112 Matching Annotations
  1. Dec 2023
    1. The tear gascame 30 seconds later.

      Explaining the pace with "30 seconds later" makes me feel like I was there

    2. No athlete has embodied the soul of a city and the spirit of itspeople as Richard did in the 1940s and '50s in Montreal, my homefor the past 21 years.

      This is a weird sentence structure

    1. raced down the side

      Exciting--feels like I"m there

    2. And that was just the beginning. You’ve never seen a hockey player like Maurice Richard. Not Crosby. Not Gretzky. Not Orr, Beliveau, Howe. None of them had the talent, the intensity, the will to take over a game like Richard. And none of them meant to their fans what le Rocket meant to Canadien fans.

      This is especially engaging to Hockey enthusiasts themselves but if that is they're target market then the descriptor is clear and exciting.

    3. Their teammates swarm about, clutching and shoving one another.

      This sentence does a really good job at engaging the reader.

    1. Topics will change each week. Students will find themselves examining religious metaphors, behaviours and ethics, and drawing links between them and the Habs.

      All of these things play into story telling

    2. He would probably have a lot of things to say about it," Bauer said.

      Importance of this statement as it pertains to the conversation

    3. are, in fact, a faith.

      Very interesting way to describe it

    1. CBC Radio Archive: The Richard Riot

      Good use of mixed media

    2. Unbeaten, unbowed, unrepentant — still forever proud.

      Alliteration at the beginning of the sentence brings power to the ending piece “still forever proud” also a great way to end the essay.

    3. believed

      Third party perspective — interesting take on story telling

  2. Nov 2023
    1. In a match the previous Sunday, Richard had twice viciouslyslashed his nemesis, Hal Laycoe of the Boston Bruins, and thenassaulted a linesman

      because they played each other a lot, the fight and tension was building.

    2. The tear gascame 30 seconds later.

      this may have been a little excessive.

    3. The Richard Riot is generally considered the firstexplosion of French-Canadian nationalism, the beginning of asocial and political dynamic that shapes Canada to this day.

      really cool to hear how this riot affected the whole country of Canada and their future.

    4. Loud Start To The Quiet Revolution MARCH 17 1955 The RIOT OVER ROCKET RICHARD

      very cool line here, using two opposites to describe each other.

    1. "Sport is part of culture and a good way to learn about another country… To discover why people are so passionate about it, it's like, 'Tell me what your sport is and I'll tell you who you are,' " he said.

      great line here about sport and how important it is for people .

    2. Another example of religious behaviour is an expectation of sacrifice, Bauer said.

      they sacrificed for the team as you do in religion, which a weird comparison but

    3. Topics will change each week. Students will find themselves examining religious metaphors, behaviours and ethics, and drawing links between them and the Habs

      course work of the class.

    4. Worshipping les Canadiens

      Interesting how they decided to make a course on religion based hockey and compare it to the religion they all practice. Just shows how important it is to them.

    1. But it was not that simple. Something momentous had happened that shook the natural order and would not allow Montreal to return to the way things once stood

      this event caused Montreal to never be the same in regards to hockey.

    2. Richard knew his temper meant trouble but felt defenseless against it. “When I’m hit, I get mad and I don’t know what I do,” he confided in one writer. “Before each game, I think about my temper and how I should control it, but as soon as I get on the ice I forget all that.”

      after reading this, a fight of this magnitude could have happened on any given night.

    3. “He is God,”

      puts a perspective on how important hockey is in Canada.

    4. Their teammates swarm about, clutching and shoving one another. Linesman Cliff Thompson grabs at Richard but he slips the official’s grip. Richard connects with an uppercut to Laycoe’s cheek.

      I love how in hockey the whole benches clear and fight no matter what happens.

    5. This is their 14th and final meeting of the regular season,

      I wonder why they did not like each other, playing 14 times per season.

    6. Maurice Richard­-le Rocket,

      he is causing a lot of backlash with his actions, even though he is the best hockey player at the time.

    1. Ted Lindsay had been dispatched for four games after punching a Toronto fan.

      should have been a longer suspension, at least it would have today.

    2. Unbeaten, unbowed, unrepentant — still forever proud.

      even though so much occurred because of this, they are still proud of what happened.

    3. 137 arrests

      that is a lot of arrests made in a short amount of time.

