyping.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This is an exciting, comprehensive paper that demonstrates the role of GATA4 on OA-like changes in chondrocytes. The authors present elegant reverse translational experiments that justify this mechanism and demonstrate the sufficiency of GATA4 in a mouse model of osteoarthritis (DMM), where GATA4 drove cartilage degeneration and pain in a manner that was significantly worse than DMM alone. This could pave the way for new therapies for OA that account for both structural changes and pain.

Strengths:

(1) GATA4 was identified from human chondrocytes.

(2) IHC and sequencing confirmed GATA4 presence.

(3) Activation of SMADs is clearly shown in vitro with GATA4 overexpression.

(4) The role of GATA4 was functionally assessed in vivo using the mouse DMM model, where the authors uncovered that GATA4 worsens OA structure and hyperalgesia in male mice.

(5) It is interesting that GATA4 is largely known to be found in cardiac cells and to have a role in cardiac repair, metabolism, and inflammation, among other things listed by the authors in the discussion (in liver, lung, pancreas). What could this new knowledge of GATA4 mean for OA as a potentially systemically mediated disease, where cardiac disease and metabolic syndrome are often co-morbid?

Weaknesses:

(1) It would be useful to explain why GATA4 was chosen over HIF1a, which was the most differentially expressed.

(2) In Figure 5, it would be useful to demonstrate the non-surgical or naive limbs to help contextualize OARSI scores and knee hyperalgesia changes.

(3) While there appear to be GATA4 small molecule inhibitors in various stages of development that could be used to assess the effects in age-related OA, those experiments are out of scope for the current study.

Comments on revised version:

I do not have further comments. Thank you for addressing the previously mentioned concerns.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Different types of retinal ganglion cell (RGC) have different temporal properties - most prominently a distinction between sustained vs. transient responses to contrast. This has been well established in multiple species, including mouse. In general, RGCs with dendrites that stratify close to the ganglion cell layer (GCL) are sustained; whereas those that stratify near the middle of the inner plexiform layer (IPL) are transient. This difference in RGC spiking responses aligns with similar differences in excitatory synaptic currents as well as with differences in glutamate release in the respective layers - shown previously and here, with a glutamate sensor (iGluSnFR) expressed in the RGCs of interest. Differences in glutamate release were not explained by differences in the distinct presynaptic bipolar cells' voltage responses, which were quite similar to one another. Rather, the difference in transient vs. sustained responses seems to emerge at the bipolar cell axon terminals in the form of glutamate release. This difference in the temporal pattern of glutamate release was correlated with differences in the size of synaptic ribbons (larger in the bipolar cells with more sustained responses), which also correlated with a greater number of vesicles in the vicinity of the larger ribbons.

The main conclusion of the study relates to a correlation (because it is difficult to manipulate ribbon size or vesicle density experimentally): the bipolar cells with increased ribbon size/vesicle number would have a greater possibility of sustained release, which would be reflected in the postsynaptic RGC synaptic currents and RGC firing rates. This model proposes a mechanism for temporal channels that is independent of synaptic inhibition. Indeed, some experiments in the paper suggest that inhibition cannot explain the transient nature of glutamate release onto one of the RGC types. Still, it is surprising that such a diverse set of inhibitory interneurons in the retina would not play some role in diversifying the temporal properties of RGC responses.

Strengths:

(1) The study uses a systematic approach to evaluating temporal properties of retinal ganglion cell (RGC) spiking outputs, excitatory synaptic inputs, presynaptic voltage responses, and presynaptic glutamate release. The combination of these experiments demonstrates an important step in the conversion from voltage to glutamate release in shaping response dynamics in RGCs.

(2) The study uses a combination of electrophysiology, two-photon imaging and scanning block face EM to build a quantitative and coherent story about specific retinal circuits and their functional properties.

Weaknesses:

(1) There were some interesting aspects of the study that were not completely resolved, and resolving some of these issues may go beyond the current study. For example, it was interesting that different extracellular media (Ames medium vs. ACSF) generated different degrees of transient vs. sustained responses in RGCs, but it was unclear how these media might have impacted ion channels at different levels of the circuit that could explain the effects on temporal tuning.

(2) It was surprising that inhibition played such a small role in generating temporal tuning. The authors explored this further in the revision, which supported the original claim that inhibition plays a minor role in glutamate release dynamics from the bipolar cells under study.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In their article "Range geography and temperature variability explain cross-continental convergence in range and phenology shifts in a model insect taxon" the authors rigorously investigate the spatial and temporal trends in the occurrence of odonate species and their potential drivers. Specifically, they examine whether species shift their geographic ranges poleward or alter their phenology to cope with changing conditions. Leveraging opportunistic observations of European and North American odonates, they find that species showing significant range shifts also exhibited shifts to earlier emergence. Considering a broad range of potential predictors, their results reveal that geographical factors, but not functional traits, are associated with these shifts.

Strengths:

The article addresses an important topic in ecology and conservation that is particularly timely in the face of reports of substantial insects declines in North America and Europe over the past decades. Through data integration the authors leverage the rich natural history record for odonates, broadening the taxonomic scope of analyses of temporal trends in phenology and distribution. The combination of phenological and range shifts in one framework presents an elegant way to reconcile previous findings and informs about the drivers of biodiversity loss.

Weaknesses:

To better understand whether species shifting both their ranges and phenology are more successful, or as stated here are 'clear winners', and hence whether those that do neither are more vulnerable would require integrating population trends alongside the discussed response. The ~10% species that have not shifted their distribution or phenology might have not declined in abundance, if they have rapidly adapted to local changes in climatic conditions (i.e. they might show a plastic response). These species might be the real 'winners', while species that have recently shifted their ranges or phenology may eventually reach hard limits. The authors are discussing this limitation but might want to adapt their wording, given the potential for misinterpretation. The finding that species with more northern ranges showed lesser northward shifts would speak to the fact that some species have already reached such a geographical range limit.

Achievements and impact:

The results support broad differences in the response of odonate species to climate change, and the prediction that range geography and temperature seasonality are more important predictors of these changes than functional traits. Simultaneously addressing range and phenological shifts highlights that most species exhibit coupled responses but also identifies a significant portion of species that do not respond in these ways that are of critical conservation concern. These results are important for improving forecasts of species' responses to climate change and identifying species of particularly conservation concern. Although not exhaustive regarding abundance trends, the study presents an important step towards a general framework for investigating the drivers of multifaceted species responses.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Canelo et al. used a combination of mathematical modeling and behavioral experiments to ask how flies orient to visual features and stabilize their gaze. In particular, the authors propose three models of visuomotor control, which lead to specific experimental predictions. With the goal of teasing out the suggested models, the authors design three flight experiments: 1) a bar-background experiment, 2) a looming-background experiment, and 3) a bar-background statistics experiment. The authors claim that: experiment 1 data favor the addition-only and graded EC model; experiment 2 data favor the all-or-none EC model; experiment 3 appears to suggest a graded EC model.

While the study is interesting, there are major issues with the conceptual framework. In general, there is a major disconnect between model and animal data. The manuscript lacks a statistical framework to support or refute the proposed models. In the end, it is unclear what are the main conclusions of the manuscript and contributions to the field.

Strengths:

They ask a significant question related to efference copies during volitional movement.

The figures are overall clear and salient.

Weaknesses:

Comparison of model to fly data:<br /> In general, the manuscript suffers from a lack of quantitative comparisons between proposed models and fly data, which compromises the main findings of the work. While Figure 1-Fig. supplement 1 shows a direct comparison between experiment and model predictions, puzzlingly there is no such quantitative comparison in the main manuscript for the faster moving stimuli. Please overlay model predictions and experimental data and provide statistical comparisons throughout. The 3 proposed models are hypotheses, but there is no statistical framework to reject or support the models/hypotheses. Further, there is a disconnect between the new flight experiments and models. In fact, we do not see the model predictions for the set of experimental conditions tested in Figs. 5-7.

Concerns about mechanical model: I have several concerns regarding the biomechanics block in Figure 2:

(1) The inertia coefficient, derived from free flight studies. does not take into account the fact that the center of rotation and center of mass do not align in the magnetic tether (see Bender & Dickinson, 2006 for estimates). This must be corrected using the parallel axis theorem. As the authors compare the model prediction to experimental data in a magnetic tether, it is critical that they revise their analysis.

(2) According to their chosen inertia and damping constants, they would estimate that the I/C time constant is ~1E-3 ms, which is much much smaller than what has been estimated for yaw turns in the magnetic tether (200 ms; Bender & Dickinson, 2006) or free flight saccades (~17 ms; see Cheng et al., 2010; 10.1242/jeb.038778). The bottom line is that the current model underestimates the influence of inertia in turn manoeuvres, i.e. the aerodynamic damping is cranked up too high relative to yaw inertia. This may explain the mismatch between data and model that the authors posit, "What causes the fly to undershoot the movement of the target object in the magnetically tethered assay? One hypothesis is that strong upward magnetic force or a blunt top end of the steel pin significantly dampens the flies' flight turns."

Loom response experiment:<br /> As nicely shown by 10.1242/jeb.02369, visual stimulation of looming stimuli in the magnetic tether evokes saccades. Is it the case as well in Fig. 6? Without showing individual trials, it is not possible to know whether this is the case. If indeed saccades are present, then the authors will have to reframe their results given the physiological evidence for saccade-related cancellation signals and the three proposed models.

Minor comments:

Missing Equation 13 for saccade model in Methods.

For the discussion and results related to flight responses to the mismatch between expected and actual visual feedback, which is germane to the proposed models, the authors should integrate a discussion of a recent paper which directly tested this idea through an augmented reality system: 10.1016/j.cub.2023.11.045. In particular, the authors argue that the optomotor response is not particularly flexible because it may not rely on an internal model, as suggested by recent physiological evidence (Fenk et al.). How do these findings relate to the 3 proposed models within your work?

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, the authors used fMRI to determine whether peripherally viewed objects could be decoded from the foveal cortex, even when the objects themselves were never viewed foveally. Specifically, they investigated whether pre-saccadic target attributes (shape, semantic category) could be decoded from the foveal cortex. They found that object shape, but not semantic category, could be decoded, providing evidence that foveal feedback relies on low-mid-level information. The authors claim that this provides evidence for a mechanism underlying visual stability and object recognition across saccades.

Strengths:

I think this is another nice demonstration that peripheral information can be decoded from / is processed in the foveal cortex - the methods seem appropriate, and the experiments and analyses are carefully conducted, and the main results seem convincing. The paper itself was very clear and well-written.

Weaknesses:

There are a couple of reasons why I think the main theoretical conclusions drawn from the study might not be supported, and why a more thorough investigation might be needed to draw these conclusions.

(1) The authors used a blocked design, with each object being shown repeatedly in the same block. This meant that the stimulus was entirely predictable on each block, which weakens the authors' claims about this being a predictive mechanism that facilitates object recognition - if the stimulus is 100% predictable, there is no aspect of recognition or discrimination actually being tested. I think to strengthen these claims, an experiment would need to have unpredictable stimuli, and potentially combine behavioural reports with decoding to see whether this mechanism can be linked to facilitating object recognition across saccades.

(2) Given that foveal feedback has been found in previous studies that don't incorporate saccades, how is this a mechanism that might specifically contribute to stability across saccades, rather than just being a general mechanism that aids the processing/discrimination of peripherally-viewed stimuli? I don't think this paper addresses this point, which would seem to be crucial to differentiate the results from those of previous studies.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

This paper used computational modeling of infants' performance in a reversal learning paradigm to identify two subgroups of infants, one that initially learned a bit faster but then perseverated more and failed to switch after the reversal (yellow cluster), and those who sampled more before the switch but then perseverated less/switched better (magenta cluster - though see below for comments about infants' overall weak performance). The authors describe magenta babies as showing a profile of greater cognitive flexibility, which they note in adults is linked to better outcomes and a lower incidence of psychiatric disorder. Indeed, the yellow cluster scored less well on several scales of the Vineland and showed lower surgency on the IBQ than the magenta cluster. The authors argue that this paper paves the way for the field of "infant computational neuropsychiatry."

In general, I think this is a fun and intriguing paper. That said, I have a number of concerns with how it is currently written.

First, the role of pupil dilation in the models was really unclear -- I've read it through a few times and came away with different impressions each time. I am now pretty sure the models were only based on infants' behavioural responses (e.g., choice for the correct versus incorrect location) rather than differences in pupil size, but pupil size kept popping up throughout, and so I initially thought the clusters were based on that. The authors should clarify this so other readers are not confused. (One thing that might help is avoiding the word "behaviour" on its own, unless it is further specified as looking behaviour or not, as I assume that some would characterize pupil dilation as a behaviour as well.)

If clusters were NOT based on pupil size (e.g., reaction to prediction error), why not? Was this attempted, and did no clusters emerge? Did the yellow and magenta group also differ in reaction to prediction error, or not? It seems like the argument that this work will be the basis of infant computational psychiatry would require that there not simply be a link between behaviour in an infant study and other measurements of their functioning - because many other papers to date have demonstrated such relationships, many longitudinally - but instead with the link to something where the neurobiology of the behaviour being studied is better understood. I assume this is why pupil dilation kept coming up, but again, it didn't actually seem to be part of the modelling unless I missed something. That is, although I think that this is a nice finding, currently I think the novelty of the finding, as well as the suggestion that it will start a whole new field, may be overblown. I certainly think the pupillometry data has promise, as does the LUMO data, which the authors alluded to being in the works. But perhaps the implications should be toned down a bit in this paper, until those data are further along.

My final substantial comment (a few more minimal ones below) is that overall, babies did quite poorly at this task. Even after 9 post-switch trials, the magenta group was still responding at chance, and the yellow group seemed not to switch at all. Infants then all seemed to perform very well again during block 2, which makes it seem like they still had the original contingency in mind. That said, from what I could see, no data was provided about how many babies looked to the original correct first during Block 2. But based on the data, I assume they basically all went back to predicting on the first side, as otherwise their return to high levels of successful trials would not make sense, unless they somehow forgot the entire thing. It would be good to know for sure, and to have that data (specifically, how many babies looked to the original side again at the start of block 2) in the main paper. Given this overall lack of sensitive performance in the paradigm, even despite the cues signaling where the rewarding video would be changing completely (that is, the contingency between cue and outcome did not itself switch, the cues themselves did), it seems odd to discuss things like statistical or even skillful learning alongside these data.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Marantos et al. showed that for some coliphages, the energetic state of the bacterial host cell has a strong impact on whether phage infection is initiated. The authors drew this conclusion from the observation that there are more free phages remaining in the medium after infection of arsenate-azide-treated cells as compared to after infection of untreated cells. These data were analyzed and reported both as ratios of the treated vs. untreated conditions and using a mass-action kinetic model of phage-cell collision in the infection mixture. The data supported the findings that for four phages infecting Escherichia coli bacteria, namely, phages λ, 𝜙80, m13, and T6, the phages are less likely to initiate infection if the host bacteria are energy-depleted. However, for phage T5, the authors found that their infection propensity is not impacted.

Strengths:

The data presented by the authors clearly supported the principal conclusion of the study ("Viral commitment to infection depends on host metabolism"). The five phages chosen by the authors represent different viral lifestyles and infection mechanisms, highlighting the potential applicability to other Escherichia coli phages. Finally, the authors successfully used a classic mass-action model of phage-cell collision to interpret their data. The simplicity of their experimental assay, combined with the use of this mathematical model, offers other investigators who study phage-bacterial interactions in other contexts a potentially useful toolkit to examine infection in general, and specifically, the dependence of phage infection on the host's metabolic state.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors isolated and measured the numbers of free phages in the medium after infection of bacteria under different treatments. These measurements were analyzed in two different ways: (1) simply as ratios (corrected/normalized using different controls), and (2) fitted using a simple mathematical model. I have concerns regarding both analyses.

1.1) For the first method, having different time points at which the sample of each phage is collected critically complicates data interpretation. As one incubates the phage-bacteria mixture for a longer time, more infection occurs, and the number of phages collected from the mixture decreases. Therefore, the different incubation time forfeits the goal of "a systematic and quantitative comparison across different phages [...]" (line 81), just as the authors self-criticized. Conceivably, the authors could have used the shortest measurement time for all phages (i.e., 10 minutes, as for phage λ). Alternatively, the authors could have applied a systematic criterion such as half (or any other fraction) of the latent period of each phage, which would still "maximize the incubation period while ensuring that manipulations were completed before the first infection cycle concluded" (lines 126-127). In my view, the seemingly arbitrary measurement time for each phage renders the entire first analysis very challenging to interpret. It also goes against the author's proposition that the protocol was "standardized" (line 92) or "consistent" (line 200). It is not clear what the readers are supposed to take away from this first analysis, or rather, which evidence, finding, or conclusion the manuscript would lose if the authors only presented the modeling-based analysis.

