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    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This manuscript aims to investigate cell extrinsic mechanisms that regulate differentiation and distribution of interneuron types in the spinal cord. The authors demonstrate that the loss of motor neurons leads to changes in number and distribution of different interneuron types, specifically V0v, V1, and V2b (but not V2a). The authors then hypothesize that this phenotype may be controlled by the action of Onecut (OC) transcription factors in motor neurons. Conditional knockout of OC1 + OC2 in motor neurons using Olig2-Cre, however, does not lead to significant changes in numbers of V1, V2a, V2b interneurons, although there is a change in their spatial distribution. While the authors do not check V0v neurons in OC mutants, they do check V2c, which show a reduction in number and change in distribution. Why the same neurons are not checked across experiments is unclear. The authors then analyze existing RNA-seq data to identify factors that could be mediating effects of the OC factors in motor neurons. They identify Ntf3 as a candidate and confirm that it is upregulated in OC mutants. Conditional loss of function of Ntf3 (Olig2-Cre) leads to increases in V1, V2a, and V2b (but not V2c) interneurons and changes in distribution of all four interneuron types. However, the Ntf3 phenotypes do not necessarily suggest that it works in the same pathway as OC to control interneuron development. Finally, the authors demonstrate that these Ntf3 conditional mutants have major defects in motor function.

      The main conclusions of the manuscript are that i) motor neurons non-cell autonomously control interneuron development, ii) that OC activity in Olig2 lineage cells non-cell autonomously controls aspects of interneuron development, and iii) that Ntf3 in motor neurons non-cell autonomously controls aspects of interneuron development. The mechanistic link between OC and Ntf3 activity is not clear. And the interneuron phenotype seen when motor neurons are depleted it not phenocopied by either loss of OC or Ntf3 from motor neurons. While the authors addressed some of my initial comments, the impact of this work on the field remains difficult to assess for the following reasons:

      (1) The manuscript relies heavily on quantifying numbers and spatial distribution of interneuron populations. However, these do not seem to be consistent in control animals across experiments, making it difficult to interpret any changes observed in genetic manipulations. Specifically, in Fig. 2 and 4, the same markers are being used to quantify V1, V2a, V2b, and V2c interneurons in controls vs. OC (Fig. 2) or Ntf3 (Fig. 4) conditional knockouts, but the numbers of neurons and their distribution in control animals are variable between these two figures. For example, there seem to be a mean of >300 V1 neurons in E12.5 brachial sections of Fig. 2 controls, but this number is <150 in Fig. 4 controls. The cell distribution scoring is similarly variable between these controls without any explanation. The same is true for E14.5 controls used in Fig. S2 vs. Fig. S6.<br /> The authors explain in response to the 1st review that technical variability including different antibodies, different researchers performing experiments, and different mouse backgrounds may contribute to this variation, but do not include this explanation clearly in the manuscript where it would be useful for readers. It would have also helped, for example, if authors had labeled datapoints on bar plots based on the animal that they came from to understand inter-animal variability within experiments. Overall, the biological significance of the results remain difficult to interpret due to high technical variability.

      (2) In the initial review, it was noted that there is no data to support the claim that OC1/2 mutants have altered interneuron development because of higher Ntf3 expression. In response to this, the authors note that the manuscript does not claim that OC exerts its non-cell autonomous effects through Ntf3 and add a new paragraph in the discussion which now addresses the fact that it is difficult to compare the phenotypes observed the different genetic manipulations presented in the work. While this paragraph addresses the incomplete mechanistic link between OC and Ntf3, it also decreases the mechanistic impact of the work.

      (3) In Figure 3E-3G, the authors show that some V1, V2a, V2b interneurons express the Ntf3 receptor TrkC. It is not stated (apologies if I missed it) what age this expression is, and from the images, it looks like in addition to medially located newborn neurons being negative, laterally located Gata3 interneurons are also broadly negative for TrkC, and many Foxd3 and Chx10 interneurons are also negative. Separate images of each channel and/or scoring would help clarify this. If many relevant interneurons are indeed TrkC negative, how this affects the conclusions should be addressed in the manuscript.

      (4) Behavioral phenotypes are not necessarily caused by Ntf3's role in premotor interneuron development.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Franziscus et al. describe an elegant approach for spatially specific proteome analysis. To achieve this, they expand fixed cells and subsequently use a laser to micro-dissect a region of interest, which is then analyzed by MS.

      They demonstrate the effectiveness of their approach by analyzing nucleus, nucleolus and the Golgi and benchmark their hits against previous dataset for these organelles.

      The manuscript is very well written and nicely guides the reader through the applied methods. The presented data is convincing and I do not see the need for additional experimental verification of the protocol. The only minor concern is the novelty of the method and the presentation. A combination of expansion, laser microdissection and proteomics has been applied in the past (PMID: 36450705, PMID: 39477916). In the manuscript one of these studies is cited, though it does not become clear that this approach is already described. However, Franziscus et al. describe the approach better and makes it more accessible to the reader, especially since the other studies described this methodology in combination with tissue expansion and not in combination with single cell expansion as it is done here. I would ask the authors to be clearer in the introduction with what others have already done and what is there contribution here. In general, I am convinced that the community will benefit from the presented protocol to analyze organelle proteomics in detail.

      Comments on revised version.

      I had only minor issues with the manuscript, which have now been addressed.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Jiang and co-authors presents an analysis of experimental measurements (about 400k variants) from a deep mutational scan of HIS3 enzyme. The authors assess the ability of a genotype to be "rescued" and show that this depends on mutation sites (in particular their solvent accessibility) and mutations effects (should be mild on folding stability or binding affinity). They further identify a set of super-compensatory mutations and their results suggest that these mutations flatten the fitness landscape.

      Strengths:

      This finding is interesting and likely of interest to a broad community. The analysis seems sound.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed my concern. Additional robustness experiments and case studies from ProteinGym are valuable.

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    1. The victimisation, I saw, was universal. It didn’t depend on poverty, on lack of education or on tradition. It didn’t depend on any of the

      Women in society face many challenges simply because of their gender. Regardless of their education, wealth or social status, they can still experience unfair treatment from men. Some women are forced to sacrifice their personal ambitions to satisfy family and cultural expectations. However, women deserve equal opportunities, respect and the freedom to make their own decisions.

    2. Babamukuru thought his wife was making a fuss about nothing, but she insisted, so the ritual dishing out of my uncle’s food was performed again.

      Maiguru's actions show that women in the family are expected to take responsibility for serving men. Although she is Babamukuru's wife, her work in the kitchen is treated as normal. Nyasha's decision not to wait for her father to finish eating suggests that she does not fully accept these traditional expectations.

    3. The day after the wedding, on Sunday, in the evening, Babamukuru called me to the sitting-room. He sat with Maiguru, he in the armchair that faced the fireplace, she on the sofa. I sat in the seat I had occupied that first time I had been in conference with Babamukuru on the day I first came to the mission. But this time my feelings were entirely different. I was dreading what was to follow. Babamukuru talked to me calmly, authoritatively and at length, told me how disappointed he was that I had grown so rebellious when he was doing so much for me, when he had been holding me 168 up for nearly two years as an example of filial virtue for his wayward daughter to follow. Babamukuru said I had to be punished for my disobedience a#fd that although he did not like to beat me, because I was of an age to be treated maturely, my behaviour showed that I was not yet mature and a beating might speed the process. I received fifteen lashes, having turned fifteen in April. Because of the seriousness of my crime, Anna was given two weeks’ leave and I took over her duties. I went about these chores grimly, with a deep and grateful masochistic delight: to me that punishment was the price of my newly acquired identity.

      On Sunday evening, the day after the wedding, Babamukuru called me to the sitting-room. He sat in his armchair and Maiguru sat on the sofa. I took the same chair I had sat in on my first night at the mission, but I was not the same girl. He did not shout, which was worse than shouting. He said he had held me up to Nyasha as the daughter she should copy, and that I had shamed his trust. A beating, he said, might help me grow up faster. I counted fifteen strokes, one for every year I had lived. Afterwards Anna was sent away on leave and her chores became mine. I scrubbed and swept without complaint, and a small, strange part of me was glad of the ache. If this was the price of saying no once, then at least I had bought something that belonged to me, even if I could not yet say what it was.

      What I added: • Tambu's physical and emotional experience, such as counting the strokes and his calm voice being worse than shouting. • A callback to the chair on her first night, to show how much she has changed. • A final line tying the pain to owning her decision.

      What I took away: • The words "crime" and "masochistic delight". I replaced them with action, so the reader sees the pain instead of being told about it. • Most of Babamukuru's reasoning, which I shortened to two sentences.

      Why: The original is flat and quick, which makes the beating of a girl seem normal and routine. I slowed it down to show the cost to Tambu and to connect it to the theme of girls being disciplined into obedience. The trade-off is that my version explains her feelings more than the original does.

    1. A 3 year-old girl was admitted in the Department of Pediatric Oncology following several months history of febrile episodes, sweating and irritability. Symptoms were first interpreted as being of infectious causes, and that is why she received repeated antibiotic therapies. There was no improvement, and that is why more investigations were performed. An abdominal ultrasound performed in a pediatric hospital revealed a right adrenal tumor mass that prompted the transfer to our unit.Family history: the patient’s mother aged 38 was diagnosed with bilateral pheochromocytoma resected when she was the age of 18 years. She presented several relapses, the most recent one at the age of 32, when she was also diagnosed with cerebral angioma. Genetic testing revealed the presence of the VHL c 244 C>G (p. Arg 82 Gly) heterozygote mutation, while the tests for RET, SDHB, SDHC and SDHD were negative.The clinical examination of our patient revealed: pallor, paroxysmal febrile episodes with irritability and sweating, tachycardia (130/min), hypertension (170/126 mmHg). There was no palpable abdominal mass.Abdominal ultrasound: well delimited tumor of the right adrenal gland, 37/34/35 mm in diameter, irregular with transonic inclusions.Magnetic resonance imaging (MRI): right adrenal tumor, 35/42/43 mm in diameter, well delimited, irregular, with marked heterogenous contrast intake, presenting cystic and necrotic areas (Figure 1).Open in a separate windowFigure 1Right adrenal tumor.Serum markers: urinary vanillylmandelic acid (VMA) 31.1 mg/24 h (normal <6.6), neuron specific enolase (NSE) 59.79 ng/ml (normal <17), ferritin 306.6 ng/ml (normal range 6–67), lactic dehydrogenase (LDH) 333 IU/L (normal range 125–300).Genetic examination: VHL c 244 C>G (p. Arg 82 Gly) heterozygotic mutation.Management: Complete surgical resection was performed with special precautions, but it was uneventful and blood pressure instantly dropped to normal.Go to:PathologyMacroscopic encapsuled 40/40/30 mm tumor, delimited by a bright yellow rim. The tumor is nodular with small hemorrhagic and necrotic areas.Microscopy: adrenal gland is compressed by a well delimited tumor made by cell nests of variable dimensions, separated by a reduced vascular connective stroma (Zellballen), with relatively numerous mitoses (8/10 High Power Field - HPF), most of them typical, very few atypical, extensive necrosis and vascular invasion. The aspect is suggestive for a malignant pheochromocytoma with Pheochromocytoma of the Adrenal gland Scaled Score (PASS) score 7: vascular invasion (1), necrosis (2), mitoses (2) (Figure 2).Open in a separate windowFigure 2Example of light microscopy image of sections from the excised tumor showing characteristics of malignant pheochromocytoma (Zellballen with central necrosis), hematoxylin eosin (HE) stain (10X).Go to:OutcomeAfter 6 months of follow-up, the patient is without any clinical symptoms, with normal blood pressure, no tumor markers, no evidence of tumor on cerebral and abdominal MRI and a normal ophthalmoscopy.

      PatientID: None

      KindredID: 1

      Case: F, 3Y0M, Ethnicity Unknown

      DiseaseAssertion: VHL

      FamilyInfo: Mother aged 38 was diagnosed with bilateral pheochromocytoma resected when she was the age of 18 years. She presented several relapses, the most recent one at the age of 32, when she was also diagnosed with cerebral angioma. Genetic testing revealed the presence of the VHL c 244 C>G (p. Arg 82 Gly) heterozygote mutation, while the tests for RET, SDHB, SDHC and SDHD were negative.

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0001954; HP:0000980; HP:0001649; HP:0000822; HP:0002666; HP:0006748 (Recurrent fever, Pallor, Tachycardia, Hypertension, Pheochromocytoma, Adrenal pheochromocytoma)

      CaseHPOFreeText: Several months history of febrile episodes, sweating and irritability. An abdominal ultrasound performed in a pediatric hospital revealed a right adrenal tumor mass. The clinical examination of our patient revealed: pallor, paroxysmal febrile episodes with irritability and sweating, tachycardia, hypertension. There was no palpable abdominal mass. Abdominal ultrasound showed a tumor of the right adrenal gland. MRI showed a right adrenal tumor confirmed by pathology to be a malignant pheochromocytoma. After 6 months from the complete resection of the tumor, the daughter is without any clinical symptoms, with normal blood pressure, normal ophthalmoscopy, no tumor markers and no evidence of tumor on cerebral or abdominal MRI.

      CaseNotHPOs: N/A

      CaseNotHPOFreeText: N/A

      CasePreviousTesting: N/A

      PreviouslyPublished: N/A

      SupplementalData: N/A

      Variant: p.R82G (c.244C>G)

      LegacyVariant: N/A

      CaseProblemVariantFreeText: N/A

      ClinVarID: 1297059, https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/clinvar/variation/1297059/

      CAID: N/A

      gnomAD: N/A

      VariantEvidence: N/A

      MutationType: missense_variant;transversion

      CivicName: R82G (c.244C>G)

      MultipleGeneVariants: N/A

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Here, Guo et al. (2025) propose that the IFN-induced GTPase GVIN1 forms a coat on cytosolic Burkholderia thailandensis, blocking actin tail formation through a mechanism analogous to GBP1-mediated restriction of Shigella motility.

      Their study was prompted by the intriguing observation that IFNγ priming and GBP1 coat formation fail to inhibit B. thailandensis actin-based motility in HeLa cells, yet IFNγ restricts the motility of Burkholderia in T24 cells. Further investigation revealed that IFNγ restricts B. thailandensis motility in T24 cells via both GBP1-dependent and -independent mechanisms, suggesting that HeLa cells lack a critical GBP1 co-factor required to inhibit actin tail formation.

      To identify the GBP1-independent mechanism, the authors performed an siRNA screen of interferon-stimulated genes (ISGs) and identified GVIN1, a large IFN-induced GTPase, as essential for restricting B. thailandensis motility. To identify the GBP1-independent mechanism, perform a knock-down screen for ISGs and find that the loss of GVIN, a very large IFN-induced GTPase, results in higher actin tail positive B. thailandensis in T24 cells. They further demonstrate that GVIN forms coats on the surface of B. thailandensis which prevent the polar localization of BimA and thus actin tail formation. In summary, the data reveal two independent IFNγ-induced pathways that restrict bacterial motility: one GBP1-dependent and the other GVIN1-dependent, each relying on distinct host co-factors.

      Global assessment:

      This is a well-executed study that convincingly demonstrates how GVIN1 restricts actin-based motility of B. thailandensis through the assembly of coatomers. The results are clearly described, the manuscript is easy to follow, and the data are overall compelling and well presented. I have only a few suggestions on how the manuscript could be further improved.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have answered all my points.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript examines a key mechanism by which KMT2A regulates RNA polymerase I transcription at ribosomal DNA. The authors suggest that KMT2A facilitates the recruitment of PCAF to rDNA. This process enhances histone acetylation and supports assembly of the RNA polymerase I transcription machinery. The study addresses an intriguing question by proposing a catalytic-independent role for KMT2A in rDNA transcription, potentially linking the KMT2A-dependent pathway to histone acetylation. However, several aspects of the proposed mechanism require further experimental validation. Notably, while the current evidence demonstrates associations among KMT2A, PCAF occupancy, histone acetylation, and rRNA transcription, it does not fully support the proposed objectives.

      Strengths:

      This could be the first report of a lysine methyltransferase regulating an acetyltransferase in Pol I-mediated gene expression.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The causal relationship between KMT2A and the recruitment of PCAF needs to be demonstrated. Simply showing reduced PCAF occupancy after depleting KMT2A does not, on its own, prove direct recruitment. The authors should investigate whether KMT2A and PCAF physically interact, and whether this interaction depends on DNA or RNA.

      (2) The main prediction of the model is that restoring PCAF activity should reverse the molecular effects caused by the depletion of KMT2A. The authors should test whether PCAF restoration can mitigate the consequences of KMT2A loss. They should also assess PCAF occupancy, H3K9 acetylation levels, Pol I occupancy, and nascent rRNA synthesis.

      (3) The catalytic-independent function of KMT2A should be directly investigated. The absence of a significant change in H3K4me3 levels following KMT2A depletion does not confirm that KMT2A's catalytic activity is not essential. Rescue experiments comparing wild-type KMT2A with a catalytically inactive variant would provide a much stronger assessment of the proposed non-catalytic mechanism.

      (4) The manuscript highlights H3K9ac; however, various acetyltransferases and histone acetylation marks are linked to active rDNA. The authors should investigate whether KMT2A specifically regulates H3K9ac or leads to broader changes in histone acetylation at rDNA.

      (5) Due to the highly repetitive nature of rDNA, the manuscript must include detailed information about the reference assembly, mapping strategy, management of multimapping reads, normalisation processes, and biological replicates. The authors should demonstrate that any observed changes in occupancy are not due to technical differences in rDNA mapping or variations in copy number.

      (6) KMT2A regulates a wide range of transcriptional programs, and its depletion can affect proliferation, cell-cycle distribution, or nucleolar function. The authors should include appropriate controls to demonstrate that the rDNA phenotype is not a result of changes in cellular proliferation or a generalised response to transcriptional or nucleolar stress.

      (7) The CSB and B-WICH complex have previously been linked to the recruitment of PCAF and the acetylation of H3K9 at active rDNA. The authors should investigate whether KMT2A operates independently of these factors or if KMT2A functions within an established pathway for remodeling rDNA chromatin.

      (8) The distinction between active and silent rDNA should be taken into account. The authors need to determine whether KMT2A/PCAF occupancy is preferentially associated with active rDNA copies. Sequential ChIP analysis or the use of established markers for active, poised, and silent rDNA would help clarify the chromatin context in which the proposed mechanism operates.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The study by Kašnik et al investigates the role of Samp1, an inner nuclear membrane protein, in muscle cell differentiation. Samp1 was already known to be required for myogenic differentiation and to influence chromatin organization at the nuclear periphery, but whether these two functions were connected was unclear. The authors set out to address this by asking whether the differentiation defect caused by Samp1 depletion is accompanied by failures in genome reorganization at the nuclear periphery.

      Using C2C12 mouse myoblasts with stable Samp1 knockdown, they combine RNA sequencing, immunofluorescence, FRIC analysis, and chromosome 8 DNA-FISH to track both the transcriptional and spatial consequences of Samp1 loss during differentiation. The goal is to show that Samp1 is needed not just for muscle gene activation but also for the peripheral repositioning of chromatin that normally accompanies differentiation, and that these two processes are linked.

      The biggest weakness of this study is that it does not explain how Samp1 actually controls chromatin organization at the nuclear periphery. Is it acting through emerin, the LINC complex, or lamin A/C? This is never addressed. At minimum, the authors should test whether a Samp1 mutant that cannot bind emerin or SUN2 can still rescue the chromatin and differentiation defects.

      Related to this, only chromosome 8 is examined for repositioning defects. This chromosome was deliberately chosen because it is known to move during myogenesis, so it is not surprising that it fails to reposition upon Samp1 depletion. A chromosome that does not normally reposition should be included to show the effect is specific, and genes that are expected to remain away from the periphery should also be examined to test whether Samp1 depletion causes indiscriminate rather than selective chromatin reorganization defects.

      More broadly, the study is largely descriptive. The main finding is that knocking down Samp1 disrupts gene expression and chromatin repositioning, and that these two things correlate. But which comes first? Does the chromatin move and then genes get silenced, or the other way around? This question is central to the paper's argument and is never tested. Without some attempt to address this, the study reads more as an observation than a mechanistic advance.

    1. PatientID: 237

      KindredID: 89

      Case: F, 46Y0M, Chinese

      DiseaseAssertion: VHL

      FamilyInfo: N/A

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0005584 (Renal cell carcinoma)

      CaseHPOFreeText: The proband presented with renal cell carcinoma at age 46.

      CaseNotHPOs: HP:0010797; HP:0002666; HP:0009711; HP:0001737; HP:0001732 (Hemangioblastoma, Pheochromocytoma, Retinal capillary hemangioma, Pancreatic cysts, Abnormality of the pancreas)

      CaseNotHPOFreeText: N/A

      CasePreviousTesting: N/A

      PreviouslyPublished: This patient was also published in a later paper by Wang et al., 2018 (PMID: 29330336).

      SupplementalData: Patient and family genotype-phenotype information is listed in Supplementary Table 1.

      Variant: c.642+70C>T

      LegacyVariant: N/A

      CaseProblemVariantFreeText: N/A

      ClinVarID: 900551, https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/clinvar/variation/900551/

      CAID: N/A

      gnomAD: N/A

      VariantEvidence: N/A

      MutationType: splice_site_variant

      CivicName: 3'UTR alteration (c.*70C>T)

      MultipleGeneVariants: N/A

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      DeCoeur et al. explored the conformational dynamics of the intrinsically disordered protein (IDP) p53-TAD and a cancer-associated variant by examining its conformation-dependent block of conductance through a nanopore. Using this approach, they identified a preferred conformational ensemble stabilized by the anti-cancer compound EGCG. They supplemented their experimental observations with steered molecular dynamics simulations of the IDP's conformational ensembles. Much of the work appears to recapitulate prior observations for this IDP, and as such, this work reads more like a method development paper. Although the use of nanopores to study IDPs as done here is not completely novel, these sorts of applications remain relatively few, and thus this work is still useful. However, there are several issues with the data and its interpretation that suggest only incomplete evidence for the conclusions. Namely, what appear to be very low statistics for the observed long-lived pore-blockage events on which much of the experimental conclusions seem to be based, and also conclusions from simulations that do not appear to align with the data. Until these issues are addressed, I find some of the conclusions to be only weakly supported by the data.

      Strengths:

      The use of nanopore current blockage to interrogate the dynamics of IDPs has the potential to be an ideal approach to investigate both mechanisms of variant pathology and drug efficacy.

      Weaknesses:

      The apparently small dataset may be limiting, and in several cases the authors appear to also over-interpret their results based on small effects.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This paper from the Villasenor lab describes the results of experiments aimed at determining the role of the interaction of β1 integrin with CD98hc on the endo- exocytic trafficking of CD98hc, and its ability to function as an amino acid transporter. The paper demonstrates the following novel and interesting observations:

      (1) CD98hc is internalised via fast endophilin-mediated endocytosis (FEME).

      (2) A mutant of CD98hc that has been reported to oppose its interaction with β1 integrin (CD98hc ISM) alters CD98hc endo- exocytic trafficking to favour a situation in which CD98hc adopts a more endosomal distribution (than does wild-type CD98hc) following stimulation of FEME with a β-adrenergic agonist.

      (3) Driving CD98hc endocytosis with a β-adrenergic agonist reduces uptake of branched-chain amino acids (BCAAs); an effect which is more pronounced following expression of the β1 integrin binding-deficient CD98hc ISM mutant.

      General comments:

      The findings of this paper are, at their core, very interesting and important and most of the work is well-executed. I consider that the 3 conclusions that I have listed above are solid and interesting (although some additional controls, etc would help consolidate these findings (see below)). However, the authors have vastly overplayed their hand in attempting to use mathematical modelling approaches and (in my opinion) invoking unnecessary working hypotheses concerning endocytic noise for which they have little evidence. I feel that the paper needs to be restructured to simplify the route between the core findings and the interpretation, and to move the mathematical modelling and 'endocytic noise' analyses and hypotheses to the discussion.

      Specific points (in order of appearance):

      (1) I am puzzled by how the graphs in Figures 1E&F have been derived from primary data and am sceptical of their validity. The curves don't look like anything that has been derived from experimental data. I gather that the curves in Figures 1E&F were generated by the equations described in the 'modelling CD98hc internalisation kinetics..'methods section, but I really cannot see how. Specifically, how can measurements of steady-state plasma membrane (PM) and endosomal pools of CD98 possibly allow the derivation of the APM and ATE operands in the equations in the 'modelling CD98hc internalisation kinetics..' methods section? Moreover, I don't see how this could be achieved in a way that could demonstrate a statistically significant difference in the trafficking of TfnR and CD98hc. The authors cite their previous 2017 Cell Reports paper to support this figure. However, the data in this paper are clearly experimental data (therefore understandable and clear), and the analysis in Vallasenor et al. (2017) does not resemble what has been performed to generate Figures 1E&F. Can the authors please properly clarify and justify this figure?

      (2) Figures 1G&H. In the assay described in Figures 1G&H, it doesn't look like the CD98hc mAb is internalised in the control. And with the siRNAs that are purported to oppose CD98 internalisation (ARF6 and endophilin), it looks like CD98 has disappeared completely, rather than accumulating at the PM as one would expect if internalisation were blocked.

      (3) In Figure 1H, the authors state that knockdown of endophilin A1 and A2 reduced CD98hc endocytosis, but it doesn't really look like this to me and there are neither quants nor stats on this.

      (4) In Figure S1D, the conclusion that knockdown of dynamin or endophilin A1 and A2 decreases intracellular CD98hc-positive vesicles is not apparent to me, and these data need quantification and statistical analysis.

      (5) In Figure 1J, the conclusion that addition of dyngo4A reduces internalisation of anti-CD98hc is not statistically supported. Moreover, although β-adrenergic agonists are clearly boosting internalisation of CD98hc in U2OS cells (Figure S1J), this, despite the asterisks (stats), does not appear to be the case in ICE-BECs (Fig. 1J); indeed, the increase is marginal, and the inter-experimental variation is too great to support a statistically significant increase in internalised CD98hc in ICE-BECs.

      (6) The authors need to display representative images from experiments leading to the data in Figure 2B.

      (7) The data in Figure 2 do not 'show that CD98hc is sorted to recycling endosomes after FEME internalisation' in an integrin-dependent manner. For this, one would need to demonstrate localisation of the CD98hc-β1 integrin complex to Rab11 (or Rab14)-positive compartments and these data are missing.

      (8) I cannot find any details of the coordinates or construction of the CD98hc ISM mutant in this paper. I am assuming that this has been informed by the Ingber JCS paper from 2020, but the authors need to describe the construction and the provenance of their mutant. Also, importantly, the authors need to validate that this mutation opposes co-immunoprecipitation of β1 integrin and CD98hc. Or to use some other approach, such as FRET, to show this). OK, some of this has been performed by Ingber's group, but as it this is so important to the authors' conclusions, they need to confirm this. Also, it would be nice if the authors were to use their IP/proteomic approach to compare the interactomes of WT CD98hc and CD98 ISM.

      (9) I think that some of the callouts to Figures 3 A-F are not correct in the manuscript. For instance, at the top of the page of the results (no page numbers), the callout to the sentence '...expressing either mGL-CD98hc WT or ISM (Figure 3A-D)' is likely wrong, and this is confusing.

      (10) The data in Figures 3A,B,D&E do show that the CD98hc ISM mutant moves from the PM to endosomes more than does WT CD98hc following β-adrenergic stimulation. This is fine. However, I don't agree that the conclusions summarised in Figure 3C&F can be justified from these data. In fact, I do not believe it is necessary or justified to attempt to extrapolate these quite basic immunofluorescence data into an involved kinetic model. It would so improve the paper if these mathematical/kinetic extrapolations were moved to the discussion and presented as discursive points rather than hard-and-fast conclusions.

      (11) The data in Figure 4A do not appear to show anything further than those in Figures 3 3A,B,D&E. Indeed, in light of Figure 3 A,B,D&E one would expect the vesicular CD98hc to be increased by the ISM mutation, but I'm not convinced that the amplitude of these so-called oscillations is necessarily different between WT and ISM mutant of CD98hc. All the differences between WT and ISM in Figure 4A&B appear proportionally larger than they are because of the truncated (non-zero baseline) axes in these graphs; a linear axis such as the y-axes in Fig. 4A&B should begin at zero, surely?

      (12) In Figure 4D, it doesn't look at all as if the PM localisation of CD98hc and intracellular levels of BCAAs are similar between WT and ISM mutant of CD98hc - as the authors state in their results text.

      (13) Why do the authors need to invoke what appear to me to be rather far-fetched and poorly supported arguments around 'endocytic noise' when the data in Figures 3A,B,D&E seem to be sufficiently consistent with those in Figure 4E to support the assertion that altered trafficking of CD98hc influences BCAA uptake?. Surely, it would be sufficient to argue that a mutant transporter that assumes a state which is distributed more endosomally than at the PM would be less efficient in uptake of BCAAs. So why the noisy arguments? It just seems to me to undermine what is potentially quite a nice and interesting paper.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The authors report an interaction between KHC and KLC1 through the coiled coil 3 of KHC, and then characterise the binding of TRAK2 to KHC through coiled coil 4 of KHC. The reporting of this second interaction is novel. The authors make a number of mutants which change the affinity of TRAK2 for KHC, but it is not clear if it ultimately prevents binding. They then demonstrate through competitive binding that TRAK2 binds more tightly to CC4 than CC1 and therefore can trigger release of Kinesin-1 auto-inhibition. The authors, however, do not show directly that the kinesin is no longer inhibited. This could be tested using negative stain EM, SAXS or motility assays in the future. The experiments are performed with immunoprecipitation pulldowns coupled with western blotting in cells, and ITC with recombinantly purified proteins.

      Strengths:

      The data showing the binding of KLC1 to KHC and the TRAK2 binding to KHC are interesting.

      The ITC data looks very good from the profiles. It seems, however, that the experiments were done once rather than replicated (at least twice, ideally three times to accommodate variation). The size-exclusion chromatography experiments showing competition between different adaptors to KHC are nicely done, and the SEC-MALS is informative in terms of determining the stoichiometry and size of the assembled complexes. The work is performed with recombinant proteins and therefore removes any ambiguity about the interactions in cells.

      Weaknesses:

      The experiments lack appropriate controls, with some experiments incomplete, and the statements claimed are not supported by the data. There are some problems with figure and data presentation and the number of replicates/lack of quantification. The validation of AlphaFold models and predictions is missing. The cell biology experiments are preliminary.

      There is a concern with the cell biology experiments. All experiments are done with transfections in the presence of the endogenous proteins. It is not clear if the proteins are overexpressed and they appear cytoplasmic. Beyond this, it is not possible to claim co-localization of the transfected proteins.

      The manuscript would benefit from general editing to improve understanding. The names used to describe the methods are incorrect. This has implications for the solidity of the statements and conclusions of the paper.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses computational modeling to examine how local synaptic activity influences astrocyte membrane potential and, in particular, whether the classical Nernstian relationship between extracellular potassium concentration and astrocyte membrane potential is maintained throughout the astrocyte. The authors focus on the possibility that local ionic changes associated with synaptic activity produce membrane potential responses in fine astrocytic processes that differ from those predicted by a global Nernstian relationship. The study addresses an important and longstanding question in astrocyte physiology and provides a potentially useful computational framework for examining how cellular morphology, membrane conductances, and local synaptic inputs shape astrocyte membrane potential. The central conclusion is that Nernstian behavior can break down during local synaptic input, particularly in fine astrocytic processes. The modeling framework could therefore be useful for understanding how the spatial organization of astrocytes influences their responses to local neuronal activity. However, the strength and generality of this conclusion depend on several biological assumptions that are not sufficiently considered in the current model or discussion.

      Strengths:

      This computational modeling addresses a longstanding question in astrocyte physiology dating back to the 1960s: whether astrocyte membrane potential (VM) follows the Nernstian prediction in response to changes in extracellular K+ concentration ([K+]e). Significant recent progress in astrocyte studies has provided a renewed opportunity to revisit this question. In this regard, the effort to develop a conductance-based NEURON model that incorporates understanding of astrocyte structure and physiology is highly valuable. The model has also shown the potential to simulate how changes in astrocyte membrane Na+, Ca2+, and Cl+ permeabilities, resulting from synaptic inputs, could alter the relative K+ permeability, and therefore the Nernstian behavior of astrocyte VM at different subregions of astrocytes. These questions are important to astrocyte physiology and remain technically challenging to experimentally evaluate. However, several concerns about the omission of recent studies on astrocyte structure and function from the model and the physiological interpretation of the Nernstian behavior of astrocytes need to be addressed before the conclusions can be adequately supported.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The premise of the modeling:<br /> The cellular context should be clearly stated. The model is intended to simulate rodent grey matter cortical protoplasmic astrocytes, but not white matter fibrous astrocytes or other specialized astrocyte populations, which differ morphologically and, to some extent, functionally.

      (2) The architecture of astrocytes:<br /> This model can be refined by incorporating recent advances in our understanding of astrocyte morphology (PMID: 35283239, PMID: 31550514). For example, (a) the branching pattern of astrocytic processes, particularly the terminal processes (or leaflets), which is a key element of the model; (b) the location of synapses within an astrocytic domain. Specifically, synapses can make contact with virtually every structural component of an astrocyte, from the soma to different levels of processes, including endfeet contacting blood vessels. This anatomical evidence is in sharp contrast to the prevailing perisynaptic astrocytic process (PAP) concept adopted in the modeling; and (c) the existence of a large quantity of reflective astrocytic processes that loop back and form gap junctional coupling at their stemming points that wrap around bundles of axons or large dendrites, forming a scaffold-like architecture (also see PMID:32312988 in your reference list). This may create regions of strong local astrocyte VM response to activity-dependent elevations of [K+]e, which could be an important feature to consider in the modeling.

      (3) Astrocyte membrane potential is not an autonomous feature of individual astrocytes:<br /> If the goal is to simulate astrocyte VM, astrocyte syncytial coupling cannot be ignored. Specifically, the very low astrocyte-to-astrocyte pathway resistance (4.2 MΩ) provides strong electrical coupling that equalizes the VM of astrocytes within a syncytium to a uniform level, a property termed astrocyte syncytial isopotentiality (PMID: 26435164; PMID: 30277762). Experimental studies have demonstrated that coupling among 7-9 astrocytes is sufficient to maintain this isopotential state. Thus, the VM of an individual astrocyte is not determined solely by its own K+ conductance and transmembrane K+ gradient, but rather the result of the electrotonic spatiotemporal summation of voltage across the syncytium. A realistic model that seeks to predict astrocyte VM should incorporate syncytial coupling as a fundamental component.

      (4) The historical debate about the Nernstian behavior of astrocyte VM in response to [K+]e:<br /> The authors should acknowledge the longstanding debate over the Nernstian behavior of glial VM in response to changes in [K+]e. This relationship was first described in the seminal neuroglia studies of Kuffler and colleagues in 1966, using optic nerve neuroglia, which are likely equivalent to fibrous astrocytes in rodent white matter. They reported a slope of ~58 mV per 10-fold change in [K+]e (PMID: 5966434). This interpretation was subsequently challenged by a series of in vivo studies of neuroglia VM in cortical grey matter, including Pape and Katzman (1972; PMID: 5016004), Ransom and Goldring (1973; PMID: 4805015), and Futamachi and Pedley (1976; PMID: 1276917). Importantly, the Futamachi study provided early in vivo evidence consistent with syncytial isopotentiality, although the existence of the astrocyte syncytium could not be demonstrated experimentally until the later work of Ransom and colleagues in 1981 (PMID: 7248773). This historical literature should be introduced in the Introduction to establish the significance of the present modeling work.

      (5) Astrocyte syncytial isopotentiality:<br /> The authors should consider that syncytial isopotentiality is a system-wide feature of both grey and white matter astrocytes. At minimum, this means that somatic astrocyte VM recordings are not consistent with a simple Nernstian prediction of VM in response to changes in [K+]e. Therefore, a model of astrocyte VM should account for syncytial coupling rather than treating VM as a property determined by individual astrocytes.

      (6) Distinguish K+ Nernstian behavior from multi-ion permeability and transporter-mediated flux:<br /> Conceptually, the high and near-exclusive K+ permeability of the resting astrocyte VM provides the basis for applying the Nernst equation to describe VM. In the present, Na+ and Ca2+ permeabilities are also introduced without a clear distinction between the conditions under which a Nernst equation remains applicable and those in which it does not. The authors should clearly define Nernstian behavior as referring specifically to K+ permeability. When the Na+ and Ca2+ permeabilities, resulting from the activation of AMPA/NMDA receptors, are involved in astrocyte across-membrane ionic activities, the VM follows the GHK prediction. Additionally, the model includes Na+-dependent transporters, which do not represent channel-mediated permeability. The authors should therefore distinguish channel-mediated ionic permeability from transport-mediated ionic flux when describing and modeling changes in astrocyte VM.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The study by Saqib M. et al. aimed to develop a refined murine model for the study of Down syndrome. The authors developed a Ts66Yah murine line by removing triplicated genes using CRISPR technology from the previously developed Ts65Dn. In this study, the authors provide a deep metabolic profiling of the murine model, studying highly metabolic tissues (liver, skeletal muscle and adipose depots) in both sexes.

      The major strength of the study is the large variety of metabolic assessments in males and females, identifying key dimorphic features in the model. However, this could also be considered a point of weakness since this is not a hypothesis-driven study, but rather a descriptive/exploratory study.

      Due to the thorough description of the model and the metabolic profile, this study will be very useful for people working on research in Down syndrome. However, there is a lack of information related to cognition, behaviour, and other key features relevant to Down syndrome that would need further study.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study reanalyzes data from a previously published cohort together with an additional cohort to investigate hippocampal activity during approach-avoidance conflict. Unlike many prior studies that isolate reward- or threat-based learning, this task requires animals to evaluate reward and threat concurrently. The central finding is that hippocampal representations differ between hesitant behaviors that lead to approach versus avoidance outcomes, with representations of the attack zone more likely during pauses preceding abort decisions. This is an important extension of prior work on hippocampal activity and deliberation, suggesting that the hippocampal content may help shape the eventual outcome.

      Strengths:

      All behavioral findings are replicated independently across cohorts, making the behavioral results highly convincing. The design is robust, and the task is especially valuable for studying approach-avoidance conflict. The behavioral paradigm is complex and rare, and neuronal recordings in such a paradigm are of great value.

      The major strength of the study is the comparison of neural activity during hesitant behavior leading to different outcomes; namely, pauses followed by the animal aborting the approach (mid-track aborts), and pauses followed by the animal committing to the approach (mid-track continues). Hippocampal activity differed between the two pauses: the attack zone was more likely to be represented during mid-track aborts. The same effect was observed on the journey before the pause: even before the animal hesitates, hippocampal activity before a pause that led to a mid-track abort was more likely to represent the attack zone than hippocampal activity before pauses that led to continued approach. This analysis suggests that hippocampal content before and during deliberative behavior is predictive of the animal's decision.

      Weaknesses:

      The interpretation of the retreat-related decoding results is less clear. The study compares two sets of retreating behavior: on the one hand, retreat after being attacked, and on the other hand, retreat after hesitation in the absence of an attack (a mid-track abort). Hippocampal activity represents the attack zone more after the animal is attacked. However, these two retreating behaviors originate from different spatial locations: retreats always start past the "attack threshold", while mid-track aborts always start before this threshold. Given that hippocampal decoding is strongly location-dependent, this difference in position makes the neural decoding results difficult to interpret. The increased representation may be due to differences in physical location, rather than distinct processing of immediate threat and an anticipatory return state.

      Comments on revised version.

      The revised manuscript is indeed more clear, but the study is largely unchanged.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Liu et al. used C. elegans animals lacking functional BMP as a model to dissect the neuropeptide signaling pathways that lead to BMP-associated fat loss. First, they established the BMP mutants as a model of dyspepsia that results in chronic dietary restriction. They then used this model to identify neuropeptide genes that are upregulated and required for BMP-associated fat loss. Next, they sought to identify the receptors for these neuropeptides and to place the genes in a genetic and cellular pathway. They also showed that the same neuropeptides and receptors contribute to fat loss in diet-restricted C. elegans. They conclude that they have identified a neuropeptide signaling cascade in which impaired pharyngeal function activates sensory neurons, which then signal through interneurons to enhance triglyceride hydrolysis in the intestine.

      Strengths:

      In this manuscript, Liu et al. characterized the pharyngeal muscles and the intestinal bacterial context of animals lacking functional BMP. They showed a correlation between BMP-associated fat loss and pharyngeal impairments that could lead to insufficient food grinding. This finding suggests that C. elegans lacking functional BMP could serve as a model for dyspepsia and chronic dietary restriction. Moreover, the authors analyzed previously published gene expression data to identify neuropeptides that are overexpressed in animals lacking BMP. They then used mutants for these neuropeptides and their receptors to determine which of these genes contribute to BMP-associated fat loss. Finally, they showed that the same neuropeptides and receptors also contribute to fat loss in diet-restricted C. elegans.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors use double mutants between BMP pathway mutants and neuropeptide or neuropeptide receptor mutants to argue that the reduced fat levels of BMP mutants are suppressed. However, with the exception of unc-31, the fat content of the corresponding single neuropeptide or neuropeptide receptor mutant is not shown. Without these, the double-mutant phenotype cannot be interpreted as suppression, since it could reflect an independent effect on fat storage. To show that the effects are related to BMP signaling, the authors should compare wild-type animals to neuropeptide mutants in a sma-6(+) background. Similarly, the fat content of ADL-ablated animals is not shown in an otherwise wild-type background.

