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{inclusions}
I'd possibly move this section above your about section because you otherwise have two sections about the inclusions righ after each other
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Add another line underneath: SAVE $50
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I would mention the pre-sale bonus here too.
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Learn
This is the program to show you
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No longer will you sit on the
Stop sitting on the
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But this is the ONLY time the price will be discounted.
But not at this price!
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this option will take you away from my main site. I wanted to offer as many payment options as possible! The only difference is I will manually enter your purchase on the backend (instead of it being instantaneous). Your access and class experience will be exactly the same!
purchasing via this option means I'll have to give you manual access after your purchase and there might be a slight delay in receiving your login details.
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Time and Money Well-Spent!
same suggestion here around the intro lines
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You don’t have to pick just one way to move through the course.
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A journey that will continue far beyond the 12 weeks →
Love the mix of images and gifs here
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Personalized Feedback
And then have an intro line here: Get exclusive access to:
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Fabric Painting & Dyeing
Potentially add an intro line here such a: Learn everything about:
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Ignite Your Creativity:
I would flip these around so you lead in with the inclusion and follow it with the 'so what?'
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You don’t need to niche down in your art practice.
I would bold this line
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struggle with decision fatigue
I wonder what it would look like to add emojis against some of these statements to grab the eye?
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create with confidence
bold
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start creating consistently
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eliminate the creative blocks
bold
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Imagine what it would feel like to
Love the animation here :)
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presale discount
I would totally mention the 50$ here so it's crystal clear
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Join us for a transformative 12-week art experience!
Can you potentiall bold this?
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same here as above. Consistency in lower and upper case
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tried and tested ideas
bold this
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work smarter, deliver better work and feel prepared
bold this
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to come?
Possibly reduce the width here so it organically fits across 3 lines. Currently, to come sits on its own in the 3rd line.
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Send me an email and I'll get back to you asap.
There's something funky going on here with 2 colours in this sentence.
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this one sits on a line by itself on my screen. Possibly delete it?
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this either needs to be lower case like annually. Or annually also needs to be upper case
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this word sits on its own in a 3rd line on my screen. Possibly fit it onto 2 lines all up?
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…I’d love to welcome you to the insiders!
Can you animate this one too so there's movement as they scroll?
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🙋♂️ You’re tired of one-off courses,
There needs to be more space between this idea and the one before
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I'd bold this and possibly even animate it so it pops on the screen on scroll. Not sure whether it's just my screen size, but this sentece sits half on the blue background and half on the white background. Possibly move it up more so it's 100% on the blue background
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Available
I'd come up with a way to align the expandable sections so the white lines are on one level across the screen.
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clients.”
this word sits on its own on my screen. Either change it so the entire statement fits on one line or reduce the width so it displays more evenly across 2 lines.
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After 3 months inside…
I would match this heading to the blue of the column on the left. The same goes for the column to the right
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take you:
these 2 words sit on their own on my screen. Possibly reduce the width here so the sentence naturally flows more evenly across 2 lines
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Hi, I’m Josh!
Can you align this with the paragraph below on the left?
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iness in 2025 and beyond!
I would reduce the width of this line so it's narrower and matches the bold sentence width above
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Tune
I would replace the microphone graphic with a mockup of a mobile phone playing your private podcast once you've finalised the artwork. so it looks snazzier and draws more attention. Something like at the top of my private case study podcast page: https://candocontent.com/copywriting-tips-podcast
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Is there any way to display 'Join today!' in one line on each button so the button is wider but not as tall?
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I would make this button yellow so it pops more
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It might look better to increase the size of the emoji so they're easier to see.
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to... sits on a line of its own on my screen. Any chance you can fit it so it displays on one?
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fourfold.
'fourfold' sits on its own line on my screen. Any chance you can fit the entire quote onto one line?
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With fellow language pros working towards the same goals!
Can you make this button yellow too so it pops more?
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There needs to be a space here
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I bet it’s not for lack of trying!
Can you make this yellow and bold too?
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now…
Is there any way to fit this into one line? On my screen 'now' sits alone on the second line.
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positive
I'd underline 'positive implications' as a whole
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Not only that…
I would bold this
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Ready to unleash your earning potential inside a community that just gets it?
I would move the button underneath this question because it flow much better then.
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The premier online community for innovative language professionals
I wonder whether breaking this out and turning it into the main heading makes this section less text heavy? You'd keep the font size for this section, but then drop the next bit down a font size and onto a new line in a different colour.
