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  1. Dec 2017
    1. Kurt

      That loneliness point was interesting... And Tim's point about how it's harder to do this because others don't seem to be doing it (so that sometimes makes me feel like "What's the point?"). Good revelations, hard questions in this video.

    2. sharing economy

      So troubling how this is getting corporatized, though. Uber is a great example of a private corporation using the ideals of the sharing economy to market a business that is essentially bad for both labor and for public infrastructure....

    3. That wasn’t the case, as Whitman explained.

      I love this not only because your perspective shifted a bit, but because it demonstrates how primary research like interviews can yield such valuable points. It's in the conversation with Steve-- the dialogue-- that your ideas begin to expand. So different from what you get from a static text...

    4. “If young people are  learning about conservation issues exclusively via the Discovery Channel, or Planet Earth DVDS, their ability to engage with nature may be limited”

      So interesting to think about the distinction between education and experience. Or maybe better: the distinction between secondary learning and primary learning. Interesting that mediated nature doesn't have the same effects on us as umediated or directly experienced nature... And that makes me wonder about all education, actually, and how applied experiences "in the field" matter to learning and to action.

    5. no direct link between values and action

      WHAT??? No way. Really?? No direct link at all?

    6. a place of altruistic concern

      Though it seems sort of in keeping with the idea of sustainability: it maybe can't be altruism as much as balance. What is good for humans is also good for the planet, so getting to a point where humans see what is better for ourselves is the tricky part...

    7. 2/3 of respondents

      Are we talking millennials here? If so, pretty impressive given the labor markets and debt that they have to cope with...

    8. Only about a third of us ages 25 to 32 have a bachelor’s degree,

      Wow-- sobering statistic...

    9. selfie with a sheep)…

      Resisting ruge to google....

    10. How do we reach something that is process-oriented? How do we know when we’ve arrived? It’s this lack of ‘quantifiability’ that makes it difficult to market sustainability as an idea because there’s no concrete way to measure our success.

      Wow this is just so interesting, and spot on in my experience in many related arenas. Especially when funding is at stake, we are generally asked to produce results, prove success, find solutions, fix problems. But as you suggest, with complex problems sometimes the "payoffs" will likely be more process than product, and the assessments and "proof" will not be as sexy as funders would like... Tough problem...

    11. Those processes can survive disruption better because there’s more accountability in the sources of the water, and we wouldn’t be putting our faith in nonrenewable sources.

      Well explained!

    12. Many followed in Carson’s footsteps, warning through the use of books, documentaries, and more recently, Facebook advertisements. The first Earth Day in 1970 was a culmination of all of these ideas and created an impetus for future policies, like the Clean Air and Water Act, the Endangered Species Act, and more recently, regulations in the EPA. Since then, sustainability has taken a front seat, and the discussion of the term and its usage is ubiquitous.

      Thinking there are lots more opportunities for hyperlinks...

    13. as industry picked up

      So interesting to think about how industrialization and sustainability are conceptually and historically linked...

    14. Considering environmental sustainability without development is like building a house in a flood zone; there’s an obvious conflict of interest, one that would be convenient to ignore.

      Nice metaphor. Helpfully explained.

    15. society, the economy, and the environment.

      Helpful-- never heard this before, and could be useful to me even in thinking of HigherEd initiatives and building sustainable public higher ed models, so thank you!

    16. Plymouth State’s Dr. Brian Eisenhauer

      I love the way you make use of local expertise in your research as well...

    17. education is what leads people out of static ways of thinking

      Wow that is an awesome definition.

    18. Key terms are hyperlinked to a glossary here*

      I'd add the word "millennial" to the glossary....

    19. Table of Contents:

      I think the TOC is somewhat cumbersome since it's not clickable...

      I didn't check this one, but there are millions of help sites like this out there that could help you on this: http://www.wpbeginner.com/plugins/how-to-create-a-table-of-content-in-wordpress-posts-and-pages/

    1. AXON could be a possible way to make money in the near future if more analysis of it is complete.

      Ok, I am looking for one more paragraph about how individual investors-- without huge resources and interdisciplinary teams-- can to the kind of analysis you have done without access to either. To balance your introduction, maybe a bit more of a conclusion that steps back from the specific companies to talk more about how these strategies can translate into steps for individuals. You do offer that a bit, but then by ending with the specific companies, you sort of leave me feeling like we don't have closure.

    2. Which is why investing is entirely a multidisciplinary and often times interdisciplinary subject

      Yes, this paper has really demonstrated this beautifully.

    3. burring

      typo

    4. In the neurodegenerative therapeutic industry

      I am also noticing how helpful it is to be an interdisciplinarian for this work. You are really learning the basics of what these companies do, and counting on that basic literacy to be able to paint a picture and a trajectory.

    5. Maybe one day WM can invest in something like this to make them a more interesting or maybe even more profitable company.

      Someday maybe this post will be evidence of how everyone should have listened to you!

    6. an economic moat

      Ha! I know what this is from reading your other posts! Makes me feel smart!

    7. I would not want to buy this company unless at a far discounted price from their market price.

      This makes good sense, and so well explained!

    8. one thousand hours

      Wow-- yes I can see the trouble for a regular individual investor like me...

