Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In this manuscript, Hua et al. proposed SLC7A11, a protein facilitating cellular cystine uptake, as a potential target for the treatment of trastuzumab-resistant HER2-positive breast cancer. If this claim holds true, the finding would be of significance and might be translated to clinical practice. Nevertheless, this reviewer finds that the conclusion was poorly supported by the data.

Notably, most of the data (Figures 2-6) were based on two cell lines - JIMT1 as a representative of trastuzumab-resistant cell line, and SKBR3 as a representative of trastuzumab sensitive cell line. As such, these findings could be cell-line specific while irrelevant to trastuzumab sensitivity at all. Furthermore, the authors claimed ferroptosis simply based on lipid peroxidation (Figure 3). Cell viability was not determined, and the rescuing effects of ferroptosis inhibitors were missing. The xenograft experiments were also suspicious (Figure 4). The description of how cysteine starvation was performed on xenograft tumors was lacking, and the compound (i.e., erastin) used by the authors is not suitable for in vivo experiments due to low solubility and low metabolic stability. Finally, it is confusing why the authors focused on epigenetic regulations (Figures 5 & 6), without measuring major transcription factors (e.g., NRF2, ATF4) which are known to regulate SLC7A11.

To sum up, this reviewer finds that the most valuable data in this manuscript is perhaps Figure 1, which provides unbiased information concerning the metabolic patterns in trastuzumab-sensitive and primary resistant HER2-positive breast cancer patients.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper investigates the mode of action of GPR55, a relatively understudied type of cannabinoid receptor, in presynaptic terminals of Purkinje cells. The authors use demanding techniques of patch clamp recording of the terminals, sometimes coupled with another recording of the postsynaptic cell. They find a lower release probability of synaptic vesicles after activation of GPR55 receptors, while presynaptic voltage-dependent calcium currents are unaffected. They propose that the size of a specific pool of synaptic vesicles supplying release sites is decreased upon activation of GPR55 receptors.

Strengths:

The paper uses cutting-edge techniques to shed light on a little-studied, potentially important type of cannabinoid receptor. The results are clearly presented, and the conclusions are for the most part sound.

Weaknesses:

The nature of the vesicular pool that is modified following activation of GPR55 is not definitively characterized.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors describe the development and implementation of hamFISH, a sensitive multiplexed ISH method. They leverage a pre-existing scRNA-seq dataset for the MeA to design 32 probes that combinatorically represent MeA neuronal populations - ~80% of MeA neurons express three of these markers. Using these markers to assess the spatial organization of the MeA, the authors identify a novel population of Ndnf+ projection neurons and characterize their connectivity with anterograde and retrograde labeling. They additionally combine hamFISH with CTB labeling of three principal MeA projection sites to show that 75% of MeA neurons have only a single projection target. Finally, they engage adult male mice in encounters with other adult males (aggression), females (mating), and pups (infanticide), followed by hamFISH and c-fos labeling to relate cell identity to behavior. Their overall conclusion is that hamFISH-defined cell types are broadly active to multiple sensory stimuli. However, the data presented are not sufficient to conclude that no selectivity exists within the MeA. A weakness of the study is that the selected hamFISH genes contain only Lhx6 as a lineage-marking transcription factor. Instead, the authors predominately use neuropeptides as markers. Genes such as Tac1, Cartpt, Adcyap1, Calb1, and Gal are expressed throughout the MeA, and many other brain regions; they are not restricted to a single transcriptomic cell type and they do not denote any developmental origins. By design, the panel has low cell type specificity as all MeA neurons express at least three of the genes. Therefore, the authors' conclusions may not hold with a more stringent classification of cell type or cell identity.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Using the well-studied oxalate-microbiome-host system, the authors propose a novel conceptual and experimental framework for developing targeted bacteriotherapies using a three-phase pre-clinical workflow. The third phase is based on a 'complex system theoretical approach' in which multi-omics technologies are combined in independent in vivo and in vitro models to successfully identify the most pertinent variables that influence specific phenotypes in diet-host-microbe systems. The innovation relies on the third phase since phase I and phase II are the dominant approaches everyone in the microbiome field uses.

Strengths:

The authors used a multidisciplinary approach which included:

(1) fecal transplant of two distinct microbial communities into Swiss-Webster mice (SWM) to characterize the host response (hepatic response-transcriptomics) and microbial activity (untargeted metabolomics of the stool samples) to different oxalate concentrations;

(2) longitudinal analysis of the N. albigulia gut microbiome composition in response to varying concentrations of oxalate by shotgun metagenomics, with deep bioinformatic analyses of the genomes assembled; and

(3) development of synthetic microbial communities around oxalate metabolisms and evaluation of these communities' activity in oxalate degradation in vivo.

Weaknesses:

However, I have concerns about the frame the authors tried to provide for a 'complex system theoretical approach' and how the data are interpreted within this frame. Several of the conclusions the authors provide do not seem to have sufficient data to support them.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Bisson et al describes the role GATA6 to regulate cardiac progenitor cell (CPC) specification and cardiomyocyte (CM) generation using human embryonic stem cells (hESCs). The authors found that GATA6 loss-of-function hESC exhibit early defects in mesendoderm and lateral mesoderm patterning stages. Using RNA-seq and CUT&RUN assays the genes of the Wnt and BMP programs were found to be affected by the loss of GATA6 expression. Modulating Wnt and BMP during early cardiac differentiation can partially rescue CPC and CM defects in GATA6 hetero- and homozygous mutant hESCs.

Strengths:

The studies performed were rigorous and the rationale for the experimental designed were logical. The results obtained were clear and supports the conclusions that the authors made regarding the role of GATA6 on Wnt and BMP pathway gene expression.

Weaknesses:

Given the wealth of studies that have been performed in this research area previously, the amount of new information provided in this study is relatively modest. Nevertheless, the results and quite clear and should make a strong contribution to the field.

Comments on revised version:

The authors have addressed the prior request to assess genes expression representing each stage of development/differentiation from mesoderm to cardiac progenitor to cardiomyocytes and confirmed that the differentiation defect lies at the cardiac progenitor and cardiomyocyte stages and not in mesodermal differentiation. This work has significantly improved the robustness of the study.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this article, the authors study the function of TEDC1 and TEDC2, two proteins previously reported to interact with TUBD1 and TUBE1. Previous work by the same group had shown that TUBD1 and TUBE1 are required for centriole assembly and that human cells lacking these proteins form abnormal centrioles that only have singlet microtubules that disintegrate in mitosis. In this new work, the authors demonstrate that TEDC1 and TEDC2 depletion results in the same phenotype with abnormal centrioles that also disintegrate into mitosis. In addition, they were able to localize these proteins to the proximal end of the centriole, a result not previously achieved with TUBD1 and TUBE1, providing a better understanding of where and when the complex is involved in centriole growth.

Strengths:

The results are very convincing, particularly the phenotype, which is the same as previously observed for TUBD1 and TUBE1. The U-ExM localization is also convincing: despite a signal that's not very homogeneous, it's clear that the complex is in the proximal region of the centriole and procentriole. The phenotype observed in U-ExM on the elongation of the cartwheel is also spectacular and opens the question of the regulation of the size of this structure. The authors also report convincing results on direct interactions between TUBD1, TUBE1, TEDC1, and TEDC2, and an intriguing structural prediction suggesting that TEDC1 and TEDC2 form a heterodimer that interacts with the TUBD1- TUBE1 heterodimer.

Comments on revisions:

I would like to thank the authors for their work and for thoroughly addressing most of my questions. I extend my congratulations to the authors for this excellent and impactful article.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, the authors identified and characterized a regulatory mechanism based on transcriptional anti-termination that connects the two gene clusters, capsid and run-off replication (ROR) locus, of the bipartite Bartonella gene transfer agent (GTA). Among genes essential for GTA functionality identified in a previous transposon sequencing project, they found a potential antiterminatior of phage origin within the ROR locus. They employed fluorescence reporter and gene transfer assays of overexpression and knockout strains in combination with ChiPSeq and promoter-fusions to convincingly show that this protein indeed acts as an antiterminator counteracting attenuation of the capsid gene cluster expression.

Impact on the field:

The results provide valuable insights into the evolution of the chimeric BaGTA, a unique example of phage co-domestication by bacteria. A similar system found in the other broadly studied Rhodobacterales/Caulobacterales GTA family suggests that antitermination could be a general mechanism for GTA control.

Strengths:

Results of the selected and carefully designed experiments support the main conclusions.

Weaknesses:

It remains open why overexpression of the antiterminator does not increase the gene transfer frequency.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In the present manuscript, Huang et.al. revealed the significant roles of the DNA methylome in regulating virulence and metabolism within Pseudomonas syringae, with a particular focus on the HsdMSR system in this model strain. The authors used SMRT-seq to profile the DNA methylation patterns (6mA, 5mC, and 4mC) in three P. syringae strains (Psph, Pss, and Psa) and displayed the conservation among them. They further identified the type I restriction-modification system (HsdMSR) in P. syringae, including its specific motif sequence. The HsdMAR participated in the process of metabolism and virulence (T3SS & Biofilm formation), as demonstrated through RNA-seq analyses. Additionally, the authors revealed the mechanisms of the transcriptional regulation by 6mA. Strictly from the point of view of the interest of the question and the work carried out, this is a worthy and timely study that uses third-generation sequencing technology to characterize the DNA methylation in P. syringae. The experimental approaches were solid, and the results obtained were interesting and provided new information on how epigenetics influences the transcription in P. syringae. The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have successfully addressed all the comments from the reviewers in their revised manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Hong et al. used a model they previously developed to study the impact of plasmid transfer on microbial multispecies communities. They investigated the effect of plasmid transfer on the existence of alternative stable states in a community. The model most closely resembles plasmid conjugation, where the transferred genes confer independent growth-related fitness effects and different plasmids do not affect each other's transfer or growth effects. For this process, the authors find that increasing the rate of plasmid transfer leads to an increasing number of stable states, as long as the model includes a constant death/dilution term.

This is an interesting and important topic, and I welcome the authors' efforts to explore these topics with mathematical modeling. The addition of sensitivity analyses also strengthens the usefulness for quantitative microbial ecologists. However, the additional sections have made the main text harder to read. Between the effect of the dilution rate, the increase in subpopulations with HGT, and the modulation of interspecies competition, the reviewers have suggested a number of factors that may explain the way plasmid transfer modulates multistability. I think it would be helpful if the authors could summarize some of these effects/interactions between different parameters in their model more. I personally continue to find the model very unintuitive, especially in the way it averages over subpopulations carrying more than one foreign plasmid. Additional sentences that give the reader intuition for the sensitivity analyses and how these interplay with the results would be good.

Specific points

(1) The model makes strong assumptions about the biology of HGT, that could be spelled out even more. Since the model is primarily applicable to HGT driven by the exchange of plasmids, I believe the abstract (and perhaps even the title of the paper) should be updated to reflect that.

(2) I am not surprised that a mechanism that creates diversity will lead to more alternative stable states. Specifically, the null model for the absence of HGT is to set gamma to zero, resulting in pij=0 for all subpopulations (line 454). This means that a model with N^2 classes is effectively reduced to N classes. It seems intuitive that an LV-model with many more species would also allow for more alternative stable states. For a fair comparison one would really want to initialize these subpopulations in the model (with the same growth rates - e.g. mu1(1+lambda2)) but without gene mobility.<br /> [Update:] It is good that it seems that initializing pij with non-zero abundance did not seem to affect the conclusion that higher amounts of HGT increases multi stability. However, rather than listing it as one control for a specific condition, I would argue that this is the appropriate null model across the board (where HGT rate is varied from 0 to a high value), including figures S9 and S10.

(3) The possibility that the same cell may be counted in different pij runs counter to all intuition that researchers coming from a background of compartmental /epidemiological modeling may have. The associated assumption that plasmids do not affect each other's dynamics or (growth/interaction) effects at all is also a very strong assumption. This should be signaled much earlier in the manuscript, possibly already in line 106 when the model is introduced.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In this study the authors developed a framework to investigate the export rates of Influenza viral RNAs translocating from the nucleus to the cytoplasm. This model suggests that the influenza virus may control gene expression at the RNA export level, namely, the retention of certain transcripts in the nucleus for longer times, allows the generation of other viral encoded proteins that are exported regularly, and only later on do certain mRNAs get exported. These encode proteins that alert the cell to the presence of viral molecules, hence keeping their emergence to very end, might help the virus to avoid detection as late as possible in the infection cycle.

The study is of limited scope. The notion that some mRNAs are retained in the nucleus after transcription is concluded early on from the FISH data. The model does not contribute much to the understanding and is mostly confirming the FISH data. The export rate is an ambiguous number and this part is not elaborated upon. One is left with more questions since no mechanistic knowledge emerges, and no additional experimentation is attempted to try drive to a deeper understanding.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have implemented the comments that required textual rewriting, which does make the paper clearer. On the experimental side, very little was done. It is fine to answer that the suggested experiments are not relevant or feasible for one reason or another, but one would expect to see some effort in providing other experimental sets to address key comments, and not only to modify a sentence in the text. So in my mind this round of revision feels more like some kind of intellectual discussion, which is fine, but I would have expected more, particularly after so much time has passed. I am still not satisfied with the way the analysis is presented in Fig. 2B, and writing a line about what is not analyzed in the legend, does not seem clear enough.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Giménez-Orenga carried out this study to assess whether human endogenous retroviruses (HERVs) could be used to improve the diagnosis of Myalgic Encephalomyelitis/Chronic Fatigue Syndrome (ME/CFS) and Fibromyalgia (FM). To this end, they used the HERV-V3 array developed previously, to characterize the genome-wide changes in the expression of HERVs in patients suffering from ME/CFS, FM, or both, compared to controls. In turn, they present a useful repertoire of HERVs that might characterize ME/CFS and FM. For the most part, the paper is written in a manner that allows a natural understanding of the workflow and analyses carried out, making it compelling. The figures and additional tables present solid support for the findings. However, some statements made by the authors seem incomplete and would benefit from a more thorough literature review. Overall, this work will be of interest to the medical community seeking in better understanding of the co-occurrence of these pathologies, hinting at a novel angle by integrating HERVs, which are often overlooked, into their assessment.

Strengths:

(1) The work is well-presented, allowing the reader to understand the overall workflow and how the specific aims contribute to filling the knowledge gap in the field.

(2) The analyses carried out to understand the potential impact on gene expression mediated by HERVs are in line with previous works, making it solid and robust in the context of this study.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors claim to obtain genome-wide HERV expression profiles. However, the array used was developed using hg19, while the genomic analysis of this work are carried out using a liftover to hg38. It would improve the statement and findings to include a comparison of the differences in HERVs available in hg38, and how this could impact the "genome-wide" findings.

(2) The authors in some points are not thorough with the cited literature. Two examples are:<br /> a) Lines 396-397 the authors say "the MLT1, usually found enriched near DE genes (Bogdan et al., 2020)". I checked the work by Bogdan, and they studied bacterial infection. A single work in a specific topic is not sufficient to support the statement that MLT1 is "usually" in close vicinity to differentially expressed genes. More works are needed to support this.<br /> b) After the previous statement, the authors go on to mention "contributing to the coding of conserved lncRNAs (Ramsay et al., 2017)". First, lnc = long non-coding, so this doesn't make sense. Second, in the work by Ramsay they mention "that contributed a significant amount of sequence to primate lncRNAs whose expression was conserved", which is different from what the authors in this study are trying to convey. Again, additional work and a rephrasing might help to support this idea.

(3) When presenting the clusters, the authors overlook the fact that cluster 4 is clearly control-specific, and fail to discuss what this means. Could this subset of HERV be used as bona fide markers of healthy individuals in the context of these diseases? Are they associated with DE genes? What could be the impact of such associations?

Appraisals on aims:

The authors set specific questions and presented the results to successfully answer them. The evidence is solid, with some weaknesses discussed above that will methodologically strengthen the work.

Likely impact of work on the field:

This work will be of interest to the medical community looking for novel ways to improve clinical diagnosis. Although future works with a greater population size, and more robust techniques such as RNA-Seq, are needed, this is the first step in presenting a novel way to distinguish these pathologies.

It would be of great benefit to the community to provide a table/spreadsheet indicating the specific genomic locations of the HERVs specific to each condition. This will allow proper provenance for future researchers interested in expanding on this knowledge, as these genomic coordinates will be independent of the technique used (as was the array used here).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors have examined the effects of two parameters that could improve their clade forecasting predictions for A(H3N2) seasonal influenza viruses based solely on analysis of haemagglutinin gene sequences deposited on the GISAID Epiflu database. Sequences were analysed from viruses collected between April 1, 2005 and October 1, 2019. The parameters they investigated were various lag periods (0, 1, 3 months) for sequences to be deposited in GISAID from the time the viruses were sequenced. The second parameter was the time the forecast was accurate over projecting forward (for 3,6,9,12 months). Their conclusion (not surprisingly) was that "the single most valuable intervention we could make to improve forecast accuracy would be to reduce the forecast horizon to 6 months or less through more rapid vaccine development". This is not practical using conventional influenza vaccine production and regulatory procedures. Nevertheless, this study does identify some practical steps that could improve the accuracy and utility of forecasting such as a few suggested modifications by the authors such as "..... changing the start and end times of our long-term forecasts. We could change our forecasting target from the middle of the next season to the beginning of the season, reducing the forecast horizon from 12 to 9 months.'

Strengths:

The authors are very familiar with the type of forecasting tools used in this analysis (LBI and mutational load models) and the processes used currently for influenza vaccine virus selection by the WHO committees having participated in a number of WHO Influenza Vaccine Consultation meetings for both the Southern and Northern Hemispheres.

Weaknesses:

The conclusion of limiting the forecasting to 6 months would only be achievable from the current influenza vaccine production platforms with mRNA. However, there are no currently approved mRNA influenza vaccines, and mRNA influenza vaccines have also yet to demonstrate their real-world efficacy, longevity, and cost-effectiveness and therefore are only a potential platform for a future influenza vaccine. Hence other avenues to improve the forecasting should be investigated.

While it is inevitable that more influenza HA sequences will become available over time a better understanding of where new influenza variants emerge would enable a higher weighting to be used for those countries rather than giving an equal weighting to all HA sequences.

Also, other groups are considering neuraminidase sequences and how these contribute to the emergence of new or potentially predominant clades.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In short, this paper uses a previously published method, ReplicaDock to improve predictions from AlphaFold-multimer. The method generated about 25% more acceptable predictions than AFm, but more important is improving an Antibody-antigen set, where more than 50% of the models become improved.

When looking at the results in more detail, it is clear that for the models where the AFm models are good, the improvement is modest (or not at all). See, for instance, the blue dots in Fig 6. However, in the cases where AFm fails, the improvement is substantial (red dots in Fig 6), but no models reach a very high accuracy (Fnat ~0.5 compared to 0.8 for the good AFm models). So the paper could be summarized by claiming, "We apply ReplicaDock when AFm fails", instead of trying to sell the paper as an utterly novel pipeline. I must also say that I am surprised by the excellent performance of ReplicaDock - it seems to be a significant step ahead of other (not AlphaFold) docking methods, and from reading the original paper, that was unclear. Having a better benchmark of it alone (without AFm) would be very interesting.

These results also highlight several questions I try to describe in the weakness section below. In short, they boil down to the fact that the authors must show how good/bad ReplicaDock is at all targets (not only the ones where AFm fails. In addition, I have several more technical comments.

Strengths:

Impressive increase in performance on AB-AG set (although a small set and no proteins ).

Weaknesses:

The presentation is a bit hard to follow. The authors mix several measures (Fnat, iRMS, RMSDbound, etc). In addition, it is not always clear what is shown. For instance, in Fig 1, is the RMSD calculated for a single chain or the entire protein? I would suggest that the author replace all these measures with two: TM-score when evaluating the quality of a single chain and DockQ when evaluating the results for docking. This would provide a clearer picture of the performance. This applies to most figures and tables. For instance, Fig 9 could be shown as a distribution of DockQ scores.

The improvements on the models where AFm is good are minimal (if at all), and it is unclear how global docking would perform on these targets, nor exactly why the plDDT<0.85 cutoff was chosen. To better understand the performance of ReplicaDock, the authors should therefore (i) run global and local docking on all targets and report the results, (ii) report the results if AlphaFold (not multimer) models of the chains were used as input to ReplicaDock (I would assume it is similar). These models can be downloaded from AlphaFoldDB.

Further, it would be interesting to see if ReplicaDock could be combined with AFsample (or any other model to generate structural diversity) to improve performance further.

The estimates of computing costs for the AFsample are incorrect (check what is presented in their paper). What are the computational costs for RepliaDock global docking?

It is unclear strictly what sequences were used as input to the modelling. The authors should use full-length UniProt sequences if that were not done.

The antibody-antigen dataset is small. It could easily be expanded to thousands of proteins. It would be interesting to know the performance of ReplicaDock on a more extensive set of Antibodies and nanobodies.

Using pLDDT on the interface region to identify good/bas models is likely suboptimal. It was acceptable (as a part of the score) for AlphaFold-2.0 (monomer), but AFm behaves differently. Here, AFm provides a direct score to evaluate the quality of the interaction (ipTM or Ranking Confidence). The authors should use these to separate good/bad models (for global/local docking), or at least show that these scores are less good than the one they used.

Comments on revisions:

The inclusion of the DockQ improved the paper. No further comments.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, the authors performed a CRISPR knockout screen in the presence of floxuridine, a chemotherapeutic agent that incorporates uracil and fluoro-uracil into DNA, and identified unexpected factors, such as the RNA m6A methyltransferase METTL3, as required to overcome floxuridine-driven cytotoxicity in mammalian cells. Interestingly, the observed N6-methyladenosine was embedded in DNA, which has been reported as DNA 6mA in mammalian genomes and is currently confirmed with mass spectrometry in this model. Therefore, this work consolidated the functional role of mammalian genomic DNA 6mA, and supported with solid evidence to uncover the METTL3-6mA-UNG2 axis in response to DNA base damage.

Strengths:

In this work, the authors took an unbiased, genome-wide CRISPR approach to identify novel factors involved in uracil repair with potential clinical interest.

The authors designed elegant experiments to confirm the METTL3 works through genomic DNA, adding the methylation into DNA (6mA) but not the RNA (m6A), in this base damage repair context. The authors employ different enzymes, such as RNase A, RNase H, DNase, and liquid chromatography coupled to tandem mass spectrometry to validate that METTL3 deposits 6mA in DNA in response to agents that increase genomic uracil.

They also have the Mettl3-KO and the METTL3 inhibition results to support their conclusion.

Weaknesses:

Although this study demonstrates that METTL3-dependent 6mA deposition in DNA is functionally relevant to DNA damage repair in mammalian cells, there are still several concerns and issues that need to be improved to strengthen this research.

First, in the whole paper, the authors never claim or mention the mammalian cell lines contamination testing result, which is the fundamental assay that has to be done for the mammalian cell lines DNA 6mA study.

Second, in the whole work, the authors have not supplied any genomic sequencing data to support their conclusions. Although the sequencing of DNA 6mA in mammalian models is challenging, recent breakthroughs in sequencing techniques, such as DR-Seq or NT/NAME-seq, have lowered the bar and improved a lot in the 6mA sequencing assay. Therefore, the authors should consider employing the sequencing methods to further confirm the functional role of 6mA in base repair.

Third, the authors used the METTL3 inhibitor and Mettl3-KO to validate the METTL3-6mA-UNG2 functional roles. However, the catalytic mutant and rescue of Mettl3 may be the further experiments to confirm the conclusion.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper presents an interesting and useful analysis of grid cell heterogeneity, showing that the experimentally observed heterogeneity of spacing and orientation within a grid cell module can allow more accurate decoding of location from a single module.

Strengths:

(1) I found the statistical analysis of the grid cell variability to be very systematic and convincing. I also found the evidence for enhanced decoding of location based on between cell variability within a module to be convincing and important, supporting their conclusions.

(2) Theoreticians have developed models that focus on the use of grid cells that are highly regular in their parameters, and usually vary only in the spatial phase of cells within modules and the spacing and orientation between modules. This focus on consistency is partly to obtain the generalization of the grid cell code to a broad range of previously unvisited locations. In contrast, most experimentalists working with grid cells know that many if not most grid cells show high variability of firing fields, as demonstrated in the figures in experimental papers. The authors of this current paper have highlighted this discrepancy, and shown that the variability shown in the data could actually enhance decoding of location.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In this paper, Hotinger et. al. propose an improved barcoded library system, called STAMPR, to study Salmonella population dynamics during infection. Using this system, the authors demonstrate significant diversity in the colonization of different Salmonella clones (defined by the presence of different barcodes) not only across different organs (liver, spleen, adipose tissues, pancreas and gall bladder) but also within different compartments of the same gastrointestinal tissue. Additionally, this system revealed that microbiota competition is the major bottleneck in Salmonella intestinal colonization, which can be mitigated by streptomycin treatment. However, this has been demonstrated previously in numerous publications. They also show that there was minimal sharing between populations found in the intestine and those in the other organs. Upon IV and IP infection to bypass the intestinal bottleneck, they were able to demonstrate, using this library, that Salmonella can renter the intestine through two possible routes. One route is essentially the reverse path used to escape the gut, leading to a diverse intestinal population; while the other, through the bile, typically results in a clonal population.

Comments on latest version:

The authors have addressed my concerns.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

RNA guanine-rich G-quadruplexes (rG4s) are non-canonical higher order nucleic acid structures that can form under physiological conditions. Interestingly, cellular stress is positively correlated with rG4 induction.

In this study, the authors examined human hippocampal postmortem tissue for the formation ofrG4s in aging and Alzheimer Disease (AD). rG4 immunostaining strongly increased in the hippocampus with both age and with AD severity. 21 cases were used in this study (age range 30-92).