1.2) The second method of analysis sought to remove the dependence of the measurements on time. I completely agree with this goal, and the findings extracted from this analysis significantly contributed to the merits of this manuscript. However, the authors achieved this goal using a single time point for each phage to calculate the infection rate (η). As shown in Figure S3, each of the phage depletion curves is anchored by only one data point (note that the P(t)/P(0) = 1 at t = 0 is assumed, not measured). This goes against the typical way this collision model is used in the literature, where a time series is measured and used to fit the model (e.g., DOI 10.1007/978-1-60327-164-6 18, or more recently, PMID 39700139). This practice in the current manuscript reduced the robustness of the inferred η values. This problem is exacerbated by assumptions used by the authors in formulating this model. For instance, the authors used a constant value for the bacterial concentration, B, because "bacterial growth and lysis were negligible" (lines 135-136). However, considering that the bacteria were cultured at 37oC in a very rich medium (first in YT broth, then in 2% glucose), the measurement times of 20, 30, and 55 minutes are most likely one or a few generations of bacterial growth and division.

Related note: I suggest that one of the panels in Figure S3 should be moved to the main text, since it is critical to the second method of analysis.

(2) The data were able to distinguish phages that successfully infected bacteria and those that remained free in the medium, and the authors appropriately interpreted the data as such throughout the Results section. However, in the Discussion (starting from the very first sentence, line 172), the authors used terms that include "adsorption" and "entry" more interchangeably (for example, see the three sentences in lines 310-313, for "viral entry efficiency is shaped by [...]", then "adsorption kinetics modeling"). I do not see how the authors' data could distinguish between adsorption (the phage particles attaching to the outside of the cell) and entry (the phage DNA being injected into the cell). Conceivably, any phage particles that irreversibly attach to a cell but do not yet inject their genome into the cell would still be removed from the medium and therefore not quantified. Another example: in lines 189-191, the authors interpreted that "[...] when the bacterium is in a low metabolic state, the phage does not bind irreversibly to the host", but how do the authors eliminate the case of no phage binding (i.e., the reversible step) to begin with? Similarly, in lines 283-293, how do the authors delineate whether energy depletion would increase the k_off term or decrease the k_inj term, because either would result in more free phages in the medium as observed in the data? I believe that the writing of the Discussion, as it stands now, is doing a disservice to the conclusions presented in the Results section.

(3) The authors presented an argument that performing infection of all five phages in the same condition is an advantage, allowing for comparison across different phages. While this goal is a completely valid one, it is difficult to reconcile that with the fact that different phages require different optimal conditions for successful infection. For instance, phage T5 famously requires Ca2+ for successful infection into the host bacterium (and later successful replication); see PMID 13174489. However, all infections were performed in TMG, which lacks Ca2+. Perhaps the absence of T5 dependence on the host metabolism is because the infection condition used by the authors was not optimal for T5 to begin with? Similar arguments could be made for other phages.

(4) Whereas the manuscript examined five coliphages, only phage T5 and phage λ were discussed extensively. I believe some discussion points for these two phages need clarification.

4.1) Phage T5: The data obtained by the authors show that the infection rate of phage T5 is not impacted by the metabolic state of the host cell. Considering that the authors used the terms "infection", "adsorption", and "entry" interchangeably to refer to the irreversible commitment of a phage to a host cell (see point 2), this discussion regarding phage T5 lacks one critical literature context: DNA entry of phage T5 is known to occur in two phases (first-step transfer and second-step transfer). Critically, the second step can only occur if phage proteins encoded by the phage DNA transferred in the first step are expressed (see PMID 10577483 and the cited papers therein). In that context, metabolic poisoning of the host bacteria should have impeded T5 infection. The authors should comment on this point.

4.2) Phage λ: The experiment using phage λ in this current study shares many resemblances to that in Brown et al. 2022. That feature alone is not a problem, but at many places in the text, the writing is ambiguous as to whether it is discussing the results in Brown et al. 2022 or in the current manuscript. I am giving three examples below, but this is not exhaustive: (i) Lines 67-69, there is no Brown et al. 2022 reference immediately after "a mutant phage variant (λh) could bypass this dependency [...]" (not just in the previous sentence); (ii) Line 228 should clearly say "Our previous findings suggested that phage λ is capable of [...]", since it concerns Brown et al., 2022, not the current study; and (iii) Lines 245-246, there is no Brown et al., 2022 reference immediately after "we observed that a mutant variant [...] even energy-depleted host" (without a reference, it reads like the authors "observed" that finding in this current manuscript).

Also, regarding phage λ: The discussion between line 230 and line 249 is very interesting, but since it concerns the differences between λ PaPa and Ur-λ, the authors should consider mentioning and discussing a very relevant recent study, PMCID: PMC6312755.

(5) Control experiments, or references to prior studies, are needed to support that the As/Az treatment at this concentration and duration (at least 10 minutes) is sufficient to deplete the metabolic state of the cell. For instance, this can be shown by impeded or null cell growth, arrested motility (using a standard swimming assay), or a fluorescent reporter for the energetic state of the cell.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This is a strong and important report that presents a framework for understanding cortical contributions to neonatal respiration. Overall, the authors successfully achieved their goal of linking cortical activity to respiratory drive. Despite the correlational nature of this study, it is a crucial step in establishing a foundation for future work to elucidate the interaction between cortical activity and breathing.

Strengths:

(1) The introduction and use of workflows that establish correlational relationships between breathing and brain activity.

(2) The execution of these workflows in human neonates.

Weaknesses:

Interpretations related to causal inference, confounds of sleep and caffeine, and the spatial interpretation of EEG data need to be addressed to ensure that the data appropriately support the conclusions.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In the present work, Yinyin Lv et al offer evidence for the therapeutic potential of trained immunity in the context of inflammatory bowel disease (IBD). Prior research has demonstrated that innate cells pre-treated (trained) with β-glucan show an enhanced pro-inflammatory response upon a second challenge.

While an increased immune response can be beneficial and protect against bacterial infections, there is also the risk that it will worsen symptoms in various inflammatory disorders. In the present study, the authors show that mice preconditioned with β-glucan have enhanced resistance to Staphylococcus aureus infection, indicating heightened immune responses.

The authors demonstrate that β-glucan training of bone marrow hematopoietic progenitors and peripheral monocytes mitigates the pro-inflammatory effects of colitis, with protection extending to naïve recipients of the trained cells.

Using a dextran sulfate sodium (DSS)-induced model of colitis, β-glucan pre-treatment significantly dampens disease severity. Importantly, the use of Rag1^-/- mice, which lack adaptive immune cells, confirms that the protective effects of β-glucan are mediated by innate immune mechanisms. Further, experiments using Ccr2^-/- mice underline the necessity of monocyte recruitment in mediating this protection, highlighting CCR2 as a key factor in the mobilization of β-glucan-trained monocytes to inflamed tissues. Transcriptomic profiling reveals that β-glucan training upregulates genes associated with pattern recognition, antimicrobial defense, immunomodulation, and interferon signaling pathways, suggesting broad functional reprogramming of the innate immune compartment. In addition, β-glucan training induces a distinct monocyte subpopulation with enhanced activation and phagocytic capacity. These monocytes exhibit an increased ability to infiltrate inflamed colonic tissue and differentiate into macrophages, marked by increased expression of Cx3cr1. Moreover, among these trained monocyte and macrophage subsets, other gene expression signatures are associated with tissue and mucosal repair, suggesting a role in promoting resolution and regeneration following inflammatory insult.

Strengths:

(1) Overall, the authors present a mechanistically insightful investigation that advances our understanding of trained immunity in IBD.

(2) By employing a range of well-characterized murine models, the authors investigate specific mechanisms involved in the effects of β-glucan training.

(3) Furthermore, the study provides functional evidence that the protection conferred by the trained cells persists within the hematopoietic progenitors and can be transferred to naïve recipients. The integration of transcriptomic profiling allows the identification of changes in key genes and molecular pathways underlying the trained immune phenotype.

(4) This is an important study that demonstrates that β-glucan-trained innate cells confer protection against colitis and promote mucosal repair, and these findings underscore the potential of harnessing innate immune memory as a therapeutic approach for chronic inflammatory diseases.

Weaknesses:

However, FPKM is not ideal for between-sample comparisons due to its within-sample normalization approach. Best practices recommend using raw counts (with DESeq2) for more robust statistical inference.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The paper by Li et al. describes the crystal structure of a complex of Sld3-Cdc45-binding domain (CBD) with Cdc45 and a model of the dimer of an Sld3-binding protein, Sld7, with two Sld3-CBD-Cdc45 for the tethering. In addition, the authors showed the genetic analysis of the amino acid substitution of residues of Sld3 in the interface with Cdc45 and biochemical analysis of the protein interaction between Sld3 and Cdc45 as well as DNA binding activity of Sld3 to the single-strand DNAs of the ARS sequence.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Chen et al. identify endophilin A1 as a novel component of the inhibitory postsynaptic scaffold. Their data show impaired evoked inhibitory synaptic transmission in CA1 neurons of mice lacking endophilin A1, and an increased susceptibility to seizures. Endophilin can interact with the postsynaptic scaffold protein gephyrin and promotes assembly of the inhibitory postsynaptic element. Endophilin A1 is known to play a role in presynaptic terminals and in dendritic spines, but a role for endophilin A1 at inhibitory postsynaptic densities has not yet been described, providing a valuable addition to the field.

To investigate the role of endophilin A1 at inhibitory postsynapses, the authors used a broad array of experimental approaches, including tests of seizure susceptibility, electrophysiology, biochemistry, neuronal culture and image analysis. The authors have addressed the remaining concerns in their revision. Taken together, their results expand the synaptic role of endophilin-A1 to include the inhibitory post synaptic element.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript is a comprehensive molecular and cell biological characterisation of the effects of P604 hydroxylation by PHD1 on RepoMan, a regulatory subunit of the PPIgamma complex. The identification and molecular characterisation of the hydroxylation site have been written up and deposited in BioRxiv in a separate manuscript. I reviewed the data and came to the conclusion that the hydroxylation site has been identified and characterised to a very high standard by LC-MS, in cells and in vitro reactions. I conclude that we should have no question about the validity of the PHD1-mediated hydroxylation.

In the context of the presented manuscript, the authors postulate that hydroxylation on P604 by PHD1 leads to the inactivation of the complex, resulting in the retention of pThr3 in H3.

Strengths:

Compelling data, characterisation of how P604 hydroxylation is likely to induce the interaction between RepoMan and a phosphatase complex, resulting in loading of RepoMan on Chromatin. Loss of the regulation of the hydroxylation site by PHD1 results in mitotic defects.

Weaknesses:

Reliance on a Proline-Alanine mutation in RepoMan to mimic an unhydroxylatable protein. The mutation will introduce structural alterations, and inhibition or knockdown of PHD1 would be necessary to strengthen the data on how hydroxylates regulate chromatin loading and interactions with B56/PP2A.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

The manuscript contains a carefully designed fMRI study, using MVPA patter analysis to investigate which high-level associate cortices contain target-related information to guide visual search. A special focus is hereby on so-called 'target-associated' information, that has previously been shown to help in guiding attention during visual search. For this purpose the author trained their participants and made them learn specific target-associations, in order to then test which brain regions may contain neural representations of those learnt associations. They found that at least some of the associations tested were encoded in prefrontal cortex during the cue and delay period.

The manuscript is very carefully prepared. As far as I can see, the statistical analyses are all sound and the results integrate well with previous findings.

I have no strong objections against the presented results and their interpretation.

The authors have addressed all my previous comments and questions in their revision of the text.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Pattern formation is responsible for generating the spatial organization of cells, tissues, and organs during embryogenesis. It operates within a multifactorial system including initial conditions, gene regulatory networks, extracellular signals, mechanical forces, stochastic noise, and environmental inputs. Finally, it ensures the functional anatomy of an organism.

This study focuses on the one central aspect in pattern formation: how spatial heterogeneity arises from an initial condition and evolves into a more complex or distinct spatial pattern (non-trivial pattern formation, as they termed). The authors made efforts to explore and characterize all possible ways to achieve the pattern formation. They do this by discussing how extracellular signals spread, how individual cells respond to those signals, and how those responses, in turn, modulate signal propagation.

Finally, their comprehensive analysis summarizes that there are three classes of interactions between extracellular signals and intracellular responses, corresponding to previously known mechanisms that can generate spatial patterns: difference in morphogen concentrations in space, noise-amplification, and Turing pattern.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The study adapts CRISPR-based detection toolkit (SHERLOCK assay) using conserved and species-specific targets for the detection of some members of the Trypanosomatidae family of veterinary importance and species-specific assays to differentiate between the six most common animal trypanosomes species responsible for AAT (SHERLOCK4AAT). The assays were able to discriminate between Trypanozoon (T. b. brucei, T. evansi and T. equiperdum), T. congolense (Savanah, Forest Kilifi and Dzanga sangha), T. vivax, T. theileri, T. simiae and T. suis. The design of both broad and species-specific assays was based primarily on sequences of the 18S rRNA, GAPDH (Glyceraldehyde-3-phosphate dehydrogenase) and invariant flagellum antigen (IFX) genes for species identification. Most importantly the authors showed varying limit of detection for the different SHERLOCK assays which is somewhat comparable to PCR-derived molecular techniques currently used for detecting animal trypanosomes even though some of these methodologies have used other primers that target genes such as ITS1 and 7SL sRNA.

The data presented in the study are particularly useful and of significant interest for diagnosis of AAT in affected areas.

Strengths:

The assays convincingly allow for the analysis and detection of most trypanosomes in AAT

Weaknesses:

Inability for the assay to distinguish T. b. brucei, T. evansi and T. equiperdum using the 18S rRNA gene as well as the IFX gene not achieving the sensitivity requirements for detection of T. vivax. Both T. brucei brucei and T. vivax are the most predominant infective species in animals (in addition to T. congolense), therefore a reliable assay should be able to convincingly detect these to allow for proper use of diagnostic assay.

Reviewer #4 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, Derkaloustian et al. look at the important topic of what affects fine touch perception. The observations that there may be some level of correlation with instabilities are intriguing. They attempted to characterize different materials by counting the frequency (occurrence #, not of vibration) of instabilities at various speeds and forces of a PDMS slab pulled lengthwise over the material. They then had humans perform the same vertical motion to discriminate between these samples. They correlated the % correct in discrimination with differences in frequency of steady sliding over the design space as well as other traditional parameters such as friction coefficient and roughness.

The authors pose an interesting hypothesis and make an interesting observation about the occurrences of instability regimes in different materials while in contact with PDMS, which is interesting for the community to see in publication. It should be noted however that the finger is complex, and there are many factors that may be over simplified, and perhaps even incorrect, with the use of the PDMS finger. There are trends, such as the trend of surfaces that are more similar in PDMS friction coefficient being easier to discriminate than those with more different PDMS friction coefficient, that contradict multiple other papers in the literature (Fehlberg et al., 2024; Smith and Scott, 1996). This may be due to the PDMS finger not being representative of the real finger conditions. A measurement of friction and the instabilities with a human finger, or demonstration that the PDMS finger is producing the same results (friction coefficient, instabilities, etc.) as a human finger, is needed.

Strengths:

The strength of this paper is in its intriguing hypothesis and important observation that instabilities may contribute to what humans are detecting as differences in these apparently similar samples.

Weaknesses:

There is are significant weaknesses in the representativeness of the PDMS finger, the vertical motion, and the speed of sliding to real human exploration. The real finger has multiple layers with different moduli. In fact, the stratum corneum cells, which are the outer layer at the interface and determine the friction, have much higher modulus than PDMS. In addition, the flat contact area can cause shifting of contact points. Both can contribute to making the PDMS finger have much more stick slip than a real finger. In fact, if you look at the regime maps, there is very little space that has steady sliding. This does not represent well human exploration of surfaces. We do not tend to use force and velocity that will cause extensive stick slip (frequent regions of 100% stick slip) and, in fact, the speeds used in the study are on the slow side, which also contributes to more stick slip. At higher speeds and lower forces, all of the materials had steady sliding regions. Further, on these very smooth surfaces, the friction and stiction are more complex and cannot dismiss considerations such as finger material property change with sweat pore occlusion and sweat capillary forces. Also, the vertical motion of both the PDMS finger and the instructed human subjects is not the motion that humans typically use to discriminate between surfaces.

This all leads to the critical question, why is the friction, normal force, and velocity not measured during the measured human exploration using the real human finger? An alternative would be showing that the PDMS finger reproduces the results of the human finger. I have checked the author's previous papers with this setup and did not find one that showed that the PDMS finger produced the same results as a human finger (Carpenter et al., 2018; Dhong et al., 2018; Nolin et al., 2022, 2021). The reviewer is not asking to do a more detailed psychophysical study with a decision-making model. All that is being asked is to use a human finger for the friction coefficient and instability measurements at typical human forces and speeds, or at least doing these measurements with both for one or two samples to show that the PDMS finger produces the same results as a human finger. The authors posed an extremely interesting hypothesis that humans may alter their speed to feel the instability transition regions. This is something that could be measured with a real finger but is not likely to be correlated accurately enough to match regime boundaries determined with such a simplified artificial finger.

