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  1. Mar 2019
    1. Unlike sinners in higher hell, Venedico shows a higher level of regret for his actions and his state in society that he attempts to avert even the gaze of Dante

      I agree

    1. There is somewhat of a connection between simony and usury since both sins are predicated on the exchange of money.

      OK. Maybe you can be even clearer here.

    1. It is also worth mentioning that the way Dante describes the flatterers shows his ability (wit) to navigate easily between every style in his poetry.

      this is cool!

    1. Clergy Members are also baptizers and they’re supposed to bring life into this world like mothers however, their corruption means that they can only give birth to even more corrupted souls.

      very good

    2. This misconception among Simonists that greed is a genetic contribution of womankind is further reiterated in how the manner in which Simonists are punished parallels child-birth imagery.

      interesting! Maybe start a new paragraph!

    3. The men do not have nearly as much accountability to be pure and loyal as the women.

      I actually think that Dante wants the clergy and the Pope (the husband) to be pure (sinless).

    4. In a marriage, the woman is loyal to the husband by preserving her virginity.

      I don't understand this. I don't think the wife is expected to preserve her virginity.

    1. It is possible that Dante tells Cacciamenico’s story precisely because he does not want it to be told, which shows that Dante understands how the punishments in Hell are part of God’s plan.

      Good. Specify, though, who "he" is.

    2. The sinners in canto 7 are not able to be remembered because “the undiscerning life that befouled them makes them dark now to all recognition”

      very good!

    1. Because the sinners in this canto wished to see far ahead, they can now only see behind them. Hence their punishment matches and completes their sin.

      You have already said this. Cut.

  2. Feb 2019
    1. This displays that one can commit sins and be punished but still be seen with great influence, like how both Dante’s view Brunetto.

      This sentence is grammatically incorrect. But your point is good.

    2. In the third ring, a fiery rain falls on the sinners, which represents an unnatural phenomenon, like sodomy. Whereas regular rain replenishes the Earth, a fiery rain does the opposite since sodomizers also do not replenish Earth with new life

      very good

    1. Some lay upon the ground, flat on their backs; some huddled in a crouch, and there they sat; and others moved about incessantly

      Only the third group includes sodomites.

    1. If their unchanging personas allow for a fabricated Hell, this, in turn, signifies that they’re evading and going against God’s punishments which He deems appropriate for the souls and are being punished by their own terms.

      Interesting!

    1. Koch, Joseph Anton (Austrian painter, engraver, and draftsman, 1768-1839), Ghirardoni, Giovanni Andrea (Italian painter, died ca. 1628). Iconografia dantesca. 1904. Artstor, library.artstor.org/asset/SS33624_33624_33391147

      Which one did the image you use in your post?

    2. I researched more about Capaneus and found that he was a figure who thought himself so strong that not even Jove could destroy him, but instead he was destroyed by the thunderbolts of Jove

      good!

    1. This idea is also supported in Barolini’s commentary with the quote by Capaneus stating, “As I was alive, so am I dead” (Inferno 14, 51). This line by Capaneus supports the notion that, “…we are our own hell” (Barolini). Capaneus’ special damnation supports this notion and helps Dante the pilgrim realize even more about the design of hell that God intended as he goes about his journey onto the right path.

      This is the most relevant part of your post. It could be clearer, though.

    1. lso note that men are the main inhabitants if not the only inhabtants of this subcircle. The reasoning for this is because it is an attack on God’s perfect image of what is ‘natural.

      what is the connection between these two sentences?

    1. As we, the readers know that in Canto 15 Dante and Virgil are still in the seventh circle of Hell to which are inhabited by sinners who have committed violence against God

      this is a fragment.

    1. Dante admits that is own work referring to the Comedy, is a piece of literature in which he feels the need tell his story even though it seems fictional

      Unclear, maybe due to punctuation.

    1. However, since Dante was Christian and wrote from his beliefs and not those of the Greeks, the head must still represent the earliest humans who were closest to God.  

      nice move!

    1. modern society

      why are you talking about modern society no? Is contractarianism a modern theory that you want to apply to a Medieval text? Please explain.

    2. By anticipating deeper to the Malebolge

      grammar (your subject is we in the following clause so it should be we here... ) anticipate something (not "anticipate to")

    1. The mention of fraud being an evil that only mankind has is the reasoning for the greater punishment of those who commit fraud.

      how do you explain this?

    1. Within this seventh circle the sin is that of suicide, which Dante uses as a religious allegory by showing that although Pier may have been without sin, meaning, Pier might have been innocent of the treasonous crimes attributed to him at the time and therefore sinless, Pier committed suicide which is blasphemous to God and in and of itself condemns the suicided to hell through lack of ability to repent

      This sentence is way too long.

    1. you

      Avoid "you", and avoid "when reading" and similar. It is obvious that we are reading. "Dante describes a dark place... and the loud moans" is one choice.

    1. Also, fraud can hurt more than one person at a time. Somebody in power, like a president, could commit fraud and it would affect millions of people. Propaganda is a form of fraud and it causes discrimination and hatred. The Holocaust is an example of fraud that lead to mass killings.

      Maybe this part needs some elaboration and a sort of introduction.

    2. He hates fraud more than violence because fraud can only hurt humans, whereas violence hurts all creatures

      I don't see how this sentence proves that fraud is worse. I would say the contrary, if I had to judge from this sentence.

    1. Dante says that “my reply was so full” because even though it was misinterpreted, it was more information that what Cavalcanti originally possessed

      Unclear

    1. Another soul interrupts the conversation that barely begun between Farinata and Dante which is later on known to be the father of Guido(Dante’s friend). The father asks Dante why his son did not accompany him, so I can imply that Guido is already dead.

      Is this paragraph necessary to your post, which is entitled "Farinata, friend or foe?"

    1. Although he is no longer living, this reaction shows that his eternal torment is a lesser cause of worry as opposed to the wrongdoings he feels the Guelfs have done him.

      very good!

    1. f a great tomb, on which I made out this,inscribed: ‘I hold Pope Anastasius enticed to leave the true path by Photinus.’” (Digital Dante, note to lines 7-9, canto 11

      I don't think this is a note. It's a translation.

    2. Fraud breaks the promise of love because fraud destroys faith/ trust. Therefore, Pope Anastasius receives the worst punishmen

      Are you accusing Anastasius of Fraud. Since he is not among the fraudulent, you might have to make a case for this (maybe that Dante already anticipates the notion of fraud...)

      (I am also testing hypothes.is again)

    1. Cerberus proceeds to devours his foods with raving hunger and remains to silence while he is fulfilling his appetite.

      Do you see any connection with the topic of the canto?