Reviewer #3 (Public Review):
Summary:
The mechanisms governing the initial female-specific activation of Sex-lethal (Sxl) in the soma, the subsequent maintenance of female-specific expression and the various functions of Sxl in somatic sex determination and dosage compensation are well documented. While Sxl is also expressed in the female germline where it plays a critical role during oogenesis, the pathway that is responsible for turning Sxl on in germ cells has been a long-standing mystery. This manuscript from Goyal et al describes studies aimed at elucidating the mechanism(s) for the sex-specific activation of the Sex-lethal (Sxl) gene in the female germline of Drosophila.
In the soma, the Sxl establishment promoter, Sxl-Pe, is regulated in pre-cellular blastoderm embryos in somatic cells by several X-linked transcription factors (sis-a, sis-b, sis-c and runt). At this stage of development, the expression of these transcription factors is proportional to gene dose, 2x females and 1x in males. The cumulative two-fold difference in the expression of these transcription factors is sufficient to turn Sxl-Pe on in female embryos. Transcripts from the Sxl-Pe promoter encode an "early" version of the female Sxl protein, and they function to activate a splicing positive autoregulatory loop by promoting the female-specific splicing of the initial pre-mRNAs derived from the Sxl maintenance promoter, Sxl-Pm (which is located upstream of Sxl-Pm). These female Sxl-Pm mRNAs encode a Sxl protein with a different N-terminus from the Sxl-Pe mRNAs, and they function to maintain female-specific splicing in the soma during the remainder of development.
In this manuscript, the authors are trying to understand how the Sxl-Pm positive autoregulatory loop is established in germ cells. If Sxl-Pe is used and its activation precedes Sxl-Pm as is true in the soma, they should be able to detect Sxl-Pe transcripts in germ cells before Sxl-Pm transcripts appear. To test this possibility, they generated RNA FISH probes complementary to the Sxl-Pe first exon (which is part of an intron sequence in the Sxl-Pm transcript) and to a "common sequence" that labels both Sxl-Pe and Sxl-Pm transcripts. Transcripts labeled by both probes were detected in germ cells beginning at stage 5 (and reaching a peak at stage 10), so either the Sxl-Pm and Sxl-Pe promoters turn on simultaneously, or Sxl-Pe is not active.
They next switched to Sxl-Pe reporters. The first Sxl-Pe:gfp reporter they used has a 1.5 kb upstream region which in other studies was found to be sufficient to drive sex-specific expression in the soma of blastoderm embryos. Also like the endogenous Sxl gene it is not expressed in germ cells at this early stage. In 2011, Hashiyama et al reported that this 1.5 kb promoter fragment was able to drive gfp expression in Vasa-positive germ cells later in development in stage 9/10 embryos. However, because of the high background of gfp in the nearby soma, their result wasn't especially convincing. Though they don't show the data, Goyal et al indicated that unlike Hashiyama et al they were unable to detect gfp expressed from this reporter in germ cells. Goyal et al extended the upstream sequences in the reporter to 5 kb, but they were still unable to detect germline expression of gfp.
Goyal et al then generated a more complicated reporter which extends 5 kb upstream of the Sxl-Pe start site and 5 kb downstream-ending at or near 4th exon of the Sxl-Pm transcript (the Sxl-Pe10 kb reporter). (The authors were not explicit as to whether the 5 kb downstream sequence extended beyond the 4th exon splice junction-in which case splicing could potentially occur with an upstream exon(s)-or terminated prior to the splice junction as seems to be indicated in their diagram.) With this reporter, they were able to detect sex-specific gfp expression in the germline beginning in L1 (first instar larva). With the caveat that gfp detection might be delayed compared to the onset of reporter activation, these findings indicated that the sequences in the reporter are able to drive sex-specific transcription in the germline at least as early as L1.
The authors next tagged the N-terminal end of the Sxl-Pe protein with HA (using Crispr/Cas9) and the N-terminal end of Sxl-Pm protein with Flag. They report that the HA-Sxl-Pe protein is first detected in the soma at stage 9 of embryogenesis. Somatic HA-Sxl-Pe protein persists into L1, but is no longer detected in L2. However, while somatic HA-Sxl-Pe protein is detected, they were unable to detect HA-Sxl-Pe protein in germ cells. In the case of FLAG-Sxl-Pm, it could first be detected in L2 germ cells indicating that at this juncture the Sxl-positive autoregulatory loop has been activated. This contrasts with Sxl-Pm transcripts which are observed in a few germ cells at stage 5 of embryogenesis, and in most germ cells by stage 10. The authors propose (based on the expression pattern of the Sxl-Pe10kb reporter and the appearance of Flag-Sxl-Pm protein) that Sxl-Pe comes on in germ cells in L1, and that the Sxl-Pe protein activates the female splicing of Sxl-Pm transcripts, giving detectable Flag-Sxl-Pm proteins beginning in L2.