References

Carpenter CW, Dhong C, Root NB, Rodriquez D, Abdo EE, Skelil K, Alkhadra MA, Ramírez J, Ramachandran VS, Lipomi DJ. 2018. Human ability to discriminate surface chemistry by touch. Mater Horiz 5:70-77. doi:10.1039/C7MH00800G<br /> Dhong C, Kayser LV, Arroyo R, Shin A, Finn M, Kleinschmidt AT, Lipomi DJ. 2018. Role of fingerprint-inspired relief structures in elastomeric slabs for detecting frictional differences arising from surface monolayers. Soft Matter 14:7483-7491. doi:10.1039/C8SM01233D<br /> Fehlberg M, Monfort E, Saikumar S, Drewing K, Bennewitz R. 2024. Perceptual Constancy in the Speed Dependence of Friction During Active Tactile Exploration. IEEE Transactions on Haptics 17:957-963. doi:10.1109/TOH.2024.3493421<br /> Nolin A, Licht A, Pierson K, Lo C-Y, Kayser LV, Dhong C. 2021. Predicting human touch sensitivity to single atom substitutions in surface monolayers for molecular control in tactile interfaces. Soft Matter 17:5050-5060. doi:10.1039/D1SM00451D<br /> Nolin A, Pierson K, Hlibok R, Lo C-Y, Kayser LV, Dhong C. 2022. Controlling fine touch sensations with polymer tacticity and crystallinity. Soft Matter 18:3928-3940. doi:10.1039/D2SM00264G<br /> Smith AM, Scott SH. 1996. Subjective scaling of smooth surface friction. Journal of Neurophysiology 75:1957-1962. doi:10.1152/jn.1996.75.5.1957

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, authors utilize biophysical modeling to investigate differences in free energies and nucleosomal configuration probability density of CpG islands and nonmethylated regions in the genome. Toward this goal, they develop and apply the cgNA+ coarse-grained model, an extension of their prior molecular modeling framework.

Strengths:

The study utilizes biophysical modeling to gain mechanistic insight into nucleosomal occupancy differences in CpG and nonmethylated regions in the genome.

Weaknesses:

Although the overall study is interesting, the manuscripts need more clarity in places. Moreover, the rationale and conclusion for some of the analyses are not well described.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In their manuscript, the authors investigate how glutaminolysis (GLS) and mitochondrial pyruvate import (MPC2) jointly shape B cell fate and the humoral immune response. Using inducible knockout systems and metabolic inhibitors, they uncover a "synthetic auxotrophy": When GLS activity/glutaminolysis is lost together with either GLUT1-mediated glucose uptake or MPC2, B cells fail to upregulate mitochondrial respiration, IL 21/STAT3 and IFN/STAT1 signaling is impaired, and the plasma cell output and antigen-specific antibody titers drop significantly. This work thus demonstrates the promotion of plasma cell differentiation and cytokine signaling through parallel activation of two metabolic pathways. The dataset is technically comprehensive and conceptually novel, but some aspects leave the in vivo and translational significance uncertain.

Strengths:

(1) Conceptual novelty: the study goes beyond single-enzyme deletions to reveal conditional metabolic vulnerabilities and fate-deciding mechanisms in B cells.

(2) Mechanistic depth: the study uncovers a novel "metabolic bottleneck" that impairs mitochondrial respiration and elevates ROS, and directly ties these changes to cytokine-receptor signaling. This is both mechanistically compelling and potentially clinically relevant.

(3) Breadth of models and methods: inducible genetics, pharmacology, metabolomics, seahorse assay, ELISpot/ELISA, RNA-seq, two immunization models.

(4) Potential clinical angle: the synergy of CB839 with UK5099 and/or hydroxychloroquine hints at a druggable pathway targeting autoantibody-driven diseases.

Weaknesses:

(1) Physiological relevance of "synthetic auxotrophy"

The manuscript demonstrates that GLS loss is only crippling when glucose influx or mitochondrial pyruvate import is concurrently reduced, which the authors name "synthetic auxotrophy". I think it would help readers to clarify the terminology more and add a concise definition of "synthetic auxotrophy" versus "synthetic lethality" early in the manuscript and justify its relevance for B cells.

While the overall findings, especially the subset specificity and the clinical implications, are generally interesting, the "synthetic auxotrophy" condition feels a little engineered. Therefore, the findings strongly raise the question of the likelihood of such a "double hit" in vivo and whether there are conditions, disease states, or drug regimens that would realistically generate such a "bottleneck". Hence, the authors should document or at least discuss whether GC or inflamed niches naturally show simultaneous downregulation/lack of glutamine and/or pyruvate. The authors should also aim to provide evidence that infections (e.g., influenza), hypoxia, treatments (e.g., rapamycin), or inflammatory diseases like lupus co-limit these pathways.

It would hence also be beneficial to test the CB839 + UK5099/HCQ combinations in a short, proof-of-concept treatment in vivo, e.g., shortly before and after the booster immunization or in an autoimmune model. Likewise, it may also be insightful to discuss potential effects of existing treatments (especially CB839, HCQ) on human memory B cell or PC pools.

(2) Cell survival versus differentiation phenotype

Claims that the phenotypes (e.g., reduced PC numbers) are "independent of death" and are not merely the result of artificial cell stress would benefit from Annexin-V/active-caspase 3 analyses of GC B cells and plasmablasts. Please also show viability curves for inhibitor-treated cells.

(3) Subset specificity of the metabolic phenotype

Could the metabolic differences, mitochondrial ROS, and membrane-potential changes shown for activated pan-B cells (Figure 5) also be demonstrated ex vivo for KO mouse-derived GC B cells and plasma cells? This would also be insightful to investigate following NP-immunization (e.g., NP+ GC B cells 10 days after NP-OVA immunization).

(4) Memory B cell gating strategy

I am not fully convinced that the memory-B-cell gate in Supplementary Figure 2d is appropriate. The legend implies the population is defined simply as CD19+GL7-CD38+ (or CD19+CD38++?), with no further restriction to NP-binding cells. Such a gate could also capture naïve or recently activated B cells. From the descriptions in the figure and the figure legend, it is hard to verify that the events plotted truly represent memory B cells. Please clarify the full gating hierarchy and, ideally, restrict the MBC gate to NP+CD19+GL7-CD38+ B cells (or add additional markers such as CD80 and CD273). Generally, the manuscript would benefit from a more transparent presentation of gating strategies.

(5) Deletion efficiency

mRNA data show residual GLS/MPC2 transcripts (Supplementary Figure 8). Please quantify deletion efficiency in GC B cells and plasmablasts.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this manuscript, Yang et al. characterize the endocytic accessory protein CCDC32, which has implications in cardio-facio-neuro-developmental syndrome (CFNDS). The authors clearly demonstrate that the protein CCDC32 has a role in the early stages of endocytosis, mainly through the interaction with the major endocytic adaptor protein AP2, and they identify regions taking part in this recognition. Through live cell fluorescence imaging and electron microscopy of endocytic pits, the authors characterize the lifetimes of endocytic sites, the formation rate of endocytic sites and pits and the invagination depth, in addition to transferrin receptor (TfnR) uptake experiments. Binding between CCDC32 and CCDC32 mutants to the AP2 alpha appendage domain is assessed by pull down experiments.

Together, these experiments allow deriving a phenotype of CCDC32 knock-down and CCDC32 mutants within endocytosis, which is a very robust system, in which defects are not so easily detected. A mutation of CCDC32, mimicking CFNDS mutations, is also addressed in this study and shown to have endocytic defects.

An experimental proof for the resistance of the different CCDC32 mutants to siRNA treatment would have helped to strengthen the conclusions.

In summary, the authors present a strong combination of techniques, assessing the impact of CCDC32 in clathrin mediated endocytosis and its binding to AP2.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors have identified novel dRTA causing SLC4A1 mutations and studied the resulting kAE1 proteins to determine how they cause dRTA. Based on a previous study on mice expressing the dRTA kAE1 R607H variant, the authors hypothesize that kAE1 variants cause an increase in intracellular pH, which disrupts autophagic and degradative flux pathways. The authors clone these new kAE1 variants and study their transport function and subcellular localization in mIMCD cells. The authors show increased abundance of LC3B II in mIMCD cells expressing some of the kAE1 variants, as well as reduced autophagic flux using eGFP-RFP-LC3. These data, as well as the abundance of autophagosomes, serve as the key evidence that these kAE1 mutants disrupt autophagy. Furthermore, the authors demonstrate that decreasing the intracellular pH abrogates the expression of LC3B II in mIMCD cells expressing mutant SLC4A1. Lastly, the authors argue that mitochondrial function, and specifically ATP synthesis, is suppressed in mIMCD cells expressing dRTA variants and that mitochondria are less abundant in AICs from the kidney of R607H kAE1 mice. While the manuscript does reveal some interesting new results about novel dRTA causing kAE1 mutations, the quality of the data to support the hypothesis that these mutations cause a reduction in autophagic flux can be improved. In particular, the precise method of how the western blots and the immunofluorescence data were quantified, with included controls, would enhance the quality of the data and offer more supportive evidence of the authors' conclusions.

Strengths:

The authors cloned novel dRTA causing kAE1 mutants into expression vectors to study the subcellular localization and transport properties of the variants. The immunofluorescence images are generally of high quality, and the authors do well to include multiple samples for all of their western blots.

Weaknesses:

Inconsistent results are reported for some of the variants. For example, R295H causes intracellular alkalinization but also has no effect on intracellular pH when measured by BCECF. The authors also appear to have performed these in vitro studies on mIMCD cells that were not polarized, and therefore, the localization of kAE1 to the basolateral membrane seems unlikely, based upon images included in the manuscript. Additionally, there is no in vivo work to demonstrate that these kAE1 variants alter intracellular pH, including the R607H mouse, which is available to the authors. The western blots are of varying quality, and it is often unclear which of the bands are being quantified. For example, LAMP1 is reported at 100kDa, the authors show three bands, and it is unclear which one(s) are used to quantify protein abundance. Strikingly, the authors report a nonsensical value for their quantification of LCRB II in Figure 2, where the ratio of LCRB II to total LCRB (I + II) is greater than one. The control experiments with starvation and bafilomyocin are not supportive and significantly reduce enthusiasm for the authors' findings regarding autophagy. There are labeling errors between the manuscript and the figures, which suggest a lack of vigilance in the drafting process.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

The manuscript by Ono et al describes the application of prime editors to introduce precise genetic changes in the zebrafish model system. Probably the most important observation is that, compared to the "standard" PE2, the prime editor with full nuclease activity appears to be more efficient at introducing insertions into the genome. Although many laboratories around the world have successfully used oligonucleotide-mediated HDR to insert short exogenous sequences such as epitope tags or loxP sites into the zebrafish genome, the method suffers from a high frequency of indels at the edit site. Thus, additional tools are badly needed, making this manuscript very important. Length of the longer reported insertion (+30) is quite close to the range of V5 (14 amino acids) and ALFA (12 amino acids without "spacer" prolines) epitope tags, as well as loxP site (34 nucleotides). Conclusions drawn in the paper are supported by compelling evidence. I only have a few minor comments:

(1) The logic for introducing two nucleotide changes (at +3 and +10) to change a single amino acid (I378) should be explicitly explained in the main body of the manuscript. It is indeed self-explanatory when looking at Supplementary Figure 1. One way of doing it could be to include Supplementary Figure 1a in Figure 1.

(2) It is not clear why a 3-nucleotide insertion was used to generate W722X. The human W720X is a single-nucleotide polymorphism, and it should be possible to make a corresponding zebrafish mutant by introducing two nucleotide changes.

(3) Lines 137-138: T7 Endonuclease assay used in Figure 2d detects all polymorphisms, both precise changes and indels. Thus, if this assay were performed on embryos shown in Figure 1c-d, the overall percentage of modified alleles would be similarly higher for PEn over PE2 (add up precise prime edits and indels). The conclusion in the last sentence of the paragraph is, therefore, incorrect, I believe.

(4) Use of terminology. "Germline transmission" is typically used to refer to the fraction of F0s transmitting desired changes (or transgenes) to their progeny, while "germline mosaicism" refers to the fraction of F1s with the desired change in the progeny of a given F0. "Germline transmission" in line 217 should be replaced with "germline mosaicism".

(5) Lines 253-255: The fraction of injected embryos that had mosaic nuclear expression of GFP, indicative of NLS insertion, should be clarified. It should also be clarified whether embryos positive for nuclear GFP were preselected for amplicon sequencing and germline transmission analyses. This is extremely important for extrapolation to scenarios like epitope tagging, where preselection is not possible.

(6) Statistical analyses. It would be helpful to clarify why different statistical tests are sometimes used to assess seemingly very similar datasets (Figures 1c, 1d, 2b, 2c, 2f).

(7) Discussion. Since authors suggest that PEn might be especially beneficial for insertion of additional sequences, it is important to stress locus-to-locus variability of success. While the precise +3 insertion was indeed tremendously efficient at both tested loci (ror2 and adgrf3b), +12 addition into adgrf3b was over 10 times less efficient (lines 193-194). In contrast, +30 into smyhc:GFP using the shorter pegRNA was highly efficient again with an average of 8.5% of sequence reads indicating precise integration (line 257, Figure 5c). Longer pegRNA did not work nearly as well (Figure 5c), but was still much better than +12 into adgrf3b. As dangerous as it is to extrapolate from small datasets, perhaps these observations indicate that optimization of RT template and PBS may be needed for each new locus in order to significantly outperform oligonucleotide-mediated HDR? If so, would the cost of ordering several pegRNAs and the effort needed to compare them factor in when deciding which method to use? Reported germline transmission rates for both ror2 W722X (+3, Figure 4a) and smyhc:NLS-GFP (+30, Figure 5f) are tantalizingly high.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In the face of emerging antibiotic resistance and slow pace of drug discovery, strategies that can enhance the efficacy of existing clinically used antibiotics are highly sought after. In this manuscript, through genetic manipulation of a model bacterium (Escherichia coli) and clinically isolated and antibiotic resistant strains of concern (Pseudomonas, Burkholderia, Stenotrophomonas), an additional drug target to combat resistance and potentiate existing drugs is put forward. These observations were validated in both pure cultures, mixed bacterial cultures and in worm models. The drug target investigated in this study appears to be broadly relevant to the challenge posed by lactamases enzyme that render lactam antibiotics ineffective in the clinic. The compounds that target this enzyme are being developed already, some of which were tested in this study displaying promising results and potential for further optimization by medicinal chemists.

Strengths:

The work is well designed and well executed and targets an urgent area of research with the unprecedented increase in antibiotic resistance.

Weaknesses:

The impact of the work can be strengthened by demonstrating increased efficacy of antibiotics in mice models or wound models for Pseudomonas infections. Worm models are relevant, but still distant from investigations in animal models.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Strengths:

This work focuses on a problem of deep significance: quantifying the structure-tension relationship and underlying mechanism for the mechanosensitive Piezo 1 and 2 channels. Such an objective is challenging for molecular dynamics simulations, due to the relatively large size of each membrane-protein system. Nonetheless, the approach chosen here is based on methodology that is, in principle, established and widely accessible. Therefore, another group of practitioners would likely be able to reproduce these findings with reasonable effort.

More specifically, while acknowledging the limitations of the MARTINI force field, this work makes a significant improvement compared to previous simulations of Piezo proteins by adopting a range of membrane tensions that includes physiologically relevant values (below 10 mN/m).

Weaknesses:

The two main results of this paper are (1) that both channels exhibit a flatter structure compared to cryo-EM measurements, and (2) their estimated force vs. displacement relationship. Although the former correlates at least quantitatively with prior experimental work, the latter relies exclusively on simulation results and model parameters.

My remaining technical concerns in the revised manuscript are as follows:

(1) At each membrane tension, all concurrent atomistic simulations were initialized from the same snapshot of a previous CG simulation: in my opinion, it is inaccurate to refer to those atomistic simulations as "independent" from each other (as is done twice in the caption of Figure 3, as well as in the text).

(2) Continuum mechanics calculations were employed to model the membrane's curvature energetics. The bending modulus, k, was not determined for the specific lipid composition used in this study, but was instead taken from previous MARTINI simulations involving the same primary lipid, POPC. Given that these calculations are intended to describe MARTINI simulations specifically, this approximation may be acceptable. However, it does not account for the increased stiffness observed in POPC/cholesterol mixtures-an effect measured experimentally but not reproduced by the MARTINI model-nor does it reflect the asymmetric conditions, as all referenced simulations involve symmetric bilayers. As a result, the bending energies and forces shown in Figure 5(c,d) are internally consistent within the model, but they probably correspond to real values up to an unknown multiplicative factor.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

This is an excellent, very interesting paper. There is a groundbreaking analysis of the data, going from typical picture presentation paradigms to more realistic conditions. I would like to ask the authors to consider a few points in the comments below.

(1) From Figure 2, I understand that there are 7 neurons responding to the character Summer, but then in line 157, we learn that there are 46. Are the other 39 from other areas (not parahippocampal)? If this is the case, it would be important to see examples of these responses, as one of the main claims is that it is possible to decode as good or better with non-responsive compared to single responsive neurons, which is, in principle, surprising.

(2) Also in Figure 2, there seem to be relatively very few neurons responding to Summer (1.88%) and to outdoor scenes (1.07%). Is this significant? Isn't it also a bit surprising, particularly for outdoor scenes, considering a previous paper of Mormann showing many outdoor scene responses in this area? It would be nice if the authors could comment on this.

