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  1. Oct 2015
    1. Anthropologists usefully define a tool as an artifact used to make other artifact

      vs

      "technical objects are always embedded within larger networks of technical ensembles, including geographic, social, technological, political, and economic forces."

    2. technical objects are always on the move toward new configurations, new milieu, and new kinds of techni­cal ensembles

      Companies like apple release the iPhone 4, for example, when they're almost done creating the iphone 6 (or a further generation away), so this is a good point

    3. ognitive deficit or a decline in cognitive ability among young peopl

      Could there be any actual benefits of cognitive deficiency?

    4. are catalyzing a shift in the technological unconscious, that is, the actions, expectations, and anticipations that have become so habitual they are “automatized,” sinking below conscious awareness while still being in­tegrated into bodily routines carried on without conscious awareness.

      Hayle is saying that our attention is not only fleeting, but the very expectation that it is fleeting is changing society as well

    5. he contemporary changes in mechanisms of attention are conveyed not through changes in the DNA but rather through epigenetic (i.e., environmental) changes. The relation between epigenetic and genetic changes has been a rich field of research in recent decades, resulting in a much more nuanced (and accurate) picture of biological adaptations than was previously understood, when the central dogma had all adaptations occurring through genetic processes

      I spent a lot of time in my bio class in high school looking at epigenetic and we talked about the effects of how external factors change our biology. We discussed in length about how computers has caused our minds to actually be sharper at detecting things and how sometimes hangs will grow in a weird way in order to help one hold a phone.

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    1. over a wide range of data-gathering instruments the results are consistent: people read less print, and they read print less well.

      I can see this as being true because online reading leads to instant gratification and information whereas you usually have to concentrate more on reading a printed article etc.

    2. Young people, who vote with their feet in college, are marching in another direction—the digital direction.

      The best way for change to be noticed is through action, not through words, and this can be seen very well through internet traffic.

    3. With linear reading, by contrast, the cognitive load is at a minimum, precisely because eye movements are more routine and fewer decisions need to be made about how to read the material and in what order. Hence the transfer to long-term memory happens more efficiently, especially when readers reread passages and pause to reflect on them as they go along.

      but there is linear reading within websites

    4. w odd a r^ e that the most valuable thing English ever had to offer was the very thing t o made us a discipline, t o transformed us from cultured gentlemen into a profession

      not the fact that it allows us to communicate?

    5. makes no apology for linking the decline of reading skills directly to a decrease in print reading, issuing a stinging indictment to teachers, professors, and other mentors who think digital reading might encourage skills of its own

      but what is the difference between reading words on paper than words online?

    6. Worse, reading skills (as measured by the ability to identify themes, draw inferences, etc.) have been declining in junior high, high school, college, and even graduate schools for the same period.

      but is this just simply amount? Because this could be due to our population growth.

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    1. research indicates that the small habitual actions associated with web interactions—clicking the mouse, moving a cursor, etc.—may be extraordinarily effective in retraining (or more accurately, repurposing) our neural circuitry, so that the changes are not only psychological but physical as well

      This relates to the last reading where Carr talked about the changes to our brains that occur when we use the internet too much. Also, this article kind of talks about the physical changes as well: http://www.theguardian.com/society/2011/may/21/children-weaker-computers-replace-activity

    2. Without abandoning print literacy. Comparative Media Studies enriches it through judicious comparison with other media, so that print is no longer the default mode into which one falls without much thought about alternatives but rather an informed choice made with full awareness of its possibilities and limitations.

      Because we have more options now than reading print, we can see the advantages of using mediums besides it and when it's more beneficial to use print.

    3. as the limiting scarce resource

      Attention is a resource that companies try to compete for online, whether its through ads or social media campaigns or things like that.

    4. Surely there must be a better way. .Needed are approaches that can lo­cate digital work within print traditions, and print traditions within dig­ital media, without obscuring or failing to account for the differences between them. One such approach is advocated here: it goes by the name of Comparative Media Studies.^ As a concept, Comparative Media Studies has long inhabited the humanities, including comparisons of manuscript and print cultures, oral versus literate cultures, papyri versus vellum, immo­bile type versus moveable type, letterpress versus offset printing, etc. These fields have tended to exist at the margins of literary culture, of interest to specialists but (with significant exceptions) rarely sweeping the humanities as a whole. Moreover, they have occupied separate niches without overall theoretical and conceptual frameworks within which Comparative Media Studies might evolve.
    5. To evaluate the impact of digital technologies, we may consider in over­view an escalating series of effects.
    6. Another way is through the concept of technogenesis, the idea that hu­mans and technics have coevolved together.

      Human ability evolve with technology because technology begets more technology.

    7. humanities as traditionally print-based disciplines

      Will evolve like everything to fit modern times.

