206 Matching Annotations
  1. May 2021
    1. As if he wasn't there!

      So was he ever their or was she just letting prejudice stop her but then after she realized that if she just ignores it then it won't stop her?

    2. And I walked directly through him,

      So she finally overcame prejudice by just going through him so its almost like he was never there

    3. With an absent-minded air --

      Why is the air absent and does this mean that everything is now calm?

    4. I approached that awful incubus

      The incubus is a evil person who goes after women so this is prejudice towards women.

    5. My load I settled fair,

      Is she settling the dispute between her and prejudice by settling the fair

    6. I took my hat, I took my stick,

      She is collecting the things that she came with and is about to leave

    7. As sudden winds do blow.

      She is referring to herself as the wind that comes out of nowhere and she is about to release her anger

    8. When a sudden inspiration came,

      Is the inspiration the ecstasy of woe she was talking about?

    9. The sun was sinking slow --

      This gives like a dark doomsday scene feeling

    10. The mountain mists were rising fast,

      The mists refer to the prejudice almost rising up and everything is becoming clear for her to pass

    11. In an ecstasy of woe --

      Does the this refer to her adrenaline she has because she's mad?

    12. So I sat before him helpless,

      This reminds me of a moment when she's had enough so she stands their for a minute and then she's about to release her furry

    13. To vacate Bunker Hill!

      What does she mean by saying vacate bunker hill?

    14. As well invite the monument

      What monument is she talking about and does this mean she got past it and this is a monumental moment?

    15. Of obdurate ill-will --

      She wasn't able to change prejudice mind

    16. If so I hoped to move that mass

      So did she accomplish in getting past prejudice or not?

    17. I might be kneeling still

      Why does she switch tenses to being in the future

    18. And then I begged him on my knees;

      She begged at first and now she is begging again because she has no other choice

    19. But he sat there as before.

      Why does he not wanna move? This represents how prejudice never goes away

    20. He got as mad as I did--

      Why did prejudice get mad when he's the problem

    21. Till I was stiff and sore;

      She tried to fight off prejudice with fighting it but maybe she does not mean literally

    22. I pelted and belabored him

      This implies that she started fighting him off

    23. and I danced and howled and swore.

      Why would she dance around the prejudice?

    24. Then I flew into a passion,

      Is her passion anger possibly?

    25. He sat there like a fool.

      When it says he sat like a fool I think this represents how the prejudice is just there and don't care and they don't mind being in the way

    26. I argued like a Solomon;

      Biblical allusion but what does it mean?

    27. The mountain winds were cool.

      The mountain winds represent the atmosphere that the prejudice is giving off

    28. My time was short --no other path --

      She had no other choice but to go this way and she was trying to overcome it soon

    29. With that colossal mule:

      The word colossal shows how big it is and maybe the word mule represents how slow it is

    30. And then I reasoned quietly

      How can you reason quietly, does this mean she just didn't speak?

    31. He didn't even try.

      The prejudice is not moving at all and this seems to represent how it don't care about other people

    32. He smiled, but as for moving! --

      From it saying that it smiled at her this seems to me that it is almost like mocking her

    33. And let me travel by.

      So the prejudice is in her way and she cant get by because of it

    34. And begged that he would move a bit

      Why does she only want it to move for a bit and not forever and why is she begging it?

    35. For he was huge and high,

      Huge and high are characteristics of a mountain so maybe the prejudice is the mountain?

    36. So I spoke to him politely,

      She is trying now to get prejudice to move

    37. Sat all across the road.

      By her saying that it sat all across the road this implies that its everywhere

    38. And there that hulking Prejudice

      I think that by her using the word hulking this implies that it was a big problem and a nuisance

    39. I carried quite a load;

      What is it that she is carrying?

    40. My strength and time were limited,

      Why does she say her strength does this mean she can only handle so much?

    41. My path quite clearly showed,

      So her path implied that she had somewhere important to be

    42. My work was such as could not wait,

      She has important business to attend to because she could not wait.

    43. That quite cut off the view.

      She was stopped completely in her tracks by prejudice?

    44. When I ran against a Prejudice

      By saying she ran against prejudice it implies that she was going fast but then she was suddenly stopped

    45. And other people's too,

      What is the importance of mentioning that other people have to do things too?

    46. Importantbusiness of my own,

      I was correct she does have something to do and she does seem to be busy

    47. With many things to do,

      What are the things she has to do and she sounds like a busy person

    48. I was climbing up a mountain-path

      The mountain represents the struggle she has to face by climbing it

    49. What is the obstacle she will be facing?

    1. I lift my lamp beside the golden door!”

      The golden door maybe represents an opportunity for the people and the lamp represents a light or hope for the people.