This immunostaining co-localized with hyper-phosphorylated tau immunostaining in neurons. The BG4 staining levels were also impacted by APOE status. rG4 structure was previously found to drive tau aggregation. Based on these observations, the authors propose a model of neurodegeneration in which chronic rG4 formation drives proteostasis collapse.

This model is interesting, and would explain different observations (e.g., RNA is present in AD aggregates and rG4s can enhance protein oligomerization and tau aggregation).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Stephens et al. present a comprehensive study of TMEM16-members via coarse-grained MD simulations (CGMD). They particularly focus on the scramblase ability of these proteins and aim to characterize the "energetics of scrambling". Through their simulations, the authors interestingly relate protein conformational states to the membrane's thickness and link those to the scrambling ability of TMEM members, measured as the trespassing tendency of lipids across leaflets. They validate their simulation with a direct qualitative comparison with Cryo-EM maps.

Strengths:

The study demonstrates an efficient use of CGMD simulations to explore lipid scrambling across various TMEM16 family members. By leveraging this approach, the authors are able to bypass some of the sampling limitations inherent in all-atom simulations, providing a more comprehensive and high-throughput analysis of lipid scrambling. Their comparison of different protein conformations, including open and closed groove states, presents a detailed exploration of how structural features influence scrambling activity, adding significant value to the field. A key contribution of this study is the finding that groove dilation plays a central role in lipid scrambling. The authors observe that for scrambling-competent TMEM16 structures, there is substantial membrane thinning and groove widening. The open Ca2+-bound nhTMEM16 structure (PDB ID 4WIS) was identified as the fastest scrambler in their simulations, with scrambling rates as high as 24.4 {plus minus} 5.2 events per μs. This structure also shows significant membrane thinning (up to 18 Å), which supports the hypothesis that groove dilation lowers the energetic barrier for lipid translocation, facilitating scrambling.

The study also establishes a correlation between structural features and scrambling competence, though analyses often lack statistical robustness and quantitative comparisons. The simulations differentiate between open and closed conformations of TMEM16 structures, with open-groove structures exhibiting increased scrambling activity, while closed-groove structures do not. This finding aligns with previous research suggesting that the structural dynamics of the groove are critical for scrambling. Furthermore, the authors explore how the physical dimensions of the groove qualitatively correlate with observed scrambling rates. For example, TMEM16K induces increased membrane thinning in its open form, suggesting that membrane properties, along with structural features, play a role in modulating scrambling activity.

Another significant finding is the concept of "out-of-the-groove" scrambling, where lipid translocation occurs outside the protein's groove. This observation introduces the possibility of alternate scrambling mechanisms that do not follow the traditional "credit-card model" of groove-mediated lipid scrambling. In their simulations, the authors note that these out-of-the-groove events predominantly occur at the dimer interface between TM3 and TM10, especially in mammalian TMEM16 structures. While these events were not observed in fungal TMEM16s, they may provide insight into Ca2+-independent scrambling mechanisms, as they do not require groove opening.

Weaknesses:

A significant challenge of the study is the discrepancy between the scrambling rates observed in CGMD simulations and those reported experimentally. Despite the authors' claim that the rates are in line experimentally, the observed differences can mean large energetic discrepancies in describing scrambling (larger than 1kT barrier in reality). For instance, the authors report scrambling rates of 10.7 events per μs for TMEM16F and 24.4 events per μs for nhTMEM16, which are several orders of magnitude faster than experimental rates. While the authors suggest that this discrepancy could be due to the Martini 3 force field's faster diffusion dynamics, this explanation does not fully account for the large difference in rates. A more thorough discussion on how the choice of force field and simulation parameters influence the results, and how these discrepancies can be reconciled with experimental data, would strengthen the conclusions. Likewise, rate calculations in the study are based on 10 μs simulations, while experimental scrambling rates occur over seconds. This timescale discrepancy limits the study's accuracy, as the simulations may not capture rare or slow scrambling events that are observed experimentally and therefore might underestimate the kinetics of scrambling. It's however important to recognize that it's hard (borderline unachievable) to pinpoint reasonable kinetics for systems like this using the currently available computational power and force field accuracy. The faster diffusion in simulations may lead to overestimated scrambling rates, making the simulation results less comparable to real-world observations. Thus, I would therefore read the findings qualitatively rather than quantitatively. An interesting observation is the asymmetry observed in the scrambling rates of the two monomers. Since MARTINI is known to be limited in correctly sampling protein dynamics, the authors - in order to preserve the fold - have applied a strong (500 kJ mol-1 nm-2) elastic network. However, I am wondering how the ENM applies across the dimer and if any asymmetry can be noticed in the application of restraints for each monomer and at the dimer interface. How can this have potentially biased the asymmetry in the scrambling rates observed between the monomers? Is this artificially obtained from restraining the initial structure, or is the asymmetry somehow gatekeeping the scrambling mechanism to occur majorly across a single monomer? Answering this question would have far-reaching implications to better describe the mechanism of scrambling.

Notably, the manuscript does not explore the impact of membrane composition on scrambling rates. While the authors use a specific lipid composition (DOPC) in their simulations, they acknowledge that membrane composition can influence scrambling activity. However, the study does not explore how different lipids or membrane environments or varying membrane curvature and tension, could alter scrambling behaviour. I appreciate that this might have been beyond the scope of this particular paper and the authors plan to further chase these questions, as this work sets a strong protocol for this study. Contextualizing scrambling in the context of membrane composition is particularly relevant since the authors note that TMEM16K's scrambling rate increases tenfold in thinner membranes, suggesting that lipid-specific or membrane-thickness-dependent effects could play a role.

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Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

This study focuses on changes in brain organization associated with congenital deafness. The authors investigate differences in functional connectivity (FC) and differences in the variability of FC. By comparing congenitally deaf individuals to individuals with normal hearing, and by further separating congenitally deaf individuals into groups of early and late signers, the authors can distinguish between changes in FC due to auditory deprivation and changes in FC due to late language acquisition. They find larger FC variability in deaf than normal-hearing individuals in temporal, frontal, parietal, and midline brain structures, and that FC variability is largely driven by auditory deprivation. They suggest that the regions that show a greater FC difference between groups also show greater FC variability.

Strengths:

The manuscript is well-written, and the methods are clearly described and appropriate. Including the three different groups enables the critical contrasts distinguishing between different causes of FC variability changes. The results are interesting and novel.

Weaknesses:

Analyses were conducted for task-based data rather than resting-state data. The authors report behavioral differences between groups and include behavioral performance as a nuisance regressor in their analysis. This is a good approach to account for behavioral task differences, given the data. Nevertheless, additional work using resting-state functional connectivity could remove the potential confound fully.

Comment from Reviewing Editor: In the revised manuscript, the authors have addressed all concerns previously identified by reviewer 3, and the eLife assessment statement reflects the point by reviewer 3 that using resting-state functional connectivity in the future could further strengthen the results.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The study investigates the potential influence of the response criterion on neural decoding accuracy in consciousness and unconsciousness, utilizing either simulated data or reanalyzing experimental data with post-hoc sorting data.

Strengths:

When comparing the neural decoding performance of Target versus NonTarget with or without post-hoc sorting based on subject reports, it is evident that response criterion can influence the results. This was observed in simulated data as well as in two experiments that manipulated subject response criterion to be either more liberal or more conservative. One experiment involved a two-level response (seen vs unseen), while the other included a more detailed four-level response (ranging from 0 for no experience to 3 for a clear experience). The findings consistently indicated that adopting a more conservative response criterion could enhance neural decoding performance, whether in conscious or unconscious states, depending on the sensitivity or overall response threshold.

Weaknesses:

(1) In the realm of research methodology, conducting post-hoc sorting based on subject reports raises an issue. This operation leads to an imbalance in the number of trials between the two conditions (Target and NonTarget) during the decoding process. Such trial number disparity introduces bias during decoding, likely contributing to fluctuations in neural decoding performance. This potential confounding factor significantly impacts the interpretation of research findings. The trial number imbalance may cause models to exhibit a bias towards the category with more trials during the learning process, leading to misjudgments of neural signal differences between the two conditions and failing to accurately reflect the distinctions in brain neural activity between target and non-target states. Therefore, it is recommended that the authors extensively discuss this confounding factor in their paper. They should analyze in detail how this factor could influence the interpretation of results, such as potentially exaggerating or diminishing certain effects, and whether measures are necessary to correct the bias induced by this imbalance to ensure the reliability and validity of the research conclusions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Tubert et al. presents the role of D5 receptors (D5R) in regulating the striatal cholinergic interneuron (CIN) pause response through D5R-cAMP-Kv1 inhibitory signaling. Their findings provide a compelling model explaining the "on/off" switch of the CIN pause, driven by the distinct dopamine affinities of D2R and D5R. This mechanism, coupled with varying dopamine states, is likely critical for modulating synaptic plasticity in cortico-striatal circuits during motor learning and execution. Furthermore, the study bridges their previous finding of CIN hyperexcitability (Paz et al., Movement Disorder 2022) with the loss of the pause response in LID mice and demonstrates the restore of the pause through D1/D5 inverse agonism.

Strengths:

The study presents solid findings, and the writing is logically structured and easy to follow. The experiments are well-designed, properly combining ex vivo electrophysiology recording, optogenetics, and pharmacological treatment to dissect / rule out most, if not all, alternative mechanisms in their model.

Weaknesses:

While the manuscript is overall satisfying, one conceptual gap needs to be further addressed or discussed: the potential "imbalance" between D2R and D5R signaling due to the ligand-independent activity of D5R in LID. Given that D2R and D5R oppositely regulate CIN pause responses through cAMP signaling, investigating the role of D2R under LID off L-DOPA (e.g., by applying D2 agonists or antagonists, even together with intracellular cAMP analogs or inhibitors) could provide critical insights. Addressing this aspect would strengthen the manuscript in understanding CIN pause loss under pathological conditions.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, the authors performed a CRISPR knockout screen in the presence of floxuridine, a chemotherapeutic agent that incorporates uracil and fluoro-uracil into DNA, and identified unexpected factors, such as the RNA m6A methyltransferase METTL3, as required to overcome floxuridine-driven cytotoxicity in mammalian cells. Interestingly, the observed N6-methyladenosine was embedded in DNA, which has been reported as DNA 6mA in mammalian genomes and is currently confirmed with mass spectrometry in this model. Therefore, this work consolidated the functional role of mammalian genomic DNA 6mA, and supported with solid evidence to uncover the METTL3-6mA-UNG2 axis in response to DNA base damage.

Strengths:

In this work, the authors took an unbiased, genome-wide CRISPR approach to identify novel factors involved in uracil repair with potential clinical interest.

The authors designed elegant experiments to confirm the METTL3 works through genomic DNA, adding the methylation into DNA (6mA) but not the RNA (m6A), in this base damage repair context. The authors employ different enzymes, such as RNase A, RNase H, DNase, and liquid chromatography coupled to tandem mass spectrometry to validate that METTL3 deposits 6mA in DNA in response to agents that increase genomic uracil.

They also have the Mettl3-KO and the METTL3 inhibition results to support their conclusion.

Weaknesses:

The authors used the METTL3 inhibitor and Mettl3-KO to validate the METTL3-6mA-UNG2 functional roles. While not an outright weakness, rescue experiments of the KO line with wild type and the METTL3 catalytic mutant would have further strengthened the evidence.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Significance:

This paper reanalyzes an experimental fitness landscape generated by Papkou et al., who assayed the fitness of all possible combinations of 4 nucleotide states at 9 sites in the E. coli DHFR gene, which confers antibiotic resistance. The 9 nucleotide sites make up 3 amino acid sites in the protein, of which one was shown to be the primary determinant of fitness by Papkou et al. This paper sought to assess whether pairwise epistatic interactions differ among genetic backgrounds at other sites and whether there are major patterns in any such differences. They use a "double mutant cycle" approach to quantify pairwise epistasis, where the epistatic interaction between two mutations is the difference between the measured fitness of the double-mutant and its predicted fitness in the absence of epistasis (which equals the sum of individual effects of each mutation observed in the single mutants relative to the reference genotype). The paper claims that epistasis is "fluid," because pairwise epistatic effects often differs depending on the genetic state at the other site. It also claims that this fluidity is "binary," because pairwise effects depend strongly on the state at nucleotide positions 5 and 6 but weakly on those at other sites. Finally, they compare the distribution of fitness effects (DFE) of single mutations for starting genotypes with similar fitness and find that despite the apparent "fluidity" of interactions this distribution is well-predicted by the fitness of the starting genotype.

The paper addresses an important question for genetics and evolution: how complex and unpredictable are the effects and interactions among mutations in a protein? Epistasis can make the phenotype hard to predict from the genotype and also affect the evolutionary navigability of a genotype landscape. Whether pairwise epistatic interactions depend on genetic background - that is, whether there are important high-order interactions -- is important because interactions of order greater than pairwise would make phenotypes especially idiosyncratic and difficult to predict from the genotype (or by extrapolating from experimentally measured phenotypes of genotypes randomly sampled from the huge space of possible genotypes). Another interesting question is the sparsity of such high-order interactions: if they exist but mostly depend on a small number of identifiable sequence sites in the background, then this would drastically reduce the complexity and idiosyncrasy relative to a landscape on which "fluidity" involves interactions among groups of all sites in the protein. A number of papers in the recent literature have addressed the topics of high-order epistasis and sparsity and have come to conflicting conclusions. This paper contributes to that body of literature with a case study of one published experimental dataset of high quality. The findings are therefore potentially significant if convincingly supported.

Validity:

In my judgment, the major conclusions of this paper are not well supported by the data. There are three major problems with the analysis.

(1) Lack of statistical tests. The authors conclude that pairwise interactions differ among backgrounds, but no statistical analysis is provided to establish that the observed differences are statistically significant, rather than being attributable to error and noise in the assay measurements. It has been established previously that the methods the authors use to estimate high-order interactions can result in inflated inferences of epistasis because of the propagation of measurement noise (see PMID 31527666 and 39261454). Error propagation can be extreme because first-order mutation effects are calculated as the difference between the measured phenotype of a single-mutant variant and the reference genotype; pairwise effects are then calculated as the difference between the measured phenotype of a double mutant and the sum of the differences described above for the single mutants. This paper claims fluidity when this latter difference itself differs when assessed in two different backgrounds. At each step of these calculations, measurement noise propagates. Because no statistical analysis is provided to evaluate whether these observed differences are greater than expected because of propagated error, the paper has not convincingly established or quantified "fluidity" in epistatic effects.

(2) Arbitrary cutoffs. Many of the analyses involve assigning pairwise interactions into discrete categories, based on the magnitude and direction of the difference between the predicted and observed phenotypes for a pairwise mutant. For example, the authors categorize as a positive pairwise interaction if the apparent deviation of phenotype from prediction is >0.05, negative if the deviation is <-0.05, and no interaction if the deviation is between these cutoffs. Fluidity is diagnosed when the category for a pairwise interaction differs among backgrounds. These cutoffs are essentially arbitrary, and the effects are assigned to categories without assessing statistical significance. For example, an interaction of 0.06 in one background and 0.04 in another would be classified as fluid, but it is very plausible that such a difference would arise due to error alone. The frequency of epistatic interactions in each category as claimed in the paper, as well as the extent of fluidity across backgrounds, could therefore be systematically overestimated or underestimated, affecting the major conclusions of the study.

(3) Global nonlinearities. The analyses do not consider the fact that apparent fluidity could be attributable to the fact that fitness measurements are bounded by a minimum (the fitness of cells carrying proteins in which DHFR is essentially nonfunctional) and a maximum (the fitness of cells in which some biological factor other than DHFR function is limiting for fitness). The data are clearly bounded; the original Papkou et al. paper states that 93% of genotypes are at the low-fitness limit at which deleterious effects no longer influence fitness. Because of this bounding, mutations that are strongly deleterious to DHFR function will therefore have an apparently smaller effect when introduced in combination with other deleterious mutations, leading to apparent epistatic interactions; moreover, these apparent interactions will have different magnitudes if they are introduced into backgrounds that themselves differ in DHFR function/fitness, leading to apparent "fluidity" of these interactions. This is a well-established issue in the literature (see PMIDs 30037990, 28100592, 39261454). It is therefore important to adjust for these global nonlinearities before assessing interactions, but the authors have not done this.

This global nonlinearity could explain much of the fluidity claimed in this paper. It could explain the observation that epistasis does not seem to depend as much on genetic background for low-fitness backgrounds, and the latter is constant (Figure 2B and 2C): these patterns would arise simply because the effects of deleterious mutations are all epistatically masked in backgrounds that are already near the fitness minimum. It would also explain the observations in Figure 7. For background genotypes with relatively high fitness, there are two distinct peaks of fitness effects, which likely correspond to neutral mutations and deleterious mutations that bring fitness to the lower bound of measurement; as the fitness of the background declines, the deleterious mutations have a smaller effect, so the two peaks draw closer to each other, and in the lowest-fitness backgrounds, they collapse into a single unimodal distribution in which all mutations are approximately neutral (with the distribution reflecting only noise).<br /> Global nonlinearity could also explain the apparent "binary" nature of epistasis. Sites 4 and 5 change the second amino acid, and the Papkou paper shows that only 3 amino acid states (C, D, and E) are compatible with function; all others abolish function and yield lower-bound fitness, while mutations at other sites have much weaker effects. The apparent binary nature of epistasis in Figure 5 corresponds to these effects given the nonlinearity of the fitness assay. Most mutations are close to neutral irrespective of the fitness of the background into which they are introduced: these are the "non-epistatic" mutations in the binary scheme. For the mutations at sites 4 and 5 that abolish one of the beneficial mutations, however, these have a strong background-dependence: they are very deleterious when introduced into a high-fitness background but their impact shrinks as they are introduced into backgrounds with progressively lower fitness. The apparent "binary" nature of global epistasis is likely to be a simple artifact of bounding and the bimodal distribution of functional effects: neutral mutations are insensitive to background, while the magnitude of the fitness effect of deleterious mutations declines with background fitness because they are masked by the lower bound. The authors' statement is that "global epistasis often does not hold." This is not established. A more plausible conclusion is that global epistasis imposed by the phenotype limits affects all mutations, but it does so in a nonlinear fashion.

In conclusion, most of the major claims in the paper could be artifactual. Much of the claimed pairwise epistasis could be caused by measurement noise, the use of arbitrary cutoffs, and the lack of adjustment for global nonlinearity. Much of the fluidity or higher-order epistasis could be attributable to the same issues. And the apparently binary nature of global epistasis is also the expected result of this nonlinearity.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Meijer et al reanalyze behavioral data from a task in which people made predictions about the next in a sequence of localized sounds with the goal of understanding the computations through which people combine sensory experiences into a prior used for perception. The authors combine basic analyses of experimental data with model simulations and development and fitting of a factorial model set that includes a prominent model of change-point detection that has previously been shown to approximate Bayesian inference at a reduced computational cost and provide a good match to human prediction data (reduced Bayesian model). The authors present a number of findings, including a demonstration of key qualitative markers for Bayesian change-point detection, a tendency in humans to over-rely on recent observations, a lack of an inverse relationship between fit values of hazard rate and fit values of noise, support for a number of assumptions in the reduced Bayesian model, and a lack of evidence for reliance on memory systems beyond the extremely minimal requirements of that model.

Strengths:

The paper asks an important question and takes a number of useful steps toward answering it. In particular, the factorial model set constructed to examine a number of explicit assumptions in the models typically fit to change-point predictive inference task data was a very useful innovation, and in some cases showed clearly that assumptions in the model are necessary or at least better than the proposed alternatives. In particular, the paper develops a notion of memory capacity that allows for a continuum of models differing in their tradeoffs between computational cost and predictive precision. Another strength of the paper is that it relies on data that avoids sequential biases that can contaminate reported beliefs in more standard predictive inference tasks.

Weaknesses:

The primary weakness of the paper is that most of the definitive findings reported within it have already been reported elsewhere. That humans increase the influence of surprising outcomes indicative of change points, or to say this another way, decrease their reliance on prior information in such cases, has been fairly well established, as has the discovery that humans tend to overuse recent outcomes when making predictions. The most novel aspect of the paper, the exploration of reductions of the Bayesian ideal observer that rely on differing memory capacities, yielded results that are somewhat difficult to interpret, particularly because it is not clear that the task analyzed is diagnostic of the memory capacity term in the model, or if so, what the qualitative hallmarks of a high/low memory capacity model reduction might be.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aim to develop a neural mass model characterized by a few collective variables mimicking the dynamics of a network of Hodgkin - Huxley neurons encompassing ion-exchange mechanisms. They describe in detail the derivation of the mean-field model, then they compare experimental results obtained for the hippocampus of a mouse with the neural network simulations and the mean-field results. Furthermore, they report a bifurcation analysis of the developed model and simulation of a small network containing various coupled neural masses, somehow moving towards the simulation of an entire connectome.

Strengths:

The author attempts to develop a mean-field model for a globally coupled network of heterogeneous Hodgkin-Huxley neurons with an explicit ion exchange mechanism between the cell interior and exterior.

Weaknesses:

(1) It seems that the reduction methodology that is employed is not the most suitable one for the single-neuron model they are considering.<br /> (2) The authors' derivation of the neural mass model is based on several assumptions, and not all well justified.<br /> (3) The formulation of the mean-field derivation is unnecessarily complicated. It could be heavily simplified by following previously published approaches to derive biologically realistic neural masses.<br /> (4) The model seems to work only for highly synchronized situations and not for the standard asynchronous evolution usually observed in neural circuits.

General Statements:

The authors honestly declared the many limitations of their approach. It is assumed that the results of the mean-field are somehow inconsistent with the neural network simulations as expected.

The authors suggest employing this model for the simulations on the whole connectome to follow seizure propagation, however, I believe that the Epileptor remains superior in this respect to this model. That indeed includes biophysical parameters but their correspondence with the ones employed in the network dynamics remains elusive, due to the many assumptions required to derive this mean-field model. Furthermore, it is more complicated than the Epileptor, I do not think that the present model will be largely employed by the community.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Haast et al. investigated the organization of the zona incerta (ZI) in the human brain based on its structural connectivity to the neocortex. They found that the ZI is organized according to a primary rostro-caudal gradient, where the rostral ZI is more strongly connected to the prefrontal cortex and the caudal ZI to the sensorimotor cortex. They also found that the central region of the ZI is differently connected to the neocortex compared with the rostral and caudal regions, and could be important as a deep brain stimulation target for the treatment of essential tremors.

Strengths:

I think the overall quality of this work is great, and the results are presented in a very clear and organized manner. I particularly appreciate the effort that the authors put into validating the results using 7T and 3T data, as well as test-retest data.

Weaknesses:

That being said, I was left with a couple of concerns after reading the paper.

(1) Although the authors discussed animal evidence for a dorsal-ventral organization of the ZI, I thought that the evidence they presented for it in this paper was not so convincing. In Figure S5, the second gradient (G2) shows a clear dorsoventral pattern, but this pattern seems to primarily separate the ZI and H fields rather than show an internal topology of the ZI. This is more likely the case given that there are two bands (superior and inferior) of high G2 values surrounding a single band (middle) of low G2 values. The evidence for the rostrocaudal gradient, on the other hand, is quite convincing.

(2) HCP data is still too advanced for clinical translation. Although 3T is becoming more and more prevalent for presurgical planning, the HCP 3T dataset is acquired with a voxel size of 1.25mm, which is a far higher resolution than the typical clinical scan. It would be very useful for clinical readers to see what individual subject replicability looks like if the data were acquired at the more typical voxel size of 2mm. This could be achieved by replicating the analysis on a downsampled version of the HCP data that more closely resembles clinical data. This is understandably a large undertaking, so it could be left to future validation work.

Langes Interview mit Hans Joachim Schellnhuber im Standard, under anderem zu Kipppunkten und der Möglichkeit, dass wir uns schon auf dem Weg in ein „neues Klimaregime“ befinden. Schellnhuber geht davon aus, dass auch das 2°-Ziel überschritten werden wird. Der „Königsweg“, um der Atmosphäre danach wieder CO₂ zu entziehen, sei der weltweite Ersatz von Zement durch Holz beim Bauen, den er als Direktor des IIASA vor allem erforschen wolle. Die Wahrscheinlichkeit dafür, dass „noch alles gutgehen" werde, sei gering. https://www.derstandard.at/story/3000000204635/klimaforscher-schellnhuber-werden-auch-ueber-das-zwei-grad-ziel-hinausschiessen

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper utilizes a neural network model to investigate how the brain employs an adaptive chunking strategy to effectively enhance working memory capacity, which is a classical and significant question in cognitive neuroscience. By integrating perspectives from both the 'slot model' and 'limited resource models,' the authors adopted a neural network model encompassing the prefrontal cortex and basal ganglia, introduced an adaptive chunking strategy, and proposed a novel hybrid model. The study demonstrates that the brain can adaptively bind various visual stimuli into a single chunk based on the similarity of color features (a continuous variable) among items in visual working memory, thereby improving working memory efficiency. Additionally, it suggests that the limited capacity of working memory arises from the computational characteristics of the neural system, rather than anatomical constraints.

