Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Synthetic autotrophy of biotechnologically relevant microorganisms offers exciting chances for CO2 neutral or even CO2 negative production of goods. The authors' lab has recently published an engineered and evolved Escherichia coli strain that can grow on CO2 as its only carbon source. Lab evolution was necessary to achieve growth. Evolved strains displayed tens of mutations, of which likely not all are necessary for the desired phenotype.

In the present paper the authors identify the mutations that are necessary and sufficient to enable autotrophic growth of engineered E. coli. Three mutations were identified, and their phenotypic role in enhancing growth via the introduced Calvin-Benson-Bassham cycle were characterized. It was demonstrated that these mutations allow autotrophic growth of E. coli with the introduced CBB cycle without any further metabolic intervention. Autotrophic growth is demonstrated by 13C labelling with 13C CO2, measured in proteinogenic amino acids. In Figures 2B and S1, the labeling data are shown, with an interval of the "predicted range under 13CO2". Here, the authors should describe how this interval was derived.

The methodology is clearly described and appropriate.

The present results will allow other labs to engineer E. coli and other microorganisms further to assimilate CO2 efficiently into biomass and metabolic products. The importance is evident in the opportunity to employ such strain in CO2 based biotech processes for the production of food and feed protein or chemicals, to reduce atmospheric CO2 levels and the consumption of fossil resources.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The authors previously showed that expressing formate dehydrogenase, rubisco, carbonic anhydrase, and phosphoribulokinase in Escherichia coli, followed by experimental evolution, led to the generation of strains that can metabolise CO2. Using two rounds of experimental evolution, the authors identify mutations in three genes - pgi, rpoB, and crp - that allow cells to metabolise CO2 in their engineered strain background. The authors make a strong case that mutations in pgi are loss-of-function mutations that prevent metabolic efflux from the reductive pentose phosphate autocatalytic cycle. The authors also argue that mutations in crp and rpoB lead to an increase in the NADH/NAD+ ratio, which would increase the concentration of the electron donor for carbon fixation. While this may explain the role of the crp and rpoB mutations, there is good reason to think that the two mutations have independent effects, and that the change in NADH/NAD+ ratio may not be the major reason for their importance in the CO2-metabolising strain.

Specific comments:

1. Deleting pgi rather than using a point mutation would allow the authors to more rigorously test whether loss-off-function mutants are being selected for in their experimental evolution pipeline. The same argument applies to crp.

2. Page 10, lines 10-11, the authors state "Since Crp and RpoB are known to physically interact in the cell (26-28), we address them as one unit, as it is hard to decouple the effect of one from the other". CRP and RpoB are connected, but the authors' description of them is misleading. CRP activates transcription by interacting with RNA polymerase holoenzyme, of which the Beta subunit (encoded by rpoB) is a part. The specific interaction of CRP is with a different RNA polymerase subunit. The functions of CRP and RpoB, while both related to transcription, are otherwise very different. The mutations in crp and rpoB are unlikely to be directly functionally connected. Hence, they should be considered separately.

3. A Beta-galactosidase assay would provide a very simple test of CRP H22N activity. There are also simple in vivo and in vitro assays for transcription activation (two different modes of activation) and DNA-binding. H22 is not near the DNA-binding domain, but may impact overall protein structure.

4. There are many high-resolution structures of both CRP and RpoB (in the context of RNA polymerase). The authors should compare the position of the sites of mutation of these proteins to known functional regions, assuming H22N is not a loss-of-function mutation in crp.

5. RNA-seq would provide a simple assay for the effects of the crp and rpoB mutations. While the precise effect of the rpoB mutation on RNA polymerase function may be hard to discern, the overall impact on gene expression would likely be informative.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This is an interesting study, covering a future direction for the diagnosis of osteoporosis.

Strength: well validated cohorts, authors are more than experts in the field, use of technology.

Weakness: the approach is still very experimental and far away to be clinically relevant.

The authors have performed a very interesting analysis combining data from different, well designed, cohorts.<br /> Authors are leaders in the field. The topic is of interest, the statistical analysis well designed, and the paper is well written and easy to read even for not experts.

I have a few comments<br /> 1) Although authors are very optimistic about HRpQCT, they should recognize (and acknowledge in the discussion) that their data have a very low clinical impact for the majority of the population. The cost of the machine is still prohibitive for the majority of clinical centers, technology needs more validations out of the reference centers, a lot of controversy on the methodology for cortical porosity. Basically, after 20 years since its introduction, it remains more a research tool than a clinical opportunity. This comment is of course not against the scientific hypothesis or the conduction of the study which remain brilliant<br /> 2) How authors have managed the role of possible secondary causes of osteoporosis? Did they excluded patients with GIOP for example? Are all study subjects treatment naïve?<br /> 3) It would be worth to better describe the role of cortical porosity and the predictive value of this parameter which has been extensively studied by Dr Seeman.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors apply a deep learning approach to predict fracture using forearm HR-pQCT data pooled from 3 longitudinal cohorts totaling 2666 postmenopausal women. The deep learning based 'Structural Fragility Score - AI' was compared to FRAX w/BMD and BMD alone in its ability to identify women who went on to fracture within the next 5 years. SFS-AI performed significantly better than FRAX w/BMD and BMD alone in all metrics except specificity. This work establishes that deep learning methods applied to HR-pQCT data have great potential for use in predicting (and therefore preventing) fractures.

The low specificity of SFS-AI compared to FRAX and BMD is not adequately acknowledged or addressed - will this lead to over diagnosis / unnecessary interventions and is that a problem?

The paper does not adequately address the relative role of bone vs soft tissue features in the determination of SFS-AI. It would be possible to feed the algorithm only the segmented bone volumes, and compare AUC, etc, of SFS-AI (bone) to that acquired using the entire bone + muscle volume. It's possible (likely?) that most of the predictive power will remain. If muscle is an important part of this algorithm, then mid-diaphyseal tibia scans will be an interesting next application - since that scan site is closer to the muscle belly compared to the distal radius site which contains very little muscle volume.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

This work presents a novel approach for predicting fracture risk from high-resolution peripheral quantitative computed tomography (HR-pQCT): by training a deep learning model to predict five-year fracture risk where the sole input is the full 3D HR-pQCT image. Prior studies have developed models, of varying complexity, to predict fracture risk from HR-pQCT. However, this study is novel in that neither the typical manual efforts required for HR-pQCT image analysis nor additional biomarker collection are required, simplifying potential clinical implementation. The authors show that their model predicts fracture within five years with greater sensitivity than FRAX (with an assumed diagnostic threshold of FRAX > 20% or T-score < -2.5 SD), albeit with reduced specificity. The authors further investigate how their model output, the structural fragility score derived by artificial intelligence (SFS-AI), is correlated with two microarchitectural parameters that can be measured with HR-pQCT, demonstrating that their model captures many relevant characteristics of a patient's bone quality that cannot be captured by the standard clinical tools used to diagnose osteoporosis, and thus to identify patients at elevated risk of fracture.

Strengths

The authors use a very large dataset and a combination of state-of-the-art methods for training and validating their fracture prediction model: k-fold cross-validation is used for training and a held-out external test dataset is used to evaluate ensembled model predictions compared to the current clinical standard for fracture screening. The results with the test dataset show that the model can identify women at risk of fracture in the next five years with greater sensitivity than both FRAX with BMD and BMD alone.

Because the model takes only a full 3D HR-pQCT image as input, the feasibility of clinical implementation is maximized. Standard morphological analysis with HR-pQCT is semi-automated and the labour required for the manual portions of analysis poses a significant barrier to clinical implementation. There is mounting evidence for the clinical utility of HR-pQCT (see Gazzotti et al. Br. J. Radiol. 2023) and fully automated models such as the one presented in this work will be critical for making clinical applications of HR-pQCT feasible.

The authors quantify the contributions to the variance of the model output and examine activation maps overlaid on the HR-pQCT images. These sub-analyses indicate that the model is identifying relevant characteristics of hierarchical bone structure for fracture prediction that are not available from aBMD measurements from DXA and thus are not accounted for in the current standard clinical diagnostic tool.

Weaknesses

The authors make the claim that SFS-AI outperforms FRAX with BMD and BMD in terms of sensitivity and specificity of predicting fragility fractures within 5 years. This claim is supported by looking at the ROCs in figure 1, but the specific comparison made in the discussion is not completely fair as currently presented in the article. The thresholds of FRAX > 20% and T-score < -2.5SD were selected by the authors for binary comparison. FRAX and BMD achieve specificities of ~95% at these thresholds, while SFS-AI achieves a specificity of only 77% at the selected threshold, SFS-AI > 0.5. Conversely, SFS-AI achieves a sensitivity of 50% to 60% while FRAX and BMD achieve very poor sensitivities, between 4% and 16%. The authors have not justified their choice of binarization thresholds for FRAX or BMD by citing literature or clinical guidelines, nor have they motivated their choice of any of the thresholds with a discussion of how clinical considerations could influence the sensitivity-specificity trade-off. It is difficult to directly compare the prognosticative performance of SFS-AI to that of FRAX or BMD when the thresholds for FRAX and BMD are at such different locations on the respective ROCs when compared to where the threshold for SFS-AI places it on the ROC. The authors have also not compared their estimates of the sensitivity and specificity of FRAX and BMD to literature to provide important context for the comparison to SFS-AI. An additional unacknowledged limitation is that the FRAX tool is designed to predict 10-year fracture risk, while the outcome used to train the SFS-AI model and to compare to FRAX was 5-year fracture risk.

Direct comparison may be impossible due to differences in study design or reported performance metrics, but the authors have not at all discussed the quantitative performance of prior models for fracture prediction or discrimination that use HR-pQCT (see Lu et al. Bone 2023 or Whittier et al. JBMR 2023) to contextualize the performance of their novel model. While the model presented in this article has the advantage that it does not require the typical expertise and manual effort needed for HR-pQCT image analysis, it is still important to acknowledge the potential trade-off of ease of implementation vs performance. Models that incorporate additional clinical data or that use standard HR-pQCT analysis outputs rather than raw images may perform well enough to justify the increase in the difficulty of clinical implementation or to motivate further work on fully automating microarchitectural analysis with HR-pQCT images.

Finally, the article does not indicate that either the code used for model training or the trained model itself will be made publicly available. This limits the ability of future researchers to replicate and build on the results presented in the article.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Weinberger et al. use different fate-mapping models, the FIRE model and PLX-diet to follow and target different macrophage populations and combine them with single-cell data to understand their contribution to heart regeneration after I/R injury. This question has already been addressed by other groups in the field using different models. However, the major strength of this manuscript is the usage of the FIRE mouse model that, for the first time, allows specific targeting of only fetal-derived macrophages.<br /> The data show that the absence of resident macrophages is not influencing infarct size but instead is altering the immune cell crosstalk in response to injury, which is in line with the current idea in the field that macrophages of different origins have distinct functions in tissues, especially after an injury.<br /> To fully support the claims of the study, specific targeting of monocyte-derived macrophages or the inhibition of their influx at different stages after injury would be of high interest.<br /> In summary, the study is well done and important for the field of cardiac injury. But it also provides a novel model (FIRE mice + RANK-Cre fate-mapping) for other tissues to study the function of fetal-derived macrophages while monocyte-derived macrophages remain intact.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this study Weinberger et al. investigated cardiac macrophage subsets after ischemia/reperfusion (I/R) injury in mice. The authors studied a ∆FIRE mouse model (deletion of a regulatory element in the Csf1r locus), in which only tissue resident macrophages might be ablated. The authors showed a reduction of resident macrophages in ∆FIRE mice and characterized its macrophages populations via scRNAseq at baseline conditions and after I/R injury. 2 days after I/R protocol ∆FIRE mice showed an enhanced pro inflammatory phenotype in the RNAseq data and differential effects on echocardiographic function 6 and 30 days after I/R injury. Via flow cytometry and histology the authors confirmed existing evidence of increased bone marrow-derived macrophage infiltration to the heart, specifically to the ischemic myocardium. Macrophage population in ∆FIRE mice after I/R injury were only changed in the remote zone. Further RNAseq data on resident or recruited macrophages showed transcriptional differences between both cell types in terms of homeostasis-related genes and inflammation. Depleting all macrophage using a Csf1r inhibitor resulted in a reduced cardiac function and increased fibrosis.

Strengths<br /> 1. The authors utilized robust methodology encompassing state of the art immunological methods, different genetic mouse models and transcriptomics.<br /> 2. The topic of this work is important given the emerging role of tissue resident macrophages in cardiac homeostasis and disease.

Weaknesses:<br /> 1. Specificity of ∆FIRE mouse model for ablating resident macrophages.<br /> The study builds on the assumption that only resident macrophages are ablated in ∆FIRE mice, while bone marrow-derived macrophages are unaffected. While the effects of the ∆FIRE model is nicely shown for resident macrophages, the authors did not directly assess bone marrow-derived macrophages. Moreover, in the immunohistological images in Fig. 1D nearly all macrophages appear to be absent. It would be helpful to further address the question of whether recruited macrophages are influenced in ∆FIRE mice. Evaluation of YFP positive heart and blood cells in ∆FIRE mice crossed with Flt3CreRosa26eYFP mice could clarify whether bone marrow-derived cardiac macrophages are influenced in ∆FIRE mice. This would be even more relevant in the I/R model where recruitment of bone marrow-derived macrophages is increased. A more direct assessment of recruited macrophages in ∆FIRE mice could also help to discuss potential similarities or discrepancies to the study of Bajpai et al, Circ Res 2018 (https://doi.org/10.1161/CIRCRESAHA.118.314028), which showed distinct effects of resident versus recruited macrophages after myocardial infarction. Providing the quantification of flow cytometry data (fig. 1E-F) would be supportive.

2. Limited adverse cardiac remodeling in ∆FIRE mice after I/R.<br /> The authors suggested an adverse cardiac remodeling in ∆FIRE mice. However, the relevance of a <5% reduction in ejection fraction/stroke volume within an overall normal range in ∆FIRE mice is questionable. Moreover, 6 days after I/R injury ∆FIRE mice were protected from the impairment in ejection fraction and had a smaller viability defect. Based on the data few questions may arise: Why was ablation of resident macrophages beneficial at earlier time points? Are recruited macrophages affected in ∆FIRE mice (see above)? Overall, the manuscript could benefit if the claim of an adverse remodeling in ∆FIRE mice would be discussed more carefully.

3. Underlying mechanisms.<br /> The study did not functionally evaluated targets from transcriptomics to provide further mechanistic insights. It would be helpful if the authors discuss potential mechanisms of the differential effects of macrophages after ischemia in more detail.

Other:<br /> - It is unclear why the authors performed RNAseq experiments 2 days after I/R (fig. 5/6), while the proposed functional phenotype occurred later.<br /> - A sample size of 2 animals per group appears very limited for RNAseq in ∆FIRE mice (fig. 6).

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Privitera et al., provide a comprehensive and rigorous assessment of how noradrenaline (NA) inputs from the locus coeruleus (LC) to the hippocampus regulate stress-induced acute changes in gene expression. They utilize RNA-sequencing with selective activation/inhibition of LC-NA activity using pharmacological, chemogenetic and optogenetic manipulations to identify a great number of reproducible sets of genes impacted by LC activation. It is noteworthy that this study compares transcriptomic changes in the hippocampus induced by stress alone, as compared with selective circuit activation/inhibition. This reveals a small set of genes that were found to be highly reproducible. Further, the publicly available data will be highly useful to the scientific community.

A major strength of the study is the inclusion of both males and females. However, with this aspect of the study also lies the biggest weakness. While the experiments tested males and females, they were not powered for identifying sex differences. There are vast amounts of literature documenting the inherent sex differences, both under resting and stress-evoked conditions, in the LC-NA system and this is a major missed opportunity to better understand if there is an impact of these sex-specific differences at the genetic level in a major LC projection region. There are many instances whereby sex effects are apparent, but do not pass multiple testing correction due to low n's. The authors highlight one of them (Ctla2b) in supplemental figure 6. This gene is only upregulated by stress in females. It is appreciated that the manuscript provides an incredible amount of novel data, making the investigation of sex differences ambitious. Data are publicly available for others to conduct follow up work, and therefore it may be useful if a list of those genes that were different based on targeted interrogation of the dataset be provided with a clear statement that multiple testing corrections failed. This will aid further investigations that are powered to evaluate sex effects.

A major finding of the present study is the involvement of noradrenergic transcriptomic changes occurring in astrocytic genes in the hippocampus. Given the stated importance of this finding within the discussion, it seems that some additional dialogue integrating this with current literature about the role of astrocytes in the hippocampus during stress or fear memory would be important.

The comparison of the candidate genes activated by the LC in the present study (swim) with datasets published by Floriou-Servou et al., 2018 (Novelty, swim, restraint, and footshock) is an interesting and important comparison. Were there other stressors identified in this paper or other publications that do not regulate these candidate genes? Further, can references be added to clarify to the reader, that prior studies have identified that novelty, restraint and footshock all activate LC-NA neurons.

Comparisons are made between chemogenetic studies and yohimbine, stating that fewer genes were activated by chemogenetic activation of LC neurons. There is clear justification for why this may occur, but a caveat may need to be mentioned, that evidence of neuronal activation in the LC by each of these methods were conducted at 90 (yohimbine) versus 45 (hM3Dq) minutes, and therefore it cannot be ruled out that differences in LC-NA activity levels might also contribute.<br /> Please add information about how virus or cannula placement was confirmed in these studies. Were missed placements also analyzed separately?

Time of day for tissue collection used in genetic analysis should be reported for all studies conducted or reanalyzed.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The present manuscript investigates the implication of locus coeruleus-noradrenaline system in the stress-induced transcriptional changes of dorsal and ventral hippocampus, combining pharmacological, chemogenetic, and optogenetic techniques. Authors have revealed that stress-induced release of noradrenaline from locus coeruleus plays a modulatory role in the expression of a large scale of genes in both ventral and dorsal hippocampus through activation of β-adrenoreceptors. Similar transcriptional responses were observed after optogenetic and chemogenetic stimulation of locus coeruleus. Among all the genes analysed, authors identified the most affected ones in response to locus coeruleus-noradrenaline stimulation as being Dio2, Ppp1r3c, Ppp1r3g, Sik1, and Nr4a1. By comparing their transcriptomic data with publicly available datasets, authors revealed that these genes were upregulated upon exposure to different stressors. Additionally, authors found that upregulation of Ppp1r3c, Ppp1r3g, and Dio2 genes following swim stress was sustained from 90 min up to 2-4 hours after stress and that it was predominantly restricted to hippocampal astrocytes, while Sik1 and Nr4a1 genes showed a broader cellular expression and a sharp rise and fall in expression, within 90 min of stress onset.

Overall, the paper is well written and provides a useful inventory of dorsal and ventral hippocampal gene expression upregulated by activation of LC-NA system, which can be used as starting point for more functional studies related to the effects of stress-induced physiological and pathological changes. However, I believe that the study would have benefited of a more comprehensive analyses of sex differences. Experiments in females were conducted only in one experiment and analyses restricted to the ventral hippocampus. Although, the experiments were overall sound and the results broadly support the conclusion made, I think some methodological choices should be better explained and rationalized. For instance, the study focuses on identifying transcriptional changes in the hippocampus induced by stress-mediated activation of the LC-NA system, however NA release following stress exposure and pharmacological or optogenetic manipulation was mostly measured in the cortex. Furthermore, behavioral changes following systemic pharmacologic or chemogenetic manipulation were observed in the open field task immediately after peripheral injections of yohimbine or CNO, respectively. Is this timing sufficient for both drugs to cross the blood brain barrier and to exert behavioral effects? Finally, the study shows that activation of noradrenergic hippocampus-projecting LC neurons is sufficient to regulate the expression of several hippocampal genes, although the necessity of these projection to induce the observed transcriptional effects has been tested to some extent through systemic blockade of beta-adrenoceptor, I believe the study would have benefited of more selective (optogenetic or chemogenetic) necessity experiments.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This study uses single-cell genomics and gene pathway analysis to characterize the transcriptional effects of influenza H1N1 infection on hypothalamic cell types. The authors use droplet-based single-nuclei RNA-seq to profile genome-wide RNA expression in adult mouse hypothalamic cells at 3, 7, and 23 days after intranasal infection with the H1N1 influenza virus. Through state-of-the-art and rigorous computational methods, the authors find that many hypothalamic cell types, glia, and especially neurons, are transcriptionally altered by respiratory infection with a non-neurotropic influenza virus and that these alterations can persist for weeks and potentially affect cell type interactions that disrupt function. For instance, microglia shift towards a pro-inflammatory molecular phenotype at 3 days post-infection, while astrocytes and oligodendrocytes significantly alter their expression of oxidoreductase activity genes and transport genes, respectively, at 7 days post-infection. In addition, POMC neurons of the arcuate hypothalamus, which suppress appetite and increase metabolism, appear to be unusually sensitive to H1N1 infection, upregulating more genes than other hypothalamic neurons. The authors' thorough discussion of the findings raises interesting questions and hypotheses about the functional implications of the molecular changes they observed, including the physiological changes that can persist long after acute viral infection. Given the role of the hypothalamus in homeostasis, this work sheds light on potential mechanisms by which the H1N1 virus can disrupt cell function and organismal homeostasis beyond the cells that it directly infects.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The new work from Lemcke et al. suggests that the infection with Influenza A virus causes such flu symptoms as sleepiness and loss of appetite through the direct action on the responsible brain region, the hypothalamus. To test this idea, the authors performed single-nucleus RNA sequencing of the mouse hypothalamus in controlled experimental conditions (0, 3, 7, and 23 days after intranasal infection) and analyzed changes in the gene expression in the specific cell populations. The key results are promising and spurring future research. After revision, the analysis was considerably improved. Alternative approaches were used for testing. Specifically, during the revision: 1) The annotation of cell types was considerably improved; 2) The authors performed an additional analysis comparing case-control studies (Cacoa), where they could partly confirm their earlier findings.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The study isolated extracellular vesicles (EV) from healthy controls (HCs) and Parkinson patients (PwP), using plasma from the venous blood of non-fasting people. Such EVs were characterized and validated by the presence of markers, their size, and their morphology. The main aim of the manuscript is to correlate the presence of synaptic proteins, namely SNAP-25, GAP-43, and SYNAPTOTAGMIN-1, normalized with HSP70, with the clinical progression of PwP. Changes in synaptic proteins have been documented in the CSF of Alzheimer's and Parkinson's patients. The demographics of participants are adequately presented. One important limiting, as well as puzzling aspect, is the fact that authors did not find differences between groups at the beginning of the study nor after one year, after age and sex adjustment. Tables in general are hard to follow. Specifically, Table 2 does not convey a clear message nor in the text of the Table itself, and the per 100% of change needs to be explained in the corresponding legend. It is only when PwP were classified as a first quartile that a significantly greater deterioration was found. However, in the case of tremor, the top 25% had values going from 0.46-0.47 to 0.32-0.35, whereas the lower three quarters went from 0.33-0.34 to 0.27-0.28 depending on the protein analyzed. This needs to be clarified in the text. Table 3 is hard to read and some of the values seem repetitive, especially for tremor, AR, and PIGD. It looks as if Figure 2 represents the same information as Table 3. The text and figure legends are not helpful in guiding the reader to understand the presented information.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Hong and collaborators investigated variations in the amount of synaptic proteins in plasma extracellular vesicles (EV) in Parkinson's Disease (PD) patients on one-year follow-up. Their findings suggest that plasma EV synaptic proteins may be used as clinical biomarkers of PD progression.

It is a preliminary study using semi-quantitative analysis of synaptic proteins.

The authors have a cohort of PD patients with clinical examination and a know-how on EV purification. Regarding this latter part, they may improve their description of EV purification. EV may be broken into smaller size EV after freezing. Does it explain the relatively small size in their EV preparation? Do the authors refer to the MISEV guidelines for EV purity? Regarding synaptic protein quantification, the choice of western blotting may not be the best one. ELISA and other multiplex arrays are available. How the authors do justify their choice? Do the authors try to sort plasma EV by membrane-associated neuronal EV markers using either vesicle sorting or immunoprecipitation?

Many technical aspects may be improved. Such technical questions weakened the authors' conclusions.

The discussion is pretty long to justify the data. It may be shortened by adding some information in the introduction.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors design an automated 24-well Barnes maze with 2 orienting cues inside the maze, then model what strategies the mice use to reach the goal location across multiple days of learning. They consider a set of models and conclude that one of these models, a combined strategy model, best explains the experimental data.

This study is written concisely and the results presented concisely. The best fit model is reasonably simple and fits the experimental data well (at least the summary measures of the data that were presented).

Major points:

1. One combined strategy (once the goal location is learned) that might seem to be reasonable would be that the animal knows roughly where the goal is, but not exactly where, so it first uses a spatial strategy just to get to the first vestibule, then switches to a serial strategy until it reaches the correct vestibule. How well would such a strategy explain the data for the later sessions? The best combined model presented in the manuscript is one in which the animal starts with a roughly 50-50 chance of a serial (or spatial strategy) from the start vestibule (i.e. by the last session before the reversal the serial and spatial strategies are at ~50-50m in Fig. 5d). Is it the case that even after 15 days of training the animal starts with a serial strategy from its starting point approximately half of the time? The broader point is whether additional examination of the choices made by the animal, combined with consideration of a larger range of possible models, would be able to provide additional insight into the learning and strategies the animal uses.

2. To clarify, in the Fig. 4 simulations, is the "last" vestibule visit of each trial, which is by definition 0, not counted in the plots of Fig. 4b? Otherwise, I would expect that vestibule 0 is overrepresented because a trial always ends with Vi = 0.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This paper uses a novel maze design to explore mouse navigation behaviour in an automated analogue of the Barnes maze. Overall I find the work to be solid, with the cleverly designed maze/protocol to be its major strength - however there are some issues that I believe should be addressed and clarified.

1. Whilst I'm generally a fan of the experimental protocol, the design means that internal odor cues on the maze change from trial to trial, along with cues external to the maze such as the sounds and visual features of the recording room, ultimately making it hard for the mice to use a completely allocentric spatial 'place' strategy to navigate. I do not think there is a way to control for these conflicts between reference frames in the statistical modelling, but I do think these issues should be addressed in the discussion.

2. Somewhat related - I could not find how the internal maze cues are moved for each trial to demarcate the new goal (i.e. the luminous cues) ? This should be clarified in the methods.

3. It appears some data is being withheld from Figures 2&3? E.g. Days 3/4 from Fig 2b-f and Days 1-5 on for Fig 3. Similarly, Trials 2-7 are excluded from Fig 3. If this is the case, why? It should be clarified in the main text and Figure captions, preferably with equivalent plots presenting all the data in the supplement.

4. I strongly believe the data and code should be made freely available rather than "upon reasonable request".

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Royer et al. present a fully automated variant of the Barnes maze to reduce experimenter interference and ensure consistency across trials and subjects. They train mice in this maze over several days and analyze the progression of mouse search strategies during the course of the training. By fitting models involving stochastic processes, they demonstrate that a model combined of the random, spatial, and serial processes can best account for the observed changes in mice's search patterns. Their findings suggest that across training days the spatial strategy (using local landmarks) was progressively employed, mostly at the expense of the random strategy, while the serial strategy (consecutive nearby vestibule check) is reinforced from the early stages of training. Finally, they discuss potential mechanistic underpinnings within brain systems that could explain such behavioral adaptation and flexibility.

Strength:<br /> The development of an automated Barnes maze allows for more naturalistic and uninterrupted behavior, facilitating the study of spatial learning and memory, as well as the analysis of the brain's neural networks during behavior when combined with neurophysiological techniques. The system's design has been thoughtfully considered, encompassing numerous intricate details. These details include the incorporation of flexible options for selecting start, goal, and proximal landmark positions, the inclusion of a rotating platform to prevent the accumulation of olfactory cues, and careful attention given to atomization, taking into account specific considerations such as the rotation of the maze without causing wire shortage or breakage. When combined with neurophysiological manipulations or recordings, the system provides a powerful tool for studying spatial navigation system.<br /> The behavioral experiment protocols, along with the analysis of animal behavior, are conducted with care, and the development of behavioral modeling to capture the animal's search strategy is thoughtfully executed. It is intriguing to observe how the integration of these innovative stochastic models can elucidate the evolution of mice's search strategy within a variant of the Barnes maze.

Weakness:<br /> 1. The development of the well-thought-out automated Barnes maze may attract the interest of researchers exploring spatial learning and memory. However, this aspect of the paper lacks significance due to insufficient coverage of the materials and methods required for readers to replicate the behavioral methodology for their own research inquiries.<br /> Moreover, as discussed by the authors, the methodology favors specialists who utilize wired recordings or manipulations (e.g. optogenetics) in awake, behaving rodents. However, it remains unclear how the current maze design, which involves trapping mice in start and goal positions and incorporating angled vestibules resulting in the addition of numerous corners, can be effectively adapted for animals with wired implants.

2. Novelty: In its current format, the main axis of the paper falls on the analysis of animal behavior and the development of behavioral modeling. In this respect, while it is interesting to see how thoughtfully designed models can explain the evolution of mice search strategy in a maze, the conclusions offer limited novel findings that align with the existing body of research and prior predictions.

3. Scalability and accessibility: While the approach may be intriguing to experts who have an interest in or are familiar with the Barnes maze, its presentation seems to primarily target this specific audience. Therefore, there is a lack of clarity and discussion regarding the scalability of behavioral modeling to experiments involving other search strategies (such as sequence or episodic learning), other animal models, or the potential for translational applications. The scalability of the method would greatly benefit a broader scientific community. In line with this view, the paper's conclusions heavily rely on the development of new models using custom-made codes. Therefore, it would be advantageous to make these codes readily available, and if possible, provide access to the processed data as well. This could enhance comprehension and enable a larger audience to benefit from the methodology.

4. Cross-validation of models: The authors have not implemented any measures to mitigate the risk of overfitting in their modeling. It would have been beneficial to include at least some form of cross-validation with stochastic models to address this concern. Additionally, the paper lacks the presence of analytics or measures that assess and compare the performance of the models.

5. Quantification of inter-animal variations in strategy development: It is important to investigate, and address the argument concerning the possibility that not all animals recruit and develop the three processes (random, spatial, and serial) in a similar manner over days of training. It would be valuable to quantify the transition in strategy across days for each individual mouse and analyze how the population average, reflecting data from individual mice, corresponds to these findings. Currently, there is a lack of such quantification and analysis in the paper.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Chan et al. attempted to identify the binding sites or pockets for the KCNQ1-KCNE1 activator mefenamic acid. Because the KCNQ1-KCNE1 channel is responsible for cardiac repolarization, genetic impairment of either the KCNQ1 or KCNE1 gene can cause cardiac arrhythmias. Therefore, the development of activators without side effects is highly desired. Since mefenamic acid binding requires both KCNQ1 and KCNE1 subunits, the authors performed drug docking simulations using the KCNQ1-psKCNE1 structural model with substitution of the extracellular five amino acids (R53-Y58) of KCNE3 to D39-A44 of KCNE1. They successfully identified some critical amino acid residues, including W323 of KCNQ1 and K41 and A44 of KCNE1. They then tested these identified amino acid residues by analyzing the point mutants and confirmed that they were critical for the binding of the activator. They also examined another activator, but structurally different DIDS, and reported that DIDS and mefenamic acid share the binding pocket, and concluded that the extracellular region composed of S1, S6, and KCNE1 is a generic binding pocket for the IKS activators.

The limitation of this study is that they had to use the KCNQ1-KCNE3-based structural model for the docking simulation. Although they only focused on the extracellular region substituted by the six amino acid residues of KCNE1, the binding mode or location of KCNE1 might be different from KCNE3. Another weakness is that unbinding may be facilitated in the closed state, whereas they had to use the open channel for the MD simulation. Therefore, their MD simulations do not necessarily reflect the unbinding process in the closed state, which should occur in the comparable electrophysiological experiments. Nevertheless, the data are solid and well support their conclusions. This work should be valuable to the field, not only for future drug design but also for the biophysical understanding of the binding/unbinding of drugs to ion channel complexes.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The voltage-gated potassium channel KCNQ1/KCNE1 (IKs) plays important physiological functions, for instance in the repolarization phase of the cardiac action potential. Loss-of-function of KCNQ1/KCNE1 is linked to disease. Hence, KCNQ1/KCNE1 is a highlighted pharmacological target and mechanistic insights into how channel modulators enhance the function of the channel is of great interest. The authors have through several previous studies provided mechanistic insights into how small-molecule activators like ML277 act on KCNQ1. However, less is known about the binding site and mechanism of action of other type of channel activators, which require KCNE1 for their effect. In this study, Chan and co-workers use molecular dynamics approaches, mutagenesis and electrophysiology to propose an overall similar binding site for the KCNQ1/KCNE1 activators mefenamic acid and DIDS, located at the extracellular interface of KCNQ1 and KCNE1. The authors propose an induced-fit model for the binding site, which critically engages residues in the N-terminus of KCNE1. Moreover, the authors discuss possible mechanisms of action of how drug binding to this site may enhance channel function.

The authors address an important question, of broad relevance to researchers in the field. The manuscript is well written and the text easy to follow. A strength of the work is the parallel use of experimental and simulation approaches, which enables both functional testing and mechanistic predictions and interpretations. For instance, the authors have experimentally assessed the putative relevance of a large set of residues based on simulation predictions. A minor limitation is that not all residues of putative importance for drug binding/effects can be reliable evaluated in experiments, which is, however, clearly discussed by the authors and a challenge shared by electrophysiologists in the field.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The authors identified the mefenamic (Mef) binding site and DIDS binding site on the KCNQ1 KCNE1 complex. The authors also identified the mechanism of interactions using electrophysiological recording, calculating V1/2 of different mutants, and looking at the instantaneous and tail currents. The contribution of each residue within the binding pocket was analysed using GBSA and PBSA and traditional molecular dynamics simulation.

The manuscript has been substantially revised from the previous version with a greater depth of computational analysis.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this ms, Tejeda-Muñoz and colleagues examine the roles of macropinocytosis in WNT signalling activation in development (Xenopus) and cancer (CRC sections, cell lines and xenograft experiments). Furthermore, they investigate the effect of the inflammation inducer Phorbol-12-myristate-13-acetate (PMA) in WNT signalling activation through macropinocytosis. They propose that macropinocytosis is a key driver of WNT signalling, including upon oncogenic activation, with relevance in cancer progression.

I found the analyses and conclusions of the relevance of macropinocytosis in WNT signalling compelling, notably upon constitutive activation both during development and in CRC. However, I think this manuscript only partially characterises the effects of PMA in WNT signalling, largely due to a lack of an epistatic characterisation of PMA roles in Wnt activation. For example:

1- The authors show that PMA cooperate with 1) GSK3 inhibition in Xenopus to promote WNT activation, and 2) (possibly) with APCmut in SW480 to induce b-cat and FAK accumulation. To sustain a specific functional interaction between WNT and PMA, the effects should be tested through additional epistatic experiments. For example, does PMA cooperate with Wnt8 in axis duplication analyses? Does PMA cooperate with any other WNT alteration in CRC or other cell lines? Importantly, does APC re-introduction in SW480 rescue the effect of PMA? Such analyses could be critical to determine specificity of the functional interactions between WNT and PMA. This question could be addressed by performing classical epistatic analyses in cell lines (CRC or HEK) focusing on WNT activity, and by including rescue experiments targeting the WNT pathway downstream of the effects e.g., dnTCF, APC re- introduction, etc.

2- While the epistatic analyses of WNT and macropinocytosis are clear in frog, the causal link in CRC cells is contained to b-catenin accumulation. While is clear that macropinocytosis reduces spheroid growth in SW480, the lack of rescue experiments with e.g., constitutive active b-catenin or any other WNT perturbation or/and APC re-introduction, limit the conclusions of this experiment.

Minor comments:

3- Different compounds targeting membrane trafficking are used to rescue modes of WNT activation (Wnt8 vs LiCl) in Xenopus.

4- The abstract does not state the results in CRC/xenografts

5- Labels of Figure 2E might be swap

6- Figure 4i,j, 6 and s4 rely on qualitative analyses instead of quantifications, which underscores their evaluation. On the other hand, the detailed quantifications in Figure S3A-D strongly support the images of Figure 5

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Tejeda Muñoz et al. investigate the intersection of Wnt signaling, macropinocytosis, lysosomes, focal adhesions and membrane trafficking in embryogenesis and cancer. Following up on their previous papers, the authors present evidence that PMA enhances Wnt signaling and embryonic patterning through macropinocytosis. Proteins that are associated with the endo-lysosomal pathway and Wnt signaling are co-increased in colorectal cancer samples, consistent with their pro-tumorigenic action. The function of macropinocytosis is not well understood in most physiological contexts, and its role in Wnt signaling is intriguing. The authors use a wide range of models - Xenopus embryos, cancer cells in culture and in xenografts and patient samples to investigate several endolysosomal processes that appear to act upstream or downstream of Wnt. A downside of this broad approach is a lack of mechanistic depth. In particular, few experiments monitor macropinocytosis directly, and macropinocytosis manipulations have pleiotropic effects that are open alternative interpretations. Several experiments are confirmatory of previous findings; the manuscript could be improved by focusing on the novel relationship between PMA-induced macropinocytosis and better support these conclusions with additional experiments.

The authors use a range of inhibitors that suppress macropinosome formation (EIPA, Bafilomycin A1, Rac1 inhibition). However, these are not specific macropinocytosis inhibitors (EIPA blocks an Na+/H+ exchanger, which is highly toxic and perturbs cellular pH balance; Bafilomycin blocks the V-ATPase, which has essential functions in the Golgi, endosomes and lysosomes; Rac1 signals through multiple downstream pathways). A specific macropinocytosis inhibitor does not exist, and it is thus important to support key conclusions with dextran uptake experiments.

The title states that PMA increases Wnt signaling through macropinocytosis. However, the mechanistic relationship between PMA-induced macropinocytosis and Wnt signaling is not well supported. The authors refer to a classical paper that demonstrates macropinocytosis induction by PMA in macrophages (PMID: 2613767). Unlike most cell types, macrophages display growth factor-induced and constitutive macropinocytic pathways (PMID: 30967001). It would thus be important to demonstrate macropinocytosis induction by PMA experimentally in Xenopus embryos / cancer cells. Does treatment with EIPA / Bafilomycin / Rac1i decrease the dextran signal in embryos? In macrophages, the PKC inhibitor Calphostin C blocks macropinocytosis induction by PMA (PMID: 25688212). Does Calphostin C block macropinocytosis in embryos / cancer cells? Do the various combinations of Wnts / Wnt agonists and PMA have additive or synergistic effects on dextran uptake? If the authors want to conclude that PMA activates Wnt signaling, it would also be important to demonstrate the effect of PMA on Wnt target gene expression.

The experiments concerning macropinosome formation in Xenopus embryos are not very convincing. Macropinosomes are circular vesicles whose size in mammalian cells ranges from 0.2 - 10 µM (PMID: 18612320). The TMR-dextran signal in Fig. 1A does not obviously label structures that look like macropinosomes; rather the signal is diffusely localized throughout the dorsal compartment, which could be extracellular (or perhaps cytosolic). I have similar concerns for the cell culture experiments, where dextran uptake is only shown for SW480 spheroids in Fig. S2. It would be helpful to quantify size of the circular structures (is this consistent with macropinosomes?).

In Fig. 4I - J, the dramatic decrease in b-catenin and especially in Rac1 after overnight EIPA treatment is rather surprising. How do the authors explain these findings? Is there any evidence that macropinocytosis stabilizes Rac1? Could this be another effect of EIPA or general toxicity?

On a similar note, Fig. 6 K - L the FAK staining in control cells appears to localize to focal adhesions, but in PMA-treated cells is strongly localized throughout the cell. Do the authors have any thoughts on how PMA stabilizes FAK and where the kinase localizes under these conditions? Does PMA treatment increase FAK signaling activity?

The tumor stainings in Figure 5 are interesting but correlative. Pak1 functions in multiple cellular processes and Pak1 levels are not a direct marker for macropinocytosis. In the discussion, the authors discuss evidence that the V-ATPase translocates to the plasma membrane in cancer to drive extracellular acidification. To which extent does the Voa3 staining reflect lysosomal V-ATPase? Do the authors have controls for antibody specificity?

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Tejeda-Munoz examines signaling by Wnt and macropinocytosis in Xenopus embryos and colon cancer cells. A major problem with the study is the extensive use of pleiotropic inhibitors as "specific" inhibitors of macropinocytosis in embryos. It is true that BafA and EIPA block macropinocytosis, but they do many other things as well. A major target of EIPA is the NheI Na+/proton transporter, which also regulates invasive structures (podosomes, invadopodia) which could have major roles in development. Similarly, Baf1 will disrupt lysosomes and the endocytic system, which secondary effects on mTOR signaling and growth factor receptor trafficking. The authors cannot assume that processes inhibited by these drugs demonstrate a role of macropinocytosis. While correlations in tumor samples between increased expression of PAK1 and V0a3 and decreased expression of GSK3 are consistent with a link between macropinocytosis and Wnt-driven malignancy, the cell and embryo-based experiments do not convincingly make this connection. Finally, the data on FAK and TES are not well integrated with the rest of the manuscript.

1. The data in Fig. 1A do not convincingly demonstrate macropinocytosis - it is impossible to tell what is being labeled by the dextran.

2. The data in Fig. 2 do not make sense. LiCL2 bypasses the WNT activation pathway by inhibiting GSK3. If subsequent treatment with BafA blocks the effects of GSK3 inhibition, then BafrA is doing something unrelated to Wnt activation, whose target is the inhibition/sequestration of GSK3. While BafA might block GSK3 sequestration by inhibiting MVB function, it should have no effect on the inhibition of GSK3 by LiCl2.

3. The effect of EHT on MP in SW480 cells is not clearly related to what is happening in the embryos. The nearly total loss of staining for Rac and -catenin after overnight EIPA does not implicate MP in protein stability - critical controls for cell viability and overall protein turnover are absent. Inhibition of WNT signaling might be expected to enhance -catenin turnover, but the effect on Rac1 is surprising. A more quantitative analysis by western blotting is required.

4. The data on FAK inhibition and TES trafficking are poorly integrated with the rest of the paper.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Despite durable viral suppression by antiretroviral therapy (ART), HIV-1 persists in cellular reservoirs in vivo. The viral reservoir in circulating memory T cells has been well characterized, in part due to the ability to safely obtain blood via peripheral phlebotomy from people living with HIV-1 infection (PWH). Tissue reservoirs in PWH are more difficult to sample and are less well understood. Sun and colleagues describe isolation and genetic characterization of HIV-1 reservoirs from a variety of tissues including the central nervous system (CNS) obtained from three recently deceased individuals at autopsy. They identified clonally expanded proviruses in the CNS in all three individuals.

Strengths of the work include the study of human tissues that are under-studied and difficult to access, and the sophisticated near-full length sequencing technique that allows for inferences about genetic intactness and clonality of proviruses. The small sample size (n=3) is a drawback. Furthermore, two individuals were on ART for just one year at the time of autopsy and had T cells compatible with AIDS, and one of these individuals had a low-level detectable viral load (Figure S1). This makes generalizability of these results to PWH who have been on ART for years or decades and have achieved durable viral suppression and immune reconstitution difficult.

While anatomic tissue compartment and CNS region accompany these PCR results, it is unclear which cell types these viruses persist in. As the authors point out, it is possible that these reservoir cells might have been infiltrating T cells from blood present at the time of autopsy tissue sampling. Cell type identification would greatly enhance the impact of this work. Several other groups have undergone similar studies (with similar results) using autopsy samples (links below). These studies included more individuals, but did not make use of the near-full length sequencing described here. In particular, the Last Gift cohort, based at UCSD and led by Sara Gianella and Davey Smith, has established protocols for tissue sampling during autopsy performed soon after death.<br /> https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35867351/<br /> https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/37184401/

Overall, this small, thoughtful study contributes to our understanding of the tissue distribution of persistent HIV-1, and informs the ongoing search for viral eradication.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Sun et al. applies the powerful technology of profiling viral DNA sequences in numerous anatomical sites in autopsy samples from participants who maintained their antiviral therapy up to the time of death. The sequencing is of high quality in using end-point dilution PCR to generate individual viral genomes. There is a thoughtful discussion, although there are points that we disagree with. This is an important data set that increases the scope of how the field thinks about the latent reservoir with a new look at the potential of a reservoir within the CNS.

1. The participants are very different in their exposure to HIV replication and disease progression. Participant 1 appears to have been on ART for most of the time after diagnosis of infection (16 years) and died with a high CD4 T cell count. The other two participants had only one year on ART and died with relatively low CD4 T cell counts (under 200). This could lead to differences in the nature of the reservoir. In this regard, the amount of DNA per million cells appears to be about 10-fold lower across the compartments sampled for participant 1. Also, one might expect fewer intact proviruses surviving after 16 years on ART compared to only 1 year on ART. The depth of sampling may be too limited and the number of participants too few to assess if these differences are features of these participants because of their different exposures to HIV replication. On the positive side, finding similarities across these big differences in participant profiles does reinforce the generalizability of the observations.

2. The following analysis will be limited by sampling depth but where possible it would be interesting to compare the ratio of intact to defective DNA. A sanctuary might allow greater persistence of cells with intact viral DNA even without viral replication (i.e. reduced immune surveillance). Detecting one or two intact proviruses in a tissue sample does not lend itself to a level of precision to address this question, but statistical tests could be applied to infer when there is sampling of 5 or more intact proviruses to determine if their frequency as a ratio of total DNA in different anatomical sites is similar or different. This would allow adjustment for the different amount of viral DNA in different compartments while addressing the question of the frequency of intact versus defective proviruses. One complication in this analysis is if there was clonal expansion of a cell with an intact genome which would represent a fortuitous over-representation intact genomes in that compartment.

3. The key point of this work is that the participants were on therapy up to the time of death ("enforcing" viral latency). The predominance of defective genomes is consistent with this assumption. Is there data from untreated infections to compare to as a signature of whether the viral DNA population was under selective pressure from therapy or not? Presumably untreated infections contain more intact DNA relative to total DNA. This would represent independent evidence that therapy was in place.