    2. Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,

      She is trying to help people and she wants to help them

    3. The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.

      Some people don't want them but others do want them maybe?

    4. Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,

      She is saying to fear no more and come and be free.

    5. With silent lips. “Give me your tired, your poor,

      Sounds like this woman is a helper for people who don't have a lot.

    6. “Keep, ancient lands, your storied pomp!” cries she

      Is she saying to keep your history but come here and keep your stories going?

    7. The air-bridged harbor that twin cities frame.

      Is this referencing New York maybe?

    8. Glows world-wide welcome; her mild eyes command

      She is well known and she welcomes all people

    9. Mother of Exiles. From her beacon-hand

      People are coming from other countries to her and the torch is her beacon and people see it as a refuge

    10. Is the imprisoned lightning, and her name

      Does the lightning mean she is mighty in power?

    11. A mighty woman with a torch, whose flame

      A woman with a torch reminds me of the Statue of Liberty

    12. Here at our sea-washed, sunset gates shall stand

      Do the gates represent something that she cant get to in life because the gates are blocking it.

    13. With conquering limbs astride from land to land;

      Is this referring to a giant Greek creature?

    14. Not like the brazen giant of Greek fame,

      When it says not like the brazen giant of Greek fame. Does this mean that its not big or maybe its not noticeable

    15. The New Colossus

      Something that is giant, it could represent something this person is facing

    1. The label, the labor, the color, the shade. The shirt.

      He ends the poem with describing the process of making the shirt and he ends the poem with the word shirt just how the poem title is shirt.

    2. Printed in black on neckband and tail. The shape,

      Is he talking about the name on the tag of the shirt?

    3. The buttonholes, the sizing, the facing, the characters

      All these things make up whats on a shirt.

    4. Down to the buttons of simulated bone,

      Is this the description of the work that it took to make the shirt?

    5. Both her and me. We have culled its cost and quality

      How did they cull the cost and quality and what is the deeper meaning behind that?

    6. And feel and its clean smell have satisfied

      The feeling when you put one a new shirt

    7. And she inspected my shirt. Its color and fit

      Did Irma make his clothes, and why is she inspecting the shirt?

    8. Lady in South Carolina, her name is Irma

      Who is Irma, is she a slave?

    9. George Herbert, your descendant is a Black

      Why does be capitalize the word Black and what does the descendant have to do with the poem?

    10. As slaves in calico headrags sweated in fields:

      He went from the 1920s to the 1800s talking about slavery. What is the significance?

    11. weating at her machine in a litter of cotton

      He is specifically now speaking of someone in particular

    12. The docker, the navvy. The planter, the picker, the sorter

      This is the process of the material of the other shirts being shipped maybe?

    13. Weavers, carders, spinners. The loader,

      These are all the positions of the people who make the clothes, and it reminds me of when he mentioned all the different fabrics.

    14. To wear among the dusty clattering looms.

      The looms are the machines that make the clothing

    15. Bailey, MacMartin. The kilt, devised for workers

      He keeps mentioning things that are Scottish, could he be Scottish?

    16. By a fabricated heraldry: MacGregor,

      Heraldry is a display and study of armorial bearings

    17. To control their savage Scottish workers, tamed

      Why would he be calling the Scottish workers savages?

    18. Invented by mill-owners inspired by the hoax of Ossian,

      Was Ossian a big influence for him maybe?

    19. Houndstooth, Tattersall, Madras. The clan tartans

      These are different fabrics and maybe each of them represent something more significant?

    20. Or a major chord.   Prints, plaids, checks,

      When he says major chord is he talking about something very important?

    21. Corners of both pockets, like a strict rhyme

      He is referencing the rhyme of the poem to the stitching of pockets on pants of how it is organized

    22. Across the placket and over the twin bar-tacked

      This is a machine used to make clothes

    23. Wonderful how the pattern matches perfectly

      He lighting up the moment with something nice

    24. Like Hart Crane’s Bedlamite, “shrill shirt ballooning.”

      He is referencing how this one guy jumped off the Brooklyn bridge and he is referencing what his shirt looked like to his clothes

    25. Air filling up the legs of his gray trousers—

      The wind is filling his clothes up while he is falling

    26. And fluttered up from his shirt as he came down,

      He gives the imagery of him being like a bird and flying out of the nest.