Strengths:

The neural network model utilized in this paper effectively integrates perspectives from both slot models and resource models (i.e., resource-like constraints within a slot-like system). This methodological innovation provides a better explanation for the limited capacity of working memory. By simulating the neural networks of the prefrontal cortex and basal ganglia, the model demonstrates how to optimize working memory storage and retrieval strategies through reinforcement learning (i.e., the efficient management of access to and from working memory). This biological simulation offers a novel perspective on human working memory and provides new explanations for the working memory difficulties observed in patients with Parkinson's disease and other disorders. Furthermore, the effectiveness of the model has been validated through computational simulation experiments, yielding reliable and robust predictions.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have already answered all my questions.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

In this study, the authors aimed to determine the role of a global double knockout (DKO) of substance P and CGRPα in modulating acute and chronic pain transmission. After successfully generating and validating the DKO mouse model, they conducted a series of behavioral pain assessments to evaluate the role of these neuropeptides in acute and chronic pain. Despite the well-established involvement of substance P and CGRPα in chronic pain, their findings revealed that the global loss of both neuropeptides did not affect the transmission of either acute or chronic pain.

A major strength of the paper is that they validated their double knockout mouse model before using a comprehensive array of both acute and chronic pain tests to reach their conclusions. One minor weakness is that their n numbers for some of the studies conducted are low.

The conclusions made by the authors are largely supported by their results and the authors successfully achieved their aim of investigating the role of simultaneous inhibition of substance P and CGRPα in pain transmission.

This study offers valuable insights into our understanding of the pain pathways. Both Substance P and CGRPα neuropeptides and their receptors were considered key players in pain signaling due to their high expression in pain-responsive neurons. However, targeting these peptides in clinical trials has not been successful. By investigating the simultaneous inhibition of substance P and CGRPα through the generation of Tac1 and Calca double knockout (DKO) mice, the authors addressed an important gap in the field. Their comprehensive assessment of pain behaviors across a range of acute and chronic pain models revealed an unexpected outcome: the absence of both neuropeptides did not significantly alter pain responses. This finding is pivotal, as it challenges the hypothesis that these peptides are essential for pain transmission, even when targeted together.

Comments on revisions:

All my previous concerns have been addressed.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The study by Rios and colleagues provides the scientific community with a compelling exploration of macrophage plasticity and its potential as a therapeutic target. By focusing on the GSK3-MAFB axis, the authors present a strong case for macrophage reprogramming as a strategy to combat inflammatory and fibrotic diseases, including severe COVID-19. Using a robust and comprehensive methodology, in this study it is conducted a broad transcriptomic and functional analyses and offers valuable mechanistic insights while highlighting its clinical relevance

Strengths:

Well performed and analyzed

Weaknesses:

Additional analyses, including mechanistic studies, would increase the value of the study.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper focuses on understanding the behavioral and neural basis of regime shift detection, a common yet hard problem that people encounter in an uncertain world. Using a regime-shift task, the authors examined cognitive factors influencing belief updates by manipulating signal diagnosticity and environmental volatility. Behaviorally, they have found that people demonstrate both over and under-reaction to changes given different combinations of task parameters, which can be explained by a unified system-neglect account. Neurally, the authors have found that the vmPFC-striatum network represents current belief as well as belief revision unique to the regime detection task. Meanwhile, the frontoparietal network represents cognitive factors influencing regime detection i.e., the strength of the evidence in support of the regime shift and the intertemporal belief probability. The authors further link behavioral signatures of system neglect with neural signals and have found dissociable patterns, with the frontoparietal network representing sensitivity to signal diagnosticity when the observation is consistent with regime shift and vmPFC representing environmental volatility, respectively. Together, these results shed light on the neural basis of regime shift detection especially the neural correlates of bias in belief update that can be observed behaviorally.

Strengths:

(1) The regime-shift detection task offers a solid ground to examine regime-shift detection without the potential confounding impact of learning and reward. Relatedly, the system-neglect modeling framework provides a unified account for both over or under-reacting to environmental changes, allowing researchers to extract a single parameter reflecting people's sensitivity to changes in decision variables and making it desirable for neuroimaging analysis to locate corresponding neural signals.

(2) The analysis for locating brain regions related to belief revision is solid. Within the current task, the authors look for brain regions whose activation covary with both current belief and belief change. Furthermore, the authors have ruled out the possibility of representing mere current belief or motor signal by comparing the current study results with two other studies. This set of analyses is very convincing.

(3) The section on using neuroimaging findings (i.e., the frontoparietal network is sensitive to evidence that signals regime shift) to reveal nuances in behavioral data (i.e., belief revision is more sensitive to evidence consistent with change) is very intriguing. I like how the authors structure the flow of the results, offering this as an extra piece of behavioral findings instead of ad-hoc implanting that into the computational modeling.

Weaknesses:

(1) The authors have presented two sets of neuroimaging results, and it is unclear to me how to reason between these two sets of results, especially for the frontoparietal network. On one hand, the frontoparietal network represents belief revision but not variables influencing belief revision (i.e., signal diagnosticity and environmental volatility). On the other hand, when it comes to understanding individual differences in regime detection, the frontoparietal network is associated with sensitivity to change and consistent evidence strength. I understand that belief revision correlates with sensitivity to signals, but it can probably benefit from formally discussing and connecting these two sets of results in discussion. Relatedly, the whole section on behavioral vs. neural slope results was not sufficiently discussed and connected to the existing literature in the discussion section. For example, the authors could provide more context to reason through the finding that striatum (but not vmPFC) is not sensitive to volatility.

(2) More details are needed for behavioral modeling under the system-neglect framework, particularly results on model comparison. I understand that this model has been validated in previous publications, but it is unclear to me whether it provides a superior model fit in the current dataset compared to other models (e.g., a model without \alpha or \beta). Relatedly, I wonder whether the final result section can be incorporated into modeling as well - i.e., the authors could test a variant of the model with two \betas depending on whether the observation is consistent with a regime shift and conduct model comparison.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Wolbachia are maternally transmitted bacteria that can manipulate host reproduction in various ways. Some Wolbachia induce male killing (MK), where the sons of infected mothers are killed during development. Several MK-associated genes have been identified in Homona magnanima, including Hm-oscar and wmk-1-4, but the mechanistic links between these Wolbachia genes and MK in the native host are still unclear.

In this manuscript, Arai et al. show that Hm-oscar is the gene responsible for Wolbachia-induced MK in Homona magnanima. They provide evidence that Hm-Oscar functions through interactions with the sex determination system. They also found that Hm-Oscar disrupts sex determination in male embryos by inducing female-type dsx splicing and impairing dosage compensation. Additionally, Hm-Oscar suppresses the function of Masc. The manuscript is well-written and presents intriguing findings. The results support their conclusions regarding the diversity and commonality of MK mechanisms, contributing to our understanding of the mechanisms and evolutionary aspects of Wolbachia-induced MK.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have already addressed the reviewer's concerns.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study bridges a micro- to macroscale understanding of the organization of the amygdala. First, using a data-driven approach, the authors identify structural clusters in the human amygdala from high-resolution post-mortem histological data. Next, multimodal imaging data to identify structural subunits of the amygdala and the functional networks in which they are involved. This approach is exciting because it permits the identification of both structural amygdalar subunits, and their functional implications, in individual subjects. There are, however, some differences in the macro and microscale levels of organization that should be addressed.

Strengths:

The use of data-driven parcellation on a structure that is important for human emotion and cognition, and the combination of this with high-resolution individual imaging-based parcellation, is a powerful and exciting approach, addressing both the need for a template-level understanding of organization as well as a parcellation that is valid for individuals. The functional decoding of rsfMRI permits valuable insight into the functional role of structural subunits. Overall, the combination of micro to macro, structure, and function, and general organization to individual relevance is an impressive holistic approach to brain mapping.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Building upon the group's previous work, this study used a 3-day threat acquisition, extinction, recall, reextinction, and reacquisition paradigm with 7T imaging to probe the mechanism by which the cerebellum contributes to fear extinction learning. The authors hypothesise this may be via its connection to the VTA, a known modulator of fear extinction due to its role in reward processing. Using complementary analysis methods, the authors demonstrate that activity with the cerebellum, DNC, and VTA is modulated by predictions about the occurrence of the US, which shows regional specificity. They show trend-level evidence that there is increased functional connectivity between the cerebellum and VTA during all phases of the paradigm with unexpected omissions. They also present a DCM which indicates that the cerebellum could positively modulate VTA activity during extinction learning. This study adds to a growing literature supporting the role of the historically overlooked cerebellum in the control of emotions and suggests that an interaction between the cerebellum and VTA should be considered in the existing model of the fear extinction network.

Strengths:

The authors address their research question using a number of complementary methods, including parametric modulation by model-derived expectation parameters, PPI, and DCM, in a logical and easily understood way. I feel the authors provide a balanced interpretation of their findings, presenting numerous interpretations and offering insight with regard to reward vs attention or unsigned prediction errors and the directionality of the interaction they identify. The manuscript is a timely addition to growing literature highlighting the role of the cerebellum in fear conditioning, and emotion generation and regulation more generally.

Weaknesses:

Subjective and skin conductance responses do not completely support the success of the learning paradigm. For example, CS+/CS- differentiation in both domains persisted after extinction training. I do not feel that this negates the findings of this manuscript, though it raises questions about the parametric modulators used, and the interpretation of the neural mechanisms proposed if they do not strongly relate to updated subjective appraisals (the goal of extinction therapy). My interpretation of the manuscript suggests there are some key results based upon contrasts that have as few as three events; I am a little unsure about the power and reliability of these effects, though I await author clarification on this matter. There are a number of unaddressed deviations from the pre-registered protocol that I have asked the authors to elaborate upon.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In their study, Osorio and colleagues present 'retriever,' an innovative computational tool designed to extract disease-specific transcriptional drug response profiles from the LINCS-L1000 project. This tool has been effectively applied to TNBC, leveraging single-cell RNA sequencing data to predict drug combinations that may effectively target the disease. The public review highlights the significant integration of extensive pharmacological data with high-resolution transcriptomic information, which enhances the potential for personalized therapeutic applications.

Strengths:

A key finding of the study is the prediction and validation of the drug combination QL-XII-47 and GSK-690693 for the treatment of TNBC. The methodology employed is robust, with a clear pathway from data analysis to experimental confirmation.

Weaknesses:

However, several issues need to be addressed. The predictive accuracy of 'retriever' is contingent upon the quality and comprehensiveness of the LINCS-L1000 and single-cell datasets utilized, which is an important caveat as these datasets may not fully capture the heterogeneity of patient responses to treatment. While the in vitro validation of the drug combinations is promising, further in vivo studies and clinical trials are necessary to establish their efficacy and safety. The applicability of these findings to other cancer types also warrants additional investigation. Expanding the application of 'retriever' to a broader range of cancer types and integrating it with clinical data will be crucial for realizing its potential in personalized medicine. Furthermore, as the study primarily focuses on kinase inhibitors, it remains to be seen how well these findings translate to other drug classes.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors use a genetically encoded fluorescent sensor, GRABNE, to measure NE dynamics in the dorsal hippocampus of mice in response to multiple behavioral manipulations. A non-linear model and regression were used to quantitatively assess the contribution of multiple behavioral covariates to changes in NE signaling, with the result that NE signal dynamics were best predicted by time from event transitions, with the signal exponentially decaying over a period of seconds to minutes after transitions. Event transitions were implemented as a transfer from a home cage to a novel arena, a transfer to a familiar linear track, and the introduction of novel objects. Additional experiments showed that spatial context transitions dominate NE signaling over novel object presentations, and experience accelerates the decay of the NE signal after spatial context transitions. Correspondingly, the hippocampal CA1 spatial code takes minutes to stabilize after context transition in both novel and familiar spaces.

Strengths:

A strength of the study is the use of the NE sensor with sub-second resolution, non-linear modeling, and regression to identify the prominent variable of interest as time from event transition, and multiple behavioral controls. The use of multiple behavioral designs to investigate the effect of familiarity, experience, and interaction of spatial context transitions and novel object introduction is a strength. Relating the dynamics of NE signal decay to the rate of CA1 spatial code changes is also a strength.

Weaknesses:

A minor weakness is that the concept of an event boundary needs to be more broadly discussed. The manuscript uses event transitions such as spatial context changes and novel object introduction to implement an event boundary. However, especially in episodic memory studies in humans, event structure and boundaries have also been shown to occur through the automatic segmentation of experiences into discrete events (Baldassano et al., Neuron, 2017; Radvansky and Zacks, Curr. Opi. Behav. Sci, 2017). The rodent experiments in the current manuscript explicitly introduce event boundaries through changes in context or objects, which can potentially be conflated with novelty. A discussion of these differences, and whether NE can also have a role in event boundary transitions based on automatic segmentation of experiences, will add to the impact of the manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, the authors examined how neural activity related to temporal information is distributed and coordinated throughout the hippocampus, dorsal striatum, and orbitofrontal cortex. Rats were forced to run for fixed time intervals on a treadmill and make a decision based on whether the interval was long (10s) or short (5s). Under these conditions time cells were observed across all examined brain regions. The primary finding of the authors is that synchronized activity between time cells across brain regions is entrained into the theta cycle. This observation is used to support the central claim that the sharing of temporal information is mediated by the theta oscillation.

Strengths:

By simultaneously recording several brain regions in an interval discrimination task, the authors provide a valuable dataset for understanding how temporal information is processed and distributed throughout relevant networks.

Weaknesses:

Several methodological concerns should be addressed and a more focused analysis should be performed to strengthen the central claims of this work.

Major Concerns

(1) The restriction to only use time cells to understand temporal information processing. Other mechanisms of encoding time, like population clocks and ramping, have been characterized in the striatum and frontal cortex, and these dynamics might contain more temporal information than the subset of cells that meet the statistical criteria for being a time cell. Furthermore, time cells in the OFC, and DS in particular, appear to be heavily biased towards the beginning of treadmill running. This raises the question of whether temporal information can be encoded by neurons other than time cells in these two regions.

(2) The results of the Bayesian decoding analysis should be expanded on. In particular, the performance of each decoder above the chance level is not quantified. Comparing the performance of decoders trained on all cells to the performance of decoders trained on time cells alone would partially address the question of whether or not time cells are the only cells that can encode temporal information in the DS and OFC.

(3) The decoding results for the test trials appear different from the results in the authors' previous publication (Shimbo et. al., 2021). There, differences in decoded time between the selected-long and selected-short trials emerged after 5s, the duration of the short trials. This was to be expected given the following two reasons. First, from the task design, it is unclear that the animal can distinguish trial types (long, short, or test) until after the first 5 seconds of treadmill running, making it logical for differences in decoded time to emerge only after this point. Second, time cell activity was identical in the first 5s of the long and short trials as shown in Figure 2A. Here, however, the differences in decoded time during the selected-long and selected-short test trials emerge within the first 2s of treadmill running. Could the authors explain this discrepancy?

Furthermore, in Figure 6B, at 3 seconds of running time, the decoded time for selected-long and selected-short trials shows a difference of nearly 2 seconds, with no further increase as running time progresses. In contrast, at 2 seconds of running time, there is no significant difference in decoded time for DS and OFC, while CA1 shows a slight increase in the decoded time for selected-long trials. This pattern suggests a sudden jump in the encoded time for selected-long trials between 2 and 3 seconds. However, without explicitly showing the raw data, it is difficult to interpret this result and other results from the decoding analysis.

Minor Concerns

(1) It is not clear how the Bayes decoder was trained. Does the training data come entirely from the long trials?

(2) For Figure 5D, even if only one of two neurons in a pair has its spike rate modulated by theta, wouldn't the expectation be that synchronous spike events between these two neurons would be modulated by theta as well? This analysis might benefit from shuffling methods to determine if the mean resultant length of synchronous spike events is larger than the chance level.

(3) In Figure 5A, the authors suggest that 'the synchronization of time cells was modulated by theta oscillation.' However, it is unclear whether the population exhibits a preferred theta phase or the phase preference only occurs at the individual cell level. If there is no preference on the population level, how would the authors interpret this result?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Blood pressure variability has been identified as an important risk factor for dementia. However, there are no established animal models to study the molecular mechanisms of increased blood pressure variability. In this manuscript, the authors present a novel mouse model of elevated BPV produced by pulsatile infusions of high-dose angiotensin II (3.1ug/hour) in middle-aged male mice. Using elegant methodology, including direct blood pressure measurement by telemetry, programmable infusion pumps, in vivo two-photon microscopy, and neurobehavioral tests, the authors show that this BPV model resulted in a blunted bradycardic response and cognitive deficits, enhanced myogenic response in parenchymal arterioles, and a loss of the pressure-evoked increase in functional hyperemia to whisker stimulation.

Strengths:

As the presentation of the first model of increased blood pressure variability, this manuscript establishes a method for assessing molecular mechanisms. The state-of-the-art methodology and robust data analysis provide convincing evidence that increased blood pressure variability impacts brain health.

Weaknesses:

One major drawback is that there is no comparison with another pressor agent (such as phenylephrine); therefore, it is not possible to conclude whether the observed effects are a result of increased blood pressure variability or caused by direct actions of Ang II. Ang II is known to have direct actions on cerebrovascular reactivity, neuronal function, and learning and memory. Given that Ang II is increased in only 15% of human hypertensive patients (and an even lower percentage of non-hypertensive), the clinical relevance is diminished. Nonetheless, this is an important study establishing the first mouse model of increased BPV.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Communication between sensory and motor cortices is likely to be important for many aspects of behavior, and in this study, the authors carefully analyse neuronal spiking activity in S1 and M1 evoked by peripheral paw stimulation finding clear evidence for sensory responses in both cortical regions

Strengths:

The experiments and data analyses appear to have been carefully carried out and clearly represented.

Weaknesses:

(1) Some studies have found evidence for excitatory projection neurons expressing PV and in particular some excitatory pyramidal cells can be labelled in PV-Cre mice. The authors might want to check if this is the case in their study, and if so, whether that might impact any conclusions.

(2) I think the analysis shown in Figure S1 apparently reporting the absence of movements evoked by the forepaw stimulation could be strengthened. It is unclear what is shown in the various panels. I would imagine that an average of many stimulus repetitions would be needed to indicate whether there is an evoked movement or not. This could also be state-dependent and perhaps more likely to happen early in a recording session. Videography could also be helpful.

(3) Some similar aspects of the evoked responses, including triphasic dynamics, have been reported in whisker S1 and M1, and the authors might want to cite Sreenivasan et al., 2016.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

As noted in the original review, the study by Sebastian-Perez addresses an important research question using a tractable model system to examine the earliest drivers of heterochromatin formation during embryogenesis. Moreover, the proteomic analyses provide a valuable resource to the research community to understand changes in the chromatin-bound proteome during the 2C-to-ESC transition. From there, they carry out more detailed analyses of TOPBP1, which shows substantive changes in chromatin association in 2C-like cells, and a potential interacting protein SMARCAD1, which shows only modest changes in chromatin association. While I appreciate that the authors have revised the manuscript to some extent to address the minor points raised, the major over-arching issue of how TOPBP1 and SMARCAD1 function in the 2C-like state is still a concern.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This work by Zhao et al. demonstrates the role of the Edwardsiella tarda type 3 secretion system translocon in activating human macrophage inflammation and pyroptosis. The authors show the requirement of both the bacterial translocon proteins and particular host inflammasome components for E. tarda-induced pyroptosis. In addition, the authors show that the C-terminal region of the translocon protein, EseB, is both necessary and sufficient to induce pyroptosis when present in the cytoplasm. The most terminal region of EseB was determined to be highly conserved among other T3SS-encoding pathogenic bacteria and a subset of these exhibited functionally similar effects on inflammasome activation. Overall, the data support the conclusions and interpretations and provide valuable insights into interactions between bacterial T3SS components and the host immune system., thereby expanding our understanding of E. tarda pathogenesis.

Strengths:

The authors use established and reliable molecular biology and bacterial genetics strategies to characterize the roles of the bacterial T3SS translocon and host inflammasome pathways to E. tarda-induced pyroptosis in human macrophages. These observations are naturally expanded upon by demonstrating the specific regions of EseB that are required for inflammasome activation and the conservation of this sequence and function among other pathogenic bacteria.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Satouh et al report the presence of spherical structures composed of endosomes, lysosomes and autophagosomes within immature mouse oocytes. These endolysosomal compartments have been named as Endosomal-LYSosomal organellar Assembly (ELYSA). ELYSAs increase in size as the oocytes undergo maturation. ELYSAs are distributed throughout the oocyte cytoplasm of GV stage immature oocytes but these structures become mostly cortical in the mature oocytes. Interestingly, they tend to avoid the region which contain metaphase II spindle and chromosomes. They show that the endolysosomal compartments in oocytes are less acidic and therefore non-degradative but their pH decreases and become degradative as the ELYSAs begin to disassemble in the embryos post fertilization. This manuscript shows that lysosomal switching does not happen during oocyte development, and the formation of ELYSAs prevent lysosomes from being activated. Structures similar to these ELYSAs have been previously described in mouse oocytes (Zaffagnini et al, 2024) and these vesicular assemblies are important for sequestering protein aggregates in the oocytes but facilitate proteolysis after fertilization. The current manuscript, however, provides further details of endolysosomal disassembly post fertilization. Specifically, the V1-subunit of V-ATPase targeting to the ELYSAs increases the acidity of lysosomal compartments in the embryos. This is a well-conducted study and their model is supported by experimental evidence and data analyses.

Comments on revisions:

This revised version of the manuscript has addressed most of my concerns.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Kondrychyn and colleagues describe the contribution of two Aquaporins Aqp1a.1 and Aqp8a.1 towards angiogenic sprouting in the zebrafish embryo. By whole-mount in situ hybridization, RNAscope and scRNA-seq, they show that both genes are expressed in endothelial cells in partly overlapping spatiotemporal patterns. Pharmacological inhibition experiments indicate a requirement for VEGR2 signaling (but not Notch) in transcriptional activation.

To assess the role of both genes during vascular development the authors generate genetic mutations. While homozygous single mutants appear normal, aqp1a.1;aqp8a.1 double mutants exhibit defects in EC sprouting and ISV formation.

At the cellular level, the aquaporin mutants display a reduction of filopodia in number and length. Furthermore, a reduction in cell volume is observed indicating a defect in water uptake.

The authors conclude, that polarized water uptake mediated by aquaporins is required for the initiation of endothelial sprouting and (tip) cell migration during ISV formation. They further propose that water influx increases hydrostatic pressure within the cells which may facilitate actin polymerization and formation membrane protrusions.

In the revised version of the manuscript the authors have added data which show that inhibition of swell-induced chloride channels mimics aqp mutant phenotypes, giving credence to the model that water influx via aquaporins is driven by an osmotic gradient.

Strengths:

The authors provide a detailed analysis of Aqp1a.1 and Aqp8a.1 during blood vessel formation in vivo, using zebrafish intersomitic vessels as a model. State-of-the-art imaging demonstrates an essential role aquaporins in different aspects of endothelial cell activation and migration during angiogenesis.

Weaknesses:

With respect to the connection between Aqp1/8 and actin polymerization/filopodia formation, the evidence appears preliminary and the authors' interpretation is guided by evidence from other experimental systems.

After revision, the authors have addressed all other concerns

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors perform a remarkably comprehensive, rigorous, and extensive investigation into the spatiotemporal dynamics between ribosomal accumulation, nucleoid segregation, and cell division. Using detailed experimental characterization and rigorous physical models, they offer a compelling argument that nucleoid segregation rates are determined at least in part by the accumulation of ribosomes in the center of the cell, exerting a steric force to drive nucleoid segregation prior to cell division. This evolutionarily ingenious mechanism means cells can rely on ribosomal biogenesis as the sole determinant for the growth rate and cell division rate, avoiding the need for two separate 'sensors,' which would require careful coupling.

Strengths:

In terms of strengths; the paper is very well written, the data are of extremely high quality, and the work is of fundamental importance to the field of cell growth and division. This is an important and innovative discovery enabled through a combination of rigorous experimental work and innovative conceptual, statistical, and physical modeling.

Weaknesses:

In terms of weaknesses, I have three specific thoughts.

Firstly, my biggest question (and this may or may not be a bona fide weakness) is how unambiguously the authors can be sure their ribosomal labeling is reporting on polysomes, specifically. My reading of the work is that the loss of spatial density upon rifampicin treatment is used to infer that spatial density corresponds to polysomes, yet this feels like a relatively indirect way to get at this question, given rifampicin targets RNA polymerase and not translation. It would be good if a more direct way to confirm polysome dependence were possible.

Second, the authors invoke a phase separation model to explain the data, yet it is unclear whether there is any particular evidence supporting such a model, whether they can exclude simpler models of entanglement/local diffusion (and/or perhaps this is what is meant by phase separation?) and it's not clear if claiming phase separation offers any additional insight/predictive power/utility. I am OK with this being proposed as a hypothesis/idea/working model, and I agree the model is consistent with the data, BUT I also feel other models are consistent with the data. I also very much do not think that this specific aspect of the paper has any bearing on the paper's impact and importance.

Finally, the writing and the figures are of extremely high quality, but the sheer volume of data here is potentially overwhelming. I wonder if there is any way for the authors to consider stripping down the text/figures to streamline things a bit? I also think it would be useful to include visually consistent schematics of the question/hypothesis/idea each of the figures is addressing to help keep readers on the same page as to what is going on in each figure. Again, there was no figure or section I felt was particularly unclear, but the sheer volume of text/data made reading this quite the mental endurance sport! I am completely guilty of this myself, so I don't think I have any super strong suggestions for how to fix this, but just something to consider.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Shimin Wang et al. investigated the role of Sertoli cells in mediating spermatogenesis disorders in non-obstructive azoospermia (NOA) through stage-specific communications. The authors utilized scRNA-seq and scATAC-seq to analyze the molecular and epigenetic profiles of germ cells and Sertoli cells at different stages of spermatogenesis.

