Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
Lai and Doe address the integration of spatial information with temporal patterning and genes that specify cell fate. They identify the Forkhead transcription factor Fd4 as a lineage-restricted cell fate regulator that bridges transient spatial transcription factors to terminal selector genes in the developing Drosophila ventral nerve cord. The experimental evidence convincingly demonstrates that Fd4 is both necessary for late-born NB7-1 neurons, but also sufficient to transform other neural stem cell lineages toward the NB7-1 identity. This work addresses an important question that will be of interest to developmental neurobiologists: How cell identities defined by initial transient developmental cues can be maintained in the progeny cells, even if the molecular mechanism remains to be investigated. In addition, the study proposes a broader concept of lineage identity genes that could be utilized in other lineages and regions in the Drosophila nervous system and in other species.
Strengths:
While the spatial factors patterning the neuroepithelium to define the neuroblast lineages in the Drosophila ventral nerve cord are known, these factors are sometimes absent or not required during neurogenesis. In the current work, Lai and Doe identified Fd4 in the NB7-1 lineage that bridges this gap and explains how NB7-1 neurons are specified after Engrailed (En) and Vnd cease their expression. They show that Fd4 is transiently co-expressed with En and Vnd and are present in all nascent NB7-1 progenies. They further demonstrate that Fd4 is required for later-born NB7-1 progenies and sufficient for the induction of NB7-1 markers (Eve and Dbx) while repressing markers of other lineages when force-expressed in neural progenitors, e.g. in the NB5-6 lineage and in the NB7-3 lineage. They also demonstrate that, when Fd4 is ectopically expressed in NB7-3 and NB5-6 lineages, this leads to the ectopic generation of dorsal muscle-innervating neurons. The inclusion of functional validation using axon projections demonstrates that the transformed neurons acquire appropriate NB7-1 characteristics beyond just molecular markers. Quantitative analyses are thorough and well-presented for most experiments.
Original weaknesses and potential extensions:
(1) While Fd4 is required and sufficient for several later-born NB7-1 progeny features, a comparison between early-born (Hb/Eve) and later-born (Run/Eve) appears missing for pan-progenitor gain of Fd4 (with sca-Gal4; Figure 4) and for the NB7-3 lineage (Figure 6). Having a quantification for both could make it clearer whether Fd4 preferentially induces later-born neurons or is sufficient for NB7-1 features without temporal restriction.
(2) Fd4 and Fd5 are shown to be partially redundant, as Fd4 loss of function alone does not alter the number of Eve+ and Dbx+ neurons. This information is critical and should be included in Figure 3.
(3) Several observations suggest that lineage identity maintenance involves both Fd4-dependent and Fd4-independent mechanisms. In particular, the fact that fd4-Gal4 reporter remains active in fd4/fd5 mutants even after Vnd and En disappear indicates that Fd4's own expression, a key feature of NB7-1 identity, is maintained independently of Fd4 protein. This raises questions about what proportion of lineage identity features require Fd4 versus other maintenance mechanisms, which deserves discussion.
(4) Similarly, while gain of Fd4 induces NB7-1 lineage markers and dorsal muscle innervation in NB5-6 and NB7-3 lineages, drivers for the two lineages remain active despite the loss of molecular markers, indicating some regulatory elements retain activity consistent with their original lineage identity. It is therefore important to understand the degree of functional conversion in the gain-of-function experiments. Sparse labeling of Fd4 overexpressing NB5-6 and NB7-3 progenies, as what was done in Seroka and Doe (2019) would be an option.
(5) The less-penetrant induction of Dbx+ neurons in NB5-6 with Fd4-overexpression is interesting. It might be worth discussing whether it is a Fd4 feature or a NB5-6 feature by examining Dbx+ neuron number in NB7-3 with Fd4-overexpression.
(6) It is logical to hypothesize that spatial factors specify early-born neurons directly so only late-born neurons require Fd4, but it was not tested. The model would be strengthened by examining whether Fd4-Gal4-driven Vnd rescues the generation of later-born neurons in fd4/fd5 mutants.
(7) It is mentioned that Fd5 is not sufficient for the NB7-1 lineage identity. The observation is intriguing in how similar regulators serve distinct roles, but the data are not shown. The analysis in Figure 4 should be performed for Fd5 as supplemental information.
Comments on latest version:
We appreciate the thorough revision and the detailed point-by-point responses. Overall, the updated manuscript has addressed the main issues we raised previously, especially around the potential potency differences of Fd4 along the birth order axis and possible redundancy with Vnd in early-born neurons. The additional data are convincing and presented clearly, with figures and supplements that are informative and appropriately labeled.
We noticed one remaining point that could be considered, the necessary-and-sufficient phrasing for Fd4 regulating NB7-1 fates. Given the possible redundancy among Fd4/5 and Vnd and the fact that early-born outputs (U1-3, Figure 3F) are not dependent on Fd4/5, we suggest revising this claim and either (a) limit the claim to necessary and sufficient for late-born NB7-1 progeny identity, or (b) frame Fd4 as sufficient for NB7-1 program induction while being required but redundant (e.g., with Vnd) for early-born features, rather than universally necessary/sufficient across the entire lineage output.
Regarding the lack of phenotype of single Fd4/5 mutants and Fd5 gain of function, we still encourage the authors to include the fd4 and fd5 single-mutant negative results as a brief supplemental item (e.g., a representative panel plus a simple quantification on Eve and Dbx would be sufficient). This would strengthen transparency, remove "data not shown" statements that are not necessary when these data can be presented as supplementary data with no space limitation, and make it easier for readers to evaluate redundancy claims.
Overall, we view the work as substantially complete and appreciate its contribution and conceptual framing. We have updated our public review to reflect the current version and the authors' efforts to address the major points raised in the prior round.