    27. He stepped to the sill himself, his jacket flared

      He is on fire and he now has to jump out himself

    28. Her into space, and dropped her. Almost at once

      He lifted his arms up and dropped her.

    29. Around his neck and kissed him. Then he held

      There was an emotional thing between these two folks. Maybe this was his wife or something

    30. A third before he dropped her put her arms   

      She was scared to let go

    31. To enter a streetcar, and not eternity.

      When he says enter a streetcar he is maybe giving the imagery of how people fell onto cars and they did not survive?

    32. And then another. As if he were helping them up

      The only thing people could do were jump out the window and he describes the boy as helping them

    33. Away from the masonry wall and let her drop.

      This is how she had to escape was falling out of the building

    34. Up to the windowsill, then held her out

      Because of the bad safety regulations their was no fire escape route

    35. Who watched how a young man helped a girl to step

      Someone people were helping but others were not

    36. The witness in a building across the street

      He is describing what people saw from the fire

    37. On the ninth floor, no hydrants, no fire escapes—

      He is describing the bad conditions of the workplace

    38. One hundred and forty-six died in the flames

      Those who lost their lives were because the safety regulations at the time were not good

    39. At the Triangle Factory in nineteen-eleven.

      This seems to be a calling for a form of a union for the workers

    40. The treadle, the bobbin. The code. The infamous blaze

      He is referencing the Triangle Shirtwaist Factory Fire that took place

    41. The wringer, the mangle. The needle, the union,

      He seems to be talking about working a lot since he mentions a union

    42. Of cuff I button at my wrist. The presser, the cutter,

      This reminds me of a business man who wears cuffs on his wrist

    43. This armpiece with its overseam to the band

      He keeps mentioning clothing, and I think the clothing represent his feelings he is carrying around, like maybe guilt?

    44. Or talking money or politics while one fitted

      So does he mean that they are all working while one person is being benefited?

    45. Gossiping over tea and noodles on their break

      So I think he is trying to talk about the struggles that the Koreans and Malaysians face.

    46. Turned in a sweatshop by Koreans or Malaysians

      Why is he mentioning Koreans and Malaysians? What is the significance of this?

    47. The nearly invisible stitches along the collar

      Does this represent his scars that are internal and nobody else can see them?

    48. The back, the yoke, the yardage. Lapped seams,

      It sounds like he is carrying something around on him and he is just going in circles and he isn't able to overcome it.

    49. Shirt

      Does the shirt represent the weight that he is carry on him?

    1. driven by a godawful wind.

      Theirs a wind that is bringing all these bad things maybe? Why is the wind so bad though?

    2. She burns like a burning bush

      If the bush is already burning does that mean that it never stops burning?

    3. to my nostrils.

      Is he feeling a burning sensation in his nose because if you breathe in smoke it will burn.

    4. She rises like dragonsmoke

      He uses dragon smoke to describe how there is a big cloud of smoke maybe.

    5. at the edge of a rain forest.

      It's almost like the forest is about to catch on fire but it barely does because it's on the edge of it.

    6. She burns like a field of poppies

      What are the significance of poppie flowers? And does he want them to burn?

    7. She burns like a shot glass of vodka.

      Alcohol can burn easily so why does he talk about fire so much?

    8. at nightfall.

      He is speaking about night time again because he already mentioned dusk. So why is night time important?

    9. A tiger under a rainbow

      A rainbow usually has gold at the end and a rainbow represents joy and if a tiger is a wild animal that can harm you is he saying that it looks innocent on the outside but when you come closer it can hurt you?

    10. silent as quicksilver.

      Quicksilver is a metal and so is he describing his heart as metal and silent?

    11. of a banker's cigar,

      Why does he use a banker's cigar when that has nothing to do with the Vietnam War?

    12. She glows like the fat tip

      He uses another way of describing glowing because he used it first in the foxfire and now he used it to describe a cigar burning and glowing.

    13. dipped in gasoline.

      If you dip something in gasoline, then you must want it to catch fire. So is he desiring for a fire to start.

    14. She burns like a cattail torch

      Cattails catch fire easily because they are very dry and it makes it easy to burn.

    15. She burns like oil on water.

      Oil on water isn't good because the oil will contaminate the water and if fire gets on it then it may become out of control.

    16. like a sack of dry ice.

      How can dry ice burn?

    17. while she burns

      What is he watching burn? And why does he refer to it as a she

    18. hanging at our sides,

      He might be carrying a burden with him.

    19. We stand with our hands

      If he describes standing with his hands does this mean that his world feels upside down?

    20. at dusk.