      (2) In several places, the authors use cell-specific expression of neuropeptides to conclude that a given neuropeptide acts in a particular cell type (e.g., Figure 4B,C; Figure 5C,D). However, because neuropeptides are secreted and can act at a distance, expression in a non-native cell type may rescue the phenotype. These experiments therefore show sufficiency but do not establish the endogenous site of action. Cell-specific knockout or knockdown, or expression from control promoters in unrelated cell types, would help address this.

      (3) The authors report that expressing npr-35 from two promoters with non-overlapping expression each fully restores the low-fat phenotype of sma-6; npr-35 mutants. This is surprising for a receptor and is difficult to interpret.

      (4) The authors identify neuropeptide genes co-expressed with npr-35 and follow up on flp-18. The rationale for restricting the search to co-expressed neuropeptides may bias hypothesis generation. Similarly, the authors show that flp-1 and flp-4, in addition to flp-18, contribute to BMP-associated fat loss, but only flp-18 is examined further because of its overlapping co-expression with npr-35, again creating a bias in the investigation of the role of neuropeptide signaling in BMP-associated fat loss.

      (5) It is difficult to interpret the experiment in Figure 5E, where the authors conclude that npr-4 is required in flp-18-overexpressing animals. Without a demonstrated fat-loss phenotype from overexpressing flp-18, a requirement for npr-4 in those animals cannot be meaningfully assessed.

      Overall, the authors convincingly identify neuropeptides and receptors that are overexpressed and that contribute to fat loss. However, several points make it difficult to fully support the proposed model and the linear pathway from the pharynx to the intestine through ADL sensory neurons and interneurons. These include the absence of phenotypic analysis of the single mutants, the challenges of interpreting cell-specific rescue experiments when studying neuropeptide function, the fact that additional neuropeptides causing BMP-associated fat loss are identified but not studied further, and results that do not necessarily point to a linear pathway (e.g., the triple mutant sma-6; nlp-10; npr-35 has a stronger phenotype than the double mutants with sma-6, the fat loss caused by overexpression of nlp-10 in a sma-6 background is not suppressed by npr-35, and the flp-18 overexpression experiment is difficult to interpret). The reviewer therefore suggests that the linearity of this pathway, and the sites of action of the neuropeptides and receptors, should be presented more cautiously or supported by additional data.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to answer the question of whether the basal ganglia, specifically neurons in the substantia nigra pars reticulata (SNr), directly select actions. This was done by recording the activity of SNr neurons, as well as neurons in the superior colliculus (a major recipient of SNr projections), during cued and self-directed actions, specifically recording the same SNr units during clearly distinct actions.

      Strengths:

      As the major output nucleus of the rodent basal ganglia, the SNr is a key location to determine if single-cell activity within the basal ganglia is specific to the selection or suppression of specific actions. This choice also provides a natural transition to the activity/roles of downstream motor nuclei that receive basal ganglia output. Multiple definitions of "action" were addressed throughout this manuscript, which is essential for an ambiguous concept like "action selection." They convincingly demonstrate that a "simple action selection hypothesis" in which there is a 1:1 correspondence between SNr single-unit activity and specific actions is incompatible with their data. The manuscript was clearly written and well-organized.

      Weaknesses:

      While the authors systematically address multiple definitions of an "action," all of the actions in this work are variations of either licking or reaching. The similar SNr activity during different types of reaches has several potential interpretations, which the authors enumerate and present arguments for why their interpretation (SNr does not implement action selection) is the most plausible. However, the study does not quite fully eliminate these possibilities. Finally, while the authors essentially eliminate the possibility of a 1:1 correspondence between SNr units and specific actions, it remains possible that SNr selects actions through a more complex population coding scheme. Indeed, they demonstrate that they can distinguish lick and reach actions by examining population SNr activity.

      Appraisal of whether authors achieved their aims/evidence supports conclusions:

      The authors achieved their aims of determining whether individual SNr neurons select for specific actions. This includes multiple definitions of "actions," with some actions differentiated by muscle group and body part (licking vs reaching), target, or timing. The evidence provided largely supports the authors' claims, though the low number of subjects in the causal optogenetic experiments makes interpretation of those results more difficult.

      Discussion of likely impact of the work in the field:

      This work will provide a foundation for future research into more nuanced dissections of basal ganglia circuitry, specifically between the SNr and its downstream target nuclei.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Female receptivity to male courtship is regulated by many factors, including development and internal status. In mature, mated females, male courtship triggers ovipositor extrusion, which prevents intromission. In immature flies, however, rejection occurs through another behavior: immature wing flicking. How this behavior is engaged and regulated is unclear. Here, Bernet & Philipsborn advanced in this matter by defining behavioral and neuronal keys related to this phenotype. The authors show that immature wing flicking depends on pheromones and acoustic cues from the males to be triggered. Additionally, the authors identify the pC1a cluster as key for this behavior.

      Strengths:

      (1) In contrast to the regulation of ovipositor extrusion, immature wing flicker, while observed, has not been fully characterized. This is a significant step forward in our understanding of the ethology around female receptivity.

      (2) The behavioral approaches that the authors used to determine the nature and correlation of immature wing flicker with male courtship are very convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      While the manuscript has clear strengths, particularly in describing immature wing flicking behavior, several analyses make some conclusions difficult to assess. This is especially troublesome since some of these assertions are the main points the authors highlight as significant findings. In particular:

      (1) The authors describe immature female wing flicking as resembling that produced by mature males during agonistic encounters. While I see some similarities, this assessment is subjective. In Figure 1D, the authors present comparative metrics without statistics; thus, it is difficult to assess the validity of the results. Implications, however, can be direct: do females produce acoustic waves to mimic males and deter mating partners (or vice versa)?

      (2) From Figure 3F, it is difficult to conclude that the arborization pattern does not differ between mature and immature flies (here, referred to as a 5h vs 10d difference). This may be an artifact of the representative images, but the arborization at 10d appears less dense, particularly around the PI area. If this difference is consistent, this could also reflect neuronal maturation contributing to this phenotype, which is particularly relevant to what the authors discuss in lines 309-339. Differences in synaptic partners might potentially explain the contrasting action of pC1 neurons in immature vs mature females (PMCID: PMC11386958).

      (3) The experiments presented do not exclude the possibility that other pC1 neurons, in addition to pC1a neurons, affect the behavior. As written (line 363), the statement indicating that pC1a is the only one affecting immature female flicking is then incorrect.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper proposes and tests a modified reinforcement learning model that can express different decision-making strategies which spontaneously emerge when performing a task and match real animal behavior. A recurrent neural network (RNN) is trained in the style of prior work on meta reinforcement learning (e.g. Wang et al. 2016, 2018), where an initial algorithm is used to train the network and a second algorithm emerges later from the recurrent dynamics of the network. These are termed weight-RL and recurrent-RL, respectively. By making several adjustments to the meta-RL training procedure, the authors find that their version (called hybrid deep reinforcement learning, or H-DRL) shows a better match to real animal behavior and orbitofrontal cortical activity dynamics. Overall, this paper is an improvement on the prior meta-RL model, but it is unclear what neuroscientists should take away from this.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors introduce a model, H-DRL, whose main strength is that it can better approximate animal behavior and neural activity on specific tasks compared to its predecessor, meta-RL. This could potentially be important for interpreting the algorithms underlying animal learning.

      (2) The changes that have been made from meta-RL are not overly complex.

      (3) The model is assessed using two types of decision-making tasks that are similar to many of the tasks used in rodent behavioral and systems neuroscience.

      (4) In addition to behavioral data, RNN unit activity is compared directly with single unit orbitofrontal cortical activity. This makes the model appealing for neuroscience applications.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In the introduction, the authors mention that other extensions of meta-RL have been tried. How does H-DRL compare with these other modifications?

      (2) The authors try to convey the impact of their model in the introduction by stating that, unlike meta-RL, "it embodies a fundamentally different theoretical claim in the context of neuroscience". It is not clear what the fundamentally different theoretical claim is. While meta-RL implements weight updates over longer timescales, H-DRL implements weight updates after each trial. Is this the fundamentally different theoretical claim? If so, that does not seem like a novel concept for behavioral and systems neuroscience.

      (3) It is not clear what inspired the specific changes to the meta-RL training procedure. Were they decisions based on incremental trial and error to intentionally reproduce the empirical behavioral and neural results, or were they based on prior logic?

      (4) Regarding the inconsistency between OFC neurons and H-DRL in previous outcome encoding (Figure 5c), it would be helpful to speculate on why this happens because it seems to be the only place where H-DRL fails.

      (5) Figure 5e seems tangential to the overall message of the paper. The paper is about H-DRL as a superior approach to modelling real behavior and neural activity compared to meta-RL. But this panel, which is the last panel in the paper, is not directly relevant because there is no comparison with the model.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors generated a cross-species single-cell transcriptomic atlas of inner ear and lateral line organs across four species (human, mouse, chicken, zebrafish) and 11 developmental stages. By comparing mechanosensitive hair cells to surrounding supporting cells, they identified hair cell-enriched (HCE) genes, conserved transcriptional programs, and stratified developmental markers. They used these core and temporally stratified gene sets to evaluate hair cell identity and maturation state in models of avian regeneration, mouse cochlear organoids, and transcription factor-reprogrammed fibroblasts. A publicly available web-based resource (HRP Hair Cell Gene Explorer and gEAR portal) was created to facilitate field-wide data exploration.

      Strengths:

      (1) Comprehensive Multi-Species Benchmark:

      Cross-species analysis spanning 43 hair cell populations and 11 developmental stages establishes a rigorous reference dataset for benchmarking hair cell identity across development, cell biology, and regenerative models.

      (2) Biological Relevance:

      The pan-HCE gene set captures 25% of all known human deafness genes, confirming its strong predictive value for hair cell-specific function and disease mechanisms.

      (3) Methodological Rigor & Robust Thresholding:

      The use of area under the receiver operating characteristic curve (AUC) provides a platform-independent metric. Testing four calculation strategies (combining 29 mechanosensitive vs. 23 mature populations with unweighted [ES1] vs. species-balanced [ES2] weighting) and taking their intersection ensures robust gene selection without species bias.

      (4) Temporal Stratification & Application:

      Categorizing pan-HCE genes into early, sustained (ES-HCE), late (L-HCE), and transiently enriched (T-HCE) sets enables tracking of maturation state across different animal and cellular models, proving effective in evaluating regenerating avian hair cells, mouse cochlear organoids (Lgr5^+ lineage), and Gfi1/Atoh1/Pou4f3/Six1-reprogrammed fibroblasts.

      (5) Experimental Validation:

      Key pan-HCE genes were independently validated across species using spatial transcriptomics, RNAscope, and Hybridization Chain Reaction (HCR).

      (6) Community Utility:

      Broad accessibility via an interactive ShinyApp and gEAR portal integration facilitates customized field-wide analysis.

      Weaknesses:

      Weaknesses were considered minor.

      (1) Interspecies Homology Resolution:

      Machine learning-based clustering (MetaNeighbor) showed that factors such as age, species, and sensory modality often override subtype identity, failing to resolve fine-grained cross-species homologies for specific subtypes (e.g., distinguishing mouse inner vs. outer hair cells relative to chicken tall vs. short hair cells).

      (2) Species Imbalance & Mapping Artifacts:

      Despite weighting schemes (ES2), teleost genome duplications (1-to-many ortholog mapping in zebrafish) complicate cross-species signal normalization. This remains an overarching issue in many fields when performing cross-species analysis.

      (3) Different mechanisms of regeneration:

      Converted fibroblasts induced only a percentage of pan-HCE genes (28.7%) and very few transient genes (9.3%). This could reflect incomplete programming towards a fully mature native hair cell state, as the authors suggest. It is also possible that direct programming via transcription factor expression or Lgr5+ cell conversion could employ mechanisms distinct from those used in normal development or in regenerative species.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors implement a complementary learning system within a pretrained LLM. Each new episode is stored in its own small adapter, a routing step selects the right adapter at recall, and a slower consolidation stage transfers the stored episodes into the base weights. The main contributions are a demonstration that this fast store retains a thousand episodes without the catastrophic forgetting seen under vanilla sequential fine-tuning, a retrieval scheme in which a stored episode is regenerated into the context window so the model can answer questions about it, and a consolidation procedure that transfers the episodes into shared weights while leaving the model's general capabilities largely intact. The authors also show that neither the adapters nor the consolidated weights support direct question answering on their own, which separates storing a memory from being able to access it.

      Strengths:

      The paper is technically sound and, to my knowledge, one of the first efforts to make the connection between complementary learning systems and the LLM plus adapter configuration explicit and then build it end to end. It is very clearly written and honest about negative results. The authors have built a system in which the fast and slow systems and the transfer between them are all explicit and measurable, on top of semantically rich pretrained representations, which is something memory research has underutilized in the LLM era.

      Weaknesses:

      My main comment is that the paper should be positioned more explicitly. The framing should be clearer if the paper is more of an ML contribution or a neuroscience contribution (it is both, but there should be an emphasis). Routed adapters/loras are already popular, and many studies have addressed continual learning in the ML literature (gated LoRA and related methods), and the authors should be upfront about this in the introduction rather than only in the discussion to help readers understand the framing earlier. Previous studies on adapters do not diminish the paper, because in my opinion its value is the neuroscience framing, and that is where I think the paper has not explored sufficiently. The classic phenomena that CLS was proposed to explain are cited but not directly tested, which I think is a missed opportunity, since most of them can be tested with materials already in the paper. Below are my main suggestions:

      The original 95 CLS paper proposes a slow cortical system because integrated knowledge supports inferences/generalizations that the episodic memory system cannot, and people need time and often sleep to form such generalizations. The paper's adapter loads one episode at a time, but the consolidated model might be able to extract the core rules or schemas of the episodic memories. If consolidation can support inference/generalizations that retrieval cannot, that is the strongest possible argument for the two-system design.

      Additionally, in the original CLS proposal, replay is interleaved so that new memories are transferred into cortex alongside old knowledge. Here, consolidation trains on the new episodes only, and the general capability of the LLM degrades accordingly. The effect of rehearsal or pseudo-rehearsal, and the interference with existing knowledge close to the consolidated content, are not measured.

      In human memory, repeated visits to the same scenario are a core aspect of episodic memory: you visit your office many times a day with slight changes in context, and episodic memory has to keep track of these visits while knowing which differences should be memorized. In the paper's design, a repeated episode would create a second adapter with a near-identical embedding, and a slightly paraphrased episode would become a new memory. Human memory studies show memory strengthens or updates the existing trace when revisitation happens, as in reconsolidation. The current design also rules out any overlap between adapters, giving a hippocampal module that does pattern separation but not the "pattern completion" half.

      Two well-established findings in the consolidation literature are worth examining: consolidated memories keep the gist and lose specific details (Winocur and Moscovitch), and new information consolidates much faster when it fits something already known (Tse et al. 2007's schema study in rodents). The paper's judge scores each character episode on separate details, and the supplement contains an example in which a question about one episode makes the consolidated model reconstruct a different episode from years earlier with the same theme, which resembles a classic "false memory". The current setup in the paper could examine these false memory structures in a much more nuanced way.

      I believe experiments tied to the memory, psychology, and cognitive science literature along these lines would greatly strengthen the study, and could make this paper a "template" for how the field can study effects that have been observed in humans but have lacked a concrete and powerful enough modern modeling system.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors seek to validate the effectiveness of an inhibitor of the Pol theta helicase-like domain ATPase activity in its ability to ablate MMEJ activity in cell line models. They then confirm the inhibitor is synthetic lethal in a variety of BRCA1/2 deficient cancer models (and one PALB2 model). Finally, they report apparent effectiveness in treatment of a single patient that failed therapy with PARPi due to 53BP1 deficiency, a hypothesized special use-case for targeting pol theta.

      Strengths:

      It is a clear bench-to-bedside translation of mechanistic-oriented basic science to a clinical therapy. The experiments are largely rigorously performed. The approaches employed are impressively diverse, from in vitro to cell-line model, to preclinical model, to clinical application. The interpretations made are well supported by the available data.

      Weaknesses:

      The addition of a few missing details would improve the usefulness to the reader. Additionally, the rationale behind some approaches could be clarified.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using realistic mathematical models, Cebrián-Lacasa et al. address the relationship between waves of activation of Cyclin B-Cdk1 that propagate through the cytoplasm of large (~1 mm) oocytes and fertilized eggs and surface contraction waves (SCWs) driven by Rho GTPase activity in the cell cortex. They present numerical simulations of the underlying reaction-diffusion equations that account in broad strokes for both the expected behavior of 'fronts' of Cdk1 activation (that propagate at constant velocity from the nucleus-the source of Cdk1 activity-to the cell cortex) and the unusual behavior of 'backs' of Cdk1 inactivation (that may propagate either away from or towards the nucleus, or exhibit simultaneous inactivation throughout the cytoplasm). They also model Rho GTPase activity in the cortex as an excitable system that propagates SCWs (target patterns, spiral waves, and more complicated patterns). When Cdk1 is activated in the cortex, it phosphorylates and inhibits the RhoGEF, Ect1, which suppresses SCWs by reducing Rho GTPase activity. As the wave-back of Cdk1 inactivation moves across the cortex, Rho GTPase activity recovers abruptly, and SCWs reappear as 'phase waves' whose speed and directionality are determined by the underlying cytoplasmic Cdk1 signal.

      Strengths:

      As a theoretical examination of an interesting and puzzling aspect of early embryonic development, this study shares the same strengths and weaknesses as all mathematical and computational approaches to molecular cell biology. The mathematical models are precise formulations of the underlying assumptions of the authors (which are quite reasonable in this reviewer's opinion), and the analysis and computational results are dependable consequences of the molecular mechanisms the authors have in mind. The model is expertly analyzed, and the results are both reliable and intriguing. The results are discussed in light of experimental evidence. Because the authors' methods and results suggest novel-and sometimes counterintuitive-avenues for experimental research, this paper is likely to have a significant impact on the field of Rho GTPase signaling in oocytes and early embryos, and perhaps in other cells as well.

      Weaknesses:

      Like all mathematical models, the underlying assumptions can be critiqued as neglecting this -or-that 'crucial' effect (e.g., mechanical coupling via cortical tension or cytoplasmic flow, as the authors acknowledge), and the highly technical methods of analysis and simulation can be unfamiliar and off-putting to experimental cell biologists. For those who take the time to understand this paper, it may change the way they think about the coupling of cell cycle control (Cdk1 activation and inactivation) and cell surface contraction waves.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use the advanced technique of cryo-electron tomography to understand the connections between the basal body and the mitochondrion in trypanosomes. They show that this connection is mediated by flexible and extendable filaments.

      Strengths:

      The authors use an array of advanced cryo-electron microscopy techniques that provide solid evidence that p197 forms the filaments between the basal body and the mitochondrion and demonstrate that these filaments are flexible and able to span a wide range of distances. This provides an important insight into how the trypanosome basal body, which has a dynamic localisation through the cell cycle, can manage its critical connection to the mitochondrion. The filaments provide the necessary flexibility to maintain the basal body - mitochondrion connections as the basal body is repositioned.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors were unable to directly connect the filaments to the structural models for their protein component, p197 and how the filament flexibility relates to the changes in the repeat region of the protein. In part, this is due to the flexibility of these filaments and demonstrates the limitation of cryo-EM to resolve such structures, but this in itself is an important outcome, as it will inform the community's use of this technology.

  3. Nov 2026
    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a resource describing the morphology and distribution of mitochondria across a large part of the central brain of Drosophila. In addition to providing a valuable resource for the community, the authors analyze their dataset in great detail. These analyses reveal interesting differences in mitochondria across cell types and brain regions with regard to morphological parameters, their spatial relationship to pre- and post-synapses, differences in mitochondrial characteristics between neurons that use different neurotransmitters, and between synapses with multiple postsynaptic partners.

      Strengths:

      The main strength of the paper is the large size of the dataset comprising ca. 6 million segmented mitochondria distributed across more than 20000 neurons. This dataset provides enough statistical power to detect differences in mitochondrial characteristics between brain regions and cell types. An additional strength is the easy accessibility of the data through the neuPrint web interface, enabling the community to explore the dataset and perform further analyses.

      Weaknesses:

      The study is primarily descriptive. While this is not necessarily a weakness, the manuscript could more clearly discuss potential applications of the dataset beyond pure characterization. Potential improvements include neurotransmitter predictions, cell type classification, or sites of gap junction coupling.

      Conclusion:

      Taken together, I consider this manuscript to provide a highly valuable resource and analysis that will be useful to researchers interested in mitochondria and neuronal cell biology in Drosophila. Furthermore, the dataset provides potential for researchers to link mitochondrial characteristics to neuronal physiology.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Dopaminergic neurons (DANs) are known to play a role in conveying rewarding and punishing signals that influence future behaviour. This study uses optogenetic manipulation of a range of subpopulations of DANs to assess their influence in several operant learning paradigms, such that the animal's own behaviour determines the DAN activation. The results show surprisingly inconsistent effects and do not support the widespread assumption that specific DANs consistently convey either positive or negative valence. In one case, the apparent valence of the DAN activation switches over a time frame of minutes from aversive to attractive, and the relevant circuits are further dissected to show this effect is dopamine-dependent, for a specific DAN subset, and contingent on operant control of behaviour.

      Strengths:

      This study has two major strengths. The first is to address the relatively neglected field of operant learning in Drosophila. The detailed unpicking of learning circuits in the Drosophila brain that has been made possible by neurogenetics and other advances has almost exclusively focussed on classical conditioning paradigms, but these are often not representative of the real behavioural situations that animals face. Cross-comparison of the behavioural results of identified neuron activation in a wider range of paradigms is very welcome. The second is the use of multiple paradigms and a wide-ranging screen to survey the effects across many lines (targeting different DAN populations), including many that have been previously tested in classical conditioning. A further strength is the useful review (in the introduction and discussion) of existing research that already raises problems with the view that a single dimensional positive and negative "value" (as conceived of in standard reinforcement learning theory) can be directly mapped to the activity of two broad clusters of DANs in the brain.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness is that it is difficult from the manuscript to understand what the authors believe is the underlying mechanism by which DAN activation should affect behaviour in operant paradigms, and how this should relate to the better-known role of DAN activity in classical conditioning. For example, they refer to Heisenberg and Wolf's 1991 distinction between operant activity and operant learning. That paper proposed a mechanism involving a goal, some degree of random variation in action, comparison of sensory input to a goal, correlation of the efference copy of the action to the output of this comparison, with the strength of this correlation subsequently shaping the action probabilities. It would help to be explicit about what DAN activity is assumed to represent in this scheme - the outcome of comparison to a goal? The actual assumptions behind the work seem more simplistic: if different groups of DANs 'signal' reward or punishment, animals should persist in actions that activate the reward DANs and desist in actions that activate the punishment DANs. This might be justified by the standard way that innately rewarding/punishing stimuli are operationally defined in learning theory. But what brain circuitry is assumed to underlie the variation and choice of actions, and how is this influenced by DANs?

      Perhaps what is most clearly shown is that avoidance behaviour to activation of innately punishing sensory neurons is not directly a consequence of downstream activation of specific DANs, such that DAN activation can be substituted to produce the same behavioural phenomena (at least for the DANs tested here). Indeed, this is how the core results are summarised at the start of the discussion. But should this have been expected? There are a lot of assumptions needed to connect the expected effect of a reinforcement signal in classical conditioning to its effect on operant behaviour that are not made sufficiently explicit.

      Appraisal:

      The authors met their aim to carry out a (fairly) comprehensive test of the effects of optogenetic activation of a variety of DAN subpopulations under several operant paradigms that differ in relevant respects (group vs. individual testing, freely moving vs. tethered). The lack of consistent results across these paradigms, and generally weak effects (with limited statistical analysis) make it difficult to interpret whether the outcome here is mostly 'noise', but perhaps this is an example where the failure to find a clear effect (as predicted) is itself informative. The paper appropriately describes the limitations (such as the mixed range and specificity of DAN subsets manipulated across the paradigms) which were probably unavoidable given the tools available.

      Likely impact on the field:

      This work should have an impact in countering assertions that dopamine neurons in the fly brain can be understood as (collectively) conveying a single dimension of valence, from positive to negative, across all behavioural and learning situations. It also provides strong motivation to more clearly understand the nature of operant learning and how/where it might be implemented in the insect brain.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Weber et al. focused on a punishment learning paradigm in Drosophila larvae using primarily high salt as an aversive stimulus. They examined the DL1-cluster of dopaminergic neurons (DANs) consisting of four neurons, mostly important for encoding such punishment. Using temporally precise optogenetic activation and inhibition during both training and testing, the authors show that particularly DAN-f1/g1 activity can bidirectionally alter memory strength and valence of high salt learning. Depending on the timing of the manipulation, artificial DAN activation could also strengthen, weaken, or abolish expression of learned behavior without altering innate preferences. By combining behavioral experiments with computational modeling, the authors developed a connectome-based circuit model in which activity of the DL1 compartment causes output neurons (MBONs) to recruit reward-like DANs via an intrinsic feedback loop. In contrast, models based on independent compartmental plasticity for reward and punishment failed to reproduce the memory valence reversals observed in behavioral experiments. Thereby, the study identified an important feature of the larval mushroom body circuit relying on intercompartmental feedback signals to process learned signals and provide appropriate behavioral outputs.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study benefits from temporal precision across both memory acquisition and retrieval phases using an optogenetic approach. DAN-f1/g1 function is addressed thoroughly and manipulated across several paradigms, convincingly validating that optogenetic manipulations specifically alter learning but not innate preferences.

      (2) The study benefits from treating the DL1 cluster as functionally heterogeneous. By examining individual neurons during retrieval, the authors solidify a prominent role for DAN-c1 in memory retrieval and DAN-f1/g1 in aversive reinforcement.

      (3) Computational modeling nicely complements the behavioral results, showing that simpler circuit architectures fail to reproduce the valence reversals observed during behavioral experiments. The success of the cross-compartmental feedback model therefore narrows the range of plausible circuit explanations and supports the authors' circuit-level rebalancing theory.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The PI is calculated from the number of larvae occupying each side of the arena after a 5-minute period of free exploration. This is a reasonable summary and standard method to measure the behavioral results, but it provides limited information about how preferences and memory retrieval dynamics may develop over time. While standard in the field, trajectory-based parameters as odor approach behavior could differ between the experiments, so not all information can be retrieved.

      (2) Their model argues for cross-compartment interaction in the mushroom body circuit, which is, however, not corroborated experimentally. Silencing individual DL1 neurons during the testing phase had little behavioral effect aside from DAN-c1, leaving the specific retrieval roles of DAN-f1 and DAN-g1 somewhat unresolved, particularly given that their simultaneous inhibition was shown to enhance memory recall.

      (3) Another limitation concerns how neuronal dynamics are represented in computational models: whereas the four DL1-DANs are represented individually, the four-neuron pPAM cluster is modelled as a single unit. Together with the limited temporal resolution of the calcium signals, as well as the unknown output dynamics in MBONs, the current model simplifies the cellular organization and physiological dynamics underlying the proposed circuit mechanism. The response parameters of the four DL1-DANs and the pPAM cluster were fitted to previously measured calcium responses evoked by brief high-salt or fructose stimulation. Although these fits reproduce the distinct temporal profiles and stimulus sensitivities observed experimentally, it remains uncertain how faithfully such stimulus-evoked responses capture DAN dynamics.

      (4) Blue light activation used in the optogenetic paradigm adds an additional (aversive) stimulus that might interfere with the behavioral outcome. While the authors included all reasonable controls and point out the benefits of being consistent with their previous work, it does add a potential confounder.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper uses correlative FIB-SEM to reconstruct cholinergic and serotonergic axons in mouse somatosensory cortex. The authors wanted to examine how these neuromodulatory axons are organized at the ultrastructural level, specifically whether their vesicles are concentrated at synaptic structures like fast transmitters (glutamate and GABA) or distributed differently. They compare the two types against glutamate and GABA axons in the same datasets, and found that the synaptic vesicles are distributed more homogeneously in the neuromodulatory axons, supporting volume transmission.

      Strengths:

      The main strength is the dataset. FIB-SEM gives isotropic resolution, so vesicles can be counted and positioned accurately in 3D. The correlative light-EM approach lets them identify genetically labeled axons without using electron-dense stains that would obscure internal structures. This is a clear improvement over previous EM studies that relied on immunolabeling and only looked at varicosities.

      The analysis is quantitative and systematic. They don't rely on identifying boutons or varicosities as the unit of analysis. Instead, they sample along the axon centerline at regular intervals, which avoids the bias of only looking at swellings. This is a cleaner way to ask where vesicles actually sit relative to synapses and other structures.

      The comparison with glutamate and GABA axons is important. It shows that the differences are not just about neuromodulatory axons being "less synaptic" in a graded way, but qualitatively different in how vesicles are organized. Glutamate and GABA axons concentrate vesicles at synapses; ACh and 5-HT axons don't.

      Weaknesses:

      An intrinsic weakness of the EM approach is the missing of molecular information. The paper finds vesicles to be distributed homogeneously regardless of potential "post-synaptic" contact elements. However, protein machinaries for vesicle release might still statistically bind to certain postsynaptic elements.

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  4. Oct 2026
    1. Likely the right hand margin slider has shattered. I just fixed this same issue on my SG-3 by 3D printing a replacement using a free file available on Thingyverse. My library printed it at no charge. The repair took a little doing— I had to drill out two small brass rivets and replace them with tiny screws, but it is great to have it working again.

      via u/radiant_control at https://www.reddit.com/r/TypewriterRepair/comments/1xk6tkj/olympia_sg3_right_margin_stop/

  5. www.researchsquare.com www.researchsquare.com
    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Strengths:

      Mahieu and colleagues ask whether mitochondrial genetic variation helps explain differences in human telomere length. They selected seven donors from a Flow-FISH reference cohort of 491 individuals and compared their mitochondrial backgrounds in cybrids sharing the same nuclear background.

      The combination of telomere and mitochondrial assays is a strength. The association between low complex I activity and telomere shortening, together with the NAC/NR rescue in Cyb2, provides useful evidence linking mitochondrial function to telomere maintenance. The correlation between donor telomere length and cybrid ROS is also interesting, although the cybrid results are more persuasive than the claims about inheritance.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors have clarified that the seven donors include intermediate telomere lengths. Their analyses excluding donors #1, #3 and #6 are reassuring, since the correlation persists in each case. However, these results appear only in the response, and the full leave-one-out analysis is not reported. The small, selected sample still limits how broadly the correlation can be interpreted.

      (2) The revised manuscript makes the distinction between the cybrid and donor findings clearer. However, CI activity shows no significant association with donor telomere length. The proposed PARP1 mechanism also remains untested: the authors acknowledge that they did not establish whether PARP1 is required for the NAC/NR rescue, but still describe its role too strongly.

      (3) The authors appropriately acknowledge that the ATP6 A177T association is inconclusive (p = 0.153). Some inheritance claims remain stronger than this warrants. The family observations are too limited to separate mitochondrial from nuclear or shared environmental effects, and the cybrid experiments do not isolate ATP6 A177T from the other variants transferred with it.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Current theories suggest psilocybin promotes meta-learning, modifies learned associations, and promotes flexibility, contributing to its transdiagnostic clinical relevance. However, the effects of psilocybin on neural state dynamics during learning and decision-making are unclear. Jacobs et al. use a rat model to examine how psilocybin changes prefrontal cortex encoding during a value-based probabilistic choice task. The authors found psilocybin increased high-value choices when uncertainty was low and increased choice variability when uncertainty was high, compared to baseline performance. A reinforcement learning model found psilocybin decreased side bias and increased reward learning while decreasing the unrewarded learning rate. Encoding of rewarded actions was enhanced in the mPFC while unrewarded actions were attenuated.

      Strengths:

      The neural correlates and computations underlying the impacts of psychedelics are poorly understood, and this study examines these through well-established decision-making approaches. These data show changes in mPFC activity during a dynamic task, allowing for analysis across different contexts and events. The data presented provide some support for leading theories on psilocybin's therapeutic use in promoting meta-learning and flexibility. The combination of techniques, including decision-making, computational modeling, and neural recordings, is appropriate, powerful, and needed to make sense of the underlying change in experience triggered by psilocybin.

      Weaknesses:

      An unfortunate weakness in the design that limits the interpretability of the findings is a lack of control data under saline administration, and a lack of comparison of psilocybin to saline rather than baseline. Psilocybin performance is compared to a single baseline session, which lacks the effect of an injection that would be present in a saline control. There is some evidence that mild stress can itself impact outcome encoding. Supplemental data in this manuscript suggest there is no significant difference in probability of selecting the optimal choice on low uncertainty trials between baseline and saline; however, the direction of impact of the saline injection is in the same direction as psilocybin in the main figures. This means that the mild stress of simply receiving an injection of saline may not be totally neutral with regard to these measures, and may contribute to the effects attributed to psilocybin at both a behavioral and neural level.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates how task components can be learned and transferred across different task contexts. The authors designed two consecutive sequence learning tasks, in which complex image sequences were generated from the combination of two graph-based structural "building blocks". One of these components was shared between the prior and transfer task environments, allowing the authors to test compositional transfer. Behavioral analyses using generalized linear models (GLMs) assessed participants' sensitivity to the underlying structure. MEG data were recorded and analyzed using classifications and feature representational similarity analysis (RSA) to examine whether neural similarity increased for stimuli sharing the same relational structure. The paper aims to uncover the neural dynamics that support compositional transfer during learning.

      Strengths and weaknesses:

      I found the methods and task design of this paper difficult to follow, particularly the way stimuli were constructed and how the experimental sequences were generated from the graph structures. These aspects would be hard to replicate without some clarification. I appreciate the integration of behavioral and neuroimaging data. The overall approach, especially the use of compositional graph structures in sequence learning, is interesting and could be used and revised in further studies in compositionality and transfer learning. I appreciated the authors' careful interpretation of their findings in the discussion. However, I would have liked a similar level of caution in the abstract, which currently overstates some claims.

      Comments on revised version.

      No further comments. I thank the authors for their diligence in addressing my comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ding et al. investigate the roles of TIE1 and TEK (Tie2) in mouse cardiac development, with a particular focus on atrial trabeculation. The authors employ multiple genetic models, including Tie1ICDflox/flox (with Cdh5-CreERT2), a knockout-first allele (EUCOMM, Tie1 tm1a/tm1a), and a Tek deletion model.

      Based on the dataset from Feng et al. 2022 Nat Commun, the authors report increased expression of Tie1 and Tek transcripts in atrial endocardial cells compared to ventricular cells at embryonic day (E) 14.5. Loss of Tie1 leads to early atrial trabeculation defects detectable at E12.5, whereas ventricular defects appear later and are less pronounced at E14.5. Chamber-specific RNA sequencing reveals stronger transcriptional changes in atrial tissue.

      Conditional deletion of Tek results in a similar phenotype, with more pronounced atrial defects. Combined deletion of Tie1 and Tek (Tie1 ΔICD/ΔICD; Tek+/-) leads to earlier and more severe defects in both atrial and ventricular trabeculation and results in embryonic lethality around E12.5, suggesting a synergistic interaction between the two genes.

      Conditional endothelial deletion of Tie1 combined with heterozygous global Tek at later embryonic stages allows analysis at later time points and again shows more severe defects in atrial trabeculation. Postnatal analysis of this model reveals reduced heart-to-body weight ratios and potential mild atrial abnormalities.

      Strength:

      (1) The authors address chamber-specific signaling mechanisms underlying atrial versus ventricular trabeculation, an area of high developmental and clinical relevance.

      (2) The study provides a comprehensive temporal analysis across multiple embryonic stages.

      (3) The use of multiple genetic models strengthens the overall conclusions and allows comparative interpretation.

      (4) While focusing on trabeculation, the authors also include observations on coronary vessel development, increasing the broader relevance of the work. The findings are therefore of interest to the wider cardiovascular research community.

      Weakness:

      (1) Limited mechanistic insight<br /> While the authors aim to investigate underlying mechanisms, the current study is largely descriptive and based on mRNA expression and genetic interaction analyses (Tie1/Tek co-deletion). Direct mechanistic insights into signaling pathways remain limited. However, the dataset provides a valuable foundation for future mechanistic studies, which should be more clearly acknowledged in the discussion.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript reports that Yoda1 and Yoda2 agonize PIEZO2 in a manner similar to PIEZO1, increasing open probability and stretch sensitivity, but the mechanism underlying this sensitivity is incomplete. Mutagenesis was shown exclusively in PIEZO1, with no corresponding mutagenesis in PIEZO2, so the proposed mechanism in PIEZO2 is inferred by homology rather than directly tested. All experiments use mouse PIEZO2, and the human ortholog should be used before generalizing the proposed reinterpretation of the field.

      Strengths:

      The pressure-clamp electrophysiology demonstrating a shift in half-activation pressure for PIEZO2 is compelling evidence in support of the central claim.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      While our knowledge regarding visual opsins is largely very good, a lot more uncertainty exists around the role of non-visual opsins. Using the power of the Drosophila melanogaster model system, Kirsh et al. investigate the role of the non-visual opsin Rhodopsin7 (Rh7). Expression analysis, based on Rh7-Gal4>UAS-GFP and HRC in situ staining, reveals strong expression in the optic lobes and somewhat weaker, but nevertheless extensive expression in the brain. An investigation of motor activity reveals that loss of function leads to an altered day and night rhythm, specifically decreasing activity during the dark phase. These flies were also less sensitive, but still responsive to a light-induced startle response and showed deficiencies in the optomotor response. To further investigate how Rh7 may modulate these responses, inspired by the Dark line of flies (which were kept in the dark for ~1400 generations) and which has accumulated C-terminal related losses, the authors conducted rescues with an intact and a C-terminal-deficient Rh7 and were able to pinpoint that region as an important driver of related behavioral shifts. These findings are particularly intriguing as Rh7 represents an ancient opsin with phylogenetic and mechanistic parallels to mammalian melanopsin.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well-written and contains high-quality data with appropriate sample sizes, and the conclusions are well supported.

      Weaknesses:

      No weaknesses were identified by this reviewer, but the following recommendations are made:

      (1) The authors should clarify exactly what tissues were taken for the comparative qPCR. This is particularly interesting in terms of the retina. Since Rh7 appears not to be expressed within the photoreceptor cells of the retina, this raises the important question as to which cells it is expressed in. To address this important question, it would also be helpful to include an expression analysis of the retina itself (by extending the RH7-GFP expression patterns and/or adding HCR in situ of the ommatidia array). The cell types of the retina are very well classified, and some evidence already exists for Rh7 expression in support cells (e.g., Charlton-Perkins et al., (2017); PMID: 28562601). This study has a unique opportunity to investigate this further by adding these critical data for a more complete picture of Rh7.

      (2) Mammalian opsins should be included in the phylogenetic analysis illustrated in Figure 2A and indicate their position on the tree. This will allow readers to better put the authors' statements regarding the intermediate position of Rh7 into perspective. In addition, note that the distinction between red and deep red is easy to miss regarding the Rh7 cluster. Perhaps the authors could use a more distinct colour scheme, for example, orange and deep red.

      (3) More details should be provided on the optomotor response experiments. Specifically, specifications of the frequencies used for the optomotor response are needed. Results show a relatively large level of variation, which may be due to different angular perspectives that flies may have had while viewing the stimulus. If possible, provide videos as examples, as they will make it clearer to viewers how much flies could move around in the setup (from the methods, it seems they could move within the 2.2 of the 3 cm diameter of the arena, which would lead to substantial differences in the visual angle of the viewed grating.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a comprehensive and well-executed investigation into the metabolic role of D-serine in the central nervous system. The authors provide solid evidence that D-serine competitively inhibits mitochondrial L-serine transport, thereby impairing one-carbon metabolism. This stereoselective mechanism reduces glycine and formate production, suppresses cellular proliferation, and induces apoptosis in immature neural cells and glioblastoma stem cells. Developmental analyses further reveal a physiological enantiomeric shift in serine metabolism during neurogenesis, aligning with the transition from proliferation to maturation. Overall, the study bridges developmental neurobiology, cancer metabolism, and amino acid transport, uncovering a previously unrecognized metabolic function of D-serine beyond its role in neurotransmission.

      Strengths:

      (1) The discovery that D-serine inhibits one-carbon metabolism by competing for mitochondrial L-serine transport-rather than through enzymatic inhibition or receptor-mediated signaling-represents a significant and previously underappreciated mechanism. This finding has broad implications for understanding metabolic regulation during neurodevelopment and offers potential relevance for targeting metabolic vulnerabilities in cancer.

      (2) The authors integrate metabolomics, mitochondrial transport assays, molecular dynamics simulations, genetic and pharmacologic perturbations, transcriptomics, and both in vitro and ex vivo models. The breadth of experimental approaches, combined with the coherence of the findings across systems, provides strong support for the central conclusions and enhances the overall impact of the study.