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I would insert screenshot testimonials from students that possibly speak to your support/guidance
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Can you add a recently purchased by widget possibly? I know it's included in my Countdown Timer subscrition, but I'm sure there are other tools that offer this.! https://elfsight.com/sales-notification-widget/
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Possibly add another screenshot testimonial section here with 3 REALLY awesome screenshots/feedback pieces?
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March 16-29, 2025
Can you add up here how many people roughly have already joined? Something like...
Join xxxx+ fellow creatives who have already signed up!
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You could add in here a mention of how many spots are left as of now
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add space between this line and the boxes
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Let me show you how:
This needs to move down
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Complete the most milestones and receive 250€ techforword credit!
Make this slightly bigger?
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Add space between this line and the box
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And each month you get to…
I'd add a space/blank line before this idea so it's more spaced out
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only 25 spots
You could again strike out hte 25 here and adjust as spaces are selling
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from the competition, and
I would change the colour so it's the same as the other words before and after
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Spots are limited to 25!
You could go to the effort of updating how many spots are left here on a daily basis (or whenever a spot sells) now that it's selling. Someting like... Only 25 (strikethrough) xx spots left!
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I'd slot in a blank row underneath here so the next line pops. more
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Disable freebie popup Client Confidentiality in the AI era?
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March 16-29, 2025
I'd slot in your trailer before the opening section
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Raves for the BB Bash
As for the final nudge, what about something like...
Imagine having 14 days to chip away at not only your skills but also your mindset?
What would it mean to you to finally stop procrastinating and doubting everything you create and LOVE the entire process instead?
Join myself and a community of fellow creatives at this transformative LIVE experience.
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What are you waiting for? Sign up now!
I'd add some student work below this section
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If you're nodding along, you belong here.
I'd slot in testimonials under this section
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You don’t need fancy supplies, loads of time, or a clear plan. All it takes is your willingness to show up and see what happens.
I'd slot in testimonials under this section
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Will live sessions be recorded?
Can you mention here how long these replays will be available on the free ticket?
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Anyone who’s tired of feeling stuck and wants to break through creative blocks.
I'd move this down so it's the last bullet point
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→ A Live Call to introduce the theme and spark ideas→ A Pre-Recorded Video where I show you my personal approach→ A Hands-On Exercise
Center this
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Think of this as
I'd delete this because it's the same beginning of the sentence as above
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This is your chance to explore new creative concepts—things like repetition, scraps, detail, and layering—through live calls, actionable prompts, and pre-recorded art videos where I show you exactly how I approach each theme. No pressure, no rules—just you, your supplies, and a whole lot of possibility.
Center this
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Your art pra
Can you add one more sentence here that sets the scene and picks up on this idea?
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experienced artist looking to shake things up or someone who just wants to start
I'm tempted to also mention this right underneath the "A FREE 14-Day Art Journaling...."
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possibly center this?
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live calls, actionable prompts, and pre-recorded art videos
I'd make this bold and italic
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No
Possibly move this onto a new line?
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Creativity
Loooove this opener!
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**Look for events with red borders to see the unique events you'll get by upgrading.**
Make sure this is centered on the page as well as the line above
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What students who upgraded in the past have to say
I'd move this up on the page right underneath the intro section so it doesn't separate the online and in-person inclusions.
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In-Person experience*
I would list this in a separate visual section so it's clearly distingueshed from the inclusions in both passes. Set the scenes with something like: The in-person experience also gives you access to:
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The Lifetime-Access Pass ONLINE allows students to maximize learning, and is designed for lifelong learners. Repetition reinforces knowledge, and having ongoing access to the presentations means students will be able to refer back to them regularly to solidify what they have learned. You will also benefit from other bonuses including workbooks, quizzes, and transcriptions to turn passive listening into active learning. Lastly, yoga teachers will be eligible for 30 hours of Yoga Alliance and 30 hours of International Association of Yoga Therapist Continuing Education Credit with this option. The Lifetime-Access Pass IN-PERSON includes everything in the Lifetime-Access Pass ONLINE, but adds a retreat like experience taking place in person in Jersey City during the conference. Join for community, structured learning time, and a bit of relaxation, too
I would condense this section so it's crystal clear even for skim-readers. I'd simply go with something like... Both Upgrade options include:
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I would list this underneath on a separate row so it pops on the page. Possibly even add a logo to each option.
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By upgrading, you are able
Upgrade
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You can save $100 on upgrades for the next 30 minutes.
I assume you'll have a timer on the page so I would remove this sentence because it's covered in the button copy
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adds
to add
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Lifetime-Access Pass ONLINE or our Lifetime-Access Pass IN-PERSON.
upgrade options.