4. There are several points in Figure 5 to raise about V3 loop sequences. The analysis includes a large number of "undetermined" sequences that did not have a V3 loop sequence to evaluate. We would argue it is a fair assumption that the deleted proviruses have the same distribution of X4 and R5 sequences as the ones that have a V3 sequence to evaluate. In this view it would be possible to exclude the sequences for which there is no data and just look at the ratio of X4 and R5 in the different compartments, specifically does this ratio change in a statistically significant way in different compartments? The authors use "CCR5 and non-CCR5" as the two entry phenotypes. The evidence is pretty strong that the "other" coreceptor the virus routinely uses is CXCR4, and G2P is providing the FPR for X4 viruses. Perhaps the authors are trying to create some space for other coreceptors on microglia, but we are pretty sure what they are measuring is X4 viruses, especially in this late disease state of participant 2. Finally, we have previously observed that the G2P FPR score of <2 is a strong indicator of being X4, FPR scores between 2 and 10 have a 50% chance of being X4, and FPR scores above 10 are reliably R5 (PMID27226378). In addition, we observed that X4 viruses form distinct phylogenetic lineages. The authors might consider these features of X4 viruses in the evaluation of their sequences. Specifically, it would be helpful to incorporate the FPR scores of the reported X4 viruses.

5. We have puzzled over the many reports of different cell types in the CNS being infected. When we examined these cells types (both as primary cells and as iPSC-derived cells), all cells could be infected with a version of HIV that had the promiscuous VSV-G protein on the virus surface as a pseudotype. However, only macrophages and microglia could be infected using the HIV Env protein, and then only if it was the M-tropic version and not the T-tropic version (PMID35975998). RNAseq analysis was consistent with this biological readout in that only macrophages and microglia expressed CD4, neurons and astrocytes do not. From the virology point of view, astrocytes are no more infectable than neurons.

6. The brain gets exposed to virus from the earliest stages of infection but this is not synonymous with viral replication. Most of the time there is virus in the CSF but it is present at 1-10% of the level of viral load in the blood and phylogenetically it looks like the virus in the blood, most consistent with trafficking T cells, some of which are infected (PMID25811757). The fact that the virus in the blood is almost always T cell-tropic in needing a high density of CD4 for entry makes it unlikely that monocytes are infected (with their low density of CD4) and thus are not the source of virus found in the CNS. It seems much more likely that infected T cells are the "Trojan Horse" carrying virus into the CNS.

7. While all participants were taking antiretroviral therapy at the time of their death, they were not all suppressed when the tissues were collected. The authors are careful not to mention "suppressive ART" in the text, which is appreciated. However, the title should be changed to also reflect this fact.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This is a short but important study. Basically, the authors show that α-synuclein overexpression's negative impact on synaptic vesicle recycling is mediated by its interaction with E-domain containing synapsins. This finding is highly relevant for synuclein function as well as for the pathophysiology of synucleinopathies. While the data is clear, functional analysis is somewhat incomplete.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript the authors established synapsin's E-domain as an essential functional binding partner that allows α-syn functionality. They show very elegantly that only synapsin isoforms that have an E-domain bind α-syn and allow the inhibition mediated by α-syn. Deletion of the C-terminus (α-syn 96-110) eliminated this interaction. Hence, synapsin E-domain binds to α-syn enabling the inhibitory effect of α-syn on synaptic transmission.

The paper will be improved significantly if additional experiments are added to expand and provide a more mechanistic understanding of the effect of α-syn and the intricate interplay between synapsin, α-syn, and the SV. For an enthusiastic reader, the manuscript as it looks now with only 3 figures, ends prematurely. Some of the experiments above or others could complement, expand and strengthen the current manuscript, moving it from a short communication describing the phenomenon to a coherent textbook topic. Nevertheless, this work provides new and exciting evidence for the regulation of neurotransmitter release and its regulation by synapsin and α-syn.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The aim of this paper is to describe a novel method for genetic labelling of animals or cell populations, using a system of DNA/RNA barcodes.

Strengths:<br /> • The author's attempt at providing a straightforward method for multiplexing Drosophila samples prior to scRNA-seq is commendable. The perspective of being able to load multiple samples on a 10X Chromium without antibody labelling is appealing.<br /> • The authors are generally honest about potential issues in their method, and areas that would benefit from future improvement.<br /> • The article reads well. Graphs and figures are clear and easy to understand.

Weaknesses:<br /> • The usefulness of TaG-EM for phototaxis, egg laying or fecundity experiments is questionable. The behaviours presented here are all easily quantifiable, either manually or using automated image-based quantification, even when they include a relatively large number of groups and replicates. Despite their claims (e.g., L311-313), the authors do not present any real evidence about the cost- or time-effectiveness of their method in comparison to existing quantification methods.<br /> • Behavioural assays presented in this article have clear outcomes, with large effect sizes, and therefore do not really challenge the efficiency of TaG-EM. By showing a T-maze in Fig 1B, the authors suggest that their method could be used to quantify more complex behaviours. Not exploring this possibility in this manuscript seems like a missed opportunity.<br /> • Experiments in Figs S3 and S6 suggest that some tags have a detrimental effect on certain behaviours or on GFP expression. Whereas the authors rightly acknowledge these issues, they do not investigate their causes. Unfortunately, this question the overall suitability of TaG-EM, as other barcodes may also affect certain aspects of the animal's physiology or behaviour. Revising barcode design will be crucial to make sure that sequences with potential regulatory function are excluded.<br /> • For their single-cell experiments, the authors have used the 10X Genomics method, which relies on sequencing just a short segment of each transcript (usually 50-250bp - unknown for this study as read length information was not provided) to enable its identification, with the matching paired-end read providing cell barcode and UMI information (Macosko et al., 2015). With average fragment length after tagmentation usually ranging from 300-700bp, a large number of GFP reads will likely not include the 14bp TaG-EM barcode. When a given cell barcode is not associated with any TaG-EM barcode, then demultiplexing is impossible. This is a major problem, which is particularly visible in Figs 5 and S13. In 5F, BC4 is only detected in a couple of dozen cells, even though the Jon99Ciii marker of enterocytes is present in a much larger population (Fig 5C). Therefore, in this particular case, TaG-EM fails to detect most of the GFP-expressing cells. Similarly, in S13, most cells should express one of the four barcodes, however many of them (maybe up to half - this should be quantified) do not. Therefore, the claim (L277-278) that "the pan-midgut driver were broadly distributed across the cell clusters" is misleading. Moreover, the hypothesis that "low expressing driver lines may result in particularly sparse labelling" (L331-333) is at least partially wrong, as Fig S13 shows that the same Gal4 driver can lead to very different levels of barcode coverage.<br /> • Comparisons between TaG-EM and other, simpler methods for labelling individual cell populations are missing. For example, how would TaG-EM compare with expression of different fluorescent reporters, or a strategy based on the brainbow/flybow principle?<br /> • FACS data is missing throughout the paper. The authors should include data from their comparative flow cytometry experiment of TaG-EM cells with or without additional hexameric GFP, as well as FSC/SSC and fluorescence scatter plots for the FACS steps that they performed prior to scRNA-seq, at least in supplementary figures.<br /> • The authors should show the whole data described in L229, including the cluster that they chose to delete. At least, they should provide more information about how many cells were removed. In any case, the fact that their data still contains a large number of debris and dead cells despite sorting out PI negative cells with FACS and filtering low abundance barcodes with Cellranger is concerning.

Overall, although a method for genetic tagging cell populations prior to multiplexing in single-cell experiments would be extremely useful, the method presented here is inadequate. However, despite all the weaknesses listed above, the idea of barcodes expressed specifically in cells of interest deserves more consideration. If the authors manage to improve their design to resolve the major issues and demonstrate the benefits of their method more clearly, then TaG-EM could become an interesting option for certain applications.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, Mendana et al developed a multiplexing method - Targeted Genetically-Encoded Multiplexing or TaG-EM - by inserting a DNA barcode upstream of the polyadenylation site in a Gal4-inducible UAS-GFP construct. This Multiplexing method can be used for population-scale behavioral measurements or can potentially be used in single-cell sequencing experiments to pool flies from different populations. The authors created 20 distinctly barcoded fly lines. First, TaG-EM was used to measure phototaxis and oviposition behaviors. Then, TaG-EM was applied to the fly gut cell types to demonstrate its applications in single-cell RNA-seq for cell type annotation and cell origin retrieving.

This TaG-EM system can be useful for multiplexed behavioral studies from next-generation sequencing (NGS) of pooled samples and for Transcriptomic Studies. I don't have major concerns for the first application, but I think the scRNA-seq part has several major issues and needs to be further optimized.

Major concerns:<br /> 1. It seems the barcode detection rate is low according to Fig S9 and Fig 5F, J and N. Could the authors evaluate the detection rate? If the detection rate is too low, it can cause problems when it is used to decode cell types.<br /> 2. Unsuccessful amplification of TaG-EM barcodes: The authors attempted to amplify the TaG-EM barcodes in parallel to the gene expression library preparation but encountered difficulties, as the resulting sequencing reads were predominantly off-target. This unsuccessful amplification raises concerns about the reliability and feasibility of this amplification approach, which could affect the detection and analysis of the TaG-EM barcodes in future experiments.<br /> 3. For Fig 5, the singe-cell clusters are not annotated. It is not clear what cell types are corresponding to which clusters. So, it is difficult to evaluate the accuracy of the assignment of barcodes.<br /> 4. The scRNA-seq UMAP in Fig 5 is a bit strange to me. The fly gut epithelium contains only a few major cell types, including ISC, EB, EC, and EE. However, the authors showed 38 clusters in fig 5B. It is true that some cell types, like EE (Guo et al., 2019, Cell Reports), have sub-populations, but I don't expect they will form these many sub-types. There are many peripheral small clusters that are not shown in other gut scRNA-seq studies (Hung et al., 2020; Li et al., 2022 Fly Cell Atlas; Lu et al., 2023 Aging Fly Cell Atlas). I suggest the authors try different data-processing methods to validate their clustering result.<br /> 5. Different gut drivers, PMC-, PC-, EB-, EC-, and EE-GAL4, were used. The authors should carefully characterize these GAL4 expression in larval guts and validate sequencing data. For example, does the ratio of each cell type in Fig 5B reflect the in vivo cell type ratio? The authors used cell-type markers mostly based on the knowledge from adult guts, but there are significant morphological and cell ratio differences between larval and adult guts (e.g., Mathur...Ohlstein, 2010 Science).<br /> 6. Doublets are removed based on the co-expression of two barcodes in Fig 5A. However, there are also other possible doublets, for example, from the same barcode cells or when one cell doesn't have detectable barcode. Did the authors try other computational approaches to remove doublets, like DoubleFinder (McGinnis et al., 2019) and Scrublet (Wolock et al., 2019)?<br /> 7. Did the authors remove ambient RNA which is a common issue for scRNA-seq experiments?<br /> 8. Why does TaG-EM barcode #4, driven by EC-GAL4, not label other classes of enterocyte cells such as betaTry+ positive ECs (Figures 5D-E)? similarly, why does TaG-EM barcode #9, driven by EE-GAL4, not label all EEs? Again, it is difficult to evaluate this part without proper data processing and accurate cell type annotation.<br /> 9. For Figure 2, when the authors tested different combinations of groups with various numbers of barcodes. They found remarkable consistency for the even groups. Once the numbers start to increase to 64, barcode abundance becomes highly variable (range of 12-18% for both male and female). I think this would be problematic because the differences seen in two groups for example may be due to the barcode selection rather than an actual biologically meaningful difference.<br /> 10. Barcode #14 cannot be reliably detected in oviposition experiment. This suggests that the BC 14 fly line might have additional mutations in the attp2 chromosome arm that affects this behavior. Perhaps other barcode lines also have unknown mutations and would cause issues for other untested behaviors. One possible solution is to back-cross all 20 lines with the same genetic background wild-type flies for >7 generations to make all these lines to have the same (or very similar) genetic background. This strategy is common for aging and behavior assays.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The work addresses challenges in linking anatomical information to transcriptomic data in single-cell sequencing. It proposes a method called Targeted Genetically-Encoded Multiplexing (TaG-EM), which uses genetic barcoding in Drosophila to label specific cell populations in vivo. By inserting a DNA barcode near the polyadenylation site in a UAS-GFP construct, cells of interest can be identified during single-cell sequencing. TaG-EM enables various applications, including cell type identification, multiplet droplet detection, and barcoding experimental parameters. The study demonstrates that TaG-EM barcodes can be decoded using next-generation sequencing for large-scale behavioral measurements. Overall, the results are solid in supporting the claims and will be useful for a broader fly community. I have only a few comments below:

Specific comments:

1. The authors mentioned that the results of structure pool tests in Fig. 2 showed a high level of quantitative accuracy in detecting the TaG-EM barcode abundance. Although the data were generally consistent with the input values in most cases, there were some obvious exceptions such as barcode 1 (under-represented) and barcodes 15, 20 (over-represented). It would be great if the authors could comment on these and provide a guideline for choosing the appropriate barcode lines when implementing this TaG-EM method.

2. In Supplemental Figure 6, the authors showed GFP antibody staining data with 20 different TaG-EM barcode lines. The variability in GFP antibody staining results among these different TaG-EM barcode lines concerns the use of these TaG-EM barcode lines for sequencing followed by FACS sorting of native GFP. I expected the native GFP expression would be weaker and much more variable than the GFP antibody staining results shown in Supplemental Figure 6. If this is the case, variation of tissue-specific expression of TaG-EM barcode lines will likely be a confounding factor.

3. As the authors mentioned in the manuscript, multiple barcodes for one experimental condition would be a better experimental design. Could the authors suggest a recommended number of barcodes for each experiential condition? 3? 4? Or more? Also, it would be great if the authors could provide a short discussion on the cost of such TaG-EM method. For example, for the phototaxis assay, if it is much more expensive to perform TaG-EM as compared to manually scoring the preference index by videotaping, what would be the practical considerations or benefits of doing TaG-EM over manual scoring?

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The current manuscript focuses on the adenine phosphoribosyltransferase (Aprt) and how the lack of its function affects nervous system function. It puts it into the context of Lesch-Nyhan disease, a rare hereditary disease linked to hypoxanthine-guanine phosphoribosyltransferase (HGPRT). Since HGPRT appears absent in Drosophila, the study focuses initially on Aprt and shows that aprt mutants have a decreased life-span and altered uric acid levels (the latter can be attenuated by allopurinol treatment). Moreover, aprt mutants show defects in locomotor reactivity behaviors. A comparable phenotype can be observed when specifically knocking down aprt in dopaminergic cells. Interestingly, also glia-specific knock-down caused a similar behavioral defect, which could not be restored when re-expressing UAS-aprt, while neuronal re-expression did restore the mutant phenotype. Moreover, mutants, pan-neuronal and pan-neuronal plus glia RNAi for aprt caused sleep-defects. Based on immunostainings Dopamine levels are increased; UPLC shows that adenosine levels are reduced and PCR showed in increase of Ent2 levels are increased (but not AdoR). Moreover, aprt mutants display seizure-like behaviros, which can be partly restored by purine feeding (adenosine and N6-methyladenosine). Finally, expression of the human HGPRT also causes locomotor defects.

The authors provide a wide range of genetic experimental data to assess behavior and some molecular assessment on how the defects may emerge. It is clearly written, and the arguments follow the experimental evidence that is provided.

The findings provide a new example of how manipulating specific genes in the fruit fly allows the study of fundamental molecular processes that are linked to a human disease.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Petitgas et al demonstrates that loss of function for the only enzyme responsible for the purine salvage pathway in fruit-flies reproduces the metabolic and neurologic phenotypes of human patients with Lesch-Nyhan disease (LND). LND is caused by mutations in the enzyme HGPRT, but this enzyme does not exist in fruit-flies, which instead only have Aprt for purine recycling. They demonstrate that mutants lacking the Aprt enzyme accumulate uric acid, which like in humans can be rescued by feeding flies allopurinol, and have decreased longevity, locomotion and sleep impairments and seizures, with striking resemblance to HGPRT loss of function in humans. They demonstrate that both loss of function throughout development or specifically in the adult ubiquitously or in all neurons, or dopaminergic neurons, mushroom body neurons or glia, can reproduce the phenotypes (although knock-down in glia does not affect sleep). They show that the phenotypes can be rescued by over-expressing a wild-type form of the Aprt gene in neurons. They identify a decrease in adenosine levels as the cause underlying these phenotypes, as adenosine is a neurotransmitter functioning via the purinergic adenosine receptor in neurons. In fact, feeding flies throughout development and in the adult with either adenosine or m6A could prevent seizures. They also demonstrate that loss of adenosine caused a secondary up-regulation of ENT nucleoside transporters and of dopamine levels, that could explain the phenotypes of decreased sleep and hyperactivity and night. Finally, they provide the remarkable finding that over-expression of the human mutant HGPRT gene but not its wild-type form in neurons impaired locomotion and induced seizures. This means that the human mutant enzyme does not simply lack enzymatic activity, but it is toxic to neurons in some gain-of-function form. Altogether, these are very important and fundamental findings that convincingly demonstrate the establishment of a Drosophila model for the scientific community to investigate LND, to carry out drug testing screens and find cures.

The experiments are conducted with great rigour, using appropriate and exhaustive controls, and on the whole the evidence does convincingly or compellingly support the claims. The exception is an instance when authors mention 'data not shown' and here data should either be provided, or claims removed: "feeding flies with adenosine or m6A did not rescue the SING phenotype of Aprt mutants (data not shown)". It is important to show these data (see below).

Sleep is used to refer to lack of movement of flies to cross a beam for more than 5 minutes. However, lack of movement does not necessarily mean the flies are asleep, as they could be un-motivated to move (which could reflect abnormal dopamine levels) or engaged in incessant grooming instead. These differences are important for future investigation into the neural circuits affect by LND.

The authors claim that based on BLAST genome searchers, there are no HPRTI (encoding HGPRT) homologues in Drosophila. However, such a claim would require instead structure-based searches that take into account structural conservation despite high sequence divergence, as this may not be detected by regular BLAST.

This work raises important questions that still need resolving. For example, the link between uric acid accumulation, reduced adenosine levels, increased dopamine and behavioural neurologic consequences remain unresolved. It is important that they show that restoring uric acid levels does not rescue locomotion nor seizure phenotypes, as this means that this is not the cause of the neurologic phenotypes. Instead, their data indicate adenosine deficiency is the cause. However, one weakness is that for the manipulations they test some behaviours but not all. The authors could attempt to improve the link between mechanism and behaviour by testing whether over-expression of Aprt in neurons or glia, throughout development or in the adult, and feeding with adenosine and m6A can rescue each of the behavioural phenotypes handled: lifespan, SING, sleep and seizures. The authors could also attempt to knock-down dopamine levels concomitantly with feeding with adenosine or m6A to see if this rescues the phenotypes of SING and sleep. Visualising the neural circuits that express the adenosine receptor could reveal why the deficit in adenosine can affect distinct behaviours differentially, and which neurologic phenotypes are primary and which secondary consequences of the mutations. This would allow them to carry out epistasis analysis by knocking-down AdoR in specific circuits, whilst at the same time feeding Aprt mutants with Adenosine.

The revelation that the mutant form of human HGPRT has toxic effects is very intriguing and important and it invites the community to investigate this further into the future.

To conclude, this is a fundamental piece of work that opens the opportunity for the broader scientific community to use Drosophila to investigate LND.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The study attempts to develop a Drosophila model for the human disease of LND. The issue here, and the main weakness of this study, is that Drosophila does not express the enzyme, HGPRT, which when mutated causes LND. The authors, instead, mutate the functionally-related Drosophila Aprt enzyme. However, it is unknown whether Aprt is also a structural homologue. Because of this, it will likely not be possible to identify pharmacological compounds that rescue HGPRT activity via a direct interaction (unless modelling predicts high conservation of substrate binding pocket between the two enzymes, etc). An additional weakness is that the study does not identify a molecule that may act as a lead compound for further development for treating LND. Rather, the various rescues reported are selective for only a subset of the disease-associated phenotypes. Thus, whilst informative, this first section of the study does not meet the study ambitions.

The second approach adopted is to express a 'humanised mutated' form of HGPRT in Drosophila, which holds more promise for the development of a pharmacological screen. In particular, the locomotor defect is recapitulated but the seizure-like activity, whilst reported as being recapitulated, is debatable. A recovery time of 2.3 seconds is very much less than timings for typical seizure mutants. Nevertheless, the SING behaviour could be sufficient to screen against. However, this is not explored.

In summary, this is a largely descriptive study reporting the behavioural effects of an Aprt loss-of-function mutation. RNAi KD and rescue expression studies suggest that a mix of neuronal (particularly dopaminergic and possibly adenosinergic signalling pathways) and glia are involved in the behavioural phenotypes affecting locomotion, sleep and seizure. There is insufficient evidence to have confidence that the Arpt fly model will prove valuable for understanding / treating LND.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Cell type deconvolution is one of the early and critical steps in the analysis and integration of spatial omic and single cell gene expression datasets, and there are already many approaches proposed for the analysis. Sang-aram et al. provide an up-to-date benchmark of computational methods for cell type deconvolution.

In doing so, they provide some (perhaps subtle) additional elements that I would say are above the average for a benchmarking study: i) a full Nextflow pipeline to reproduce their analyses; ii) methods implemented in Docker containers (which can be used by others to run their datasets); iii) a fairly decent assessment of their simulator compared to other spatial omics simulators. A key aspect of their results is that they are generally very concordant between real and synthetic datasets. And, it is important that the authors include an appropriate "simpler" baseline method to compare against and surprisingly, several methods performed below this baseline. Overall, this study also has the potential to also set the standard of benchmarks higher, because of these mentioned elements.

The only weakness of this study that I can readily see is that this is a very active area of research and we may see other types of data start to dominate (CosMx, Xenium) and new computational approaches will surely arrive. The Nextflow pipeline will make the prospect of including new reference datasets and new computational methods easier.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript Sangaram et al provide a systematic methodology and pipeline for benchmarking cell type deconvolution algorithms for spatial transcriptomic data analysis in a reproducible manner. They developed a tissue pattern simulator that starts from single-cell RNA-seq data to create silver standards and used spatial aggregation strategies from real in situ-based spatial technologies to obtain gold standards. By using several established metrics combined with different deconvolution challenges they systematically scored and ranked 11 deconvolution methods and assessed both functional and usability criteria. Altogether, they present a reusable and extendable platform and reach very similar conclusions to other deconvolution benchmarking paper, including that RCTD, SpatialDWLS and Cell2location typically provide the best results.

More specifically, the authors of this study sought to construct a methodology for benchmarking cell type deconvolution algorithms for spatial transcriptomic data analysis in a reproducible manner. The authors leveraged publicly available scRNA-seq, seqFISH, and STARMap datasets to create synthetic spatial datasets modeled after that of the Visium platform. It should be noted that the underlying experimental techniques of seqFISH and STARMap (in situ hybridization) do not parallel that of Visium (sequencing), which could bias simulated data. Furthermore, to generate the ground truth datasets cells and their corresponding count matrix are represented by simple centroids. Although this simplifies the analysis it might not necessarily accurately reflect Visium spots where cells could lie on a boundary and affect deconvolution results. On the other hand, the authors state that in silver standard datasets one half of the scRNA-seq data was used for simulation and the other half was used as a reference for the algorithms, but the method of splitting the data, i.e., at random or proportionally by cell type, was not specified. Supplying optimal reference data is important to achieve best performance, as the authors note in their conclusions.

The authors thoroughly and rigorously compare methods while addressing situational discrepancies in model performance, indicative of a strong analysis. The authors make a point to address both inter- and intra- dataset reference handling, which has a significant impact on performance. Major strengths of the simulation engine include the ability to downsample and recapitulate several cell and tissue organization patterns.

It's important to realize that deconvolution approaches are typically part of larger exploratory data analysis (EDA) efforts and require users to change parameters and input data multiple times. Furthermore, many users might not have access to more advanced computing infrastructure (e.g. GPU) and thus running time, computing needs, and scalability are probably key factors that researchers would like to consider when looking to deconvolve their datasets.

The authors achieve their aim to benchmark different deconvolution methods and the results from their thorough analysis support the conclusions that many methods are still outperformed by bulk deconvolution methods. This study further informs the need for cell type deconvolution algorithms that can handle both cell abundance and rarity throughout a given tissue sample.

The reproducibility of the methods described will have significant utility for researchers looking to develop cell type deconvolution algorithms, as this platform will allow simultaneous replication of the described analysis and comparison to new methods.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The authors thoroughly evaluate the performance and scalability of existing cell-type deconvolution methods. The paper builds on the existing knowledge by considering the suitability of deconvolution algorithms in the context of more challenging analyses where rare cell types are present or when dealing with unmatched references or noise introduced by a highly abundant cell type within the data. The paper also presents a new simulation framework for spatial transcriptomics data to support their benchmarking effort.

● Major strengths and weaknesses of the methods and results.

While most of the benchmarking studies rely on publicly available spatial transcriptomics datasets, one of the major strengths of the paper is the additional evidence support from their silver standard datasets. Leveraging computational processes synthspot, the authors generated abundant synthetic spatial transcriptomics data with replicates. In addition, the data generation process also accounts for 9 different biological patterns to stay close to real data quality. The authors also communicated with the original authors of each benchmarked method to ensure correct implementation and optimal performance. Figure 2 provides a clear and concise summary of the benchmark results, which will be of great assistance to users who are contemplating conducting deconvolution analysis.

The simulation setup has a significant weakness in the selection of reference single-cell RNAseq datasets used for generating synthetic spots. It is unclear why a mix of mouse and human scRNA-seq datasets were chosen, as this does not reflect a realistic biological scenario. This could call into question the findings of the "detecting rare cell types remains challenging even for top-performing methods" section of the paper, as the true "rare cell types" would not be as distinct as human skin cells in a mouse brain setting as simulated here. Furthermore, it is unclear why the authors developed Synthspot when other similar frameworks, such as SRTsim, exist. Have the authors explored other simulation frameworks? Finally, we would have appreciated the inclusion of tissue samples with more complex structures, such as those from tumors, where there may be more intricate mixing between cell types and spot types.

The authors have effectively accomplished their objectives in benchmarking deconvolution methods by thoughtfully designing the experiments and selecting appropriate evaluation metrics. This paper will be highly beneficial for the community.

This paper can provide guidance for selecting the most proper deconvolution methods under user-decided scenarios of the interests. Synthspot, allows for generating more realistic artificial tissue data with specific spatial patterns and is integrated as part of an easy-to-use and adaptable Nextflow pipeline. It might be worthwhile to clearly differentiate this work from previous work either in the benchmarking area or SRT data simulation area.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this paper, Hui and colleagues investigate how the predictive accuracy of a polygenic score (PGS) for body mass index (BMI) changes when individuals are stratified by 62 different covariates. After showing that the PGS has different predictive power across strata for 18 out of 62 covariates, they turn to understanding why these differences and seeing if predictive performance could be improved. First, they investigated which types of covariates result in the largest differences in PGS predictive power, finding that covariates with larger "main effects" on the trait and covariates with larger interaction effects (interacting with the PGS to affect the trait) tend to better stratify individuals by PGS performance. The authors then see if including interactions between the PGS and covariates improves predictive accuracy, finding that linear models only result in modest increases in performance but nonlinear models result in more substantial performance gains.

Overall, the results are interesting and well-supported. The results will be broadly interesting to people using and developing PGS methods. Below I list some strengths and minor weaknesses.

Strengths:

A major impediment to the clinical use of PGS is the interaction between the PGS and various other routinely measured covariates, and this work provides a very interesting empirical study along these lines. The problem is interesting, and the work presented here is a convincing empirical study of the problem.

The result that PGS accuracy differs across covariates, but in a way that is not well-captured by linear models with interactions is important for PGS method development.

Weakness:

While arguably outside the scope of this paper, one shortcoming is the lack of a conceptual model explaining the results. It is interesting and empirically useful that PGS prediction accuracy differs across many covariates, but some of the results are hard to reconcile simultaneously. For example, it is interesting that triglyceride levels are associated with PGS performance across cohorts, but it seems like the effect on performance is discordant across datasets (Figure 2). Similarly, many of these effects have discordant (linear) interactions across cohorts (Figure 3). Overall it is surprising that the same covariates would be important but for presumably different reasons in different cohorts. Similarly, it would be good to discuss how the present results relate to the conceptual models in Mostafavi et al. (eLife 2020) and Zhu et al. (Cell Genomics 2023).

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This work follows in the footsteps of earlier work showing that BMI prediction accuracy can vary dramatically by context, even within a relatively ancestrally homogenous sample. This is an important observation that is worth the extension to different context variables and samples.

Much of the follow-up analyses are commendably trying to take us a step further-towards explaining the underlying observed trends of variable prediction accuracy for BMI. Some of these analyses, however, are somewhat confounded and hard to interpret.

For example, many of the covariates which the authors use to stratify the sample by may drive range restriction effects. Further, the covariates considered could be causally affected by genotype and causally affect BMI, with reverse causality effects; other covariates may be partially causally affected by both genotype and BMI, resulting in collider bias. Finally, population structure differences between quintiles of a covariate may drive variable levels of stratification. These can bias estimation and confounds interpretations, at least one of which intuitively seems like a concern for each of the context variables (e.g., the covariates SES, LDL, diet, age, smoking, and alcohol drinking).

The increased prediction accuracy observed with some of the age-dependent prediction models is notable. Despite the clear utility of this investigation, I am not aware of much existing work that shows such improvements for context-aware prediction models (compared to additive/main effect models). I would be curious to see if the predictive utility extends to held-out data from a data set distinct from the UKB, where the model was trained, or whether it replicates when predicting variation within families. Such analyses could strengthen the evidence for these models capturing direct causal effects, rather than other reasons for the associations existing in the UKB sample.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Polygenic scores (PGS), constructed based on genetic effect sizes estimated in genome-wide association studies (GWAS) and used to predict phenotypes in humans have attracted considerable recent interest in human and evolutionary genetics, and in the social sciences. Recent work, however, has shown that PGSs have limited portability across ancestry groups, and that even within an ancestry group, their predictive accuracy varies markedly depending on characteristics such as the socio-economic status, age, and sex of the individuals in the samples used to construct them and to which they are applied. This study takes further steps in investigating and addressing the later problem, focusing on body mass index, a phenotype of substantial biomedical interest. Specifically, it quantifies the effects of a large number of co-variates and of interactions between these covariates and the PGS on prediction accuracy; it also examines the utility of including such covariates and interaction in the construction of predictors using both standard methods and artificial neural networks. This study would be of interest to investigators that develop and apply PGSs.

I should add that I have not worked on PGSs and am not a statistician, and apologize in advance if this has led to some misunderstandings.

Strengths:

- The paper presents a much more comprehensive assessment of the effects of covariates than previous studies. It finds many covariates to have a substantial effect, which further highlights the importance of this problem to the development and application of PGSs for BMI and more generally.<br /> - The findings re the relationships between the effects of covariates and interactions between covariates and PGSs are, to the best of my knowledge, novel and interesting.<br /> - The development of predictors that account for multiple covariates and their interaction with the PGS are, to the best of my knowledge, novel and may prove useful in future efforts to produce reliable PGSs.<br /> - The improvement offered by the predictors that account for PGS and covariates using neural networks highlights the importance of non-linear interactions that are not addressed by standard methods, which is both interesting and likely to be of future utility.

Weaknesses:

- The paper would benefit substantially from extensive editing. It also uses terminology that is specific to recent literature on PGSs, thus limiting accessibility to a broader readership.<br /> - The potential meaning of most of the results is not explored. Some examples are provided below:<br /> • the paper emphasizes that 18/62 covariates examined show significant effects, but this result clearly depends on the covariates included. It would be helpful to provide more detail on how these covariates were chosen. Moreover, many of these covariates are likely to be correlated, making this result more difficult to interpret. Could these questions at least be partially addressed using the predictors constructed using all covariates and their interactions jointly (i.e., with LASSO)? In that regard, it would be helpful to know how many of the covariates and interactions were used in this predictor (I apologize if I missed that).<br /> • While the relationship between covariate effects and covariate-PGS interaction effects is intriguing, it is difficult to interpret without articulating what one would expect, i.e., what would be an appropriate null.<br /> • The finding that using artificial neural networks substantially improves prediction over more standard methods is especially intriguing, and highlights the potential importance of non-linear relationships between PGSs and covariates. These relationships remain hidden in a black box, however. Even fairly straightforward analyses, based on using different combinations of the PGS and/or covariates may shed some light on these relationships. For example, analyzing which covariates have a substantial effect on the prediction or varying one covariate at a time for different values of the PGS, etc.<br /> - The relationship to previous work should be discussed in greater detail.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Zhao et al describes the identification of RAPSYN, a NEDD8 E3 ligase previously studied for its role in acetylcholine receptor clustering and neuromuscular junction formation, as a factor promoting the stabilisation of the BCR-ABL oncogene in Chronic Myeloid Leukemia (CML) cells. The authors have identified that NEDDylation of BCR-ABL by RAPSYN antagonises its poly-ubiquitin and subsequent proteasome-based degradation. Knocking down RAPSYN with shRNA led to increased poly-ubiquitination and faster turnover of BCR-ABL. Furthermore, they describe that SRC-dependent phosphorylation of RAPSYN facilitates its NEDD8-ligase activity.

The authors' findings are primarily rooted in a series of well-conducted in vitro experiments using two CML cell lines, K562 and MEG-01. While the findings are interesting and novel, further work to corroborate these findings in primary CML samples would have greatly strengthened the potential real-world relevance of these discoveries. The authors appear to have some PBMCs from primary CML patients and a BM sample from a Ph+ ALL in which they performed western blot analyses (Fig 1). Couldn't these samples have been used to at least confirm some of the key discoveries? For example, the neddylation of BCR-ABL, or; sensitivity of primary leukemic cells to RAPSYN knockdown, and/or; phosphorylation of RAPSYN by SRC?

The authors initially interrogated a fairly dated (circa 2009) microarray-based primary dataset to show that the increase in RAPSYN is primarily a post-transcriptional event, as mRNA levels are not different between healthy and CML samples. It would be interesting to see whether differences might be more readily seen in more recent RNA-seq datasets from CML patients, given the well-known differences in sensitivity between the two platforms. Additionally, I wonder if there would be transcriptional signatures of increased NEDDylation (or RAPSYN-induced NEDDylation) that could be interrogated in primary samples? Furthermore, there are proteomics datasets of CML cells made resistant to TKIs (through in vitro selection experiments) that could be interrogated for independent validation of the authors' discoveries. For example: from K562 cells, PMID: 30730747 or PMID: 34922009).

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this study the authors aim to elucidate the role of RAPSYN in BCR-ABL-mediated leukemogenesis. RAPSYN is mainly known as a scaffolding protein for anchoring acetylcholine receptors (AChRs) to the cytoskeleton in muscle cells, facilitating AChR clustering through neddylation (Li et al., 2016). The authors demonstrate, through a broad and rigorous array of biochemical assays, that RAPSYN also plays a crucial role in the neddylation of BCR-ABL in leukemia cells. Their results indicate that this process shields BCR-ABL from ubiquitination and subsequent degradation, likely through a mechanism involving competition for binding with the BCR-ABL ubiquitin ligase c-CBL. In addition, the authors delve into the regulatory mechanisms underlying RAPSYN stability, demonstrating that it is enhanced through phosphorylation by SRC. This discovery further deepens our understanding of the complex dynamics of the molecular interactions that regulate BCR-ABL stability in leukemia.

To confirm the physiological significance of their findings, the authors effectively utilize cell viability assays and in vivo models. The integration of these approaches lends strength and validity to their conclusions.

The implications of the findings presented in this study are important, particularly in relation to our understanding of the pathogenesis and potential therapeutic strategies for Philadelphia chromosome-positive leukemias. By illuminating the role of RAPSYN in the regulation of BCR-ABL stability, this research potentially uncovers avenues for the development of targeted therapies, making a significant contribution to the field.

Most of the conclusions drawn in this paper are well supported by data, but some aspects of the data need to be clarified and extended:

1) The authors propose that targeting RAPSYN in Ph+ leukemia could have a high therapeutic index, suggesting that inhibition of RAPSYN may lead to cytotoxicity in Ph+ leukemia with high specificity and minimal side effects. To substantiate this assertion, the authors should investigate the impact on cell viability upon RAPSYN knockdown in non-Ph leukemic cell lines or HS-5 cells (similar to Figure 1C), despite their lower RAPSYN protein levels.

2) The authors intriguingly show that the protein levels of RAPSYN are significantly enriched in Ph+ patient samples and cell lines (Figure 1A,B), even though the mRNA levels remain unchanged (Supplementary Figure 1 A-C). This observation merits a clear explanation in the context of the presented results. The data in the manuscript does imply a feedforward loop mechanism (Figure 7), where BCR-ABL activates SRC, which subsequently stabilizes RAPSYN, which in turn helps protect BCR-ABL from c-CBL-mediated degradation. If this is the working hypothesis, it would be beneficial for the reader to see supporting evidence.

3) The authors present compelling evidence to suggest that RAPSYN may possess direct NEDD8-ligase activity on BCR-ABL. To strengthen this claim, it may be valuable to conduct further assays involving a ligase-deficient mutant, such as C366A, beyond its use in Figure 2J. Incorporating this mutant into the in vitro assay illustrated in Figure 2K, for instance, could offer substantial validation for the claim. In addition, showing whether the ligase-deficient mutant is capable of phenocopying the phosphorylation-mutant Y336F, as showcased in Figures 5E, F, and 6D, F, would be beneficial.

4) The observations presented in Figures 6 C-G require additional clarification. Notably, there are discrepancies in relative cell viability effects in K562 cells, and to some extent in MEG-01 cells, under conditions that are indicated as being either identical or highly similar. For instance, this inconsistency is observable when comparing the left panels of Figure 6C and 6D in the case of NC overexpression + shSRC#2, and the left panels of Figure 6E and 6G with NC overexpression or shNC, respectively. Listing potential causes of these discrepancies would strengthen the overall validity of the findings and their subsequent interpretation.

5) Throughout the manuscript, immunoblots which showcase immunoprecipitations of BCR-ABL or His-BCR-ABL depict poly-neddylation (e.g. Figures 2E-M, 3D-G, and 5A-E) and poly-ubiquitination (e.g. Figures 3D-G) patterns/smears where these patterns seem to extend below the molecular weight of BCR-ABL. To enhance clarity, it would be valuable for the authors to provide an explanation in the text or the figure legend for this observation. Is it reflective of potential degradation of BCR-ABL or is there another explanation behind it?

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This is a very nice study showing how partial loss of vestibular function leads to long term alterations in behavioural responses of mice. Specifically, the authors show that VOR involving both canal and otolith afferents are strongly attenuated following treatment and partially recover. The main result is that loss of VOR is partially "compensated" by increased OKR in treated animals. Finally, the authors show that treatment primarily affects type I hair cells as opposed to type II. Overall, these results have potentially important implications for our understanding of how the VOR Is generated using input from both type I and type II hair cells. As detailed below however, more controls as well as analyses are needed.

Major points:

The authors analyze both canal and otolith contributions to the VOR which is great. There is however an asymmetry in the way that the results are presented in Figure 1. Please correct this and show time series of fixations for control and at W6 and W12. Moreover, the authors are plotting table and eye position traces in Fig. 1B but, based on the methods, gains are computed based on velocity. So please show eye velocity traces instead. Also, what was the goodness of fit of the model to the trace at W6? If lower than 0.5 then I think that it is misleading to show such a trace since there does not seem to be a significant VOR. This is important to show that the loss is partial as opposed to total. It seems to me that the treatment was not effective at all for aVOR for at least some animals. What happens if these are not included in the analysis?

Figure 2A shows a parallel time course for gains of aVOR and OCR at the population level. Is this also seen at the individual level?

Figure 3: please show individual datapoints in all conditions.

Figure 4: The authors show both gain and phase for OKR. Why not show gain and phase for aVOR and OCR in Figure 1. I realize that phase is shown in sup Figures but it is important to show in main figures. The authors show a significant increase in phase lead for aVOR but no further mention is made of this in the discussion. Moreover, how are the authors dealing with the fact that, as gain gets smaller, the error on the phase will increase. Specifically, what happens when the grey datapoints are not included?

Discussion: As mentioned above, the authors should discuss the mechanisms and implications of the observed phase lead following treatment. Moreover, recent literature showing that VN neurons that make the primary contribution to the VOR (i.e., PVP neurons) tend to show more regular resting discharges than other classes (i.e., EH cells), and that such regularity is needed for the VOR should be discussed (Mackrous et al. 2020 eLife). Specifically, how are type I and type II hair cells related to discharge regularity by central neurons in VN?

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

To further understand the plasticity of vestibular compensation, Schenberg et al. sought to characterize the response of the vestibular system to short-term and partial impairment using gaze stabilization behaviors. A transient ototoxic protocol affected type I hair cells and produced gain changes in the vestibulo-ocular reflex and optokinetic response. Interestingly, decreases in vestibular function occurred in coordination with an increase in ocular reflex gain at frequencies where vestibular information is more highly weighted over visual. Moreover, computational approaches revealed unexpected detriment from low reproducibility on combined gaze responses. These results inform the current understanding of visual-vestibular integration especially in the face of dysfunction.

Strengths<br /> The manuscript takes advantage of VOR measurements which can be activated by targeted organs, are used in many species including clinically, and indicate additional adverse effects of vestibular dysfunction.

The authors use a variety of experimental procedures and analysis methods to verify results and consider individual performance effects on the population data.

The conclusions are well-justified by current data and supported by previous research and theories of visuo-vestibular function and plasticity.

Weaknesses<br /> The manuscript describes the methodology as inducing reversible changes (lines 44, 67,) but the data shows a reversible effect only in hair cell histology (Fig 3A-B) not in function as demonstrated by the persistent aVOR gain reduction in week 12 (Fig 1C) and increase of OKR gain in weeks 6-12 (Fig 4C/D).

The manuscript begins with the mention of fluctuating vestibular function clinically, but does not connect this to any specific pathologies nor does it relate its conclusions back to this motivation.

The conclusions of frequency-specific changes in OKR would be stronger if frequency-specific aVOR effects were demonstrated similar to Figure 4D.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This manuscript by Petersen and colleagues investigates the mechanistic underpinnings of activation of the ion channel TREK-1 by mechanical inputs (fluid shear or membrane stretch) applied to cells. Using a combination of super-resolution microscopy, pair correlation analysis and electrophysiology, the authors show that the application of shear to a cell can lead to changes in the distribution of TREK-1 and the enzyme PhospholipaseD2 (PLD2), relative to lipid domains defined by either GM1 or PIP2. The activation of TREK-1 by mechanical stimuli was shown to be sensitized by the presence of PLD2, but not a catalytically dead xPLD2 mutant. In addition, the activity of PLD2 is increased when the molecule is more associated with PIP2, rather than GM1 defined lipid domains. The presented data do not exclude direct mechanical activation of TREK-1, rather suggest a modulation of TREK-1 activity, increasing sensitivity to mechanical inputs, through an inherent mechanosensitivity of PLD2 activity. The authors additionally claim that PLD2 can regulate transduction thresholds in vivo using Drosophila melanogaster behavioural assays. However, this section of the manuscript overstates the experimental findings, given that it is unclear how the disruption of PLD2 is leading to behavioural changes, given the lack of a TREK-1 homologue in this organism and the lack of supporting data on molecular function in the relevant cells. This work will be of interest to the growing community of scientists investigating the myriad mechanisms that can tune mechanical sensitivity of cells, providing valuable insight into the role of functional PLD2 in sensitizing TREK-1 activation in response to mechanical inputs, in some cellular systems.

The authors convincingly demonstrate that, post application of shear, an alteration in the distribution of TREK-1 and mPLD2 (in HEK293T cells) from being correlated with GM1 defined domains (no shear) to increased correlation with PIP2 defined membrane domains (post shear). These data were generated using super-resolution microscopy to visualise, at sub diffraction resolution, the localisation of labelled protein, compared to labelled lipids. The use of super-resolution imaging enabled the authors to visualise changes in cluster association that would not have been achievable with diffraction limited microscopy. However, the conclusion that this change in association reflects TREK-1 leaving one cluster and moving to another overinterprets these data, as the data were generated from static measurements of fixed cells, rather than dynamic measurements capturing molecular movements.

When assessing molecular distribution of endogenous TREK-1 and PLD2, these molecules are described as "well correlated: in C2C12 cells" however it is challenging to assess what "well correlated" means, precisely in this context. This limitation is compounded by the conclusion that TREK-1 displayed little pair correlation with GM1 and the authors describe a "small amount of TREK-1 trafficked to PIP2". As such, these data may suggest that the findings outlined for HEK293T cells may be influenced by artefacts arising from overexpression.

The changes in TREK-1 sensitivity to mechanical activation could also reflect changes in the amount of TREK-1 in the plasma membrane. The authors suggest that the presence of a leak currently accounts for the presence of TREK-1 in the plasma membrane, however they do not account for whether there are significant changes in the membrane localisation of the channel in the presence of mPLD2 versus xPLD2. The supplementary data provide some images of fluorescently labelled TREK-1 in cells, and the authors state that truncating the c-terminus has no effect on expression at the plasma membrane, however these data provide inadequate support for this conclusion. In addition, the data reporting the P50 should be noted with caution, given the lack of saturation of the current in response to the stimulus range.

Finally, by manipulating PLD2 in D. melanogaster, the authors show changes in behaviour when larvae are exposed to either mechanical or electrical inputs. The depletion of PLD2 is concluded to lead to a reduction in activation thresholds and to suggest an in vivo role for PA lipid signaling in setting thresholds for both mechanosensitivity and pain. However, while the data provided demonstrate convincing changes in behaviour and these changes could be explained by changes in transduction thresholds, these data only provide weak support for this specific conclusion. As the authors note, there is no TREK-1 in D. melanogaster, as such the reported findings could be accounted for by other explanations, not least including potential alterations in the activation threshold of Nav channels required for action potential generation. To conclude that the outcomes were in fact mediated by changes in mechanotransduction, the authors would need to demonstrate changes in receptor potential generation, rather than deriving conclusions from changes in behaviour that could arise from alterations in resting membrane potential, receptor potential generation or the activity of the voltage gated channels required for action potential generation.

