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www.theherbalistspath.com www.theherbalistspath.com
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natural minded
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appointments
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sick-care trap
what does this mean?
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drug store
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popping the latest and greatest protein powder into your smoothie each day. Or loading that fancy diffuser up, so the good smells permeate your home.
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video
Great smile & tone. Make clear whether the toolkit is the same as the evergreen ticket. And whether FB group is for upsell only or all attendees Shorten explanation of the upsell - go into more detail about that on the all access pass page
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Feb 27- March 1st
Be consistent on how you write dates
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knithappysummit.com knithappysummit.com
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Your free ticket is on its way to your inbox!But wait …If you’re excited about theKnit Happy! Summityou will love the VIP All-Access Pass!$300+ worth of knitting workshops, courses, your ticket to the VIP-only Stitch Sessions on Zoom, knitting patterns, and amazing resources that will help you take your passion for knitting to the next level!
Great intro and well done on following the template!
Are you able to add a progress bar at the top of the page?
Could you get even more specific on your summit goal here, rather than "next level"? See some of your copy lower down. Is it about: skills, professionalism, doing things they thought they couldn't, confidence... You have great copy on the page, and next level is fine, but a little generic.
What about something like "become the confident knitter you've always wanted to be"
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for the next 30 minutes!
Are you able to add a countdown timer?
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multiple businesses
Are you adding bonuses from other speakers?
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$[####]
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Presentations are free for 48 hours to keep us all taking action together and to keep the feel similar to an in-person event where you’d have to attend live.
I really like this wording!
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$[####]
update with the total $ value
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February 14
As per other box: just check all your dates are consistent
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February 14th
Check your dates are consistent across the page
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If you need help filling in this form or you have questions, contact our team at knithappy@doublethestitches.com
You noted a question about having the checkout with 2 payment options in 1 thrivecart checkout. I'll just focus on copy here, so please go ahead and ask this Q on Slack or on a call :)
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On the Saturday evening of the Summit, we’ll have a live Knit Night on Zoom where you’ll have a chance to hang out and virtually knit alongside Summit Speakers and fellow VIP attendees. When you upgrade your ticket, you’ll receive your exclusive Zoom link to join us. Connect with fellow passionate knitters from your favorite comfy knitting spot in your most comfy clothes!
Shorten this - you mention the full details of how to access above so just something like "Come hang out and virtually knit alongside summit speakers and fellow VIP attendees from your favorite comfy knitting spot."
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February 14 -
I think you wrote Feb 15 above?
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UPGRADE MY TICKET NOW!
Add the reduced price (full price in strike through) either in the button or above it
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GET THE VIP ALL-ACCESS PASS NOW!
Add the discounted price here, with the full price in strike through
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Jump to:Membership Trial | Knitting Workshops | Patterns & eBooks | Resources
Great having these categories!
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Light Bulb Moments
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help you knit the projects you've been dreaming of creating!
Great language
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Master new skills & take your passion
Great language
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springvegetablegardeningsummit.com springvegetablegardeningsummit.com
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Free TicketYou've already grabbed your free ticket! If you don't do anything else, this is what you'll get:Access to each presentation for 24 hours Access to the free, private Facebook groupInstant and ongoing access to all presentationsBonus Live Session - Gardening Q&A30-day free trial in the Zone 9 Garden ClubChances to win VIP-exclusive prizes$700+ in speaker bonusesSeeds lists, gardening workbooks, and workbooksAll-Access Pass
These boxes are great. Move them above the FAQ
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over $2000
keep the value consistent
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here
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over $700
I would either say "an extra" or put a dollar value on the 3 items above, otherwise it feels inconsistent to the reader (she said 2500 at the top, now she's saying 700)
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Exclusive Access to a Live Gardening Q&A
Be consistent whether it's just one live or more (your images say plural)
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$1600
Keep the $ value consistent throughout the page (you said $2500 higher up)
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successful
Is this the main benefit of the summit? i.e. learning what mistakes to avoid, plants not dying on you, picking the right thing to plant etc. If so, use this concept in the first paragraph, rather than 'fast progress'
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Watch this video to learn more!
Great having a video :) and well done on it! I would just edit as follows: - no need to say you don't know what all the bonuses are yet - no need to repeat why you want them to get the pass and the benefits in your last section of the video (see the video script template)
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make fast progress toward growing
Is this the main benefit of the summit, or is it about being simpler or less overwhelming (as you say in your video below)?
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all-access perks such as
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