    9. Martin Shkreli’s approach

      Ok, so I definitely have a freaky cringe when I see his name because of ethical concerns over drug price gouging. But I am sticking with you! Wondering if you'll talk about his bad press, or just work with his model and leave all that aside?

    10. market capitalization = shares outstanding * share price (Bodie 2017) enterprise value = market capitalization – cash + debt (Bodie 2017) net present value = (cash flow / (1 + discount rate) ^ 1 + (cash flow / (1 + discount rate) ^ 2 +…. (cash flow / (1 + discount rate) ^ t (Bodie 2017)

      Ok if you are writing for a general audience, you will need more English here. This isn't fully clear to beginners...so depends on who you want to be your audience here.

    11. twenty percent returns

      whoa

    12. most countries gross domestic product passes through different stock exchanges everyday

      I never really knew this-- quite fascinating, and really shows the power of the exchanges...wow.

    1. But the greatest Discipline is a generous helping of curiosity.

      THIS SHOULD BE OUR PROGRAM T-SHIRT AND I AM NOT KIDDING!

    2. This protects the original image as well as offers the artist a chance to change the position of the text and indication lines.

      Seems like something I see all the time now in anatomy books...

    3. thinker form

      ???

    4. Today, the officials of the Univerisity of Vienna are attempting to retrace the past and seeking buried information, in hopes that they might aid the next generation to approach these atrocities. Third generation students and scholars are morally outraged and seeking full access to the documents and locations of the victims’ remains. They hope to properly bury the victims and memorialize them.  

      A link to some of these efforts would be awesome here, since I would totally like to explore more!

    5. Requiring all Medical faculty to declare their ethnic lineage as either Aryan or non-Aryan, an action which provided the Nazi Regime with a list of those who refused to provide their ethnic background.

      Whoa. Again, I almost feel like there a whole paper to write on the connections between medical illustration, eugenics, and genocide in world history...

    6. started out in life showing an interest in music,

      Interesting that maybe that calling to the arts is what made him turn to art as part of his life as a physician...

    7. Some views in science helped foster a movement with grim intentions. Germany during the 1870’s was fighting a major war between the Second French Empire and Prussian-led  German Forces. This war caused much unification for Germany as a country, solidifying it while building tension and hostility which was a leading cause of  World War One. This seems irrelevant for this discussion on Brödel, however, the information supplies an understanding of what is to come in the future of medical illustration. 

      This is a bit muddled to me. You seem to allude to the role that medical illustration plays in war and in cultural movements (including genocide), but then dismiss it for this particular illustrator, so it seems a little weird as a paragraph...

    8. and the study of the “races,” which eventually led to many eugenics and ethnic purity movements.

      I would like to hear more about your opinion on how medical illustration bleeds (no pun intended) into culture and affects how different groups of people (women, people of color, disabled people, etc) are viewed and treated...

    9. Gray’s anatomy was a success in their day and in ours.

      :) In more ways that one.

    10. A law was passed to stop “body snatching” a term that means stealing bodies from freshly dug graves. Unfortunately, there weren’t enough hanged convicts in England to supply all the young medical students, so the government passed a law allowed for bodies found in a workhouse, or hospital, of a person who has not enough to pay for their own funeral, will be used as cadavers for the medical students. This is where they found their subjects.

      This is such stunning information. And makes me curious to know about the politics of all of this now, in the 21st century.

    11. still without the use of preservatives.

      Wow.

    12. the figured in the 18th century (particularly female anatomies) anatomical atlases are often shown piecemeal, as parts rather than whole.”

      Do you think there is a place for feminist analysis here? Is there any link between these fragmented bodies and the fragmented ways women's bodies are portrayed in contemporary advertising, for example?

    13. poet, and a playwright until he answered his true calling in life as a professor of anatomy

      Amazing to think about how hard it would to be this "interdisciplinary" these days-- the university structures would likely make young scholars choose one or the other of these areas...

    14. They called themselves natural philosophers. The natural philosopher of the eighteenth-century was controlled by patronage and attempting to distinguish themselves as true natural philosophers. However, due to the constant influence of the Anatomist, there was no credit issued to the artist of the anatomical atlases.

      I am having trouble following this. Again, I think slowing down and defining terms more deliberately (maybe hyperlinks or a glossary?) would help a lot.

    15. The foreshortening in the left leg of the figure is an exciting image, as it displays the abilities of the Renaissance artist.

      Very cool to see this start to develop historically! This is a wonderful Art History paper, as well as what it does for Medical Illustration...

    16. However, his plans were ceased by a dying Fabricius in 1616 due to a rivalry between them. 

      The grammar here is clunky enough that I can't catch the meaning, which is too bad since it's a great story and I am interested!

    17. the highest likelihood

      not sure what that means...

    18. The new tool was Lithography.

      Maybe needs more definition since this paper is clearly aimed at a general readership...and I, for one, don't know what that is...

    19. There is no information, however about how one would go about removing them.

      That made me laugh out loud...though I am not sure it is supposed to be funny. :)

    20. His Medical illustration career

      Honestly, I never knew about this part of his work, but wow-- that neck and shoulder image is spectacular.

    21. I

      TYPO but ha ha

    22. no such thing as a cross-section

      Ah-- so interesting to think of the cross-section as something that is historically produced at a certain point in time!