This work provides further evidence of the astounding flexibility of mechanical sensing in cells. By outlining how mechanical activation of TREK-1 can be sensitised by mechanical regulation of PLD2 activity, the authors highlight a mechanism by which TREK-1 sensitivity could be regulated under distinct physiological conditions.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Force sensing and gating mechanisms of the mechanically activated ion channels is an area of broad interest in the field of mechanotransduction. These channels perform important biological functions by converting mechanical force into electrical signals. To understand their underlying physiological processes, it is important to determine gating mechanisms, especially those mediated by lipids. The authors in this manuscript describe a mechanism for mechanically induced activation of TREK-1 (TWIK-related K+ channel. They propose that force induced disruption of ganglioside (GM1) and cholesterol causes relocation of TREK-1 associated with phospholipase D2 (PLD2) to 4,5-bisphosphate (PIP2) clusters, where PLD2 catalytic activity produces phosphatidic acid that can activate the channel. To test their hypothesis, they use dSTORM to measure TREK-1 and PLD2 colocalization with either GM1 or PIP2. They find that shear stress decreases TREK-1/PLD2 colocalization with GM1 and relocates to cluster with PIP2. These movements are affected by TREK-1 C-terminal or PLD2 mutations suggesting that the interaction is important for channel re-location. The authors then draw a correlation to cholesterol suggesting that TREK-1 movement is cholesterol dependent. It is important to note that this is not the only method of channel activation and that one not involving PLD2 also exists. Overall, the authors conclude that force is sensed by ordered lipids and PLD2 associates with TREK-1 to selectively gate the channel. Although the proposed mechanism is solid, some concerns remain.

1) Most conclusions in the paper heavily depend on the dSTORM data. But the images provided lack resolution. This makes it difficult for the readers to assess the representative images.

2) The experiments in Figure 6 are a bit puzzling. The entire premise of the paper is to establish gating mechanism of TREK-1 mediated by PLD2; however, the motivation behind using flies, which do not express TREK-1 is puzzling. Importantly, data in this figure is not convincing.<br /> -Figure 6B, the image is too blown out and looks over saturated. Unclear whether the resolution in subcellular localization is obvious or not.<br /> -Figure 6C-D, the differences in activity threshold is 1 or less than 1g. Is this physiologically relevant? How does this compare to other conditions in flies that can affect mechanosensitivity, for example?

3) 70mOsm is a high degree of osmotic stress. How confident are the authors that a. cell health is maintained under this condition and b. this does indeed induce membrane stretch? For example, does this stimulation activate TREK-1?

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The manuscript "Mechanical activation of TWIK-related potassium channel by nanoscopic movement and second messenger signaling" presents a new mechanism for the activation of TREK-1 channel. The mechanism suggests that TREK1 is activated by phosphatidic acids that are produced via a mechanosensitive motion of PLD2 to PIP2-enriched domains. Overall, I found the topic interesting, but several typos and unclarities reduced the readability of the manuscript. Additionally, I have several major concerns on the interpretation of the results. Therefore, the proposed mechanism is not fully supported by the presented data. Lastly, the mechanism is based on several previous studies from the Hansen lab, however, the novelty of the current manuscript is not clearly stated. For example, in the 2nd result section, the authors stated, "fluid shear causes PLD2 to move from cholesterol dependent GM1 clusters to PIP2 clusters and this activated the enzyme". However, this is also presented as a new finding in section 3 "Mechanism of PLD2 activation by shear."

For PLD2 dependent TREK-1 activation. Overall, I found the results compelling. However, two key results are missing.<br /> 1. Does HEK cells have endogenous PLD2? If so, it's hard to claim that the authors can measure PLD2-independent TREK1 activation.<br /> 2. Does the plasma membrane trafficking of TREK1 remain the same under different conditions (PLD2 overexpression, truncation)? From Figure S2, the truncated TREK1 seem to have very poor trafficking. The change of trafficking could significantly contribute to the interpretation of the data in Figure 1.

For shear-induced movement of TREK1 between nanodomains. The section is convincing, however I'm not an expert on super-resolution imaging. Also, it would be helpful to clarify whether the shear stress was maintained during fixation. If not, what is the time gap between reduced shear and the fixed state. lastly, it's unclear why shear flow changes the level of TREK1 and PIP2.

For the mechanism of PLD2 activation by shear. I found this section not convincing. Therefore, the question of how does PLD2 sense mechanical force on the membrane is not fully addressed. Particularly, it's hard to imagine an acute 25% decrease cholesterol level by shear - where did the cholesterol go? Details on the measurements of free cholesterol level is unclear and additional/alternative experiments are needed to prove the reduction in cholesterol by shear.<br /> Importantly, there is no direct evidence for "shear thinning" of the membrane and the authors should avoid claiming shear thinning in the abstract and summary of the manuscript.

The authors should also be aware that hypotonic shock is a very dirty assay for stretching the cell membrane. Often, there is only a transient increase in membrane tension, accompanied by many biochemical changes in the cells (including acidification, changes of concentration etc). Therefore, I would not consider this as definitive proof that PLD2 can be activated by stretching membrane.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors provide a large-scale study of 18-month-olds, tested on a battery of tests (7 tasks designed to study attention, 1 to study working memory). Most of these tasks are already well-established, and the authors provide an additional replication.<br /> They further show that the variability in toddler's behavior (in terms of accuracy and reaction time) can be best and most parsimoniously accounted by two variable, one would correspond to attention, and the second one to social attention (i.e., the well-known interest for faces across the lifespan). Additionally, the authors find no evidence for a distinction between endogenous and exogenous attention. One may however argue that it is unclear whether any of the tasks actually tap endogenous attention. More detailed discussion of the cognitive functions involved in each of the tasks would enrich the paper.

Arguably, the working memory task is the task that is most likely to involve endogenous attention, as the behavior being tested is a spontaneous interest for a hidden object, hence attention triggered by an internal mental representation. Unfortunately, this task yielded null results and did not replicate previous findings.

Altogether, these findings provide an interesting method. Its value will be assessed when these behavioral evaluations will be combined with neural data and clinical assessment, as teased by the authors towards the end of the paper.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The manuscript describes a large scale study of 8 eye tracking tasks in a large cohort of 18 month old children. The dataset is impressive and allows a comparison across children in different tasks that assess social, endogenous, and exogenous attention tasks. As such, it provides a benchmark for future studies that examine eye movements within different cohorts of children and across development and offers exciting possibilities to correlate these measures with behavior, other measures of motor and neural development, and to compare these measures with children diagnosed with neurodevelopmental disorders.

It does seem like additional insights can be gained from the study that could potentially address important topics in development, attention, and eye movements. Which components of attention are similar and in what way? The distinction between social vs non social is interesting but not ground breaking (e.g., the preference of toddlers to attend to faces); maybe looking at specific sub-tasks and clusters of participants the study can reveal new insights about the differences and similarities across tasks. The manuscript describes the importance of characterizing profiles of attention and individual differences, what kind of profiles are found in the study? Are there different profiles among this large cohort?<br /> Moreover, to allow comparison across analysis methods, ages, and neurodevelopmental disorders, it is important that the full dataset will be available online (i.e., all eye tracking data not just the metrics) as well as the software to run tasks that should also be made available to encourage using the battery across different research communities.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Braithwaite et al. present data from a comprehensive large-scale study of 18-month-old's visual attention. The authors leverage a battery of well-known visual attention tasks to replicate canonical effects found in the literature and assess the latent structure of these tasks. They find that, while controlling for eye tracking precision and accuracy, two factors best fit the data - attention to social and non-social stimuli.

Strengths:<br /> The current study represents what amounts to years of hard work collecting data from a population that is challenging to work with - young children. The authors have diligently attended to data cleaning and sample size throughout the manuscript. Not only do they provide a large-scale replication of several well-known tasks, but they use advanced statistical modeling to discover the structure of visual attention in these 18-month-olds. Overall, this is a valuable contribution to the literature and provides a useful framework for studying visual attention development.

Weaknesses:<br /> While the study is clearly a valuable addition to the extant literature, I have several concerns that might be addressed to improve the manuscript. These primarily center around clarity and conciseness. First, the introduction seems to lack clarity at times. For example, the first paragraph seems to introduce several ideas (e.g., brain and cognitive development, direct and indirect measures of cognition, eyetracking, etc) that make it hard to understand where the paper is going. The authors might consider homing in on 2 main points to motivate eye tracking as a tool. Second, there are many different eye tracking measures may make it difficult for the reader to track which measures were used for each task and which were relevant for the larger model. This may be remedied by adding a section to the methods that briefly describes how each measure was calculated and perhaps a table that lists each task, the measure, and how it was calculated. Third, the results are exciting but hard to visualize in the supplementary figures. I commend them on using raincloud plots to visualize the individual data, but I would strongly encourage the authors to rethink how they display the data. For example, I find the supplementary images hard to see and as a result the effects reported are hard to discern in the image. Fourth, I believe the current data warrant a deeper discussion of what these findings mean. For example, given the developmental nature of the current study, it would be valuable for the authors to discuss how the structure visual attention might change or stay the same across development. For example, do the authors believe the current two factor model would replicate in older children, or would exogenous and endogenous attention emerge as separable components? How do these predictions relate to the extensive research in the adult literature?

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors investigated the molecular underpinnings of sleep-related memory consolidation and explored transcriptional changes in memory-related neurons, specifically the α′β′-Kenyon cells in the mushroom bodies (MB) of fruit flies in different states of memory consolidation. Their experiments identified changes in several genes and subsequently conducted functional experiments on sleep and memory. These findings are useful for further characterization of the molecular pathways that may link sleep to long-term memory formation.

The functional characterization of the identified genes revealed that the perturbation of two genes alters sleep: 1) Polr1f knockdown reduces sleep and increases pre-ribosome and translation. 2) In contrast, knockdown of Regnase-1 decreases sleep. Furthermore, Regnase-1 knockdown impairs all forms of appetitive memory. Although the findings are generally interesting, the functional relationship between these genes, sleep, and memory does not entirely become clear from the presented work. Some conclusions are not completely supported by the data, and alternative explanations are not considered.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Sleep and memory are intertwined processes, with sleep-deprivation having a negative impact on long-term memory in many species. Recently, the authors showed that fruit flies form sleep-dependent long-term appetitive memory only when fed. They showed that this context-dependent memory trace maps to the anterior-posterior (ap) α'β' mushroom body neurons (MBNs) (Chouhan et al., (2021) Nature). However, the molecular cascades induced during training that promote sleep and memory have remained enigmatic.

Here the authors investigate this issue by combining cell-specific transcriptomics, genetic perturbations, and measurements of sleep and memory. They identify an array of genes altered in expression following appetitive training. These genes are mainly downregulated, and predominantly encode regulators of transcription and RNA biosynthesis. This is a conceptually attractive finding given that long-term memory requires de novo protein translation.

The authors then screen these genes for novel regulators of sleep and memory. They show that one of these genes (Polr1F) acts in ap α'β' MBNs to promote wakefulness, while another (Regnase-1) promotes sleep. They also identify a specific role for Regnase-1 in ap α'β' MBNs in regulating short- and long-term memory formation, and demonstrate that Pol1rF inhibits translation throughout the fly brain.

The analyses of molecular alterations in ap α'β' MBNs are interesting and impressive. However, caveats remain regarding the effect of Polr1F and Regnase-1 on sleep. There are significant differences in the impact of Polr1F knockdown on sleep between datasets, and from the data currently presented, it is unclear whether Polr1F and Regnase-1 might also play important developmental roles in ap α'β' MBNs that influence sleep. These caveats can be readily addressed by additional experiments that would enhance the robustness of the manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

A landmark work (Chouhan et al., 2022) from the Sehgal group previously investigated the relationship between sleep and long-term memory formation by dissecting the role of mushroom body intrinsic neurons, extrinsic neurons, and output neurons during sleep-dependent and sleep-independent memory consolidation. In this manuscript, Li et al., profiled transcriptome in the anterior-posterior (ap) α'/β' neurons and identified genes that are differentially expressed after training in fed condition, which supports sleep-dependent memory formation. By knocking down candidate genes systematically, the authors identified Polr1F and Regnase-1 as two important hits that play potential roles in sleep and memory formation. What is the function of sleep and how to create a memory are two long-standing questions in science. The present study used a creative approach to identify novel components that may link sleep and memory consolidation in a specific type of neuron. Importantly, these components implicated that RNA processing may play a role in these processes.

While I am enthusiastic about the innovative approach employed to identify RNA processing genes involved in sleep regulation and memory consolidation, I feel that the data presented in the manuscript is insufficient to support the claim that these two genes establish a definitive link between sleep and memory consolidation. First, the developmental role of Regnase-1 in reducing sleep remains unclear because knocking down Regnase-1 using the GeneSwitch system produced neither acute nor chronic sleep loss phenotype. To address potential confounding issues caused by the GeneSwtich system, I would suggest considering alternative methods, such as Gal80ts, to restrict the RNAi knockdown to adulthood. In addition, QPCR or other expression-measuring methods should be used to validate the specificity and efficiency of the knockdown. Further testing of additional RNAi fly lines and conducting overexpression experiments would also lend credibility to the phenotypes. Second, while constitutive Regnase-1 knockdown produced robust phenotypes for both sleep-dependent and sleep-independent memory, it also led to a severe short-term memory phenotype. This raises the possibility that flies with constitutive Regnase-1 knockdown are poor learners, thereby having little memory to consolidate. The defect in learning could be simply caused by chronic sleep loss before training. Thus, this set of results does not substantiate a strong link between sleep and long-term memory consolidation. Lastly, the discussion on the sequential function of training, sleep, and RNA processing on memory consolidation appears to be speculative based on the present data. While the novel approach did provide novel candidate genes with functions in sleep, memory, and potentially their link, the manuscript would greatly benefit from carefully adjusting the conclusions and incorporating rigorous validations for the RNAi knockdown experiments.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Randomized clinical trials use experimental blinding and compare active and placebo conditions in their analyses. In this study, Fassi and colleagues explore how individual differences in subjective treatment (i.e., did the participant think they received the active or placebo treatment) influence symptoms and how this is related to objective treatment. The authors address this highly relevant and interesting question using a powerful method by (re-)analyzing data from four published neurostimulation studies and including subjective treatment in statistical models explaining treatment response. The major strengths include the innovative and important research question, the inclusion of four different studies with different techniques and populations to address this question, sound statistical analyses, and findings that are of high interest and relevance to the field.

My main suggestion is that authors reconsider the description of the main conclusion to better integrate and balance all findings. Specifically, the authors conclude that (e.g., in the abstract) "individual differences in subjective treatment can explain variability in outcomes better than the actual treatment", which I believe is not a consistent conclusion across all four studies as it does not appropriately consider important interactions with objective treatment observed in study 2 and 3. In study 2, the greatest improvement was observed in the group that received TMS but believed they received sham. While subjective treatment was associated with improvement regardless of objective active or sham treatment, improvement in the objective active TMS group who believed they received sham suggests the importance of objective treatment regardless of subjective treatment. In Study 3, including objective treatment in the model predicted more treatment variance, further suggesting the predictive value of objective treatment. In addition to updating the conclusions to better reflect this interaction, I suggest authors include the proportion of participants in each subjective treatment group that actually received active or sham treatment to better understand how much of the subjective treatment is explained by objective treatment. I think it is particularly important to better integrate and more precisely communicate this finding, because the conclusions may otherwise be erroneously interpreted as improvements after treatment only being an effect of subjective treatment or sham.

The paper will have significant impact on the field. It will promote further investigation of the effects of sham vs active treatment by the introduction of the terms subjective treatment vs objective treatment and subjective dosage that can be used consistently in the future. The suggestions to assess the expectation of sham vs active earlier on in clinical trials will advance the understanding of subjective treatment in future studies. Overall, I believe the data will substantially contribute to the design and interpretation of future clinical trials by underscoring the importance of subjective treatment.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This manuscript focuses on the clinical impact of subjective experience or treatment with transcranial magnetic stimulation and transcranial direct current stimulation studies with retrospective analyses of 4 datasets. Subjective experience or treatment refers to the patient level thought of receiving active or sham treatments. The analyses suggest that subjective treatment effects are an important and under appreciated factor in randomized controlled trials. The authors present compelling evidence that has significance in the context of other modalities of treatment, treatment for other diseases, and plans for future randomized controlled trials. Other strengths included a rigorous approach and analyses. Some aspects of the manuscript are underdeveloped and the findings are over interpreted. Thank you for your efforts and the opportunity to review your work.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This study compares visuospatial working memory performance between patients with MS and healthy controls, assessed using analog report tasks that provide continuous measures of recall error. The aim is to advance on previous studies of VWM in MS that have used binary (correct/incorrect) measures of recall, such as from change detection tasks, that are not sensitive to the resolution with which features can be recalled, and to use mixture modelling to potentially disentangle different contributions to overall performance. This aim is met in part, but there are some problems with the authors' interpretation of their findings:

- How can the authors be confident the performance deficits in the patient groups are impairments of working memory and not visual or motor in nature? I appreciate there was some kind of clinical screening, but it seems like there should have been a control condition matched to the experimental tasks with only the memory components removed.<br /> - The participant groups are large, which is definitely a strength, but not particularly well-matched in terms of demographics, with notable differences in age (mean and spread), years of education and gender. These could potentially contribute to differences in performance between groups and tasks.<br /> - The authors interpret the mixture model parameter described as "misbinding error" as reflecting failures of feature binding, and propose a link to hippocampus on that basis, however there is now quite strong evidence that these errors (often called swaps) are explained mostly or entirely by imprecision in memory for the cue feature (bar color in this case), e.g. McMaster et al. (2022), already cited in the ms.

The methodology of the ROC analyses should be described in more detail: it is not clear what measures are being used to classify participants or how.

There are a number of unusual choices of terminology that could potentially confuse or mislead the reader:<br /> - The tasks are not "n-Back" tasks by the usual meaning: they are analog report tasks with sequential presentation.<br /> - The terms recall "error","variability", "precision" and "fidelity" are used idiosyncratically. Variability and precision usually refer to the same thing: they describe the dispersion or spread of errors. The measure described as recall error in the sequential tasks is presumably absolute (or unsigned) error. For the mixture model parameters I suggest describing them more explicitly in terms of the mixture attributes, e.g. "Von Mises SD", "Target proportion", "Non-target proportion" "Uniform proportion".

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors applied two visual working memory tasks, a memory-guided localization (MGL), examining short-term memory of the location of an item over a brief interval, and an N-back task, examining orientation of a centrally presented item, in order to test working memory performance in patients with multiple sclerosis (including a subgroup with relapsing-remitting and one with secondary progressive MS), compared with healthy control subjects. The authors used an approach in testing and statistically modelling visual working memory paradigm previously developed by Paul Bays, Masud Husain and colleagues. Such continuous measure approaches make it possible to quantify the precision, or resolution, of working memory, as opposed to measuring working memory using discretised, all-or-none measures.

The authors of the present study found that both MS subgroups performed worse than controls on the N-back task and that only the secondary progressive MS subgroup was significantly impaired on the MGL task. The underlying sources of error including incorrect association of an object's identity with its location or serial order, were also examined.

The application of more precise psychophysiological methods to test visual working memory in multiple sclerosis should be applauded. It has the potential to lead to more sensitive and specific tests which could potentially be used as useful outcome measures in clinical trials of disease modifying drugs, for example.

However, there are some significant limitations which severely affect the scientific validity and interpretability of the study:

a) There is a striking lack of key clinical information. The inclusion and exclusion criteria are unclear and a recruitment flowchart has not been provided. Therefore it is unclear what proportion of MS patients were ineligible due to, for example, visual impairment. Basic clinical data such as EDSS scores, disease duration, treatment history, and performance on standard cognitive testing were not provided. Basic clinical and demographic data for each subgroup were not provided in a clear format. This severely limits the interpretability of the study and its significance for this clinical population. For example, might it be that the SPMS patients performed worse on the MGL task because they were more cognitively impaired than RRMS patients? That question might be easily answered, but the answer is unclear based on the data provided.

b) The study is completely agnostic to the underlying pathophysiology. There is no neuroimaging available, therefore it is unclear how the specific working memory impairments observed might relate to lesioned underlying brain networks which are crucial for specific aspects of working memory. This severely limits the scientific impact of the results. This limitation is acknowledged by the authors, but the authors did not put forward any hypotheses on how their results may be underpinned by the underlying disease processes.

c) The present study does not compare the continuous-report testing with a discrete measure task so it is unclear if the former is more sensitive, or more feasible in this patient group, although this may not have been the purpose of the study.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors investigated the effects of deletion of the ER-plasma membrane/Golgi tethering proteins tricalbins (Tcb1-3) on vacuolar morphology to demonstrate the role of membrane contact sites (MCSs) in regulating vacuolar morphology in Saccharomyces cerevisiae. Their data show that tricalbin deletion causes vacuolar fragmentation possibly in parallel with TORC1 pathway. In addition, their data reveal that levels of various lipids including ceramides, long-chain base (LCB)-1P and phytosphingosine (PHS) are increased in tricalbin-deleted cells. The authors find that exogenously added PHS can induce vacuole fragmentation and by performing analyses of genes involved in sphingolipid metabolism, they conclude that vacuolar fragmentation in tricalbin-deleted cells is due to the accumulated PHS in these cells. Importantly, exogenous PHS- or tricalbin deletion-induced vacuole fragmentation was suppressed by loss of the nucleus vacuole junction (NVJ), suggesting the possibility that PHS transported from the ER to vacuoles via the NVJ triggers vacuole fission.

This work provides valuable insights into the relationship between MCS-mediated sphingolipid metabolism and vacuole morphology. The conclusions of this paper are mostly supported by their results, but there is concern about physiological roles of tricalbins and PHS in regulating vacuole morphology under known vacuole fission-inducing conditions. That is, in this paper it is not addressed whether the functions of tricalbins and PHS levels are controlled in response to osmotic shock, nutrient status, or ER stress.

There is another weakness in their claim that the transmembrane domain of Tcb3 contributes to the formation of the tricalbin complex which is sufficient for tethering ER to the plasma membrane and the Golgi complex. Their claim is based only on the structural simulation, but not on biochemical experiments such as co-immunoprecipitation and pull-down.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The manuscript investigates the role of membrane contact sites (MCSs) and sphingolipid metabolism in regulating vacuolar morphology in the yeast Saccharomyces cerevisiae. The authors show that tricalbin (1-3) deletion leads to vacuolar fragmentation and the accumulation of the sphingolipid phytosphingosine (PHS). They propose that PHS triggers vacuole division through MCSs and the nuclear-vacuolar junction (NVJ). The study presents some solid data and proposes potential mechanisms underlying vacuolar fragmentation driven by this pathway. However, there are some concerns regarding the strength and interpretation of their lipid data, and the robustness of some conclusions. The manuscript would benefit from addressing these concerns and providing more conclusive evidence to support the proposed conclusions. Overall, the study provides valuable insights into the connection between MCSs, lipid metabolism, and vacuole dynamics, but further clarification will be highly valuable to strengthen the conclusions.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This manuscript investigates the mechanism behind the accumulation of phytosphingosine (PHS) and its role in triggering vacuole fission. The study proposes that membrane contact sites (MCSs) are involved in two steps of this process. First, tricalbin-tethered MCSs between the endoplasmic reticulum (ER) and the plasma membrane (PM) or Golgi modulate the intracellular amount of PHS. Second, the accumulated PHS induces vacuole fission, most likely via the nuclear-vacuolar junction (NVJ). The authors suggest that MCSs regulate vacuole morphology through sphingolipid metabolism.<br /> While some of the results in the manuscript are interesting the overall logic is hard to follow. In my assessment of the manuscript, my primary concern lies in its broad conclusions which, in my opinion, exceed the available data and raise doubts. Here are some instances where this comes into play for this manuscript:

2.) Major points for revision

1.) The rationale to start investigating a vacuolar fission phenotype in the beginning is very weak. It is basically based on a negative genetic interaction with NVJ1. Based on this vacuolar fragmentation is quantified. The binning for the quantifications is already problematic as, in my experience, WT cells often harbor one to three vacuoles. How are quantifications looking when 1-3 vacuoles are counted as "normal" and more than 3 vacuoles as "fragmented"? The observed changes seem to be relatively small and the various combinations of TCB mutants do not yield a clear picture.<br /> 2.) The analysis of the structural requirements of the Tcb3 protein is interesting but does not seem to add any additional value to this study. While it was used to quantify the mild vacuolar fragmentation phenotype it does not reoccur in any following analysis. Is the tcb3Δ sufficient to yield the lipid phenotype that is later proposed to cause the vacuolar fragmentation phenotype?<br /> 3.) The quantified lipid data also has several problems. i) The quantified effects are very small. The relative change in lipid levels does not allow any conclusion regarding the phenotypes. What is the change in absolute PHS in the cell. This would be important to know for judging the proposed effects. ii) It seems as if the lipid data is contradictory to the previous study from the lab regarding the role of tricalbins in ceramide transfer. Previously it was shown that ceramides remain unchanged and IPC levels were reduced. This was the rationale for proposing the tricalbins as ceramide transfer proteins between the ER and the mid-Golgi. What could be an explanation for this discrepancy? Does the measurement of PHS after labelling the cells with DHS just reflect differences in the activity of the Sur2 hydroxylase or does it reflect different steady state levels.<br /> 4.) Determining the vacuole fragmentation phenotype of a lag1Δlac1Δ double mutant does not allow the conclusion that elevated PHS levels are responsible for the observed phenotype. This just shows that lag1Δlac1Δ cells have fragmented vacuoles. Can the observed phenotype be rescued by treating the cells with myriocin? What is the growth rate of a LAG1 LAC1 double deletion as this strain has been previously reported to be very sick. Similarly, what is the growth phenotype of the various LCB3 LCB4 and LCB5 deletions and its combinations.<br /> 5.) The model in Figure 3 E proposes that treatment with PHS accumulates PHS in the endoplasmic reticulum. How do the authors know where exogenously added PHS ends up in the cell? It would also be important to determine the steady state levels of sphingolipids after treatment with PHS. Or in other words, how much PHS is taken up by the cells when 40 µM PHS is added?<br /> 6.) Previous studies have observed that myriocin treatment itself results in vacuolar fragmentation (e.g. Hepowit et al. biorXivs 2022, Fröhlich et al. eLife 2015). Why does both, depletion and accumulation of PHS lead to vacuolar fragmentation?<br /> 7.) The experiments regarding the NVJ genes are not conclusive. While the authors mention that a NVJ1/2/3 MDM1 mutant was shown to result in a complete loss of the NVJ the observed effects cannot be simply correlated. It is also not clear why PHS would be transported towards the vacuole. In the cited study (Girik et al.) the authors show PHS transport from the vacuole towards the ER. Here the authors claim that PHS is transported via the NVJ towards the vacuole. Also, the origin of the rationale of this study is the negative genetic interaction of tcb1/2/3Δ with nvj1. This interaction appears to result in a strong growth defect according to the Developmental Cell paper. What are the phenotypes of the mutants used here? Does the additional deletion of NVJ genes or MDM1 results in stronger growth phenotypes?<br /> 8.) As a consequence of the above points, several results are over-interpreted in the discussion. Most important, it is not clear that indeed the accumulation of PHS causes the observed phenotypes.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this study, the authors attempt to describe alterations in gene expression, protein expression, and protein phosphorylation as a consequence of chronic adenylyl cyclase 8 overexpression in a mouse model. This model is claimed to have resilience to cardiac stress.

Major strengths of the study include 1) the large dataset generated which will have utility for further scientific inquiry for the authors and others in the field, 2) the innovative approach of using cross-analyses linking transcriptomic data to proteomic and phosphoproteomic data. One weakness is the lack of a focused question and clear relevance to human disease. These are all critical biological pathways that the authors are studying and essentially, they have compiled a database that could be surveyed to generate and test future hypotheses.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this study, the investigators describe an unbiased phosphoproteomic analysis of cardiac-specific overexpression of adenylyl cyclase type 8 (TGAC8) mice that was then integrated with transcriptomic and proteomic data. The phosphoproteomic analysis was performed using tandem mass tag-labeling mass spectrometry of left ventricular (LV) tissue in TGAC8 and wild-type mice. The initial principal component analysis showed differences between the TGAC8 and WT groups. The integrated analysis demonstrated that many stress-response, immune, and metabolic signaling pathways were activated at transcriptional, translational, and/or post-translational levels.

The authors are to be commended for a well-conducted study with quality control steps described for the various analyses. The rationale for following up on prior transcriptomic and proteomic analyses is described. The analysis appears thorough and well-integrated with the group's prior work. Confirmational data using Western blot is provided to support their conclusions. Their findings have the potential of identifying novel pathways involved in cardiac performance and cardioprotection.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors aim to develop an easy-to-use image analysis tool for the mother machine that is used for single-cell time-lapse imaging. Compared with related software, they tried to make this software more user-friendly for non-experts with a design of "What You Put Is What You Get". This software is implemented as a plugin of Napari, which is an emerging microscopy image analysis platform. The users can interactively adjust the parameters in the pipeline with good visualization and interaction interface.

Strengths:<br /> - Updated platform with great 2D/3D visualization and annotation support.<br /> - Integrated one-stop pipeline for mather machine image processing.<br /> - Interactive user-friendly interface.<br /> - The users can have a visualization of intermediate results and adjust the parameters.

Weaknesses:<br /> - Based on the presentation of the manuscript, it is not clear that the goals are fully achieved.<br /> - Although there is great potential, there is little evidence that this tool has been adopted by other labs.<br /> - The comparison of Otsu and U-Net results does not make much sense to me. The systematic bias could be adjusted by threshold change. The U-Net output is a probability map with floating point numbers. This output is probably thresholded to get a binary mask, which is not mentioned in the manuscript. This threshold could also be adjusted. Actually, Otsu is a segmentation method and U-Net is an image transformation method and they should not be compared together. U-Net output could also be segmented using Otsu.<br /> - The diversity of datasets used in this study is limited.

- There is some ambiguity in the main point of this manuscript, the title and figures illustrate a complete pipeline, including imaging, image segmentation, and analysis. While the abstract focus only on the software MM3. If only MM3 is the focus and contribution of this manuscript, more presentations should focus on this software tool. It is also not clear whether the analysis features are also integrated with MM3 or not.

- The impact of this work depends on the adoption of the software MM3. Napari is a promising platform with expanding community. With good software user experience and long-term support, there is a good chance that this tool could be widely adopted in the mother machine image analysis community.<br /> - The data analysis in this manuscript is used as a demo of MM3 features, rather than scientific research.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors present an image-analysis pipeline for mother-machine data, i.e., for time-lapses of single bacterial cells growing for many generations in one-dimensional microfluidic channels. The pipeline is available as a plugin of the python-based image-analysis platform Napari. The tool comes with two different previously published methods to segment cells (classical image transformation and thresholding as well as UNet-based analysis), which compare qualitatively and quantitatively well with the results of widely accessible tools developed by others (BACNET, DelTA, Omnipose). The tool comes with a graphical user interface and example scripts, which should make it valuable for other mother-machine users, even if this has not been demonstrated yet.

The authors also add a practical overview of how to prepare and conduct mother-machine experiments, citing their previous work and giving more advice on how to load cells using centrifugation. However, the latter part lacks detailed instructions.

Finally, the authors emphasize that machine-learning methods for image segmentation reproduce average quantities of training datasets, such as the length at birth or division. Therefore, differences in training can propagate to difference in measured average quantities. This result is not surprising and is normally considered a desired property of any machine-learning algorithm as also commented on below.

Points for improvement:<br /> Different datasets: The authors demonstrate the use of their method for bacteria growing in different growth conditions in their own microscope. However, they don't provide details on whether they had to adjust image-analysis parameters for each dataset. Similarly, they say that their method also works for other organisms including yeast and C. elegans (as part of the Results section) but they don't show evidence nor do they write whether the method needs to be tuned/trained for those datasets. Finally, they don't demonstrate that their method works on data from other labs, which might be different due to differences in setup or imaging conditions.

Bias due to training sets:<br /> The bias in ML-methods based on training datasets is not surprising but arguably a desired property of those methods. Similarly, threshold-based classical segmentation methods are biased by the choice of threshold values and other segmentation parameters. A point that would have profited from discussion in this regard: How to make image segmentation unbiased, that is, how to deliver physical cell boundaries? This can be done by image simulations and/or by comparison with alternative methods such as fluorescence microscopy.

The authors stress the user-friendliness of their method in comparison to others. For example, they write: 'Unfortunately, many of these tools present a steep learning curve for most biologists, as they require familiarity with command line tools, programming, and image analysis methods.' I suggest to instead emphasize that many of the tools published in recent years are designed to be very use friendly. And as will all methods, MM3 also comes at a prize, which is to install Napari followed by the installation of MM3, which, according to their own instructions, is not easy either.

Joint Public Review:

The objectives of the study:

This paper aims to characterize the dynamics that drive allostery of the adenosine A1 receptor (A1R) via computational analysis of its activation free energy landscape and measurements of the appropriate geometrical parameters. This is done by focusing on the allosteric signaling pathways in different activation states, from inactive to active states via intermediate and pre-active ones, as well as the characterization of putative drug-binding pockets. The long-term objectives are to eventually be able to aid drug discovery efforts for this therapeutically important<br /> GPCR.

Key findings and major conclusions:

Conventional MD does not enable the sampling of the complete conformational landscape of receptor activation. Instead, enhanced sampling MD simulations are required to achieve this. Using metadynamics, the authors decipher the activation pathway of A1R, decode the allosteric networks and identify transient pockets. The protein energy networks computed throughout the inactive, intermediate active, pre-active and active conformational states unravel the extra and intracellular allosteric centers and the communication pathways that couple them, whereby the pathways are reinforced in the activated state. These conformations primarily differ in the dynamics of the ionic lock motif that couples TM3 to TM6 in the inactive conformation and reveal that G-proteins are required to fully stabilize the active conformation. Support for these findings comes from prior mutagenesis work on the A1R that identified key allosteric residues that in many cases map to identified communication nodes. Finally, the authors identified allosteric pockets throughout the A1R in four different conformational states that support prior experimental and MD studies on the mechanism of the positive allosteric modulator MIPS521 and which could be targeted for the design of new modulators. This indicates how energy networks are enhanced and redistributed by allosteric modulators and how this might explain their effect on receptor activity. Overall, these findings provide complementary support to a structure-based mechanism of activation and allosteric modulation of A1R, and extend the findings to incorporate dynamics across the full activation pathway.

The perceived strengths and weaknesses:

This preprint employs a combination of computational techniques to successfully reconstruct and analyze the conformational ensemble of the A1R activation. The metadynamics simulations supported the aim of the study, the results are clearly presented, and the work is very well written. The authors provide a valuable discussion of how the protein energy network analysis can contribute to the rational design of specific A1R modulators with desired mode of action. The employed computational approach does not capture communication pathways that involve water-mediated connections or interactions between ligands and residues. Moreover, full convergence of the free energy landscapes is not guaranteed. Overall, A1R is a good choice as the target for this study as there is existing structural and pharmacological data to support preliminary findings. Moreover, the framework presented herein could be adapted and scaled to other GPCRs with structural templates, which might enable comparison of allosteric pathways across families and classes.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

DMRT1 is essential in testis development in different species. While Dmrt1 is the testis-determining factor in chicken and deletion encompassing this gene lead to gonadal dysgenesis in human, the role of DMRT1 in testis development remains to be clarified. Despite an early expression of Dmrt1 in the mouse gonad and a potential function as a pioneer factor, DMRT1 is only required for the maintenance of the Sertoli cell identity in the postnatal testis. The use of a new animal model could provide new insights into the role of this factor in humans. Here the authors have generated a knockout model of DMRT1 in rabbits. They show that the XY mutant gonads differentiate as ovary indicating that DMRT1 is required for testis differentiation in rabbits. In addition, most of the germ cells remain pluripotent as evidenced by the maintenance of POU5F1 in both XY and XX mutant gonads. These are very important results potentially explaining gonadal dysgenesis associated with the DMRT1 locus in disorders of sex development in humans.

The experiments are meticulous and convincing. I find the arguments of the authors about the role of DMRT1 in germ cells in addition to its function in Sertoli cell differentiation, both comprehensible and compelling. Clearly, this is an important insight in sex determination and gametogenesis.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

It is well known that DMRT proteins and more specifically, DMRT1 plays a key role in sex determination processes of many species. While DMRT1 has been shown to be critical for the sex determination of fish, birds, and reptiles, it seems less crucial at the sex determination stages of the mice. It is important though for adult sex maintenance in mice.

Unlike its minor role in mouse sex determination, it seems that variants in DMRT1 in humans cause 46, XY DSD and sex reversal.

The paper by Dujardin et al., is a beautiful study that provides an answer to this long-lasting discrepancy of the difference between the two common mammal species: human and mouse. It is a really nice example of how working with other mammal species, like the rabbit, could serve as a nice model for understanding mammalian sex determination.

In this study the researchers first described the expression patterns of DMRT1 in the rabbit XY and XX gonads throughout the window of sex determination.

They then used CRISPR/Cas9 to generate DMRT1 KO rabbits and analysed the phenotype in XY and XX rabbits. They show that XY rabbits present with complete XY male-to-female sex reversal, very similar to what was observed in human 46, XY DSD patients (but not the mice model). They further show that in the XY sex-reversed gonads, germ cells fail to enter meiosis. They next analysed XX gonads and while there is no major effect on sex determination (as expected), the germ cells in these ovaries fail to enter meiosis, highlighting the critical role that DMRT1 has in germ cells.

I think it is really important that we start to embrace other mammal models that are not the mouse as we find many instances that the mouse is not the optimal system for understanding human sex determination. The study is well explained and presented. The data is clear, and the paper is fluent to read.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

This manuscript deals with the sex-related gene, DMRT1, showing that it has a testis-promoting function in the rabbit. In loss-of-function studies in the mouse and human, DMRT1 has a role in testis maintenance after birth, although forced expression in the mouse can induce testis formation.

The authors used CRISPR/Cas9 genome editing to generate DMRT1-/- rabbit embryos. The gonads of these embryos developed as ovaries. Interestingly, in addition Y-linked SRY, DMRT1 is required for timely up-regulation of SOX9 during Sertoli cell differentiation in the male gonad. This is quite different to the situation in mice, where Dmrt1 is not required in the testis until after birth (and Sry induced up-regulation of Sox9 hence does not require Dmrt1).

The work adds to the field of sex determination by further broadening our understanding of the DMRT1 gene and the evolution of gonadal sex determination.

In the Discussion section, it is suggested that DMRT1 could act as a pioneering factor to allow SRY action upon Sox9 in the rabbit model. The data show that DMRT1 may be more central to testis formation in mammals than previously considered. The work supports the notion that our understanding that the genetics of gonadal development (and indeed development more generally) should not rest solely on findings in the mouse.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Summary<br /> While DNA sequence divergence, differential expression, and differential methylation analysis have been conducted between humans and the great apes to study changes that "make us human", the role of lncRNAs and their impact on the human genome and biology has not been fully explored. In this study, the authors computationally predict HSlncRNAs as well as their DNA Binding sites using a method they have developed previously and then examine these predicted regions with different types of enrichment analyses. Broadly, the analysis is straightforward and after identifying these regions/HSlncRNAs the authors examined their effects using different external datasets.

Strengths/weaknesses<br /> By and large, the analysis performed is dependent on their ability to identify HSlncRNAs and their DBS. I think that they have done a good job of showing the performance metrics of their methods in previous publications. Thereafter, they perform a series of enrichment-type analyses that have been used in the field for quite a while now to look at tissue-specific enrichment, or region-specific enrichment, or functional enrichment, and I think these have been carried out well. The authors achieved the aims of their work. I think one of the biggest contributions that this paper brings to the field is their annotation of these HSlncRNAs. Thus a major revisionary effort could be spent on applying their method to the latest genomes that have been released so that the community could get a clean annotation of newly identified HSlncRNAs (see comment 2).

Comments<br /> 1) Though some of their results about certain HSlncRNAs having DBSs in all genes is rather surprising/suspicious, I think that broadly their process to identify and validate DBSs is robust, they have multiple lines of checks to identify such regions, including functional validation. These predictions are bound to have some level of false positive/negative rate and it might be nice to restate those here and on what experiment/validation data these were conducted. However, the rest of their analysis comprises different types of enrichment analysis which shouldn't be affected by outlier HSlncRNAs if indeed their FPR/FNR are low.

2) There are now several new genomes available as part of the Zoonomia consortium and 240 Primate consortium papers released. These papers have re-examined some annotations such as Human Accelerated Regions (HARs) and found with a larger dataset as well as better reference genomes, that a large fraction of HARs were actually incorrectly annotated - that is that they were also seen in other lineages outside of just the great apes. If these papers have not already examined HSlncRNAs, the authors should try and re-run the computational predictions with this updated set and then identify HSlncRNAs there. This might help to clarify their signal and remove lncRNAs that might be present in other primates but are somehow missing in the great apes. This might also help to mitigate some results that they see in section 3 of their paper in comparing DBS distances between archaics and humans.

3) The differences between the archaic hominins in their DBS distances to modern humans are a bit concerning. At some level, we expect these to be roughly similar when examining African modern humans and perhaps the Denisovan being larger when examining Europeans and Asians, but they seem to have distances that aren't expected given the demography. In addition, from their text for section 3, they begin by stating that they are computing two types of distances but then I lost track of which distance they were discussing in paragraph 3 of section 3. Explicitly stating which of the two distances in the text would be helpful for the reader.

4) Isn't the correct control to examine whether eQTLs are more enriched in HSlncRNA DBSs a set of transcription factor binding sites? I don't think using just promoter regions is a reasonable control here. This does not take away from the broader point however that eQTLs are found in DBSs and I think they can perform this alternate test.

5) In the discussion, they highlight the evolution of sugar intake, which I'm not sure is appropriate. This comes not from GO enrichment but rather from a few genes that are found at the tail of their distribution. While these signals may be real, the evolution of traits is often highly polygenic and they don't see this signal in their functional enrichment. I suggest removing that line. Moreover, HSlncRNAs are ones that are unique across a much longer time frame than the transition to agriculture which is when sugar intake rose greatly. Thus, it's unlikely to see enrichment for something that arose in the past 6000-7000 years would in the annotation that is designed to detect human-chimp or human-neanderthal level divergence.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Lin et al attempt to examine the role of lncRNAs in human evolution in this manuscript. They apply a suite of population genetics and functional genomics analyses that leverage existing data sets and public tools, some of which were previously built by the authors, who clearly have experience with lncRNA binding prediction. However, I worry that there is a lack of suitable methods and/or relevant controls at many points and that the interpretation is too quick to infer selection. While I don't doubt that lnc RNAs contribute to the evolution of modern humans, and certainly agree that this is a question worth asking, I think this paper would benefit from a more rigorous approach to tackling it.

At this point, my suggestions are mostly focused on tightening and strengthening the methods; it is hard for me to predict the consequence of these changes on the results or their interpretation, but as a general rule I also encourage the authors to not over-interpret their conclusions in terms of what phenotype was selected for when as they do at certain points (eg glucose metabolism).

I note some specific points that I think would benefit from more rigorous approaches, and suggest possible ways forward for these.

1. Much of this work is focused on comparing DNA binding domains in human-unique long-noncoding RNAs and DNA binding sites across the promoters of genes in the human genome, and I think the authors can afford to be a bit more methodical/selective in their processing and filtering steps here. The article begins by searching for orthologues of human lncRNAs to arrive at a set of 66 human-specific lncRNAs, which are then characterised further through the rest of the manuscript. Line 99 describes a binding affinity metric used to separate strong DBS from weak DBS; the methods (line 432) describe this as being the product of the DBS or lncRNA length times the average Identity of the underlying TTSs. This multiplication, in fact, undoes the standardising value of averaging and introduces a clear relationship between the length of a region being tested and its overall score, which in turn is likely to bias all downstream inference, since a long lncRNA with poor average affinity can end up with a higher score than a short one with higher average affinity, and it's not quite clear to me what the biological interpretation of that should be. Why was this metric defined in this way?

2. There is also a strong assumption that identified sites will always be bound (line 100), which I disagree is well-supported by additional evidence (lines 109-125). The authors show that predicted NEAT1 and MALAT1 DBS overlap experimentally validated sites for NEAT1, MALAT1, and MEG3, but this is not done systematically, or genome-wide, so it's hard to know if the examples shown are representative, or a best-case scenario.

It's also not quite clear how overlapping promoters or TSS are treated - are these collapsed into a single instance when calculating genome-wide significance? If, eg, a gene has five isoforms, and these differ in the 3' UTR but their promoter region contains a DBS, is this counted five times, or one? Since the interaction between the lncRNA and the DBS happens at the DNA level, it seems like not correcting for this uneven distribution of transcripts is likely to skew results, especially when testing against genome-wide distributions, eg in the results presented in sections 5 and 6. I do not think that comparing genes and transcripts putatively bound by the 40 HS lncRNAs to a random draw of 10,000 lncRNA/gene pairs drawn from the remaining ~13500 lncRNAs that are not HS is a fair comparison. Rather, it would be better to do many draws of 40 non-HS lncRNAs and determine an empirical null distribution that way, if possible actively controlling for the overall number of transcripts (also see the following point).

3. Thresholds for statistical testing are not consistent, or always well justified. For instance, in line 142 GO testing is performed on the top 2000 genes (according to different rankings), but there's no description of the background regions used as controls anywhere, or of why 2000 genes were chosen as a good number to test? Why not 1000, or 500? Are the results overall robust to these (and other) thresholds? Then line 190 the threshold for downstream testing is now the top 20% of genes, etc. I am not opposed to different thresholds in principle, but they should be justified.

Likewise, comparing Tajima's D values near promoters to genome-wide values is unfair, because promoters are known to be under strong evolutionary constraints relative to background regions; as such it is not surprising that the results of this comparison are significant. A fairer comparison would attempt to better match controls (eg to promoters without HS lncRNA DBS, which I realise may be nearly impossible), or generate empirical p-values via permutation or simulation.

4. There are huge differences in the comparisons between the Vindija and Altai Neanderthal genomes that to me suggest some sort of technical bias or the such is at play here. e.g. line 190 reports 1256 genes to have a high distance between the Altai Neanderthal and modern humans, but only 134 Vindija genes reach the same cutoff of 0.034. The temporal separation between the two specimens does not seem sufficient to explain this difference, nor the difference between the Altai Denisovan and Neanderthal results (2514 genes for Denisovan), which makes me wonder if it is a technical artefact relating to the quality of the genome builds? It would be worth checking.

