Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The molecular mechanisms underlying ciliogenesis are not well understood. Previously, work from the same group (Wu et al., 2018) identified myosin-Va as an important protein in transporting preciliary vesicles to the mother vesicles, allowing for initiation of ciliogenesis. The exocyst complex has previously been implicated in ciliogenesis and protein trafficking to cilia. Here, Lin et al. investigate the role of exocyst complex protein EXOC6A in cilia formation. The authors find that EXOC6A localizes to preciliary vesicles, ciliary vesicles, and the ciliary sheath. EXOC6A colocalizes with Myo-Va in the ciliary vesicle and the ciliary sheath, and both proteins are removed from fully assembled cilia. EXOC6A is not required for Myo-Va localization, but Myo-VA and EHD1 are required for EXOC6A to localize in ciliary vesicles. The authors propose that EXOC6A vesicles continually remodel the cilium: FRAP analysis demonstrates that EXOC6A is a dynamic protein, and live imaging shows that EXOC6A fuses with and buds off from the ciliary membrane. Loss of EXOC6A reduces, but does not eliminate, the number of cilia formed in cells. Any cilia that are still present are structurally abnormal, with either bent morphologies or the absence of some transition zone proteins. Overall, the analyses and imaging are well done, and the conclusions are well supported by the data. The work will be of interest to cell biologists, especially those interested in centrosomes and cilia.

Strengths:

The TEM micrographs are of excellent quality. The quality of the imaging overall is very good, especially considering that these are dynamic processes occurring in a small region of the cell. The data analysis is well done and the quantifications are very helpful. The manuscript is well-written and the final figure is especially helpful in understanding the model.

Weaknesses:

Additional information about the functional and mechanistic roles of EXOC6A would improve the manuscript greatly.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, Gamen et al. investigated the roles of hypoxia and HIF1a signaling in regulating epicardial function during cardiac development and neonatal heart regeneration. The authors identified hypoxic regions in the epicardium during development and demonstrated that genetic and pharmacological stabilization of HIF1a during neonatal heart injury prolonged epicardial activation, preserved myocardium, enhanced infarct resolution, and maintained cardiac function beyond the normal postnatal regenerative window.

Strengths:

HIF1a signaling was manipulated in an epicardium-specific manner using appropriate genetic tools.

Weaknesses:

Some conclusions still need clarification.

Comments on revisions:

(1) The authors' comment on the partial overlap of HP1 and HIF1a IF signals (HIF1a is highly unstable ... broader regions of hypoxia) is reasonable and would help readers interpret the data if included in the text describing Fig. 1.

(2) The conclusion regarding WT1+ cells in Fig. 2a and b remains unclear. Both panels display larger and smaller magenta cells, and when all are taken into account, the overall number does not appear substantially different. Additional clarification is needed on how the quantification was performed.

(3) Regarding Figure 6-figure supplement 1c, it seems difficult to conclude the endothelial identity of WT1+ cells based on EMCN staining, as the markers do not overlap. The authors note that WT1 is upregulated in endothelial cells, but this has been reported in the context of injury, which differs from the context of the present study involving Molidustat.

Decision simplifies access to legal abortion for women and girls who became pregnant due to rape by removing the need for proof or judicial approval by relying international rights standards it holds the state accountable for ensuring timely and unimpeded access to abortion service.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors meticulously characterized EC-specific Tgfbr1, Tgfbr2, or double knockout in the retina, demonstrating through convincing immunostaining data that loss of TGF-β signaling disrupts retinal angiogenesis and choroidal neovascularization. Compared to other genetic models (Fzd4 KO, Ndp KO, VEGF KO), the Tgfbr1/2 KO retina exhibits the most severe immune cell infiltration. The authors proposed that TGF-β signaling loss triggers vascular inflammation, attracting immune cells - a phenotype specific to CNS vasculature, as non-CNS organs remain unaffected.

Strengths:

The immunostaining results presented are clear and robust. The authors performed well-controlled analyses against relevant mouse models. snRNA-seq corroborates immune cell leakage in the retina and vascular inflammation in the brain.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have revised the manuscript and addressed all my questions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study investigates whether individuals can learn to adopt egalitarian norms that incur a personal monetary cost, such as rejecting offers that benefit them more than the giver (advantageous inequitable offers). While these behaviors are uncommon, two experiments aim to demonstrate that individuals can learn to reject such offers by observing a "teacher" who follows these norms. The authors use computational modelling to argue that learners adopt these norms through a sophisticated process, inferring the latent structure of the teacher's preferences, akin to theory of mind.

Strengths:

This paper is well-written and tackles an important topic relevant to social norms, morality, and justice. The findings are promising (though further control conditions are necessary to support the conclusions). The study is well-situated in the literature, with a clever experimental design and a computational approach that may offer insights into latent cognitive processes. In the revision, the authors clarified some questions related to the initial submission.

Weaknesses:

Despite these strengths, I remain unconvinced that the current evidence supports the paper's central claims. Below, I outline several issues that, in my view, limit the strength of the conclusions.

(1) Experimental Design and Missing Control Condition:

The authors set out to test whether observing a "teacher" who is averse to advantageous inequity (Adv-I) will affect observers' own rejection of Adv-I offers. However, I think the design of the task lacks an important control condition needed to address this question. At present, participants are assigned to one of two teachers: DIS or DIS+ADV. Behavioral differences between these groups can only reveal relative differences in influence; they cannot establish whether (and how) either teacher independently affects participants' own behavior. For example, a significant difference between conditions can emerge even if participants are only affected by the DIS teacher and are not affected at all by the DIS+ADV teacher. What is crucially missing here is a no-teacher control condition, which can then be compared with each teacher condition separately. This control condition would also control for pure temporal effects unrelated to teacher influence (e.g., increasing Adv-I rejections due to guilt build-up).

While this criticism applies to both experiments, it is especially apparent in Experiment 2. As shown in Figure 4, the interaction for 10:90 offers reflects a decrease in rejection rates following the DIS teacher, with no significant change following the DIS+ADV teacher. Ignoring temporal effects, this pattern suggests that participants may be learning NOT to reject from the DIS teacher, rather than learning to reject from the DIS+ADV teacher. On this basis, I do not see convincing evidence that participants' own choices were shaped by observing Adv-I rejections.

In the Discussion, the authors write that "We found that participants' own Adv-I-averse preferences shifted towards the preferences of the Teacher they just observed, and the strength of these contagion effects related to the degree of behavior change participants exhibited on behalf of the Teachers, suggesting that they internalized, at least somewhat, these inequity preferences." However, there is no evidence that directly links the degree of behaviour change (on the teacher's behalf) to contagion effects (own behavioural change). I think there was a relevant analysis in the original version, but it was removed from the current version.

(2) Modelling Efforts: The modelling approach is underdeveloped. The identification of the "best model" lacks transparency, as no model-recovery results are provided. Additionally, behavioural fits for the losing models are not shown, leaving readers in the dark about where these models fail. Readers would benefit from seeing qualitative/behavioural patterns that favour the winning model. Moreover, the reinforcement learning (RL) models used are overly simplistic, treating actions as independent when they are likely inversely related. For example, the feedback that the teacher would have rejected an offer provides evidence that rejection is "correct" but also that acceptance is "an error," and the latter is not incorporated into the modelling. In other words, offers are modelled as two-armed bandits (where separate values are learned for reject and accept actions), but the situation is effectively a one-armed bandit (if one action is correct, the other is mistaken). It is unclear to what extent this limitation affects the current RL formulations. Can the authors justify/explain their reasoning for including these specific variants? The manuscript only states Q-values for reject actions, but what are the Q-values for accept actions? This is unclear.

In Experiment 2, only the preferred model is capable of generalization, so it is perhaps unsurprising that this model "wins." However, this does not strongly support the proposed learning mechanism, lacking a comparison with simpler generalizing mechanisms (see following comments).

(3) Conceptual Leap in Modelling Interpretation: The distinction between simple RL models and preference-inference models seems to hinge on the ability to generalize learning from one offer to another. Whereas in the RL models, learning occurs independently for each offer (hence no cross-offer generalization), preference inference allows for generalization between different offers. However, the paper does not explore "model-free" RL models that allow generalization based on the similarity of features of the offers (e.g., payment for the receiver, payment for the offer-giver, who benefits more). Such models are more parsimonious and could explain the results without invoking a theory of mind or any modelling of the teacher. In such model versions, a learner acquires a functional form that allows prediction of the teacher's feedback based on offer features (e.g., linear or quadratic weighting). Because feedback for an offer modulates the parameters of this function (feature weights), generalization occurs without necessarily evoking any sophisticated model of the other person. This leaves open the possibility that RL models could perform just as well or even outperform the preference learning model, casting doubt on the authors' conclusions.

Of note: even the behaviourists knew that when Little Albert was taught to fear rats, this fear generalized to rabbits. This could occur simply because rabbits are somewhat similar to rats. But this doesn't mean Little Albert had a sophisticated model of animals that he used to infer how they behave.

In their rebuttal letter, the authors acknowledge these possibilities, but the manuscript still does not explore or address alternative mechanisms.

(4) Limitations of the Preference-Inference Model: The preference-inference model struggles to capture key aspects of the data, such as the increase in rejection rates for 70:30 DI offers during the learning phase (e.g., Fig. 3A, AI+DI blue group). This is puzzling. Thinking about this, I realized the model makes quite strong, unintuitive predictions which are not examined. For example, if a subject begins the learning phase rejecting the 70:30 offer more than 50% of the time (meaning the starting guilt parameter is higher than 1.5), then, over learning, the tendency to reject will decrease to below 50% (the guilt parameter will be pulled down below 1.5). This is despite the fact that the teacher rejects 75% of the offers. In other words, as learning continues, learners will diverge from the teacher. On the other hand, if a participant begins learning by tending to accept this offer (guilt < 1.5), then during learning, they can increase their rejection rate but never above 50%. Thus, one can never fully converge on the teacher. I think this relates to the model's failure in accounting for the pattern mentioned above. I wonder if individuals actually abide by these strict predictions. In any case, these issues raise questions about the validity of the model as a representation of how individuals learn to align with a teacher's preferences (given that the model doesn't really allow for such an alignment).

In their rebuttal letter, the authors acknowledged these anomalies and stated that they were able to build a better model (where anomalies are mitigated, though not fully eliminated). But they still report the current model and do not develop/discuss alternatives. A more principled model may be a Bayesian model where participants learn a belief distribution (rather than point estimates) regarding the teacher's parameters.

(5) Statistical Analysis: The authors state in their rebuttal letter that they used the most flexible random effect structure in mixed-effects models. But this seems not to be the case in the model reported in Table SI3 (the very same model was used for other analyses too). Indeed, here it seems only intercepts are random effects. This left me confused about which models were used.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This important study by Turner et al., examines the functional role of a sparse but unique population of neurons in the cortex that express Nitric oxide synthase (Nos1). To do this, they pharmacolologically ablate these neurons in focal region of whisker related primary somatosensory (S1) cortex using a saponin-Substance P conjugate. Using widefield and 2-photon microscopy, as well as field recordings, they examine the impact of this cell specific lesion on blood flow dynamics and neuronal population activity. Within primary somatosensory cortex after Nos1 ablation, they find changes in neural activity patterns, decreased delta band power, reduced sensory evoked changes in blood flow (specifically eliminates the sustained blood flow change after stimulation) and decreased vasomotion.

Strengths:

This was a technically challenging study and the experiments were executed in an expert manner. The manuscript was well written and I appreciated the cartoon summary diagrams included in each figure. The analysis was rigorous and appropriate. Their discovery that Nos1 neurons can have significant effects on blood flow dynamics and neural activity is quite novel that should seed many follow up, mechanistic experiments to explain this phenomenon. The conclusions were justified by the convincing data presented.

Weaknesses:

I did not find any major flaws with the study. I originally noted some potential issues with the authors' characterization of the lesion and its extent, but that has been resolved in the revised manuscript.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have thoughtfully addressed the relatively minor concerns I had originally raised. Congratulations to the authors for producing this important paper.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

eQTLs have emerged as a method for interpreting GWAS signals. However, some GWAS signals are difficult to explain with eQTLs. In this paper, the authors demonstrated that caQTLs can explain these signals. This suggests that for GWAS signals to actually lead to disease phenotypes, they must be accessible in the chromatin. This implies that for GWAS signals to translate into disease phenotypes, they need to be accessible within the chromatin.

However, fundamentally, caQTLs, like GWAS, have the limitation of not being able to determine which genes mediate the influence on disease phenotypes. This limitation is consistent with the constraints observed in this study.

(1) Reproducibility / Methods. The concrete numbers provided in the authors' response (e.g., 20 YRI LCL ATAC‑seq samples used only for peak discovery; caQTL mapping restricted to 100 GBR LCLs; 99,320 ATAC peaks tested vs 14,872 genes for eQTL; 373 European RNA‑seq samples, with clarification of overlap) do not appear to be reflected in the Methods. These specifics should be incorporated directly into the Methods sections.

(2) Experimental evidence demonstrating transcription factor binding at representative caQTL peaks would strengthen causal interpretation of these loci.

(3) Tissue/cell‑type specificity of caQTLs: Prior work supports that chromatin‑level effects are broadly shared across cellular states, whereas expression effects are more context‑specific; thus, caQTLs are generally less "state‑specific" than eQTLs. However, this does not imply equivalence across distinct cell types: caQTLs derived from different cell types may yield different results, particularly where accessibility is cell‑type restricted.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript reports high-resolution functional MRI data and MEG data revealing additional mechanistic information about an established paradigm studying how foveal regions of primary visual cortex (V1) are involved in processing peripheral visual stimuli. Because of the retinotopic organization of V1, peripheral stimuli should not evoke responses in the regions of V1 that represent stimuli in the center of the visual field (the fovea). However, functional MRI responses in foveal regions do reflect the characteristics of peripheral visual stimuli - this is a surprising finding first reported in 2008. The present study uses fMRI data with sub-millimeter resolution to study the how responses at different depths in the foveal gray matter do or don't reflect peripheral object characteristics during 2 different tasks: one in which observers needed to make detailed judgments about object identity, and one in which observers needed to make more coarse judgments about object orientation. FMRI results reveal interesting and informative patterns in these two conditions. A follow-on MEG study yields information about the timing of these responses. Put together, the findings settle some questions in the field and add new information about the nature of visual feedback to V1.

Strengths:

(1) Rigorous and appropriate use of "laminar fMRI" techniques.

(2) The introduction does an excellent job of contextualizing the work.

(3) Control experiments and analyses are designed and implemented well

Weaknesses:

(1) The use of the term "low order" to describe object orientation is potentially confusing. During review, the authors considered this issue and responded that they would continue with the use of the term low-order to describe object orientation because a low-pass spatial frequency filter would provide object orientation information. This is certainly a reasonable perspective; nonetheless, this reviewer thinks spatial frequencies that low are not readily represented by neurons in early visual cortex and it is common to use "low-order" to refer to features extracted in early visual areas, so I think this causes confusion.

(2) The methods contain a nice description of the methods for "correcting the vascular-related signals". I'm guessing this is the method that removed, e.g., 22% of foveal voxels (previous paragraph), but it's not entirely clear whether the voxel selection methods described in the "correcting the vascular-related signals" are describing the same processing step referred to in the previous paragraph as "a portion of voxels was removed based on large vein distribution".

(3) It is quite difficult to perform laminar analyses across multiple visual areas because distortion compensation is not perfect and registration of functional to anatomical data will always be a bit better in some places and a bit worse in others. An ideal manuscript would include some images showing registration quality in V1, LOC, and IPS regions for a few different participants, or include some kind of quality metric indicating the confidence in depth assignments in different regions.

(4) For the decoding analysis, it would be helpful to have more information about how samples were defined for each condition -- were the beta values for entire blocks used as samples for each condition, or were separate timepoints during a block used in the SVM as repeated samples for each condition?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This important study shows that betulin from wild peach trees disrupts neural signaling in aphids by targeting a conserved site in the insect GABA receptor. The authors present a nicely integrated set of molecular, physiological, and genetic experiments to establish the compound's species-specific mode of action. While the mechanistic evidence is solid, the manuscript would benefit from a broader discussion of evolutionary conservation and potential off-target ecological effects.

Strengths:

The main strengths of the study lie in its mechanistic clarity and experimental rigor. The identification of a betulin-binding single threonine residue was supported by (1) site-directed mutagenesis and (2) functional assays. These experiments strongly support the specificity of action. Furthermore, the use of comparative analyses between aphids and fruit flies demonstrates an important effort to explore species specificity, and the integration of quantitative data further enhances the robustness of the conclusions.

Comments on revisions:

The revision satisfactorily addresses my concerns on evolutionary context, methodological clarity, and ecological risk.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In classical models of signaling network, the signaling activity increases monotonically with the ligand affinity. However, certain receptors prefer ligands of intermediate affinity. In the paper, the authors present a new minimal model to derive generic conditions for ligand specificity. In brief, this requires multi-site phosphorylation and that high-affinity complexes be more prone to degrade. This particular type of kinetic discrimination allows to overcome equilibrium constraints.

Strengths:

The model is simple, and it adds only a few parameters to classical generic models. They moreover vary these additional parameters in ranges based on experimental observations. They explain how the introduction of these new parameters is essential to ligand specificity. Their model quantitatively reproduces the ligand specificity of a certain receptor. They finally provide testable prediction.

Weaknesses:

The naming of multiple variables as activity without precise definitions may be confusing to readers.

Comments on revisions:

I thank the authors for addressing my comments. One point remains regarding the naming of multiple variables as activity. Besides using other words, the authors may consider giving precise definitions of terms, e.g. by writing "We define kinase activity as the phosphorylation rate $\omega=k_p\tau$." A connection that appears only at line 204 in the present manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Cupollilo et al. investigate the properties of hippocampal CA3 neurons that express the immediate early gene cFos in response to a single foot shock. They compare ex-vivo the electrophysiological properties of these "engram neurons" labeled with two different cFos promoter-driven green markers: Their new virally delivered tool FLEN labels neurons 2-6 h after activity, while RAM contains additional enhancers and peaks considerably later (>24 h). Since the fraction of labeled CA3 cells is comparable with both constructs, it is assumed (but not tested) that they label the same population of activated neurons at different time points. Both FLEN+ and RAM+ neurons in CA3 receive more synaptic inputs compared to non-expressing control neurons, which could be a causal factor for cFos activation, or a very early consequence thereof. Frequency facilitation and E/I ratio of mossy fiber inputs were also tested, but are not different in both cFos+ groups of neurons. One day after foot shock, RAM+ neurons are more excitable than RAM- neurons, suggesting a slow increase in excitability as a major consequence of cFos activation.

Strengths:

The study is conducted to high standards and contributes significantly to our understanding of memory formation and consolidation in the hippocampus. Modifications of intrinsic neuronal properties seem to be more salient than overall changes in the total number of (excitatory and inhibitory) inputs, although a switch in the source of the synaptic inputs would not have been detected by the methods employed in this study

Weaknesses:

The new tool FLEN is not quantitatively compared to e.g. the TetTag reporter mouse. Nevertheless, the fluorescent images of FLEN+ neurons are quite convincing.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Using the theory of efficient coding, the authors study how neural gains may be adjusted to optimize information transmission by noisy neural populations while minimizing metabolic cost, under the assumption that other aspects of neural activity (i.e. tuning) are determined by the computation performed by the network.

The manuscript first presents mathematical results for the general case where the computational goals of the neural population are not specified (the computation is implicit in the assumed tuning curves). It then develops the theory for a specific probabilistic coding scheme. The general theory provides an explanation for firing rate homeostasis at the level of neural clusters with firing rate heterogeneity within clusters. The specific application further explains stimulus-specific adaptation in visual cortex.

The mathematical derivations, simulations and application to visual cortex data are solid as far as I can tell.

This remains a highly technical manuscript although the authors have improved the clarity of presentation of the general theory (which is the bulk of the work presented) and better motivated/explained modeling assumptions and choices. In the second part, the manuscript focuses on a specific code (homeostatic DDC) showing that this can be implemented by divisive normalization and can explain stimulus-specific adaptation.

Strengths:

The problem of efficient coding is a long-standing and important one. This manuscript contributes to that field by proposing a theory of efficient coding through gain adjustments, independent of the computational goals of the system. The main assumption, and insight, is that computational goals and efficiency can be in some sense factorized: tuning curve shapes are determined by the computational goal, whereas gains can be adjusted to optimize transmission of information.

One key result is a normative explanation for firing rate homeostasis at the level of neural clusters (groups of neurons that perform a similar computation) with firing rate heterogeneity within each cluster. Both phenomena are widely observed, and reconciling them under one theory is important.

The mathematical derivations are thorough. Although the model of neural activity is artificial, the authors make sure to include many aspects of cortical physiology, while also keeping the models quite general.

Section 2.5 derives the conditions in which homeostasis would be near-optimal in cortex, which appear to be consistent with many empirical observations in V1. This indicates that homeostasis in V1 might be indeed a close to optimal solution to code efficiently in the face of noise.

The application to the data of Benucci et al 2013 is the first to offer a normative explanation of stimulus-specific adaptation in V1.

The novelty and significance of the work are presented clearly in the newly extended Introduction and Discussion.

Weaknesses:

The manuscript remains hard to read. The general theory occupies most of the manuscript, as needed to convey it fully. But as a result the second part on homeostatic DDC and adaptation is somewhat underdeveloped and risks having less visibility than it might deserve.

The paper Benucci et al 2013 shows that homeostasis holds for some stimulus distributions, but not others i.e. when the 'adapter' is present too often. This manuscript, like the Benucci paper, discards those datasets. But from a theoretical standpoint, it seems important to consider why that would be the case, and if it can be predicted by the theory proposed here. The authors now acknowledge this limitation in the Discussion.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors convincingly demonstrate that a population of CCK+ spinal neurons in the deep dorsal horn express the G protein coupled estrogen receptor GPR30 to modulate pain sensitivity in the chronic constriction injury (CCI) model of neuropathic pain in mice. Using complementary pharmacological and genetic knockdown experiments they convincingly show that GPR30 inhibition or knockdown reverses mechanical, tactile and thermal hypersensitivity, conditioned place aversion, and c-fos staining in the spinal dorsal horn after CCI. They propose that GPR30 mediates an increase in postsynaptic AMPA receptors after CCI using slice electrophysiology which may underlie the increased behavioral sensitivity. They then use anterograde tracing approaches to show that CCK and GPR30 positive neurons in the deep dorsal horn may receive direct connections from primary somatosensory cortex. Chemogenetic activation of these dorsal horn neurons proposed to be connected to S1 increased nociceptive sensitivity in a GPR30 dependent manner. Overall, the data are very convincing and the experiments are well conducted and adequately controlled. However, the proposed model of descending corticospinal facilitation of nociceptive sensitivity through GPR30 in a population of CCK+ neurons in the dorsal horn is not fully supported.

Strengths:

The experiments are very well executed and adequately controlled throughout the manuscript. The data are nicely presented and supportive of a role for GPR30 signaling in the spinal dorsal horn influencing nociceptive sensitivity following CCI. The authors also did an excellent job of using complementary approaches to rigorously test their hypothesis.

Weaknesses:

The primary weakness in this manuscript involves overextending the interpretations of the data to still propose a role for corticospinal descending facilitation. While the viral tracing demonstrates a potential connection between S1 and CCK+ or GPR30+ spinal neurons, no direct evidence is provided for S1 in facilitating any activity of these neurons in the dorsal horn.

Comments on the latest version:

The authors did an excellent job addressing many of the critiques raised. Despite acknowledging that a direct functional corticospinal projection to CCK/GPR30+neurons is not supported by the data and revising the title, these claims still persist throughout the manuscript. Manipulating gene expression or the activity of postsynaptic neurons through a trans-synaptic labeling strategy does not directly support any claim that those upstream neurons are directly modulating spinal neurons through the proposed pathway. Indeed they might, but that is not demonstrated here.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This is a very interesting study from Vandendoren and colleagues examining the role of PVN oxytocin neurons during thermoregulatory behaviors, in particular during thermoregulatory huddling. The findings are important and compelling, and have implications for the thermoregulation field as well as the social/naturalistic behavior field.

Strengths:

The study is very creative and tackles a challenging task to examine how natural and social behavior influences neural circuits for a homeostatic system such as thermoregulation. The authors use a combination of state-of-the-art tools (photometry, optogenetics, automated behavior tracking, thermal imaging, and core body temperature measurement), often in combination with each other, to produce a rigorous and high-dimensional dataset. Carrying out tightly temperature-controlled experiments and examining natural behavior, neural activity, and body physiology simultaneously is quite a feat. I applaud the authors for taking this on in a rigorous and detailed manner. This paper will be valuable for both the thermoregulation field as well as for researchers interested in naturalistic social behaviors. The conclusions are supported by the data.

Weaknesses:

I have a number of questions and suggestions for clarification that would help improve the interpretation of the findings.

(1) Figure 1D-F: It would be helpful to include representative images of cFos expression in the PVN, LS, and DMH during both quiescent and solo huddling conditions, to better illustrate the reported differences.

(2) Figure 1C: The data suggest a general suppression of neural activity during sleep-associated quiescent huddling, which somewhat complicates the interpretation of what specifically the active huddling cells are responding to. A more informative control might have been a comparison between huddling and a more generic form of social engagement (e.g., dyadic sniffing) to assess whether huddling-responsive neurons are broadly tuned to social stimuli. While it may not be feasible to add this experimentally at this time, a brief discussion of this limitation in the main text would be valuable.

(3) Figure 2H-J vs. Figure 1: The fiber photometry data suggest increased PVN activity during quiescent huddling vs active huddling, which appears to contrast with the cFos results from Figure 1. It would be helpful for the authors to comment on possible reasons for this discrepancy-e.g., methodological differences, temporal resolution, or cell-type specificity.

(4) Figure 2O: A comparable linear regression for active huddling would be informative to assess whether the observed relationships extend across behavioral states.

(5) Temperature manipulation: The use of floor temperature changes presents a distinct physiological and sensory experience from, for example, manipulation of ambient temperature. A discussion of how this choice may affect neural circuit engagement or interpretation of thermoregulatory responses would be beneficial.

(6) Correlations with behavior: Across the manuscript, it would be informative to see correlations between huddle duration and neural activity (e.g., cFos expression, calcium signal magnitude). Similarly, do longer huddles produce greater thermogenic effects?

(7) Lactating vs. virgin mothers: The inclusion of maternal data is intriguing but feels somewhat disconnected from the central huddling-thermoregulation narrative. If these experiments are to remain, additional explanation of their rationale and how they fit into the broader story would help clarify their relevance.

(8) Optogenetic manipulation: Have the authors tested the effect of PVN OT neuron stimulation or inhibition during huddling? Even a negative result would be of interest to the field. If these data exist (main or supplementary), I apologize for missing them. If not, the authors might consider including them or commenting briefly on any attempts or challenges in carrying out these experiments.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study investigates the role of the enzyme Alcohol Dehydrogenase 5 (ADH5) in brown adipose tissue (BAT) during aging. BAT is crucial for thermogenesis and energy balance, but its function and mass diminish with age, contributing to metabolic dysfunction and age-related diseases. ADH5, also known as S-nitrosoglutathione reductase, regulates nitric oxide (NO) signaling by damaging S-nitrosylation modifications from proteins. The authors show that aging in mice leads to increased protein S-nitrosylation but reduced ADH5 expression in BAT, resulting in impaired metabolic and cognitive functions. Deletion of ADH5 in BAT accelerates tissue senescence and systemic metabolic decline.

Mechanisticaremoving lly, aging suppresses ADH5 via downregulation of heat shock factor 1 (HSF1), a master regulator of protein homeostasis. Importantly, pharmacologically boosting HSF1 improves BAT function and mitigates both metabolic and cognitive declines in aged mice. The findings highlight a critical HSF1-ADH5 pathway in BAT that protects against aging-related dysfunction, suggesting that targeting this pathway may offer new therapeutic strategies for improving metabolic health and cognition during aging.

Strengths:

This research provides insight into the interplay between redox biology, proteostasis, and metabolic decline in aging. By identifying a specific enzyme that controls SNO status in BAT and further developing a therapy to target ADH5 in BAT to prevent age-related decline, the authors have identified a putative mechanism to combat age-related decline in BAT function.

Weaknesses:

(1) Sex needs to be considered as a biological variable, at a minimum in the reporting of the phenotypes observed in this manuscript, but also potentially by further experimentation. The only mention of sex I could find is that the authors reported the general protein SNO status in BAT is increased with age in male C57Bl/6J mice. Is this also true in female mice? For all of the ADH5 knockout mouse data, are these also male mice? Do female ADH5 knockout mice have a consistent phenotype, or are the sex differences?

