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- Dec 2018
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www.wilnichols.com www.wilnichols.com
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that experience,
Which experience? I feel like the previous two paragraphs introduced enough different concepts that the antecedents here is unclear.
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The specter of upcoming departure influenced behavior in a way that removed one from reality — academics in Lyon mattered less at home, new friends would return to their countries of origin and communication would lapse, and why invest for comfort when somewhere so briefly?
This sentence is 44 words!!!
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Not in Austin, but near, and often visiting. Twenty miles North. Sometimes, further
Living twenty miles north of Austin or visiting twenty miles north? This is a confusing set of sentences. Unnecessarily truncated.
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