5. Inferring evolution: There are some points of the manuscript where the authors are quick to infer positive selection. I would caution that GTEx contains a lot of different brain tissues, thus finding a brain eQTL is a lot easier than finding a liver eQTL, just because there are more opportunities for it. Likewise, claims in the text and in Tables 1 and 2 about the evolutionary pressures underlying specific genes should be more carefully stated. The same is true when the authors observe high Fst between groups (line 515), which is only one possible cause of high Fst - population differentiation and drift are just as capable of giving rise to it, especially at small sample sizes.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In order to find small molecules capable of enhancing regenerative repair, this study employed a high throughput YAP-activity screen method to query the ReFRAME library, identifying CLK2 inhibitor as one of the hits. Further studies showed that CLK2 inhibition leads to AMOTL2 exon skipping, rendering it unable to suppress YAP.

The novelty of the study is that it showed that inhibition of a kinase not previously associated with the HIPPO pathway can influence YAP activity through modification of mRNA splicing. The major arguments appear solid.

There are several noteworthy points when assessing the results. In Figure S1C, 100nM drug was toxic to cells at 72 hours and 1nM drug suppressed cell proliferation by 60%. Yet such concentrations were used in Figure 1B and C to argue CLK2 inhibition liberates YAP activity (which one would assume will increase cellular proliferation). In Figure 1C it appears that 1nM drug treatment led to some kind of cellular stress, as cells are visibly enlarged. In Figure 1D, 1nM drug, which would have suppressed cell growth by 60%, did not affect YAP phosphorylation. Taken together, it appears even though CLK2 inhibitor (at high concentrations) liberates YAP activity, its toxicity may override the potential use of this drug as a YAP-activator to salve tissue regenerative repair, which was one of the goals hinted in the background section.

In Figure 2D, at 100nM concentration, the drug did not appear to affect AMOTL2 splicing. Even though at higher concentrations it did, this potentially put into question whether YAP activity liberated by this drug at 1nM (Fig 2A), 10-50nM (Fig 2C) concentrations is caused by altered AMOTL2 splicing. Discussions should be provided on the difference in drug concentrations in these experiments. Does the drug decay very fast, and is that why later studies required higher dose?

Likely impact of the work on the field: this study presented a high throughput screen method for YAP activators and showed that such an approach works. The hit compound found from ReFRAME library, a CLK2 inhibitor, may not be actually useful as a YAP activator, given its clear toxicity. Applying this screen method on other large compound libraries may help find a YAP activator that helps regenerative repair. The finding that CLK2 inhibition could alter AMOTL2 splicing to affect HIPPO pathway could bring a new angle to understanding the regulation of HIPPO pathway.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors have screened the ReFRAME library and identified candidate small molecules that can activate YAP. The found that SM04690, an inhibitor of the WNT signaling pathway, could efficiently activate YAP through CLK2 kinase which has been shown to phosphorylate SR proteins to alter gene alternative splicing. They further demonstrated that SM04690 mediated alternative splicing of AMOTL2 and rendered it unlocalized on the membrane. Alternatively spliced AMOTL2 prevented YAP from anchoring to the cell membrane which results in decreased YAP phosphorylation and activated YAP. Previous findings showed that WNT signaling more or less activate YAP. The authors revealed that an inhibitor of WNT siganaling could activate YAP. Thus, these findings are potentially interesting and important. However, the present manuscript provided a lot of indirect data and lacked key experiments.

Major points:<br /> 1. In Figure S3, since inhibition of CLK2 resulted in extensive changes in alternative splicing, why did the authors choose AMOTL2? How to exclude other factors such as EEF1A1 and HSPA5, do they affect YAP activation? Angiomotin-related AMOTL1 and AMOTL2 were identified as negative regulators of YAP and TAZ by preventing their nuclear translocation. It has been reported that high cell density promoted assembly of the Crumbs complex, which recruited AMOTL2 to tight junctions. Ubiquitination of AMOTL2 K347 and K408 served as a docking site for LATS2, which phosphorylated YAP to promote its cytoplasmic retention and degradation. How to determine that alternative splicing rather than ubiquitination of AMOTL2 affects YAP activity? Does AMOTL2 Δ5 affect the ubiquitination of AMOTL2? Does overexpression of AMOTL2 Δ5Δ9 cause YAP and puncta to co-localize?<br /> 2. The author proposed that AMOTL2 splicing isoform formed biomolecular condensates,.However, there was no relevant experimental data to support this conclusion. AMOTL2 is located not only on the cell membrane but also on the circulating endosome of the cell, and the puncta formed after AMOTL2 dissociation from the membrane is likely to be the localization of the circulating endosome. The author should co-stain AMOTL2 with markers of circulating endosomes, or conduct experiments to prove the liquidity of puncta to verify the phase separation of AMOTL2 splicing isoform.<br /> 3. The localization of YAP in cells is regulated by cell density, and YAP usually translocates to the nucleus at low cell density. In Figure 2E, the cell densities of DMSO and SM04690-treated groups are inconsistent. In Figure 4A, the magnification of t DMSO and SM04690-treated groups is inconsistent, and the SM04690-treated group seems to have a higher magnification.<br /> 4. There have been many reports that the WNT signaling pathway and the Hippo signaling pathway can crosstalk with each other. The authors should exclude the influence of the WNT signaling pathway by using SM04690.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

This study on drug repurposing presents the identification of potent activators of the Hippo pathway. The authors successfully screen a drug library and identify two CLK kinase inhibitors as YAP activators, with SM04690 targeting specifically CLK2. They further investigate the molecular basis of SM04690-induced YAP activity and identify splicing events in AMOTL2 as strongly affected by CLK2 inhibition. Exon skipping within AMOTL2 decreases the interactions with membrane bound proteins and is sufficient to induce YAP target gene expression. Overall the study is well designed, the conclusions are supported by sufficient data and represent an exciting connection between alternative splicing and the HIPPO pathway. The specificity of the inhibitor towards CLK2 and the mode of action via AMOTL2 could be supported by further data:

1. The inconsistent inhibitor concentrations and varying results reported in the paper can be distracting. For instance, the response of endogenous targets to 100 nM concentration is described as a >5-fold increase in Figure 2B, whereas it is reported as a 1-1.5-fold response to 1000 nM in Figure 2D. This inconsistency should be addressed and clarified to provide a more accurate and reliable representation of the findings.<br /> 2. In the absence of a strong inhibitor induced YAP target gene expression (Figure 2D), it is difficult to conclude the dependency on YAP expression, as investigated by siRNA mediated knockdown. In a similar experiment, the dependency of the inhibitor on CLK2 expression could be confirmed<br /> 3. To further support the conclusion that CLK2 is the direct target of SM04690, it would be informative to investigate the effects of CLK1/4 inhibition on AMOTL2 exons (for example within RNA-seq data). If CLK1/4 inhibitors do not induce changes in AMOTL2 exons, it would strengthen the evidence for CLK2's role as the direct target. Including the results in the discussion would enhance the comprehensiveness of the study.<br /> 4. It would be important to determine the specific dose of SM04690 required to induce changes in AMOTL2 splicing. The authors observe that AMOTL2 protein levels appear unaffected at doses below 50 nM in Figure 3D, while YAP target genes are already affected at 20 nM in Figure 3G. Although Western blotting may not be the most sensitive method to detect minor changes in splicing, performing PCR experiments at lower doses could provide more insight into the splicing changes. Therefore, it is suggested that the authors include PCR experiments at lower doses to determine if changes in splicing are visible and to better establish the relationship between splicing and gene expression changes.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

As a pathogen, S. aureus has evolved strategies to evade the host's immune system. It effectively remains 'under the radar' in the host until it reaches high population densities, at which point it triggers virulence mechanisms, enabling it to spread within the host. The agr quorum sensing system is central to this process, as it coordinates the pathogen's virulence network in response to its cell density. When a threshold cell density (quorum) is reached, individual cells in the population detect the quorum peptide (AgrD). This activates the Agr two-component system comprising of a histidine kinase (AgrC) and response regulator (AgrA), leading to the expression of exoenzymes and toxins that facilitate the pathogenicity of S. aureus.<br /> However, previous research has indicated that oxidative stress can possibly bypass agr quorum signaling and inhibit agr-dependent gene expression. Specifically, when exposed to high concentrations of hydrogen peroxide (H2O2), the redox-sensitive cysteines in AgrA can form an intramolecular disulfide bond, preventing AgrA from binding to DNA and initiating gene expression. Moreover, another study has shown that cells which have responded to the quorum peptide are vulnerable to oxidative damage. This damage is mediated by PSM toxins that are produced by quorum peptide responders. Consequently, this oxidative stress leads to the selection of agr mutants that are better adapted to growth in oxygen-rich environments and can exploit the benefits of the products released by the quorum-responding cells.

Given this sensitivity of the agr system to oxidative modification and the fitness cost arising from PSM expression, it raises a pertinent question: how do cells with a functional agr quorum sensing system persist within the population under conditions of oxidative stress without being overtaken by agr mutants? The current study by Podkowik et al. offers a plausible explanation. It suggests that cells that respond to the quorum peptide may be primed against oxidative stress by activating intrinsic mechanisms that reduce not only the endogenous production of harmful ROS but also mitigate their adverse effects on the cell, thus providing a unique benefit to cells that maintain an active agr system. Interestingly, these protective mechanisms are long-lived, and safeguard the cells against external oxidative stressors such as H2O2, even after the agr system has been deactivated in the population.

In their study, the authors present compelling evidence that supports the role of agr in shielding S. aureus from lethal H2O2 stress, and they establish that this protection is connected to the activation of agr-dependent RNAIII and the subsequent block of Rot translation. Importantly, the protective mechanisms that are activated persist throughout growth and provide S. aureus with defense against the host's ROS in a murine intraperitoneal infection model.

However, the study falls short in elucidating the specific intrinsic mechanisms responsible for this long-lasting protection against external ROS. While the authors infer that agr mutants, which are more vulnerable to external H2O2, display an increased respiratory activity and gene expression profile associated with aerobic fermentation, it remains ambiguous whether controlling these mechanisms alone can confer extended protection from external H2O2 in an aerobic environment. Further research is needed to confirm this hypothesis.

In summary, this study reveals that the agr quorum sensing system's role in relation to ROS is multifaceted and more complex than previously thought, as it orchestrates a balance between mechanisms that both induce and mitigate endogenous ROS, ultimately contributing to the pathogenesis of S. aureus.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In their study, Podkowik et al. elucidate the protective role of the accessory gene regulator (agr) system in Staphylococcus aureus against hydrogen peroxide (H2O2) stress. Their findings demonstrate that agr safeguards the bacterium by controlling the accumulation of reactive oxygen species (ROS), independent of agr activation kinetics. This protection is facilitated through a regulatory interaction between RNAIII and Rot, impacting virulence factor production and metabolism, thereby influencing ROS levels. Notably, the study highlights the remarkable adaptive capabilities of S. aureus conferred by agr. The protective effects of agr extend beyond the peak of agr transcription at high cell density, persisting even during the early log-phase. This indicates the significance of agr-mediated protection throughout the infection process. The absence of agr has profound consequences, as observed by the upregulation of respiration and fermentation genes, leading to increased ROS generation and subsequent cellular demise. Interestingly, the study also reveals divergent effects of agr deficiency on susceptibility to hydrogen peroxide compared to ciprofloxacin. While agr deficiency heightens vulnerability to H2O2, it also upregulates the expression of bsaA, countering the endogenous ROS induced by ciprofloxacin. These findings underscore the complex and context-dependent nature of agr-mediated protection. Furthermore, in vivo investigations using murine models provide valuable insights into the importance of agr in promoting S. aureus fitness, particularly in the context of neutrophil-mediated clearance, with notable emphasis on the pulmonary milieu. Overall, this study significantly advances our understanding of agr-mediated protection in S. aureus and sheds light on the sophisticated adaptive mechanisms employed by the bacterium to fortify itself against oxidative stress encountered during infection.

The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by the data; however, certain aspects regarding the impact of agr loss on bacterial metabolic status require additional experimental clarification.

1) The RNA-seq analysis revealed that the Δagr strain exhibited increased expression of genes involved in respiration and fermentation, suggesting enhanced energy generation. However, metabolic modeling based on transcriptomic data indicated a decrease in tricarboxylic acid (TCA) cycle and lactate flux per unit of glucose uptake in the Δagr mutant. Additionally, intracellular ATP levels were significantly lower in the Δagr mutant compared to the wild-type strain, despite the carbon being directed into an acetate-generating, ATP-yielding carbon "overflow" pathway. Furthermore, growth analysis in nutrient-constrained medium demonstrated a decrease in the growth rate and yield of the Δagr mutant. Given that S. aureus actively utilizes the electron transport chain (ETC) to replenish NAD pools during aerobic growth on glucose, supporting glycolytic flux and pyruvate dehydrogenase complex (PDHC) activity while restricting TCA cycle activity through carbon catabolite repression (CCR), it is suggested that the authors analyze glucose consumption rates in conjunction with the determination of intracellular levels of pyruvate, AcCoA, and TCA cycle intermediates such as citrate and fumarate. These additional experiments will provide valuable insights into the metabolic fate of glucose and pyruvate and their subsequent impact on cellular respiration and fermentation in the Δagr mutant.

2) The authors highlighted the importance of redox balance in Δagr cells by emphasizing the tendency of these cells to prioritize NAD+-generating lactate production over generating additional ATP from acetate. However, the results regarding acetate and lactate production in Δagr cells during aerobic growth suggest that carbon is directed towards acetate generation rather than lactate.

3) The authors mentioned that respiration and fermentation typically reduce the NAD+/NADH ratios, and since these activities are elevated in Δagr strains (Figure 5F-G), they initially anticipated a lower NAD+/NADH ratio compared to wild-type agr cells. However, the increase in respiration and activation of fermentative pathways leads to a decrease in NADH levels, therefore resulting in an increase in the NAD+/NADH ratio.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Sun and co-authors have determined the crystal structures of EHEP with/without phlorotannin analog, TNA, and akuBGL. Using the akuBGL apo structure, they also constructed model structures of akuBGL with phlorotannins (inhibitor) and laminarins (substrate) by docking calculation. They clearly showed the effects of TNA on akuBGL activity with/without EHEP and resolubilization of the EHEP-phlorotannin (eckol) precipitate under alkaline conditions (pH >8). Based on this knowledge, they propose the molecular mechanism of the akuBGL-phlorotannin/laminarin-EHEP system at the atomic level. Their proposed mechanism is useful for further understanding of the defensive-offensive association between algae and herbivores. However, there are several concerns, especially about structural information, that authors should address.

1. TNA binding to EHEP<br /> The electron densities could not show the exact conformations of the five gallic acids of TNA, as the authors mentioned in the manuscript. On the other hand, the authors describe and discuss the detailed interaction between EHEP and TNA based on structural information. The above seems contradictory. In addition, the orientation of TNA, especially the core part, in Fig. 4 and PDB (8IN6) coordinates seem inconsistent. The authors should redraw Fig. 4 and revise the description accordingly to be slightly more qualitative.

2. Two domains of akuBGL<br /> The authors concluded that only the GH1D2 domain affects its catalytic activity from a detailed structural comparison and the activity of recombinant GH1D1. That conclusion is probably reasonable. However, the recombinant GH1D2 (or GH1D1+GH1D2) and inactive mutants are essential to reliably substantiate conclusions. The authors failed to overexpress recombinant GH1D2 using the E. coli expression system. Have the authors tried GH1D1+GH1D2 expression and/or other expression systems?

3. Inhibitor binding of akuBGL<br /> The authors constructed the docking structure of GH1D2 with TNA, phloroglucinol, and eckol because they could not determine complex structures by crystallography. The molecular weight of akuBGL would also allow structure determination by cryo-EM, but have the authors tried it? In addition, the authors describe and discuss the detailed interaction between GH1D2 and TNA/phloroglucinol/eckol based on docking structures. The authors should describe the accuracy of the docking structures in more detail, or in more qualitative terms if difficult.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this study the authors try to understand the interaction of a 110 kDa ß-glucosidase from the mollusk Aplysia kurodai, named akuBGL, with its substrate, laminarin, the main storage polysaccharide in brown algae. On the other hand, brown algae produce phlorotannin, a secondary metabolite that inhibits akuBGL. The authors study the interaction of phlorotannin with the protein EHEP, which protects akuBGL from phlorotannin by sequestering it in an insoluble complex.

The strongest aspect of this study is the outstanding crystallographic structures they obtained, including akuBGL (TNA soaked crystal) structure at 2.7 Å resolution, EHEP structure at 1.15 Å resolution, EHEP-TNA complex at 1.9 Å resolution, and phloroglucinol soaked EHEP structure at 1.4 Å resolution. EHEP structure is a new protein fold, constituting the major contribution of the study.

The drawback on EHEP structure is that protein purification, crystallization, phasing and initial model building were published somewhere else by the authors, so this structure is incremental research and not new.

Most of the conclusions are derived from the analysis of the crystallographic structures. Some of them are supported by other experimental data, but remain incomplete. The impossibility to obtain recombinant samples, implying that no mutants can be tested, makes it difficult to confirm some of the claims, especially about the substrate binding and the function of the two GH1Ds from akuBGL.

The authors hypothesize from their structure that the interaction of EHEP with phlorotannins might be pH dependent. Then they succeed to confirm their hypothesis, showing they can recover EHEP from precipitates at alkaline pH, and that the recovered EHEP can be reutilized.

A weakness in the model is raised by the fact that the stoichiometry of the complex EHEP:TNA is proposed to be 1:1, but in Figure 1 they show that 4 µM of EHEP protects akuBGL from 40 µM TNA, meaning EHEP sequesters more TNA than expected, this should be addressed in the manuscript.

The authors study the interaction of akuBGL with different ligands using docking. This technique is good for understanding the possible interaction between the two molecules but should not be used as evidence of binding affinity. This implies that the claims about the different binding affinities between laminarin and the inhibitors should be taken out of the preprint.

In the discussion section there is a mistake in the text that contradicts the results. It is written "EHEP-TNA could not dissolve in the buffer of pH > 8.0" but the result obtained is the opposite, the precipitate dissolved at alkaline pH.

Solving a new protein fold, as the authors report for EHEP, is relevant to the community because it contributes to the understanding of protein folding. The study is also relevant dew to the potential biotechnological application of the system in biofuel production. The understanding on how an enzyme as akuBGL can discriminate between substrates is important for the manipulation of such enzyme in terms of improving its activity or changing its specificity. The authors also provide with preliminary data that can be used by others to produce the proteins described or to design a strategy to recover EHEP from precipitates with phlorotannin at industrial scales.

In general methods are not carefully described, the section should be extended to improve the manuscript.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Sun et al. reveals several crystal structures that help underpin the offensive-defensive relationship between the sea slug Aplysia kurodai and algae. These centre on TNA (a algal glycosyl hydrolase inhibitor), EHEP (a slug protein that protects against TNA and like compounds) and BGL (a glycosyl hydrolase that helps digest algae). The hypotheses generated from the crystal structures herein are supported by biochemical assays.

The crystal structures of apo and TNA-bound EHEP reveals the binding (and thus protection) mechanism. The authors then demonstrate that the precipitated EHEP-TNA complex can be resolubilised at an alkaline pH, potentially highlighting a mechanism for EHEP recycling in the A. kurodai midgut. The authors also present the crystal structures of akuBGL, a beta-glucosidase utilised by Aplysia kurodai to digest laminarin in algae into glucose. The structure revealed that akuBGL is composed of two GH1 domains, with only one GH1 domain having the necessary residue arrangement for catalytic activity, which was confirmed via hydrolytic activity assays. Docking was used to assess binding of the substrate laminaritetraose and the inhibitors TNA, eckol and phloroglucinol to akuBGL. The docking studies revealed that the inhibitors bound akuBGL at the glycone-binding suggesting a competitive inhibition mechanism. Overall, most of the claims made in this work are supported by the data presented.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This manuscript tried to answer a long-standing question in an important research topic. I read it with great interest. The quality of the science is high, and the text is clearly written. The conclusion is exciting. However, I feel that the phenotype of the transgenic line may be explained by an alternative idea. At least, the results should be more carefully discussed.

Specific comments:

1) Stability or activity (Fv/Fm) was not affected in PSII with the W14F mutation in D1. If W14F really represents the status of PSII with oxidized D1, what is the reason for the degradation of almost normal D1?

2) To focus on the PSII in which W14 is oxidized, this research depends on the W14F mutant lines. It is critical how exactly the W-to-F substitution mimics the oxidized W. The authors tried to show it in Figure 5. Because of the technical difficulty, it may be unfair to request more evidence. But the paper would be more convincing with the results directly monitoring the oxidized D1 to be recognized by FtsH.

3) Figure 3. If the F14 mimics the oxidized W14 and is sensed by FtsH, I would expect the degradation of D1 even under the growth light. The actual result suggests that W14F mutation partially modifies the structure of D1 under high light and this structural modification of D1 is sensed by FtsH. Namely, high light may induce another event which is recognized by FtsH. The W14F is just an enhancer.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In their manuscript, Kato et al investigate a key aspect of membrane protein quality control in plant photosynthesis. They study the turnover of plant photosystem II (PSII), a hetero-oligomeric membrane protein complex that undertakes the crucial light-driven water oxidation reaction in photosynthesis. The formidable water oxidation reaction makes PSII prone to photooxidative damage. PSII repair cycle is a protein repair pathway that replaces the photodamaged reaction center protein D1 with a new copy. The manuscript addresses an important question in PSII repair cycle - how is the damaged D1 protein recognized and selectively degraded by the membrane-bound ATP-dependent zinc metalloprotease FtsH in a processive manner? The authors show that oxidative post-translational modification (OPTM) of the D1 N-terminus is likely critical for the proper recognition and degradation of the damaged D1 by FtsH. Authors use a wide range of approaches and techniques to test their hypothesis that the singlet oxygen (1O2)-mediated oxidation of tryptophan 14 (W14) residue of D1 to N-formylkynurenine (NFK) facilitates the selective degradation of damaged D1. Overall, the authors propose an interesting new hypothesis for D1 degradation and their hypothesis is supported by most of the experimental data provided. The study certainly addresses an elusive aspect of PSII turnover and the data provided go some way in explaining the light-induced D1 turnover. However, some of the data are correlative and do not provide mechanistic insight. A rigorous demonstration of OPTM as a marker for D1 degradation is yet to be made in my opinion. Some strengths and weaknesses of the study are summarized below:

Strengths:

1. In support of their hypothesis, the authors find that FtsH mutants of Arabidopsis have increased OPTM, especially the formation of NFK at multiple Trp residues of D1 including the W14; a site-directed mutation of W14 to phenylalanine (W14F), mimicking NFK, results in accelerated D1 degradation in Chlamydomonas; accelerated D1 degradation of W14F mutant is mitigated in an ftsH1 mutant background of Chlamydomonas; and that the W14F mutation augmented the interaction between FtsH and the D1 substrate.

2. Authors raise an intriguing possibility that the OPTM disrupts the hydrogen bonding between W14 residue of D1 and the serine 25 (S25) of PsbI. According to the authors, this leads to an increased fluctuation of the D1 N-terminal tail, and as a consequence, recognition and binding of the photodamaged D1 by the protease. This is an interesting hypothesis and the authors provide some molecular dynamics simulation data in support of this. If this hypothesis is further supported, it represents a significant advancement.

3. The interdisciplinary experimental approach is certainly a strength of the study. The authors have successfully combined mass spectrometric analysis with several biochemical assays and molecular dynamics simulation. These, together with the generation of transplastomic algal cell lines, have enabled a clear test of the role of Trp oxidation in selective D1 degradation.

4. Trp oxidative modification as a degradation signal has precedent in chloroplasts. The authors cite the case of 1O2 sensor protein EXECUTER 1 (EX1), whose degradation by FtsH2, the same protease that degrades D1, requires prior oxidation of a Trp residue. The earlier observation of an attenuated degradation of a truncated D1 protein lacking the N-terminal tail is also consistent with authors' suggestion of the importance of the D1 N-terminus recognition by FtsH. It is also noteworthy that in light of the current study, D1 phosphorylation is unlikely to be a marker for degradation as posited by earlier studies.

Weaknesses:

1. The study lacks some data that would have made the conclusions more rigorous and convincing. It is unclear why the level of Trp oxidation was not analyzed in the Chlamydomonas ftsH 1-1 mutant as done for the var 2 mutant. Increased oxidation of W14 OPTM in Chlamydomonas ftsH 1-1 is a key prediction of the hypothesis. It is also unclear to me what is the rationale for showing D1-FtsH interaction data only for the double mutant but not for the single mutant (W14F). Why is the FtsH pulldown of D2 not statistically significant (p value = {less than or equal to}0.1). Wouldn't one expect FtsH pulls down the RC47 complex containing D1, D2, and RC47. Probing the RC47 level would have been useful in settling this. A key proposition of the authors' is that the hydrogen bonding between D1 W14 and S25 of PsbI is disrupted by the oxidative modification of W14. Can this hypothesis be further tested by replacing the S25 of PsbI with Ala, for example?

2. Although most of the work described is in vivo analysis, which is desirable, some in vitro degradation assays would have strengthened the conclusions. An in vitro degradation assay using the recombinant FtsH and a synthetic peptide encompassing D1 N-terminus with and without OPTM will test the enhanced D1 degradation that the authors predict. This will also help to discern the possibility that whether CP43 detachment alone is sufficient for D1 degradation as suggested for cyanobacteria.

3. The rationale for analyzing a single oxidative modification (W14) as a D1 degradation signal is unclear. D1 N-terminus is modified at multiple sites. Please see Mckenzie and Puthiyaveetil, bioRxiv May 04 2023. Also, why is modification by only 1O2 considered while superoxide and hydroxide radicals can equally damage D1?

4. The D1 degradation assay seems not repeatable for the W14F mutant. High light minus CAM results in Fig. 3 shows a statistically significant decrease in D1 levels for W14F at multiple time points but the same assay in Fig. 4a does not produce a statistically significant decrease at 90 min of incubation. Why is this? Accelerated D1 degradation in the Phe mutant under high light is key evidence that the authors cite in support of their hypothesis.

5. The description of results at times is not nuanced enough, for e.g. lines 116-117 state "The oxidation levels in Trp-14 and Trp-314 increased 1.8-fold and 1.4-fold in var2 compared to the wild type, respectively (Fig. 1c)" while an inspection of the figure reveals that modification at W314 is significant only for NFK and not for KYN and OIA. Likewise, the authors write that CP43 mutant W353F has no growth phenotype under high light but Figure S6 reveals otherwise. The slow growth of this mutant is in line with the earlier observation made by Anderson et al., 2002. In lines 162-163, the authors talk about unchanged electron transport in some site-directed mutants and cite Fig. 2c but this figure only shows chl fluorescence trace and nothing else.

6. The authors rightly discuss an alternate hypothesis that the simple disassembly of the monomeric core into RC47 and CP43 alone may be sufficient for selective D1 degradation as in cyanobacteria. This hypothesis cannot yet be ruled out completely given the lack of some in vitro degradation data as mentioned in point 2. Oxidative protein modification indeed drives the disassembly of the monomeric core (Mckenzie and Puthiyaveetil, bioRxiv May 04 2023).

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Light energy drives photosynthesis. However, excessive light can damage (i.e., photo-damage) and thus inactivate the photosynthetic process. A major target site of photo-damage is photosystem II (PSII). In particular, one component of PSII, the reaction center protein, D1, is very suspectable to photo-damage, however, this protein is maintained efficiently by an elaborate multi-step PSII-D1 turnover/repair cycle. Two proteases, FtsH and Deg, are known to contribute to this process, respectively, by efficient degradation of photo-damaged D1 protein processively and endoproteolytically. In this manuscript, Kato et al., propose an additional step (an early step) in the D1 degradation/repair pathway. They propose that "Tryptophan oxidation" at the N-terminus of D1 may be one of the key oxidations in the PSII repair, leading to processive degradation of D1 by FtsH. Both, their data and arguments are very compelling.

The D1 protein repair/degradation pathway in its simplest form can be defined essentially by five steps: (1) migration of damaged PSII core complex to the stroma thylakoid, (2) partial PSII disassembly of the PSII core monomer, (3) access of protease degrading damaged D1, (4) concomitant D1 synthesis, and (5) reassembly of PSII into grana thylakoid. An enormous amount of work has already been done to define and characterize these various steps. Kato et al., in this manuscript, are proposing a very early yet novel critical step in D1 protein turnover in which Tryptophan(Trp) oxidation in PSII core proteins influences D1 degradation mediated by FtsH.

Using a variety of approaches, such as mass-spectrometry (Table 1), site-directed mutagenesis (Figures 2-4), D1 degradation assays (Figures 3, and 4), and simulation modeling (Figure 5), Kato et al., provide both strong evidence and reasonable arguments that an N-terminal Trp oxidation may be likely to be a 'key' oxidative post-translational modification (OPTM) that is involved in triggering D1 degradation and thus activating the PSII repair pathway. Consequently, from their accumulated data, the authors propose a scenario in which the unraveling of the N-terminal of the D1 protein facilitated by Trp oxidation plays a critical 'recognition' role in alerting the plant that the D1 protein is photo-damaged and thus to kick start the processive degradation pathway initiated possibly by FtsH. Coincidently, Forsman and Eaton-Rye (Biochemistry 2021, 60, 1, 53-63), while working with the thermophilic cyanobacterium, Thermosynechococcus vulcanus, showed that when the N-terminal DE-loop of the D1 protein is photo-damaged a disruption of the interaction between the PsbT subunit and D1 occurs which may serve as a signal for PSII to undergo repair following photodamage. While the activation of the processive degradation pathways in Chlamydomonas versus Thermosynechococcus vulcanus have significant mechanistic differences, it's interesting to note and speculate that the stability of the N-terminal of their respective D1 proteins seems to play a critical role in 'signaling' the PSII repair system to be activated and initiate repair. But it's complicated. For instance, significant Trp oxidation also occurs on the lumen side of other PSII subunits which may also play a significant role in activating the repair processes as well. Indeed, Kato et al.,( Photosynthesis Research volume 126, pages 409-416 (2015)) proposed a two-step model whereby the primary event is disruption of a Mn-cluster in PSII on the lumen side. A secondary event is damage to D1 caused by energy that is absorbed by chlorophyll. But models adapt, change, and get updated. And the data provided by Kato et al., in this manuscript, gives us a unique glimpse/snapshot into the importance of the stability of the N-terminal during photo-damage and its role in D1-turnover. For instance, the author's use site-directed mutagenesis of Trp residues undergoing OPTM in the D1 protein coupled with their D1 degradation assays (Figure 3 and 4), provides evidence that Trp oxidation (in particular the oxidation of Trp14) in coordination with FtsH results in the degradation of D1 protein. Indeed, their D1 degradation assays coupled with the use of a ftsh mutant provide further significant support that Trp14 oxidation and FtsH activity are strongly linked. But for FstH to degrade D1 protein it needs to gain access to photo-damaged D1. FtsH access to D1 is achieved by having CP43 partially dissociate from the PSII complex. Hence, the authors also addressed the possibility that Trp oxidation may also play a role in CP43 disassembly from the PSII complex thereby giving FtsH access to D1. Using a site-directed mutagenesis approach, they showed that Trp oxidation in CP43 appeared to have little impact on the PSII repair (Supplemental Figure S6). This result shows that D1-Trp14 oxidation appears to be playing a role in D1 turnover that occurs after CP43 disassembly from the PSII complex. Alternatively, the authors cannot exclude the possibility that D1-Trp14 oxidation in some way facilitates CP43 dissociation. Further investigation is needed on this point. However, D1-Trp14 oxidation is causing an internal disruption of the D1 protein possibly at the N-terminus of the protein. Consequently, the role of Trp14 oxidation in disrupting the stability of the N-terminal domain of the D1 protein was analyzed computationally. Using a molecular dynamics approach (Figure 5), the authors attempted to create a mechanistic model to explain why when D1 protein Trp14 undergoes oxidation the N-terminal domain of D1protein becomes unraveled. Specifically, the authors propose that the interaction between D1 protein Trp14 with PsbI Ser25 becomes disrupted upon oxidation of Trp14. Consequently, the authors concluded from their molecular dynamics simulation analysis that " the increased fluctuation of the first α-helix of D1 would give a chance to recognize the photo-damaged D1 by FtsH protease". Hence, the author's experimental and computational approaches employed here develop a compelling early-stage repair model that integrates 1) Trp14 oxidation, 2) FtsH activation and 3) D1- turnover being initiated at its N-terminal domain. However, a word of caution should be emphasized here. This model is just a snapshot of the very early stages of the D1 protein turnover process. The data presented here gives us just a small glimpse into the unique relationship between Trp oxidation of the D1 protein which may trigger significant N-terminal structural changes of the D1 protein that both signals and provides an opportunity for FstH to begin protease digestion of the D1 protein. However, the authors go to great lengths in their discussion section to not overstate solely the role of Trp14 oxidation in the complicated process of D1 turnover. The authors certainly recognize that there are a lot of moving parts involved in D1 turnover. And while Trp14 oxidation is the major focus of this paper, the authors show in Supplemental Fig S4 the structural positions of various additional oxidized Trp residues in the Thermosynecoccocus vulcans PSII core proteins. Indeed, this figure shows that the majority of oxidized Trps are located on the luminal side of PSII complex clustered around the oxygen-evolving complex. So, while oxidized Trp14 may be involved in the early stages of D1 turnover certainly oxidized Trps on the lumen side are also more than likely playing a role in D1 turnover as well. To untangle this complex process will require additional research.

Nevertheless, identifying and characterizing the role of oxidative modification of tryptophan (Trp) residues, in particular, Trp14, in the PSII core provides another critical step in an already intricate multi-step process of D1 protein turnover during photo-damage.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this study, the authors aimed to investigate how cells respond to dynamic combinations of two stresses compared to dynamic inputs of a single stress. They applied the two stresses - carbon stress and hyperosmotic stress - either in or out of phase, adding and removing glucose and sorbitol.

Both a strength and a weakness, as well as the main discovery, is that the cells' hyperosmotic response strongly requires glucose. For in-phase stress, cells are exposed to hyperosmotic shock without glucose, limiting their ability to respond with the well-studied HOG pathway; for anti-phase stress, cells do have glucose when hyperosmotically shocked, but experience a hypo-osmotic shock when both glucose and sorbitol are simultaneously removed. Responding with the HOG pathway and so amassing intracellular glycerol amplifies the impact of this hypo-osmotic shock. Counterintuitively then, it is the presence of glucose rather than the stress of its absence that is deleterious for the cells.

The bulk of the paper supports these conclusions with clean, compelling time-lapse microscopy, including extensive analysis of gene deletions in the HOG network and measurements of both division and death rates. The methodology the authors develop is powerful and widely applicable.

Some discussion of the value of applying periodic inputs would be helpful. Cells are unlikely to have previously seen such inputs, and periodic stimuli may reveal behaviours that are rarely relevant to selection.

The authors' findings demonstrate the tight links that can exist between metabolism and the ability to respond to stress. Their study appears to have parted somewhat from their original aim because of the HOG pathway's reliance on glucose. It would be interesting to see if the cells behaviour is simpler in periodically varying sorbitol and a stress where there is little known connection to the HOG network, such as nitrogen stress.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors have used microfluidic channels to study the response of budding yeast to variable environments. Namely, they tested the ability of the cells to divide when the medium was repeatedly switched between two different conditions at various frequencies. They first characterized the response to changes in glucose availability or in the presence of hyper-osmotic stress via the addition of sorbitol to the medium. Subsequently, the two stresses were combined by applying the alternatively or simultaneously (in-phase). Interestingly, the observed that the in-phase stress pattern allowed more divisions and low levels of cell mortality compared to the alternating stresses where cells were dividing slowly and many cells died. A number mutants in the HOG pathway were tested in these conditions to evaluate their responses. Moreover, the activation of the MAPK Hog1 and the transcriptional induction of the hyper-osmotic stress promoter STL1 were quantified by fluorescence microscopy.

Overall, the manuscript is well structured and data are presented in a clear way. The time-lapse experiments were analyzed with high precision. The experiments confirm the importance of performing dynamic analysis of signal transduction pathways. While the experiments reveal some unexpected behavior, I find that the biological insights gained on this system remain relatively modest.

In the discussion section, the authors mention two important behaviors that their data unveil: resource allocation (between glycolysis and HOG-driven adaptation) and regulation of the HOG-pathway based on the presence of glucose. These behaviors had been already observed in other reports (Sharifan et al. 2015 or Shen et al. 2023, for instance). I find that this manuscript does not provide a lot of additional insights into these processes. One clear evidence that is presented, however, is the link between glycerol accumulation during the sorbitol treatment and the cell death phenotype upon starvation in alternating stress condition. However, no explanations or hypothesis are formulated to explain the mechanism of resource allocation between glycolysis and HOG response that could explain the poor growth in alternating stresses or the lack of adaptation of Hog1 activity in absence of glucose.

Another key question is to what extent the findings presented here can be extended to other types of perturbations. Would the use of alternative C-source or nitrogen starvation change the observed behaviors in dynamic stresses? If other types of stresses are used, can we expect a similar growth pattern between alternating versus in-phase stresses?

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Li, Fan et al. designed and evaluated a reinforcement learning (RL) based model to automate the planning of an optimal path for the collection of data for single particle cryo-electron microscopy. The goal was to maximize the quality of the data while minimizing the time required for acquisition. They use a deep regressor (DR) to rank all the targets in the grid based on their quality as predicted from low-magnification images. In the cryo-RL model, the prediction of the DR is modified by the result of a deep Q-network (DQN) driven by a reward based on the real-time assessment of newly acquired images and a penalty based on the time required to move the microscope stage to explore new areas of the specimen. The DR and the DQN are trained on a set of low-magnification preview images and their corresponding high-magnification recordings labeled based on the quality of fit of the contrast transfer function (the CTFMaxRes parameter). The distribution of quality of a series of non-ranked trajectories was used as a snowball baseline (SB). Importantly, all tests in this paper were performed on four datasets collected by an exhaustive sampling of the grid. Thus, all data is available to all protocols.

When trained on a subset of squares from the same grid, DR+DQN outperforms DR which in turn outperforms SB. To improve transferability between specimens, both DR and DQN were trained with a large dataset sourced from a variety of samples and grid types imaged at the Cianfrocco Lab. Comparison of the performance of Cryo-RL (DR+DQN), DR, SB and of human subjects with different levels of expertise indicates shows that Cryo-RL yields the most high-resolution images in the shortest time. Further, the quality of the maps obtained from subsets of data selected using Cryo-RL is on par with the best datasets collected manually, although the latter showed marked variability.

The demonstration that a low-magnification image contains sufficient information to predict the quality of high magnification counterpart is very encouraging. However, the authors show that this translates into a high-resolution structure for one of the four datasets. The use of CTFMaxRes, although prevalent in the field, is an incomplete estimator of the quality of micrographs. Even though both the DQN and DR can be trained using different criteria, it is not clear how strong a correlation between alternative parameters and the low-magnification images would be.

This study concentrates on three "well-behaved" samples that tend to distribute evenly in the holes. The behavior of many macromolecules, e.g. orientation bias and stability, correlates with ice thickness in convoluted ways. Since ice thickness can vary drastically throughout a single hole, the overall appearance may not be sufficient to ensure a recording of the region where "good particles" concentrate. In these cases, sub-hole characterization from the low-magnification images will be necessary to target the appropriate areas. However, the feasibility of such an approach is yet to be determined. All that said, this is a timely publication that is likely to have a positive impact on the efficiency of data collection for cryo-EM.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors identify a bottleneck in cryoEM data collection, namely path optimization, and provide a method and software to attempt to solve this problem, then evaluate the solution based on several metrics including full downstream processing. In addition, the authors report on a cryoEM data collection simulator, which could be used to more efficiently train users and microscope operators if released. I have experience with cryo-EM and applications of machine learning to cryoEM. In my opinion, the results are convincing insofar as showing that the algorithm employed by cryoRL performs at least as well as humans and with greater consistency than humans. I think combining cryoRL with existing square & hole targeting algorithms and collection software has the potential to result in a complete and efficient automated solution for high-resolution cryoEM data collection.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The data presented suggest that their algorithm can replace a human operator, which is a strong enough reason to publish and disseminate the technology. At the same time, aspects of the methods and results could benefit from a clearer explication. For example, the reported R^2 values for their model's performance are less than 0.5, (0.191, 0.2, 0.345, 0.467). I take this to mean the model's predictions are better than the mean value but that it will probably not generalize well for data it hasn't seen yet. Please comment.

Did the authors partition their data into a training set, a validation set, and a test set? From the manuscript, it wasn't obvious to me they withheld a test set (a set of data never seen by the model, which they used to evaluate the performance of the model selected based on the validation set). From Extended Data Figures 1 and 2, I inferred that the number of samples in the confusion matrix matches the validation size (n=2341). So, are they reporting validation results and not test results? Please explain.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The Hedgehog (HH) protein family is important for embryonic development and adult tissue maintenance. Deregulation or even temporal imbalances in the activity of one of the main players in the HH field, sonic hedgehog (SHH), can lead to a variety of human diseases, ranging from congenital brain disorders to diverse forms of cancers. SHH activates the GLI family of transcription factors, yet the mechanisms underlying GLI activation remain poorly understood. Modification and activation of one of the main SHH signalling mediators, GLI2, depends on its localization to the tip of the primary cilium. In a previous study the lab had provided evidence that SHH activates GLI2 by stimulating its phosphorylation on conserved sites through Unc-51-like kinase 3 (ULK3) and another ULK family member, STK36 (Han et al., 2019). Recently, another ULK family member, ULK4, was identified as a modulator of the SHH pathway (Mecklenburg et al. 2021). However, the underlying mechanisms by which ULK4 enhances SHH signalling remained unknown. To address this question, the authors employed complex biochemistry-based approaches and localization studies in cell culture to examine the mode of ULK4 activity in the primary cilium in response to SHH. The study by Zhou et al. demonstrates that ULK4, in conjunction with STK36, promotes GLI2 phosphorylation and thereby SHH pathway activation. Further experiments were conducted to investigate how ULK4 interacts with SHH pathway components in the primary cilium. The authors show that ULK4 interacts with a complex formed between STK36 and GLI2 and hypothesize that ULK4 functions as a scaffold to facilitate STK36 and GLI2 interaction and thereby GLI2 phosphorylation by STK36. Furthermore, the authors provide evidence that ULK4 and STK36 co-localize with GLI2 at the ciliary tip of NIH 3T3 cells, and that ULK4 and STK36 depend on each other for their ciliary tip accumulation. Overall, the described ULK4-mediated mechanism of SHH pathway modulation is based on detailed and rigorous Co-IP experiments and kinase assays as well as confocal imaging localization studies. The authors used various mutated and wild-type constructs of STK36 and ULK4 to decipher the mechanisms underlying GLI2 phosphorylation at the tip of the primary cilium. These novel results on SHH pathway activation add valuable insight into the complexity of SHH pathway regulation. The data also provide possible new strategies for interfering with SHH signalling which has implications in drug development (e.g., cancer drugs).

However, it will be necessary to explore additional model systems, besides NIH3T3, HEK293 and MEF cell cultures, to conclude on the universality of the mechanisms described in this study. Ultimately, it needs to be addressed whether ULK4 modulates SHH pathway activity in vivo. Is there evidence that genetic ablation of ULK4 in animal models leads to less efficient SHH pathway induction? It also remains to be resolved how ULK3 and ULK4 act in distinct or common manners to promote SHH signalling. Another remaining question is, whether cell type- and tissue-specific features exist, that play a role in ULK3- versus ULK4-dependent SHH pathway modulation. In particular for the studies on ciliary tip localization of factors, relevant for SHH pathway transduction, a higher temporal resolution will be needed in the future as well as a deeper insight into tissue/ cell type-specific mechanisms. These caveats, mentioned here, don't have to be addressed in new experiments for the revision of this manuscript but could be discussed.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors provide solid molecular and cellular evidence that ULK4 and STK36 not only interact, but that STK36 is targeted (transported?) to the cilium by ULK4. Their data helps generate a model for ULK4 acting as a scaffold for both STK36 and its substrate, Gli2, which appear to co-localise through mutual binding to ULK4. This makes sense, given the proposed role of most pseuodkinases as non-catalytic signaling hubs. There is also an important mechanistic analysis performed, in which ULK4 phosphorylation in an acidic consensus by STK36 is demonstrated using IP'd STK36 or an inactive 'AA' mutant, which suggests this phosphorylation is direct.

The major strength of the study is the well-executed combination of logical approaches taken, including expression of various deletion and mutation constructs and the careful (but not always quantified in immunoblot) effects of depleting and adding back various components in the context of both STK36 and ULK3, which broadens the potential impact of the work. The biochemical analysis of ULK4 phosphorylation appears to be solid, and the mutational study at a particular pair of phosphorylation sites upstream of an acidic residue (notably T2023) is further strong evidence of a functional interaction between ULK4/STK36. The possibility that ULK4 requires ATP binding for these mechanisms is not approached, though would provide significant insight: for example it would be useful to ask if Lys39 in ULK4 is involved in any of these processes, because this residue is likely important for shaping the ULK4 substrate-binding site as a consequence of ATP binding; this was originally shown in PMID 24107129 and discussed more recently in PMID: 33147475 in the context of the large amount of ULK4 proteomics data released.

The discussion is excellent, and raises numerous important future work in terms of potential transportation mechanisms of this complex. It also explains why the ULK4 pseudokinase domain is linked to an extended C-terminal region. Does AF2 predict any structural motifs in this region that might support binding to Gli2?

