33 Matching Annotations
  1. Aug 2018
  2. www.swingvilles.com www.swingvilles.com
    1. Schedule: I'm not a big fan of the "NOUVEAU" button placed on the pictures. Could it be possible to have it more like a ribbon (as the image example I sent you)? Same for the colors on the levels added by you. I understand the meaning though. Would it be helpful to have me sending pictures for each boxes with everyhting on it (ribbon, colored frame,...) + respective details buttons?

    2. Could it be possible to justify the texts in general? (pop-ups, dances descriptions, etc...) So it has a classier outcome.

    3. n’est

      n'ait

    4. d’une

      d'un

    5. au

      aux

    6. et leurs

      et de leurs (add "de" in between)

    7. LES DANSES DE COUPLES LES DANSES DE COUPLES LES DANSES DE COUPLES LES DANSES DE COUPLES

      COUPLE (without the "s" at the end)

    8. Thématique

      Thématiques (add the "s" at the end)

    9. Illimité

      illimité (small "i" at the beginning cause the typo makes it hard to read with the 2 'l' afterward)

    10. Swing Lab

      SwingLab (no space between the 2 words)

    11. Détail du niveau

      "Détail du cours" (let's put this for that one). And right now it doesn't open any pop-up. Could it be possible to open a pop-up with the class description? (doesn't matter to me to have this repeated twice). I copy the text here to facilitate your task: Le Street Dance est un cours enfants (6 à 18 ans). Au sein de ce cours, nous y explorerons les danses urbaines des plus contemporaines (Hip Hop, Dance Hall, Afro,…) aux plus anciennes (Swing, Charleston, …). L’idée pour ce cours est de mélanger les tranches d’âge afin de proposer une experience enrichissante pour tout le monde (motivation pour les plus jeunes regardant les plus âgés et responsabilisation/parrainage pour les plus âgés envers les plus jeunes).

    12. Lindy hop 1

      Lindy Hop 1 (capital "H" for Hop)

    13. Lindy hop 2

      Lindy Hop 2 (capital "H" for Hop)

    14. Lindy hop 3

      Lindy Hop 3 (capital "H" for Hop)

    15. Danses de couples

      Danses de couple (without the "s" at the end)

    16. Lindy hop

      Lindy Hop (capital "H" for Hop)

    17. N

      n (small size instead of capital)

    18. Swing Lab

      SwingLab (without the space between the 2 words)

    19. N

      n (small size instead of capital)

    20. Accèss

      Accès (without the second "s" at the end)

    21. Avenue

      avenue (small letter "a")

    22. 3400

      34000 (one zero extra)

    23. Vous n’en avez

      Vous n'avez (scratching the "en")

    24. Ce

      ce (small "c")

    25. Lindy Hop , sortez

      (...) Lindy Hop. Vous sortez(...) (separate the long sentence in two sentences)

    26. Register now

      S'inscrire

    27. Register now

      S'inscrire

    28. Abonnenments

      Abonnements

    29. The top banner is cropped (the tagline is hidden). I understand this would be the case on the mobile version. But the tagline is just a little bit there on the web version. I wonder if that's normal?

    30. Intermediarie

      Intermédiaire

    31. Intermédiarie

      Intermédiaire

    32. Intermédiarie

      Intermédiaire

    33. Les Cours Planning Tarifs Les Salles Inscriptions

      I would like to have the menu in the order of the scrolling:

      • Planning
      • Les Cours
      • Tarifs
      • Les Salles