      (3) The temporal shift in D-/L-serine levels during neurodevelopment is elegantly linked to the transition from proliferative to mature neuronal states. The selective vulnerability of neural progenitors and tumor cells-contrasted with the resistance of mature neurons-highlights a biologically meaningful and potentially targetable metabolic distinction.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Per my training and expertise, my evaluation and feedback below are focused on the behavioral components of this study and not the modeling. The authors use heat avoidance thermotaxis behavior in adult flies as a behavioral read out of decision-making with the goal of providing a novel quantitative analysis of the navigational strategies that contribute to heat avoidance behavior. Breaking down a specific behavior (here, heat avoidance) into component behavioral motifs can provide a more detailed analysis that can contribute to deeper understanding of navigational strategies within Drosophila and potentially aid understanding of navigational strategies at a broader level. The authors describe temperature preference behaviors, as has been previously reported and examine the role(s) of thermoreceptors localized to the antennae compared to the rest of the fly. The thermotaxis behavior is then broken down into several parameters with the goal of gaining deeper insight into how and when the fly initiates and generates heat avoidance behavior. The work would be further strengthened and clarified by more completely setting the findings within the context of the field both by including relevant citations and via text that describes this within the manuscript. Additionally, while the authors discuss choosing the temperatures in the assay to allow for more "straightforward interpretation", it would be important to note that this might not be what the fly actually experiences and although it might drive a "decision" it might not be revealing the ethologically accurate behavior. Additionally, Figure 2 in particular can be revised to aid the reader in understanding and evaluating the results. For example, writing out the terms on the y-axis (or making a table a reader could easily reference) and including statistically significant findings on the figure itself would allow the reader to more easily draw their own conclusions. Finally, a more thorough discussion would help make the findings more accessible and demonstrate how these findings have the potential to be of broad interest to many disciplines. For example, placing findings in the context of navigation and quantitative behavioral analysis across species and referring to figures within the discussion section itself.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors established an experimental system that reproduced three-dimensional triphasic epithelia, i.e., the original epithelium, its EMT, and MET. Keratinocytes (KCs), skin epithelial cells, placed on a microporous membrane migrated through 3.0-um or larger micropores. The 3.0-um-pored membrane induced an epithelial structure with three states: stratified KCs above the membrane, KCs showing EMT within the micropores, and a new stratified epithelium under the membrane. The membrane with larger micropores failed to maintain this triphasic epithelia. Live imaging revealed that KCs moved in a reciprocating manner, with actin-rich filopodia-like KC structures extending into and out of the 3.0-um micropores, while the cells migrated unidirectionally into larger micropores. KO of Piezo1 and keratin 6 increased KC entry to and exit from the 3.0-um micropores. Their results demonstrate that benign keratinocytes migrate through confined spaces in a reciprocating manner, which might help form triphasic epithelia, recapitulating wound healing processes.

      Strengths:

      Careful observation of the behaviour of keratinocytes on the different sized pores. CrispR-Cas9 gene editing to KO Piezo 1 and keratin 6 isoforms in HaCaT keratinocytes.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The authors employed the BindCraft platform to develop binders targeting the chemokine CCL25, a selective activator of the chemokine receptor CCR9. They successfully generated two classes of binders: one that inhibits all CCL25-mediated CCR9 activation, and another that permits CCR9 G protein signaling while simultaneously preventing arrestin recruitment. These tools will enable the dissection of arrestin involvement in regulating cell migration.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Hossain et al. investigate the role of ITK as a central regulator of autoimmune lung injury. They used ITK-deficient mice and the pristane-induced pulmonary hemorrhage (PH) model to show that ITK deficiency confers protection against PH. The adoptive cell transfer experiment suggests a possible role for altered Treg cells in ITK-deficient mice in regulating the inflammatory response in the lungs of pristane-injected mice. This study shows that targeting the ITK axis may be beneficial by reducing systemic inflammatory injury that contributes to poor outcomes in PH.

      Strengths:

      This study highlights the importance of ITK in regulating pulmonary hemorrhage. The enrichment of Treg cells is known to confer protection in autoimmunity-mediated alveolar damage. However, the involvement of ITK in regulating the Treg cells' function is interesting and could be explored as a novel therapeutic approach for chronic inflammation.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have answered my comments by incorporating new results and clarification to their observation.

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      Proband: FA_II:1, male uknown age

      FamilyDetails: heterozygous unaffected parents, parents were first cousins, VWF:Ag on low end of reference range

      Labs: prolonged bleeding time (15min), reduced VWF:Ag (0.06 IU/mL), FVIII:Ag (0.18 IU/mL), FVIII:C (0.20 IU/mL), and VWF:RiCoF (0.06 IU/mL), absent multimers

      Genotype: p.Arg273Trp reported as c.1067C>T (MANE transcript is 817C>T)

      CAID: CA228829

    2. BII:3

      Proband: FB_II:3, male age unknown

      Family details: parents are unaffected heterozygotes, VWF:Ag on the low end of reference range

      Labs: prolonged bleeding time (15min), reduced VWF:Ag (0.09 IU/mL), FVIII:Ag (0.33 IU/mL), FVIII:C (0.21 IU/mL), and VWF:RiCoF (0.04 IU/mL), absent multimers

      Genotype: p.Arg273Trp reported as c.1067C>T (MANE transcript is 817C>T)

      CAID: CA228829

    3. CII:6

      Proband: FC_II:6, male age unknown

      FamilyDetails: parents are unaffected hets, first cousins, fathers VWF:Ag at very low end of reference

      Labs: prolonged bleeding time (>20min), reduced VWF:Ag (less than 0.01 IU/mL), FVIII:Ag (0.06 IU/mL), FVIII:C (0.09 IU/mL), and VWF:RiCoF (less than 0.01 IU/mL), absent multimers

      Genotype: p.Arg273Trp reported as c.1067C>T (MANE transcript is 817C>T)

      CAID: CA228829

    1. Supplementary Table S1 & S2 Proband and Variant Information:

      Case71: GT75, Female, 9 years old, French/African

      DiseaseAssertion: Glanzmann thrombasthenia

      FamilyInfo: N/A

      ParentalGenotype: N/A

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0031364, HP:0000421, HP:0000225

      (Ecchymosis, epistaxis, gingival bleeding)

      CaseHPOFreeText: Lots of deciduous teeth with bleeding, hematomas in the eye and under the clavicle

      CaseNotHPOs: N/A

      CaseNotHPOsFreeText: N/A

      ProteinExpression: Flow cytometry showed less than 5% αIIbβ3 (See Supplementary Table 1)

      PlateletAggregation: Absent platelet aggregation (See Supplementary Table 1)

      CasePreviousTesting: Sanger sequencing of ITGA2B and ITGB3

      Gene: ITGA2B

      Variant: NM_000419.3:c.*165T>C

      LegacyVariant: N/A

      ClinVar: N/A

      CAiD: CA915940530

      gnomAD: N/A

    1. plified from DNA derived from affected individuals offamily MI. In addition to the guanine residue at nucleotideposition

      Case#: Family MI, Northern European

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0001639

      CaseHPOFreeText:

      CaseNotHPOs:

      CaseNotHPOFreeText:

      CasePreviousTesting:

      CaseMethod1:

      CaseMethod2:

      CaseGenotypingMethod: PCR amplification followed by Cycle Sequencing

      Variant: The nucleotide variant positions here refer to those described in the initial cloning of the gene in 1988 (PMID: 3336363), but nucleotide G579A here aligns to NM_001018005.2(TPM1):c.523G>A (p.Asp175Asn).

      ClinVar: 12456

      CAID: CA018106

      gnomAD: Grpmax FAF = 7.900e-7, SNV: 15-63060899-G-A, gnomADv4_D175N

      VariantEvidence:

      CaseAddInfo:

      CasePMIDs: PMID:8327508

    2. nucleotide position 595 in exon 5 of the a-tropomyosingene (Figure 2, left). The normal adenine residue was alsoprese

      Case#: Family MZ, Northern European

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0001639 ( Hypertrophic cardiomyopathy)

      CaseHPOFreeText:

      CaseNotHPOs:

      CaseNotHPOFreeText:

      CasePreviousTesting:

      CaseMethod1:

      CaseMethod2:

      CaseGenotypingMethod: PCR amplification followed by Cycle Sequencing

      Variant: The nucleotide variant positions here refer to those described in the initial cloning of the gene in 1988 (PMID: 3336363), but nucleotide A595G here aligns to NM_001018005.2(TPM1):c.539A>G (p.Glu180Gly).

      ClinVar: 12455

      CAID: CA019017

      gnomAD: 15-63060915-A-G not in gnomAD v4.0.0

      VariantEvidence:

      CaseAddInfo:

      CasePMIDs: PMID:8327508

    1. c.6879 T

      Case#: ATM02_V-3

      Demographics: Male, 18 yrs at report

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0000752, HP:0001581

      CaseNotHPOs:

      CasePreviousTesting:

      CaseMethod1:

      CaseMethod2:

      CaseGenotypingMethod:

      Variant: NM_017890.4:c.6879delT

      ClinVar:

      CAID: CA4824093

      gnomAD:

      VariantEvidence: This variant has been reported in two apparently unrelated families of common ethnicity, and therefore likely founder mutation. Hence, the score is reduced from default.

      CaseAddInfo:

      CasePMIDs:

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      The work of Pal and colleagues considers a hierarchical and multi-population version of the "oscillatory recurrent gated neural integrator circuits" (ORGaNICs) model, showing through analytics that the model captures multiple relevant experimental results: first of all, its oscillatory dynamics produce a profile with high resemblance to experimental results, both in terms of decay of power at high frequency and in terms of shifting peak as a function of stimulus contrast. Second, inter-areal communication subspace dimensionality is lower than within-area dimensionality. The authors then proceed to further characterize the model's response properties as a function of input and feedback gain. In particular, they find that frequencies transmitted with higher strength also carry more information, that changing gain modifies the dimensionality of communication subspaces, and that these properties can be used in a three-layer model, where an upstream area can select which downstream area to communicate to, based on the strength of feedback gain.

      Strengths

      This work demonstrates that a single-circuit model with normalization properties can capture both the oscillatory dynamics and the inter-areal communication properties measured in cortical circuits, matching multiple experimental results. The full analytical tractability of the model is highly advantageous, allowing for easier exploration of parameters, replicability, and effective interpretations of results compared to purely numerical approaches.

      The work also makes a useful conceptual link between normalization, coherence-based communication, and subspace-based communication. In particular, it shows how both phenomena can emerge from the same circuit dynamics, where normalization is a key factor.

      Interestingly, the model is also extended to multiple areas, showing how attention (in the form of changes in feedback gain) can synchronize the activity of a downstream area with one of two upstream areas, thus effectively selecting which area to communicate with.

      In general, this is an interesting computational framework and a useful starting point for future modeling work. A particular strength is that it connects normalization, oscillatory dynamics, coherence, and communication subspaces within one analytically tractable model, making it possible to generate mechanistic hypotheses about when inter-areal communication should be stronger, lower-dimensional, or preferentially routed through feedback.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors describe the results of a high throughput screen for small molecule activators of GCN2. Ultimately, they find 3 promising compounds. One of these three, compound 20 (C20) is of the most interest both for its potency and specificity. The major new finding is that this molecule appears to activate GCN2 independent of GCN1, which suggests that it works by a potentially novel mechanism. Biochemical analysis suggests that each bind in the ATP binding pocket of GCN2, and that at least in vitro C20 is a potent agonist. Structural modeling provides insight into how the three compounds might dock in the pocket and generates testable hypotheses as to why C20 perhaps acts through a different mechanism than other molecules.

      Strengths:

      Of the 3 compounds identified by the authors, C20 is of the most interest, not just for its intriguing mechanistic distinction as being GCN1-independent (shown genetically in two distinct cell lines, CHO and 293T, and in contrast to other GCN2 activators) but also for its potency. Ultimately, C20 might be a tool for providing mechanistic insight into the details of GCN2 activation and regulation and could be exploited therapeutically.

      Weaknesses:

      The chief limitation of this work is that the experiments exploring the effects of C20 on ISR output in cells are limited, so how useful these compounds are both experimentally and therapeutically remains to be determined.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed my comments. A more extensive analysis of UPR signaling in cells (transcription and cell death in particular) would have further strengthened the paper, but that can be left to future work.

    1. 23< 1110−−23FdelEx1‐3/c.2435delCdelEx1‐3/p.P812RfsX311–3/1818/19N/PD

      Case: Patient 2, F, Hungarian

      DiseaseAssertion: VWD type 3

      FamilyInfo: compatible with recessive inheritance

      ParentalGenotype(s): n/a

      CasePresentingHPOs: n/a

      CaseHPOFreeRext: Bleeding score: 23, VWF:Ag (IU dL−1): < 1, VWF:CB (IU dL−1): 1, FVIII:C (IU dL−1): 10, VWF:RCo below detection limit (<10 IU dL−1), not detectable VWF on multimer gels, bleeding episode severity increased after the menarche

      CaseNOTHPOs: n/a

      CaseNOTHPOFreeText: no inhibitor detected, did not become refractory to factor replacement therapy

      CasePreviousTesting: n/a

      Gene: VWF

      Variant:

      delEx1‐3 (delEx1‐3), Exon 1–3

      c.2435delC (p.Pro812ArgfsX31), Exon 18

      Intron 40 VNTR: 18/19

      Note: multimer electrophoresis, Recombinant VWF antigen concentrations and Collagen binding activity (VWF:CB) measured by ELISA, direct sequencing of the 51 exons and the exon‐intron boundaries, Breakpoint analysis and breakpoint‐specific PCR

    1. 3'

      PatientID: 4

      KindredID: 4

      Case: F, 16Y0M, Ethnicity Unknown

      DiseaseAssertion: retinal capillary hemangioma

      FamilyInfo: N/A - family history was unremarkable. The paper states however that this patient inherited the duplication from a nonsymptomatic parent.

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:0009711 (retinal capillary hemangioma)

      CaseHPOFreeText: a 16- year-old girl referred to this center for VHL testing due to an isolated retinal angioma

      CaseNotHPOs: N/A

      CaseNotHPOFreeText: N/A

      CasePreviousTesting: N/A

      PreviouslyPublished: N/A

      SupplementalData: N/A

      Variant: c.*1149A>G

      LegacyVariant: N/A

      CaseProblemVariantFreeText: N/A

      ClinVarID: N/A

      CAID: CA2573130264 https://reg.clinicalgenome.org/redmine/projects/registry/genboree_registry/by_caid?caid=CA2573130264

      gnomAD: N/A

      VariantEvidence: Quantitative Southern blot/real-time quantitative PCR analyses was normal in this patient. Known polymorphic variant on the 3’UTR of the VHL gene, as well as the 5’UTR. PCR–RFLP assay approach showed that both alleles were expressed in apparently equimolar amounts (Fig. 2d) suggesting that the 11 bp duplication has no effect on expression of the affected allele.

      MutationType: 3_prime_UTR_variant

      CivicName: c.–65_–55dup11 AND 3' UTR alteration (c.*1149A>G)

      MultipleGeneVariants: Germline, VHL, c.–65_–55dup11

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Liu, He, et al. present results suggesting hippocampal ripples support short-term working memory possibly via coupling with lateral temporal ripples. The basic finding that hippocampal ripples increase during a 7 s working memory maintenance period is intriguing and previously not shown, although the lack of control analyses in other MTL regions limits the importance of the finding. The paper moves onto a hippocampal-lateral temporal ripple coupling analysis that shows evidence of memory reinstatement of late encoding categorical representations, although don't necessarily relate to the main hippocampal ripple results found earlier in the paper.

      (1) "Thus, the lack of association between VSTM-delay ripples and later cued recall raises a possibility: ramping-up ripple dynamics during active maintenance may support online VSTM, whereas LTM formation may depend more on ripple events occurring during post-encoding time windows." The idea that ripples occur during post-encoding instead of encoding is not supported by Henin et al. (2021) Brain or Sakon et al (2024) J of Neuro. No one has replicated the post-encoding ripples in Norman et al 2019, which appear to be a statistical fluke due to the lack of ripple tuning during that window.

      (2) Thank you for doing the gamma comparison-it's very important that people keep investigating ripples vs. high gamma. I also appreciate the use of a direct interaction test comparing them even though the results did not show a significant difference in slopes.

      Even with 1/3 the electrodes I maintain that the AMY control would be quite important to differentiate high gamma (frequently shown in AMY) and ripples (do not occur in AMY-either in animals or humans). It's ok if the error bars are noisy and I'd even be fine with pooling AMY+ERC as a non-hippocampal MTL control. That way the field doesn't have to wholly rely on "future studies" as written in the (helpful) revised Discussion.

      (3) Thanks for taking a look.

      (4) This is a nice effect. Z=1.8 for a three-way interaction despite only 13 participants seems meaningful to me.

      (5) I appreciate the change. I strongly recommend changing each row to channel X trial, since superimposing with rows confuses the participant-to-participant comparisons (it's not in the spirit of what a raster is meant to reveal). I also suggest shrinking the plot in the y-direction to make visualizing the ramp easier. Visualization aside, the swarm plot of participant-level ramping effects is very important and really hammers home the nice ramping effect. Congrats.

      (6) I would suggest replacing Figs. 2b-e with Fig. S4. Using the entire Encoding period is misleading considering the clear tuning from 0-1 s.

      (7) This makes more sense, thank you.

      (8) Better, although I think the proper interaction test is between maintenance with encoding. Since the swarms show Remember < Forget for Encoding now, however, it's less of an important point.

      (9) Thanks for the more detailed explanation. Based on past literature it seems unlikely it takes over one second to reinstate semantic information (see the same Encoding ripple references above...or a long line of HFA or even concept cell work), but your classifier shows what it shows. So I'm ok with the analysis and presentation even if I'm suspect of the theory.

      (10) Thank you for including the interaction tests. I once again disagree with the theoretical framework since Encoding also has salient visual inputs yet shows clear tuning with decoding not significantly different from maintenance (what causes those big error bars in Fig. 5d, left??). That said, I'm satisfied with the presentation since they report this interaction between Encoding and Maintenance in Results.

      (11) Thanks, I think these were important analyses to add. I'm not sure what to make of the fact that coupled ripples don't increase considering that hippocampal ripples do, so by statistical chance alone you would think they should, but it's not a major point.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors established an experimental system that reproduced three-dimensional triphasic epithelia, i.e., the original epithelium, its EMT, and MET. Keratinocytes (KCs), skin epithelial cells, placed on a microporous membrane migrated through 3.0-um or larger micropores. The 3.0-um-pored membrane induced an epithelial structure with three states: stratified KCs above the membrane, KCs showing EMT within the micropores, and a new stratified epithelium under the membrane. The membrane with larger micropores failed to maintain this triphasic epithelia. Live imaging revealed that KCs moved in a reciprocating manner, with actin-rich filopodia-like KC structures extending into and out of the 3.0-um micropores, while the cells migrated unidirectionally into larger micropores. KO of Piezo1 and keratin 6 increased KC entry to and exit from the 3.0-um micropores. Their results demonstrate that benign keratinocytes migrate through confined spaces in a reciprocating manner, which might help form triphasic epithelia, recapitulating wound healing processes.

      Strengths:

      Careful observation of the behaviour of keratinocytes on the different sized pores. CrispR-Cas9 gene editing to KO Piezo 1 and keratin 6 isoforms in HaCaT keratinocytes.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors have improved the observed weaknesses including better statistical analysis and more detail on replicates. They have also performed staining for laminin beta3 chain.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Negreira et al. propose a new scDNAseq method, using semi-permeable capsules (SPCs) and primary template-directed amplification (PTA). The authors optimize several metrics to improve their predictions, such as determining GC bias, Intra-Chromosomal fluctuation (ICF -metric to differentiate replicative and non-replicative cells) and Intra-chromosomal coefficient of variation (ICCV - chromosome read distribution). The coverage evenness was evaluated using the fini index and the median absolute pairwise difference between the counts of two consecutive bins. They validate the proposed method using two Leishmania donovani strains isolated from different countries, BPK081 (low genomic variability) and HU3 (high genomic variability). Then, they showed that the method outperforms WGA and has similar accuracy to the discontinued 10X-scDNA (10X Genomics), further improving on short CNV identification. The authors also show that the method can identify somy variations, insertions/deletions and SNP variations across cells. This is a timely and very relevant work that has a wide applicability in copy number variation assessment using single-cell data.

      I really appreciate this work. My congratulations to the authors.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Hossain et al. investigate the role of ITK as a central regulator of autoimmune lung injury. They used ITK-deficient mice and the pristane-induced pulmonary hemorrhage (PH) model to show that ITK deficiency confers protection against PH. The adoptive cell transfer experiment suggests a possible role for altered Treg cells in ITK-deficient mice in regulating the inflammatory response in the lungs of pristane-injected mice. This study shows that targeting the ITK axis may be beneficial by reducing systemic inflammatory injury that contributes to poor outcomes in PH.

      Strengths:

      This study highlights the importance of ITK in regulating pulmonary hemorrhage. The enrichment of Treg cells is known to confer protection in autoimmunity-mediated alveolar damage. However, the involvement of ITK in regulating the Treg cells' function is interesting and could be explored as a novel therapeutic approach for chronic inflammation.

      Weakness:

      The novelty of this study lies in the association between ITK-deficient Tregs and pulmonary hemorrhage in autoimmunity. One limitation of this study is that the authors performed all experiments in ITK global knockout mice, in which not only T cells but all other cell types are deficient in ITK. Therefore, further studies are required for a mechanistic rationale for targeting ITK in severe inflammatory lung disease.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have answered my comments by incorporating new results and clarification to their observation.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses bulk mRNA sequencing to profile transcriptional changes in intestinal cells during the early postnatal period in mice-a developmental window that has received relatively little attention despite its importance. This developmental stage is particularly significant because it parallels late gestation in humans, a time when premature infants are highly vulnerable to necrotizing enterocolitis (NEC). By sampling closely spaced timepoints from birth through postnatal week four, the authors generate a resource that helps define transcriptional trajectories during this phase. Although the primary focus is on murine tissue, the authors also present limited data from human fetal intestinal biopsy samples and organoids.

      Strengths:

      The close temporal sampling in mice offers a detailed view of dynamic transcriptional changes across the first four weeks after birth. The authors leverage these close timepoints to perform hierarchical clustering to define relationships between developmental stages. This is a useful approach, as it highlights when transcriptional states shift most dramatically and allows for functional predictions about classes of genes that vary over time. This high-level analysis provides an effective entry point into the dataset and will be useful for future investigations. The inclusion of human fetal intestinal samples, although limited, is especially notable given the scarcity of data from late fetal timepoints. The authors are generally careful in their presentation of results, acknowledging the limitations of their approach and avoiding over-interpretation. As they note, this dataset is intended as a foundation for their lab and others, with secondary approaches required to more fully explore the biological questions raised. The revised manuscript also addresses many of the issues of clarity and presentation raised in the original review.

      Weaknesses:

      A limitation of the study is the use of bulk mRNA sequencing on unsorted cell populations to draw conclusions about individual cell types. This is particularly challenging for intestinal epithelial cells, where few genes are exclusively expressed in single cell types. For instance, markers such as Lgr5 and Olfm4 are enriched in intestinal stem cells (ISCs), but are also expressed by other absorptive and secretory lineages. Although the authors incorporate marker-based deconvolution analyses, the epithelial signatures used here are not among the cell populations originally validated for mMCPcounter. Conclusions that specific epithelial populations increase or decrease across timepoints would benefit from more robust systematic, complementary validation.

      Validation of the sequencing data in this study remains limited. The authors have added imaging/IF-based validation of mesenchymal populations; however, validation otherwise relies primarily on qPCR, which measures expression using a similar modality rather than providing orthogonal support. Many of the epithelial cell type-specific dynamics inferred from the bulk sequencing and deconvolution analyses are therefore not independently validated. Moreover, the regional differences reported in Lgr5, Olfm4, and Ascl2-appearing much higher in proximal than distal samples-were not recapitulated by qPCR validation of Olfm4. Additional orthogonal validation of these cell type-specific dynamics would be valuable in future studies.

      Finally, the human fetal biopsy samples represent a potentially valuable component of the study given the scarcity of data from these developmental timepoints, but the conclusions that can currently be drawn from these samples are limited. The central figure presenting these data shows immunofluorescence for LGR5, a single stem cell marker, and the staining at day 35 is difficult to interpret. The data support localization of LGR5-positive cells to crypts as early as 26 weeks, but more extensive analysis would be needed to draw broader conclusions about human intestinal development. Thus, while inclusion of these samples adds value to the study, this component remains relatively limited in scope.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript from Løberg and coworkers tests a previously suggested hypothesis for how coeliac disease is triggered. The disease is characterized by T cells responding to deamidated gluten peptides that are invariably associated with the production of IgA antibodies against the self-protein transglutaminase 2 (TG2), which is responsible for the deamidation. According to their hypothesis, intracellular TG2 is released into the gut when intestinal epithelial cells (IEC) are shed into the lumen and degraded, where it forms transient complexes with gluten while deamidating it. As complexes are taken up into gut-associated lymphoid tissues, the complexes will function as hapten-carrier antigens for B-T cell interactions, driving B cell responses against TG2 and T cell responses against deamidated gluten. They have previously created a mouse strain carrying human antibodies specific for TG2, TCR specific for deamidated gluten and HLA molecules that can efficiently present the gluten peptides. Here, they have now created a novel mouse model where they can induce expression of TG2 fused to deamidated gluten peptides in IEC. Using this together with previous mouse strains, they show that IEC lysates from induced animals contain antigens that will activate antigen-specific B and T cells in vitro, and that the fusion protein can be detected in the gut lumen between 12 hours and 3 days after induction of expression. Furthermore, when TG2- and deamidated gluten-specific B and T cells are transferred into the mice that are subsequently induced, TG2-specific IgG and IgA antibodies are produced and there is strong activation of germinal centre responses of the B cells and Tfh responses by the T cells. However, for this response to happen, the transferred T cells need to be orally primed with deamidated peptides and the strong mucosal adjuvant CT before induction of the TG2 fusion protein that will activate B cells.

      Strengths:

      There is a lack of animal models that mimic celiac disease, at least partly because it is a complex condition involving both classical hypersensitivity and autoimmunity. While the major T cell antigens responsible are gluten peptides that have been deamidated through the action of transglutaminase 2 (TG2) and are presented on specific HLA molecules, the disease is also invariably associated with an autoantibody response against the enzyme, TG2, that modifies the peptides, usually consisting of IgA antibodies. The antibody response is so strongly correlated with the disease that it is now used for diagnosis in the clinic. The group responsible for the current work has previously developed mouse models in efforts to study the disease, including strains expressing disease-associated human HLA, TCR and antibodies. Although they have so far not been able to fully replicate the disease in mice, these have been useful tools to study how the disease may be triggered in the gut.

      Where TG2 modifies gluten peptides and where it is encountered by B cells has been a bit of a puzzle. Most agree that TG2 is primarily an intracellular protein, but that significant amounts can also be found extracellularly, attached to cell surfaces or the extracellular matrix. Gluten peptides are mainly located extracellularly or in endosomes, and for this reason extracellular TG2 in the gut have been thought to be most important for deamidation. However, where TG2 is present in the gut has not been definitively answered. In addition, an attractive model that would explain the immune responses is that extracellular TG2 bind gluten peptides, that these are taken up by TG2-specific B cells, and deamidated peptides are subsequently presented on MHCII for T cells. This would require TG2-peptide complexes to be present extracellularly where B and T cells are both present. The authors have previously hypothesized that TG2 may be produced in IEC and released into the gut lumen, where it would form complexes with gluten peptides and then be taken up by M cells positioned over gut-associated lymphoid tissues, in particular Peyer´s patches. Previously, they have demonstrated that B and T cells can be forced to interact in Peyer´s patches following an oral immunization with antibodies specifically recognizing that B cell receptor that are linked to a gluten peptide in the presence of a strong mucosal adjuvant in the form of cholera toxin.

      Here, the authors now specifically address whether expression of TG2 in IEC is sufficient to trigger autoreactive B and T cells to respond. They show that induced expression of a TG2-gluten peptide fusion protein specifically in IECs is sufficient to trigger the production of IgG and IgA antibodies against TG2 when antigen-specific B and T cells are present. Following induction, they also demonstrate activation of B and T cells in Peyer´s patches, resulting in autoantibody production of IgA and IgG antibodies. The use of an inductive system to express the antigen is an important control, with transferred cells only activated when the antigen is produced. In addition, the fact that activation of cells mainly occurs in Peyer´s patches further supports that it is dependent on TG2 fusion protein secreted into the gut lumen that triggers the response, as the main function of Peyer´s patches is to initiate responses to antigen in the lumen.

      Overall, the authors present convincing data that proteins primarily present intracellularly in IEC can trigger antigen-specific responses in Peyer´s patches, given that antigen-specific B and T cells are present.

      Weaknesses:

      This paper is still some way from establishing a mouse model that mimics celiac disease, and the authors do not make any such claims. It demonstrates a situation that could be similar to when celiac disease is first triggered in humans. However, the fact that a TG2-specific IgA antibody response can be triggered in the model does not necessarily show that it can be triggered in a more natural situation (when the antigen would need to be a TG2 - gluten peptide complex) or that it is the only way for such a response to be triggered. Hence, it does not really prove that the model describes the situation in people with coeliac disease, only that a similar response can be triggered in the mouse model.

      There are also many remaining questions regarding the response that could have been further developed. Some of which should probably have been addressed already in this manuscript. First, given the importance of the expression of the antigen in IECs into the lumen and the strong responses in Peyer´s patches, the authors should have provided additional information about the expression of the TG2-fusion protein in epithelial cells in the follicular-associated epithelium covering and other epithelia surrounding the structure. Is it possible that even M cells express the antigen, and that it may not need to be in the lumen to reach the Peyer´s patches? Second, it is not addressed whether antigen-specific pre-activation of T cells using peptide and CT is strictly needed or if CT alone could have created an environment where antigen-specific responses are triggered by the TG2 fusion protein alone (i.e. using CT as an adjuvant for a response to an antigen expressed in IEC). Or even if other inflammatory gut responses, not necessarily triggered by CT but instead by virus, pathogenic bacteria or oral dextran, would have sufficed. Although T cell cross-reactivity to external antigens could play a role in humans developing disease, it would be easier to envision a situation where any gut inflammation, in the presence of antigen-specific B and T cells and a susceptible HLA environment, could trigger a response. Finally, the role of dendritic cells and/or other APCs present in the gut and/or Peyer´s patches in the priming of T cells should probably have been discussed, i.e., whether presentation of antigen by B cells is sufficient or not. If inflammation or CT alone is sufficient for T cell priming (see above), this indirectly supports that direct presentation from B cells may play an important role in T cell activation.

      Other themes that could have been further developed are more general, involving the system and its correlation with celiac disease. For example, what would happen if the expression of the TG2 fusion protein is maintained over time using dox; will damage be observed to the gut mucosa that is similar to the one seen in celiac patients? What would happen when the antigen is no longer expressed? Will the mice maintain memory B and T cells that can rapidly respond upon re-expression of the antigen? Or would the constant presence of endogenous TG2 eventually lead to tolerance development? It would be particularly interesting to see if the cells are first triggered/primed by the expression of the GP2 fusion antigen in IEC, and then determine if memory cells can be activated, or active responses maintained, if gluten is given orally to the mice and its interaction with endogenous TG2 is then sufficient.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study provides structural and functional insights into the sterol recognition mechanism of ABCG5/G8.

      Strengths:

      The modeling of ergosterol into the density map is plausible, considering that the protein was heterologously expressed in yeast, only CHS was added during purification, and MD simulations rendered CHS binding to this site unlikely. The identified ergosterol-binding site in the central TMD cavity closely aligns with the location previously observed in a cholesterol-soaked crystal structure, strongly supporting the notion that this cavity serves as the primary substrate-transport pocket. Furthermore, mutagenesis of the key Tyr residue abolishes the ergosterol-specific enhancement of ATPase activity, providing robust functional support for the structural findings.

      Weaknesses:

      However, several caveats should be considered when interpreting these results:

      First, while local resolution in the TMD region appears sufficient to trace side chains, the overall resolution of 3.5 Å poses challenges for precisely discerning subtle side-chain movements or rotamer changes. As the structural comparison with the apo and CRL-bound forms reveals no major helical shifts-remaining confined to side-chain rearrangements-caution is warranted when attributing mechanistic significance to these localized variations without exhaustive functional validation.

      Second, a major limitation lies in the mechanistic model proposed by the authors. The manuscript suggests that the peripheral cholesterol-binding site (CRL) observed exclusively in previous crystal structures represents an intermediate state of sterol flip-flop. However, the authors provide no new experimental or computational evidence in this study to substantiate this hypothesis. Consequently, this model remains speculative and lacks sufficient empirical backing at this stage.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study integrates living neuronal circuits with a real-time reinforcement-learning framework to enable closed-loop optimization of directional firing sequences at single-spike resolution. By using the spatiotemporal structure of neuronal firing as feedback, the system adaptively searches for stimulation patterns that increase a predefined propagation reward. The work represents an exciting step toward systematic and adaptive control of living neuronal networks.

      Strengths:

      The study presents a cutting-edge closed-loop platform that combines neuronal cultures, high-temporal-resolution electrophysiology, and reinforcement learning with millisecond-scale latency. The ability to optimize directional activity propagation at single-spike resolution is particularly novel. More broadly, the work provides a compelling framework for interacting with biological neural networks in an adaptive rather than purely predefined manner.

      Weaknesses:

      Several aspects of the analysis and interpretation require further clarification. In particular, the definition and computation of directional propagation and reward are not always clear. The generalizability of the optimized stimulation patterns across cultures also remains unclear.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript shows how a change in food source can lead to organismal adaptation to stress. Namely, different yeast strains impact the response of Drosophila to cold stress. An intriguing connection between food intake, gut, and neuronal signaling is described.

      Strengths:

      The genetic association studies suggest how pathways can be altered to provide cold tolerance in Drosophila.

      Weaknesses:

      [MRPL10+] is described here as a yeast prion, yet there is no solid evidence supporting this. It is unclear whether the prion exists; therefore, the primary conclusion is unclear. More biochemical analyses and additional characterization are needed to support the idea that MRPL10 is, in fact, in a prion state in the strains the authors received and utilized in this manuscript. It is unclear whether the mating scheme to produce daughter cells without the prion would actually work as described, and no follow-up work verifies the lack of the prion state. In addition, more common prions were omitted from the study, and it is unclear whether they might be present in the strains used as well. There is no [PSI+], [RNQ+], or [URE3] strain assessed, and it is possible that there is another prion in the [MRPL10+] strain.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Bedford considers how the fitness of SARS-CoV-2 and influenza H3N2 variants have changed over time. The fitness of viral variants are estimated from trajectories of variant frequencies using multinomial logistic regression (MLR). The MLR approach was previously developed and is well-validated. Changes in mean population fitness (i.e. fitness flux) is then derived from changes in the fitness of circulating variants through time.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript makes some noteworthy observations. For one, it is reassuring to know that fitness variation well predicts the rate of fitness change in viral populations, as expected under Fisher's fundamental theorem. Similarly, it is interesting that simple counts of mutations perform as well as much more sophisticated protein language models in predicting variant fitness.

      Weaknesses:

      My two main concerns both relate to the interpretation of fitness flux and how confident we should be that it is quantifying changes in absolute fitness as opposed to environmentally-dependent changes in fitness through time.

      (1) Interpretation of fitness flux:

      I'm not entirely convinced that mean population fitness can be meaningfully compared through time, at least not as a measure of fitness change on an absolute scale. Here, mean population fitness is defined as the weighted sum of the relative fitness of each variant, so changes in mean pop fitness necessarily reflect changes in relative fitness. To obtain a fitness value of each variant that is comparable across time, a "scaffolding approach" is used to estimate window-specific effect and the global fitness (f_i) of each variant. The major assumption here is that by accounting for the window-specific effects, the global fitness of each variant becomes directly comparable. This assumption seems somewhat suspect. It seems impossible to know whether the window-specific effect is capturing the full environmentally-dependent component of fitness in a given window. There could also be a high degree of temporal autocorrelation in window-specific effects between neighboring windows due to similarities in environment that would decay over time.

      To put this in another way, say we directly competed a 2020 SARS-CoV-2 variant with a 2025 variant in the distant future after all host-immunity to these strains had waned. Would we really be confident in estimating the fitness advantage of the 2025 variant over the 2020 variant? Or would this estimates of relative strain fitness still reflect the environments in which they were measured in, including the NPIs that were in effect in 2020 and the complex immune structure of the host population in 2025?

      (2) Inability to separate different components of fitness:

      Earlier work, like Meijers et al. for SARS-Cov-2 (Cell, 2023), decomposed overall changes in fitness into different components of fitness such as changes in intrinsic fitness (transmission potential) and immune escape. While the current model is simpler, in some ways this earlier work was more elegant and more powerful in its ability to explain what components of fitness drove the overall change in population-level fitness.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript titled "Glia regulate local retinoic acid levels to specify neuronal specialisation for high-acuity vision" by Lahne et al. examines the interaction of cellular and signaling mechanisms involved in neuronal specialization. While there have been rapid increases in the discovery and cataloguing of different cell types based on transcriptional signatures that can be uncovered by single-cell approaches, there is much less known about how variations in cell morphology within a cell type are governed. The highly stereotypical specializations in photoreceptor morphology found in high acuity zones of various species are an excellent example. This study implicates retinoic acid signaling as a functional driver of these photoreceptor specializations in addition to its previously described role in establishing the spatial positioning of high acuity zones within the neural tissue. Furthermore, evidence is presented that retinoic acid does not directly signal through photoreceptors, but instead this signal is received by Müller glia to non-cell-autonomously affect the photoreceptors. Overall, this study identifies a potential mechanism that integrates the broad patterning role of retinoic acid with its local effects on specializations within a cell type and suggests that glial cells are integral to this mechanism.

      Strengths:

      The major strengths of this study are the well-executed experiments and clearly communicated results. The application of pharmacological agents is useful for precise timing of target inhibition and to prevent effects on other retinoic acid-mediated processes.

      Weaknesses:

      There are two issues with the study that weaken the conclusions that are drawn. The first is that the primary evidence that Mueller glia are the cells receiving the retinoic acid signal is that the RARE reporter is active in these cells. However, it should be considered whether this reporter is capable of responding to all retinoic acid signaling. Is it possible that the construct's binding site sequences and/or their configuration will limit the ability to detect other receptor complexes that respond to retinoic acid? For example, will complexes that contain RorBeta or RxrGamma (two established retinoic acid receptors) in complex with thyroid receptors be able to activate this reporter? If that is the case, then it could be that the Mueller glia are shaping the retinoic acid availability in the local environment of cones through their expression of the Cyp26 genes, but the cones as well as the Müller glia are directly responding to the retinoic acid signaling. If there are methods to test this, such as directly activating/repressing retinoic acid signaling in cones or MG with some cell type specificity, that would greatly strengthen the argument that it is a non-cell autonomous effect. One experiment that does argue in favor of this is that the loss of MG leads to a small outer segment, but this is where the second issue should be considered. The study uses three methods (including genetic loss of MG) that block the acuity zone-specific elongation of the photoreceptors, but one concern is that the shortening of these outer segments is a non-specific effect. In all three of the treatments (Figures 3, 5, 9), the segments look somewhat disorganized and not simply like a conversion of the Acuity zone outer segments to the Dorsal state. It would be powerful to complement these approaches with a retinoic acid-related manipulation that does the opposite - that converts Dorsal outer segments into a longer Acuity zone-like morphology. That would be strong support for the proposed hypothesis.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      This manuscript investigates whether high-level physical reasoning is influenced by ongoing vestibular and bodily signals rather than operating as a fully abstract process. The authors combine Galvanic Vestibular Stimulation (GVS) with the Virtual Tools task to test the effects of vestibular perturbation during reasoning under terrestrial gravity in Study 1 and visually simulated altered gravity in Study 2. The experimental approach is original and provides a potentially useful bridge between research on vestibular processing, physical cognition, and embodied reasoning.

      The revised manuscript is substantially improved. The authors have responded carefully to many of the methodological concerns raised in the previous review. In particular, they have removed the original arbitrarily weighted Gravity-Weighted Index, introduced mixed-effects models that account for participant-level and game-level variability, clarified the basis of the gravity-impact classification, and more clearly distinguished preregistered from exploratory analyses. The interpretation of the strategy measures and the treatment of the 0.5g and 2g conditions have also been improved. These revisions provide a substantially stronger and more transparent analytical framework for evaluating the hypotheses.

      Strengths

      The principal strength of the study is its conceptual and methodological originality. Combining vestibular stimulation with a relatively high-level physical problem-solving task provides an innovative approach to testing whether ongoing bodily information is associated with physical reasoning. The comparison of games that differ in their dependence on gravity is also potentially informative for distinguishing general effects of vestibular perturbation from effects more specifically associated with gravity-relevant reasoning.

      The revised analyses represent another important strength. The mixed-effects models provide a more principled basis for inference than reliance on individual game-level comparisons alone, while the revised Gravity Index removes the arbitrary weighting used in the original manuscript. The clearer treatment of exploratory analyses also makes it easier to distinguish the primary evidence from complementary observations. Overall, the revision has addressed many of the methodological concerns raised previously and has made the empirical pattern considerably easier to evaluate.

      Weaknesses

      The main remaining concern is the correspondence between the strength of the empirical evidence and the strength of the manuscript's central claims.

      In Study 1, the aggregate measures provide little evidence for an overall effect of GVS on performance or strategy. More importantly for the proposed gravity-specific account, the newly introduced mixed-effects analyses do not show significant stimulation-by-gravity-impact interactions for the principal performance or strategy measures. Some gravity-level-specific and game-level effects are present, including a difference in placement distance for high-gravity-impact games, and the exploratory spatial analyses provide additional evidence that vestibular perturbation may influence aspects of strategy. These findings are potentially informative, but the overall pattern is selective rather than a consistent and convergent demonstration that greater dependence on gravity systematically increases the detrimental effect of GVS.

      The evidence in Study 2 is more limited. Aggregate differences between GVS and Sham are small across the main performance and strategy measures, and the mixed-effects analyses do not identify reliable stimulation effects across the low-, medium-, or high-gravity-impact categories. Study 2 therefore does not directly demonstrate that GVS facilitates physical reasoning under altered gravity.

      The cross-study Gravity Index analyses provide some evidence that the effects may differ across gravitational contexts, but the pattern remains heterogeneous. For success rate, the high-gravity-impact contrast is in the predicted direction but remains a directional trend, with the credible interval including the point of equivalence. Other performance measures do not provide convergent support for the same pattern. The distance index shows reliable cross-study contrasts at some gravity-impact levels, but these form a crossover pattern rather than a simple reduction of the GVS effect as gravity dependence increases. The principal study-by-gravity-impact interactions are also not robust. In addition, this Gravity Index analysis was not preregistered and compares two separate participant samples. Taken together, these findings are more consistent with suggestive evidence for a context-dependent influence of vestibular perturbation than with a definitive demonstration of facilitation or rapid adaptation under altered gravity.