    8. Constructing a database also makes it possible for different scholars (or teams of scholars) to create different front-ends for the same data, thus encouraging collaboration in data collection, storing, and analysis.

      Ease of access to information always encourages developing new information faster.

    9. presupposition

      a thing tacitly assumed beforehand at the beginning of a line of argument or course of action.

    10. Such feelings, which are widespread,^ constitute nothing less than a change in worldview

      People have integrated new media into their lives so much that when it's removed they feel distressed. This is the same as any sudden change as it fundamentally removes what we are used too.

    11. Students read and write print texts in the classroom and consume and create digital texts^of their own on screens (with computers, iPhones, tablets, etc.), but there is little transfer from leisure activities to classroom instruction or vice versa

      there is this difference between writing a school paper and typing a text message.

    12. The abil­ity to access and retrieve information on a global scale has a significant im­pact on how one thinks about one’s place in the world.

      the world has become smaller

    1. As the number of links increased, comprehension declined, as measured by writing a summary and completing a multiple-choice test. Si

      I think this is why Wikipedia is so popular, all the general information in one link

    1. Hyper reading, which includes skimming, scanning, fragmenting, and juxtaposing texts, is a strategic response to an information-intensive envi­ronment, aiming to conserve attention by quickly identifying relevant infor­mation, so that only relatively few portions of a given text are actually read.

      I did not even know my brain took in so much when I skimmed, but according to her this is an actual brain function

    2. widespread,^ constitute nothing less than a change in worldview.Moreover, research indicates that the small habitual actions associated with web interactions—clicking the mouse, moving a cursor, etc.—may be extraordinarily effective in retraining (or more accurately, repurposing) our neural circuitry, so that the changes are not only psychological but physical as well

      I never figured that the physical nature of using a computer actually benefits memory in anyway at all. This is her first point I find distinctly different from others

    3. Couldn't it be argued that "web searches" are the same library except more accessible with a wider selection?

    1. Concentration can be had, but for ·most of us it is only by setting oneself against the things that rourinely destroy it.

      I definitely agree with this idea of having to set oneself against the things that destroy concentration. I believe it is becoming more difficult for younger generations to concentrate.

    2. Our brains have become particularly adapted to creating coherent, gap-free sto-ries ....

      This is surprising considering how much the internet brings about a “gap” in my thinking. My attention span is definitely different because of the internet.

    3. eyes wide shut

      This implies a sort of idea that we don’t know where we’re going and we have no clue the direction of where things could go with the internet. This is a valid point of skepticism, but the other side isn’t really explored.

    4. Net seizes our attention only to scatter it

      I have noticed that the internet only keeps my attention in short bursts. I can’t watch a 20 minute clip, but I can watch 20 1 minute clips.

    5. Neuroscience is now squarely at the center of any discussion of thinking or memory.

      I never realized that neuroscience and memory was in the discussion when talking about computing, but it makes sense that it is since the brain is one huge biological computer.

    6. The Shallows: What the Internet Is Doing to Our Brains.

      Fun fact: I read this book. It sounds more interesting than it actually was. I was disappointed because I wanted more on the neuroscience of it but the main focus was the technology side because you can only say so many times and in so many ways that the internet is making our memory and attention span worse.

    7. that our inner exertions literally have the power to change us that thoroughly. It is not just that we, are what we think; we are how, with what tools, we think.

      I believe this. If you dedicate as much time as the piano players were to imagining that your hands are repeating the same notes over and over, you're basically creating muscle memory without the physical parts.

    8. Maybe the screen was reconditioning him

      This would make sense when thinking of pavlov. The more we expect the information to be there, the more we'll just look it up every time we need to know it. The computer acts as an external memory

    9. Serious literary work has levels. The involved reader takes in not only the narrative premise and the craft of its realization, but also the resonanc
    10. Is coming into human consciousness also a coming into narrative-is it part of the nature of human consciousness to seek and create narrative, which is to say meaning?

      well a narrative can be first person so yes?

    11. Our brains have become particularly adapted to creating coherent, gap-free sto-ries .... 1his propensity for narrative creation is part of what pre-disposes humans to religious thought.

      did they not do this before though with spoken stories and books?

    12. Think of all that we can explore, think of the amazing lateral speeds of which we are now capable, the wealth of other kinds of information (visual, spoken, musical

      but people still have passion for these so I feel they will never die

    13. As it follows an electronic-as opposed to mechanical-paradigm, this transformation is dramatically more accelerated and more psychologically formative than any previous technological transformation we have gone through as a species. The overwhelming difference is that where formerly we could be said to interact with various systems------be those of commerce, law, politics, scholarship-now those systems are, in effect, merging into one, an unwieldy gargantuan unity that runs all its parts on a code of ls and Os.

      im confused why he is scared of this though

    14. Our us.e of the Internet involves many paradoxes, but the one that promises to have the greatest long-term influence over how we think is this one: the Net seizes our attention only to scatter it."
    15. Is Google Making Us Stupid?," an essay that begins with an image of unsettling implication

      no its just allowing more people access to more info

    16. "information wants to be free."

      the circle?

