415 Matching Annotations
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where
when
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Beatrice addressing Dante
This doesn't happen in Inferno.
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In Canto 2, line 70 Beatrice is introduced, “I am Beatrice who cause you to go
It seems like Beatrice is in Inferno talking to Dante. Please rephrase explaining that this dialogue is reported by Virgil. Beatrice talks to Virgil, not to Dante
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was
Please always use the present tense.
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After encountering Virgil, he
revise
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somewhat
he is exactly his guide, cut "somewhat of"
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as to
of
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collaboration
a collation?
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leader
better to say "guide"
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This image stuck out to me over the others because as I was reading, I was copying down certain lines that suck out to me
This is OK in a post, but remember to avoid this kind of register when you write a more formal paper.
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Wrold
Please check and fix spelling throughout the post.
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the vita of Christina t
Is this a title?
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Paulo’s
Paolo's
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entered
Please always use the present tense when you tell what happens in the "story" .
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Vergil
Please use the spelling of the edition we are using: Virgil.
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