A weakness in the study, which is most evident in Figure 1, where Ulk4 siRNA is performed in the NIH3T3 model (and effects on Shh targets and Gli2 phosphorylation assessed), is that we do not know if ULK4 protein is originally present in these cells in order to actually be depleted. Also, we are not informed if the ULK4 siRNA has an effect on the 'rescue' by HA-ULK4; perhaps the HA-ULK4 plasmid is RNAi resistant, or if not, this explains why phosphorylation of Gli2 never reaches zero? Given the important findings of this study, it would be useful for the authors to comment on this, and perhaps discuss if they have tried to evaluate endogenous levels of ULK4 (and Stk36) in these cells using antibody-based approaches, ideally in the presence and absence of Shh. The authors note early on the large number of binding partners identified for ULK4, and siRNA may unwittingly deplete some other proteins that could also be involved in ULK4 transport/stability in their cellular model.

The sequence of ULK4 siRNAs is not included in the materials and methods as far as I can see.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, Zhou et al. demonstrate that the pseudokinase ULK4 has an important role in Hedgehog signaling by scaffolding the active kinase Stk36 and the transcription factor Gli2, enabling Gli2 to be phosphorylated and activated.<br /> Through nice biochemistry experiments, they show convincingly that the N-terminal pseudokinase domain of ULK4 binds Stk36 and the C-terminal Heat repeats bind Gli2.

Lastly, they show that upon Sonic Hedgehog signaling, ULK4 localizes to the cilia and is needed to localize Stk36 and Gli2 for proper activation.

This manuscript is very solid and methodically shows the role of ULK4 and STK36 throughout the whole paper, with well controlled experiments. The phosphomimetic and incapable mutations are very convincing as well.<br /> I think this manuscript is strong and stands as is, and there is no need for additional experiments.

Overall, the strengths are the rigor of the methods, and the convincing case they bring for the formation of the ULK4-Gli2-Stk36 complex. There are no weaknesses noted. I think a little additional context for what is being observed in the immunofluorescence might benefit readers who are not familiar with these cell types and structures.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Summary:<br /> Shibl et al., studied the possible role of dicarboxylate metabolite azelaic acid (Aze) in modulating the response of different bacteria, it was used as a carbon source by Phycobacter and possibly toxic for Alteromonas. The experiments were well conducted using transcriptomics, transcriptional factor coexpression networks, uptake experiments, and chemical methods to unravel the uptake, catabolism, and toxicity of Aze on these two bacteria. They identified a putative Aze TRAP transporter in bacteria and showed that Aze is assimilated through fatty acid degradation in Phycobacter. Meanwhile, in Alteromonas it is suggested that Aze inhibits the ribosome and/or protein synthesis, and that efflux pumps shuttles Aze outside the cytoplasm. Further on, they demonstrate that seawater amended with Aze selects for microbes that can catabolize Aze.

Major strengths:<br /> The manuscript is well written and very clear. Through the combination of gene expression, transcriptional factor co-expression networks, uptake experiments, and chemical methods Shibl et al., showed that Aze has a different response in two bacteria.

Major weakness:<br /> There is no confirmation of the Aze TRAP transporters through mutagenesis.

Impact on the field:<br /> Metabolites exert a significant influence on microbial communities in the ocean, playing a crucial role in their composition, dynamics, and biogeochemical cycles. This research highlights the intriguing capacity of a single metabolite to induce contrasting responses in distinct bacterial species, underscoring its role in shaping microbial interactions and ecosystem functions.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This study explores the breadth of effects of one important metabolite, azelaic acid, on marine microbes, and reveals in-depth its pathway of uptake and catabolism in one model bacterial strain. This compound is known to be widely produced by phytoplankton and plants, and to have complex effects on associated microbiomes.

This work uses transcriptomics to assay the response of two strains that show contrasting responses to the metabolite: one catabolizes the compound and assimilates the carbon, while the other shows growth inhibition and stress response. A highly induced TRAP transporter, adjacent to a previously identified regulator, is inferred to be the specific uptake system for azelaic acid. However the transport function was not directly tested via genetic or biochemical methods. Nevertheless, this is a significant finding that will be useful for exploring the distribution of azelaic acid uptake capability across metagenomes and other bacteria.

The authors use pulse-chase style metabolomics experiments to beautifully demonstrate the fate of azelaic acid through catabolic pathways. They also measure an assimilation rate per cell, though it remains unclear how this measured rate relates to natural systems. The metabolomics approach is an elegant way to show carbon flux through cells, and could serve as a model for future studies.

The study seeks to extend the results from two model strains to complex communities, using seawater mesocosm experiments and soil/Arabidopsis experiments. The seawater experiments show a community shift in mesocosms with added azelaic acid. However, the mechanisms for the shift were not determined; further work is necessary to demonstrate which community members are directly assimilating the compound vs. benefitting indirectly or experiencing inhibition. In my opinion the soil and Arabidopsis experiments are quite preliminary. I appreciate the authors' desire to broaden the scope beyond marine systems, but I believe any conclusions regarding different modes of action in aquatic vs terrestrial microbial communities are speculative at this stage.

This work is a nice illustration of how we can begin to tease apart the effects of chemical currencies on marine ecosystems. A key strength of this work is the combination of transcriptomics and metabolomics methods, along with assaying the impacts of the metabolite on both model strains of bacteria and whole communities. Given the sheer number of compounds that probably play critical roles in community interactions, a key challenge for the field will be navigating the tradeoffs between breadth and depth in future studies of metabolite impacts. This study offers a good compromise and will be a useful model for future studies.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors have conducted lots of field work, lab work and statistical analysis to explore the effect of brumation on individual tissue investments, the evolutionary links between the relative costly tissue sizes, and the complex non-dependent processes of brain and reproductive evolution in anuran. The topic fits well within the scope of the journal and the manuscript is generally written well. The different parameters used in the present study will attract a board readership across ecology, zoology, evolution biology, and global change biology.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors set out to show how hibernation is linked to brain size in frogs. If there were broader aims it is hard to decipher them. The authors present an extremely impressive dataset and a thorough set of cutting-edge analyses. However not all details are well explained. The main result about hibernation and brain size is fairly convincing, but it is hard to think of broader implications for this study. Overall, the manuscript is very confusing and hard to follow.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this work, the authors examine the mechanism of action of MOTS-c and its impact on monocyte-derived macrophages. In the first part of the study, they show that MOTS-c acts as a host defense peptide with direct antibacterial activity. In the second part of the study, the authors aim to demonstrate that MOTS-c influences monocyte differentiation into macrophages via transcriptional regulation.

Major strengths. Methods used to study the bactericidal activity of MOTS-c are appropriate and the results are convincing.

Major weaknesses. Methods used to study the impact on monocyte differentiation are inappropriate and the conclusions are not supported by the data shown. A major issue is the use of the THP-1 cell line, a transformed monocytic line which does not mimic physiological monocyte biology. In particular, THP-1 differentiation is induced by PMA, which is a completely artificial system and conclusions from this approach cannot be generalized to monocyte differentiation. The authors would need to perform this series of experiments using freshly isolated monocytes, either from mouse or human. The read-out used for macrophage differentiation (adherence to plastic) is also not very robust, and the authors would need to analyze other parameters such as cell surface markers. It is also not clear whether MOTS-c could act in a cell-intrinsic fashion, as the authors have exposed cells to exogenous MOTS-c in all their experiments. The authors did not perform complementary experiments using MOTS-c deficient monocytes. The authors have also analyzed the transcriptomic changes induced by MOTS-c exposure in macrophages derived from young or old mice. While the results are potentially interesting, the differences observed seem independent from MOTS-c and mainly related to age, therefore the conclusions from this figure are not clear. Another concern is the reproducibility of the experiments, as the authors do not indicate the number of biological replicates analyzed nor the number of independent experiments performed.

The different parts of the manuscript do not appear well connected and it is not clear what the main message from the manuscript would be. The physiological relevance of this study is also unclear.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The research study presented by Rice et al. set out to further profile the host defense properties of the mitochondrial protein MOTS-c. To do this they studied i. the potential antimicrobial effects of MOTS-c on common bacterial pathogens E.coli and MRSA, ii. the effects of MOTS-c on the stimulation and differentiation of monocytes into macrophages. This is a well performed study that utilizes relevant methods and cell types to base their conclusions on. However, there appear to be a few weaknesses to the current study that hold it back from more broad application.

Comment 1: From reading the manuscript methods and results, it is unclear exactly what the synthetic MOTS-c source is. Therefore it is hard to determine whether there may be any impurities in the production of this synthetic protein that may interfere with the results presented throughout the manuscript. Though, the data presented in Supplemental Figure 4F, where E.coli expressing intracellular MOTS-c inhibited bacterial growth certainly support MOTS-c specific effects. Similarly with the experiments showing endogenous MOTS-c levels rising in stimulation and differentiated macrophages (Figure 3).

Comment 2: It is interesting that the mice receiving bacteria coupled with MOTS-c lost about 10% of their body weight. It would have been interesting to demonstrate the cause of this weight loss since the effect appears to be separate from mere PAMPs as shown by using heat-killed MRSA in Supplemental Figure 5. Was inflammation changed? Is this due to changes in systemic metabolism? Would have been interesting to have seen CRP levels or circulating liver enzymes.

Despite these concerns, the data are well suited to answering their research question, and they open up the door to studying how mitochondrial peptides like MOTS-c could have roles outside of the mitochondria.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors propose a new codon adaptation metric, Codon Adaptation Index of Species (CAIS), which they present as an easily obtainable proxy for effective population size. To permit between-species comparisons, they control for both amino acid frequencies and genomic GC content, which distinguishes their approach from existing ones. Having confirmed that CAIS negatively correlates with vertebrate body mass, as would be expected if small-bodied species with larger effective populations experience more efficient selection on codon usage, they then examine the relationship between CAIS and intrinsic structural disorder in proteins.

The idea of a robust species-level measure of codon adaptation is interesting. If CAIS is indeed a reliable proxy for the effectiveness of selection, it could be useful to analyze species without reliable life history- or mutation rate data (which will apply to many of the genomes becoming available in the near future).

A key question is whether CAIS, in fact, measures adaptation at the codon level. Unfortunately, CAIS is only validated indirectly by confirming a negative correlation with body mass. As a result, the observations about structural disorder are difficult to evaluate.

A potential problem is that differences in GC between species are not independent of life history. Effective population size can drive compositional differences due to the effects of GC-biased gene conversion (gBGC). As noted by Galtier et al. (2018), genomic GC correlates negatively with body mass in mammals and birds. It would therefore be important to examine how gBGC might affect CAIS, and to what extent it could explain the relationship between CAIS and body mass.

Suppose that gBGC drives an increase in GC that is most pronounced at 3rd codon positions in high-recombination regions in small-bodied species. In this case, could observed codon usage depart more strongly from expectations calculated from overall genomic GC in small vertebrates compared to large ones? The authors also report that correcting for local intergenic GC was unsuccessful, based on the lack of a significant negative relationship with body mass (Figure 3D). In principle, this could also be consistent with local GC providing a relatively more appropriate baseline in regions with high recombination rates. Considering these scenarios would clarify what exactly CAIS is capturing.

Given claims about "exquisitely adapted species", the case for using CAIS as a measure of codon adaptation would also be stronger if a relationship with gene expression could be demonstrated. RSCU is expected to be higher in highly expressed genes. Is there any evidence that the equivalent GC-controlled measure behaves similarly?

The manuscript is overall easy to follow, though some additional context may be helpful for the general reader. A more detailed discussion of how this work compares to the approach taken by Galtier et al. (2018), which accounted for GC content and gBGC when examining codon preferences, would be appropriate, for example. In addition, it would have been useful to mention past work that has attempted to explicitly quantify selection on codon usage.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this study, the authors investigate the biological function of the FK506-binding protein FKBP35 in the malaria-causing parasite Plasmodium falciparum. Like its homologs in other organisms, PfFKBP35 harbors peptidyl-prolyl isomerase (PPIase) and chaperoning activities, and has been considered a promising drug target due to its high affinity to the macrolide compound FK506. However, PfFKBP35 has not been validated as a drug target using reverse genetics, and the link between PfFKBP35-interacting drugs and their antimalarial activity remains elusive. The manuscript is structured in two parts addressing the biological function of PfFKBP35 and the antimalarial activity of FK506, respectively.

The first part combines conditional genome editing, proteomics and transcriptomics analysis to investigate the effects of FKBP35 depletion in P. falciparum. The work is very well performed and clearly described. The data provide definitive evidence that FKBP35 is essential for P. falciparum blood stage growth. Conditional knockout of PfFKBP35 leads to a delayed death phenotype, associated with defects in ribosome maturation as detected by quantitative proteomics and stalling of protein synthesis in the parasite. The authors propose that FKBP35 regulates ribosome homeostasis but an alternative explanation could be that changes in the ribosome proteome are downstream consequences of the abrogation of FKBP35 essential activities as chaperone and/or PPIase. It is unclear whether FKBP35 has a specific function in P. falciparum as compared to other organisms. The knockdown of PfFKBP35 has no phenotypic consequence, showing that very low amounts of FKBP35 are sufficient for parasite survival and growth. In the absence of quantification of the protein during the course of the experiments, it remains unclear whether the delayed death phenotype in the knockout is due to the delayed depletion of the protein or to a delayed consequence of early protein depletion. This limitation also impacts the interpretation of the drug assays.

In the second part, the authors investigate the activity of FK506 on P. falciparum, and conclude that FK506 exerts its antimalarial effects independently of FKBP35. This conclusion is based on the observation that FK506 has the same activity on FKBP35 wild type and knock-out parasites, suggesting that FK506 activity is independent of FKBP35 levels, and on the fact that FK506 kills the parasite rapidly whereas inducible gene knockout results in delayed death phenotype. However, there are alternative explanations for these observations. As mentioned above, the delayed death phenotype could be due to delayed depletion of the protein upon induction of gene knockout. FK506 could have a similar activity on WT and mutant parasites when added before sufficient depletion of FKBP35 protein. In some experiments, the authors exposed KO parasites to FK506 later, presumably when the KO is effective, and obtained similar results. However, in these conditions, the death induced by the knockout could be a confounding factor when measuring the effects of the drug. Furthermore, the authors show that FK506 binds to FKBP35, and propose that the FK506-FKBP35 complex interferes with ribosome maturation, which would point towards a role of FKBP35 in FK506 action. In summary, the study does not provide sufficient evidence to rule out that FK506 exerts its effects via FKBP35.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The introduction is plotted with two parallel stories about PfKBP35 and FK506, with ribosome biogenesis as the central question at the end. In its current form, the manuscript suffers from two stories that are not entirely interconnected, unfinished, and somewhat confusing. I recommend focusing only on one story - either characterizing PfBP35 and its role in Plasmodium falciparum biology - future investigation of PfBP35 control of cellular processes or focusing on the actual targets of the FK506 drug (identified in figure 4). Both stories need additional experiments to make the manuscript(s) more complete. The results from PfFBP35 need more evidence for the proposed ribosome biogenesis pathway control. On the other hand, the results from the drug FK506 point to different targets with lower EC50, and other follow-up experiments are needed to substantiate the authors' claims. The strengths of the manuscript are the figures and experimental design. The combination of omics methods is informative and gives an opportunity for follow-up experiments.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The study by Thommen et al. sought to identify the native role of the Plasmodium falciparum FKBP35 protein, which has been identified as a potential drug target due to the antiplasmodial activity of the immunosuppressant FK506. This compound has multiple binding proteins in many organisms; however, only one FKBP exists in P. falciparum (FKBP35). Using genetically-modified parasites and mass spectrometry-based cellular thermal shift assays (CETSA), the authors suggest that this protein is in involved in ribosome homeostasis and that the antiplasmodial activity of FK506 is separate from its activity on the FKBP35 protein. The authors first created a conditional knockdown using the destruction domain/shield system, which demonstrated no change in asexual blood stage parasites. A conditional knockout was then generated using the DiCre system. FKBP35KO parasites survived the first generation but died in the second generation. The authors called this "a delayed death phenotype", although it was not secondary to drug treatment, so this may be a misnomer. This slow death was unrelated to apicoplast dysfunction, as demonstrated by lack of alterations in sensitivity to apicoplast inhibitors. Quantitative proteomics on the FKBP35KO vs FKBP35WT parasites demonstrated enrichment of proteins involved in pre-ribosome development and the nucleolus. Interestingly, the KO parasites were not more susceptible to cycloheximide, a translation inhibitor, in the first generation (G1), suggesting that mature ribosomes still exist at this point. The SunSET technique, which incorporates puromycin into nascent peptide chains, also showed that in G1 the FKBP35KO parasites were still able to synthesize proteins. But in the second generation (G2), there was a significant decrease in protein synthesis. Transcriptomics were also performed at multiple time points. The effects of knockout of FKBP35 were transcriptionally silent in G1, and the parasites then slowed their cell cycles as compared to the FKBP35WT parasites.

The authors next sought to evaluate whether killing by FK506 was dependent upon the inhibition of PfKBP35. Interestingly, both FKBP35KO and FKBP35WT parasites were equally susceptible to FK506. This suggested that the antiplasmodial activity of FK506 was related to activity targeting essential functions in the parasite separate from binding to FKBP35. To identify these potential targets, the authors used MS-CETSA on lysates to test for thermal stabilization of proteins after exposure to drug, which suggests drug-protein interactions. As expected, FK506 bound FKBP35 at low nM concentrations. However, given that the parasite IC50 of this compound is in the uM range, the authors searched for proteins stabilized at these concentrations as putative secondary targets. Using live cell MS-CETSA, FK506 bound FKBP35 at low nM concentrations; however, in these experiments over 50 ribosomal proteins were stabilized by the drug at higher concentrations. Of note, there was also an increase in soluble ribosomal factors in the absence of denaturing conditions. The authors suggested that the drug itself led to these smaller factors disengaging from a larger ribosomal complex, leading to an increase in soluble factors. Ultimately, the authors conclude that the native function of FKBP35 is involved in ribosome homeostasis and that the antiplasmodial activity of FK506 is not related to the binding of FKBP35, but instead results from inhibition of essential functions of secondary targets.

Strengths<br /> This study has many strengths. It addresses an important gap in parasite biology and drug development, by addressing the native role of the potential antiplasmodial drug target FKBP35 and whether the compound FK506 works through inhibition of that putative target. The knockout data provide compelling evidence that the KBP35 protein is essential for asexual parasite growth after one growth cycle. Analysis of the FKBP35KO line also provides evidence that the effects of FK506 are likely not solely due to inhibition of that protein, but instead must have secondary targets whose function is essential. These data are important in the field of drug development as they may guide development away from structure-based FK506 analogs that bind more specifically to the FKBP35 protein.

Weaknesses:<br /> There are also a few notable weaknesses in the evidence that call into question the conclusion in the article title that FKBP35 is definitely involved in ribosomal homeostasis. While the proteomics supports alterations in ribosome biogenesis factors, it is unclear whether this is a direct role of the loss of the FKBP35 protein or is more related to non-specific downstream effects of knocking down the protein. The CETSA data clearly demonstrate that FK506 binds PfKB35 at low nM concentrations, which is different than the IC50 noted in the parasite; however, the evidence that the proteins stabilized by uM concentrations of drug are actual targets is not completely convincing. Especially, given the high uM amounts of drug required to stabilize these proteins. This section of the manuscript would benefit from validation of a least one or two of the putative candidates noted in the text. In the live cell CETSA, it is noted that >50 ribosomal components are stabilized in drug treated but not lysate controls. Similarly, the authors suggest that the -soluble fraction of ribosomal components increases in drug-exposed parasites even at 37{degree sign}C and suggests that this is likely from smaller ribosomal proteins disengaging from larger ribosomal complexes. While the evidence is convincing that this protein may play a role in ribosome homeostasis in some capacity, it is not sure that the title of the paper "FKBP secures ribosome homeostasis" holds true given the lack of mechanistic data. A minor weakness, but one that should nonetheless be addressed, is the use of the term "delayed death phenotype" with regards to the knockout parasite killing. This term is most frequently used in a very specific setting of apicoplast drugs that inhibit apicoplast ribosomes, so the term is misleading. It is also possible that the parasites are able to go through a normal cycle because of the kinetics of the knockout and that the time needed for protein clearance in the parasite to a level that is lethal.

Overall, the authors set out to identify the native role of FKB35 in the P. falciparum parasites and to identify whether this is, in fact, the target of FK506. The data clearly demonstrate that FKBP35 is essential for parasite growth and provide evidence that alterations in its levels have proteomic but not transcriptional changes. However, the conclusion that FKBP35 actually stabilizes ribosomal complexes remains intermediate. The data are also very compelling that FK506 has secondary targets in the parasite aside from FKBP35; however, the high uM concentrations of the drug needed to attain results and the lack of biological validation of the CETSA hits makes it difficult to know whether any of these are actually the target of the compound or instead are nonspecific downstream consequences of treatment.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Kainate receptors play various important roles in synaptic transmission. The receptors can be divided into low affinity kainate receptors (GluK1-3) and high affinity kainate receptos (GluK4-5). The receptors can assemble as homomers (GluK1-3) or low-high affinity heteromers (GluK4-5). The functional diversity is further increased by RNA splicing. Previous studies have investigated C-terminal splice variants of GluK1, but GluK1 N-terminal (exon 9) insertions have not been previously characterized. In this study Dhingra et al investigate the functional implications of a GluK1 splice variant that inserts a 15 amino acid segment into the extracellular N-terminal region of the protein using whole-cell and excised outside-out electrophysiology.<br /> The authors produce solid data to show that the insertion profoundly impacts the function of GluK1-1a - the channels that have the insertion are slower to desensitize. The data also shows that the insertion changes the modulatory effects of Neto proteins, resulting in altered rates of desensitization and recovery from desensitization. To determine the mechanism by which the insertion exerts these functional effects, the authors perform pull-down assays of Neto proteins, and extensive mutagenesis on the insert.

The electrophysiological part of the study is very rigorous and meticulous.

The biggest weakness of the manuscript is the structural work. Due to issues with preferred orientation (a common problem in cryo-EM), the 3D reconstructions are at a low resolution (in the 5-8 Å range) and cannot offer much mechanistic insight into the effects of the insertion. Based on the available data, the authors posit that the insertion does not change the arrangement of the subunits in the desensitized state. However, there is no comparison with a structure that does not contain the insertion, so while the statement may well be true, no data is shown to support it.

Overall, the cryo-EM contributes little and distracts from the good parts of the manuscript.

Another part that does not contribute much is the RNAseq data that has been pulled from a database and analyzed for the paper. It is being used to show that the exon 9 insertion variant is predominantly expressed in the cerebellar cortex at early stages of brain development. The methods do not describe in detail how the data has been analyzed (e.g., is the data scaled per sample/gene or globally?) so it is hard to know what we can compare in the heat plots. In Figure 1- supplement 1 there aren't striking differences in expression (at least not obviously visible in the current illustration).

Despite these weaknesses, the study is an important contribution to the field because it characterizes a GluK1 variant that has not been studied before and highlights the functional diversity that exists within the kainate receptor family.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Among ionotropic glutamate receptors, kainate receptors (KAR) are still the object of intense investigation to understand their role in normal and pathological excitatory synaptic transmission. Like other receptors, KAR appear under different splicing variants and their respective physiological function is still debated. In this manuscript Dhingra et al explored the impact of the presence and of the absence of Exon9 of the GluK1 receptors on the pharmacological, biophysical and structural properties of the receptors. They further investigated how it is impacted by the association of KAR with their cognate auxiliary subunit Neto 1 and 2. This study represents a large body of work and data. The authors addressed the issue in a very systematic and rigorous manner.

First, by exploring RNAseq database, authors showed that GluK1 transcripts containing the exon 9 are present in many brain structures and especially in the cerebellum suggesting that a large part of GluK1 contains effectively this exon9.<br /> Using HEK cells as an expression system, they characterized many gating and biophysical properties of GluK1 receptors containing or not the exon9. Evaluated parameters were desensitization, relative potency of glutamate versus kainite, polyamine block.

It is known that the association of GluK1 with auxiliary proteins Neto1/2 modulate the properties of the receptors. Authors investigated systematically whether Neto1 and 2 similarly alter GluK1 properties in function of the presence of exon9. This study provides many quantitative data that could be reused for modeling the role of kainate receptors. Given the change shown by the authors, the presence of exon in GluK1 is noticeable and likely should have an impact of synaptic transmission.<br /> Interestingly, authors used a mutational approach to identify critical residue encoded by exon9 that are responsible for the functional differences between the two splice variants. In many cases, the replacement of a single amino acid lead to the absence of current confirming the crucial role of the segment of the receptor. However, it made the comparison and the identification of critical residues more challenging.<br /> Authors attempted to establish the structure GluK1 receptors comprising the exon9 using different preparation methods. They succeeded in obtaining structures with equivalent or lower resolution compared with previous report on GluK1 and GluK2 receptors. However, the organization of the peptide coded by exon is poorly defined and limited possible analyses. Despite this they could observe that the presence of the exon9 does not alter significantly the structure of GluK1.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

GluK1 forms glutamate-gated ion channels with an important function in synaptic transmission and neuron excitability. Particularly, a GluK1 splice-variant (Gluk1-1) with significant expression in different regions of the brain has not been characterized before. The paper of Dhingra et al. aims to evaluate the role of the Exon 9 splice insert in GluK1 on channel function. This study relies mainly on electrophysiological approaches to determine the effect of the splice insert on GluK1 gating properties, including desensitization, agonist efficacy, recovery, and rectification. Overall, this work provides two major milestones: 1) the first functional characterization of the Gluk1-1a variant and 2) the first structure of this channel. The functional data supporting the role of the insert on channel properties are solid, although the current data does not provide significant insights about the mechanisms behind this. Also, the little information associated with the resolved structure precludes providing further insights about the structural basis that account for the impact of the insert on channel function. Overall, I consider this an interesting paper that represents an important advance in the study of glutamate receptors.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The study provides a complete comparative interactome analysis of α-arrestin in both humans and drosophila. The authors have presented interactomes of six humans and twelve Drosophila α-arrestins using affinity purification/mass spectrometry (AP/MS). The constructed interactomes helped to find α-arrestins binding partners through common protein motifs. The authors have used bioinformatic tools and experimental data in human cells to identify the roles of TXNIP and ARRDC5: TXNIP-HADC2 interaction and ARRDC5-V-type ATPase interaction. The study reveals the PPI network for α-arrestins and examines the functions of α-arrestins in both humans and Drosophila.

Comments<br /> I will like to congratulate the authors and the corresponding authors of this manuscript for bringing together such an elaborate study on α-arrestin and conducting a comparative study in drosophila and humans.

Introduction:<br /> The introduction provides a rationale behind why the comparison between humans and Drosophila is carried out.<br /> - Even though this is a research manuscript, including existing literature on similar comparison of α-arrestin from other articles will invite a wide readership.

Results:<br /> The results cover all the necessary points concluded from the experiments and computational analysis.<br /> • The authors could point out the similarity of the α-arrestin in both humans and Drosophila.<br /> • Citing the direct connecting genes from the network in the text will invite citations and a wider readership.

Figures:<br /> The images are elaborate and well-made.<br /> • The authors could use a direct connected gene-gene network that pointing interactions. This can be used by other readers working on the same topic and ensure reproducibility and citations.<br /> • The blot/gel images can be of higher resolution.

Discussion:<br /> The authors have utilized and discussed the conclusion they draw from their study. But could highlight more on ARRDCs and why it was selected out of the other arrestins. The authors have provided future work directions associated with their work.

Supplementary figures:<br /> The authors have a rigorous amount of work added together for the success of this manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors present a novel interactome focused on human and fly alpha-arrestin family proteins and demonstrate its application in understanding the functions of these proteins. Initially, the authors employed AP/MS analysis, a popular method for mapping protein-protein interactions (PPIs) by isolating protein complexes. Through rigorous statistical and manual quality control procedures, they established two robust interactomes, consisting of 6 baits and 307 prey proteins for humans, and 12 baits and 467 prey proteins for flies. To gain insights into the gene function, the authors investigated the interactors of alpha-arrestin proteins through various functional analyses, such as gene set enrichment. Furthermore, by comparing the interactors between humans and flies, the authors described both conserved and species-specific functions of the alpha-arrestin proteins. To validate their findings, the authors performed several experimental validations for TXNIP and ARRDC5 using ATAC-seq, siRNA knockdown, and tissue staining assays. The experimental results strongly support the predicted functions of the alpha-arrestin proteins and underscore their importance.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Lee, Kyungtae and colleagues have discovered and mapped out alpha-arrestin interactomes in both human and Drosophila through the affinity purification/mass spectrometry and the SAINTexpress method. They found the high confident interactomes, consisting of 390 protein-protein interactions (PPIs) between six human alpha-arrestins and 307 preproteins, as well as 740 PPIs between twelve Drosophila alpha-arrestins and 467 prey proteins. To define and characterize these identified alpha-arrestin interactomes, the team employed a variety of widely recognized bioinformatics tools. These included protein domain enrichment analysis, PANTHER for protein class enrichment, DAVID for subcellular localization analysis, COMPLEAT for the identification of functional complexes, and DIOPT to identify evolutionary conserved interactomes. Through these analyses, they confirmed known alpha-arrestin interactors' role and associated functions such as ubiquitin ligase and protease. Furthermore, they found unexpected biological functions in the newly discovered interactomes, including RNA splicing and helicase, GTPase-activating proteins, ATP synthase. The authors carried out further study into the role of human TXNIP in transcription and epigenetic regulation, as well as the role of ARRDC5 in osteoclast differentiation. This study holds important value as the newly identified alpha-arrestin interactomes are likely aiding functional studies of this group of proteins. Despite the overall support from data for the paper's conclusions, certain elements related to data quantification, interpretation, and presentation demand more detailed explanation and clarification.

1) In Figure 1B, it is shown that human alpha-arrestins were N-GFP tagged (N-terminal) and Drosophila alpha-arrestins were C-GFP (C-terminal). However, the rationale of why the authors used different tags for human and fly proteins was not explained in the main text and methods.<br /> 2) In Figure 2A, there seems to be an error for labeling the GAL4p/GAL80p complex that includes NOTCH2, NOTCH1 and TSC2.<br /> 3) In Figure 5, given that knockdown of TXNIP did not affect the levels and nuclear localization of HDAC2, the authors suggest that TXNIP might modulate HDAC2 activity. However, the ChiP assay suggest a different model - TXNIP-HDAC2 interaction might inhibit the chromatin occupancy of HDAC2, reducing histone deacetylation and increasing global chromatin accessibly. The authors need to propose a model consistent with these sets of all data.<br /> 4) The authors showed that ectopic expression of ARRDC5 increased osteoclast differentiation and function. Does loss of ARDDC5 lead to defects in osteoclast function and fate determination?<br /> 5) From Figure 6D, the authors argued that ARRDC5 overexpression resulted in more V-ATPase signals: however, there is no quantification. Quantification of the confocal images will foster the conclusion. Also, western blots for V-ATPase proteins will provide an alternative way to determine the effects of ARRDC5.<br /> 6) The results from Figure 6D did not support the authors' argument that ARRDC5 might control the membrane localization of the V-ATPase, as bafilomycin is the V-ATPase inhibitor. ARRDC5 knockdown experiments will help to determine whether ARRDC5 can control the membrane localization of the V-ATPase in osteoclast.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Sejour et al. is testing "translational ramp" model described previously by Tuller et al. in S. cerevisiae. Authors are using bioinformatics and reporter based experimental approaches to test whether "rare codons" in the first 40 codons of the gene coding sequences increase translation efficiency and regulate abundance of translation products in yeast cells. Authors conclude that "translation ramp" model does not have support using new set of reporters and bioinformatics analyses. The strength of bioinformatic evidence and experimental analyses of the rare codons insertion in the reporter make compelling case for authors claims. However major weakness of the manuscript is that authors do not take in account other confounding effects in their analyses as well as multiple previous studies that argue with "translation ramp" model. The existence of the early elongation ramp with "rare codons" was previously contested with local mRNA structure at the start codon, peptidyl-tRNA drop-off or interactions of the nascent peptide chain with exit channel of the ribosome models. All of these effects are not considered or discussed in the manuscript at this point. Such an authors approach makes the manuscript rather biased and short on discussing multiple other possible conclusions on reasons of slow translation elongation at the beginning of the protein synthesis.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Tuller et al. first made the curious observation, that the first ∼30-50 codons in most organisms are encoded by scarce tRNAs and appear to be translated slower than the rest of the coding sequences (CDS). They speculated that this has evolved to pace ribosomes on CDS and prevent ribosome collisions during elongation - the "Ramp" hypothesis. Various aspects of this hypothesis, both factual and in terms of interpretating the results, have been challenged ever since. Sejour et al. present compelling results confirming the slower translation of the first ~40 codons in S. cerevisiae but providing alternative explanation for this phenomenon. Specifically, they show that the higher amino acid sequence divergence of N-terminal ends of proteins and accompanying lower purifying selection (perhaps the result of de novo evolution) is sufficient to explain the prevalence of rare slow codons in these regions. These results are an important contribution in understanding how aspects of evolution of protein coding regions can affect translation efficiency on these sequences and directly challenge the "Ramp" hypothesis proposed by Tuller et al.

I believe the data is presented clearly and the results generally justify the conclusions. I do have one specific concern related to interpretating the data. The authors show that the conservation score of the last 40 codons is not dissimilar to the conservation score of the first 40 (Fig. 4 A & C). They also show that the calculated translational speed of the first 40 codons is significantly lower than the rest of the CDS. At the same time, they show lack of statistically significant decrease of calculated translational speed for the last 40 codons (Figure S1). If the poor conservation of the first 40 codon explains the slower speed of their translation what is the authors' explanation for the absence of statistically significant reduction of calculated translational speed for the last 40 codons?

"Although the reporter is GFP, the N- terminal region of this particular protein is derived from yeast HIS3, not GFP, and has little if any effect on the fluorescence of the GFP fused downstream."

The statement above is logical and reasonable; however, it is not supported by any reference or control experiments. At the very least this fact should be explicitly acknowledged. Also, the RNA levels of reporters were not measured, which means it cannot be categorically concluded that the observed effect is due to changes of translational efficiency. This is an important caveat.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In the current study, the authors employed C elegans transgenic line of sfGFP::Abeta worms to investigate molecules implicated in Abeta aggregation and clearance. They conduct siRNA knockdown, RNA deletion, and overexpression experiments to demonstrate that collagens and ADM-2 play critical roles in aggregate formation and clearance, respectively. Basically, the data support the main claims and key conclusions. However, the impact and significance of the findings are considered average at this time. Additional work is necessary for strengthening the research and supporting the major conclusions. For instance, it remains unclear how ADM-2 removes extracellular aggregates. The work is also missing studies to assess whether collagen escalation increases aggregate formation. These two biological processes are critical for understanding the balance in Abeta aggregate formation.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors generated a novel transgenic C. elegans model with inducible expression and secretion of human GFP-tagged human Aβ1-42. Using this model, they investigated the role of ECM in the aggregation of Aβ. They identified collagens that regulate Aβ aggregate formation, and found the metalloproteases ADM-2 modulates ECM and assist in the removal of extracellular Aβ aggregates. The results suggest that ECM composition is critical for Aβ aggregate and removal. These data add in an interesting way to the ongoing discussion on the aggregation and clearance of amyloid through the extracellular matrix. However, some issues remain to be addressed.

1) The authors developed a novel C.elegans model for studying extracellular amyloid beta aggregation and is therefore likely to be taken up broadly by the field. However, the new model should be fully characterized. Throughout the manuscript, the only method to detect amyloid deposition was the GFP fluorescence intensity and morphology, while direct characterization of amyloid aggregates is lacking.

2) A targeted RNA interference (RNAi) screen was used to identify the key regulators of Aβ aggregation and clearance, which is one of the strengths of the study. There should be evidence that RNAi works to knockdown the specific genes. Similarly, there should be evidence indicating that ADM-2 is indeed expressed in the overexpression experiments.

3) It remains unknown whether ADM-2 directly degrades Aβ or facilitates the clearance of Aβ by remoulding the ECM. The effect of ADM-2 on ECM remodeing should be examined.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The authors generated a novel sfGFP::Aβ C. elegans models of AD that expresses Abeta aggregates extracellularly; using this worm model, they identified that a disintegrin and metalloprotease ADM-2, an ortholog of human ADAM9, participated in removing these extracellular aggregates. This worm model may be very useful to the AD field after further characterization.

A novelty of this paper is the generation of a worm model of AD that produces extracellular Abeta aggregates, mimicking one of the two disease-defining pathological features of AD. The authors have also identified a protein which inhibits Abeta aggregation in the AD worm model; if these data are relevant to humans, they may reveal a new druggable target against AD.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Meiosis uses distinct cohesin complexes for chromosome morphogenesis and segregation such as cohesins with meiosis-specific REC-8 and COH-3/4 in the nematode. In this important paper, by using stage-specific depletion of the cohesin component, the authors nicely showed that REC-8-cohesin stably binds to meiotic chromosomes and plays an essential role in sister chromatid cohesion in diakinesis and meiosis I. Moreover, COH-3/4-cohesin, whose chromosome binding is stabilized by the SCC-2 cohesin regulator, is more dynamic than Rec8-cohesin in prophase I and plays a role in loop-axis formation.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

During meiosis, mitotic cohesin complexes are replaced by meiosis-specific cohesins to enable a stepwise loss of sister chromatid cohesion. The identity of the cohesin complex is defined by its kleisin subunit. In the early meiotic prophase, the mitotic kleisin Scc1 is replaced by a meiotic counterpart Rec8. C. elegans expresses two additional meiotic kleisins, COH-3 and COH-4; however, how meiotic cohesin complexes differ in their loading and function has been unclear. In this paper, Castellano-Pozo and colleagues unveil their differential dynamics and functions using elegant approaches that include auxin-mediated depletion and TEV-mediated removal of meiotic kleisins. The association of COH-3/4 with chromosomes is dynamic and is under the control of two cohesin regulators, WAPL-1 and SCC-2, while REC-8 remains more stably associated. The authors established that COH-3/4 is involved in maintaining the structural integrity of chromosome axes, whereas the REC-8 cohesin is solely responsible for sister chromatid cohesion throughout meiosis. They further demonstrated the role of REC-8 in the repair of meiotic DSBs.

Overall, this solid work unequivocally establishes the distinct regulation and requirements for REC-8 and COH-3/4 cohesin complexes during C. elegans meiosis. However, as the authors acknowledged, the role of REC-8 cohesins in sister chromatid cohesion has been shown previously using genetic mutants (Crawley et al., 2016 eLife). While the authors highlighted the advantages of removing cohesin subunits in establishing their distinct requirements, many of the results were recapitulated from their previous work (e.g. rec-8; spo-11 and coh-3/4; spo-11). It might be helpful for the readers to compare the results between the two studies and point out uniquely illuminating results.

The role of REC-8 in DNA repair has also been shown in different contexts. Chromosomes fragmentation and DNA bridges are observed in rec-8; syp-1 or rec-8; syp-2 (RNAi) animals (Colaiacovo et al., 2003 Dev Cell; Crawley et al., 2016 eLife), suggesting a role of REC-8 in inter-sister repair. Persistent RAD-51 foci are also observed on asynapsed chromosomes in rec-8 mutants, suggesting a role for REC-8 in DNA repair (Cahoon et al., 2019 Genetics). The authors must cite these papers and discuss the results in the context of prior work.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The study, performed in the animal model C. elegans, aims at characterizing functional differences in the meiosis-specific kleisins, REC-8 and COH-3/4.<br /> The authors conclude that in worms the identity of the kleisin subunit of the cohesin complex determines whether cohesin promotes cohesion, or controls higher-order chromosome structure. COH-3/4 is highly abundant and dynamic and responds to SCC-2 and WAPL-1. In contrast, REC-8 complexes associate stably and in low abundance and are resistant to SCC-2 and WAPL-1 perturbations.

Main points:

This study is a continuation and partially a repeat of a study Castellano-Pozo & Martinez-Perez published in Nat. Comm. 2020, in which they depleted COH-3/4 and REC-8 by injecting TEV and cleaved artificially engineered TEV sites in these kleisins.The results were slightly different though, as the authors concluded: "Disassembly of axial elements requires simultaneous removal of REC-8 and COH-3/4."

The current study uses a degron instead of TEV and SIM to revisit the same result. This time, degradation of COH-3/4 alone, but not of Rec8 alone completely eliminates axial elements. It seems that, if the conclusion is now correct, the previous headline must be incorrect, showing that more care has to be taken in the conclusions.

One new experiment in this study is the degradation of scc-2::AID::GFP. The authors treat the germline with auxin for 14 hours. How long scc-2::AID actually needs for degradation and thus, how long cells actually remain without SCC-2, is unknown. What is definitely needed is a serious analysis of the speed of degradation of Scc2 in the various stages.

It is currently not possible to estimate, as the authors do, how long cells have been without SCC-2. This estimation assumes an immediate depletion of SCC-2.<br /> If this were indeed the case, then depletion intervals should be much shorter, because the important primary phenotypes occur immediately after depletion, not 14 hours later.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The manuscript describes a multi-ancestry meta-analysis of genome-wide association studies of tuberculosis risk from case-control cohorts across several European, Asian, and African countries.

A main finding is that there is substantial common variant heritability of tuberculosis risk is well established. However, this analysis needs to be adjusted for differing case-control ratios in order to put the heritability estimates onto the liability scale so that variation across countries/cohorts can be properly assessed.

The authors find the strongest statistical evidence for association at a HLA locus. However, because of the complexity of this region and the diversity across ancestries, interpretation of this association is difficult.

This manuscript shows that there is potential to identify heritable sources of tuberculosis risk across ancestries. However, better genotyping of the HLA region and larger sample sizes will be needed to make further progress.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This manuscript tackles the important and vexing problem of mapping alleles for TB. It is a really important problem, and this paper presents the largest genetic data set. It does so by amalgamating data from multiple cohorts. The manuscript rightly points out that many studies have not produced reproducible results, and most alleles are population specific, and rarely seen in multiple studies.

1. Authors find a strong HLA associated SNP. They do conduct HLA imputation, but there is little effective fine-mapping. Authors should report which classical alleles are consistent with this allelic association (e.g. which classical alleles are in phase with it). Authors comment on DQA1-0301, but it isn't clear in the main text how significant it is. I think the authors should dig a little deeper. Imputing amino acids and assessing association might be useful. Finding classical alleles that explain the SNP associations and are seen across populations might be useful. If the authors think that the SNP might be a regulatory allele, the authors should make a case for that based on genomic annotations, eQTL analyses etc.<br /> 2. The authors comment on ancestry. Are ancestry components disease associated in any cohort? It might be interesting to demonstrate this.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

This paper was a significant and commendable effort, given all the challenges in TB genetics research. It was generally well written and analyses well done. Analytical methods were appropriate. The inclusion of polygenic heritability estimates is also nice to have within this large work. There is also a wealth of supplemental data provided, which will be useful to the field.

However, there are a number of important weaknesses that need to be addressed. These are listed here, and recommended revisions are addressed in the recommendations section:<br /> 1. As the authors point out, one of the challenges in this work is the varying phenotype definitions (diagnosis of TB cases, definition of controls) across all the included genetic studies. Table S1 is critical for this, however it is missing information, and some of the information is unclear. More importantly, the authors state multiple times that there is no evidence of heterogeneity due to these variable phenotype definitions, and that genetic ancestry contributes more to differences in effect sizes between GWAS than study design. However, these two things are confounded - different study designs / phenotype definitions were used in studies of different ancestry.<br /> 2. The polygenic heritability analysis table is not explained very well.<br /> 3. The supplemental data file is not very helpful without some sort of guide. It isn't clear whether the wealth of candidate genes that have been studied in TB were examined in these data. That would be a great benefit of this work.<br /> 4. There needs to be clarity on how unpublished works were sought. In non-genetic meta-analyses, there is usually some detail about a process of contacting authors, etc. There needs to be some assurance that every attempt was made to collect all the relevant data. It is also not clear why family-based analyses could not be included considering that summary statistics were the basis of analysis.<br /> 5. It is rather surprising that only one locus meets genome-wide significance. The authors do explain this well in terms of the ancestry-specific effects driving these results, but it is also surprising that no candidate genes (that had not been discovered in GWAS studies, but were rather studied separately) did not rise to some higher significance threshold.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Liu et al present a very interesting manuscript investigating whether there are distinct mechanisms of learning in children with ASD. What they found was that children with ASD showed comparable learning to typically developing children, but that there was a difference in learning strategy, with less plasticity and more stable learning representations in children with ASD. In other words, children with ASD showed similar learning performance to typically developing children but were more likely to use different learning rules to get there. Interestingly greater fMRI-measured brain plasticity was associated with learning gains in typically developing children, whereas more stable (less plasticity) neural patterns were associated with learning gains in autistic children. This was mediated by insistence on sameness (from the RRIB) in the ASD group.

This is a good paper, well reasoned and with strong methods. The biggest issue is related to subject numbers and possibly the conceptualization of ASD. With n=35 it is only possible to make a generalized statement about autism. For example, take the following statement from the results: "while most TD children used the memory-based strategy most frequently following training, nearly half of the children with ASD used rule-based strategies most frequently for trained problems." Is this the heterogeneity of autism at play, or the noisiness of the task and measures? Conceptually, is it realistic to expect a unitary learning strategy in all of autism? Lastly, the task itself can only be solved in a subset of autistic children and therefore presents a limited view of the condition.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

- Overall, the authors sought to determine whether children with autism spectrum disorder (ASD) or typical development (TD) would both benefit from a 5-day intervention designed to improve numerical problem-solving. They were particularly interested in how learning across training would be associated with pre-post intervention changes in brain activity, measured with functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI). They also examined whether brain-behavior associations driven by learning might be moderated by a classic cognitive inflexibility symptom in ASD ("insistence on sameness").

- The study is reasonably well-powered, uses a 5-day evidence-based intervention, and uses a multivariate correlation-based metric for examining neuroplastic changes that may be less susceptible to random variation over time than conventional mass univariate fMRI analyses.

- The study did have some weaknesses that draw into question the specific claims made based on the present set of analyses, as well as limit the generalizability of the findings to the significant proportion of individuals with ASD that are outside of the normative range of general cognitive functioning. The study also found minimal evidence for transfer between trained and untrained mathematical problems, limiting enthusiasm for the intervention itself.

- The majority of the authors' claims were rooted in the data and the team was generally able to accomplish their aims. I am sensitive to the fact that one of the main limitations I noted would have significant ethical implications-i.e. NOT offering potentially beneficial numerical training to children randomized to a sham or control group.