      Something in his life is growing dark.

    21. dances around her

      So fire is dancing around this girl? And why would he describe the fire as dancing? Is the fire out of control?

    22. A skirt of flames

      When he says skirt of flames I imagine the fire is all around him.

    23. in a thigh-shaped valley.

      Why does he refer to a valley as being shaped like a thigh?

    24. She burns like foxfire

      Foxfire is a light emitted by fungi on decaying wood so could he be the wood that is decaying and the girl is his light in his life.

    25. she burns like a piece of paper.

      Why is there an indent in this line and what type of memory is he remembering.

    26. inside my head. At daybreak

      So this is a memory that he cant let go because it's stuck in his head. But what does he mean by daybreak?

    27. belongs to a girl still burning

      Could this be a tragic memory of a girl he saw in Vietnam? Or could he be referring to a memory as a girl?

    28. The cry I bring down from the hills

      Could this be him talking about his memories of the Vietnam War?

    29. "You and I Are Disappearing"

      Who is disappearing? And could this be a person who he loves, that is disappearing with him?

    1. Or does it explode?

      This is what happens when you don't go after your dream. It builds up all this preasure inside of you and then you explode with your dream.

    2. like a heavy load.

      He refers to a dream like a heavy load because it weighs you down because its always on your mind.

    3. Maybe it just sags

      Does your dream just drag along with you because you don't pursue it?

    4. like a syrupy sweet?

      He describes the way you feel when you accomplish your dreams as if it is syrupy and sweet.

    5. Or crust and sugar over—

      He's asking do you pursue your dreams and if you do are your dreams sweet and do they crust and sugar over?

    6. Does it stink like rotten meat?

      When you put off your dreams, it reminds you later in the way of stinking rotten meat.

    7. And then run?

      He is referring to how you run from your dreams?

    8. Or fester like a sore—

      When he uses the word fester like a sore he is using this to describe what happens when you put off your dreams, he is describing it as the feeling and desire for the dream become more intensified as a sore being untreated.

    9. like a raisin in the sun?

      He's comparing a dream drying up to a raisin in the sun.

    10. Does it dry up

      This relates back to the last line, and he's stating that when you put off a dream it dries up.

    11. What happens to a dream deferred?

      I think he's asking a rhetorical question. I think he already knows what happens but he's saying what happens when you put off a dream? And how does it affect that dream?

    1. in the chalk and choke.

      I think that she is talking about how she is planning something with chalk and she's struggling by talking about her choking

    2. in the many many mornings-after;

      She is saying there are more days to come after the nights and mornings

    3. in the non-cheering dark,

      When she says non-cheering dark I think she is referring to a silent night, maybe meaning peace and quiet.

    4. cultivation of strength to heal and enhance

      I think that when she talks about strength to heal and enhance she is trying to call people to her, so she can help them and I think this refers back to the title of prisoners, but not in the literal sense but prisoners of their feelings and she's trying to help them.

    5. I call for you

      This relates to the last line and I think she is calling for the broken people to come to her.

    6. what wants to crumble you down, to sicken

      Something is tearing her down and it is causing her distress.

    7. Over

      There is that word over again, I think she is trying to refer to getting over something.

    8. long blows that you want to give and blows you are going to get.

      She is talking about you get what you do to other people, maybe.

    9. cultivation of victory Over

      Why is the O in over capitalized, what is important about that word?

    10. I call for you

      I don't know who she is calling to but maybe it relates back to the title and she is calling for prisoners. Or maybe she's trying to get somebody's attention.

    11. Where it is dry.

      I think this is repetition from the last line and if she is repeating it, then it must be important.

    12. Where it is dry.

      I think by her saying where it is dry she is talking about the bad things that aren't being fixed because it's like saying if there was water then it could grow but because it's dry nothing is happening.

    13. Under the wolves and coyotes of particular silences.

      I think by this line she is meaning that she is under something, and the people above her are mean like wolves and coyotes and they silence her.

    14. in the hot paralysis.

      When she says hot I think she is meaning her desire on the inside to wanna do something but by paralysis she is saying she cant. So its something she desires to do but she cant.

    15. in the vertigo cold.

      I think she is referring to something like looking down on a situation, and its a cold situation so maybe she's meaning that its not good because cold represents bad like how warm would represent good.

    16. Dark gardening

      I think when she says dark gardening she is referring to something thats not good and thats what their harvesting is thing that are bad.

    17. I call for you cultivation of strength in the dark.

      She is calling for unity of some people, and she is saying to come out of the dark and be together.