(2) It would be helpful to know the extent of ADH5 loss in the adipose tissue of knockout mice, either by mRNA or by immunoblotting for ADH5. It could also be helpful to know if ADH5 is deleted from the inguinal adipose tissue of these mice, especially since they seem to accumulate fat mass as they age (Figure 2B).

(3) For Figure 4D, the ChiP, it would be better to show the IgG control pulldowns. Also, there's an unexpected thing where all the values for the Adh5 flox mice are exactly the same - how is this possible? Finally, it's not clear how these BAT samples were treated with HSF1A - was this done in vivo or ex vivo?

(4) I didn't understand what was on the y-axis in Figure 5A, nor how it was measured. I assume it's HSF1A, and maybe it's the part in the methods with the Metabolomic Analysis, but this wasn't clear. It would also help if release from the NC-Vehicle formulation could be included as a negative control.

(5) What happens to BAT protein S-nitrosylation in HSF1A-treated mice?

(6) Figure 1B: What is the age of the positive (ADH5BKO) and negative (Adh5 fl) mice?

(7) Figure 1F: Can you clarify what I'm looking at in the P16ink4a panels? The red staining? Is the blue staining DAPI? This is also a problem in Figures 3C, 3D and 5G, and 5I. Figure 4B looks great - maybe this could be used as an example?

(8) Figure 3B looks a bit odd since 7 of the 12 total mice seem to have an IL-beat level of exactly 5. I was a bit unclear about why arbitrary units were used for IL-1β levels since it says an ELISA was used to quantify IL-1β; however, in the methods the authors describe a Bio-Rad Laboratories Bio-plex Pro Mouse Cytokine 23-Plex approach, which I don't think is an ELISA. Can the approach to measuring IL-1β be clarified, and could the authors explain why they can't show units of mass for IL-1β levels?

(9) Figure 2C and 2D: I don't really understand why the Heat or VO2 need to be expressed as fold changes. Can't these just be expressed with absolute units? It's also confusing why the heat fold change is 1.0 in the light and the dark for the floxed animal. I bet this is because the knockout is normalized to the floxed animal for light and then normalized again for the dark period, but since both are on the same graph, readers could be confused into thinking there is no difference in the heat production or VO2 between light and dark, which would be surprising. This could all just be solved if absolute units were used.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The intracellular pathogen Toxoplasma gondii scavenges metal ions such as iron and zinc to support its replication; however, mechanistic studies of iron and zinc uptake are limited. This study investigates the function of a putative iron and zinc transporter, ZFT. In this paper, the authors provide evidence that ZFT mediates iron and zinc uptake by examining the regulation of ZFT expression by iron and zinc levels, the impact of altered ZFT expression on iron sensitivity, and the effects of ZFT depletion on intracellular iron and zinc levels in the parasite. The effects of ZFT depletion on parasite growth are also investigated, showing the importance of ZFT function for the parasite.

Strengths:

A key strength of the study is the use of multiple complementary approaches to demonstrate that ZFT is involved in iron and zinc uptake. Additionally, the authors build on their finding that loss of ZFT impairs parasite growth by showing that ZFT depletion induces stage conversion and leads to defects in both the apicoplast and mitochondrion.

Weaknesses:

(1) Excess zinc was shown not to alter ZFT expression, but a cation chelator (TPEN) did lead to decreased expression. While TPEN is often used to reduce zinc levels, does it have any effect on iron levels? Could the reduction in ZFT after TPEN treatment be due to a reduction in the level of iron or another cation?

(2) ZFT expression was found to be dynamic depending on the size of the vacuole, based on mean fluorescence intensity measurements. Looking at protein levels by Western blot at different times during infection would strengthen this finding.

(3) ZFT localization remained at the parasite periphery under low iron conditions. However, in the images shown in Figure S1c, larger vacuoles (containing 4-8 parasites) are shown for the untreated conditions, and single parasite-containing vacuoles are shown for the low iron condition. As ZFT localization is predominantly at the basal end of the parasite in larger PV and at the parasite periphery for smaller vacuoles, it would be better to compare vacuoles of similar size between the untreated and low-iron conditions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors find that the bacterial pathogen Shigella flexneri uses the T3SS effector IpaH1.4 to induce degradation of the IFNg-induced protein RNF213. They show that in the absence of IpaH1.4, cytosolic Shigella is bound by RNF213. Furthermore, RNF213 conjugates linear and lysine-linked ubiquitin to Shigella independently of LUBAC. Intriguingly, they find that Shigella lacking ipaH1.4 or mxiE, which regulates the expression of some T3SS effectors, are not killed even when ubiquitylated by RNF213 and that these mutants are still able to replicate within the cytosol, suggesting that Shigella encodes additional effectors to escape from host defenses mediated by RNF213-driven ubiquitylation.

Strengths:

The authors take a variety of approaches, including host and bacterial genetics, gain-of-function and loss-of-function assays, cell biology, biochemistry, . Overall, the experiments are elegantly designed, rigorous, and convincing.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a very interesting collection of methods and results using brain ultrasound localization microscopy (ULM) in awake mice. They emphasize the effect of the level of anesthesia on the quantifiable elements assessable with this technique (i.e. vessel diameter, flow speed, in veins and arteries, area perfused, in capillaries) and demonstrate the possibility of achieving longitudinal cerebrovascular assessment in one animal during several weeks with their protocol.

The authors made a good rewriting the article based on the reviewers' comments. One of the message of the first version of the manuscript was that variability in measurements (vessel diameter, flow velocity, vascularity) were much more pronounced under changes of anesthesia than when considering longitudinal imaging across several weeks. This message is now not quite mitigated, as longitudinal imaging seems to show a certain variability close to the order of magnitude observed under anesthesia. In that sense, the review process was useful in avoiding hasty conclusion and calls for further caution in ULM awake longitudinal imaging, in particular regarding precision of positioning and cancellation of tissue motion.

Strengths:

Even if the methods elements considered separately are not new (brain ULM in rodents, setup for longitudinal awake imaging similar to those used in fUS imaging, quantification of vessel diameters/bubble flow/vessel area), when masterfully combined as it is done in this paper, they answer two questions that have been long-running in the community: what is the impact of anesthesia on the parameters measured by ULM (and indirectly in fUS and other techniques)? Is it possible to achieve ULM in awake rodents for longitudinal imaging? The manuscript is well constructed, well written, and graphics are appealing.

The manuscript has been much strengthened by the round of review, with more animals for the longitudinal imaging study.

Weaknesses:

The manuscript has been only marginally modified since our last round of review, so there is probably not much we reviewers can additionally elaborate to improve it. Therefore my last concerns about the reliability of longitudinal quantifications and on certain discrepancies remains for this paper. As a general piece of advice, I would just say that every claim (' is higher', is lower', is stable') should be supported by evidence and statistical testing if it is not already the case.

Response 06: the authors' response is not satisfactory. Even if the difference in terms of ROI boundaries between fig 4e and fig 4j has been underlined by the authors, they only provide a wordy comment and no additional quantitative analysis that could explain the discrepancy I pointed out. By doing so they take the risk of making misinterpretations. The reader is left with a discrepancy that could be explained by 2 mechanisms: -pial vessel population behave differently from penetrating arterioles and venules OR - the imaging of pial vessels with ULM is not good enough to enable proper quantification because the vessels are not clearly visible (out of plane extent). In any case Figure 4j does not "provides a more comprehensive representation of cortical vasculature" as stated. If the changes in pial vessels cannot be reliably measured, they should be excluded from the ROI.

Line 161: be careful with the use of vessel density, as pointed by reviewer 1.

Line 196: "the decrease in venous vessel area (averaging 55% across mice) was greater than that of arterial (averaging 35%)" no stat test has been performed.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper aims to elucidate the gene regulatory network governing the development of cone photoreceptors, the light-sensing neurons responsible for high acuity and color vision in humans. The authors provide a comprehensive analysis through stage-matched comparisons of gene expression and chromatin accessibility using scRNA-seq and scATAC-seq from the cone-dominant 13-lined ground squirrel (13LGS) retina and the rod-dominant mouse retina. The abundance of cones in the 13LGS retina arises from a dominant trajectory from late retinal progenitor cells (RPCs) to photoreceptor precursors and then to cones, whereas only a small proportion of rods are generated from these precursors.

Strengths:

The paper presents intriguing insights into the gene regulatory network involved in 13LGS cone development. In particular, the authors highlight the expression of cone-promoting transcription factors such as Onecut2, Pou2f1, and Zic3 in late-stage neurogenic progenitors, which may be driven by 13LGS-specific cis-regulatory elements. The authors also characterize candidate cone-promoting genes Zic3 and Mef2C, which have been previously understudied. Overall, I found that the across-species analysis presented by this study is a useful resource for the field.

Weaknesses:

The functional analysis on Zic3 and Mef2C in mice does not convincingly establish that these factors are sufficient or necessary to promote cone photoreceptor specification. Several analyses lack clarity or consistency, and figure labeling and interpretation need improvement.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The paper introduced the pipeline to analyze brain imaging of freely moving animals: registering deforming tissues and maintaining consistent cell identities over time. The pipeline consists of three neural networks that are built upon existing models: BrainAlignNet for non-rigid registration, AutoCellLabeler for supervised annotation of over 100 neuronal types, and CellDiscoveryNet for unsupervised discovery of cell identities. The ambition of the work is to enable high-throughput and largely automated pipelines for neuron tracking and labeling in deforming nervous systems.

Strengths:

(1) The paper tackles a timely and difficult problem, offering an end-to-end system rather than isolated modules.

(2) The authors report high performance within their dataset, including single-pixel registration accuracy, nearly complete neuron linking over time, and annotation accuracy that exceeds individual human labelers.

(3) Demonstrations across two organisms suggest the methods could be transferable, and the integration of supervised and unsupervised modules is of practical utility.

Weaknesses:

(1) Lack of solid evaluation. Despite strong results on their own data, the work is not benchmarked against existing methods on community datasets, making it hard to evaluate relative performance or generality.

(2) Lack of novelty. All three models do not incorporate state-of-the-art advances from the respective fields. BrainAlignNet does not learn from the latest optical flow literature, relying instead on relatively conventional architectures. AutoCellLabeler does not utilize the advanced medNeXt3D architectures for supervised semantic segmentation. CellDiscoveryNet is presented as unsupervised discovery but relies on standard clustering approaches, with limited evaluation on only a small test set.

(3) Lack of robustness. BrainAlignNet requires dataset-specific training and pre-alignment strategies, limiting its plug-and-play use. AutoCellLabeler depends heavily on raw intensity patterns of neurons, making it brittle to pose changes. By contrast, current state-of-the-art methods incorporate spatial deformation atlases or relative spatial relationships, which provide robustness across poses and imaging conditions. More broadly, the ANTSUN 2.0 system depends on numerous manually tuned weights and thresholds, which reduces reproducibility and generalizability beyond curated conditions.

Evaluation:

To make the evaluation more solid, it would be great for the authors to (1) apply the new method on existing datasets and (2) apply baseline methods on their own datasets. Otherwise, without comparison, it is unclear if the proposed method is better or not. The following papers have public challenging tracking data: https://elifesciences.org/articles/66410, https://elifesciences.org/articles/59187, https://www.nature.com/articles/s41592-023-02096-3.

Methodology:

(1) The model innovations appear incrementally novel relative to existing work. The authors should articulate what is fundamentally different (architectural choices, training objectives, inductive biases) and why those differences matter empirically. Ablations isolating each design choice would help.

(2) The pipeline currently depends on numerous manually set hyperparameters and dataset-specific preprocessing. Please provide principled guidelines (e.g., ranges, default settings, heuristics) and a robustness analysis (sweeps, sensitivity curves) to show how performance varies with these choices across datasets; wherever possible, learn weights from data or replace fixed thresholds with data-driven criteria.

Appraisal:

The authors partially achieve their aims. Within the scope of their dataset, the pipeline demonstrates impressive performance and clear practical value. However, the absence of comparisons with state-of-the-art algorithms such as ZephIR, fDNC, or WormID, combined with small-scale evaluation (e.g., ten test volumes), makes the strength of evidence incomplete. The results support the conclusion that the approach is useful for their lab's workflow, but they do not establish broader robustness or superiority over existing methods.

Impact:

Even though the authors have released code, the pipeline requires heavy pre- and post-processing with numerous manually tuned hyperparameters, which limits its practical applicability to new datasets. Indeed, even within the paper, BrainAlignNet had to be adapted with additional preprocessing to handle the jellyfish data. The broader impact of the work will depend on systematic benchmarking against community datasets and comparison with established methods. As such, readers should view the results as a promising proof of concept rather than a definitive standard for imaging in deformable nervous systems.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Pablo Ruiz Cuenca et al. conducted a GPS logger study with 124 adult participants across four different slum areas in Salvador, Brazil, recording GPS locations every 35 seconds for 48 hours. The aim of their study was to investigate step-selection models, a technique widely used in movement ecology to quantify contact with environmental risk factors for exposure to leptospires (open sewers, community streams, and rubbish piles). The authors built two different types of models based on distance and based on buffer areas to model human environmental exposure to risk factors. They show differences in movement/contact with these risk factors based on gender and seropositivity status. This study shows the existence of modest differences in contact with environmental risk factors for leptospirosis at small spatial scales based on socio-demographics and infection status.

Strengths:

The authors assembled a rich dataset by collecting human GPS logger data, combined with field-recorded locations of open sewers, community streams, and rubbish piles, and testing individuals for leptospirosis via serology. This study was able to capture fine-scale exposure dynamics within an urban environment and shows differences by gender and seropositive status, using a method novel to epidemiology (step selection).

[Editors' note: I have reviewed the authors' revised submission and confirm that they have adequately addressed the reviewers' comments for this manuscript.]

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This work presents theoretical results concerning the effect of punctuated mutation on multistep adaptation and empirical evidence for that effect in cancer. The empirical results seem to agree with the theoretical predictions. However, it is not clear how strong the effect should be on theoretical grounds, and there are other plausible explanations for the empirical observations.

For various reasons, the effect of punctuated mutation may be weaker than suggested by the theoretical and empirical analyses:

(1) The effect of punctuated mutation is much stronger when the first mutation of a two-step adaptation is deleterious (Figure 2). For double inactivation of a TSG, the first mutation--inactivation of one copy--would be expected to be neutral or slightly advantageous. The simulations depicted in Figure 4, which are supposed to demonstrate the expected effect for TSGs, assume that the first mutation is quite deleterious. This assumption seems inappropriate for TSGs, and perhaps the other synergistic pairs considered, and exaggerates the expected effects.

(2) More generally, parameter values affect the magnitude of the effect. The authors note, for example, that the relative effect decreases with mutation rate. They suggest that the absolute effect, which increases, is more important, but the relative effect seems more relevant and is what is assessed empirically.

(3) Routes to inactivation of both copies of a TSG that are not accelerated by punctuation will dilute any effects of punctuation. An example is a single somatic mutation followed by loss of heterozygosity. Such mechanisms are not included in the theoretical analysis nor assessed empirically. If, for example, 90% of double inactivations were the result of such mechanisms with a constant mutation rate, a factor of two effect of punctuated mutagenesis would increase the overall rate by only 10%. Consideration of the rate of apparent inactivation of just one TSG copy and of deletion of both copies would shed some light on the importance of this consideration.

Several factors besides the effects of punctuated mutation might explain or contribute to the empirical observations:

(1) High APOBEC3 activity can select for inactivation of TSGs (references in Butler and Banday 2023, PMID 36978147). This selective force is another plausible explanation for the empirical observations.

(2) Without punctuation, the rate of multistep adaptation is expected to rise more than linearly with mutation rate. Thus, if APOBEC signatures are correlated with a high mutation rate due to the action of APOBEC, this alone could explain the correlation with TSG inactivation.

(3) The nature of mutations caused by APOBEC might explain the results. Notably, one of the two APOBEC mutation signatures, SBS13, is particularly likely to produce nonsense mutations. The authors count both nonsense and missense mutations, but nonsense mutations are more likely to inactivate the gene, and hence to be selected.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Cheverra et al. present a comprehensive anatomical and functional analysis of the motor neurons innervating the male reproductive tract in Drosophila melanogaster, addressing a gap in our understanding of the peripheral circuits underlying ejaculation and male fertility. They identify two classes of multi-transmitter motor neurons-OGNs (octopamine/glutamate) and SGNs (serotonin/glutamate)-with distinct innervation patterns across reproductive organs. The authors further characterize the differential expression of glutamate, octopamine, and serotonin receptors in both epithelial and muscular tissues of these organs. Behavioral assays reveal that SGNs are essential for male fertility, whereas OGNs and glutamatergic transmission are dispensable. This work provides a high-resolution map linking neuromodulatory identity to organ-specific motor control, offering a valuable framework to explore the neural basis of male reproductive function.

Strengths:

Through the use of an extensive set of GAL4 drivers and antibodies, this work successfully and precisely defines the neurons that innervate the male reproductive tract, identifying the specific organs they target and the nature of the neurotransmitters they release. It also characterizes the expression patterns and localization of the corresponding neurotransmitter receptors across different tissues. The authors describe two distinct groups of dual-identity neurons innervating the male reproductive tract: OGNs, which co-express octopamine and glutamate, and SGNs, which co-express serotonin and glutamate. They further demonstrate that the various organs within the male reproductive system differentially express receptors for these neurotransmitters. Based on these findings, the authors propose that a single neuron capable of co-releasing a fast-acting neurotransmitter alongside a slower-acting one may more effectively synchronize and stagger events that require precise timing. This, together with the differential expression of ionotropic glutamate receptors and metabotropic aminergic receptors in postsynaptic muscle tissue, adds an additional layer of complexity to the coordinated regulation of fluid secretion, organ contractility, and directional sperm movement-all contributing to the optimization of male fertility.

Weaknesses:

The main weakness of the manuscript is the lack of detail in the presentation of the results. Specifically, all microscopy image figures are missing information about the number of samples (N), and in the case of colocalization experiments, quantitative analyses are not provided. Additionally, in the first behavioral section, it would be beneficial to complement the data table with figures similar to those presented later in the manuscript for consistency and clarity.

Wider context:

This study delivers the first detailed anatomical map connecting multi-transmitter motor neurons with specific male reproductive structures. It highlights a previously unrecognized functional specialization between serotonergic and octopaminergic pathways and lays the groundwork for exploring fundamental neural mechanisms that regulate ejaculation and fertility in males. The principles uncovered here may help explain how males of Drosophila and other organisms adjust reproductive behaviors in response to environmental changes. Furthermore, by shedding light on how multi-transmitter systems operate in reproductive control, this model could provide insights into therapeutic targets for conditions such as male infertility and prostate cancer, where similar neuronal populations are involved in humans. Ultimately, this genetically accessible system serves as a powerful tool for uncovering how multi-transmitter neurons orchestrate coordinated physiological actions necessary for the functioning of complex organs.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this EEG study, Huang et al. investigated the relative contribution of two accounts to the process of conflict control, namely the stimulus-control association (SC), which refers to the phenomenon that the ratio of congruent vs. incongruent trials affects the overall control demands, and the stimulus-response association (SR), stating that the frequency of stimulus-response pairings can also impact the level of control. The authors extended the Stroop task with novel manipulation of item congruencies across blocks in order to test whether both types of information are encoded and related to behaviour. Using decoding and RSA, they showed that the SC and SR representations were concurrently present in voltage signals, and they also positively co-varied. In addition, the variability in both of their strengths was predictive of reaction time. In general, the experiment has a solid design, but there are some confounding factors in the analyses that should be addressed to provide strong support for the conclusions.

Strengths:

(1) The authors used an interesting task design that extended the classic Stroop paradigm and is potentially effective in teasing apart the relative contribution of the two different accounts regarding item-specific proportion congruency effect, provided that some confounds are addressed.

(2) Linking the strength of RSA scores with behavioural measures is critical to demonstrating the functional significance of the task representations in question.

Weakness:

(1) While the use of RSA to model the decoding strength vector is a fitting choice, looking at the RDMs in Figure 7, it seems that SC, SR, ISPC, and Identity matrices are all somewhat correlated. I wouldn't be surprised if some correlations would be quite high if they were reported. Total orthogonality is, of course, impossible depending on the hypothesis, but from experience, having highly covaried predictors in a regression can lead to unexpected results, such as artificially boosting the significance of one predictor in one direction, and the other one to the opposite direction. Perhaps some efforts to address how stable the timed-resolved RSA correlations for SC and SR are with and without the other highly correlated predictors will be valuable to raising confidence in the findings.

(2) In "task overview", SR is defined as the word-response pair; however, in the Methods, lines 495-496, the definition changed to "the pairing between word and ISPC" which is in accordance with the values in the RDMs (e.g., mccbb and mcirb have similarity of 1, but they are linked to different responses, so should they not be considered different in terms of SR?). This needs clarification as they have very different implications for the task design and interpretation of results, e.g., how correlated the SC and SR manipulations were.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:<br /> This article reports a cost-effectiveness comparison of intramural and extramural that NIH funded between 2009 and 2019. Using data obtained from NIH RePORTER, they linked total project costs to publication output, using robust validated metrics including Relative Citation Ratio (RCR), Approximate Potential to Translate (APT), and clinical citations. They find that after adjusting for confounders in regression and propensity-score analyses, extramural projects were generally more cost-effective, though intramural projects were more cost effective for generating clinical citations. They also describe differences in the topics of intramural- and extramural-funded publications, with intramural projects more likely to generate papers on viral infections and immunity or cancer metastases and survival, but less likely to generate papers on pregnancy and maternal health, brain connectivity and tasks, and adolescent experiences and depression. The authors aptly describe the different natures of the intramural and extramural funding models, including that extramural researchers spend much time writing grant applications and that the work described in extramural publications often receives funding from sources other than NIH grants.

Strengths:<br /> The authors leveraged publicly available data (including RePORTER and the iCite repository) and used robust validated metrics (RCR, APT, clinical citations). They carefully considered a large number of confounders, including those related to the PI, and performed several well-described regression analyses.

Weaknesses:<br /> Figure 3A shows intramural projects producing about 2.75 papers per year in 2009, whereas extramural projects are producing just over 1 paper per year. Extramural projects appear to catch up over the next five years. While the authors attempt to explain the difference in their figure legend, another explanation is that the intramural projects started well before 2009 but, as the authors state, intramural data only became available in 2009.

As the authors note, funding information is often complex and difficult to characterize for an analysis like this. How did the authors handle: i) publications linked to multiple extramural grants; ii) publications linked to intramural and extramural grants; iii) publications linked NIH grants and non-NIH grants?<br /> I would think it necessary to somehow apportion credit, as otherwise it would appear that extramural projects are more productive than they truly are.

Also, it is not clear if the authors took account of the indirect costs paid by the NIH to universities that have received extramural grants.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this paper, the authors used a multi-level modelling approach to reanalyse trial data from Takeda's Phase III randomised control trial investigating the efficacy of the TAK-003 vaccine against dengue. The aim of the paper is to refine uncertainty by incorporating all the available data into the model and pooling across stratifications that are correlated. A major challenge in constructing a likelihood that allows for data available at differing levels of aggregation by group and outcome, and at different time intervals. This is done by first supposing that the data is available without aggregation for all groups, outcomes and time points, and then marginalising over the aggregated levels. The model is validated using simulations and then applied to trial data from Takeda. Results appear to corroborate those of Takeda with reduced uncertainty in the estimates.

Strengths:

The main strength of the paper is the multi-level modelling approach. It is a particularly natural one for this setting. One reason for this, as discussed in the paper, is that correlations across stratifications can arise when there are similarities in their underlying causal structure. It is more realistic to model this nested data structure hierarchically. Another reason, also well discussed in the paper, is the reduction in uncertainty you get when you pool estimates across related groups. Multi-level modelling is also beneficial when group sizes are different. For example, there were too few cases of DENV-4 from seronegatives, which resulted in hospitalised disease for the original analysis to produce estimates, but by using multi-level modelling, this paper can produce estimates. The modelling framework developed in this paper will be simple to extend to further trial data collected in the future.

Another strength is that it is reanalysing existing trial data, which is both cost-effective and beneficial for scientific reproducibility. This approach also helps to assess the robustness of conclusions about the efficacy of the TAK-003 vaccine to use of different analytical methods.

The paper is well-written. The tables and figures presented in this paper are particularly informative. Protection conferred by the vaccine varies depending upon which variant a person is exposed to, their serostatus, and time since vaccination. The analysis presented supports the discussed conclusions. Comparisons between the results of this paper and the results of the original trial analysis are also shown and demonstrate a reduction in the uncertainty of parameter estimates, as desired.

Weaknesses:

The weakness of the paper is that it reports per-exposure protection instead of vaccine efficacy. This is methodologically sound, but it does limit the comparability of this study with the original trial analyses, which reported vaccine efficacy. It is therefore unclear whether the reduction in uncertainty observed is due solely to the multi-level modelling approach or whether it may be due in part to the parameters of interest being slightly different.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Across two experiments, this work presents a novel spatial predictive inference paradigm that facilitates the investigation of meta-learning across multiple environments with distinct statistics, as well as more local learning from sequences of observations within an environment. The authors present behavioral data indicating that people can indeed learn to distinguish between noise levels and calibrate their learning rates accordingly across environments, even on initial trials when revisiting an environment. They complement their behavioral results with computational modeling, further bolstering claims of both local and global adaptation. Additional fMRI results support the role of OFC in this meta-learning process, with central OFC activity reflecting similarity between environments. This similarity emerges over time with task experience. Holistically, this paradigm and these data add to our understanding of how humans dynamically adapt their behavior on different timescales.

Strengths:

The novel paradigm represents a clever and creative expansion of spatial predictive inference tasks. The cover story was well chosen to facilitate an intuitive understanding of both the differences between environments and the estimation of the mean within environments.

Additionally, the authors present complementary results from two experiments, which strengthen the behavioral findings. This is especially effective as the initial experiment's results were a bit noisy, and the modifications within the second experiment increased both power and the specificity/accuracy of participant predictions. Taken together, the behavioral results provide convincing evidence that participants did distinguish environments based on their underlying statistics and adapted their initial behavior accordingly.

Beyond this, the combination of behavioral results, computational modeling, and neuroimaging enhances the impact of the work. It paints a fuller picture of whether and how humans meta-learn the global statistics of environments, and this is an important direction for the field of adaptive learning.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors make the distinction between meta-learned "global" learning rates and within-environment learning rate adaptation in response to "local" fluctuations/observations. Though the experimental paradigm is novel, there are certainly links to prior work - for instance, though change point structures don't entail revisiting unique environments, they do require meta-learning from environmental statistics that is distinct from transient local adaptation to prediction errors. This tendency to increase one's learning rate after large prediction errors is appropriate in change point environments, though, as is true in this study, the amount of increase should be dependent on. This represents a similar kind of slower-timescale learning or reuse of more "global" parameters, and can be seen to different extents in prior work. It might benefit readers if the authors were to link the current work to previous research more explicitly to draw clearer connections between the approaches and findings.

(2) Throughout much of the paper, the authors refer to the distinctions between environments primarily as differences in "initial learning rates" or "environment-specific learning rates." This is particularly prominent when discussing fMRI results. Though the optimal initial learning rate did differ across environments, this was the result of differences in underlying task statistics. It will be important to clarify this throughout the text, because of the confounds between task statistics and initial learning rate (and to some extent, the position on the screen), it is not possible to separate the impact of these specific variables. This is also relevant to understanding the justification for using methods like RSA to test whether brain regions represent task states similarly. If the main hypothesis is that neural activity reflects the (initial) learning rate itself, then a univariate analysis approach would seem more natural.

(3) For the neuroimaging results in particular, the specificity of some of the results (e.g. ventral striatum showing an effect of prediction error only in the low noise condition in the second half of task experience, only on the first trial) is a bit surprising. Additional justification of or context for these results would be useful to help readers gauge how expected or surprising these findings are.

(4) There are some methodological details that are unclear (e.g., how were the positions of the crabs selected relative to the location they emerged from? Looking at Figure 1C, it looks like the crabs spread out unevenly, and that the single position they emerge from is not necessarily at the center of the crab locations.) Additional detail and clarity would help address some unanswered questions (more details below).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to develop Squidly, a sequence-only catalytic residue prediction method. By combining protein language model (ESM2) embedding with a biologically inspired contrastive learning pairing strategy, they achieve efficient and scalable predictions without relying on three-dimensional structure. Overall, the authors largely achieved their stated objectives, and the results generally support their conclusions. This research has the potential to advance the fields of enzyme functional annotation and protein design, particularly in the context of screening large-scale sequence databases and unstructured data. However, the data and methods are still limited by the biases of current public databases, so the interpretation of predictions requires specific biological context and experimental validation.