      A second concern is the mechanistic interpretation. The experiment directly measures behavioral performance and strategy under GVS and Sham conditions. It does not directly measure the strength of a terrestrial gravity prior, prediction errors, sensory reweighting, internal-model updating, or stochastic resonance. Predictive coding and related frameworks provide plausible interpretations of the findings, but the present behavioral data cannot distinguish among these mechanisms. Statements that GVS downregulates a terrestrial gravity prior, accelerates revision of an internal model, recalibrates cognitive expectations, or provides a vestibular "teaching signal" therefore imply a level of mechanistic specificity that is not directly established by the current experiments.

      Overall, the study remains innovative and potentially valuable, and the revision has substantially strengthened the analytical framework. The empirical results support a more circumscribed conclusion that vestibular perturbation can influence selected aspects of physical reasoning and strategy, with suggestive evidence that these effects may vary across gravitational contexts. The evidence is less conclusive for the broader claims that real-time embodied experience generally determines high-level physical reasoning or that vestibular perturbation facilitates rapid adaptation through specific mechanisms of gravity-prior updating.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Conditioned analgesia refers to the ability of a learned fear cue to suppress pain-related behavior and neural activity. Understudied, the authors developed a novel conditioned analgesia procedure in which a cue that had been paired or unpaired with shock was played while a hot plate increased temperature. Compared to several control conditions, the authors found increased latency to a nociceptive response (paw licking). The authors identified somatostatin neurons in the periaqueductal gray as a likely mediator of the behavior. They then showed that: (1) stimulating vlPAG-SST neurons blocked nociceptive response latency increases to the CS+, (2) stimulating vlPAG-SST neurons suppressed fear retrieval freezing, (3) stimulating vs. inhibiting vlPAG-SST neurons drove opposing modulation of c-fibers and Aδ-fibers, (4) direct-projecting vlPAG SST neurons modulate freezing while RVM-projecting vlPAG SST neurons modulate conditioned analgesia.

      Strengths:

      These experiments have many strengths. The behavioral assay is chief among them. The assay is robust and controls for confounding factors to reveal a repeatable effect of a shock-paired cue to delay nociceptive responding. The optogenetic experiments provide the correct level of temporal precision, given the authors' time-specific interest in cued responding. Combining neuronal manipulations with spinal recordings is particularly innovative, especially in the context of more behavioral neuroscience-based assays. All-in-all, I found this to be an exceptionally strong set of experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      No obvious weaknesses were identified by this reviewer.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors presented evidence that spatial cognition in this population is under sexual selection, with extra-pair males, primarily chosen by the females, having better spatial cognition than males they cuckolded and males with better spatial cognition having more extra-pair young.

      Strengths:

      This cognitive ecology study was conducted on a well-known long-term study population of free-ranging mountain chickadees. This strong base, alongside a thorough study design and extensive statistical analyses, enabled the authors to address research questions that few other labs can address, making this a potentially powerful study of broad general interest.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors report findings from a set of experiments that compare learning outcomes from two broad classes of training regimens. The first, concept discovery, emphasizes the identification of task components. The second, concept implementation, emphasizes the procedural deployment of task components. Learners tend to self-schedule the former, but task performance and performance on an immediate test are supported by the latter.

      Strengths:

      The authors address a novel research question with clear application value. The experiments that are reported in the manuscript are effectively designed to answer the research questions of interest. However, as I will expound on below, the authors ultimately misinterpret their findings.

      Weaknesses:

      This manuscript makes no mention of the distinction between learning and performance (e.g., Schmidt & Bjork, 1992; Soderstrom & Bjork, 2015). It is well-known in the human learning literature that valid tests of learning are ones that entail a separation of context from an initial acquisition phase. This separation may be temporal (i.e., a delayed test) or feature-based (i.e., a test of transfer on novel iterations of a task). In any case, contextual differentiation between test and acquisition is critical to provide an accurate assessment of learning. To the authors' credit, they do report results from both a delayed test and tests of transfer. However, they do not appropriately interpret the results of those tests, which demonstrate no impact of training schedule on learning. They instead rely on findings from immediate tests to support their claims that graduated concept implementation supports learning. In truth, concept implementation is neither preferred by learners nor beneficial to learning. These findings are accordingly quite limited in terms of generating insights for effective training conditions.

      Compounding my primary concern above, I will note that the authors report fitting Bayesian multilevel models (MLMs) to their data, yet rely extensively on analyses of participant means (e.g., permutation t-tests) when a proper MLM would suffice, and in fact would be more appropriate. Bayesian MLMs are an incredibly flexible and robust analytic tool (e.g., Fiechter, 2024), and I would have liked to have seen a more comprehensive approach in this manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Maigler & Lin et al present a convincing set of behavioral and electrophysiological experiments and analyses exploring how individual differences in taste preference map onto neural responses in the gustatory cortex (GC). They go on to examine how both preferences and neural responses shift following intervening taste experience. Their experiments are strengthened by examining tastes of distinct identities and palatability (sweet, sour, salty, bitter) and correspond each animal's individual preference to the palatability-related late phase of the neural response.

      Strengths:

      (1) They demonstrate a relationship between the behavioral expression of taste preference and palatability-related GC neural responses. The direct correlation of expression of taste preference with GC neural responses indicates that taste preference behavior may be less noisy than previously thought, reflecting actual neural activity.

      (2) They address the stability of individual taste preference by comparing within and between session expression. This finding indicates that individual preference on any given trial or test session can differ from canonical palatability.

      (3) The animal's preferences for various tastes are reflected in the neurophysiological recordings, despite that behavior and physiology sessions are separated by several weeks, with an intervening surgery, across multiple delivery methods (active licking vs passive delivery), and across homeostatic states (thirsty vs sated).

      (4) They provide evidence that representational drift in palatability coding may arise from sensory experience rather than from the passive passage of time.<br /> The findings are novel and impactful, and the results are relatively complete.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors state that "no differences in effects were observed between taste batteries" (Methods), but it is not clear which analyses were performed to determine this, especially considering that many of the analyses are within-animal. Without more clarity, it is difficult to evaluate whether the interaction of different tastes within the sets of stimuli bias the main conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript studies a minimal model of tissue homeostasis in which stem (S), progenitor/transit-amplifying (T), and differentiated (D) cells interact through stochastic fate decisions and mechanically regulated proliferation. Combining a compartment-level analytical description with particle-based simulations, the authors show that pressure-dependent growth can stabilise cell populations and maintain tissue homeostasis over a broad parameter range. They derive homeostatic cell fractions and identify distinct regimes, including tissues maintained by rare stem cells or by long-lived progenitors. Most notably, the simulations reveal the spontaneous emergence of persistent stem-cell clusters and renewal-unit-like structures in the absence of explicit niche signals or differential adhesion. The authors further analyse spatial correlations, cluster statistics, lineage dynamics and neighbourhood compositions, and argue that stochastic fate decisions qualitatively alter the spatial organisation of mechanically regulated tissues. Based on the annotated manuscript, several of these central claims concern the emergence and stability of stem-cell clusters and their interpretation as self-organised structures.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is clearly written, technically competent, and combines analytical calculations with large-scale agent-based simulations in an elegant way. The systematic analysis of spatial observables, including pair correlations, cluster-size distributions, void statistics, neighbourhood composition, and lineage tracing, provides a rich characterisation of tissue organisation. The comparison with the authors' previous work on deterministic stem-cell hierarchies is particularly interesting, as it demonstrates that altering the fate-choice scheme can qualitatively change the resulting tissue architecture from stem-cell repulsion to stem-cell clustering. The study therefore generates a number of experimentally testable predictions regarding stem-cell spatial organisation and lineage dynamics. I also found the attempt to connect microscopic fate decisions to mesoscopic tissue-level organisation valuable, as this remains a relatively underexplored area at the interface of stem-cell biology and tissue mechanics.

      Weaknesses:

      My main concern relates to novelty and positioning within the existing literature. The manuscript frequently presents mechanical feedback as a mechanism capable of generating tissue homeostasis and robust cell-type proportions. However, the idea that crowding- or pressure-dependent feedback can robustly stabilise renewing tissues is already well established, both in mechanical homeostasis models and in more general feedback-based theories of tissue regulation. Consequently, the homeostasis aspect of the present manuscript appears more as an application of existing principles to a particular mechanical framework than as a fundamentally new conceptual advance. The authors should position their work more clearly with respect to these studies and explain more explicitly what genuinely new biological or mathematical insights are provided beyond the existence of homeostatic steady states.

      The manuscript therefore derives its novelty primarily from the spatial phenomena emerging from the coupling of stochastic fate decisions and mechanical interactions. While the observed stem-cell clustering is intriguing, the mechanistic explanation remains incomplete. The authors attribute clustering to stochastic symmetric divisions combined with mechanical control, yet it remains unclear whether the observed structures genuinely arise from a new self-organised mechanical mechanism or simply reflect local genealogical correlations generated by repeated symmetric divisions. Several of the strongest conclusions, including long-range order, renewal-unit formation, and stable niche-like organisation, require more rigorous support. In particular, the manuscript currently lacks appropriate control models that would disentangle the effects of mechanics, stochasticity, and daughter-cell placement. Furthermore, the definition of clusters via a specific distance threshold appears somewhat arbitrary and may itself influence the inferred cluster sizes and conclusions regarding finite renewal units. It would be important to demonstrate robustness with respect to this choice.

      I also have concerns regarding the simulation methodology and interpretation of the spatial statistics. Large tissues are assembled from smaller pre-equilibrated patches. While this may be computationally convenient, it raises concerns about whether long-range structures can emerge naturally and whether the reported spatial organisation could be affected by the construction procedure. Given that one of the central claims concerns spatial ordering over large scales, it would be important to demonstrate explicitly that the patching procedure does not influence the results. Similarly, the manuscript interprets pair-correlation and void statistics as evidence for long-range ordering of stem-cell clusters, but does not sufficiently exclude alternative explanations arising from finite system size, patch construction, or simple genealogical clustering.

      Conclusion:

      Overall, I find the manuscript interesting, whilst I also believe it should have a major revision. The most valuable contribution of the study is not the demonstration that mechanical feedback can maintain homeostasis, but rather the suggestion that stochastic fate decisions can qualitatively reshape the spatial organisation produced by mechanically regulated tissues. For a broad-interest journal, however, the authors should sharpen the positioning of the work relative to prior homeostasis theory, establish more clearly the mechanistic origin of the reported stem-cell clustering, and provide additional evidence that the observed structures are genuine emergent features of the model rather than artefacts of modelling assumptions or analysis choices.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Recent work reported that STING binds Ap4A and proposed that elevated Ap4A levels could modulate the cGAS-STING pathway. Intracellular Ap4A levels are controlled by the hydrolase NUDT2, itself a cancer drug target, and loss of NUDT2 raises cellular Ap4A pools. Building on this, the authors set out to investigate whether and how Ap4A modulates the cGAS-STING pathway. This question was motivated by the fact that the mechanism by which STING might bind a linear dinucleotide such as Ap4A remained unclear, and by the existence of alternative routes of crosstalk between Ap4A and the pathway. These include the chemical similarity between Ap4Ns and pppGpA, the linear intermediate generated by cGAS during cGAMP synthesis, raising the possibility that Ap4A could inhibit cGAS directly, as well as a potential downstream effect on the kinase TBK1.

      Using in vitro biochemistry, the authors show that STING does not, in fact, bind Ap4A, contrary to what was previously claimed, and they further examine the impact of NUDT2 loss on the cGAS-STING pathway. This clarifies for the field whether Ap4A could influence the pathway in any way, whether through binding to cGAS, STING, or TBK1.

      The authors find that cGAS can bind Ap4A but cannot process it. cGAS also binds Ap4G, but processes it only inefficiently and only when supplied at very high concentrations in vitro. This argues against physiological relevance in cells, since inhibition of canonical cGAMP synthesis would require Ap4Ns to be present in excess over ATP and GTP, a condition unlikely to be met at physiological nucleotide concentrations even when NUDT2 is absent. The authors also test for effects on TBK1, showing that while it can bind Ap4A, the concentrations required for inhibition are similarly not physiological.

      The authors conduct a thorough series of biochemical and biophysical experiments to clarify the underlying mechanism, systematically ruling out a plausible effect of Ap4A in cells at each step. Even where an effect on cGAS or TBK1 can be detected at very high, non-physiological concentrations, this remains confined to in vitro conditions. The experiments are sound and conducted with scientific rigor, and the results support the authors' conclusions.

      This work provides clear evidence that STING does not bind Ap4Ns, and that even where binding does occur elsewhere in the pathway, there is no plausible mechanism by which Ap4Ns could modulate the cGAS-STING pathway under physiological conditions. This resolves an open question for the field: if Ap4Ns do have biological effects related to this pathway, these are unlikely to arise from a direct interaction with cGAS, STING, or TBK1, and must instead be mediated through other processes. The methods and data will be a useful reference for the community when evaluating future claims of nucleotide second-messenger crosstalk.

      Prior studies have shown that NUDT2 disruption, which elevates cellular Ap4A levels, is associated with down-regulation of interferon-response pathways. This is notable in light of the current findings, which show no direct biochemical interaction between Ap4A and cGAS, STING, or TBK1. Together, this suggests that if elevated Ap4A does suppress IFN production, it likely does so indirectly, through mechanisms other than direct engagement of the cGAS-STING-TBK1 axis.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The LC3 family of proteins, which includes LC3B, are ubiquitin-like proteins that are covalently linked to phosphatidylethanolamine in the expanding autophagosomal membrane during autophagy. LC3 family members bind to short sequences of amino acids that reside within dynamic regions in a wide variety of proteins. These sequences, termed LC3 Interacting Regions (LIRs), were initially thought to function primarily to link LIR containing autophagy cargo receptors to LC3 family members to help facilitate their capture during autophagy. However, the functional importance of LIRs in autophagy has broadened to include more general functions in autophagy as well. While a general consensus for LIR sequences has been described as [FWY]0-X1-X2-[LVI]3 recent work has suggested that additional sequences outside of the canonical LIR sequence can bind LC3 family members and play important roles in autophagy. In this manuscript by Kosmatka et al, the authors perform a high throughput screen using bacterial surface display coupled with fluorescence associated cell sorting to identify which human sequences can bind to LC3B. They identify a variety of peptides capable of binding LC3B including peptides from proteins that have not previously been described as LC3B binding proteins. The results from the bacterial surface display were then used to guide sequence analysis, mutational analysis and structural studies to further characterize the range of LIR sequences that are capable of binding LC3B. Taken together, this work adds to the growing knowledge of how LIR sequences interact with LC3 family members and demonstrates which amino acids both inside and outside of the LIR sequence aid in binding. This work also identifies new potential LC3 binding proteins which may play unknown roles in autophagy regulation. Lastly, this work reinforces the importance of alternative LIR sequences such as the [WFY]0-X1-X2-[WFY]3 sequence which the authors have dubbed the LIR+ sequence.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript uses a robust approach to identify and characterize different peptide sequences that can interact with LC3B. They validate a large number of sequences using biolayer interferometry (BLI). The large number of LC3B binding sequences and their dissociation constants adds significant new information to the field that will help others understand what sequences can bind to LC3B. The authors are also very careful to accurately report on their data and not overly interpret their findings.

      Weaknesses:

      After the authors identify proteins from their bacterial display assay, the remainder of the manuscript is focused on characterizing the different types of sequences that are identified in addition to validating the LC3B-LIR interactions using BLI and X-ray crystallography. However, it's not entirely clear if the screen identified novel LC3B binders that interact with LC3B in cells. While I acknowledge that the focus of the manuscript is on the characterization of LIR sequences that can bind LC3B it seems like a missed opportunity to not validate a few of the novel LC3B binders in vivo.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Zavadska et al. presents a phylogenomic study focused on the relationships among metakinetoplastids, specifically addressing the question whether Neobodonida are monophyletic. The authors collected eleven kinetoplastid strains affiliated with five out of six neobodonid clades identified in previous studies and sequenced their transcriptomes. These data along with SRAs available from public databases were processed via assembly, annotation and decontamination. The final dataset, representing all (non-trypanosomatid) kinetoplastids with genome and/or transcriptome data available as well as selected trypanosomatids and discoban outgroups, was used for protein orthology inference and identification of single-copy orthologs present in the majority of taxa, followed by phylogenetic analysis in maximum likelihood and Bayesian frameworks.

      Strengths:

      I find the new data and resulting phylogenetic reconstruction valuable and interesting, particularly given the paucity of genomic/transcriptomic data from free-living kinetoplastids. The study is well-designed methodologically, and the main finding (paraphyly of Neobodonida) appears indisputable, considering the provided phylogenimic evidence. Following best practices, the authors shared their primary data, scripts, and files resulting from the conducted analyses.

      Weaknesses:

      Several aspects of the presentation and interpretation would benefit from revision. In particular, the composition of the neobodonid lineages central to the study is insufficiently explained, and an 18S rRNA gene-based tree showing these lineages and the placement of the newly analysed strains would substantially improve the clarity of the study. The Introduction would also benefit from a more concise and better-structured account of previous phylogenetic evidence and a clearer explanation of the broader biological significance of kinetoplastids, while the Methods could be streamlined by removing redundant information and presenting some details in tables. Finally, the rationale for including the electron microscopy images in the supplement should be clarified, as these are currently not discussed in the text and represent only a single studied strain.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors probe the combined role of phosphorylation of an intrinsically disordered region (IDR) and domain pocket interactions with small molecules on the assembly of a multidomain protein HDAC6 using molecular simulations. Their find that IDR phosphorylation and ligand interactions with domain pockets can together reshaped in the interaction networks; thereby, expanding mechanistic understanding of multidomain protein assembly in the context of phase separation beyond an IDR centric grammar. The work is supported by extensive simulations featuring several controls and analysis of the underlying interaction networks.

      Strengths:

      (1) They find an important role of phosphorylation and ligand binding in shaping multidomain protein assembly.

      (2) They demonstrate that even if IDR:IDR interactions are important in isolated IDR systems, folded domain-folded domain interactions can dominate in the full-length protein. Furthermore, ligands can significantly perturb the interaction landscape, e.g., by redirecting folded domain-folded domain interactions to domain pocket ones.

      (3) They also show that different ligands can yield differing impact on the interaction networks by both competing with and compensating interactions to varying degrees. This is demonstrated for two ligands (Nexturastat A and HPOB).

      (4) They probe both the IDRs in isolation (including both the phosphorylated and unphosphorylated versions) and condensates formed via these IDRs. They also characterize assemblies of the full length proteins (with and without phosphorylation) in presence and absence of the ligands. The combined simulations, in general, support the key conclusions of the paper.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There are areas where statistical tests can improve the quantitative presentation of the work. Specifically, the difference in the IDR ensembles for the isolated chains should be assessed for statistical significance.

      (2) There appears to be considerable finite-size effects in some of the slab simulations that may affect the conclusions. In particular, the chains along the long axis appear to be interacting across the periodic boundary. This can happen if the slab long axis is not long enough/if the ratio of dilute phase to dense phase is not large enough.

      (3) Some decisions in the simulation conditions require further justification/explanation. More specifically, the concentrations of small molecules used, as well as the decision to conduct simulations at 295 K, should be adequately justified.

      (4) Given the size of the full-length protein, it is understandable that the full dense phase is not probed for the full-length protein. However, it would be useful to comment on how the conclusions may change in the context of the full length. For instance, there is no real interface that the small molecules need to diffuse across and so discussions on the role of partitioning in the paper should be better contextualized in light of this.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Wang et al. describes the identification of a novel mechanism by which the canonical Wnt/beta-catenin pathway could regulate endothelial permeability in the central nervous system (CNS). Specifically, they show that in circumventricular organs (CVOs), in which the blood-brain barrier (BBB) is not established in vessels and endothelial cells are highly permeable, the previously reported low levels of Wnt/beta-catenin coincide with high levels of the vascular endothelial growth factor receptor 2 (VEGFR2, Flk-1), whereas the decoy receptor VEGFR1 (flt-1) is expressed at low levels. In order to test the hypothesis in vivo that the Wnt/beta-catenin pathway controls VEGF signaling in CNS vessels by regulating VEGF receptors, the authors analyzed mosaic cerebellar vessels of mice deficient for the Wnt receptor frizzled 4 (Fzd4), showing that BBB+ (normal condition) vessels show low VEGFR2 and high VEGFR1, whereas BBB- (Fzd4ko) vessels show high VEGFR2 and low VEGFR1. Similarly, although not as conclusively due to strong background from Müller cells, these effects were also visible in the retina of these mice. Conversely, dominant genetic activation of beta-catenin signaling in endothelial cells in vivo resulted in upregulation of VEGFR1 and downregulation of VEGFR2 in vessels of the CVOs as well as of the choroid plexus.

      In order to better understand the direct relevance of Wnt/beta-catenin signaling for this regulatory theme, the authors activated the pathway in HEK293 cells, stably harboring the Super-Top-FLASH reporter construct in the presence of VEGFR2 and VEGF. Moreover, by transfecting Wnt1 into HEK293 cells, the authors analysed the effect of TGFbeta, EGF, and FGF signaling. Together, these experiments showed that Wnt/beta-catenin signaling potently suppressed VEGF signaling at low concentrations of Wnt1 transfection, whereas VEGFR2 suppression was only visible at relatively high concentrations. Also, the other pathways were suppressed, although to a lower extent.

      In conclusion, the authors suggest a mechanism of VEGF signaling suppression by Wnt/beta-catenin 1) at the post-receptor level of VEGF receptors and 2) at the transcriptional level of VEGFR1 and VEGFR2, independent of VEGF signaling suppression.

      Strengths:

      (1) The present manuscript provides interesting additional information on top of the published work on the mechanistic function of vascular permeability control by Wnt/beta-catenin, specifically by the highlighted interaction with the VEGF pathway and the opposed regulation of the two VEGF receptors VEGFR1 and VEGFR2.

      (2) They have used state-of-the-art animal models, high-resolution imaging, and appropriate in vitro analysis.

      (3) This finding has potentially strong implications for future therapeutic strategies, aiming at Wnt/beta-catenin activation in various diseases of the CNS in which vascular repair is desired.

      Weaknesses:

      A detailed analysis of the post-receptor and transcriptional mechanisms remains largely unexplored and needs to be explored in the future.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The authors show convincingly the complexity of gene up- and down-regulation at the outset of metamorphosis and identify substantial differences between the two sexes, even at this early time in development. The complexity of microRNA expression and the difference between the sexes are also nicely laid out. The functional significance of these differences, though, is harder to establish. The authors have focused on the roles of two families of developmental hormones, the ecdysteroids, and the juvenile hormones. The emergence of sex-specific differentiation of organs during metamorphosis is clearly downstream of the action of ecdysteroids and/or JH, but there is no evidence that the presence or lack of these hormones has any effect on the sexual identity of organ systems - i.e., that manipulations of JH or ecdysteroid result in either the masculinization or feminization of individuals or their organs. The precedence for the linkage of these hormones to sex determination is the 2002, Belgacem & Martin study, which describes the effects of JH on fly locomotion. These authors show that the number of stop/start bouts is sexually dimorphic, and removal of JH in males shifts their frequency into the female range while giving treated males exogenous JH moves it back. While this is referred to as a "feminization" of male behavior, this quantitative shift in frequency is not as compelling as would be a qualitative shift -- for example, the removal of JH causing males to show egg-laying behavior (a result that has never been seen). Also, these effects are in a fully mature system, rather than at the early metamorphic time examined in the present paper. In driving and coordination metamorphosis, JH and ecdysteroids are intimately involved in sexual differentiation, but I know of no compelling evidence that they play a role in sex determination.

      While the summary of the effects or removal of specific microRNAs on the components of the biosynthetic pathway for the JHs and ecdysteroids (Figure 2E ,F) is quite compelling, I am concerned about the effects of the removal of mir-277 and mir-34 on the levels of both the JHs and 20E. My concern centers around the data from the control group (w[1118] animals in Figure 2D). These data are the first report of a marked sex difference in the titer of either JH or ecdysteroid at the start of metamorphosis in Drosophila. As expected, males show a 10-20 increase in levels of JH III, JHB3, and 20E between the L3 stage and the white puparium, but, surprisingly, the levels of these hormones in female L3 larvae are equal to or greater than that seen at pupariation! These data for females run counter to over 50 years of work on the effects of ecdysteroids in Drosophila!

      As far as I can gather from the paper, the L3 data were obtained using wandering larvae. This stage lasts for about 12 hours and ends with pupariation. Larvae from this period need to be used with caution for hormone studies. Levels of both JH and ecdysteroid are low as larvae leave the food but rapidly rise to their peak levels at the white puparium stage 12 hours later. To deal with the rapidly changing hormonal landscape through this period, the researchers have used physiological markers to track this progression. Initially, it was the sage of "puffing" of the giant salivary gland chromosomes, but, for bulk collection of staged larvae, larvae are fed on food containing a blue dye, and progression is tracked by the loss of blue coloring from the gut. I could not find if the authors had any criteria for selecting larvae during the wandering period. Male and female larvae grow to different sizes. Might this difference in growth be biased when larvae were selected during their wandering phase?

      The other hormone-related issue is the expression of Kr-h1 during larval stages and metamorphosis (Figure 1G). Kr-h1 is the main target of JH and Kr-h1 expression is often used as a proxy for the JH titer. The authors report that peak Kr-h1 expression occurs in the L3 (when the JH titer should be lowest!) and that it drops at wandering. This pattern is counter to that reported in the literature (e.g., FlyBase, ModEncode).

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors use several genome-wide approaches to find commonalities and differences between distinct dormancy models, including S. pombe spores, killifish diapause embryos, and human dormant cancer cells. As G0 states are ubiquitous in nature, yet still understudied, this study provides not only a clear demonstration of an evolutionarily-conserved component in G0 regulation, but also a rich resource of genomics datasets, that will be especially of interest to S. pombe and killifish researchers.

      The main conclusions of the study are that: (1) there are commonalities in dormancy programs across eukaryotic evolution; (2) the uncoupling between transcriptome and translatome is more pronounced in non-dividing cells, particularly at ribosomal protein coding genes; and (3) dormant cells retain dynamic responses to stress, changing their cellular state and maintaining this difference.

      Overall, the study is clearly written, provides large data resources for future research in the dormancy field, and the conclusions are supported by the presented evidence (although point 3 would require further experimental clarification, see below).

      Major comments:

      A key consideration when comparing transcriptomes of cycling and dormant cells is the overall RNA quantity in the cells; however, it is not made clear in the manuscript whether this overall level was compared and/or if RNA-seq used spike-in quantification. However, this will directly affect some conclusions; for example, there is a conceptual difference between a transcript upregulated in spores and a transcript that appears upregulated in spores but is in fact 'less repressed than average' (resulting in higher FC). While the overall transcript diversity as described will be not affected, this analysis can provide important context. For the highlighted example of ribosomal protein mRNAs, this scenario could be what resulted in an apparent mRNA increase but protein decrease (which would be interpreted as both mRNA stabilization and translation inhibition); if the total mRNA is much lower, then the mRNA levels may be similar (which would then be interpreted as no change in transcription nor mRNA stability, but highlight the importance of translation inhibition).

      This point was more clearly described in a previous seminal study by the authors (Marguerat et al 2012), and so should be made clearer here as well. What is the overall RNA level in cycling cells compared to quiescent cells, and compared to spores? Likewise, what is the overall reduction in total protein levels? Was the overall reduction comparable to the previous study? These overall levels should at least be quantified, which is a straight-forward experiment. The current mention of this limitation (two sentences in the last paragraph of the conclusion) is not enough.

      Accordingly, the term "induced" (in Fig 2 for example) may be misleading, and could be separated into truly "induced" genes and "relatively induced" genes, when normalized to absolute levels. Likewise, Fig S2A and S2I are misleading due to this effect (normalization will tend to show a similar number of up-regulated and down-regulated genes). These panels should be clarified by plotting next to the relative quantification (current panels) a comparison taking overall RNA level into account. This will very likely strongly increase the number of downregulated genes and decrease the number of upregulated genes, and the new lists can also be subjected to GO analysis.

      The same issue would be important to discuss for the killifish experiment as well.

      For spore offspring stress experiments, the estimated number of cell divisions after spore germination should be indicated. It appears over 20, which would confirm the authors' conclusion that an epigenetic state is induced and persists over multiple rounds of replication and underlie improved heat resistance, indeed hinting at transcriptional memory through chromatin modification. As the phenotype is tested at a population-level, it is unclear whether every spore is equally able to impart this phenotype, and for how long the stress resistance response persists. Moreover, it may be clearer to test heat resistance in log-phase cells, as in the current experimental setup cells are grown to stationary-phase before plating; however, stationary-phase cultures are more heterogenous and more heat-resistant.

      Note also that using 3-fold serial dilutions (instead of more commonly used 10-fold) means that the differences shown in Fig 3M are mild. Plating duplicates (at log-phase) and imaging at several times of growth would be necessary to have a clearer view of the result.

      Significance:

      Overall, the study provides a proof-of-concept that dormancy programs across vastly different eukaryotes display commonalities. This is not an entirely new concept, but this is the first demonstration of it using S. pombe and turquoise killifish and will therefore be of interest to a wide audience of researchers interested in quiescence and dormancy in general. A key finding (albeit also not entirely new) is the transcriptome/proteome difference, which appears increased in dormant cells; this hints at the existence of key post-transcriptional regulatory mechanisms in dormant and G0 cells.

      A current key limitation is that only relative quantifications are discussed, which can currently give a misleading idea of overall transcriptional activity in dormant cells. Another limitation is that differentially-regulated genes, proteins and GO processes are mentioned, but with relatively limited biological interpretation, making some sections of the manuscript lengthy and descriptive.

      Advance: The authors provide a vast amount of datasets for fission yeast spores (transcriptome, proteome, differential viability of a mutant collection) and killifish, which will be a very useful resource for researchers in the field. The authors identified several genes and processes that are commonly differentially regulated in dormant cells across several systems, including autophagy and ribosomal protein genes, which were previously known to be required for G0.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study aims to explain why different HER2 isoforms produce distinct cancer-cell phenotypes, with a particular focus on the poorly understood mechanisms by which p95-HER2 promotes the invasive and metastatic behaviors of HER2-positive breast cancer. The authors propose that functional selectivity at the HER2 receptor level, particularly signaling through Y1139, preferentially engages an MRTFA-TGFB1I1 transcriptional/cytoskeletal program, thereby shifting p95-HER2-expressing cells toward individual motility, matrix degradation, invasion, and metastasis rather than simply proliferation.

      Strengths:

      A major strength is the multi-level experimental strategy. Rather than relying on a single invasion assay, the authors integrate phenotypic profiling, single-cell RNA-seq, imaging of MRTFA nuclear localization, protein validation, cytoskeletal analysis, matrix-degradation assays, transwell invasion, 3D spheroid/organoid assays, and orthotopic transplantation. This provides relatively coherent evidence that p95-HER2 cells occupy a distinct biological state characterized by individual motility and invasion, accompanied by a myogenic/contractile transcriptional program and increased MRTFA nuclear localization. Another strong aspect is the attempt to connect the downstream phenotype to a specific HER2 phosphorylation site. The authors identify Y1139 as a candidate determinant of the "go" phenotype and show that mutation of Y1139 to phenylalanine eliminates MRTFA translocation as well as the associated motility and invasion phenotypes

      Weaknesses:

      The main limitation is that the evidence for the proposed signaling mechanism is stronger for functional dependence than for direct molecular mechanism. The data establish that Y1139, MRTFA, and TGFB1I1 are required for the p95-HER2 invasive phenotype, but they do not appear to fully establish how phosphorylation at Y1139 mechanistically couples p95-HER2 to MRTFA activation. In particular, a direct biochemical link between Y1139 and the machinery controlling actin polymerization/MRTFA nuclear translocation would make the proposed pathway substantially more convincing.

      A second limitation is the model system used in the study. Much of the mechanistic work relies on three particular engineered HER2 isoform-expressing cell lines, while the in vivo experiments use NOD/SCID mice. This is useful for testing tumor-cell intrinsic invasion and metastasis, but it limits conclusions about the generality of the functional regulation across different cell contexts, and also limits the understanding of how the pathway operates in the intact immune microenvironment. This is especially relevant because the manuscript itself places p95-HER2 in the broader context of immune evasion and notes that MRTFA can regulate PD-L1; however, the current models cannot adequately establish whether the proposed pathway contributes to immune-mediated metastatic progression in vivo.

      Finally, the distinction between "go" and "grow" signaling is conceptually attractive, but the extent to which it represents a general property of HER2-positive human breast cancers remains less certain. The study provides strong experimental evidence for functional selectivity in the models examined, but additional validation in independent patient-derived models and clinically relevant tumors would be needed before generalizing this mechanism across HER2-positive disease.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to build a comprehensive understanding of the cell classes that make up the adult zebrafish olfactory bulb (OB) and their connectivity. Using an EM volume covering the three OB layers and several glomeruli, they aim to reconstruct a sufficient sample of all cell classes in the OB. Based on 459 proofread reconstructions, they identify 13 cell classes and a small number of subclasses and offer detailed expert neuroanatomical arguments, largely qualitative, for why these classes are distinct. While they do not have a synapse classification, they further build a manual wiring diagram of connectivity based on these reconstructions, which together offer a strong baseline understanding of the organization of the OB and useful properties to build into a future quantitative assessment of fish neuroanatomy in general.

      Strengths:

      The paper offers a powerful example of why expert assessment remains a vital tool in neuroanatomy. While quantification is deeply important to scale data, the kind of careful multimodal human investigation of neuronal shape, connectivity, and ultrastructure forms a key basis for discovering and differentiating neuronal cell types. The authors use multi-expert classification to validate qualitative assessments as well, which is a good way to handle cross-individual uncertainty. The descriptions of each type and their relationships are generally quite thorough, and there are enough cells to offer a satisfying baseline categorization. Anyone studying zebrafish OB is likely to get a lot out of this paper.

      Weaknesses:

      While I am a strong believer in expert neuroanatomical intuition alongside quantitative neuroanatomical approaches to cell typing (especially given the manageable number of cells and cell types), I would have liked a section explaining why this approach was taken as opposed to a more quantitative one from the beginning. I think that this is a case study in where the expert qualitative approaches are useful, especially with fascinating details like the unusual hand-shaped spines. A lot of the strength of the paper comes from this philosophy, in my view, and it would be nice to hear it elucidated by the authors. I would also be curious if the authors came to any conclusions about what might have been possible with a more data-driven approach, although this may be beyond the scope of the work or not terribly interesting.

      There were some aspects of the cell typing that I didn't totally understand. Two of the most common issues with cell typing are that (1) it is unclear if cell types are discrete and (2) unusual cells appear that don't have enough peers to classify into an unambiguous type. Did those happen here? For example, it was not obvious to me how it was decided that mitral cells fell into three subclasses: small, medium, and large, and not a continuum from small to large. Similarly, some interneuron classes had subclasses. What anatomical qualities suggested that a split was a subclass-level split vs a class-level split? Were there any cells that were impossible to classify into a group, or was everything actually tidy? How confident are the authors that they have captured the complete diversity of the OB from this sampling?

      I generally appreciated the numerous detailed figures and found them generally clear and informative. However, as someone who is not deeply familiar with zebrafish olfactory bulb organization, I would have liked to have at least some global context for each cell class in terms of how typical cells relate to the layers and glomeruli. Figure 18B does a nice job of this with many cells, but it would be clearer to see this along the way with the individual classes (and subclasses) as well.

      For the connectivity analysis, I commend the authors for doing as much manual synapse annotation as they did, but the lack of completeness makes it less clear how to interpret the connectivity findings. In particular, how complete is the current assessment? For example, when describing connectivity between pairs of cells, how were the pairs selected? Did they necessarily have contact between the meshes, or innervate the same glomerulus, or were they just two cells of the same type in any location? This is useful to understand how to interpret the connectivity fractions measured.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigated the role of AHL15 in regulation of gene expression using AHL15 overexpression lines. Their results do show that more gene are downregulated when AHL15 is upregulated and its binding is not affecting the chromatin accessibility. Further, they investigated AHL15 binds in regions depleted in histone modifications and other epigenetic signatures. Subsequently, they investigated the presence of AHL15 in the gene chromatin loops. They found overlaps with both upregulated and downregulated genes. The methods are appropriately described, but could be improved to include the analysis of self-looping gene boundaries.

      Strengths:

      Their study clearly showed lack of any specific sequence enrichment in the AHL15 binding sites, other than these being AT-rich, suggesting that AHL proteins do not recognize a specific DNA sequence but are recruited to their AT-rich target sites in another way. The study does suggest significant enrichment of AHL15 binding sites at TSS and TES, and AHL15 sites are depleted of any histone marks. They also identified that AHL15 binding sites overlap with self-looping gene boundaries. The authors have addressed the comments raised in the revised manuscript.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have addressed the comments raised, in the revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      An outstanding question in the field of high frequency oscillations (HFOs) in the context of epilepsy is how these oscillations emerge, considering that they occur at such high frequencies i.e., 250Hz well above the firing ability of single neurons. One hypothesis that has been suggested in the past is that neurons that fire in an out of phase fashion or rather at random intervals may contribute to a spectrum of HFOs ranging from 250-500Hz that observed in epilepsy. However, how possible it is that random action potentials could aggregate to the extent that they could give rise to HFOs in the so-called fast ripple (FRs) frequency range (>200 according to the authors) remains unclear. To test this hypothesis, they used computational modeling to randomly insert action potentials in a signal, and they found that this approach is sufficient to generate FRs. Some of the predictors of whether FRs could occur were neuronal count, firing rate and synchronization. Besides computational modeling, they used different model systems to test whether that would be possible to be observed in neuronal cultures, in epileptic rats (intrahippocampal kainic acid model), and human data. Neuronal cultures treated with picrotoxin did not show evidence that FRs could be generated more than chance aggregation of action potentials. They then asked whether synchronization and firing rate could play a role in the emergence of FRs. They found that changes in neural firing and synchronization, such as those occurring during differences phase of the sleep-wake cycle could affect the number of FRs occurring by chance aggregation, with more FRs seen during periods of wakefulness, a result that they replicated in human data.

      The authors largely achieve their proposed aims of demonstrating that random neuronal firing can, in principle, generate FRs. Results from this study could influence current thinking around mechanisms generating FRs in epilepsy. The use of different computational approaches and model systems could offer new analytical methodologies for the study of FRs in the context of brain disease.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors used a multi-level approach combining computational modeling with experimental datasets, including neuronal cultures, a rat model of temporal lobe epilepsy and human data.

      (2) Identification of key parameters such as neuronal count, firing rate, synchronization and brain state in observed incidence of FRs generated through random aggregation of neural firing.

      (3) Cross-species validation increases the likelihood of generalizability of the findings.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have addressed my comments and have no further suggestions or any changes in my assessment.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this ambitious study the authors set out to analyse the validity of a number of claims, both minor and major from 400 published articles within the field of Drosophila immunity that were published before 2011. The authors were able to determine initially if claims were supported by comparing to other published literature in the field and if required by experimentally testing 'unchallenged' claims that had not been followed up in subsequent published literature. Using this approach the authors identified a number of claims that had contradictory evidence using new methods or taking into account developments within the field post initial publication. They publish their findings on a publicly available website designed to enable the research community to assess published work within the field with greater clarity.

      Strengths:

      The work presented is rigorous and methodical, the data presentation is high quality and importantly the data presented support the conclusions. The discussion is balanced and the study is written considerately and respectfully highlighting that the aim of the study is not to assign merit to individual scientists or publications but rather to improve clarity for scientists across the field. The approach carried out by the researchers focuses on testing the validity of the claims made in the original papers rather than testing whether the original experimental methods produced reproducible results. This is an important point since there are many reasons why the original interpretation of data may have understandably led to the claims made. These potential explanations for irreproducible data or conclusions are discussed in detail by the authors for each claim investigated.

      The authors have generated an accompanying website which provides a valuable tool for the Drosophila Immunity research community that can be used to fact check key claims and encourages community engagement. This will achieve one important goal of this study - to prevent time loss for scientists who base their research on claims that are irreproducible. The authors rightly point out that it is impossible (and indeed undesirable) to avoid publication of irreproducible results within a field since science is 'an exploratory process where progress is made by constant course correction'. This study is however an important piece of work that will make that course correction more efficient.

      Comments on revised version:

      I'm impressed with the revisions carried out by the authors. No further comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Yadav et al. revisit the old conundrum of why certain genes encoding inner mitochondrial membrane (IMM) proteins are retained in the mitochondrial genome (mtIMMs; 13 genes in humans) while genes encoding other IMM proteins (nuIMMs) have been relocated to the nuclear genome during evolution. It was noted already in 1986 that nuIMMs have transmembrane helices (TMHs) of lower hydrophobicity than mtIMMs (FEBS Lett 198:1). A number of subsequent studies have shown that some mtIMMs can be converted to nuIMMs by appending a mitochondrial targeting sequence (MTS) and, in most cases, reducing the hydrophobicity of one or more of the TMHs (reviewed in Genes & Dis 7:578). Conversely, increasing the hydrophobicity of a TMH in a nuIMM protein can prevent its import into mitochondria (e.g., PNAS 99:10510). Whether the reduction in TMH hydrophobicity in nuIMMs is mainly driven by the need to bypass cotranslational targeting of the protein to the ER and trafficking along the secretory pathway, or to prevent the protein from being prematurely stuck in the IMM during mitochondrial import, is still, to some extent and open question, and experimental support for both possibilities exists (e.g., FEBS Lett 591:65).