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    1. No one can really predict

      If no one can predict, than is this whole paper just the worst case scenario? What point does it try to convey? He remains unsure almost to distance himself from his own extreme points.

    2. We might think in terms of a circuit-board model, picturing ourselves as the contact points.

      I think that this circuit board model is a bleak outlook on humanity and i disagree with the notion that we are becoming as automated as the machines we create. This can be seen through any creative field.

    3. Language will grow increasingly iropoverished through a series of vicious cycles.

      I agree with this notion that language is forever growing more and more simple, but I’m not sure if technology is to blame or simply our removal from the archaic forms of the language. Moreover, I’m not sure if its a bad thing or not.

    4. If electronic media are the one thing that the young are at ease with, why not exploit the fact?

      I disagree with this notion that companies looking to bring technology into classrooms are trying to exploit the children by indoctrinating them with he technology they are comfortable with. Instead, I simply believe that technology is a useful educational tool that companies design for students.

    5. "morbid symptoms"

      This metaphor is very helpful in describing just how much change technology brings about. Although I never thought of it like this, it seems a little extreme.

    6. eading is fundamentally an act of translation

      DeCerteau said something similar when he said, "Reading thus introduces an 'art' which is anything but passive”

    7. The electronic media, while conspicuous in gadgetry, are very nearly invisible in their functioning. They have slipped deeply and irrevocably into our midst, creating sluices and circulating through them.

      not referencing any machine as a whole, but all the parts that make it up

    8. Who can blame the students? Everything they meet with in the world around them gives the signal: That was then, and electronic communications are now.

      It's funny that even today, with all the technology that has improved education, students are still not able to focus. Even worse, we get distracted at very inconvenient times.

    9. Gutenberg
    10. But certainly the idea of what it means to be a person liv-ing a life will be much changed.

      i disagree. Living a life will be the same but just with more tech involved. I am confused exactly what he means by this.

    11. Language will grow increasingly iropoverished through a series of vicious cycles

      language always has

    12. hey are less and less will-ing to publish work, however worthy, that will not make a tidy profi

      but the internet allows anyone to publish anything

    13. Engagement is intrinsically public, taking place within a circuit oflarger connectedness.

      it can be private.....

    14. Print also posits a time axis; the turning of pages, not to mention the vertical descent down the page, is a forward-moving succession, with earlier contents at every point serving as a ground for what follows. Moreover, the printed material is static-it is the reader, not the book, that moves forward.

      confused what he is trying to say

    15. The so-called natural world, the place we used to live, which served us so long as the yardstick for all measurements, can now only be perceived through a scrim

      dramatic much?

    16. Many educators say that our students are less and less able to read, or analyze, or write with clarity and purpose.

      I would argue children read more because of the internet

    17. The printed word is part of a vestigial order that we are moving away from-by choice and by societal compulsion.

      but what is the difference between a written word to it being typed. It gives the same message.

    1. And what will happen when educators find that not very many of the old materials will "play"-that is, capture student enthusiasm?

      Text students read wil always change overtime. Students will always read some text that stand the test of time (Like Shakespear, Salinger, ect.) and new or newly discovered text that they can relate too.

    2. that our educational systems are in decline; that our students are less and less able to read and comprehend their required texts, and that their aptitude scores have leveled off well below those of previous gener-ations. T

      Language always evolves overtime, and people brains just aren't as accustomed to seeing older styles of writing. This is what makes reading older text harder, people need to work more since it's very different from what they are used too. People aren't simply getting dumber.

    3. reading is fundamentally an act of translation. Symbols are turned into their ver-bal referents and these are in turn interpreted

      sounds like semiotics

    4. printed sheet is heading for obsolescence

      I feel like the printed sheet will never be fully obsolete because of it's permanence.

    1. 'hd if you still think God made us," writes Greenberg, "there's a neurochemical reason for that too." He quotes writer David Linden, author of The Acddental Mind: How Brain Evolution Has Given Jls Love, Memory, Dreams, and God· "Our brains have be-come particularly adapted to creating coherent, gap-free stories .... This propensity for narrative creation is part of what predisposes humans to religious thought."

      isn't science "filling in the gap" searching to make sense of our existence as well? A bit bias I would say.

    2. You Are What You Click More than twenty years ago I published a book called The Gutenberg Elegies: The Fate of Reading in an Electronic Age. It was my speculative-but also, I admit, somewhat alarmed-response to what felt like the rash ascendancy of all things digital.

