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    1. With all of these observations able to be ascertained from an analysis of only the main eating space, it is easy to see that a full observation of the entire establishment would yield far more extensive results.

      Does this post need a "conclusion"? If so, maybe a statement about the limitations of the observations is warranted, but something more conclusive would be more effective. Maybe end with some questions the details perhaps evoke.

    1. area every weekend

      This paragraph assumes a college degree puts someone in the middle or upper class. It doesn't. Especially graduate students... We generally live in poverty.

    2. tes for my built environment description

      This assumes an audience familiar with this assignment/project. How can you revise with a larger audience of potential researchers in mind?