    23. this illustration does show a map of some of the nerves, and where they protrude from the peripheral nervous system. 

      Even in your paper, I am enjoying that the summaries are one part art criticism and one part anatomy review. I can really see how your studies in both fields have prepared you to write this article!

    24. Japanese is not a common language for most.

      ????except for those in Japan????

    25. this is most likely due to the fact that the cadaver was sat up on a stool for the illustrator.

      How odd! But I guess it would have been hard to get a good perspective from above...??

    26. This semi-schematic illustration of the eye

      awesome image!

    27. Naturalistic, Semi-schematic, and Schematic.

      Would this be a good place to define these again, or link to definitions?

    28. There were five squatting figures,

      So do these exist? How do we know these things? Could you add pictures?

    29. three treatises devoted to anatomy, one to midwifery, two each to the study of the pulse and to therapeutics, one to ophthalmology and one to dietetics. None of his works have been preserved,

      Gosh, it's amazing to think about what it would be like to have copies of those now...

    30. Human Dissection

      This section seems a bit disjointed. Can it be wrapped into the outline more coherently? How does it connect to the thing just above and just below it?

    31. This illustration was likely used to teach young hunters the best place to injure the mammoth: the heart. Though there was little understanding of anatomy and physiology at that time, this was one of the first documented pieces of medical illustration. 

      Very cool! I couldn't quite see why this was connecting to your topic, but of course-- a diagram that instructs about the anatomy of the mammoth...so cool.

    1. Cult-brands don’t create a reactive business strategy based on what their competitors do, they carve out a unique strategy all their own.

      That is something I really see in Higher Ed, and it drives me nuts. Everyone trying to "innovate" in just the same way as everyone else!

    2. and socioeconomic backgrounds

      That really can't be true, can it?

    3. ixty-four percent of all Americans now own an Apple product,

      !!!!!!

    4. H.O.G.,

      I never knew this was actually organized by Harley Davidson itself!

    5. Patagonia

      I was so intrigued by the way they have been advertising around the Bear's Ears controversy... I know lots of people who went out and bought Patagonia just because they were fighting Trump on that issue...

    6. will see approximately 5,000 advertisements throughout a single day,

      Oh my gosh. Amazing number! Though also I guess they are getting even harder and harder to disaggregate from non-ad materials...

    7. The apparent harmlessness of these cult-brands can still be in question, especially in the ways that they motivate us to buy.

      Ah yes...

    8. Star-Trek enthusiasts at a convention and the group of followers historically seen at Jonestown.

      Yes, though some might suggest that the damage that Facebook does as a "brand" is far more devastating to human culture than the Jonestown event....

    9. while the other is benign.

      Ooooo really? Excited to see where this goes, since I wonder about that....

    10. undertaking our habituation

      Not totally sure what that means...

    1. using pharmacological

      I like the fact that anxiety is treated as a "real" symptom that needs alleviating. With my mom's stroke, she suffered depression and it was really not treated or taken seriously. Research I read later suggested she should have been treated and that it could have improved her overall outcomes with speech and mobility as well. Ugh.

    2. music therapy

      After my mom's stroke, she had total aphasia and could not speak or communicate at all. But she could sing along to her favorite songs. WOW!!!!!! BRAIN IS WILD!!!!!

    3. At the facility that I work at

      I like the inclusion of the applied experience like this.

    4. falls have been known to expedite the process of the disease.

      I would never have guessed that-- seems so unrelated, but I see why it would do this now...

    5. mental stimulation

      Curious about what counts here. Reading? TV? Puzzles? Conversation?

    6. participants, who performed some level of exercise had less risk of cognitive impairment,

      Ok, I am getting off the couch as soon as I finish reading this, for real.

    7. lack of appetite and dry mouth could possibility be due to unaware of need.

      Wow. Amazing that the brain could trick the body this way...

    8. This can be both good and bad.  For example, a resident may eat lunch but once lunch is all cleaned up and everything is out of view they question when lunch will be served.  As a staff member tries to redirect them and alert them they have already eaten some of the residents take it as an insult to their memory and become agitated. 

      Wow-- such a delicate dance you must be doing all the time. Reminds me of this beautiful podcast: http://www.radiolab.org/story/121385-bus-nowhere/. Seriously, LISTEN TO THIS IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY!!!

    9. lost doing their own everyday activities or may even forget what they were doing altogether.

      I do notice this so much more as I age, and I wonder how I can tell the difference between normal aging and the early stages of dementia. But I am also struck by the fact that "normal" brains do have some of these problems-- the line between diseased and healthy is not always totally rigid maybe...there is some interesting crossover...

    10. Alzheimer’s Disease Archive by Ask Doctor K

      Your image formatting is weird, and it's really rough here because it disrupts the text...

    11. slow the overall progression.

      that sounds encouraging...

    12. toileting, bathing, mobility, and feeding.

      So interesting to see how the cognitive skills and motor skills relate and intertwine... I guess neurology is really about both. I really saw this in the aftereffects of my mom's stroke: there's no fully separating the limp and the speech and the memory and the depression...

    13. chop

      chalk, I think...

    14. family members and caregivers to be able to identify the stages and understand what is happening. 

