210 Matching Annotations
  1. Oct 2016
  2. Jul 2016
  3. Jun 2016
    1. But we do not need change based on the demagogy, bigotry and anti-immigrant sentiment that punctuated so much of the Leave campaign’s rhetoric — and is central to Donald J. Trump’s message.

      Can one be taken without the other? I don't know the answer, but have the feeling they are more intertwined.

    1. In his remarks today, President Obama disgracefully refused to even say the words 'Radical Islam'.

      I still can't get over the immediate pivot to attacking Obama and Clinton. I realize that Trump is all about not being "politically correct," but to pass over the immediate tragedy and those affected by it in such a perfunctory way just seems to evidence is egomania.

  4. May 2016
  5. Apr 2016
    1. To be right across the water from the headquarters of the United Nations, where I represented our country many times.

      Speeches like this are often given in symbolic locations. Clinton is on her own turf--nearly a year later she would win the New York primary.

      But the United Nations reference and background here further symbolize the fact that Clinton has extensive political experience--primarily as secretary of state.

  6. Mar 2016
    1. As soon as a job becomes routine enough to describe in a spec sheet, it becomes vulnerable to outsourcing.

      Diction is able to be seen at the very beginning of the sentence when "as soon as" is first stated. That phrase alone is encouraging the reader to not only consider a new concept, but to actually come to terms with it being the truth. "routine enough" is also used to show that one does not need to be a professional nor do they need to be an expert to describe it in a spec sheet. Lastly, "become is used for the second time to emphasize the fact that it WILL happen. Afterwards, "vulnerable to outsourcing" is placed last and primarily chosen carefully to show that vulnerable in terms of loss is expressed with a negative connotation and outsourcing is being approached as something awful.

  7. Feb 2016
    1. It was the frontrunner for the Republican nomination for president showing off the demagogue's instinct for amplifying the angriest voice in the mob.

      This really hits at what's so scary about Trump (for me). It's the hatred that Trump seems to thrive off. He brings out the worst in people and amplifies it.

    1. Sarah Gross, a high school teacher and contributor to our blog, did recently using Hypothesis with her senior class as they read the Opinion piece “What Really Keeps Women Out of Tech.”

      Will this work? When this teacher asks her class to annotate online about an equity issue, the students are working in an environment where they might encounter public feedback and also influence public opinion.

  8. Jan 2016
    1. “He is from the private sector, not a politician, can I get a “Hallelujah!”

      It might seem odd to celebrate a candidate's lack of experience for a job--it would stand to reason that a experienced politician would be a good choice for the next president--Palin here plays on the rhetoric that Washington/the political system is "broken" and needs someone from outside it's corrupt influences to fix it.

    2. our great United States of America

      So America is great but also needs to be made great again? It mystifies me that the whole rhetoric around the lost greatness of the country doesn't get labeled anti-American.

    1. Those with money and power will gain greater control over the decisions that could send a young soldier to war, or allow another economic disaster, or roll back the equal rights and voting rights that generations of Americans have fought, even died, to secure.

      Here's one of those with money in search of greater control.

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    2. I see it in the American who served his time, and dreams of starting ove

      I am glad to see a reference to what I consider our largest national embarrassment. Our prison population and how many men of color we lock up.

    3. We have to end the practice of drawing our congressional districts so that politicians can pick their voters, and not the other way around

      This would take a constitutional amendment or grassroots efforts at the state level.

      What would also help would have been scientific methods of sampling for the census but a literal read of the constitution does not allow this....

    4. Fifty years of isolating Cuba had failed to promote democracy, setting us back in Latin America.  That’s why we restored diplomatic relations, opened the door to travel and commerce, and positioned ourselves to improve the lives of the Cuban people.  You want to consolidate our leadership and credibility in the hemisphere?  Recognize that the Cold War is over.  Lift the embargo.

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    5. 10,000 air strikes

      Recent statistics I read in the NYTimes. Number of ISIS fighters in 2014 = 30,000. Number of fighters killed in air strikes in 2015 = 25,000. Number of ISIS fighters at the end of 2015 = 30,000. New math? 30 - 25 = 30? (And only 6 non-combatants were killed the U.S. claims.)

    6. online tools that give an entrepreneur everything he or she needs to start a business

      Have you compared either our physical infrastructure (crumbling) or our digital (monopolized and non-existent)

    7. But after years of record corporate profits

      And capital gains taxed at a far lower rate than the income of lower and middle class.

      Nothing is going to happen on taxes until the next census. Gerrymandering after 20110 was just to deep a red cut.

      The only tax reform Paul Ryan will take is a txt cut.

    8. You’ll be pretty lonely, because you’ll be debating our military, most of America’s business leaders, the majority of the American people, almost the entire scientific community, and 200 nations around the world who agree it’s a problem and intend to solve it.

      melting glaciers

    9. Now, I’m guessing we won’t agree on health care anytime soon. 

      As Obama noted live in an aside, this is not an applause line, but it got a few claps from someone who I'm guessing does not agree with so -called Obama Care and is proud of it. LOL.

