make this the hyperlink, not just 'sites'

make specific subject heading: Group engagement ideas

1) links to an MLA support page ; 2) needs to not be just hyperlinked 'here'

needs to be adjusted to not just link to 'here'

needs to be adjusted to not just link to 'here'

needs to be adjusted to not just link to 'click here'

This list needs to be updated!

When/where is this explained further?

update default email subject header to be: "Site Theme or Tool Suggestion/Request"

Need to explain how to have people become registered users of a site in order to understand that option

Do we explain how to do this anywhere else?

need to update screenshot as the search engine question is different now

Explain more about how to use sites/why to use sites

How can people disable Comments for the whole site? For individual pages/posts?

Humanities Commons / the Commons

(such as Google Docs or Microsoft Word)

add note/text about how using headings appropriately is key for site accessibility and that the size and font of your site is not controlled by this tool bar but is instead controlled by the theme

remove 'MLA' and just say 'toolbar'

adjust to not be in first person since other documentation isn't in first person

Is there a reason this is capitalized?

This links to an MLA Commons guide

Need to update text that's linked so it's not just linked on the words "here" (for accessibility reasons)

This links to an MLA Support documentation page, not an HCommons one

hyperlink text needs to be updated to not just 'here'

Also, this links to an MLA Commons Help documentation page, not an HCommons one

It would be nice if we didn't have to link to this other place for this info. When we modularize this content, it would be good to have a mini module for Site Users explanation

Need to note that you need to click on 'Sites' and 'My Sites" from HCommons first, in order to see the black bar at the top of the screen. Or you need to go to the URL for the site and be logged into the Commons to see the black toolbar.

Bronte is referring to the crypts in Westminster Abbey.

Let's go to Paris.

that's only 2 years after the first game was launched

are you immersed? What does immersion mean?

It would be interesting to visit the company to see how all these groups of people are set up and work together. How does collaboration work? Or are the different types of people/units just separated out and never talk?

That's not as long as I would have assumed. To me, they feel like they have been around for longer.

Is this an effective chapter title?!

This table of contents page allows people to navigate the book both in a traditional fashion and through a network graph. Do you think this strategy is effective?

I would include 'people' in here