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Joining us
For the first time, you can join
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offers
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Ready to fall in love with paper planning?
I'd plant some seed here in a separte section above this one. Something along the lines of: Use the ideas inside this Mini Training to...
Orangise your multi-passionate business Keep your neurodivergent brain in check Map out your busy family week .....
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What’s included in Dopamine Planning:
I would include a testimonial section above this one once you have reviews/screenshots. Something like: This is what's possible:
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For years, I struggled with using a planner consistently. I’d start off excited, set everything up beautifully… and then stop using it after a few weeks. I owned a veritable planner graveyard. Every time I tried to get back into planning, I felt like I’d already failed. But the problem wasn’t me. The problem was that most planner advice isn’t designed for brains that need novelty, flexibility, and dopamine to stay engaged. That’s why I created Dopamine Planning - to help you find a way to plan that feels rewarding, motivating, and actually fun to come back to. If you’ve ever felt like planners just don’t work for you… I promise, you’re not broken. You just need a different approach - one that works with your brain, not against it. And that’s exactly what I’m going to show you inside Dopamine Planning.
This section is so good. Highly relevant, super personal! Love!
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Shift your mindset so consistency feels easy -
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Discover what makes planning enjoyable
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Handle blank pages
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Return to your planner
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The secret to planner consistency? Making it fun to return to.
The mini-training that adds the fun back into planning so you actually stay on track.
Because planning should be flexible, rewarding and motivating!
No complicated systems. No perfectionism. Just a simple way to reset and start again.
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possibly make this all caps or italic? And.... looove this statement!
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There's a space in front of But :)
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Conference Schedule
I would include a section above the schedule that touches on what's in it for the attendees. This can be along the lines of cement yourself as THE trusted instructor, have a competitive edge, support your students better, have a deep understanding of the impact of what you do.
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Over the next three days,
Let's explore our key topics for the event: brain injury, endocrine health, and reproductive health
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Focused Deep Dives:
Days 2-4: Focused Deep Dives
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Please click each event to learn more about it. Please pardon changes as the schedule is under construction.
Please click each event to learn more. NOTE: The final schedule is yet to be confirmed.
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Transformational Learning Goals:Evidence-Based Practice: Understand specific yoga protocols for various health conditions to enhance your personal practice and teaching.Customized Approach: Gain insights into yoga’s core elements for tailored, effective practice.Advocacy & Integration: Build a scientific foundation to support yoga’s integration in schools, healthcare, prisons, and more.Critical Analysis: Develop the skills to independently access, evaluate, and interpret scientific research, reducing misinformation.Collaboration & Growth: Connect with fellow yogis and scientists, opening doors for career advancement and future research collaborations.
I would move this underneath the table below
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Daily sessions total 3-4 hours of immersive learning. 🔍 (7-8 hours if you upgrade after registering)
I would bold this
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No prerequisites required—just bring your curiosity! 🌟
I would bold this
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Day one covers
Let's start with the
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Kick-Off with the Basics:
Day 1: Kick off with the Basics
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We will build your knowledge of the brain science of yoga in three key areas: Yoga + Brain InjuryYoga + Endocrine HealthYoga + Reproductive Health
I suggest moving this part underneath the sign-up button and turning it into a 3-column section with an icon to match each idea.
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Our 5th annual conference will be hybrid, with online and in person options (Jersey City, NJ).
Join us online or in person (Jersey City, NJ).
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what 2025 in Untapped Brilliance looks like
what's waiting for you inside Untapped Brilliance in 2025
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I teach these same strategies and insights that helped me, to my ADHD clients so they get amazing results too!!
Now I get to support my ADHD clients with the same strategies and insights that have helped me get amazing results!
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Does your life look amazing on paper? You're smart, creative, healthy, travel to fun places, and have loving family and friends. But inside, you feel disorganized, and your ADHD symptoms seem to hold you back from fully enjoying life.
Your life looks amazing on paper.
You're smart, creative, healthy, travel to amazing places and have a loving family and friends.
But inside, you...
Have I hit the nail on the head?
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Pay Annually
I would add an FAQ section above this section
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Hello Morning!
Can you format these monthly sections consistently?
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to help you take...
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Here's what you get when you enroll in The Untapped Brilliance Club. 2 monthly live group coaching calls with Jacqueline A live training workshop every month 8 Week Planning Party Workshop Course Library A Personal Guided Tour with Jacqueline. Unlimited Body Double Sessions Private Facebook Group Monthly Voxer Hours
Can you possibly centre this?
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you
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As soon as you join, you get to schedule a
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Hi, I’m Jacqueline.