To investigate the signals that activate Sxl-Pe in germ cells, the authors tested four of the X-linked genes (sis-a, sis-b, sis-c, and runt) that function to activate Sxl-Pe in the soma in early embryos. RNAi knockdown of sis-b, sis-c, and runt had no apparent effect on oogenesis. In contrast, knockdown of sis-a resulted in tumorous ovaries, a phenotype associated with Sxl mutations. (Three different RNAi transgenes were tested-two gave this phenotype, the third did not.) Sxl-Pe10kb reporter activity in L1 female germ cells is also dependent on sis-A.
Several approaches were used to confirm a role for sis-a in a) oogenesis and b) the activation of the Sxl-Pm autoregulatory loop. They showed that sis-a germline clones (using tissue-specific Crispr/Cas9 editing) resulted in the tumorous ovary phenotype and reduced the expression of Sxl protein in these ovaries. They found that sis-a transcripts and GFP-tagged Sis-A protein are present in germ cells. Finally, they showed tumorous ovary phenotype induced by germline RNAi knockdown of sis-a can be partially rescued by expressing Sxl in the germ cells.
Critique:
While this manuscript addresses a longstanding puzzle - the mechanism activating the Sxl autoregulatory loop in female germ cells-and likely identified an important germline transcriptional activator of Sxl, sis-a, the data that they've generated doesn't make a compelling story. At every step, there are puzzle pieces that don't fit the narrative. In addition, some of their findings are inconsistent with many previous studies.
(1) The authors used RNA FISH to time the expression of Sxl-Pe and Sxl-Pm transcripts in germ cells. Transcripts complementary to Sxl-Pe and Sxl-Pm were detected at the same time in embryos beginning at stage 5. This is not a definitive experiment as it could mean a) that Sxl-Pe and Sxl-Pm turn on at the same time, b) that Sxl-Pe comes on after Sxl-Pm (as suggested by the Sxl-Pe10kb reporter) or c) Sxl-Pe never comes on.
(2) Hashiyama et al reported that they detected gfp expression in stage 9/10 germ cells from a 1.5 kb Sxl-Pe-gfp. As noted above, this result wasn't entirely convincing and thus it isn't surprising that Goyal et al were unable to reproduce it. Extending the upstream sequences to just before the 1st exon of Sxl-Pm transcripts also didn't give gfp expression in germ cells. Only when they added 5 kb downstream did they detect gfp expression. However, from this result, it isn't possible to conclude that the Sxl-Pe promoter is actually driving gfp expression in L1 germ cells. Instead, the Sxl promoter active in the germ line could be anywhere in their 10 kb reporter.
(3) At least one experiment suggests that Sxl-Pe never comes on in germ cells. The authors tagged the N-terminus of the Sxl-Pe protein with HA and the N-terminus of the Sxl-Pm protein with Flag. Though they could detect HA-Sxl-Pe protein in the soma, they didn't detect it in germ cells. On the other hand, the Flag-Sxl-Pm protein was detected in L2 germ cells (but not earlier). These results would more or less fit with those obtained for the 10 kb reporter and would support the following model: Prior to L1, Sxl-Pm transcripts are expressed and spliced in the male pattern in both male and female germ cells. During L1, Sxl protein expressed via a mechanism that depends upon a 10 kb region spanning Sxl-Pe (but not on Sxl-Pe) is produced and by L2 there are sufficient amounts of this protein to switch the splicing of Sxl-Pm transcripts from a male to a female pattern-generating Flag-tagged Sxl-Pm protein.
(4) The 10kb reporter is sex-specific, but not germline-specific. The levels of gfp in female L1 somatic cells are equal to if not greater than those in L1 female germ cells. That the Sxl-Pe10kb reporter is active in the soma complicates the conclusion that it represents a germ line-specific promoter. Germline activity is, however, sensitive to sis-A knockdowns which is plus. Presumably, somatic expression of the reporter wouldn't be sensitive to a (late) sis-A knockdown- but this wasn't shown.