      Yadav et al. present an extensive bioinformatics study which nicely confirms the reduced hydrophobicity of nuIMM TMHs compared to mtIMM TMHs (and also compared to TMHs in proteins that traffic along the secretory pathway). The study is based on a lot more sequence data and many more kinds of comparisons than previous publications, and leaves little doubt that the reduction in hydrophobicity in nuIMM TMHs is real.

      Based on their bioinformatics analysis, the authors also propose that aliphatic -> Thr substitutions (ATS) are the main driver of hydrophobicity reduction in nuIMMs, TMHs, and that Thr has been enriched also in mtIMMs. TMHs in organisms that depend only on Oxa1-type IMM insertases, possibly in order to reduce the aggregation propensity of these proteins when produced in the mitochondrial matrix. This is a novel hypothesis that has not been proposed in earlier work.

      The authors additionally show that a mitochondrially encoded ATP6 protein can be converted into a nuclearly encoded, import-competent protein using ATS to reduce the hydrophobicity of its TMHs and, conversely, that import of a nuclearly encoded ATP6 protein is blocked when Thr residues in its TMHs are mutated to aliphatic residues. Similar findings have been published before; what is new is the use of aliphatic -> Thr substitutions (rather than other aliphatic -> polar substitutions).

      Detailed comments:

      While previous bioinformatics studies of how gene relocation from the mitochondrial to the nuclear genome impacts protein sequence have focused on TMH hydrophobicity, Yadav et al. expand this to include individual amino acid frequencies. The authors present four types of analyses:

      (1) The authors identify E. coli homologs of the 13 genes retained in human mitochondrial DNA, do structure-based sequence alignments of the homologous pairs, and then compare the individual aligned TMH pairs in terms of hydrophobicity and Thr content. The authors also calculate an amino acid substitution matrix from the aligned TMH pairs. These data are presented in Figure 2 (and supplements).

      Hydrophobicity is calculated based using the GRAVY algorithm and the Kyte-Doolittle scale, and by calculating the fraction of ALIVF residues. Both nuIMM and mtIMM TMHs are found to be significantly less hydrophobic than the E. coli TMHs (p ≈ 0.002). Thr is reported to be enriched in nuIMM and mtIMM TMHs relative to E. coli TMHs (as are Asn and Pro, while Val and Phe are reduced relative to E. coli TMHs, panel C). Panels F and G show an enrichment of Thr residues in nuIMMs of marginal significance (p = 0.02), and an enrichment in mtIMMs of higher significance (but the statistics are skewed by one mtIMM TMH that apparently contains almost 40% Thr residues). The substitution matrix in panel H indicates that aliphatic I, L, A, and G residues in the E. coli TMHs are often substituted by Thr and Val in the mitochondrial proteins. F does not show this substitution pattern, questioning the use of ALIVF counts in the analysis.

      (2) The authors calculate hydrophobicities and amino acid frequencies for all human TMHs found in AlphaFold2 structures and grouped according to their cellular location: ER, Golgi, plasma membrane, nucleus, outer mitochondrial membrane (OMM), nuclearly encoded proteins in the inner mitochondrial membrane (nuIMM), and mitochondrially encoded proteins in the inner mitochondrial membrane (mtIMM). These data are presented in Figure 3 (and supplements).

      OMM and nuIMM TMHs are significantly less hydrophobic than the secretory pathway TMHs, whereas mtIMM TMHs seem to have similar hydrophobicities as the secretory ones. nuIMM TMHs may have a slightly increased Thr content compared to secretory pathway proteins, but only one p-value is significant (Golgi vs nuIMM). mtIMM TMHs appear to have a higher Thr content than nuIMM proteins, but the statistics is skewed by a single point at a Thr fraction of 0.25. The Thr enrichment is less pronounced than for the E. coli comparison in Figure 2, Figure 3 Supplement. Fig. 8 shows that TMHs in chloroplast and mitochondrial plant proteins both have reduced hydrophobicity compared to ER-targeted proteins.

      (3) Starting from the 66 mitochondrially encoded proteins in Jakobids, the authors identify homologous proteins that have become nuclearly encoded and carry an N-terminal mitochondrial targeting sequence (MTS) in organisms with smaller mitochondrial genomes. As in 1, the authors then do structure-based sequence alignments of the 63 homologous nuIMM and mtIMM TMH pairs found, and compare the individual aligned TMH pairs in terms of hydrophobicity and Thr content. These data are presented in Figure 4 (and supplements).

      The reduction in hydrophobicity in nuIMM vs mtIMM TMHs upon relocation to the nucleus is robust and confirms earlier publications (panel C). The increase in Thr content in nuIMM vs mtIMM TMHs is less convincing (p = 0.012, panel G) and is opposite to what is seen in Figure 3C.

      (4) By phylogenetic analysis, the authors identify three independent relocations of the ATP6 gene to the nuclear genome, do structure-based sequence alignments of nuIMM and mtIMM pairs representing these three events, and illustrate the reduced hydrophobicity of the TMHs in the nuclearly encoded proteins by hydrophobicity plots. These data are presented in Figure 5 (and supplements).

      In panel C, it is not only aliphatic-to-Thr substitutions that reduce the hydrophobicity of the nuATP6 TMHs. How much is the hydrophobicity reduced if the Thr mutations are reversed (i.e., how much does the hydrophobicity reduction depend on ATS specifically and not on other kinds of substitutions)?

      In a short experimental section, the authors go on to show that a mitochondrially encoded ATP6 protein can be converted into a nuclearly encoded, import-competent protein using ATS to reduce the hydrophobicity of its TMHs (but functionality is not tested) and, conversely, that import of a nuclearly encoded ATP6 protein is blocked when Thr residues in its TMHs are mutated to aliphatic residues (Figures 6, 7).

      Finally, the authors carry out all-atom MD simulations to study the energetics of H-bond formation between Thr side chains and TMH backbone atoms.

      In summary, the reduction in TMH hydrophobicity in nuIMMs compared to mtIMMs (and to secretory pathway membrane proteins) is robust and nicely confirms earlier studies. The purported enrichment in Thr content in both nuIMMs and mtIMMs has weaker statistical support in the data: p-values are typically > 0.01 (or may be skewed by an outlier) and appear not to have been corrected for multiple testing in all cases. As is clear from the ATP6 data in Figure 5, aliphatic -> Thr substitutions explain only a fraction of the overall hydrophobicity reduction in nuIMM TMHs, and the role of other hydrophobicity-reducing mutations in gene relocation could be better defined.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study describes an increase in body growth and body composition in both mice and women. In mice, the impact on growth is mainly seen during the first pregnancy, and the changes postpartum on body composition are also different during the first and second pregnancies. The study has used various knockout models in the growth hormone axis to understand these changes as well as some gene expression analysis related to GH, IGF-1 and estrogen signalling pathways.

      Strengths:

      (1) The inclusion of various knock-out mouse models that allow for exploration of mechanisms related to the above-mentioned changes.

      (2) The investigation of gene expression of GHR, IGF-1R and ER pathways.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The study is built on the premise that the SMAC mimetic AZD5582 can reverse HIV latency via the RelB-mediated non-canonical NF-kB pathway activation; however, its molecular regulators remain undefined. The authors use an inducible BioID RelB reporter system in Jurkat N6 cells containing an integrated HIV-1 provirus and identify both the basal and the AZD5582-activated chromatin and transcriptional regulatory network of the non-canonical NF-kB pathway. To further explore the role of the identified regulators, an HIV-CRISPR latency screening approach was used, and based on enrichment or depletion of guide RNAs in the supernatant, genes that inhibited or activated virus reactivation, respectively, were identified. Genes like LRPPRC (RNA-binding protein), KAT7 (acetyltransferase), NSD2 (H3L36 methyltransferase), SIN3A (part of histone deacetylase complex), and others were identified to be essential for HIV reactivation. Nearly half of the identified factors were found to be negative regulators of reactivation, notably CBP/p300 (acetyltransferase), CHD4, USP7, UHRF1, and DNMT1. The roles of KAT7 and p300 were validated through the use of specific inhibitors. To narrow down regulators that are specific for nc NF-kB HIV reactivation vs NF-kB dependent HIV expression, a parallel CRISPR screen was performed with TNF-alpha, which reconfirmed the role of RelB, KAT7, and p300 in AZD5582-mediated HIV reactivation.

      Overall, this is a solid and well-designed study that combines complementary approaches to deliver a valuable resource.

      The study's strength lies in integrating two high-throughput approaches of RelB proximity labelling and targeted CSIPR screening to identify molecular regulators of the HIV reactivation pathway. A parallel CSIPR screen with TNF-alpha provides key insights into pathway-specific vs shared regulators of latency reversal.

      The limitation of the study, as indicated by the authors, is that the assays are based only on HIV output. Additionally, some of the identified interactors may be indirect or context-dependent and may not represent all HIV reservoirs in vivo.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Drosophila neuroblasts (NBs) serve as a well-established model for studying neural stem cell biology. The intrinsic genetic programs that control their mitotic potential throughout development have been described in remarkable detail, highlighting a series of sequentially expressed transcription factors and RNA-binding proteins that together constitute the temporal patterning system.

      However, the mechanisms that limit the number of NB divisions remain largely unknown in a specific subset of NBs known as mushroom body neuroblasts (MB NBs). Unlike other NBs, which terminate proliferation before or shortly after the onset of metamorphosis, MB NBs continue dividing until the end of metamorphosis, ceasing only just before adulthood.<br /> In this study, the authors identify the transcription factor Krüppel (Kr), a member of the conserved Krüppel-like family, as temporally regulated in MB NBs. They demonstrate that Kr knockdown during pupal stages maintains expression of the RNA-binding protein Imp and results in prolonged MB NB proliferation into adulthood. Their data suggest that Kr contributes to the timely silencing of Imp during metamorphosis. The authors further identify Kr-h1, a related transcription factor, as a potential antagonist. While Kr-h1 appears dispensable for the timely termination of MB NBs under normal conditions, its overexpression leads to their continued proliferation and tumor-like expansion in adults.

      This work provides the first evidence for a transcription factor-driven temporal regulation mechanism in MB NBs, offering new insight into the control of neural stem cell self-renewal. Given the evolutionary conservation of Krüppel-like factors, this study may have broader implications for the neural stem cell field.

      Strengths:

      (1)The study possibly identifies a new series of temporal transcription factors that are specific for mushroom body neuroblasts.

      (2) The mechanism could be conserved in vertebrates.

      Comment on revised version.

      The authors have clarified the expression status of Kr in the KrIf-1 mutant, as well as the regulatory interactions among Kr, Kr-h1, and E93. My other concerns have also been satisfactorily addressed. I congratulate the authors on this excellent work and on discovering a novel mechanism that regulates temporal progression and the termination of division in mushroom body neuroblasts.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      S. Keeley & collaborators propose a computational approach to infer time-varying latent variables directly from calcium traces (e.g., obtained with 2p imaging) without the need for deconvolving the traces into spike trains in a preliminary, independent step. Their approach rests on 1 of 3 families of latent models: GPFA, HMM and dynamical systems - which they augment with an observation model that maps latent variables to fluorescence traces. They validate their approach on simulated data as well as a single real dataset, showing that the approach improves latent variable inference and model fitting, compared to more traditional approaches (although not directly compared with the 2-step one; see below). They provide a GitHub repository with code to fit their models (which I have not tested).

      Strengths:

      The approach is sound and well-motivated. The authors are specialists of latent variable models. The manuscript is succinct, well-written and the figures are clear. I particularly liked the diversity of latent models considered, in particular latent models with continuous (GPFA) vs. discrete (HMM) dynamics, which are useful for characterizing different types of neural computations. The validation on both simulated and real data is convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness point that I see is that the approach is tested only on a single real dataset (odor response dataset). The other model fits are obtained from simulated data. While the results are convincing, it would be useful to see the approach tested on other datasets, for instance datasets with different brain areas, different behavioral conditions, or different calcium indicators. This would help assess the generality of the approach and its robustness to different experimental conditions.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors reanalyze genome assemblies of four indigenous chicken breeds from Yunnan Province together with the red jungle fowl reference (GRCg6a), and search for genes with disrupted protein-coding sequences. They catalog candidate pseudogenes and missing genes to estimate that 7,993 of the ancestral genes are dispensable. They characterize the positional distribution of pseudogenization mutations along coding sequences, their fixation in breeds, their estimated ages, and their pathway enrichments. Most results are replicated in four independent PacBio HiFi-based chicken assemblies. From the biased position of pseudogenization mutations toward CDS ends, their frequent fixation, and the phylogenetic signal in gene-loss patterns, the authors conclude that large-scale loss of function is a major driver of chicken evolution and domestication, consistent with the "less-is-more" hypothesis.

      Strengths:

      The catalog itself is a substantial resource: the comparison spans multiple closely related genomes, the main patterns are checked in a second, independently assembled set of HiFi genomes, and population resequencing data are used to ask whether the pseudogenization mutations are fixed rather than segregating. The finding that candidate loss-of-function genes are under relaxed purifying selection is well supported. The question of what gene loss contributes to domestication is worth asking, and this is a useful dataset for asking it.

      Weaknesses:

      The finding that genes carrying disruptive mutations are under relaxed selection is not particularly surprising, and the more interesting claim, that the observed patterns reflect positive selection for gene loss, is less certain in my opinion.

      (1) Relaxed purifying selection versus positive selection. The bias of pseudogenization mutations toward the two ends of coding sequences is interpreted as positive or artificial selection, along with elevated dN/dS. But the alternative, that disruptive mutations at gene ends are simply better tolerated, is equally consistent with the results. Several mechanisms would produce this pattern under relaxed constraint without positive selection per se: alternative downstream start sites that rescue 5-prime disruptions; the small fraction of protein truncated by 3-prime disruptions; and the enrichment of disordered regions at protein termini.

      (2) The functional status of the pseudogenes is assumed, not demonstrated. Genome-scale work cannot be expected to validate individual genes, but the language of the paper should reflect the candidate status of these calls. Nearly all predicted pseudogenes (~95%) were reported as transcribed in multiple tissues. It is possible for a nonfunctional coding sequence to retain intact regulatory sequences, but the observation deserves more attention in the paper, particularly because transcripts carrying premature termination codons can be the targets of nonsense-mediated decay, which is not discussed. These remain candidate pseudogenes defined by the presence of a putatively large-effect mutation (e.g. premature stop or frameshift).

      (3) What "missing" means. For a gene to be scored as completely absent, it could be genuinely deleted, or its allele could be diverged enough that annotation and orthology/mapping no longer detect it. These are different phenomena. Related, since most pseudogenization mutations are reported as fixed or nearly fixed in their populations, the history of alleles matters: it is not clear how the authors established which state is derived, and whether the reference sequence assumed to be functional is in fact the "functional" version.

      (4) Limited biological insight into domestication. The main biological interpretation rests on hierarchical clustering of dispensable genes followed by ontology enrichment within clusters (Figure 7a), with narrative connections to breed phenotypes. Only 19.6% of dispensable genes have Gene Ontology assignments, and the phenotype links are speculative. The section on the subspecies origin of the GRCg6a reference is only loosely connected to the loss-of-function story, and the population-genetic analysis supporting it is thin as described.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a comprehensive proximity proteomics analysis of Golgi- and endosome-associated CATCHR complexes, including COG, GARP, and EARP, using near-endogenously expressed TurboID-tagged subunits. The study aims to define how these tethering complexes organize distinct trafficking modules involving coiled-coil tethers, Rab-associated proteins, SNAREs, SM proteins, and other trafficking regulators. In addition to validating known associations, the authors identify CCDC186 as a candidate vesicle tether and WWOX as a potential regulator of Golgi homeostasis and glycosylation. The work provides a broad resource for understanding the spatial organization of CATCHR-associated trafficking networks. However, several conclusions require further experimental and statistical support, particularly those interpreting proximity-labeling data as physical interactions or evidence of discrete functional complexes.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript addresses an important question in membrane trafficking and provides a systematic comparison of the proximity interactomes of COG, GARP, and EARP complexes. The use of near-endogenously expressed TurboID-tagged subunits is a strength, as it may reduce artifacts associated with protein overexpression. The dataset is comprehensive and has the potential to serve as a valuable resource for investigators studying Golgi and endosomal trafficking. The comparative analysis identifies both known trafficking factors and potentially novel regulators, including CCDC186 and WWOX. The functional follow-up experiments add biological relevance to the proteomic findings and extend the study beyond descriptive mapping. Overall, the scope is well defined, and the manuscript proposes an interesting model in which CATCHR complexes act as organizing hubs for vesicle tethering and fusion.

      Weaknesses:

      A major limitation is that TurboID proximity labeling is repeatedly interpreted as evidence of physical interaction or assembly into discrete complexes, although the method primarily reports spatial proximity. The soluble GFP-TurboID control may not adequately account for enrichment caused by membrane confinement and high local protein concentration in Golgi/endosomal microdomains. Some spatial enrichment analyses do not reach statistical significance, weakening claims of compartment-specific labeling. Several low-fold-change SNARE hits are emphasized despite limited enrichment. Additional quantitative imaging is needed, including colocalization analysis of streptavidin labeling with Golgi/endosomal markers and localization of GFP-TurboID. The WWOX knockdown phenotype requires validation by rescue, independent siRNA, or CRISPR-based approaches. Several supporting data, quantifications, figure corrections, and nomenclature revisions are also needed.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors aim to build on their previous work to further define the mechanism by which GDNF can induce enteric nervous system migration and differentiation in the Holstein mouse model (Hol Tg/Tg) of Hirschsprung's disease (HSCR). They show that GDNF can cause neuronal differentiation from either Schwann cell precursors (SCP) that migrate from the periphery and/or enteric glia (or neural crest precursors located in the intestine). Surprisingly, the rescue effect of GDNF is mediated through signaling with NCAM1 rather than the canonical receptor RET, with blockade of NCAM1 significantly reducing the number of GDNF-treatment induced neurons in the distal colon of Holstein mice. The authors then perform scRNA-seq data of the colonic ENS from Holstein mice +/- GDNF, and pseudotime analysis of this data indicates the SCP downregulate SCP genes and upregulate classical enteric glial genes on their transition to becoming enteric neurons. Following this, the authors employ Dhh-Cre mice (to label SCP), Slc18a2Cre and GFAPCreERT2 (to label enteric glia) and finally Wnt1Cre2 mice (to label neural crest derived cells) to assess the kinetics and end identity of enteric neurons driven by GDNF treatment. Using these animal models, the authors propose a model by which transdifferentiation of SCP gives rise to enteric neurons first, followed by transdifferentiation of enteric glia; the resulting enteric neurons labelled by Dhh, Slc18a2 or GFAP Cres are all biased to a cholinergic lineage, raising a questions about the source of nitrergic neurons. Finally, the authors postulate that at least some nitrergic neurons come from a non-neural crest lineage in GDNF treated Hol Tg/Tg mice as they are not labelled by a Wnt1Cre2 model, while all ENS cells are labelled in three wildtype Wnt1Cre2Tg/+;R26YFP/+ mice.

      Strengths and Weaknesses:

      This work convincingly shows that NCAM1 is required for GDNF-induced rescue of the Holstein mouse model of HSCR and, along with the NCAM1 staining in human HSCR tissue, highlights the potential of this treatment even in HSCR patients with loss of function RET mutations. The major weakness of this study is in the interpretation of the mouse models; many of these models are not fully penetrant/show mosaicism in other studies (like the DhhCre and Wnt1Cre) or may not only label the specific subpopulation they present (in this case, the GfapCreERT2 and Slc18a2Cre; these genes have been shown in Schwann cells/SCP in other studies, and the expression pattern of these two genes outside of the gut at the relevant developmental timepoints are not shown). While these are unavoidable limitations with our current mouse models, the authors need to clearly acknowledge these limitations in the interpretation of their data (with the DhhCre and Wnt1Cre) or more definitively show the models are only labelling enteric glia (in the case of the Gfap and Slc18a2Cre). In addition, in some figures the authors should add untreated Hol Tg/Tg and ideally WT mice so readers can contextualise the effect of GDNF on Hol Tg/Tg mice. Finally, it appears the statistics throughout the paper are performed on using each ROI taken from n=3-5 animals - this is inappropriate, as images from the same animal are not independent samples. The statistical unit in question for every analysis performed should be 1 animal, thus the statistics should be done on the n=3-5 animals, not the n=3-11 images from 3-5 animals (which leads to an n of 6-55).

      Specific comments:

      In general I find the author's conclusions are relatively well supported, albeit a little overstated for the evidence presented in the later figures and with the need to correct the statistical analysis. For Figures 1-5, I have only minor comments, as follows.

      In Figure 1-2, the Gata4-RFP reporter is used to sort cells for scRNA-seq, and the authors get a large number of non-ENS cells so utilise Elavl4 and Sox10 expression to pull out neurons and glia to analyse. Do other putative neuronal/glial genes pull out the same cells, and can the authors find evidence of non-neural crest derived glia/neurons in this dataset? This would ensure there isn't a bias in this first analysis and strengthen the later claims respectively.

      In Figure 3, the interpretation of increased NCAM1 and pFAK would be aided by adding the MFI for the untreated Hol Tg/Tg and ideally WT mice at p10 to assess if this is a normal developmental increase or induced by GDNF treatment - I would ask the authors add at least untreated Hol Tg/Tg at p10 as authors already present this data as images in figure 3D. Similarly, it would be nice to have neuronal counts of untreated Hol Tg/Tg and WT mice presented in Figure 4c to assess if NCAM1 inhibition completely or only partially prevents the effect of GDNF.

      In the text accompanying Figure 2 and 5, the authors use a variety of markers of assign SCP or enteric glia identity to the clusters, but some of the enteric glia genes can be expressed by Schwann cells/SCP in other contexts - it is worth adding references to the genes chosen to define SCP and enteric glia so readers can understand why those were chosen and the strength of evidence for each marker. For me, with the exception of Dhh I do not find any of these genes definitive as, at least on the SCP/Schwann cell side, they have been shown to express Gfap, Slc18a2, Sox2 and single cell analysis indicates they also express Cpe. The ability for SCP/Schwann cells to express both Gfap and Slc18a2 is important for the interpretation of the upcoming experiments.

      In Figure 6, the authors state in line 213 that "quantitative analysis as a function of time revealed that GFAP+ cells in the distal colon are not all derived from Dhh-expressing SCPs on the first day of treatment"; however, the DhhCre is restricted to specific SCP subsets (Xie, Meng, et al. "Schwann cell precursors contribute to skeletal formation during embryonic development in mice and zebrafish." Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences 116.30 (2019): 15068-15073) and thus may not be labelling all SCP coming into the intestine. As far as I know there are no models that would allow labelling of all SCP without labelling enteric glia so would require the generation of a new models or techniques that is out of scope for this work - however, the authors should acknowledge the possibility of Dhh negative SCP contributing to the ENS.

      Figure 7 and 8 focuses on the contribution of Dhh+ cells, Slc18a2+ cells and cells expressing GFAP between p3-p8 to the ENS of GDNF treated Hol Tg/Tg mice. The authors first show that by p20 the number of neurons per mm2 is equivalent to those at p60, indicating p20 as an appropriate timepoint to assess the relative contribution of each pool of glia to the resulting neurons. The authors show that neurons derived from a DhhCre are detectable first, then Slc18a2, followed finally by GFAP. This data supports the authors claims that neurons first arise from Dhh+ SCP, but as I raised earlier, both Slc18a2 and GFAP can be expressed by schwann cells later in development - the authors in fact show that GFAP is in fact expressed by Dhh+ cells in figure 6, and showed with pseudotime analysis that SCP undergo a transition to Gfap+ Slc18a2+ glial cells before becoming neurons. The data presented here negates that analysis, or at least suggests some Dhh+ cells skip this step, otherwise the kinetics of neuronal differentiation would align across the 3 lines used. Could the authors address this discrepancy? For example, one addition could be to show that SCP/schwann cells on extrinsic gut innervating nerve fibres do not express Gfap or Slc18a2 at the timepoints used. In addition, their scRNA-seq analysis suggests that Gfap & Slc18a2 are expressed in the same cells, so one would expect similar kinetics in both populations - what is the overlap of GFAP staining with Slc18a2-YFP expression at the earlier stages (say p6 and p10?). Alternatively, the inducible nature of the GFAPCreERT2 means some bona fide GFAP expressing cells may be missed if the tamoxifen dose is not saturating, thus underestimating the contribution of this population to the total neuron count. As such, could the authors please show co-staining with GFAP in some induced GFAPCreERT2 samples to assess the effectiveness of this Cre. As with other figures, it would also be nice to add Holstein negative reporters at p20 as a control to assess the level of contribution each one of these cell lineages has in a normally developing animal compared to GDNF treated Hol Tg/Tg mice.

      In Figure 9, the authors show that neurons derived from labelled cells in the DhhCre-YFP or Slc18a2Cre-YFP skew strongly cholinergic (81%) compared to nitrergic (13%), but only 52% of the total neurons in GDNF treated Hol Tg/Tg mice are cholinergic, while 42% are NOS1+. The authors say that a similar trend is seen in Slc18a2Cre-YFP mice with a 'slightly higher percentage' reflecting Slc18a2 expression in neurons. However, this 'slightly higher' percentage looks to be about 40%, which is the amount expected in GDNF treated Hol Tg/Tg. I think the authors underplay the level of nitrergic neurons that are labelled in the Slc18a2Cre mice and should consider the possibility that Slc18a2+ glia can give rise to the nitrergic neurons seen in GDNF treated Holstein mice. This data also contrasts with prior reports that indicate SCP tend to become NOS1 expressing in a Ret or Ednrb loss of function HSCR model (Uesaka, Toshihiro, et al. "Enhanced enteric neurogenesis by Schwann cell precursors in mouse models of Hirschsprung disease." Glia 69.11 (2021): 2575-2590), a discrepancy worth discussing.

      In Figure 10, the authors assess the contribution of neural crest to the ENS of WT and Hol Tg/Tg mice using a Wnt1Cre2 line, and conclude there is non-neural crest contribution to the ENS of GDNF treated Hol Tg/Tg mice. This is an interesting idea and supported by a few studies the authors mention in the discussion; however, the labelling of neural crest derived cells in Wnt1Cre2 may not be fully penetrant. While this line has a well established leaky phenotype, others have reported it can have patchy recombination in the neural crest too (potentially in a background dependent manner, according to the line information on Jackson laboratories). For example, recent works shows significant mosaicism in the embryonic phase (Gandhi, S., Du, E. J., Pangilinan, E. S., & Harland, R. M. (2024). The Wnt1-Cre2 transgene causes aberrant recombination in non-neural crest cell types. bioRxiv, 2024-11.) This may not be the case in the authors home institution in a FVB background, as they show all HuCD+ and Sox+ cells overlap with the Wnt1Cre2 reporter, but the Hol Tg/Tg mice have aberrant neural crest development - this could interfere Wnt1 expression thus the effectiveness of the Wnt1Cre2, thus leading to non-labelled, but actually neural crest derived cells. It is also possible that those neurons are truly from a non-neural crest background, and the neural crest labelling tools are all flawed in one way or another - as such, I think the authors just need to discuss this alternative possibility in the discussion.

      Finally, Figure 11 shows NCAM1 expression in human tissue resections from HSCR patients. This data bolsters the idea that GDNF treatment could be an effective treatment for HSCR. The methods indicate that 3 tissue samples from HSCR patients were obtained, but staining is only shown for one - could all 3 be included, along with secondary only controls? This is important as human tissue resections are often processed many hours after removal, so are prone to higher background. It would also be interesting to include tissue from non-HSCR patients (the controls used most often in other studies are resections from anorectal malformations which are performed at approximately the same age as HSCR resections) to see if NCAM1 expression is influenced by the absence of an ENS in human patients, but I understand these samples are not always possible to obtain. If not possible, the authors could consider analysing publicly available RNA sequencing datasets to assess if RET is solely expressed in mature neuronal populations while NCAM1 is expressed by glial and neuronal populations like in their mice data.

      Overall, the authors clearly show that GDNF can drive differentiation of neurons from different glial populations through NCAM1 not RET, and supports continued effort to translate this work to the clinic as a potential therapy for HSCR patients. I am not convinced that the relative contributions of each glial subpopulation can be extrapolated from the mouse models used - this is a problem across the field, and will only be rectified with the development of new models, which is out of scope for this work. This work complements recent work showing NCAM1-GDNF signaling promotes neurogenesis in glia in Ednrb-/- mice (Mueller, Jessica L., et al. "Intramuscular enteric glia persist in Hirschsprung disease and undergo neurogenesis in response to GDNF-NCAM1 signaling." Scientific Reports 15.1 (2025): 33200), and will add to our understanding of neural development.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors were investigating the impact of introducing novel facultative bacterial endosymbionts into the pest aphid, Diuraphis noxia, to explore the possibility of using facultative symbionts as a crop protection tool. They successfully established the vertical transmission of both endosymbionts and performed a series of aphid performance and dispersal experiments together with measurement of aphid feeding on host plant health, growth, and metabolism. While most of the experiments revealed no effect of the endosymbionts, some significant treatment effects were found, showing that Rickettsiella reduced aphid dispersal, and Regiella reduced aphid population growth and feeding damage.

      Strengths:

      The team worked with two novel facultative symbionts (Rickettsiella viridis and Regiella insecticola) that they were able to successfully establish in D. noxia. The data were collected and analyzed using solid, well-described methodology.

      Weaknesses:

      While interpretation of the data is reasonable, the few experiments which revealed significant treatment effects rest on relatively small sample sizes.

      Measuring symbiont density is difficult. The authors use quantitative PCR to measure the "density" of endosymbionts relative to a host gene. This is a standard approach in the field; however, recent work has shown that endosymbionts like the aphid primary endosymbiont, Buchnera, are variably polyploid [1]; further the aphid cells that house the symbionts are also highly polyploid and variable in their ploidy [2]. It is important to understand that what is being measured when using qPCR is DNA copy number and not quantification of the number of symbiont cells. Alternative approaches to measuring symbiont density include flow cytometry [3], and SymbiQuant [4], a machine vision tool that can quantitatively characterize symbiont populations from DAPI-stained confocal images. These alternate approaches also have their limitations. Currently, there is no perfect approach to measuring symbiont density, which remains an important measure in experiments such as these. Put simply, it is important for a reader to be aware of the limitations of each approach and interpret data accordingly.

      [1] Komaki, K., and H. Ishikawa. 2000. Genomic copy number of intracellular bacterial symbionts of aphids varies in response to developmental stage and morph of their host. Insect Biochemistry and Molecular Biology 30:253-258.

      [2] Nozaki, T., and S. Shigenobu. 2022. Ploidy dynamics in aphid host cells harboring bacterial symbionts. Scientific Reports 12:9111.

      [3] Simonet, P., G. Duport, K. Gaget, M. Weiss-Gayet, S. Colella, G. Febvay, H. Charles, J. Viñuelas, A. Heddi, and F. Calevro. 2016. Direct flow cytometry measurements reveal a fine-tuning of symbiotic cell dynamics according to the host developmental needs in aphid symbiosis. Scientific Reports 6:19967.

      [4] James, E. B., X. Pan, O. Schwartz, and A. C. C. Wilson. 2022. SymbiQuant: A machine learning object detection tool for polyploid independent estimates of endosymbiont population size. Frontiers in Microbiology 13:816608.

      Impact and Significance:

      Food security and production, and pest control are major challenges facing the human population. This work contributes knowledge that will benefit the development of alternate pest control strategies in agriculture.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Knoerzer-Suckow et al. explore the mechanisms of organelle inheritance during endodyogeny in Toxoplasma gondii using an innovative dual-labeling approach to track the distribution of maternal organelles into daughter parasites. They can clearly distinguish between maternal and daughter-derived organelles using their dual-labeling Halo Tag approach. They reveal that different organelles are trafficked to daughter parasites in three broad patterns they have binned into groups. Their findings reveal a role for MyoF in the inheritance of micronemes and rhoptries, and notably, they observe that the inner membrane complex (IMC) is not recycled. Instead, the IMC undergoes a pronounced relocalization to the posterior of the maternal cell, where it is likely targeted for degradation.

      Strength:

      The data surrounding their MyoF knockdown experiments, IMC degradation, and trafficking of MIC2 after auxin washout are convincing. These data add to the knowledge of how organelle inheritance occurs in T. gondii, increasing the field's understanding of endodyogeny.

      Weakness:

      The inability to achieve higher temporal resolution due to phototoxicity precluded tracking of single micronemes, thus it remains possible that some micronemes follow a path similar to rhoptries and enter daughter cells before development of the residual body while others are recycled via the residual body.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      The authors sought to determine when the dorsal hippocampus and mPFC are causally required during a delayed spatial working memory task. Using temporally precise optogenetic silencing in mice performing a delayed cue-guided T-maze task, they tested the effects of transient perturbations during distinct behavioral epochs. Contrary to the common view that these regions are primarily required during the delay period to maintain working memory representations, they report that silencing during the delay had little effect on performance, whereas perturbation during the early phase of central-arm traversal consistently impaired performance. The authors conclude that hippocampal and prefrontal contributions to memory-guided behavior are dynamically engaged during active navigation rather than passive maintenance of information.

      The study has several strengths. The behavioral paradigm is carefully designed to dissociate cue, delay, and movement epochs, allowing temporally specific causal manipulations. The systematic comparison of multiple task epochs represents a major strength and provides compelling evidence that the behavioral effects of perturbation are epoch-dependent. The authors also include several important controls, including stimulation during multiple task phases, a longer-delay condition to dissociate task epoch from elapsed time since cue presentation, and analyses of movement trajectories and perseverative behavior that provide additional insight into the nature of the behavioral deficits. Together, these experiments convincingly demonstrate that transient dorsal hippocampal and mPFC perturbations have markedly different behavioral consequences depending on when they occur within a trial.

      The evidence is generally solid and supports the primary finding that perturbations during early navigation produce larger impairments than perturbations during the delay period. However, some aspects of the broader interpretation are less well supported. Most notably, the study lacks a non-memory control task, such as a visually guided version of the maze, making it difficult to determine whether the observed deficits specifically reflect disruption of memory-guided behavior or more general impairments in action selection, behavioral flexibility, or movement planning. The observed increase in perseverative responding and delayed commitment to a turn are consistent with either interpretation. In addition, several experimental conditions rely on relatively small numbers of animals, limiting confidence in some negative findings, particularly for the longer-delay and later-run manipulations. Finally, while the Discussion proposes that hippocampal-prefrontal circuits become engaged during the transformation of stored information into action, this mechanistic interpretation remains speculative because no neural recordings accompany the causal manipulations.

      Overall, the authors achieve their primary aim of demonstrating that the behavioral consequences of dorsal hippocampal and mPFC silencing depend strongly on task epoch. The data convincingly support the conclusion that these structures are more vulnerable to perturbation during early navigation than during the brief delay period used in this task. The broader conclusion that these findings redefine when hippocampal-prefrontal circuits support working memory should be interpreted more cautiously, as alternative explanations involving action selection or behavioral state remain plausible in the absence of additional control tasks.

      The findings are potentially important because they challenge the common assumption that hippocampal and prefrontal contributions to delayed-response tasks are centered on delay-period maintenance. Instead, the work supports the idea that these circuits may be recruited when remembered information is translated into goal-directed behavior. This framework is broadly consistent with recent distributed models of working memory and provides an interesting perspective that may help reconcile previous studies reporting effects during different task phases. The behavioral paradigm and temporally precise perturbation approach should also be useful for future studies aimed at dissecting the dynamic contributions of hippocampal-prefrontal circuits during memory-guided behavior.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Chovanec and Yin used their newly developed sci-L3-Strand-seq powerful method to characterize SCE after Cas9 cleavage in a human cell line, using either a single target site or an element repeated 237 times in the genome. SCE are often neglected in DNA repair analyses since they are « genetically silent ». Interestingly, the authors found enrichment of SCE at unique Cas9 sites, but only a modest enrichment of SCE when Cas9 targets 237 sites in the genome. The genetic control of SCE formation at Cas9 sites is not deliberately addressed in this paper. However, the authors found that targeted SCE seem to be enriched in a subpopulation of cells, particularly « permissive » for SCE, but the determinants of such a population are unknown. Finally, the power of the sci-L3-Strand-seq allowed the authors to characterize a specific type of SCE based on the analysis of reciprocal daughter-cell pairs' genomes that is associated with a specific type of chromosomal rearrangement compatible with the ones observed in HR defective BRCA1/2 deficient cells.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Analysis of immune receptor repertoires (IRR) needs to take into account the underlying diversity of the repertoires analysed, and the limitations inherent to the technologies used to measure IRRs: limited sampling depth relative to total number of cells and clonotypes, and experimental noise. In this work, Kitanovski and colleagues present ClustIRR. ClustIRR proposes to improve the analysis of immune receptor repertoires, specifically TCRs in the presented applications, by performing two steps: (1) consistent and comparable sequence clustering across repertoires, to account for sparsity of sampling, and (2) estimation of sequence clusters of interest using a Bayesian approach. They showcase ClustIRR performance in 3 scenarios: detection of antigen-specific T cells in a peptide-stimulation, detection of T cells responding to immunotherapy in the context of lung cancer, and analysis of mouse and human T cell repertoires.

      Strengths:

      (1) The cluster occupancy calculation presents an important conceptual framework which would be of interest and useful to the TCR repertoire field as it smoothly integrates information over a set of experimental conditions or time points. The application to longitudinal TCR sequencing datasets is particularly interesting, and could easily be extended to BCR sequencing datasets. Moreover, the calculation can be performed with any user-defined grouping of TCR clones, which allows for usage of other existing methods as the user wishes.

      (2) The results of the human and mouse repertoires provide a very insightful argument for the use of metaclones as opposed to single clones for analysis of repertoires compared to single clones.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While ClustIRR provides an interesting framework to analyse TCR sequencing datasets, it is not clear whether ClustIRR can perform more informative sequence clustering than state-of-the-art methods. A comparison of obtained clusters with existing methods would provide a useful benchmark. Moreover, computation time scales quite fast with the number of sequences included. This is a major limitation, as the authors state that a time of 2.5 hours is required for clustering of ~100,000 sequences, a number of clones that can easily be reached when analysing multiple samples together.

      (2) The authors claim in the abstract that ClustIRR is integrated with gene expression data. However, in the results presented, the gene expression and TCR sequencing data are analysed separately, and the results are simply correlated. No real integration in the analysis exists for these two data types. The claim should be removed from the abstract. Moreover, the differential gene expression section, while it presents interesting results, lacks clarity and transparency. Presentation of the data in more transparent ways (such as showing violin plots or clustering on the UMAP) would increase the strength of the claims.

      (3) The score calculation does not seem to be normalized to take into account the underlying diversities of CDR3a and CDR3b. While still a useful metric for sequence clustering, I worry about the impact of the lack of normalisation on the conclusion that the "alpha chain drives functional convergence through germline bias". The observation that clustering is mostly driven by the J gene is known and expected (https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC5553937/), as the J gene has lower diversity and greater overlap with the definition of CDR3. Because CDR3a is lower diversity generally from CDR3b, it will likely dominate the sequence similarity signal. Thus, it will appear that Ja drives the signal. The authors do try to address this by looking at clusters driven by CDR3b similarity. However, a low number of CDR3b-driven clusters is consistent with the similarity definition. I wonder if instead the appropriate control for this analysis would be to run the same analysis disregarding CDR3a sequence altogether, and quantify whether similar species-specific DCJ are identified when only CDR3b similarity is used? Absence or reduction of species-specific clustering would confirm that the effect is driven by the CDR3a sequence.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents a comprehensive meta-analysis of choice probability (CP), a classic metric of the relationship between single-neuron responses and an animal's perceptual judgment. The authors compiled data from 59 macaque electrophysiology studies and identified several factors that consistently influence CP magnitude, including neuronal sensitivity, brain area, stimulus duration, and task type. These results provide evidence that helps settle several long-standing debates about how CP should be interpreted.

      Strengths:

      This work is a rare example of meta-analysis in macaque electrophysiology, focusing on an important and long-debated metric, choice probability (CP), in the study of sensory and decision-making mechanisms. CP has been measured across many studies, but its interpretation remains contentious because it depends on numerous task and recording factors in addition to sensory and decision-making mechanisms. Individual macaque studies also typically include few subjects, and CP effects are generally small, which prevents any single study from drawing strong conclusions about general patterns. The authors identified an ideal use case for meta-analysis and combined fragmented findings from individual primate studies into a coherent picture of which factors matter most for CP and which do not. This work can also serve as a guide for future meta-analyses of macaque electrophysiology data.

      Weaknesses:

      While the survey and discussion of CP's interpretation are comprehensive, the paper would benefit from a clearer conclusion on why measuring CP remains important and what future directions could make CP more useful for revealing sensory and decision-making mechanisms.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this study Wu & Turrigiano investigate an ethologically relevant form of associative learning (conditioned taste aversion-CTA) and its extinction in the Shank3 KO mouse model of ASD. They also examine the underlying circuits in anterior insular cortex (AIC) simultaneously, using two-photon calcium imaging through GRIN lens. They report that Shank3 KO mice learn CTA slower and suggest that this is mediated by a reduction in tastant-stimulus activity suppression of AIC neurons and reduced signal-to-noise ratio due to increased noise correlations in AIC neurons. Interestingly, once Shank3 KO mice do acquire CTA, they extinguish the aversive memory more rapidly than wild-type. This accelerated extinction is accompanied by a faster loss of neuronal and population-level taste selectivity and coding in the AIC compared to WT mice.