    1. Itʹs full as Opera ‑

      The place she performs is full of people.

    2. Nor any Placard boast me ‑

      She is not known by people.

    3. I mention ‑ easy ‑ Here ‑

      Its easy for her to dance ballet

    4. Nor any know I know the Art

      People don't know that she knows how to dance ballet.

    5. Till I was out of sight, in sound,The House encore me so

      Is she afraid of the spotlight? She doesn't want the house to encore for her?

    6. Nor tossed my shape in Eider Balls,Nor rolled on wheels of snow

      Was she able to become a ballerina? But it was hard to become one?

    7. Nor hopped for Audiences ‑ like Birds ‑One Claw opon the air ‑

      She never had enough ambition to accomplish her dreams

    8. And though I had no Gown of Gauze ‑No Ringlet, to my Hair,

      She didn't have the right things to become a ballerina

    9. In Pirouette to blanch a Troupe ‑Or lay a Prima, mad,

      She wanted to be a ballerina, but she couldn't

    10. Would put itself abroad

      If she had the right skills she could have went on to being a professional ballet dancer.

    11. That had I Ballet Knowledge

      She's saying if she had certain knowledge. So maybe she's blaming her skills on her lack of knowledge.

    12. But oftentimes, among my mind,A Glee possesseth me

      I think she means that she's sad but sometimes she becomes happy but it don't last long.

    13. No Man instructed me

      She sounds like she's independent and maybe she don't have a dad and thats why she's sad.

    14. I cannot dance opon my Toes

      I don't think she means she cant literally dance, I think she's using it as like she's broken and she's expressing her emotions through as she cant dance because dancing is connected to joy, so maybe she's sad.

  2. Apr 2021
    1. Thinking back, I realize that this could not have been the first time the word was used in my presence.

      That wasn't her first time hearing the word but the meaning of the word was different and because of that, she didn't know how to take it because the way her family used it was different than how the young boy used it.

    2. He snatched his test from me and spit out that word.

      Because this boy said this word he was probably raised around the word and because of that it shaped his reality. And how she had never heard that word shows her reality. And this relates back to the last paragraph when she wrote,"And building from the meanings of what we hear, we order reality."

    3. And building from the meanings of what we hear, we order reality.

      What words we are raised around and how the words are used in our life determines how we use them and what we know about that word determines our reality, but our reality of something may be different than another persons reality.

    4. Dialogue achieves its power in the dynamics of a fleeting moment

      Dialogue is more powerful than spoken words because of who is saying it, what is being said, and how they are saying it.

    1. Is baited by the fickle fruit, declare

      Is he being tempted by the fruits of life?

    2. Make plain the reason tortured Tantalus

      He sounds like he's comparing his life to Tantalus. Almost like he's reaching for something in life but he'll never get to it.

    3. Why flesh that mirrors Him must some day die,

      He's questioning why we have to die. He's contemplating life

    4. The little buried mole continues blind,

      When he talks about how a mole digs through the ground, Is he talking about how he walks through life blinded like a mole.

    5. And did He stoop to quibble could tell why

      Quibble means to have an objection or a criticism. Whats being criticized?

    6. I doubt not God is good, well-meaning, kind,

      He believes in God and he believes that God is good and everything he does works for good

    1. ideological dichotomy

      This is defined as a sharp division of things or ideas into two contradictory parts.

    1. Its technique is a matter for educational experts, but its object is for the vision of seers.

      When he says that the object is for the vision of seers I see it as him saying that only the people who can imagine a better future and the determined ones will truly be able to accomplish this and they will be the ones to make a change

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    1. After all, who shall describe Beauty?

      I think beauty for him represents freedom and rights.

    2. Even as you visualize such ideals you know in your hearts that these are not the things you really want

      When he last asked the audience what they would do with their freedom he mentioned a lot of luxurious things and then when he mentions that this isn't what they really want, it shows how all they desire is freedom and the rights like everyone else.

    3. If you tonight suddenly should become full-fledged Americans; if your color faded, or the color line here in Chicago was miraculously forgotten

      When he talks about becoming an American I think he sees being American as a colorless person and theirs no lines that limit you to anything and thats why he wants to be American so he can be free.

    4. We want to be Americans, full-fledged Americans, with all the rights of other American citizens. But is that all?

      He desires to be an American with all the same rights that White Americans have, but I think its hard for him because he sees how history of America has been tragic to Black Americans and I think by him saying he wants to be an American he says he wants freedom but what America was and is, he doesn't want to be apart of that.