Strengths:

The strengths of this work include the innovative methodological incorporation of EC classification information for "reaction-informed" sample pairing, thereby enhancing the discriminative power of contrastive learning. Results demonstrate that Squidly outperforms existing machine learning methods on multiple benchmarks and is significantly faster than structure prediction tools, demonstrating its practicality.

Weaknesses:

Disadvantages include the lack of a systematic evaluation of the impact of each strategy on model performance. Furthermore, some analyses, such as PCA visualization, exhibit low explained variance, which undermines the strength of the conclusions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors derive an integrate-and-fire model to describe the dynamics of a more complex Wang-Buzsaki model and compare the two models. A detailed discussion of bifurcation schemes in both models is convincing and allows us to evaluate the simpler model.

Strengths:

The idea is interesting, and the mathematical approach appears to be convincing. In addition, differences between the simple and original models are also discussed.

Weaknesses:

A comparison to experimental data is necessary to support the theoretical work.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this contribution, the authors report atomistic, coarse-grained and lattice simulations to analyze the mechanism of supercomplex (SC) formation in mitochondria. The results highlight the importance of membrane deformation as one of the major driving forces for the SC formation, which is not entirely surprising given prior work on membrane protein assembly, but certainly of major mechanistic significance for the specific systems of interest.

Strengths:

The combination of complementary approaches, including an interesting (re)analysis of cryo-EM data, is particularly powerful, and might be applicable to the analysis of related systems. The calculations also revealed that SC formation has interesting impacts on the structural and dynamical (motional correlation) properties of the individual protein components, suggesting further functional relevance of SC formation. In the revision, the authors further clarified and quantified their analysis of membrane responses, leading to further insights into membrane contributions. They have also toned down the decomposition of membrane contributions into enthalpic and entropic contributions, which is difficult to do. Overall, the study is rather thorough, highly creative and the impact on the field is expected to be significant.

Weaknesses:

Upon revision, I believe the weakness identified in previous work has been largely alleviated.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Lmx1a is an orthologue of apterous in flies, which is important for dorsal-ventral border formation in the wing disc. Previously, this research group has described the importance of the chicken Lmx1b in establishing the boundary between sensory and non-sensory domains in the chicken inner ear. Here, the authors described a series of cellular changes during border formation in the chicken inner ear, including alignment of cells at the apical border and concomitant constriction basally. The authors extended these observations to the mouse inner ear and showed that these morphological changes occurred at the border of Lmx1a positive and negative regions, and these changes failed to develop in Lmx1a mutants. Furthermore, the authors demonstrated that the ROCK-dependent actomyosin contractility is important for this border formation and blocking ROCK function affected epithelial basal constriction and border formation in both in vitro and in vivo systems.

Strengths:

The morphological changes described during border formation in the developing inner ear are interesting. Linking these changes to the function of Lmx1a and ROCK dependent actomyosin contractile function are provocative.

Weaknesses:

There are several outstanding issues that need to be clarified before one can pin the morphological changes observed being causal to border formation and that Lmx1a and ROCK are involved.

Comments on the latest version:

The revised manuscript has provided clarity of their results on some levels, but unfortunately, the basal restriction during border formation remains unclear and the study did not advance the understanding of role of Lmx1a in boundary formation. Overall comments are indicated below:

(1) The authors states in the rebuttal, "we do not think that ROCK activity is required for the formation or maintenance of the basal constriction at the interface of Lmx1a-expressing and non-expressing cells"<br /> If the above is the sentiment of the authors, then the manuscript is not written to support this sentiment clearly, starting with this misleading sentence in the Abstract, "The boundary domain is absent in Lmx1a-deficient mice, which exhibit defects in sensory organ segregation, and is disrupted by the inhibition of ROCK-dependent actomyosin contractility."

(2) As acknowledged by the authors, the data as they currently stand could be explained by Lmx1a functioning in specifying the non-sensory fate and may not function directly in boundary formation. With this caveat in mind, the role of Lmx1a in boundary formation remains unclear.

(3) I feel like the word "orchestrate" in the title is an overstatement.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This study presents a useful inventory of polyadenylated RNAs cleaved by the double-stranded RNA endonuclease Rnt1 in yeast. The data were obtained with solid methodology based on high-throughput sequencing, and the evidence that Rnt1 contributes to cellular homeostasis through controlling the turnover of selected mRNAs is convincing.

Comments on revisions:

I appreciate the authors' thorough and thoughtful response, and I find that the manuscript has been substantially strengthened by the additional data, analyses, and textual clarifications.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Wethington et al. investigated the mechanistic principles underlying antigen-specific proliferation and memory formation in mouse natural killer (NK) cells following exposure to mouse cytomegalovirus (MCMV), a phenomenon predominantly associated with CD8+ T cells. Using a stochastic modeling approach, the authors aimed to develop a quantitative model of NK cell clonal dynamics during MCMV infection. Starting from a single immature Ly49+CD27+ NK cell, a two-state linear model (with a death variant) explained the negative correlation between clone size at 8 dpi and the CD27+ fraction, but failed to reproduce the first and second moments of CD27+ and CD27− NK cell populations at 8 dpi. To address this limitation, the authors added an intermediate maturation state, yielding a three-stage model (CD27+Ly6C− → CD27−Ly6C− → CD27−Ly6C+) that fits the first and second moments under two constraints: CD27+ NK cells proliferate faster than CD27− NK cells, and clone size is negatively correlated with the CD27+ fraction (upper bound of −0.2). The model predicts high proliferation in the intermediate state and high death in mature CD27−Ly6C+ cells, and it was validated using Adams et al. (2021) NK reporter mice tracking CD27+/− populations after tamoxifen, allowing discrimination between bone marrow-derived and pre-existing peripheral NK cells. To test the prediction that mature CD27− NK cells have a higher death rate, the authors measured Ly49H+ NK cell viability in the mouse spleen at different time points post-MCMV infection. Data confirmed lower viability of mature (CD27−) than immature (CD27+) cells during days 4-8 post-infection, and a model variant supported that higher CD27− death increases their proportion in the dead cell compartment. Altogether, the authors propose a three-stage quantitative model of antigen-specific expansion and maturation of naïve Ly49H+ NK cells with the trajectory CD27+Ly6C− (immature) → CD27−Ly6C− (mature I) → CD27−Ly6C+ (mature II), highlighting high proliferation in the mature I state and increased death in the mature II state.

Strengths:

Models explaining correlations and first and second moments, supported by analytical investigations, stochastic simulations, and model selection, identify key processes in antigen-specific NK expansion and maturation. The work distinguishes expansion, contraction, and memory in NK cells from CD8+ T cells and informs NK therapy development.

Weaknesses (relating to initial submission):

The conclusions of this paper are largely supported by the available data. However, a comparative analysis with more recent works in the field would be desirable. Clarifications:

(1) Initial Conditions and Grassmann Data: The Grassmann data is used solely as a constraint, while the simulated values of CD27+/CD27− cells could have been directly fitted to the Grassmann data, which assumes a 1:1 ratio of CD27+/CD27− at t = 0. This would allow an alternative initial condition rather than starting from a single CD27+ cell.

(2) Correlation Coefficients in the Three-State Model: Although the parameter scan of the three-stage model (Figure 2) demonstrates the potential for negative correlations between colony size and the fraction of CD27+ cells, the calculated correlation coefficients using the fitted parameter values are not shown. Including these would validate that the fitted parameters lie in the negative-correlation regime.

(3) Viability Dynamics and Adaptive Response: The authors measured the time evolution of CD27+/− dynamics and viability over 30 days post-infection (Figure 4). It would be valuable to test whether the three-state model can reproduce the adaptive response of CD27− cells to MCMV infection, particularly the observed drop in CD27− viability at 5 dpi and its rebound at 8 dpi. Demonstrating this would test whether the model can simultaneously explain viability dynamics and moment dynamics, and would enable sensitivity analysis of CD27− viability with respect to model parameters.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Meiotic recombination initiates with the formation of DNA double-strand break (DSB) formation, catalyzed by the conserved topoisomerase-like enzyme Spo11. Spo11 requires accessory factors that are poorly conserved across eukaryotes. Previous genetic studies have identified several proteins required for DSB formation in C. elegans to varying degrees; however, how these proteins interact with each other to recruit the DSB-forming machinery to chromosome axes remains unclear.

In this study, Raices et al. characterized the biochemical and genetic interactions among proteins that are known to promote DSB formation during C. elegans meiosis. The authors examined pairwise interactions using yeast two-hybrid (Y2H) and co-immunoprecipitation and revealed an interaction between a chromatin-associated protein HIM-17 and a transcription factor XND-1. They further confirmed the previously known interaction between DSB-1 and SPO-11 and showed that DSB-1 also interacts with a nematode-specific HIM-5, which is essential for DSB formation on the X chromosome. They also assessed genetic interactions among these proteins, categorizing them into four epistasis groups by comparing phenotypes in double vs. single mutants. Combining these results, the authors proposed a model of how these proteins interact with chromatin loops and are recruited to chromosome axes, offering insights into the process in C. elegans compared to other organisms.

Weaknesses:

This work relies heavily on Y2H, which is notorious for having high rates of false positives and false negatives. Although the interactions between HIM-17 and XND-1 and between DSB-1 and HIM-5 were validated by co-IP, the significance of these interactions was not tested in vivo. Cataloging Y2H and genetic interactions does not yield much more insight. The model proposed in Figure 4 is also highly speculative.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors quantify human fMRI BOLD responses in pulvinar and mediodorsal thalamic nuclei during a fear conditioning and extinction task across two days, in a large sample size (hundreds of participants). They show that the BOLD responses in these areas differentiate the conditioned (CS+) and safety (CS-) stimuli. Additionally, this changes with repeated trials, which could be a neural correlate of fear learning. They show that the anterior pulvinar is most correlated with the MD, and that this is not due to anatomical proximity. They perform graph analysis on the pulvinar subnuclei, which suggests that the medial pulvinar is a hub between the sensory (lateral/inferior) and associative (anterior) pulvinar. They show different patterns of thalamic activity across conditioning, extinction, recall, and renewal.

Strengths:

The data has a large sample size (n=293 in some measures, n=412 in others). This is a validated human fear conditioning/extinction task that Dr Milad's group has been working with for several years. Few labs have investigated the thalamus activity during fear conditioning and extinction, particularly with a large sample size. There is an independent replication of the pulvinar network structure (Figure 3), which suggests that the processing in the more sensory-related inferior and lateral pulvinar is relayed to the anterior pulvinar (and possibly thereby to more action-related prefrontal areas) via an intermediate step in the medial pulvinar - potentially a novel discovery, but that needs more validation.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors cannot make causal claims about their results based on correlational neuroimaging evidence. Causal claims should be pared back. E.g., sentence 1 in the Results section: "The anterior pulvinar and MD contribute to early associative threat learning, as evidenced by increased functional activation in response to CS+ compared to CS- at the block level (Fig. 1b-c)." needs to be reworded to something like "The anterior pulvinar and MD have increased functional activation... This suggests that these areas may contribute to early associate threat learning."

(2) Figure 1: The fact that the difference in BOLD activity between CS+ and CS- goes away on the third trial is not addressed. This is a very large effect in the data.

(3) Figure 3: Could the observed network structure be due to anatomical proximity? Perhaps the authors should do an analogous analysis to what they did in Figure 2 for this intra-pulvinar analysis. This analysis doesn't take into account the indirect connections through corticothalamic and thalamocortical connections with the visual cortex and the pulvinar. There is an implicit assumption that there are interconnections between the pulvinar subnuclei, but there are few strong excitatory projections between these subnuclei to my knowledge. If visual areas are included in the graph, it would make things more complex, but would probably dramatically change the story. In this way, the message is somewhat constructed or arbitrary.

(3) In the results section describing Figures 4-7, there are no statistics supporting the claims made. There needs to be a set of graphs comparing the results across the study sessions and days, with statistical comparisons between the different experiments to confirm differences.

(4) Figure 7 does not include the major corticothalamic and thalamocortical projections from early, mid-level, and higher visual cortex to the different pulvinar nuclei. I doubt that there are strong direct projections between the pulvinar nuclei; rather, the functional connections are probably mediated through interconnections with cortical visual areas.

(5) Stylistic: There are a lot of hypotheses and interpretations presented in this primary literature paper, which may be better suited for a review or perspective piece.

(6) In the discussion, there is an assumption that the fMRI BOLD responses to CS+ and CS- need to be different to indicate that an area is processing these distinctly, but the BOLD signal can only detect large-scale changes in overall activity. It's easy to imagine that an area could be involved in processing these two stimuli distinctly without showing an overall difference in the gross amount of activity.

(7) There is strong evidence that the BOLD responses to the threat-related and safety-related stimuli are different, modest evidence for their claims of learning/plasticity in these pathways, and circumstantial evidence supporting their hypothesized graph network models. Overall, most of the claims made in the discussion are better considered possible interpretations rather than proven findings - this is not a criticism, as these experiments and subject matter are extremely complex.

This study continues to validate the power and utility of this in human fear conditioning/extinction paradigm, and extends this paradigm to investigating fear learning beyond the traditional limbic system pathways. It's possible that their models for the pulvinar nuclei interconnections could guide future neuromodulation or DBS studies that could provide more causal evidence for their hypotheses.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Toxoplasma gondii is an obligate intracellular parasite and the causative agent of Toxoplasmosis. Parasite invasion into host cells, intracellular replication, and then egress, which results in the destruction of the infected cell, is central to pathogenicity. This manuscript focuses on understanding how maternal resources (in this case, cellular organelles) are shared between daughter parasites during cell division. Many organelles are single copy, meaning that division and inheritance by the daughters is crucial for successful replication. The major strength of this study was the use of a Halo-based pulse chase assay to characterize patterns of organelle inheritance. The results show that both microneme and rhoptries (secretory vesicles) previously thought to be synthesized de novo are inherited by daughter parasites. Thus, this paper adds new insight to our understanding of cell division in this important parasite.

Strengths:

This study demonstrated that pulse labeling of proteins can be used to monitor protein synthesis, turnover, and movement. This approach will be of great interest to the field. Using this method, the authors demonstrate three main modes of organelle inheritance.

(1) Organelles, where there are multiple copies (such as secretory vesicles, micronemes, and rhoptries), are divided between the daughter parasites, with additional contribution of newly formed vesicles. New and old material remain as separate entities in the cell.

(2) Single-copy organelles, which are expanded to include newly synthesized material prior to division, such as the Golgi and apicoplast.

(3) Cytoskeletal structures that are synthesized anew during each round of division. These studies provide more refined insight into patterns or organelle inheritance and demonstrate that secretory organelles are not made de novo during each round of division as previously thought. The paper has a logical flow, and overall, the data is presented in a clear and organized fashion.

Weaknesses:

(1) Descriptions of methodology and statistical analysis were incomplete.

(2) There are inconsistencies between the data in Figures 1 and 5. In Figure 1, a small amount of maternal IMC is visible in stage 2 parasites. Although this is a ~90% reduction, these parasites should be quantified as parasites with material IMC. However, the graph in Figure 5C indicates that no material parasites have GAPM1a, given that graph 5C is a binary measure (present vs. absent), one would expect a non-zero percent of parasites to have maternal material.

(3) The conclusion from Figure 6 was not justified based on the data. I agree with the author's conclusion that the accumulation of micronemes and rhoptries in the residual body was time-dependent. In Figure 6A, the signal observed in the residual body at times 6:30, 13, and 14 hours is not observed in subsequent time points. However, the fate of these micronemes and rhoptries is unclear. It cannot be concluded that these vesicles are recycled back to the mother. They could also have been degraded. In fact, the graphs of microneme inheritance in Figure 2B show a decrease in maternal signal from 100% to 80% between stages 1 and 2, indicating that some microneme degradation is taking place.

(4) To convincingly demonstrate that the redistribution of micronemes and rhoptries was due to recovery of MyoF protein levels after auxin washout, a Western blot should be performed to show MyoF protein levels over time. In addition, the decrease in mMIC2 protein levels in the residual body in Figure 8F should be measured and normalized for photobleaching. Both apical and basal signals appear to be reduced over the time course of imaging.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Fan and colleagues measure proteomics and transcriptomics in 3 organs (liver, skeletal muscle, cerebral cortex) from male C57BL/6 mice to investigate whether intermittent fasting (IF; 16h daily fasting over 4 months) produces systemic and organ-specific adaptations.

They find shared signaling pathways, certain metabolic changes, and organ-specific responses that suggest IF might affect energy utilization, metabolic flexibility, while promoting resilience at the cellular level.

Strengths:

The fact that there are 3 organs and 2 -omics approaches is a strength of this study.

Weaknesses:

The analytical approach of the data generated by the present study is not well posed, because it doesn't help to answer key questions implicit in the experimental design. Consequently, the paper, as it is for now, reads as a mere description of results and not a response to specific questions.

The presentation of the figures, the knowledge of the literature, and the inclusion of only one sex (male) are all weaknesses.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors analyzed PopART data to better characterize the age and sex-specific heterosexual HIV transmission dynamics in Zambia, with the goal of allocating resources.

Strengths:

Important analysis to hone in on the key driver of HIV transmission in Zambia, which hopefully can be used to tune prevention efforts to maximize effect while limiting required resources. Two analytic approaches were used, and while the phylogenetic data were markedly more limited, they mirrored the simulated epidemic. The authors did a nice job reviewing the limitations of the data and the analyses. The authors did a nice job of providing analyses to support their goals and hypothesis, and this work may have more impact now that resources in SSA for HIV prevention and treatment may become more scarce

Weaknesses:

To increase the impact and utility of this work, it would be helpful to parse the analysis just a bit further to estimate the roles of undiagnosed vs diagnosed and untreated subpopulations on this transmission. PopART is a multifaceted intervention, but the cost, effort, and approach to reengagement in care vs testing/treatment can be quite different.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, the authors identified a previously unrecognized organ interaction where limb immobilization induces thermogenesis in BAT. They showed that limb immobilization by cast fixation enhances the expression of UCP1 as well as amino acid transporters in BAT, and amino acids are supplied from skeletal muscle to BAT during this process, likely contributing to increased thermogenesis in BAT. Furthermore, the experiments with IL-6 knockout mice and IL-6 administration to these mice suggest that this cytokine is likely involved in the supply of amino acids from skeletal muscle to BAT during limb immobilization.

Strengths:

The function of BAT plays a crucial role in the regulation of an individual's energy and body weight. Therefore, identifying new interventions that can control BAT function is not only scientifically significant but also holds substantial promise for medical applications. The authors have thoroughly and comprehensively examined the changes in skeletal muscle and BAT under these conditions, convincingly demonstrating the significance of this organ interaction.

Weaknesses:

Through considerable effort, the authors have demonstrated that limb-immobilized mice exhibit changes in thermogenesis and energy metabolism dynamics at their steady state. However, The impact of immobilization on the function of skeletal muscle and BAT during cold exposure has not been thoroughly analyzed.

Comments on revisions:

The authors appropriately responded to the reviewers' recommendations made during the previous round of peer review.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Immunogenic Plasmodium falciparum proteins that could be targeted to prevent parasite development in the liver are of significant interest for novel anti-malarial vaccine development. In this study, McConville et al evaluate the trafficking and functional importance of LSA3, a protein expressed in the blood and liver stages and previously shown to provide protection in immunized chimpanzees. LSA3 contains a PEXEL motif, but the authors have previously shown that this protein does not appear to be exported beyond the PVM in the liver stage (McConville et al, PNAS 2024). However, LSA3 trafficking and functional importance have not been comprehensively evaluated across stages. In the present study, the authors find that blood-stage LSA3 undergoes PEXEL processing, and a portion of the protein is exported into the erythrocyte, where it localizes to punctate structures distinct from Maurer's clefts. Using a knockout mutant, LSA3 is shown to be dispensable for blood and mosquito stages but important to liver-stage development. Collectively, these results validate LSA3 as a liver-stage target and place it among several other PEXEL proteins that display differential trafficking beyond the PVM in the erythrocyte but not the hepatocyte.

Strengths:

(1) The authors present a thorough analysis of LSA3 trafficking in the blood stage. PEXEL processing by Plasmepsin 5 is clearly demonstrated through a combination of mini LSA3-GFP reporters and Plasmepsin 5 inhibitors. Importantly, an LSA3 knockout mutant is used to show that the LSA3-C anti-sera also react with additional, unidentified parasite proteins in the blood stage. Nonetheless, comparison between the WT and KO parasites clearly indicates that a portion of LSA3 is exported into the erythrocyte, which is further supported by protease-protection assays with fractionated iRBCs. This contrasts with the liver stage, where LSA3 does not appear to traffic beyond the PVM, similar to what has been observed for other PEXEL proteins in the rodent malaria model.

(2)This study provides the first direct analysis of LSA3 function by reverse genetics, showing this protein is important for liver stage development in chimeric human liver mice. Several PEXEL proteins in P. berghei have been shown to be exported into the host cell in the blood stage, but do not appear to cross the PVM in the liver stage. These observations reinforce that even without detectable export into the hepatocyte, PEXEL proteins play critical roles during liver stage development.

Weaknesses:

(1) A previous study reported that anti-LSA3 antibodies inhibit blood-stage growth, suggesting a role for LSA3 during erythrocyte infection. While the authors carefully evaluate the LSA3 mutant in mosquito and liver stages, the impact on blood stage fitness is not tested. While the knockout shows LSA3 is not essential in the blood stage, its importance during erythrocyte infection remains unclear.

(2) The authors previously reported that anti-LSA3-C signal in the liver stage localizes within the parasite and at the parasite periphery but is not exported into the hepatocyte. In the present study, it is shown that anti-LSA3-C reacts with other parasite proteins beyond LSA3 in the blood stage, and this may also occur in the liver stage. However, since liver-stage IFAs were only performed on samples co-infected with both WT and ∆LSA3 parasites, non-specific anti-LSA3-C reactivity at this stage could not be determined, and the localization of LSA3 in the liver stage remains somewhat unclear.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The manuscript by Yang et al. investigates how a prior experience (notably by the activation of sensory/reinforcing dopaminergic neurons) alters olfactory response and memory expression in Drosophila. They refer to a priming effect with the definition: "Priming is a process by which exposure to a stimulus affects the response to a subsequent stimulus in Humans". The authors observed that exposing flies to a series of shocks (or the optogenetic activation of aversively reinforcing dopaminergic neurons) decreases ensuing odour avoidance. Conversely, optogenetic activation of sweet-sensing neurons increases following odour avoidance. They proposed that the reduced odour avoidance was due to the involvement of reward dopaminergic neurons involved during shock (or the optogenetic activation of aversively reinforcing dopaminergic neurons). They indeed show the involvement of reward dopaminergic neurons innervating the mushroom body (the fly learning and memory centre) during shock preexposure. Recording (calcium activity) from reward dopaminergic neurons before and after shock preexposure shows that only a small subset of dopaminergic neurons innervating the mushroom body γ4 compartment increases their response to odour after shock. They then showed the requirement of the γ4 reward dopaminergic neurons during shock preexposure on ensuing odour avoidance. They also tested the role of the dopamine receptor in the mushroom body. They finally recorded from different mushroom body output neurons, including the one (MBON-γ4γ5) likely affected by the increased activity of the corresponding γ4 reward dopaminergic neurons after shock preexposure. They recorded odour-evoked responses from these neurons before and after shock preexposure, but did not find any plasticity, while they found a logical effect during spaced cycles of aversive training.

Overall, the study is very interesting with a substantial amount of behavioural analysis and in vivo 2-photon calcium imaging data, but some major (and some minor) issues have to be resolved to strengthen their conclusions.

(1) According to neuropsychological work (Henson, Encyclopedia of Neuroscience (2009), vol. 7, pp. 1055-1063), « Priming refers to a change in behavioral response to a stimulus, following prior exposure to the same, or a related, stimulus. Examples include faster reaction times to make a decision about the stimulus, a bias to produce that stimulus when generating responses, or the more accurate identification of a degraded version of the stimulus". Or "Repetition priming refers to a change in behavioural response to a stimulus following re-exposure" (PMID: 18328508). I therefore do not think that the effects observed by the authors are really the investigation of the neural mechanisms of priming. To me, the effect they observed seems more related to sensitisation, especially for the activation of sweet-sensing neurons. For the shock effect, it could be a safety phenomenon, as in Jacob and Waddell, 2020, involving (as for sugar reward) different subsets for short-term and long-term safety.

(2) The author missed the paper from Thomas Preat, The Journal of Neuroscience, October 15, 1998, 18(20):8534-8538 (Decreased Odor Avoidance after Electric Shock in Drosophila Mutants Biases Learning and Memory Tests). In this paper, one of the effects observed by the authors has already been described, and the molecular requirement of memory-related genes is investigated. This paper should be mentioned and discussed.

(3) Overall, the bidirectional effect they observed is interesting; however, their results are not always clear, and the use of a delta PI is sometimes misleading. The authors have mentioned that shocks induced attraction to the novel odour, while they should stick to the increase or decrease in preference/avoidance. As not all experiments are done in parallel logic, it is not always easy to understand which protocol the authors are using. For example, only optogenetics is used in the appetitive preexposure. Does exposing flies to sugar or activating reward dopaminergic neurons also increase odour avoidance? The observed increased odour avoidance after optogenetic activation of sweet-sensing neurons involve reward (e.g., decreased response) and/or punishment (e.g., increased response) to increase odour avoidance? The author should always statistically test the fly behavioural performances against 0 to have an idea of random choice or a clear preference toward an odour. On the appetitive side, the internal hunger state would play an important role. The author should test it or at least discuss it.

(4) The authors found a discrepancy between genetic backgrounds; sometimes the same odour can be attractive or aversive. Different effects between the T-maze and the olfactory arena are found. The authors proposed that: "Punishment priming effect was still not detected, probably due to the insensitivity of the optogenetic arena". This is unclear to me, considering all prior work using this arena. The author should discuss it more clearly. They mentioned that flies could not be conditioned with air and electric shock. However, flies could be conditioned with the context + shock, which is changing in the T-maze and not in the optogenetic area.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this single center, single arm, open label non-randomised study the authors tested the use of paclitaxel at 180-220 mg/m2 and cisplatin at 60mg/m2 in patients with squamous NSCLC and pemetrexed at 500mg/m2 and cisplatin at 60mg/m2 in adenocarcinoma of lung origin in the neoadjuvant setting. The chemotherapy appears to have been given at a relatively standard dose; though the platin dose at 60mg/m2 is somewhat lower than has been used in the checkmate 816 trial (75mg/m2/dose), this is a well-established dose for NSCLC.

Key differences to currently approved neoadjuvant chemo-ICI treatment is that anti-PD1 antibody sintilimab (at 200mg/dose) was given on day 5 and that only 2 cycles of chemotherapy were given pre surgery, but then repeated on two occasions post surgery. Between May/2020 and Nov/2023 50 patients were screened, 38 went on to have this schedule of tx, 31 (~82%) went on to have surgery and 27 had the adjuvant treatment. The rate of surgery is entirely consistent with the checkmate 816 data.

Question to the authors:

It would be very helpful to understand why 7 (~18% of the population) patients did not make it to surgery and whether this is related to disease progression, toxicity or other reasons for withdrawal.

The key clinical endpoints were pCR and mPR rates. 2/38 patients are reported to have achieved a radiological pCR but only 31 patients underwent surgery with histological verification. Supp table2 suggests that 10/31 patients achieved a pCR, 6/31 additional patients achieved a major pathological response and that 13/31 did not achieve a major pathological response

It would be really helpful for understanding the clinical outcome to present the histopathological findings in the text in a bit more detail and to refer the outcome to the radiological findings. I note that the reference for pathological responses incorrectly is 38 patients as only 31 patients underwent surgery and were evaluated histologically.

The treatment was very well tolerated with only 1 grade 3 AE reported. The longer term outcome will need to be assessed over time as the cohort is very 'young'. It is not clear what the adjuvant chemo-ICI treatment would add and how this extra treatment would be evaluated for benefit - if all the benefit is in the neoadjuvant treatment then the extra post-operative tx would only add toxicity

Please consider what the two post-operative chemo-ICI cycles might add to the outcome and how the value of these cycles would be assessed. Would there be a case for a randomised assessment in the patients who have NOT achieved a mPR histologically?