      His essay became outdated so quickly as even he did not realize how fast technology could and would advance

    1. Daily news-papers, with their long columns of print, struggle against declining sales. Fewer and fewer people under the age of fifty read them; comput-ers will soon make packaged information a custom product. But if the printed sheet is heading for obsolescence, people are tuning in to the signals. The screen is where the information and entertainment wars will be fought.

      I do really see his point, and the new generation when we become teachers, the internet will seem to be the more used resource in my prediction, however, I do not believe we are there yet.

    2. are now. Do I exaggerate? If all this is the case, why haven't we heard more about it? Why hasn't somebody stepped forward with a bow tie and a pointer stick to explain what is going on?

      I often feel the same when something happens in the world wether it be a news story, or an event that happened in sports, I never know if it is a historical event or not. I often question "will this be remembered in 20,40,60,100 years. Will it be written in the textbooks? And there is no man to tell us if it will. I guess it is up to us.

    3. The printed word is part of a vestigial order that we are moving away from-by choice and by societal compulsion.

      ironic that he is writing how the printed word is dying however he is writing it on something with the printed word

  2. Sep 2015
  3. isites.harvard.edu isites.harvard.edu
    1. Historically, this sort of shift in authority accompanied the emergence and development of the informational genres. The progression is nicely marked in the shift from Webster (Noah) to Webster's (the publishing house in Springfield, Mass.) and finally to Webster's as a synonym for "the dictionary," a generic name that has in fact been in the public domain for a number of years.

      Evolution of media has brought a sort off dissonance between author and work

    2. Information, in short, is a strikingly bland substance."

      Information has to be factual; opinions are interesting but information is strictly based on facts. Unfortunately people mix the two up.

    3. The word information, in this theory, is used in a special sense that must not be confused with its ordinary usage

      Why are there so many different meanings for words?!?!?!

    4. but also notions like "reputation

      Each media outlet has to have it's own image, and within that, their information will be judged

    5. now-obsolete use of information to mean "formation or moulding of the mind or character, instruction,"

      interesting how the changing of language can skew our perception of the past

    6. And while it is certain that many forms and genres will migrate in part or in whole to an electronic mode of existence over the coming years,

      he was right

    7. forty-five years from now gender roles will be differen

      aren't we trying to destroy gender roles

    8. Paper is just an object that [some] information has been sprayed onto in the past... —Ted Nelson

      Begins with quotes.

    9. information is able to perform the work it does precisely because it fuzzes the boundaries between several genetically distinct categories of experience. Ultimately, then, the question we want to ask is phenomenological rather than lexicographical; not, What does information mean?, but rather, How is the impression of "information" constituted out of certain practices of reading and the particular representations that support them?
    10. complement to the informational forms of print — a domain that privileges the personal, the private, and the subjective against the impersonal, the public, and the objective.

      i like the point he makes here--why not see the internet as complimenting printed works, rather than competing with it?

    11. ntertextuality"

      the relationship between texts, especially literary ones.

    12. When theorists talk about the power of the new media to make everyone an author, for example, or to provide everyone with universal access to potential audiences of millions of readers,

      This is a point that we've made several times in our class, so it's as if he is addressing us directly here

    13. Take the picture that appeared in Popular Mechanics magazine in 1950 in an article on "The Home of the Future."

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    14. and first of all the limit between the private, the secret (whether private or public) and the public or phenomenal.

      This is very relevant today with the notions of social media and the questions it raises such as privacy.

    15. First, for the notion of "publishing." To a certain extent, the particularities of the Web in this regard are purely quantitative. A signal virtue of electronic technologies is to remove the capital and institutional impediments to the production and circulation of documents.

      The key here for me is "circulation" because no matter the platform that the information is on, the importance of its reception depends on the circulation of the media,

    16. "form of communication"

      This is very similar to the McLuhan which talks about media as a form of language.

    17. nd this way of talking rests on two assumptions. First, they assume a correlation between the size of a text (as measured in characters, bytes, column inches, or whatever) and the amount of content it conveys — a step that implies the commoditization of content that is central to the cultural role we ask information to play.

      The information that is being conveyed can be skewed by a misunderstanding of how the data is collected/

    18. But none of this should be taken as depreciating the cultural effects of electronic media.

      He is basically saying that even though printed books will remain, electronic media won't fall. To me, this is an important distinction but still hard to grasp.

    19. Separated from, or without the implication of, reference to a person informed: that which inheres in one of two or more alternative sequences, arrangements, etc., that produce different responses in something, and which is capable of being stored in, transferred by, and communicated to inanimate things.

      2nd Definition of Information

      used in art fields and fields like cybernetics and information theory

    20. Knowledge communicated concerning some particular fact, subject, or event; that of which one is apprised or told; intelligence, news. spec. contrasted with data.

