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  1. Apr 2019
    1. In the “Madonna and Child” by Berlinghiero, Madonna’s face is too big for her body and she’s holding a miniature adult Jesus in her hands. The bodies are not proportional relative to themselves or each other.

      Very good!

    2. The difference is that Dante depicts the inferno as a structured institution however, Van Eyck depicts the inferno as a more chaotic region where the souls are everywhere rather than being localized in different levels.

      Good!

    1. escape

      You missed the point here. The question is:

      Question 2: Make a brief comparison between the last judgement envisions by Dante and this depiction of it (right painting).

    1. This is very different from how Dante was in the beginning of Inferno, where he questioned himself and his worthiness of being the one to do the journey.

      good point

    1. The presence of the words ‘teeth’ and ‘bone’ further emphasize Ugolino’s canine-like actions because it resembles a dog struggling to chomp on a bone whose rough exterior highlights the hardness of Ruggieri’s human flesh as well as the indifference and cruelty of the soul, itself.

      nice!

    1. So in conclusion, the whole pilgrimage was worthless because Lucifer ultimately had zero impact on the development of Dante and his guide to purgatory.

      maybe this is ìntentional

    1. Lucifer used this ability to speak to try and incite rebellion among the other angels

      Good point: see Milton's Paradise Lost if you want to see Lucifer's rhetorical skills!

    1. As Barollini described it: “In spiritual terms, Lucifer is the antithesis of the Divine Trinity: Lucifer spirates death where the Trinity spirates love.”

      Good use of secondary source. You can insert the link to the page in the word Barolini if you want.

    1. Canto 33 focuses on the nature of weeping among the sinners. Dante alters the meaning of weeping for each soul. Count Ugolino wants to cry because he wants to express his grief for eating his own sons however, Alberigo wants to cry in order to obtain some for of autonomy over his own sins. Both want to express their grief for their fate however, neither can express it because crying is a humane characteristic that doesn’t fit their inhumane crimes.

      Nice!

    2. The “stone” represents his loss of humanity because he begins to perceive his sons as food.

      the stone doesn't connect with this kind of perception, I think.

    1. After reading this Canto it made me realize

      After reading this canto, I realized (because the subject of reading is I). OR Reading this canto made me realized (reading is the subject)

  2. Mar 2019
    1. which

      why "which"? which is a relative pronoun. It refers to the last noun mentioned. In this case Satan's body. Your sentence means "Satan's body isn't the first time). Cut which and say just "This isn't the first time).

    1. This made my posts more than just summaries of each canto. I can see that as the weeks went on, I tried to focus more on a specific idea in each canto.

      good for you!

    1. Dante’s exploration of contrapasso in the Inferno is something I find very interesting, as readers can probably tell from the numerous times that I’ve brought it up through my blog posts.

      good analysis

    1. At first I thought the topics I address have all been very different, but looking back I notice I usually write of how Dante views certain sinners and their actions. I write whether he shows the sinners pity or distain, whether he writes of their punishment as fair or unjust.

      good comment

    1. I believe, going forward, this would be a useful technique to add to the upcoming posts because it allows for an analysis of how the vivid text is brought to life in a manner that allows me to visualize the harrowing events in Hell.

      very good!

    2. . Considering that Dante depends solely on Virgil as his guide, it is understandable that I included this connection in order to make my point.

      Absolutely!

    1. My first four blog posts were more like summaries rather than reflective posts. They all included images with a short description of them but, I mostly summarized what the canto was about. However, my blog posts five and six had more connections, comparisons, similarities and changes in style.

      Good for you!

    1. all my other posts have either directly addressed the way the act of remembrance is used in the text or alludes to it by examining the representation of sinners in comparison to their living appearance

      interesting!

    1. On the other hand, I have to admit that my posts lack coherency and logical organization due to the fact that I choose the most appealing image or topic of my interest in a particular canto without paying attention to what I previously wrote about.

      you don't have to stick with the same topic!

    1. Sometimes I find myself formulating my own ideas of what events mean and get so excited that I write my posts on my ideas alone without searching outside commentaries that could take my idea a little bit further as well as support my ideas. Finding solid support would not only validate and explain my ideas but would also help other students reading my posts better understand the ideas I’m trying to express if maybe the way I have worded something isn’t as clear as it could be.

      This is a very important point.

    1. Of course, Dante did not place this reference here knowingly since he believed that the Donation of Constantine happened. Regardless, I believe it is worth mentioning as an interesting observation even though it is undoubtedly without intent.

      You already said this.

    2. The forgery of the Donation of Constantine was an act that I would classify as violence using intellect or in a broader term fraud as well as a theft of power from those who held it by dishonest means.

      good point

    3. was the first example of the encyclopedic nature of Dante’s Commedia I was introduced to and whose layers I find fascinating.

      I don't understand: you think that before this canto there are no references to previous writings or culture?

    1. When Ciampolo bluffed, it portrayed Ciampolo’s victory and Alichino’s defeat (Falvo

      In this sentence you are using Falvo's exact words, which should quoted between inverted commas. Please see out plagiarism test.

    2. The Logistic Model Has Good and Bad Features PROS CONS Mathematically Tractable, College Life

      What is this? Is this a title? Maybe check MLA style to see how to quote a website. (But I have the impression that this is not a scientific website like the databases we are using)

    3. Martinez and Durlings note to lines 19-21, states that the traditional idea of how dolphins would warn the sailors when there was a storm approaching

      This is incomplete.

    4. Sparknotes

      This is not an acceptable source in academia, because those text are not peer reviewed. You don't even need a secondary sources to understand that Dante and Virgil are hiding (the poem says it).

    1. the Pilgrim

      the pilgrim lives the story, doesn't tell him (unless you mean that when the Pilgrim speaks of himself in the Comedy he does so with pride and not shame – but you should rephrase your sentence).

    2. Virgil’s encouragement for the Pilgrim to seek fame can be read as representing Dante’s act of writing the Divine Comedy, to use his life to gain fame by writing poetry

      Good!

    1. The demons are pretending to help Dante cross the 8th Circle hence they’re acting as “dolphins” leading Dante and Vergil who represent the sailors however, the beasts are really like the sinners themselves who trick and deceive people.  

      very nice!

    1. Barolini elaborates on this point by claiming, “Malacoda [Evil Tail] weaves truth with falsehood into a perfectly designed trap, giving instructions and information that seem straightforward and helpful to Virgilio but that his troops can decode as deceitful and hostile,” (Barolini)

      good use of the secondary source

    1. Given that Dante’s father was accused of usury, a form of fraud, could this be an admission by Dante that the accusations against his father were not only true but also that Dante himself assisted in that fraud? Or could it symbolize Dante freeing himself from the shame he felt due to his father’s crimes since the sins of the father should not fall upon the son?

      Good questions

    1. In Canto 23, Virgil and Dante managed to slip away from Barbariccia and the other demons that were distracted by the demons Calcabrina and Alinchino fighting. Virgil and Dante saw this as their final opportunity to leave

      Please use the present tense.

    1. This contrasts with the way in which most of the sinners in Hell are prey to their emotions and physical desires such as anger, lust, greed, and so forth. Although Virgil is in one circle of Hell, he is only there because he is not a Christian; he is a pagan. Virgil, however, uses his willpower to master his emotions. Throughout the poem, the ability to master emotions is seen to be a uniquely human characteristic that identifies with human ability.

      nice!

    1. He is becoming more aware of his connections to the souls in Hell, especially when they are connected to a political or religious background in which Dante participates.

      this is unclear... Dante feels connected to Nicholas III? Dante is part of the clergy?