- I think the authors' work will represent a welcome addition to a growing corpus of studies showing similar neuropsychological test performance across several cognitive domains (e.g. learning, memory, proactive cognitive control, etc.) in ASD and TD. However, these relatively preserved cognitive functions still appear to be implemented by unique neural systems and demonstrate unique correlations to clinical symptoms in youth with ASD relative to TD, which may have implications for both educational and clinical contexts.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Liu and colleagues examined learning and brain plasticity in neurotypical children and children with autism. The main findings include autistic children relying more on rule-based versus memory-based learning strategies, altered associations between learning gains and brain plasticity in children with autism, and insistence on sameness as a moderator between brain plasticity and learning in autism. Although the sample size is limited in this study, the findings provide a significant contribution to the field.

The major strengths of this paper include an extensive pre and post training protocol, a detailed methods section, rationale behind the study, investigation of a potential moderator of learning gains and neural plasticity, and investigation of "neural plasticity" in association to learning in autism.

Weaknesses of the study include a small sample size, and some missing information/analyses from the study.

The authors laid out four clear aims of the study. They investigated these aims and the analytic approaches were appropriate.

The paper included significant findings toward better understanding the mechanisms underlying differences in learning strategies and behavior in children diagnosed with autism spectrum disorder. This holds significant value in educational and classroom settings. Further, the investigation of a potential moderator of learning gains and neural plasticity provides a potential mechanism to improve the relationship. Overall, this is a significant contribution to the field.

The autism literature is limited in understanding differences in learning styles and the underlying neural mechanisms of these differences.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

As part of a special issue on COVID-19 and cancer, Fuzzell and colleagues report findings from their mixed method study on the impact of the pandemic on cervical cancer screening and colposcopies, consisting of a national (United States) survey (March-August 2021) of 1251 clinicians (675 perform colposcopy) and qualitative interviews (June-December 2021) with 55 of these clinicians. The study looked specifically at perceived pandemic-related practice changes and disruptions over one year into the pandemic after the lockdowns had been lifted.

The overall focus is on three pandemic-related questions (impact on cervical cancer screening practice, colposcopy practice, ability to provide LEEP) that were asked as part of a larger survey related to cervical cancer screening and management of abnormal results, details of which are however not fully described in terms of the survey's general aim and items, but seem to have been designed within the context of adherence to guidelines (following Cabana's Guideline Based Practice Improvement Framework).

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Lindsay Fuzzell and her team of researchers have performed an extremely well-executed survey study, which captures a wide spectrum of providers who perform cervical cancer screening in the US. The researchers have captured a vast amount of demographic data in this study in attempting to determine whether cervical cancer screening continued to be reduced in the year immediately after the lockdown period caused by the COVID-19 pandemic.

The authors have uncovered some important and revealing concerns regarding the current state of cancer screening during the public health crisis caused by the COVID-19 pandemic. The most notable implication from their survey was a statistically higher reported reduction in cervical cancer screening in Internal medicine and family medicine providers as well as for community health and safety net clinics. These findings are important as they represent a large portion of primary care and a vulnerable patient population that has been shown to have worse cancer-related outcomes.

This study is more sobering information about the magnitude of ramifications of the COVID-19 pandemic on the US public health system. Decreases in cancer screening may have lasting implications for cancer-related mortality for many years to come. The implications of not going back to pre-pandemic cancer screening rates are daunting, to say the least.

The scope of this survey, the amount of data attained, and the sound methodology of the data acquisition and statistical analysis are the strengths of this study. Weaknesses are inherent to the study relying on survey answers rather than data from cervical cancer screening registries. Reporting biases are complex in surveys and answers given may not reflect the true rates of screening. The authors have also reported a disproportionate and statistically significant reduction in cervical cancer screening for Black and Asian providers. I would conclude more cautiously here with confidence intervals crossing one in both for this statistical analysis.

Overall, this is a survey study with a great magnitude, which has important implications for cancer screening and public health in the US.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

In this paper, the authors report cervical cancer screening practice during the covid pandemic in the US from the perspective of health professionals (HPs). Two methods were used: survey and regression analysis, and qualitative interviews. Analyses indicated that older, non-White, internal medicine, and family medicine clinicians and those practicing in community health centers had higher odds of reporting reduced screening. Interviews highlighted disruptions of services and a lack of tracking systems.<br /> The strengths of the paper are mainly i) using three different sources of HPs' recruitment and ii) being able to recruit a large number of participants in both survey and interviews and iii) the demographic characteristics of the interviewees were similar to those of the participants of the survey.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The strength of this work is the quality and quantity of data, which identify a critical histidine residue, His12 of SsrB, that is responsible for the allosteric, pH-dependent conformational change in SsrB and for phosphorylation of SsrB. That is the fundamental question to the field: the low pH response when Salmonella invades host cells and utilizes acidification within a Salmonella-containing vacuole as a signal to initiate the expression of virulence genes from the Salmonella pathogenicity island 2 (SPI-2) suite of virulence genes, which encode specific effector proteins and a unique secretion injectisome that has, to date, eluded purification. The SsrB protein will activate the transcription of non-SPI-2 genes at neutral pH in the regulation of biofilm formation. The low pH, phosphorylated SsrB structure allows for cooperative binding to DNA that is necessary for SPI-2 gene activation. Remarkably, the substitution of the single His12 residue of SsrB is enough to eliminate its activity at acidic pH, but not at normal pH. The authors employ a clever and exceptional single-molecule DNA unzipping assay for their DNA affinity measurements. Another major strength of this work is the logical flow of the results section and the lucidity of the written presentation. This work will guide the field in allowing for the expression of SPI-2 in the lab for mechanistic studies that would be otherwise impossible to do within a vacuole.

The first chapter of the results section includes the demonstration that acid pH increases SsrB affinity for SPI-2 promoter DNA. The authors employed a sophisticated single molecule DNA unzipping to measure the effects of pH on SsrB affinity to the DNA target. The DAN affinity was ~32-fold higher at acid pH (6.1) than at neutral pH (7.4). At both acidic and neutral pH conditions DNA binding was highly cooperative.

In the second results chapter, the authors investigated whether the DAN binding domain of SsrB was responsible for low pH-stimulated DNA binding. SsrB is a classic two-component regulatory protein with an N-terminal receiver domain that gets phosphorylated during activation and a C-terminal DNA binding domain to affect the regulation of gene expression in response to phosphorylation. Again, the single molecule DNA unzipping assay was employed to characterize pH effects on just the C-terminal binding domain (SsrB-C). The isolated C-terminal domain bound DNA with a 4-fold lower affinity as compared to the full-length protein. Cooperativity was also reduced. SsrB-C was shown to be unable to support acid-stimulation of SPI-2 transcription using both in vivo and in vitro transcriptional assays. The data is quite solid.

The third results chapter is a comparison of SsrB to other members of the NarL/FixJ subfamily of response regulators. SsrB is the only member to have known pH dependence on its activity. The authors found SsrB to have the highest pI of the subfamily and the second-greatest number of histidine residues. Of four histidine residues in the receiver domain His12 was conserved in the subfamily, while His28, His34, and His 72 were unique to SsrB and thus initially investigated. Since histidine residues are known to play a role in pH sensing, the three histidine residues in the receiver domain were extensively characterized for a potential role in pH-dependent transcriptional activation. The experiments ruled out the role of the three unique histidine residues in the SsrB receiver domain in pH sensing.

The fourth research chapter demonstrated that it is the conserved His14 of SsrB that is responsible for pH sensing. A striking result was the finding that the H12Q substitution retained full DNA binding activity at neutral pH, but at acidic pH, the H12Q allele was unable to activate SPI-2 transcription. Further analysis showed the mutant allele was defective in subunit cooperativity.

The fifth research chapter characterized other amino acid substitutions at His12 of SsrB. Positively charged substitutions were employed to mimic the protonated state of His12 and aromatic substitutions were chosen to mimic the aromatic nature of the imidazole ring of histidine. H12Y and H12F substitutions had substantially reduced activity but retained pH sensing. Charged substitutions were defective for both binding and pH sensing. These results support the conclusion that the aromatic nature of the histidine imidazole role was important for pH sensing.

In the final research chapter, the authors characterized His 12 substitutions for effects on SsrB phosphorylation at Asp56. The results of these assays showed that substitution at His12 reduced both SsrB phosphorylation at neutral pH and abolished pH-dependent changes in SsrB phosphorylation consistent with conformational changes in SsrB as a result of substitution at His12.

Overall, a solid study that defines the essential role of His12 in SsrB activation at low pH. His12 is critical for pH sensing, SsrB phosphorylation, SsrB oligomerization, and in vivo Salmonella virulence.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors seek to explore the mechanistic basis for enhancement binding to DNA by SsrB at lower pH. Their evidence supports the conclusions listed in the Evaluation Summary. Multiple additional conclusions are not supported by the data as described below:

1. The experiment displayed in Figure 5 is deeply flawed for multiple reasons and should be removed from the manuscript entirely. A Michaelis-Menton plot compares the initial rate of a reaction versus substrate concentration. Instead, the authors plotted the fraction of SsrB that is phosphorylated after 10 minutes at various substrate concentrations. Such a plot must reach saturation because the enzyme is limiting, whereas it is not always possible to achieve saturation in a genuine Michaelis-Menton plot. Because no reaction rates were measured, it is not possible to derive kcat values from the data. There are also at least three potential problems with the reaction conditions themselves: (i) Increasing the concentration of the phosphoramidite substrate increased ionic strength. Response regulator active sites contain many charged moieties and autophosphorylation of at least one response regulator (CheY) is inhibited by increasing ionic strength (PMID 10471801). (ii) Autophosphorylation with phosphoramidite is pH dependent because the nitrogen on the donor must be protonated to form a good leaving group (PMID 9398221). The pKa of phosphoramidite is ~8. Therefore, the fraction of phosphoramidite that is reactive (i.e., protonated) will be very different at pH 6.1 and 7.4. (iii) Response regulator autophosphorylation absolutely depends on the presence of a divalent metal ion (usually Mg2+) in the active site (PMID 2201404). There is no guarantee that the 20 mM Mg2+ included in the reaction is sufficient to saturate SsrB. Furthermore, as the authors themselves note, the amino acid at SsrB position 12 is likely to affect the affinity of Mg2+ binding. Therefore, the fraction of SsrB that is reactive (i.e. has Mg2+ bound) may differ between wildtype and the H12Q mutant, and/or between wildtype at different pHs (because the protonation state of His12 changes).

2. The data in Figures 1abcd and 3de are clearly sigmoidal rather than hyperbolic, indicating cooperativity. However, there are insufficient data points between the upper and lower bounds to accurately calculate the Hill coefficient or KD values. This limitation of the data means that comparisons of apparent Hill coefficient or KD values under different conditions cannot be the basis of credible conclusions.

3. There are hundreds of receiver domain structures in PDB. There is some variation, but to a first approximation receiver domain structures, all exhibit an (alpha/beta)5 fold. The structure of SsrB predicted by i-TASSER breaks the standard beta-2 strand into two parts, which throws off the numbering for subsequent beta strands. Given the highly conserved receiver domain fold, I am skeptical that the predicted i-TASSER structure is correct or adds any value to the manuscript. If the authors wish to retain the structure of the manuscript, then they should point out the unusual feature and the consequence of strand numbering.

4. The detailed predictions of active site structure in Supplementary Figure 5 are not physiologically relevant because Mg2+ was not included in the simulation. The presence of a divalent cation binding to Asp10 and Asp11 is likely to substantially alter interactions between Asp 10, Asp11, His12, and Lys109.

5. The authors present an AlphaFold model of an SsrB dimer, and note that His12 is at the dimer interface. However, the authors also believe that a higher-order oligomer of SsrB binds to DNA in a pH-dependent manner. Do the authors have any suggestions or informed speculation about how His12 might affect higher-order oligomerization than dimerization?

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Once inside a cellular vacuole, Salmonella senses the low pH and activates the transcriptional regulator SsrB to induce expression of the Salmonella pathogenicity island 2 genes that are essential for intracellular survival and replication inside the host. This study investigates the mechanisms by which SsrB senses the pH changes, and with a series of elegant experiments identify a conserved residue in the receiver domain, His12, as essential for pH sensing and Salmonella virulence.

Overall, this study identifies an important mechanism of pathogen virulence, which could be targeted to control intracellular replication of the pathogen. The experiments are well conducted, the manuscript is clearly written, and the data are convincing and well presented. The authors perform a logical and detailed analysis of several portions of SsrB to finally identify His12 as a key residue for pH sensing. This was not an easy task. Moreover, the fact that a single amino acid appears to be so important for SsrB pH sensing and SsrB phosphorylation is an important finding for potentially targeting SsrB and inhibiting Salmonella virulence.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The work proposes a model of neural information processing based on a 'synergistic global workspace,' which processes information in three principal steps: a gatekeeping step (information gathering), an information integration step, and finally, a broadcasting step. The authors determined the synergistic global workspace based on previous work and extended the role of its elements using 100 fMRI recordings of the resting state of healthy participants of the HCP. The authors then applied network analysis and two different measures of information integration to examine changes in reduced states of consciousness (such as anesthesia and after-coma disorders of consciousness). They provided an interpretation of the results in terms of the proposed model of brain information processing, which could be helpful to be implemented in other states of consciousness and related to perturbative approaches. Overall, I found the manuscript to be well-organized, and the results are interesting and could be informative for a broad range of literature, suggesting interesting new ideas for the field to explore. However, there are some points that the authors could clarify to strengthen the paper. Key points include:

1. The work strongly relies on the identification of the regions belonging to the synergistic global workspace, which was primarily proposed and computed in a previous paper by the authors. It would be great if this computation could be included in a more explicit way in this manuscript to make it self-contained. Maybe include some table or figure being explicit in the Gradient of redundancy-to-synergy relative importance results and procedure.

2. It would be beneficial if the authors could provide further explanation regarding the differences in the procedure for selecting the workspace and its role within the proposed architecture. For instance, why does one case uses the strength of the nodes while the other case uses the participation coefficient? It would be interesting to explore what would happen if the workspace was defined directly using the participation coefficient instead of the strength. Additionally, what impact would it have on the procedure if a different selection of modules was used? For example, instead of using the RSN, other criteria, such as modularity algorithms, PCA, Hidden Markov Models, Variational Autoencoders, etc., could be considered. The main point of my question is that, probably, the RSN are quite redundant networks and other methods, as PCA generates independent networks. It would be helpful if the authors could offer some comments on their intuition regarding these points without necessarily requiring additional computations.

3. The authors acknowledged the potential relevance of perturbative approaches in terms of PCI and quantification of consciousness. It would be valuable if the authors could also discuss perturbative approaches in relation to inducing transitions between brain states. In other words, since the authors investigate disorders of consciousness where interventions could provide insights into treatment, as suggested by computational and experimental works, it would be interesting to explore the relationship between the synergistic workspace and its modifications from this perspective as well.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

SUMMARY:

In this paper, Luppi et al., apply the recently developed integrated information decomposition to the question how the architecture of information processing changes when consciousness is lost. They explore fMRI data from two different populations: healthy volunteers undergoing reversible anesthesia, as well as from patients who have long-term disorders of consciousness. They show that, in both populations, synergistic integration of information is disrupted in common ways. These results are interpreted in the context of the SAPHIRE model (recently proposed by this same group), that describes information processing in the brain as being composed of several distinct steps: 1) gatekeeping (where gateway regions introduce sensory information to the global synergistic workspace where 2) it is integrated or "processed" before 3) by broadcast back to to the brain.

I think that this paper is an excellent addition to the literature on information theory in neuroscience, and consciousness science specifically. The writing is clear, the figures are informative, and the authors do a good job of engaging with existing literature. While I do have some questions about the interpretations of the various information-theoretic measures, all in all, I think this is a significant piece of science that I am glad to see added to the literature.

One specific question I have is that I am still a little unsure about what "synergy" really is in this context. From the methods, it is defined as that part of the joint mutual information that is greater than the maximum marginal mutual information. While this is a perfectly fine mathematical measure, it is not clear to me what that means for a squishy organ like the brain. What should these results mean to a neuro-biologist or clinician?

Right now the discussion is very high level, equating synergy to "information processing" or "integrated information", but it might be helpful for readers not steeped in multivariate information theory to have some kind of toy model that gets worked out in detail. On page 15, the logical XOR is presented in the context of the single-target PID, but 1) the XOR is discrete, while the data analyzed here are continuous BOLD signals w/ Gaussian assumptions and 2) the XOR gate is a single-target system, while the power of the Phi-ID approach is the multi-target generality. Is there a Gaussian analog of the single-target XOR gate that could be presented? Or some multi-target, Gaussian toy model with enough synergy to be interesting?

I think this would go a long way to making this work more accessible to the kind of interdisciplinary readership that this kind of article with inevitably attract.

STRENGTHS

The authors have a very strong collection of datasets with which to explore their topic of interest. By comparing fMRI scans from patients with disorders of consciousness, healthy resting state, and various stages of propofol anesthesia, the authors have a very robust sample of the various ways consciousness can be perturbed, or lost. Consequently, it is difficult to imagine that the observed effects are merely a quirk of some biophysical effect of propofol specifically, or a particular consequence of long-term brain injury, but do in fact reflect some global property related to consciousness. The data and analyses themselves are well-described, have been previously validated, and are generally strong. I have no reason to doubt the technical validity of the presented results.

The discussion and interpretation of these results is also very nice, bringing together ideas from the two leading neurocognitive theories of consciousness (Global Workspace and Integrated Information Theory) in a way that feels natural. The SAPHIRE model seems plausible and amenable to future research. The authors discuss this in the paper, but I think that future work on less radical interventions (e.g. movie watching, cognitive tasks, etc) could be very helpful in refining the SAPHIRE approach.

Finally, the analogy between the PID terms and the information provided by each eye redundantly, uniquely, and synergistically is superb. I will definitely be referencing this intuition pump in future discussions of multivariate information sharing.

WEAKNESSES

I have some concerns about the way "information processing" is used in this study. The data analyzed, fMRI BOLD data is extremely coarse, both in spatial and temporal terms. I am not sure I am convinced that this is the natural scale at which to talk about information "processing" or "integration" in the brain. In contrast to measures like sample entropy or Lempel-Ziv complexity (which just describe the statistics of BOLD activity), synergy and Phi are presented here as quasi-causal measures: as if they "cause" or "represent" phenomenological consciousness. While the theoretical arguments linking integration to consciousness are compelling, is this is right data set to explore them in?

For example, the work by Newman, Beggs, and Sherril (nee Faber), synergy is associated with "computation" performed in individual neurons: the information about the future state of a target neuron that is only accessible when knowing both inputs (analogous to the synergy in computing the sum of two dice). Whether one thinks that this is a good approach neural computation or not, it fits within the commonly accepted causal model of neural spiking activity: neurons receive inputs from multiple upstream neurons, integrate those inputs and change their firing behavior accordingly.

In contrast, here, we are looking at BOLD data, which is a proxy measure for gross-scale regional neural activity, which itself is a coarse-graining of millions of individual neurons to a uni-dimensional spectrum that runs from "inactive to active." It feels as though a lot of inferences are being made from very coarse data.

REFERENCES:

1. Newman, E. L., Varley, T. F., Parakkattu, V. K., Sherrill, S. P. & Beggs, J. M. Revealing the Dynamics of Neural Information Processing with Multivariate Information Decomposition. Entropy 24, 930 (2022).

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors analysed functional MRI recordings of brain activity at rest, using state-of-the-art methods that reveal the diverse ways in which the information can be integrated in the brain. In this way, they found brain areas that act as (synergistic) gateways for the 'global workspace', where conscious access to information or cognition would occur, and brain areas that serve as (redundant) broadcasters from the global workspace to the rest of the brain. The results are compelling and consisting with the already assumed role of several networks and areas within the Global Neuronal Workspace framework. Thus, in a way, this work comes to stress the role of synergy and redundancy as complementary information processing modes, which fulfill different roles in the big context of information integration.

In addition, to prove that the identified high-order interactions are relevant to the phenomenon of consciousness, the same analysis was performed in subjects under anesthesia or with disorders of consciousness (DOC), showing that indeed the loss of consciousness is associated with a deficient integration of information within the gateway regions.

However, there is something confusing in the redundancy and synergy matrices shown in Figure 2. These are pair-wise matrices, where the PID was applied to identify high-order interactions between pairs of brain regions. I understand that synergy and redundancy are assessed in the way the brain areas integrate information in time, but it is still a little contradictory to speak about high-order in pairs of areas. When talking about a "synergistic core", one expects that all or most of the areas belonging to that core are simultaneously involved in some (synergistic) information processing, and I do not see this being assessed with the currently presented methodology. Similarly, if redundancy is assessed only in pairs of areas, it may be due to simple correlations between them, so it is not a high-order interaction. Perhaps it is a matter of language, or about the expectations that the word 'synergy' evokes, so a clarification about this issue is needed. Moreover, as the rest of the work is based on these 'pair-wise' redundancy and synergy matrices, it becomes a significative issue.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This study uses electrophysiological techniques in vitro to address the role of the Na+ leak channel NALCN in various physiological functions in cartwheel interneurons of the dorsal cochlear nucleus. Comparing wild type and glycinergic neuron-specific knockout mice for NALCN, the authors show that these channels 1) are required for spontaneous firing, 2) are modulated by noradrenaline (NA, via alpha2 receptors) and GABA (through GABAB receptors), 3) how the modulation by NA enhances IPSCs in these neurons.

This work builds on previous results from the Trussell's lab in terms of the physiology of cartwheel cells, and from other labs in terms of the role of NALCN channels, that have been characterized in more and more brain areas somewhat recently; for this reason, this study could be of interest for researchers that work in other preparations as well. The general conclusions are strongly supported by results that are clearly and elegantly presented.

I have a few comments that, in my opinion, might help clarify some aspects of the manuscript.

1) It is mentioned throughout the manuscript, including the abstract, that the results suggest a closed apposition of NALCN channels and alpha2 and GABAB receptors. From what I understand, this conclusion comes from the fact that GABAB receptors activate GIRK channels through a membrane-delimited mechanism. Is it possible that these receptors converge on other effectors, for example adenylate cyclase (see https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6374141/).

2) In Figure 2G, the neurons from NALCN KO mice appear to reach a significantly higher frequency than those from WT (figure 2E, 110 vs. 70 spikes/s). Was this higher frequency a feature of all experiments? The results mention a rundown of peak firing rate due to whole-cell dialysis, but, from what I understand, the control conditions should be similar for all experiments.

3) Also in Figure 2, the firing patterns for neurons from WT and NALCN KO mice appear to be quite different, with spikes appearing to be generated during the hyperpolarization of the bursts in the second half of the current step for WT neurons but always during the depolarization in KO neurons. Was this always the case? If so, could NALCN channels be involved in this type of firing? Along these lines, it would be interesting to show an example of a firing pattern of neurons from WT mice in the presence of NA, which inhibits NALCN channels.

4) It might be interesting to discuss how the hyperpolarization induced by the activation of GIRK channels and inhibition of NALCN channels could have different consequences due to their opposite effect on the input resistance.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This is a very interesting paper with several important findings related to the working mechanism of the cartwheel cells (CWC) in the dorsal cochlear nucleus (DCN). These cells generate spontaneous firing that is inhibited by the activation of α2-adrenergic receptors, which also enhances the synaptic strength in the cells, but the mechanisms underlying the spontaneous firing and the dual regulation by α2-adrenergic receptor activation have remained elusive. By recording these cells with the NALCN sodium-leak channel conditionally knocked, the authors discovered that both the spontaneous firing and the regulation by noradrenaline (NA) require NALCN. Mechanistically, the authors found that activation of the adrenergic receptor or GABAB receptor inhibits NALCN. Interestingly, these receptor activations also suppress the low [Ca2+] "activation" of NALCN currents, suggesting crosstalk between the pathways. The finding of such dominant contribution of the NALCN conductance to the regulation of firing by NA is somewhat surprising considering that NA is known to regulate K+ conductances in many other neurons.

The studies reveal the molecular mechanisms underlying well known regulations of the neuronal processes in the auditory pathway. The results will be important to the understanding of auditory information processing in particular, and, more generally, to the understanding of the regulation of inhibitory neurons and ion channels. The results are convincing and are clearly presented.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The study by Ngodup and colleagues describes the contribution of sodium leak NALCN conductance on the effects of noradrenaline on cartwheel interneurons of the DCN. The manuscript is very well-written and the experiments are well-controlled. The scope of the study is of high biological relevance and recapitulates a primary finding of the Khaliq lab (Philippart et al., eLife, 2018) in ventral midbrain dopamine neurons, that Gi/o-coupled receptors inhibit NALCN current to reduce neuronal excitability. Together these studies provide unequivocable evidence for NALCN as a downstream target of these receptors. There are no major concerns. I have only minor suggestions:

Minor<br /> 1. As introduced in the introduction, NALCN is inhibited by extracellular calcium which has led to some discourse of the relevance of NALCN when recorded in 0.1 mM calcium. A strength of this study is the effect of NA on NALCN is recorded in physiological levels of calcium (1.2 mM). I suggest including the concentration of extracellular calcium in the aCSF in the Results section instead of relying on the reader to look to the Methods.

2. It would be interesting to include the basal membrane properties of the KO compared to wildtype, including membrane resistance and resting membrane potential. From the example recording in Figure 2, one might think that the KOs have lower membrane resistance, so it is interesting that the 2 mV hyperpolarization produced similar effects on rheobase. In addition, from the example in Figure 2G, it appears that NA has an effect on firing frequency with large current injection in the KO. Is this true in grouped data and if so, is there any speculation into how this occurs?

3. Please expand on the rationale for why GABAB and alpha2 must be physically close to NALCN. To my knowledge, the mechanism by which these receptors inhibit NALCN is not known. Must it be membrane-delimited?

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Wang and colleagues recently demonstrated the essential role of RBM24 (RNA-binding motif protein 24a) in the development of mouse hair cells (source: https://doi.org/10.1002/jcp.31003). In this study, they further expand on their findings by revealing that Rbm24 expression is absent in Pou4f3 mutant mice but not in Gfi1 mutant mice. This observation suggests that POU4F3 acts as an upstream regulator of Rbm24. The researchers effectively demonstrate that POU4F3 can bind to and regulate Rbm24 through three distant enhancers, which are located in open chromatin regions and are bound by POU4F3. Lastly, Wang and colleagues discovered that ectopic expression of Rbm24 was unable to prevent the degeneration of POU4F3 null hair cells.

The findings in this manuscript hold great significance as they provide additional insights into the transcriptional cascades crucial for hair cell development. The discovery of enhancers capable of driving transgene expression specifically in hair cells holds promising therapeutic implications. The figures presented in the study are of excellent quality, the employed techniques are state-of-the-art, the data are accurately represented without exaggeration, and the study demonstrates a high level of rigor.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Previous studies have shown that two hair cell transcription factors, Pou4f3 and Gfi1, are both necessary for the survival of cochlear hair cells, and that Gfi1 is regulated by Pou4f3. The authors have previously also shown that mosaic inactivation of the RNA-binding protein RBM24 leads to outer hair cell death.

In the present study, the authors show that hair cells die in Pou4f3 and Gfi1 mutant mice. They show that Gfi1 is regulated by Pou4f3. Both these observations have been published before. They then show that RBM24 is absent in Pou4f3 knockouts, but not Gfi1 knockouts. They ectopically activate RMB24 in the hair cells of Pou4f3 knockouts, but this does not rescue the hair cell death. Finally, the authors validate three RMB24 enhancers that are active in young hair cells and which have been previously shown to bind Pou4f3.

The experiments are well-executed and the data are clear. The results support the conclusions of the paper.

Much of the work in the paper has been reported before. The result that hair cell transcription factors operate in a network, with some transcription factors activating only a subset of hair cell genes, is an expected result. Since RMB24 is only one of many genes regulated directly by Pou4f3, it is not surprising that it cannot rescue the Pou4f3 knockout hair cell degeneration.

The identification of new hair cell enhancers may be of use to investigators wishing to express genes in hair cells.

In sum, this work, although carefully performed, does not shed significant new light on our understanding of hair cell development or survival.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This manuscript by Kelly et al. reports results from single-cell transcriptomic analysis of spinal neurons in zebrafish. The work builds on a strong foundation of literature and the objective, to discern gene expression patterns specializing on functionally distinct motor circuits, is well rationalized. Specifically, they compared the transcriptomes in the escape and swimming circuits.

The authors discovered, in the motor neurons of the escape circuit, two functional groups or "cassettes" of genes related to excitability and vesicle release, respectively. Expression of these genes makes sense for a "fast" circuit. This finding will be important to the field and form the basis for subsequent studies differentiating the escape circuit from others.

Unfortunately, efforts to identify a counterpart cassette in the SMns of the swimming pathway were unsuccessful. Instead, they found an abundance of transcription factors and ribosomal proteins; 1/3 were reported as other proteins, although it wasn't clear whether those were genes mediating excitability or transmitter release. Further analysis was not reported, and the authors speculate that the neurons in that pathway may not yet be born.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Kelly et al. strategically leverage state-of-the art scRNA-seq methods combined with unique strengths of the zebrafish larval model to identify gene expression patterns that underlie the different functional output of different neuronal circuits that converge on similar muscle groups. The results lead to the identification of ion channel and synapse associated genes that distinguish the neuronal components of a fast circuit mediating escape behavior from a rhythmic circuit mediating graded swimming.

The authors develop methods for isolation of single spinal cord neurons from 4 day post fertilization (dpf) zebrafish larvae. The 4 dpf neuronal circuits mediating escape vs. rhythmic swimming behavior have been extensively characterized allowing knowledge of the specific motor neuron and interneuron populations involved in one vs. the other circuit. (Work from the authors' research group has contributed to this strong starting point for this study.)

The transcriptomic analyses lead to the identification of clusters of cells sharing significant gene expression that distinguishes them from other clusters. Using well-known neuron subtype specific markers, the authors are able to assign a specific neuronal identity to about 2/3 of the cluster. Moreover, one other cluster results in the recognition in zebrafish of a neuronal cell type identified in the mammalian spinal cord, v0c, that they confirm to be present in zebrafish using solid markers. In addition, the results show that the zebrafish v0c population expressed markers of both cholinergic and glutamatergic neurons, while the mammalian v0c population is known to be cholinergic. (It is not clear whether the possibility that mammalian v0c neurons also express glutamatergic markers has been specifically tested, but it seems, at present, there is no evidence to suggest that might be the case.)

To zoom in on the question of molecular differences between the fast vs. rhythmic circuits, the authors focus on motor neurons as two different populations of neurons are involved in each circuit. (Along the way, they also identify markers that mark different subtypes of motor neurons.) They find that primary motor neurons (PMNs) involved in the fast circuit express a distinguishing cassette of ion channel and synapse associated genes. Moreover, the cassette of genes also is expressed by interneurons that function in the fast circuit. The results are illuminating and set the stage for many future exacting experiments.

As is true for significant work, the results open up and permit yet more rigorous and strategic analyses, running the gamut from specific molecules to behavior, of the circuit mechanisms underlying unique behaviors.

Overall, the work is carried out to high rigorous standards and the vast majority of conclusions are strongly supported by the results. However, there are a few instances of potential over-interpretation and points that could be further clarified/discussed:

1 - lines 412-414. The authors conclude that "Most importantly, and as detailed below, our scRNA seq revealed the ion channel and synaptic genes that serve to match specific neuronal function to behavior." That the authors have identified a gene cassette that distinguishes neurons of the fast escape circuit is a laudable finding. However, at this stage, to say that this gene cassette is the basis for unique circuit function and resultant behavior is a well-supported hypothesis that requires rigorous testing and not yet a solid conclusion. (Maybe that is what the authors meant, and I have misinterpreted the sentence.)

2 - lines 323-324: Given that ~ 6 hrs separates PMN from SMN birthdates (Myers et al. 1986) and that the study was done using 4dpf larval tissue, the possibility that the higher level of expression of transcription factors and RNA-biding factors in SMNs reflects "the less well differentiated state that accompanies the later birthdate of the SMns" seems unlikely.

3 - Fig 5 and Sup Fig 1:The authors mention that the unidentified cluster in the motor neuron set shares markers with non-skeletal muscle. I realize that this cluster is tangential to their focus. However, given that this cluster predominantly arises from the FACS sorted cells, it is worth considering that the cells might correspond to the pancreas.

4 - lines 113-115 and Fig. 1: The authors indicate that three clusters reflect cells that have mixed glial and neuronal cell expression. Is there any possibility that in a few instances, in the final single cell capture, that two rather than one cell were collected? (Again, not a major focus of the study but the cluster is commented on.)

Finally, as the transcriptomic information about glial cells will be of interest to many in the field, the authors are to be commended for depositng the data in congratulations to the authors for depositing the data in the publicly accessible Gene Expression Omnibus.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Functional and anatomical studies of spinal circuitry in vertebrates have formed the basis of our understanding of neuronal control of movements. Larval zebrafish provide a simplified system for deciphering spinal circuitry. In this manuscript, the authors performed scRNAseq on spinal cord neurons in larval zebrafish, identifying major classes of neuronal and glial types. Through transcriptome analysis, they validated several key interneuron types previously implicated in zebrafish locomotion circuitry. The authors went beyond identifying transcriptional markers and explored synaptic molecules associated with the strength of motor output. They discovered molecular distinctions causally related to the unique physiology of primary motoneuron (PMn) function, which involves providing strong synaptic outputs for escapes and fast swimming. They defined functional 'cassettes' comprising specific combinations of voltage-dependent ion channel types and synaptic proteins, likely responsible for generating maximal motor outputs.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this study, the authors investigate where and when brain activity is modulated by incoming linguistic cues during sentence comprehension. Sentence stimuli were designed such that incoming words had varying degrees of constraint on the sentence's structural interpretation as participants listened to them unfolding, i.e. due to varying degrees of verb transitivity and the noun's likelihood of assuming a specific thematic role. Word-by-word "online" structural interpretations for each sentence were extracted from a deep neural network model trained to reproduce language statistics. The authors relate the various metrics of word-by-word predicted sentence structure to brain data through a standard RSA approach at three distinct points of time throughout sentence presentation. The data provide convincing evidence that brain activity reflects preceding linguistic constraints as well as integration difficulty immediately after word onset of disambiguating material.

The authors confirm that their sentence stimuli vary in degree of constraint on sentence structure through independent behavioral data from a sentence continuation task. They also show a compelling correlation of these behavioral data with the online structure metric extracted from the deep neural network, which seems to pick up on the variation in constraints. In the introduction, the authors argue for the potential benefits of using deep neural network-derived metrics given that it has "historically been challenging to model the dynamic interplay between various types of linguistic and nonlinguistic information". Similarly, they later conclude that "future DLMs (...) may provide new insights into the neural implementation of the various incremental processing operations(...)".

By incorporating structural probing of a deep neural network, a technique developed in the field of natural language processing, into the analysis pipeline for investigating brain data, the authors indeed take an important step towards establishing advanced machine learning techniques for researching the neurobiology of language. However, given the popularity of deep neural networks, an argument for their utility should be carefully evidenced. However, the data presented here don't directly test how large the benefit provided by this tool really is. In fact, the authors show compelling correlations of the neural network-derived metrics with both the behavioral cloze-test data as well as several (corpus-)derived metrics. While this is a convincing illustration of how deep language models can be made more interpretable, it is in itself not novel. The correlation with behavioral data and corpus statistics also raises the question of what is the additional benefit of the computational model? Is it simply saving us the step of not having to collect the behavioral data, not having to compute the corpus statistics or does the model potentially uncover a more nuanced representation of the online comprehension process? This remains unclear because we are lacking a direct comparison of how much variance in the neural data is explained by the neural network-derived metrics beyond those other metrics (for example the main verb probability or the corpus-derived "active index" following the prepositional phrase).

With regards to the neural data, the authors show convincing evidence for early modulations of brain activity by linguistic constraints on sentence structure and importantly early modulation by the coherence between multiple constraints to be integrated. Those modulations can be observed across bilateral frontal and temporal areas as well as parts of the default mode network. The methods used are clear and rigorous and allow for a detailed exploration of how multiple linguistic cues are neurally encoded and dynamically shape the final representation of a sentence in the brain. However, at times the consequences of the RSA results remain somewhat vague with regard to the motivation behind different metrics and how they differ from each other. Therefore, some results seem surprising and warrant further discussion, for example:

Why does the neural network-derived parse depth metric fit neural data before the V1 uniqueness point if the sentence pairs begin with the same noun phrase? This suggests that the lexical information preceding V1, is driving the results. However, given the additional results, we can already exclude an influence of subject likelihood for a specific thematic role as this did not model the neural data in the V1 epoch to a significant degree. Relatedly, In Fig 2C it seems there are systematic differences between HiTrans and LoTrans sentences regarding the parse depth of determiner and subject noun according to the neural network model, while this is not expected according to the context-free parse.

"The degree of this mismatch is proportional to the evidence for or against the two interpretations (...). Besides these two measures based on the entire incremental input, we also focused on Verb1 since the potential structural ambiguity lies in whether Verb1 is interpreted as a passive verb or the main verb."

The neural data fits in V1 epoch differ in their temporal profile for the mismatch metrics and the Verb 1 depth respectively. I understand the "degree of mismatch" to be a measure of how strongly the neural network's hidden representations align with the parse depth of an active or passive sentence structure. If this is correct, then it is not clear from the text how far this measure differs from the Verb 1 depth alone, which is also indicating either an active or passive structure.

In previous studies, differences in neural activity related to distinct amounts of open nodes in the parse tree have been interpreted in terms of distinct working memory demands (Nelson et al. pnas 2017, Udden et al tics 2020). It seems that some of the metrics, for example the neural network-derived parse depth or the V1 depth may be similarly interpreted in the light of working memory demands. After all, during V1 epoch, the sentences do not only differ with respect to predicted sentence structure, but also in the amount of open nodes that need to be maintained. In the discussion, however, the authors interpret these results as "neural representations of an unfolding sentence's structure".

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This article is focused on investigating incremental speech processing, as it pertains to building higher-order syntactic structure. This is an important question because speech processing in general is lesser studied as compared to reading, and syntactic processes are lesser studied than lower-level sensory processes. The authors claim to shed light on the neural processes that build structured linguistic interpretations. The authors apply modern analysis techniques, and use state-of-the-art large language models in order to facilitate this investigation. They apply this to a cleverly designed experimental paradigm of EMEG data, and compare neural responses of human participants to the activation profiles in different layers of the BERT language model.

Strengths:

[1] The study aims to investigate an under-explored aspect of language processing, namely syntactic operations during speech processing

[2] The study is taking advantage of technological advancements in large language models, while also taking linguistic theory into account in building the hypothesis space

[3] The data combine EEG and MEG, which provides a valuable spatio-temporally resolved dataset

[4] The use of behavioural validation of high/low transitive was an elegant demonstration of the validity of their stimuli

Weaknesses:

[1] The manuscript is quite hard to understand, even for someone well-versed in both linguistic theory and LLMs. The questions, design, analysis approach, and conclusions are all quite dense and not easy to follow.

[2] The analyses end up seeming overly complicated when the underlying difference between sentence types is a simple categorical distinction between high and low transitivity. I am not sure why tree depth and BERT are being used to evaluate the degree to which a sentence is being processed as active or passive. If this is necessary, it would be helpful for the authors to motivate this more clearly.

[3] The main data result figures comparing BERT and the EMEG brain data are hard to evaluate because only t-values are provided, and those, only for significant clusters. It would be helpful to see the full 600 ms time course of rho values, with error bars across subjects, to really be able to evaluate it visually. This is a summary statistic that is very far away from the input data

[4] Some details are omitted or not explained clearly. For example, how was BERT masked to give word-by-word predictions? In its default form, I believe that BERT takes in a set of words before and after the keyword that it is predicting. But I assume that here the model is not allowed to see linguistic information in the future. How were the auditory stimuli recorded? Was it continuous speech or silences between each word? How was prosody controlled? Was it a natural speaker or a speech synthesiser?

It is difficult for me to fully assess the extent to which the authors achieved their aims, because I am missing important information about the setup of the experiment and the distribution of test statistics across subjects.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Syntactic parsing is a highly dynamic process: When an incoming word is inconsistent with the presumed syntactic structure, the brain has to reanalyze the sentence and construct an alternative syntactic structure. Since syntactic parsing is a hidden process, it is challenging to describe the syntactic structure a listener internally constructs at each time moment. Here, the authors overcome this problem by (1) asking listeners to complete a sentence at some break point to probe the syntactic structure mentally constructed at the break point, and (2) using a DNN model to extract the most likely structure a listener may extract at a time moment. After obtaining incremental syntactic features using the DNN model, the authors analyze how these syntactic features are represented in the brain using MEG.

Although the analyses are detailed, the current conclusion needs to be further specified. For example, in the abstract, it is concluded that "Our results reveal a detailed picture of the neurobiological processes involved in building structured interpretations through the integration across multifaceted constraints". The readers may remain puzzled after reading this conclusion.

Similarly, for the second part of the conclusion, i.e., "including an extensive set of bilateral brain regions beyond the classical fronto-temporal language system, which sheds light on the distributed nature of language processing in the brain."<br /> The more extensive cortical activation may be attributed to the spatial resolution of MEG, and it is quite well acknowledged that language processing is quite distributive in the brain.

The authors should also discuss:

(1) individual differences (whether the BERT representation is a good enough approximation of the mental representation of individual listeners).

(2) parallel parsing (I think the framework here should allow the brain to maintain parallel representations of different syntactic structures but the analysis does not consider parallel representations).

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors' aim was to test to what extent atypical organization of language is associated with a mirrored brain organization of other cognitive functions. In particular, they focused on the inferior frontal gyri (IFG) by studying the inhibitory control network. This allowed them to directly test the support for the Causal hypothesis of hemispheric specialization, arguing for fast sequences of cognitive processes being better performed by a single hemisphere, versus the Statistical hypothesis of lateralization, postulating an independent lateralization of each cognitive function.

Previous studies on this topic did not focus on functions involving homotopic language regions. This limitation is bypassed in this study by assessing inhibition with a Stop-Signal Task which also engages the IFG in the contralateral site to the verb generation task. By studying a combination of structural and functional information, in addition to the activation contrasts, the authors are able to test whether atypical organization is accompanied by stronger interhemispheric connectivity. Although relying mainly on correlations and lacking important methodological information that may be critical to understand the reported effects, the results are quite straightforward. However the bilingual/monolingual status and gender of the participants is not reported which might affect the relationship between language and inhibitory control.

The conclusions of the paper are supported by the data. With their design, the authors observed that, as a group, individuals with atypical organization show a mirror organization of the whole inhibitory network to the contralateral site, supporting the Causal hypothesis at the group level. However, individual data support the Statistical hypothesis, since the segregation between language and inhibition was not observed in all individuals and a variety of configurations in bilateral and bilateral organisation of language and inhibition were also observed.

The results of this study have important implications for our understanding of the independence between different cognitive functions which is crucial when addressing brain damage and rehabilitation. This aspect also indirectly speaks to researchers interested in evolution and in bilingualism and its relation to cognitive control. These aspects are not discussed but incorporating them would broaden the interest of the paper beyond the current implications mentioned.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Language skills are traditionally associated with a network of brain regions in the left hemisphere. In this intriguing study, Esteban Villar-Rodríguez and collaborators examined if atypical hemispheric lateralization for language determines the functional and structural organisation of the network for inhibitory control as well as its relationship with schizotypy and autistic spectrum traits. The results suggest that individuals who have atypical lateralisation of the language function have also an atypical (mirrored) lateralisation of the inhibitory control network, compared to the typical group (individuals with left-lateralised language function). Furthermore, the atypical organization of language production is associated with a greater white matter volume of the corpus callosum, and atypical lateralization of inhibitory control is related to a higher interhemispheric functional coupling of the IFC, suggesting a link between atypical functional lateralisation (language and inhibitory control) and structural and functional changes in the brain.

This study also provides interesting evidence on how atypical language lateralisation impacts some aspects of language behaviour (reading), i.e., atypical lateralization predicts worse reading accuracy. Furthermore, the results suggest an association between atypical lateralization and increased schizotypy and autistic traits.

The strength of this work is that it presents a collection of measurements on the same individuals (including task-related behavioural, functional and structural neuroimaging measures) to reveal if (and how) atypical language lateralisation might be associated with: (1) atypical neural organisation of other non-linguistic cognitive systems, (2) behavioural performance associated with language tasks, and finally (3) personality traits. As such the results presented in this manuscript have the potential to be informative for various disciplines. For instance, if clarifications/corrections are provided (see below), the results might provide some insight into the role of the right hemisphere for language processing in healthy individuals as well as patient populations with acquired linguistic impairment including stroke and dementia.

One important weakness of this manuscript is that several areas, including the characteristics of participants tested, and the hypotheses/predictions, are underspecified or incomplete. Furthermore, in some cases the types of analysis do not seem to be appropriate for addressing the questions of the present study and very little explanation for those choices is provided.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This study provides a novel in vitro model for the study of retinol transport across the human BBB by pairing iPSC-derived BMECs with the use of recombinant vitamin A serum transport proteins, RBP and TTR. Key findings of the paper include 1) the observation that the delivery mode of retinol affects its intracellular accumulation at the BBB but not its permeation across the BBB, 2) further highlighting that intracellular concentrations of retinol are also ensured by its efflux via its receptor STRA6 and 3) a potential novel role for TTR in retinol transport by upregulating LRAT mRNA expression, independently of RBP. Notably, the model appears to be more accurate than ones previously used (primary porcine BMECs) to study retinol delivery at the BBB, and could be used to study the retinol dysregulation at the BBB in neurodegenerative diseases (e.g. by using iPSC lines from NDD patients), something that miss in the paper.

Indeed, the major disappointment of this work is the clinical relevance that was highlighted in the Introduction but was never really studied in the end. iPSC from patients could be added to the study.

