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  1. Mar 2016
    1. We're going to make a great country again. We're going to start winning again. We're going to win a lot, it's going to be a big difference, believe me. It's going to be a big difference.

      Trump uses his whole introduction on explaining how terrible America is right now. I don't think this is the best way to get Americans' support. Most Americans are very proud of their country and will not hear it spoken ill of. But because he ends it saying that he will fix all of this and "make America great again", he will most likely get the votes of those who agree with him and want a more traditional/old fashioned America.

    2. Here, Texas provided my family with hope. Here, my mom became the first in her family ever to go to college. Here, my dad fled Cuba and washed dishes, making 50 cents an hour to pay his way through the University of Texas. I graduated from high school at Second Baptist not too far away from here.

      Cruz is using ethos to show that he is a true Texan, and he is one of them. He proves that he is proud of his state and will continue to fight for their rights as well as the rights of the rest of America.

    3. Thirty-six years ago, Ronald Reagan and George H.W. Bush began the Reagan Revolution. For a generation, they defined conservatism as limited government and free enterprise and a strong national defense. But they also appealed to our hopes and our dreams.

      Rubio is using logos to gain support. He proves that he has knowledge about American political history, and he is planning on using this to run America in the greates way possible.

    4. Well, you know, on the way over here, even getting ready earlier and sitting in the green room and watching the early coverage, you know, my father carried mail on his back and his father was a coal miner and my mother's mother was an immigrant, could barely speak English. And I'm standing on this stage. It's pretty remarkable.

      Kasich is using pathos and ethos to make himself relatable. He is telling the voters about how he went through a lot, and he knows what its like to work for what you have. He also brings out the patriotic feeling in people by telling his story of the American dream that says you can become anything you want with enough hard work.

    5. It's not about us, it's about the American people.

      Carson is smart to include this in his introduction. It proves that he is not running for President for personal gain but to improve America and the life of the average American.

    1. I think America can only live up to its potential when we make sure that every American has a chance to live up to his or her potential. That will be my mission as president. And I think together we will make progress.

      Hillary Clinton ends her opening statement in a very American way. She talks about how we can make America live up to its greatness, and how this can only be done if everyone is given the chance to thrive. Using pathos like this she brings out the patriotic feeling that is so strong for many Americans. This is a helpful tool to gain votes from anyone, but I think maybe she did it to get some respect from the "make America great" part of the republican party and their voters.

    2. But I want to go further. I want to tackle those barriers that stand in the way of too many Americans right now. African-Americans who face discrimination in the job market, education, housing, and the criminal justice system. Hardworking immigrant families living in fear, who should be brought out of the shadows so they and their children can have a better future. Guaranteeing that women’s work finally gets the pay, the equal pay that we deserve.

      Here Clinton wants to show that she will do more than what is necessary. She gives attention to minorities, promising to help with the difficulties so many have to face everyday. This will engage those communities and gain her votes.

    3. SANDERS: And aligned with a corrupt campaign finance system is a rigged economy. And that’s an economy where ordinary Americans are working longer hours for low wagers. They are worried to death about the future of their kids. And yet they are seeing almost all new income and all new wealth going to the top 1 percent. And then in addition to that, the American people are looking around and they see a broken criminal justice system. They see more people in jail in the United States of America than any other country on earth, 2.2 million. We’re spending $80 billion a year locking up fellow Americans. They see kids getting arrested for marijuana, getting in prison, getting a criminal record, while they see executives on Wall Street who pay billions of dollars in settlements and get no prosecution at all. No criminal records for them. I think what our campaign is indicating is that the American people are tired of establishment politics, tired of establishment economics. They want a political revolution in which millions of Americans stand up, come together, not let the Trumps of the world divide us, and say, you know what, in this great country, we need a government that represents all of us, not just a handful of wealthy campaign contributors. Thank you.

      Sanders is using pathos to make the voters like him again. He tells a story that all ordinary American can relate to, and when they hear him understand and know how they feel, it makes him relatable and gives them hope that he will actually fix the things they worry about.