      This is an important study that uses in vivo methods to assess circuit dysfunction in a mouse model of ASD, related to sensory perception valence (in this case taste). The study is well executed, the data are of high quality, and the analyses procedures are detailed. Furthermore, the behavioural paradigm is well thought, particularly the approach for assessing extinction through repeated retrieval sessions (T1-T5), which effectively tests discrimination between saccharin and water rather than relying solely on lick counts or total consumption as a measure of extinction. Finally, the statistical tests used are appropriate and justified.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have addressed all comments satisfactorily.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Zappit is an open-source implementation of arbitrary-access laser-scanning optogenetics for manipulation of neuronal activity in mice. As the method requires expertise ranging from optics, hardware control and programming, the authors make the point that this powerful strategy is underutilized in the field, and put forward a well-documented modular hardware and software platform aligned to the Allen Mouse Brain Atlas aimed at enabling the larger scientific community to use this approach (democratizing) for controlling cortical activity during behavior in mice.

      The authors favor a galvanometric approach to laser targeting. The system is inexpensive, easy to build, well-documented and user friendly (Matlab based GUI and GitHub repository). The photo-stimulation laser is directed into an X-Y galvo scanner targeted to the specimen using a dichroic mirror and focused on the sample using a Plössl lens as scan lens which is also used as an objective. The scan lens/objective images the specimen onto a camera via tube lens (also a Plössl lens) in a 0.5X magnification ensuring to fit the extent of the mouse brain onto the camera sensor (USB-3 Basler acA120-40um).

      The authors report short and reproducible onsite time (~ 0.5 ms) and block (mask) the stimulation source using the laser analog control (~0.5 ms). The system is reliable, aiming at up to 20 stimulation sites per sequence considered as quasi-simultaneous (10 ms). They minimize rebound by gentle ramping down of stimulation over 250 ms.

      The system is fast to calibrate by mapping scanner positions to pixel space in the camera space and mapping stereotaxic coordinate onto the image of the exposed skull. The theoretical x-y PSF is 70 µm (measured ~90µm) while the authors make the point that due to scattering the photo-stimulation spot size (lateral extent) is about 1 mm in diameter. This is what they also observe in electrophysiological recordings using silicon probes. The effective radius of inactivation depends on laser power, but was about 1 mm for laser powers (1-2-4 mW) on which the authors observed significant behavioral perturbations - in several tasks: 1) a delayed response somatosensory discrimination, 2) a visual detection task assessing changes in temporal frequency of a drifting visual stimulus; and 3) a visual discrimination (International Brain Laboratory task) in which mice were tasked to report the location of visual stimuli by turning a wheel. As proof of principle, the authors used a photo-stimulation set composed of 52 bilateral sites positioned at 0.5 mm interval covering a large network of frontal, motor and somatosensory cortical areas. Indeed, photo-inhibition of frontal motor cortex sites produced robust increases in reaction time. In contrast, stimulation at other motor and somatosensory sites produced modest, but significant decreases in reaction times.

      While the approach is not novel, it does serve the need of better disseminating this technique in the research community. Overall, the Zappit is well-documented and easy to build and use, and will have impact in increasing robust use of site directed photo-stimulation (exciting/inhibiting ensembles of neurons at particular ~1 mm size regions of interests across the dorsal surface of the brain). The authors also note that the axial resolution is ~1.5 mm.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their manuscript, Huifang Yan and colleagues perform RNA-seq (CEL-seq) and ATAC-seq experiments to profile the transcriptome and chromatin accessibility of sponge larvae across larval competence, settlement and early postlarval development. Amphimedon, the sponge species that they use, is amenable to lab experiments and can therefore be a convenient model for experimenting with this otherwise difficult to assay ecological parameters and cues. They had previously observed that light conditions (diminished light) at sunset are Sucritical for larvae to enter a pre-settlement stage and prime them for settlement and metamorphosis. In this paper they report that these conditions induce a gain of accessibility in many genes, including transcription factors, and that altering these conditions by providing continuous light at sunset affects this reprogramming event.

      Strengths:

      The above is a very interesting observation, one that the authors speculate that could have a broader significance and be a theme in many more larvae. I agree with the authors that this is an important finding and I think that the paper will be interesting for the broad readership of eLife. If this is the case, the authors open up a new theme of chromatin regulation, extensively studied in mammalian contexts, but severely understudied in pretty much every other context.

      Weaknesses:

      I think however that their paper often reports the data in a difficult to follow way, and that other sorts of analyses would have made the results more accessible for the broad readership.

  6. Sep 2026
    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents an engineered 3-step circuit in E. coli that combines toggle-switch-based symmetry breaking with quorum-sensing interactions to generate colony-scale spatial patterns. The work is interesting as a synthetic circuit integration study and as a demonstration of self-organized patterning across physically separated colonies. The authors provided a compelling demonstration of the characterization/tuning of parts to guide the overall system engineering. A notable strength is the demonstration that a single circuit can generate a range of self-organized spatial patterns across separate colonies.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed my previously raised issues.

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    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their paper, the authors propose using dynamic MEGA-sLASER acquisitions to track the incorporation of ¹³C from uniformly ¹³C-labeled glucose into glutamate(+glutamine) and GABA pools. This approach enables the direct and simultaneous investigation of excitatory and inhibitory neurotransmission and metabolism without requiring a ¹³C radiofrequency coil. While the authors' goals and efforts are commendable, the work has several significant limitations.

      Strengths:

      Use of excellent hardware (¹H cryoprobe, ultra-high-field MRI scanners); Ambitious objectives.

      Weaknesses:

      MRS data analysis requires improvement; Small cohort sizes; No demonstration that the proposed acquisition scheme is superior in terms of robustness, accuracy, or performance.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Determining the ways in which Alzheimer's disease (AD) impacts the neural instantiations of memory is a fundamental aim of neuroscience and likely to be critical to understanding and treating disease progression. Previous work has highlighted how the hippocampal spatial code - typically context-specific - fails to discriminate between different environments in rodent models of AD. Here, Wang et al. leverage new analyses in a rat model of AD to test whether this deficit in 'remapping' reflects an impairment in intrinsic temporal coding. The authors find that the intrinsic temporal code of AD rats does come to effectively discriminate between environments (albeit more weakly than their wild-type counterparts), despite persistent impairments in remapping.

      Strengths:

      One of the major strengths of this work is its focus on distinguishing between two different types of neural impairments in AD. While previous work has highlighted impairments in remapping, these impairments could be due to: (a) impairments in intrinsic neural computations, or (b) impairments in the way these intrinsic neural computations are anchored to the world. The author's evidence supports the latter, with important implications for the nature of these impairments.

      Weaknesses:

      A handful of weaknesses could be addressed to strengthen this work. Firstly, a number of key measures of place code quality and behavioral quality between groups are omitted. Given that the author's interpretations rely on comparisons between groups and often use decoding analyses for central conclusions, indicating whether the recordings are comparable between groups in terms of behaviors and cell counts would be helpful for the reader. Even better, matching cell counts between groups for decoding analyses could ensure that outcomes are not driven by this potential confound.

      Another weakness that is worth addressing involves the pivotal comparison between time-averaged remapping (Figure 4) and intrinsic temporal code discrimination (Figure 3). For temporal code discrimination, the analysis relies on comparisons between pairs of epochs (e.g. from A1B1 to A2B2), while for remapping, the comparison averages together epochs (A1+A2 and B1+B2). As a result, these comparisons are characterizing two slightly different things. Given that this is a key comparison for this paper (cofiring evolves to discriminate contexts while the spatial code does not), I think it would be important to demonstrate that remapping between pairs of epochs also stagnates to more closely mirror the cofiring analysis.

      A final weakness is the sharp wave ripple (SWR) ensemble analysis. Here, the authors extract population vectors during SWR (SWR-PVs) during rest in both WT and AD rats. Next, they compare the extent to which SWR-PVs on AVERAGE resemble other SWR-PVs for that epoch. The authors report that this measure increases with experience in AD rats but not wild-type (WT) rats. While the authors interpret this to mean that SWR-PVs come to be more reliable with experience in AD rats, it could alternatively mean that SWR-PVs become less diverse or 'muddier' with experience, while SWR-PVs in WT rats continue to represent diverse trajectories. To make this analysis compelling, a better measure might be something that quantifies the diversity or content of SWR-PVs and something that quantifies similarity between each SWR-PV and the most similar other SWR-PVs.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes an interesting study (preceded by a pilot study) that combined computational modeling with two tasks to try to tease apart state, trait, and vulnerability-related effects of depression. Specifically, the authors administered a bandit task and a gambling task to healthy controls, currently depressed adults, formerly depressed adults, and adults at familial risk of depression, and then used a suite of computational models to identify group differences in key model parameters. Key results included the detection of lower punishment learning rates (during the bandit task) in the remitted depressed group, which the authors hypothesize may be a compensatory mechanism to counteract the over-reaction to negative feedback that often characterizes depression (and indeed, punishment learning rates were elevated in currently depressed adults). Among non-depressed adults, lower punishment learning rates were associated with more apathy and anhedonia. The remitted depressed group also showed lower lapse rates in the bandit task. In the gambling task, the inverse temperature parameter was elevated in currently depressed adults and in adults at high familial risk for depression; exactly how to interpret this last result seems unclear. This is a revised manuscript, and from what I can see it appears that the authors were responsive to earlier comments.

      Strengths (and summary of weaknesses):

      I think the study has several noteworthy strengths. Testing four groups is a strength, as there is great interest in teasing apart risk factors of depression vs. "scars" of the illness, and the use of unmedicated individuals removes a common confound. The work is hypothesis-driven, the modeling is sophisticated, and the paper is well-written. Moreover, as the authors note, modeling allowed the authors to identify group differences that were not evident in raw behavioral analyses.

      However, I think the manuscript could be further improved because some aspects of the methodology are a bit confusing and/or do not seem optimal. I list these issues in the comments below, but to briefly summarize: (a) I did not understand why the authors estimated separate reward and punishment values for each bandit; (b) the rationale for Bayesian Model Averaging could be strengthened; (c) examining relationships between model parameters and symptom scores only in the control group is suboptimal given the goal to better understand depression; and (d) the group differences in inverse temperature seem like they may depend on potential outliers. I think addressing these concerns would improve the paper and ensure that the study has a strong impact on the field.

      Details regarding weaknesses/concerns:

      (1) I found a basic aspect of the 4-arm bandit modeling confusing - namely, the use of separate reward and punishment value estimates (see equations 1 and 2 in the supplement). The participants are choosing among the bandits (presumably) based on value estimates for each bandit. Clearly, delivery of rewards and punishments affect those estimates, but it is not clear to me why or how there are separate value terms for rewards and punishments; typically, rewards and punishments influence one overall value estimate per bandit. Can the authors clarify? (I see that similar models were used in references 29 and 30, but additional clarification for readers of the current manuscript would be helpful)

      (2) Bayesian Model Averaging (BMA) is new to me and may be new to many readers, and it would be helpful to provide a stronger rationale for the approach. The manuscript argues that model selection amounts to a "winner-takes-all" approach that may introduce bias; maybe, but typically the goal is to figure out which mechanism(s) best explain behavior, and so winner-takes-all is often appropriate. My limited understanding is that BMA is often used when prediction-rather than mechanistic understanding-is the goal. Why is BMA the right choice here?

      (3) The authors performed a confirmatory factor analysis on questionnaire data from healthy controls out of concern that extreme scores in the other groups might bias the factor structure; consequently, they can only relate model parameters to their latent factors in the healthy controls. This does not seem optimal. While the negative relationships between punishment learning rate and both anhedonia and apathy in controls are interesting, the controls are not struggling with anhedonia or apathy. It would be valuable to know if similar relationships obtain in the other groups, particularly because this would speak to the study's goal of distinguishing between risk for depression and state/trait aspects of depression.

      (4) Figure 5 gives the impression that group differences in inverse temperature may depend on potential outliers in the relative and MDD groups. Is that correct?

      (5) The paper notes a group difference in IQ as estimated from the WTAR, and looking at Table 1 it appears that the group difference is driven by a lower WTAR score in the healthy volunteers (HV) from the pilot study. First things first: the score in the HV group is too low to be a standardized WTAR score. Like IQ scores, standardized WTAR scores typically have a mean around 100; scores for the four Study 2 groups look alright, but the Study 1 mean score of 40 is much too low. Can the authors clarify?

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims to characterize the three-dimensional organization of primary cilia in the postnatal mouse growth plate and to determine how ciliary prevalence, length, position, and orientation vary across anatomical regions and stages of chondrocyte differentiation. The authors combine volumetric imaging and automated image analysis with conditional disruption of IFT88, limb immobilization, and bulk transcriptomics. The work provides a valuable anatomical dataset and identifies several interesting spatial patterns, including increased ciliation in the lateral resting zone, longer cilia in hypertrophic chondrocytes, and, most notably, a non-random orientation of ciliary projections despite a much broader distribution of centriole positions.

      The descriptive evidence is largely solid, and the imaging dataset should be useful to researchers studying primary cilia, skeletal development, and tissue mechanobiology. However, the evidence is incomplete for several of the central mechanistic conclusions. In particular, the current analyses do not establish that ciliary orientation is uncoupled from basal-body position, and they leave unresolved how ciliary orientation relates to cell orientation. The immobilization experiment also supports a narrower conclusion than the proposed cell-intrinsic orientation program, while the final model linking ciliary angle to multidirectional signal integration remains speculative. Overall, the authors succeed in identifying an interesting and reproducible anatomical pattern, but the mechanism underlying that pattern remains largely open.

      Strengths:

      A major strength is the scale and anatomical context of the imaging. Quantifying thousands of cilia and tens of thousands of centrioles in three dimensions while preserving information about growth-plate zone and position across the limb is technically demanding. This allows the authors to identify regional differences that would be lost in dissociated cells or bulk tissue measurements.

      The study also provides several potentially useful observations. Ciliation is higher in the lateral periphery, particularly in the resting zone, cilia are longer in hypertrophic chondrocytes, and ciliary projections show a reproducible non-random orientation. The latter is the most interesting result of the study and provides a useful foundation for asking how organelle orientation is established within a developing tissue.

      I also appreciated that the authors place these observations in several biological contexts rather than stopping at a descriptive atlas. IFT88 disruption alters ciliation and growth-plate cell organization, while immobilization changes growth-plate dimensions, cell morphology and orientation, and the transcriptome even though the measured ciliary properties remain comparatively stable. These perturbations give the anatomical observations useful biological context.

      Weaknesses

      The main concern is that the claim that ciliary orientation is uncoupled from basal-body position is not directly demonstrated. The manuscript shows that centriole positions are broadly distributed and, separately, that ciliary projections have a preferred tissue-level orientation. Different population-level distributions, however, do not establish independence within individual cells. For example, basal bodies could be broadly distributed while their position determines which of two opposite directions along a common tissue axis the cilium adopts. This possibility is particularly relevant because Centrin-2 labels both centrioles, whereas only one serves as the basal body. The current data therefore support a difference between the population distributions of position and orientation, but not yet the stronger claim that the two are uncoupled.

      A related gap is the relationship between cell orientation and ciliary orientation. The manuscript measures both, and cell orientation changes with growth-plate region, IFT88 deletion, and immobilization, while ciliary orientation appears relatively stable. Yet the two measurements are never directly related within the same cells. It is therefore unclear whether cilia adopt a reproducible angle relative to the major axis of their own cell, whether this relationship changes between the center and periphery, or whether changes in cell organization can occur independently of local ciliary alignment. This seems important for interpreting the tissue-level orientation pattern.

      The statistical treatment of orientation also deserves caution. These are circular or spherical measurements, yet much of the analysis relies on linear distributions and Kolmogorov-Smirnov tests. This is particularly problematic around the 0{degree sign}/360{degree sign} boundary, where values near 350{degree sign} and 30{degree sign} are geometrically close but appear separated in a linear representation. The manuscript also does not clearly distinguish between a preferred axis, where opposite directions are equivalent, and a preferred polarity, where one direction is favored. In addition, thousands of cilia are nested within a much smaller number of mice, so the apparent statistical power should not be driven primarily by pooled object counts. Given that regional differences are a central theme of the paper, it would also be useful to know more clearly whether the preferred axis or the strength of the orientation bias differs between the middle and lateral growth plate at the animal level. I also could not identify a formal comparison of the centriole or ciliary distributions with an appropriate uniform circular or spherical null. The reported tests mainly compare zones and regions, so the claims that centriole position is non-preferential and ciliary orientation is non-random are not yet statistically established in the form presented.

      The IFT88 conditional knockout is not carried through to the principal orientation question. The authors examine cell size, cell-axis organization, ciliation, and cilium length, but do not report whether the remaining cilia retain the preferred orientation or whether centriole positioning changes. Given the central role of this genetic perturbation in the manuscript, this leaves the genetic and orientation arms of the study somewhat disconnected.

      Finally, the immobilization experiment and the mechanistic interpretation should be separated more carefully. Only four animals were analyzed in the offloaded and contralateral conditions, and medial and lateral regions were averaged because of the small sample size. The experiment shows that the established ciliary orientation remains relatively stable over a two-week postnatal interval despite clear changes elsewhere in the tissue. It does not exclude a role for mechanical forces earlier in establishing the axis, nor does a nonsignificant difference with four animals demonstrate equivalence. Similarly, the proposed cell-intrinsic orientation program and the final "single-axis blindness" model are interesting hypotheses, but the study does not yet identify what establishes the axis or how the observed ciliary angle would alter sensitivity to a force or biochemical gradient. Those ideas are worth discussing, but they should remain clearly separated from the observations directly supported by the data.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This review describes how cryo-EM is moving RNA structural biology from the determination of static structures toward the characterization of conformational ensembles. Eight case studies spanning self-splicing introns, riboswitches, viral RNA elements and synthetic assemblies show how cryo-EM has captured folding intermediates, hinge-mediated domain motions and ligand-dependent switching, and the authors pair these examples with practical guidance on construct design, sample preparation, vitrification and heterogeneity analysis. The argument that conformational heterogeneity is a source of mechanistic information, rather than a limitation, is well supported, and Table 1 will be a useful reference for laboratories entering the field. The manuscript is timely and of broad interest, and I recommend publication after minor revision.

      (1) Scaffold-based structure determination (page 14, lines 5-9). The section on chimeric RNAs presents the scaffold strategies as a single group and cites Haack et al. (2025) and Langeberg & Kieft (2023) in one parenthetical, so individual results are not attributed to their sources. The distinction between these studies is substantive. Earlier scaffolds based on the Tetrahymena group I intron (Langeberg & Kieft, 2023) or on RNA origami (Sampedro Vallina et al., Nucleic Acids Res. 51:4613-4624, 2023) resolved the appended RNAs at approximately 4.4-5 Å. Haack et al. (2025) reported the first RNA scaffold to yield a high-resolution structure of the target itself, resolving the ligand-binding pocket of the thiamine pyrophosphate (TPP) riboswitch at 2.5 Å and extending nucleotide-level cryo-EM analysis to small RNAs that had previously been intractable. I ask the authors to attribute each result to its source and to state explicitly that Haack et al. (2025) achieved the first high-resolution structure of a scaffolded target RNA. Because the same study captured the ligand-free TPP riboswitch in an open, Y-shaped conformation, a direct example of the ligand-dependent switching that is central to this review, the TPP riboswitch should also appear in the riboswitch section (page 8, lines 15-36), together with the fluoride riboswitch of Langeberg & Kieft (2023).

      (2) Page 6, lines 8-14. Self-splicing introns are described collectively as evolutionary ancestors of the spliceosome that reside in pre-mRNA transcripts. The proposed ancestral relationship to spliceosomal introns and snRNAs applies to group II introns. Group I introns, including the Tetrahymena intron, which interrupts a pre-rRNA, initiate splicing with an exogenous guanosine and are not considered spliceosomal precursors.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This paper explored the role of beta rhythms in the context of spatial learning and mPFC-hippocampal dynamics. The authors characterized mPFC and hippocampal beta oscillations, examining how their coordination and their spectral profiles related to learning and prefrontal neuronal firing. Rats performed two tasks, a Y-maze and F-maze, with the F-maze task being more cognitively demanding. Across learning, prefrontal beta oscillation power increased while beta frequency decreased. In contrast, hippocampal beta power and beta frequency decreased. This was particularly for the well-performed and well-learned Y-maze paradigm. The authors identified the timing of beta oscillations, revealing an interesting shift in beta burst timing relative to reward entry as learning progressed. They also discovered an interesting population of prefrontal neurons that were tuned to both prefrontal beta and hippocampal sharp-wave ripple events, revealing a spectrum of SWR-excited and SWR-inhibited neurons that were differentially phase locked to prefrontal beta rhythms.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript presents a large common garden experiment across Sweden using solely local germplasm. Additionally, there is a collection of selection experiments that begin investigating the factors shaping fecundity in these populations. This provides an impressive amount of data and analysis investigating the underlying factors involved. Together, this helps support the data showing that fluctuations and interactions are key components determining Arabidopsis fitness and are more broadly applicable across plant and non-plant species.

      Strengths:

      The field trials are well conducted with extensive effort and sampling. Similarly while the genetic analysis is complex it is well conducted and reflects the complexity of dealing with population structure that may be intricately linked to adaptive structure. This has no real solution and the option of presenting results with and without correction is likely the only appropriate option.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses a fundamental but underexplored aspect of homeotic gene function: how regulators of cell identity act during late stages of organ development. The authors take advantage of layer-specific mutants of the MADS-box gene PhDEF in Petunia hybrida to dissect the roles of this floral identity regulator in the epidermis and mesophyll. By combining single-cell RNA sequencing with ChIP-seq analyses in wild-type and mutant chimeric petals, the work demonstrates that, although PhDEF is expressed at comparable levels in both petal layers, it binds to and regulates a substantially larger and more layer-enriched set of genes in the epidermis than in the mesophyll. The identification of both layer-specific and shared PhDEF binding sites supports a model in which pre-existing layer identity modulates the regulatory output of homeotic transcription factors.

      Major comments from review at Review Commons:

      Dissecting PhDEF binding preferences in the epidermis versus the mesophyll using the star and wico mutants is a clever and powerful approach. However, conclusions involving cell identity should be drawn with caution for two reasons. First, cell identities appear to be altered in the mutants: scRNA-seq data suggest that even cells assigned to the same cluster can be molecularly distinct across genotypes. For example, the transcriptomes of wild-type epidermis and mesophyll are highly similar (Pearson correlation R = 0.94), yet both show lower correlation with epidermal cells from star or wico petals. These results raise questions such as are the cells identified as epidermal cells really strictly epidermal in the mutants? Do you need to take into consideration cell composition of the mutants when you do differential expression analysis? Second, PhDEF is expressed in both epidermal and mesophyll clusters in all genotypes, albeit at different levels and in fewer cells in the mutants. As a result, the ChIP-seq profiles should be interpreted as cell type-enriched rather than cell type-specific. And there are a few things that need clarification:

      a) Protoplasting and tissue dissection analyses suggest that mesophyll cells constitute more than 80% of the cells in wild-type petals, whereas the scRNA-seq data indicate a substantially lower proportion. Could this discrepancy reflect technical biases in cell recovery or capture efficiency, or issues related to cell identity assignment during clustering and annotation? Notably, the scRNA-seq data from star and wico petals show mesophyll proportions close to 80%. Is this difference due to an increased abundance of mesophyll cells in the mutants, or could it instead reflect differences in transcriptomic separability? In wild-type petals, the epidermal and mesophyll transcriptomes are highly correlated and express similar numbers of genes, with epidermal cells distinguished mainly by higher expression of a subset of genes. This raises the possibility that mesophyll cells in the wild type occupy a more plastic or less differentiated transcriptional state and may therefore be misclassified as epidermal cells, whereas disruption of regulatory mechanisms in the mutants enhances transcriptional divergence and alters cell clustering outcomes.

      b) Cluster 0 appears to show internal heterogeneity, as the expression patterns of KCS3 and LLE2 are largely mutually exclusive. Do these patterns reflect the presence of distinct epidermal cell types within the limb that are currently grouped into a single cluster?

      c) Clusters 0 and 7 both exhibit high expression of pigmentation genes, while cluster 7 additionally shows strong enrichment for cell division genes. Are cell cycle genes the primary features distinguishing these two clusters? If cell cycle effects are regressed out, would cluster 7 merge with cluster 0, potentially yielding a more continuous cell state trajectory and helping to resolve the pattern noted in point (b)?

      d) Pearson correlation is largely driven by highly expressed genes and may therefore be insensitive to changes in cell identity markers. The conclusions that the less clear separation of mesophyll and epidermal cells in star is due to altered cell identity would be more convincing if supported by independent validation, such as in situ hybridization or reporter analyses, to directly visualize molecular alterations in the relevant cell types when comparing wild-type and mutant tissues.

      Significance:

      Overall, this work significantly advances our understanding of late homeotic gene function. It establishes compelling evidence for how developmental context constrains transcription factor activity and offers broadly relevant insights for studies of organ patterning. The combination of genetic mosaics with single-cell and chromatin-level analyses represents a powerful and generalizable strategy that will be of interest to both plant developmental biologists and researchers studying transcriptional regulation.

      My expertise: single cell genomics, chromatin biology and plant development.

      Comments on latest version:

      The authors have addressed my concerns and questions. And I agree with your assessment of "valuable" for significance and "solid" for strength of evidence.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Davis and colleagues aimed to identify the molecular sensors and signaling cascade that enable collecting lymphatic vessels to increase their spontaneous contraction frequency in response to intraluminal pressure (pressure-induced chronotropy). They tested whether the process is similar to blood vessel myogenic constriction by relying on cation channels (TRPC6, TRPM4, PKD2, PIEZO1, etc.) or instead require the activation of G-protein-coupled receptors (presumably mechanosensitive GNAQ/GNA11-coupled receptors), using ex vivo pressure myography of mouse popliteal lymphatics, smooth muscle-specific conditional knockouts, quantitative PCR validation, and single-cell RNA sequencing for target prioritization. The authors convincingly demonstrate that pressure-induced chronotropy does not require the cation channels implicated in arterial myogenic tone but is blunted by deletion of GNAQ/GNA11 or IP3 receptor 1, supporting a model of GPCR > IP3 > Ca2+ release > Cl⁻ channel activation > depolarization. The core conclusion is robust. The work redefines lymphatic pacemaking as G-protein-coupled receptor-dependent mechanotransduction, distinct from arterial mechanisms, and provides a genetically validated toolkit that is useful for studying lymphatic function and dysfunction.

      Strengths:

      (1) The data are of high quality and highly sensitive functional readouts

      (2) The systematic genetic targeting is a major strength that overcomes pharmacological artifacts

      (3) Careful quantitative analyses of frequency-pressure slopes

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed my comments. No additional comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Elley and colleagues describes experiments on the effects of synthetic torpor on ex vivo heart ischemia. The key aspect of the study was the use of viral-vector mediated manipulation of the hypothalamic medial preoptic area (MPA) in rats. They used AAV-CaMKIIa-hM3D(Gq). The authors report that chemogenetic activation of the MPA prior to an ex vivo heart ischemia-reperfusion insult induces cardio protection against infarct size that is independent of prior in vivo hypothermia. Phosphoproteomic analysis of cardiac tissue suggested changes in cell survival and death pathways.

      Strengths:

      This study has important strengths. The idea is novel. The experimental design is appropriately rationalized and fascinating. The manuscript is written and presented concisely.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to describe how the three basic ingredients of a voluntary motor command, that is excitation, inhibition and neuromodulation, are altered in people with multiple sclerosis. They recorded high-density surface electromyograms from tibialis anterior and soleus during slow triangular contractions in 89 patients and 34 control participants, decomposed the signals into the discharge times of individual motor units, and extracted seven features of the resulting discharge patterns. These features were then combined into three composite scores intended to represent the three ingredients, and the authors asked whether the scores in patients differ from those in controls in their average value, in their spread, and in the shape of their distribution. The working hypothesis was that the motor command is disturbed in different ways in different patients rather than in one consistent direction, and the authors report findings that they consider consistent with that hypothesis.

      Strengths:

      The dataset is the main strength of this work, and it is quite a considerable one. Studies of motor unit behaviour in neurological populations are usually built on ten or twenty participants, whereas here there are 89 patients spanning the full range of disability together with 34 controls, two muscles per person, and more than 12,000 unique motor units. The clinical characterisation is thorough and includes disease subtype, symptom duration, disability score, walking tests and lesion locations from clinical imaging. The experimental protocol is appropriate and was clearly demanding to deliver in a population of this kind. The treatment of the motor unit data in the statistical models is also more careful than is common in this literature, in particular the recognition that motor unit labels are arbitrary and the correct nesting of units within muscle and within participant. The question itself is well worth asking, and the central observation, that average discharge rates and rate modulation are reduced while a minority of patients sit far above anything seen in controls, is interesting.

      Weaknesses:

      Three issues limit how far the conclusions can be taken as the paper stands.

      First, the framework that gives the paper its title is not the framework that was used. The published approach searches a large database of simulations to find the combination of synaptic inputs that reproduces an observed discharge pattern. What is applied here is a weighted average of standardised discharge features, in which the weights are mutual information values taken from that earlier work and the signs of the weights are supplied by the authors on the basis of the literature. Mutual information measures how much a feature tells you about a parameter. It does not carry the direction of that association, and it does not become a regression coefficient by having a sign attached to it. Since the direction of every conclusion in the paper depends on those assigned signs, the reader has no way of judging how faithfully the composite scores track the physiological quantities they are named after. I do not understand why this was not done with simulations. The authors should expand or clarify this point.

      The simulations have known inputs, so the composites could be computed on the simulated discharge patterns and their accuracy reported directly. Two of the features were also modified relative to those simulations, being computed against joint torque rather than against the synaptic drive, and using a normalised version of the hysteresis measure, while the weights derived for the original features were retained. The authors should justify this or specify why this was not done and how it affects the underlying physiology.

      A related difficulty is that the three composite scores are not independent of one another. The hysteresis measure contributes to all three of them and several other features contribute to two. Finding abnormality in all three components of the motor command may therefore reflect a single underlying signal expressed three times over. The correlations between the composites are not reported, and without them the reader cannot tell which of these two readings is correct.

      Second, the comparison with stroke and with spinal cord injury, which carries much of the novelty of the paper, is asserted rather than demonstrated. A good deal of recent motor unit work in spinal cord injury and in stroke is also omitted, which is an important weakness, and I would encourage the authors to engage with it directly rather than treat those populations as a settled contrast. The abstract and the discussion state that the variability seen here is fundamentally different from the consistency seen in those populations, but no stroke or spinal cord injury data are presented, and no quantitative comparison with published values is offered. This matters because the individual patterns illustrated in the paper, that is, reduced peak discharge rate, compressed rate modulation, a narrowed recruitment range, synchronisation between units, and continued firing after the end of the task, are all well-described features of spastic paresis of other causes. This is commonly observed in people with spinal cord injury as well. One of the three illustrated patients is described as having mild hemiparesis and spasticity. Most of this cohort also carries cervical and thoracic cord lesions in addition to lesions above the spinal cord, so a simpler reading of the spread in these data is a mixture of the mechanisms already known from stroke and from spinal cord injury, present in varying proportions in different patients. That would be a different and considerably less novel conclusion, and it deserves to be considered explicitly. There is a statistical asymmetry in the comparison as well, since the populations described as consistent have been studied in samples of ten to twenty people, and small samples cannot reveal the tails of a distribution.

      Third, the central finding of greater variability between patients has plausible alternative explanations that have not been excluded. The value for each participant is the median across the motor units identified in that person, and the number of units varies widely between participants and between the two groups. The precision of a median depends on how many units contribute to it, so precision that differs systematically between groups will inflate the spread of the participant values on its own. In addition, the leg studied was the more affected leg in the patients but the dominant leg in the controls. Choosing the more affected of two limbs is a selection on an extreme value, and it will both shift the patient average and widen the patient distribution for reasons that are purely statistical. Since the Methods state that both legs were recorded, perhaps the authors could consider adding this as an additional control. Finally, the hypothesis is framed in terms of multiple peaks and possible subgroups of patients, yet no test of multimodality is performed, and the density estimates shown do not obviously support it.

      The feature carrying by far the largest weight in the neuromodulation score shows no group difference at all, and depending on which version of the hysteresis measure entered the composite, either one or none of its six constituent features differs between groups. The group difference in neuromodulation is also absent in the primary model and emerges only when maximal strength is added as a covariate, a change that the text reports but describes as leaving the results generally unchanged.

      Moreover, medication may be assessed more clearly considering the large cohort. Thirty-four of the 89 patients take antispastic drugs, and both tizanidine and baclofen act on the system that the neuromodulation score measures, while others take reuptake inhibitors that act in the opposite direction. A quantitative comparison, with the obvious caveat of confounding by indication, would be needed before the neuromodulation findings can be read as disease-related. The authors should consider this to strengthen the manuscript or justify why this was not done.

      Appraisal:

      The authors achieve their descriptive aim. They show convincingly that motor unit discharge is altered in multiple sclerosis, that the average change is towards lower discharge rates and reduced rate modulation, and that the patient group is more dispersed than the control group on most measures. I do not think they establish the two claims that give the work its stated significance, that is, that the abnormalities can be attributed specifically to excitatory, inhibitory, and neuromodulatory drive, and that the resulting pattern distinguishes multiple sclerosis from other conditions affecting the same pathways.

      Impact and utility:

      The findings and dataset are very novel and, once shared, will be a resource for the field, and I would encourage the authors to release the analysis code and the exact weights alongside it. Moreover, it would have been valuable to see more relationships reported between the clinical measures and motor unit behaviour, in particular disability, walking speed, lesion location and medication.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their manuscript "Multiplexed CRISPRi Reveals a Transcriptional Switch Between KLF Activators and Repressors in the Maturing Neocortex", Kirk and colleagues seek to dissect the developmentally regulated pan-neuronal gene programs that control the postnatal maturation of cortical neurons. For this, the authors analyzed newly generated and existing RNA-seq and ATAC-seq of Layer 4 and Layer 6 cortical pyramidal neurons at postnatal day 2 (P2) and day 30 (P30) and identified thousands of shared developmentally regulated genes and genomic (promoter) regions, including genes involved in axon growth (tend to be downregulated) and synaptic function (tend to be upregulated). Motif enrichment analysis of promoters of differentially regulated genes revealed a strong presence of KLF/Sp family binding motifs, pointing to Krüppel-Like Factors (KLFs) as key transcriptional regulators of cortical maturation. Expression profiling showed a developmental switch from activating KLFs (Klf6, Klf7) expressed neonatally to repressive KLFs (Klf9, Klf13) upregulated during maturation. Using an elegant in vivo multiplexed CRISPR interference (CRISPRi) system, the authors achieved efficient, cell-type-specific knockdown of these TFs and showed that Klf9 and Klf13 repress a set of genes that includes cytoskeletal regulators such as Tubb2b, Dpysl3, and Rac3. Conversely, Klf6 and Klf7 promoted the expression of these same genes in the early postnatal period, and their knockdown led to reduced expression of these genes, particularly at P10 when their activating influence is strongest. Since promoters of shared KLF targets were enriched for KLF/Sp motifs but showed little change in chromatin accessibility, the authors propose a model in which distinct KLF family members function either as transcriptional repressors and activators that compete at constitutively accessible promoters and thereby act as a developmental transcriptional switch that coordinates the downregulation of axon growth programs and upregulation of synaptic maturation genes during cortical development.

      Strengths:

      The study addresses an interesting question and advances our understanding of the transcriptional regulation underlying postnatal cortical development. A major strength of the study lies in the innovative use of in vivo multiplexed CRISPR interference (CRISPRi), which allows for cell-type-specific, combinatorial knockdown of redundant TFs - this an elegant solution to a long-standing challenge in transcription factor research and should be useful also for other neuroscience studies that require local and cell-type-specific gene loss-of-function. Also, the integration of RNA-seq and ATAC-seq across developmental time points provides a robust foundation for identifying direct targets of the KLF family, and the findings are reinforced by cross-species conservation and the identification of targets with clear neurodevelopmental relevance.

      Weaknesses:

      The major weakness of the study lies in its relatively narrow scope: the study focuses primarily on transcriptional mechanisms and largely lacks functional validation of the neuronal phenotypes that are predicted by the gene expression data (e.g. axonal morphology). Despite these limitations, the paper offers an interesting model for a transcriptional switch during neuronal maturation in the cortex and establishes a powerful methodological framework for dissecting redundant gene networks in vivo.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work provides a novel guide for Research Performing Organizations (RPOs) to evaluate researchers in ways that promote responsible research practices. Such a tool could help inform the development of policies that foster these practices within RPOs and potentially influence decisions related to the hiring and promotion of scientific staff. The guide was developed through a modified three-round Delphi process based on a preliminary set of recommendations provided by members of various organizations. Each round included a survey, and items that did not reach a consensus of >80% were reconsidered in the subsequent round. Round 3 consisted of an in-person meeting, during which the final guide was developed based on criteria that reached {greater than or equal to}80% consensus among participants. The guide includes six practices for evaluation (verification efforts, prospective study registration, data/code/materials sharing, reporting transparency, open-access publishing, and disclosure of funding interests) with an additional seventh component. Each practice includes a clearly defined aim and criteria describing what good practice looks like. The complete study methodology, statistical analyses, and supporting data are available through Open Science Framework (OSF).

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this work is the development of a practical tool that could help foster responsible research practices among candidates and provide promotion and hiring panel members with clearer criteria for assessing such practices. The three-round Delphi process, which included international participants, provides a structured approach to reaching consensus on practices that could contribute positively to the research ecosystem.

      Weaknesses:

      The recruitment strategy may have introduced selection bias and limited the representation of researchers and other interest holders from diverse geographical and institutional contexts, particularly from the Global South. Although the authors acknowledge that variability across regions and institutions should be considered when applying the guide, greater representation of these contexts would strengthen confidence in the broad applicability and generalizability of the proposed framework.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Omar Matar and colleagues describe how they successfully closed the life cycle of the tropical tuxedo urchin Mespilia globulus in a small, closed aquarium system. Its capacity to flourish under closed culturing conditions sets this sea urchin apart from most echinoderms and indeed most marine invertebrates, which require high-quality flow-through seawater (i.e. coastal access and a flow-through aquarium system). As M. globulus reaches sexual maturity in captivity in 4-6 months, which is shorter than other sea urchins, it opens the potential for transgenerational studies.

      Matar et al. have developed a suite of molecular and genomic techniques and resources, including Cas9-mediated gene knockdown and chromosome-scale genome assemblies for both sexes and colour morphs. These strong aquaculture and genomics platforms suggest that M. globulus can provide insights into aspects of the sea urchin life cycle and history that would be difficult to study in other sea urchin models, which historically have been focused on embryogenesis.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript announces M. globulus as a novel, genome-enabled echinoderm model that can be cultured in a closed system with a few hundred litres of 23/24oC artificial seawater. This allows for experimental analysis of parts of the sea urchin life cycle that are not particularly tractable in other sea urchins, including the developmental biology of metamorphosis, symbiont interactions and immunity through the life cycle, post-settlement biomineralisation, and sex determination. The capacity to knock out embryonic/larval genes using CRISPR/Cas9 and visualise localised embryonic and larval gene expression using HCR are consistent with claims M. globulus can contribute novel insights into basic and applied (aquaculture) biology of sea urchins and echinoderms.

      Weaknesses:

      The general weakness of this manuscript is that the authors do not explain aspects of their study in enough detail (e.g. a single figure - Figure 2 - presents results of analysis of normal development, HCR and Cas9 knockdowns). This manuscript provides limited methodological detail about the culture system and the analysis of gene expression. Here are a few suggestions on how to improve the manuscript:

      First, the authors should provide a thorough description of the methods used to cultivate and maintain M. globulus. This should include further details about the closed aquarium system; a schematic of the system would be insightful. Basic details about husbandry are needed, including (i) stocking densities of adults, embryos/larvae, postlarvae/juveniles; (ii) frequencies of level and water changes/top-ups; (iii) feeding regime at all phases of the life cycle (amount/sea urchin, post-feeding cleaning, etc.). These and other details are essential for the uptake of this model system. This documentation would provide the foundation for future improvements, which include shortening the time to acquire larval competence and sexual maturity, and improving and standardising larval settlement.

      Second, the description of the procurement and analysis of mRNA is brief, unreferenced and reads as protocols used for an established model species (e.g. what is PFA in this case - the concentration of paraformaldehyde and the buffer can vary markedly between organisms and life stages). Even the RNA extraction protocols can vary between and within species. For instance, highly pigmented tissues tend to be more difficult to procure useable RNA. The HCR analysis, which is also scantily described, is restricted to embryonic and larval stages. Given the emphasis on the capacity of the M. globulus system to analyse all phases of the life cycle, it would be good to know if HCR can be performed on settled postlarvae, juveniles and adult tissues.

      Third, the authors should consider dividing Figure 2, which consists of confocal images of normal development, HCR results and CRISPR/Cas9 knockout results, into three separate figures that explore these studies separately. A figure on normal development could, for instance, include documentation of metamorphosis, with a suite of images of postlarval stages. A figure documenting HCR could be expanded to include more stages, higher magnification images and other genes. A figure on the Cas9 knockdown of a PKS gene can provide details on the normal expression of this gene using HCR and possibly qRT-PCR.

      Fourth, there should be consideration of providing more characterisation about the protein-coding genes comprising the chromosomal region (Chr. 4) that has marked differences between sexes. This could go beyond Supplementary Table 4 and Supplementary Figure 5B, and include analysis of expression in adult tissues (this would be enhanced by having matching male and female tissues), and KEGG pathways and GO enrichments.