As a general comment, the study is well done however the introduction and the discussion as a bit long and do not get to the point of the work easily. Even sometimes losing the reader in many details (necessary here?). Less abbreviations would be appreciated for general readers.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Est and Murphy tested the feasibility of using brain microvascular endothelial-like cells (BMECs) derived from induced pluripotent stem cells (iPSCs) as a model for studying retinoid uptake and transport across the blood-brain barrier (BBB). Establishing this experimental model is an important step towards obtaining greater mechanistic insight into the specificity of retinol trafficking between blood and retinoid-dependent tissues. The authors validated the iPSC-derived BMECs by detecting the expression of specific protein markers for BBB. They also demonstrated that BMECs form a tight barrier when cultured in a Transwell chamber, allowing for the quantification of permeability across the cells rather than through paracellular leakage. Finally, they confirmed the expression of the transporter (STRA6), binding protein (CRBP1), and enzyme (LRAT), which are key elements of the molecular machinery involved in the cellular uptake of circulating retinol. The carefully established model of the human BBB served as an experimental platform for the authors to investigate the uptake and transcellular transport of retinol. For this purpose, they compared the kinetics and efficiency of retinoid accumulation delivered to the cell as free retinol, retinol bound to serum retinol-binding protein (RBP), or retinol-RBP in complex with transthyretin (TTR), a physiological binding partner for retinol-loaded RBP.

Although the development and thorough characterization of the experimental model of the BBB have great value and meaningfully contribute to ongoing efforts to better understand the mechanisms of retinoid homeostasis, the premise and interpretation of cellular uptake appear controversial. In particular:

1. The authors assume that there is a significant fraction of free ROL, 20% for ROH/RBP and 7% for RBP/TTR complexes (summarized in Table 1). This implies that at the physiological concentration of ROH/RBP in the plasma of 2 uM, free ROL represents 0.4 uM. However, the concentration of free ROL is limited by its poor solubility in the aqueous phase, which is around 0.06 uM (Szuts EZ, 1991, Arch Biochem Biophys). Moreover, taking into account the large concentration of other potential nonspecific carriers for lipids, it is safe to assume that there is virtually no free ROH in the plasma. There is also an important physiological reason for the limited amount of free ROL. Its rapid and nonspecific partition into cells (also observed in this study) would work against the highly specific RBP/STRA6-dependent ROH uptake pathway, undermining its physiological function.

2. The advantage of the experimental system used in this report is that it allows for the assessment of the permeability across BMECs. Interestingly, the basolateral accumulation of ROH represented only a small fraction (1 - 1.5%) of the total ROH taken up by the cells. Moreover, the overall permeability was comparable regardless of the source of ROL added at the apical side. However, a question remains: would the outcome of the experiment be different if the basolateral chamber contained an ROH acceptor (retinol-binding proteins) rather than Hank's balanced salt solution, to which the partition of ROL is limited by its water solubility? In fact, the maximum concentration of ROH on the basolateral side did not exceed 40 nM (Fig 5D and 7C), which is roughly the maximum water solubility of ROH. Thus, this experimental design limits extrapolation of the data to in vivo conditions.

3. The authors claim that transthyretin (TTR) increases BMECs permeability when compared to ROH/RBP. However, the mechanistic explanation for this phenomenon remains unclear. Do the authors imply the presence of a putative TTR receptor whose signaling could affect the efflux of ROL at the basolateral side of BMECs? TTR is an ubiquitous plasma protein. The concentration of TTR is tightly regulated and maintained between 300 - 330 mg/L. Therefore, it is questionable how TTR can serve as a signaling molecule modulating retinoid homeostasis in the brain.

4. Although overexpression of LRAT in response to increased uptake of ROH is well-documented, the postulate that TTR stimulates the expression of LRAT in an RBP-independent manner is puzzling, for the reasons mentioned in point 3. Moreover, LRAT is a highly efficient enzyme that operates under physiological conditions with substrate concentrations below the Km value. The rate of esterification is primarily limited by the intracellular transport of ROH to the ER. Therefore, without kinetic studies, it is unclear whether an increased number of LRAT copies (x2) would have a significant effect on the rate of accumulation of retinyl esters (REs).

5. The conclusion that cellular uptake of ROH is biphasic appears to be correct. However, the proposed interpretation of the mechanistic principles of this phenomenon is oversimplified. It assumes that loading CRBP1 with ROL to its capacity triggers the synthesis of REs. However, the saturation of CRBP1 with ROH is not required for REs formation. In fact, studies on CRBP1-deficient mice indicate that this protein is not necessary for the efficient esterification of ROL but rather affects the intracellular turnover of retinoids. It is likely that with increasing concentration of ROH, the specific and controlled mechanism of intracellular retinoid transport becomes saturated, allowing for spontaneous diffusion-driven partitioning of retinoids within cells.

Additional technical issues that could affect the experimental outcomes:

1. The formation of the ROH/RBP-TTR complex should be confirmed and purified using gel filtration to separate free TTR and ROH/RBP. Only fractions containing the complex should be used in the experiments. Assuming that the complex is formed with 100% efficiency is overly optimistic.

2. Reloading RBP with isotopically labeled ROH requires an additional purification step. Stripping ROL from the ROH/RBP complex with organic solvent (diethyl ether) is appropriate but relatively harsh, causing partial unfolding of a fraction of RBP. Therefore, assuming that 100% of stripped RBP remains functional and can be reloaded with ROH is inaccurate. Reloading apo-RBP with a stoichiometric amount of ROH without an additional purification step (e.g., ion exchanger) leads to an excess of free ROL and/or its nonspecific association with nonfunctional RBP fractions. Measuring absorbance at 330 nm is not sufficient proof of binding since free ROH also absorbs at the same wavelength.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Vitamin A is critical for the development of the brain and for neuronal function and plasticity, however the mechanisms responsible for the uptake of retinol across the blood brain barrier (BBB) are currently not known. The authors investigate vitamin A uptake across the blood brain barrier using an in vitro model based on endothelial cells differentiated from human derived induced pluripotent stem cells. Using recombinant cargo proteins and radioactive tracers the authors then propose a mechanism and a kinetic model for the uptake of retinol across the BBB that requires serum retinol binding protein 4 (RBP4 or RBP) and its receptor stimulated by retinoic acid 6 (STRA6). The results support a concentration dependent mechanism of transport combining a rapid fluid-phase retinol and a slower directed RBP-complexed retinol across the BBB. The data also hint at the potential regulatory roles of TTR on this process independent of its interaction with RBP.

Strengths:<br /> The studies are rigorous and careful and the authors consider free retinol uptake from the fluid-phase in addition to evaluating RBP-TTR and RBP-STRA6 interactions.<br /> The antibody to STRA6 is validated.<br /> The experiments performed are clearly described.

Weaknesses:<br /> The results presented do not offer significant new information regarding the uptake of retinol by tissues beyond what is known and published using genetic, structural and biochemical approaches.<br /> The use of the iPSC-derived BBB model is potentially interesting but this could have been complemented by a thorough genetic dissection of the cellular factors required for the uptake, transcellular transport, and secretion of retinol by the brain endothelial cells.<br /> The conclusions derived are not well supported by the data presented.<br /> It is difficult to infer a mechanism or to derive a meaningful conclusion regarding the in vivo relevance of the results presented.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This study provides insights into the early detection of malignancies with noninvasive methods. The study contained a large sample size with external validation cohort, which raises the credibility and universality of this model. The new model achieved high levels of AUC in discriminating malignancies from healthy controls, as well as the ability to distinguish tumor of origin. Based on these findings, prospective studies are needed to further confirm its predictive capacity.

However, there are several concerns about the manuscript, which needs to be clarified or modified.

First, the use of "multimodal model" will definitely increase workload of the testing. From the results of this manuscript, the integration of multimodal data did not significantly outperform the EM-based model. Is this kind of integration necessary? Is that tool really cost-effective? The authors did not convince me of its necessity, advantages, and clinical application.

Second, the baseline characteristics of part of the enrolled patients are not clear. It seems that some of the cancer patients were diagnosed only by imaging examinations. The manuscript described "staging information was not available for 25.7% of cancer patients, who were confirmed by specialized clinicians to have non-metastatic tumors". I have no idea how did this confirmation make? According to clinicians' experience only?

Third, it seems that one of the important advantages of this new model is the low depth coverage in comparing to previous screening models for cancer. The authors should discuss more on the reason why the new model could achieve comparable predictive accuracy with an obviously lower sequencing depth.

Lastly, the readability of this manuscript needs to be improved. The focus of the background section is not clear, with too much detail of other studies and few purposeful summaries. You need to explain the goals and clinical significance of your study. In addition, the results section is too long, and needs to be shortened and simplified. Move some of the inessential results and sentences to supplementary materials or methods.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The authors tried to diagnose cancers and pinpoint tissues of origin using cfDNA. To achieve the goal, they developed a framework to assess methylation, CNA, and other genomic features. They established discovery and validation cohorts for systematic assessment and successfully achieved robust prediction power.

Still, there are places for improvement. The diagnostic effect can be maximized if their framework works well in early stage cancer patients. According to Table 1, about 10% of the participants are stage I. Do these cancers also perform well as compared to late stage cancers?

Can authors show a systematic comparison of their method to other previous methods to summarize what their algorithm can achieve compared to others.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The manuscript addresses a fundamental question about how different types of communication signals differentially affect brain states and neurochemistry. In addition, the manuscript highlights the various processes that modulate brain responses to communication signals, including prior experience, sex, and hormonal status. Overall, the manuscript is well-written and the research is appropriately contextualized. The authors are thoughtful about their quantitative approaches and interpretations of the data.

That being said, the authors need to work on justifying some of their analytical approaches (e.g., normalization of neurochemical data, dividing the experimental period into two periods (as opposed to just analyzing the entire experimental period as a whole)) and should provide a greater discussion of how their data also demonstrate dissociations between neurochemical release in the basolateral amygdala and behavior (e.g., neurochemical differences during both of the experimental periods but behavioral differences only during the first half of the experimental period). The normalization of neurochemical data seems unnecessary given the repeated-measures design of their analysis and could be problematic; by normalizing all data to the baseline data (p. 24), one artificially creates a baseline period with minimal variation (all are "0"; Figures 2, 3 & 5) that could inflate statistical power.

The Introduction could benefit from a priori predictions about the differential release of specific neuromodulators based on previous literature.

The manuscript would also benefit from a description of space use and locomotion in response to different valence vocalizations.

Nevertheless, the current manuscript seems to provide some compelling support for how positive and negative valence vocalizations differentially affect behavior and the release of acetylcholine and dopamine in the basolateral amygdala. The research is relevant to broad fields of neuroscience and has implications for the neural circuits underlying social behavior.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Ghasemahmad et al. report findings on the influence of salient vocalization playback, sex, and previous experience, on mice behaviors, and on cholinergic and dopaminergic neuromodulation within the basolateral amygdala (BLA). Specifically, the authors played back mice vocalizations recorded during two behaviors of opposite valence (mating and restraint) and measured the behaviors and release of acetylcholine (ACh), dopamine (DA), and serotonin in the BLA triggered in response to those sounds.

Strength: The authors identified that mating and restraint sounds have a differential impact on cholinergic and dopaminergic release. In male mice, these two distinct vocalizations exert an opposite effect on the release of ACh and DA. Mating sounds elicited a decrease of Ach release and an increase of DA release. Conversely, restraint sounds induced an increase in ACh release and a trend to decrease in DA. These neurotransmission changes were different in estrus females for whom the mating vocalization resulted in an increase of both DA and ACh release.

Weaknesses: The behavioral analysis and results remain elusive, and although addressing interesting questions, the study contains major flaws, and the interpretations are overstating the findings.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors described a computational method catELMo for embedding TCR CDR3 sequences into numeric vectors using a deep-learning-based approach, ELMo. The authors applied catELMo to two applications: supervised TCR-epitope binding affinity prediction and unsupervised epitope-specific TCR clustering. In both applications, the authors showed that catELMo generated significantly better binding prediction and clustering performance than other established TCR embedding methods. However, there are a few major concerns that need to be addressed.

1. There are other TCR CDR3 embedding methods in addition to TCRBert. The authors may consider incorporating a few more methods in the evaluation, such as TESSA (PMCID: PMC7799492), DeepTCR (PMCID: PMC7952906) and the embedding method in ATM-TCR (reference 10 in the manuscript). TESSA is also the embedding method in pMTnet, which is another TCR-epitope binding prediction method and is the reference 12 mentioned in this manuscript.

2. The TCR training data for catELMo is obtained from ImmunoSEQ platform, including SARS-CoV2, EBV, CMV, and other disease samples. Meanwhile, antigens related to these diseases and their associated TCRs are extensively annotated in databases VDJdb, IEDB and McPAS-TCR. The authors then utilized the curated TCR-epitope pairs from these databases to conduct the evaluations for eptitope binding prediction and TCR clustering. Therefore, the training data for TCR embedding may already be implicitly tuned for better representations of the TCRs used in the evaluations. This seems to be true based on Table 4, as BERT-Base-TCR outperformed TCRBert. Could catELMo be trained on PIRD as TCRBert to demonstrate catELMo's embedding for TCRs targeting unseen diseases/epitopes?

3. In the application of TCR-epitope binding prediction, the authors mentioned that the model for embedding epitope sequences was catElMo, but how about for other methods, such as TCRBert? Do the other methods also use catELMo-embedded epitope sequences as part of the binding prediction model, or use their own model to embed the epitope sequences? Since the manuscript focuses on TCR embedding, it would be nice for other methods to be evaluated on the same epitope embedding (maybe adjusted to the same embedded vector length). Furthermore, the authors found that catELMo requires less training data to achieve better performance. So one would think the other methods could not learn a reasonable epitope embedding with limited epitope data, and catELMo's better performance in binding prediction is mainly due to better epitope representation.

4. In the epitope binding prediction evaluation, the authors generated the test data using TCR-epitope pairs from VDJdb, IEDB, McPAS, which may be dominated by epitopes from CMV. Could the authors show accuracy categorized by epitope types, i.e. the accuracy for TCR-CMV pair and accuracy for TCR-SARs-CoV2 separately?

5. In the unsupervised TCR clustering evaluation, since GIANA and TCRdist direct outputs the clustering result, so they should not be affected by hierarchical clusters. Why did the curves of GIANA and TCRdist change in Figure 4 when relaxing the hierarchical clustering threshold?

6. In the unsupervised TCR clustering evaluation, the authors examined the TCR related to the top eight epitopes. However, there are much more epitopes curated in VDJdb, IEDB and McPAS-TCR. In real application, the potential epitopes is also more complex than just eight epitopes. Could the authors evaluate the clustering result using all the TCR data from the databases?

7. In addition to NMI, it is important to know how specific each TCR cluster is. Could the authors add the fraction of pure clusters in the results? Pure cluster means all the TCRs in the cluster are binding to the same epitope, and is a metric used in the method GIANA.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In the manuscript, the authors highlighted the importance of T-cell receptor (TCR) analysis and the lack of amino acid embedding methods specific to this domain. The authors proposed a novel bi-directional context-aware amino acid embedding method, catELMo, adapted from ELMo (Embeddings from Language Models), specifically designed for TCR analysis. The model is trained on TCR sequences from seven projects in the ImmunoSEQ database, instead of the generic protein sequences. They assessed the effectiveness of the proposed method in both TCR-epitope binding affinity prediction, a supervised task, and the unsupervised TCR clustering task. The results demonstrate significant performance improvements compared to existing embedding models. The authors also aimed to provide and discuss their observations on embedding model design for TCR analysis: 1) Models specifically trained on TCR sequences have better performance than models trained on general protein sequences for the TCR-related tasks; and 2) The proposed ELMo-based method outperforms TCR embedding models with BERT-based architecture. The authors also provided a comprehensive introduction and investigation of existing amino acid embedding methods. Overall, the paper is well-written and well-organized.

The work has originality and has potential prospects for immune response analysis and immunotherapy exploration. TCR-epitope pair binding plays a significant role in T cell regulation. Accurate prediction and analysis of TCR sequences are crucial for comprehending the biological foundations of binding mechanisms and advancing immunotherapy approaches. The proposed embedding method presents an efficient context-aware mathematical representation for TCR sequences, enabling the capture and analysis of their structural and functional characteristics. This method serves as a valuable tool for various downstream analyses and is essential for a wide range of applications.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Here, the authors trained catElMo, a new context-aware embedding model for TCRβ CDR3 amino acid sequences for TCR-epitope specificity and clustering tasks. This method benchmarked existing work in protein and TCR language models and investigated the role that model architecture plays in the prediction performance. The major strength of this paper is comprehensively evaluating common model architectures used, which is useful for practitioners in the field. However, some key details were missing to assess whether the benchmarking study is a fair comparison between different architectures. Major comments are as follows:

- It is not clear why epitope sequences were also embedded using catELMo for the binding prediction task. Because catELMO is trained on TCRβ CDR3 sequences, it's not clear what benefit would come from this embedding. Were the other embedding models under comparison also applied to both the TCR and epitope sequences? It may be a fairer comparison if a single method is used to encode epitope sequence for all models under comparison, so that the performance reflects the quality of the TCR embedding only.<br /> - The tSNE visualization in Figure 3 is helpful. It makes sense that the last hidden layer features separate well by binding labels for the better performing models. However, it would be useful to know if positive and negative TCRs for each epitope group also separate well in the original TCR embedding space. In other words, how much separation between these groups is due to the neural network vs just the embedding?<br /> - To generate negative samples, the author randomly paired TCRs from healthy subjects to different epitopes. This could produce issues with false negatives if the epitopes used are common. Is there an estimate for how frequently there might be false negatives for those commonly occurring epitopes that most populations might also have been exposed to? Could there be a potential batch effect for the negative sampled TCR that confounds with the performance evaluation?<br /> - Most of the models being compared were trained on general proteins rather than TCR sequences. This makes their comparison to catELMO questionable since it's not clear if the improvement is due to the training data or architecture. The authors partially addressed this with BERT-based models in section 2.4. This concern would be more fully addressed if the authors also trained the Doc2vec model (Yang et al, Figure 2) on TCR sequences as baseline models instead of using the original models trained on general protein sequences. This would make clear the strength of context-aware embeddings if the performance is worse than catElmo and BERT.

Joint Public Review

The manuscript by Mitra and coworkers analyses the functional role of Orai in the excitability of central dopaminergic neurons in Drosophila. The authors show that a dominant-negative mutant of Orai (OraiE180A) significantly alters the gene expression profile of flight-promoting dopaminergic neurons (fpDANs). Among them, OraiE180A attenuates the expression of Set2 and enhances that of E(z) shifting the level of epigenetic signatures that modulate gene expression. The present results also demonstrate that Set2 expression via Orai involves the transcription factor Trl. The Orai-Trl-Set1 pathway modulates the expression of VGCC, which, in turn, are involved in dopamine release. The topic investigated is interesting and timely and the study is carefully performed and technically sound; however, there are several major concerns that need to be addressed:

1- In Figure S2E, STIM is overexpressed in the absence of Set2 and this leads to rescue. It is presumed that STIM overexpression causes excess SOCE, yet this is rarely the case. Perhaps the bigger concern, however, is how excess SOCE might overcome the loss of SET2 if SET2 mediates SOCE-induced development of flight. These data are more consistent with something other than SET2 mediating this function.

2- In Figure 3, data is provided linking SET2 expression and Cch-induced Ca2+ responses. The presentation of these data is confusing. In addition, the results may be a simple side effect of SET2-dependent expression of IP3R. Given that this article is about SOCE, why isn't SOCE shown here? More generally, there are no measurements of SOCE in this entire article. Measuring SOCE (not what is measured in response to Cch) could help eliminate some of this confusion.

3- A significant gap in the study relates to the conclusion that trl is a SOCE-regulated transcription factor. This conclusion is entirely based on genetic analysis of STIMKO heterozygous flies in which a copy of the trl13C hypomorph allele is introduced. While these results suggest a genetic interaction between the expression of the two genes, the evidence that expression translates into a functional interaction that places trl immediately downstream of SOCE is not rigorous or convincing. All that can be said is that the double mutant shows a defect in flight which could arise from an interruption of the circuit. Further, it is not clear whether the trl13C hypomorph is only introduced during the critical 72-96 hour time window when the Orai1E180E phenotype shows up. The same applies to the over-expression of Set2 and the other genes. If the expression is not temporally controlled, then the phenotype could be due to the blockade of an entirely different aspect of flight neuron function.

4- In Figure 4, data is shown that SOCE compensates for the loss of Trl, the presumed mediator of SOCE-dependent flight. The fact that flight deficits are rescued by raising SOCE in the absence of Trl is very inconsistent with this conclusion.

5- In Figure 5 (A-C), data is provided that Trl transcripts are unaffected by loss of SOCE and that overexpression cannot rescue flightlessness. From this, the authors conclude that this gene "must" be calcium responsive. While that is one possibility, it is also possible that these genes are not functionally linked.

6- There is no characterization of SOCE in fpDANs from flies expressing native Orai or the dominant negative OraiE180A mutant. While the authors refer to previous studies, as the manuscript is essentially based on Orai function thapsigargin-induced SOCE should be tested using the Ca2+ add-back protocol in order to assess the release of Ca2+ from the ER in response to thapsigargin as well as the subsequent SOCE.

7- In the experiments performed to rescue flight duration in Set2RNAi individuals the authors overexpress STIM and attribute the effect to "Excess STIM presumably drives higher SOCE sufficient to rescue flight bout durations caused by deficient Set2 levels.". This should be experimentally tested as the STIM:Orai stoichiometry has been demonstrated as essential for SOCE.

8- The authors show that overexpression of OraiE108A results in Stim downregulation at a mRNA level. What about the protein level? And more important, how does OraiE108A downregulate Stim expression? Does it promote Stim degradation? Does it inhibit Stim expression?

9- Lines 271-273, the authors state "whereas overexpression of a transgene encoding Set2 in THD' neurons either with loss of SOCE (OraiE180A) or with knockdown of the IP3R (itprRNAi), lead to significant rescue of the Ca2+ response". This is attributed to a positive effect of Set2 expression on IP3R expression and the authors show a positive correlation between these two parameters; however, there is no demonstration that Set2 expression can rescue IP3R expression in cells where the IP3R is knocked down (itprRNAi). This should be further demonstrated.

10- The data presented in Figure 3E should be functionally demonstrated by analyzing the ability of CCh to release Ca2+ from the intracellular stores in the absence of extracellular Ca2+.

11- The conclusion that SOCE regulates the neuronal excitability threshold is based entirely on either partial behavioral rescue of flight, or measurements of KCl-induced Ca2+ rises monitored by GCaMP6m in DAN neurons. The threshold for neuronal excitability is a precise parameter based on rheobase measurements of action potentials in current-clamp. Measurements of slow calcium signals using a slow dye such as GCaMp6m should not be equated with neuronal excitability. What is measured is a loss of the calcium response in high K depolarization experiments, which occurs due to the loss of expression of Cav channels. Hence, the use of this term is not accurate and will confuse readers. The use of terms referring to neuronal excitability needs to be changed throughout the manuscript. As such, the conclusions regarding neuronal excitability should be strongly tempered and the data reinterpreted as there are no true measurements of neuronal excitability in the manuscript. All that can be said is that expression of certain ion channel genes is suppressed. Since both Na+ channels and K+ channel expression is down-regulated, it is hard to say precisely how membrane excitability is altered without action potential analysis.

12- Related, since trl does not contain any molecular domains that could be regulated by Ca2+ signaling, it is unclear whether trl is directly regulated by SOCE or the regulation is highly indirect. Reporter assays evaluating trl activation upon Ca2+ rises would provide much stronger and more direct evidence for the conclusion that trl is a SOCE-regulated TF. As such the evidence is entirely based on RNAi downregulation of trl which indicates that trl is essential but has no bearing on exactly what point of the signaling cascade it is involved.

13- Are NFAT levels altered in the Orai1 loss of function mutant? If not, this should be explicitly stated. It would seem based on previous literature that some gene regulation may be related to the downregulation of this established Ca2+-dependent transcription factor. Same for NFkb.

14- Does over-expression of Set2 restore ion channel expression especially those of the VGCCs? This would provide rigorous, direct evidence that SOCE-mediated regulation of VGCCs through Set2 controls voltage-gated calcium channel signaling.

15- All 6 representative panels from Figure 3B are duplicated in Figure 4G. Likewise, 2 representative panels from Figure 5H are duplicated in Figure 6D. Although these panels all represent the results from control experiments, the relevant experiments were likely not conducted at the same time and under the same conditions. Thus, control images from other experiments should not be used simply because they correspond to controls. This situation should be clarified.

16- The figures are unusually busy and difficult to follow. In part this is because they usually have many panels (Fig. 1: A-I; Fig. 2, A-J, etc) but also because the arrangement of the panels is not consistent: sometimes the following panel is found to the right, other times it is below. It would help the reader to make the order of the panels consistent, and, if possible, reduce the number of panels and/or move some of the panels to new figures.

17- As a final recommendation, the reviewers suggest that the authors a- Reword the text that refers to membrane excitability since membrane excitability was not directly measured here. b-Explain why STIM1 rescues the partial loss of flight in Set2 RNAi flies (Fig. S2E); and c- Explain how/why trl is calcium regulated and test using luciferase (or other) reporter assays whether Orai activation leads to trl activation.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The authors show that concurrently presenting foreign words and their translations during sleep leads to the ability to semantically categorize the foreign words above chance. Specifically, this procedure was successful when stimuli were delivered during slow oscillation troughs as opposed to peaks, which has been the focus of many recent investigations into the learning & memory functions of sleep. Finally, further analyses showed that larger and more prototypical slow oscillation troughs led to better categorization performance, which offers hints to others on how to improve or predict the efficacy of this intervention. The strength here is the novel behavioral finding and supporting physiological analyses, whereas the biggest weakness is the interpretation of the peak vs. trough effect.

Major importance:

I believe the authors could attempt to address this question: What do the authors believe is the largest implication of this studies? How far can this technique be pushed, and how can it practically augment real-world learning?

Lines 155-7: How do the authors argue that the words fit well within the half-waves when the sounds lasted 540 ms and didn't necessarily start right at the beginning of each half-wave? This is a major point that should be discussed, as part of the down-state sound continues into the up-state. Looking at Figure 3A, it is clear that stimulus presented in the slow oscillation trough ends at a time that is solidly into the upstate, and would not neurolinguists argue that a lot of sound processing occurs after the end of the sound? It's not a problem for their findings, which is about when is the best time to start such a stimulus, but it's a problem for the interpretation. Additionally, the authors could include some discussion on whether possibly presenting shorter sounds would help to resolve the ambiguities here.

Medium importance:

Throughout the paper, another concern relates to the term 'closed-loop'. It appears this term has been largely misused in the literature, and I believe the more appropriate term here is 'real-time' (Bergmann, 2018, Frontiers in Psychology; Antony et al., 2022, Journal of Sleep Research). For instance, if there were some sort of algorithm that assessed whether each individual word was successfully processed by the brain during sleep and then the delivery of words was subsequently changed, that could be more accurately labeled as 'closed-loop'.

Figure 5 and corresponding analyses: Note that the two conditions end up with different sounds with likely different auditory complexities. That is, one word vs. two words simultaneously likely differ on some low-level acoustic characteristics, which could explain the physiological differences. Either the authors should address this via auditory analyses or it should be added as a limitation.

Line 562-7 (and elsewhere in the paper): "episodic" learning is referenced here and many times throughout the paper. But episodic learning is not what was enhanced here. Please be mindful of this wording, as it can be confusing otherwise.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this project, Schmidig, Ruch and Henke examined whether word pairs that were presented during slow-wave sleep would leave a detectable memory trace 12 and 36 hours later. Such an effect was found, as participants showed a bias to categorize pseudowords according to a familiar word that they were paired with during slow-wave sleep. This behavior was not accompanied by any sign of conscious understanding of why the judgment was made, and so demonstrates that long-term memory can be formed even without conscious access to the presented content. Unconscious learning occurred when pairs were presented during troughs but not during peaks of slow-wave oscillations. Differences in brain responses to the two types of presentation schemes, and between word pairs that were later correctly- vs. incorrectly-judged, suggest a potential mechanism for how such deep-sleep learning can occur.

The results are very interesting, and they are based on solid methods and analyses. Results largely support the authors' conclusions, but I felt that there were a few points in which conclusions were not entirely convincing:

1) As a control for the critical stimuli in this study, authors used a single pseudoword simultaneously played to both ears. This control condition (CC) differs from the experimental condition (EC) in a few dimensions, among them: amount of information provided, binaural coherence and word familiarity. These differences make it hard to conclude that the higher theta and spindle power observed for EC over CC trials indicate associative binding, as claimed in the paper. Alternative explanations can be made, for instance, that they reflect word recognition, as only EC contains familiar words.

2) The entire set of EC pairs were tested both following 12 hours and following 36 hours. Exposure to the pairs during test #1 can be expected to have an effect over memory one day later, during test #2, and so differences between the tests could be at least partially driven by the additional activation and rehearsal of the material during test #1. Therefore, it is hard to draw conclusions regarding automatic memory reorganization between 12 and 36 hours after unconscious learning. Specifically, a claim is made regarding a third wave of plasticity, but we cannot be certain that the improvement found in the 36 hour test would have happened without test #1.

3) Authors claim that perceptual and conceptual processing during sleep led to increased neural complexity in troughs. However, neural complexity was not found to differ between EC and CC, nor between remembered and forgotten pairs. It is therefore not clear to me why the increased complexity that was found in troughs should be attributed to perceptual and conceptual word processing, as CC contains meaningless vowels. Moreover, from the evidence presented in this work at least, I am not sure there is room to infer causation - that the increase in HFD is driven by the stimuli - as there is no control analysis looking at HFD during troughs that did not contain stimulation.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

The study aims at creating novel episodic memories during slow wave sleep, that can be transferred in the awake state. To do so, participants were simultaneously presented during sleep both foreign words and their arbitrary translations in their language (one word in each ear), or as a control condition only the foreign word alone, binaurally. Stimuli were presented either at the trough or the peak of the slow oscillation using a closed-loop stimulation algorithm. To test for the creation of a flexible association during sleep, participant were then presented at wake with the foreign words alone and had (1) to decide whether they had the feeling of having heard that word before, (2) to attribute this word to one out of three possible conceptual categories (to which translations word actually belong), and (3) to rate their confidence about their decision.

The paper is well written, the protocol ingenious and the methods are robust. However, the results do not really add conceptually to a prior publication of this group showing the possibility to associate in slow wave sleep pairs of words denoting large or small object and non words, and then asking during ensuing wakefulness participant to categorise these non words to a "large" or "small" category. In both cases, the main finding is that this type of association can be formed during slow wave sleep if presented at the trough (versus the peak) of the slow oscillation. Crucially, whether these associations truly represent episodic memory formation during sleep, as claimed by the authors, is highly disputable as there is no control condition allowing to exclude the alternative, simpler hypothesis that mere perceptual associations between two elements (foreign word and translation) have been created and stored during sleep (which is already in itself an interesting finding). In this latter case, it would be only during the awake state when the foreign word is presented that its presentation would implicitly recall the associated translation, which in turn would "ignite" the associative/semantic association process eventually leading to the observed categorisation bias (i.e., foreign words tending to be put in the same conceptual category than their associated translation). In the absence of a dis-confirmation of this alternative and more economical hypothesis, and if we follow Ocam's razor assumption, the claim that there is episodic memory formation during sleep is speculative and unsupported, which is a serious limitation irrespective of the merits of the study. The title and interpretations should be toned down in this respect

Other remarks:

Lines 43-45 : the assumption that the sleeping brain decides whether external events can be disregarded, requires awakening or should be stored for further consideration in the waking state is dubious, and the supporting references date from a time (the 60') during which hypnopedia was investigated in badly controlled sleep conditions (leaving open the doubt about the possibility that it occurred during micro awakenings)

1st paragraph, lines 48-53 , the authors should be more specific about what kind of new associations and at which level they can be stored during sleep according to recent reports, as a wide variety of associations (mostly elementary levels) are shown in the cited references. Limitations in information processing during sleep should also be acknowledged.

The authors ran their main behavioural analyses on delayed retrieval at 36h rather than 12h with the argument that retrieval performance was numerically larger at 36 than 12h but the difference was non-significant (line 181-183), and that effects were essentially similar. Looking at Figure 2, is the trough effect really significant at 12h ? In any case, the fact that it is (numerically) higher at 36 than 12h might suggest that the association created at the first 12h retrieval (considering the alternative hypothesis proposed above) has been reinforced by subsequent sleep.

In the discussion section lines 419-427, the argument is somehow circular in claiming episodic memory mechanisms based on functional neuroanatomical elements that are not tested here, and the supporting studies conducted during sleep were in a different setting (e.g. TMR)

Supplementary Material: in the EEG data the differentiation between correct and incorrect ulterior classifications when presented at the peak of the slow oscillation is only significant in association with 36h delayed retrieval but not at 12h, how do the authors explain this lack of effect at 12 hour?

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The Ras/MEK/Erk signaling cascade is a ubiquitous pathway activated by many extracellular signals and is critical for a wide variety of cell function. In this manuscript, the authors generate Erk1/2 double knockouts specifically in Nkx2.1-derived cells (basically MGE/POA-derived cells in the forebrain) and explore changes in oligodendrocyte number and cortical interneuron function. They observe a striking loss of Nkx2.1-lineage oligos (and astrocytes) in the anterior commissure, although the mechanism for this specific loss is unclear. While there is no significant change in the number of cortical interneurons, the authors do note a decrease in SST+/Calb- INs in the mutant. The authors then use DREADDs to manipulate activity in Nkx2.1-lineage cells. Surprisingly, chemogenetic activation of Nkx2.1-lineage KO cells led to an upregulation of SST protein in SST+ INs, while other characteristics in KO mice (cFos expression, open field locomotion) were not changed (or altered at much lower levels) in KOs compared to similar stimulation in control mice. Overall, the paper contains numerous insightful observations, but a coherent, overall theme for what Erk1/2 is doing in Nkx2.1-lineage cells at different development timepoints is somewhat lacking. For example, the authors focus on changes in SST levels in the KO mice, justifiably because that is where they see the biggest difference, yet they perform e-phys experiments only on PV+, fast spiking cells in Figure 5. While it may be more challenging to find SST+ cells in the KO, the logic of recording from PV cells was not clear. Sometimes this paper reads as a series of data points where the overall theme of the story is not always evident.

More importantly, the authors use heterozygous ERK1/2 mice as 'het controls' throughout the manuscript. However, they have not sufficiently demonstrated that the ERK levels in hets are similar to WT. Figure 1B-J purports to show that ERK1/2 levels in a handful of cells from heterozygous mice are equivalent to WT, but there is no quantification of this observation. It is unconventional to use heterozygous mice as controls without clearly demonstrating that they are similar/identical to controls. Especially in a scenario such as this, where one would expect to see 50% of protein levels in hets compared to WT mice. As such, readers are cautioned for how to interpret some of these findings. For example, there may be instances where there is no significant difference between KO and 'het controls', but if they had compared to true WT controls, then it's possible some differences could emerge.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Knowles et al. investigated the developmental roles of Erk1/2 expression in cells from the Nkx2.1-lineage, which includes the PV and SST classes of cortical inhibitory interneurons (CINs) and glial subtypes. They find that embryonic expression of Erk1/2 regulates the number of Nkx2.1-derived oligodendrocytes and astrocytes, but not CINs, observed in postnatal mice. However, Erk1/2 is necessary for the expression of SST in subset of Nkx2.1-derived CINs, which can be partially rescued by postnatal depolarization via chemogenetic stimulation with DREADDs. Finally, loss of Erk1/2 from these cells impairs activity-dependent expression of FOSB. Collectively, this revised paper demonstrates differential roles of Erk1/2 for the development of glia and neurons. Furthermore, it suggests SST CINs may be particularly vulnerable to loss of Erk1/2 signaling during both early embryonic and later postnatal developmental stages.

Strengths:<br /> This paper uses multiple transgenic mouse lines to investigate the contributions of Erk1/2 loss and over-expression and MEK overexpression for interneuron and glial development. Furthermore, they consider how Erk1/2 signaling may evolve over the course of development from embryonic to postnatal juvenile and adult stages. Thus, they investigate Erk1/2's early role in cell differentiation and its later role in activity dependent signaling. This approach to studying gene function throughout development is important but not often attempted within a single study.

The authors investigate Erk1/2 using several techniques, including immunohistochemistry, sequencing of translated genes using the Ribotag method, electrophysiology, and chemogenetic stimulation using DREADDs. Thus, they aim to apply a comprehensive battery of approaches to assay Erk1/2 signaling in Nkx2.1-derived cells throughout development.

Weaknesses:<br /> This paper describes a series of mostly separate observations that are not directly linked. The mechanisms underlying their observations and the significance of the findings are often unclear.

The authors use Erk1-/-; Erk2fl/wt; Nkx2.1Cre as "het" controls throughout the manuscript. However, there is no explanation for why this is a valid control except for a statement that they are "grossly intact", without elaboration. It is unclear why the authors did not use Nkx2.1Cre mice for their control. Figure 1 - Supplemental Figure 1 provides the only comparison between Erk1-/-; Erk2fl/wt; Nkx2.1Cre and Erk1-/-; Erk2wt/wt; Nkx2.1Cre mice. This figure shows a single example of immune staining for Erk2, but it is not obvious that Nkx2.1 control or "het control" cells even express Erk2 in this image. There is no quantification. Thus, their choice of control condition is not obviously appropriate.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This paper describes a novel and important role for IP3 receptors (IP3R) in the control of store-operated calcium entry (SOCE) in neurons. The authors provide strong evidence that in human neural progenitor cells before and after differentiation in vitro, as well as a neuroblastoma cell line (SH-SY5Y), knockdown of the IP3R1 isoform significantly diminishes SOCE triggered by ER calcium store depletion. Interestingly, SOCE is fully restored in these cells by overexpressing WT IP3R1 or a mutant that cannot conduct Ca2+ but is not restored by an IP3R1 mutant that cannot bind IP3. Based on these results the authors conclude that IP3-bound IP3R1 enhances SOCE not by depleting ER Ca2+ but through an as yet uncharacterized physical interaction.

The authors propose that resting levels of IP3 are sufficient for this activity, based on the ability of a Gq inhibitor to mimic the effect of IP3R1 knockdown on SOCE. Importantly, the inhibitor does not affect SOCE in cells lacking IP3R1, arguing against a nonspecific effect of the drug. The ability of partial binding of low levels of IP3 to support this activity is somewhat surprising, and further studies will be needed to test whether the enhancing effect is amplified by receptor-driven elevation of IP3.

An important question is how the IP3R1 acts to enhance SOCE. A proximity ligation assay clearly showed that IP3R1 knockdown disrupted STIM1 and Orai1 colocalization after store depletion, supporting the notion that IP3R1 acts to enhance STIM1-Orai1 interactions. How might this occur? The authors suggest that IP3R1 enhances the formation or stability of ER-plasma membrane (ER-PM) junctions where STIM1 and Orai1 combine to trigger SOCE, based on the rescue of SOCE by overexpression of STIM1 or E-syt1, both of which promote ER-PM junction formation or stability. However, this is indirect evidence, and a more direct demonstration of how IP3R1 affects ER-PM junction abundance and size would add stronger support for this hypothesis.

The authors suggest that the effects of IP3R1 described here may serve to selectively promote SOCE in response to stimuli that generate IP3 as opposed to other signals that release ER Ca2+. This proposal and its functional impact need further study, including why it appears to be cell-specific, occurring in neurons but not HEK 293 cells and other cell types.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Chakraborty et al. present a comprehensive analysis of the role of the IP3R in regulating SOCE in neuronal cells starting with human neurons derived from stem cells and continuing with SH-SY5Y cells after careful characterization of the maintenance of the inhibitory role of IP3R. They also show differential effects in non-neuronal cell lines. The work is careful and the data convincing. The conclusion that IP3Rs somehow stabilize ER-PM MCS to enhance SOCE is supported by the findings especially the surprising finding that the IP3R effect does not require a functional pore but does require IP3 binding to IP3R. Overall this is a careful, well-done analysis. However, the conclusion that IP3R stabilizes ER-PM MCS is mostly inferred from the current data. The authors need to extend the finding by directly assessing the size, density, and the number of ER-PM MCS using endogenous STIM1 (there are reliable antibodies for STIM1) to confirm their conclusion that when IP3R is knocked down ER-PM MCS are smaller/less dense. Another interesting experiment that would support their conclusion is expressing tagged STIM1 and Orai1 and observing their interaction in real time after store depletion. These experiments would need to be carefully controlled to select cells with low levels of expression of STIM1-Orai1 as there are hints from their current data that high expressors would not exhibit the IP3R dependence on SOCE. So, some independent experimental evidence that IP3R knockdown is affecting ER-PM MCS and not STIM1-Orai1 interaction directly to support the presented PLA data would greatly support the final conclusion of the paper. From the PLA assay alone it is difficult to differentiate between poor direct STIM1-Orai1 interaction versus stability of ER-PM MCS.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

SOCE is a ubiquitous cell signalling pathway that sustains long-lasting Ca2+ elevations required for the proliferation of T cells and the differentiation and contractility of skeletal muscle. Patients with loss of function mutations in either STIM1 or ORAI1 suffer from severe combined immunodeficiency while patients with gain-of-function mutations suffer from muscle weakness. The report that an intracellular calcium channel acts as a tether at membrane contact sites to regulate the activity of STIM/ORAI channels is thus relevant for health and disease, given the essential role of the SOCE pathway for immune and muscle cell function.

The IP3R is the major Ca2+ release pathway that initiates the STIM/ORAI activation cascade and the group of Colin Taylor (coauthor of the present study) showed that a pool of immobile receptors licensed to respond to physiological stimuli localizes near STIM-ORAI interaction sites at ER-PM junctions DOI: 10.1016/j.ceb.2018.10.001. This group further showed that IP3Rs are tethered to PM-bound actin by the KRas-induced actin-interacting protein (KRAP) DOI: 10.1038/s41467-021-24739-9 while the group of Indu Ambudkar showed that IP3R is juxtaposed to immobile STIM2 clusters within ER-PM junctions DOI: https://doi.org/10.1073/pnas.2114928118 The mechanism by which IP3R impinges on SOCE at ER-PM contact sites remains unclear, however.

The present study provides an important clue by showing that IP3Rs themselves can act as tethering proteins independently of their calcium release function. However, several important questions remain unanswered. Are the native and mutated receptors recruited differentially to ER-PM junctions? If so, what interacting partner(s) and mechanisms enable IP3-bound receptors to enhance the interactions between STIM1 and ORAI1? And why is this effect restricted to neuronal cells?

Previous studies indicate that IP3R can interact with actin via KRAP, with STIM proteins, with ORAI channels, and with phosphoinositides. The authors point to phosphoinositides as a potential target that could explain the need for IP3, but this possibility has not been experimentally addressed. They should establish whether phosphoinositides are involved in the recruitment of IP3R receptors and provide additional mechanistic insight by documenting whether IP3R depletion impacts the stability of contact sites or their ability to exchange lipids between membranes. Another unresolved question relates to the observation that the phenotype is restricted to neuronal cell types and absent in HEK-293 cells typically used for electrophysiological recordings of CRAC currents. The authors should attempt to clarify the molecular basis of this difference between cell types.

From a methodological standpoint, one limitation is that the functional assays used are quite indirect. One critical SOCE determinant is the filling state of intracellular calcium stores, which was estimated indirectly by measuring the amplitude of the Ca2+ elevation evoked by the addition of the SERCA inhibitor thapsigargin. Although this method is widely used it does not directly reflect the key parameter driving STIM1 activation which is the free calcium concentration within the ER lumen. Direct ER [Ca2+] recordings are required to clarify this critical point.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

McCormick, Cleary et al., explore the question of how the nucleotide state of the tubulin heterodimer affects the interaction between adjacent tubulins.

(1) The setup of the authors' model, which attributes the dynamic properties of the growing microtubule only to the differences in interface binding affinities, is unrealistic. They excluded the influence of the nucleotide-dependent global conformational changes even in the 'Self-Acting Nucleodide' model (Fig. 1A). As the authors have found earlier, tubulin in its unassembled state may be curved irrespective of the species of the bound nucleotide (Rice et al., 2008, doi: 10.1073/pnas.0801155105), but at the growing end of microtubules, the situation could be different. Considering the recently published papers from other laboratories, it may be more appropriate to include the nucleotide-dependent change in the tubulin conformation in the Self-Acting Nucleotide model.

(2) The result that the minus end is insensitive to GDP (Fig. 2) was previously published in a paper by Tanaka-Takiguchi et al. (doi: 10.1006/jmbi.1998.1877). The exact experimental condition was different from the one used in Fig. 2, but the essential point of the finding is the same. The authors should cite the preceding work, and discuss the similarities and differences, as compared to their own results.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This study addresses the fundamental question of how the nucleotide, associated with the beta-subunit of the tubulin dimer, dictates the tubulin-tubulin interaction strength in the microtubule polymer. This problem has been a topic of debate in the field for over a decade, and it is essential for understanding microtubule dynamics.

McCormick and colleagues focus their attention on two hypotheses, which they call the "self-acting" model and the "interface-acting" model. Both models have been previously discussed in the literature and they are related to the specific way, in which the GTP hydrolysis in the beta-tubulin subunit exerts an effect on the microtubule lattice. The authors argue that the two considered models can be discriminated based on a quantitative analysis of the sensitivity of the growth rates at the plus- and minus-ends of microtubules to the concentration of GDP-tubulins in mixed nucleotide (GDP/GMPCPP) experiments. By combing computational simulations and in vitro observations, they conclude that the tubulin-tubulin interaction strength is determined by the interfacial nucleotide.

The major strength of the paper is a systematic and thorough consideration of GDP as a modulator of microtubule dynamics, which brings novel insights about the structure of the stabilizing cap on the growing microtubule end.

I think that the study is interesting and valuable for the field, but it could be improved by addressing the following critical points and suggestions. They concern (1) the statistical significance of the main experimental finding about the distinct sensitivity of the plus- and minus-ends of microtubules to the GTP-tubulin concentration in solution, and (2) the validity of the formulation of the "self-acting" model with an emphasis solely on the longitudinal bonds.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Schmid et al. investigate the question of how sensory learning in animals and artificial networks is driven both by passive exposure to the environment (unsupervised) and from reinforcing feedback (supervised) and how these two systems interact. They first demonstrate in mice that passive exposure to the same auditory stimuli used in a discrimination task modifies learning and performance in the task. Based on this data, they then tested how the interaction of supervised and unsupervised learning in an artificial network could account for the behavioural results.