(3) I was also surprised to see that there are many fewer responses to scene cuts (6.7%) compared to camera cuts (51%) because every scene cut involves a camera cut. Could this have been a result of the much larger number of camera cuts? (A way to test this would be to subsample the camera cuts.)

(4) Line 201. The analysis of decoding on a per-patient basis is important, but it should be done on a per-session basis - i.e., considering only simultaneously recorded neurons, without any pooling. This is because pooling can overestimate decoding performances (see e.g. Quian Quiroga and Panzeri NRN 2009). If there was only one session per patient, then this should be called 'per-session' rather than 'per-patient' to make it clear that there was no pooling.

(5) In general, the decoding results are quite interesting, and I was wondering if the authors could give a bit more insight by showing confusion matrices, with the predictions of the appearance of each of the characters, etc. Some of the characters may appear together, so this could be another entry of the decoder (say, predicting person A, B, C, A&B, A&C, B&C, A&B&C). I guess this could also show the power of analyzing the population activity.

(6) Lines 406-407. The claim that stimulus-selective responses to characters did not account for the decoding of the same character is very surprising. If I understood it correctly, the response criterion the authors used gives 'responsiveness' but not 'selectivity'. So, were people's responses selective (e.g., firing only to Summer) or non-selective (firing to a few characters)? This could explain why they didn't get good decoding results with responsive neurons. Again, it would be nice to see confusion matrices with the decoding of the characters. Another reason for this is that what are labelled as responsive neurons have relatively weak and variable responses.

(7) Line 455. The claim that 500 neurons drive decoding performance is very subjective. 500 neurons gives a performance of 0.38, and 50 neurons gives 0.33.

(8) Lines 492-494. I disagree with the claim that "character decoding does not rely on individual cells, as removing neurons that responded strongly to character onset had little impact on performance". I have not seen strong responses to characters in the paper. In particular, the response to Summer in Figure 2 looks very variable and relatively weak. If there are stronger responses to characters, please show them to make a convincing argument. It is fine to argue that you can get information from the population, but in my view, there are no good single-cell responses (perhaps because the actors and the movie were unknown to the subjects) to make this claim. Also, an older paper (Quian Quiroga et al J. Neurophysiol. 2007) showed that the decoding of individual stimuli in a picture presentation paradigm was determined by the responsive neurons and that the non-responsive neurons did not add any information. The results here could be different due to the use of movies instead of picture presentations, but most likely due to the fact that, in the picture presentation paradigm, the pictures were of famous people for which there were strong single neuron responses, unlike with the relatively unknown persons in this paper.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, Ryan et al. have performed a state-of-the-art full genome CRISP-based screen of iNEurons expressing a teggd version of TDP-43 in order to determine expression modifiers of this protein. Unexpectedly, using this approach the authors have uncovered a previously undescribed role of the BORC complex in affecting the levels of TDP-43 protein, but not mRNA expression. Taken together, these findings represent a very solid piece of work that will certainly be important for the field.

Strengths:

BORC is a novel TDP-43 expression modifier that has never been described before and it seemingly acts on regulating protein half life rather than transcriptome level. It has been long known that different labs have reported different half-lives for TDP-43 depending on the experimental system but no work has ever explained these discrepancies. Now, the work of Ryan et al. has for the time identified one of these factors which could account for these differences and play an important role in disease (although this is left to be determined in future studies).

The genome wide CRISPR screening has demonstrated to yield novel results with high reproducibility and could eventually be used to search for expression modifiers of many other proteins involved in neurodegeneration or other diseases

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors propose a new version of idTracker.ai for animal tracking. Specifically, they apply contrastive learning to embed cropped images of animals into a feature space where clusters correspond to individual animal identities.

Strengths:

By doing this, the new software alleviates the requirement for so-called global fragments - segments of the video, in which all entities are visible/detected at the same time - which was necessary in the previous version of the method. In general, the new method reduces the tracking time compared to the previous versions, while also increasing the average accuracy of assigning the identity labels.

Weaknesses:

The general impression of the paper is that, in its current form, it is difficult to disentangle the old from the new method and understand the method in detail. The manuscript would benefit from a major reorganization and rewriting of its parts. There are also certain concerns about the accuracy metric and reducing the computational time.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors investigated the assembly and polar localization of the chemosensory cluster in P. aeruginosa. They discovered that a certain protein (FlhF) is required for the polar localization of the chemosensory cluster while core motor structures are necessary for the assembly of the cluster. They found that flagella and chemosensory clusters always co-localize in the cell; either at the cell pole in wild type cells or randomly-located in the cell in FlhF mutant cells. They hypothesize that this co-localization is required to keep the level of another protein (CheY-P), which controls motor switching, at low levels as the presence of high-levels of this protein (if the flagella and chemosensory clusters were not co-localized) is associated with high-levels of c-di-GMP and cell aggregations.

Strengths:

The manuscript is clearly-written and straightforward. The authors applied multiple techniques to study the bacterial motility system including fluorescence light microscopy and gene editing. In general, the work enhances our understanding of the subtlety of interaction between the chemosensory cluster and the flagellar motor to regulate cell motility. This work will be of interest to bacteriologists and cell biologists in general.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Mondal et al. use computational modeling to investigate how activity-dependent shifts in voltage-dependent (in)activation curves can complement changes in ion channel conductance to support homeostatic plasticity. While it is well established that the voltage-dependent properties of ion channels influence neuronal excitability, their potential role in homeostatic regulation, alongside conductance changes, has remained largely unexplored. The results presented here demonstrate that activity-dependent regulation of voltage dependence can interact with conductance plasticity to enable neurons to attain and maintain target activity patterns, in this case, intrinsic bursting. Notably, the timescale of these voltage-dependent shifts influences the final steady-state configuration of the model, shaping both channel parameters and activity features such as burst period and duration. A major conclusion of the study is that altering this timescale can seamlessly modulate a neuron's intrinsic properties, which the authors suggest may be a mechanism for adaptation to perturbations.

While this conclusion is largely well-supported, additional analyses could help clarify its scope. For instance, the effects of timescale alterations are clearly demonstrated when the model transitions from an initial state that does not meet the target activity pattern to a new stable state. However, Fig. 6 and the accompanying discussion appear to suggest that changing the timescale alone is sufficient to shift neuronal activity more generally. It would be helpful to clarify that this effect primarily applies during periods of adaptation, such as neurodevelopment or in response to perturbations, and not necessarily once the system has reached a stable, steady state. As currently presented, the simulations do not test whether modifying the timescale can influence activity after the model has stabilized. In such conditions, changes in timescale are unlikely to affect network dynamics unless they somehow alter the stability of the solution, which is not shown here. That said, it seems plausible that real neurons experience ongoing small perturbations which, in conjunction with changes in timescale, could allow gradual shifts toward new solutions. This possibility is not discussed but could be a fruitful direction for future work.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Review of resubmission: The authors provided a response to the reviews from myself and other reviewers. While some points were made satisfactorily, particularly in clarification of the innervation of cortex to striatum and the effects of input stimulation, many of my points remain unaddressed. In several cases, the authors chose to explain their rationale rather than address the issues at hand. A number of these issues (in fact, the majority) could be addressed simply by toning done the confidence in conclusions, so it was disappointing to see that the authors by and large did not do this. I repeat my concerns below and note whether I find them to have been satisfactorily addressed or not.

In the manuscript by Klug and colleagues, the investigators use a rabies virus-based methodology to explore potential differences in connectivity from cortical inputs to the dorsal striatum. They report that the connectivity from cortical inputs onto D1 and D2 MSNs differs in terms of their projections onto the opposing cell type, and use these data to infer that there are differences in cross-talk between cortical cells that project to D1 vs. D2 MSNs. Overall, this manuscript adds to the overall body of work indicating that there are differential functions of different striatal pathways which likely arise at least in part by differences in connectivity that have been difficult to resolve due to difficulty in isolating pathways within striatal connectivity, and several interesting and provocative observations were reported. Several different methodologies are used, with partially convergent results, to support their main points.

However, I have significant technical concerns about the manuscript as presented that make it difficult for me to interpret the results of the experiments. My comments are below.

Major:<br /> There is generally a large caveat to the rabies studies performed here, which is that both TVA and the ChR2-expressing rabies virus have the same fluorophore. It is thus essentially impossible to determine how many starter cells there are, what the efficiency of tracing is, and which part of the striatum is being sampled in any given experiment. This is a major caveat given the spatial topography of the cortico-striatal projections. Furthermore, the authors make a point in the introduction about previous studies not having explored absolute numbers of inputs, yet this is not at all controlled in this study. It could be that their rabies virus simply replicates better in D1-MSNs than D2-MSNs. No quantifications are done, and these possibilities do not appear to have been considered. Without a greater standardization of the rabies experiments across conditions, it is difficult to interpret the results.

This is still an issue. The authors point out why they chose various vectors. I can understand why the authors chose the fluorophores etc. that they did, yet the issues I raised previously are still valid. The discussion should mention that this is a potential issue. It does not necessarily invalidate results, but it is an issue. Furthermore, it is possible (in all systems) that rabies replicates better/more efficiently in some cells than others. This is one possible interpretation that has not really been explored in any study. I don't suggest the authors attempt to do that, but it should be raised as a potential interpretation. If the rabies results could mean several different things, the authors owe it to the readership to state all possible interpretations of data.

The authors claim using a few current clamp optical stimulation experiments that the cortical cells are healthy, but this result was far from comprehensive. For example, membrane resistance, capacitance, general excitability curves, etc are not reported. In Figure S2, some of the conditions look quite different (e.g., S2B, input D2-record D2, the method used yields quite different results that the authors write off as not different). Furthermore, these experiments do not consider the likely sickness and death that occurs in starter cells, as has been reported elsewhere. Health of cells in the circuit is overall a substantial concern that alone could invalidate a large portion, if not all, of the behavioral results. This is a major confound given those neurons are thought to play critical roles in the behaviors being studied. This is a major reason why first-generation rabies viruses have not been used in combination with behavior, but this significant caveat does not appear to have been considered, and controls e.g., uninfected animals, infected with AAV helpers, etc, were not included.

This issue remains unaddressed. I did not request clarity about experimental design, but rather, raised issues about the potential effects of toxicity. I believe this to be a valid concern that needs to be discussed in the manuscript, especially given what look visually like potential differences in S2.

The overall purity (e.g., EnvA pseudotyping efficiency) of the RABV prep is not shown. If there was a virus that was not well EnvA-pseudotyped and thus could directly infect cortical (or other) inputs, it would degrade specificity.

This issue has not been addressed. Viral strain is irrelevant. The quality of the specific preparations used is what matters.

While most of the study focuses on the cortical inputs, in slice recordings, inputs from the thalamus are not considered, yet likely contribute to the observed results. Related to this, in in vivo optogenetic experiments, technically, if the thalamic or other inputs to the dorsal striatum project to the cortex, their method will not only target cortical neurons but also terminals of other excitatory inputs. If this cannot be ruled it, stating that the authors are able to selectively activate the cortical inputs to one or the other population should be toned down.

The authors added text to the discussion to address this point. While it largely does what is intended, based on the one study cited, I disagree with the authors' conclusions that it is "clear" that potential contamination from other sites does not play a role. The simplest interpretation is the one the authors state, and there is some supporting evidence to back up that assertion, but to me that falls short of making the point "clear" that there are no other interpretations.

The statements about specificity of connectivity are not well founded. It may be that in the specific case where they are assessing outside of the area of injections, their conclusions may hold (e.g., excitatory inputs onto D2s have more inputs onto D1s than vice versa). However, how this relates to the actual site of injection is not clear. At face value, if such a connectivity exists, it would suggest that D1-MSNs receive substantially more overall excitatory inputs than D2s. It is thus possible that this observation would not hold over other spatial intervals. This was not explored and thus the conclusions are over-generalized. e.g., the distance from the area of red cells in the striatum to recordings was not quantified, what constituted a high level of cortical labeling was not quantified, etc. Without more rigorous quantification of what was being done, it is difficult to interpret the results.

Again, the goal here would be to make a statement about this in the discussion to clarify limitations of the study. I don't expect the authors to re-do all of these experiments, but since they are discussing the corticostriatal circuits, which have multiple subdomains, this remains a relevant point. It has not been addressed.

The results in Figure 3 are not well controlled. The authors show contrasting effects of optogenetic stimulation of D1-MSNs and D2-MSNs in the DMS and DLS, results which are largely consistent with the canon of basal ganglia function. However, when stimulating cortical inputs, stimulating the inputs from D1-MSNs gives the expected results (increased locomotion) while stimulating putative inputs to D2-MSNs had no effect. This is not the same as showing a decrease in locomotion - showing no effect here is not possible to interpret.

I think that the caveat of showing no clear effects of inputs to D2 stimulation should be pointed out. Yes, I understand that the viruses appeared to express etc., but again it remains possible that the results are driven by a lack of e.g., sufficient ChR2 expression. Aside from a full quantification of the number of cells expressing ChR2, overlap in fiber placement and ChR2 expression (which I don't suggest), this remains a possibility and should be pointed out, as it remains a possibility.

In the light of their circuit model, the result showing that inputs to D2-MSNs drive ICSS is confusing. How can the authors account for the fact that these cells are not locomotor-activating, stimulation of their putative downstream cells (D2-MSNs) does not drive ICSS, yet the cortical inputs drive ICSS? Is the idea that these inputs somehow also drive D1s? If this is the case, how do D2s get activated, if all of the cortical inputs tested net activate D1s and not D2s? Same with the results in Figure 4 - the inputs and putative downstream cells do not have the same effects. Given potential caveats of differences in viral efficiency, spatial location of injections, and cellular toxicity, I cannot interpret these experiments.

The explanation the authors provide in their rebuttal makes sense, however this should be included in the discussion of the manuscript, as it is interesting and relevant.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The study provides an interesting contribution to our understanding of Cryptovaranoides relationships, which is a matter of intensive debate among researchers. My main concerns are in regard to the wording of some statements, but generally, the discussion and data are well prepared. I would recommend moderate revisions.

Strengths:

(1) Detailed analysis of the discussed characters.

(2) Illustrations of some comparative materials.

Weaknesses:

Some parts of the manuscript require clarification and rewording.

One of the main points of criticism of Whiteside et al. is using characters for phylogenetic considerations that are not included in the phylogenetic analyses therein. The authors call it a "non-trivial substantive methodological flaw" (page 19, line 531). I would step down from such a statement for the reasons listed below:

(1) Comparative anatomy is not about making phylogenetic analyses. Comparative anatomy is about comparing different taxa in search of characters that are unique and characters that are shared between taxa. This creates an opportunity to assess the level of similarity between the taxa and create preliminary hypotheses about homology. Therefore, comparative anatomy can provide some phylogenetic inferences. That does not mean that tests of congruence are not needed. Such comparisons are the first step that allows creating phylogenetic matrices for analysis, which is the next step of phylogenetic inference. That does not mean that all the papers with new morphological comparisons should end with a new or expanded phylogenetic matrix. Instead, such papers serve as a rationale for future papers that focus on building phylogenetic matrices.

(2) Phylogenetic matrices are never complete, both in terms of morphological disparity and taxonomic diversity. I don't know if it is even possible to have a complete one, but at least we can say that we are far from that. Criticising a work that did not include all the possibly relevant characters in the phylogenetic analysis is simply unfair. The authors should know that creating/expanding a phylogenetic matrix is a never-ending work, beyond the scope of any paper presenting a new fossil.

(3) Each additional taxon has the possibility of inducing a rethinking of characters. That includes new characters, new character states, character state reordering, etc. As I said above, it is usually beyond the scope of a paper with a new fossil to accommodate that into the phylogenetic matrix, as it requires not only scoring the newly described taxon but also many that are already scored. Since the digitalization of fossils is still rare, it requires a lot of collection visits that are costly in terms of time.

(4) If I were to search for a true flaw in the Whiteside et al. paper, I would check if there is a confirmation bias. The mentioned paper should not only search for characters that support Cryptovaranoides affinities with Anguimorpha but also characters that deny that. I am not sure if Whiteside et al. did such an exercise. Anyway, the test of congruence would not solve this issue because by adding only characters that support one hypothesis, we are biasing the results of such a test.

To sum up, there is nothing wrong with proposing some hypotheses about character homology between different taxa that can be tested in future papers that will include a test of congruence. Lack of such a test makes the whole argumentation weaker in Whiteside et al., but not unacceptable, as the manuscript might suggest. My advice is to step down from such strong statements like "methodological flaw" and "empirical problems" and replace them with "limitations", which I think better describes the situation.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors explored how individual dorsolateral striatum (DLS) spiny projection neurons (SPNs) receive functional input from whisker-related cortical columns. The authors developed and validated a novel slice preparation and method to which they applied rigorous functional mapping and thorough analysis. They found that individual SPNs were driven by sparse, scattered cortical clusters. Interestingly, while the cortical input fields of nearby SPNs had some degree of overlap, connectivity per SPN was largely distinct. Despite sparse, heterogeneous connectivity, topographical organization was identified. The authors lastly compared direct (D1) vs. indirect (D2) pathway cells, concluding that overall connectivity patterns were the same, but D1 cells received stronger input from L6 and D2 cells from L2/3. The paper thoughtfully addresses the question of whether barrel cortex broadly or selectively innervates SPNs. Their results indicate selective input that is loosely topographic. Their work deepens the understanding of how whisker-related somatosensory signals can drive striatal neurons.