Strengths:

By understanding the gene expression patterns and chromatin accessibility changes in Sertoli cells, the authors sought to uncover key regulatory mechanisms underlying male infertility and identify potential targets for therapeutic interventions. They emphasized that the absence of the SC3 subtype would be a major factor contributing to NOA.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have addressed my concerns. I have no further comments.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript reports the computational study of the dynamics of PROTAC-induced degradation complexes. The research investigates how different linkers within PROTACs affect the formation and stability of ternary complexes between the target protein BRD4BD1 and Cereblon E3 ligase, and the degradation machinery. Using computational modeling, docking, and molecular dynamics simulations, the study demonstrates that although all PROTACs form ternary complexes, the linkers significantly influence the dynamics and efficacy of protein degradation. The findings highlight that the flexibility and positioning of Lys residues are crucial for successful ubiquitination. The results also discussed the correlated motions between the PROTAC linker and the complex.

Strengths:

The field of PROTAC discovery and design, characterized by its limited research, distinguishes itself from traditional binary ligand-protein interactions by forming a ternary complex involving two proteins. The current understanding of how the structure of PROTAC influences its degradation efficacy remains insufficient. This study investigated the atomic-level dynamics of the degradation complex, offering potentially valuable insights for future research into PROTAC degradability.

Comments on revisions:

All my questions have been addressed.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Simoes et al enhanced dynamic glucose-enhanced (DGE) deuterium spectroscopy with Deuterium Metabolic Imaging (DMI) to characterize the kinetics of glucose conversion in two murine models of glioblastoma (GBM). The authors combined spectroscopic imaging and noise attenuation with histological analysis and showcased the efficacy of metabolic markers determined from DGE DMI to correlate with histological features of the tumors. This approach is also potent to differentiate the two models from GL261 and CT2A.

Strengths:

The primary strength of this study is to highlight the significance of DGE DMI to interrogate the metabolic flux from glucose. The authors focused on glutamine/glutamate and lactate. They attempted to correlate the imaging findings with in-depth histological analysis to depict the link between metabolic features and pathological characteristics such as cell density, infiltration, and distant migration.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Using a combination of in vivo studies with testosterone-inhibited and aged mice with lower testosterone levels as well as isolated mouse and human seminal vesicle epithelial cells the authors show that testosterone induces an increase in glucose uptake. They find that testosterone induces a difference in gene expression with a focus on metabolic enzymes. Specifically, they identify increased expression of enzymes regulating cholesterol and fatty acid synthesis, leading to increased production of 18:1 oleic acid. The revised version strengthens the role of ACLY as the main regulator of seminal vesicle epithelial cell metabolic programming. 18:1 oleic acid is secreted by seminal vesicle epithelial cells and taken up by sperm, inducing an increase in mitochondrial respiration. The difference in sperm motility and in vivo fertilization in the presence of 18:1 oleic acid and the absence of testosterone, however, is small. Additional experiments should be included to further support that oleic acid positively affects sperm function.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript aims to follow up on a previously published paper (Busch and Hansel 2023) which proposed that the morphological variation of dendritic bifurcation in Purkinje cells in mice and humans is indicative of the number of climbing fiber inputs, with dendritic bifurcation at the level of the soma resulting in a proportion of these neurons being multi-innervated. The functional and anatomical climbing fiber data was obtained solely from mice since all human tissue was embalmed and fixed, and the extension of these findings to human Purkinje cells was indirect. The current comparative anatomy study aims to resolve this question in human tissue more directly and to further analyse in detail the properties of adult human Purkinje cell dendritic morphology.

Strengths:

The authors have carried out a meticulous anatomical quantification of human Purkinje cell dendrites, in tissue preparations with a better signal-to-noise ratio than their previous study, comparing them with those from mice. Importantly, they now present immunolabelling results that trace climbing fiber axons innervating human PCs. As well as providing detailed analyses of spine properties and interesting new findings of human PC dendritic length and spine types, the work confirms that human PCs that have two clearly distinct dendritic branches have an approximately x% chance of receiving more than one CF input, segregated across the two branches. Albeit entirely observational, the data will be of widespread interest to the cerebellar field, in particular, those building computational models of Purkinje cells.

Weaknesses:

The work is, by necessity, purely anatomical. It remains to be seen whether there are any functional differences in ion channel expression or functional mapping of granule inputs to human PCs compared with the mouse that might mitigate the major differences in electronic properties suggested.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors have made microfluidic arrays of pores and obstacles with a complex shape and studied the swimming of multicellular magnetotactic bacteria through this system. They provide a comprehensive discussion of the relevant parameters of this system and identify one dimensionless parameter, which they call the scattering number and which depends on the swimming speed and magnetic moment of the bacteria as well as the magnetic field and the size of the pores, as the most relevant. They measure the effective speed through the array of pores and obstacles as a function of that parameter, both in their microfluidic experiments and in simulations, and find an optimal scattering number, which they estimate to reflect the parameters of the studied multicellular bacteria in their natural environment. They finally use this knowledge to compare different species to test the generality of this idea.

Strengths:

This is a beautiful experimental approach and the observation of an optimal scattering number (likely reflecting an optimal magnetic moment) is very convincing. The results here improve on similar previous work in two respects: On the one hand, the tracking of bacteria does not have the limitations of previous work, and on the other hand, the effective motility is quantified. Both features are enabled by choices of the experimental system: the use the multicellular bacteria which are larger than the usual single-celled magnetotactic bacteria and the design of the obstacle array which allows the quantification of transition rates due to the regular organization as well as the controlled release of bacteria into this array through a clever mechanism.

Weaknesses:

Some of the reported results are not as new as the authors suggest, specifically trapping by obstacles and the detrimental effect of a strong magnetic field have been reported before as has the hypothesis that the magnetic moment may be optimized for swimming in a sediment environment where there is a competition of directed swimming and trapping. Other than that, some of the key experimental choices on which the strength of the approach is based also come at a price and impose some limitations, namely the use of a non-culturable organism and the regular, somewhat unrealistic artificial obstacle array.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This paper seeks to characterize the portability of methylation clocks across groups. Methylation clocks are trained to predict biological aging from DNA methylation but have largely been developed in datasets of individuals with primarily European ancestries. Given that genetic variation can influence DNA methylation, the authors hypothesize that methylation clocks might have reduced accuracy in non-European ancestries.

Strengths:

The authors evaluate five methylation clocks in 621 individuals from the MAGENTA study. This includes approximately 280 individuals sampled in Puerto Rico, Cuba, and Peru, as well as approximately 200 self-identified African American individuals sampled in the US. To understand how methylation clock accuracy varies with proportion of non-European ancestry, the authors inferred local ancestry for the Puerto Rican, Cuban, Peruvian, and African American cohorts. Overall, this paper presents solid evidence that methylation clocks have reduced accuracy in individuals with non-European ancestries, relative to individuals with primarily European ancestries. This should be of great interest to those researchers who seek to use methylation clocks as predictors of age-related, late-onset diseases and other health outcomes.

Weaknesses:

One clear strength of this paper is the ability to do more sophisticated analyses using the local ancestry calls for the MAGENTA study. It would be valuable to capitalize on this strength and assess portability across the genetic ancestry spectrum, as was recently advocated by Ding et al. in Nature (2023). For example, the authors could regress non-European local ancestry fraction on measures of prediction accuracy. This could paint a clearer picture of the relationship between genetic ancestry and clock accuracy, compared to looking at overall correlations within each cohort.

The authors present two possible reasons that methylation clocks might have reduced accuracy in individuals with non-European ancestries: genetic variants disrupting methylation sites (i.e. "disruptive variants"), and genetic variants influencing methylation sites (i.e. meQTLs). The authors conclude disruptive variants do not contribute to poor methylation clock portability, but the evidence in support of this conclusion is incomplete. The site frequency spectrum of disruptive variants in Figure 4 is estimated from all gnomAD individuals, and gnomAD is comprised of primarily European individuals. Thus, the observation that disruptive variants are generally rare in gnomAD does not rule them out as a source of poor clock portability in admixed individuals with non-European ancestries.

It is also unclear to what extent meQTLs impact methylation clock portability. The authors find that the frequency of meQTLs is higher in African ancestry populations, but this could reflect the fact that some of the analyzed meQTLs were ascertained in African Americans. The number of meQTL-affected methylation sites also varies widely between clocks, ranging from 6 to 271; thus, meQTLs likely impact the portability of different clocks in different ways. Overall, the paper would benefit from a more quantitative assessment of the extent to which meQTLs influence clock portability.

The paper implies that methylation clocks have an inferior ability to predict AD risk in admixed populations relative to white individuals, but the difference between white AD patients and controls is not significant when correcting for multiple testing. This nuance should be made more explicit.

Finally, this paper overlooks the possibility that environmental exposures co-vary with genetic ancestry and play a role in decreasing the accuracy of methylation clocks in genetically admixed individuals. Quantifying the impact of environmental factors is almost certainly outside of the scope of this paper. However, it is worth acknowledging the role of environmental factors to provide the field with a more comprehensive overview of factors influencing methylation clock portability. It is also essential to avoid the assumption that correlations with genetic ancestry necessarily arise from genetic causes.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Chromosomal inversions have been predicted to play a role in adaptive evolution and speciation because of their ability to "lock" together adaptive alleles in genomic regions of low recombination. In this study, the authors use a combination of cutting-edge genomic methods, including BioNano and PacBio HiFi sequencing, to identify six large chromosomal inversions segregating in over 100 species of Lake Malawi cichlids, a classic example of adaptive radiation and rapid speciation. By examining the frequencies of these inversions present in species from six different linages, the authors show that there is an association between the presence of specific inversions with specific lineages/habitats. Using a combination of phylogenetic analyses and sequencing data, they demonstrate that three of the inversions have been introduced to one lineage via hybridization. Finally, genotyping of wild individuals as well as laboratory crosses suggests that three inversions are associated with XY sex determination systems in a subset of species. The data add to a growing number of systems in which inversions have been associated with adaptation to divergent environments. However, like most of the other recent studies in the field, this study does not go beyond describing the presence of the inversions to demonstrate that the inversions are under sexual or natural selection or that they contribute to adaptation or speciation in this system.

Strengths:

All analyses are very well done, and the conclusions about the presence of the six inversions in Lake Malawi cichlids, the frequencies of the inversions in different species, and the presence of three inversions in the benthic lineages due to hybridization are well-supported. Genotyping of 48 individuals resulting from laboratory crosses provides strong support that the chromosome 10 inversion is associated with a sex-determination locus.

Weaknesses:

The evidence supporting a role for the chromosome 11 inversion and the chromosome 9 inversion in sex determination is based on relatively few individuals and therefore remains suggestive. The authors are mostly cautious in their interpretations of the data. However, there are a few places where they state that the inversions are favored by selection, but they provide no evidence that this is the case and there is no consideration of alternative hypotheses (i.e. that the inversions might have been fixed via drift).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Cilia are antenna-like extensions projecting from the surface of most vertebrate cells. Protein transport along the ciliary axoneme is enabled by motor protein complexes with multimeric so-called IFT-A and IFT-B complexes attached. While the components of these IFT complexes have been known for a while, precise interactions between different complex members, especially how IFT-A and IFT-B subcomplexes interact, are still not entirely clear. Likewise, the precise underlying molecular mechanism in human ciliopathies resulting from IFT dysfunction has remained elusive.

Here, the authors investigated the structure and putative function of the to-date poorly characterised C-terminus of IFT-B complex member IFT172 using alpha-fold predictions, crystallography and biochemical analyses including proteomics analyses followed by mass spectrometry, pull-down assays, and TGFbeta signalling analyses using chlamydomonas flagellae and RPE cells. The authors hereby provide novel insights into the crystal structure of IFT172 and identify novel interaction sites between IFT172 and the IFT-A complex members IFT140/IFT144. They suggest a U-box-like domain within the IFT172 C-terminus could play a role in IFT172 auto-ubiquitination as well as for TGFbeta signalling regulation.

As a number of disease-causing IFT72 sequence variants resulting in mammalian ciliopathy phenotypes in IFT172 have been previously identified in the IFT172 C-terminus, the authors also investigate the effects of such variants on auto-ubiquitination. This revealed no mutational effect on mono-ubiquitination which the authors suggest could be independent of the U-box-like domain but reduced overall IFT172 ubiquitination.

Strengths:

The manuscript is clear and well written and experimental data is of high quality. The findings provide novel insights into IFT172 function, IFT complex-A and B interactions, and they offer novel potential mechanisms that could contribute to the phenotypes associated with IFT172 C-terminal ciliopathy variants.

Weaknesses:

Some suggestions/questions are included in the comments to the authors below.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This work presents a 27-region DMR model for early diagnosis and prognostic prediction of colorectal cancer using plasma methylation markers. While this non-invasive diagnostic and prognostic tool could interest a broad readership, several critical issues require attention.

Major Concerns:

(1) Inconsistencies and clarity issues in data presentation

a) Sample size discrepancies<br /> - The abstract mentions screening 119 CRC tissue samples, while Figure 1 shows 136 tissues. Please clarify if this represents 119 CRC and 17 normal samples.<br /> - The plasma sample numbers vary across sections: the abstract cites 161 samples, Figure 1 shows 116 samples, and the Supplementary Methods mentions 77 samples (13 Normal, 15 NAA, 12 AA, 37 CRC).

b) Methodological inconsistencies<br /> - The Supplementary Material reports 477 hypermethylated sites from TCGA data analysis (Δβ>0.20, FDR<0.05), but Figure 1 indicates 499 sites.<br /> - The manuscript states that analyzing TCGA data across six cancer types identified 499 CRC-specific methylation sites, yet Figure 1 shows 477. Please also explain the rationale for selecting these specific cancer types from TCGA.<br /> - "404 CRC-specific DMRs" mentioned in the main text while "404 MCBs" in Figure 1, the authors need to clarify if these terms are interchangeable or how MCBs are defined.

(2) Methodological documentation

- The Results section requires a more detailed description of marker identification procedures and justification of methodological choices.<br /> - Figure 3 panels need reordering for sequential citation.

(3) Quality control and data transparency

- No quality control metrics are presented for the in-house sequencing data (e.g., sequencing quality, alignment rate, BS conversion rate, coverage, PCA plots for each cohort).<br /> - The analysis code should be publicly available through GitHub or Zenodo.<br /> - At a minimum, processed data should be made publicly accessible to ensure reproducibility.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Surgical resection remains the most effective treatment for retroperitoneal liposarcoma. However, postoperative recurrence is very common and is considered the main cause of disease-related death. Considering the importance and effectiveness of precision medicine, the identification of molecular characteristics is particularly important for the prognosis assessment and individualized treatment of RPLS. In this work, the authors described the gene expression map of RPLS and illustrated an innovative strategy of molecular classification. Through the pathway enrichment of differentially expressed genes, characteristic abnormal biological processes were identified, and RPLS patients were simply categorized based on the two major abnormal biological processes. Subsequently, the classification strategy was further simplified through nonnegative matrix factorization. The authors finally narrowed the classification indicators to two characteristic molecules LEP and PTTG1, and constructed novel molecular prognosis models that presented obviously a great area under the curve. A relatively interpretable logistic regression model was selected to obtain the risk scoring formula, and its clinical relevance and prognostic evaluation efficiency were verified by immunohistochemistry. Recently, prognostic model construction has been a hot topic in the field of oncology. The interesting point of this study is that it effectively screened characteristic molecules and practically simplified the typing strategy on the basis of ensuring high matching clinical relevance. Overall, the study is well-designed and will serve as a valuable resource for RPLS research.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript by Flowers et al. aimed to enhance the accuracy of automated ligand model building by refining the qFit-ligand algorithm. Recognizing that ligands can exhibit conformational flexibility even when bound to receptors, the authors developed a bioinformatic pipeline to model alternate ligand conformations while improving fitting and more energetically favorable conformations.

Strengths:

The authors present a computational pipeline designed to automatically model and fit ligands into electron density maps, identifying potential alternative conformations within the structures.

Weaknesses:

Ligand modeling, particularly in cases of poorly defined electron density, remains a challenging task. The procedure presented in this manuscript exhibits clear limitations in low-resolution electron density maps (resolution > 2.0 Å) and low-occupancy scenarios, significantly restricting its applicability. Considering that the maps used to establish the operational bounds of qFit-ligand were synthetically generated, it's likely that the resolution cutoff will be even stricter when applied to real-world data.<br /> The reported changes in real-space correlation coefficients (RSCC) are not substantial, especially considering a cutoff of 0.1. Furthermore, the significance of improvements in the strain metric remains unclear. A comprehensive analysis of the distribution of this metric across the Protein Data Bank (PDB) would provide valuable insights.<br /> To mitigate the risk of introducing bias by avoiding real strained ligand conformations, the authors should demonstrate the effectiveness of the new procedure by testing it on known examples of strained ligand-substrate complexes.

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2. vary the intonation or pitch of (the voice), especially to express mood or feeling.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors investigate the mechanisms supporting learning to suppress distractors at predictable locations, focusing on proactive suppression mechanisms manifesting before the onset of a distractor. They used EEG and inverted encoding models (IEM). The experimental paradigm alternates between a visual search task and a spatial memory task, followed by a placeholder screen acting as a 'ping' stimulus -i.e., a stimulus to reveal how learned distractor suppression affects hidden priority maps. Behaviorally, their results align with the effects of statistical learning on distractor suppression. Contrary to the proactive suppression hypothesis, which predicts reduced memory-specific tuning of neural representations at the expected distractor location, their IEM results indicate increased tuning at the high-probability distractor location following the placeholder and prior to the onset of the search display.

Strengths:

Overall, the manuscript is well-written and clear, and the research question is relevant and timely, given the ongoing debate on the roles of proactive and reactive components in distractor processing. The use of a secondary task and EEG/IEM to provide a direct assessment of hidden priority maps in anticipation of a distractor is, in principle, a clever approach. The study also provides behavioral results supporting prior literature on distractor suppression at high-probability locations.

Weaknesses:

In response to my comments during the first review, the authors have clarified and further discussed several methodological aspects, limitations, and alternative interpretations, tempering some of their claims and, overall, improving the manuscript. These involved mostly broadening the introduction and discussion of the putative mechanisms in distractor suppression, evaluating alternative explanations due to the dual-task design, clarifying methodological details regarding the inverted encoding model, and discussing the possibility that proactive suppression might actually require enhanced tuning toward the expected feature. While, to some degree, the results may still remain open to alternative explanations, the study, in its current form, presents an interesting paradigm and promising findings that will undoubtedly be useful for future research. I therefore have no major remaining comments.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this work, the authors present a biologically plausible, efficient E-I spiking network model and study various aspects of the model and its relation to experimental observations. This includes a derivation of the network into two (E-I) populations, the study of single-neuron perturbations and lateral-inhibition, the study of the effects of adaptation and metabolic cost, and considerations of optimal parameters. From this, they conclude that their work puts forth a plausible implementation of efficient coding that matches several experimental findings, including feature-specific inhibition, tight instantaneous balance, a 4 to 1 ratio of excitatory to inhibitory neurons, and a 3 to 1 ratio of I-I to E-I connectivity strength.

Strengths:

While many network implementations of efficient coding have been developed, such normative models are often abstract and lacking sufficient detail to compare directly to experiments. The intention of this work to produce a more plausible and efficient spiking model and compare it with experimental data is important and necessary in order to test these models. In rigorously deriving the model with real physical units, this work maps efficient spiking networks onto other more classical biophysical spiking neuron models. It also attempts to compare the model to recent single-neuron perturbation experiments, as well as some long-standing puzzles about neural circuits, such as the presence of separate excitatory and inhibitory neurons, the ratio of excitatory to inhibitory neurons, and E/I balance. One of the primary goals of this paper, to determine if these are merely biological constraints or come from some normative efficient coding objective, is also important. Lastly, though several of the observations have been reported and studied before, this work arguably studies them in more depth, which could be useful for comparing more directly to experiments.

Weaknesses:

This work is the latest among a line of research papers studying the properties of efficient spiking networks. Many of the characteristics and findings here have been discussed before, thereby limiting the new insights that this work can provide. Thus, the conclusions of this work should be considered and understood in the context of those previous works, as the authors state. Furthermore, the number of assumptions and free parameters in the model, though necessary to bring the model closer to biophysical reality, make it more difficult to understand and to draw clear conclusions from. As the authors state, many of the optimality claims depend on these free parameters, such as the dimensionality of the input signal (M=3), the relative weighting of encoding error and metabolic cost, and several others. This raises the possibility that it is not the case that the set of biophysical properties measured in the brain are accounted for by efficient coding, but rather that theories of efficient coding are flexible enough to be consistent with this regime. With this in mind, some of the conclusions made in the text may be overstated and should be considered in this light.

Conclusions, Impact, and additional context:

Notions of optimality are important for normative theories, but they are often studied in simple models with as few free parameters as possible. Biophysically detailed and mechanistic models, on the other hand, will often have many free parameters by their very nature, thereby muddying the connection to optimality. This tradeoff is an important concern in neuroscientific models. Previous efficient spiking models have often been criticized for their lack of biophysically-plausible characteristics, such as large synaptic weights, dense connectivity, and instantaneous communication. This work is an important contribution in showing that such networks can be modified to be much closer to biophysical reality without losing their essential properties. Though the model presented does suffer from complexity issues which raise questions about its connections to "optimal" efficient coding, the extensive study of various parameter dependencies offers a good characterization of the model and puts its conclusions in context.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Hensel investigated the implications of SARS-CoV-2 RNA secondary structure in synonymous and nonsynonymous mutation frequency. The analysis integrated estimates of mutational fitness generated by Bloom and Neher (from publicly available patient sequences) and a population-averaged model of RNA base-pairing from Lan et al (from DMS mutational profiling with sequencing, DMS-MaPseq)

The results show that base-pairing limits the frequency of some synonymous substitutions (including the most common C→T), but not all: G→A and A→G substitutions seem unaffected by base-pairing.

The author then addressed nonsynonymous C→T substitutions at basepaired positions. While there is still a generally higher estimated mutational fitness at unpaired positions, they propose a coarse adjustment to disentangle base-pairing from inherent mutational fitness at a given position. This adjustment reveals that nonsynonymous substitutions at base-paired positions, which define major variants, have higher mutational fitness.

Overall, this manuscript highlights the importance of considering RNA secondary structure in viral evolution studies.

The conclusions of this work are generally well supported by the data presented. Particularly, the author acknowledges most limitations of the analyses and addresses them. Even though no new sequencing results were generated, the author used available data generated from the analysis of roughly seven million sequenced patient samples. Finally, the author discusses ways to improve the current available models.

There are a number of limitations of this work that should be highlighted, specifically in regard to the secondary structure data used in this paper. The Lan et al. dataset was generated using a multiplicity of infection (MOI) of 0.05, 24 hours post-infection (h.p.i.). At such a low MOI and late timepoint, viral replication is not synchronous and sequencing artifacts might be generated by cell debris and viral RNA degradation, therefore impacting the population-averaged results. In addition, the nonsynonymous base-paired positions in Figure 2 have relatively high population-averaged DMS reactivity, which suggests those positions are dynamic. Therefore, the proposed adjustment could result in an incorrect estimation of their inherent mutational fitness.

Additionally, like all such RNA probing experiments within cells, it remains difficult to deconvolve DMS/SHAPE low reactivity with RNA accessibility (e.g. from protein binding).

This work presents clear methods and an easy-to-access bioinformatic pipeline, which can be applied to other RNA viruses. Of note, it can be readily implemented in existing datasets. Finally, this study raises novel mechanistic questions on how mutational fitness is not correlated to secondary structure in the same way for every substitution.

Overall, this work highlights the importance of studying mutational fitness beyond an immune evasion perspective. On the other hand, it also adds to the viral intrinsic constraints to immune evasion.

Comments on revisions:

Following revision by the author, our concerns have been addressed. The additional analysis strengthens the conclusions & the revisions to the text have improved the manuscript for a general audience.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Excessive sucrose is a possible initial factor for the development of metabolic dysfunction-associated fatty liver disease (MAFLD). To investigate the possibility that intervention with JNK inhibitor could lead to the treatment of metabolic dysfunction caused by excessive sucrose intake, the authors performed multi-organ transcriptomics analysis (liver, visceral fat (vWAT), skeletal muscle, and brain) in a rat model of MAFLD induced by sucrose overtake (+ JNK inhibitor treatment).

The major strengths and weakness of this study are as follows.

Strengths:

・It has been previously reported that inhibition of JNK signalling can contribute to the prevention of hepatic steatosis (HS) and related metabolic syndrome in other models, but the role of JNK signalling in the metabolic disruption caused by excessive intake of sucrose, a possible initial factor for the development of MAFLD, has not been well understood, and the authors have addressed this point.<br /> ・This study is also important because pharmacological therapy for MAFLD has not yet been established.<br /> ・By obtaining transcriptomic data in multiple organs and comprehensively analyzing the data using gene co-expression network (GCN) analysis and genome-scale metabolic models (GEM), the authors showed the multi-organ interaction in not only in the pathology of MAFLD caused by excessive sucrose intake but also in the treatment effects by JNK-IN-5A.<br /> ・Since JNK signalling has diverse physiological functions in many organs, the authors effectively assessed possible side effects with a view to the clinical application of JNK-IN-5A.

Weaknesses:

・The metabolic process activities were evaluated using RNA-seq results in Figure 7, but direct data such as metabolite measurements are lacking.<br /> ・There is a lack of consistency in the data between JNK-IN-5A_D1 and _D2, and there is no sufficient data-based explanation for why the effects observed in D1 were inconsistent in the D2 samples.<br /> ・Although it is valuable that the authors were able to suggest the possibility of JNK inhibitor as a therapeutic strategy for MAFLD, the evaluation of the therapeutic effect was limited to evaluation of plasma TG, LDH, and gene expression changes. As there was no evaluation of liver tissue images, it is unclear what changes were brought about in the liver by the excessive sucrose intake and the treatment with JNK-IN-5A.