Strengths :<br /> The clear behavioural impact of passive exposure to sounds on accelerating learning is a major strength of the paper. Moreover, the observation that passive exposure had a positive impact on learning whether it was prior to the task or interleaved with learning sessions provides interesting constraints for modelling the interaction between supervised and unsupervised learning. A practical fallout for labs performing long training procedures is that the periods of active learning that require water-restriction could be reduced by using passive sessions. This could increase both experimental efficiency and animal well-being.

The modelling section clearly exhibits the differences between models and the step-by-step presentation building to the final model provides the reader with a lot of intuition about how supervised and unsupervised learning interact. In particular, the authors highlight situations in which the task-relevant discrimination does not align with the directions of highest variance, thus reinforcing the relevance of their conclusions for the complex structure of sensory stimuli. A great strength of these models is that they generate clear predictions about how neural activity should evolve during the different training regimes that would be exciting to test.

Weaknesses :<br /> The experimental design presented cannot clearly show that the effect of passive exposure was due to the specific exposure to task-relevant stimuli since there is no control group exposed to irrelevant stimuli. Studies have shown that exposure to a richer sensory environment, even in the adult, swiftly (ie within days) enhances responses even in the adult and even when the stimuli are different from those present in task1-3. Since the authors conclude that their network models "build latent representations of features that are determined by statistical properties of the input distribution, as long as those features aid the decoding of task-relevant variables" (line 339, my emphasis). This conclusion, and therefore the link of behaviour to the models, is weakened by the lack of direct testing of the need for task-relevant stimuli to be presented.

The conclusion that "passive exposure influences responses to sounds not used during training" (line 147) does not seem fully supported by the authors' analysis. The authors show that there is an increase in accuracy for intermediate sweep speeds despite the fact that this is the first time the animals encounter them in the active session. However, it seems impossible to exclude that this effect is not simply due to the increased accuracy of the extreme sounds that the animals had been trained on. For example, simply prolonging learning in stage 3 is likely to increase accuracy across sounds at stage 4, passive sessions may be mimicking this effect. Moreover, the authors point out that there is no effect on the slope of the psychometric curve. Such a sharpening would be predicted if the passive presentations were indeed enhancing intermediate sound representations, making them more precise and more discriminable.

In the modelling section, the authors adjusted the hyper-parameters to maximize the difference between pure active and passive/active learning. This makes a comparison of learning rates between models somewhat confusing, raising the question of whether the differences highlight an interaction between the two types of learning or simply parameter choice. For example:

- Figure 5: although in model 3 passive listening enhances learning relative to the pure active condition, learning is overall much slower in the active condition compared to model 2. This raises the question of whether the addition of unsupervised rules makes the models more apt at exploiting passive exposure but at the cost of efficient active learning.

- Figure 6 & 7: model 5 only differs from model 4 by the addition of supervised learning at layer 1 and the use of what should be a harder task (stimuli spread over the first PCs) however model 5 clearly has much better performance for the P: A condition which is surprising given that the unsupervised and supervised learning periods are clearly separated.

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Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Schmid et al present a lovely study looking at the effect of passive auditory exposure on learning a categorization task.

The authors utilize a two-alternative choice task where mice have to discriminate between upward and downward-moving frequency sweeps. Once mice learn to discriminate easy stimuli, the task is made psychometric and additional intermediate stimuli are introduced (as is standard in the literature). The authors introduce an additional two groups of animals, one that was passively exposed to the task stimuli before any behavioral shaping, and one that had passive exposure interleaved with learning. The major behavioral finding is that passive exposure to sounds improves learning speed. The authors show this in a number of ways through linear fits to the learning curves. Additionally, by breaking down performance based on the "extreme" vs "psychometric" stimuli, the authors show that passive exposure can influence responses to sounds that were not present during the initial training period. One limitation here is that the presented analysis is somewhat simplistic, does not include any detailed psychometric analysis (bias, lapse rates etc), and primarily focuses on learning speed. Ultimately though, the behavioral results are interesting and seem supported by the data.

To investigate the neural mechanisms that may underlie their behavioral findings, the authors turn to a family of artificial neural network models and evaluate the consequences of different learning algorithms and schedules, network architectures, and stimulus distributions, on the learning outcomes. The authors work through five different architectures that fail to recapitulate the primary behavior findings before settling on a final model, utilizing a combination of supervised and unsupervised learning, that was capable of reproducing the key aspects of the experiments. Ultimately, the behavioral results presented are consistent with network models that build latent representations of task-relevant features that are determined by statistical properties of the input distribution.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Summary of Author's Results/Intended Achievements<br /> The authors were trying to ascertain the underlying learning mechanisms and network structure that could explain their primary experimental finding: passive exposure to a stimulus (independent of when the exposure occurs) can lead to improvements in active (supervised) learning. They modeled their task with 5 progressively more complex shallow neural networks classifying vectors drawn from multi-variate Gaussian distributions.

Account of Major Strengths:<br /> Overall, the experimental findings were interesting, albeit not necessarily novel. The modelling was also appropriate, with a solid attempt at matching the experimental condition to simplified network models.

Account of Major Weaknesses:<br /> I would say there are two major weaknesses of this work. The first is that even Model 5 differs from their data. For example, the A+P (passive interleaved condition) learning curve in Figure 7 seems to be non-monotonic, and has some sort of complex eigenvalue in its decay to the steady state performance as trials increase. This wasn't present in their experimental data (Figure 2D), and implies a subtle but important difference. There also appear to be differences in how quickly the initial learning (during early trials) occurs for the A+P and A:P conditions. While both A+P and A:P conditions learn faster than A only in M5, A+P and A:P seem to learn in different ways, which isn't supported in their data. The second major weakness is that the authors also don't generate any predictions with M5. Can they test this model of learning somehow in follow-up behavioural experiments in mice?

Discussion of Likely Impact:<br /> Without follow-up experiments to test their mechanism of why passive exposure helps in a schedule-independent way, the impact of this paper will be limited.

Additional Context:<br /> I believe the authors need to place this work in the context of a large amount of existing literature on passive (unsupervised) and active (supervised) learning interactions. This field is broad both experimentally and computationally. For example, there is an entire sub-field of machine learning, called semi-supervised learning that is not mentioned at all in this work.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Summary of what the authors were trying to achieve.

This paper studies the possible effects of tACS on the detection of silence gaps in an FM-modulated noise stimulus. Both FM modulation of the sound and the tACS are at 2Hz, and the phase of the two is varied to determine possible interactions between the auditory and electric stimulation. Additionally, two different electrode montages are used to determine if variation in electric field distribution across the brain may be related to the effects of tACS on behavioral performance in individual subjects.

Major strengths and weaknesses of the methods and results.

The study appears to be well-powered to detect modulation of behavioral performance with N=42 subjects. There is a clear and reproducible modulation of behavioral effects with the phase of the FM sound modulation. The study was also well designed, combining fMRI, current flow modeling, montage optimization targeting, and behavioral analysis. A particular merit of this study is to have repeated the sessions for most subjects in order to test repeat-reliability, which is so often missing in human experiments. The results and methods are generally well-described and well-conceived. The portion of the analysis related to behavior alone is excellent. The analysis of the tACS results is also generally well described, candidly highlighting how variable results are across subjects and sessions. The figures are all of high quality and clear. One weakness of the experimental design is that no effort was made to control for sensation effects. tACS at 2Hz causes prominent skin sensations which could have interacted with auditory perception and thus, detection performance.

Appraisal of whether the authors achieved their aims, and whether the results support their conclusions.

Unfortunately, the main effects described for tACS are encumbered by a lack of clarity in the analysis. It does appear that the tACS effects reported here could be an artifact of the analysis approach. Without further clarification, the main findings on the tACS effects may not be supported by the data.

Likely impact of the work on the field, and the utility of the methods and data to the community.

The central claim is that tACS modulates behavioral detection performance across the 0.5s cycle of stimulation. However, neither the phase nor the strength of this effect reproduces across subjects or sessions. Some of these individual variations may be explainable by individual current distribution. If these results hold, they could be of interest to investigators in the tACS field.

The additional context you think would help readers interpret or understand the significance of the work.

The following are more detailed comments on specific sections of the paper, including details on the concerns with the statistical analysis of the tACS effects.

The introduction is well-balanced, discussing the promise and limitations of previous results with tACS. The objectives are well-defined.

The analysis surrounding behavioral performance and its dependence on the phase of the FM modulation (Figure 3) is masterfully executed and explained. It appears that it reproduces previous studies and points to a very robust behavioral task that may be of use in other studies.

There is a definition of tACS(+) vs tACS(-) based on the relative phase of tACS that may be problematic for the subsequent analysis of Figures 4 and 5. It seems that phase 0 is adjusted to each subject/session. For argument's sake, let's assume the curves in Fig. 3E are random fluctuations. Then aligning them to best-fitting cosine will trivially generate a FM-amplitude fluctuation with cosine shape as shown in Fig. 4a. Selecting the positive and negative phase of that will trivially be larger and smaller than a sham, respectively, as shown in Fig 4b. If this is correct, and the authors would like to keep this way of showing results, then one would need to demonstrate that this difference is larger than expected by chance. Perhaps one could randomize the 6 phase bins in each subject/session and execute the same process (fit a cosine to curves 3e, realign as in 4a, and summarize as in 4b). That will give a distribution under the Null, which may be used to determine if the contrast currently shown in 4b is indeed statistically significant.

Results of Fig 5a and 5b seem consistent with the concern raised above about the results of Fig. 4. It appears we are looking at an artifact of the realignment procedure, on otherwise random noise. In fact, the drop in "tACS-amplitude" in Fig. 5c is entirely consistent with a random noise effect.

To better understand what factors might be influencing inter-session variability in tACS effects, we estimated multiple linear models ..." this post hoc analysis does not seem to have been corrected for multiple comparisons of these "multiple linear models". It is not clear how many different things were tried. The fact that one of them has a p-value of 0.007 for some factors with amplitude-difference, but these factors did not play a role in the amplitude-phase, suggests again that we are not looking at a lawful behavior in these data.

"So far, our results demonstrate that FM-stimulus driven behavioral modulation of gap detection (FM-amplitude) was significantly affected by the phase lag between the FM-stimulus and the tACS signal (Audio-tACS lag) ..." There appears to be nothing in the preceding section (Figures 4 and 5) to show that the modulation seen in 3e is not just noise. Maybe something can be said about 3b on an individual subject/session basis that makes these results statistically significant on their own. Maybe these modulations are strong and statistically significant, but just not reproducible across subjects and sessions?

"Inter-individual variability in the simulated E-field predicts tACS effects" Authors here are attempting to predict a property of the subjects that was just shown to not be a reliable property of the subject. Authors are picking 9 possible features for this, testing 33 possible models with N=34 data points. With these circumstances, it is not hard to find something that correlates by chance. And some of the models tested had interaction terms, possibly further increasing the number of comparisons. The results reported in this section do not seem to be robust, unless all this was corrected for multiple comparisons, and it was not made clear?

"Can we reduce inter-individual variability in tACS effects ..." This section seems even more speculative and with mixed results.

Given the concerns with the statistical analysis above, there are concerns about the following statements in the summary of the Discussion:

"2) does modulate the amplitude of the FM-stimulus induced behavioral modulation (FM-amplitude)"<br /> This seems to be based on Figure 4, which leaves one with significant concerns.

"4) individual variability in tACS effect size was partially explained by two interactions: between the normal component of the E-field and the field focality, and between the normal component of the E-field and the distance between the peak of the electric field and the functional target ROIs."<br /> The complexity of this statement alone may be a good indication that this could be the result of false discovery due to multiple comparisons.

For the same reasons as stated above, the following statements in the Abstract do not appear to have adequate support in the data:<br /> "We observed that tACS modulated the strength of behavioral entrainment to the FM sound in a phase-lag specific manner. ... Inter-individual variability of tACS effects was best explained by the strength of the inward electric field, depending on the field focality and proximity to the target brain region. Spatially optimizing the electrode montage reduced inter-individual variability compared to a standard montage group."<br /> In particular, the evidence in support of the last sentence is unclear. The only finding that seems related is that "the variance test was significant only for tACS(-) in session 2". This is a very narrow result to be able to make such a general statement in the Abstract. But perhaps this can be made more clear.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In "Behavioral entrainment to rhythmic auditory stimulation can be modulated by tACS depending on the electrical stimulation field properties" Cabral-Calderin and collaborators aimed to document 1) the possible advantages of personalized tACS montage over standard montage on modulating behavior; 2) the inter-individual and inter-session reliability of tACS effects on behavioral entrainment and, 3) the importance of the induced electric field properties on the inter-individual variability of tACS.

To do so, in two different sessions, they investigated how the detection of silent gaps occurring at random phases of a 2Hz- amplitude modulated sound could be enhanced with 2Hz tACS, delivered at different phase lags. In addition, they evaluated the advantage of using spatially optimized tACS montages (information-based procedure - using anatomy and functional MRI to define the target ROI and simulation to compare to a standard montage applied to all participants) on behavioral entrainment. They first show that the optimized and the standard montages have similar spatial overlap to the target ROI. While the optimized montage induced a more focal field compared to the standard montage, the latter induced the strongest electric field. Second, they show that tACS does not modify the optimal phase for gap detection (phase of the frequency-modulated sound) but modulates the strength of behavioral entrainment to the frequency-modulated sound in a phase-lag specific manner. However, and surprisingly, they report that the optimal tACS lag, and the magnitude of the phasic tACS effect were highly variable across sessions. Finally, they report that the inter-individual variability of tACS effects can be explained by the strength of the inward electric field as a function of the field focality and on how well it reached the target ROI.

The article is interesting and well-written, and the methods and approaches are state-of-the-art.

Strengths:<br /> - The information-based approach used by the authors is very strong, notably with the definition of subject-specific targets using a fMRI localizer and the simulation of electric field strength using 3 different tACS montages (only 2 montages used for the behavioral experiment).<br /> - The inter-session and inter-individual variability are well documented and discussed. This article will probably guide future studies in the field.

Weaknesses:<br /> - The addition of simultaneous EEG recording would have been beneficial to understand the relationship between tACS entrainment and the entrainment to rhythmic auditory stimulation.<br /> - It would have been interesting to develop the fact that tACS did not "overwrite" neural entrainment to the auditory stimulus. The authors try to explain this effect by mentioning that "tACS is most effective at modulating oscillatory activity at the intended frequency when its power is not too high" or "tACS imposes its own rhythm on spiking activity when tACS strength is stronger than the endogenous oscillations but it decreases rhythmic spiking when tACS strength is weaker than the endogenous oscillations". However, it is relevant to note that the oscillations in their study are by definition "not endogenous" and one can interpret their results as a clear superiority of sensory entrainment over tACS entrainment. This potential superiority should be discussed, documented, and developed.<br /> - The authors propose that "by applying tACS at the right lag relative to auditory rhythms, we can aid how the brain synchronizes to the sounds and in turn modulate behavior." This should be developed as the authors showed that the tACS lags are highly variable across sessions. According to their results, the optimal lag will vary for each tACS session and subtle changes in the montage could affect the effects.<br /> - In a related vein, it would be very useful to show the data presented in Figure 3 (panels b,d,e) for all participants to allow the reader to evaluate the quality of the data (this can be added as a supplementary figure).

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Kerkoerle and colleagues present a very interesting comparative fMRI study in humans and monkeys, assessing neural responses to surprise reactions at the reversal of a previously learned association. The implicit nature of this task, assessing how this information is represented without requiring explicit decision-making, is an elegant design. The paper reports that both humans and monkeys show neural responses across a range of areas when presented with incongruous stimulus pairs. Monkeys also show a surprise response when the stimuli are presented in a reversed direction. However, humans show no such surprise response based on this reversal, suggesting that they encode the relationship reversibly and bidirectionally, unlike the monkeys. This has been suggested as a hallmark of symbolic representation, that might be absent in nonhuman animals.

I find this experiment and the results quite compelling, and the data do support the hypothesis that humans are somewhat unique in their tendency to form reversible, symbolic associations. I think that an important strength of the results is that the critical finding is the presence of an interaction between congruity and canonicity in macaques, which does not appear in humans. These results go a long way to allay concerns I have about the comparison of many human participants to a very small number of macaques.

I understand the impossibility of testing 30+ macaques in an fMRI experiment. However, I think it is important to note that differences necessarily arise in the analysis of such datasets. The authors report that they use '...identical training, stimuli, and whole-brain fMRI measures'. However, the monkeys (in experiment 1) actually required 10 times more training. More importantly, while the fMRI measures are the same, group analysis over 30+ individuals is inherently different from comparing only 2 macaques (including smoothing and averaging away individual differences that might be more present in the monkeys, due to the much smaller sample size).

Despite this, the results do appear to show that macaques show the predicted interaction effect (even despite the sample size), while humans do not. I think this is quite convincing, although had the results turned out differently (for example an effect in humans that was absent in macaques), I think this difference in sample size would be considerably more concerning.

I would also note that while I agree with the authors' conclusions, it is notable to me that the congruity effect observed in humans (red vs blue lines in Fig. 2B) appears to be far more pronounced than any effect observed in the macaques (Fig. 3C-3). Again, this does not challenge the core finding of this paper but does suggest methodological or possibly motivational/attentional differences between the humans and the monkeys (or, for example, that the monkeys had learned the associations less strongly and clearly than the humans).

This is a strong paper with elegant methods and makes a worthwhile contribution to our understanding of the neural systems supporting symbolic representations in humans, as opposed to other animals.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In their article titled "Brain mechanisms of reversible symbolic reference: a potential singularity of the human brain", van Kerkoerle et al address the timely question of whether non-human primates (rhesus macaques) possess the ability for reverse symbolic inference as observed in humans. Through an fMRI experiment in both humans and monkeys, they analyzed the bold signal in both species while observing audio-visual and visual-visual stimuli pairs that had been previously learned in a particular direction. Remarkably, the findings pertaining to humans revealed that a broad brain network exhibited increased activity in response to surprises occurring in both the learned and reverse directions. Conversely, in monkeys, the study uncovered that the brain activity within sensory areas only responded to the learned direction but failed to exhibit any discernible response to the reverse direction. These compelling results indicate that the capacity for reversible symbolic inference may be unique to humans.

In general, the manuscript is skillfully crafted and highly accessible to readers. The experimental design exhibits originality, and the analyses are tailored to effectively address the central question at hand. Although the first experiment raised a number of methodological inquiries, the subsequent second experiment thoroughly addresses these concerns and effectively replicates the initial findings, thereby significantly strengthening the overall study. Overall, this article is already of high quality and brings new insight into human cognition.

I identified three weaknesses in the manuscript:<br /> - One major issue in the study is the absence of significant results in monkeys. Indeed, authors draw conclusions regarding the lack of significant difference in activity related to surprise in the multi-demand network (MDN) in the reverse congruent versus reverse incongruent conditions. Although the results are convincing (especially with the significant interaction between congruency and canonicity), the article could be improved by including additional analyses in a priori ROI for the MDN in monkeys (as well as in humans, for comparison).<br /> - While the authors acknowledge in the discussion that the number of monkeys included in the study is considerably lower compared to humans, it would be informative to know the variability of the results among human participants.<br /> - Some details are missing in the methods.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

This study investigates the hypothesis that humans (but not non-human primates) spontaneously learn reversible temporal associations (i.e., learning a B-A association after only being exposed to A-B sequences), which the authors consider to be a foundational property of symbolic cognition. To do so, they expose humans and macaques to 2-item sequences (in a visual-auditory experiment, pairs of images and spoken nonwords, and in a visual-visual experiment, pairs of images and abstract geometric shapes) in a fixed temporal order, then measure the brain response during a test phase to congruent vs. incongruent pairs (relative to the trained associations) in canonical vs. reversed order (relative to the presentation order used in training). The advantage of neuroimaging for this question is that it removes the need for a behavioral test, which non-human primates can fail for reasons unrelated to the cognitive construct being investigated. In humans, the researchers find statistically indistinguishable incongruity effects in both directions (supporting a spontaneous reversible association), whereas in monkeys they only find incongruity effects in the canonical direction (supporting an association but a lack of spontaneous reversal). Although the precise pattern of activation varies by experiment type (visual-auditory vs. visual-visual) in both species, the authors point out that some of the regions involved are also those that are most anatomically different between humans and other primates. The authors interpret their finding to support the hypothesis that reversible associations, and by extension symbolic cognition, is uniquely human.

This study is a valuable complement to prior behavioral work on this question. However, I have some concerns about methods and framing.

Methods - Design issues:

1. The authors originally planned to use the same training/testing protocol for both species but the monkeys did not learn anything, so they dramatically increased the amount of training and evaluation. By my calculation from the methods section, humans were trained on 96 trials and tested on 176, whereas the monkeys got an additional 3,840 training trials and 1,408 testing trials. The authors are explicit that they continued training the monkeys until they got a congruity effect. On the one hand, it is commendable that they are honest about this in their write-up, given that this detail could easily be framed as deliberate after the fact. On the other hand, it is still a form of p-hacking, given that it's critical for their result that the monkeys learn the canonical association (otherwise, the critical comparison to the non-canonical association is meaningless).

2. Between-species comparisons are challenging. In addition to having differences in their DNA, human participants have spent many years living in a very different culture than that of NHPs, including years of formal education. As a result, attributing the observed differences to biology is challenging. One approach that has been adopted in some past studies is to examine either young children or adults from cultures that don't have formal educational structures. This is not the approach the authors take. This major confound needs to minimally be explicitly acknowledged up front.

3. Humans have big advantages in processing and discriminating spoken stimuli and associating them with visual stimuli (after all, this is what words are in spoken human languages). Experiment 2 ameliorates these concerns to some degree, but still, it is difficult to attribute the failure of NHPs to show reversible associations in Experiment 1 to cognitive differences rather than the relative importance of sound string to meaning associations in the human vs. NHP experiences.

4. More minor: The localizer task (math sentences vs. other sentences) makes sense for math but seems to make less sense for language: why would a language region respond more to sentences that don't describe math vs. ones that do?

Methods - Analysis issues:

5. The analyses appear to "double dip" by using the same data to define the clusters and to statistically test the average cluster activation (Kriegeskorte et al., 2009). The resulting effect sizes are therefore likely inflated, and the p-values are anticonservative.

Framing:

6. The framing ("Brain mechanisms of reversible symbolic reference: A potential singularity of the human brain") is bigger than the finding (monkeys don't spontaneously reverse a temporal association but humans do). The title and discussion are full of buzzy terms ("brain mechanisms", "symbolic", and "singularity") that are only connected to the experiments by a debatable chain of assumptions.

First, this study shows relatively little about brain "mechanisms" of reversible symbolic associations, which implies insights into how these associations are learned, recognized, and represented. But we're only given standard fMRI analyses that are quite inconsistent across similar experimental paradigms, with purely suggestive connections between these spatial patterns and prior work on comparative brain anatomy.

Second, it's not clear what the relationship is between symbolic cognition and a propensity to spontaneously reverse a temporal association. Certainly, if there are inter-species differences in learning preferences this is important to know about, but why is this construed as a difference in the presence or absence of symbols? Because the associations aren't used in any downstream computation, there is not even any way for participants to know which is the sign and which is the signified: these are merely labels imposed by the researchers on a sequential task.

Third, the word "singularity" is both problematically ambiguous and not well supported by the results. "Singularity" is a highly loaded word that the authors are simply using to mean "that which is uniquely human". Rather than picking a term with diverse technical meanings across fields and then trying to restrict the definition, it would be better to use a different term. Furthermore, even under the stated definition, this study performed a single pairwise comparison between humans and one other species (macaques), so it is a stretch to then conclude (or insinuate) that the "singularity" has been found (see also pt. 2 above).

7. Related to pt. 6, there is circularity in the framing whereby the authors say they are setting out to find out what is uniquely human, hypothesizing that the uniquely human thing is symbols, and then selecting a defining trait of symbols (spontaneous reversible association) *because* it seems to be uniquely human (see e.g., "Several studies previously found behavioral evidence for a uniquely human ability to spontaneously reverse a learned association (Imai et al., 2021; Kojima, 1984; Lipkens et al., 1988; Medam et al., 2016; Sidman et al., 1982), and such reversibility was therefore proposed as a defining feature of symbol representation reference (Deacon, 1998; Kabdebon and Dehaene-Lambertz, 2019; Nieder, 2009).", line 335). They can't have it both ways. Either "symbol" is an independently motivated construct whose presence can be independently tested in humans and other species, or it is by fiat synonymous with the "singularity". This circularity can be broken by a more modest framing that focuses on the core research question (e.g., "What is uniquely human? One possibility is spontaneous reversal of temporal associations.") and then connects (speculatively) to the bigger conceptual landscape in the discussion ("Spontaneous reversal of temporal associations may be a core ability underlying the acquisition of mental symbols").

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Bull et al aimed to use data from observational studies and mendelian randomisation to explore if changes in circulating metabolites are associated with colorectal cancer development. As Mendelian randomisation uses information on genetic variations which are fixed at birth, it is less vulnerable to confounding than standard observational studies.

Overall, a major strength of the study is that it uses data from large cohort studies, one from childhood, adolescence, and early adulthood when the incidence of colorectal cancer is very low (reducing the likelihood of reverse causation) and before medication (such as statins which have the potential to affect metabolite levels) has been initiated.

This study has some weaknesses which have been acknowledged by the authors. Although the findings of this study indicate the potentially significant role that polyunsaturated fatty acids may have in colorectal cancer risk, the genes and therefore also the genetic variations (SNPs) associated with fatty acids often produce an effect for more than one fatty acid which may introduce bias. This together with the fact that there was limited information available on many specific fatty acids which are known causative metabolites for colorectal cancer, makes it difficult to establish with confidence which specific classes of fatty acids could potentially play a causative role in these associations. Also, the study populations are majority white European descent which may limit the applicability of these findings to other populations.

The methodology used was largely acceptable to achieve the aims set out and the findings have shown an association between polyunsaturated fat and colorectal cancer. However, I feel that the conclusion should be tempered slightly as although this study alongside other similar MR studies provides evidence of an association between genetic liability to CRC and levels of metabolites at certain ages, I do not think there is enough evidence at this stage to say that genetic liability for CRC actually alters the levels of metabolites.

Overall, this is an important piece of work that has the potential to contribute to our understanding of the causal relationship between circulating metabolites at different stages of the life cycle and colorectal cancer risk as it would be extremely difficult to gather such evidence using other study designs. It opens the door for future research aiming to better understand the role that these metabolites could play in colorectal cancer risk prediction and in turn help identify groups of individuals who would benefit most from prevention and early detection interventions.

This work will be of interest not only to epidemiologists working in the area of GI tract cancers but also those interested in the different applications for mendelian randomisation within cancer epidemiology research.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Bull et al investigates the relationship between metabolic features, in particular different lipoproteins and fatty acids, and colorectal cancer. They combine different data sources to analyze forward and reverse Mendelian Randomization associations in children and adults. Their results indicate that polyunsaturated fatty acids may be implicated in the risk for colorectal cancer.

Overall, the paper is well-written, and the methods used are solid. The use of different data (cohort individual data and summary stats) and stratifications strengthens the analyses. The conclusions drawn from the results are balanced and supported by the data although the novelty of the findings is modest.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The manuscript by Zheng, et al., is focused on assessing the role of deletion of PTPMT1, a mitochondria-based phosphatase, in mitochondrial fuel selection. Authors show that the utilization of pyruvate, a key mitochondrial substrate derived from glucose, is inhibited, whereas fatty acid utilization is enhanced. Importantly, while the deletion of PTPMT1 does not impact development of skeletal muscle or heart, the metabolic inflexibility leads to muscular atrophy, heart failure, and sudden death. Mechanistically, authors claim that the prolonged substrate shift from carbohydrates to lipids causes oxidative stress and mitochondrial dysfunction, leading to accumulation of lipids and muscle cell and CM damage in the KO. Interestingly, PTPMT1 deletion from the liver or adipose tissue does not generate any local or systemic defects. Authors conclude that PTPMT1 plays an important role in maintaining mitochondrial flexibility and that the balanced utilization of carbohydrates and lipids is essential for skeletal muscle and heart.

The following issues remain:

1) Authors have not alleviated the concern regarding the fact that CKMM- and the MYHC-Cre express early, during development ; even if the effects are not grossly apparent during development, many developmental issues progress over time and manifest later in adulthood, particularly those concerning cardiac function and development (ie adult congenital disease). As such, the authors explanation that they don't observe differences does not suffice; detailed developmental assessment by histology at the various developmental stages (by timed mating) are needed to validate the study and conclusions of the authors. Alternatively, as mentioned previously, authors could utilize inducible cre drivers, expressing the gene only in adulthood to prove that the effects are or not developmental in nature. Similarly, the authors new assertion that late-onset phenotypes observed in the knockout mice over time is attributed to the metabolic defects arising from the loss of PTPMT1 in the embryos needs to be validated- therefore the developmental effects are in fact critical to the phenotype and should be demonstrated in the paper.

2) Quantification of ALL western blot data is an absolute necessity and speaks to the rigor and reproducibility of the study. I do not agree that this is unnecessary or that it would take up too much space.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

This study presents novel findings on the metabolic fuel preference shift regulated by PTPMT1, a target of interest, in skeletal and cardiac muscle cells.

Zheng et al. have investigated the effects of PTPMT1 Knock-out on cellular metabolic flexibility. Since the authors used several types of appropriate tissue-specific mouse models, it seems to be a broad significance at the first glance. However, most of the data lack the quantification, consequently they don't provide statistical significance. In addition, the functional data such as echocardiography shows partial and limited data.<br /> Therefore, it is only a matter of speculation that the absence of PTPMT1 inhibits glucose (pyruvate) utilization and promotes FAO.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

The Eph receptor tyrosine kinase family plays a critical function in multiple physiological and pathophysiological processes. Hence, understating the regulation of these receptors is a highly important question. Through extensive experiments in cell lines and cultured neurons, Chang et.al show that the signaling hub protein, MYCBP2 positively regulates the overall stability of a specific member of the family, EPHB2, and by that the cellular response to ephrinBs. Overall, this work sheds light on the divergence in the regulatory mechanisms of the Eph receptors family. The physiological importance of this new regular mechanism awaits discovery.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Members of the EphB family of tyrosine kinase receptors are involved in a multitude of diverse cellular functions, ranging from the control of axon growth to angiogenesis and synaptic plasticity. In order to provide these diverse functions, it is expected that these receptors interact in a cell-type-specific manner with a diverse variety of downstream signalling molecules.

The authors have used proteomics approaches to characterise some of these molecules in further detail. This molecule, myc-binding protein 2 (MYCBP2) also known as highwire, has been identified in the context of establishment of neural connectivity. Another molecule coming up on this screen was identified as FBXO45.

The authors use classical methods of co-IP to show a kinase-independent binding of MYCBP2 to EphB2. They further showed that FBXO45 within a ternary complex increased the stability of the EphB2/MYCBP2 complex.

To define the interacting domains, they used clearly designed swapping experiments to show that the extracellular and transmembrane domains are necessary and sufficient for the formation of the ternary complex.

Using a cellular contraction assay, the authors showed the necessity of MYCBP2 in mediating the cytoskeletal response of EphB2 forward signalling. Furthermore, they used the technically challenging stripe assay of alternating lanes of ephrinB-Fc and Fc to show that also in this migration-based essay MYCBP2 is required for EphB mediated differential migration pattern.

MYCBP2 in addition is necessary to stabilize EphB2, that is in the absence of MYCBP2, EphB2 is degraded in the lysosomal pathway.

Interestingly, the third protein in this complex, Fbxo45, was further characterized by overexpression of the domain of MYCBP2, known to interact with Fbxo45. Here the authors showed that this approach led to the disruption of the EphB2 / MYCBP2 complex, and also abolished the ephrinB-mediated activation of EphB2 receptors and their differential outgrowth on ephrinB2-Fc / Fc stripes.

Finally, the authors demonstrated an in vivo function of this complex using another model system, C elegans where they were able to show a genetic interaction.

Data shows in a nice set of experiments a novel level of EphB2 forward signalling where a ternary complex of this receptor with multifunctional MYCBP2 and Fbxo45 controls the activity of EphB2, allowing a further complex regulation of this important receptor. Additionally, the authors challenge pre-existing concepts of the function of MYCBP2 which might open up novel ways to think about this protein.

Of interest is this work also in terms of the development of the retinotectal projection in zebrafish where MYCBP2/highwire plays a crucial role, and thus might lead to a better understanding of patterning along the DV axis, for which it is known that EphB family members are crucial.

Overall, the experiments are classical experiments of co-immunoprecipitations, swapping experiments, collapse assays, and stripe assays which all are well carried out and are convincing.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, Chang et al set out to find direct interactions with the Eph-B2 receptor, as our knowledge of its function/regulation is still incomplete. Using proteomic analysis of Hela cells expressing EPHB2, they identified MYCBP2 as a potential binder, which they then confirm using extensive biochemical analyses, an interaction that seems to be negatively affected by the binding of ephrin-B2 (but not B1). Furthermore, they find that FBXO45, a known MYCBP2 interaction, strongly facilitates its binding to EPHB2. Intriguingly, these interactions depend on the extracellular domains of EPHB2, something that is surprising given the fact that MYCBP2 is an intracellular protein. Finally, they find that, in contrast to what could be expected given the known function of MYCBP2 as a ubiquitin E3 ligase, it actually positively regulates EPHB2 protein stability, and function.

The strength of this manuscript is the extensive biochemical analysis of the EPHB2/MYCBP2/FBXO43 interactions. Most of the conclusions are warranted although I do not understand the physiological interpretation of how these proteins could interact in the extracellular space.

The attempt to extend the study to an in vivo animal using the worm is important. However, I find the results in the worm confusing and overly interpreted in their current form.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, the authors identified and characterized the five C-terminus repeats and a 14aa acidic tail of the mouse Dux protein. They found that repeat 3&5, but not other repeats, contribute to transcriptional activation when combined with the 14aa tail. Importantly, they were able to narrow done to a 6 aa region that can distinguish "active" repeats from "inactive" repeats. Using proximal labeling proteomics, the authors identified candidate proteins that are implicated in Dux-mediated gene activation. They were able to showcase that the C-terminal repeat 3 binds to some proteins, including Smarcc1, a component of SWI/SNF (BAF) complex. In addition, by overexpressing different Dux variants, the authors characterized how repeats in different combinations, with or without the 14aa tail, contribute to Dux binding, H3K9ac, chromatin accessibility, and transcription. In general, the data is of high quality and convincing. The identification of the functionally important two C-terminal repeats and the 6 aa tail is enlightening. The work shined light on the mechanism of Dux function.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this manuscript, Smith et al. delineated novel mechanistic insights into the structure-function relationships of the C-terminal repeat domains within the mouse DUX protein. Specifically, they identified and characterised the transcriptionally active repeat domains, and narrowed down to a critical 6aa region that is required for interacting with key transcription and chromatin regulators. The authors further showed how the DUX active repeats collaborate with the C-terminal acidic tail to facilitate chromatin opening and transcriptional activation at DUX genomic targets.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Dux (or DUX4 in human) is a master transcription factor regulating early embryonic gene activation and has garnered much attention also for its involvement in reprogramming pluripotent embryonic stem cells to totipotent "2C-like" cells. The presented work starts with the recognition that DUX contains five conserved c. 100-amino acid carboxy-terminal repeats (called C1-C5) in the murine protein but not in that of other mammals (e.g. human DUX4). Using state-of-the-art techniques and cell models (BioID, Cut&Tag; rescue experiments and functional reporter assays in ESCs), the authors dissect the activity of each repeat, concluding that repeats C3 and C5 possess the strongest transactivation potential in synergy with a short C-terminal 14 AA acidic motif. In agreement with these findings, the authors find that full-length and active (C3) repeat containing Dux leads to increased chromatin accessibility and active histone mark (H3K9Ac) signals at genomic Dux binding sites. A further significant conclusion of this mutational analysis is the proposal that the weakly activating repeats C2 and C4 may function as attenuators of C3+C5-driven activity.

By next pulling down and identifying proteins bound to Dux (or its repeat-deleted derivatives) using BioID-LC/MS/MS, the authors find a significant number of interactors, notably chromatin remodellers (SMARCC1), a histone chaperone (CHAF1A/p150) and transcription factors previously (ZSCAN4D) implicated in embryonic gene activation.

The experiments are of high quality, with appropriate controls, and thus provide a rich compendium of Dux interactors for future study. Indeed, a number of these (SMARCC1, SMCHD1, ZSCAN4) make biological sense, both for embryonic genome activation and for FSHD (SMCHD1).

The central question raised by this study, however, concerns the function of the Dux repeats, apparently unique to mice. While it is possible, as the authors propose, that the weak activating C1, C2 C4 repeats may exert an attenuating function ("sub-functionalization") on activation mediated by C3 and/or C5, it could similarly be argued that the different repeats are indeed expected to display different activation potentials, chromatin opening, cofactor recruitment, due to, simply, the differences in their sequences. The argument for an active attenuating function would have been strengthened, for example, by the finding of repressor recruitment by C1/C2/C4 (and not just less of everything). The possible biological relevance of these repeats thus remains to be established.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

In mammals, a large methyltransferase complex (including METTL3, METTL14 and WTAP) deposits m6A across the transcriptome, and METTL3 serves as its catalytic core component. In this manuscript, the authors identified two cleaved forms of METTL3 and described the function of METTL3a (residues 239-580) in breast tumorigenesis. METTL3a mediates the assembly of METTL3-METTL14-WTAP complex, the global m6A deposition and breast cancer progression. Furthermore, the METTL3a-mTOR axis was uncovered to mediate the METTL3 cleavage, providing potential therapeutic target for breast cancer. This study is properly performed and the findings are very interesting; however, some problems with the model and assays need to be modified.. It is widely known that METTL3 and METTL14 form a stable heterodimer with the stoichiometric ratio of 1:1 (Wang X et al. Nature 534, 575-578 (2016), Su S et al. Cell Res 32(11), 982-994 (2022), Yan X et al. Cell Res 32(12), 1124-1127 (2022)), the numbers of METTL3 and METTL14 in the model of Fig 7P are not equivalent and need to be modified.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this study, Yan et al. report that a cleaved form of METTL3 (termed METTL3a) plays an essential role in regulating the assembly of the METTL3-METTL14-WTAP complex. Depletion of METTL3a leads to reduced m6A level on TMEM127, an mTOR repressor, and subsequently decreased breast cancer cell proliferation. Mechanistically, METTL3a is generated via 26S proteasome in an mTOR-dependent manner.

The manuscript follows a smooth, logical flow from one result to the next, and most of the results are clearly presented. Specifically, the molecular interaction assays are well-designed. This model represents a significant addition to the current understanding of m6A-methyltransferase complex formation.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

Peng et al develop a computational method to predict/rank transcription factors (TFs) according to their likelihood of being pioneer transcription factors--factors that are capable of binding nucleosomes--using ChIP-seq for 225 human transcription factors, MNase-seq and DNase-seq data from five cell lines. The authors developed relatively straightforward, easy to interpret computational methods that leverage the potential for MNase-seq to enable relatively precise identification of the nucleosome dyad. Using an established smoothing approach and local peak identification methods to estimate positions together with identification of ChIP-seq peaks and motifs within those peaks which they referred to as "ChIP-seq motifs", they were able to quantify "motif profiles" and their density in nucleosome regions (NRs) and nucleosome free regions (NFRs) relative to their estimated nucleosome dyad positions. Using these profiles, they arrived at an odd-ratio based motif enrichment score along with a Fisher's exact test to assess the odds and significance that a given transcription factor's ChIP-seq motifs are enriched in NRs compared to NFRs, hence, its potential to be a pioneer transcription factor. They showed that known pioneer transcription factors had among the highest enrichment scores, and they could identify 32 relatively novel pioneer TFs with high enrichment scores and relatively high expression in their corresponding cell line. They used multiple validation approaches including (1) calculating the ROC-AUC associated with their enrichment score based on 16 known pioneer TFs among their 225 TFs which they used as positives and the remaining TFs (among the 225) as negatives; (2) use of the literature to note that known pioneer TFs that acted as key regulators of embryonic stem cell differentiation had a highest enrichment scores; (3) comparison of their enrichments scores to three classes of TFs defined by protein microarray and electromobility shift assays (1. strong binder to free and nucleosomal DNA, 2. weak binder to free and nucleosomal DNA, 3. strong binding to free but not nucleosomal DNA); and (4) correlation between their calculated TF motif nucleosome end/dyad binding ratio and relevant data from an NCAP-SELEX experiment. They also characterize the spatial distribution of TF motif binding relative to the dyad by (1) correlating TF motif density and nucleosome occupancy and (2) clustering TF motif binding profiles relative to their distance from the dyad and identifying 6 clusters.

The strengths of this paper are the use of MNase-seq data to define relatively precise dyad positions and ChIP-seq data together with motif analysis to arrive at relatively accurate TF binding profiles relative to dyad positions in NRs as well as in NFRs. This allowed them to use a relatively simple odds ratio based enrichment score which performs well in identifying known pioneer TFs. Moreover, their validation approaches either produced highly significant or reasonable, trending results.

The weaknesses of the paper are relatively minor. The most significant one is that they used ROC-AUC to assess the prediction accuracy of their enrichment score on a highly imbalanced dataset with 16 positives and 209 negatives. ROC-AUC is known to be a misleading prediction measure on highly imbalanced data. This is mitigated by the fact that they find an AUC = 0.94 for their best case. Thus, they're likely to find good results using a more appropriate performance measure for imbalanced data. Another minor point is that they did not associate their enrichment score (focus of Figure 2) with their correlation coefficients of TF motif density and nucleosome occupancy (focus of Figure 3). Finally, while the manuscript was clearly written, some parts of the Methods section could have been made more clear so that their approaches could be reproduced. The description of the NCAP-SELEX method could have also been more clear for a reader not familiar with this approach.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

In this study, the authors utilize a compendium of public genomic data to identify transcription factors (TF) that can identify their DNA binding motifs in the presence of nuclosome-wrapped chromatin and convert the chromatin to open chromatin. This class of TFs are termed Pioneer TFs (PTFs). A major strength of the study is the concept, whose premise is that motifs bound by PTFs (assessed by ChIP-seq for the respective TFs) should be present in both "closed" nucleosome wrapped DNA regions (measured by MNase-seq) as well as open regions (measured by DNAseI-seq) because the PTFs are able to open the chromatin. Use of multiple ENCODE cell lines, including the H1 stem cell line, enabled the authors to assess if binding at motifs changes from closed to open. Typical, non-PTF TFs are expected to only bind motifs in open chromatin regions (measured by DNaseI-seq) and not in regions closed in any cell type. This study contributes to the field a validation of PTFs that are already known to have pioneering activity and presents an interesting approach to quantify PTF activity.

For this reviewer, there were a few notable limitations. One was the uncertainty regarding whether expression of the respective TFs across cell types was taken into account. This would help inform if a TF would be able to open chromatin. Another limitation was the cell types used. While understandable that these cell types were used, because of their deep epigenetic phenotyping and public availability, they are mostly transformed and do not bear close similarity to lineages in a healthy organism. Next, the methods used to identify PTFs were not made available in an easy-to-use tool for other researchers who may seek to identify PTFs in their cell type(s) of interest. Lastly, some terms used were not defined explicitly (e.g., meaning of dyads) and the language in the manuscript was often difficult to follow and contained improper English grammar.

Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

Peng et al. designed a computational framework for identifying pioneer factors using epigenomic data from five cell types. The identification of pioneer factors is important for our understanding of the epigenetic and transcriptional regulation of cells. A computational approach toward this goal can significantly reduce the burden of labor-intensive experimental validation. Nevertheless, there are several caveats in the current analysis which may require some modification of the computational methods and additional analysis to maximize the confidence of the pioneer factor prediction results.

A key consideration that arises during this review is that the current analysis anchors on H1 ESC and therefore may have biased the results toward the identification of pioneer factors that are relevant to the four other differentiated cell types. The low ranking of Yamanaka factors and known pioneer factors of NFYs and ESRRB may be due to the setup of the computational framework. Analysis should be repeated by using each of every cell type as an anchor for validating the reproducibility of the pioneer factors found so far and also to investigate whether TFs related to ESC identity (e.g. Yamanaka factors, NFYs and ESRRB) would show significant changes in their ranking. Given the potential cell type specificity of the pioneer factors, the extension to more cell types appears to be important for further demonstrating the utility of the computational framework.

Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

This cross-sectional study examined the results of a survey about cancer treatment disruption during June-August 2020 in 82 counties located in Missouri and Illinois in the U.S. The main outcome was disruption in cancer care. Authors reported that higher education, being a female, experiencing more discrimination in healthcare settings, and having scheduled a telehealth appointment were associated with higher odds of care disruption. Lack of a research focus, lack of following any conceptual framework, the cross-sectional nature of the study, and the small sample size were the noted shortcomings of the manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

Dr. Kia Davis and colleagues present a thoughtful analysis of disruptions to cancer care during COVID-19 in the article, "Understanding disruptions in cancer care to reduce increased cancer burden: a cross-sectional study." The article is based on an online survey of 680 residents in the Siteman Cancer Center catchment area in Summer 2020. The authors aim to characterize demographic differences in cancer care disruptions. Information about the causes and distribution of care disruption can help reduce the impacts of COVID-19 and guide the recovery of programs and services. The article provides a clear and detailed assessment of factors associated with care disruption and return to care during the first six months of the pandemic.

A strength of the study is the focus on the catchment area of the cancer center during a period of dramatic change. The results would provide timely and actionable data to address emerging barriers to care and associated social or contextual factors. This information helps the Community Outreach and Engagement efforts to be responsive to community priorities despite rapidly evolving circumstances.

The analysis would benefit from greater detail in three areas. First, it would be helpful to have more information about how the outcome measures were originally developed or tested. Second, for the regression analysis, it would be helpful to show the demographic characteristics of the two strata to better understand the sample composition. Third, the authors should demonstrate that the data do not violate the assumptions for conducting logistic regression to improve confidence in the findings.

COVID-19 affected all aspects of the cancer continuum. The study reports factors associated with postponing or canceling cancer-related appointments during the pandemic. It will be of great interest to researchers and practitioners in cancer prevention and control.