While the clinical dataset identifies that the proposed reduced chemo-ICI therapy has clinical merit and should be assessed in a randomized study, the translational work is less informative.

The authors suggest that the treatment has a positive impact on T lymphocytes. Blood sampling was done at day 0 and day 5 of each of the four cycle of chemotherapy with an additional sample post cycle 4. The authors state that data were analysed at each stage.

The data in Figure 3B are reported for three sets of pairs: baseline to pre day 5 in cycle 1, day 5 to day 21 in cycle 1, baseline of cycle to to day 5. It remains unclear whether the datasets contain the same top 20 clones and it would be very helpful to show kinetic change for the individual 'top 20 clones' throughout the events in individual patients; as it stands the 'top20 clones' may vary widely from timepoint to timepoint. Of note, the figures do not demonstrate that the top 20 TCR clones were 'continuously increased'.

Instead, the data suggest that there are fluctuations in the relative distributions over time but that may simply be a reflection of shifts in T cell populations following chemotherapy rather than of immunological effects in the cancer tissue.<br /> Consistent with this the authors conclude (line 304/5): "No significant difference was observed in the diversity, evenness, and clonality of TCR clones across the whole treatment procedure" and this seems to be a more persuasive conclusion than the statement 'that a positive effect on T lymphocytes was observed' - where it is also not clear what 'positive' means.

The text needs a more balanced representation of the data: only a small subset of four patients appear to have been evaluated to generate the data for figure 3B and only three patients (P5, P6, P7) can have contributed to figure 3C if the sample collection is represented accurately in Figure 3A.

The text refers to flow cytometric results in SF3. However, no information is given on the flow cytometry in M&M, markers or gating strategy.

Please consider changing the terminology of the 'phases' into something that is easier to understand. One option would be to use a reference to a more standard unit (cycle 1-4 of chemotherapy and then d0/d5/d21).

Please make it explicit in the text that molecular analyses were undertaken for some patients only, and how many patients contribute to the data in figures 3B-F. Figure 3A suggests paired mRNA data were obtained in 2 patients (P2 and P5) but I cannot find the results on these analyses; four individual blood samples to assess TCR changes int PH1/PH2/PH3and PH4 were only available in four patients (P4,P5,P7,P9). Only three patients seem to have the right samples collected to allow the analysis for 'C3' in figure 3C.

Please display for each of the 'top 20 clones' at any one timepoint how these clones evolve throughout the study; I expect that a clone that is 'top 20' at a given timepoint may not be among the 'top twenty' at all timepoints.

Please also assess if the expanded clonotypes are present (and expanded) in the cancer tissue at resection, to link the effect in blood to the tumour. Given that tissue was collected for 31 patients, mRNA sequencing to generate TCR data should be possible to add to the blood analyses in the 12 patients in Figure 3A. Without this data no clear link can be made to events in the cancer.

Please provide in M&M the missing information on the flow cytometry methodology (instrument, antibody clones, gating strategy) and what markers were used to define T cell subsets (naïve, memory, central memory, effector memory).

The authors also describe that ctDNA reduces after chemo-ICI treatment. This is well documented in their data but ultimately irrelevant: if the cancer volume is reduced to the degree of a radiological or pathological response /complete response then the quantity of circulating DNA from the cancer cells must reduce. More interesting would be the question whether early changes predict clinical outcome and whether recurrent ct DNA elevations herald recurrence.

Please probe whether the molecular data identify good radiological or pathological outcomes before cycle 2 is started and whether the ctDNA levels identify patients who will have a poor response and/or who relapse early.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This study provides some interesting observations on how different flavour e-cigarettes can affect lung immunology; however, there are numerous flaws, including a low replicate number and a lack of effective validation methods, meaning findings may not be repeated. This is a revised article but several weaknesses remain related to the analysis and interpretation of the data.

Strengths:

The strength of the study is the successful scRNA-seq experiment which gives some preliminary data that can be used to create new hypotheses in this area.

Weaknesses:

Although some text weaknesses have been addressed since resubmission, other specific weaknesses remain: The major weakness is the n-number and analysis methods. Two biological n per group is not acceptable to base any solid conclusions. Any validatory data was too little (only cell % data) and not always supporting the findings (e.g. figure 3D does not match 3B/4A). Other examples include:

(1) There aren't enough cells to justify analysis - only 300-1500 myeloid cells per group with not many of these being neutrophils or the apparent 'Ly6G- neutrophils'

(2) The dynamic range of RNA measurement using scRNAseq is known to be limited - how do we know whether genes are not expressed or just didn't hit detection? This links into the Ly6G negative neutrophil comments, but in general the lack of gene expression in this kind of data should be viewed with caution, especially with a low n number and few cells. The data in the entire paper is not strong enough to base any solid conclusion - it is not just the RNA-sequencing data.

(3) There is no data supporting the presence of Ly6G negative neutrophils. In the flow cytometry only Ly6G+ cells are shown with no evidence of Ly6G negative neutrophils (assuming equal CD11b expression). There is no new data to support this claim since resubmission and the New figures 4C and D actually show there are no Ly6G negative cells - the cells that the authors deem Ly6G negative are actually positive - but the red overlay of S100A8 is so strong it blocks out the green signal - looking to the Ly6G single stains (green only) you can see that the reported S100A8+Ly6G- cells all have Ly6G (with different staining intensities).

(4) Eosinophils are heavily involved in lung macrophage biology, but are missing from the analysis - it is highly likely the RNA-sequence picked out eosinophils as Ly6G- neutrophils rather than 'digestion issues' the authors claim

(5) After author comments, it appears the schematic in Figure 1A is misleading and there are not n=2/group/sex but actually only n=1/group/sex (as shown in Figure 6A). Meaning the n number is even lower than the previous assumption.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This manuscript submitted by Takagi et al. details the molecular characterization of the FT-expressing cell at a single-cell level. The authors examined what genes are expressed specifically in FT-expressing cells and other phloem companion cells by exploiting bulk nuclei and single-nuclei RNA-seq and transgenic analysis. The authors found the unique expression profile of FT-expressing cells at a single-cell level and identified new transcriptional repressors of FT such as NIGT1.2 and NIGT1.4.

Although previous researchers have known that FT is expressed in phloem companion cells, they have tended to neglect the molecular characterization of the FT-expressing phloem companion cells. To understand how FT, which is expressed in tiny amounts in phloem companion cells that make up a very small portion of the leaf, can be a key molecule in the regulation of the critical developmental step of floral transition, it is important to understand the molecular features of FT-expressing cells in detail. In this regard, this manuscript provides insight into the understanding of detailed molecular characteristics of the FT-expressing cell. This endeavor will contribute to the research field of flowering time.

During the initial review process, I proposed the following two points for improving this manuscript:

(1) The most noble finding of this manuscript is the identification of NTGI1.2 as the upstream regulator of FT-expressing cluster 7 gene expression. The flowering phenotypes of the nigtQ mutant and the transgenic plants in which NIGT1.2 was expressed under the SUC2 gene promoter support that NIGT1.2 functions as a floral repressor upstream of the FT gene. Nevertheless, the expression patterns of NIGT1.2 genes do not appear to have much overlap with those of NIGT1.2-downstream genes in the cluster 7 (Figs S14 and F3). An explanation for this should be provided in the discussion section.

(2) To investigate gene expression in the nuclei of specific cell populations, the authors generated transgenic plants expressing a fusion gene encoding a Nuclear Targeting Fusion protein (NTF) under the control of various cell type-specific promoters. Since the public audience would not know about NTF without reading reference 16, some explanation of NTF is necessary in the manuscript. Please provide a schematic of the constructs the authors used to make the transformants.

The revised manuscript has addressed my comments well. I am deeply grateful for the authors' efforts to address concerns raised by me and other reviewers.<br /> I have no doubt that the manuscript in its current form is worthy of publication in this journal and will provide valuable insights into flowering time for many readers.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

This paper introduces the Avian Vocalization Network (AVN), a novel birdsong analysis pipeline using deep learning. By automating vocal annotation tasks, the AVN generates interpretable song features and song similarity scores on novel datasets without retraining. The performance of the network is solid and is comparable to that of human annotators.

The authors have improved the manuscript in several aspects, such as the comparison with the Goffinet work. Overall, the AVN feature set could become a useful tool for evaluating birdsongs. But the authors also chose not to address a certain number of criticisms, and some issues remain poorly addressed, and the work is not reproducible at this stage. With a little effort, these issues could get resolved in my view. I will just pick on four issues that I think can be easily addressed:

(1) Limitation of feature set: They claim that AVN satisfies the criteria (line 60) of "creating a common feature space for the comparison of behavioural phenotypes ..."(line 51), but then on LDA analysis, explained on line 910 they say "excluding amplitude and amplitude modulation features as they were found to vary". Since their feature set is not stable and not truly 'common' to all tasks, this limitation needs addressing in the discussion (that some features seem to vary undesirably, and they need exclusion based on some criteria to be defined).

(2) Missing information on classification training loss: The Authors insist that their triplet loss is not related to classification, and they brush off my request for more information. In their rebuttal, they write: 'The loss function is related to the relative distance between embeddings of syllables with the same or different labels, not the classification of syllables as same or different.' Perplexingly, however, in the revised paper, authors speak themselves of 'classes', in Line 1004: this allows the model to begin learning an easier task, of separating syllables of different classes by a smaller margin.' So it seems the authors actually agree with me that there is an underlying classification task. I am therefore going to make it a bit more explicit here what I'm asking for, hoping this will better resonate with them.

In line 984 they define their loss function and in lines 994-996 they define 'hard' and 'semi-hard' triplets. Authors then train a system to minimize the loss with a ratio of 75 percent semi-hard triplets and 25 percent hard triplets and a final weighing parameter value alpha=0.7. What I'm asking for is this 'classification' loss their trained model achieves, or in other words, the fraction of triplets that end up producing a loss, either of the 'hard' or 'semi-hard' type. For example, if their model manages to separate all 'possible triplets' by a margin of at least alpha, then the loss would be zero. If the model achieves to separate all triplets except one, then the loss would correspond to the amount by which the separation differences between the anchor and the positive vs negative samples exceeds alpha. So, an important number to provide in the paper is the fraction of triplets that incur a nonzero loss, i.e., the fraction of semi-hard triplets. And another important quantity is the fraction of hard triplets, i.e. the fraction of triplets that would incur a loss if alpha were set to zero, or, in other words, the triplets for which the negative sample is closer to the anchor than the positive sample. By the way, I assume this latter fraction of hard cases will be zero - that their model does not confuse any positive and negative training samples...<br /> Note: the quantification chosen by the authors termed 'contrast index' is interesting, but it is a derived quantity, it is not the quantity authors chose to optimize during training. If authors were to report both the training loss achieved and the 'contrast index', follow-up work could be benchmarked against both these quantities. If for example, a follow-up model achieves smaller loss but worse contrast, then the loss is not a good placeholder measure for optimizing contrast. Alternatively, follow-up work could focus on the contrast index as training objective, obliterating the need for the triplet loss as an intermediate step (I don't buy the authors' argument that such an optimization would be infeasible).

(3) Reproducibility: they explain the way they train the CNN with triplet loss to produce the embeddings, but we're missing both actual scripts on GitHub to train and inference from scratch, and model weights, or even hyper parameters they used. Authors only provide the architecture, and I don't think that's enough to be considered replicable in today's standards. I would suggest they release complete model checkpoint weights for the result they report, the exact data splits, the hyper parameters they used and training and testing code, so that one can very easily verify their claims and apply their methods to other datasets. Note: for example, the code to extract the embeddings is incomplete (the function definition of single_bird_extract_embeddings cannot be found on GitHub) and the model weights they used are missing.

(4) With regards to the age prediction model, the authors should specify that this model is mainly useful for comparisons across studies but less so for precise evaluation of the effects of a treatment within a study. Namely, the effect on song of a treatment is best assessed by comparison to within-subject past song, and by comparison to age-matched control birds (ideally siblings) raised in identical conditions, rather than to invoke a generic model trained on other birds and from different colonies and breeding conditions as authors propose to do. In other words, to introduce a generic model for evaluation of song maturity introduces measurement noise in terms of the additional birds and their variable conditions, which can hinder precise assessment of treatment effects. Note that to state that in past work such maturity models were used is not a good justification, scientifically speaking.

Finally, the authors write that methods for syllable segmentation have not been systematically compared but the whisperseg work they use did such a comparison. So the authors should revise their novelty claim of being the first to compare syllable segmentation methods.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Tan et al. examined how multivoxel patterns shift in time windows surrounding event boundaries caused by both prediction errors and prediction uncertainty. They observed that some regions of the brain show earlier pattern shifts than others, followed by periods of increased stability. The authors combine their recent computational model to estimate event boundaries that are based on prediction error vs. uncertainty and use this to examine the moment-to-moment dynamics of pattern changes. I believe this is a meaningful contribution that will be of interest to memory, attention, and complex cognition research.

Strengths:

The authors have shown exceptional transparency in terms of sharing their data, code, and stimuli, which is beneficial to the field for future examinations and to the reproduction of findings. The manuscript is well written with clear figures. The study starts from a strong theoretical background to understand how the brain represents events and has used a well-curated set of stimuli. Overall, the authors extend the event segmentation theory beyond prediction error to include prediction uncertainty, which is an important theoretical shift that has implications in episodic memory encoding, the use of semantic and schematic knowledge, and attentional processing.

Weaknesses:

The data presented is limited to the cortex, and subcortical contributions would be interesting to explore. Further, the temporal window around event boundaries of 20 seconds is approximately the length of the average event (21.4 seconds), and many of the observed pattern effects occur relatively distal from event boundaries themselves, which makes the link to the theoretical background challenging. Finally, while multivariate pattern shifts were examined at event boundaries related to either prediction error or prediction uncertainty, there was no exploration of univariate activity differences between these two different types of boundaries, which would be valuable.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors set out to dissect the mechanistic basis of their previously published finding that encountering cutaneous antigen augments the persistence of CD8+ memory T cells that enter skin (TRM) (Hirai et al., 2021, Immunity). Here they use the same murine model to study the fate of CD8+ T cells after antigen-priming in the lymph nodes, (1) those that re-encounter antigen in the skin via vaccinia virus (VV) versus (2) those that do not encounter antigen in skin but rather are recruited via topical dinitrofluorobenzene (DNFB) (so-called "bystander TRM"). The authors' previous publication establishes that this first group of CD8+ TRM has a persistence advantage over bystander TRM under TGFb-limiting conditions. The current paper advances this finding by elucidating the role of TGFBR3 in regulating CD8+ TRM skin persistence upon topical antigen exposure. Key novelty of the work lies in generation and use of the CD8+ T cell-specific TGFBR3 knockout model, which allows them to demonstrate the role of TGFBR3 in fine tuning the degree of CD8+ T cell skin persistence and that TGFBR3 expression is promoted by CD8+ TRM encountering their cognate antigen upon initial skin entry. Future work directly measuring active TGFb in the skin under different conditions would help identify physiologic scenarios which yield active TGFb-limiting conditions, thus establishing physiologic relevance.

Strengths:

Technical strengths of the paper include (1) complementary imaging and flow cytometry analyses, (2) integration of their scRNA-seq data with the existing CD8+ TRM literature via pathway analysis, and (3) use of orthogonal models where possible. Using a vaccina virus (VV) model, with and without ovalbumin (OVA), the authors investigate how topical antigen exposure and TCR strength regulate CD8+ TRM skin recruitment and retention. The authors use both FTY720 and a Thy1.1 depleting antibody to demonstrate that skin CD8+ TRM expand locally following both a primary and secondary recall response to topical OVA application.

A conceptual strength of the paper is the authors' observation that TCR signal strength upon initial TRM tissue entry helps regulate the extent of their local re-expansion on subsequent antigen re-exposure. They achieved this by applying peptides of varying affinity for the OT-I TCR on the DNFB-exposed flank in tandem with initial VV-OVA + DNFB treatment. They then measured TRM expansion after OVA peptide rechallenge, revealing that encountering a higher affinity peptide upon skin entry leads to greater subsequent re-expansion. Additionally, by generating an OT-I Thy1.1+ E8i-creERT2 huNGFR Tgfbr3fl/fl (Tgfbr3∆CD8) mouse, the authors were able to elucidate a unique role for TGFBR3 in CD8+TRM persistence when active TGFb in skin is limited.

Weaknesses:

Overall, the authors' conclusions are well supported although there are some instances where additional controls, experiments, or clarifications would add rigor. The conclusions regarding skin localized TCR signaling leading to increased skin CD8+ TRM proliferation in-situ and increased TGFBR3 expression would be strengthened by assessing skin CD8+ TRM proliferation and TGFBR3 expression in models of high versus low avidity topical OVA-peptide exposure. The authors could further increase the impact of the paper by fully exploring whether TGFBR3 is regulated at the RNA or protein level; analysis of scRNAseq data included in the rebuttal did show an increase in Tgfbr3 RNA transcript levels in VV-treated compared to DNFB-treated back skin.

Quantification of the skin TRM population relies primarily on imaging analysis, which the authors indicate is more sensitive and consistent for quantifying this population. While flow cytometry is used to perform some phenotyping of TRMs, there remain some missed opportunities for more extensive analysis of markers expressed by this population. Finally, quantifying right and left skin draining lymph node CD8+ T cell numbers would clarify the skin specificity and cell trafficking dynamics of the authors' model.

This work heavily utilizes models developed and defined in previously published work (Hirai, T., et al., Competition for Active TGFβ Cytokine Allows for Selective Retention of Antigen-Specific Tissue- Resident Memory T Cells in the Epidermal Niche. Immunity, 2021. 54(1): p. 84-98.e5). Rather than repeating control experiments for this manuscript, the authors reference data included in this prior work. Thus, readers interested in a more in-depth understanding of these tools and concepts would be encouraged to read both papers.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript investigates which social navigation mechanisms, with different cognitive demands, can explain experimental data collected from homing pigeons. Interestingly, the results indicate that the simplest strategy - route averaging - aligns best with the experimental data, while the most demanding strategy - selectively propagating the best route - offers no advantage. Further, the results suggest that a mixed strategy of weighted averaging may provide significant improvements.

The manuscript addresses the important problem of identifying possible mechanisms that could explain observed animal behavior by systematically comparing different candidate models. A core aspect of the study is the calculation of collective routes from individual bird routes using different models that were hypothesized to be employed by the animals, but which differ in their cognitive demands.

The manuscript is well-written, with high-quality figures supporting both the description of the approach taken and the presentation of results. The results should be of interest to a broad community of researchers investigating (collective) animal behavior, ranging from experiment to theory. The general approach and mathematical methods appear reasonable and show no obvious flaws. The statistical methods also appear.

Strengths:

The main strength of the manuscript is the systematic comparison of different meta-mechanisms for social navigation by modeling social trajectories from solitary trajectories and directly comparing them with experimental results on social navigation. The results show that the experimentally observed behavior could, in principle, arise from simple route averaging without the need to identify "knowledgeable" individuals. Another strength of the work is the establishment of a connection between social navigation behavior and the broader literature on the wisdom of crowds through the concept of effective group size.

Weaknesses:

However, there are two main weaknesses that should be addressed:

(1) The first concerns the definition of "mechanism" as used by the authors, for example, when writing "navigation mechanism." Intuitively, one might assume that what is meant is a behavioral mechanism in the sense of how behavior is generated as a dynamic process. However, here it is used at a more abstract (meta) level, referring to high-level categories such as "averaging" versus "leader-follower" dynamics. It is not used in the sense of how an individual makes decisions while moving, where the actual route followed in a social context emerges from individuals navigating while simultaneously interacting with conspecifics in space and time. In the presented work, the approach is to directly combine (global) route data of solitary birds according to the considered "meta-mechanisms" to generate social trajectories. Of course, this is not how pigeon social navigation actually works-they do not sit together before the flight and say, "This is my route, this is your route, let's combine them in this way." A mechanistic modeling approach would instead be some form of agent-based model that describes how agents move and interact in space and time. Such a "bottom-up" approach, however, has its drawbacks, including many unknown parameters and often strongly simplifying (implicit) assumptions. I do not expect the authors to conduct agent-based modeling, but at the very least, they should clearly discuss what they mean by "mechanism" and clarify that while their approach has advantages-such as naturally accounting for the statistical features of solitary routes and allowing a direct comparison of different meta-mechanisms is also limited, as it does not address how behavior is actually generated. For example, the approach lacks any explicit modeling of errors, uncertainty, or stochasticity more broadly (e.g., due to environmental influences). Thus, while the presented study yields some interesting results, it can only be considered an intermediate step toward understanding actual behavioral mechanisms.

(2) While the presented study raises important questions about the applicability and viability of cumulative cultural evolution (CCE) in explaining certain animal behaviors such as social navigation, I find that it falls short in discussing them. What are the implications regarding the applicability of CCE to animal data and to previously claimed experimental evidence for CCE? Should these experiments be re-analyzed or critically reassessed? If not, why? What are good examples from animal behavior where CCE should not be doubted? Furthermore, what about the cited definitions and criteria of CCE? Are they potentially too restrictive? Should they be revised-and if so, how? Conversely, if the definitions become too general, is CCE still a useful concept for studying certain classes of animal behavior? I think these are some of the very important questions that could be addressed or at least raised in the discussion to initiate a broader debate within the community.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript investigates the role of EV-D68 proteases 2A and 3C in nuclear pore complex (NPC) dysfunction and their contribution to motor neuron toxicity. The authors demonstrate that both proteases cleave only a limited number of nucleoporins, with 2A^pro showing the strongest impact by inhibiting nuclear import and export of proteins and disrupting NPC permeability without affecting RNA export. Importantly, treatment with the 2A^pro inhibitor telaprevir reduced neuronal cell death in a dose-dependent manner, achieving neuroprotection at concentrations below those required to inhibit viral replication. The study addresses a relevant mechanism underlying EV-D68-induced neuropathology and explores a potential therapeutic intervention.

Strengths:

(1) Provides significant mechanistic insight into how EV-D68 proteases alter NPC function and contribute to neuronal toxicity.

(2) The use of recombinant 2A and 3C proteins allows clear dissection of the specific contribution of each protease.

(3) Demonstrates a therapeutic effect of telaprevir, with neuroprotection independent of viral replication inhibition, adding translational value to the findings.

(4) The topic is highly relevant given the association of EV-D68 with acute flaccid myelitis.

Weaknesses:

(1) Most experiments were performed with recombinant proteases, lacking validation in the context of viral infection, where both proteases act simultaneously.

(2) The conclusion that RNA export is unaffected requires confirmation during actual infection.

(3) The reduction of neurotoxicity by telaprevir does not fully demonstrate that the protective effect is solely mediated through NPC preservation; additional analyses of eIF4G cleavage, nucleoporin integrity, and stress granules are needed.

(4) The study would be strengthened by including another 2A inhibitor (e.g., boceprevir) to confirm the specificity of telaprevir's protective effects.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The study by Zhang et al. focuses on how phase separation of a chromatin-associated protein MORC2, could regulate gene expression. Their study shows that MORC2 forms dynamic nuclear condensates in cells. In vitro, MORC2 phase separation is driven by dimerization and multivalent interactions involving the C-terminal domain. A key finding is that the intrinsically disordered region (IDR) of MORC2 exhibits strong DNA binding. They report that DNA binding enhances MORC2's phase separation and its ATPase activity, offering new insights into how MORC2 contributes to chromatin organization and gene regulation. The authors try to correlate MORC2's condensate-forming ability with its gene silencing function, but this warrants additional controls and validation. Moreover, they investigate the effect of disease-linked mutations in the N-terminal domain of MORC2 on its ability to form cellular condensates, ATPase activity, and DNA-binding, though the findings appear inconclusive in the manuscript's current form.

Strengths:

The authors determined a 3.1 Å resolution crystal structure of the dimeric coiled-coil 3 (CC3) domain of MORC2, revealing a hydrophobic interface that stabilizes dimer formation. They present extensive evidence that MORC2 undergoes liquid-liquid phase separation (LLPS) across multiple contexts, including in vitro, in cellulo, and in vivo. Through systematic cellular screening, they identified the C-terminal domain of MORC2 as a key driver of condensate formation. Biophysical and biochemical analyses further show that the IDR within the C-terminal domain interacts with the C-terminal end region (IBD) and also exhibits strong DNA-binding capacity, both of which promote MORC2 phase separation. Together, this study emphasizes that interactions mediated by multiple domains-CC3, IDR, and IBD- drives MORC2 phase separation. Finally, the authors quantified the effect of removing the CC3 on the upregulation and downregulation of target gene expression.

Weaknesses:

Though the findings appear compelling in isolation, the study lacks discussion on how its findings compare with previous studies. Particularly in the context of MORC2-DNA binding, there are previous studies extensively exploring MORC2-DNA binding (Tan, W., Park, J., Venugopal, H. et al. Nat Commun 2025), and its effect on ATPase activity (ref 22). The contradictory results in ref 22 about the impact of DNA-binding on ATPase activity, and ATPase activity on transcriptional repression, warrant proper discussion. The authors performed extensive in-cellulo screening for the investigation of domain contribution in MORC2 condensate formation, but the study does not consider/discuss the possibility of some indirect contributions from the complex cellular environment. Alternatively, the domain-specific contributions could be quantified in vitro by comparing phase diagrams for their variants. While the basis of this study is to investigate the mechanism of MORC2 condensate-mediated gene silencing, the findings in Figure 6 appear incomplete because the CC3 deletion not only affects phase separation of MORC2 but also dimerization. Furthermore, their investigation on disease-linked MORC2 mutations appears very preliminary and inconclusive because there are no obvious trends from the data. Overall, the discussion appears weak as it is missing references to previous studies and, most importantly, how their findings compare to others'.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study from Stahl et al., the authors demonstrate that medaka pluripotent embryonic cells can self-organise into eye organoids containing both retina and lens tissues. While these organoids can self-organize into an eye structure that resembles the vertebrate eye, they are built from a fundamentally different morphogenetic process - an "inside-out" mechanism where the lens forms centrally and moves outward, rather than the normal "outside-in" embryonic process. This is a very interesting discovery, both for our understanding of developmental biology and the potential for tissue engineering applications. The study would benefit from some additional experiments and a few clarifications. The authors suggest that the lens cells are the ones that move from the central to a more superficial position. Is this an active movement of lens cells or just the passive consequence of the retina cells acquiring a cup shape? Are the retina cells migrating behind the lens or the lens cells pushing outwards? High-resolution imaging of organoid cup formation, tracking retina cells in combination with membrane labeling of all cells would help elucidate the morphogenetic processes occurring in the organoids. Membrane labeling would also be useful as Prox1 positive lens cells appear elongated in embryos while in the organoids, cell shapes seem less organised, less compact and not elongated (for example as shown in Fig 3f,g).

The organoids could be a useful tool to address how cell fate is linked to cell shape acquisition. In the forming organoids, retinal tissue initially forms on the outside, while non-retinal tissue is located in the centre; this central tissue later expresses lens markers. Do the authors have any insights into why fate acquisition occurs in this pattern? Is there a difference in proliferation rates between the centrally located cells and the external ones? Could it be that highly proliferative cells give rise to neural retina (NR), while lower proliferating cells become lens?

What happens in organoids that do not form lenses? Do these organoids still generate foxe3 positive cells that fail to develop into a proper lens structure? And in the absence of lens formation, does the retina still acquire a cup shape?

The author suggest that lens formation occurs even in the absence of Matrigel. Is the process slower in these conditions? Are the resulting organoids smaller? While there are indeed some LFC expressing cells by day2, these cells are not very well organised and the pattern of expression seems dotty. Moreover, LFC staining seems to localise posterior to the LFC negative, lens-like structure (e.g. Fig.S1 3o'clock).

How do these organoids develop beyond day 4? Do they maintain their structural integrity at later stages?

The role of HEPES in promoting organoid formation is intriguing. Do the authors have any insights into why it is important in this context? Have the authors tried other culture conditions and does culture condition influence the morphogenetic pathways occurring within the organoids?

Significance:

This is a very interesting paper, and it will be important to determine whether this alternative morphogenetic process is specific to medaka or if similar developmental routes can be recapitulated in organoid cultures from other vertebrate species.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Microexons are highly conserved alternative splice variants, the individual functions of which have thus far remained mostly elusive. Inclusion of microexons in mature mRNAs increases during development, specifically in neural tissues, and is regulated by SRRM proteins. Investigation of individual microexon function is a vital avenue of research, since microexon inclusion is disrupted in diseases like autism. This study provides one of the first rigorous screens (using zebrafish larvae) of the functions of individual microexons in neurodevelopment and behavioural control. The authors precisely excise 21 microexons from the genome of zebrafish using CRISPR-Cas9 and assay the downstream impacts on neurite outgrowth, larvae motility and sociality. A small number of mild phenotypes were observed, which contrasts with the more dramatic phenotypes observed when microexon master regulators SRRM3/4 are disrupted. Importantly, this study attempts to address the reasons why mild/few phenotypes are observed and identifies transcriptomic changes in microexon mutants that suggest potential compensatory gene regulatory mechanisms.