As mentioned in the Weakness section, biological data is insufficient, such as the lack of metabolite measurements and a histological evaluation of the liver. However, overall, the authors successfully provided the valuable insights that the JNK inhibitor has a cross-organ therapeutic effect on their MAFLD model induced by sucrose overtake. Their insist is supported by convincing data, comprehensively analysing the transcriptomic data obtained from multiple organs using GCN (gene co-expression network) analysis and GEM (genome-scale metabolic modelling).

Their comprehensive transcriptomic analysis in multiple organs, including the brain, has demonstrated that the effects of drugs are more widespread than just on specific tissues thought to be the main target, indicating the importance of focusing on tissue interactions when we assess the effects of drugs. Also, the data set in this study will be useful for comparative evaluation with transcriptomics data for other MALFD models.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors set out to develop a tissue culture method in which to study the different regenerative abilities of the central and peripheral branch of sensory axons. Neurons developed a small and large branch, which have different regenerative abilities, different transport rates and different microtubule properties. The study provides convincing evidence that the two axonal branches differ in a way to corresponds to in vivo. The different regenerative abilities of the two branches are an important observation, because until now it has not been clear whether this difference is intrinsic to the neuron and axons or due to differences in the environment surrounding the axons. The authors have then looked for molecular explanations of the differences between the branches. They find different transport rates and different microtubule dynamics. The different microtubule dynamics are explained by differing levels of spastin, an enzyme that severs microtubules encouraging dynamics.

Strengths:

The differences between the two branches are clearly shown, together with differences in transport, microtubule dynamics and regeneration. The in vitro model is novel and could be widely used. The methods used are robust and generally accepted.

Weaknesses:

The revised version of the paper has addressed the weaknesses that were identified.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Zhang et al. explores the effect of autophagy regulator ATG6 on NPR1-mediated immunity. The authors propose that ATG6 directly interacts with NPR1 in the nucleus to increase its stability and promote NPR1-dependent immune gene expression and pathogen resistance. This novel role of ATG6 is proposed to be independent of its role in autophagy in the cytoplasm. The authors demonstrate through biochemical analysis that ATG6 interacts with NPR1 in yeast and very weakly in vitro. They further demonstrate using overexpression transgenic plants that in the presence of ATG6-mcherry the stability of NPR1-GFP and its nuclear pool is increased.

Comments on latest version:

The initial apprehensions about statistical oversights and the use of an unclear nuclear marker were fixed. The implementation of the nls-mCherry for nuclear co-localization and additional statistical analyses was done well. However, the functional importance pertaining to cytoplasmic accumulation of the ARG6 protein should ideally be explored in more detail in future studies.

Updated sections:<br /> • Figure 1e: Added statistical analysis and updated with a nuclear marker.<br /> • Line Revisions: Terminology corrections for "infection" instead of "invasion".<br /> • NLS Analysis: Extended alignment and inclusion of conserved domains with predicted NLS (cut-off score: 2.6).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Sphingosine-1-phosphate (S1P) metabolic and signaling genes are expressed highly in retinal Müller glia (MG) cells. This study tested how S1P signaling regulates glial phenotype, dedifferentiation of, reprogramming into proliferating MG-derived progenitor cells (MGPCs), and neuronal differentiation of the progeny of MGPCs using in vivo chick retina. Major techniques used are Sc-RNASeq and immunohistochemistry to determine the gene expression and proliferation of MG cells that co-label with signaling antibodies or mRNA FISH following treating the in vivo eyes with various S1P signaling antagonists, agonists, and signal modulators. The major conclusions drawn are supported by the results presented. However, the methodology they have used to modulate the S1P pathway using various chemical drugs raises questions about the outcomes and whether those are the real effects of S1P receptor modulation or S1P synthesis inhibition.

Strengths:

- Use of elaborated single-cell RNAseq expression data.<br /> - Use of FISH for S1P receptors and kinase as a good quality antibody is not available.<br /> - Use of EdU assay in combination with IHC<br /> - Comparison with human and Zebrafish Sc-RNA data

Weaknesses:

The methodology is not very clean. A number of drugs (inhibitors/ antagonists/agonists signal modulators) are used to modulate S1P expression or signaling in the retina without evidence that these drugs are reaching the target cells. No alternative evaluation if the drugs, in fact, are effective. The drug solubility in the vehicle and in the vitreous is not provided, and how did they decide on using a single dose of each drug to have the optimal expected effect on the S1P pathway?

In the revision, the authors provided justification for the use of single doses of the modulators and how they could pass the retinal barrier and affect the MG gene expression and receptor functioning.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this article Wen et. al., describe the development of a 'proof-of-concept' bi-functional vector based out of HSV-deltaICP-34.5's ability to purge latent HIV-1 and SIV genomes from cells. They show that co-infection of latent J-lat T-cell lines with a HSV-deltaICP-34.5 vector can reactivate HIV-1 from a latent state. Over- or stable expression of ICP 34.5 ORF in these cells can arrest latent HIV-1 genomes from transcription, even in the presence of latency reversal agents. ICP34.5 can co-IP with- and de-phosphorylate IKKa/b to block its interaction with NF-k/B transcription factor. Additionally, ICP34.5 can interact with HSF1 which was identified by mass-spec. Thus, the authors propose that the latency reversal effect of HSV-deltaICP-34.5 in co-infected JLat cells is due to modulatory effects on the IKKa/b-NF-kB and PP1-HSF-1 pathway.

Next the authors cleverly construct a bifunctional HSV based vector with deleted ICP34.5 and 47 ORFs to purge latency and avoid immunological refluxes, and additionally expand the application of this construct as a vaccine by introducing SIV genes. They use this 'vaccine' in mouse models and show the expected SIV-immune responses. Experiments in rhesus macaques (RM), further elicit potential for their approach to reactivate SIV genomes and at the same time block their replication by antibodies. What was interesting in the SIV experiments is that the dual-functional vector vaccine containing sPD1- and SIV Gag/Env ORFs effectively delayed SIV rebound in RMs and in some cases almost neutralized viral DNA copy detection in serum. Very promising indeed, however there are some questions I wish the authors explored to answer, detailed below.

Overall, this is an elegant and timely work demonstrating the feasibility of reducing virus rebound in animals, and potentially expand to clinical studies. The work was well written, and sections were clearly discussed.

Strengths:

The work is well designed, rationale explained and written very clearly for lay readers.<br /> Claims are adequately supported by evidence and well designed experiments including controls.

Weaknesses:

(1) It looks like ICP0 is also involved in latency reversal effects. More follow-up work will be required to test if this is in fact true.

(2) It is difficult to estimate the depletion of the latent viral reservoir. The authors have tried to address this issue. A more convincing argument to this reviewer will be data to demonstrate that after the bi-functional vaccine, the animals show overall reduction in the number of circulating latent cells. The feasibility to obtain such a result is not clearly demonstrated.

(3) The authors state that the reduced virus rebound detected following bi-functional vaccine delivery is due to latent genomes becoming activated and steady-state neutralization of these viruses by antibody response. This needs to be demonstrated. Perhaps cell-culture experiments from specimen taken from animals might help address this issue. In lab cultures one could create environments without antibody responses, under these conditions one would expect higher level of viral loads being released in response to the vaccine in question.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors have tried to determine the regulatory role of Phosphoglycerate mutate (PGAM), an enzyme involved in converting 3-phosphoglycerate to 2-phosphoglycerate in glycolysis, in differentiation and suppressive function of regulatory CD4 T cells through de novo serine synthesis. This is done by contributing one carbon metabolism and eventually epigenetic regulation of Treg differentiation.

Strengths:

The authors have rigorously used inhibitors and antisense RNA to verify the contribution of these pathways in Treg differentiation in-vitro. This has also been verified in an in-vivo murine model of autoimmune colitis. This has further clinical implications in autoimmune disorders and cancer.

Weaknesses:

The authors have used inhibitors to study pathways involved in Treg differentiation. However, they have not studied the context of overexpression of PGAM, which was the actual reason to pursue this study.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Troyer and colleagues have studied the in vivo localisation and mobility of the E.coli RNaseE (a protein key for mRNA degradation in all bacteria) as well as the impact of two key protein segments (MTS and CTD) on RNase E cellular localisation and mobility. Such sequences are important to study since there is significant sequence diversity within bacteria, as well as a lack of clarity about their functional effects. Using single-molecule tracking in living bacteria, the authors confirmed that >90% of RNaseE localised on the membrane, and measured its diffusion coefficient. Via a series of mutants, they also showed that MTS leads to stronger membrane association and slower diffusion compared to a transmembrane motif (despite the latter being more embedded in the membrane), and that the CTD weakens membrane binding. The study also rationalised how the interplay of MTS and CTD modulate mRNA metabolism (and hence gene expression) in different cellular contexts.

Strengths:

The study uses powerful single-molecule tracking in living cells along with solid quantitative analysis, and provides direct measurements for the mobility and localisation of E.coli RNaseE, adding to information from complementary studies and other bacteria. The exploration of different membrane-binding motifs (both MTS and CTD) has novelty and provides insight on how sequence and membrane interactions can control function of protein-associated membranes and complexes. The methods and membrane-protein standards used contribute to the toolbox for molecular analysis in live bacteria.

Weaknesses:

The Results sections can be structured better to present the main hypotheses to be tested. For example, since it is well known that RNase E is membrane-localised (via its MTS), one expects its mobility to be mainly controlled by the interaction with the membrane (rather than with other molecules, such as polysomes and the degradosome). The results indeed support this expectation - however, the manuscript in its current form does not lay down the dominant hypothesis early on (see second Results chapter), and instead considers the rifampicin-addition results as "surprising"; it will be best to outline the most likely hypotheses, and then discuss the results in that light.

Similarly, the authors should first discuss the different modes of interaction for a peripheral anchor vs a transmembrane anchor, outline the state of knowledge and possibilities, and then discuss their result; in its current version, the ms considers the LacY2 and LacY6 faster diffusion compared to MTS "remarkable", but considering the very different mode of interaction, there is no clear expectation prior to the experiment. In the same section, it would be good to see how the MD simulations capture the motion of LacY6 and LacY12, since this will provide a set of results consistent with the experimental set.

The work will benefit from further exploration of the membrane-RNase E interactions; e.g., the effect of membrane composition is explored by just using two different growth media (which on its own is not a well-controlled setting), and no attempts to change the MTS itself were made. The manuscript will benefit from considering experiments that explore the diversity of RNaseE interactions in different species; for example, the authors may want to consider the possibility of using the membrane-localisation signals of functional homologs of RNaseE in different bacteria (e.g., B. subtilis). It would be good to look at the effect of CTD deletions in a similar context (i.e., in addition to the MTS substitution by LacY2 and LacY6).

The manuscript will benefit from further discussion of the unstructured nature of the CTD, especially since the RNase CTD is well known to form condensates in Caulobacter crescentus; it is unclear how the authors excluded any roles for RNaseE phase separation in the mobility of RNaseE in E.coli cells.

Some statements in the Discussion require support with example calculations or toning down substantially. Specifically, it is not clear how the authors conclude that RNaseE interacts with its substrate for a short time (and what this time may actually be); further, the speculation about the MTS "not being an efficient membrane-binding motif for diffusion" lacks adequate support as it stands.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript by Alexander et al describes a careful and rigorous application of multiomics to mouse primordial germ cells (PGCs) and their surrounding gonadal cells during the period of sex differentiation.

Strengths:

In thoughtfully designed figures, the authors identify both known and new candidate gene regulatory networks in differentiating XX and XY PGCs and sex-specific interactions of PGCs with supporting cells. In XY germ cells, novel findings include the predicted set of TFs regulating Bnc2, which is known to promote mitotic arrest, as well as the TFs POU6F1/2 and FOXK2 and their predicted targets that function in mitosis and signal transduction. In XX germ cells, the authors deconstruct the regulation of the premeiotic replication factor Stra8, which reveals TFs involved in meiosis, retinoic acid signaling, pluripotency and epigenetics among predictions; this finding, along with evidence supporting regulatory potential of retinoic acid receptors in meiotic gene expression is an important addition to the debate over the necessity of retinoic acid in XX meiotic initiation. In addition, a self-regulatory network of other TFs is hypothesized in XX differentiating PGCs, including TFAP2c, TCF5, ZFX, MGA and NR6A1, which is predicted to turn on meiotic and Wnt signaling targets. Finally, analysis of PGC-support cell interactions during sex differentiation reveals substantially more interactions in XX, via WNTs and BMPs, as well as some new signaling pathways that predominate in XY PGCs including ephrins, CADM1, Desert Hedgehog and matrix metalloproteases. This dataset will be an excellent resource for the community, motivating functional studies and serving as a discovery platform.

Weaknesses:

While the authors performed all of their comparisons between XX versus XY datasets at each timepoint, a more systematic analysis of expression and accessibility changes across time for each sex would be valuable. It remains possible that common mechanisms of differentiation to XX and XY could be missing from this analysis that focused on sex-specific differences.

Specific Questions:

(1) Line 461: "the population of E13.5 XX PGCs displaying the strongest Stra8 expression levels corresponded to the same population of XX PGCs with the highest module score of early meiotic prophase I genes (Fig. 3c; Supplementary Fig. 3a-b)" however the Stra8+ XX PGCs that do not robustly express meiotic genes should be examined to understand more about their differentiation potential. The authors are well-poised to identify the likely trajectories available to cell subsets in their dataset, and not doing so is a missed opportunity.

(2) The authors state that "we found that Stra8, Rec8, Rnf2, Sycp1, Sycp2, Ccnb3, and Zglp1 contain the RA receptor motifs in their regulatory sequences (Supplementary Figure 4g)." What is the strength of the RA->meiosis pathway compared to other mechanisms regulating meiosis? Perhaps the authors could take this analysis further with the following questions: (1) ask whether meiotic genes more enriched in RA motifs compared to other expressed genes or other motifs (2) compare the strength of peak-gene correlations for all peaks containing RA receptor motifs vs. those with peaks for Zglp1, Rnf2, etc binding. The strengths of these correlations could provide clues to how much gene expression varies in response to RA exposure vs. modulation of these other factors and thus tell us something about how much RA is playing a role.

(3) In figure 4, the shift from promoters in E11.5 XX PGCs to distal intergenic regions is fascinating. What can we learn about epigenetic reprogramming/methylation changes across gene bodies?

(4) The overlap between gene targets of TCFL5 with other highly expressed TFs differentially upregulated in E13.5 XX PGCs over XY suggests ambiguity regarding its role as a central or high-level regulator of differentiation; as in vivo validation has not been performed, I suggest softening this conclusion.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Initial Review:

This paper reports investigations of chromosome stiffness in oocytes and spermatocytes> the paper shows that prophase I spermatocytes and MI/MII oocytes yield high Young Modulus values in the assay the authors applied. Deficiency in each one of three meiosis-specific cohesins they claim did not affect this result and increased stiffness was seen in aged oocytes but not in oocytes treated with the DNA-damaging agent etoposide.

The paper reports some interesting observations which are in line with a report by the same authors of 2020 where increased stiffness of spermatocyte chromosomes was already shown. In that sense, it the current manuscript is an extension of that previous paper and thus novelty is somewhat limited. The paper is also largely descriptive as it does neither propose mechanism nor report factors that determine the chromosomal stiffness.

There are several points that need to be considered.

Limitations of the study and the conclusions are not discussed in "Discussion"; that's a significant gap. Even more so as the authors rely on just one experimental system for all their data - no independent verification - and that in vitro system may be prone to artefacts.

It is somewhat unfortunate that they jump between oocytes and spermatocytes to address the cohesin question. Prophase I (pachytene) spermatocytes chromosomes are not directly comparable to MI or MII oocyte chromosomes. In fact, the authors report Young Modulus values of 3700 for MI oocytes and only 2700 for spermatocyte prophase chromosomes, illustrating this difference. Why not using oocyte-specific cohesin deficiencies?

It remains unclear whether the treatment of oocytes with the detergent TritonX-100 affects the spindle and thus the chromosomes isolated directly from the Triton-lysed oocytes. In fact, it is rather likely that the detergent affects chromatin-associated proteins and thus structural features of the chromosomes.

Why did the authors use mouse strains of different genetic background, CD-1 and C57BL/6? That makes comparison difficult. Breeding of heterozygous cohesin mutants will yield the ideal controls, i.e. littermates.

How did the authors capture chromosome axes from STAG3-deficient spermatocytes which feature very little if any axes? How representative are those chromosomes that could be captured?

Line 135: that statement is not substantiated; better to show retraction data and full reversibility.

Line 144: the authors claim that the Young Modulus of MII oocytes is "slightly" higher than that of mitotic cells (MEFs). Well, "slightly" means it is rather similar and therefore the commonly used statement that MII is similar to mitosis is OK - contrary to the authors claim.

There are a lot of awkward sentences in this text. Some sentences lack words, are not sufficiently precise in wording and/or logic, and there are numerous typos. Some examples can be found in lines 89 (grammar), 94, 95 ("looked"), 98, 101 ("difference" - between what?), and some are commonplaces or superficial (lines 92/93, 120..., ). Occasionally the present and past tense are mixed (e.g. in M&M). Thus the manuscript is quite badly written.

Comments on revisions:

In their revised paper, Liu et al have addressed a number of my concerns and thus the paper is clearly improved in several details, e.g. in showing a control for a potential effect of the detergent (new supplies. fig. 5). Other points were not sufficiently addressed though.

I remain sceptical about using mice of a substantially different genetic background (CD1) as controls in the analysis of the cohesin mutants (C57BL/6). The argument that C57BL/6 yield smaller litter size is, frankly, ridiculous. Hundreds of labs worldwide extensively and successfully work with C57BL/6. Further, the paper Liu et al. cite to argue that there are no (or minor) differences in chromosome structure (Biggs et al., 2020, which is from the same lab) of the two mouse strains deals with spermatocyte chromosomes only. Nothing there on oocyte chromosomes. And there is no direct comparison within the same experimental setting since in Biggs et al only C57BL/6 is used (sic!). Thus, this is not a convincing argument. It would also be reassuring to see an independent reference directly comparing different genetic backgrounds (authors may have a look at older papers of Pat Hunt/Terry Hassold where they may find some data). In my experience, differences in genetic background do play a very clear role in meiosis, e.g. in the timing of juvenile spermatogenesis, in the onset of puberty, in the kinetics of oocyte maturation, in the success of PBE, and in biophysical properties as seen in the stability of oocytes during experimental handling. In fact, the authors themselves indicate differences in reproduction by stating the low litter size of C57BL/6. Thus, I strongly advise carrying out at least a few key experiments using C57BL/6 control mice (which can very easily and cheaply be obtained from vendors; the authors have used C57BL/6 wt before - see their 2020 paper).

The answer to my question #5 is not really satisfactory. I asked specifically how the authors isolated the very small chromosomes from Stag3-/- spermatocytes, where the axes are almost non-existing. The authors refer to suppl. fig. 3, but that shows isolation from Rec8-/- spermatocytes, which still have nicely visible, well-formed, shortened axes. Suppl. fig. 4 shows this for Rad21l-/-. Why not show this for the Stag3-/-, which in this respect is the most critical and difficult, and specifically answer my question?

The overall criticism of the lack of conceptual novelty of the basic message of the paper and of very little if any insights into the mechanisms and factors determining the changes in chromosome stiffness remains.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

In An image-computable model of speeded decision-making, the authors introduce and fit a combined CCN-EAM (a 'VAM') to flanker-task-like data. They show that the VAM can fit mean RTs and accuracies as well as the congruency effect that is present in the data, and subsequently analyze the VAM in terms of where in the network congruency effects arise.

I have mixed feelings about this manuscript, as I appreciate the innovative efforts to combine CNNs with EAMs in a new class of cognitive models, while also having some reservations from an EAM perspective. The idea of combining these approaches has great potential, and I'm excited to see where this research will lead. However, I do have some concerns about the quality of fit between the behavioral data and the model. Specifically, the RT distributions, delta plots, and conditional accuracy function don't appear to be well-matched by the VAM. The conflict effects on behavioral data are well-established and typically considered crucial to understanding the underlying cognitive process. Unfortunately, it seems that these parts of the data don't fit well with the proposed model.

This disparity is not entirely surprising. The EAM literature suggests that LBA models might not be suitable for conflict tasks, and the presented results seem to confirm this concern. Conflict EAMs, including the DMC (e.g., Ulrich et al., 2015; Evans & Servant, 2022; Lee & Sewell 2024), propose dynamic drift rates with a fast automatic process that is gradually withdrawn from evidence accumulation over time. This approach results in congruency effects arising from temporal dynamics, not spatial representations.<br /> In contrast, the VAM imposes static drift rates in the LBA model, leading to an effect between drift rates that translates to changes in representations. However, this account does not adequately explain the behavioral data, and the proposed representational geometry explanation is therefore limited.

My concerns are addressed in the revised manuscript, but I struggle to understand why the authors distinguish between explaining mean effects across individuals and congruency effects within individuals. These concepts seem related, and issues at the individual level could propagate to the group mean. Furthermore, I find it challenging to accept that dynamics merely act 'in concert' with the orthogonalization mechanism, as it seems possible that an account that uses a time-varying EAM may not require any orthogonalization mechanism in the first place. The orthogonalization mechanism might have arisen because the model does not have the possibility to account for the conflict effect from temporal effects, instead of spatial effects. I could envision a CNN-DMC in which conflict effects arise only at the level of the choice model (e.g., as a time-varying filter that changes which information is read out from the visual system, rather than due to changes in the representations in the visual system itself). This possibility should be acknowledged in the paper, and it would be interesting to discuss how such an account would be tested.

While I appreciate the technological advancement presented in this paper, my concerns are not about implementation details but rather about the choice of models and their consequences. I believe that a more in-depth exploration of which conclusions can be drawn, and which model comparisons would be required to reach a final conclusion.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, the authors have started off using an immortalized human cell line and then gene edited it to decrease the levels of VEGF1 (in order to influence vascularization), and the levels of Runx2 (to decrease osteogenesis). They first transplanted these cells with a collagen scaffold. The modified cells showed a decrease in vascularization when VEGF1 was decreased, and suggested an increase in cartilage formation.

In another study, matrix generated by these cells subsequently remodeled into a bone marrow organ. When RUNX2 was decreased, the cells did not mineralize in vitro, and their matrices expressed types I and II collagen but not type X collagen in vitro, in comparison with unedited cells. In vivo, the author claims that remodeling of the matrices into bone was somewhat inhibited. Lastly, they utilized matrices generated by RUNX2-edited cells to regenerate chondro-osteal defects. They suggest that the edited cells regenerated cartilage in comparison with unedited cells.

Strengths:

- The notion that inducing changes in the ECM by genetically editing the cells is a novel one, as it has long been thought that ECM composition influences cell activity.<br /> - If successful, it may be possible to make off the shelf ECMS to carry out different types of tissue repair.

Weaknesses:

- The authors have not demonstrated robust cartilage formation (quantitation would be useful).<br /> - Measuring total GAG content does not prove the presence of cartilage<br /> - There are numerous overstatements about forming and implanting cartilage.<br /> - Although it is implied, RUNX2 deletion did not improve cartilage formation by the modified cells.<br /> - In the control line, MSOD-B there were variability in the amount of safranin O positive material in various histological panels in the figures.; more quantitation is needed.<br /> - In the in vivo articular defect experiments, an untreated injured joint is needed as a negative control.<br /> - Statements about bone generation are often not reflective of the microCT data presented.<br /> - The discussion over-interprets the results.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Dong et al. present a thorough investigation into the potential of repurposing citalopram, an SSRI, for hepatocellular carcinoma (HCC) therapy. The study highlights the dual mechanisms by which citalopram exerts anti-tumor effects: reprogramming tumor-associated macrophages (TAMs) toward an anti-tumor phenotype via C5aR1 modulation and suppressing cancer cell metabolism through GLUT1 inhibition while enhancing CD8+ T cell activation. The findings emphasize the potential of drug repurposing strategies and position C5aR1 as a promising immunotherapeutic target. However, certain aspects of experimental design and clinical relevance could be further developed to strengthen the study's impact.

Strength:

It provides detailed evidence of citalopram's non-canonical action on C5aR1, demonstrating its ability to modulate macrophage behavior and enhance CD8+ T cell cytotoxicity. The use of DARTS assays, in silico docking, and gene signature network analyses offers robust validation of drug-target interactions. Additionally, the dual focus on immune cell reprogramming and metabolic suppression presents a thorough strategy for HCC therapy. By emphasizing the potential for existing drugs like citalopram to be repurposed, the study also underscores the feasibility of translational applications.

Major weaknesses/suggestions:

The dataset and signature database used for GSEA analyses are not clearly specified, limiting reproducibility. The manuscript does not fully explore the potential promiscuity of citalopram's interactions across GLUT1, C5aR1, and SERT1, which could provide a deeper understanding of binding selectivity. The absence of GLUT1 knockdown or knockout experiments in macrophages prevents a complete assessment of GLUT1's role in macrophage versus tumor cell metabolism. Furthermore, there is minimal discussion of clinical data on SSRI use in HCC patients. Incorporating survival outcomes based on SSRI treatment could strengthen the study's translational relevance.

By addressing these limitations, the manuscript could make an even stronger contribution to the fields of cancer immunotherapy and drug repurposing.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This manuscript asks an interesting and important question: what part of 'cerebellar' motor dysfunction is an acute control problem vs a compensatory strategy to the acute control issue? The authors use a cerebellar 'blockade' protocol, consisting of high-frequency stimuli applied to the cerebellar peduncle which is thought to interfere with outflow signals. This protocol was applied in monkeys performing center outreaching movements and has been published from this laboratory in several preceding studies. I found the take-home-message broadly convincing and clarifying - that cerebellar block reduces muscle activation acutely particularly in movements that involve multiple joints and therefore invoke interaction torques, and that movements progressively slow down to in effect 'compensate' for these acute tone deficits. The manuscript was generally well written, and the data was clear, convincing, and novel. My comments below highlight suggestions to improve clarity and sharpen some arguments.

