for example
missing comma here
for example
missing comma here
URI (Uniform Resource Identifier)
Ibid.
that people use as Web addresses
"Web address" is so awkward as a term. Better to just make it concrete, anyway, by providing a familiar example like "The URLs that appear in the address bar in a Web browser […]".
<Bob> <is a> <person>. <Bob> <is a friend of> <Alice>. <Bob> <is born on> <the 4th of July 1990>. <Bob> <is interested in> <the Mona Lisa>. <the Mona Lisa> <was created by> <Leonardo da Vinci>. <the video 'La Joconde à Washington'> <is about> <the Mona Lisa>.
The syntax highlighting here is very strange. It seems to follow the rule that the first atom inside a set of angle brackets is bold, and the subsequent atoms (if any) are not.
This ability to have the same resource be in the subject position of one triple and the object position of another makes it possible to find connections between triples
There's probably a better way to put this.
the Mona Lisa is the subject of one and the object of two triples
The natural way to phrase this would be "the subject of one triple and the object of two". (There should probably be a "both" thrown in there, too, to make the sentence structure even more predictable.)
I have written down all these thoughts are as ‘remarks’
spurious "are" here
offline documents
"[...] that is, ones not technically on the Web"
This poses a problem that we'll need to address.
Add a liaison/segue sentence here (after this one) that says "Browsers, in fact, were not designed with triple scripts in mind at all."
Browsers
"Web browsers"
This is of course ideal
huh?
It expects the system read call to return a promise that resolves to the file's contents.
Just say "It expects the read
call to resolve to the file contents."?
The project archive's subtree
Find a better way to say this. E.g. "The subdirectory for Part 1 from the project archive source tree"
[ 0, 0, 0, 1 ]
And of course there's a bug here. This should be [1, 0, 0, 1]
.
returns [ 0, 0, 0, 1 ]
We can afford to emphasize the TYPE
family constants here by saying something like:
Or, to put it another way, given a statement
let stats = checker.getStats()
, the following results are true:stats[LineChecker.TYPE_NONE] // evaluates to `1` stats[LineChecker.TYPE_CR] // evaluates to `0` stats[LineChecker.TYPE_LF] // evaluates to `0` stats[LineChecker.TYPE_CRLF] // evaluates to `1`
propertes
"properties"
returned
"... by getStats
."
In fact, this is the default for DOS-style text-processing utilities.
Note that the example cited is "a single line of text". We should emphasize that this isn't what we mean when we say that this is the default for DOS-style text files. (Of course DOS supports multi-line text files. It's just that the last line will have no CRLF sequence.)
IETP
should be "IETF"
rollback
nit: should be "to roll back" here
FAQ
Bad link (currently points to @chrisaldrich's profile page)
ontop
typo?
this section
Should have probably written "this entire section (including the preceding code block and the one that follows)".
speak
"to speak"
code blocks
"blocks containing our flavored pseudocode"
turn-of-phrases
MarketWatch doesn't have editors?
–in common-sense terms–
these should be em dashes
limites
should be "limits"
Englebart
should be "Engelbart"
then
should be "than"
smart dimension
Capitalize “Smart Dimension” for consistency of style.
Plane
For clarity, this is better lowercase to differentiate between design tree options and concepts like “Plane”.
let’s
lets (no apostrophe)
Designs
lc “designs”
Designs
lc “designs”
Graphics Card
Lowercase “graphics card”
any other like product you can think of.
Redundant with the phrase “all sorts of products.”
SolidWorks is typically used to design assemblies that work mechanically that are typically less than 200 parts.
More simply, “SolidWorks is typically used to design mechanical assemblies comprising fewer than 200 parts,”
systems
Missing a space after “CAD”.
You will learn how to start a new part file, the different file types, the user interface, different setting and view options.
You will learn how to start a new part file, the different file types, the user interface, and different setting and view options.
which remained sealed up and unknown after his passing in 1988
missing an "until" here
exits
typo for "exists"
Two things that still need to be addressed in section 7:
Next, we discuss the implementation strategy.
s/.*/Let's discuss an implementation strategy/
my word processor Author could already see extra metainformation on the macOS Clipboard when text copied from the Apple Safari web browser, that the text came from a specific web address etc
less
"fewer"
It also typically goes hand in hand with another concept known as scratching your own itch. Building a product or service or website that you yourself would like to see in the world.
Lots of punctuation mistakes in these two "sentences"—one being that this isn't really two sentences, since the second is a fragment, but it could be fixed by swapping the period for a colon or em dash.
while still holding tab down
Alt, you mean? (No Windows here; can't test, but it seems like that would be the right way to do it.)
fake plastic human-interest
The formatting of this link is messed up.
philantropic gift
Typo; should "philanthropic".
Javascript
"JavaScript" (or "JS")
Javascript
"JavaScript" (or "JS")
revist
Typo; should be "revisit".
d-blocks
As noted above (see https://hypothes.is/a/oHvCzI1DEeuC9IvJw8DOYw), g-blocks are most appropriate.
"// export"
Should be /// export
for the same reason as above. (See https://hypothes.is/a/oHvCzI1DEeuC9IvJw8DOYw.)
"// <script>" and "// </script>"
Should be using //?
here, now that g-blocks are a thing.
before
"before"? We only just mentioned it!
by
typo (should be "my")
Like the algorithm as proposed by Dwork et al, it can tolerant of up to 1 = 3 byzantine voting power.
Our algorithm is based on algorithm 2’
Is this a typo or is this "two prime"?