Strengths:

(1) The manuscript is well written with excellent presentation of the data in the figures.

(2) The experimental design is rigorous and explained in sufficient detail.

(3) The identification of a potential microexon compensatory mechanism by transcriptional alterations represents a valued attempt to begin to explain complex genetic interactions.

Overall this is a study with robust experimental design that addresses a gap in knowledge of the role of microexons in neurodevelopment.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This is a thought-provoking perspective by Reichmann et al, outlining supportive evidence that Mycobacterium tuberculosis co-evolved with its host Homo Sapiens to both increase susceptibility to infection and reduce rates of fatal disease through decreased virulence. TB is an ancient disease where two modes of virulence are likely to have evolved through different stages of human evolution: one before the Neolithic Demographic Transition, where humans lived in sparse hunter-gatherer communities, which likely selected for prolonged Mtb infection with reduced virulence to allow for transmission across sparse populations. Conversely, following the agricultural and industrial revolutions, Mtb virulence is likely to have evolved to attack a higher number of susceptible individuals. These different disease modalities highlight the central idea that there are different immunological routes to TB disease, which converge on a disease phenotype characterized by high bacterial load and destruction of the extracellular matrix. The writing is very clear and provides a lot of supportive evidence from population studies and the recent clinical trials of novel TB vaccines, like M72 and H56. However, there are areas to support the thesis that have been described only in broad strokes, including the impact of host and Mtb genetic heterogeneity on this selection, and the alternative model that there are likely different TB diseases (as opposed to different routes to the same disease), as described by several groups advancing the concept of heterogeneous TB endotypes. I expand on specific points below.

Strengths:

(1) The idea that Mtb evolved to both increase transmission (and possible commensalism with humans) with low rates of reactivation is intriguing. The heterogeneous TB phenotypes in the collaborative cross model (PMID: 35112666) support this idea, where some genetic backgrounds can tolerate a high bacterial load with minimal pathology, while others show signs of pathogenesis with low bacterial loads. This supports the idea that the underlying host state, driven by a number of factors like genetics and nutrition, is likely to explain whether someone will co-exist with Mtb without pathology, or progress to disease. I particularly enjoyed the discussion of the protective advantages provided by Mtb infection, which may have rewired the human immune system to provide protection against heterologous pathogens- this is supported by recent studies showing that Mtb infection provides moderate protection against SARS-CoV-2 (PMID: 35325013, and 37720210), and may have applied to other viruses that are likely to have played a more significant role in the past in the natural selection of Homo Sapiens.

(2) Modeling from Marcel Behr and colleagues (PMID: 31649096) indeed suggests that there are at least TB clinical phenotypes that likely mirror the two distinct phases of Mtb co-evolution with humans. Most of the TB disease progression occurs rapidly (within 1-2 years of exposure), and the rest are slow cases of reactivation over time. I enjoyed the discussion of the difference between the types of immune hits needed to progress to disease in the two scenarios, where you may need severe immune hits for rapid progression, a phenotype that likely evolved after the Neolithic transition to larger human populations. On the other hand, a series of milder immune events leading to reactivation after a long period of asymptomatic infection likely mirrors slow progression in the hunter-gatherer communities, to allow for prolonged transmission in scarce populations. Perhaps a clearer analysis of these models would be helpful for the reader.

Weaknesses:

(1) The discussion of genetic heterogeneity is limited and only discusses evidence from MSMD studies. Genetics is an important angle to consider in the co-evolution of Mtb and humans. There is a large body of literature on both host and Mtb genetic associations with TB disease. The very fact that host variants in one population do not necessarily cross-validate across populations is evidence in support of population-specific adaptations. Specific Mtb lineages are likely to have co-evolved with distinct human populations. A key reference is missing (PMID: 23995134), which shows that different lineages co-evolved with human migrations. Also, meta-analyses of human GWAS studies to define variants associated with TB are very relevant to the topic of co-evolution (e.g., PMID: 38224499). eQTL studies can also highlight genetic variants associated with regulating key immune genes involved in the response to TB. The authors do mention that Mtb itself is relatively clonal with ~2K SNPs marking Mtb variation, much of which has likely evolved under the selection pressure of modern antibiotics. However, some of this limited universe of variants can still explain co-adaptations between distinct Mtb lineages and different human populations, as shown recently in the co-evolution of lineage 2 with a variant common in Peruvians (PMID: 39613754).

(2) Although the examples of anti-TNF and anti-PD1 treatments are relevant as drivers of TB in limited clinical contexts, the bigger picture is that they highlight major distinct disease endotypes. These restricted examples show that TB can be driven by immune deficiency (as in the case of anti-TNF, HIV, and malnutrition) or hyperactivation (as in the case of anti-PD1 treatment), but there are still certainly many other routes leading to immune suppression or hyperactivation. Considering the idea of hyper-activation as a TB driver, the apparent higher rate of recurrence in the H56 trial referenced in the review is likely due to immune hyperactivation, especially in the context of residual bacteria in the lung. These different TB manifestations (immune suppression vs immune hyperactivation) mirror TB endotypes described by DiNardo et al (PMID: 35169026) from analysis of extensive transcriptomic data, which indicate that it's not merely different routes leading to the same final endpoint of clinical disease, but rather multiple different disease endpoints. A similar scenario is shown in the transcriptomic signatures underlying disease progression in BCG-vaccinated infants, where two distinct clusters mirrored the hyperactivation and immune suppression phenotypes (PMID: 27183822). A discussion of how to think about translating the extensive information from system biology into treatment stratification approaches, or adjunct host-directed therapies, would be helpful.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The goal of HiJee Kang et al. in this study is to explore the interaction between assemblies of neurons with similar pure-tone selectivity in mouse auditory cortex. Using holographic optogenetic stimulation in a small subset of target cells selective for a given pure tone (PTsel), while optically monitoring calcium activity in surrounding non-target cells, they discovered a subtle rebalancing process: co-tuned neurons that are not optogenetically stimulated tend to reduce their activity. The cortical network reacts as if an increased response to PTsel in some tuned assemblies is immediately offset by a reduction in activity in the rest of the PTsel-tuned assemblies, leaving the overall response to PTsel unchanged. The authors show that this rebalancing process affects only the responses of neurons to PTsel, not to other pure tones. They also show that assemblies of neurons that are not selective for PTsel don't participate in the rebalancing process. They conclude that assemblies of neurons with similar pure-tone selectivity must interact in some way to organize this rebalancing process, and they suggest that mechanisms based on homeostatic signaling may play a role.

The authors have successfully controlled for potential artefacts resulting from their optogenetic stimulation. This study is therefore pioneering in the field of the auditory cortex (AC), as it is the first to use single-cell optogenetic stimulation to explore the functional organization of AC circuits in vivo. The conclusions of this paper are very interesting. They raise new questions about the mechanisms that could underlie such a rebalancing process.

(1) This study uses an all-optical approach to excite a restricted group of neurons chosen for their functional characteristics (their frequency tuning), and simultaneously record from the entire network observable in the FOV. As stated by the authors, this approach is applied for the first time to the auditory cortex, which is a tour de force. However, such approach is complex and requires precise controls to be convincing. The authors provide important controls to demonstrate the precise ability of their optogenetic methods. In particular, holographic patterns used to excite 5 cells simultaneously may be associated with out-of-focus laser hot spots. Cells located outside of the FOV could be activated, therefore engaging other cells than the targeted ones in the stimulation. This would be problematic in this study as their tuning may be unrelated to the tuning of the targeted cells. To control for such effect, the authors have decoupled the imaging and the excitation planes, and checked for the absence of out-of-focus unwanted excitation (Suppl Fig1).

(2) In the auditory cortex, assemblies of cells with similar pure-tone selectivity are linked together not only by their ability to respond to the same sound, but also by other factors. This study clearly shows that such assemblies are structured in a way that maintains a stable global response through a rebalancing process. If a group of cells within an assembly increases its response, the rest of the assembly must be inhibited to maintain the total response.<br /> The boundary between assemblies is smooth as the rebalancing process occurring in one assembly seem to affect also the response of the other assembly comprising cells tuned to a the other frequency. This trend is not significant but visible for both tested frenquencies in Fig. 3 and Fig S3.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a combined experimental and theoretical workflow to study partitioning noise arising during cell division. Such quantifications usually require time-lapse experiments, which are limited in throughput. To bypass these limitations, the authors propose to use flow-cytometry measurements instead and analyse them using a theoretical model of partitioning noise. The problem considered by the authors is relevant and the idea to use statistical models in combination with flow cytometry to boost statistical power is elegant. The authors demonstrate their approach using experimental flow cytometry measurements and validate their results using time-lapse microscopy. The approach focuses on a particular case, where the dynamics of the labelled component depends predominantly on partitioning, while turnover of components is not taken into account. The description of the methods is significantly clearer than in the previous version of the manuscript. I have only two comments left:

• In eq. (1) the notation has been changed/corrected, but the text immediately after it still refers to the old notation.

• Maybe I don't fully understand the reasoning provided by the authors, but it is still not entirely clear to me why microscopy-based estimates are expected to be larger. Fewer samples will increase the estimation uncertainty, but this can go either way in terms of the inferred variability.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The authors use Xenopus embryos to study feedback interactions between the planar cell polarity (PCP) proteins in the context of convergence and extension. They show that binding of the cytoplasmic polarity protein Pk2 to Vangl2 is needed for them to synergistically suppress defects in convergence and extension caused by Dvl overexpression. They then examine protein localizations in animal cap cells, and show that Wnt11-induced accumulation of Fzd7, Ror2 and Dvl into plasma membrane patches is disrupted by the functional Vangl2/Pk complex. This disperses Fzd and causes its endocytosis, while Dvl remains at the plasma membrane. Interestingly, Ror2 and Vangl2 tend to have a broader localization within the membrane patches than Fzd7/Dvl, leading to a model in which Ror2 mediates the transfer of Dvl from Vangl2/Pk to Fzd7 in response to Wnt11.

This work uses a mixture of biochemical approaches, phenotypic assays in Xenopus and imaging. The data is carefully quantitated and the imaging is high quality. This is an interesting paper, showing mechanisms by which Vangl2/Pk can functionally antagonize Fzd/Dvl during planar cell polarity.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Intrinsic properties of a neuron refer to the ion channels that a neuron expresses. These ion channels determine how a neuron responds to its inputs. How intrinsic properties link to behavior remains poorly understood. Medina and Margoliash address this question using the zebra finch, a well-studied songbird. Previous studies from their lab and other labs have shown that the intrinsic properties of adult songbird basal-ganglia projecting premotor neurons, are more similar within a bird than across birds. Across birds, this similarity is related to the extent of similarity in the songs; the more similar the song between two birds, the more similar the intrinsic properties between the neurons of these two birds. Finally, the intrinsic properties of these neurons change over the course of development and are sensitive to intact auditory feedback. However, the song features that relate to these intrinsic properties and the function of the within-bird homogeneity of intrinsic properties are unclear.

In this manuscript, the authors address these two questions by examining the intrinsic properties of basal-ganglia projecting premotor neurons in zebra finch brain slices. Specifically, they focus on the Ih current (as this is related to rhythmic activity in many pattern-generating circuits) and correlate the properties of the Ih current with song features. They find that the sag ratio (a measure of the driving force of the Ih current) and the rebound area (a measure of the post-inhibitory depolarisation) are both correlated with the temporal features of the song. First, they show the presence of correlations between the length of the song motif and the length of the longest syllable (most often a harmonic stack syllable). Based on this, they conclude that longer song motifs are composed of longer syllables. Second, they show that HVCX neurons within a bird have more similar sag ratios and rebound areas than across birds. Third, the mean sag ratio and mean rebound areas across birds were correlated with the duration of the longest harmonic stack within the song. These two results suggest that IPs are correlated with the temporal structure of the song. To further test this, the authors used natural and experimental tutoring procedures to have birds that learned two different types of songs that only differed in length; the longer song had an extra harmonic stack at the end. Using these two sets of birds, the authors find larger sag ratios and higher firing frequencies in birds with longer songs. Fifth, they show that the post-inhibitory rebound area allows neurons to respond to excitatory inputs and produce spikes. Neurons with a larger rebound area have a larger time window for responding to excitatory inputs. Based on this, they speculate that HVCX neurons with larger rebound areas integrate over larger time windows. Finally, they make a network model of HVC and show that one specific model could explain sequence-specific bursting of HVCX neurons.

Strengths:

The question being addressed is an interesting question and the authors use appropriate techniques. The authors find a new temporal structure within the song, specifically, they find that longer songs typically have more syllables and longer syllables. As far as I know, this has not been shown earlier. The authors build on existing literature to suggest that IPs of HVCX neurons are correlated with the temporal structure of songs.

Comments on revised version:

I have read through the revised paper and I also feel that my comments have been addressed.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors present a report of a large Pseudomonas aeruginosa hospital outbreak affecting more than 80 patients with first sampling dates in 2011 that stretched over more than 10 years and was only identified through genomic surveillance in 2020. The outbreak strain was assigned to the sequence type 621, an ST that has been associated with carpabapenem resistance across the globe. Ongoing transmission coincided with both increasing resistance without acquisition of carbapenemase genes as well as convergence of mutations towards a host-adapted lifestyle.

Strengths:

The convincing genomic analyses indicate spread throughout the hospital since the beginning of the century and provide important benchmark findings for future comparison

The sampling was based on all organisms sent to the Multidrug resistant Organism Repository and Surveillance Network across the U.S. Military Health System.

Using sequencing data from patient and environmental samples for phylogenetic and transmission analyses as well as determining recurring mutations in outbreak isolates allows for insights into the evolution of potentially harmful pathogens with the ultimate aim of reducing their spread in hospitals.

Weaknesses:

The epidemiological information was limited and the sampling methodology was inconsistent, thus complicating inference of exact transmission routes. Epidemiological data relevant for this analysis include information on the reason for sampling, patient admission and discharge data and underlying frequency of sampling and sampling results in relation to patient turnover.

Comments on revisions:

Thank you for the careful revision and consideration of my comments.

I am pleased to confirm that all my concerns have been comprehensively addressed.

The changes and additions made have resolved my initial feedback, and I see no need to alter my evaluation.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This work used multiple approaches to show that CCK is critical for long-term potentiation (LTP) in the auditory thalamocortical pathway. They also showed that the CCK mediation of LTP is age-dependent and supports frequency discrimination. This work is important because is opens up a new avenue of investigation of the roles of neuropeptides in sensory plasticity.

Strengths:

The main strength is the multiple approaches used to comprehensively examine the role of CCK in auditory thalamocortical LTP. Thus, the authors do provide a compelling set of data that CCK mediates thalamocortical LTP in an age-dependent manner.

Weaknesses:

The behavioral assessment is relatively limited, but may be fleshed out in future work.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This work addresses an important question of chromosome architecture changes associated with organotopic metastatic traits, showing important trends in genome reorganization. The most important observation is that 3D genome changes consistent with adaptations for new microenvironment, including lung metastatic breast cells exhibiting signatures of the genome architecture typical to a lung cell-like conformation and brain metastatic prostate cancer cells showing compartment shifts toward a brain-like state.

Strengths:

This work presents interesting original results, which will be important for future studies and biomedical implications of epigenetic regulation in norm and pathology.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This valuable paper presents Spyglass, a comprehensive software framework designed to address the critical challenges of reproducibility and data sharing in neuroscience. The authors have developed a robust ecosystem built on community standards such as NWB and DataJoint, and demonstrate its utility by applying it to datasets from two independent labs, successfully validating the framework's ability to reproduce and extend published findings. While the framework offers a powerful blueprint for modern, reproducible research, its immediate broad impact may be tempered by the significant upfront investment required for adoption and its current focus on electrophysiological data. Nevertheless, Spyglass stands as an important and practical contribution, providing a well-documented and thoughtfully designed path toward more transparent and collaborative science.

Strengths:

(1) Principled solution to a foundational challenge:

The work offers a concrete and comprehensive framework for reproducibility in neuroscience, moving beyond abstract principles to provide an implemented, end-to-end ecosystem.

(2) Pragmatic and robust architectural design:

Features such as the "cyclic iteration" motif for spike-sorting curation and the "merge" motif for pipeline consolidation demonstrate deep, practical experience with neurophysiological analysis and address real-world challenges.

(3) Cross-laboratory validation:

The successful replication and extension of published hippocampal decoding findings across independent datasets strongly support the framework's utility and underscore its potential for enabling reproducible science.

(4) Accessibility through documentation and demos:

Extensive tutorials and the availability of a public demo environment lower some of the barriers to adoption.

Weaknesses:

(1) High barrier to adoption:

The requirement to convert all data into NWB, maintain a relational database, and train users in structured workflows is a significant hurdle, particularly for smaller labs.

(2) Limited tool integration:

The current pipelines, while useful, still resemble proof-of-principle demonstrations. Closer integration with established analysis libraries such as Pynapple and others could broaden the toolkit and reduce duplication of effort.

(3) Experimental metadata support:

While NWB provides a solid foundation for storing neurophysiology data streams, it still lacks broad and standardized support for experimental metadata, including descriptions of conditions, subject details, and procedures, as well as links across datasets. This limitation constrains one of Spyglass's key promises: enabling reproducible, cross-laboratory science. The authors should clarify how Spyglass plans to address or mitigate this gap - for example, by adopting or contributing to metadata extensions, providing templates for experimental conditions, or integrating with complementary systems that manage metadata across datasets.

(4) Cross-laboratory interoperability:

While demonstrated across two datasets, the manuscript does not fully address how Spyglass will handle the diversity of metadata standards, acquisition systems, and lab-specific practices that remain major obstacles to reproducibility.

(5) Visualization limitations:

Beyond the export system and Figurl, NWB offers relatively few options for interactive data exploration. The ability to explore data flexibly and discover new phenomena remains limited, which constrains one of the potential strengths of standardized pipelines.

Spyglass is well-positioned to become a community framework for reproducible neuroscience workflows, with the potential to set new standards for transparency and data sharing. With expanded modality coverage, tighter integration of existing community tools, stronger solutions for cross-lab interoperability, and richer visualization capabilities, it could have a transformative impact on the field.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript examines decision-making in a context where the information for the decision is not continuous, but separated by a short temporal gap. The authors use a standard motion direction discrimination task over two discrete dot motion pulses (but unlike previous experiments, fill the gaps in evidence with 0-coherence random dot motion of differently coloured dots). Previous studies using this task (Kiani et al., 2013; Tohidi-Moghaddam et al., 2019; Azizi et al., 2021; 2023) or other discrete sample stimuli (Cheadle et al., 2014; Wyart et al., 2015; Golmohamadian et al., 2025) have shown decision-makers to integrate evidence from multiple samples (although with some flexible weighting on each sample). In this experiment, decision-makers tended not to use the second motion pulse for their decision. This allows the separation of neural signatures of momentary decision-evidence samples from the accumulated decision-evidence. In this context, classic electroencephalography signatures of accumulated decision-evidence (central-parietal positivity) are shown to reflect the momentary decision-evidence samples.

Strengths:

The authors present an excellent analysis of the data in support of their findings. In terms of proportion correct, participants show poorer performance than predicted if assuming both evidence samples were integrated perfectly. A regression analysis suggested a weaker weight on the second pulse, and in line with this, the authors show an effect of the order of pulse strength that is reversed compared to previous studies: A stronger second pulse resulted in worse performance than a stronger first pulse (this is in line with the visual condition reported in Golmohamadian et al., 2025). The authors also show smaller changes in electrophysiological signatures of decision-making (central parietal positivity and lateralised motor beta power) in response to the second pulse. The authors describe these findings with a computational model which allows for early decision-commitment, meaning the second pulse is ignored on the majority of trials. The model-predicted electrophysiological components describe the data well. In particular, this analysis of model-predicted electrophysiology is impressive in providing simple and clear predictions for understanding the data.

Weaknesses:

Some readers may be left questioning why behaviour in this experiment is so different from previous experiments, which use almost exactly the same design (Kiani et al., 2013; Tohidi-Moghaddam et al., 2019; Azizi et al., 2021; 2023). The authors suggest this may be due to the staircase procedure used to calibrate the coherence of (single-pulse) dot motion stimuli for individuals at the start of the experiment. But it remains unclear why overall performance in this experiment is so bad. Participants achieved ~85% correct following 400 ms of 33 - 45% coherent motion. In previous work, performance was ~90% correct following 240ms of 12.8% coherent motion. It seems odd that adding the 0% coherent motion in the temporal gaps would impair performance so greatly, given it was clearly colour-coded. There is a lack of detail about the stimulus presentation parameters to understand whether visual processing explains the declined performance, or if there is a more cognitive/motivational explanation.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper investigates putative networks associated with prediction errors in task-based and resting-state fMRI. It attempts to test the idea that prediction errors minimisation includes abstract cognitive functions, referred to as the global prediction error hypothesis, by establishing a parallel between networks found in task-based fMRI where prediction errors are elicited in a controlled manner and those networks that emerge during "resting state".

Strengths:

Clearly, a lot of work and data went into this paper, including 2 task-based fMRI experiments and the resting state data for the same participants, as well as a third EEG-fMRI dataset. Overall, well written with a couple of exceptions on clarity, as per below, and the methodology appears overall sound, with a couple of exceptions listed below that require further justification. It does a good job of acknowledging its own weakness.

Weaknesses:

(1) The paper does a good job of acknowledging its greatest weakness, the fact that it relies heavily on reverse inference, but cannot quite resolve it. As the authors put it, "finding the same networks during a prediction error task and during rest does not mean that the networks' engagement during rest reflects prediction error processing". Again, the authors acknowledge the speculative nature of their claims in the discussion, but given that this is the key claim and essence of the paper, it is hard to see how the evidence is compelling to support that claim.

(2) Given how uncontrolled cognition is during "resting-state" experiments, the parallel made with prediction errors elicited during a task designed for that effect is a little difficult to make. How often are people really surprised when their brains are "at rest", likely replaying a previously experienced event or planning future actions under their control? It seems to be more likely a very low prediction error scenario, if at all surprising.

(3) The quantitative comparison between networks under task and rest was done on a small subset of the ROIs rather than on the full network - why? Noting how small the correlation between task and rest is (r=0.021) and that's only for part of the networks, the evidence is a little tenuous. Running the analysis for the full networks could strengthen the argument.

(4) Looking at the results in Figure 2C, the four-quadrant description of the networks labelled for low and high PE appears a little simplistic. The authors state that this four-quadrant description omits some ROIs as motivated by prior knowledge. This would benefit from a more comprehensive justification. Which ROIs are excluded, and what is the evidence for exclusion?

(5) The EEG-fMRI analysis claiming 3-6Hz fluctuations for PE is hard to reconcile with the fact that fMRI captures activity that is a lot slower, while some PEs are as fast as 150 ms. The discussion acknowledges this but doesn't seem to resolve it - would benefit from a more comprehensive argument.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Altin et al. examines the dynamics of bacterial assemblies, building on previously published work documenting mechanical spiral waves. The authors show that the emergent dynamics can be influenced by various factors, including the strain of bacteria and water content in the sample. While the topic of this paper would be of broad interest, and the preliminary results are certainly interesting, various aspects of this paper are underdeveloped and require further exploration.

Strengths:

One of the nice features of this system is the ability to transition between the different states based on the addition or withdrawal of water. The authors use a similar experimental model system and mathematical model to previously published work (Reference 49), but extend by showing that the behaviour can be modified through simple interventions. Specifically, the authors show that adding water droplets or drying the sample through heating can result in changes in the observed wave structure. This represents a possible way of controlling active matter.

The mathematical model proposed in this paper involves a phase-oscillator model of Kuramoto-style coupling (similar to previously reported models). A non-reciprocal phase lag is introduced in order to facilitate the patterns seen in experiments. The qualitative agreement in the behaviour is quite striking, showing both spiral waves and travelling waves.

Weaknesses:

The principal observation of the paper - that spiral waves emerge in these systems and can be controlled in various ways - is not linked to microscale dynamics at the cell level. It is recognised that hydrodynamics can introduce non-reciprocity, an essential ingredient of this model. However, in this work the authors have not identified a physical mechanism for the lag, e.g., either through steric interactions or hydrodynamic disturbances. This is also relevant in the phase oscillator modelling section. In low Reynolds number flows, dynamics are instantaneously determined. In this light, what does the phase lag term represent? What is the origin of the coupling term, b? Can this be varied systematically or derived from experimental measurements or parameters?

Classification of wave properties is an important aspect of this paper, but is not accomplished in a quantitative sense. What is the method for distinguishing between travelling and spiral waves? There is a range of quantitative tools that could be used to investigate these dynamics (and also compare quantitatively with the models). For example, examining the correlation functions and order parameters could assist with the extraction of wave features (see extensive literature on oscillator models).

The methodology of changing the dynamics through moisture content appears to be slightly underdeveloped, e.g., adding water involves a droplet, and removing water is accomplished by heating (which presumably could cause other effects). Could the dynamics not be controlled more directly by varying the humidity? At the same time, the authors also mention that temperature itself plays a role in shaping the behaviour. What is the mechanism for this? Is it just through evaporation? Since the frequency increases with temperature, could it just be that activity increases with temperature?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study establishes a platform for studying mosquito flight activity over the course of several weeks and demonstrates key applications of such a paradigm: the comparison of daily activity profiles across different Aedes aegypti populations and the quantification of responses to physiological and environmental perturbations.

Strengths:

(1) Overall, the authors succeed in setting up a low-cost, scalable tracking system that stably records mosquito flight activity for several weeks and uses it to demonstrate compelling use cases.

(2) The text is organized well, is easy to read, and is understandable for a broad audience.

(3) Instructions for constructing housing and for performing tracking with a dedicated GUI are available on an accompanying website, with open-source (and well-organized) code.

(4) A complementary pair of methods (one testing for activity signals at specific times of the day, and the other capturing broader daily patterns) is used effectively.

Weaknesses:

(1) In the interval-based GLMM results, since each time interval is tested independently, p-values should be corrected for multiple hypotheses (for instance, through controlling the false discovery rate).

(2) The accompanying GUI application needs some modifications to fully work out of the box on a sample video.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Understanding the mechanisms of neural specification is a central question in neurobiology. In Drosophila, the mushroom body (MB), which is the associative learning region in the brain, consists of three major cell types: γ, α'/β', and α/β kenyon cells. These classes can be further subdivided into seven subtypes, together comprising ~2000 KCs per hemi-brain. Remarkably, all of these neurons are derived from just four neuroblasts in each hemisphere. Therefore, a lot of endeavors are put into understanding how the neuron is specified in the fly MB.

Over the past decade, studies have revealed that MB neuroblasts employ a temporal patterning mechanism, producing distinct neuronal types at different developmental stages. Temporal identity is conveyed through transcription factor expression in KCs. High levels of Chinmo, a BTB-zinc finger transcription factor, promote γ-cell fate (Zhu et al., Cell, 2006). Reduced Chinmo levels trigger expression of mamo, a zinc finger transcription factor that specifies α'/β' identity (Liu et al., eLife, 2019). However, the specification of α/β neurons remains poorly understood. Some evidence suggests that microRNAs regulate the transition from α'/β' to α/β fate (Wu et al., Dev Cell, 2012; Kucherenko et al., EMBO J, 2012). One hypothesis even proposes that α/β represents a "default" state of MB neurons, which could explain the difficulty in identifying dedicated regulators.

The study by Chung et al. challenges this hypothesis. By leveraging previously published RNA-seq datasets (Shih et al., G3, 2019), they systematically screened BAC transgenic lines to selectively label MB subtypes. Using these tools, they analyzed the consequences of manipulating E93 expression and found that E93 is required for α/β specification. Furthermore, loss of E93 impairs MB-dependent behaviors, highlighting its functional importance.

Strengths:

The authors conducted a thorough analysis of E93 manipulation phenotypes using LexA tools generated from the Janelia Farm and Bloomington collections. They demonstrated that E93 knockdown reduces expression of Ca-α1T, a calcium channel gene identified as an α/β marker. Supporting this conclusion, one LexA line driven by a DNA fragment near EcR (R44E04) showed consistent results. Conversely, overexpression of E93 in γ and α'/β' Kenyon cells led to downregulation of their respective subtype markers.