I would add this to a separate visual section because it's a new idea
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Managing ADHD isn't a one-size-fits-all approach.
Can you make this bold so it really pops?
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If you’ve been nodding along, it doesn’t mean those things aren’t possible for you—it just means you haven’t discovered the right approach that works in harmony with your ADHD brain, body, and life… yet!
I would centre this on the page so it really pops and place it on a separate visual section
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What you'd REALLY love is this:
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Finding you here tells me a few things about you.
Chances are...
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Bored by textbooks and repetitive exercises for learning a new language?Ready for language learning resources for your exact level and interests?👉 Treat yourself to cutting-edge approaches crafted by two experienced language teachers... so you don’t keep having the same old chatbot conversation over and over again.👉 Pick up an incredible toolkit that combines fresh inspiration, innovative study materials, and tutorials to put the FUN back in language learning!
Experience the FUTURE of language learning and join the thriving online community.
If you’re looking for fresh inspiration (and a lot more FUN! 🥳), then this is the perfect place for you.
Find the accountability, inspiration and community to confidently make AI a firm part of your tailored language learning routine.
Join for $9/month!
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What if you could learn your target language EXTRA QUICK……right inside your favorite AI chatbot?Get INSTANT ACCESS to a growing collection of 80+ tried-and-tested prompts to help you improve your conversational & grammar skills right away.Using the prompts is as easy as 1, 2, 3:1. Copy the prompt into your favorite AI chatbot.2. Fill in the blanks to adjust your level and topics of interest.3. Hit send and let the learning begin!And with chatbot recommendations for each prompt, you always get the BEST results!
Get INSTANT ACCESS to a growing collection of 80+ tried-and-tested prompts to help you improve your conversational & grammar skills right away.
Everything you need to learn your target language EXTRA QUICK right inside your favorite AI chatbot!
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Want to easily boost your listening skills but don't have tons of time to spend abroad?Wondering how AI can help boost your listening skills? This course is for you!Learn how to use AI tools to:💬 Understand Natural Spoken Language💬 Get Ready for Real-Life Conversations💬 Practice Your Listening Skills with AI QuizzesComing by March 2025. 😁
The handy self-guided resource that grows your target language comprehension skills right inside popular free AI tools like ChatGPT!
Grow your vocabulary, practice your listening and understand natural spoken language with our 5 tried-and-tested shortcuts!
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What if we told you that you can get ready for real-life conversations or improve the ones you’re already having… …without a practice partner?AI Shortcuts for Speaking Practice is the handy self-guided resource that grows your confidence & target language communication skills right inside popular free AI tools like ChatGPT!
The handy self-guided resource that grows your confidence & target language communication skills right inside popular free AI tools like ChatGPT!
Get ready for real-life conversations or improve the ones you're already having without a practice partner!
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Blurb for the Quiz:
What’s your language learning superpower?
Take the short 6-question quiz, and walk away with 3 tried-and-tested AI prompts to match your learning style and boost your target language skills right away.
Take the quiz!
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How AI Can Boost Your Language Learning Are you sick of boring textbooks and repetitive exercises for learning a new language? Wish you could get Artificial Intelligence to create tailored learning materials just for you?You can! 🦾In this FREE 60-minute training, you'll learn:🤖 Why use AI for language learning🦾 How to build AI-powered learning habits🤓 How to use AI to maintain and improve your languagesIntrigued? Check it out!
Are you sick and tired of the same repetitive exercises and wish you had access to tailored learning materins instead?
Watch the FREE 60-minute training and find out how AI can boost your language learning.
Watch free now!
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Students and members can log in here.
Are you a student or member? Log in here.
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The ins and outs of Inserting Zippers OR Knowing how to insert zippers
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and this one?
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lifetime access
can you possibly make this stand out?
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Create
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All it takes is your creativity, a few affordable materials, and the lessons inside this self-paced course.
LOVE!!!
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I suggest adding 2 sections:
- Here is what past challengers had to say about their experience: (add screenshot testimonials here)
- This is how the challenge will unfold: (add a theme for each day)
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The daily calls mean you can
Delete this
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Being part of a private community helps you feel
Join your fellow challengers for accountability, to share wins and connect with likeminded ADHDers.
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Daily Training
Is this live? If so, add this in here. Otherwise mention it's prerecorded
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My
Get FREE access to my step-by-step system designed for ADHD brains like yours.
Map out and implement your plan for 2025 in a way that feels logical and motivating to you.
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Free LIVE Challenge
I'd remove this and add FREE into the button copy
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Craft your ADHD friendly plan for 2025 in just 5 days! So you can create a memorable and productive year.