(5) Their results with the HA-Sxl-Pe protein don't fit with many previous studies-assuming that the authors have explained their results properly. They report that HA-Sxl-Pe protein is first detected in the soma at stage 9 of embryogenesis and that it then persists till L2. However, previous studies have shown that Sxl-Pe transcripts and then Sxl-Pe proteins are first detected in ~NC11-NC12 embryos. In RNase protection experiments, the Sxl-Pe exon is observed in 2-4 hr embryos, but not detected in 5-8 hr, 14-12 hr, L1, L2, L3, or pupae. Northerns give pretty much the same picture. Western blots also show that Sxl-Pe proteins are first detectable around the blastoderm stage. So it is not at all clear why HA-Sxl-Pe proteins are first observed at stage 9 which, of course, is well after the time that the Sxl-Pm autoregulatory loop is established.
Given the obvious problems with the initial timing of somatic expression described here, it is hard to know what to make of the fact that HA-tagged Sxl-Pe proteins aren't observed in germ cells.
As for the presence of HA-Sxl-Pe proteins later than expected: While RNase protection/Northern experiments showed that Sxl-Pe mRNAs are expressed in 2-4 hr embryos and disappear thereafter, one could argue from the published Western experiments that the Sxl-PE proteins expressed at the blastoderm stage persist at least until the end embryogenesis, though perhaps at somewhat lower levels than at earlier points in development. So the fact that Goyal et al were able to detect HA-Sxl-Pe proteins in stage 9 embryos and later on in L1 larva probably isn't completely unexpected. What is unexpected is that the HA-Sxl-Pe proteins weren't present earlier.
(6) The authors use RNAi and germline clones to demonstrate that sis-A is required for proper oogenesis: when sis-A activity is compromised in germ cells, i) tumorous ovary phenotypes are observed and ii) there is a reduction in the expression of Sxl-Pm protein. They are also able to rescue the phenotypic effects of sis-a knockdown by expressing a Sxl-Pm protein. While the experiments indicating sis-a is important for normal oogenesis and that at least one of its functions is to ensure that sufficient Sxl is present in the germline stem cells seem convincing, other findings would make the reader wonder whether Sis-A is actually functioning (directly) to activate Sxl transcription from promoter X.
The authors show that sis-a mRNAs and proteins are expressed in stage 3-5 germ cells (PGCs). This is not unexpected as the X-linked transcription factors that turn Sxl-Pe on are expressed prior to nuclear migration, so their protein products should be present in early PGCs. The available evidence suggests that their transcription is shut down in PGCs by the factors responsible for transcriptional quiescence (e.g., nos and pgc) in which case transcripts might be detected in only one or two PGC-which fits with their images. However, it is hard to believe that expression of Sis-A protein in pre-blastoderm embryos is relevant to the observed activation of the Sxl-Pm autoregulatory loop hours later in L2 larva.
It is also not clear how the very low level of gfp-Sis-A seen in only a small subset of migrating germ cells in stage 10 embryos (Figure S6) would be responsible for activating the Sxl-Pe10kb reporter in L1. It seems likely that the small amount of protein seen in stage 10 embryos is left over from the pre-cellular blastoderm stage. In this case, it would not be surprising to discover that the residual protein is present in both female and male stage 10 germ cells. This would raise further doubts about the relevance of the gfp-Sis-A at these early stages.
In fact, given the evidence presented implicating sis-a in activating Sxl, (the germline activation of the Sxl-Pe10kb reporter, the RNAi knockdowns, and the germ cell-specific sis-a clones) it is clear that the sis-A RNAs and proteins seen in pre-cellular blastoderm PGCs aren't relevant. The germline clone experiment (and also the RNAi knockdowns) indicates that sis-A must be transcribed in germ cells after Cas9 editing has taken place. Presumably, this would be after transcription is reactivated in the germline (~stage 10) and after the formation of the embryonic gonad (stage 14) so that the somatic gonadal cells can signal to the germ cells. With respect to the reporter, the relevant time frame for showing that sis-A is present in germ cells would be even later in L1.
(7) As noted above, the data in this manuscript do not support the idea that Sxl-Pe proteins activate the Sxl-Pm female splicing in the germline. Flybase indicates that there is at least one other Sxl promoter that could potentially generate a transcript that includes the male exon but still could encode a Sxl protein. This promoter "Sxl-Px" is located downstream of Sxl-Pm and from its position it could have been included in the authors' 10 kb reporter. The reported splicing pattern of the endogenous transcript skips exon2, and instead links an exon just downstream of Sxl-Px to the male exon. The male exon is then spliced to exon4. If the translation doesn't start and end at one of the small upstream orfs in the exons close to Sxl-Px and the male exon, a translation could begin with an AUG codon in exon4 that is in frame with the Sxl protein coding sequence. This would produce a Sxl protein that lacks aa sequences from N-terminus, but still retains some function.
Another possible explanation for how gfp is expressed from the 10 kb reporter is that the transcript includes the "z" exon described by Cline et al., 2010.