      That makes sense-- having this understanding would change how you interact I imagine... this is very interesting...

    15. There are no specific causes to the disease,

      Does this seem like we are on to a new paragraph? I think so, to me... I won't comment much on grammar throughout, but I think we could tighten this up a lot if you wanted to, and I am happy to help with that project anytime if you have a few hours in the future and want to polish it up.

    16. Alzheimer’s disease is a common type of dementia

      I actually didn't even know that Alzheimer's was a form of dementia.

    1. someone who is not a feminist.

      Understatement!

    2. Meninists?)

      Sigh. Ugh.

    3. were on this hashtag.

      I literally cannot bring myself to look. Thank you for taking one for the team in the name of research.

    4. “it pisses me tf off that everyone treats men like shit ngl like take your feminazi ass 5 steps back n look at the bigger picture bitch.”

      !!!!

    5. Minority women made their own organizations to represent racial and gender oppression.

      So much of this resonates today after black women did so much to elect Doug Jones in Alabama, partially (maybe) as a response to the sexual assault and harassment charges against Moore... Was that a feminist vote? And yet white women overwhelmingly went for Moore. Complicated rewriting of feminist history going on...

    6. meninist

      whoa

    7. I tell them: Women’s Studies

      I was a double major (Women's Studies and English) in college, and I distinctly remember, despite being VERY political and engaged, being very nervous to tell the average person (especially man) that I might meet that I was a WS major. It took bravery then and I think it takes bravery now to do that, and that sure tells you something.

  2. Nov 2017
    1. 100 percent of individuals verified

      Again, this is a bit problematic given the whole "use your real name" thing that happened a couple of years ago, when people were getting kicked off for using their chosen names (esp. queer people, in the examples I remember). Like Jeremy alludes below, it's a fine line because unequal power means that policies have different effects on different people...

    2. solutions

      I also wonder about the difference between "solutions" and "alternatives."

  3. Oct 2017
    1. Facebook should become a public benefit corporation.

      Yeah, ok! Take me to this planet! I love chatting with Kate over on Mastodon! Whatever wacky insanity Dr. Wu is peddling here (in the commons), I am buying (metaphorically and without ponying cash or data). I don't think FB will be the nonprofit public benefit platform we need. But maybe we can build it somewhere? Hoping the next backlash period in American political history will see a resurgence of public institutions with public infrastructure, including tech infrastructure. FB was built at Harvard. Let's build Wubook in the community colleges and town libraries and food co-ops. STOP LAUGHING BECAUSE I MEAN IT and we can.

    2. Coming clean

      I am so so so cynical because this seems ridiculous. I can only imagine that they would only come clean in targeted ways that shore up their longterm profit goals. They would take a small hit if it would benefit the company in the long run in terms of revenues and longevity. I just don't see how we can rely on this kind of airing of dirty laundry when we know it always needs to serve its own profit margins. That being said, I understand that the company's longterm sustainability could be improved if they admit to and fix their problems. But I just can't feel hopeful that this really makes the platform better for users: wouldn't it just make FB a better user of users?

    3. replacing at least half of the leadership team and board with underrepresented people of color who are informed and value diversity and inclusion

      +1

    4. advertising of T-shirts or hair products.

      I kind of think the days where we could separate out which products are political and which aren't may be just about over.

    5. Facebook should allow users to sort their news feed chronologically by default on all platforms, rather than rely on an algorithmically sorted News Feed.

      Someone call Twitter and remind them, too.

    6. recounted her time at the company

      REMEMBER THE OLD DAYS? THERE WAS NO CRIME AND TAFFY WAS A NICKEL AND EVERY LADY HAD A PINAFORE?

    7. a way to balance our impulsive present selves with our greater aspirations.

      This seems like a totally ridiculous idea, but this last line is awesome, and I would be interested in a tool that did this. I just wonder how you do this algorithmically. Like, do you let users totally define and build value according to their own personal standards? That's interesting. But this is so damn weird. Why would I want FB to get all up in my values this way? Maybe for the same reason I now count on them to archive the f*$%kin diary of my life. Doh.

    8. more transparency.

      I wonder if you can have "more" or "less" transparency. If transparency is controlled, won't it always be not transparent? Maybe clearer, but not transparent? If FB holds all the power to decide how to be more transparent, I just can't believe we could every really get transparency. Though maybe we could get something "good enough." After all, we have like NO transparency now and so many of us are still willing to be there. But I tend to think we may need al alternative to FB rather than a solution for FB.

    9. emotional signaling-as-engagement.

      I don't know what is weird to me about this, but somehow blaming users' emotional reactions seems...off...I dunno. I will sleep on it. Can't say what is bothering me about this.

    1. the World Wide Web is, in the words of web-literacy expert Mike Caulfield, “a web, and the way to establish authority and truth on the web is to use the web-like properties of it

      Brilliant. Going to tattoo that on my brain. Seems obvious, but it's not how we practice yet.

    2. “The greatest enemy of fact checking is hubris”—that is, having excessive trust in one’s ability to accurately pass judgment on an unfamiliar website.

      Helpful to use this with students...

    3. students need to harness the power of the web to evaluate a single node in it.

      Excellent, well said.