Strengths:

Overall this is a carefully conducted study, and the major claims are well-supported. The use of a novel ex vivo slice prep that keeps relevant corticostriatal projections intact allows for careful mapping of the barrel cortex to dorsolateral striatum SPNs. Careful reporting of both columnar and layer position, as well as postsynaptic SPN type (D1 or D2) allows the authors to uncover novel details about how the dorsolateral striatum represents whisker-related sensory information.

Weaknesses:

Most technical weaknesses have now been addressed in the text.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In their study, Shen et al. examine how first- and second-order neurons of early olfactory circuits among invertebrates and vertebrates alike respond to and encode odor identity and concentration. Previously published electrophysiological and imaging data are re-analyzed and complemented with computational simulations. The authors explore multiple potential circuit computations by which odor concentration-dependent increases in first-order neuron responses transform into concentration-invariant responses on average across the second-order neuron population, and report that divisive normalization exceeds subtractive normalization and intraglomerular gain control in accounting for this transformation. The authors then explore how either rate- or timing-based schemes in third-order neurons may decode odor identity and concentration information from such concentration-invariant mean responses across the second-order neuron population. Finally, the results of their study of second-order neurons (invertebrate projection neurons and vertebrate mitral cells) are contrasted with the concentration-variant responses of second-order projection tufted cells in mammals. Overall, through a combination of neural data re-analysis, computational simulation, and conceptual theory, this study provides important new understanding of how aspects of sensory information are encoded through the actions of distinct components of early olfactory circuits.

Strengths:

Consideration of multiple evolutionarily disparate olfactory circuits, as well as re-analysis of previously published neural data sets combined with novel simulations guided by those sets, lends considerable robustness to some key findings of this study. In particular, the finding that divisive normalization - with direct inspiration from established circuit components in the form of glomerular layer short-axon cells - accounts more thoroughly for the average concentration invariance of second-order olfactory neurons at a population level than other forms of normalization is compelling. Likewise, demonstration of the required 'crossover' of first-order neuron concentration sensitivity for divisive normalization to achieve such flattening of concentration variance across the second-order population is notable, with simulations providing important insight into experimentally observed patterns of first-order neuron responses. Limited clarity in other aspects of the study, in particular related to the consideration of neural response latencies and enumerated below, temper the overall strength of the study.

Weaknesses:

(1) While the authors focus on concentration-dependent increases in first-order neuron activity, reflecting the majority of observed responses, recent work from the Imai group shows that odorants can also lead to direct first-order neuron inhibition (i.e., reduction in spontaneous activity), and within this subset, increasing odorant concentration tends to increase the degree of inhibition. Some discussion of these findings and how they may complement divisive normalization to contribute to the diverse second-order neuron concentration-dependence would be of interest and help expand the context of the current results.

(2) Related to the above point, odorant-evoked inhibition of second-order neurons is widespread in mammalian mitral cells and significantly contributes to the flattened concentration-dependence of mitral cells at the population level. Such responses are clearly seen in Figure 1D. Some discussion of how odorant-evoked mitral cell inhibition may complement divisive normalization, and likewise relate to comparatively lower levels of odorant-evoked inhibition among tufted cells, would further expand the context of the current results. Toward this end, replication of analyses in Figures 1D and E following exclusion of mitral cell inhibitory responses would provide insight into the contribution of such inhibition to the flattening of the mitral cell population concentration dependence.

(3) The idea of concentration-dependent crossover responses across the first-order population being required for divisive normalization to generate individually diverse concentration response functions across the second-order population is notable. The intuition of the crossover responses is that first-order neurons that respond most sensitively to any particular odorant (i.e., at the lowest concentration) respond with overall lower activity at higher concentrations than other first-order neurons less sensitively tuned to the odorant. Whether this is a consistent, generalizable property of odorant binding and first-order neuron responsiveness is not addressed by the authors, however. Biologically, one mechanism that may support such crossover events is intraglomerular presynaptic/feedback inhibition, which would be expected to increase with increasing first-order neuron activation such that the most-sensitively responding first-order neurons would also recruit the strongest inhibition as concentration increases, enabling other first-order neurons to begin to respond more strongly. Discussion of this and/or other biological mechanisms (e.g., first-order neuron depolarization block) supporting such crossover responses would strengthen these results.

(4) It is unclear to what degree the latency analysis considered in Figures 4D-H works with the overall framework of divisive normalization, which in Figure 3 we see depends on first-order neuron crossover in concentration response functions. Figure 4D suggests that all first-order neurons respond with the same response amplitude (R in eq. 3), even though this is supposed to be pulled from a distribution. It's possible that Figure 4D is plotting normalized response functions to highlight the difference in latency, but this is not clear from the plot or caption. If response amplitudes are all the same, and the response curves are, as plotted in Figure 4D, identical except for their time to half-max, then it seems somewhat trivial that the resulting second-order neuron activation will follow the same latency ranking, regardless of whether divisive normalization exists or not. However, there is some small jitter in these rankings across concentrations (Figure 4G), suggesting there is some randomness to the simulations. It would be helpful if this were clarified (e.g., by showing a non-normalized Figure 4D, with different response amplitudes), and more broadly, it would be extremely helpful in evaluating the latency coding within the broader framework proposed if the authors clarified whether the simulated first-order neuron response timecourses, when factoring in potentially different amplitudes (R) and averaging across the entire response window, reproduces the concentration response crossovers observed experimentally. In summary, in the present manuscript, it remains unclear if concentration crossovers are captured in the latency simulations, and if not, the authors do not clearly address what impact such variation in response amplitudes across concentrations may have on the latency results. It is further unclear to what degree divisive normalization is necessary for the second-order neurons to establish and maintain their latency ranks across concentrations, or to exhibit concentration-dependent changes in latency.

(5) How the authors get from Figure 4G to 4H is not clear. Figure 4G shows second-order neuron response latencies across all latencies, with ordering based on their sorted latency to low concentration. This shows that very few neurons appear to change latency ranks going from low to high concentration, with a change in rank appearing as any deviation in a monotonically increasing trend. Focusing on the high concentration points, there appear to be 2 latency ranks switched in the first 10 responding neurons (reflecting the 1 downward dip in the points around neuron 8), rather than the 7 stated in the text. Across the first 50 responding neurons, I see only ~14 potential switches (reflecting the ~7 downward dips in the points around neurons 8, 20, 32, 33, 41, 44, 50), rather than the 32 stated in the text. It is possible that the unaccounted rank changes reflect fairly minute differences in latencies that are not visible in the plot in Figure 4G. This may be clarified by plotting each neuron's latency at low concentration vs. high concentration (i.e., similar to Figure 4H, but plotting absolute latency, not latency rank) to allow assessment of the absolute changes. If such minute differences are not driving latency rank changes in Fig. 4G, then a trend much closer to the unity line would be expected in Figure 4H. Instead, however, there are many massive deviations from unity, even within the first 50 responding neurons plotted in Figure 4G. These deviations include a jump in latency rank from 2 at low concentration to ~48 at high concentration. Such a jump is simply not seen in Figure 4G.

(6) In the text, the authors state that "Odor identity can be encoded by the set of highest-affinity neurons (which remains invariant across concentrations)." Presumably, this is a restatement of the primacy model and refers to invariance in latency rank (since the authors have not shown that the highest-affinity neurons have invariant response amplitudes across concentration). To what degree this statement holds given the results in Figure 4H, however, which appear to show that some neurons with the earliest latency rank at low concentration jump to much later latency ranks at high concentration, remains unclear. Such changes in latency rank for only a few of the first responding neurons may be negligible for classifying odor identity among a small handful of odorants, but not among 1-2 orders of magnitude more odors, which may feasibly occur in a natural setting. Collectively, these issues with the execution and presentation of the latency analysis make it unclear how robust the latency results are.

(7) Analysis in Figures 4A-C shows that concentration can be decoded from first-order neurons, second-order neurons, or first-order neurons with divisive normalization imposed (i.e., simulating second-order responses). This does not say that divisive normalization is necessary to encode concentration, however. Therefore, for the authors to say that divisive normalization is "a potential mechanism for generating odor-specific subsets of second-order neurons whose combinatorial activity or whose response latencies represent concentration information" seems too strong a conclusion. Divisive normalization is not generating the concentration information, since that can be decoded just as well from the first-order neurons. Rather, divisive normalization can account for the different population patterns in concentration response functions between first- and second-order neurons without discarding concentration-dependent information.

(8) Performing the same polar histogram analysis of tufted vs. mitral cell concentration response functions (Figure 5B) provides a compelling new visualization of how these two cell types differ in their concentration variance. The projected importance of tufted cells to navigation, emerging directly through the inverse relationship between average concentration and distance (Figure 5C), is not surprising, and is largely a conceptual analysis rather than new quantitative analysis per se, but nevertheless, this is an important point to make. Another important consideration absent from this section, however, is whether and how divisive normalization may impact tufted cell activity. Previous work from the authors, as well as from Schoppa, Shipley, and Westbrook labs, has compellingly demonstrated that a major circuit mediating divisive normalization of mitral cells (GABA/DAergic short-axon cells) directly targets external tufted cells, and is thus very likely to also influence projection tufted cells. Such analysis would additionally provide substantially more justification for the Discussion statement "we analyzed an additional type of second-order neuron (tufted cells)", which at present instead reflects fairly minimal analysis.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The paper "The 1000+ mouse project: large-scale spatiotemporal parametrization and modeling of preclinical cancer immunotherapies" is focused on developing a novel methodology for automatic processing of bioluminescence imaging data. It provides quantitative and statistically robust insights into preclinical experiments that will contribute to optimizing cell-based therapies. There is an enormous demand for such methods and approaches that enable the spatiotemporal evaluation of cell monitoring in large cohorts of experimental animals.

Strengths:

The manuscript is generally well written, and the experiments are scientifically sound. The conclusions reflect the soundness of experimental data. This approach seems to be quite innovative and promising to improve the statistical accuracy of BLI data quantification.

This methodology can be used as a universal quantification tool for BLI data for in vivo assessment of adoptively transferred cells due to the versatility of the technology.

Weaknesses:

No weaknesses were identified by this Reviewer.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a technically impressive data set showing that repeated excitation or restraint stress internalises somatodendritic α2A adrenergic autoreceptors (α2A ARs) in locus coeruleus (LC) neurons. Loss of these receptors weakens GIRK-dependent autoinhibition, raises neuronal excitability, and is accompanied by higher MAO A, DOPEGAL, AEP, and tau N368 levels. The work combines rigorous whole-cell electrophysiology with barbadin-based trafficking assays, qPCR, Western blotting and immunohistochemistry. The final schematic is appealing and in principle, could explain early LC hyperactivity followed by degeneration in ageing and Alzheimer's disease.

Strengths:

Multi-level approach - The study integrates electrophysiology, pharmacology, mRNA quantification, and protein-level analysis.

Use of barbadin to block β-arrestin/AP-2-dependent internalisation is both technically precise and mechanistically informative

Well-executed electrophysiology

translation relevance

converges to a model that peers discussed (scientists can only discuss models - not data!)

Weaknesses:

Nevertheless, the manuscript currently reads as a sequence of discrete experiments rather than a single causal chain

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Khanna et al. use a well-conceived and well-executed set of experiments and analyses primarily to document the interaction between neural oscillations in the beta range (here, 13-30 Hz) and recovery of function in an animal model of stroke. Specifically, they show that cortical "beta bursts", or short-term increases in beta power, correlate strikingly with the timeline of behavioral recovery as quantified with a reach-to-grasp task. A key distinction is made between global beta bursts (here, those that synchronize between cortical and subcortical areas) and local bursts (which appear on only a few electrodes). This distinction of global vs. local is shown to be relevant to task performance and movement speed, among other quantities of interest.

A secondary results section explores the relationship between beta bursts and neuronal firing during the grasp portion of the behavioral task. These results are valuable to include, though mostly unsurprising, with global beta in particular associated with lower mean and variance in spike rates.

Last, a partial recapitulation of the primary results is offered with a neurologically intact (uninjured) animal. No major contradictions are found with the primary results.

Highlights of the Discussion section include a thoughtful review of atypical movements executed by individuals with Parkinson's disease or stroke survivors, placing the current results in an appropriate clinical context. Potential physiological mechanisms that could account for the observed results are also discussed effectively.

Strengths:

Overall, this is a very interesting paper. The ultimate impact will be enhanced by the authors' choice to analyze beta bursts, which remain a relatively under-explored aspect of neural coding.

The reach-and-grasp task was also a well-considered choice; the combination of a relatively simple movement (reaching towards a target in the same location each time) and a more complex movement (a skilled object-manipulation grasp) provides an internal control of sorts for data analysis. In addition, the task's two sub-movements provide a differential in terms of their likelihood to be affected by the stroke-like injury: proximal muscles (controlling reach) are likely to be less affected by stroke, while distal muscles (controlling grasp) are highly likely to be affected. Lastly, the requirement of the task to execute an object lift maximizes its difficulty and also the potential translational impact of the results on human injury.

The above comments about the task exemplify a strength that is more generally evident: a welcome awareness of clinical relevance, which is in evidence several times throughout the Results and Discussion.

Weaknesses:

The study's weaknesses are mostly minor and, for the most part, correctable.

One concern that may not be correctable in this study: the results about the spatial extent of beta activity seem constrained by relatively poor-quality data. It seems half or more of the electrodes are marked as too noisy to provide useful data in Figure 3. If this reflects the wider reality for all analyses, as mentioned, it may not be correctable for the present study. In that case, perhaps some of the experiments or analyses can be revisited or expanded for a future study, when better electrode yields are available.

Other concerns:

In some places, there is a lack of clarity in the presentation of the results. This is not serious but should be addressed to aid readers' comprehension.

Lastly, given the central role of beta oscillations within the study, it would be better for completeness to include even a brief exploration of sustained beta power (rather than bursts), and the modulation of sustained beta (or lack thereof) in the study's areas of concern: behavioral recovery, task performance, etc.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This study investigates how phasic and tonic pain modulate behaviour in a free-operant foraging paradigm. The authors apply a computational modeling approach to the behavioural data to quantify the decision value of phasic pain, as well as the degree to which tonic pain reduces motivational vigour. EEG assessments showed, e.g., reduced signal power at alpha and beta frequencies in tonic pain conditions compared to no-tonic-pain conditions, but no association between these neural measures and motivational vigour. The authors conclude that tonic and phasic pain serve different motivational functions, with phasic pain acting as a punishment signal promoting avoidance and tonic pain reducing motivational vigour.

Strengths:

The experimental paradigm is highly innovative. Assessing human behaviour in a naturalistic yet highly controlled setting represents a promising approach to pain research. Notably, assessing pain magnitude implicitly, via its motivational value, offers insights about the overall pain experience that are not usually accessible via common pain ratings.

Weaknesses:

Despite these strengths, the manuscript would benefit significantly from more precise definitions of key concepts and an overall clearer, more coherent presentation of its main arguments. The writing, in its current form, often presents claims that are too vague or insufficiently connected with the experimental findings. Moreover, certain aspects of the computational modeling and statistical analysis appear flawed or inadequately justified.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

The authors present a revised version of their manuscript (Ragusa et al.) describing a hemogenic gastruloid (haemGx) model, used to investigate stages of blood production in vitro and for modeling a rare type of infant leukemia. The revisions address several major concerns raised during the initial round of review, and new data have been provided that overall improve the clarity and rigour of the study. In particular, the additional flow cytometry, single-cell RNA-seq analyses, and benchmarking against in vivo datasets help, to some extent, to substantiate the claims of developmental relevance of haemGx to yolk sac (YS)- and AGM-like hematopoietic waves. Nonetheless, some issues remain, particularly regarding the claims of short-term engraftment, novelty of the model, and the extent to which AGM-like HSPC are truly captured.

Major Points:

(1) The authors have clarified the novelty of their haemGx protocol relative to existing gastruloid models, including the importance of the Activin A pulse and protocol extension to 216h. Flow cytometry and scRNA-seq analyses support the emergence of endothelial and hematopoietic populations with dynamic marker expression. However, direct side-by-side comparisons with previously published protocols (e.g., Rossi et al., 2022) remain limited. The claim of "spatio-temporal accuracy" should be more cautiously phrased.

(2) The characterization of the identity of the hematopoietic waves generated in the haemGx system has been improved in the revised manuscript. Flow cytometry analysis now includes CD31/CD34 co-expression in CD41+ and CD45+ subsets, and scRNA-seq re-clustering supports two hematopoietic waves with distinct marker sets (e.g., Gata2/Myb vs. Hoxa9/Ikzf1). Projection onto multiple embryonic reference datasets (Hou et al., Zhu et al., Thambyrajah et al.) is a valuable addition. The case for YS-like EMP and AGM-like HSPC precursors is reasonably made, though further functional distinctions (e.g., lineage output differences) would strengthen the claims.