Another notable strength is the authors' effort to dissect the genetic epistasis between E93 and previously known regulators. Through MARCM and reporter analyses, they showed that Chinmo and Mamo suppress E93, while E93 itself suppresses Mamo. This work establishes a compelling molecular model for the regulatory network underlying MB cell-type specification.

Weaknesses:

The interpretation of E93's role in neuronal specification requires caution. Typically, two criteria are used to establish whether a gene directs neuronal identity:<br /> (1) gene manipulation shifts the neuronal transcriptome from one subtype to another, and<br /> (2) gene manipulation alters axonal projection patterns.

The results presented here only partially satisfy the first criterion. Although markers are affected, it remains possible that the reporter lines and subtype markers used are direct transcriptional targets of E93 in α/β neurons, rather than reflecting broader fate changes. Future studies using single-cell transcriptomics would provide a more comprehensive assessment of neuronal identity following E93 perturbation.

With respect to the second criterion, the evidence is also incomplete. While reporter patterns were altered, the overall morphology of the α/β lobes appeared largely intact after E93 knockdown. Overexpression of E93 in γ neurons produced a small subset of cells with α/β-like projections, but this effect warrants deeper characterization before firm conclusions can be drawn. While the results might be an intrinsic nature of KC types in flies, the interpretation of the reader of the data should be more careful, and the authors should also mention this in their main text.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript by Kawadkar et al investigates the role of Nup107 in developmental progression via regulation of ecdysone signaling. The authors identify an interesting phenotype of Nup107 whole body RNAi depletion in Drosophila development - developmental arrest at the late larval stage. Nup107-depleted larvae exhibit mis-localization of the Ecdysone receptor (EcR) from the nucleus to the cytoplasm and reduced expression of EcR taret genes in salivary glands, indicative of compromised ecdysone signaling. This mis-localization of EcR in salivary glands was phenocopied when Nup107 was depleted only in the prothoracic gland (PG), suggesting that it is not nuclear transport of EcR but presence of ecdysone (normally secreted from PG) that is affected. Consistently, whole body levels of ecdysone were shown to be reduced in Nup107 KD, particularly at the late third instar stage when a spike in ecdysone normally occurs. Importantly, the authors could rescue the developmental arrest and EcR mis-localization phenotypes of Nup107 KD by adding exogenous ecdysone, supporting the notion that Nup107 depletion disrupts biosynthesis of ecdysone, which arrests normal development. Additionally, they found that rescue of Nup107 KD phenotype can also be achieved by over-expression of the receptor tyrosine kinase torso, which is thought to be the upstream regulator of ecdysone synthesis in the PG. Transcript levels of torso are also shown to be downregulated in the Nup107KD, as are transcript levels of multiple ecdysone biosynthesis genes. Together, these experiments reveal a new role of Nup107 or nuclear pore levels in hormone-driven developmental progression, likely via regulation of levels of torso and torso-stimulated ecdysone biosynthesis.

Strengths:

The developmental phenotypes of an NPC component presented in the manuscript are striking and novel, and the data appears to be of high quality. The rescue experiments are particularly significant, providing strong evidence that Nup107 functions upstream of torso and ecdysone levels in regulation of developmental timing and progression.

Weaknesses:

The underlying mechanism is however not clear, and any insight into how Nup107 may regulate these pathways would greatly strengthen the manuscript. Some suggestions to address this are detailed below.

Major questions:

(1) Determining how specific this phenotype is to Nup107 vs. to reduced NPC levels overall would give some mechanistic insight. Does knocking down other components of the Nup107 subcomplex (the Y-complex) lead to similar phenotypes? Given the published gene regulatory function of Nup107, do other gene regulatory Nups such as Nup98 or Nup153 produce these phenotypes?

(2) In a related issue, does this level of Nup107 KD produce lower NPC levels? It is expected to, but actual quantification of nuclear pores in Nup107-depleted tissues should be added. These and above experiments would help address a key mechanistic question - is this phenotype the result of lower numbers of nuclear pores or specifically of Nup107?

(3) Additional experiments on how Nup107 regulates torso would provide further insight. Does Nup107 regulate transcription of torso or perhaps its mRNA export? Looking at nascent levels of the torso transcript and the localization of its mRNA can help answer this question. Or alternatively, does Nup107 physically bind torso?

(4) The depletion level of Nup107 RNAi specifically in the salivary gland vs. the prothoracic gland should be compared by RT-qPCR or western blotting.

(5) The UAS-torso rescue experiment should also include the control of an additional UAS construct - so Nup107; UAS-control vs Nup107; UAS-torso should be compared in the context of rescue to make sure the Gal4 driver is functioning at similar levels in the rescue experiment.

Minor:

(6) Figures and figure legends can stand to be more explicit and detailed, respectively.

Comments on revisions:

The revised manuscript addresses several outstanding issues, most importantly the question of whether the developmental delay phenotype of Nup107 is exhibited by other Nups.

I recommend that the authors include the data they provide in the rebuttal letter on Nup153 KD not showing the delay phenotype (Figure R1) into the actual manuscript. It's an important mechanistic question raised by multiple reviewers, and would strengthen the authors' conclusions. Ideally, knock downs of other Nups of the Nup107 complex should be investigated, especially given that all those RNAi lines are publicly available.

Figure 6B should also specify whether the torso transcript being measured is mRNA or nascent, as it would help understand whether it's transcription or mRNA stability that is affected by Nup107 KD.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Epigenetic silencing of target genes by the Polycomb pathway is central to maintenance of cell fates during development and depends on repressive chromatin states involving Polycomb complexes and histone modifications. However, the mechanisms by which these chromatin states are built at the earliest stages of development are unclear. Here, Gonzaga-Saavedra and colleagues use the premier experimental system for studying Polycomb gene regulation, Drosophila development, to investigate when Polycomb domains emerge and how they are assembled. Using a combination of CRISPR gene editing, imaging, and genomic profiling, they determine that while H3K27me3 is initially present in the first nuclear cycles, it quickly dissipates and does not re-emerge until mid-nuclear cycle 14, during the major wave of zygotic genome activation (ZGA). This finding helps resolve current discrepancies in the field, informs potential mechanisms of transgenerational inheritance, and indicates that repressive Polycomb domains are built de novo on target genes in embryogenesis. The authors then set out to examine how Polycomb domains are built. Through live imaging and immunofluorescence, they determine that the histone H3K27 methyltransferase, E(z), is present in nuclei at high levels throughout cleavage and blastoderm stages. By contrast, they determine that several Polycomb proteins that bind PREs (cis elements that demarcate Polycomb targets in the genome) are absent from early cleavage nuclei and progressively increase following nuclear cycle 10. These findings suggest that the absence of H3K27me3 in early embryos may be due to failure to assemble functional Polycomb complexes at target genes. Lastly, the authors test the requirement of two transcription factors with important roles in ZGA, GAF, and ZLD. Despite binding to many PREs and regulating chromatin accessibility in early embryos, they find that GAF is largely dispensable for the emergence of H3K27me3 domains. On the other hand, they find that the pioneer factor ZLD is required for proper H3K27me3 emergence; in its absence, some Polycomb domains accumulate greater levels of H3K27me3, whereas other Polycomb domains accumulate less H3K27me3.

Strengths:

The strengths of this study are manifold. It studies an important topic with broad interest to the chromatin and epigenetics fields. It is well-written with detailed method descriptions. In addition, the experimental design and rigor of execution are exceptional despite working with very small amounts of biological material. Example strengths include that the Polycomb proteins studied were tagged with the same epitope, permitting direct quantitative comparisons in imaging and in genomics experiments. Microscopy studies are quantified and performed both via live imaging and via immunofluorescence. The microscopy studies reinforce and extend conclusions made via ChIP. Sophisticated loss-of-function analyses allow for direct mechanistic tests of Polycomb domain emergence.

Weaknesses:

Overall, the study is quite strong already, but it can be further strengthened in several ways. First, several conclusions should be refined based on the data presented. Second, the extent to which ZLD is important for initiating Polycomb domain formation should be made clearer. Third, additional genomic profiling experiments are needed to provide insight into models explaining why H3K27me3 is absent prior to NC14.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Mutations in the prolyl hydroxylase, PHD2, cause erythrocytosis and, in some cases, can result in tumorigenesis. Taber and colleagues test the structural and functional consequences of seven patient-derived missense mutations in PHD2 using cell-based reporter and stability assays, and multiple biophysical assays, and find that most mutations are destabilizing. Interestingly, they discover a PHD2 mutant that can hydroxylate the C-terminal ODD, but not the N-terminal ODD, which suggests the importance of N-terminal ODD for biology. A major strength of the manuscript is the multidisciplinary approach used by the authors to characterize the functional and structural consequences of the mutations. However, the manuscript had several major weaknesses, such as an incomplete description of how the NMR was performed, a justification for using neighboring residues as a surrogate for looking at prolyl hydroxylation directly, or a reference to the clinical case studies describing the phenotypes of patient mutations. Additionally, the experimental descriptions for several experiments are missing descriptions of controls or validation, which limits their strength in supporting the claims of the authors.

Strengths:

(1) This manuscript is well-written and clear.

(2) The authors use multiple assays to look at the effects of several disease-associated mutations, which support the claims.

(3) The identification of P317R as a mutant that loses activity specifically against NODD, which could be a useful tool for further studies in cells.

Weaknesses:

Major:

(1) The source data for the patient mutations (Figure 1) in PHD2 is not referenced, and it's not clear where this data came from or if it's publicly available. There is no section describing this in the methods.

(2) The NMR hydroxylation assay.

A. The description of these experiments is really confusing. The authors have published a recent paper describing a method using 13C-NMR to directly detect proly-hydroxylation over time, and they refer to this manuscript multiple times as the method used for the studies under review. However, it appears the current study is using 15N-HSQC-based experiments to track the CSP of neighboring residues to the target prolines, so not the target prolines themselves. The authors should make this clear in the text, especially on page 9, 5th line, where they describe proline cross-peaks and refer to the 15N-HSQC data in Figure 5B.<br /> B. The authors are using neighboring residues as reporters for proline hydroxylation, without validating this approach. How well do CSPs of A403 and I566 track with proline hydroxylation? Have the authors confirmed this using their 13C-NMR data or mass spec?<br /> C. Peak intensities. In some cases, the peak intensities of the end point residue look weaker than the peak intensities of the starting residue (5B, PHD2 WT I566, 6 ct lines vs. 4 ct lines). Is this because of sample dilution (i.e., should happen globally)? Can the authors comment on this?

(3) Data validating the CRISPR KO HEK293A cells is missing.

(4) The interpretation of the SEC data for the PHD2 mutants is a little problematic. Subtle alterations in the elution profiles may hint at different hydrodynamic radii, but as the samples were not loaded at equal concentrations or volumes, these data seem more anecdotal, rather than definitive. Repeating this multiple times, using matched samples, followed by comparison with standards loaded under identical buffer conditions, would significantly strengthen the conclusions one could make from the data.

Minor:

(1) Justification for picking the seven residues is not clearly articulated. The authors say they picked 7 mutants with "distinct residue changes", but no further rationale is provided.

(2) A major finding of the paper is that a disease-associated mutation, P317R, can differentially affect HIF1 prolyhydroxylation, however, additional follow-up studies have not been performed to test this in cells or to validate the mutant in another method. Is it the position of the proline within the catalytic core, or the identity of the mutation that accounts for the selectivity?

Comments on revision:

The revised manuscript addresses most of my concerns, i.e performing SEC experiments under matched sample concentrations, and incorporating additional data to justify the use of surrogate residues to monitor proline hydroxylation. I appreciate the improvements in the text to clarify the NMR experiments, but I still find their description confusing. Although the authors are using neighboring residues to monitor proline hydroxylation (which they justify convincingly using supplementary data), the language in the text suggests they are (and can?) monitor them directly (i.e. referring to proline cross-peaks in an 15N-HSQC spectrum). The axis labels in Figure 5B also seem to have become mislabeled in this revised version.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In this manuscript, the authors leverage multiple cellular models including the drosophila fat body and cultured hepatocytes to investigate the metabolic programs governing cell size. By profiling gene programs in the larval fat body during the third instar stage - in which cells cease proliferation and initiate a period of cell growth - the authors uncover a coordinated downregulation of genes involved in mitochondrial pyruvate import and metabolism. Enforced expression of the mitochondrial pyruvate carrier restrains cell size, despite active signaling of mTORC1 and other pathways viewed as traditional determinants of cell size. Mechanistically, the authors find that mitochondrial pyruvate import restrains cell size by fueling gluconeogenesis through the combined action of pyruvate carboxylase and phosphoenolpyruvate carboxykinase. Pyruvate conversion to oxaloacetate and use as a gluconeogenic substrate restrains cell growth by siphoning oxaloacetate away from aspartate and other amino acid biosynthesis, revealing a tradeoff between gluconeogenesis and provision of amino acids required to sustain protein biosynthesis. Overall, this manuscript is extremely rigorous, with each point interrogated through a variety of genetic and pharmacologic assays. The major conceptual advance is uncovering the regulation of cell size as a consequence of compartmentalized metabolism, which is dominant even over traditional signaling inputs. The work has implications for understanding cell size control in cell types that engage in gluconeogenesis but more broadly raise the possibility that metabolic tradeoffs determine cell size control in a variety of contexts.

Comments on revised version:

I have had a chance to review the manuscript and response to reviewer comments. I was extremely positive about this manuscript at first submission, and thought that the manuscript rigorously reported a surprising observation with broad implications across fields. The notion that intracellular metabolic networks can be dominant determinants of cell size, even over traditional signaling inputs, is surprising and important. The authors also provide convincing mechanistic insights into how the observed metabolic changes could affect cell size regulation. I think my previous comments and summary remain applicable for the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Zhu, Emanuelli, and colleagues describe a novel pharmacological activator of the Integrated Stress Response kinase GCN2. The work is conclusive and biochemically solid. This work significantly adds to the pharmacological arsenal targeting the ISR and, in particular, GCN2.

Strengths:

Strong biochemistry, novel molecular activator of GCN2 (GCN1 independent).

Weaknesses:

The rationale for the screen is not exploited in the results (e.g., pathogenic GCN2 mutants), and lots of cell-based read-outs are not endogenous.

Major points

(1) Regarding the justification of the work. Since the authors justify the screen for GCN2 activators with loss-of-function mutants associated with diseases, it would be of interest to evaluate whether the best compounds identified in the study are indeed able to prompt activation of those mutants (or at least of the most prevalent). This approach could actually go in parallel with the docking experiments carried out in the last figure of the manuscript, where mutants could be modelized as well.

(2) The compounds are only tested using « artificial » proximal signaling outputs. It would be interesting to evaluate whether the best identified compounds are capable of prompting endogenous eIF2alpha phosphorylation in cellular models.

(3) Other GCN2 activators (other than GCN2iB, e.g., HC-7366) were recently identified. In this context, it would be of interest to carry out a small benchmarking study to evaluate how the compounds identified in the current study perform against the previously identified molecules.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The authors address an important challenge in developmental biology: the quantitative description of tissue deformation during organogenesis. They have developed a new pipeline to quantify early heart tube morphogenesis in the mouse, with cellular resolution. They adopt an elegant approach by integrating multiple 3D time-lapse datasets into a dynamic atlas of cardiac morphogenesis in order to compute spatio-temporal deformation patterns. The main findings highlight a strong compartmentalization of cell behaviors, with tissue growth and anisotropy exhibiting complementary and spatially segregated patterns. Using these data, the authors developed an in-silico fate mapping tool to interrogate cell displacement within the myocardium. This virtual model provides new mechanistic insights into how the bilateral cardiac primordia converge and transform into a three-dimensional heart tube. The authors identify "belt-like" constraints at the arterial and venous poles that prevent tissue expansion and thus shape the ventricular barrel morphology.

The computational framework is highly innovative and impressive, providing an unprecedented 3D model of tissue deformation during heart morphogenesis. It also opens avenues for testing hypotheses regarding tissue growth and the forces that cause cell motion. However, the proposed model of ventricular chamber formation with the two constraining belts remains hypothetical, lacking biological validation and requiring strengthening or modulation.

Overall, this carefully performed study provides a new model for exploring tissue deformation during organogenesis and will be of broad interest to computational and developmental biologists.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study by Suzuki et al. reports an interesting stereo-selective role of D-serine in regulating one-carbon metabolism during neurodevelopment to adapt the functional transition, probably through the competition with mitochondrial transport of L-serine. The authors provide a multi-layered set of evidence, including metabolomics, enzyme assays, mitochondrial transport competition, and functional assays in immature/neural progenitor cells, to build up a conceptual integration of D-serine as both a neurotransmitter and a metabolic regulator in the central neural system, which raises a broad potential interest to the neuroscience and metabolism communities.

Strengths:

This work provides a conceptual advance that D-serine not only serves as a traditional neurotransmitter in the central neural system but also critically contributes to metabolic regulation of neural cells. The authors performed solid metabolomic assays to validate the suppressive effect of D-serine on the one-carbon metabolic pathway, providing some evidence that D-serine competitively inhibits mitochondrial serine transport, but not directly impairs SHMT2 enzymatic activity. All these data indicate a critical role of D-serine synthesis during neural maturation and suggest a potential translational strategy for targeting serine metabolism in neural tumors.

Weaknesses:

(1) The detailed mechanism by which D-serine competes with L-serine for its mitochondrial transport is not investigated. For example, although the authors made some discussion, they did not provide direct genetic or biochemical evidence linking these effects to the specific transporters, such as SFXN1.

(2) Unlike tumor cells, where SHMT2 usually plays a predominant role in catalyzing serine/THF-derived one-carbon metabolism, normal cells may employ both SHMT1 and SHMT2 to do the work. Even under certain conditions that SHMT2-mediated one-carbon metabolism is suppressed, the activity of SHMT1 could be elevated for compensation. Thus, it is important to investigate whether D-serine affects SHMT1 activity or changes the balance between SHMT1- and SHMT2-mediated one-carbon metabolism. To this aim, the authors are strongly encouraged to perform a metabolic flux assay (MFA) by using 13C-labeled L-serine in the model cells in the presence and absence of D-serine.

(3) A defect in serine-derived one-carbon metabolism may cause multiple cellular stress responses. It is valuable to detect whether cellular NADPH/NADH, GSH, or ROS is altered before and after D-serine treatment.

(4) The physiological relevance between D-serine and neural cell maturation/death should be further tested and discussed, since the dosage of D-serine used in the in vitro assay is much higher than that in physiological conditions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to address whether nuclear pore complex components localize and function at PD in plant cells to mediate cell-to-cell communication.

Strengths:

(1) Novelty and Significance:<br /> The core hypothesis, drawing parallels between PD and NPC transport, is highly original and addresses a critical gap in understanding plant intercellular communication. The idea that phase-separated domains formed by FG-NUPs could act as diffusion barriers at PD offers a plausible and sophisticated explanation for their complex transport properties, including size exclusion and facilitated translocation. This could fundamentally change how we view PD function.

(2) Comprehensive Evidence:<br /> The study employs a rigorous and diverse set of experimental approaches, including a comprehensive bioinformatic analysis of both moss and Arabidopsis NUPs in available PD proteomic datasets, extensive imaging analysis of Nup localization in vivo, and functional transport assays using a loss-of-function nup mutant (cpr5). The transport assay is particularly important to provide functional evidence linking CPR5 to PD-mediated transport. The finding that callose levels were not significantly different in cpr5 mutants under these conditions is helpful and supports a distinct, callose-independent mechanism of transport regulation.

(3) Objectivity:<br /> The authors are forthright in discussing the limitations and potential artifacts of their own data, clearly distinguishing between observations and definitive conclusions.

Weaknesses:

While the claims are generally justified as hypotheses or consistent observations, the authors themselves extensively detail the caveats, which are worth reiterating for clarity:

(1) Potential Overexpression Artifacts in Localization:<br /> Although efforts were made to control expression levels, the authors acknowledge that transient overexpression could still lead to NUP accumulation at PD, either as a physiologically relevant accumulation under excess conditions or due to mis-targeting, or even as storage depots. The resolution of confocal microscopy also does not allow for a definitive conclusion on the nature of the location.

(2) Proteomics Purity:<br /> The authors note that the presence of NUPs in PD fractions/proteomics cannot definitively rule out contamination, as PD cannot currently be purified to absolute homogeneity and is often contaminated with other organelles, including the nucleus.

(3) CPR5 Mutant Interpretation:<br /> While cpr5 mutants exhibited reduced macromolecular transport, the authors state that they cannot exclude that the reduced transport is due to secondary effects in the cpr5 mutants, which show rather severe phenotypic defects. This is an important distinction, as CPR5 has known roles in defense responses and hormone signaling that could indirectly influence PD integrity, independent of callose deposition. The lack of effect on small molecule transport is a good control, but the broader pleiotropic effects of cpr5 mutants remain a consideration.

(4) Conceptual Distinction between NPC and PD:<br /> The authors correctly point out that while similarities exist, the physical assembly of NUPs at PD must differ from that at the NPC due to the presence of the desmotubule and smaller cytoplasmic sleeve width at PD. Moreover, nucleocytoplasmic transport depends on karyopherin proteins that interact with the NPC central channel to complete the transport. Yet the role of karyopherins in this case is not clear. Therefore, the proposed "PD pore complex" may bear some NPC features, but not be identical.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The manuscript describes an interesting approach towards designing genetic circuits to sense different RAS mutants in the context of cancer therapeutics. The authors created sensors for mutant RAS and incorporated feed-forward control that leverages endogenous RAS/MAPK signaling pathways in order to dramatically increase the circuits' dynamic range. The modularity of the system is explored through the individual screening of several RAS binding domains, transmembrane domains, and MAPK response elements, and the author further extensively screened different combinations of circuit components. This is an impressive synthetic biology demonstration that took it all the way to cancer cell lines. However, given the sole demonstrated output in the form of fluorescent proteins, the authors' claims related to therapeutic implications require additional empirical evidence or, otherwise, expository revision.

Major comments:

"These therapies are limited to cancers with KRASG12C mutations" is technically accurate. However, in this fast-moving field, there are examples such as MRTX1133 which holds the promise to target the very G12D mutation that is the focus of this paper. There are broader efforts too. It would help the readers better appreciate the background if the authors could update the intro to reflect the most recent landscape of RAS-targeting drugs.

Only KRASG12D was used as a model in the design and optimization work of the genetic circuits. Other mutations should be quite experimentally feasible and comparisons of the circuits' performances across different KRAS mutations would allow for stronger claims on the circuits' generalizability. Particularly, the cancer cell line used for circuit validation harbored a KRASG13D mutation. While the data presented do indeed support the circuit's "generalizability," the model systems would not have been consistent in the current set of data presented.

In Figure 2a, the text claims that "inactivation of endogenous RAS with NF1 resulted in a lower YFP/RBDCRD-NarX expression," but Figure 2a does not show a statistically significant reduction in expression of SYFP (measured by "membrane-to-total signal ratio [RU]).

The therapeutic index of the authors' systems would be better characterized by a functional payload, other than florescent proteins, that for example induce cell death, immune responses, etc.

Regarding data presented in "Mechanism of action" (Figure 2), the observations are interesting and consistent across different fluorescent reporters. However, with regard to interpretations of the underlying molecular mechanisms, it is not clear whether the different output levels in 2b, 2c, and 2d are due to the pathway as described by the authors or simply from varied expression levels of RBDCRD-NarX itself (2a) that is nonlinearly amplified by the rest of the circuit. From a practical standpoint, this caveat is not critical with respect to the signal-to-noise ratios in later parts of the paper. From a mechanistic interpretation standpoint, claims made forth in this section are not clearly substantiated. Some additional controls would be nice. For example, if the authors express NarXs that constitutively dimerize on the membrane, what would the RasG12D-responsiveness look like? Does RasG12D alter the input-output curve of NarL-RE? How would Figure 4f compare to a NaxR constitutively dimerized control that only relies on transcriptional amplification of the Ras-dependent promoters? It's also possible that these Ras could affect protein production at the post-transcriptional or even post-translational levels, which were not adequately considered.

The text claims that "in contrast to what we saw in HEK293 overexpressing RAS (Figure 5d), the "AND-gate" RAS-targeting circuits do not generate higher output than the EF1a-driven, binding-triggered RAS sensor in HCT-116. Instead, the improved dynamic range results from decreased leakiness in HCT- 116k.o." Comparing the experiment from Figure 5d, which looks at activation in KRASG12D and KRASWT, to the experiments in Figure 6b-d, which looks at activation in HCT-116WT and HCT-116KO is misleading. In Fig 5d., cells are transfected with KRASG12D and KRASWT to emulate high levels of mutant RAS and high levels of wild-type RAS. In Figures 6b-d, HCT-116WT has endogenous levels of mutant RAS, while the KCT-116KO is a knock-out cell line, and does not have mutant or WT RAS. Therefore, the improved dynamic range or "decreased leakiness in HCT-116KO" in comparison to Figure 5d. is more comparable to the NF1 condition from Figure 2, which deactivates endogenous RAS. While this may not be feasible, the most accurate comparison would have been an HCT-116KO line with KRASWT stably integrated.

We couldn't locate the citation or discussion of Figure 4d in the text. Conversely, based on the text description, Figure 6g would contain exciting results. But we couldn't find Figure 6g anywhere ... unless it was a typo and the authors meant Figure 6f, in which case the cool results in Figure S8 could use more elaboration in the main text.

Comments on revisions:

Now that the authors have extensively addressed my comments through text and additional experiments, I am supportive of its conclusions. I thank them for the rigorous updates and congratulate them on an important piece demonstrating the potential of synthetic biology circuits.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors generate an optimized small molecule inhibitor of SMARCA2/4 and test it in a panel of cell lines. All uveal melanoma (UM) cell lines in the panel are growth inhibited by the inhibitor making the focus of the paper. This inhibition is correlated with loss of promoter occupancy of key melanocyte transcription factors e.g. SOX10. SOX10 overexpression and a point mutation in SMARCA4 can rescue growth inhibition exerted by the SMARCA2/4 inhibitor. Treatment of a UM xenograft model results in growth inhibition and regression which correlates with reduced expression of SOX10 but not discernible toxicity in the mice. Collectively, the data suggest a novel treatment of uveal melanoma.

Strengths:

There are many strengths of the study, including the strong challenge of the on-target effect, the assays used and the mechanistic data. The results are compelling as are the effects of the inhibitor. The in vivo data is dose-dependent and doses are low enough to be meaningful and associated with evidence of target engagement.

Weaknesses:

The authors have addressed weaknesses in the revised version.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study addresses the population genetic underpinnings of the extraordinary diversity of genes in the MHC, which is widespread among jawed vertebrates. This topic has been widely discussed and studied, and several hypotheses have been suggested to explain this diversity. One of them is based on the idea that heterozygote genotypes have an advantage over homozygotes. While this hypothesis lost early on support, a reason study claimed that there is good support for this idea. The current study highlights an important aspect that allows us to see results presented in the earlier published paper in a different light, changing strongly the conclusions of the earlier study, i.e., there is no support for a heterozygote advantage. This is a very important contribution to the field. Furthermore, this new study presents an alternative hypothesis to explain the maintenance of MHC diversity, which is based on the idea that gene duplications can create diversity without heterozygosity being important. This is an interesting idea, but not entirely new.

Strengths:

(1) A careful re-evaluation of a published model, questioning a major assumption made by a previous study.

(2) A convincing reanalysis of a model that, in the light of the re-analysis-loses all support.

(3) A convincing suggestion for an alternative hypothesis.

Weaknesses:

(1) The statement that the model outcome of Siljestam and Rueffler is very sensitive to parameter values is, in this form, not correct. The sensitivity is only visible once a strong assumption by Siljestam and Rueffler is removed. This assumption is questionable, and it is well explained in the manuscript by J. Cherry why it should not be used. This may be seen as a subtle difference, but I think it is important to pin done the exact nature of the problem (see, for example, the abstract, where this is presented in a misleading way).

(2) The title of the study is very catchy, but it needs to be explained better in the text.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In 2021 (PMID: 33503405) and 2024 (PMID: 38578830) Constantinou and colleagues published two elegant papers in which they demonstrated that the Topbp1 checkpoint adaptor protein could assemble into mesoscale phase-separated condensates that were essential to amplify activation of the PIKK, ATR, and its downstream effector kinase, Chk1, during DNA damage signalling. A key tool that made these studies possible was the use of a chimeric Topbp1 protein bearing a cryptochrome domain, Cry2, which triggered condensation of the chimeric Topbp1 protein, and thus activation of ATR and Chk1, in response to irradiation with blue light without the myriad complications associated with actually exposing cells to DNA damage.