Primary comments:

(1) Torque vs. tone: Is it known whether this type of cerebellar blockade is reducing muscle tone or inducing any type of acute co-contraction that could influence limb velocity through mechanisms different than 'atonia'? If so, the authors should discuss this information in the discussion section starting around line 336, and clarify that this motivates (if it does) the focus on 'torques' rather than muscle activation. Relatedly, besides the fact that there are joints involved, is there a reason there is so much emphasis on torque per se? If the muscle is deprived of sufficient drive, it would seem that it would be more straightforward to conceptualize the deficit as one of insufficient timed drive to a set of muscles than joint force. Some text better contextualizing the choices made here would be sufficient to address this concern. I found statements like those in the introduction "hand velocity was low initially, reflecting a primary muscle torque deficit" to be lacking in substance. Either that statement is self-evident or the alternative was not made clear. Finally, emphasize that it is a loss of self-generated torque at the shoulder that accounts for the velocity deficits. At times the phrasing makes it seem that there is a loss of some kind of passive torque.

(2) Please clarify some of the experimental metrics: Ln 94 RESULTS. The success rate is used as a primary behavioral readout, but what constitutes success is not clearly defined in the methods. In addition to providing a clear definition in the methods section, it would also be helpful for the authors to provide a brief list of criteria used to determine a 'successful' movement in the results section before the behavioral consequences of stimulation are described. In particular, the time and positional error requirements should be clear.

(3) Based on the polar plot in Figure 1c, it seemed odd to consider Targets 1-4 outward and 5-8 inward movements, when 1 and 5 are side-to-side. Is there a rationale for this grouping or might results be cleaner by cleanly segregating outward (targets 2-4) and inward (targets 6-8) movements? Indeed, by Figure 3 where interaction torques are measured, this grouping would seem to align with the hypothesis much more cleanly since it is with T2,T3,and T4 where clear coupling torques deficits are seen with cerebellar block.

4. I did not follow Figure 3d. Both the figure axis labels and the description in the main text were difficult to follow. Furthermore, the color code per animal made me question whether the linear regression across the entire dataset was valid, or would be better performed within animal, and the regressions summarized across animals. The authors should look again at this section and figure.

(5) Line 206+ The rationale for examining movement decomposition with a cerebellar block is presented as testing the role of the cerebellum in timing. Yet it is not spelled out what movement decomposition and trajectory variability have to do with motor timing per se.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This is a short and straightforward paper describing BOLD fMRI and depth electrode measurements from two regions of the fusiform gyrus that show either higher or lower BOLD responses to faces vs. objects (which I will call face-positive and face-negative regions). In these regions, which were studied separately in two patients undergoing epilepsy surgery, spiking activity increased for faces relative to objects in the face-positive region and decreased for faces relative to objects in the face-negative region. Interestingly, about 30% of neurons in the face-negative region did not respond to objects and decreased their responses below baseline in response to faces (absolute suppression).

Strengths:

These patient data are valuable, with many recording sessions and neurons from human face-selective regions, and the methods used for comparing face and object responses in both fMRI and electrode recordings were robust and well-established. The finding of absolute suppression could clarify the nature of face selectivity in human fusiform gyrus since previous fMRI studies of the face-negative region could not distinguish whether face < object responses came from absolute suppression, or just relatively lower but still positive responses to faces vs. objects.

Weaknesses:

The authors claim that the results tell us about both 1) face-selectivity in the fusiform gyrus, and 2) the physiological basis of the BOLD signal. However, I would like to see more of the data that supports the first claim, and I am not sure the second claim is supported.

(1) The authors report that ~30% of neurons showed absolute suppression, but those data are not shown separately from the neurons that only show relative reductions. It is difficult to evaluate the absolute suppression claim from the short assertion in the text alone (lines 105-106), although this is a critical claim in the paper.<br /> (2) I am not sure how much light the results shed on the physiological basis of the BOLD signal. The authors write that the results reveal "that BOLD decreases can be due to relative, but also absolute, spike suppression in the human brain" (line 120). But I think to make this claim, you would need a region that exclusively had neurons showing absolute suppression, not a region with a mix of neurons, some showing absolute suppression and some showing relative suppression, as here. The responses of both groups of neurons contribute to the measured BOLD signal, so it seems impossible to tell from these data how absolute suppression per se drives the BOLD response.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aimed to investigate the effects of organic strip cropping on carabid richness and density as well as on crop yields. They find on average higher carabid richness and density in strip cropping and organic farming, but not in all cases.

Strengths:

Based on highly resolved species-level carabid data, the authors present estimates for many different crop types, some of them rarely studied, at the same time. The authors did a great job investigating different aspects of the assemblages (although some questions remain concerning the analyses) and they present their results in a visually pleasing and intuitive way.

Weaknesses:

The authors used data from four different strip cropping experiments and there is no real replication in space as all of these differed in many aspects (different crops, different areas between years, different combinations, design of the strip cropping (orientation and width), sampling effort and sample sizes of beetles (differing more than 35 fold between sites; L 100f); for more differences see L 237ff). The reader gets the impression that the authors stitched data from various places together that were not made to fit together. This may not be a problem per se but it surely limits the strength of the data as results for various crops may only be based on small samples from one or two sites (it is generally unclear how many samples were used for each crop/crop combination).

One of my major concerns is that it is completely unclear where carabids were collected. As some strips were 3m wide, some others were 6m and the monoculture plots large, it can be expected that carabids were collected at different distances from the plot edge. This alone, however, was conclusively shown to affect carabid assemblages dramatically and could easily outweigh the differences shown here if not accounted for in the models (see e.g. Boetzl et al. (2024) or Knapp et al. (2019) among many other studies on within field-distributions of carabids).

The authors hint at a related but somewhat different problem in L 137ff - carabid assemblages sampled in strips were sampled in closer proximity to each other than assemblages in monoculture fields which is very likely a problem. The authors did not check whether their results are spatially autocorrelated and this shortcoming is hard to account for as it would have required a much bigger, spatially replicated design in which distances are maintained from the beginning. This limitation needs to be stated more clearly in the manuscript.

Similarly, we know that carabid richness and density depend strongly on crop type (see e.g. Toivonen et al. (2022)) which could have biased results if the design is not balanced (this information is missing but it seems to be the case, see e.g. Celeriac in Almere in 2022).

A more basic problem is that the reader neither learns where traps were located, how missing traps were treated for analyses how many samples there were per crop or crop combination (in a simple way, not through Table S7 - there has to have been a logic in each of these field trials) or why there are differences in the number of samples from the same location and year (see Table S7). This information needs to be added to the methods section.

As carabid assemblages undergo rapid phenological changes across the year, assemblages that are collected at different phenological points within and across years cannot easily be compared. The authors would need to standardize for this and make sure that the assemblages they analyze are comparable prior to analyses. Otherwise, I see the possibility that the reported differences might simply be biased by phenology.

Surrounding landscape structure is known to affect carabid richness and density and could thus also bias observed differences between treatments at the same locations (lower overall richness => lower differences between treatments). Landscape structure has not been taken into account in any way.

In the statistical analyses, it is unclear whether the authors used estimated marginal means (as they should) - this needs to be clarified.

In addition, and as mentioned by Dr. Rasmann in the previous round (comment 1), the manuscript, in its current form, still suffers from simplified generalizations that 'oversell' the impact of the study and should be avoided. The authors restricted their analyses to ground beetles and based their conclusions on a design with many 'heterogeneities' - they should not draw conclusions for farmland biodiversity but stick to their system and report what they found. Although I understand the authors have previously stated that this is 'not practically feasible', the reason for this comment is simply to say that the authors should not oversell their findings.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The reduction in a response to a specific stimulus after repeated exposures is called habituation. Alterations in habituation to noxious stimuli are associated with chronic pain in humans, however, the underlying molecular mechanisms involved are not clear. This study uses the nematode C. elegans to study genes and mechanisms that underlie habituation to a form of noxious stimuli based on heat, termed thermo-noxious stimuli. The authors previously showed that the Calcium/Calmodulin-dependent protein kinase (CMK-1) regulates thermo-nociceptive habituation in the nematode C. elegans. Although CMK-1 is a kinase with many known substrates, the downstream targets relevant for thermo-nociceptive habituation are not known. In this study, the authors use two different kinase screens to identify phosphorylation targets of CMK-1. One of the targets they identify is Calcineurin (TAX-6). The authors show that CMK-1 phosphorylates a regulatory domain of Calcineurin at a highly conserved site (S443). In a series of elegant experiments, the authors use genetic and pharmacological approaches to increase or decrease CMK-1 and Calcineurin signaling to study their effects on thermo-nociceptive habituation in C. elegans. They also combine these various approaches to study the interactions between these two signaling proteins. The authors use specific promoters to determine in which neurons CMK-1 and Calcineurin function to regulate thermo-nociceptive habituation. The authors propose a model based on their findings illustrating that CMK-1 and Calcineurin act mostly in different neurons to antagonistically regulate habituation to thermo-nociceptive stimuli in a complex manner.

Strengths:

(1) Given the conservation of habituation across phylogeny, identifying genes and mechanisms that underlie nociceptive habituation in C. elegans may be relevant for understanding chronic pain in humans.

(2) The identification of canonical CaM Kinase phosphorylation motifs in the substrates identified in the CMK-1 substrate screen validates the screen.

(3) The use of loss and gain of function approaches to study the effects of CMK-1 and Calcineurin on thermo-nociceptive responses and habituation is elegant.

(4) The ability to determine the cellular place of action of CMK-1 and Calcineurin using neuron-specific promoters in the nematode is a clear strength of the genetic model system.

Weaknesses:

(1) The manuscript begins by identifying Calcineurin as a direct substrate of CMK-1 but ends by showing that CMK-1 and Calcineurin mostly act in different neurons to regulate nociceptive habituation which disrupts the logical flow of the manuscript.

(2) The physiological relevance of CMK-1 phosphorylation of Calcineurin is not clear.

(3) It is not clear if Calcineurin is already a known substrate of CaM Kinases in other systems or if this finding is new.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, the authors use genetic tools to ablate oligodendrocytes in the cerebellum during postnatal development. They show that the oligodendrocyte numbers return to normal post-weaning. Yet, the loss of oligodendrocytes during development seems to result in decreased synchrony of calcium transients in Purkinje neurons across the cerebellum. Further, there were deficits in social behaviors and motor coordination. Finally, they suppress activity in a subset of climbing fibers to show that it results in similar phenotypes in the calcium signaling and behavioral assays. They conclude that the behavioral deficits in the oligodendrocyte ablation experiments must result from loss of synchrony.

Strengths:

Use of genetic tools to induce perturbations in a spatiotemporally specific manner.

Weaknesses:

The main weakness in this manuscript is the lack of a cohesive causal connection between the experimental manipulation performed and the phenotypes observed. Though they have taken great care to induce oligodendrocyte loss specifically in the cerebellum and at specific time windows, the subsequent experiments do not address specific questions regarding the effect of this manipulation. Calcium transients in Purkinje neurons are caused to a large extent by climbing fibers, but there is evidence for simple spikes to also underlie the dF/F signatures (Ramirez and Stell, Cell Reports, 2016). Also, it is erroneous to categorize these calcium signals as signatures of "spontaneous activity" of Purkinje neurons as they can have dual origins. Further, the effect of developmental oligodendrocyte ablation on the cerebellum has been previously reported by Mathis et al., Development, 2003. They report very severe effects such as the loss of molecular layer interneurons, stunted Purkinje neuron dendritic arbors, abnormal foliations, etc. In this context, it is hardly surprising that one would observe a reduction of synchrony in Purkinje neurons (perhaps due to loss of synaptic contacts, not only from CFs but also from granule cells). The last experiment with the expression of Kir2.1 in the inferior olive is hardly convincing. In summary, while the authors used a specific tool to probe the role of developmental oligodendrocytes in cerebellar physiology and function, they failed to answer specific questions regarding this role, which they could have done with more fine-grained experimental analysis.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript describes the role of the production of c-di-AMP on the chlamydial developmental cycle. Chlamydia are obligate intracellular bacterial pathogens that rely on eukaryotic host cells for growth. The chlamydial life cycle depends on a cell form developmental cycle that produces phenotypically distinct cell forms with specific roles during the infectious cycle. The RB cell form replicates amplifying chlamydia numbers while the EB cell form mediates entry into new host cells disseminating the infection to new hosts. Regulation of cell form development is a critical question in chlamydia biology and pathogenesis. Chlamydia must balance amplification (RB numbers) and dissemination (EB numbers) to maximize survival in its infection niche. The main findings In this manuscript show that overexpression of the dacA-ybbR operon results in increased production of c-di-AMP and early expression of the transitionary gene hctA and late gene omcB. The authors also knocked down the expression of the dacA-ybbR operon and reported a reduction in the expression of both hctA and omcB. The authors conclude with a model suggesting the amount of c-di-AMP determines the fate of the RB, continued replication, or EB conversion. Overall, this is a very intriguing study with important implications however the data is very preliminary and the model is very rudimentary and is not well supported by the data.

Describing the significance of the findings:

The findings are important and point to very exciting new avenues to explore the important questions in chlamydial cell form development. The authors present a model that is not quantified and does not match the data well.

Describing the strength of evidence:

The evidence presented is incomplete. The authors do a nice job of showing that overexpression of the dacA-ybbR operon increases c-di-AMP and that knockdown or overexpression of the catalytically dead DacA protein decreases the c-di-AMP levels. However, the effects on the developmental cycle and how they fit the proposed model are less well supported.

dacA-ybbR ectopic expression:

For the dacA-ybbR ectopic expression experiments they show that hctA is induced early but there is no significant change in OmcB gene expression. This is problematic as when RBs are treated with Pen (this paper) and (DOI 10.1128/MSYSTEMS.00689-20) hctA is expressed in the aberrant cell forms but these forms do not go on to express the late genes suggesting stress events can result in changes in the developmental expression kinetic profile. The RNA-seq data are a little reassuring as many of the EB/Late genes were shown to be upregulated by dacA-ybbR ectopic expression in this assay.

The authors also demonstrate that this ectopic expression reduces the overall growth rate but produces EBs earlier in the cycle but overall fewer EBs late in the cycle. This observation matches their model well as when RBs convert early there is less amplification of cell numbers.

dacA knockdown and dacA(mut)

The authors showed that dacA knockdown and ectopic expression of the dacA mutant both reduced the amount of c-di-AMP. The authors show that for both of these conditions, hctA and omcB expression is reduced at 24 hpi. This was also partially supported by the RNA-seq data for the dacA knockdown as many of the late genes were downregulated. However, a shift to an increase in RB-only genes was not readily evident. This is maybe not surprising as the chlamydial inclusion would just have an increase in RB forms and changes in cell form ratios would need more time points.

Interestingly, the overall growth rate appears to differ in these two conditions, growth is unaffected by dacA knockdown but is significantly affected by the expression of the mutant. In both cases, EB production is repressed. The overall model they present does not support this data well as if RBs were blocked from converting into EBs then the growth rate should increase as the RB cell form replicates while the EB cell form does not. This should shift the population to replicating cells.

Overall this is a very intriguing finding that will require more gene expression data, phenotypic characterization of cell forms, and better quantitative models to fully interpret these findings.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors took a well-characterised (partly by them), important E3 ligase, in the anaphase-promoting complex, and decided to design peptide inhibitors for it based on one of the known interacting motifs (called D-box) from its substrates. They incorporate unnatural amino acids to better occupy the interaction site, improve the binding affinity, and lay foundations for future therapeutics - maybe combining their findings with additional target sites.

Strengths:

The paper is mostly strengths - a logical progression of experiments, very well explained and carried out to a high standard. The authors use a carefully chosen variety of techniques (including X-ray crystallography, multiple binding analyses, and ubiquitination assays) to verify their findings - and they impressively achieve their goals by honing in on tight-binders.

Weaknesses:

Some things are not explained fully and it would be useful to have some clarification. Why did the authors decide to model their inhibitors on the D-box motif and not the other two SLiMs that they describe? What exactly do they mean when they say their 'observation is consistent with the idea that high-affinity binding at degron binding sites on APC/C, such as in the case of the yeast 'pseudo-substrate' inhibitor Acm1, acts to impede polyubiquitination of the bound protein'? It's an interesting thing to think about, and probably the paper they cite explains it more but I would like to know without having to find that other paper.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

In this manuscript, the authors have explored the beneficial effect of autophagy upregulation in the context of HD pathology in a disease stage-specific manner. The authors have observed functional autophagy lysosomal pathway (ALP) and its machineries at the early stage in the HD mouse model, whereas impairment of ALP has been documented at the later stages of the disease progression. Eventually, the authors took advantage of the operational ALP pathway at the early stage of HD pathology, in order to upregulate ALP and autophagy flux by inhibiting mTORC1 in vivo, which ultimately reverted back to multiple ALP-related abnormalities and phenotypes. Therefore, this manuscript is a promising effort to shed light on the therapeutic interventions with which HD pathology can be treated at the patient level in the future.

Strengths:

The study has shown the alteration of ALP in the HD mouse model in a very detailed manner. Such stage-dependent in vivo study will be informative and has not been done before. Also, this research provides possible therapeutic interventions for patients in the future.

Weaknesses:

Some constructive comments and suggestions in order to reflect the key aspects and concepts better in the manuscript :

(1) The authors have observed lysosome number alteration in a temporally regulated disease stage-specific manner. In this scenario investigation of regulation, localization, and level of TFEB, the transcription factor required for lysosome biogenesis, would be interesting and informative.

(2) For the general scientific community better clarification of the short forms will be useful. For example, in line 97, page 4, AP full form would be useful. Also 'metabolized via autophagy' can be replaced by 'degraded via autophagy'.

(3) The nuclear vs cytosolic localization of HTT aggregates shown in Figure 2, are very interesting. The increase in cytosolic HTT aggregate formation at 10 months compared to 6 months probably suggests spatio-temporal regulation of aggregate formation. The authors could comment in a more elaborate manner, on the reason and impact of this kind of regulation of aggregate formation in the context of HD pathology.

(4) In this manuscript, the authors have convincingly shown that mTOR inhibition is inducing autophagy in the HD mouse model in vivo. On the other hand, mTOR inhibition would also reduce overall cellular protein translation. This aspect of mTOR inhibition can also potentially contribute to the alleviation of disease phenotype and disease symptoms by reducing protein overload in HD pathology. The authors' comments regarding this aspect would be appreciated.

(5) The authors have shown nuclear inclusion formation and aggregation of mHTT and also commented on its potential removal with the UPS system (proteasomal degradation) in vivo. As there is also a reciprocal relationship present between autophagy and proteasomal machineries, upon upregulation of autophagy machinery by mTOR inhibition proteasomal activity may decrease. How nuclear proteasomal activity increases to tackle nuclear mHTT IBs, would be interesting to understand in the context of HD pathology. Comments from the authors in this aspect would clarify the role of multiple degradation pathways in handling mutant HTT protein in HD pathology.

(6) For the treatment of neurodegenerative disorders taking the temporal regulation into consideration is extremely important, as that will determine the success rate of the treatments in patients. The authors in this manuscript have clearly discussed this scenario. However, for neurodegenerative disordered patients, in most cases, the symptom manifestation is a late onset scenario. In that case, it will be complicated to initiate an early treatment regime in HD patients. If the authors can comment on and discuss the practicality of the early treatment regime for therapeutic purposes that would be impactful.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The paper 'The electrogenicity of the Na+/K+-ATPase poses challenges for computation in highly active spiking cells' by Weerdmeester, Schleimer, and Schreiber uses computational models to present the biological constraints under which electrocytes-specialized highly active cells that facilitate electro-sensing in weakly electric fish-may operate. The authors suggest potential solutions these cells could employ to circumvent these constraints.

Electrocytes are highly active or spiking (greater than 300Hz) for sustained periods (for minutes to hours), and such activity is possible due to an influx of sodium and efflux of potassium ions into these cells for each spike. This ion imbalance must be restored after each spike, which in electrocytes, as with many other biological cells, is facilitated by the Na-K pumps at the expense of biological energy, i.e., ATP molecules. For each ATP molecule the pump uses, three positively charged sodium ions from the intracellular space are exchanged for two positively charged potassium ions from the extracellular volume. This creates a net efflux of positive ions into the extracellular space, resulting in hyperpolarized potentials for the cell over time. This does not pose an issue in most cells since the firing rate is much slower, and other compensatory mechanisms and other pumps can effectively restore the ion imbalances. In electrocytes of weakly electric fish, however, that operate under very different circumstances, the firing rate is exceptionally high. On top of this, these cells are also involved in critical communication and survival behaviors, emphasizing their reliable functioning.

In a computation model, the authors test four increasingly complex solutions to the problem of counteracting the hyperpolarized states that occur due to continuous NaK pump action to sustain baseline activity. First, they propose a solution for a well-matched Na leak channel that operates in conjunction with the NaK pump, counteracting the hyperpolarizing states naturally. Additionally, their model shows that when such an orchestrated Na leak current is not included, quick changes in the firing rates could have unexpected side effects. Secondly, they study the implication of this cell in the context of chirps - a means of communication between individual fishes. Here, an upstream pacemaking neuron entrains the electrocyte to spike, which ceases to produce a so-called chirp - a brief pause in the sustained activity of the electrocytes. In their model, the authors show that it is necessary to include the extracellular potassium buffer to have a reliable chirp signal. Thirdly, they tested another means of communication in which there was a sudden increase in the firing rate of the electrocyte followed by a decay to the baseline. For reliable occurrence of this, they emphasize that a strong synaptic connection between the pacemaker neuron and the electrocyte is warranted. Finally, since these cells are energy-intensive, they hypothesize that electrocytes may have energy-efficient action potentials, for which their NaK pumps may be sensitive to the membrane voltages and perform course correction rapidly.

Strengths:

The authors extend an existing electrocyte model (Joos et al., 2018) based on the classical Hodgkin and Huxley conductance-based models of Na and K currents to include the dynamics of the NaK pump. The authors estimate the pump's properties based on reasonable assumptions related to the leak potential. Their proposed solutions are valid and may be employed by weakly electric fish. The authors explore theoretical solutions that compound and suggest that all these solutions must be simultaneously active for the survival and behavior of the fish. This work provides a good starting point for exploring and testing in in vivo experiments which of these proposed solutions the fish use and their relative importance.

Weaknesses:

The modeling work makes assumptions and simplifications that should be listed explicitly. For example, it assumes only potassium ions constitute the leak current, which may not be true as other ions (chloride and calcium) may also cross the cell membrane. This implies<br /> that the leak channels' reversal potential may differ from that of potassium. Additionally, the spikes are composed of sodium and potassium currents only and no other ion type (no calcium). Further, these ion channels are static and do not undergo any post-translational modifications. For instance, a sodium-dependent potassium pump could fine-tune the potassium leak currents and modulate the spike amplitude (Markham et al., 2013).

This model considers only NaK pumps. In many cell types, several other ion pumps/exchangers/symporters are simultaneously present and actively participate in restoring the ion gradients. It may be true that only NaK pumps are expressed in the weakly electric fish Eigenmannia virescens. This limits the generalizability of the results to other cell types. While this does not invalidate the results of the present study, biological processes may find many other solutions to address the non-electroneutral nature of the NaK pump. For example, each spike could include a small calcium ion influx that could be buffered or extracted via a sodium-calcium exchanger.

Finally, including testable hypotheses for these computational models would strengthen this work.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Using multimodal closed-loop behavior and activity monitoring in the neocortex, Solyga and Keller show that the auditory cortex computes the deviation of current sensory input from expectations. Interestingly, in addition, mismatch responses within the auditory stream are non-linearly influenced by concurrent sensorimotor error computations in the visual pathway. These results suggest that non-hierarchical interactions (lateral relational cross-talk) must be considered when analyzing cortical models based on predictive processing. In my opinion, this is a fundamental study that addresses the question of hierarchical vs. no-hierarchical interactions across neocortical areas. Overall, I find the experiments elegantly designed, and the results robust, providing compelling evidence for non-hierarchical interactions across neocortical areas, and more specifically of exchange of sensorimotor prediction error signals across modalities. The authors thoroughly addressed the concerns raised. In my opinion, this has substantially strengthened the manuscript, enabling much clearer interpretation of the results reported.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

In this study, the authors have attempted to demonstrate a critical role for the cytoskeletal scaffold protein Ezrin, in the upstream regulation of EGFR/AKT/MTOR signaling. They show that in the absence of Ezrin, ligand-induced EGFR trafficking and activation at the endosomes is perturbed, with decreased endosomal recruitment of the TSC complex, and a corresponding decrease in AKT/MTOR signaling.

Strengths:

The authors have used a combination of novel imaging techniques, as well as conventional proteomic and biochemical assays to substantiate their findings. The findings expand our understanding of the upstream regulators of the EGFR/AKT MTOR signaling and lysosomal biogenesis, appear to be conserved in multiple species, and may have important implications for the pathogenesis and treatment of diseases involving endo-lysosomal function, such as diabetes and cancer, as well as neuro-degenerative diseases like macular degeneration. Furthermore, pharmacological targeting of Ezrin could potentially be utilized in diseases with defective TFEB/TFE3 functions like LSDs. While a majority of the findings appear to support the hypotheses, there are substantial gaps in the findings that could be better addressed. Since Ezrin appears to directly regulate MTOR activity, the effects of Ezrin KO on MTOR-regulated, TFEB/TFE3 -driven lysosomal function should be explored more thoroughly. Similarly, a more convincing analysis of autophagic flux should be carried out. Additionally, many immunoblots lack key controls (Control IgG in CO-Ips) and many others merit repetition to either improve upon the quality of the existing data, validate the findings using orthogonal approaches or to provide a more rigorous quantitative assessment of the findings, as highlighted in the recommendation for authors.