    4. Worse, the approach trains students’ attention on the website itself, thus cutting them off from the most efficient route to learning more about a site: finding out what the rest of the web has to say (after all, that’s why we call it a web).

      Yes yes!

    5. checklists may make students more vulnerable to scams, not less.

      Great point.

    6. Many middle school students, it seems, have an unflinching belief in the value of statistics—regardless of where the numbers come from.

      Ha ha...not just middle school students...

      :(

    7. civic online reasoning—the ability to evaluate digital content and reach warranted conclusions about social and political issues: (1) identifying who’s behind the information presented, (2) evaluating the evidence presented, and (3) investigating what other sources say.

      So helpful.

    8. Determining who’s behind information and whether it’s worthy of our trust is more complex than a true/false dichotomy.

      Amen.

    1. The internet may not have changed everything, but it has definitely changed many things about the way politics operates in the 21st century, and youth have been on the front lines of this process.

      I think Cathy N Davidson's new book on transforming the university puts this into a helpful historical context as far as the mechanics of education are concerned, and I'm taking some good, practical ideas away from her work about the challenges and possibilities that tech raises for teachers who aim to actively engage students in their own learning.

    2. adult leaders are looking in the wrong places

      I have been thinking about this-- and wondering how I shape and predetermine how my students develop their voices on the web. Trying to strike the balance between educating about privacy and public work, helping with content development through critical questions, and backing off enough to let new paths emerge that I might not have led them to.

  4. Sep 2017
    1. a determinant, one which students must adapt to, one which requires a surrender of their agency. They become their data, and while they may find ways to feed certain data into the system, they have no power to resist their own reduction to numbers, patterns, and statistics.

      This could be extrapolated to so many situations in EdTech right now. Succinctly put, and helpful to see it so clearly articulated.

  5. Aug 2017
    1. It is understandably tempting to view this struggle through a feminist lens, and in so doing to think about the family-career balancing challenge as uniquely female or somehow reserved just for mothers.

      Hmmm... not sure I am see why this article's view of the struggle is not expressly feminist. I don't think I would consider a feminist view of this issue as one that sees career-balancing challenges as uniquely female or reserved just for mothers. I would think feminism would critique such conscripted approaches to the question, and would instead look more to society and social values, and the ways in which gendered norms operate around work-life balance. I'd think patriarchy is one of the big problems here, not necessarily men. And some men will be privileged at points from these norms, though others will be limited by them... Anyway, love this piece, but didn't feel too connected to this sentence, which seems to me like an underselling of feminism's ability to address complex ideas as this article does.

  6. Jul 2017
    1. gender, sexual orientation

      Maybe add gender identity and expression?

    2. grievance

      This is a grievance process for accusations but not for decisions. False accusations seem potentially less troublesome than judgments or punishments that might be off. I am starting to see the challenges of having a "rule book" if we don't really tease this all out, but also wondering if we want a rule book as much as a code of ethics? I enjoy this "Statement on Ethics and Inclusion" from DHSI: http://dhsi.org/events.php. Really don't know...I get that this is complicated and I am learning much from others right now.

    3. including sponsors and those with decision-making authority, will not be tolerated.

      Again, how does the regulation here work? I have probably read too much Althusser (and David LOVES to dive into the lit theory with me), but I wonder how the decision-makers can be called out via this code? Is there some kind of board that functions to do this? or is it up to the "community" to enforce this? or are we a post-enforcement group and this is a code of ethics rather than a rule book?

    4. community leaders

      Again, when I think about this in practice, I wonder who this would be. And then I wonder-- if these people are not officials of the event, how does that shift the way this CoC works? George Siemens and I were chatting on Twitter about this. What is the difference between a "rule" and a community standard, and which category does this document fall into? Isn't this a totally relevant conversation for us to have as folks interested in "open?"

    5. citizenship

      Oooo! A word we love to talk about!

    6. our

      Who is this?

  7. Jun 2017
    1. Chloe Brookes-Holder, 18, believes the vaccine led to her illness despite the World Health Organisation saying there is no credible evidence of a link between HPV and chronic illnesses

      Oh my god vaccinate your kids already. Cancer and science are both real.

  8. Apr 2017
    1. The below article represents a small sample of lessons lessons learned from these collaborations and the experimental work we are doing

      Cool- helpful to present research summaries like this!

    1. Attracting and maintaining a young workforce

      And maybe relatedly thinking about how a young workforce will age in a rapidly evolving marketplace. How can we assure that our students don't just meet skills requirements for their first jobs, but also have the ability to connect with ongoing scholarly and professional growth, so they can help shape their jobs as they change and develop over time. How do we assure that we work for the public good and for students, and not just for the corporate world and their reewnable entry-level workforce needs?

    2. to synthesize information

      Interested in how we teach these integrative processes, since a multi-disciplinary, problem-solving approach won't necessarily mean we synthesize...

    3. posing a ‘challenge’ that must be solved through cross-disciplinary work with students in other disciplines

      A decidedly instrumental approach. Are there critical pathways we could take as well? Do we want to use disciplinary knowledge to solve problems, or also find ways to refigure the shape of education, of knowledge, of disciplines?