    4. And what has happened is, I think, the American people have responded to a series of basic truths, and that is that we have today a campaign finance system which is corrupt, which is undermining American democracy, which allows Wall Street and billionaires to pour huge sums of money into the political process to elect the candidates of their choice.

      This is something a lot of Americans have a problem with and by brining it up Sanders prove that he does not support a system like that, by doing this he gains support of those who are bothered by how much money drives elections.

    5. And when it began, we had no political organization, no money, and not much name recognition outside of the state of Vermont.

      Sanders is using pathos to make himself seem more relatable to the audience (the voter). He is doing it by showing them that he had the same starting materials as anyone else would and he knows what its like to be "just a normal person".

    6. WOODRUFF: Good evening, and thank you. We are happy to welcome you to Milwaukee for this Democratic debate.

      In this introduction Woodruff is taking care of the formal introduction of todays event and thanks the people making it possible. Without this, the whole debate would've started off on an unprofessional note.

    1. Genetically Modified Organisms (GMOs): Transgenic Crops and Recombinant DNA Technology

      Phillips, T. (2008) Genetically modified organisms (GMOs): Transgenic crops and recombinant DNA technology. Nature Education 1(1):213

    2. Theresa Phillips, Ph.D

      Doctor Philips has a wealth of knowledge in this field. Her sources for this article are also from respected publishers and authors. This all adds to her credibility for this topic and article.

    3. Faster maturation

      At this point does genetic modification become inhumane? Other documentaries point out inhumane living conditions of animals, how would this play a role in that?

    4. Unfortunately, seeds containing genes for recombinant proteins can cause unintentional spread of recombinant genes or exposure of non-target organisms to new toxic compounds in the environment.

      Philips is identifying the risks associated with GMOs, without "bashing" them, it shows that she is seeing the topic from a unbiased perspective.

    5. Then, in 1986, a publication by the Organization for Economic Cooperation and Development (OECD), called "Recombinant DNA Safety Considerations," became the first intergovernmental document to address issues surrounding the use of GMOs. This document recommended that risk assessments be performed on a case-by-case basis. Since then, the case-by-case approach to risk assessment for genetically modified products has been widely accepted; however, the U.S. has generally taken a product-based approach to assessment, whereas the European approach is more process based (Devos et al., 2007). Although in the past, thorough regulation was lacking in many countries, governments worldwide are now meeting the demands of the public and implementing stricter testing and labeling requirements for genetically modified crops.

      This sort of address the question I had about widespread adoption of GMOs. Since there are so many different takes on the positives and negatives surrounding GMOs, we would need something to try and educate people about them.

    6. Increased Research and Improved Safety Go Hand in Hand

      Philips is saying that with proper research and diligence that the use of GMOs can be safely commercialized. This doesn't seem too bias, because she doesn't immediately say GMOs are going to be a big success or failure.

    7. History of International Regulations for GMO Research and Development

      Would the history and the perception of GMOs effect its widespread adoption in the future? Or are the use of GMOs just so necessary, the benefits outweigh the consequences?

    8. Risks and Controversies Surrounding the Use of GMOs

      This is a good way to show the downsides of the GMOs, but do the positives outweigh the negatives? The author is both showing the positives and negatives of the use of GMOs.

    9. Vitamin enrichment

      The introduction of "Golden Rice" has the advantage of having a high amount of Vitamin A in it that normal rice, why wouldn't more people want to eat it?

    10. This is a good question to pose, if people already get injected with a low dose of a disease, what is the problem with genetic modification? Also it is a good way to get the reader engaged, because of the great question it poses.

    1. Belyy, Vladislav, and Ahmet Yildiz. "Processive cytoskeletal motors studied with single-molecule fluorescence techniques." FEBS letters 588.19 (2014): 3520-3525.