Comments on revisions:

The authors have satisfactorily addressed most of the concerns raised in the prior version, and have significantly improved upon the overall findings in the revised version.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

This study investigates the cortical circuitry at the mesoscopic level of cortical columns in the human secondary visual cortex (V2) using high-resolution fMRI at ultra-high field strength (7T). The findings confirm the columnar organization of color-selective thin and disparity-selective thick stripes, a result previously demonstrated and replicated in human fMRI research. However, this study adds a novel layer of analysis by examining cortical depth, providing insights into feedforward and feedback connections to and from V2. Furthermore, examining texture selectivity in V2 showed no evidence of a columnar structure when compared to color- and disparity-selective activation clusters. Interestingly, texture selectivity in V2 was most pronounced in deeper cortical layers, with significant feedback connectivity from V4. The authors conclude that local columnar circuitry plays a crucial role in color and disparity processing within V2, while texture selectivity is driven by feedback modulation. This research underscores the potential of high-resolution human fMRI to explore the local circuitry of the cortex at the mesoscopic scale.

However, I still have a few comments that I would like to be addressed:

(1) In lines 401-403, the authors state that differential BOLD responses can significantly enhance the laminar specificity. Differential contrasts indeed have the potential to reduce macrovascular contributions that are unspecific to both experimental conditions, which was already discussed in the literature (e.g., Yacoub et al., 2008, High-field fMRI unveils orientation columns in humans). This might be especially true for the pial vasculature that drains a larger surface area of the cortex, e.g., multiple columns, which is probably the key factor that enables cortical column mapping using differential BOLD contrasts despite the relatively large spatial point spread function of the BOLD response. However, this may differ for laminar analyses, where neuronal and vascular responses from intracortical and pial veins might be harder to disentangle. It would, therefore, be advisable to tone down this statement somewhat since it could imply that laminar specificity can be readily achieved with GE-BOLD, while this remains an active area of research. This is not to say that the present results are incorrect, but the broader implications of this statement should be cautiously framed.

(2) Looking at Figure 3, one might also argue (excluding responses from V4) that statistically significant differences in selectivity are only observed where the cortical profiles generally show higher response levels. Could this be simply due to varying signal-to-noise ratios (SNR) achieved by different contrasts (color, disparity, texture)?

(3) In lines 480-484, the authors state that twenty blocks for each stimulus condition should be sufficient to investigate within-subject effects. It would be helpful if they could elaborate on the basis for this claim. High-resolution fMRI is typically limited by low temporal signal-to-noise ratio (tSNR), and extensive averaging is often required to achieve sufficient signal. Clarifying the rationale behind this assertion would strengthen the argument.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Plectin is a cytolinker that associates with cytoskeletal and intercellular junction proteins and is essential for epithelial integrity and cell migration. Previous reports showed that PLEC regulates tumor growth and metastasis in different cancers. In this manuscript, the authors describe PLEC as a target in initiation and growth of HCC. They show that inhibiting PLEC reduced tumorigenesis in different in vitro and in vivo HCC models, including in a xenograft model, DEN model, oncogene-induced HCC model and a lung metastasis model. A drug PST had similar effects, a purported Plectin inhibitor, suggesting that PLEC inhibition could be a tumor prevention or treatment strategy. Mechanistically, the authors show that inhibiting PLEC results in a disorganized cytoskeleton, deficiency in cell migration, and changes in cancer-relevant signaling pathways. This study demonstrates the importance of understanding mechanobiology of HCC for the development of new treatment strategies.

Strengths:

(1) This study used a variety of in vivo models to explore the role of Plectin in HCC formation and metastasis, which extend beyond the cell line-based studies reported in prior research.<br /> (2) Blocking PLEC disrupts pathways that promote tumors and cell migration, thus preventing tumor progression.<br /> (3) Overall, the anti-cancer phenotype is promising, strengthening the important role of PLEC and related factors in tumor growth and metastasis.

Weaknesses:

(1) There is limited novel mechanistic insights as the effect of inhibiting PLEC on the cytoskeleton, cell migration and related signaling pathways have previously been reported.<br /> (2) The results associated with PST, should be interpretated with caution. Although it is reported as an inhibitor of PLECTIN, and the phenotypes and pathways affected are similar to the knock-out, additional research is needed to support whether it will be safe and specific in treating or preventing HCC.

Reviewer #3 (Public review):

Summary:

Tanaka and colleagues addressed the role of the C-C chemokine receptor 4 (CCR4) in early atherosclerotic plaque development using ApoE-deficient mice on a standard chow diet as a model. Because several CD4+ T cell subsets express CCR4, they examined whether CCR4-deficiency alters the immune response mediated by CD4+ T cells. By histological analysis of aortic lesions, they demonstrated that the absence of CCR4 promoted the development of early atherosclerosis, with heightened inflammation linked to increased macrophages and pro-inflammatory CD4+ T cells, along with reduced collagen content. Flow cytometry and mRNA expression analysis for identifying CD4+ T cell subsets showed that CCR4 deficiency promoted higher proliferation of pro-inflammatory effector CD4+ T cells in peripheral lymphoid tissues and accumulation of Th1 cells in the atherosclerotic lesions. Interestingly, the increased pro-inflammatory CD4+ T cell response occurred despite the expansion of T CD4+ Foxp3+ regulatory cells (Tregs), found in higher numbers in lymphoid tissues of CCR4-deficient mice, suggesting that CCR4 deficiency interfered with Treg's regulatory actions. In addition, CCR4 deficiency induced an augmented Th1/Treg ratio in the aortic lesions. The CCR4-mediated mechanisms underlying the control of early inflammation and atherosclerosis development were not completely elucidated. In vitro studies suggest that CCR4 expression in Tregs plays a role in controlling DC activation and, in turn, the extent of CD4+T cell activation and proliferation. Dependence on CCR4 expression for Treg migration to the atherosclerotic aorta was not proved. The findings contrast with earlier studies in a murine model of advanced atherosclerosis, where CCR4 deficiency did not alter the development of the aortic lesions. The authors included a thoughtful discussion about hypothetical mechanisms explaining these contrasting results, including putative differences in the role played by the CCL17/CCL22-CCR4 axis along the stages of atherosclerosis development in this murine model.

Major strengths:

• Demonstration of CCR4 deficiency's impact on early atherosclerosis. CCR4 deficiency effects on the early atherosclerosis development in the Apoe-/-mice model were demonstrated by a quantitative analysis of the lesion area, inflammatory cell content and the expression profile of several pro- and anti-inflammatory markers.<br /> • Analysis of the T CD4+ response in various lymphoid tissues (peripheral and para-aortic lymph nodes and spleen) and the atherosclerotic aorta during the early phase of atherosclerosis in the Apoe-/-mice model. This analysis, combining flow cytometry and mRNA expression, showed that CCR4 deficiency enhanced T CD4+ cell activation, favouring the amplification of the typical biased Th1-mediated inflammatory response observed in the lymphoid tissues of hypercholesterolemic mice.<br /> • Treg transference experiments. Transference of Treg from Apoe-/- or Ccr4-/- Apoe-/- mice to Apoe-/- mice under a standard chow diet was useful for addressing the relevance of CCR4 expression on Tregs for the atheroprotective effect of this regulatory T cell subset during early atherosclerosis.

Major weaknesses:

• The effect of CCR4 deficiency on the Th1/Th17 balance was not evaluated. Although the role of Th17 cells in atherosclerosis remains controversial, RORγt+ cells constituted, on average, more than 10% of the effector TCD45+CD3+CD4+ lymphocytes in the aorta of Apoe-/- mice (Fig 4H). Changes in the Th1/Th17 balance in lymphoid tissues and aortic lesions may influence the type and functional properties of inflammatory cells recruited to the atherosclerotic aorta.

• Lack of in vivo evidence for Treg suppressive effects on DC activation. The proposed CCR4 requirement for the Treg suppressive activity on DC activation is supported by in vitro co-culture assays, in which CCR4-deficiency partially reverted Treg regulatory actions. Higher expression of CD86, a DC activation marker, was found in spleen DCs from Ccr4-/- Apoe-/- mice compared to Apoe-/- mice (Supplementary Fig 5), which would be worth commenting on and discussing.

• Methodological limitations. Controls in flow cytometry analysis were suboptimal (no viability and doublets were checked) which may have introduced artefacts, especially when measuring less-represented cell populations within complex samples. In addition, assessing Treg migration to the aorta in atherosclerotic mice faced methodological limitations that hindered statistical comparisons between Tregs from Apoe-/- and Ccr4-/- Apoe-/- mice, leading to inconclusive results. The dependence on CCR4 expression for Treg migration to the atherosclerotic aorta was not established.

• Treg transference experiments did not allow the detection of a reduction in the aortic lesion area by transferred CCR4 expressing Tregs (comparison between saline and Apoe-/- Tregs groups). Using Apoe-/- mice as recipients, the CCR4-dependent protective effect of Tregs was mostly evidenced by analysis of aortic inflammation, which was valuable. When using Ccr4-/- Apoe-/- mice as recipients, analysis of aortic inflammation was not mentioned.

Study limitations:

This investigation has some limitations. Current tools for single-cell characterization have revealed the phenotypic heterogeneity and dynamics of aortic leukocytes, including T cells, which are among the principal aortic leukocytes found in mouse and human atherosclerotic lesions (doi:10.1161/CIRCRESAHA.117.312513). The flow cytometry analysis applied in this study cannot distinguish the generation of particular phenotypes within T CD4+ subsets, including putative phenotypes of no-suppressive T cells expressing low levels of Foxp3, as seems could occur in other chronic inflammatory disorders (doi: 10.1038/nm.3432; doi: 10.1172/JCI79014). Limitations due to the use of a complete CCR4 knockout mouse and putative differences in CCR4-mediated mechanisms along atherosclerosis stages and in human atherosclerosis were commented on by the authors in the discussion.

Global Impact:

This work opens the way for a deeper analysis of the contribution of CCR4 and its ligands to the activation and differentiation of T CD4+ lymphocytes during atherosclerosis development, with these lymphocytes being fundamental players in the generation of pro-atherogenic and anti-atherogenic immune responses. Differences in the mechanisms mediated by the CCL17/CCL22-CCR4 axis among early and advanced atherosclerosis highlight the complex landscape to examine and validate in human samples and the need to achieve a deep knowledge for identifying genuine and safe targets capable of promoting protective anti-atherogenic immune responses.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Using C. elegans as a model, the authors present an interesting story demonstrating a new regulatory connection between olfactory neurons and the digestive system. Mechanistically, they identified key factors (NSY-1, STR-130 et.al) in neurons, as well as critical 'signaling factors' (INS-23, DAF-2) that bridge different cells/tissues to execute the digestive shutdown induced by poor-quality food (Staphylococcus saprophyticus, SS).

Strengths:

The conclusions of this manuscript are mostly well supported by the experimental results shown.

Weaknesses:

Several issues could be addressed and clarified to strengthen their conclusions.

(1) The word "olfactory" should be carefully used and checked in this manuscript. Although AWCs are classic olfactory neurons in C. elegans, no data in this manuscript supports the idea that olfactory signals from SS drive the responses in the digestive system. To validate that it is truly olfaction, the authors may want to check the responses of worms (e.g. AWC, digestive shutdown, INS-23 expression) to odors from SS.

(2) In line 113, what does "once the digestive system is activated" mean? The authors need to provide a clearer statement about 'digestive activation' and 'digestive shutdown'.

(3) No control data on OP50. This would affect the conclusions generated from Figures 2A, 2B, 2D, 3B, 3C, 3G, 4D-G, 5D-E, 6B-D.

(4) Do the authors know which factors are released from AWC neurons to drive the digestive shutdown?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study aimed to investigate changes in neural responses over time after acute stress and their association with real-life stress. To this end, functional MRI data was collected from 3 tasks (Oddball, 2-back, Associative retrieval) early and late following stress and control conditions. Emotional ratings during a stressful week before an exam and a non-stressful week without an exam were used to index real-world stress. In total, data from 70 individuals were used for the analyses in the paper. Results showed increased oddball related activation early after stress whereas activation to the associative retrieval was reduced across early and late trials following stress compared with control. Brain activation during the oddball task after stress contrasted against control correlated with the index used to measure stress in the real-world. This is a very ambitious study and the findings that stress has opposite effects on the oddball and the associative retrieval tasks is new. However, I am not convinced that brain responses are correlated with real-world stress from the results presented in the paper. I also have several other concerns listed below.

Strengths:

The study uses a unique design based on hypothesis firmly grounded in theories of stress related brain function. Large amounts of data are collected for all of the 70 participants included in the analyses and the hypotheses tested using paired tests have strong statistical power. Data collection methods are sound aiming to reduce stress induced by being in the scanner environment for the first time and reducing variation in cortisol due to circadian rhythm.

Weaknesses:

An important argument in the paper is that neural responses associated with stress in the lab correspond to stress in real life. This conclusion is based on a single correlation analysis. This is weak evidence because the correlation is based on 70 individuals and may be driven by outliers. In fact, the correlation between the difference in stress-related SN activation (Stress-Control) and real life stress residual is likely to be driven by outliers. In fig 5b, there are 3 persons with SN values of around 2, which is twice as much as the fourth highest value. There is also 1 person with a Real life stress residual of -3 or -4, which is three to four times as much as the person with the second lowest value. These 4 outliers should be removed before calculating the correlation coefficient. Also, no power analysis is presented in the paper showing what effect size is needed for significant results given a sample size of 70.

It is not clear why the activation maps from the tasks performed in the scanner are referred to as the SN, ECN, and DMN. They are discussed as if they were resting state networks. They are however not resting state networks because they are the results of contrasting two task conditions to each other and not the results from correlating BOLD time-series data from different regions within subjects. Even though masks corresponding to SN, ECN, and DMN are used to calculate means of all voxels, I think these contrasts should be referred to as the tasks that were used to evoke them. It becomes misleading to call them networks which usually refers to nodes and edges in fMRI studies. The first scan was a resting state scan, but these data are not presented in the paper.

Introduction<br /> In the introduction it is said that there are genomically driven effects of cortisol 1 to 2 hours after stress. This is repeated in the discussion: "[the late stress phase] is thought to be dominated by genomically driven effects of glucocorticoids". (There is no reference to this statement however.) This idea, that gene expression should only be regulated by corticosteroids following stress seems unrealistic. The increase in cortisol was only around 60% from baseline in the current study which seems to be similar to other studies. This means that the baseline cortisol level is far from zero. Therefore, effects of cortisol on gene expression must occur all the time and be tightly regulated by circadian clocks. To propose that genomically driven effects of cortisol only exist 1 to 2 hours following stress is therefore too simplistic.

In the last paragraph, it says that n=83. However, the final sample consists of 70 people. Correct this number.

Methods<br /> The EMA data analysis is difficult to understand. Why are the residuals used instead of means for example? I could not understand how the residual values used in the analysis should be interpreted from the way this section was written. Therefore, I cannot judge whether the index is valid or reliable. Using mean values is more common than using residuals when investigating individual differences in stress responses. The use of residuals needs justification and clarification. The results from an analysis using mean values should also be reported.

How was AUCi calculated? What software was used to calculate AUCi?

How was the mediation analysis performed? The only information I found was: "We additionally ran separate models with an interaction term modelled for neural activity in the targeted ROI's to examine the relationship between task performance and neural responses, with random slopes and intercepts also modelled for ROI activity." This is not how mediation analyses are done conventionally. It is common to use structural equation modelling or a series of regression analyses. What is meant by separate models? Was a reduced model compared to a full model with an interaction term? In this case, this is not a mediation analysis. I think the term moderation is better to describe this analysis.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Hiramatsu et al. investigated how cognate neurotransmitter receptors with antagonizing downstream effects localize within neurons when co-expressed. They focus on mapping the dopaminergic Dop1R1 and Dop2R receptors, corresponding to the mammalian D1- and D2-like dopamine receptors, which have opposing effects on intracellular cAMP levels, in neurons of the Drosophila mushroom body (MB). To visualize specific receptors in single neuron types within the crowded MB neuropil, the authors use existing dopamine receptor alleles tagged with 7 copies of split GFP to target the reconstitution of GFP tags specifically in the neurons of interest, providing a readout of receptor localization.

The authors demonstrate that both Dop1R1 and Dop2R are enriched, to differing degrees, in the axonal compartments of Kenyon cells cholinergic presynaptic inputs and in different dopamine neurons (DANs) that project axons to the MB. Co-localization studies of dopamine receptors with the presynaptic marker Brp suggest that Dop1R1, and to a greater extent Dop2R, localize near release sites. This pattern in DANs suggests Dop1R1 and Dop2R serve as dual-feedback autoreceptors. Finally, they provide evidence that the balance of Dop1R1 and Dop2R in the axons of two different DAN populations is differentially modulated by starvation, which plays a role in regulating appetitive behaviors.

In their revised manuscript, Hiramatsu et al. revisited the localization and functional integrity of Dop1R1 and Dop2R within the Drosophila mushroom body. This revision strengthens their claims with new high-resolution imaging data and additional behavioral assays, supporting the functional integrity of 7X split GFP-tagged receptors and their distinct localizations within neural circuits.

The revised manuscript by Hiramatsu et al. demonstrates substantial improvements in experimental design and data presentation, effectively addressing concerns raised during the initial review. The addition of advanced imaging techniques and behavioral data confirms the functionality of tagged receptors, while providing deeper insights into their spatial and functional dynamics within neural circuits modulating responses to environmental changes like starvation. This study makes an important contribution to neuroscience, enhancing our understanding of dopamine receptor distribution in circuits underlying learning and memory.

Strengths:

The authors use reconstitution of GFP fluorescence of split GFP tags integrated at the endogenous locus of dopamine receptors, providing a precise readout of receptor localization. This method preserves endogenous transcriptional and post-transcriptional regulation, a critical feature for protein localization studies.

The choice of the Drosophila mushroom body as a model system is excellent, as it is well-studied, its connectome is carefully reconstructed, and its role in behaviors and associative memory enables linking receptor localization patterns to circuit function and behavior. This approach allows the authors to demonstrate that antagonizing dopamine receptors can act as autoreceptors within the axonal compartments of MB-innervating DANs. Moreover, they show that starvation differentially modulates the balance of these receptors in distinct DANs, highlighting the role of this regulation in circuit function and behavior.

The incorporation of higher-resolution Airyscan microscopy and functional assays in the revision provide evidence that tagged receptors retain functionality and predominantly localize at presynaptic sites within Kenyon cells and DANs. These findings support the dual autoreceptor feedback model proposed.

Weaknesses:

While the revision significantly strengthens the manuscript, the absence of specific antibodies against these receptors remains a limitation. This is understandable given the challenges of generating antibodies against such proteins. However, the use of more direct validation methods, such as specific antibodies (if available), and employing higher-resolution techniques like expansion microscopy, could further validate and enhance the robustness of the findings.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

The authors evaluate spectral changes in electroencephalography (EEG) data as a function of the congruency of audio and visual information associated with biological motion (BM) or non-biological motion. The results show supra-additive power gains in the neural response to gait dynamics, with trials in which audio and visual information was presented simultaneously producing higher average amplitude than the combined average power for auditory and visual conditions alone. Further analyses suggest that such supra-additivity is specific to BM and emerges from temporoparietal areas. The authors also find that the BM-specific supra-additivity is negatively correlated with autism traits.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Nichols et al studied the role of axon guidance molecules and their receptors and how these work as long-range and/or local cues, using in-vivo time-lapse imaging in C. elegans. They found that the Netrin axon guidance system, work in different modes when acting as a long-range (chemotaxis) cue vs local cue (haptotaxis). As an initial context, they take advantage of the postembryonic-born neuron, PDE, to understand how its axon grows and then is guided into its target. They found that this process occurs in various discrete steps, during which the growth cone migrates and pauses at specific structures, such as the vSLNC. The role of the UNC-6/Netrin and UNC-40/DCC axon guidance ligand-receptor pair was then looked at in terms of its requirement for (1) initial axon outgrowth direction, (2) stabilization at the intermediate target, (3) directional branching from the sublateral region or (4) ventral growth from intermediate target to the VNC. They found that each step is disrupted in the unc-6/Netrin and unc-40/DCC mutants and observed how the localization of these proteins changed during the process of axon guidance in wild type and mutant contexts. These observations were further supported by analysis of a mutant important for the regulation of Netrin signaling, the E3 ubiquitin ligase madd-2/Trim9/Trim67. Remarkably, the authors identified that this mutant affected axonal adhesion and stabilization, but not directional growth. Using membrane-tethered UNC-6 to specific localities, they then found this to be a consequence of the availability of UNC-6 at specific localities within the axon growth path. Altogether, this data and in-vivo analysis provide compelling evidence of the mechanistic foundation of Netrin-mediated axon guidance and how it works step by step.

The conclusions are well-supported, with both imaging and quantification of each step of axon guidance and localization of UNC-6 and UNC-40. Using a different type of neuron to validate their findings further supports their conclusions and strengthens their model. They also probe the role of the axon guidance ligand-receptor pair SLT-1/Slit and SAX-3/ROBO in this process and find it to work in parallel to UNC-6. This work sets up the stage for future analysis of other axon guidance molecules or regulators using time-lapse in-vivo imaging to better understand their role as long-range and/or local cues.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Members of a conserved family of flavin-containing monooxygenases (FMOs) play key roles in lifespan extension induced by diet restriction and hypoxia. In C. elegans, fmo-2 has received the majority of attention, but there are multiple fmo genes in both worms and mammals, and how overlapping or distinct the functional roles of these paralogs are remains unclear. Here Tuckowski et al. identify that a new family member, fmo-4, is also a positive modulator of lifespan. Based on differential requirements of fmo-2 and fmo-4 in stress resistance and lifespan extension paradigms, however, the authors conclude that fmo-4 acts through mechanisms that are distinct from fmo-2. Ultimately, the authors place fmo-2 genetically within a pathway involving atf-6, calreticulin, the IP3 receptor, and mitochondrial calcium uniporter, which was previously shown to link ER calcium homeostasis to mitochondrial homeostasis and longevity. The authors thus achieve their overarching aim to reveal that different FMO family members regulate stress resistance and lifespan through distinct mechanisms. Furthermore, because the known enzymatic activity of FMOs involves oxygenating xenobiotic and endogenous metabolites, these findings highlight a potential new link between redox/metabolic homeostasis and ER-mitochondrial calcium signaling.

Strengths:

The authors demonstrate links between multiple conserved life-extending signaling pathways and fmo-4, expanding both the significance and mechanistic diversity of FMO-family genes in aging and stress biology.

The authors use genetics to discover an interesting and unanticipated new link between FMOs and calcium pathways known to regulate lifespan.

The genetic epistasis patterns for lifespan and stress resistance phenotypes are generally clean and compelling.

Weaknesses:

The authors achieve a necessary and valuable first step with regard to linking FMO-4 to calcium homeostasis, but the mechanisms involved remain preliminary at this stage. Specifically, the genetic interactions between fmo-4 and conserved mediators of calcium transport and signaling are convincing, but a putative molecular mechanism by which the activity of FMO-4 would alter subcellular calcium transport remains unclear and potentially indirect. The authors effectively highlight this gap as a key pursuit for subsequent studies.

The authors have shown that carbachol and EDTA produce the expected effects on a cytosolic calcium reporter in neurons, supporting the utility of the chemical approach in general, but validating that carbachol, EDTA and fmo-4 itself have an impact on calcium in the tissues and subcellular compartments relevant to the lifespan phenotypes would still be valuable in supporting the overall model. Notably, however, the hypodermal-specific role of FMO-4 suggests potential cell non-autonomous regulation of lifespan, such that this pathway may ultimately involve complex inter-cellular signaling that would necessitate substantially more time and effort.

Employing mutants and more sophisticated genetic tools for modulating calcium transport or signaling (in addition to RNAi) would strengthen key conclusions and/or help to elucidate tissue- or age-specific aspects of the proposed mechanism.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript provides experimental evidence on circadian behavioural cycles in Antarctic krill. The krill were obtained directly from krill fishing vessels and the experiments were carried out on board using an advanced incubation device capable of recording activity levels over a number of days. A number of different experiments were carried out where krill were first exposed to simulated light:dark (L:D) regimes for some days followed by continuous darkness (DD). These were carried out on krill collected during late autumn and late summer. A further set of experiments was performed on krill across three different seasons (summer, autumn, winter), where incubations were all DD conditions. Activity was measured as the frequency by which an infrared beam close to the top of the incubation tube was broken over unit time. Results showed that patterns of increased and decreased activity that appeared synchronised to the LD cycle persisted during the DD period. This was interpreted as evidence of the operation of an internal (endogenous) clock. The amplitude of the behavioural cycles decreased with time in DD, which further suggests that this clock is relatively weak. The authors argued that the existence of a weak endogenous clock is an adaptation to life at high latitudes since allowing the clock to be modulated by external (exogenous) factors is an advantage when there is a high degree of seasonality. This hypothesis is further supported by seasonal DD experiments which showed that the periodicity of high and low activity levels differed between seasons.