    4. “I don’t start in the middle, because I don’t yet understand the framework in which pieces fit together into a coherent image. Instead, I frame the outline and build clusters of pieces that look like they go together, and lastly add the connecting pieces that draw the whole image together.”

      I also like this idea for building majors. Could students start with rough frameworks and build components as they go, including in their final years? Do all pathways have to be fully planned at the outset?

  9. Dec 2016
    1. The same technology that can spew hate speech on an individual’s blog post can also be used by community organizers to publicly critique proposed legislation.

      Yes, this is part of the paradoxical way that open works, as Martin Weller has argued. This is the crux of all of the challenge for me right now.

    2. hopeless

      suggest edit: change to "hopeful."

    3. Much of what makes Hypothes.is special – its non-profitness, its open sourceness, its advocating for open standards-ness – is specifically structured to counteract the politics of the siloed version of the web we have now, which is not conducive or structured for enhancing civic engagement. The fundamentally open structure of the web allows information to flow freely. An open structure for web annotation will allow critique and conversation to similarly flow freely. There I go again on standards, but it’s an important difference between Twitter and Hypothes.is (or any open annotation client): your annotations are yours in a way that your Tweets simply are not.

      YES, I agree with this.

    4. verifying information

      Honestly, I am flummoxed about how to respond to the fake news/propaganda thing. Notions of "truth" and "credibility" and "verifiability" are so complicated, and I don't want to be forced by the terms of a fucked up debate to rally around reductive ideas that some things are true and some are false. And then again, I don't want to advocate for an anything-goes approach that makes room for climate- and holocaust-deniers. I am an active user of Snopes. But how do we allow for the richness and complexity of diverse perspectives and non-dominant narratives, while resisting the emerging leftist role of "truth police?" I think H might allow us to do the kind of discursive work-- dialogic work-- that helps here. I don't like to think about that work as fact-checking as much as the critical exposure of epistemologies. We are all biased. Anyone else uncomfortable with the idea that if we just science enough (or whatever) we can get to some kind of pure, irrefutable truth? How could that end up hurting the causes we are trying to advance?

    5. the internet as the democratization of information and the internet as yet another, perhaps even more insidious, manifestation of the inextricable relationship between knowledge and power.

      Yes. This.

    6. socio-technical architecture

      Interesting phrase. Thinking about how all spaces are social (I think?) and all are built (I think?), and so what exactly makes the sociality or structure of a space "open"? Could it have to do not just with inclusivity, but also with the decentering effect that resists boundaries and borders-- and maybe therefore meaning? Invoking Homi Bhabha here in thinking about how margins define centers (not vice versa) and wondering if part of what feels politically important about web annotation is the way that it decenters the text itself, makes it incomplete, multi-authored, dynamic. And that will both challenge master-narratives and maybe also challenge meaning itself, which can be alienating to participants and a challenge to community building. Sorry-- I used to teach Intro Lit Crit. :)

    7. “not-yet-ness.”

      I know I am basically just another lit crit perspective here, but honestly that background-- particularly as a poststructuralist and probably as a postmodernist--inflects so much of my thinking about what the web is and can be. I think moving from English to Interdisciplinary Studies has also made me value the perspective that sees all knowledge as always incomplete; I love that my new field has a core value of noting that there is always another perspective, even if it's not visible or known yet. So when I work with students on the web-- especially in "intro" courses that are supposed to indoctrinate them to the core principles and theories of Interdisciplinary Studies-- I like to present the web as a space that allows and supports dynamism rather than stasis (process over product). But this is so out of line with so much about how teachers think about "public" writing and projects; we want them to be "portfolio" worthy, tidy, complete. When student work is flawed, I think it's a reminder to us about how we can think of all scholarly work. I love that H lets us focus on critique without a requirement that we devalue the work-- in fact, quite the opposite (we critique what has value and potential and impact and utility...). Just thinking out loud, but I think this aspect of "open-endedness" is really the core (ha ha-- irony) of so many of my areas of interest right now.

    8. internet citizens

      Thinking about this term, and about preceding it with "everyday." Wondering how one becomes this, whether it can ever be mundane without erasing the privilege inherent in the status.

    9. I came to understand open as an invitation for reciprocal networking, the ongoing negotiation of power, and as ambiguity.

      So much of this resonates after reading Martin Weller's wonderful little post today (and the awesome PPT embedded therein): http://blog.edtechie.net/openness/the-paradoxes-of-open-scholarship/

  10. Nov 2016
    1. The Trail to Interdisiplinary Studies

      If you make POSTS instead of PAGES, I will be able to comment on them!

    1. learning management system,

      What the hell IS this? Do we mean a commercial product? Do we mean a closed digital sandbox for a course? Do we mean whatever it is we design in order to give structure to our courses/learning? I am starting to think we shouldn't use this phrase without knowing if we are just shorthanding Canvasblackboardwhatever (this is a WHAT) or talking about how we structure our courses (this is a HOW).

  11. Oct 2016
    1. text-message reminders or remedial coaching

      To me, these are lame ideas. I mean, fine. But what about looking at the institutional barriers that contribute to students failing out? What about dealing with the real costs of college to relieve pressure on students who have to work long hours on top of studying? This article seems to blame students for not doing well. In some cases, I get that-- but in others, students struggling with economic pressures, mental illness, addiction, racism, transfer bureaucracies, and stale curricula shouldn't really shoulder all of the blame.