    1. "The mass is beautiful. I am often very sorry that we live so far from churches. Perhaps not being able to attend to our religion every Sunday hinders us from being just so fortunate as other people."

      they lived very from the churches, but they still were very religious. they feel bad for living that far away

    2. Some miles farther, and the woods fell away again, disclosing the river. The road descended the last hill from the higher land and sank almost to the level of the ice. Three houses were dotted along the mile of bank above; but they were humbler buildings than those of the village, and behind them scarcely any land was cleared and there was little sign of cultivation:-built there, they seemed to be, only in witness of the presence of man.

      On their travels they come across so many different areas, little areas of land with 2-3 houses.

    3. The great three-decked stove stood in the centre of the house; the sheet-iron stove-pipe, after mounting for some feet, turned at a right angle and was carried through the house to the outside, so that none of the precious warmth should be lost. In a corner was the large wooden cupboard; close by, the table; a bench against the wall; on the other side of the door the sink and the pump. A partition beginning at the opposite wall seemed designed to divide the house in two, but it stopped before reaching the stove and did not begin again beyond it, in such fashion that these divisions of the only room were each enclosed on three sides and looked like a stage setting-that conventional type of scene where the audience are invited to imagine that two distinct apartments exist although they look into both at once.

      Good insight of how they live and the layout.

    4. In her heart she felt that never since the earth began was there a springtime like this springtime to-be

      They are always looking forward to better weather and happier living.

    5. That is to say, for wages of twenty dollars a month he was in harness each day from four in the morning till nine at night at any and every job that called for doing

      Interesting to see their work and the pay to go along with it.

    6. then could I bear the waiting better."

      He’s try to describe the way hope makes us do things differently while still letting the reader come to that conclusion on their own. Interesting writing tactic

    7. long after nightfall

      Great story telling

    8. speaker ended by adding his own laugh.

      The speaker is not just a speaker if he’s injecting his own laugh he is a part of the conversation

    9. across the water

      Interesting way to describe the excitement of exploration by underplaying it

  3. May 2023
    1. Kutti’s coat shone with cleanliness, sparkling in the sunshinelike a silk sari

      similie

    2. Celina Aunty’s words made my dream glimmeragain.

      personification

    3. Her face glowed like a moon

      similie

    4. “Don’t talk back.” Her face flushed redder than a brick.

      hyperbole

    5. when I felt like a rock was sitting on my chest,

      similie

    6. “Because you’re not talking much to anyone, Viji, and that’s nothealthy. Your thoughts are sitting inside you like a stone,

      similie

    7. His words felt like a warm ray of sunshine slipping in through arain-soaked sky.

      similie

    8. His words felt like a warm ray of sunshine slipping in through arain-soaked sky.

      personification

    9. He slipped his fingers through mine. They felt bony as askeleton’s

      similie

    10. I didn’t tell her how sick you were.I didn’t want to believe it.

      repetition

    11. Arul wound your new doll’s hair around one of his wrists like ahandcuff.

      similie

    12. And it wasn’t justmy feet that dragged. It was like my mind was dragging my heartalong, and it and the rest of my body didn’t want to come.

      similie

    13. My feet felt heavy as sacks full of scrap metal.

      similie

    14. inside was already wet. A rash had broken out on your back, makingyour skin as rough as sandpaper,

      similie

    15. The wind picked up. It tore away the plastic tablecloth we’d usedas a door and sent it flapping like a bat across the dark graveyard.

      similie

    16. Your body was a tight knot.

      metaphor

    17. Purple rain clouds burst over us like rottinggrapes.

      similie

    18. “Don’t be.” Kumar churned the filthy water with his stick. “Kidsdie every day. You start feeling sorry, you’ll drown.”

      metaphor

    19. of water thatlooked and smelled like raw sewage.

      similie

    20. “No, no, Akka.” Muthu grinned weakly at me. “If you kept mefrom working that long, I’d fall ill from shock.”

      hyperbole

    21. All through that starless night, your breath came in wheezy gasps asraindrops wriggled, like silver snake

      similie

    22. But the woman at the orphanage was arakshasi.”

      metaphor

    23. “You’re the one being ridiculous,” he said. “I went to one ofthose ‘schools’ once. It was a prison.”

      metaphor

    24. That was a miracle.

      metaphor

    25. I didn’t want youtraveling all alone to our palace.

      metaphor

    26. “Cheee!