      1st Definition of Information

      used in a particularistic sense (aka in the typical context we would normally use information in)

    21. information "...both covers and covers up much of what was referenced by the anthropological sense of 'culture.'" But even granting all this, it doesn't follow that we can simply drop the word information from our vocabularies in favor of literatures, culture, knowledge, or whatever other items it seems to be standing in for.
    22. the first sort of error is in seeing the future as being insufficiently like the present, and that is relatively easy to correct for; you just imagine the future furnished like the room you are in. Whereas the second sort of error involves seeing the future as insufficiently different from the present,

      So basically the first error is seeing the future too similarly the present and the second is not seeing it differently enough from the present

    23. This is one of the important ways in which information differs from knowledge, which always requires a knowing subject — an individual, a collectivity, or at the limit a text, which serves as a proxy for its author.
    24. "Objectivity" is a complex notion here. It refers, first, to a kind of perspectival objectivity, the impression that information gives us its content in the "view from nowhere," without reference to private states or privileged points of view. This perspective-neutrality is the feature of information that gives it a more-or-less uniform exchange value, so that a piece of information that I give you can in principle be as comprehensible or as useful to you as it is to me.
    25. hese claims to inclusiveness in turn permit us to attach a significance to exclusion — to an event that doesn't appearing in the newspaper, a word that doesn't appear in the dictionary, a historic site or restaurant that doesn't appearing in a travel guide, and so on. But of course this kind of claim is only possible when the boundaries of a document or building impose a manifest physical limit on the amount of material it can contain.
    26. he trope is crucial to the claims of enthusiasts of the technology that it will usher in a new and epochal discursive order. We have to believe, that is, that the substance that computers traffic in, "information" in the technical sense of the term, is the same sort of stuff that led to the Reformation and the French Revolution, whether or not contemporaries talked about it in those terms. But the fact is that the use of information that people have in mind when they talk about "the information age" or say that information brought about the Reformation is not

      What does he suggest about the importance of making these distinctions?

    27. Agre is certainly right, for example, to say that part of the work that information does for librarians is to flatten and obscure the subjective social topographies of content that are implicit when we speak of the holdings of a library in terms of "literatures."

      What feature of how the term "information" is Nunberg highlighting here?

    28. In this essay, I want to show that these metaphors play false to the truth; we are rather in the situation, as Paul Duguid puts it, of breaking the banks and hoping still to have the river.

      How do these analogies make Nunberg's point? What is the relationship between form and content that he is getting at?

    29. But there is a difficulty even in speaking of "intertextuality" when the individuation of texts themselves becomes so problematic: what could débordementsignify when there are no bords in the first place?

      A brief background on what's at stake with this question: http://faculty.washington.edu/cbehler/glossary/intertex.htm

    30. Electronic publication implies a new calculus of reputation, which I think no one has yet come to grips with.

      How so?

    31. But the assumption implicit in that phrase — that the magnitude or breadth of someone's reputation is proportional to its farthest geographical extension — has no relevance in the electronic world, where it takes no greater investment of resources to make a text available to distant readers than to local ones.

      Why is this true?

    32. When theorists talk about the power of the new media to make everyone an author, for example, or to provide everyone with universal access to potential audiences of millions of readers, they invoke a notion of authorship and a model of access that is more appropriate to traditional print media than to electronic communication. What is an author, after all, if the new media no longer support the legal status or institutional privileges that have traditionally defined that role? And what real increase is there in the ability of the average citizen to affect public opinion if anyone who wants to gain the attention of a mass audience has to compete for attention with

      Does the concept of an "author" make sense in digital environments?

    33. There will be a digital revolution, but the printed book will be an important participant in it.
    34. For the present it's enough to observe that there is nothing in the economics of publishing as a whole or the body of practice surrounding the use of the printed book that militates for its disappearance, even over the long term.
    35. Nothing betrays the spirit of an age so precisely as the way it represents the future.
    36. The second misapprehension is the opposite of the first. It comes from a failure to appreciate, not how durable some features of the material setting will turn out to be, but rather how contingent and mutable are some of the categories of social life.
    37. The first and most obvious comes of taking some recent innovation at the steepest point of its curve and projecting it linearly to a point where it has swept all its predecessors aside.
    38. And here, for all the revolutionary talk of the enthusiasts, there is a persistent tendency to yield to the second kind of misapprehension that representations of the future are liable to, where we naturalize contingent features of the current order of things. Indeed, the revolutionary rhetoric of the enthusiasts makes them especially susceptible to this presupposition, because the goal of making the material advantages of the new media sound inviting and exciting requires us to assume a continuity of communicative needs and interests.

      It's very difficult for me to puzzle out any sort of meaning here....difficult concept and difficult language

    39. What is most telling to us now about the Popular Mechanics picture is its presupposition is that in the year 2000 the household cleaning will still be woman's work

      I love this--the focus is on technological progress rather than other, more important forms of progress (equality, etc.)