I would totally make this the potent main tagline in the header...
Craft your ADHD friendly plan for 2025 in just 5 days for a memorable and productive year ahead!
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Take a closer look at what you can look forward to →
I love this video and would totally move it up towards the top of the page right underneath the 'during the bb art jouranls masterclass' section
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During
This comment relates to the picture above: I'd change it to something like... but right now...
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Find confidence through creativity in this
Get first dibs on a transformative 12-week art experience and FINALLY embrace your unique style as a creator.
Join the waitlist today and prepare to grow your confidence through creativity!
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And you finally...
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Ready to Do This?
I'd finish off with a final push. Help them reflect about their options. Yes, you can attempt to do this on your own, or you can do it with my expert guidance and support. What is it going to be?
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Command the Room, Sis!
I would include a section that shows how people progress through the program week by week with a tangible win after each week so they can picture how they'll progress through the content but also through their transformation
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I’m gonna h
Can you change these up so it's crystal clear what people get? Is it pre-recorded videos? Do they get personal access to you? If so, how often?
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$2,850
Personally, I'm not a huge fan of putting hyperthetical pricetags against inclusions and rather lead with the amazing value this offer represents on its own
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budget-friendly
Not sure about the use of budget-friendly here.
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How Am I Qualified to
I would move this further down on the page and explain the possible transformation with your program a bit more first.
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Command the Room, Sis! is more than a
Introducing: Command the Room, the career coaching program that...
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You have
And while you ABSOLUTELY have the ...
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Mamas, you second-guess yourself
But right now, you're...
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Imagine if...
Love this section... and I would totally lead in with it. Imagine a day when...
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It’s time to remember
Lead with a big, bold promise here that gives peope hope right from the start
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www.bbhenrystudio.com www.bbhenrystudio.com
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sed forever.
CTA: Get instant access now
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If you are a mixed media artist
I would bold the most important sections here and possibly reduce them to the 5-8 most important.
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gather supplies
Can you add 1 short sentence here?
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Take a look at some of the class highlights →
What we'll cover in this course:
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What will you gain from this course when you enroll today?
I'm tempted to add an emotive intro blurb here, even it it's short. Somethign along the lines of. What if you could create a zipper pouch without... a sewing machine, being a sewing pro, etc.
All it takes is your creativity, a few affordable materials and the lessons inside this self-paced course.
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All lessons are available to watch immediately upon purchase!
I would also remove this and incorporate it into the button CTA: Get instant access for only $45
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A self-paced, online art course for the mixed media artist interested in slow stitching and textiles
I would remove this because it feels like a double up and instead simply add 'self-paced' into the header image.
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JOIN FOR FREE
ACCESS FREE NOW
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Co-create, share and learn in a space where connection matters more than perfection...a cozy community for creatives.
Can you possibly add a button underneath each blurb so it's clear where people have to click?
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You might enjoy these podcast episodes,featuring yours truly:
As you add more episodes to your repertoire, you can absolutely add them here. :)
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In my spare time (HA!) I love to read, bake all the things, sleep in, travel and go barefoot on the beach.
So good. That's the stuff people love to find on an about page. :)
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Several placesto find me in print…
Love!!!! Such a great visual touch and a good option to make this trust section different to the one on your home page.
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Wherever you are in your creative journey, I’m here to help you take that next step.
Love the above the fold section. I would bold this sentence to make it pop though!
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In
Delete and lead in with "My studio-aka my happy, gloriously messy place-, is where I experiment with..."
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I’m here to
Lets help you...
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Blending Abstract is the perfect introduction to mixed media play with pastels, watercolors and pencils, designed for beginners. Check it out now.SALVAGED: A Layered Pieces Journal guides you through building a curated cache of salvaged papers and then creating your own art journal by layering color, paper and texture. Click Here.Free Mixed Media Art Tutorials Find my creative walkthroughs archived here. You will access creative tips, techniques and color filled projects that I am excited to share. There is something for everyone regardless of your preferred medium or experience level. Let’s go!
Ideally, I'd still love to see this as 3 columns with image. :)
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Your creative journey deserves a joyful, supportive space.
But there's more to my story than meets the eye.
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Artist, maker, baker, and a tech-loving beach wanderer,
I would save this detail for your about page. This section is meant to be teasing a little bit and intrigue people to click through to your about page. :)
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Hey, I’m Roben-Marie!
Meet the artist!
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Follow me on:
PS. Remember that you have ongoing access to BB Fringe Flip Book, so make sure you bookmark it for when the time is right.
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Articles
Some of my articles
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