In this current report Morano and co-workers utilise the same optogenetic Topbp1 system to investigate a different question, namely whether Topbp1 phase-condensation can be inhibited pharmacologically to manipulate downstream ATR-Chk1 signalling. This is of interest, as the therapeutic potential of the ATR-Chk1 pathway is an area of active investigation, albeit generally using more conventional kinase inhibitor approaches.

The starting point is a high throughput screen of 4730 existing or candidate small molecule anti-cancer drugs for compounds capable of inhibiting the condensation of the Topbp1-Cry2-mCherry reporter molecule in vivo. A surprisingly large number of putative hits (>300) were recorded, from which 131 of the most potent were selected for secondary screening using activation of Chk1 in response to DNA damage induced by SN-38, a topoisomerase inhibitor, as a surrogate marker for Topbp1 condensation. From this the 10 most potent compounds were tested for interactions with a clinically used combination of SN-38 and 5-FU (FOLFIRI) in terms of cytotoxicity in HCT116 cells. The compound that synergised most potently with FOLFIRI, the GSK3-beta inhibitor drug AZD2858, was selected for all subsequent experiments.

AZD2858 is shown to suppress the formation of Topbp1 (endogenous) condensates in cells exposed to SN-38, and to inhibit activation of Chk1 without interfering with activation of ATM or other endpoints of damage signalling such as formation of gamma-H2AX or activation of Chk2 (generally considered to be downstream of ATM). AZD2858 therefore seems to selectively inhibit the Topbp1-ATR-Chk1 pathway without interfering with parallel branches of the DNA damage signalling system, consistent with Topbp1 condensation being the primary target. Importantly, neither siRNA depletion of GSK3-beta, or other GSK3-beta inhibitors were able to recapitulate this effect, suggesting it was a specific non-canonical effect of AZD2858 and not a consequence of GSK3-beta inhibition per se.

To understand the basis for synergism between AZD2858 and SN-38 in terms of cell killing, the effect of AZD2858 on the replication checkpoint was assessed. This is a response, mediated via ATR-Chk1, that modulates replication origin firing and fork progression in S-phase cell under conditions of DNA damage or when replication is impeded. SN-38 treatment of HCT116 cells markedly suppresses DNA replication, however this was partially reversed by co-treatment with AZD2858, consistent with the failure to activate ATR-Chk1 conferring a defect in replication checkpoint function.

Figures 4 and 5 demonstrate that AZD2858 can markedly enhance the cytotoxic and cytostatic effects of SN-38 and FOLFIRI through a combination of increased apoptosis and growth arrest according to dosage and treatment conditions. Figure 6 extends this analysis to cells cultured as spheroids, sometimes considered to better represent tumor responses compared to single cell cultures.

Significance:

Liquid phase separation of protein complexes is increasingly recognised as a fundamental mechanism in signal transduction and other cellular processes. One recent and important example was that of Topbp1, whose condensation in response to DNA damage is required for efficient activation of the ATR-Chk1 pathway. The current study asks a related but distinct question; can protein condensation be targeted by drugs to manipulate signalling pathways which in the main rely on protein kinase cascades?

Here, the authors identify an inhibitor of GSK3-beta as a novel inhibitor of DNA damage-induced Topbp1 condensation and thus of ATR-Chk1 signalling.

This work will be of interest to researchers in the fields of DNA damage signalling, biophysics of protein condensation, and cancer chemotherapy.

Comments on latest version:

Having read the revised manuscript and rebuttal I am satisfied that the authors have resolved my various original concerns through a combination of clarification/ explanation and textual changes necessary to make the description of certain data precise. My impression is that they have also largely or completely satisfied the concerns of the other reviewers, with the possible exception of reviewer 1's point about the relative toxicity of AZD and FOLFIRI in colorectal cancer cell lines versus the untransformed CCD841 cell line. This is of course an important point with respect to the possible practical application of this combination for cancer therapy, however this seems somewhat subsidiary to the main novelty and significance of the findings, which are that protein liquid phase separation/ condensation can be manipulated pharmacologically to modify signal transduction processes and that existing drugs can be re-purposed to this end.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, the authors probe the mechanisms by which Dyngo-4a, a dynamin inhibitor used to block endocytosis, disrupts caveolae dynamics. They provide compelling evidence that Dyngo-4a inhibits caveolae dynamics and endocytosis (as well as several other aspects of plasma membrane dynamics) by a dynamin-independent mechanism. They also provide strong computational and experimental data showing that Dyngo-4a inserts into membranes and decreases lipid packing in the outer leaflet of the plasma membrane. Finally, they demonstrate that the addition of excess cholesterol to cells reverses the effects of Dyngo-4a on caveolae dynamics, presumably by reversing lipid packing defects. Based on these findings they conclude that lipid packing regulates caveolae dynamics and endocytosis in a cholesterol-dependent manner.

This work should be of value to cell biologists interested in plasma membrane remodeling and membrane trafficking, biophysicists that study small molecule/membrane interactions and membrane remodeling processes, and chemists interested in designing drugs to target membrane trafficking machinery and pathways.

Strengths:

This work addresses the important topic of how a widely used endocytic inhibitor actually works. In the process of addressing this question, the authors uncover unexpected connections between how lipids are packed in cell membranes and membrane dynamics. The methods are appropriate and many of the claims made in this work are well supported by data.

Weaknesses:

I appreciate that the manuscript has already gone through one round of revisions and that many of the concerns from the previous reviewers appear to have been addressed. However, as an interested reader, I would like to offer several additional comments for the authors to consider.

(1) It is not clear based on the data presented whether the effects of Dyngo-4a on lipid packing give rise to defects in caveolae dynamics or if these effects are merely correlated. To show this more definitively, one might expect additional experimental approaches to be used to perturb lipid packing. I appreciate this is probably beyond the scope of the current study. However, it seems important for the manuscript to be clear about how far this interpretation can be pushed in the absence of additional independent lines of evidence.

(2) On a related note, it is not obvious how changes in lipid packing in the outer leaflet could impact caveolae dynamics. It would be helpful to include a cartoon illustrating how this might work.

(3) The authors note that Dyngo-4a inhibits several dynamic processes including generalized plasma membrane mobility (Fig 4A&B), transferrin uptake (Fig S4C), and fusion of fusogenic liposomes (Fig S4G). This clearly indicates there is a major disruption of the plasma membrane going on here that is not limited to caveolae. They go on to show that the addition of cholesterol reverses the effects of Dyngo-4a on caveolae dynamics. However, they do not discuss whether adding back cholesterol has similar effects on plasma membrane mobility and transferrin uptake. This information could help to further pinpoint whether the mechanisms of action are shared, and if the role of cholesterol is more general in controlling these events or is instead specific to caveolae.

(4) In Fig 4C, the morphology of the neck region of the Dyngo04a treated caveolae structure appears to be "pinched" compared to the control. I appreciate that more EM studies are underway. It would be useful to specifically compare the morphology of the caveolae as part of those studies.

(5) In Line 91, a statement is made that 8S complex formation requires cholesterol. This is debatable, as they appear to form in E. coli in the absence of cholesterol (reference 14).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This work is important because it complements other single-molecule mechanics approaches, in particular optical trapping, which inevitably exerts off-axis loads. The nanospring method has its own weaknesses (individual steps cannot be seen), but it brings new clarity to our picture of KIF1A and will influence future thinking on the kinesins-3 and on kinesins in general.

Strengths:

By tethering single copies of the kinesin-3 dimer under test via a DNA nanospring to a strong binding mutant dimer of kinesin-1, the forces developed and experienced by the motor are constrained into a single axis, parallel to the microtubule axis. The method is imaging-based, which should improve accessibility. In principle, at least, several single-motor molecules can be simultaneously tested. The arrangement ensures that only single molecules can contribute. Controls establish that the DNA nanospring is not itself interacting appreciably with the microtubule. Forces are convincingly calibrated, and reading the length of the nanospring by fitting to the oblate fluorescent spot is carefully validated. The excursions of the wild-type KIF1A leucine zipper-stabilised dimer are compared with those of neuropathic KIF1A mutants. These mutants can walk to a stall plateau, but the force is much reduced. The forces from mutant/WT heterodimers are also reduced.

Weaknesses:

The tethered nanospring method has some weaknesses; it only allows the stall force to be measured in the case that a stall plateau is achieved, and the thermal noise means that individual steps are not apparent. The nanospring does not behave like a Hookean spring - instead linearly increasing force is reported by exponentially smaller extensions of the nanospring under tension. The estimated stall force for Kif1A (3.8 pN) is in line with measurements made using 3-bead optical trapping, but those earlier measurements were not of a stall plateau, but rather of limiting termination (detachment) force, without a stall plateau. More confidence in the 3.7 pN stall plateau determined in the current work could be obtained by demonstrating that a stall at a higher force is obtained using the nanospring method on kinesin-1, which stalls at >7 pN in single bead optical trapping.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Boda et al. describes the results of a targeted RNAi screen in the background of Vps16A-depleted Drosophila larval fat body cells. In this background, lysosomal fusion is inhibited, allowing the authors to analyze the motility and localization specifically of autophagosomes, prior to their fusion with lysosomes to become autolysosomes. In this Vps16A-deleted background, mCherry-Atg8a labeled autophagosomes accumulate in the perinuclear area, through an unknown mechanism.

The authors found that depletion of multiple subunits of the dynein/dynactin complex caused an alternation of this mCherry-Atg8a localization, moving from the perinuclear region to the cell periphery. Interactions with kinesin overexpression suggest these motor proteins may compete for autophagosome binding and transport. The authors extended these findings by examining potential upstream regulators including Rab proteins and selected effectors, and they also examined effects on lysosomal movement and autolysosome size. Altogether, the results are consistent with a model in which specific Rab/effector complexes direct movement of lysosomes and autophagosomes toward the MTOC, promoting their fusion and subsequent dispersal throughout the cell.

Strengths:

Although previous studies of the movement of autophagic vesicles have identified roles for microtubule-based transport, this study moves the field forward by distinguishing between effects on pre- and post-fusion autophagosomes, and by its characterization of the roles of specific Dynein, Dynactin, and Rab complexes in regulating movement of distinct vesicle types. Overall, the experiments are well controlled, appropriately analyzed, and largely support the authors' conclusions..

Weaknesses:

One limitation of the study is the genetic background that serves as basis for the screen. In addition to preventing autophagosome-lysosome fusion, disruption of Vps16A has been shown to inhibit endosomal maturation and to block trafficking of components to the lysosome from both the endosome and Golgi apparatus. Additional effects previously reported by the authors include increased autophagosome production and reduced mTOR signaling. Thus Vps16A-depleted cells have a number of endosome, lysosome and autophagosome-related defects, with unknown downstream consequences. Additionally, the cause and significance of the perinuclear localization of autophagosomes in this background is unclear. Thus, interpretations of the observed reversal of this phenotype are difficult, and have the caveat that they may apply only to this condition, rather than to normal autophagosomes. Additional experiments to observe autophagosome movement or positioning in a more normal environment would improve the manuscript.

Comments on revision:

The revised manuscript and author responses have satisfactorily met my concerns. I have no further issues and congratulate the authors on this work.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In their revised manuscript, the authors addressed most of the reviewers' concerns. One concern was the emphasis on increased MLEC-OST interactions during infection, which the authors toned down in the revision. They clarified that MLEC interaction with OST is maintained-rather than increased-during infection, while its interaction with other QC factors decreases. They also added context and discussion of the co-localization of viral proteins with ER and mitochondrial proteins, noting that both nsp2 and MLEC localize to mitochondria-associated membranes (MAMs), providing a plausible explanation for these interactions.

Another concern involved the effects of MLEC KD on the cellular environment. To address this, the authors analyzed stress pathway activation and glycosylation of endogenous proteins in MLEC KD cells. They found only modest upregulation of the HSF1 pathway and no changes in the UPR or other stress responses, suggesting MLEC KD does not broadly disrupt ER proteostasis. Additionally, glycopeptide profiling showed only minor changes in host protein glycosylation, supporting a more direct role for MLEC in viral replication rather than general host glycoprotein disruption.

However, some weaknesses remain. Direct interaction between MLEC and nsp2 during infection was not detected, and the identified viral glycopeptides were limited to only five Spike sites. Furthermore, the mechanism by which MLEC promotes viral replication is still unclear.

In summary, the authors strengthened the manuscript by addressing reviewers' concerns through additional data, clarified language, and expanded discussion. While the overall support for MLEC's pro-viral role is solid, its precise mechanism of action remains speculative. Future work will be needed to directly link MLEC's activity to specific steps in viral protein biogenesis and replication.

Original summary: In this study, Davies and Plate set out to discover conserved host interactors of coronavirus non-structural proteins (Nsp). They used 293T cells to ectopically express flag-tagged Nsp2 and Nsp4 from five human and mouse coronaviruses, including SARS-CoV-1 and 2, and analyzed their interaction with host proteins by affinity purification mass-spectrometry (AP-MS). To confirm whether such interactors play a role in coronavirus infection, the authors measured the effects of individual knockdowns on replication of murine hepatitis virus (MHV) in mouse Delayed Brain Tumor cells. Using this approach, they identified a previously undescribed interactor of Nsp2, Malectin (Mlec), which is involved in glycoprotein processing and shows a potent pro-viral function in both MHV and SARS-CoV-2. Although the authors were unable to confirm this interaction in MHV-infected cells, they show that infection remodels many other Mlec interactions, recruiting it to the ER complex that catalyzes protein glycosylation (OST). Mlec knockdown reduced viral RNA and protein levels during MHV infection, although such effects were not limited to specific viral proteins. However, knockdown reduced the levels of five viral glycopeptides that map to Spike protein, suggesting it may be affected by Mlec.

Strengths:

This is an elegant study that uses a state-of-the-art quantitative proteomic approach to identify host proteins that play critical roles in viral infection. Instead of focusing on a single protein from a single virus, it compares the interactomes of two viral proteins from five related viruses, generating a high confidence dataset. The functional follow-ups using multiple live and reporter viruses, including MHV and CoV2 variants, convincingly depict a pro-viral role for Mlec, a protein not previously implicated in coronavirus biology.

Weaknesses:

Although a commonly used approach, AP-MS of ectopically expressed viral proteins may not accurately capture infection-related interactions. The authors observed Mlec-Nsp2 interactions in transfected 293T cells (1C) but were unable to reproduce those in mouse cells infected with MHV (3C). EIF4E2/GIGYF2, two bonafide interactors of CoV2 Nsp2 from previous studies, are listed as depleted compared to negative controls (S1D). Most other CoV2 Nsp2 interactors are also depleted by the same analysis (S1D). Previously reported MERS Nsp2 interactors, including ASCC1 and TCF25, are also not detected (S1D). Furthermore, although GIGYF2 was not identified as an interactor of MHV Nsp2/4 in human cells (S1D), its knockdown in mouse cells reduced MHV titers about 1000 fold (S4). The authors should attempt to explain these discrepancies.

More importantly, the authors were unable to establish a direct link between Mlec and the biogenesis of any viral or host proteins, by mass-spectrometry or otherwise. Although it is clear that Mlec promotes coronavirus infection, the mechanism remains unclear. Its knockdown does not affect the proteome composition of uninfected cells (S15B), suggesting it is not required for proteome maintenance under normal conditions. The only viral glycopeptides detected during MHV infection originated from Spike (5D), although other viral proteins are also known to be glycosylated. Cells depleted for Mlec produce ~4-fold less Spike protein (4E) but no more than 2-fold less glycosylated spike peptides (5D), compounding the interpretation of Mlec effects on viral protein biogenesis. Furthermore, Spike is not essential for the pro-viral role of Mlec, given that Mlec knockdown reduces replication of SARS-CoV-2 replicons that express all viral proteins except for Spike (6A/B).

Any of the observed effects on viral protein levels could be secondary to multiple other processes. Interventions that delay infection for any reason could lead to imbalance of viral protein levels, because Spike and other structural proteins are produced at a much higher rate than non-structural proteins due to the higher abundance of their cognate subgenomic RNAs. Similarly, the observation that Mlec depletion attenuates MHV-mediated changes to the host proteome (S15C/D) can also be attributed to indirect effects on viral replication, regardless of glycoprotein processing. In the discussion, the authors acknowledge that Mlec may indirectly affect infection through modulation of replication complex formation or ER stress, but do not offer any supporting evidence. Interestingly, plant homologs of Mlec are implicated in innate immunity, favoring a more global role for Mlec in mammalian coronavirus infections.

Finally, the observation that both Nsp2 (3C) and Mlec (3E/F) are recruited to the OST complex during MHV infection neither support nor refute any of these alternate hypotheses, given that Mlec is known to interact with OST in uninfected cells and that Nsp2 may interact with OST as part of the full length unprocessed Orf1a, as it co-translationally translocates into the ER.

Therefore, the main claims about the role of Mlec in coronavirus protein biogenesis are only partially supported.

Comments on revisions:

Figure 7B should be revised to show that MLEC maintains interactions with rather than recruited to the OST.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The study explores the functional consequence of CDK12 loss in prostate cancer. While CDK12 loss has been shown to confer homologous recombination (HR) deficiency through premature intronic polyadenylation of HR genes, the response of PARPi monotherapy has failed. This study therefore performed an in-depth analysis of genomic sequencing data from mCRPC patient tumors, and showed that tumors with CDK12 loss lack pertinent HR signatures and scars. Furthermore, functional exploration in human prostate cancer cell lines showed that while the acute inhibition of CDK12 resulted in aberrant polyadenylation of HR genes like BRCA1/2, HR-specific effects were overall modest or absent in cell lines or xenografts adapted to chronic CDK12 loss. Instead, vulnerability to genetically targeting CDK13 resulted in a synthetic lethality in tumors with CDK12 loss, as shown in vivo with SR4825, a CDK12/13 inhibitor - thus serving as a potential therapeutic avenue.

The evidence supporting this study is based on in-depth genomic analyses of human patients, acute knockdown studies of CDK12 using a CDK12/13 inhibitors SR4835, adaptive knockout of CDK12 using LuCaP 189.4_CL and inducible re-expression of CDK12, CDK12 single clones in 22Rv1 (KO2 and KO5) and Skov3 (KO1), Tet-inducible knockdown of BRCA2 or CDK12 followed by ionizing radiation and measurement of RAD51 foci, lack of sensitivity generally to PARPi and platinum chemotherapy in cells adapted to CDK12 loss, loss of viability of CDK13 knockout in CDK12 knockout cells, and in vivo testing of SE4825 in LuCaP xenografts with intact and CDK12 loss.

Strengths:

Overall, this study is robust and of interest to the broader homologous recombination and CDK field. First, the topic is clinically relevant given the lack of PARPi response in CDK12 loss tumors. Second, the strength of the genomic analysis in CDK12 lost PCa tumors is robust with clear delineation that BRCA1/2 genes and maintenance of most genes regulating HR are intact. Specifically, the authors find that there is no mutational signature or genomic features suggestive of HR, such as those found in BRCA1/2 tumors. Lastly, novel lines are generated in this study, including de novo LuCaP 189.4_CL with CDK12 loss that can be profound for potential synthetic lethalities.

Weakness:

One caveat that continues to be unclear as presented, is the uncoupling of cell cycle/essentiality of CDK12/13 from HR-directed mechanisms. Is this purely a cell cycle arrest phenotype acutely with associated down-regulation of many genes?

While the RAD51 loading ssRNA experiments are informative, the Tet-inducible knockdown of BRCA2 and CDK12 is confusing as presented in Figure 5, shBRCA2 + and -dox are clearly shown. However, were the CDK12_K02 and K05 also knocked down using inducible shRNA or a stable knockout? The importance of this statement is the difference between acute and chronic deletion of CDK12. Previously, the authors showed that acute knockdown of CDK12 led to an HR phenotype, but here it is unclear whether CDK12-K02/05 are acute knockdowns of CDK12 or have been chronically adapted after single cell cloning from CRISPR-knockout.

Given the multitude of lines, including some single-cell clones with growth inhibitory phenotypes and ex-vivo derived xenografts, the variability of effects with SR4835, ATM, ATR, and WEE1 inhibitors in different models can be confusing to follow. Overall, the authors suggest that the cell lines differ in therapeutic susceptibility as they may have alternate and diverse susceptibilities. It may be possible that the team could present this more succinctly and move extraneous data to the supplement.

The in-vitro data suggests that SR4835 causes growth inhibition acutely in parental lines such as 22RV1. However, in vivo, tumor attenuation appears to be observed in both CDK12 intact and deficient xenografts, LuCAP136 and LuCaP 189.4 (albeit the latter is only nominally significant). Is there an effect of PARPi inhibition specifically in either model? What about the the 22RV1-K02/05? Do these engraft? Given the role of CDK12/13 in RNAP II, these data might suggest that the window of susceptibility in CDK12 tumors may not be that different from CDK12 intact tumors (or intact tissue) when using dual CDK12/13 inhibitors but rather represent more general canonical essential functions of CDK12 and CDK13 in transcription. From a therapeutic development strategy, the authors may want to comment in the discussion on the ability to target CDK13 specifically.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Sox9 is a transcription factor crucial for development and tissue homeostasis, and its expression continues in various adult eye cell types, including retinal pigmented epithelium cells, Müller glial cells, and limbal and corneal basal epithelia. To investigate its functional roles in the adult eye, this study employed inducible mouse mutagenesis. Adult-specific Sox9 depletion led to severe retinal degeneration, including the loss of Müller glial cells and photoreceptors. Further, lineage tracing revealed that Sox9 is expressed in a basal limbal stem cell population that supports stem cell maintenance and homeostasis. Mosaic analysis confirmed that Sox9 is essential for the differentiation of limbal stem cells. Overall, the study highlights that Sox9 is critical for both retinal integrity and the differentiation of limbal stem cells in the adult mouse eye.

Strengths:

In general, inducible genetic approaches in the adult mouse nervous system are rare and difficult to carry out. Here, the authors employ tamoxifen-inducible mouse mutagenesis to uncover the functional roles of Sox9 in the adult mouse eye.

Careful analysis suggests that two degeneration phenotypes (mild and severe) are detected in the adult mouse eye upon tamoxifen-dependent Sox9 depletion. Phenotype severity nicely correlates with the efficiency of Cre-mediated Sox9 depletion.

Molecular marker analysis provides strong evidence of Mueller cell loss and photoreceptor degeneration.

A clever genetic tracing strategy uncovers a critical role for Sox9 in limbal stem cell differentiation.

Comments on revised submission:

The revised manuscript is very much improved and has addressed all my concerns.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript presents computational modelling of the behaviour of mice during encounters with novel and familiar objects, originally reported in Akiti et al. (Neuron 110, 2022). Mice typically perform short bouts of approach followed by retreat to a safe distance, presumably to balance exploration to discover possible reward with the potential risk of predation. However, there is considerable heterogeneity in this exploratory behaviour, both across time as an individual subject becomes more confident in approaching the object, and across subjects; with some mice rapidly becoming confident to closely explore the object, while other timid mice never become fully confident that the object is safe. The current work aims to explain both the dynamics of adaptation of individual animals over time, and the quantitative and qualitative differences in behaviour between subjects, by modelling their behaviour as arising from model-based planning in a Bayes adaptive Markov Decision Process (BAMDP) framework, in which the subjects maintain and update probabilistic estimates of the uncertain hazard presented by the object, and rationally balance the potential reward from exploring the object with the potential risk of predation it presents.

In order to fit these complex models to the behaviour the authors necessarily make substantial simplifying assumptions, including coarse-graining the exploratory behaviour into phases quantified by a set of summary statistics related to the approach bouts of the animal. Inter-individual variation between subjects is modelled both by differences in their prior beliefs about the possible hazard presented by the object, and by differences in their risk preference, modelled using a conditional value at risk (CVaR) objective, which focuses the subject's evaluation on different quantiles of the expected distribution of outcomes. Interestingly, these two conceptually different possible sources of inter-subject variation in brave vs timid exploratory behaviour turn out not to be dissociable in the current dataset as they can largely compensate for each other in their effects on the measured behaviour. Nonetheless, the modelling captures a wide range of quantitative and qualitative differences between subjects in the dynamics of how they explore the object, essentially through differences in how subject's beliefs about the potential risk and reward presented by the object evolve over the course of exploration, and are combined to drive behaviour.

Exploration in the face of risk is a ubiquitous feature of the decision-making problem faced by organisms, with strong clinical relevance, yet remains poorly understood and under-studied, making this work a timely and welcome addition to the literature.

Strengths:

- Individual differences in exploratory behaviour are an interesting, important, and under-studied topic.

- Application of cutting-edge modelling methods to a rich behavioural dataset, successfully accounting for diverse qualitative and qualitative features of the data in a normative framework.

- Thoughtful discussion of the results in the context of prior literature.

Limitations:

- The model-fitting approach used of coarse-graining the behaviour into phases and fitting to their summary statistics may not be applicable to exploratory behaviours in more complex environments where coarse-graining is less straightforward.

Comments on revisions:

All recommendations to authors from the first review were addressed in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

DNA double-strand breaks (DSB) in repeated DNA pose a challenge for repair by homologous recombination (HR) due to the potential of generating chromosomal aberrations, especially involving repeats on different chromosomes. This conceptual caveat led to a long-held notion that HR is not active in repeated DNA, which was disproven in groundbreaking work by Chiolo showing in Drosophila that DSBs in pericentromeric repeats are mobilized to the nuclear periphery for repair by HR. A similar mechanism operates in mouse cells, as shown by the Gautier laboratory, but the mobilization goes to the nucleolar periphery, called nucleolar caps. In this manuscript, the authors reexamine the role of MDC1 in the mobilization of DSBs in rDNA in human cells. Previous work has shown that MDC1 is replaced by Treacle, the gene associated with Treacher Collins syndrome 1, in its role as the main adaptor of the DNA damage response, and these results are confirmed here. The novelty of this contribution lies in the discovery that MDC1 is required downstream in the recruitment of BRCA1 and RAD51 to nucleolar DSBs that were mobilized to the nucleolar cap. Using multiple MCD knockout models and DSBs induced by the nuclease PpoI, which cleaves at nuclear sites as well as in the 28S rDNA, convincingly documents this role of MDC1 and shows that it acts upstream of the RNF8-RNF168 ubiquitylation axis. Using a proxy assay of co-localization of EdU incorporation at DSBs (gammaH2AX), evidence is provided that MDC1 is required for HR in rDNA. MDC1 was not required for RAD51 recruitment to IR-induced foci, but it is unclear whether this is related to the different DSB chemistry (enzymatic versus IR) or to the localization of the DSB (rDNA versus unique sequence genome).

Strengths:

(1) The manuscript is well-written, and the experimental evidence is nicely presented.

(2) Multiple MDC1 knockout models are used to validate the results.

(3) Convincing back-complementation data clarify the relationship between MDC1 and RNF8.

Weaknesses:

(1) The recruitment of BRCA2 was not directly demonstrated. This caveat could be recognized, as IF for BRCA2 is challenging.

(2) PpoI also induces DSBs in the non-rDNA genome. These DSBs would be an ideal control to establish nucleolar specificity of the events described and clarify whether the difference between IR and PpoI is the chemical structure of the DSB or the location of the DSB.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper presents a novel transformer-based neural network model, termed the epistatic transformer, designed to isolate and quantify higher-order epistasis in protein sequence-function relationships. By modifying the multi-head attention architecture, the authors claim they can precisely control the order of specific epistatic interactions captured by the model. The approach is applied to both simulated data and ten diverse experimental deep mutational scanning (DMS) datasets, including full-length proteins. The authors argue that higher-order epistasis, although often modest in global contribution, plays critical roles in extrapolation and capturing distant genotypic effects, especially in multi-peak fitness landscapes.

Strengths:

(1) The study tackles a long-standing question in molecular evolution and protein engineering: "how significant are epistatic interactions beyond pairwise effects?" The question is relevant given the growing availability of large-scale DMS datasets and increasing reliance on machine learning in protein design.

(2) The manuscript includes both simulation and real-data experiments, as well as extrapolation tasks (e.g., predicting distant genotypes, cross-ortholog transfer). These well-rounded evaluations demonstrate robustness and applicability.

(3) The code is made available for reproducibility.

Weaknesses:

(1) The paper mainly compares its transformer models to additive models and occasionally to linear pairwise interaction models. However, other strong baselines exist. For example, the authors should compare baseline methods such as "DANGO: Predicting higher-order genetic interactions". There are many works related to pairwise interaction detection, such as: "Detecting statistical interactions from neural network weights", "shapiq: Shapley interactions for machine learning", and "Error-controlled non-additive interaction discovery in machine learning models".