      Overall, this is an exciting development in the study of echinoids and echinoderms. This manuscript can be improved by providing the reader with more details. Given the exciting prospect of being able to study M. globulus settlement and metamorphosis in detail, the authors may consider providing more information about this part of the life cycle.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript asks whether biogeographic patterns are similarly predictable across temporal scales in two sympatric clingfishes (Gouania). By integrating oceanographic dispersal simulations, population genomics, mtDNA, and demographic inference, the authors find broadly concordant contemporary connectivity between species but less consistent deeper phylogeographic and demographic histories. The study addresses an interesting question, although several aspects of the genomic analyses and their interpretation need further attention.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript has a strong comparative design and an interesting biological system. Comparing sympatric species provides a useful framework for asking how consistently shared environmental processes translate into similar evolutionary patterns. The integration of oceanographic, population-genomic, phylogeographic, and demographic evidence across temporal scales is a particular strength. The most convincing result is that contemporary connectivity appears more predictable across species than deeper phylogeographic and demographic history.

      Weaknesses:

      The main new dataset is whole-genome resequencing of 85 individuals (46 G. orientalis, 39 G. hofrichteri) from five localities on Crete and Kythira. These reads were mapped to the chromosome-level Gouania willdenowi assembly (fGouWil2; publicly labeled as G. willdenowi but referred to throughout as the G. adriatica reference) produced by the Vertebrate Genomes Project (Rhie et al. 2021). No new reference genome was generated here, which limits the genomic contribution. Ideally, each focal species would have its own reference.

      Mapping both species to a third congener also creates an important reference-bias issue. Figure 6a places G. orientalis closer to the reference lineage than G. hofrichteri, so the more distant species is expected to map less well and yield fewer callable sites. That is the direction observed: G. hofrichteri yields nearly half as many called variants (3.17 M vs 5.82 M). This could reflect real diversity, differential mapping, or both. Per-species mapping rates, missingness, and callable-site counts should therefore be reported, and outlier comparisons repeated using sites callable in both species.

      Coverage is also low and uneven: 69 individuals were targeted at 5X and 16 at 15X. This is probably adequate for broad population structure, but more problematic for heterozygosity- and frequency-based statistics, as hard calls at ~5X can bias heterozygosity, nucleotide diversity, FIS, and nearly fixed variants. The single 15X G. orientalis from NNE-Mades, which has unusually high diversity and affects FST, illustrates the issue. Key results should therefore be checked using genotype likelihoods, common-depth downsampling, or the higher-coverage subset. Table S1 should also report realized depth and missingness and clarify the discrepancy with the Methods, which state that two individuals per population were sequenced at 15X. Agreement among PCA, admixture, and FST is not independent reassurance because all use the same hard-called genotype matrix (see Lou et al. 2021; Helmkampf et al. 2025).

      Much of the remaining dataset comes from previous studies or public resources: the COI sequences, four of five MSMC2 genomes, the VGP genome, and Copernicus currents. Thus, the main new contribution is the Crete-Kythira population-genomic dataset. The strongest result is that contemporary connectivity is broadly concordant between species, whereas deeper phylogeographic and demographic histories are less predictable. The geographic mismatch among datasets, however, limits direct comparisons across scales.

      The least secure result is parallel genomic divergence, which is emphasized in the title. The null model for parallel divergence is problematic. The enrichment test treats 29,039 windows as independent even though 60-kb windows overlap by 30 kb. Adjacent windows are therefore not independent, and both species also share the same reference architecture. The significance of 8 shared windows among 397 and 220 outliers may consequently be inflated. This should be tested with a null model that preserves genomic autocorrelation, such as non-overlapping blocks or permutations of larger genomic segments. Otherwise, the parallelism claim should be softened, particularly in the title.

      The gene-level analysis raises the same concern and also contains several inconsistencies. The background is 23,789 genes in the Methods, but 21,274 in Table S3; the Methods specify {plus minus}30 kb around window midpoints whereas Table S6 appears to use 120 kb; and the nearly fixed-variant analysis uses 45 and 8 genes in the Methods versus 52 and 14 in the Results/Table S3. These numbers need to be reconciled. I would also avoid placing much weight on a single shared tuba gene without an appropriate null model.

      The MSMC2 analysis uses one diploid genome per species but is interpreted as species-level demographic history. Because these genomes come from different localities and the manuscript itself shows substantial within-species structure, species and locality are confounded. These results should be framed as exploratory histories of the sampled genomes/populations unless additional individuals are analyzed.

      The link between oceanography and genomic connectivity is also mainly visual. Because this is a central aim, it should be tested quantitatively, for example by comparing a Lagrangian connectivity matrix with genetic distance while accounting for geographic distance. Similarly, the correlation between pairwise FST values across species should use a matrix-based permutation test rather than a standard Spearman p-value based on 10 non-independent comparisons. The Methods explicitly state that correlations between oceanography and population structure are tested, but no such analysis is reported.

      A few additional points need attention. The NNE-Mades G. orientalis is excluded from some analyses but retained in others despite strongly affecting results. The particle-drift model assumes passive 2D advection and omits larval behavior and vertical movement, which should be stated. Mitochondrial-nuclear discordance could also reflect stochasticity, introgression, or sex-biased dispersal. Finally, several inconsistencies need correction, including duplicate Figure S6/missing S7, four versus five populations in the Figure 2 caption, the ENA accession range, and several typos.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work by Abdelnaby et al. investigated the different Orai isoforms, and also especially Orai1 alpha and beta for NFAT 1 and NFAT 4 translocation, but also its impact in genetically modified T-cells. This is a very well-performed work that manages to monitor NFAT nuclear/cytosol ratio even in a time-dependent manner. Overall, this study has been very well performed, is clearly written and discusses the literature very accurately.

      Strengths:

      For monitoring NFAT translocation, the authors have managed to observe this pattern even in a time-dependent manner. The authors may like to describe how this analysis was done with more details, as I believe some software assistance was needed to distinguish the nuclear to cytosolic region for a huge number of cells. Clearly, this analysis provides a very clear picture of the time course of translocation and allows for a precise statistical analysis.

      Remarkably, NFAT1 and NFAT4 translocation was not substantially different for Orai1 alpha- and Orai1 beta-mediated Ca2+ signals. This has also been observed previously by Zhang et al. for NFAT1 from the same laboratory. Clearly, this is in contrast to the work of reference 38 (Kar et al.). All these publications have been performed with a huge amount of data, and I believe that clearly stating this difference in results from previous work is an additional important aspect of this manuscript.

      In line with the similar NFAT translocation efficiency of Orai1 alpha- or beta-containing cells, the authors carefully evaluated differentially expressed genes in CD4+ T cells. They did not find a substantial difference in these cells that were transduced with Orai1 alpha or beta - clear orthogonal evidence for a conserved function of Orai1 alpha and beta for transcriptional activation.

      Weaknesses:

      This reviewer identified no obvious weaknesses in this work.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates strategies to overcome resistance to PARP inhibitors (olaparib) in a mouse model of BRCA1-related triple-negative breast cancer. They test whether combining olaparib with a PI3K inhibitor (alpelisib) or with an immune-stimulating agent (Poly(I:C)) can improve outcomes in both drug-sensitive and drug-resistant tumors, and find that both combinations extend survival in sensitive tumors, while only the PI3K combination partially overcomes established resistance. To understand the biological basis for these differences, the authors apply a previously developed hydrogel-based assay that measures seven microRNAs directly within tumor tissue sections, preserving their spatial location. They then build a set of computational tools-based on a topic-modeling method called latent Dirichlet allocation (LDA), principal component analysis (PCA), and an image-similarity measure called SSIM-to interpret these spatial microRNA patterns and relate them to tumor drug sensitivity, treatment type, and the surrounding immune cell environment.

      Strengths:

      (1) The in vivo survival experiments are well powered and rigorously analyzed, with appropriate statistical testing (log-rank tests) clearly supporting the central efficacy claims: both combination therapies benefit sensitive tumors, and PI3K inhibition (but not Poly(I:C)) partially rescues resistant tumors.

      (2) The spatial microRNA measurement technology, while previously published, is thoughtfully applied here to an earlier treatment timepoint (10 days) than prior work, which is a reasonable and useful extension aimed at capturing biology before advanced tumor changes complicate interpretation.

      (3) The core finding that a microRNA topic dominated by miR-21 associates with drug sensitivity, while a topic dominated by let-7a associates with resistance, is supported by a formal statistical test (a Mann-Whitney U test comparing principal component scores between sensitive and resistant tumors), giving reasonable confidence in this specific result.

      (4) The idea of layering an immune-infiltration similarity map (SSIM) onto the microRNA topic maps is a creative and potentially broadly useful way to connect molecular spatial patterns with tissue architecture, and could be adapted to other spatial biomarker studies beyond this one.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Several of the paper's central spatial and immune-colocalization findings are supported only by visual inspection of small numbers of samples (commonly three tumors per treatment group) rather than by formal statistical comparison. This applies to the treatment-type separation shown in Figure 3B.iii and to the immune-microRNA co-localization patterns shown in Figure 4B.ii, both of which are described narratively without accompanying statistical tests.

      (2) The claim that Poly(I:C) fails to alter the immune composition of resistant tumors, unlike PI3K inhibition, is stated qualitatively ("little difference") without a quantitative comparison, which weakens confidence in this specific interpretation.

      (3) All spatial analyses derive from a single mouse model at a single treatment timepoint, with no independent tumor cohort used to test whether the identified microRNA topics and their treatment/sensitivity associations generalize. This is an appropriate scope for an initial proof-of-concept study but means the biomarker potential of the approach remains unproven outside this specific dataset.

      Overall, the authors achieve their stated aims, and the evidence broadly supports the paper's central conclusions distinguishing drug-sensitive from drug-resistant tumors. The additional analyses linking treatment regimen and immune infiltration to spatial microRNA patterns are plausible and consistent with the survival data, though they rely on small sample sizes and, in places, qualitative rather than statistical comparisons, and would benefit from further validation. The analytical framework itself - particularly the SSIM-based integration of molecular and cellular spatial data - is a useful and creative contribution with potential utility for other groups working on spatial biomarker discovery.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates how the activity of hypothalamic paraventricular oxytocin (PVNOT) neurons relates to physiological states in female mice, with a particular focus on behavioral states and thermogenic sympathetic activity. To address this question, the authors combined automated video-based behavioral classification with calcium imaging of PVNOT neuron activity. Sympathetic thermogenesis was inferred from surface temperature changes measured by infrared thermography, and the authors have made their custom analysis scripts available. The authors report that strong, pulsatile activation of PVNOT neurons was "occasionally" observed immediately before transitions from resting to active states. This observation suggests that PVNOT neuronal activity may facilitate the transition from rest to activity. This phenomenon was observed in both pair-housed and individually housed animals. Taken together, these findings raise the possibility that the oxytocinergic system contributes to naturalistic behavior transitions even in the absence of social interactions. However, concerns regarding the selectivity of GCaMP expression in oxytocin-expressing neurons call into question the validity of the recorded PVNOT neuronal activity. The revised manuscript improves the presentation and interpretation of the data. Nevertheless, because the authors have not provided additional experiments or analyses addressing the major methodological concerns, the evidence supporting the central conclusions remains essentially unchanged.

      Strengths:

      The oxytocinergic neural system is believed to subserve a wide range of physiological functions. Elucidating these roles requires monitoring PVNOT neuronal activity under diverse behavioral contexts, as well as manipulating this activity to establish causal relationships. In this study, the authors present a technically sound experimental framework that integrates behavioral tracking in both individually and group-housed mice with the monitoring and manipulation of PVNOT neuron activity. This setup represents a valuable methodological resource for researchers investigating the physiological functions of oxytocin.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Immunohistochemical validation of selective GCaMP expression in oxytocin-expressing neurons showed that only 24-51% of GCaMP-positive neurons expressed oxytocin. As an alternative approach, the authors argue that the similarity between calcium dynamics recorded in virgin and lactating animals supports the identity of the recorded neurons as oxytocin neurons. While this physiological comparison is interesting, it does not constitute direct evidence for cell-type specificity of GCaMP expression. The revised manuscript now acknowledges that in situ hybridization targeting oxytocin mRNA would provide a more reliable validation, but such validation has not been performed. Therefore, uncertainty regarding the identity of the recorded neurons remains, limiting confidence in the interpretation of the calcium imaging data.

      (2) Although the authors' interpretation is generally consistent with the data presented, their main conclusions rely heavily on observational findings. Moreover, optogenetic stimulation of PVNOT neurons failed to robustly recapitulate behavioral state transitions (Figs. 6D and S5B). Further interventional experiments remain necessary to rigorously test the authors' interpretation and establish a causal relationship between PVNOT activity and rest-to-active transitions. In particular, loss-of-function approaches targeting the PVNOT system, such as OXTR antagonism, inhibitory optogenetics, or cell-type-specific ablation, remain essential to determine whether perturbation of this system alters behavioral state transitions. Although the authors expanded the Discussion to acknowledge this limitation, the revised manuscript provides no additional experimental evidence addressing it.

      Comments on revised version.

      I appreciate the authors' efforts to clarify the manuscript and to discuss the limitations more explicitly. Nevertheless, because my major concerns have been addressed primarily through revised interpretation rather than new evidence, my overall assessment of the scientific support for the principal conclusions remains unchanged.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript addresses a fundamental question in cognitive neuroscience: which event should serve as the temporal reference for neural processing during natural vision? While fixation onset has traditionally been treated as the analogue of stimulus onset in free-viewing experiments, the authors convincingly demonstrate that this assumption is incomplete.

      The study utilizes a remarkable natural-viewing dataset consisting of simultaneous MEG and eye-tracking recordings collected during the exploration of thousands of natural scenes. The authors compare several candidate eye-movement events and evaluate which event best explains the timing of the early M100 response. Across several complementary analyses, saccade-related events consistently outperform fixation onset, with peak saccade curvature emerging as the event that best predicts neural response timing.

      Strengths:

      A particular strength of the work is that the conclusions do not rely on a single analytical approach. Instead, multiple independent analyses converge on the same interpretation, increasing confidence that the observed timing relationships are robust rather than analysis-specific. The comparison between natural-viewing responses and classical stimulus-onset responses is especially compelling and highlights qualitative differences in their spatiotemporal organization. Of particular conceptual importance, the findings support the broader perspective that perception is intrinsically linked to action and internally generated sensorimotor processes. This aligns well with growing evidence that oculomotor action and active sampling play central roles in perception. The work contributes to an important ongoing shift in how natural vision should be studied experimentally and interpreted theoretically.

      Weaknesses:

      I identified no major weaknesses in the study. The main limitation is the relatively small number of participants, despite the exceptionally rich dataset. Future work in larger cohorts and across complementary electrophysiological recording modalities will help establish the generalizability of the reported temporal relationships.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work aims to understand the mechanisms that platelets use to interact with and compact fibrin fibers during clot formation. This is an important process during wound healing and recent work has demonstrated that platelets play a critical role in generating the force required to drive accumulation of fibrin. The authors argue that current models are insufficient to account for the observed reduction in clot volume and propose that platelets actively 'wind-up' these fibers by undergoing myosin-dependent rotation. While interesting, the experiments performed by the authors do not directly test this mechanism and further evidence is required to support their claims.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The motivation to switch from the system used in Figure 1 and 2 to the '2D fiber-retraction assay' is not clear. While the authors state that this system has 'reduced complexity' the differences between these assays appears to disrupt the 'cage-like' organization of fibrin around platelets shown in Figure 1 and 2 (compare images in Figure 2 with those in Figure 4). An in-depth comparison of two methods is needed to support the conclusions from the 2D system. Furthermore, the change in plasma volume (Figure 2 vs Figure 7) should also be tested - the authors state that this increases fibrin fiber formation, but this is not quantified or demonstrated in the figures. Notably, this appears to change the morphology of the fibrin fibers shown (comparing Figure 2 and Figure 7).

      (2) It is unclear how the classification of platelets as 'fiber-winding' versus 'fiber compaction' differs in Figure 2. The criteria used for these classifications should be stated. Further, it seems premature to characterize fibers as wound without having established this earlier in the manuscript.

      (3) Is the 'gearwheel' different from the 'cage' of fibrin fibers? They appear similar, but it is difficult to distinguish between these with only qualitative descriptions of these phenotypes.

      (4) The quantification of platelet extensions in Figure 9 is confusing. While the those in 9A are clear, those in 9B are not. For instance, what is the difference between #7 and #8 in the middle panel of 9B? It does not seem like #8 is labeling an extension.

      (5) It is unclear what the modeling accomplishes as there is no comparison between the results of these simulations and their experiments.

      (6) The data presented in Figure 12 provides the most direct support for their mechanism, but falls short of directly testing their claims. These experiments should be repeated to include blebbistatin to test the contribution of myosin and include quantitative rather than qualitative comparisons of these experiments.

      Comments on revised version:

      The manuscript is substantially improved in clarity and organization. The authors have adequately addressed most of my concerns regarding presentation and interpretation through revisions to the text and figures. However, my primary mechanistic concerns remain unresolved. Although the proposed model is now presented more cautiously, the revised manuscript still does not directly test the central mechanism, and the conclusions therefore remain insufficiently supported.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Normandin et al. explore the coding of stimuli predicting an aversive event in the prelimbic cortex. Stimuli could either be explicitly paired, explicitly unpaired, or novel but with an inferred association with the aversive event (generalization). Long-term tracking of GCaMP positive neurons allowed them to examine how coding evolves out to a month following training. In general, they found two types of ensemble codes. One was ensembles coding for each stimulus independently, but with enhanced responding to the one eliciting a freezing response. The other was ensembles that responded to all stimuli in proportion to their similarity to the stimulus paired with the aversive event, either increasing or decreasing their activation with the degree of freezing elicited by a stimulus. Importantly, this second set of ensembles was more stable across days, potentially providing a memory trace.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors track ensembles in prelimbic cortex over long time scales, providing valuable information on the consolidation of neural codes.

      (2) Neural coding of generalization is examined, which is under examined in the field.

      Comments on revised version.

      The authors have convincingly and thoroughly addressed my concerns. I have no further issues regarding this study.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary

      This study aims to contest recent findings that prenatal exposure to natural sounds and anthropogenic noise before hatching affects development and fitness in an altricial songbird. To this aim, it attempts to estimate hearing capacities of zebra finch nestlings. It first uses responses to clicks in nestlings and adults to estimate differences in hearing thresholds but uses experimental parameters that systematically lower nestling responses. It then measures responses to tones but restrict nestling data to a protocol (long tones) that failed in adults; response to tones with a correct protocol (short tones) is repeated in adults only. Thirdly, it includes data on loud airborne sound making eggs vibrate, even though this has no relevance to embryonic vibration perception by direct contact with the incubating parent or in incubators. Lastly, it includes a lengthy discussion on how these results, even though inaccurate or incorrect, would show that zebra finch nestlings and embryos are "functionally deaf". It fails to note that even if the experiment had been performed correctly and still failed to detect an auditory response in 2 day hatchlings - which is unlikely given the above and findings in other songbirds - this would not somehow eliminate the developmental effects of prenatal sounds that have been empirically demonstrated.

      Strength:

      The study is not performed adequately to bring reliable answers, but it addresses the important topic of hearing development in altricial songbirds and the long-held (but untested) assumption that altricial avian embryos cannot hear. More broadly, there is a need to reassess avian auditory perception - and the methodological approaches to measure it - given the accumulating evidence that some bird species respond to high frequency biological sounds beyond their known hearing range.

      Weaknesses:

      The study presents many experimental flaws that specifically compromise response detection in immature animals in the first experiment, and data from the remaining two experiments are invalid. The revision did not fix any of these issues.

      i) Response to clicks, Fig 1: Unlike what the revision claims, the deviations from validated protocols (too rapid stimulation, too few measurements, low temperature, reliance on clicks only) do lead to a potentially large underestimation of nestling hearing sensitivity. Calculation and new data trying to show that these deviations would not matter are wrong or insufficient. Even without strict conventions on ABR methodology, it is striking that every single experimental choice made here i) greatly differs from other avian studies and ii) reduces - rather than maximises - response detection, specifically for low amplitude signals (as in nestlings or near thresholds).

      ii) Response to frequency tones, Fig 2: The experiment on frequency sensitivity (long tone burst) failed in adults (positive control) with 0 to only about half of the adults responding (Fig S1), and sensitivity underestimated by 30dB (Fig2). Measures with a failed positive control are invalid, even if the overall pattern of the few data points obtained in nestlings vaguely resemble (but does not match) expectations. That the experiment was repeated in adults with a correct protocol (short tone pips) - but not in nestlings - is highly misleading.

      iii) Attempts to validate the protocols above by comparing to published adult values are meaningless (response A.3.1; Fig 5). The one experiment being compared (short tones) was only performed in adults in this study. This cannot validate results obtained by different methodologies in nestlings, for responses to clicks or long tones.

      iv) Vibrations: No previous results on the effect of zebra finch heat calls on development rely on the hypothesis or assumption that airborne sound from heat calls makes eggs vibrate. This idea is solely attributable to the authors of the preprint, and is not biologically or experimentally realistic. All speculations from this experiment (Fig3) on vibration perception by embryos or heat call effects are meaningless.

      v) Writing and presentation: The text throughout is highly misinformative for non-specialists or any reader not carefully inspecting figures (including in supplementary material) and methods. The confusion is greatly aggravated in the (6-page long) discussion which i) fails to recognise and account for the study shortcomings, and instead ii) greatly overstates the results and what they mean, and iii) misrepresents current knowledge by excluding highly relevant studies showing evidence of early sound perception in embryos and hatchlings, and introducing many errors in the presentation of published papers. This creates an illusion of a strong mismatch between heat-calls and zebra finch sensory capacities, for which the study actually does not provide any evidence for, and which is extremely unlikely to exist.

      vi) The revision did not address any of the major flaws of the study outlined above (see detailed assessment below). In particular,<br /> ** For point i):<br /> - estimations for the effect of having done too few (400) measurements are wrong - the effect on hearing thresholds cannot be calculated, but would be much greater than 4dB with the expected 37% noise reduction with the standard 1000 sweeps;

      - the new data provided does not measure the impact of high stimulus rate, and measures on adults largely underestimate effects on nestling response;

      - body temperature, now provided in the revision, is at the lowest extreme for the species, which may increase hearing thresholds;

      - tones do elicit a stronger and earlier response than clicks. Whether this is related to stimulus duration does not change the fact that clicks underestimate hearing thresholds, and delay hearing onset by several days.<br /> ** For points ii) and iv):<br /> No new data or any valid explanation was provided in the revision. It is still the case that nestling frequency responses were obtained with an experiment where the positive control failed; and the vibrating egg experiment is irrelevant to vibration perception in embryos and any observed effects of heat calls on development.<br /> ** The revision greatly lengthens the speculations about heat call perception, based on inaccurate or totally incorrect data.

      Conclusion and impact:<br /> i) Overall, the study fails to provide any reliable estimate of zebra finch nestling hearing capacities: it underestimates hearing onsets and thresholds (clicks) and gives no information on nestling frequency sensitivity. It is extremely likely that a better designed ABR experiment, or a more sensitive methodology (e.g. electrophysiology), would have detected a response in 2 day-old nestlings, as in other songbirds. The conclusion of "deafness" in hatchlings (or embryos, which were not tested) is clearly unsupported.<br /> If zebra finch hatchlings were clearly deaf, a well-designed study would have shown this a lot more convincingly.

      ii) The data on adults in not new (3 prior studies) - although this study generally underestimates zebra finch high frequency sensitivity. The presentation in relation to heat-calls is flawed: true values of heat-call frequency range and sound levels (>6kHz at 45dB) fall within the adult hearing range.

      iii) Without any new evidence, this study does not progress our understanding of heat-call and noise impact on development. Exactly the same issue remains: that heat-call and noise effects on development contradict the general VIEW on hearing ontogeny in altricial birds. But we have learnt nothing from this study on hearing ontogeny or frequency sensitivity. The study provides no reliable neuroscience data to advance the debate.

      iv) The largest section of the preprint is a highly speculative discussion, based on erroneous data and wrong interpretations, as well as a misrepresentation of what is known. That these issues would not be recognised is - in my view - of serious concern.

      Detailed assessment:

      The summary by the authors of my major concerns (R3.A0) is incorrect and misreport many of my statements, without giving any meaningful answers. I will not engage in such discussion.

      My actual three major concerns do remain:

      (1) Results on Fig 1 overestimate hearing onset and thresholds: All experimental parameters chosen to test responses to clicks are known to lower detection. From their cumulative impact, there is absolutely no doubt that the data in Fig 1 underestimate hearing capacities, and disproportionately so in nestlings compared to adults. Therefore, no quantitative estimate of nestling hearing threshold, absolute or relative (i.e. the estimated "54dB difference"), can be taken from this study. The age of hearing onset based on clicks (4 day old) is also wrong.

      (2) All results on Fig 2 are false: 40 to 100% of adults (positive control) failed to respond within their normal hearing range (Fig S1). Data on nestling frequency sensitivity using this methodology (Fig 2) are clearly invalid.

      (3) All results on Fig 3 are irrelevant: they assume zebra finch parents are hoovering in front of their nest while heat-calling rather than incubating their eggs, which is nonsense. Any speculation on the role of bone-conduction or vibrotactile stimulation for embryonic heat-call detection is simply unfounded.

      The authors' responses to these comments are largely mistaken (see below), and do not change the 3 facts stated above. Overall, the data produced are unreliable, and so are the interpretations and conclusions.<br /> The conclusions that i) heat-calls fall outside of adult hearing range and ii) young nestlings (and embryos) are deaf, are both incorrect. The study provides no actual estimate of nestling hearing and how far off their hearing range heat-calls fall.

      (1) Responses to clicks underestimate hearing abilities, specifically in nestlings.

      (i) DISPROPORTIONATE EFFECT OF PROTOCOL ON NESTLINGS: As reported in other avian studies (e.g. Brittan Powell et al 2004), because of their immature neural system, nestlings show low amplitude waveforms compared to adults. This occurs even with sound much louder than their hearing threshold. For example here, 8 day old nestlings show waveforms of only low amplitude at 95dB, even though they respond to sound 40dB softer, at 55dB (Fig 1H).

      This characteristic of nestling waveforms means that:<br /> - nestling responses are harder to detect,<br /> - nestling responses are more easily attenuated below the detection criteria (>2 S/N),<br /> - a low amplitude response in nestlings at a given sound level does not predict that softer sounds will not be perceived by the animal.

      Any deviation in protocol that attenuates waveform amplitude will therefore disproportionately affect nestling thresholds (and artificially lead to the "54dB" estimate).<br /> Even without universal standards (resp R3.A1.1), knowing this, the protocol should be adjusted to maximise response detection. This study does exactly the opposite.

      (ii) INSUFFICIENT MEASUREMENTS: using only 400 sweeps, rather than the typical 1000 sweeps, reduces response detection, especially in nestlings.

      - The claim that using 1000 sweeps would only decrease the hearing threshold by 4dB (response A3.2; ms L530) is false:<br /> - Based on the square root relationship mentioned by the authors, using 1000 averages instead of 400 would improve the signal-to-noise ratio by 37%, which would allow detecting many small amplitude waves which are currently hidden in the abnormally high noise.<br /> - Lowering the noise floor level by 4dB does not mean that the hearing threshold would only decrease by 4dB. The improvement in hearing threshold would be much greater, especially in nestlings.

      (iii) UNSUITABLY HIGH STIMULATION RATE: the new data on pairs of clicks greatly underestimate the attenuation by high stimulation rates, and so do adult measurements compared to nestlings'.<br /> - the click rate used in this study (25 clicks per second) is 5 to 25 times faster than most previous studies in young birds (e.g. Saunders et al 1973, 1974: 1 stim/sec or less; Katayama 1985: 3.3 clicks/sec; Brittan-Powell et al 2004: 4 stim/sec), and 6 times faster than zebra finch heat-calls.<br /> - responses to pairs of clicks (new data in Fig S3; L 543-552, response A3.3) does not measure the response dampening caused by high stimulation rates. Response attenuation (adaptation) after a single click is much weaker than after a train of 400 consecutive clicks (or even just 30). This paired-click measure ignores the cumulative attenuation observed with many consecutive stimuli. Paired-click paradigm is used to measure immediate refractoriness for other purposes (e.g. temporal resolution, diagnosis tool) but does not replicate high stimulation rates.<br /> It is unclear why the authors chose to use this weak approximation rather than simply replicating the measurements at the same slow rate as in other avian studies. This would have given a straightforward answer, comparable to previous studies that have demonstrated the detrimental impact of fast rate on response strength by directly comparing responses to different stimulation rates (e.g. Saunders et al 1973; Brittan-Powell et al 2004).<br /> - Adults are less sensitive to high stimulation rates than immature individuals (e.g. Saunders et al 1973; Khayutin 1985; Brittan-Powell et al 2004 and 6 references cited therein). Effects of fast rate in adults (new data in Fig S3) therefore largely underestimate effects on nestlings (not measured), and the high stimulation rate used in this study increases the relative difference between nestlings and adults.<br /> - Given the 2 points above, it is incorrect to conclude from this new data that the high stimulation rate used had "no effect on ABR amplitude or thresholds" (responses A3.3 L551). Instead, given that 40ms (i.e. interval for 25 clicks/ sec) is at the limit of what adults can handle after a single click, this new data does confirm that the stimulation rate is indeed too high and underestimates hearing in nestlings (and adults to a lesser extent).

      (iv) LOW BODY TEMPERATURE can reduce ABR response.<br /> - The average body temperature (39.5C) now provided in the revised manuscript (response A2) is at the lowest extreme of the range for zebra finches. The normal average body temperature for zebra finches is 41C at low ambient temperature, rising to 43-44C at high ambient temperatures (when heat-calls would be produced). This value of 41C is consistent across many studies in wild and domestic zebra finches (e.g. Wojciechowski et al 2020 [avr 41C at 23C]; Udino and Mariette 2022 [avg 41, min=40C at 32C]; Bech and Midtgard 1981 [avr ~41C]; Pessato et al 2022 avg=41C at 27C]). The only study reporting a body temperature average as low as 39C (Cooper et al 2020) was indeed under hypothermic conditions, obtained in adult zebra finches under extreme fasting conditions (17hrs of food deprivation), at ambient temperature below thermoneutrality, during the night (i.e. during "nocturnal hypothermia", when bird body temperature is normally lower).<br /> Therefore 39.5C does corresponds to hypothermic conditions for most individuals. While this body temperature remains considerably higher than that used experimentally to supress hearing response, using a below-normal body temperature, added to other factors, may lower wave amplitude and therefore increase hearing threshold estimates.

      (v) CLICKS UNDERESTIMATE HEARING ONSETS<br /> - My statement that, compared to tones, clicks elicit a smaller response, at a later age, is correct (Saunders et al 1973; Brittan-Powell et al 2004).<br /> - It does not matter whether this is due to differences in stimulation duration (response R3.A2.1), since clicks are always much shorter than tones. What matters is that hearing onset based on responses to clicks has been found to underestimate the earliest age at which an auditory response can be obtained by several days (Saunders et al 1973).<br /> - Without any valid nestling data for tones (see below), this study, based on clicks only, does not provide the true age of hearing onset.<br /> - The suggestion of using 170dB clicks (response R3.A2.1) is very odd. The correct approach would have been to use a correct protocol for tones in nestlings, rather than solely correcting it for adults (see below).

      (vi) CONFUSING INTERPRETATION OF WAVE AMPLITUDE AND LATENCY<br /> - the text implies throughout that nestlings lacking an adult-like amplitude and latency is a sign of poor hearing (e.g. L122 "ABR wave I gradually reaches maturity 25 days after hatching").<br /> - It should be clarified that this is a characteristic of immature systems but does mean these nestlings do not hear. For example, this characteristic persists even in 10d old nestlings which have similar hearing thresholds to adults.

      (2). Results on nestling frequency sensitivity are invalid. Using long (25ms) tones with subdermal electrodes is incorrect, and not used by anyone other than the authors. The failure to repeat the experiment with a correct protocol (5ms tones) in nestlings is misleading:

      (i) When 60% of 4-day old chicks respond to clicks (Fig 1), they are described as "functionally deaf" (L78, L261). By contrast, when 0% to 60% of adults respond to tones in the core of their hearing range (Fig S1 for data shown in Fig 2), this is merely presented as a methodological limitation (text added L186-197), and the authors still proceed to presenting results on nestlings with a method that failed in adults (positive control).

      (ii) When the positive control fails, the experiment is failed. This principle applies in Neuroscience as in any scientific field.

      (iii) That the experiment repeated in adults with the standard and correct short tone protocol (5ms) gave normal results, is not a validation. Instead, it proves the point that 25ms is unsuitable (regardless of whether that is due to rising time, L399). This correction does NOTHING to fix results in nestlings, which were ONLY done with the unsuitable 25ms tones.

      (iv) The mixture of adult data with 5 and 25ms tones, instead, creates confusion, because differences in protocols between nestlings and adults are blurred in the text. The abnormally small proportion of adults responding (0 to 60%) with 25ms tones is only shown in supplementary material, and attenuated in the main text (L186: "about half").

      (v) The claim (response R3.A1.2) that long 25ms tones is commonly used with the ABR methodology used here is false:<br /> ** ALL (but 1) avian studies using tones of 20ms or longer (cited by myself or by the authors in their reply R3.A1.2) used a different ABR methodology, with electrodes implanted through the skull. The only exception, using 25ms tones with subdermal electrodes (as here), is a study by the authors themselves.<br /> ** All other avian studies with subdermal electrodes used short tones, of 5ms or less (e.g. Brittan-Powell et al 2002, 2004; Henry & Lucas 2008), as in the corrected adult experiment.<br /> ** My initial comment already specified this difference in electrode placement.<br /> ** The results here (failing in adults) unquestionably show that the method of long tones with subdermal electrodes does not work, and the literature shows that no one else uses it.

      (vi) When the aim of the study is to contest effects of high frequency sounds (L39-45), it is odd to choose a protocol specifically directed at testing responses to very low frequencies (responses A3.1, R3A.0; L398-403) and that compromises all results.

      (vii) That the shape of the few data points obtained in nestlings with long tones would broadly resemble expectations (responses A3.1, R3A.0) is not a validation: See ii.<br /> - The shape is not even correct:<br /> ** Why aren't 4 and 6 day old nestlings responding to any frequency when they were responding to clicks (in spite of poor detection conditions for clicks)?<br /> *** Why are they not responding, when 2 day old flycatchers respond to tones from 1 to 4kHz at 45dB, and 0.5 to 5kHz at 60dB (Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva 1992, Korneeva et al 2006)?

      (viii) That only relative measures between nestlings and adults matter (resp R3.A4; L404) is incorrect. Measures that are qualitatively (see vii) and quantitatively (see i) wrong cannot be compared.<br /> If these data with long tones were indeed acceptable, why repeat the experiment in adults with a correct protocol, even before this flaw was pointed to during the review?

      (ix) The unusually low number of measurements (400 instead of 1000; L530) will have reduced detectability of low amplitude responses, in nestlings and near thresholds, here as in the click experiment (see above). The claim that this would only increase threshold by 4dB (responses A3.2, L530) is wrong (see above).

      (x) There is no explanation as to why only half of the 6-day old nestlings (n=5-6) were tested with tones. Would having 10 in this group shown a response at 6-day old?

      (xi) Even the correct 5ms tone protocol in adults overestimated thresholds at higher frequencies (>3kHz) by up to 30dB compared to other published estimates (Fig 5). If inter-population differences among domestic zebra finches (L 393; Fig 5 legend; resp R3.A4) were enough to cause 30dB differences, results on domestic zebra finches here should not be extrapolated to those on wild-derived Australian zebra finches documenting developmental effects of heat calls.

      The authors give no other elements than the above in their responses that could demonstrate the validity of their nestling frequency data.

      Based on other studies, we can expect zebra finch hearing to develop sensitivity to high frequencies after that to middle frequencies. But pretending that this study provides any evidence towards this is wrong. There is no valid data.

      (3) The experiment using loud sounds to make eggs vibrate is biologically and experimentally meaningless. The claim that these measurements would rule out vibration perception in embryos is totally unfounded. The preprint is creating the illusion of having ruled-out a mechanism that they have not tested.

      (i) zebra finches are not hovering in front of their nest when heat-calling. They are in physical contact with the eggs while incubating, with vibrations expected to travel directly through solids from adults to eggs, without attenuation.

      (ii) the claim that previous studies on heat-call developmental impact rely on the assumption of airborne sound making egg vibrate (response A3.5, R3.A8) is incorrect. This is conceptually wrong and there is no indication of this in any paper.

      (iii) vibration perception in embryos in birds and other taxa (e.g. amphibian, reptiles and insects) rely on direct contact with the source, not on loud airborne sounds shaking eggs. Beyond any consideration on heat-calls, claiming that this experiment could give any indication of vibration perception in embryos is nonsense.

      The authors give no information in their responses that could demonstrate the validity of this experiment.

      (4) Interpretation and discussion

      All other songbird studies, individually and collectively, show much greater hearing sensitivity in nestlings that what this study is trying to suggest (e.g Khayutin 1985; Korneeva et al 2006; Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva 1992; Rivera et al 2018; Platzen and Magrath 2004; Haff & Magrath 2012). The only way the authors can reach their conclusion is by:<br /> - presenting data that greatly underestimate hearing sensitivity in zebra finches (see sections 1 and 2) and overstating them, and;<br /> - misrepresenting current knowledge by excluding relevant papers and being unclear about what the literature shows.<br /> This study tries to impose the idea that zebra finch do not detect any sound before day 4-6 post-hatch, and have extremely rudimental hearing until day 8-10 post-hatch. By contrast, other studies show very young hatchlings respond to sound 1 to 3 days after hatching (first age tested) and show quite sophisticated, and totally functional, responses to relevant sounds at 5 days old.

      This is not to say that hearing does not continue to improve post-hatch in birds, or that sensitivity to mid frequencies post-hatch would not precede that to high frequencies. But statements throughout this study are so exaggerated and/or wrong that nothing can be learnt. It is undeniable that this study fails to provide the useful and balanced assessment needed to establish were true heat-calls actually sit relative to zebra finch adult, nestling and embryonic hearing range.

      It is literally impossible to correct every wrong statement in the discussion and responses to reviewers. I focus here on some examples related the claims of "nestling deafness" or of heat-calls being outside of adult zebra finch hearing range, as well as inaccuracies leading to an apparent match with current literature.

      (i) MISALIGNMENT WITH OTHER STUDIES AND MISREPORTING

      *** Neurological evidence

      - Highly relevant evidence on response to sound in zebra finch embryos (Rivera et al<br /> 2018) is totally excluded.<br /> Excluding this study on the basis that it used a different methodology that does not directly quantifying auditory sensitivity (resp R3.A6a) is a poor justification. Evidence, even indirect or imperfect, should be brought to the attention of the readers.

      - This applies to many other studies cited in my first review and arbitrarily excluded here. If one wants to conclude on "deafness", all evidence, even indirect, should be considered. Excluding non-ABR studies means the conclusion cannot be extended beyond flat ABR traces.

      - Other studies show much greater sensitivity that what the text describes:

      * Flycatcher hatchlings at 2-3d post hatch (first age tested), respond across a wide range of frequencies (0.3 to 5kHz), at low to moderate sound levels (45-65dB)<br /> (Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva 1992, Korneeva et al 2006).

      * Stating that these studies in flycatchers "likely yield lower thresholds" (L364) is an astonishing understatement. Thresholds in Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva (1992) at 2-3 day old were 35 dB lower than those here at 4 day old with clicks, and 60 to 80dB lower than those with tones of 1-2kHz at 8 day old.

      * Claims that "sensitivity improves rapidly postnatally, with ~40 dB threshold decreases (L365)" is also misreporting these studies' findings. Thresholds decreased by 25dB consistently at 9 out of 11 frequencies tested from 0.3 to 8kHz (Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva, 1992). A difference of 40dB was only found at 5-6kHz (Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva, 1992). Likewise, improvement also varied from 25 to 40dB in Korneeva 2006. These do not average to "~40 dB".

      * Even birds developing 4 times slower than songbirds (budgerigars) show a response at 5 day old. My statement that Brittan-Powell 2004 shows an auditory response at 5d old is correct. Re-response R3.A2.2: Fig 1B shows one example for ONE individual. All other figures based on multiple individuals shows at least some individuals responded at 5-6 days old at frequencies less than 4Khz (Fig 1C, 4 and 5).

      - Many inaccuracies on avian hearing remain uncorrected in the revision.<br /> * e.g. L 329: extrapolating high frequency hearing (>6khZ) from precocial species is incorrect because even adult chicken and ducks are not sensitive to high frequencies.<br /> The authors imply elsewhere that species of songbirds cannot be compared (resp A4, R3.A6), but make extrapolations from species that are far more remote, phylogenetically, developmentally and ecologically than other songbirds.

      *** Behavioural evidence

      - contradicts this study findings:

      * When correctly cited and described, the literature, does not support the authors' statement that nestling behavioural response "typically emerges between ~5-10 days post-hatch" (L358). It emerges earlier, at an unknown age, including potentially from hatch (present at 1.5day) for innate responses (see below).

      * Results in other songbirds are not consistent with this study finding that a "response to loud click stimuli is first detectable at 4-8 days post hatch" (L230). Instead they show nestling hearing capacities described here are abnormally poor.

      * Therefore, the conclusion that "The timeline of behavioural studies closely matches the onset and maturation of ABR responses observed here in zebra finches" (L360) is wrong.

      - shows a very early response (1-2day post hatch), with no known onset:

      * songbird behavioural response to sound, with parental alarm call suppressing begging, has been demonstrated in nestlings as young as 1.5 or 3 days old (Khayutin 1985, Korneeva et al 2006, Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva 1992). None of these results are mentioned in the revision when discussing behavioural evidence (L357-360).

      * Instead, they exclusively mention studies that started testing nestlings at 5-6 days old, or much later (e.g. 17 day old: Suzuki 2011; 14 day old: Barati & McDonald 2017).

      * ALL of these studies (cited or not) demonstrated a significant response of nestlings to calls on the first age tested. NONE tested the onset of this response.