(3) The authors have now provided additional evidence for low-level engraftment following adrenal implantation of whole haemGx. Although technically demanding, this in vivo result remains marginal and should be interpreted with caution. Crucially, this still does not demonstrate HSC-level repopulation capacity. The revised manuscript has softened the claims accordingly, now referring to "progenitor" activity rather than "pre-HSC." We agree that this adjusted claim is more suitable, though the reproducibility of this experiment is still unclear.

(4) The MNX1 overexpression experiments are generally convincing in showing early expansion of a putative HE-to-EMP-like population and transcriptional resemblance to MNX1-r AML. However, the evidence for transformation is still solely based on in vitro data and lacks any evidence of in vivo leukaemia engraftment. The ability to perturb the system would add translational value to the haemGx platform, although future studies are needed to better define transformation dynamics and leukemogenic progression.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this manuscript, Natarajan and colleagues report on the role of a prophage, termed SfPat, in the regulation of motility and biofilm formation by the marine bacterium Shewanella fidelis. The authors investigate the in vivo relevance of prophage carriage by studying the gut occupation patterns of Shewanella fidelis wild-type and an isogenic SfPat- mutant derivative in a model organism, juveniles of the marine tunicate Ciona robusta. The role of bacterial prophages in regulating bacterial lifestyle adaptation and niche occupation is a relatively underexplored field, and efforts in this direction are appreciated.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed my main concerns. While some responses remain somewhat ambiguous or defer key clarifications to future studies, I appreciate that not everything can be resolved within a single manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Voigt et al. present a comprehensive study exploring the molecular mechanisms and evolution of biomineralization in the calcareous sponge Sycon ciliatum. Using a multi-omics approach, including comparative transcriptomics, proteomics, genomic analyses, and high-resolution in situ hybridization, the authors identify 829 candidate biomineralization genes, with a special focus on the calcarin gene family. These calarains, structurally analogous to galaxin in stony corals, show cell-type- and spicule-type-specific expression patterns, revealed through meticulous FISH imaging. Chromosomal analysis further uncovers that several calcarin genes are arranged in tandem arrays, suggesting diversification via gene duplication and neofunctionalization. Notably, the study finds striking parallels between the calcarins of S. ciliatum and galaxins of aragonitic corals in terms of gene arrangement, tertiary structure predictions, and expression dynamics, pointing to a remarkable case of parallel evolution during the emergence of biomineralized skeletons in early metazoans.

Strengths:

The study is methodologically robust, integrating transcriptomic, proteomic, and genomic data with detailed cell biological analysis.

High-quality, carefully annotated FISH images convincingly demonstrate the spatial expression patterns of calcarins.

Novel evidence of sponge cell trans-differentiation is presented through cell-type-specific gene expression.

The comparative perspective with coral galaxins is well-executed and biologically insightful, supported by structural predictions and chromosomal data.

Figures and supplementary materials are thoughtfully revised for clarity and accessibility, addressing reviewer feedback.

Weaknesses:

Direct functional validation of calcarin roles in biomineralization is lacking, a limitation acknowledged by the authors and inherent to sponge models.

The evolutionary history of calcarins and galaxins remains only partially resolved due to challenges in reconstructing phylogenies of fast-evolving gene families.

Some initial figure annotations and definitions (e.g., "radial tube") required clarification, although these were addressed in revision.

Overall, the work significantly advances our understanding of biomineralization´s molecular basis and its parallel evolution in early diverging metazoans.

Comments on revisions:

I would like to thank the authors for addressing all my comments/suggestions. I am OK with the revised version of the manuscript

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The migration of primordial germ cells (PGCs) to the developing gonad is a poorly understood yet essential step in reproductive development. Here, the authors examine whether there are differences in leading and lagging migratory PGCs using single-cell RNA sequencing of mouse embryos. Cleverly, the authors dissected embryonic trunks along the anterior-to-posterior axis prior to scRNAseq in order to distinguish leading and lagging migratory PGCs. After batch corrections, their analyses revealed several known and novel differences in gene expression within and around leading and lagging PGCs, intercellular signaling networks, as well as number of genes upregulated upon gonad colonization. The authors then compared their datasets with publicly available human datasets to identify common biological themes. Altogether, this rigorous study reveals several differences between leading and lagging migratory PGCs, hints at signatures for different fates among the population of migratory PGCs, and provides new potential markers for post-migratory PGCs in both humans and mice. While many of the interesting hypotheses that arise from this work are not extensively tested, these data provide a rich platform for future investigations.

Strengths:

The authors have successfully navigated significant technical challenges to obtain a substantial number of mouse migratory primordial germ cells for robust transcriptomic analysis. Here, the authors were able to collect quality data on ~13,000 PGCs and ~7,800 surrounding somatic cells, which is ten times more PGCs than previous studies.

The decision to physically separate leading and lagging primordial germ cells was clever and well-validated based on expected anterior-to-posterior transcriptional signatures.

Within the PGCs and surrounding tissues, the authors found many gene expression dynamics they would expect to see both along the PGC migratory path as well as across developmental time, increasing confidence in the new differentially expressed genes they found.

The comparison of their mouse-based migratory PGC datasets with existing human migratory PGC datasets is appreciated.

The quality control, ambient RNA contamination elimination, batch correction, cell identification and analysis of scRNAseq data were thorough and well-done such that the new hypotheses and markers found through this study are dependable.

The subsetting of cells in their trajectory analysis is appreciated, further strengthening their cell terminal state predictions.

Weaknesses:

There were a few validation experiments within this study. For one such experiment, whether there is a difference in pSMAD2/3 along the AP axis is unclear and not quantified, as was nicely done for Lefty1/2.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript presents a large common garden experiment across Sweden using solely local germplasm. Additionally, there is a collection of selection experiments that begin investigating the factors shaping fecundity in these populations. This provides an impressive amount of data and analysis investigating the underlying factors involved. Together, this helps support the data showing that fluctuations and interactions are key components determining Arabidopsis fitness and are more broadly applicable across plant and non-plant species.

Strengths:

The field trials are well conducted with extensive effort and sampling. Similarly while the genetic analysis is complex it is well conducted and reflects the complexity of dealing with population structure that may be intricately linked to adaptive structure. This has no real solution and the option of presenting results with and without correction is likely the only appropriate option.

Weaknesses:

A significant finding from this study was that fecundity is shaped more by yearly fluctuations and their interaction with genotype than it is by the main effect of location or genotype. Another significant finding is that the strength of selection can be quite strong, with nearly 5x ranges across accessions. It should be noted that there are a number of other studies using Arabidopsis in the wild with multiple years and locations that found similar observations beyond the Oakley citation. In general, the context of how these findings relate to existing knowledge in Arabidopsis is a bit underdeveloped.

The effects of the populations across the locations seem to rely on individual tests and PC analysis. It would seem to be possible to incorporate these tests more directly in the linear modeling analysis, and it isn't quite clear why this wasn't conducted.

I'm a bit puzzled by the discussion on how to find causative loci. This seems to focus solely on GWAS as the solution, with a goal to sequence vast individuals. But the loci that the manuscript discussed were found by a combination of structured mapping populations followed by molecular validation that then informed the GWAS. As such, I'm unsure if the proposed future approach of more sequencing is the best when a more balanced approach integrating diverse methods and population types will be more useful.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This is an impressive paper that offers a much-needed 3D standardized brain atlas for the hackled-orb weaving spider Uloborus diversus, an emerging organism of study in neuroethology. The authors used a detailed immunohistological whole-mount staining method that allowed them to localize a wide range of common neurotransmitters and neuropeptides and map them on a common brain atlas. Through this approach, they discovered groups of cells that may form parts of neuropils that had not previously been described, such as the 'tonsillar neuropil', which might be part of a larger insect-like central complex. Further, this work provides unique insights into the previously underappreciated complexity of higher-order neuropils in spiders, particularly the arcuate body, and hints at a potentially important role for the mushroom bodies in vibratory processing for web-building spiders.

Strengths:

To understand brain function, data from many experiments on brain structure must be compiled to serve as a reference and foundation for future work. As demonstrated by the overwhelming success in genetically tractable laboratory animals, 3D standardized brain atlases are invaluable tools - especially as increasing amounts of data are obtained at the gross morphological, synaptic, and genetic levels, and as functional data from electrophysiology and imaging are integrated. Among 'non-model' organisms, such approaches have included global silver staining and confocal microscopy, MRI, and, more recently, micro-computed tomography (X-ray) scans used to image multiple brains and average them into a composite reference. In this study, the authors used synapsin immunoreactivity to generate an averaged spider brain as a scaffold for mapping immunoreactivity to other neuromodulators. Using this framework, they describe many previously known spider brain structures and also identify some previously undescribed regions. They argue that the arcuate body - a midline neuropil thought to have diverged evolutionarily from the insect central complex - shows structural similarities that may support its role in path integration and navigation.

Having diverged from insects such as the fruit fly Drosophila melanogaster over 400 million years ago, spiders are an important group for study - particularly due to their elegant web-building behavior, which is thought to have contributed to their remarkable evolutionary success. How such exquisitely complex behavior is supported by a relatively small brain remains unclear. A rich tradition of spider neuroanatomy emerged in the previous century through the work of comparative zoologists, who used reduced silver and Golgi stains to reveal remarkable detail about gross neuroanatomy. Yet, these techniques cannot uncover the brain's neurochemical landscape, highlighting the need for more modern approaches-such as those employed in the present study.

A key insight from this study involves two prominent higher-order neuropils of the protocerebrum: the arcuate body and the mushroom bodies. The authors show that the arcuate body has a more complex structure and lamination than previously recognized, suggesting it is insect central complex-like and may support functions such as path integration and navigation, which are critical during web building. They also report strong synapsin immunoreactivity in the mushroom bodies and speculate that these structures contribute to vibratory processing during sensory feedback, particularly in the context of web building and prey localization. These findings align with prior work that noted the complex architecture of both neuropils in spiders and their resemblance (and in some cases greater complexity) compared to their insect counterparts. Additionally, the authors describe previously unrecognized neuropils, such as the 'tonsillar neuropil,' whose function remains unknown but may belong to a larger central complex. The diverse patterns of neuromodulator immunoreactivity further suggest that plasticity plays a substantial role in central circuits.

Weaknesses:

My major concern, however, is that some of the authors' neuroanatomical descriptions rely too heavily on inference rather than what is currently resolvable from their immunohistochemistry stains alone.

Reviewer #5 (Public review):

Summary:

Hypothalamic hypocretin/orexin neurons are well-known to be involved in arousal, muscle tone and energy metabolism. Using a combination of fiber photometry, video-based movement assessments, and deep learning algorithms, the authors provide compelling evidence that the activity of these neurons correlates with net body movement over multiple behaviors and is independent of nutritional state. The authors also demonstrate that hypocretin/orexin release differs between two downstream projection sites, the locus coeruleus and substantia nigra, and are able to distinguish the activity in these sites that is due to inputs from these hypothalamic neurons vs. from other subcortical populations. The authors also convincingly show that the correlation between body movement and hypocretin/orexin neuron activity is much stronger compared to other subcortical regions. However, hypocretin/orexin neuron ablation does not affect the power spectra of movements, an observation that appears at odds with their overall conclusions.

Strengths:

The multidisciplinary approach using multiple state-of-the-art tools is supported by a rigorous experimental design and strong statistical analyses. The authors have been highly responsive to previous critiques. Concerns of another reviewer regarding the confound between arousal and movement have been addressed by new pupillometry data as a measure of arousal and multivariate analyses to distinguish between the contributions of arousal vs. movement to hypocretin/orexin neuron activity. The new data in Figure 2H added in response to a suggestion by Reviewer 3 particularly strengthens the paper.

Weaknesses:

Reviewer 2 mentioned that previous studies using orexin antagonists in rodents have largely found inconsistent effect of antagonizing orexin signaling on simple motor activity and points out that these studies are not referenced here. The authors respond that "orexin antagonism - or optogenetic silencing of HONs - evokes either reduced locomotion, or no effect on locomotor movements" and add references to paragraph 4 of the Discussion. Aside from the fact that 2 of the 3 references added are from the senior author, none address the fact that orexin antagonists induce sleep and that optogenetic silencing of these cells creates a condition where sleep can ensue with short latency - results that certainly affect body movement/locomotor activity.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this set of experiments, the authors describe a novel research tool for studying complex cognitive tasks in mice, the HABITS automated training apparatus, and a novel "machine teaching" approach they use to accelerate training by algorithmically providing trials to animals that provide the most information about the current rule state for a given task.

Strengths:

There is much to be celebrated in an inexpensively constructed, replicable training environment that can be used with mice, which have rapidly become the model species of choice for understanding the roles of distinct circuits and genetic factors in cognition. Lingering challenges in developing and testing cognitive tasks in mice remain, however, and these are often chalked up to cognitive limitations in the species. The authors' findings, however, suggest that instead we may need to work creatively to meet mice where they live. In some cases it may be that mice may require durations of training far longer than laboratories are able to invest with manual training (up to over 100k trials, over months of daily testing) but that the tasks are achievable. The "machine teaching" approach further suggests that this duration could be substantially reduced by algorithmically optimizing each trial presented during training to maximize learning.

Weaknesses:

Cognitive training and testing in rodent models fill a number of roles. Sometimes, investigators are interested in within-subjects questions - querying a specific circuit, genetically defined neuron population, or molecule/drug candidate, by interrogating or manipulating its function in a highly trained animal. In this scenario, a cohort of highly trained animals which have been trained via a method that aims to make their behavior as similar as possible is a strength.

However, often investigators are interested in between-subjects questions - querying a source of individual differences that can have long term and/or developmental impacts, such as sex differences or gene variants. This is likely to often be the case in mouse models especially, because of their genetic tractability. In scenarios where investigators have examined cognitive processes between subjects in mice who vary across these sources of individual difference, the process of learning a task has been repeatedly shown to be different. The authors recognize that their approach is currently optimized for testing within-subjects questions, but begin to show how between-subjects questions might be addressed with this system.

The authors have perhaps shown that their main focus is highly-controlled within-subjects questions, as their dataset is almost exclusively made up of several hundred young adult male mice, with the exception of 6 females in a supplemental figure. It is notable that these female mice do appear to learn the two-alternative forced choice task somewhat more rapidly than the males in their cohort, and the authors suggest that future work with this system could be used to uncover strategies that differ across individuals.

Considering the implications for mice modeling relevant genetic variants, it is unclear to what extent the training protocols and especially the algorithmic machine teaching approach would be able to inform investigators about the differences between their groups during training. For investigators examining genetic models, it is unclear whether this extensive training experience would mitigate the ability to observe cognitive differences, or select for the animals best able to overcome them - eliminating the animals of interest. Likewise, the algorithmic approach aims to mitigate features of training such as side biases, but it is worth noting that the strategic uses of side biases in mice, as in primates, can benefit learning, rather than side biases solely being a problem. However, the investigators may be able to highlight variables selected by the algorithm that are associated with individual strategies in performing their tasks, and this would be a significant contribution.

A final, intriguing finding in this manuscript is that animal self-paced training led to much slower learning than "manual" training, by having the experimenter introduce the animal to the apparatus for a few hours each day. Manual training resulted in significantly faster learning, in almost half the number of trials on average, and with significantly fewer omitted trials. This finding does not necessarily argue that manual training is universally a better choice, because it led to more limited water consumption. However, it suggests that there is a distinct contribution of experimenter interactions and/or switching contexts in cognitive training, for example, by activating an "occasion setting" process to accelerate learning for a distinct period of time. Limiting experimenter interactions with mice may be a labor saving intervention, but may not necessarily improve performance. This could be an interesting topic of future investigation, of relevance to understanding how animals of all species learn.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, Banse et al., demonstrate that combining computer prediction with genetic analysis in distinct Caenorhabditis species can streamline the discovery of aging interventions by taking advantage of the diverse pool of compounds that are currently available. They demonstrate that through careful prioritization of candidate compounds, they are able to accomplish a 30% positive hit rate for interventions that produce significant lifespan extensions. Within the positive hits, they focus on all-trans retinoic acid (atRA) and discover that it modulates lifespan through conserved longevity pathways such as AKT-1 and AKT-2 (and other conserved Akt-targets such as Nrf2/SKN-1 and HSF1/HSF-1) as well as through AAK-2, a conserved catalytic subunit of AMPK. To better understand the genetic mechanisms behind lifespan extension upon atRA treatment, the authors perform RNAseq experiments using a variety of genetic backgrounds for cross comparison and validation. Using this current state-of-the-art approach for studying gene expression, the authors determine that atRA treatment produces gene expression changes across a broad set of stress-response and longevity-related pathways. Overall, this study is important since it highlights the potential of combining traditional genetic analysis in the genetically tractable organism C. elegans with computational methods that will become even more powerful with the swift advancements being made in artificial intelligence. The study possesses both theoretical and practical implications not only in the field of aging, but also in related fields such as health and disease. Most of the claims in this study are supported by solid evidence, but the conclusions can be refined with a small set of additional experiments or re-analysis of data.