    1. the Machine,

      throughout the story, the "Machine" is capitalized, categorizing it as a character rather than an object

    2. When Vashti served away form the sunbeams with a cry, she behaved barbarically - she put out her hand to steady her. "How dare you!" exclaimed the passenger. "You forget yourself!" The woman was confused, and apologized for not having let her fall. People never touched one another. The custom had become obsolete, owing to the Machine.

      Caring for another's well-being, even in instinctive ways such as catching someone who falls, is rude. The Machine shuns all instinctive human behavior, going to show how the Machine strips its inhabitants of their humanity

    3. "Those mountains to the right - let me show you them." She pushed back a metal blind. The main chain of the Himalayas was revealed. "They were once called the Roof of the World, those mountains."

      The Himalayas

    4. It was to the ear what artificial air was to the lungs, and agonizing pains shot across her head.

      Its like how everyone currently freaks out whenever the wifi goes down

    5. Man, the flower of all flesh, the noblest of all creatures visible, man who had once made god in his image, and had mirrored his strength on the constellations, beautiful naked man was dying, strangled in the garments that he had woven

      Just a few passages before this, the inhabitants were calling for the death of men in order to avenge the machine--we need to not take our humanity for granted.

    6. scraps of the untainted sky.

      nature is the only pure and good thing

    7. Wessex

      He's under England

    8. Ælfrid

      King of Wessex from 871 to 899

    9. hills of Wessex

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    10. It was robbed us of the sense of space and of the sense of touch, it has blurred every human relation and narrowed down love to a carnal act, it has paralysed our bodies and our wills, and now it compels us to worship it. The Machine develops - but not on our lies. The Machine proceeds - but not to our goal. We only exist as the blood corpuscles that course through its arteries, and if it could work without us, it would let us die.

      foreshadows the ending

    11. Man"s feet are the measure for distance,

      Kunos realization of measurement Feet = Distance Hands = ownership Body=love, desire, strength

    12. unmechanical names

      Common way of speaking is "Unmechanical" old time-y.

    13. idea

      what does the term "ideas" really mean to this society, the context seems to be a false representation of our idea of an idea.

    14. By these days it was a demerit to be muscular.

      I found this aspect similar to a direction today's society is headed in. Athleticism is definitely not as stressed as in previous generations.

    15. not through the Machine."

      Kuno finally gets what he wants.

    16. honeycomb

      Callback to the original idea of the honeycomb.

    17. superstitious phrase

      Its interesting how God is seen as superstitious, but the Machine isnt, even though Vashti has her rituals too.

    18. Homelessness

      This capital "Homelessness" comes up here from Vashti as what seems like the ultimate way to describe death, with the lack of belonging in the world among a machine.

    19. "We have indeed advance, thanks to the Machine,

      It really seems cult-ish here.

    20. Doubtless the Committee was right.

      Its interesting that the narrator becomes a third-person limited presence here as it clearly shows her opinion on the Committee

    21. ideas to be got

      This symbol of ideas as the only meaning to life comes up again here.

    22. "It is contrary to the spirit of the age," she asserted. "Do you mean by that, contrary to the Machine?"

      She believes the spirit of the age to be the machine, but Kuno sees something more.

    23. had an idea

      The idea represents the creativity one can experience outside of the machine, as referenced multiple times in the story.

    24. but you were always busy or isolated

      Its a familiar feeling to a lot of us because even though we have access to instant communication, we still are always preoccupied.

    25. scraps of the untainted sky

      Note untainted; it was livable. Does this mean they were really controlled by the machine?

    26. "Never," said Kuno, "never. Humanity has learnt its lesson."

      But where is humanity if the machine stops?

    27. "Quicker," he gasped, "I am dying - but we touch, we talk, not through the Machine."

      I thought touching was disgusting? But in times of crisis, the rule is adverted.

    28. "The Machine stops."

      There is no infinity, there always must be the end. It is a law in our universe.

    29. But for the most part panic reigned, and men spent their strength praying to their Books, tangible proofs of the Machine"s omnipotence.

      Technology=God?

    30. She whirled around, praying to be saved from this, at any rate, kissing the Book, pressing button after button.

      So it is a religion!

    31. Man, the flower of all flesh, the noblest of all creatures visible, man who had once made god in his image, and had mirrored his strength on the constellations, beautiful naked man was dying, strangled in the garments that he had woven.

      Is the author trying to lay out the demise of man through technology or is the author trying to detail how fragile we are?

    32. "I have been threatened with Homelessness," said Kuno.

      Honestly? I still don't understand why he couldn't have just told her through the machine.

    33. A tube oozed towards her serpent fashion

      A certain inevitable death. It's almost like the snake from the story of Adam and Eve; these tubes were trusted and now they seem sinister.