    2. Crystallographic work later showed that this inhibition occurs via a tail-mediated crosslinking of the two motor domains, preventing the separation of the two heads required for neck linker undocking [12]. Similar autoinhibitory mechanisms appear to be present in kinesin-2 [13], kinesin-3 [14], and myosin V [15], [16] and [17] motors.

      Would the inhibition of the motor domains effect the organism as a hole? What would be the effects of inhibition on a consumer product? Would there be any adverse side effects?

    3. Observing the motors directly in real time allows for measurement of a number of fundamental properties.

      A detailed measurement like this will reveal information useful to learn about how kinesin, dyenin, and myosin move. All of the evidence and explanations for this is included in the article as well as citations to where the information can be found and explained in more detail.

    4. For a more detailed understanding of the motor’s mechanism, it is invaluable to know its stepping pattern – the manner in which the heads move with respect to one another as the motor walks down its track.

      The authors claim that it is extremely important to understand how cytoskeletons move along their paths. By knowing more about how they move, we can find out how speed as well as number of steps affects mechanisms. This article will explain and explore how this works to give us a better understanding of how and why it works the way it does.

    5. Vladislav Belyya, Ahmet Yildiz

      Both of the authors of this article are credible writers. They are both part of physics and biology departments at Berkeley University in California. Their degrees prove that they know what they are taking about.

    6.  

      This article is posted on an online database called www.sciencedirect.com. This helps prove the credibility of the article because this website only posts scholarly articles and book chapters related to scientific topics.

    7. Processive cytoskeletal motors studied with single-molecule fluorescence techniques

      The audience for this article would be people interested in the topic with previous information about the subject. It is expected that the audience already knows the basics of the mechanisms studied. This is necessary to be able to explain a topic like this in a way detailed enough to prove and explain its points. As this is a strictly scientific article there is no bias, and the authors are just presenting and explaining the facts.

    1. GloFish are the first transgenic animals available to the American public. But what's the biotechnology behind them?

      Pray, L. (2008) Recombinant DNA technology and transgenic animals. Nature Education 1(1):51

    2. hormones that were once isolated only in small amounts from human cadavers can now be mass-produced by genetically engineered cells

      What are the ethics behind this? Once again are we taking the role of God a little too far? However, if their practical benefits outweigh the consequence, would it be worth it then?

    3. Currently, GloFish are the only recombinant-DNA animal that has been approved for human "use" by the U.S. Food and Drug Administration. Their approval has raised important questions about whether, and to what extent, genetically modified animals should be made available to consumers.

      Why would they not want them to be available to the general public? I feel as if, when there are more people being able to look and study them, only more knowledge will come of it.

    4. A transgenic, or genetically modified, organism is one that has been altered through recombinant DNA technology, which involves either the combining of DNA from different genomes or the insertion of foreign DNA into a genome

      Could we be able to recombine plant genes with an animal or vis versa? Would this be taking the role of playing God too far?

    5. Leslie Pray, Ph.D. 

      The author of this article, Doctor Leslie Pray, proves the credibility of her article by citing and referring to scientific articles. Her doctorate give not only her but also her writing credibility.

  2. Feb 2016
    1. Everyone deserves to know what's in their food so they can make informed decisions about what to feed themselves and their families.

      This liberal news source's article on gene modified organisms takes a different stand than the conservative article. Right from the start the language and writing style gives away that the author of the article does not think highly of GMO's or at least that she is for labeling of them. It is made to seem that rights are being taken away from us by there not being mandatory labeling of gene modified food. The article is ended by telling us that labeling is common sense, and that anyone not labeling their products are being dumb and disrespectful.

    1. In an interview on TheBlaze Radio, Lempert discussed the FDA’s recent approval of a genetically modified salmon that grows twice as fast and requires 25 percent less food as a typical salmon.

      In this article on genetically modified organisms published by a conservative news source, the author Mike Opelka keeps his writing neutral. It starts off with a positive statement about GMO's making me think it would be a pro GMO article, but overall it is informative and includes statements about different stores not carrying gene modified products. I was expecting a positive or at least not negative attitude towards GMO's from the conservative news source, but I am glad to say the article was written in a way that didn't make me feel like they were pushing GMO's onto me.