    10. get the education

      The idea that America has had the number one education system in the world is not true. I think our success has always been as being the place the best and brightest want to be.

      We are a country built on immigration not our educational system.

    11. Students and teachers! We're annotating the State of the Union live and in the days that follow here at this link. Join the conversation at any point!

      No pressure. Really, this is just a conversation. Respond as you might if you were watching the speech in class. You can ask questions, make comments, and reply to those of others. Feel free to get historical, political, even humorous--you can add GIFs!

    12. Today, technology doesn’t just replace jobs on the assembly line, but any job where work can be automated.

      Is this just another "expert" prediction like Christensen's bogus disruption theories.

    13. It’s how we reformed our health care system, and reinvented our energy sector; how we delivered more care and benefits to our troops and veterans, and how we secured the freedom in every state to marry the person we love.

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    14. from helping students learn to write computer code

      kidscancode and everyone needs to code mantra comes front and center. Not sure that is our strongest educational priority.

      but if Obama has been weak on anythign it has been education.

    15. So I hope we can work together this year on bipartisan priorities like criminal justice reform, and helping people who are battling prescription drug abuse

      Low bar problems (it is an election year) and lets not ignore the fact the big pharma has made millions on prescription drug abuse.

      Though look at the sentence structure in the paragraph. Sets the bar low and then dangles low hanging fruit with a call to action.

    1. unfolded with a new generation fighting two long and costly wars; that saw a vicious recession spread across our nation and the world.  It has been, and still is, a hard time for many.

      Is this an example of 44 passing the blame back on to 4 or simply a statement of reality?

      It is quite the negative connotation to start

    1. the teacher’s role here is as co-learner in the reading process, observing and coaching student thinking on the side.

      This is crucial ... and Terry is talking right now about videocasting annotation activity to show the work you are doing (but we do lose real authenticity? Are we annotation for the camera?)

    2. annotating explicitly to make connections between what they’re reading and the rest of the world can help them see why particular texts matter and are still relevant today

      I think this is a great point. Readers/annotators can add modern relevance to classic texts.

    3. a way of working many find much more engaging than individual analog annotation

      It is interesting to start with comments and then go to text, different from reading the text and when there is an annotation decide to read. I hate to say, but could be used kind of like cliffnotes?

    4. audio recordings on 12 months of reading

      Is this for him? Or for the world? You wonder about intention with annotation, and the value of it. Sometimes, I notice annotations get lost in the mix, and I wonder the real value of doing this: is it for me, to better understand? Or to gather with you, to share understanding? Both?

    5. to not just passively read but to fully enter a text, to collaborate with it, to mingle with an author on some kind of primary textual plane.

      I'm wondering how this mingling with the author changes when it is public annotation. Is it a less intimate reading?

    6. variety of tools

      I like Hypothesis and the others here, but none feel like a natural fit for me in terms of conversation. I like this threaded element, but it still feels as if some of the bars for entry and participation leaves some folks out (unintentionally). I think we are making strides, though.

    7. digital version of a traditional annotated bibliography from here, page-level annotations

      I've found this to be a powerful practice with my students. As I see their bibliographies develop in real time, I see all sorts of opportunities to probe, prod, assist, or otherwise intervene to support the research process.

    8. often requires background knowledge students don’t have

      I've so often found background knowledge to be the major stumbling block for my middle and high school students. I'm intrigued by the potential for a group of students to use collaborative annotation to "crowd source" their background knowledge.

    9. maps

      I love the annotation of maps, and the various tools that bring life to mapping ideas ... including the multimedia aspects of annotation .... showing us dark corners of the map and forgotten corners of the world ...

    10. it can be a technique to slow readers down, deepen their engagement and aid in comprehension and analysis

      This is so important, as a rationale for teachers to consider online annotation ...

    11. a comment on Facebook or YouTube.

      So interesting to think of Twitter, etc. as annotation platforms. Twitter just announced they are going beyond 140 characters and adding the ability to screenshot text.

    1. President Obama will deliver his final State of the Union address on January 12, 2016 at 9PM ET. Watch as he reflects on the road we've traveled in the last seven years.

      Join teachers and students from around the country to annotate Obama's last State of the Union address on Tuesday at 9PM. Join Jeremy Dean, as he leads an "annotatathon" -- one of many we hope to see during this electoral season, as part of the Letters to the Next President project, co-sponsored by the NWP and WQED. Keep your eye out for the link to the transcript of the speech then join us on hypothes.is to annotate it live -- or later this week. Have your students join us live or later in the week as well!

    1. Will we accept an economy where only a few of us do spectacularly well?

      A rhetorical question to which the answer is clearly "No!" But phrasing it as a question forces the audience to momentarily consider the truth of the statement and thus more emphatically agree with Obama's alternative statement that follows.

    1. National Constitution Center

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      The National Constitution Center in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania is across the street from Independence Hall where both the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence were signed.

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      The choice of location is obviously deeply symbolic, linking Obama’s presidential bid with the founding moment of US history. A black president would go a long way to “finishing” the “improbable experiment” in equality begun by the Constitutional Convention in 1787.