Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Pescher and colleagues present a revised manuscript detailing the multi-omic characterisation of Leishmania donovani amastigote to promastigote differentiation and integration of this data. The molecular pathways that regulate Leishmania life-stage transitions are still poorly understood, with many approaches exploring single proteins/RNAs etc in a reductionist manner. This paper takes a systems-scale approach and does a good job of integrating the disparate -omics datasets to generate hypotheses about the intersections of regulatory proteins that are associated with life-cycle progression. The differentiation step studied is from amastigote to promastigote using hamster-derived amastigotes which is a major strength. The use of hamsters permits the extraction of parasites that are host adapted and represent "normal", host-adapted Leishmania ploidy; the promastigote experiments are performed at a low passage number. Therefore, this is a strength or the work as it reduces the interference from the biological plasticity of Leishmania when it is cultured outside the host for prolonged periods. The multi-omics datasets presented are robust in their acquisition and analysis and will form an excellent resource for researchers studying the molecular events (particularly proteasomal protein degradation, and phosphorylation) during life-stage progression.
General comments on the revisions:
My view is that the authors have made significant, satisfactory changes that address the comments and queries I made on the original manuscript (Review Commons).
There are two areas where the authors had to make major changes/justifications where further comment is merited, these were:
RNA-seq.<br /> The most significant issue was the originally underpowered RNA-seq which had only two replicates. This has been repeated with four replicates now. This has not led to changes in the interpretation of the data between the original study and this one. One comment that the authors make in the response to this was : "Given the robustness of the stage-specific transcriptome, and the legal constrains associated with the use of animals, we chose to limit the number of replicates to the necessary". Ensuring that animal experiments are properly powered and that maximum robustness of the data from the minimum sample size is an important part of experimental design for ethical use of animal models. Essentially the replication here could have been avoided if the original study had used 1 more animal. However, the new version of RNA-seq brings appropriate confidence to the interpretation of the data.
Phosphoproteomics.<br /> The authors provide a robust justification of their strategy for the phosphoproteomics and highlight the inclusion criteria for phosphosites: "Phosphosites were only considered if detected with high confidence (identification FDR<1%) and high localisation confidence (localisation probability >0.75) in at least one replicate". The way missing values were dealt with is explained "For statistical analyses, missing values within a given condition were imputed with a well-established algorithm (MLE) only when at least one observed value was present in that condition." This fills in some of the gaps I was missing from the original manuscript, and I am satisfied that the data analysis is entirely appropriate for a discovery/system -based approach such as this one. The authors also edit the manuscript to reflect that "occupancy" or "stoichiometry" might not be the best description of what they were presenting and switched to the terminology of "normalised phosphorylation level" - I think this is an appropriate response.
Overall, in the absence of follow up experiments on specific individual examples, some of the claims in the original submission were toned down and reflect a more neutral description of the data now. Significantly, the data still underpin a key role for regulation of the ribosome between the amastigote and promastigote stages (and during the differentiation process). The recursive and reciprocal links between the phosphorylation and ubiquitination systems are interesting and present many opportunities for future investigation.