    1. When we sat down to talk aboutSerial, it was ethicalloopholes like this one that struck us the most. What westarted to realize is that Koenig signals her findings in theface of uncertainty in a very different way than we do inthe academy. Ultimately, we wondered if these questions ofethics, of the politics of representation, of self-reflexivity—all the shortcuts Koenig took that we wouldn’t—might bepart of the reason why an academic version ofSerialmightnot ever be as popular.

      This is a very good point. It is not likely that Serial would be as popular if it was executed in a more academic form. The casual style and language from the podcast is part of what keeps people interested. You can even notice that reading this article, it is a lot harder to stay focused and actually understand what is being said when the language is more complicated. This makes one lose interest a lot faster than when listening to an easy going podcast like Serial.

    2. JLA:How would you describe your approach to visualanthropology? Where did it come from? How were youtrained?

      All of the questions being asked are very good. They lead to good, descriptive answers. Its important to ask questions that are open and that can not be answered in short sentences.

    3. REFERENCES CITED

      All references are cited for this article, this is a part of proving it is a scholarly article.

    4. Erica Lehrer is a sociocultural anthropologist and curator. She iscurrently an associate professor and the Canada Research Chair inMuseum and Heritage Studies in the departments of History andSociology-Anthropology at Concordia University, Montreal.

      This article is written by a professor and is a scholarly article. The article's language is technical and everything is based of off research.

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    1. This interview is the first time Jay has spoken publicly about events surrounding Lee’s death and the trial that ended in Syed’s conviction.

      This is a popular source. I know this because it is an interview published on theintercept.com. It is written in an easy-to-read language, and is meant for the general public/those interested in Hae Min Lee's murder.

    2. The star witness at Syed’s trial was Jay Wilds, a former classmate who testified that he helped Syed dispose of Lee’s body. Jay’s testimony was critical to the state’s case; indeed, without his testimony it’s virtually impossible that the state could have even brought Syed to trial.

      In this paragraph Jay comes of as the good guy, almost heroic. "Without him they would not have been able to catch the murderer" is what it says to me. Knowing the story I already have my own opinion of Jay, but if this was the first time I heard of this case, this paragraph would make me think highly of Jay.

    1. He said he did have doubts about Adnan’s claim of innocence but that he definitely thought there was something “off” about this case. That we still don’t know what happened in this murder. We still don’t have the true story.

      It is clear that Jim Trainum does not believe Jays story. He thinks they shut down the case before it got too complicated. The fact that he is a real detective and knows how the system works, makes the audience believe him when he tells that this is not an uncommon thing and that taking "the easy way out" si not a rare thing to see in the business.

    2. But, see-- I don’t get that. I mean that’s like what my father always used to always say, “all facts are friendly.”

      Koenigs belief that "all facts are friendly" goes against what Trainum is saying about building your case. It makes her seem very neutral and like she truly want to know the truth even if she doesnt like it.

    3. The pre-interview was when the cops and the witness kind of iron out the statement so it can be taped as a coherent thing.

      This explanation is very helpful in understanding what she is talking about for those of us who are not familiar with the process. It also proves that she knows what she is talking about, which gives her credibility.

    4.   He puts it on who they consider to be the logical suspect.

      The way Jim says this makes it seem like he think convicting Adnan was just the simplest way to solve the case and maybe not the right decision.

    5. A jurisdiction not too different from Baltimore.

      Koenig proves that Trainum is fit for the job and has experience with similar cases.

    6.   Jim Trainum, and we’ve-- we hired you, because unlike me, you’re a real detective.

      Here Koenig is giving credibility to Jim Trainum, making sure it is clear that he is the expert and he will be able to investigate the case on a higher level than Sarah.

    1. Best of social media

      This fun add on helps catch the attention of people who does not have a big interest in the sport, but enjoys the social aspect.

