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Access to all presentations by top researchers studying the neuroscience of yoga ($5000+ value)
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empowering knowledge about how yoga affects the brain
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My mission is to bridge the yoga world and the neuroscience world by connecting scientists and yogis, replicating hands-on neuroscience experiments for learners, and sharing resources.
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expand your practice, inspire your personal growth and leave you in awe
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making this an incredible library of knowledge. All presentations with down-to-earth scientists, yoga classes with top teachers, recordings of Q&A sessions, workbooks, experiments, and quizzes are available.
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Build your library over time or apply your subscription fees toward Lifetime-Access Passes for continuing education credits.
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Workbooks and quizzes to guide your learning, and turn passive listening into active learning
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I am dedicated to helping you embody wealth consciousness and making the process as easy as possible. To help, you’ll hear about my Wealth Uplevel Program here and there throughout the event. On the final day, one lucky (and engaged) attendee will be selected to win a full scholarship and have instant access to 9 powerful modules, Live calls, and group support to make embodying and creating wealth EASY. Stay tuned for details and your chance to apply!
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He received his Bachelor’s of Music in Music Education from Ohio Wesleyan University and his Master's of Music in Music Education degree with a Kodály emphasis from Capital University.
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Middle School Music Summit™
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If you still have questions, we encourage you to go ahead and sign up. What do you have to lose - Your ticket is FREE! 😁 Even learning one tip will be worth more than the cost (FREE) of admission. 🙌 Your questions will likely be answered during the event or in the Facebook community, which you’ll be able to join right away after grabbing your free ticket. However, if you need to ask us a question before registering, feel free to send us an email at mistymiller@tptsellertipsandadvice.com.
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Learn how to get more eyes on your TPT store, and drive traffic that will help boost your sales during this free 4-day event for teacher sellers.
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You don’t need another summit teaching you the basics of selling on TPT or ideas that will take you months to implement. The Teacher Seller GROWTH Summit was specifically created for TPT Sellers like you.
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some of the things I've learned along the way.💡I believe in finding your passion. 💡I believe in conquering your fears. 💡I believe in being positive & persevering through what life hands you.
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I love collaborating with expert educators in the world of “student success strategies” and am super psyched about our first annual Art of Motivating Students Summit!
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On your next trip to Yellowstone, you could just miss out on one-in-a-lifetime photo opps. Or you could sign up for Eavesdropping on Wild Conversations and let the animals tell you exactly where you need to be for the sighting of a lifetime.
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100% Satisfaction Guarantee for 30-Days
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Taking this course in person would cost up to $1,000 plus any travel expenses.
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You’ll start to notice the signals the animals have always been putting out and start to understand the natural world in a way that was lost to you before. You’ll feel confident as you’re able to easily understand wildlife. Your friends will ask how you got that photo of a lifetime and you’ll be able to tell them, “The crows told me where to stand.” Even if you’ve never been hiking or you're an experienced birder or photographer, Eavesdropping On Wild Conversations can deliver the ancient ability to understand animals.
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learn to build a relationship with wild animals without a lifetime of learning.
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How fun and unique methods of journaling and sketching can boost your observation skills while documenting your experiences.
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You’ll also get to see real pages from sketchbooks, hear the exact bird call in question, examine actual photos to pinpoint the signals you’re looking for, and review real video examples of communication unfolding so you’re confident that you understand what you’re observing.
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Module 6: Becoming Part of Nature
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If you're ready to finally develop an intimate understanding of wild animals, this course is for you.
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Decoding the Secrets of Animal Language for Ultimate Wildlife Encounters
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Animals are communicating around you, all the time. This is the only program that shows you step by step how to tune into what they’re saying, join the conversation, and transform your relationship with wild animals and the natural world.
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You want to know their movements and habits. You want to feel connected to nature and be at home in the wild. You want to understand animal behavior and what they’re telling you.
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Your Montessori Hub for Parents & Educators to equip you with practical and high quality Montessori resources to help you nurture the limitless potential of every child.
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Say goodbye to parenting or teaching overwhelm and hello to empowered guidance
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Are you feeling alone in your quest to navigate challenging behavior, and effectively support your child’s holistic development? Are those moments of doubt creeping in, making you wonder if you’re truly doing the best for your children or students?I understand the frustration of not having easy access to quality Montessori resources and the feeling of isolation in this journey. But it doesn’t have to be this way.
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Hi, I'm Lucie.
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Start with a $7 trial to get full access to our Montessori resources and community. This brief period allows you to fully experience our support and educational materials, ensuring it’s the right fit for your family‘s journey.
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The Childhood Potential Club is here to support you to help your children thrive!
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Check out the incredible lineup of speakers you will learn from in the Stop the Clock Summit
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