    34. "Quicker," he gasped, "I am dying - but we touch, we talk, not through the Machine."

      Yay for progress.

    35. As for Vashti, her life went peacefully forward until the final disaster. She made her room dark and slept; she awoke and made the room light. She lectured and attended lectures.

      Business as usual.

    36. Here his story ended. Discussion of it was impossible, and Vashti turned to go.

      Example of the mechanical nature of the people in this time period.

    37. It is not the proper thing, it is not mechanical

      proper=mechanical

    38. uneasy slumber, she was disturbed by an unfamiliar glow, which was the dawn.

      Glimpse into the lives of these people.

    39. The man in front dropped his Book - no great matter, but it disquieted them all. In the rooms, if the Book was dropped, the floor raised it mechanically

      Almost shocked them all but the Machine soothed them.

    40. "Because, any moment, something tremendous many happen."

      Seemingly paranoid.

    41. Then she fed, talked to many friends, had a bath, talked again, and summoned her bed.

      Shows what the norm is in this time period.

    42. for it was rumoured that Euthanasia, too, was out of order, and that pain had reappeared among men.

      With Vashti's comment that she wanted to be euthanised because she gave a bad lecture, it appears that euthanasia is a common want in the people, even if for mundane events. It is therefore, highly possible that this 'pain' Vashti speaks of is something we may not recognise as pain; it may be something mundane that the people controlled by The Machine have been provided with their whole lives, and thus feel they cannot love without.

    43. while there was the Book there was security.

      Another example of the power that the Book and The Machine has over the people, even in a time of crisis that is directly associated with their leaders.

    44. "I have seen them, spoken to them, loved them. They are hiding in the midst and the ferns until our civilization stops. Today they are the Homeless - tomorrow ------ "

      Is Kuno's encounter with these 'other people' explicitly mentioned before this moment in the story?

    45. Wessex, when Ælfrid overthrew the Danes.

      What is the purpose of these references to Wessex (the Anglo Saxon Kingdom) in terms of forming the overall storyline?

    46. kissing the Book

      Even in a time of complete terror and upheaval (most likely caused by The Machine) Vashti still believes that the Book will provide her with comfort.

    47. The Mending Apparatus has treated us so well in the past that we all sympathize with it, and will wait patiently for its recovery. In its own good time it will resume its duties

      Another example of how blame is not placed upon The Machine when its failings become apparent

    48. "Some one of meddling with the Machine---" they began. "Some one is trying to make himself king, to reintroduce the personal element." "Punish that man with Homelessness."

      The people of this world have become so dependent on The Machine that they cannot accept the entity they accept as their leader may possibly be failing them.

    49. re-establishment of religion

      Religion is re-established, however not the in sense we understand today; religious affiliation with The Machine is what is emphasised to the people. Perhaps this was an attempt to make the people so dependent on The Machine they wouldn't realise the collapse of their world.

    50. "Beware of first- hand ideas!" exclaimed one of the most advanced of them. "First-hand ideas do not really exist.

      The Machine and those loyal to it shun the idea of independent thought throughout the story. Creating a collective group focussed around the same ideas as opposed to allowing for opinion and discussion leaves the people dependent on The Machine for guidance and support in their everyday lives.

    51. "Of course," said a famous lecturer - he of the French Revolution, who gilded each new decay with splendour - "of course we shall not press our complaints now

      This is super ironic because the French Revolution was caused by the aristocrats becoming spoiled with luxury and not acknowledging the warning signs of their downfall--just as the people in the Machine have become spoiled and refuse to change their ways.

    52. Wessex

      Wessex was an Anglo Saxon kingdom in the UK up until around the 10th century. While the name is used in some contexts today, the kingdom no longer exists. What was the purpose of bringing this name up again in what we assume to be a futuristic setting?

    53. We created the Machine, to do our will, but we cannot make it do our will now.

      Recently an AI was noted saying that it would keep a "human zoo"... I don't know about you but these two lines are freaking me out.

    54. trying to summon trains which could not be summoned

      no more metrocards :(

    55. Ever since her birth she had been surrounded by the steady hum

      just like now there is always something making noise. whether it's cars, air conditioning or even animals- there is never complete silence.

    56. He kissed her.

      this is probably the only time the kissed-maybe even touched

    57. air- ship

      this reminds me of Zepllins

    58. so did recapture the meaning of “Near” and “Far”. “Near” is a place to which I can get quickly on my feet, not a place to which the train or the air-ship will take me quickly. “Far” is a place to which I cannot get quickly on my feet;

      our understanding of near is by way way of car or plane and not by walking anymore

    59. "I found out a way of my own." The phrase conveyed no meaning to her, and he had to repeat it.

      anything that is against the machine is unthinkable to her

    60. tubular railway

      sounds like a bullet train

    61. The phrase still conveyed nothing. If Eternity was stopping it would of course be set going shortly.

      Linking the machine stopping to everything ended. Incomprehensible because no human can understand what life would be like without the machine.