    2. impulsive choice is often the more rational choice in the context of their lives.

      If a kid doesn't have access to enough food or to any fun food, I bet that kid eats a marshmallow. And they would be smart to eat it.

    3. students who come from stressful, low-income environments might have a particularly hard time developing gritty characteristics.

      I doubt "grit" is something anyone is born with. So how does it emerge in some people and not others, and why doesn't this article seem to care about the social and economic forces that shape students?

    4. hints at financial stress as a complicating circumstance in their lives.

      Yes, I think that the study seems to totally ignore all of the factors that students face. By looking at "personality" traits, it seems to forget that institutions and socioeconomic reality affect how students perform.

    5. Standardized test scores factor in, as does socioeconomic status

      Seems weird to name these two things as if they are equivalent. The first is a metric while the second is a characteristic. In other words, test scores aren't a thing on their own, but they are a reflection of many things, one of which is actually socioeconomic status...

    1. It makes learning relevant to all populations, to real life and real work,

      I love this. Making learning "real" seems so key, and it's almost surprising to think that sometimes we disconnect it so much from the real world.

    2. Its almost saying that technology is essential to learning now

      I don't know if I think it is essential to learning, but it seems to afford so many possibilities of connecting learners with the world of ideas-- why wouldn't we use it if we are lucky enough to have the means?

    1. This would be covered in the physical education. It would teach you how to navigate yourself through multiple situations. This course could also help teach how to do these skills with others that are not well versed.

      Sounds really interesting, but this isn't clear enough to follow. Needs some rewriting...

    1. While reading this study

      I think you read a summary of the study? Not the study? Shelby is a PSU student, so her blog would just be a summary...

    2. “Improving Patient Safety Through Provider Communication Strategy Enhancements.”

      can you link to this?

    1. Robin DeRosa and my advisor Terri Dautcher

      This is going to be a problem. You need at least one person with knowledge about health or athletic training to act as an advisor. You should mention that person here, otherwise I think you will be decreasing your credibility with the Council.

    1. Adventure Education: (AP3950) Adventure Therapy (PEPE201) Theory/Practice in Coaching (PRPRT3043) Advanced Risk Management/ Decision Making (PRPRT3041) Group Leadership Techniques (ENENVST3011) Wilderness/LNT/Leadership (PRPRT3042) Wilderness Skills Practicum: Climbing (PRPRT3042) Wilderness Skills Practicum: River Travel (PRPRT3042) Wilderness Skills Practicum: Backpacking

      You can probably cut out this list and just go right to the paragraph where you describe them one by one.

    2. broad marketability when it comes to getting hired can be a problem

      This sounds important, but I don't think the idea is clear as it's written here-- can you explain what you mean in a clearer sentence?

    1. This program is interdisciplinary because it is taking a science and art from.

      New paragraph? (And also correct typo!)

    2. https://www.flickr.com/photos/dansapples/9109921641/in/photolist-eT1Jjv-ecdFLk-aEijP-8ztt1t-8Tyg8-gnziZR-3b2rF-kUV4BK-f389Xp-VxQv7-8Qs7mM-4rt3hC-8QvdgC-h4FY6Z-HkFso-Vxeag-VxdT6-VxQaN-VxPBL-VxQrE-VxPXL-VxeH6-Vxedz-4SoWMb-dMBQt4-anXUQz-8FbBmR-5L7Y4w-VxeU4-dcJwY5-Vxe5K-8T6dYB-a2xAoG-8Wo1-5ppS88-ebEsf-8RZxjY-VxPQu-2jp8Z2-VxQEQ-9uNsSa-ix962u-6noXaX-niiHc8-nhxL5g-aCvUAR-cDzAF7-4JpSLg-nggVAF-4QbCZ

      Use a short link for these captions. I can show you how! You don't want this massive link mucking up the visuals of your pretty site...

    1. I want to be in HR because I like to help people with their problems.

      I am not sure that most people would say that this is the key thing about HR. I would change this...

    2. The Law is also very helpful due to I will be in HR and knowing the law would be very helpful.

      This is pretty weak. Can you try to rewrite this and add more content here?

    3. Humanity

      Really???

    1. undefined now because I am figuring out what to call my program

      Time is running out, man! :)

    2. Coaching, Psychology, and Business

      You will need a name that doesn't include the names of current majors...

    1. scientific writing

      You keep mentioning writing, but I don't see it really emphasized here. Which course(s)? Just the WRCO?

    2. MCPHS

      Write out the first time.

    3. far easier

      I don't think I would lay that out up front. Not quite the emphasis you want.

    4. truly a little bit of everything

      This seems vague and overstated. Doesn't seem true...

    1. As an interdisciplinary Studies major

      This is a Page, not a post, so sadly I can't comment. But it's absolutely GREAT! Exciting major, well-designed!

    2. Entrepreneurship of the Cannabis Industry

      Maybe "Cannabis Industry Entrepreneurship?"

    1. I carefully designed a program incorporating a series of art education classes such as instructional planning, curriculum and assessment, methods and materials and intro to art education

      Courses need full titles and numbers and should have 1-2 sentences EACH to explain why you selected each one.