Strengths:

(1) The criteria for prioritizing compounds for screening are well-defined and is easy to replicate (Figure 1), even for scientists with limited experience in computational biology. The approach is also adaptable to other systems or model organisms.

(2) I commend the researchers for doing follow-up experiments with the compound propranolol to verify its effect of lifespan (Figure 2- figure supplement 2), given the observation that it affected the growth of OP50. To prevent false hits in the future, the reviewer recommends the use of inactivated OP50 for future experiments to remove this confounding variable.

(3) The sources of variation (Figure 3-figure supplement 2) are taken into account and demonstrates the need for advancing our understanding of the lifespan phenotype due to inter-individual variation.

(4) The addition of the C. elegans swim test in addition to the lifespan assays provides further evidence of atRA-induced improvement in longevity.

(5) The RNAseq approach was performed in a variety of genetic backgrounds, which allowed the authors to determine the relationship between AAK-2 and HSF-1 regulation of the retinoic acid pathway in C. elegans, specifically, that the former functions downstream of the latter.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors demonstrate that atRA extends lifespan in a species-specific manner (Figure 3). Specifically, this extension only occurs in the species C. elegans yet, the title implies that atRA-induced lifespan extension occurs in different Caenorhabditis species when it is clearly not the case. While the authors state that failure to observe phenotypes in C. briggsae and C. tropicalis is a common feature of CITP tests, they do not speculate as to why this phenomenon occurs.

(2) There are discrepancies between the lifespan curves by hand (Figure 3-Figure supplement 1) and using the automated lifespan machine (Figure 3-supplement 3). Specifically, in the automated lifespan assays, there are drastic changes in the slope of the survival curve which do not occur in the manual assays and may be suggestive that confounding factors may still operate or produce additional variation in ALM experiments despite relatively well-controlled environmental conditions.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this study, Chen L et al. systematically analyzed the mycobacterial nucleomodulins and identified MgdE as a key nucleomodulin in pathogenesis. They found that MgdE enters into host cell nucleus through two nuclear localization signals, KRIR108-111 and RLRRPR300-305, and then interacts with COMPASS complex subunits ASH2L and WDR5 to suppress H3K4 methylation-mediated transcription of pro-inflammatory cytokines, thereby promoting mycobacterial survival. This study is potentially interesting, but there are several critical issues that need to be addressed to support the conclusions of the manuscript.

(1) Figure 2: The study identified MgdE as a nucleomodulin in mycobacteria and demonstrated its nuclear translocation via dual NLS motifs. The authors examined MgdE nuclear translocation through ectopic expression in HEK293T cells, which may not reflect physiological conditions. Nuclear-cytoplasmic fractionation experiments under mycobacterial infection should be performed to determine MgdE localization.

(2) Figure 2F: The authors detected MgdE-EGFP using an anti-GFP antibody, but EGFP as a control was not detected in its lane. The authors should address this technical issue.

(3) Figure 3C-3H: The data showing that the expression of all detected genes in 24 h is comparable to that in 4 h (but not 0 h) during WT BCG infection is beyond comprehension. The issue is also present in Figure 7C, Figure 7D, and Figure S7. Moreover, since Il6, Il1β (pro-inflammatory), and Il10 (anti-inflammatory) were all upregulated upon MgdE deletion, how do the authors explain the phenomenon that MgdE deletion simultaneously enhanced these gene expressions?

(4) Figure 5: The authors confirmed the interactions between MgdE and WDR5/ASH2L. How does the interaction between MgdE and WDR5 inhibit COMPASS-dependent methyltransferase activity? Additionally, the precise MgdE-ASH2L binding interface and its functional impact on COMPASS assembly or activity require clarification.

(5) Figure 6: The authors proposed that the MgdE-regulated COMPASS complex-H3K4me3 axis suppresses pro-inflammatory responses, but the presented data do not sufficiently support this claim. H3K4me3 inhibitor should be employed to verify cytokine production during infection.

(6) There appears to be a discrepancy between the results shown in Figure S7 and its accompanying legend. The data related to inflammatory responses seem to be missing, and the data on bacterial colonization are confusing (bacterial DNA expression or CFU assay?).

(7) Line 112-116: Please provide the original experimental data demonstrating nuclear localization of the 56 proteins harboring putative NLS motifs.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Disclaimer:

My expertise is in live single-molecule imaging of RNA and transcription, as well as associated data analysis and modeling. While this aligns well with the technical aspects of the manuscript, my background in translation is more limited, and I am not best positioned to assess the novelty of the biological conclusions.

Summary:

This study combines live-cell imaging of nascent proteins on single mRNAs with time-series analysis to investigate the kinetics of mRNA translation.

The authors (i) used a calibration method for estimating absolute ribosome counts, and (ii) developed a new Bayesian approach to infer ribosome counts over time from run-off experiments, enabling estimation of elongation rates and ribosome density across conditions.

They report (i) translational bursting at the single-mRNA level, (ii) low ribosome density (~10% occupancy {plus minus} a few percents), (iii) that ribosome density is minimally affected by perturbations of elongation (using a drug and/or different coding sequences in the reporter), suggesting a homeostatic mechanism potentially involving a feedback of elongation onto initiation, although (iv) this coupling breaks down upon knockout of elongation factor eIF5A.

Strengths:

(1) The manuscript is well written, and the conclusions are, in general, appropriately cautious (besides the few improvements I suggest below).

(2) The time-series inference method is interesting and promising for broader applications.

(3) Simulations provide convincing support for the modeling (though some improvements are possible).

(4) The reported homeostatic effect on ribosome density is surprising and carefully validated with multiple perturbations.

(5) Imaging quality and corrections (e.g., flat-fielding, laser power measurements) are robust.

(6) Mathematical modeling is clearly described and precise; a few clarifications could improve it further.

Weaknesses:

(1) The absolute quantification of ribosome numbers (via the measurement of $i_{MP}$​) should be improved. This only affects the finding that ribosome density is low, not that it appears to be under homeostatic control. However, if $i_{MP}$​ turns out to be substantially overestimated (hence ribosome density underestimated), then "ribosomes queuing up to the initiation site and physically blocking initiation" could become a relevant hypothesis. In my detailed recommendations to the authors, I list points that need clarification in their quantifications and suggest an independent validation experiment (measuring the intensity of an object with a known number of GFP molecules, e.g., MS2-GFP MS2-GFP-labeled RNAs, or individual GEMs).

(2) The proposed initiation-elongation coupling is plausible, but alternative explanations, such as changes in abortive elongation frequency, should be considered more carefully. The authors mention this possibility, but should test or rule it out quantitatively.

(3) The observation of translational bursting is presented as novel, but similar findings were reported by Livingston et al. (2023) using a similar SunTag-MS2 system. This prior work should be acknowledged, and the added value of the current approach clarified.

(4) It is unclear what the single-mRNA nature of the inference method is bringing since it is only used here to report _average_ ribosome elongation rate and density (averaged across mRNAs and across time during the run-off experiments - although the method, in principle, has the power to resolve these two aspects).

(5) I did not find any statement about data availability. The data should be made available. Their absence limits the ability to fully assess and reproduce the findings.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In the revised manuscript, Long et al., showed that sul1∆ mutants have extended replicative lifespan in budding yeast. In comparison, other mutants that have sulfate transport deficiency did not show extended lifespan, suggesting SUL1 deletion extends lifespan independently of sulfate intake. The authors then explored the transcriptome of sul1∆ mutants by RNA-seq, which suggests that SUL1 deletion impacts common longevity pathways. Furthermore, the authors characterized how the PKA pathway is affected in sul1∆ mutants: SUL1 deletion promotes the nuclear localization of Msn2, as well as autophagy, indicating down-regulation of the PKA pathway.

Strengths:

This study raised an interesting point that inorganic transporters may impact cellular stress response pathways and affect lifespan. Some of the characterizations on the sul1∆ mutants, including the RNA-seq and MSN2 localization could provide valuable sources for people in related fields. Compared with the previous version, the writing is significantly improved, making the manuscript clearer.

Weaknesses:

Several critical flaws have not been revised. The claims are still not well supported by the data.

(1) The revised manuscript still uses Atg8-EGFP, in which GFP is likely tagging at the C-terminus of Atg8. No strain information was provided for this strain, so it is unclear whether it is N- or C- terminal tagged. As pointed by reviewers of the previous version, C-terminal tagged Atg8 is not functional. As a result, the conclusions on autophagy (Figure 4) is questionable.

(2) The nuclear localization of Msn2 is much more convincing after the authors updated Figure 3C. However, the rest of the microscopy images (e.g. Figure 3E, 4B, 4E) are still of low resolution. Again, I suggest to separate the DIC and GFP channels. It is really hard to tell where is the GFP signal from these figures.

(3) In the Kankipati et al. 2015 paper, which is cited by the authors, SUL1E427Q is incorporated on a pRS316 (URA3) plasmic and expressed in sul1∆sul2∆ mutants. In this manuscript, the authors used SUL1E427Q mutants but did not give detailed information on how this construct is expressed. Is it endogenously mutated, incorporated into somewhere in the genome, or expressed from an extrachromosomal plasmid?<br /> In Figure 1B, they simply used BY4741 as a control for the SUL1E427Q mutant. This makes me thinking they are using a SUL1E427Q endogenous point mutation mutant. If so, the authors may want to include the information about this strain in their Supplementary table. Or if it is expressed from an extra copy on chromosomes or extrachromosomal plasmids, the authors would need to express this construct in sul1∆ mutant. In this case, the authors may want to use sul1∆ and sul1∆+empty vector as controls, instead of BY4741. As the authors mentioned in their rebuttal letter, lifespan experiments vary between each individual trials and are not comparable between different trials. Thus proper controls are essential to make the results convincing.

(4) As suggested by reviewers of the previous version, the authors tested the sulfate uptake in different mutants within 10 minute of Na2SO4 addition (Figure 1B). The authors concluded from the data that wild type takes up sulfate faster than the mutants but they reach similar concentrations at the end point (as fast as 10 minutes). Are all these cells sulfate-starved before the experiment? If not, the experiment might be affected by the basal level of sulfate in each mutants.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Cardno et al. "test the hypothesis that DUBs could oppose PROTAC-mediated degradation of cellular targets, using AURKA as a model target". A screen with a panel of siRNA that depleted 97 DUBs in the presence and absence of AURKA targeted PROTAC-D identified DUBs that regulated AURKA and those that affected the sensitivity of PROTAC-D. Validation studies with DUBs, UCHL5, and OTU6A yielded mixed results. UCHL5 not only affected PROTAC-mediated AURKA degradation but also affected CRBN-associated substrates, OTUD6A, more specifically, affected PROTAC-mediated AURKA degradation, and the effects of OTUD6A were associated with the localisation of AURKA. The findings are interesting; the impact of the findings would be strengthened if the key results are validated in one or more cancer cell lines that have not been modified.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, authors Simone Rencken and co-authors present and investigate the genome of the common cuttlefish Sepia officinalis.

Strengths:

The authors explain in a detailed yet concise manner the main steps for a genome assembly, with very robust methods for validation, and according to current best practices. In addition to the chromosomal assembly, the authors confirmed the presence of 47 chromosomes using Hi-C data and multiple species synteny. They also generated a comprehensive gene annotation, with assessments of gene completeness, providing a useful resource for the community of researchers interested in cuttlefish biology and comparative genomics.

Weaknesses:

While the study touches upon the subjects of gene content, TE activity, or species-level comparisons, the study does not provide in-depth investigations of these.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors' research here was to understand the role of hypoxia and hypoxia-induced transcription factor Hif-1a in the epicardium. The authors noted that hypoxia was prevalent in the embryonic heart, and this persisted into neonatal stages until postnatal day 7 (P7). Hypoxic regions in the heart were noted in the outer layer of the heart, and expression of Hif-1a coincided with the epicardial gene WT1. It has been documented that at P7, the mouse heart cannot regenerate after myocardial infarction, and the authors speculated that the change in epicardial hypoxic conditions could play a role in regeneration. The authors then used genetic and pharmacological tools to increase the activity of Hif genes in the heart and noted that there was a significant improvement in cardiac function when Hif-1a was active in the epicardium. The authors speculated that the presence of Hif-1a improved cell survival.

Strengths:

A focus on hypoxia and its effects on the epicardium in development and after myocardial infarction. This study outlines the potential to extend the regenerative time window in neonatal mammalian hearts.

Weaknesses:

While the observations of improved cardiac function are clear, the exact mechanism of how increased Hif-1a activity causes these effects is not completely revealed. The authors mention improved myocardium survival, but do not include studies to demonstrate this.

There is an indication that fibrosis is decreased in hearts where Hif activity is prolonged, but there are no studies to link hypoxia and fibrosis.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

The authors present an important approach to identify imported P. falciparum malaria cases, combining genetic and epidemiological/travel data. This tool has the potential to be expanded to other contexts. The data was analyzed using convincing methods, including a novel statistical model; although some recognized limitations can be improved. This study will be of interest to researchers in public health and infectious diseases.

Strengths:

The study has several strengths, mainly the development of a novel Bayesian model that integrates genomic, epidemiological, and travel data to estimate importation probabilities. The results showed insights into malaria transmission dynamics, particularly identifying importation sources and differences in importation rates in Mozambique. Finally, the relevance of the findings is to suggest interventions focusing on the traveler population to help efforts for malaria elimination.

Weaknesses:

The study also has some limitations. The sample collection was not representative of some provinces, and not all samples had sufficient metadata for risk factor analysis, which can also be affected by travel recall bias. Additionally, the authors used a proxy for transmission intensity and assumed some conditions for the genetic variable when calculating the importation probability for specific scenarios. The weaknesses were assessed by the authors.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this revised manuscript, Gao et al. presented a series of well-controlled behavioral data showing that tussling, a form of high-intensity fighting among male fruit flies (Drosophila melanogaster) is enhanced specifically among socially experienced and relatively old males. Moreover, results of behavioral assays led authors to suggest that increased tussling among socially experienced males may increase mating success. They also concluded that tussling is controlled by a class of olfactory sensory neurons and sexually dimorphic central neurons that are distinct from pathways known to control lunges, a common male-type attack behavior.

A major strength of this work is that it is the first attempt to characterize behavioral function and neural circuit associated with Drosophila tussling. Many animal species use both low-intensity and high-intensity tactics to resolve conflicts. High-intensity tactics are mostly reserved for escalated fights, which are relatively rare. Because of this, tussling in the flies, like high-intensity fights in other animal species, have not been systematically investigated. Previous studies on fly aggressive behavior have often used socially isolated, relatively young flies within a short observation duration. Their discovery that 1) older (14-days old) flies tend to tussle more often than younger (2 to 7-days-old) flies, 2) group-reared flies tend to tussle more often than socially isolated flies, and 3) flies tend to tussle at later stage (mostly ~15 minutes after the onset of fighting), are the result of their creativity to look outside of conventional experimental settings. These new findings are key for quantitatively characterizing this interesting yet under-studied behavior.

Newly presented data have made several conclusions convincing. Detailed descriptions of methods to quantify behaviors help understand the basis of their claims by improving transparency. However, I remain concerned about authors' persistent attempt to link the high intensity aggression to reproductive success. The authors' effort to "tone down" the link between the two phenomena remains insufficient. There are purely correlational. I reiterate this issue because the overall value of the manuscript would not change with or without this claim.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Use of reporter assays to understand the regulatory mechanisms controlling gene expression moves beyond simple correlations of cis-regulatory sequence accessibility, evolutionary sequence conservation, and epigenetic status with gene expression, instead quantifying regulatory sequence activity for individual elements. Tulloch et al., provide a systematic characterization of two new reporter assay techniques (LS-MPRA and d-MPRA) to comprehensively identify cis-regulatory sequences contained within genomic loci of interest during retinal development. The authors then apply LS-MPRA and d-MPRA to identify putative cis-regulatory sequences controlling Olig2 and Ngn2 expression, including potential regulatory motifs that known retinal transcription factors may bind. Transcription factor binding to regulatory sequences is then assessed via CUT&RUN. The broader utility of the techniques is then highlighted by performing the assays across development, across species, and across tissues.

Strengths:

(1) The authors validate the reporter assays on retinal loci for which the regulatory sequences are known (Rho, Vsx2, Grm6, Cabp5) mostly confirming known regulatory sequence activity but highlighting either limitations of the current technology or discrepancies of previous reporter assays and known biology. The techniques are then applied to loci of interest (Olig2 and Ngn2) to better understand the regulatory sequences driving expression of these transcription factors across retinal development within subsets of retinal progenitor cells, identifying novel regulatory sequences through comprehensive profiling of the region.

(2) LS-MPRA provides broad coverage of loci of interest.

(3) d-MPRA identifies sequence features that are important for cis-regulatory sequence activity.

(4) The authors take into account transcript and protein stability when determining the correlation of putative enhancer sequence activity with target gene expression.