      * the one study looking at progression across 3 ages, at 5, 8 and 11 day old shows parental alarm calls suppress nestling calling at day 5 as much as later on, with no effect of age (Platzen and Magrath 2004). The authors failed to acknowledge this in their response (resp A4) or revision (L359).

      * the claim that Haff & Magrath (2012) showed nestlings did not respond at 5-6 day old but did at 10-11 days (resp A4) is wrong. At 5 day old, they responded to their own species alarm calls, as well as to another similar sounding species and to the sound of predators themselves (Table2 in Haff & Magrath 2012; as in Platzen and Magrath 2004).

      - learning, not just hearing, improves nestling response with age:

      * Haff & Magrath (2012) showed that by 10-11 day old, nestlings had learnt to also respond to heterospecifics, demonstrating that learning improves nestling response with age.

      * the intensity of the response to low frequency sound improved more with age than that to high frequency calls. If improvement were related to hearing limitations, the opposite would be expected (Haff & Magrath (2012).

      - nestlings discriminate complex calls, including at high frequency

      * By 5-6 day old, nestlings can already discriminate several different sounds indicative of danger, among the complex natural acoustic background (Haff & Magrath 2012).

      * nestling do not respond indiscriminately to any calls, but only to relevant sounds that specifically present a threat to them (Haff and Magrath 2012; Magrath et al 2006).

      * the idea that nestlings only distinguish "low frequency broadband cues" (L362) is inaccurate (resp R3.A6). Nestlings respond to scrubwren chip calls and fairywren alarm calls that are narrowband calls with the fundamental at 8 and 10 kHz respectively (Platzen and Magrath 2004; Haff and Magrath 2012).

      * These studies indeed "do not imply mature auditory sensitivity" (L362), they show that auditory maturity is not needed to show a perfectly functional response to biologically meaningful sounds in a natural context.

      - Overall, every other songbird species tested shows greater hearing sensitivity than that proclaimed here for zebra finches. It is very unlikely that zebra finches would be such an outlier.

      (ii) INCORRECT CONCLUSION ON DEAFNESS

      Deafness of young zebra finch nestlings cannot be demonstrated because:

      - the study has no valid response to tones in nestlings to establish the age of hearing onset.

      - responses to clicks are greatly underestimated (see 1). Had correct, more sensitive, protocol parameters been used, it is very likely that:<br /> * Most 2 day old nestlings would have responded to clicks, instead of 60% of 4 day old nestlings.<br /> * Thresholds would be lower, especially in nestlings.<br /> The >54dB difference between nestlings and adults based on an assumed 95dB threshold in 2d old nestlings is wrong.

      - based on data on other songbird nestlings, a difference of 25dB would be more realistic (at frequencies of 1-2 kHz, comparable to clicks, Aleksandrov and Dmitrieva 1992, Korneeva et al 2006). This greatly contrasts with the >54dB estimate here. While the authors qualify their estimate as "conservative" (legend Fig4, L293), it is actually greatly overestimated.

      - Even assuming the data in this study were correct, the interpretation is erroneous. Concluding "deafness of young nestlings" is incorrect when 60% of 4 day old nestlings respond to clicks at 80dB. This is especially wrong given that the ABR method systematically overestimates thresholds by 20-40dB.

      - That ABR is used in humans to diagnose deafness (L263) does not make ABR the most suitable method for birds, when evidence shows that other methods (e.g. electrophysiology or behaviour) are more accurate. Hearing screening in humans can only use non-invasive methods, and has additional criteria than accuracy (price, ease, etc).

      - The discussion fails to acknowledge the implications of the limitations of the study (detailed above). For example, talking in broad terms of differences in protocols (L392-395), does not tell readers that this study, because of the parameters chosen, led to an underestimation of zebra finch hearing capacities.<br /> The discussion instead greatly overstates what the study shows (e.g. L229-232, 261, 277-278, 288, 332, 340, etc).

      (iii) INCORRECT CONCLUSION THAT HEAT-CALL FALL OUTSIDE THE ADULT HEARING RANGE.

      - heat-calls fall outside the adult hearing range solely because of the authors' decision to:<br /> * restrict heat-call frequency range to the authors' own estimation (7-10kHz) on 4 birds instead of using published values that caused developmental impact (e.g. Katsis et al: 6-10kHz), or were produced in vitro (5.9kHz; Anttonnen et al 2025);

      * lowering heat call sound level (34dB at 10 cm) to measurements on 4 isolated birds under unknown temperature conditions for an unknown amount of time, when the same paper gives values of 43.4 dB at 1 m (range: 30.7-53.2) in standard in vitro conditions.

      * As soon as EITHER of these two values is corrected, the statement that heat calls are outside zebra finch adult hearing range is false.

      * In addition, assuming constant heat-call sound level across contexts is unreasonable. That zebra finch can produce inspiratory syllable very similar to heat calls and during inspiration at 65dB during song (Goller & Dalley 2001) argues against the assumption that heat-calls are always soft.

      - Other species also show perception, not just production (resp R3.A10a), of calls above their known hearing range (10-20kHz; e.g. Duque et al 2020). The zebra finch is not the only case in birds of mismatch between signals perceived and known hearing range.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors report and characterize the formation of aggregate microstructures by the motile filamentous cyanobacterium Fluctiforma draycotensis, which exhibits gliding motility accompanied by rotation along the long axis while excreting EPS. In experiments with motile F. draycotensis cultures, they observed the formation of granular structures composed of cyanobacteria and other material (iron, polystyrene beads, etc.), with macrostructures on the scale of 1mm within 24 hours. The structures were motile at speeds comparable to that of the cyanobacteria filaments, resulting in their growth through coalescence over time. Notably, such macrostructures were absent in nonmotile F. draycotensis, pointing to the role of filament motility in their formation. Through experiments examining the micro-scale dynamics, inert material such as small polystyrene beads was found to be transported by the gliding, buckling, and plectoneme dynamics of the filaments, pointing to the underlying mechanism by which particles are collected into larger-scale microgranule structures.

      To interrogate the properties that drive the cyanobacteria filament buckling, plectoneme formation, and entanglement, the authors develop a mechanical model for filaments as nearly inextensible, slender bodies with resistance to twisting and bending under active gliding forces and torques and responding to fluid flows and surface adhesion. They derive expressions for the thresholds for buckling and twisting instabilities, which are additionally demonstrated and interrogated through simulation via the Immersed Boundary Method. Most importantly, bending and plectoneme formation only occur with sufficiently long filaments, and the threshold is shorter for bending than for plectoneme formation. Experimental observations with wild-type filaments agree with the model-predicted thresholds. The authors perform additional experiments with shorter filaments below both thresholds, including the filamentous bacterium Pseudanabaena, which fail to collect particles (though can in principle form macrostructures).

      Strengths:

      This work appears to be novel (notably, the discovery and characterization of the particle collection behavior of a filamentous cyanobacterium) and has interesting implications for both naturally observed cyanobacterial macrostructures as well as the controllable parameters in engineering them. The experimental and modeling work is well motivated, contributing to the broader understanding of macrostructure formation and material aggregation through active filament dynamics (not exclusive to cyanobacteria), as well as the underlying physical properties governing important filamentous cyanobacterium dynamics. As such, I would expect the results of this paper to be of broad interest to both biophysicists and microbiologists. Generally, the manuscript is well written with clear, compelling figures that illustrate the important conclusions of this study.

      Weaknesses:

      In the section on "Shorter gliding filaments cannot collect particles nor form granule macrostructures", the filamentous cyanobacteria considered *all* fall below the predicted thresholds for bending and twisting. The "long" F. draycotensis are 60 microns in length, notably less than the 120 and 320 micron thresholds derived in the previous section as well as the lengths of filaments considered in Figure 3D, yet these "long" 60 micron filaments form macrostructures. How can this be understood in the context of the model predictions? Is the nature of the macrostructures in Figure 4B, the microscale parameters, or the collection of particles somehow different than those with filaments an order of magnitude longer in earlier parts of the paper? The paper would be stronger if these sorts of questions were addressed in the text and/or with supplementary figures.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Most models of reinforcement learning in the brain treat the question of how the external world is represented as an afterthought. In "Error driven representation learning in the mesolimbic system", the authors begin by calling attention to this limitation of previous work, then proceed to show that neural activity in part of the ventral striatum evolves in a manner consistent with dopaminergic RPE-driven representation learning. Overall, the question is interesting, the modeling is well done, and the claims are bold. While I am not convinced that olfactory tubercle outputs _mainly_ reflect state features acquired through error-driven learning (see main points below), I am now more willing to believe that they might. I am confident that this work will spark discussion.

      Strengths:

      The latent weight trajectory inference approach is a nice application of Kalman filtering, the model validation and comparison steps are well executed and thorough, the discussion is nicely written and includes an appropriate caveat about the weight transport problem, and the general idea of striatal output being value-like but also having state-like aspects that evolve over time is thought-provoking.

      Weaknesses:

      In my view, the main limitation of this work is that the authors do not clearly rule out (1) non-representation learning and (2) non-error-driven learning. This fits with the narrow research question stated at the end of the introduction (L71-72), which is confirmatory in nature and does not claim to exclude alternatives, but other aspects of the framing are less consistent.

      Main points of criticism

      (1) Representation vs. value learning

      The first two pages of the manuscript gave me the impression that the authors wish to draw a clear distinction between representation and value learning, and that they would squarely position this paper as a study of representation learning. The substance of the work does not seem consistent with this positioning, a mismatch that could be addressed either by incorporating new analysis and discussion or by changing the framing.

      Examples of emphasis on representation:

      - Abstract L14-17 defines value and representation learning and states why they are different.

      - First three paragraphs of introduction explain the power of learned representations.

      - Results L103-108 attribute state representations to OTu and value to downstream regions.

      For this level of emphasis, it would be good to see a convincing argument that OTu MSN activity is better understood as a state representation than as the output of a value function.

      Options for establishing OTu as state and not value:

      - Explicitly claim in the introduction that previous work has established this, and explain why evidence of stimulus valence being encoded in this area (citations on L68-70) does not favour the value interpretation. Discussing how OTu differs from other parts of ventral striatum that are canonically seen as value coding would also help.

      - Directly compare the extent of state vs. value encoding in the present data. The $w=1$ control is a good step in this direction, but its connection to value coding is mentioned only in passing.

      (2) Error driven learning vs. other types of learning

      Similar to my previous point, the authors seem to claim that the representational changes they study are specifically error driven. While the authors include a good number of controls and ablations, it was not obvious to me that any of them correspond to a form of non-error driven learning that could plausibly generate useful representations. Adding Hebbian learning or a sparsifying learning rule would strengthen this aspect of the work.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors show that exposure of cancer cells to DSBs induced enzymatically or by ionizing radiation (IR) results in large-scale genomic amplifications (DIGA: DSB-induced genomic amplifications) that are detectable by FACS. This phenomenon was observed in diverse cancer cell lines and was shown to be limited by p53 in paired cell lines. In principle, DIGA could result from re-initiation of DNA synthesis within the same cell cycle, mitotic segregation errors, or repair-associated DNA synthesis. The authors conduct experiments to distinguish between these possibilities and conclude that DIGA is the result of extensive RAD51-dependent DNA synthesis.

      Strengths:

      The observation of genome amplification in response to DSBs specifically in cancer cells is striking, particularly at high IR doses or by AsiSI endonuclease induction. At 9 Gy, almost 50% of cells have a >4N DNA content. The correlation between high levels of DIGA and reduced clonogenic survival of melanoma cells suggests that DIGA contributes to IR-induced cytotoxicity. The authors convincingly show that DIGA occurs in a single cell cycle and is not due to chromosome mis-segregation at mitosis. Because DIGA is partially dependent on resection nucleases, POLD3, POLD4, RAD52 and RAD51, the authors conclude that DIGA results from repair synthesis by a BIR-like process.

      There are significant weaknesses in the study:

      (1) It is unclear to this reviewer how BIR-like synthesis could increase genomic DNA copy number by 50% or more, as indicated by the FACS plots. In the case of AsiSI, there are ~150 sites that are efficiently cleaved in U2OS cells. Each of these sites would need to prime extensive synthesis by an inefficient migrating D-loop mechanism. Studies of BIR-like synthesis at DSBs in U2OS cells have shown that repair tracts are fairly short, around 3-10 kb in length. Thus, it is hard to rationalize how BIR at a few hundred DSBs could initiate such large changes in genome size.

      (2) The BrdU-FACS plot shown in Figure S4 shows that most of the cells have an 8N content 48 and 72 h after AsiSI induction and do not have much BrdU incorporated. This finding would suggest that genomic DNA doubling is mostly independent of de novo synthesis. Also, there does not seem to be a continuum from 4N up to 8N in these plots as one might expect from variable length DNA synthesis tracts.

      (3) The requirement for XRCC4, XLF and LIG4 to promote DIGA is puzzling if synthesis occurs by a BIR-like mechanism. Although there is evidence that DNA synthesis at DSBs can be initiated by homology-directed strand invasion and terminated by NHEJ, this mechanism would limit the extent of synthesis to a few kb at each site. One might have expected an increase in DIGA in the absence of core NHEJ factors because of the increased number of DSBs available for BIR.

      (4) Although the authors rule out re-replication as a contributor to IR-induced DIGA, the FACS profiles of MLN4924 and 9 Gy treatment look remarkably similar, and both would be inhibited by aphidicolin treatment. A previous study showed that DSBs induce endoreduplication in Arabidopsis (Adachi et al. PNAS 2011).

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed at a comprehensive phenotypic characterization of the roles of all Rab proteins expressed in PN neurons in developing Drosophila olfactory system. Important data are shown for a number of these Rabs with small/no phenotypes (in the Supplements) as well as the main endosomal Rabs, Rab5, 7, and 11 in the main figures.

      Strengths:

      The mosaic analysis is a great strength allowing visualization of small clones or single neuron morphologies. This also allows some assessment of cell autonomy of the observed phenotypes. The impact of the work lies in the comprehensiveness of the experiments. The rescue experiments are a strength. The added developmental data strengthen the impact of the paper.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness is that the experiments do not address the mechanisms that are affected by the loss of these Rab proteins, especially in terms of the most significant cargos. The insights thus do not extend far beyond what is already known from other work in many systems.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Cells and tissues are viscoelastic materials. However, metabolic processes that underly survival, growth and migration render the cell as an active matter at non-equilibrium. These two facts contribute to the difficulty of probing mechanical properties especially with sub-cellular resolution. However, the concept that the mechanical phenotype can be indicative of normal physiology necessitates approaches of defining the cellular phenotype. Here, Muenker et al evokes a powerful argument for mapping intracellular mechanics using optical tweezer- active microrheology. They present a suite of parameters towards a definition of a mechanical fingerprint. This is a compelling idea. There are some concerns as detailed below

      Strengths:

      These are technically challenging experiments and the authors provide systematic approaches to probe a system at non-equilibrium.

      Weaknesses:

      The importance of the mechanical fingerprint is diluted due to some missing controls needed for biological relevance. As it reads, sinusoidal waves are applied sequentially from 1- 1024Hz.<br /> Please clarify if amplitude is the same for each frequency, also how many frequencies are used?

      On this point, due to perturbations due to alterations in pre-stress, are the orders of frequencies randomized?

      How many beads are probed in a given cell.

      Is the graph in 1 c G', G" per cell or average of many cells?

      Figure 1e is quite nice, however is there an equivalent performed in a non-linear ECM such as collagen for comparison, in a similar vein can the equivalent be calculated for cells with/without treatment with low doses of cycloheximide to reduce protein synthesis? Yes, cytoskeletal elements are important for cell mechanics, but cytoplasm crowding is often an overlooked factor.

      The biggest issue is the interpretation of the different factors as each of these cells have different energetic needs.<br /> The comparison between cancer cells with different aggressiveness, immune and epithelial cells.<br /> For example, some types of cancer cells will be dominated by glycolysis vs oxphos, which will influence both the cytoplasmic and nuclear mechanics?

      It would be useful to carefully assess factors not restricted to<br /> a) Cytoskeleton<br /> b) Protein synthesis<br /> c) Metabolic state

      For similar lines and/ or cells where there are lineages that are either more metastatic in cancer, normal counterpart or drug resistant in an effort to link the fingerprint to a biological output. Specifically, is migration, proliferation, survival correlated with the measurements.

      The reviewer is sensitive to the technical difficulties of the experiments. However, the interpretation and importance of the mechanical fingerprinting requires additional work as mentioned above.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      In this work, Styer et al. explore host selection as a means for recruiting microbes that may aid their host under stressful conditions, in this case under drought stress, as an alternative to target-SynCom design. They do so by subjecting rice plants to several generations of soil transplantation, and by using the most successful rice plants as donors for the next generation. By using several NGS approaches and very thorough bioinformatics analysis, the authors identify potential microbial taxa and the associated functions enriched in the conditions of interest.

      Strengths:

      In general, I think this approach was very much needed in the field as an alternative to SynComs, which are still not readily usable in croplands. This work sets the grounds for future similar approaches, using different stresses and different host plants.

      In this work, the experimental setup is well thought-through and well-replicated. In addition, an exhaustive set of preliminary experiments was performed before deciding on the final panel of soils to use and scoring methodology. The figures are clear and well-explained.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Dwulet et al. explores how the development of spontaneous neural activity in primary sensory cortices influences the co-alignment of multiple sensory modalities in higher-order brain areas (HOAs). To address this question, they focus on connectivity between the primary visual (V1) and somatosensory (S1) cortices and an associative cortical area (RL) in mice. The authors combine experimental (wide-field and two-photon calcium imaging) and computational approaches to show that spontaneous activity matures at a different pace across these brain regions. Their data indicate that S1 develops more rapidly than V1, which is possibly beneficial for RL's integration of visual and somatosensory inputs through correlated spontaneous activity. Using a computational model, they demonstrate that a moderate correlation between V1 and S1 activity can optimally guide the formation of bimodal neurons in RL, which are crucial for maximizing the decodability of multisensory stimuli. This finding highlights the role of correlated spontaneous activity in primary sensory cortices in establishing co-aligned topographic multimodal sensory representations in downstream circuits.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well written and it provides strong enough evidence to support the main claim of the authors. The insights on the role of correlated activity on instructing co-aligned multisensory maps in HOAs are not trivial and are an important advancement for the field.

      Weaknesses:

      In the opinion of this reviewer, the study has no major weaknesses. A drawback of the work is that none of the predictions of the computational modeling have been corroborated through mechanistic experimental manipulations of early brain activity.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed all my previous concerns. I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors sought to define how GATA6-dependent programming of resident peritoneal macrophages regulates lipid metabolism and, in turn, eosinophil survival. By integrating a myeloid-restricted GATA6-deficiency model with cellular phenotyping, lipidomic analyses, and measurements of lipid mediators, the study attempts to connect macrophage transcriptional identity to sphingolipid and cysteinyl leukotriene pathways that may shape eosinophil persistence. The work also appears intended to provide a mechanistic bridge between prior observations from this group and others regarding GATA6-positive macrophages, lipid metabolism, and eosinophil homeostasis.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study addresses an important and understudied question: how tissue-resident macrophage identity controls the local lipid environment and thereby influences eosinophil survival.

      (2) The use of a genetically defined GATA6-deficiency model provides a biologically relevant framework for testing the contribution of macrophage programming.

      (3) The lipidomic data broaden the analysis beyond a single mediator and identify coordinated changes in sphingolipids and glycerophospholipids that may generate useful hypotheses for the field.

      (4) The finding that GATA6 deficiency promotes eosinophil survival is clear, potentially important, and consistent with prior work cited by the authors.

      (5) The study is performed by a knowledgeable team and brings together macrophage biology, eosinophil biology, and lipid metabolism in a way that is likely to interest several research communities.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The central mechanistic chain-GATA6 deficiency leading to altered sphingolipid abundance, altered LTE4 production, and consequently increased eosinophil survival-is not fully demonstrated. The data support associations among these features, but the causal order remains uncertain.

      (2) The cited literature linking sphingolipid and cysteinyl leukotriene biosynthesis does not substitute for direct testing in this model. Perturbation or rescue experiments targeting sphingolipid synthesis and cysteinyl leukotriene production would be needed to establish necessity and directionality.

      (3) The broader lipidomic changes complicate the emphasis on sphingolipids. Because glycerophospholipids are also increased, the phenotype may reflect more extensive membrane-lipid remodeling, altered phospholipase activity, changes in the Lands cycle, or shifts in free fatty-acid availability.

      (4) The manuscript would benefit from a clearer distinction between observations made directly in GATA6-deficient peritoneal macrophages and mechanistic inferences extrapolated from prior studies.

      (5) The physiological and pathological relevance is not yet sufficiently established. It remains unclear whether enhanced eosinophil survival translates into altered eosinophil accumulation, activation, or tissue injury during inflammatory disease in the peritoneal cavity or lung.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this work, Brown and colleagues report that the photosensor protein LITE-1 of the nematode C. elegans may also a chemosensor that can be activated by high concentrations of the compound diacetly. LITE-1 was described as a putative ion channel of the gustatory receptor family, which is mainly constituted by insect odorant receptors. These form tetrameric ion channels that can be activated by odorant. Specificity is achieved by forming heteromeric channels from three copies of the odorant receptor co-receptor (ORCO) and another subunit that resembles ORCO in the pore-forming C-terminus, but brings in a binding site for the respective odorant. LITE-1 has a very similar structure, according to Alphafold3 predictions, and also carries a binding pocket. In LITE-1, this was proposed to be occupied by a light-absorbing molecule that activates the channel when a photon is absorbed. Alternatively, compounds generated by absorption of high-energy photons may be formed in vivo and bound by the LITE-1 binding pocket. Koh et al. now demonstrate that another, non-light activated compound, diacetyl, at high concentrations, can activate cells expressing LITE-1. Such (chemosensory) cells are also responsible for the avoidance of high concentrations of diacetyl. For this aspect, the protein seems to act in neurons, which are not necessarily the same cells in which LITE-1 is evoking the photophobic response. LITE-1 activation in excitable cells, i.e muscles, causes strong body contraction and paralysis, and the authors show that this is also the case when diacetyl is present. This action is surprisingly rapid, i.e. within 10 seconds after adding diacetyl, raising the question of how the compound can enter the body so quickly. The authors further present molecular docking studies showing that diacetyl could occupy the binding pocket of LITE-1. Last, they show that another compound chemically resembling diacetyl, i.e. 2,3-pentanedione, can also induce avoidance in a LITE-1 dependent manner, though not as potently.

      The data are intriguing and the demonstration of LITE-1 being a diacetyl chemosensor is interesting. Following the first submission and review, the authors addressed most of the questions that this reviewer had and improved the paper significantly. It will add to the further understanding of the still-mysterious multimodal sensory ion channel LITE-1.

      The authors identified mutants lacking diacetyl responses. In their chemotaxis assay (Fig. 1A, B), they show that lite-1 mutants do not avoid high concentrations of diacetyl. However, the animals actually show attraction, as the chemotaxis index was positive. If the lite-1 animals were insensitive, they should be indifferent and the chemotaxis index should be close to zero. The authors now showed that other neurons contribute to the avoidance response that are not themselves bona fide chemosensory neurons, as the avoidance behavior remained in a tax-4 mutant, that is lacking most sensory neuron responses. The authors further showed that diacetyl responses of ADL can be rescued by expressing LITE-1 specifically in this neuron in a lite-1 mutant background, thus demonstrating that LITE-1 acts cell-autonomously in ADL to affect avoidance behavior.

      The effect of diacetyl on muscle cells (Fig. 3C) is pretty rapid. As shown in the initial submission, already during 1 minute after application the animals are almost maximally contracted. The authors now provide a time course with data points every 10 seconds. This shows that contraction is maximal already after 10 seconds of exposure (provided the zero time point is the one where diacetyl is added). This is remarkable, as the compound would have to either pass the worm cuticle, or enter through the gut and diffuse through the body to reach the muscle cells. It would be of interest to compare this to time courses of other pharmacological agents that need to enter the worm's body for their action. As a comparison, often sodium azide is used to paralyze worms for imaging purposes. This molecule is even smaller than diacetyl, but azide action typically requires more time for maximal effects. Could there be active transport mechanisms involved? Maybe diacetyl can pass through some transporters for related molecules into / through intestinal cells quickly, to then reach the body fluid and muscle cells.

      One alternative explanation could be that other mechanisms may be at play. E.g. diacetyl may be immediately sensed by ciliated chemosensory neurons that might release a signaling molecule that leads to activation of LITE-1 in muscles, or that sensitizes it somehow, responding to light used for filming animals. The authors addressed these concerns by repeating their assay in a lite-1 mutant background. The authors had tested unc-13 mutants to rule out indirect effects on the neurons recorded. Likewise, eliminating neuropeptide signaling via unc-31 mutants would have been informative, as neuropeptide signaling plays a role in LITE-1-mediated light avoidance behavior (PMID 40238937, 39489735).

      Molecular docking studies are now described in more detail. The authors also provide a structural model of the diacetyl-docked LITE-1. In this model, only one of the four putative binding sites carries diacetyl. Maybe the authors could test how structure is affected if all four sites contain diacetyl? Mutations of LITE-1 that lack aminoacids shown to be contacted by diacetyl have been described (C300, R222). It would have been insightful to test if such mutants are still activated by diacetyl. This would also verify that there is not an unknown breakdown product of diacetyl that could affect LITE-1 function through oxidative pathways, as diacetyl has been implicated as a photosensitizer in the past.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aim to compare proposal models of perceptual decision making using a joint modeling approach, where they fit models to both behavioral outcomes as well as CPP. Most notably, they compare a standard evidence accumulation model with models that track the evidence without integrating it over time (extrema detection). The authors report that the joint CPP-behavioral data do not discriminate between two of their proposals.

      Strengths:

      This is an interesting finding that reinforces the idea that what we believe to see based on aggregation over trials may not be what happens on every single trial. The models are creative and the simulations are convincing, relating the models to multiple neural markers of decision formation. These include the CPP but also mu/beta power spectra.

      Initial weaknesses:

      Contrary to the original draft, the current version now clarifies the goals of the study as well as the role of internal vs external noise.

      The authors clarify their stance on the optimality of extrema detection in the Public Review, where they make some good points. Specifically, they argue that models that have studied optimal decision making in the past have considered a quite narrow definition of optimality, for example, ignoring energetic costs.

      The authors clarified the fixed value of the scaling parameter (which apparently was already mentioned in the initial draft, which I had missed). My comment about the discrepancy between the bounded integration model and the EZ diffusion model can thus be ignored. However, I do think that the similarity of the bounded integration model and the EZ diffusion model could be acknowledged in the manuscript somewhere.

      I still think the choice of modeling the grand average accuracy and EEG signal may distort the results. As Figure 1 reveals, there is in fact substantial variation in the change in accuracy across conditions. I can imagine that one model may be preferred over another based on the aggregate data, while the other model is preferred for some participants. On the group level, this may lead to different conclusions, at least quantitatively (e.g., in terms of G2), but potentially even qualitatively. This is especially true for the neurally-informed models because of the covariation between behavioral and neural data.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study found that ADF serotonergic neurons have a significant role in extending lifespan mediated by HIF-1, as well as serotonin receptor SER-7 in the GABAergic RIS interneurons. The author focuses on the sufficiency and necessity of components from the central nervous system and how they contribute to aging upon hypoxia.

      Previous work from the lab has identified that the stabilization of HIF-1 in neurons is sufficient to extend lifespan through the serotonin receptor, SER-7, which subsequently activates fmo-2 in the intestine and leads to lifespan extension. Building on this, the author sought to determine which serotonergic neurons are involved and found that serotonin signaling in ADF neurons is required for lifespan extension mediated by HIF-1.

      The author next tested which subset of neurons requires Ser-7 expression to rescue hypoxic response. They found that ser-7 expression in multiple neurons is sufficient to induce fmo-2, with the top candidate being the RIS neuron. Ablation of the RIS neuron did not extend lifespan, suggesting that ser-7 expression in the RIS neuron is required for lifespan extension, positioning it as a key component in the longevity signaling pathway.

      The author also investigated neurotransmitters and found that GABA and tyramine are important components in this circuit. They showed that the tyramine receptor called tyra-3 is required for vhl-1-mediated longevity. Given that tyra-3 is expressed in oxygen- and carbon dioxide-sensing neurons, the author demonstrated that these sensing neurons work downstream of serotonin signaling. Lastly, the author screened neuropeptide/receptor binding pairs and identified NLP-17 as playing a role in hypoxia-mediated longevity.

      Originality and Significance:

      This research is significant in that it uncovers components that are sufficient and necessary for lifespan extension via the hypoxic response. It provides comprehensive data supporting longevity induced by HIF-1-mediated hypoxic response, in conjunction with fmo-2, a longevity gene, as demonstrated in previous work from the lab. Moreover, it provides a number of new transgenic worm tools for C. elegans and aging communities.

      Conclusions:

      This study provides insights into how hypoxic response regulates aging in a cell non-autonomous manner, outlining a potential circuit involving neurons, neurotransmitters, and neuropeptides.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Maigler & Lin et al present a convincing set of behavioral and electrophysiological experiments and analyses exploring how individual differences in taste preference map onto neural responses in the gustatory cortex (GC). They go on to examine how both preferences and neural responses shift following intervening taste experience. Their experiments are strengthened by examining tastes of distinct identities and palatability (sweet, sour, salty, bitter) and correspond each animal's individual preference to the palatability-related late phase of the neural response.

      Strengths:

      (1) They demonstrate a relationship between the behavioral expression of taste preference and palatability-related GC neural responses. The direct correlation of expression of taste preference with GC neural responses indicates that taste preference behavior may be less noisy than previously thought, reflecting actual neural activity.

      (2) They address the stability of individual taste preference by comparing within and between session expression. This finding indicates that individual preference on any given trial or test session can differ from canonical palatability.

      (3) The animal's preferences for various tastes are reflected in the neurophysiological recordings, despite that behavior and physiology sessions are separated by several weeks, with an intervening surgery, across multiple delivery methods (active licking vs passive delivery), and across homeostatic states (thirsty vs sated).

      (4) They provide evidence that representational drift in palatability coding may arise from sensory experience rather than from the passive passage of time.<br /> The findings are novel and impactful, and the results are relatively complete.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors state that "no differences in effects were observed between taste batteries" (Methods), but it is not clear which analyses were performed to determine this, especially considering that many of the analyses are within-animal. Without more clarity, it is difficult to evaluate whether the interaction of different tastes within the sets of stimuli bias the main conclusions.

      (2) It is not clear how the analyses in Figure 3 emerge from the behavioral patterns across Figures 2A2 and 2B2. Along these lines, citric acid responses for R1 and R2 and saccharine responses for R7 and R8 are not shown in Figures 2A2 and 2B2, thus, we cannot determine if they change from the first to final BAT sessions. Salt, even at low concentrations, may not be palatable when rats are in a water-restricted state. It would be interesting to see Figure 3's analysis exclusively for sweet or for bitter tastes.

      (3) A potential reason why a single taste experience session causes taste palatability responses in GC neurons to revert to a reflection of canonical palatability ranks, as is seemingly shown in Figure 6, is not discussed.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, the authors strived to develop a highly efficient drug survival assay for in vitro cultured human malaria parasites P. falciparum. This was done by generating a transgenic P. falciparum line using a creLox strategy that allows detection of (presumably) viable parasites by a β-lactamase assay. To estimate the Limit of quantification of the recombined P. falciparum NF54i-lacZ, the authors ultimately designed a protocol in which viable parasites are detected by the luminescence of β-D-galactoside generated by β-lactamase within the transgenic parasites. For this, the parasite must be incubated with rapamycin for 120 hours to induce CreLox recombinase, which places β-lactamase under an active promoter. Using this assay, termed MULTI-i2, the author shows interactions between two antimalarial drug pairs that were previously demonstrated by another assay. In the case of pyronaridine and piperaquine pair, the NULT-i2 assay generated some additional insights compared to the previous assay, presumably by virtue of including more concentration datapoints. In conclusion, the authors argue that the MULTI-i2 assay is much less resource-intensive and time-consuming and can be applied on a large scale at a much lower cost and with the highest efficiency.

      Overall, the data generated in this manuscript are clear and well represented, and I am convinced that MULTI-i2 provides yet another of many drug assays for malaria parasites and could be put to good use. However, I struggle to fully appreciate the merit of his study, as the manuscript reads more like a technical document than a scientific study.

      I particularly lack an understanding of the strengths and weaknesses/limitations of the MULTI-i2 methodology and, thus, its applicability. I also do not fully appreciate the need for such an elaborate luminescence-based experimental setup. It would be good if some of these issues were addressed.

      Specifically:

      (1) The whole assay is based on detecting parasites by luminescence after 120 hr (5 days) after drug exposure. During that time, presumably the parasites that survived the drug pressure regrow to a detectable level and, at the same time, perform efficacious CreLox-based recombination to produce β-D-galactoside for detection. Is this necessary? How superior is this detection method to other methods, such as Fluorescence-assisted Cell Sorting (FACS) e.t.c.? Moreover, the 5-day growth-CreLox-β-D-galactoside production could introduce a series of confounding effects. In my view, more studies (beyond comparisons with a single existing method) would be useful for understanding this entire process.

      (2) Related to that above, how would MULTI-i2 perform in case of drugs that do not necessarily kill all parasites, such as artemisinin? In the case of artemisinin, it is becoming evident that at least a small fraction of the parasite revives after treatment via a temporary dormancy state. This has, in fact, also been shown for other drugs such as mefloquine, pyrimethamine, etc. Would such a situation produce a range of false readings? In general, in its current state, it is hard to see what the limitations of this method are, which makes it hard to decide whether to use it for a particular application.

      (3) Given the stated cost and labor efficiency of MULTI-i2, it is disappointing to see only two applications for two drug pairs: atovaquone/proguanil and piperquine/pyronaridine, for both of which their interactions were already known. The manuscript would benefit greatly if the authors demonstrated more drug interactions and identified (and ultimately validated) new ones. This would certainly make MULT-i2 method more attractive. In particular, it would be nice to see if one could use MULTI-i2 for studies of triple combinations as enthusiastically suggested.

      (4) Throughout the manuscript, the authors claim that MULTI-i2 is considerably less expensive and can be done much faster than previous methods. In my view, this is not exactly a scientific argument. The cost of an assay depends heavily on the cost of reagents and labor, which are subject to market price fluctuations. The efficiency and time consumption can very much depend on laboratory organization etc. Unless the author could specifically demonstrate where and how these assays are cheaper and faster, I suggest not discussing this.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no more comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors are trying to provide the molecular basis for the emerging role of VDAC2 in mitochondrial apoptosis. They use multiple approaches from biochemistry, cell biology, and structural biology.

      Strengths:

      Isolating the VDAC2-BAX complex and providing the molecular basis of this interaction in mitochondrial apoptosis is pretty innovative and significant.

      The authors have tried to validate their results using multiple approaches, which corroborates the quality of the study.

      Weaknesses:

      The scientific data and its presentation could be improved.

    1. Case report: Disease phenotype associated with simultaneous biallelic mutations in ABCA4 and USH2A due to uniparental disomy of chromosome 1

      Case#: Patient 9, female, Mexican, symptoms onset 6 yrs. ago, Mexico City

      DiseaseAssertion: IRD

      FamilyInfo: parents are non-sanguineous and asymptomatic, they also denied any history related to ocular diseases. Information disclosed that the mother had one stillbirth and three miscarriages, but denied any related diseases/health issues to this child.

      CasePresentingHPOs: HP:00305, HP:00080, HP:0000493, HP:0025586, HP:0030329, HP:0012713

      CaseHPOFreeText: Proband presented with light sensitivity as well as adaptation difficulties when going from dark-to-light. Right eye was 20/200 and left eye was 20/160 from the visual acuity test. Macular bull's eye appearance. Subnormal rod and cone responses. Peripapillary sparing retina.

      CaseNotHPOs: HP:0007737, HP:0000750, HP:0000510

      CaseNotHPOFreeText: No afferent pupillary defect. No anomalies in anterior segment.

      Genotyping Method: QIAamp DNA Blood Kit was used to extract gDNA and quantification/purity of the sample was found using a NanoDrop 2000 spectrophotometer. 293 genes were sequenced. gDNA was sequenced via Illumina technology. Following, certain sequences were additionally analyzed against a reference genome in order to identify changes and interpret.

      PreviouslyPublished: n/a

      Variant: NM_000350.3(ABCA4):c.4926C>G (p.Ser1642Arg), NM_000350.3(ABCA4):c.5044_5058del (p.Val1682_Val1686del)

      ClinVar: 99332, 99340

      CAID: n/a

      SupplementalData: Phenotype data in results section as well as figures 1, 2, and 3 showing phenotypic testing results.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their manuscript, the authors assess how TRPML1 influences lysosome trafficking and function in astrocytes using a neuron-astrocyte coculture system. Specifically, it was found that activation of TRPML1 reduces LEL motility in astrocyte branches while TRPML1 increases it, and a model was proposed in which TRPML1 coordinates lysosomal positioning along astrocyte branches, enabling LELs to locally regulate actin-membrane linkers that influence PAP (peripheral astrocyte processes) structure and plasticity. The authors primarily use pharmacology to buttress their findings.

      Strengths:

      TRPML1 is currently under investigation as a potential therapeutic target for lysosomal storage disorders and neurodegenerative diseases such as AD and PD. The manuscript is hence timely and important as the crosstalk between glia cells and neurons is likewise increasingly recognized as disease-relevant.

      Weaknesses:

      Unfortunately, experiments performed to investigate the role of TRPML1 are based purely on pharmacological tools. No bona fide KO data are available. At least for some experiments, this should be done. MLIV iPSC lines are available.

      If no KO controls are being provided, at least the authors shall use ML1-SA1 (EVP-169) as an agonist instead of ML-SA1, because ML-SA1 activates all three TRPML channels, which would be a major problem for this study. Likewise, the ML-SI3 antagonist also has effects on other TRPMLs. EDME is a blocker with higher specificity for TRPML1.

      When using pharmacological tools, the original papers relating to these tools may be cited. For example:

      - For ML-SA1 https://www.nature.com/articles/ncomms1735 and for MK6-83 https://www.nature.com/articles/ncomms5681

      - ML-SI3 as a blocker for TRPML1 seems problematic: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/33187805/ ; an alternative may be: https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-021-87817-4

      No reference is made to other important regulators of lysosomal cation homeostasis such as TPC1 or TPC2, two other Ca2+/Na+ permeable cation channels, or other TRPML channels. The authors should provide some data supporting or excluding a role of these channels.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes a web-based tool that allows researchers to compare large numbers of representative ("plausible") conformations of proteins. It also includes energetic analysis from multiple widely used structure-prediction methods.

      Strengths:

      This tool will likely be useful for students who want to learn more about the ensemble properties of proteins. The resource is well organized and it represents a large amount of computing resources.

      Weaknesses:

      It is not entirely clear how the database may be utilized by other groups to advance research. It could be helpful if the authors add a short section that provides example use cases that illustrate how this database can support new strategies for studying protein dynamics.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors were investigating the impact of introducing novel facultative bacterial endosymbionts into the pest aphid, Diuraphis noxia, to explore the possibility of using facultative symbionts as a crop protection tool. They successfully established the vertical transmission of both endosymbionts and performed a series of aphid performance and dispersal experiments together with measurement of aphid feeding on host plant health, growth, and metabolism. While most of the experiments revealed no effect of the endosymbionts, some significant treatment effects were found, showing that Rickettsiella reduced aphid dispersal, and Regiella reduced aphid population growth and feeding damage.

      Strengths:

      The team worked with two novel facultative symbionts (Rickettsiella viridis and Regiella insecticola) that they were able to successfully establish in D. noxia. The data were collected and analyzed using solid, well-described methodology.

      Weaknesses:

      While interpretation of the data is reasonable, the few experiments which revealed significant treatment effects rest on relatively small sample sizes.

      Measuring symbiont density is difficult. The authors use quantitative PCR to measure the "density" of endosymbionts relative to a host gene. This is a standard approach in the field; however, recent work has shown that endosymbionts like the aphid primary endosymbiont, Buchnera, are variably polyploid [1]; further the aphid cells that house the symbionts are also highly polyploid and variable in their ploidy [2]. It is important to understand that what is being measured when using qPCR is DNA copy number and not quantification of the number of symbiont cells. Alternative approaches to measuring symbiont density include flow cytometry [3], and SymbiQuant [4], a machine vision tool that can quantitatively characterize symbiont populations from DAPI-stained confocal images. These alternate approaches also have their limitations. Currently, there is no perfect approach to measuring symbiont density, which remains an important measure in experiments such as these. Put simply, it is important for a reader to be aware of the limitations of each approach and interpret data accordingly.

      [1] Komaki, K., and H. Ishikawa. 2000. Genomic copy number of intracellular bacterial symbionts of aphids varies in response to developmental stage and morph of their host. Insect Biochemistry and Molecular Biology 30:253-258.<br /> [2] Nozaki, T., and S. Shigenobu. 2022. Ploidy dynamics in aphid host cells harboring bacterial symbionts. Scientific Reports 12:9111.<br /> [3] Simonet, P., G. Duport, K. Gaget, M. Weiss-Gayet, S. Colella, G. Febvay, H. Charles, J. Viñuelas, A. Heddi, and F. Calevro. 2016. Direct flow cytometry measurements reveal a fine-tuning of symbiotic cell dynamics according to the host developmental needs in aphid symbiosis. Scientific Reports 6:19967.<br /> [4] James, E. B., X. Pan, O. Schwartz, and A. C. C. Wilson. 2022. SymbiQuant: A machine learning object detection tool for polyploid independent estimates of endosymbiont population size. Frontiers in Microbiology 13:816608.

      Impact and Significance:

      Food security and production, and pest control are major challenges facing the human population. This work contributes knowledge that will benefit the development of alternate pest control strategies in agriculture.