    1. Inmate Psychology

      I can't see my comments when I type, so I couldn't add them to your post. You may have to change your theme to fix this. I can show you the issue when I see you next...frustrating... Not your fault, but it has to be fixed.

      This statement is AWESOME! Biggest issues are 1) the comma splices (run-on sentences split by a comma) and 2) the program title.

      For the comma splices, join this Hypothesis group: https://hypothes.is/groups/AYvx7o6R/grammarcheck.

      Then you can see my comments and fix the errors.

      The title will likely be an issue because we can't use "Psychology" in the title since then the program will be counted for the Psych department's accreditation process, which they won't be ok with. So we can change it to something like: "Psychological Approaches to Justice and Corrections" or "Psychological Aspects of Corrections." Think about it... We can chat about this on Tuesday.

    1. The classes that I need to take now need to help me with my future career and family advocacy; classes that touch upon Social work as well. One Social work class that I plan on taking in the Spring is SW3130 Child Welfare and Family Services. My WECO course Is HE3220 Applied Nutrition for a Healthy Living. I will complete my WRCO and QRCO in the Spring semester. My QRCO class will be SS3700 Social Statistics, and my WRCO credit will be completed with HE3240 Health Promotion Planning and Evaluation.  The class I think I will benefit the most from is SW 3150 Child Maltreatment.

      Because this is a page and not a post, there is no place for me to comment on the work. This essay will definitely not pass as is, so you need to revise it quite a bit. Look at the sample that is online and see me if you need help. Mostly, you need to go more slowly through your courses, explaining what each one brings to the major. List them as suggested on the tips sheet (link on our syllabus). And your conclusion definitely needs expanding. Intro is good! Come see me for help...

    2. My education here at Plymouth is coming to a close shortly, and I find myself celebrating all of my “lasts” here on campus: like my last halloween, my last homecoming, my last time signing up for classes

      This is not helpful to your statement. Try to conclude with a focus on your interdisciplinary major.

    3. Women’s Health Issues, World Religions, and Medical Ethics

      It's not clear which of these are courses in your contract. List them one at a time with their course numbers, including only courses in your program. Explain how each one fits with your major. I am not sure how World Religions fits???

    1. is bank learning.

      usually called "the banking method of education" not "bank learning."

    1. The information could be right, but the way it is delivered to the students is completely wrong.

      Good point.

    2. busy work and blah blah blah

      Love this!

    1. bad habits

      The idea that what passes for learning could actually be the accumulation of bad habits is so sadly ironic...

    2. “what can this information be used for” the teacher satirically responds “the final”.

      EXCELLENT. I mean horrible, but EXCELLENT.

    1. If teachers are willing to put the students interest above their own when it comes to teaching techniques there would be a dramatic difference in the performance of students across the world.

      Powerful final line!!!

    2. After watching a video and reading a blog post

      Add links!

    1. https://www.plymouth.edu/undergraduate/general-education/general-education-requirements-fall-2005-later/first-year-experience/

      Make this link hot (link so we can click on it). Let me know if you need help doing this.

    2. Getting the readers attention will provide good feedback,

      This is confusing. Can you restate it?

    3. resolve the area of study.

      What does this mean?

    4. according to studies done by top professionals

      Can you be specific? Link to the studies?

    5. The plymouth state website

      So is that your scholarly article? I am kind of confused as to why you are at this website...

    1. In other words, the aspiration and ability of the American postsecondary institutions to accommodate some approximation of universal access has been its foremost characteristic. Institutions' shortfalls in completely achieving that aspiration have been the major source of criticism and debate within American higher education. It is the perpetual American dilemma of how achieve both equality and excellence.

      Important! Let's discuss this quote in class!

    2. the proliferation of huge football stadiums

      Interesting that this is such a key part of HigherEd history...

    3. One of the biggest shifts was the federal government becoming directly involved in higher education, which developed during the Civil War when southern congressmen who opposed the legislation were absent. The Morrill Act of 1862 set in motion an elaborate program whereby states received profits from the sale of an allotted portion of western lands if used to establish programs of agricultural, mechanical, and military sciences, along with liberal arts.

      Important development

    4. "Souls?!? Damn your souls! Make tobacco."

      Maybe this should be some kind of motto for our class????

    1. student learning isthe root of student persistence

      I LOVE THIS!!! It suggests that LEARNING will keep students in college. Not just friends, or fun, or whatever. But learning. Do you think that is true? Also thinking about how this relates to Freire... does it matter what KIND of learning? like banking, problem-posing, etc...

    2. Frequency and quality ofcontact with faculty, staff, and students

      Interesting-- seems like isolation and disengagement from community are the key risk factors then...

    3. take advising seriously

      Curious to know if students think advising is important... Have you had advising yet? good advising? bad advising?

    4. segmentation

      I think in general universities silo off their most important mission-driven projects and programs, partially because they are assuring that they don't get missed. But this ends up marginalizing the projects and programs in an ironic way

    5. Some institutions even go so far as to hire retention consultants

      We've done this at my university.

    6. Taking Student Retention Seriously: Rethinking the First Year of College

      Starting today-- Tues 10/4/16-- around 9:45am Eastern, annotation flash mob of this article. Join us!