    62. edification

      The improvement of one morally or intellectually.

    63. The Machine has been most merciful.

      Interesting insight on machines. Previously said that The Machine gives no mercy, but now saying the machine has been most merciful.

    64. How can I possibly explain this? It was naked, humanity seemed naked, and all these tubes and buttons and machineries neither came into the world with us, nor will they follow us out, nor do they matter supremely while we are here.

      Forster is showing the difference between man and machine here comparing life cycles of machines. Also shows humans insight on it in the story.

    65. "You know that we have lost the sense of space. We say “space is annihilated”, but we have annihilated not space, but the sense thereof.

      Very similar to how the internet makes everything seem so close despite those same things being far away.

    66. pneumatic stopper

      These are utilized for stopping chucks or moving parts. Often called stopper cylinders.

    67. atavism

      The tendency to revert to ancestral types.

    68. Machine can have no mercy

      Machines don't give in to people.

    69. They commune with humanity in dreams.

      Brings up an interesting difference between man and machine. The connection to earth would only be felt by humanity and not machine. Also, the fact that humanity can group with the earth is something uniquely human.

    70. But this is not for me, nor perhaps for my generation. I climbed with my respirator and my hygienic clothes and my dietetic tabloids! Better thus than not at all.

      Humanity is at such a stage that they cannot do anything without the help of man-made devices and technology. Technology is a lifeline.

    71. You are throwing civilization away."

      Mindset that civilization trumps humanity.

    72. in its twilight our strong will suffer euthanasia, that the Machine may progress, that the Machine may progress, that the Machine may progress eternally.

      Machine valued over human life. People in this society are acting in the opposite manner of human and animal nature--killing off the strongest and letting the weakest survive.

    73. he would never have been happy in that state of life to which the Machine had called him;

      In this society, humans are both weak-willed and physically weak

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    75. At this she grew angry. "I worship nothing!" she cried.

      First reaction is to defend herself after she hears Kuno has been threatnened with homelessness--conveys her priorities.

    76. irreligious

      Again, Kuno's language conveys that his mother views the Machine as a god.

    77. "You are beginning to worship the Machine," he said coldly.

      Machine as a god

    78. The victim is exposed to the air, which kills him.

      I was a bit confused about this...is it because their lungs/bodies are unaccustomed to the purer surface version or Oxygen (or the "real" Oxygen because I think they mentioned that the Oxygen underground is synthetic)?

    79. She was too well-bred to shake him by the hand.

      Opposite of what is polite/custom in our culture

    80. "Can you imagine anything more absurd?" she cried to a friend. "A man who was my son believes that the Machine is stopping. It would be impious if it was not mad."

      set up for irony

    81. "The Machine," they exclaimed, "feeds us and clothes us and houses us; through it we speak to one another, through it we see one another, in it we have our being. The Machine is the friend of ideas and the enemy of superstition: the Machine is omnipotent, eternal; blessed is the Machine."

      sounds a lot like how someone would pray to God

    82. French Revolution

      lots of talk about the French Revolution especially towards the end... why is this?

    83. People were crawling about

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    85. cinematophote

      I still don't understand what this is #difficultWords

    86. Your descendants will be even in a better position than you, for they will learn what you think I think, and yet another intermediate will be added to the chain. And in time" - his voice rose - "there will come a generation that had got beyond facts, beyond impressions, a generation absolutely colourless, a generation

      Foster predicts here that first hand accounts are worthless. I guess it sort of makes sense because of the belief that the first hand accounts can sometimes be bias but even then this gets a little far fetched...

    87. "Because I have seen her in the twilight - because she came to my help when I called - because she, too, was entangled by the worms, and, luckier than I, was killed by one of them piercing her throat."

      Okay is this supposed to be another human or what because later he talks about how he saw other humans and this part confused me...

    88. The Machine hums! Did you know that? Its hum penetrates our blood, and may even guide our thoughts.

      Reminded me of how the ac constantly hums in the background and then when it turns off it's total silence.

    89. The Machine hums! Did you know that? Its hum penetrates our blood, and may even guide our thoughts.

      Reminded me of how the ac constantly hums in the background and then when it turns off it's total silence.

    90. His was not a type that the Machine desired to hand on.

      The machine gets to decide what type of humans get to keep procreating instead of the humans deciding what kinds of machines should be created--role reversal

    91. I could not tell you such a thing through the Machine."

      This is still like how it's hard to tell someone very bad/ good news through the phone instead of in person. That nuance still hasn't changed in this world

    92. which exactly resembled her own.

      Similar to how houses are built based on one model in neighborhoods today.