(2) While the transformer architecture is cleverly adapted, the claim that it allows for "explicit control" and "interpretability" over interaction order may be overstated. Although the 2^M scaling with MHA layers is shown empirically, the actual biological interactions captured by the attention mechanism remain opaque. A deeper analysis of learned attention maps or embedding similarities (e.g., visualizations, site-specific interaction clusters) could substantiate claims about interpretability.

(3) The distinction between nonspecific (global) and specific epistasis is central to the modeling framework, yet it remains conceptually underdeveloped. While a sigmoid function is used to model global effects, it's unclear to what extent this functional form suffices. The authors should justify this choice more rigorously or at least acknowledge its limitations and potential implications.

(4) The manuscript refers to "pairwise", "3-4-way", and ">4-way" interactions without always clearly defining the boundaries of these groupings or how exactly the order is inferred from transformer layer depth. This can be confusing to readers unfamiliar with the architecture or with statistical definitions of interaction order. The authors should clarify terminology consistently. Including a visual mapping or table linking a number of layers to the maximum modeled interaction order could be helpful.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript uses adaptive sampling simulations to understand the impact of mutations on the specificity of the enzyme PDC-3 β-lactamase. The authors argue that mutations in the Ω-loop can expand the active site to accommodate larger substrates.

Strengths:

The authors simulate an array of variants and perform numerous analyses to support their conclusions.

The use of constant pH simulations to connect structural differences with likely functional outcomes is a strength.

Weaknesses:

I would like to have seen more error bars on quantities reported (e.g., % populations reported in the text and Table 1).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The authors set out to resolve the high-resolution structure of a glutamine synthetase (GS) decamer using cryo-EM, investigate glutamine binding at the decamer interface, and validate structural observations through biochemical assays of ATP hydrolysis linked to enzyme activity. Their work sits at the intersection of structural and functional biology, aiming to bridge atomic-level details with biological mechanisms - a goal with clear relevance to researchers studying enzyme catalysis and metabolic regulation.

Strengths and weaknesses of methods and results:

A key strength of the study lies in its use of cryo-EM, a technique well-suited for resolving large, dynamic macromolecular complexes like the GS decamer. The reported resolutions (down to 2.15 Å) initially suggest the potential for detailed structural insights, such as side-chain interactions and ligand density. However, several methodological limitations significantly undermine the reliability of the results:

(1) Cryo-EM data processing: The absence of critical details about B-factor sharpening - a standard step to enhance map interpretability - is a major concern. For high-resolution maps (<3 Å), sharpening is typically applied to resolve side-chain features, yet the submitted maps (e.g., those in Figures 1D, 2D, and supplementary figures) appear unprocessed, with density quality inconsistent with the claimed resolutions. This makes it difficult to evaluate whether observed features (e.g., glutamine binding) are genuine or artifacts of unsharpened data.

(2) Modeling and density consistency: The structural models, particularly for glutamine binding at the decamer interface, do not align with the reported resolution. The maps shown in Figure 2D and Supplementary Figure S7 lack sufficient density to confidently place glutamine or even surrounding residues, conflicting with claims of 2.15 Å resolution. Additionally, fitting a non-symmetric ligand (glutamine) into a symmetry-refined map requires justification, as symmetry constraints may distort ligand placement.

(3) Biochemical assay controls: While the enzyme activity assays aim to link structure to function, they lack essential controls (e.g., blank reactions without GS or substrates, substrate omission tests) to confirm that ATP hydrolysis is GS-dependent. The use of TCEP, a reducing agent, is also not paired with experiments to rule out unintended effects on the PK/LDH system, further limiting confidence in activity measurements.

Achievement of aims and support for conclusions:

The study falls short of convincingly achieving its goals. The claimed high-resolution structural details (e.g., side-chain densities, ligand binding) are not supported by the provided maps, which lack sharpening and show inconsistencies in density quality. Similarly, the biochemical data do not robustly validate the structural claims due to missing controls. As a result, the evidence is insufficient to confirm glutamine binding at the decamer interface or the functional relevance of the observed structural features.

Likely impact and utility:

If these methodological gaps are addressed, the work could make a meaningful contribution to the field. A well-resolved GS decamer structure would advance understanding of enzyme assembly and ligand recognition, while validated biochemical assays would strengthen the link between structure and function. Improved data processing and clearer reporting of validation steps would also make the structural data more reliable for the community, providing a resource for future studies on GS or related enzymes.

Additional context:

Cryo-EM has transformed structural biology by enabling high-resolution analysis of large complexes, but its success hinges on rigorous data processing and validation steps that are critical to ensuring reproducibility. The challenges highlighted here are not unique to this study; they reflect broader issues in the field where incomplete reporting of methods can obscure the reliability of results. By addressing these points, the authors would not only strengthen their current work but also set a positive example for transparent and rigorous structural biology research.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, Frelih et al, investigate the relationship between aperiodic neural activity, as measured by EEG, and working memory performance, and compares this to the more commonly analyzed periodic, and in particular theta, measures that are often associated with such tasks. To do so, they analyze a primary dataset of 57 participants engaging in an n-back task, as well as a replication dataset, and use spectral parameterization to measure periodic and aperiodic features of the data, across time. In the revision, the authors have clarified some key points, and added a series of additional analyses and controls, including the use of an additional method, that helps to complement the original analyses and further corroborates their claims. In doing so, they find both periodic and aperiodic features that relate to the task dynamics, but importantly, the aperiodic component appears to explain away what otherwise looks like theta activity in a more traditional analysis. This study therefore helps to establish that aperiodic activity is a task-relevant dynamic feature in working memory tasks and may be the underlying change in many other studies that reported 'theta' changes, but did not use methods that could differentiate periodic and aperiodic features.

Strengths:

Key strengths of this paper include that it addresses an important question - that of properly adjudicating which features of EEG recordings relate to working memory tasks - and in doing so provides a compelling answer, with important implications for considering prior work and contributing to understanding the neural underpinnings of working memory. The revision is improved by showing this using an additional analysis method. I do not find any significant faults or error with the design, analysis, and main interpretations as presented by this paper, and as such, find the approach taken to be a valid and well-enacted. The use of multiple variants of the working memory task, as well as a replication dataset significantly strengthens this manuscript, by demonstrating a degree of replicability and generalizability. This manuscript is also an important contribution to motivating best practices for analyzing neuro-electrophysiological data, including in relation to using baselining procedures. I think the updates in the revision have helped to clarify the findings and impact of this study.

Weaknesses:

Overall, I do not find any obvious weaknesses with this manuscript and it's analyses that challenge the key results and conclusions. Updates through the revision have addressed my previous points about adding some additional notes on the methods and conclusions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors introduce a gene-level framework to detect shared genetic architecture between complex traits by integrating GWAS summary statistics with eQTL data via a new algorithm, Sherlock-II, which aggregates signals from multiple (cis/trans) eSNPs to produce gene-phenotype p-values. Shared pathways are identified with Partial-Pearson-Correlation Analysis (PPCA).

Strengths:

The authors show the gene-based approach is complementary and often more sensitive than SNP-level methods, and discuss limitations (in terms of no directionality, dependence on eQTL coverage).

Weaknesses:

(1) How do the authors explain data where missing tissues or sparse eQTL mapping are available? Would that bias as to which genes/traits can be linked and may produce false negatives or tissue-specific false positives?

(2) Aggregating SNP-level signals into gene scores can be confounded by LD; for example, a nearby causal variant for a different gene or non-expression mechanism may drive a gene's score, producing spurious gene-trait links. How do the authors prevent this?

(3) How the SNPs are assigned to genes would affect results, this is because different choices can change which genes appear shared between traits. The authors can expand on these.

(4) Many reported novel trait links remain speculative without functional or orthogonal validation (e.g., colocalization, perturbation data). Thus, the manuscript's claims are inconclusive and speculative.

(5) It would be best to run LD-aware colocalization and power-matched simulations to check for robustness.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary

The manuscript by Puno and colleagues investigates the impact of hypoxia on cortical interneuron migration and downstream signaling pathways. They establish two models to test hypoxia, cortical forebrain assembloids, and primary human fetal brain tissue. Both of these models provide a robust assay for interneuron migration. In addition, they find that ADM signaling mediates the migration deficits and rescue using exogenous ADM. The findings are novel and very interesting to the neurodevelopmental field, revealing new insights into how cortical interneurons migrate and as well, establishing exciting models for future studies. The authors use sufficient iPSC line,s including both XX and XY, so the analysis is robust. In addition, the RNAseq data with re-oxygenation is a nice control to see what genes are changed specifically due to hypoxia. Further, the overall level of validation of the sequencing data and involvement of ADM signaling is convincing, including the validation of ADM at the protein level. Overall, this is a very nice manuscript. I have a few comments and suggestions for the authors.

Strengths and Weaknesses:

(1) Can the authors comment on the possibility of inflammatory response pathways being activated by hypoxia? Has this been shown before? While not the focus of the manuscript, it could be discussed in the Discussion as an interesting finding and potential involvement of other cells in the Hypoxic response.

(2) Could the authors comment on the mechanism at play here with respect to ADM and binding to RAMP2 receptors - is this a potential autocrine loop, or is the source of ADM from other cell types besides inhibitory neurons? Given the scRNA-seq data, what cell-to-cell mechanisms can be at play? Since different cells express ADM, there could be different mechanisms in place in ventral vs dorsal areas.

(3) For data from Figure 6 - while the ELISA assays are informative to determine which pathways (PKA, AKT, ERK) are active, there is no positive control to indicate these assays are "working" - therefore, if possible, western blot analysis from assembloid tissue could be used (perhaps using the same lysates from Figure 3) as an alternative to validate changes at the protein level (however, this might prove difficult); further to this, is P-CREB activated at the protein level using WB?

(4) Could the authors comment further on the mechanism and what biological pathways and potential events are downstream of ADM binding to RAMP2 in inhibitory neurons? What functional impact would this have linked to the CREB pathway proposed? While the link to GABA receptors is proposed, CREB has many targets beyond this.

(5) Does hypoxia cause any changes to inhibitory neurogenesis (earlier stages than migration?) - this might always be known, but was not discussed.

(6) In the Discussion section, it might be worth detailing to the readers what the functional impact of delayed/reduced migration of inhibitory neurons into the cortex might result in, in terms of functional consequences for neural circuit development.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper reports histological, PET imaging, functional and behavioural data evaluating the longevity of AAV2 infection in multiple brain areas of macaques in the context of DREADD experiments. The central aim is to provide unprecedented information about how long the expression of HM4di or HM3dq receptors are expressed and efficient in modulating brain functions after vector injections. The data show peak expression after 40 to 60 days of vector injection, and stable expressions for up to 1.5 years for hM4di, and that hM3dq remained mostly at 75% of peak after a year, declining to 50% after 2 years. DREADDs effectively modulated neuronal activity and behaviour for approximately two years, evaluated with behavioural testings, neural recordings or FDG-PET. A statistical evaluation revealed that vector titers, DREADD type and tags contribute to the measured peak level of DREADD expression.

The article present a thorough discussion of the limitations and specificities of chemogenetic approaches in monkeys.

Strength:

These are unique data, in non-human primate (NHP), an animal model that not only features physiological and immunological characteristics similar to humans, but also contributes to neurobiological functional studies over long timescales with experiments spanning months or years. This evaluation of long-term efficacy of DREADDs will be very important for all laboratories using chemogenetics in NHP but also for future use of such approach in experimental therapies. The longevity estimates are based on multiple approaches including behavioural and neurophysiological, thus providing information on functional efficacy of DREADD expression.

Performing such evaluation requires specific tools like PET imaging that very few monkey labs have access to. This study was done by the laboratory that has developed the radiotracer c11-DCZ, used here, a radiotracer binding selectively to DREADDs and providing, using PET, quantitative in vivo measures of DREADD expression. This study and its data should thus be a reference in the field, providing estimates to plan future chemogenetic experiments.

Publishing databases of experimental outcomes in NHP DREADD experiments is crucial for the community because such experiments are rare, expensive and long. It contributes to refining experiments and reducing the number of animals overall used in the domain.

Weaknesses:

This study is a meta-analysis of several experiments performed in one lab. The good side is that it combined a large amount of data that might not have been published individually; the down side is that all things where not planned and equated, creating a lot of unexplained variances in the data. However, this was judiciously used by the authors to provide very relevant information. One might think that organized multi-centric experiments planned using the knowledge acquired here, will provide help testing more parameters, including some related to inter-individual variability, and particular genetic constructs.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study elucidated the impact of GATA4 on aging- and injury-induced cartilage degradation and osteoarthritis (OA) progression, based on the team's finding that GATA expression is positively correlated with aging in human chondrocytes. By integrating cell culture of human chondrocytes, gene manipulation tools (siRNA, lentivirus), biological/biochemical analyses and murine models of post-traumatic OA, the team found that increasing GATA4 levels reduced anabolism and increased catabolism of chondrocytes from young donors, likely through upregulation of the BMP pathway, and that this impact is not correlated with TGF-β stimulation. Conversely, silencing GATA4 by siRNA attenuated catabolism and elevated aggrecan/collagen II biosynthesis of chondrocytes from old donors. The physiological relevance of GATA4 was further validated by the accelerated OA progression observed in lentivirus-infected mice in the DMM model.

Strengths:

This is a highly significant and innovative study that provides new molecular insights into cartilage homeostasis and pathology in the context of aging and disease. The experiments were performed in a comprehensive and rigorous manner. The data were interpreted thoroughly in the context of the current literature.

Weaknesses:

The only aspect that would benefit from further clarification is a more detailed discussion of aging-associated ECM changes in the context of prior literature.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors produce a new tool, BEHAV3D to analyse tracking data and to integrate these analyses with large and small scale architectural features of the tissue. This is similar to several other published methods to analyse spatio-temporal data, however, the connection to tissue features is a nice addition, as is the lack of requirement for coding. The tool is then used to analyse tracking data of tumour cells in diffuse midline glioma. They suggest 7 clusters exist within these tracks and that they differ spatially. They ultimately suggest that these behaviours occur in distinct spatial areas as determined by CytoMAP.

Strengths:

The tool appears relatively user-friendly and is open source. The combination with CytoMAP represents a nice option for researchers.

The identification of associations between cell track phenotype and spatial features is exciting and the diffuse midline glioma data nicely demonstrates how this could be used.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This study uses all atom MD simulation to explore the mechanics of channel opening for the NOMPC mechanosensitive channel. Previously the authors used MD to show that external forces directed along the long-axis of the protein (normal to the membrane) results in AR domain compression and channel opening. This force causes two changes to the key TRP domains adjacent to the channel gate: 1) a compressive force pushes the TRP domain along the membrane normal, while 2) a twisting torque induces a clock-wise rotation on the TRP domain helix when viewing the bottom of the channel from the cytoplasm. Here, the authors wanted to understand which of those two changes are responsible for increasing the inner pore radius, and they show that it is the torque. The simulations in Figure 2 probe this question with different forces, and we can see the pore open with parallel forces in the membrane, but not with the membrane-normal forces. I believe this result as it is reproducible, the timescales are reaching 1 microsecond, and the gate is clearly increasing diameter to about 4 Å. This seems to be the most important finding in the paper, but the impact is limited since the authors already shows how forces lead to channel opening, and this is further teasing apart the forces and motions that are actually the ones that cause the opening.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Breyton and colleagues analysed the emergent dynamics from a neural mass model, characterised the resultant complexity of the dynamics, and then related these signatures of complexity to datasets in which individuals had been anaesthetised with different pharmacological agents. The results provide a coherent explanation for observations associated with different time series metrics, and further help to reinforce the importance of modelling when integrating across scientific studies.

Strengths:

* The modelling approach was clear, well-reasoned and explicit, allowing for direct comparison to other work and potential elaboration in future studies through the augmentation with richer neurobiological detail.

* The results serve to provide a potential mechanistic basis for the observation that Perturbational Complexity Index changes as a function of consciousness state.

Weaknesses:

* Coactivation cascades were visually identified, rather than observed through an algorithmic lens. Given that there are numerous tools for quantifying the presence/absence of cascades from neuroimaging data, the authors may benefit from formalising this notion.

* It was difficult to tell, graphically, where the model's operating regime lay. Visual clarity here will greatly benefit the reader.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed my concerns.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The study demonstrates that calcium-sensing trafficking proteins Synaptotagmin (Syt) 1 and Syt7 are involved in the efficient presentation of mycobacterial antigens by MR1 during M. tuberculosis infection.

This is achieved by creating antigen-presenting cells in which the Syt1 and Syt7 genes are knocked out. These mutated cell lines show significantly reduced stimulation of MAIT cells, while their stimulation of HLA class I-restricted T cells remains unchanged. Syt1 and Syt7 co-localize in a late endo-lysosomal compartment where MR1 molecules are also located, near M. tuberculosis-containing vacuoles.

Strengths:

This work uncovers a new aspect of how mycobacterial antigens generated during infection are presented. The finding that Syt1 and Syt7 are relevant for final MR1 surface expression and presentation to MR1-restricted T cells is novel and adds valuable information to this process.

The experiments include all necessary controls and convincingly validate the role of Syt1 and Syt7.

Another key point is that these proteins are essential during infection, but they are not significant when an exogenous synthetic antigen is used in the experiments. This emphasizes the importance of studying infection as a physiological context for antigen presentation to MAIT cells.

An additional relevant aspect is that the study reveals the existence of different MR1 antigen presentation pathways, which differ from the endoplasmic reticulum or endosomal pathways that are typical for MHC-presented peptides.

Weaknesses:

The reduced MAIT cell response observed with Syt1 and Syt7-deficient cell lines is statistically significant but not completely abolished. This may suggest that only some MR1-loaded molecules depend on these two Syt proteins. Further research is needed to determine whether, during persistent M. tuberculosis infection, enough MR1-loaded molecules are produced and transported to the plasma membrane to sufficiently stimulate MAIT cells.

The study proposes that other Syt proteins might also play a role, as outlined by the authors. However, exploring potential redundant mechanisms that facilitate MR1 loading with antigens remains a challenging task.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In this work Thapliyal and Glauser tried to provide mechanistic understanding by which animals modulate their neural circuit responses to control nociceptive behavior on the basis of the dynamic internal feeding state. It is an important study that adds to growing body of evidences coming from multiple model systems. They have used elegant genetics, behavioral and Ca-imaging experiments to demonstrate how the auxiliary thermosensory neuron pair, AWC and one of the internal state sensing interneuron pair, ASI, respond to dynamic internal starvation-state to modulate behavioral response to noxious heat. Interestingly, these neuron pairs use distinct molecular mechanisms along with some other unidentified neurons to suppress heat-indued reversal response under short-term and prolonged starvations. The experiments are well performed that support most of the claims and provide important framework for future studies.

I have some queries that if answered, will certainly enhance the study,

(1) The results suggests that ASI is one of the primary drivers for the starvation-evoked behavioral plasticity, which regulates AWC activity under prolonged starvation. It raises many important questions including, a) how starvation modulates ASI response to heat? b) under prolonged starvation, whether ASI also promotes other, non-AWC, glutamatergic inhibitory neurons to suppress heat-induced reversal and how?

(2) How does ASI regulate AWC activity? In the proposed model (figure 8) authors suggested an independent, unknown signal, other than INS-32 and NLP-18, from ASI to regulate AWC activity. However, from the results the existence of another signal is not very clear.

(3) Previously, Takeishi et. al., showed that ins-1 dynamically modulates AWC-AIA mediated thermotaxis behavior based on the feeding state of the animal. It raises questions whether ins-1 also contributes to noxious heat-induced reversal behavior.

(4) Experiments with AWC fate conversion mutants (nsy-1 and nsy-7) were very good ideas, however the results obtained were confusing. flp-6 mutant data suggests AWCoff would be essential for heat induced reversal, especially at the low intensity stimulus level. However, nsy-1 mutant forming two AWCon neurons showed complete rescue at the low heat level, which is quite opposite. Similarly, although less prominent, eat-4 rescue experiments suggested both nsy-1 and nsy-7 should behave normally at high heat condition, which was not the result observed.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, Nieto et al. investigate how spatial gene expression patterns in the early Drosophila embryo are regulated at the level of transcriptional bursting. Using live-cell MS2 imaging data of four reporter constructs and the endogenous eve gene, the authors extract temporal dynamics of nascent transcription at single-cell resolution. They implement a novel, simplified algorithm to infer promoter ON/OFF states based on fluorescence slope dynamics and use this to quantify burst duration (Ton), inter-burst duration (Toff), and total activity time across space.

The key finding is that while Ton and Toff remain relatively constant across space, the activity time-the window between first and last burst-is spatially modulated and best explains mean expression differences across the embryo. This uncovers a general strategy where early embryonic patterning genes modulate the duration of their transcriptionally permissive states, rather than the frequency or strength of bursting itself. The manuscript also shows that different enhancers of the same gene (e.g., sna proximal vs. shadow) can differentially modulate Toff and activity time, providing mechanistic insight into enhancer function.

Strengths:

The manuscript introduces activity time as a major, previously underappreciated determinant of spatial gene expression, distinct from Ton and Toff, providing an intuitive mechanistic link between temporal bursting and spatial patterning.

The authors develop a tractable inference algorithm based on linear accumulation/decay rates of MS2 fluorescence, allowing efficient burst state segmentation across thousands of trajectories.

Analysis across multiple biological replicates and different genes/enhancers lends confidence to the reproducibility and generalizability of the findings.

By analyzing both synthetic reporter constructs and an endogenous gene (eve), the work provides a coherent view of how enhancer architecture and spatial regulation are intertwined with transcriptional kinetics.

The supplementary information extends the biological findings with a gene expression noise model that accounts for non-exponential dwell times and illustrates how low-variability Ton buffers stochasticity in transcript levels.

Weaknesses:

The manuscript does not clearly delineate how this analysis extends beyond the prior landmark study (citation #40: Fukaya et al., 2016). While the current manuscript offers new modeling and statistics, more explicit clarification of what is novel in terms of biological conclusions and methodological advancement would help position the work.

While the methods are explained in detail in the Supplementary Information, the manuscript would benefit from including a diagrammatic model and explicitly clarifying whether the model is descriptive or predictive in scope.

The interpretation that fluorescence decay reflects RNA degradation could be confounded by polymerase runoff or transcript diffusion from the transcription site. These potential limitations are not thoroughly discussed.

The so-called loading rate is used as an empirical parameter in fitting fluorescence traces, but is not convincingly linked to distinct biological processes. The manuscript would benefit from a more precise definition or reframing of this term.

Impact and Utility:

The study provides a general and scalable framework for dissecting transcriptional kinetics in developing embryos, with implications for understanding enhancer logic and developmental robustness. The algorithm is suitable for adaptation to other live-imaging datasets and could be useful across systems where temporal transcriptional variability is being quantified. By highlighting activity time as a key regulatory axis, the work shifts attention to transcriptionally permissive windows as a primary developmental control layer.

This work will be of interest to: developmental biologists investigating spatial gene expression, researchers studying transcriptional regulation and noise, quantitative biologists developing models for transcriptional dynamics, and imaging and computational biologists working with live single-cell data.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors repeated measured the behavior of individual flies across several environmental situations in custom-made behavioral phenotyping rigs.

Strengths:

The study uses several different behavioral phenotyping devices to quantify individual behavior in a number of different situations and over time. It seems to be a very impressive amount of data. The authors also make all their behavioral phenotyping rig design and tracking software available, which I think is great and I'm sure other folks will be interested in using and adapting to their own needs.

Weaknesses/Limitations:

I think an important limitation is that while the authors measured the flies under different environmental scenarios (i.e. with different lighting, temperature) they didn't really alter the "context" of the environment. At least within behavioral ecology, context would refer to the potential functionality of the expressed behaviors so for example, an anti-predator context, or a mating context, or foraging. Here, the authors seem to really just be measuring aspects of locomotion under benign (relatively low risk perception) contexts. This is not a flaw of the study, but rather a limitation to how strongly the authors can really say that this demonstrates that individuality is generalized across many different contexts. It's quite possible that rank-order of locomotor (or other) behaviors may shift when the flies are in a mating or risky context.

I think the authors are missing an opportunity to use much more robust statistical methods. It appears as though the authors used pearson correlations across time/situations to estimate individual variation; however far more sophisticated and elegant methods exist. The problem is that pearson correlation coefficients can be anti-conservative and additionally, the authors have thus had to perform many many tests to correlate behaviors across the different trials/scenarios. I don't see any evidence that the authors are controlling for multiple testing which I think would also help. Alternatively, though, the paper would be a lot stronger, and my guess is, much more streamlined if the authors employ hierarchical mixed models to analyse these data, which are the standard analytical tools in the study of individual behavioral variation. In this way, the authors could partition the behavioral variance into its among- and within-individual components and quantify repeatability of different behaviors across trials/scenarios simultaneously. This would remove the need to estimate 3 different correlations for day 1 & day 2, day 1 & 3, day 2 & 3 (or stripe 0 & stripe 1, etc) and instead just report a single repeatability for e.g. the time spent walking among the different strip patterns (eg. figure 3). Additionally, the authors could then use multivariate models where the response variables are all the behaviors combined and the authors could estimate the among-individual covariance in these behaviors. I see that the authors state they include generalized linear mixed models in their updated MS, but I struggled a bit to understand exactly how these models were fit? What exactly was the response? what exactly were the predictors (I just don't understand what Line404 means "a GLM was trained using the environmental parameters as predictors (0 when the parameter was not change, 1 if it was) and the resulting individual rank differences as the response"). So were different models run for each scenario? for different behaviors? Across scenarios? what exactly? I just harp on this because I'm actually really interested in these data and think that updating these methods can really help clarify the results and make the main messages much clearer!

I appreciate that the authors now included their sample sizes in the main body of text (as opposed to the supplement) but I think that it would still help if the authors included a brief overview of their design at the start of the methods. It is still unclear to me how many rigs each individual fly was run through? Were the same individuals measured in multiple different rigs/scenarios? Or just one?

I really think a variance partitioning modeling framework could certainly improve their statistical inference and likely highlight some other cool patterns as these methods could better estimate stability and covariance in individual intercepts (and potentially slopes) across time and situation. I also genuinely think that this will improve the impact and reach of this paper as they'll be using methods that are standard in the study of individual behavioral variation

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The authors report that intra-chromosomal gene correlation length (spatial correlations in gene expressions along the chromosome) serves as a proxy of chromatin structure and hence gene expression. They further explore changes in these metrics with aging. These are interesting and important findings. However, there are fundamental problems at this time.

(1) The basic method lacks validation. There is no validation of the method by approaches that directly measure chromatin structure, for example ATAC-seq, ChIP-seq, or CUT n RUN.

(2) There is no validation by interventions that directly probe chromatin structure, such as HDAC inhibitors. The authors employ datasets with knockdown of LINE-1 for validation. However, this is not a specific chromatin intervention.

(3) There is no statistical analysis, e.g., in Figures 4 and 5.

(4) The authors state, "in Figure 4a changes in the heterochromatin are not identical for all chromosomes shown...." I do not see the data for individual chromosomes.

(5) In comparisons of WT vs HGPS NT or HGPS SCR (Figure S6), is this a fair comparison? The WT and HGPS are presumably from different human donors, so they have genetic and epigenetic differences unrelated to HGPS.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript, "A Python Toolbox for Representational Similarity Analysis", presents an overview of the RSAToolbox, including a review of the methods it implements (some of which are more recently developed) and recommendations for constructing RSA analysis pipelines. It is encouraging to see that this toolbox, which has existed in both Python and other forms, continues to be actively developed and maintained.

Strengths:

The authors do a nice job reviewing the history of RSA analysis while introducing the methods within the toolbox. It is helpful that the authors discuss when and how to apply specific measures to different data types (e.g., why Euclidean or Mahalanobis distances are suboptimal for spike data). The manuscript strikes a valuable balance between theoretical background and hands-on instruction. The inclusion of decision-making aids, such as the Euler diagram for selecting similarity measures, and well-maintained demo scripts (available on GitHub), enhance the manuscript's utility as a practical guide.

Overall, this paper will be particularly useful to researchers new to RSA and those interested in performing a rigorous analysis using this framework. The manuscript and accompanying toolbox provide everything a researcher needs to get started, provided they take the time to engage with the methodological details and references offered

Weaknesses:

While the links to the demos in the figure legend did not work for me, it was easy to locate the current demos online, and it's encouraging to see that they are actively maintained. One small issue is that a placeholder ("XXX") remains in the description of Figure 3b and should be corrected.