Strengths

Although there has been a lot of field observations of various circadian type behaviour in Antarctic krill, relatively few experimental studies have been published considering this behaviour in terms of circadian patterns of activity. Krill are not a model organism and obtaining them and incubating them in suitable conditions are both difficult undertakings. Furthermore, there is a need to consider what their natural circadian rhythms are without the overinfluence of laboratory-induced artefacts. For this reason alone, the setup of the present study is ideal to consider this aspect of krill biology. Furthermore, the equipment developed for measuring levels of activity is well-designed and likely to minimise artefacts.

Weaknesses

I have little criticism of the rationale for carrying out this work, nor of the experimental design. Nevertheless, the manuscript would benefit from a clearer explanation of the experimental design, particularly aimed at readers not familiar with research into circadian rhythms. Furthermore, I have a more fundamental question about the relationship between levels of activity and DVM on which I will expand below. Finally, it was unclear how the observational results made here related to the molecular aspects considered in the Discussion.

(1) Explanation of experimental design - I acknowledge that the format of this particular journal insists that the Results are the first section that follows the Introduction. This nevertheless presents a problem for the reader since many of the concepts and terms that would generally be in the Methods are yet to be explained to the reader. Hence, right from the start of the Results section, the reader is thrown into the detail of what happened during the LD-DD experiments without being fully aware of why this type of experiment was carried out in the first place. Even after reading the Methods, further explanation would have been helpful. Circadian cycle type research of this sort often entrains organisms to certain light cycles and then takes the light away to see if the cycle continues in complete darkness, but this critical piece of knowledge does not come until much later (e.g. lines 369-372) leaving the reader guessing until this point why the authors took the approach they did. I would suggest the following (1) that more effort is made in the Introduction to explain the exact LD/DD protocols adopted (2) that a schematic figure is placed early on in the manuscript where the protocol is explained including some logical flow charts of e.g. if behavioural cycle continues in DD then internal clock exists versus if cycle does not continue in DD, the exogenous cues dominate - followed by - major decrease in cyclic amplitude = weak clock versus minor decrease = strong clock and so on

(2) Activity vs kinesis - in this study, we are shown data that (i) krill have a circadian cycle - incubation experiments; (ii) that krill swarms display DVM in this region - echosounder data (although see my later point). My question here is regarding the relationship between what is being measured by the incubation experiments and the in situ swarm behaviour observations. The incubation experiments are essentially measuring the propensity of krill to swim upwards since it logs the number of times an individual (or group) break a beam towards the top of the incubation tube. I argue that krill may be still highly active in the rest of the tube but just do not swim close to the surface, so this approach may not be a good measure of "activity". Otherwise, I suggest a more correct term of what is being measured is the level of "upward kinesis". As the authors themselves note, krill are negatively buoyant and must always be active to remain pelagic. What changes over the day-night cycle is whether they decide to expend that activity on swimming upwards, downwards or remaining at the same depth. Explaining the pattern as upward kinesis then also explains by swarms move upwards during the night. Just being more active at night may not necessarily result in them swimming upwards.

(3) Molecular relevance - Although I am interested in molecular clock aspects behind these circadian rhythms, it was not made clear how the results of the present study allow any further insight into this. In lines 282 to 284, the findings of the study by Biscontin et al (2017) are discussed with regard to how TIM protein is degraded by light via the clock photreceptor CRYTOCHROME 1. This element of the Discussion would be a lot more relevant if the results of the present study were considered in terms of whether they supported or refuted this or any other molecular clock model. As it stands, this paragraph is purely background knowledge and a candidate for deletion in the interest of shortening the Discussion.

Other aspects<br /> (i) 'Bimodal swimming' was used in the Abstract and later in the text without the term being fully explained. I could interpret it to mean a number of things so some explanation is required before the term is introduced.<br /> (ii) Midnight sinking - I was struck by Figure 2b with regards to the dip in activity after the initial ascent, as well as the rise in activity predawn. Cushing (1951) Biol Rev 26: 158-192 describes the different phases of a DVM common to a number of marine organisms observed in situ where there is a period of midnight sinking following the initial dusk ascent and a dawn rise prior to dawn descent. Tarling et al (2002) observe midnight sinking pattern in Calanus finmarchicus and consider whether it is a response to feeding satiation or predation avoidance (i.e. exogenous factors). Evidence from the present study indicates that midnight sinking (and potential dawn rise) behaviour could alternatively be under endogenous control to a greater or lesser degree. This is something that should certainly be mentioned in the Discussion, possibly in place of the molecular discussion element mentioned above - possibly adding to the paragraph Lines 303-319.

(iii) Lines 200-207 - I struggled to follow this argument regarding Piccolin et al identifying a 12 h rhythm whereas the present study indicates a ~24 h rhythm. Is one contradicting the other - please make this clear.

(iv) Although I agree that the hydroacoustic data should be included and is generally supportive of the results, I think that two further aspects should be made clear for context (a) whether there was any groundtruthing that the acoustic marks were indeed krill and not potentially some other group know to perform DVM such as myctophids (b) how representative were these patterns - I have a sense that they were heavily selected to show only ones with prominent DVM as opposed to other parts of the dataset where such a pattern was less clear - I am aware of a lot of krill research where DVM is not such a clear pattern and it is disingenuous to provide these patterns as the definitive way in which krill behaves. I ask this be made clear to the reader (note also that there is a suggestion of midnight sinking in Fig 5b on 28/2).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

authors had previously identified that a colorectal cancer cell line generates small extracellular vesicles (sEVs) via a mechanism where a larger intracellular compartment containing these sEVs is secreted from the surface of the cell and then tears to release its contents. Previous studies had suggested that intraluminal vesicles (ILVs) inside endosomal multivesicular bodies and amphisomes can be secreted by fusion of the compartment with the plasma membrane. The 'torn bag mechanism' considered in this manuscript is distinctly different, because it involves initial budding off of a plasma membrane-enclosed compartment (called the amphiectosome in this manuscript, or MV-lEV). The authors successfully set out to investigate whether this mechanism is common to many cell types and to determine some of the subcellular processes involved.

The strengths of the study are:

(1) The high-quality imaging approaches used, including live-cell imaging and EN, which seem to show good examples of the proposed mechanism.<br /> (2) They screen several cell lines for these structures, also search for similar structures in vivo, and show the tearing process by real-time imaging.<br /> (3) Regarding the intracellular mechanisms of ILV production, the authors also try to demonstrate the different stages of amphiectosome production and differently labelled ILVs using immuno-EM.

Several of the techniques employed are technically challenging to do well, and so these are critical strengths of the manuscript.

Overall, I think the authors have been successful in identifying amphiectosomes secreted from multiple cell lines and cells in vivo, and in demonstrating that the ILVs inside them have at least two origins (autophagosome membrane and late endosomal multivesicular body) based on the markers that they carry. Inevitably, it remains unclear how universal this mechanism is in vivo and its overall contribution to EV function.<br /> I think there could be a significant impact on the EV field and consequently on our understanding of cell-cell signalling based on these findings. It will flag the importance of investigating the release of amphiectosomes in other studies, especially as the molecular mechanisms involved in this type of 'ectosomal-style' release will be different from multivesicular compartment fusion to the plasma membrane and should be possible to be manipulated independently.<br /> In general, the EV field has struggled to link up analysis of the subcellular biology of sEV secretion and the biochemical/physical analysis of the sEVs themselves, so from that perspective, the manuscript provides a novel angle on this problem.

Reviewer #1 (Public review):

The study by Aguirre-Botero et al. shows the dynamics of 3D11 anti-CSP monoclonal antibody (mAb) mediated elimination of rodent malaria Plasmodium berghei (Pb) parasites in the liver. The authors show that the anti-CSP mAb could protect against intravenous (i.v.) Pb sporozoite challenge along with the cutaneous challenge, but requires higher concentration of antibody. Importantly, the study shows that the anti-CSP mAb not only affects sporozoite motility, sinusoidal extravasation, and cell invasion but also partially impairs the intracellular development inside the liver parenchyma, indicating a late effect of this antibody during liver stage development. While the study is interesting and conducted well, the only novel yet very important observation made in this manuscript is the effect of the anti-CSP mAb on liver stage development.

Comments on latest version:

No further comments.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Kaya et al uncover an intriguing relationship between hippocampal sharp wave-ripple production and peripheral hormone exposure, food intake, and lateral hypothalamic function. These findings significantly expand our understanding of hippocampal function beyond mnemonic processes and point a direction for promising future research.

Strengths:

Some of the relationships observed in this paper are highly significant. In particular, the inverse relationship between GLP1/Leptin and Insulin/Ghrelin are particularly compelling as this aligns well with opposing hormone functions on satiety.

Weaknesses: I would be curious if there were any measurable behavioral differences that occur with different hormone manipulations.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study elucidated the mechanism underlying drug resistance induced by CDK4/6i as a single agent and proposed a novel and efficacious second-line therapeutic strategy. It highlighted the potential of combining CDK2i with CDK4/6i for the treatment of HR+/HER2- breast cancer.

Strengths:

The study demonstrated that CDK4/6 induces drug resistance by impairing Rb activation, which results in diminished E2F activity and a delay in G1 phase progression. It suggests that the synergistic use of CDK2i and CDK4/6i may represent a promising second-line treatment approach. Addressing critical clinical challenges, this study holds substantial practical implications.

Weaknesses:

(1) Drug-resistant cell lines: Was a drug concentration gradient treatment employed to establish drug-resistant cell lines? If affirmative, this methodology should be detailed in the materials and methods section.

(2) What rationale informed the selection of MCF-7 cells for the generation of CDK6 knockout cell lines? Supplementary Figure 3. A indicates that CDK6 expression levels in MCF-7 cells are not notably elevated.

(3) For each experiment, particularly those involving mice, the author must specify the number of individuals utilized and the number of replicates conducted, as detailed in the materials and methods section.

(4) Could this treatment approach be extended to triple-negative breast cancer?

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The manuscript describes how synthetic polymers, primarily poloxamers of different sizes, influence bacterial mechanosensitive channel MscL gating by modifying the interfacial tension of the membrane. The authors expressed MscL in U2OS cells and chemically blebbed the cells to derive giant plasma membrane vesicles (GPMVs) containing MscL G22S. They applied micropipette aspiration on GPMVs to obtain bending rigidity (kc) and area expansion modulus (kA) and used patch clamping to obtain activation pressure. They found a negative correlation between kc and kA with activation pressure and attributed the changes to activation pressure to the lowering of the interfacial tension in the presence of polymers. They carried out coarse-grain molecular dynamics simulations and showed that under tension the hydrophilic PEO group adsorbs to the bilayer more, thereby lowering the interfacial tension. Besides MscL, they showed similar results with TREK-1 activation. The conclusion that differences in interfacial tension are what drive the changes in activation pressure is based on using a thermodynamic model.

Strengths:

(1) Reveals that synthetic polymer that lowers bending rigidity and area expansion modulus increases activation pressure of mechanosensitive channel by lowering interfacial tension - this is an important finding.

(2) General data quality is high with detailed and thorough analysis. The use of both micropipette aspiration and patch clamp in the same study is noteworthy.

(3) Discussion on nanoplastics and their effect on membrane properties and therefore their impact on mechanosensitivity is interesting.

Weaknesses:

Interfacial tension is not experimentally measured. Given the main argument of this paper is that synthetic polymers reduce interfacial tension, which increases MS channel activation pressure, it would be prudent to show experimental measurements to bolster their analysis.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This manuscript presents a new approach for non-invasive, MRI-based, measurements of cerebral blood volume (CBV). Here, the authors use ferumoxytol, a high-contrast agent and apply specific sequences to infer CBV. The authors then move to statistically compare measured regional CBV with known distribution of different types of neurons, markers of metabolic load and others. While the presented methodology captures and estimated 30% of the vasculature, the authors corroborated previous findings regarding lack of vascular compartmentalization around functional neuronal units in the primary visual cortex.

Strengths:

Non invasive methodology geared to map vascular properties in vivo.

Implementation of a highly sensitive approach for measuring blood volume.

Ability to map vascular structural and functional vascular metrics to other types of published data.

Weaknesses:

The key issue here is the underlying assumption about the appropriate spatial sampling frequency needed to captures the architecture of the brain vasculature. Namely, ~7 penetrating vessels / mm2 as derived from Weber et al 2008 (Cer Cor). The cited work, begins by characterizing the spacing of penetrating arteries and ascending veins using vascular cast of 7 monkeys (Macaca mulatta, same as in the current paper). The ~7 penetrating vessels / mm2 is computed by dividing the total number of identified vessels by the area imaged. The problem here is that all measurements were made in a "non-volumetric" manner and only in V1. Extrapolating from here to the entire brain seems like an over-assumption, particularly given the region-dependent heterogeneity that the current paper reports.

Comments on revisions:

I appreciate the effort made to improve the manuscript. That said, the direct validation of the underlying assumption about spatial resolution sampling remains unaddressed in the final version of this manuscript. With the only intention to further strengthen the methodology presented here, I would encourage again the authors to seek a direct validation of this assumption for other brain areas.

In their reply, the authors stated "... line scanning or single-plane sequences, at least on first impression, seem inadequate for whole-brain coverage and cortical surface mapping. ". This seems to emanate for a misunderstanding as the method could be used to validate the mapping, not to map per-se.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Boldt et al., investigated whether previously established relationships between transdiagnostic psychiatric symptom dimensions and confidence distortions would result in downstream influences on the confidence-related behaviour of reminder setting. 600 individuals from the general population completed a battery of psychiatric symptom questionnaires and an online reminder-setting task. In line with previous studies, individuals high in compulsivity (CIT) showed over-confidence in their task performance, whereas individuals high in anxious-depression (AD) tended to be under-confident. Crucially, the over-confidence associated with CIT partially mediated a decreased tendency to use external reminders during task performance, whereas the under-confidence associated with AD did not result in any alteration in external reminder setting. The authors suggest that metacognitive monitoring is impaired in CIT which has a knock-on effect on reminder setting behaviour, but that a direct link also exists between CIT and reduced reminder setting independently of confidence.

Strengths:

The study combines the latest advances in transdiagnostic approaches to psychopathology with a cleverly designed external reminder-setting task. The approach allows for investigation of what some of the downstream consequences associated with impaired metacognition in sub-clinical psychopathology may be.

The experimental design and hypotheses were pre-registered prior to data collection.

The manuscript is well written and rigorous analysis approaches are used throughout.

Weaknesses:

Participants only performed a single task so it remains unclear if the observed effects would generalise to reminder setting in other cognitive domains.

The sample consisted of participants recruited from the general population. Future studies should investigate whether the effects observed extend to individuals with the highest levels of symptoms (including clinical samples).

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

The authors aimed to determine whether goal-directed and cue-driven attentional strategies (goal- and sign-tracking phenotypes) were associated with variation in cued motor responses and dorsomedial striatal (DMS) glutamate transmission. They used a treadmill task in which cues indicated whether rats should turn or stop to receive a reward. They collected and analyzed several behavioral measures related to task performance with a focus on turns (performance, latency, duration) for which there are more measures than for stops. First, they established that goal-trackers perform better than sign-trackers in post-criterion turn performance (cued turns completed) and turn initiation. They used glutamate sensors to measure glutamate transmission in DMS. They performed analyses on glutamate traces that suggest phasic glutamate DMS dynamics to cues were primarily associated with successful turn performance and were more characteristic of goal-trackers (ie. rats with "goal-directed" attentional strategy). Smaller and more frequent DMS glutamate peaks were associated with other task events, cued misses (missed turns), cued stops, and reward delivery and were more characteristic of sign-trackers (i.e. rats with "cue-driven" attentional strategies). Consistent with the reported glutamate findings, chemogenetic inhibition of prelimbic-DMS glutamate transmission had an effect on goal-trackers' turn performance without affecting sign-trackers' performance in the treadmill task.

Strengths:

The power of the sign- and goal-tracking model to account for neurobiological and behavioral variability is critically important to the field's understanding of heterogeneity of the brain in health and disease. The approach and methodology are sound in their contribution to this important effort.

The authors establish behavioral differences, measure a neurobiological correlate of relevance, and then manipulate that correlate in a broader circuitry and show a causal role in behavior that is consistent with neurobiological measurements and phenotypic differences.

Sophisticated analyses provide a compelling description of the authors' observations.

Limitations:

Considerable transparency was added in the revised preprint. The "n" for each analysis is now available in Tables 1 and 3, carefully cross-referenced by figure. Readers may now carefully consider the n's in drawing their own conclusions from reported data.

While more conventional trial-averaged population activity traces are not presented or analyzed, the unique nature of the peak phenotypes is likely to "wash out" potentially meaningful signals if averaged across subjects. The distribution of peaks analyses (and shifts observed with chemogenetic inhibition) are improved in the revised preprint and are informative to illustrate this likelihood. Representative traces should theoretically be consistent with population averages within phenotype, and if not, discussion of such inconsistencies may have enriched the conclusions drawn from the study. For example, population traces of the phasic cue response in GT may resemble the representative peak examples, while smaller irregular peaks of ST may "wash out" in a population average (possibly resulting in a prolonged elevation) and could have strengthened the rationale for more sophisticated analyses of peak probability that remain the focus of the revised preprint.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

Sleep has not only been shown to support the strengthening of memory traces, but also their transformation. A special form of such transformation is the abstraction of general rules from the presentation of individual exemplars. The current work used large online experiments with hundreds of participants to shed further light on this question. In the training phase participants saw composite items (scenes) that were made up of pairs of spatially coupled (i.e., they were next to each other) abstract shapes. In the initial training, they saw scenes made up of six horizontally structured pairs and in the second training phase, which took place after a retention phase (2 min awake, 12 hour incl. sleep, 12 h only wake, 24 h incl. sleep), they saw pairs that were horizontally or vertically coupled. After the second training phase, a two-alternatives-forced-choice (2-AFC) paradigm, where participants had to identify true pairs versus randomly assembled foils, was used to measure performance on all pairs. Finally, participants were asked five questions to identify, if they had insight into the pair structure and post-hoc groups were assigned based on this. Mainly the authors find that participants in the 2 minute retention experiment without explicit knowledge of the task structure were at chance level performance for the same structure in the second training phase, but had above chance performance for the vertical structure. The opposite was true for both sleep conditions. In the 12 h wake condition these participants showed no ability to discriminate the pairs from the second training phase at all.

Strengths:

All in all, the study was performed to a high standard and the sample size in the implicit condition was large enough to draw robust conclusions. The authors make several important statistical comparisons and also report an interesting resampling approach. There is also a lot of supplemental data regarding robustness.

Weaknesses:

My main concern regards the small sample size in the explicit group and the lack of experimental control.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This interesting manuscript describes a study investigating the role of MC4R signalling on kisspeptin neurons. The initial question is a good one. Infertility associated with MC4 mutations in humans has typically been ascribed to the consequent obesity and impaired metabolic regulation. Whether there is a direct role for MC4 in regulating the HPG axis has not been thoroughly examined. Here, the researchers have assembled an elegant combination of targetted loss of function and gain of function in vivo experiments, specifically targetting MC4 expression in kisspeptin neurons. This excellent experimental design should provide compelling evidence for whether melanocortin signalling dirently affects arcuate kisspeptin neurons to support normal reproductive function. There were definite effects on reproductive function (irregular estrous cycle, reduced magnitude of LH surge induced by exogenous estradiol). However, the magnitude of these responses and the overall effect on fertility were relatively minor. The mice lacking MC4R in kisspeptin neurons remained fertile despite these irregularities. The second part of the manuscript describes a series of electrophysiological studies evaluating the pharmacological effects of melanocortin signalling in kisspeptin cells in ex-vivo brain slides. These studies characterised interesting differential actions of melanocortins in two different populations of kisspeptin neurons. Collectively, the study provides some novel insights into how direct actions of melanocortin signalling via the MC4 receptor in kisspeptin neurons contribute to the metabolic regulation of the reproductive system. Importantly, however, it is clear that other mechanisms are also at play.

Strengths:

The loss of function/gain of function experiments provides a conceptually simple but hugely informative experimental design. This is the key strength of the current paper - especially the knock-in study that showed improved reproductive function even in the presence of ongoing obesity. This is a very convincing result that documents that reproductive deficits in MC4R knockout animals (and humans with deleterious MC4R gene variants) can be ascribed to impaired signalling in the hypothalamic kisspeptin neurons and not necessarily caused as a consequence of obesity. As concluded by the authors: "reproductive impairments observed in MC4R deficient mice, which replicate many of the conditions described in humans, are largely mediated by the direct action of melanocortins via MC4R on Kiss1 neurons and not to their obese phenotype." This is important, as it might change how such fertility problems are treated.

I would like to see the validation experiments for the genetic manipulation studies given greater prominence in the manuscript because they are critical to interpretation. Presently, only single unquantified images are shown, and a much more comprehensive analysis should be provided.

Weaknesses:

(1) Given that mice lacking MC4R in kisspeptin neurons remained fertile despite some reproductive irregularities, this can be described as a contributing pathway, but other mechanisms must also be involved in conveying metabolic information to the reproductive system. This is now appropriately covered in the discussion.

(2) The mechanistic studies evaluating melanocortin signalling in kisspeptin neurons were all completed in ovariectomised animals (with and without exogenous hormones) that do not experience cyclical hormone changes. Such cyclical changes are fundamental to how these neurons function in vivo and may dynamically alter how they respond to hormones and neuropeptides. Eliminating this variable makes interpretation difficult, but the authors have justified this as a reductionist approach to evaluate estradiol actions specifically. However, this does not reflect the actual complexity of reproductive function.

For example, the authors focus on a reduced LH response to exogenous estradiol in ovariectomised mice as evidence that there might be a sub-optimal preovulatory LH surge. However, the preovulatory LH sure (in intact animals) was not measured.

They have not assessed why some follicles ovulated, but most did not. They have focused on the possibility that the ovulation signal (LH surge) was insufficient rather than asking why some follicles responded and others did not. This suggests some issue with follicular development, likely due to changes in gonadotropin secretion during the cycle and not simply due to an insufficient LH surge.

Reviewer #2 (Public review):

Summary:

This study by Tünte et al. investigated the development of interoceptive sensitivity during the first year of life, focusing specifically on cardiac and respiratory sensitivity in infants aged 3, 9, and 18 months. The research employed a previously developed experimental paradigm for the cardiac domain and adapted it for a novel paradigm in the respiratory domain. This approach assessed infants' cardiac and respiratory sensitivity based on their preferential looking behavior toward visuo-auditory stimuli displayed on a monitor, which moved either in sync or out of sync with the infants' own heartbeats or breathing. The results in the cardiac domain showed that infants across all age groups preferred stimuli moving synchronously rather than asynchronously with their heartbeat, suggesting the presence of cardiac sensitivity as early as 3 months of age. However, it is noteworthy that this preference direction contradicts a previous study, which found that 5-month-old infants looked longer at stimuli moving asynchronously with their heartbeat (Maister et al., 2017). In the respiratory domain, only the group of 9-month-old infants showed a preference for stimuli presented synchronously with their breathing. The authors conducted various statistical analyses to thoroughly examine the obtained data, providing deeper insights valuable for future research in this field.

Strengths:

Few studies have explored the early development of interoception, making the replication of the original study by Maister et al. (2017) particularly valuable. Beyond replication, this study expands the investigation into the respiratory domain, significantly enhancing our understanding of interoceptive development. The provision of longitudinal and cross-sectional data from infants at 3, 9, and 18 months of age is instrumental in understanding their developmental trajectory.

Weaknesses:

Due to a technical error, this study failed to counterbalance the conditions of the first trial in both the iBEAT and iBREATH tests. Although the authors addressed this issue as much as possible by employing alternative analyses, it should be noted that this error may have critically influenced the results and, thus, the conclusions.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In the manuscript, the authors aimed to elucidate the molecular mechanism that explains neurodegeneration caused by the depletion of axonal mitochondria. In Drosophila, starting with siRNA depletion of Milton and Miro, the authors attempted to demonstrate that the depletion of axonal mitochondria induces the defect in autophagy. From proteome analyses, the authors hypothesized that autophagy is impacted by the abundance of eIF2β and the phosphorylation of eIF2α. The authors followed up the proteome analyses by testing the effects of eIF2β overexpression and depletion on autophagy. With the results from those experiments, the authors proposed a novel role of eIF2β in proteostasis that underlies neurodegeneration derived from the depletion of axonal mitochondria.

The manuscript has several weaknesses. The reader should take extra care while reading this manuscript and when acknowledging the findings and the model in this manuscript.

The defect in autophagy by the depletion of axonal mitochondria is one of the main claims in the paper. The authors should work more on describing their results of LC3-II/LC3-I ratio, as there are multiple ways to interpret the LC3 blotting for the autophagy assessment. Lysosomal defects result in the accumulation of LC3-II thus the LC3-II/LC3-I ratio gets higher. On the other hand, the defect in the early steps of autophagosome formation could result in a lower LC3-II/LC3-I ratio. From the results of the actual blotting, the LC3-I abundance is the source of the major difference for all conditions (Milton RNAi and eIF2β overexpression and depletion).

Another main point of the paper is the up-regulation of eIF2β by depleting the axonal mitochondria leads to the proteostasis crisis. This claim is formed by the findings from the proteome analyses. The authors should have presented their proteomic data with much thorough presentation and explanation. As in the experiment scheme shown in Figure 4A, the author did two proteome analyses: one from the 7-day-old sample and the other from the 21-day-old sample. The manuscript only shows a plot of the result from the 7-day-old sample, but that of the result from the 21-day-old sample. For the 21-day-old sample, the authors only provided data in the supplemental table, in which the abundance ratio of eIF2β from the 21-day-old sample is 0.753, meaning eIF2β is depleted in the 21-day-old sample. The authors should have explained the impact of the eIF2β depletion in the 21-day-old sample, so the reader could fully understand the authors' interpretation of the role of eIF2β on proteostasis.