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How would it feel to… Discover new areas of interest relating to your heritage? Share your heritage with your extended family and friends by learning new recipes and techniques? Connect with others who are also passionate about their Hungarian heritage? Grow in your knowledge about Hungarian heritage and culture and be able to share with your family members? Develop new skills and interests that connect you to your heritage?
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People all around the world are cooking heritage foods, studying the language, planning trips to Hungary (or former territories of Hungary) to see their ancestral villages, and learning all they can about Hungarian heritage. Our sessions are designed to help you learn more about those things that interest you most and introduce you to some things you might not be aware of!
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How the Hungarian Heritage Expo came to be… For years I have been thinking about how to bring people together for an opportunity to learn more about their heritage. However, finding the space and coordinating attendees from around the United States and having the calendars line up for participants and attendees was a daunting task. In my work I meet so many amazing people who love their Hungarian heritage and are committed to passing it on. While we won’t be in person, we will have opportunities to connect with one another. And we’ll have the opportunity to learn from the presenters and be encouraged and inspired by them! #text-732941609 { text-align: center; }
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Are you… Searching for ways to dig deeper into your Hungarian heritage? Tired of feeling like you are doing this all on your own? Looking to connect with others to hear their stories and to share yours? Wondering if anyone in your family is paying attention to all of this “Hungarian stuff?” (By the way, they are!) Distracted by all the chatter and criticism on social media when people are just trying to make a connection to their heritage? Be a part of the Hungarian Heritage Expo!
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Let’s face it, growing up outside of Hungary means there are things we have missed out on. But that doesn’t mean we can’t learn about and incorporate these traditions into our lives! The Hungarian Heritage Expo is a great way to learn about a variety of things that relate to Hungarian heritage and culture. Pick those things that resonate with you and add them into your life — it’s not too late!
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YOU'RE READY TO START PLANNING FOR YOUR MOST PROFITABLE HOLIDAY SEASON YET. You deserve to have access to the most crucial information for running and scaling your business. At Laser Maker Con: Holiday Hustle Edition, we're committed to providing you with the tools, strategies, and insights you need to succeed. Sign up now and let's make this holiday season your most profitable yet!
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I know firsthand what it's like to miss out on the holidays because I was too busy with work and overwhelmed by holiday orders. That's why I'm hosting the Laser Maker Con - Holiday Hustle Edition. This conference is all about helping laser engraving businesses prepare for the holiday rush so that you can not only have a successful Q4 but also enjoy the season yourself. Through comprehensive tutorials, hands-on projects, and expert guidance, the LMK speakers are here to support you every step of the way.
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