Weaknesses:

(1) In its current form, the many important controls that are standard for other MPRA experiments are not shown or not performed, limiting the interpretations of the utility of the techniques. This includes limited controls for basal-promoter activity, limited information about sequence saturation and reproducibility of individual fragments across different barcode sequences, limitations in cloning and assay delivery, and sequencing requirements. Additional quantitative metrics, including locus coverage and number of barcodes/fragments, would be beneficial throughout the manuscript.

(2) There are no statistical metrics for calling a region/sequence 'active'. This is especially important given that NR3 for Olig2 seems to have a small 'peak' and has non-significant activity in Figure 4.

(3) The authors present correlational data for identified cis-regulatory sequences with target gene expression. Additionally, the significance of transcription factor binding to the putative regulatory sequences is not currently tested, only correlated based on previous single-cell RNA-sequencing data. While putative regulatory sequences with potential mechanisms of regulation are identified/proposed, the lack of validation (and discrepancies with previous literature) makes it hard to decipher the utility of the techniques.

(4) While the interpretations that Olig2 mRNA/protein expression is dynamically regulated improved the proportions of cells that co-expressed CRM-regulated GFP and Olig2, alternate explanations (some noted) are just as likely. First, the electroporation isn't specific to Olig2+ progenitors. Also, the tested, short CRM fragments may have activating signals outside of Olig2 neurogenic cells because chromatin conformation, histone modifications, and DNA methylation are not present on plasmids to precisely control plasmid activity. Alternatively, repressive elements that control Olig2 expression are not contained in the reporter vectors.

(5) It is unclear as to why the d-MPRA uses a different barcoding strategy, placing a second copy of the cis-regulatory sequence in the 3' UTR. As acknowledged by the author, this will change the transcript stability by changing the 3' UTR sequence. Because of this, comparisons of sequence activity between the LS-MPRA and d-MPRA should not be performed as the experiments are not equivalent.

(6) Furthermore, details of the mutational burden in d-MPRA experiments are not provided, limiting the interpretations of these results.

(7) Many figures are IGV screenshots that suffer from low resolution. Many figures could be consolidated.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Krwawicz et al., present evidence that expression of DNMTs in E. coli results in (1) introduction of alkylation damage that is repaired by AlkB; (2) confers hypersensitivity to alkylating agents such as MMS (and exacerbated by loss of AlkB); (3) confers hypersensitivity to oxidative stress (H2O2 exposure); (4) results in a modest increase in ROS in the absence of exogenous H2O2 exposure; and (5) results in the production of oxidation products of 5mC, namely 5hmC and 5fC, leading to cellular toxicity. The findings reported here have interesting implications for the concept that such genotoxic and potentially mutagenic consequences of DNMT expression (resulting in 5mC) could be selectively disadvantageous for certain organisms. The other aspect of this work which is important for understanding the biological endpoints of genotoxic stress is the notion that DNA damage per se somehow induces elevated levels of ROS.

Strengths:

The manuscript is well-written, and the experiments have been carefully executed providing data that support the authors' proposed model presented in Fig. 7 (Discussion, sources of DNA damage due to DNMT expression).

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors have established an informative system relying on expression of DNMTs to gauge the effects of such expression and subsequent induction of 3mC and 5mC on cell survival and sensitivity to an alkylating agent (MMS) and exogenous oxidative stress (H2O2 exposure). The authors state (p4) that Fig. 2 shows that "Cells expressing either M.SssI or M.MpeI showed increased sensitivity to MMS treatment compared to WT C2523, supporting the conclusion that the expression of DNMTs increased the levels of alkylation damage." This is a confusing statement and requires revision as Fig. 2 does ALL cells shown in Fig. 2 are expressing DNMTs and have been treated with MMS. It is the absence of AlkB and the expression of DNMTs that that causes the MMS sensitivity.

(2) It would be important to know whether the increased sensitivity (toxicity) to DNMT expression and MMS is also accompanied by substantial increases in mutagenicity. The authors should explain in the text why mutation frequencies were not also measured in these experiments.

(3) Materials and Methods. ROS production monitoring. The "Total Reactive Oxygen Species (ROS) Assay Kit" has not been adequately described. Who is the Vendor? What is the nature of the ROS probes employed in this assay? Which specific ROS correspond to "total ROS"?

(4) The demonstration (Fig. 4) that DNMT expression results in elevated ROS and its further synergistic increase when cells are also exposed to H2O2 is the basis for the authors' discussion of DNA damage-induced increases in cellular ROS. S. cerevisiae does not possess DNMTs/5mC, yet exposure to MMS also results in substantial increases in intracellular ROS (Rowe et al, (2008) Free Rad. Biol. Med. 45:1167-1177. PMC2643028). The authors should be aware of previous studies that have linked DNA damage to intracellular increases in ROS in other organisms and should comment on this in the text.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present data demonstrating that optogenetic inhibition of either D1- or D2-MSNs in the NAc Shell attenuates expression of sensory-specific PIT while largely sparing value-based decision on an instrumental task. They also provide evidence that SS-PIT depends on D1-MSN projections from the NAc-Shell to the VP, whereas projections from D2-MSNs to the VP do not contribute to SS-PIT.

Strengths:

This is clearly written. The evidence largely supports the authors' interpretations, and these effects are somewhat novel, so they help advance our understanding of PIT and NAc-Shell function.

Weaknesses:

I think the interpretation of some of the effects (specifically the claim that D1-MSNs do not contribute to value-based decision making) is not fully supported by the data presented.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Wójcik and colleagues investigated how the maintenance of task information in working memory influences the dimensionality of task representations. The task required an exclusive-or (XOR) mapping as the output by combining stimulus features separated by a delay period. The authors found that context information invariant to input features (i.e., color) is maintained and enhanced over the course of learning the task.

The significance of this study lies in its demonstration of how learning selectively changes the geometry of task representations. The clear-cut results emphasize that learning promotes the abstraction of task representations for context-dependent computations. It is also important to investigate how working memory mechanisms contribute to the geometry and optimization of task representations, as such studies in humans are scarce.

Strengths:

(1) The task design and analyses are clear.

(2) The theoretical motivation to study low-dimensional representations and temporal decomposition is strong. Understanding how learning changes these qualities is a novel and important question.

Weaknesses:

(1) The specific contribution of working memory maintenance to the dimensionality and abstraction of representations is unclear. While the task likely recruits working memory, there are no direct assessments linking the observed results to particular qualities or mechanisms of working memory. In other words, neural representations observed during the delay period are interpreted as working memory.

(2) The dissociation between XOR and motor representations is ambiguous, as they only become distinguishable during error trials. Additionally, they show similar time courses and learning-related changes.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

The authors investigated SP-induced physiological and molecular changes in Djungarian hamsters and the endogenous recovery from it after circa half a year. The study aimed to elucidate the intrinsic mechanism and included nice experiments to distinguish between rheostatic effects on energy state and homeostatic cues driven by an interval timer. It also aimed to elucidate the role of Dio3 by introducing a targeted mutation in the MBH by ICV. The experiments and analyses are sound, and the amount of work is impressive. The impact of this study on the field of seasonal chronobiology is probably high.

Even though the general conclusions are well-founded, I have fundamental criticism concerning 3 points, which I recommend revising:

(1) The authors talk about a circannual interval timer, but this is no circannual timer. This is a circa-semiannual timer. It is important that the authors use precise wording throughout the manuscript.

(2) The authors put their results in the context of clocks. For example, line 180/181 seasonal clock. But they have described and investigated an interval timer. A clock must be able to complete a full cycle endogenously (and ideally repeatedly) and not only half of it. In contrast, a timer steers a duration. Thus, it is well possible that a circannual clock mechanism and this circa-semiannual timer of photoperiodic species are 2 completely different mechanisms. The argumentation should be changed accordingly.

(3) The authors chose as animal model the Djungarian hamster, which is a predominantly photoperiodic species and not a circannual species. A photoperiodic species has no circannual clock. That is another reason why it is difficult to draw conclusions from the experiment for circannual clocks. However, the Djungarian hamster is kind of "indifferent" concerning its seasonal timing, since a small fraction of them are indeed able to cycle (Anchordoquy HC, Lynch GR (2000), Evidence of an annual rhythm in a small proportion of Siberian hamsters exposed to chronic short days. J Biol Rhythms 15:122-125.). Nevertheless, the proportion is too small to suggest that the findings in the current study might reflect part of the circannual timing.

Therefore, the authors should make a clear distinction between timers and clocks, as well as between circa-annual and circa-semiannual durations/periods.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this work, Brown and colleagues report that the photosensor protein LITE-1 of the nematode C. elegans may also be a chemosensor that can be activated by high concentrations of the compound diacetyl. LITE-1 was described as a putative ion channel of the gustatory receptor family, which is mainly constituted by insect odorant receptors. These form tetrameric ion channels that can be activated by odorants. Specificity is achieved by forming heteromeric channels from three copies of the odorant receptor co-receptor (ORCO) and another subunit that resembles ORCO in the pore-forming C-terminus, but brings in a binding site for the respective odorant. LITE-1 has a very similar structure, according to Alphafold3 predictions, and also carries a binding pocket. In LITE-1, this was proposed to be occupied by a light-absorbing molecule that activates the channel when a photon is absorbed. Alternatively, compounds generated by absorption of high-energy photons may be formed in vivo and bound by the LITE-1 binding pocket. Koh et al. now demonstrate that another, non-light-activated compound, diacetyl, at high concentrations, can activate cells expressing LITE-1. Such (chemosensory) cells are also responsible for the avoidance of high concentrations of diacetyl. LITE-1 activation in excitable cells, i.e, muscles, causes strong body contraction and paralysis, and the authors show that this is also the case when diacetyl is presented. The authors further present molecular docking studies showing that diacetyl could occupy the binding pocket of LITE-1. Last, they show that another compound chemically resembling diacetyl, i.e., 2,3-pentanedione, can also induce avoidance in a LITE-1 dependent manner, though not as potently.

The data are intriguing, and the demonstration of LITE-1 being a diacetyl chemosensor is interesting. Yet, there are a few questions arising that the authors should address.

The authors identified mutants lacking diacetyl responses. In their chemotaxis assay (Figures 1A, B), they show that lite-1 mutants do not avoid high concentrations of diacetyl. However, the animals actually showed attraction, as the chemotaxis index was positive. If the lite-1 animals were insensitive, they should be indifferent, and the chemotaxis index should be close to zero. This means, other neurons contribute to the diacetyl response, and the result of these neurons being activated means/remains attraction? If so, the authors need to rule out any effects of these neurons on the effects they attribute to LITE-1 in the other assays.

The effect of diacetyl on muscle cells (Figure 3C) is pretty rapid, i.e., already during 1 minute after application, the animals are almost maximally contracted. How fast is it really? Can the authors provide a time course with more time points during the first minute? This is a relevant question, as the compound would have to either pass the worm cuticle or enter through the gut and diffuse through the body to reach the muscle cells. Can one expect this to occur within (less than) a minute?

In this context, the authors need to rule out that other mechanisms may be at play. E.g., diacetyl may be immediately sensed by ciliated chemosensory neurons that might release a signaling molecule that leads to activation of LITE-1 in muscles, or that sensitizes it somehow, responding to light used for filming animals. The authors should repeat this assay in a lite-1 mutant background. Furthermore, the authors tested unc-13 mutants to rule out indirect effects on the neurons recorded. Likewise, they should eliminate neuropeptide signaling via unc-31 mutants (a recent paper cited by the authors showed involvement of neuropeptide signaling in LITE-1-mediated light avoidance behavior). Last, to demonstrate that effects are not indirect in response to chemosensory neurons, the authors should repeat the contraction or swimming assay in a tax-4 mutant, which largely lacks chemosensation. This also applies to the chemotaxis assay. Animals should exhibit a chemotaxis index to diacetyl of zero, then.

Does diacetyl activate other neurons expressing LITE-1? A number of cells express LITE-1 at high levels, which the authors have not tested (they restricted their analyses to chemosensory neurons). This is important to address because it leaves the possibility that LITE-1 requires a specific partner only present in these chemosensory neurons to detect diacetyl. This partner would have to be present also in muscles, where diacetyl could activate ectopically expressed LITE-1. According to CeNGEN scRNAseq data, cells expressing LITE-1 can be identified. The ADL and ASH neurons actually come up only at the lowest threshold, so some of the other cells showing much higher levels of LITE-1 mRNAs, i.e., AVG, ALM, PLM, ASG, PHA, PHB, AVM, RIF, or some pharyngeal neurons, should be tested. ASG was among the cells the authors recorded from, but this neuron did not show a response.

The authors need to show that diacetyl responses of ADL and/or ASK can be rescued by expressing LITE-1 specifically in these neurons in a lite-1 mutant background.

Molecular docking studies are not described in detail. How was this done? Diacetyl is a very small molecule. How well can docking algorithms assess this at all? Did the authors preselect the binding pocket, or did the algorithm sample the entire molecular surface of the LITE-1 model and end up with the binding pocket? The latter would be very convincing. The authors should provide control docking experiments with other molecules that caused avoidance in their hands (i.e. benzaldehyde, 2,4,5,trimethlythiazole, isoamyl alcohol, nonanone, octanone), but did not activate LITE-1. Also, they should try docking molecules related to diacetyl, and if there are some that do not dock under the same conditions, such molecules should be used in a behavioral experiment. Ideally, they should also not activate LITE-1. Examples could be, e.g., diacetyl monoxime or 2,4-pentanedione.

Last, the authors should provide a PDB file with the docked diacetyl to allow readers to assess the binding for themselves. Since a large number of mutations of LITE-1 have been reported, it may be that amino acids shown to be essential for LITE-1 function are also required for diacetyl binding. If so, this could be backed up with an experiment.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, Shivani Bodas et al. investigate the role of actin, actin-binding proteins, and microtubules in regulating the membrane-associated periodic skeleton (MPS) in neuronal axons. The MPS, first reported by Ke Xu et al. in 2013 (Science), has since been implicated in various neuronal functions, including mechanical support, axonal diameter control, axonal degeneration regulation, and spatial organization of signaling molecules. Given its biological importance, further elucidation of MPS assembly mechanisms is of considerable interest. However, I have concerns regarding the novelty and strength of the conclusions presented in this work. Many of the findings largely reiterate previously published observations, and the most novel conclusions are not fully substantiated by the data.

Strengths:

(1) The MPS represents a structurally and functionally important cytoskeletal system in neurons. Studies aimed at understanding its developmental mechanisms are biologically meaningful and potentially impactful.

(2) The authors attempt to dissect MPS assembly during early neuronal development, a process that could offer mechanistic insight into how the MPS is established and maintained.

Weaknesses:

(1) Limited Novelty Across Results Sections:

Of the seven Results sections, only one (Figure 6) and part of another (Figure 9) present data leading to relatively novel interpretations, specifically, the authors' claim that βII-spectrin is recruited to the axonal cortex via F-actin interactions as early as DIV1, followed by rearrangement into a periodic structure by DIV4. However, this conclusion is not fully supported (see below). The remaining results (Figures 1-5, 7, and 8) largely recapitulate findings reported in earlier studies and thus add limited new knowledge.

(2) Insufficient Evidence for Early Recruitment and Rearrangement of βII-spectrin:

The claim that βII-spectrin is recruited to the axonal cortex via F-actin interactions as early as at DIV 1 and subsequently reorganized into a periodic structure during DIV1-4 is central to the manuscript but lacks robust experimental support.

On Page 17, Line 526, the authors the authors state that " To exclude cytoplasmic spectrin resulting from overexpression, only axons with low expression of βII spectrin-GFP were selected for the analysis". However, selecting for low expression alone does not guarantee the absence of cytoplasmic signal. Without volumetric imaging (e.g., 3D super-resolution imaging to see the cross section of axons), it is difficult to definitively conclude that the FRAP data (Figures 6 and 9) reflect cortical rather than cytoplasmic localization.

Prior FRAP studies (Zhong et al., eLife 2014) observed minimal fluorescence recovery over 1800 seconds in axons expressing βII-spectrin-GFP at low levels, with faster recovery (~200-300 seconds) only evident under high expression conditions. The fast recovery kinetics (tens of seconds) reported in this manuscript could plausibly result from free diffusion of cytoplasmic βII-spectrin-GFP rather than cortical turnover.

Furthermore, on Page 10, Line 310, the authors assert that endogenous βII-spectrin "is recruited early to the axonal cortex, followed by progressive establishment of periodic order". However, the STED images shown in Figure 1 do not convincingly distinguish between cortical and cytoplasmic pools.

As such, the observed disordered βII-spectrin molecules, whether overexpressed or endogenous, could still represent a diffuse cytoplasmic population. An alternative and perhaps more parsimonious interpretation is that βII-spectrin is initially cytoplasmic and only later recruited and arranged into periodic structures at the cortex.

(3) Use of Pharmacological Perturbations:

Like many earlier studies, this manuscript relies heavily on pharmacological perturbation (e.g., cytoskeletal drugs) to assess the roles of actin, actin-binding proteins, and microtubules in MPS assembly. While this approach is widely used, it is important to acknowledge that such agents may have off-target effects. The manuscript would benefit from greater caution in interpreting these results, or better yet, the inclusion of genetic or optogenetic approaches to independently validate these findings.