      onomatopeia

    27. “Rukku’s the sweetest of us all,” Muthu said. “That’s why themosquitoes like her best.”

      metaphor

    28. I’ll brush his coat so it shines like silk

      hyperbole

    29. “My friends and I sell trash to make ends meet,”

      metaphor

    30. Silver pins of rain fell around us as we left the church.

      metaphor

    31. “Priests don’t accuse kids who are in God’s house,”

      metaphor

    32. like they could hear music. Like theywere alive. Alive the way you were alive, alive right there, right then,

      repetition

    33. those little flames, dancing in thatstill, silent church, dancing like they could hear music.

      personification

    34. We stood in a circle, linked together like an unbreakablenecklace.

      similie

    35. You took the bead from him, and your face brightened slowly,like the sun peeking out from behind rain clouds. The two of you

      similie

    36. You were silent for what felt like forever.

      hyperbole

    37. steal our gold?

      metaphor

    38. A nauseating smell rose and smacked me in the face, but I toiledas fast as I could.

      personification

    39. And then it rose and came at us like a monstrous cobra,swallowing everything in sight, and I ran.”

      simile

    40. That was something.No.That was everything.

      metaphor

    41. “Your necklaces are worththeir weight in gold!”

      hyperbole

    42. why can’t we try to sell her jewelry?”

      metaphor

    43. As we approached a street vendor whose spicy food was makingmy mouth water,

      metaphor

    44. I rubbed the notes between my fingers, asthough they were fine silk.

      similie

    45. watched you stacking pieces of cardboard and humming joyfully,the realization stabbed me

      metaphor

    46. “I get to slice your hands into little tiny pieces.”

      hyperbole

    47. His words pierced me like needles.

      simile

    48. “Chee!”

      onomatopeia

    49. The man’s eyes fell on me. They were mean, like a rogueelephant’s.

      similie

    50. Yesu fight the bad guys?” Muthu continued. “He had twelve in hisgang—”

      metaphor

    51. When, at last, I placed a section in my mouth, I could hear itburst as my teeth met the flesh, squeezing the juice out onto mytongue, tart at first and then sweet. Everything else melted awayexcept for the taste, the smell, the feel of the fruit on my tongue.I ate the fruit slowly. The way you liked to do things.

      metaphor

    52. We were in plain sight.But we were invisible.

      metaphor

    53. og of worry.

      personification

    54. uge posters as tall as we were,

      similie

    55. “Ahhh,” you murmured, cradling it in your hands as if it werethe most beautiful thing ever.

      similie

    56. as

      similie

    57. as

      similie

    58. as

      similie

    59. as

      similie

    60. Hugging him close, like you used to hug your doll, you finallylay down on our sheet. “Story?”

      similie

    61. Tishoom.

      onomatopeia

    62. He reminded me of a sunflower

      metaphor

    63. Kutti pricked up his ears and stood attentively at your side, likehe understood you perfectly.

      similie

    64. Our story was clearlywritten on my swollen face and your cut lip

      personification

    65. boiling insidelike the oil in her frying pan.

      similie

    66. Ai-ai-yo!

      onomatopeia

    67. flood of vehicles and pedestrians.

      metaphor

    68. doubts slithered into my mind.

      pesonification

    69. buses to and from the city roared through ourvillage.

      personification

    70. likesunshine slipping into a dark room

      similie

    71. I can’t bear seeing you hurt, but how can I stop him?” Shegazed at the pictures of the Gods and Goddesses smiling downserenely from our kitchen wall. As if they’d suddenly leap into lifeand start helping.

      personification

  4. Apr 2023
    1. Imagining Appa “before” took a lot of imagining. I was a goodimaginer, but even so, I couldn’t imagine him all the way nice.

      repetition: using derivatives of imagine a lot.

  5. Jul 2017
    1. se a reader’s ability to effectively scan a page, as opposed to reading every word

      importan skill when reading a foreign text!

  6. Jul 2016
    1. Please watch this video to understand the difference between this amendment and the amendment tat is more likely to actually bring you solar at little to no upfront costs. https://www.facebook.com/Renewabledrive/videos/970883766353482/

    1. Yes On 1 For The Sun

      This FB page and amendment has said to be a sneaky back door legislation that will actually ensure power to the big dogs and make it harder for us to get solar. Please correct me if wrong.