    2. Key points

      All the background information given helps paint the whole picture, and makes it more interesting and understandable for readers that don't usually follow sports.

    3. It's a third Super Bowl title for the Broncos, while for the Panthers, the wait for their first goes on.

      A nice way of summing up an informative article about this weekends big football game.

    4. But Newton was smothered by the Broncos defence and gave up three turnovers - including one that led to a touchdown. if (window.bbcdotcom && bbcdotcom.slot) { bbcdotcom.slot("mpu", [1,2,3]); } if (window.bbcdotcom && bbcdotcom.show) { bbcdotcom.show(); }

      The way this is written makes the article more directed towards fans of the Denver Broncos. I say this based on the authors use of the word "smothered". Another more neutral word could have been used, but because more Broncos fans will read this article than Panthers fans it is a nice way of "hyping up" the winning team.

    5. By James Gheerbrant BBC Sport

      BBC is a well known news outlet, and would not be able to get away with printing false information. This makes me believe this is a credible author.

    6. Super Bowl 50: Denver Broncos beat Carolina Panthers

      The very simple, yet explaining title gives the impression that this article will give me the facts I need to know about this event.

    1. I’ve got this thing in my head that I’ll catch him in a lie. Maybe just a tiny, meaningless lie, and that’s going to be his tell, and he’ll be caught.

      Here Koenig shows her own personal wish in this case. She wants to catch Adnan in a lie. Nad if she thinks she can catch him lying, that must mean she believes he isn't innocent.

    2. What doesn’t make sense, if Nisha is saying this call happened at the video store, is that Jay didn’t have that job yet on January 13.

      Here Koenig is using straight facts to prove her point. In a case like this; opinion and interpretation plays a big part, but you can't deny hard facts.

    3. Then, you know how Adnan says he can’t remember much at all about the day Hae went missing?

      By using a friendly tone like this, like it is an ongoing conversation between Koenig and the audience, Sarah is able wheel us back into the story by bringing up points from the first episode. It helps the listener feel engaged in Adnans story.

    4. Over the past few weeks, I’ve been holding up bits of evidence here and there that look bad for Adnan. Today, I’m just going to lay out the rest.

      In this sentence Koenig proves both that she might have been bias in the past, and that even though she favors Adnan she is not going to withhold facts. This proves that even though it is hard to stay neutral in a case like this it is important to let the facts speak for themselves and to not leave out anything.

    5. This is a Global-Tel link prepaid call from Adnan Syed an inmate at a Maryland Correctional facility…

      Including this automatic message instantly puts us in the middle of the situation. It makes a point of Adnan actually being in prison for what happened, and it points out the importance of actually figuring out what happened.

    1. They ditch Hae's car at the I-70 Park and Ride. And then, to hear Jay tell it, they just kind of tool around Baltimore County

      A map or a visualization of where they went, with the corresponding times, would be nice, it would give the audience a sense of setting and direction. This would just lead to a more immersive reading for the audience.

    2. After track practice, Jay picks Adnan up again

      The constant "Narrative" voice of Koenig helps keep a timeline for the reader. When finishing each passage, it is nice to have a clear progression in the story line. It allows the reader to stay more engaged in the reading, because they are able to see the clear progression to the next scene of the podcast.

    3. Just a warning that the tape is a little upsetting to hear in parts.

      The vocabulary gives you a sense of how the interrogation went but, I wish there was more imagery. For example, to give details about the way Jay and the detective reacted to each other; such as describing tone, setting, mood, etc.

    4. They weren't super close, but they had mutual friends. Jay sold weed, and he and Adnan smoked together

      The author is able to connect / appeal to a younger audience with the use of a more "laid back" vocabulary. This helps hold the attention of the audience, because the diction is more relatable.

    5. for 21 minutes after school one day in 1999

      Koenig immediately gives you the details to the murder, which grabs the audience's attention. The use of flashback sets up the scene nicely and gives the proper introduction into the story.

  3. Jan 2016